Manmarziyan – Hamari Adhuri Kahani Chapter 5


Hloo all my lovely friends.I’m Sv back with my next part of our journey. How are you all ?? Hope all are fine. Just typed fast , so please do spare me with the typos.Thank you all for those lovely comments. Please do comment your views regarding this part and did not start to write Let me live . Will update once i complete. Held up with my work thats why irregular update. Sorry for that. Love you all.

Enjoy the ride….

All reaches the apartment and Neil immediately mails Sam about his arrival. Sam who sees his message finds smile in her face as she was not coming out of her room once she reached her house. Piyali who saw this condition of Sam was now in high angry with Samrat but he was not even looking at their face as he was not able to face them , his guilty is pricking his heart. But Piyali was just thinking that he is just avoiding them.

Radhika , Teji neil and rathore were in high mood of enjoying their time together and no one left a single chance to pull other’s leg. Radhika would help prena in the kitchen and Teji who will just come in between and take the pappads or something . Both Radhika and Prena were not able to understand as they will cook and keep it aside but after few minutes the food gets disappeared. At one time they found that he mouse is Teji and the ladies scared him out of the kitchen and Rathore was laughing at the ladies behaviour. Teji came with pout face and Rathore gave him a pappad which he secretly taken from the kitchen to teji and he jumped into Rathore’s lap and sat like a small kid and was eating the pappad and Neil was so happy to see his life is always fun filled. At that time he just remembered his Sammy . His thoughts were lost in her beautiful smile and her memories. Rathore gave a mobile to Neil. Neil gave a questioning look.
Rathore ; Go speak to your love .

Neil ; Why should I speak to Sam ??
Rathore ; When did I say Sam ?? I just said speak to your love . See even your heart says you still love Sam. Go speak to her. She might feel happy when she hears your voice.
Neil ; How do you know she might feel happy??
Rathore was just smiling at Neil’s stupidity ; Neil I know her , she always keeps your side from the school days. So stop acting like a big man now go and speak to her. Neil thought for a second and smiled and gave a peak on Rathore’s face. Rathore was smiling at Neil’s action and Radhika who saw this, hugged Rathore from the back.
Rathore ; Your welcome and pulled her front.

Radhika ; How do you know that I just came to say thank you??
Rathore ; See we might have not been born for same parents but I love you and Teji as you guys are my family . So my choti’s happiness is my happiness. She nodded and hugged him( Rathore knew everything about Radhika but he doesnot know who was the one she loved. Radhika purposefully hid that as Rathore may find him and bring him to Radhika as she doesnot want anyone to find her as she is happy here) . He caressed her head. Teji made a pout face. Rathore extended his hand and Teji too hugged and Neil who spoke to Sam was now super happy and hugged him from behind prena wished them to be happy always. All shouted till the whole apartment was shaken by their noise.

Rathore and Teji would dance for crazy hindi songs and Rathore would dance as the hero and Teji would wear nighty and dance heroine’s part and they make a perfect pair and other 3 would just laugh like hell. They were planning to go for Niagara falls and prena was not interested as she wanted stay home because of the cold climate and the other 4 started for Niagara and Radhika just texted someone and they reached the place.

Neil ; Chashni this is the world’s most largest waterfalls and the sound of the falls is huge . I beg you pls don’t talk as I need to hear the sound of the falls. Radhika in top anger started to chase Neil and Teji too joined them and they were playing like small kids . At that time Rathore collided with a cute girl and he lost his sense in her beauty . Radhika Neil and Teji who were standing some far place shook their hands.
Neil ; Soo this is Luna. Teji nodded .
Neil ; How does this Eiffel tower did not see her ??

Radhika ; Eiffel tower ?? Whom ??
Neil ; Ooh you guys don’t know this. Rathore’s nick name was Eiffel tower.He would be the last in the row. Where ever he goes we can easily spot as his head will always be top of everyone’s head. Radhika and teji saw rathore and accepted the name which was suitable.
Radhika ; She was a newly joined , my best friend but her only wish was to love rathore . She is soo cute a perfect one for my Rathore.
Neil ; Not a bad selection .

Radhika; Thank you.
Neil ; I said her choice , my best friend. Radhika shrink her eyes and gave a look towards Neil .
Neil ; What ok ok she is also cute you are great. Now ok ?? Radhika nodded and found them talking and most of the time Rathore was blushing. Neil was making fun of Rathore and Teji and Radhika was just enjoying his acting skills.


Arjun reached the airport and found a person holding his name card and Arjun came to that person and he took to the apartment. It was not huge but a perfect one for 3 people to live. A small yet a cute apartment for him . He thanked the person who dropped him and that person informed that he will come and pick Arjun next day morning to the office. Arjun gave a hug to that person and the person was taken back with Arjun’s hug.

Driver; My name is Cook sir .
Arjun ; Just call me Arjun Cook, Sir would be called by…… just call me by my name and gave his signature smile. Bye Cook. Cook too wished him and left the place.
Arjun to himself ; Sir would be called by my wife , and smiled and closed the main door. He took his bag and unpacked his luggage and started to keep his life’s picture the whole house which will give him full confidence for him to find her. He then thought that the girl he met in Canada airport and he thought that why did I feel that it was my Radhika ?? Is that really you Panoti ?? I will find you and always make you my panoti of my life so that you wont leave me and smiled.

Arjun started his job in creative and got many friends and silently was just searching Radhika’s profile as this is one of the big Ad agencies in the country but he was not able to find her name nor her picture as Rathore made sure that their safety was ensured.

After 1 month of full enjoyment Rathore left for Chicago . All the 3 made a sad face and Neil too joined creative and with his charms he too earned many friends but always missed his best one. Sam started to work in bird song and she started to move on but that was not an easy one for her. She was detoriating.

Piyali was thinking of speaking to Prena as she is the one who knew about Neil and Sam . So she called Prena but couldn’t reach her. Piyali slowly asked Sam Neil’s number . Sam was not able to understand but just gave the number. Piyali spoke to Neil in a formal way and she asked Neil to give to Prena.
Piyali ; Prena I know what Sam has done was not a correct one but she is also suffering here. She lost her Radhika, then Neil too left us. She is shattered. I just want your help prena. I know this sounds greedy but I am not able to see Sam in this way.
Prena (who saw Neil who was also missing his Sammy) ; Piyali I will make sure that my daughter in law is happy.
Piyali ; Prena ?? with tears in her eyes.

Prena ; Look if you are happy then can I take my sam as my daughter in law .
Piyali (wiped her eyes) ; Sure .
Prena ; Then I’ll make all the arrangements for her in Canada, don’t say anything to Sam but just send her here and I will take care of my Sam but not now after 1 month as I have to make all the arrangements.
Piyali ; Canada ?? But Neil said you all are going to San Francisco .
Prena (thought of Neil’s stupid intelligence ) ; No that one was dropped . We are in Canada only and they held their call and both felt a kind of relief in their heart thinking of their children.

2 months later……


There was an important project which needs to be made immediately and for which he was asking some assistance from Canada office. Rathore called Radhika .
Rathore ; Chashni I need your help .
Radhika ; Anything for my rathore say me what should I need to do ??
Rathore ; come here many big clients are coming I need help.
Radhika ; Rathore I don’t see you talking like a big business man but like a panicked kid. Someone from the other side called him.
Rathore ; Just say me a punch line for this immediately. Here all are just breaking our head. She giggled .
Rathore gave the phone to Arjun and he took the phone and again his heart was now dancing. Some kind of happiness struck. The words struck in his neck. He was struggling to speak. Somehow he got the strength he spoke.

Arjun ; Hhee Hello…. ummm hiee
Radhika ; Hiee say me the details I’ll do it and say it to you. Arjun heard the voice which was like his radhika’s and he was just standing like a stone.
Rathore who saw this hit his back and Arjun came back to sense and spoke about the product and she said she will mail the punch line to Rathore . Arjun just nodded and gave back the phone to Rathore and he went out of the cabin and held Danny’s hands and twisted him and was dancing because of his unexplainable happiness.
Rathore ; Chashni connect to Neil too , she too did the same. Inbetween she send the required info to Rathore
Radhika ; Rathore sent.
Rathore ; Chashni you are the best. Neil I need you guys help , can you please send chashni here as there are many projects are coming I want chashni here . For 2 months then let her go back to Canada. Neil who totally forgot about Arjun , said “ Rathore she will come, no need to ask permission at all”
Rathore; Neil I love you.
Neil ; I love you too.
Radhika ; Yuck you guys are disgusting but let me take my friend umm luna with me but she will join me after a week. So when is my flight Rathore ??
Rathore ; Mailed and it is today evening and you will reach home tonight.

Radhika ; Packing ??
Rathore ; You have few dresses in our house also so stop your talk get up and Clark will be waiting for you.
Neil ; Wait did you ask me permission or saying me the information.
Rathore ; Bro both .
Radhika ; What are you made of ?? U r impossible. Ok ok but you should buy few set of new dresses as i want some trendy one.
Rathore ; Anything for my chashni. Now get up rush out dear.
Radhika ; Neil say to mom and teji too he has gone outside with Sasha.
Rathore ; Who is sasha ??

Radhika ; I thought you would ask why did he go out during working hours.
Rathore (laughed) ; Come on get up we will talk about that later run chashni run.
They held the call and Radhika who was happy for no reason just rushed out and hugged Neil and took the passport and visa from the receptionist took the car and started from there. She was jumping in the car laughing singing . Clark also joined her and they reached the airport. She gave a warm hug to Clark and rushed inside the airport to catch the flight with a small bag.
Rathore called Danny.
Danny ; What chief ??
Rathore ; Can you go to airport and pick up meera ??
Danny ; Who ?? Your sis ??
Rathore ; Yup Meera Kundra my sis is coming here for 2 months.
Danny ; Wow she is coming . I wish i again get those sweets which she makes she is unique in that .
Rathore ; You have 2 full months son go and pick her up.
Danny ; Chief let me take the new one too.
Rathore ; Who that one ?? Pointing Arjun. Danny nodded.
Rathore ; Never no to my danny now go before she lands , if you go late she will rip you apart .
Danny ; You are the best . K i’ll take him bye chief. Danny went out stood on the table and shouted “ Meera is coming here for 2 months” All threw the paper over the head and shouted like they were having price hike.

Danny ; A M (Arjun Mehra’s short form , all called him AM). Come we are gonna pick her up.
Arjun ; Wait who is Meera ??
Danny ; Rathore’s sister . Rathore has a sister and a brother. They are in Canada , Arjun’s heart now stopped hearing the word Canada.
Arjun ;What place did you say ??
Danny ; Canada .
Arjun ; Dont waste a single minute, now come and held his hand and rushed to the airport.
They reached the airport on time and found the flight has just arrived. Danny just went to a coffee shop to get 2 coffees for them. Arjun was breathing heavily. His heart was having a speed check that how fast his heart can beat. He turned and was standing by facing opposite to the entrance.
Radhika came out and found a tall guy and something made her to come close to him. She just hugged tight him from behind and closed her eyes and some unknown peace came and from her eyes a tiny tear escaped . Arjun’s heart beat was now audible and he too held her hand tight in a manner that he just want her and nothing and he will not leave her again.
Radhika ; I missed you soo much .

Arjun ; I missed you too . Please don’t leave me .

Precap – Sam’s trip to Canada….Arjun tries to impress Radhika…….and lot more…….

That’s it guys for today Hope this was a lengthy one. Do you all like that ?? Please say me your views and let me know how was this one. Love you all. Will try to be regular. Stay blessed and bear my hugs and kisses too. Muhhaaaaaa…..

Credit to: Sv

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  1. Awwwww that was a cuteeee epi ..loved it 🙂

    1. Thank you neetz . Love you.

  2. Sv dear lovely epi……… hope ardhika and nesam unite soon.
    and pls get a girl for Teji too…
    lol keep going…………

    1. Shiva they will unite thats for sure but not soon. Coz rads will make Arjun to go crazy . Hey teji has sasha a furious one. Thank you shiva stay blessed

  3. Awesome, marvellous, outstanding episode. ..loved it to the coreeeee. …piyali n prerna convo was really awesome. ..nesam will get marry….wowwww. ..arjun at Chicago n rads in Canada. …rathore n taneil teji bond vetlyyyy cuteee….now rads came to Chicago. ..wowwww. ..loved ardhika meeting n hug….cliffhanger. ..why did you stop there. …I curious to know the next part….precap is very interesting n exciting. …very lovely narration n awesoooooome dialogues. …keep it up honeyyy. …eagerly waiting for the next episode, love you loads. . . Muaaaaahhhhhh. .. 🙂 lotssssss of hugsssssss n kissesssss ….♡♡♡♡♡♡

    1. Hey special well i stopped there for a purpose, you will know that in the next update. Rads is not easy to be convinced she will make him go crazy . lol. Love you dear. Bear hugs and kisses too.

  4. Awesome episode, finally Ardhika meet, eagerly waiting for the next update. Sv you nail it, well done. 🙂

    1. Thank you brin. Did not start yet . Once completed i will update it .

  5. Aww d last scene was fab…..n d whole epi was osm….n it was interesting convo of d moms….with funny rathore teji hindi dance basanti…..???
    Btw gm… off now 2 complete my projt…
    Love u lots sv….hugs….pecks????

    1. Dev thank you so much. All the best for your project . Do well . Love you lods and bear my hugs buddy.

  6. Svswthrt a total blast….m so much happy after reading this one….can’t describe what I am feeling right now….omg finally they met nd I m dancing here…. mom thinks I have gone mad….I m reading it again nd again….what to do m not satisfied reading once…twice or thrice….dear you are a true writer….it z just perfect….you described the update very beautifully…. I was waiting eagerly for this one swthrt glad to read it atlast…..when z the next one?….love you my swthrt….muaaah…. Tc?

    1. Hey my lil one. Im really happy to see your comment. Yup they finally met even i’m happy for that . Thanks for those complements, hope i made this an enjoyable one. I have to write let me live too. That is in pending for many days and 2 states is also there but sure i’ll try to write it soon and max of max 3 days i’ll update is dear. Promise. Love you soo much darling

  7. sv such a lvly epi dear its amazing plzzz post nxt epi today only nah plz plzz plzz and unite ardhika and nesam fastly dear

    1. Ohh my gosh natasha thanks dear but i have not yet started yet. Will update soon dear promise . Pls do spare me for this . Love you soo much

  8. Awesome 🙂

    1. Thank you Emz

  9. Awesome chappy sv cute and emotional I was smiling like an idiot ..pls update your 2 states ..actually I like it more u lot dear 🙂 🙂

    1. Sammy my love thank you dear. 2 states would be updated max of max tomo promise. Love you soo much

  10. Aweeee….my twin…totally masti ,fun….u always have that charm in ur chapter….precap too interesting…omg I cant believe radz hugged someone from behind…what will happen next…rathore,teji n raneil bond is awesome…update

    1. Rosie my twin , charms omg ok i know i should not say thanks , Wait dear the twist is in the next part , but promise you this is not a dream kind of stuff, this is real but she will make arjun to go crazy . Love you lods , will update soon dear.

  11. Sv its superb !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I hope ardhika will unite…………..and nesam too……………….

    1. Aastha who was the admission hope all went well. It will take time for them to join . Love you soo much

      1. Hello sugar candy…………..I got admission in a college I wanted to get into………….I’m very happy…………….thanks for ur prayers and well wishes………………love u……………

      2. That’s a good news Aastha . All the best dear. Rock the collage. Love u dear.

  12. Sv.. u are a darling… such a sweet surprise for ardhika.. I loved it… waiting to know wat happens next.. loads of love n TC

    1. Thank you soo much jessie Pls do wait will upload soon dear . Love you soo much

  13. Wow sv superb. I wished u had continued. Pls update soon. The pre cap looks grt.pls don’t delay. I can barely wait

    1. Thank you Rg but that was for a purpose. U will know it in the next update. Love you dear . Sure once i finish i’ll update it no more dealys

  14. Awesome ? wow

    1. Thank u ab 🙂

  15. Loved it full masti and fun, loved that Prena and Piyali are taking efforts to unite Nesam. Loved the update, stay blessed

    1. Thank u soo much gianna . Yup mom are the one who care about the kids. Love u soo much.

  16. amazing episode …………… loved it …………….pls update soon …………..luv ya ………….tc

    1. Thank u soo much priya. Will update once I complete dear. Love u

  17. another awesome epi..waiting for their nxt one soon..and also update the other ff…love u..take care

    1. Thank u ritu for the words. They will join hands. Thats for sure. About the other ffs I have completed let me live and 2 states half way dear. Will update once complete.

  18. Oh god ponnie its fantastic epi darling I’m n moon nw…….trio(boys) bond is too gud…. U have sme magic to make me smile wide still I can’t belve radz hug arjun god sv..,.. Precap is really interesting so pls update soonnn…. Sv u have tried comic, bro&sis bond, emotional y don’t u try horror & romance ???? Its req from me so pls consider ds gave a try.,……., luv u a lot big teddy hug& kissssss fr u ………. 🙂

    1. Gayathri ponnie thanks a ton dear. Its all ur love which makes me write something. Gayathri for me romance is total zero . Never for me romance comes. Im really bad in romance and about horror never thoght dear but will try once. As that will be new need some time honey. Love u soo much dear. Hugs and kisses. Muuhhhaaa

  19. Hey sv it’s fantastic…….. mindblowing plz update soon can’t wait……. love u tc

    1. Deeva thank u soo much. I have not even staryed a word . Will finish it and update it soon dear. Pls do spare me for that. Love u dear.

  20. Hi Sv , this was fantastic… loved the bonding between Radhika Rathore and Teji….felt sad for Ne-Sam…hope they unite soon…and now Radhika in Chicago…wow…waiting for her to meet Arjun…lets see what Arjun does to win his love back… loved it cuite pie 🙂 and a big hug for you stay blessed 🙂

    1. Thank u soo much didi. Radhika will make arjun to go break his head. Arjun should prove himself. Love u di and bear hugs and kisses too. Muuhhhaaa.

  21. Awesome episode

    1. Thank u gayu.

  22. amazing episode ……..eagerly waiting next update .pls update next

    1. Thank u soo.much subha. Will update soon.

  23. hey sv dear its so lovely epi..hope arjun succeed to impress radz

    1. Thank u sok much dipika. Arjun should prove himself to radhika and which is not a easy task for him.

  24. Mind blowing sv darling 😀 😀 its totally fabulous 😀 😀 loved it 😀 😀 sorry for not commenting previous part darling those are really my bad days coz DAT much happened… own team member betrayed us ….. He outsourced our code to some other company which v put effort for 7 month…… V can’t even digest dat news after v heared from our company…. I came out of DAT company again they called n told dis suddenly dono wat to do…… Wen i reached my company Just saw him with teary eyed he said sorry after dat didn’t c his face just informed my MD n came out…. Can’t digest DAT till now darling ….. Now feeling better….. Thanks darling ……love u so much….. Take care….:D 😀 😀

    1. Suga my dear friend thank you. Oh my god i can see the hard work you guys would have put in. Dear one thing the person might have taken the project of yours but not ur knowledge or skills . Keep smiling and make them feel bad for what they have done. That 1 smile will do all the work. Dont ever feel bad and low for anything. Everything will be set right. Sry if i have said something wrong but always stay strong and smile dear. Love you lods and take care dear.

      1. Thank u sooooo much darling its really soothing my soal 😀 😀 u said all correct only darling ntg wrong in dat 😀 love u for dat 😀 yea sure 😀 now everything solved darling 😀 love uuuu muhaaaaaaa 😀 take care 😀

      2. Thats my suga. Love you lods take care and always smile.

  25. Well done sv chellam….fantastic one….rathore what a man yaar……really he is amazing character……I love him soo much….teji is very funny…,.loved their bond…well described…….last part ardhika hug scenes is real or dream????? Superb chapter….waiting for next one….love u lot ….tc…. Muaaahhhhhh…….

    1. Susi chellam thank you soo much. Well rathore does anything for teji and radhika. Last hug part was not a dream its true dear. Love you lods. Bear my hugs and kisses too. Muhhaaaaa

  26. Hi Sv dear,Episode is awesome.. 🙂 Finally Rads is in Chicago..Arjun trying to impress Rads..Not bad.. 🙂 Very nice update..Sorry for the late comment.. 🙁 Stay blessed and keep smiling.. 🙂 Lots of love.. 🙂 <3

    1. Sweetie my sweety thank you soo much. No sorry at all sweetie . Love you dear and bear hugs and kisses too.

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