Manmarziyan – Hamari Adhuri Kahani Chapter 23

Hloo all im Sv tadaaa , Here is the next part of HAK pls do comment ur views. Love u all….

Enjoy the ride….

Rathore was discussing with the legal team to take over bird song but the problem is rathore should be in person to and which was bothering is he was planning to change the birdsong to radhika’s name but to make her in person is sparing her happy life which rathore would dare not to do.
Rathore was discussing with Neil over phone and they decided that let radhika say what she is willing to do. But little did rathore knew that radhika will ask him to change the name in his name or others rather than her name.
Arjun’s apartment…..
Teji Arjun and radhika were sitting in the dining table and was discussing of what happened to bird song as that was not a company which will sink.
Arjun ; I distinctly remember there were more than 5 deals signed for 3 years of contract then how come BS sinking, how ??
Teji ; im sorry to say this sir your sister is the reason of this. Arjun was hell anger as even after so many shame she is still in her stand where there is no wrong on Samrat.
Arjun ; cant she leave them ?? And teji she was my guardian and no more my sister a third person to me now.
Radhika ; Arjun ?? in a higher tone with confused voice….
Arjun ; what ?? What not she did to u and others and the dumbest of all i was hell blind no more this time. I will save bird song to repent my mistake. She gave a look. TEji understood her look as Rathore already started to speak with his legal team about takeover of BS.

Teji ; dont worry rathu will take care..
Arjun ; who ??
Teji ; sorry rathore my brother sorry our brother. He nodded. Just then rathore called Teji and asked about himself and Radhika.
Teji ; yaar rathu im here with chashni only and for heaven sake go out with bhabhi she is fed up with ur bhai mode now change to lover mode.
Radhika giggled hearing that and Arjun lost his heart on her pink face when she was controlling her laugh and her teary eyes for controlling her laugh. After the call there was a text from rose to him. He jerked as that was a punch and a angry emoji with a red face. He gulped and sweated badly. He saw Arjun and radhika. Radhika went in to for something.
Radhika ; oye what happened ?? Teji saw Arjun and showed the phone. He smiled and said something on his ears. Teji’s face brightened. In between Teji (hussked) ; Will this work ?
Arjun ; i bet it will work.
Teji ; what if not ??
Arjun ; fall on her feet well that may work.
Teji ; i will owe u one for this.
Arjun ; i will count this bye now go soon else even that will not work. Teji nodded and rushed out with a warm hug. Radhika came out and walked to Arjun and made her feet up to match his height and kept her chin over his shoulder. He smiled and made himself a bit down to make her comfortable to keep her chin. She smiled and made him stand proper and inbetween his hands and his body she inserted her head and smiled at him. He burst out in laugh and pulled her to him and asked what happened ??
Radhika ; donno wanna play with u like this. Why shouldn’t i ??
Arjun ; of course panoti why are u asking this ??
Radhika ; why did u laugh that big then.

Arjun ; look im a shy person basically and some person coming near to me makes me feel goose bumps and u are making me go all shy radhika hoo pls dont do this and he did in a girly way. She turned and twisted her lips and winked her eyes and came near him and circled her hand over his neck and in a kind of a boyish voice ; hey baby how about a kiss and she stressed the s part a bit more.
Arjun ; hoo pls someone help me save me from this man aoooo she laughed but she too continued today no one can save u from me miss arjun mehra he burst out and held her by waist and said ; i dont want to Mr. Radhika Mehra. She too laughed at him and they spent some cute times before leaving back home. He drove back to home and on the way he diverted his way to a small hotel.
Radhika ; why are we here ??
Arjun ; teji wanted to speak.
Radhika ; Where is teji arjun ??
Arjun ; look there and they saw Teji with a board in his neck stating im sorry rose i wont skip my date here after and she was looking at him with a puppy smile the way he was keeping his face a long face and the rose face of her was now turning red coz of smile.
Radhika burst out and came near teji and rose.
Arjun saw rose and smiled at her.
Rose ; how is my punishment brother ??
Arjun ; awesome my little cutie. Both radhika and teji cant understand how they knew each other.
Rose ; what are u looking at me tej he was the one who helped me to get u.
Teji ; how ??
Rose ; dont speak i will say only to her pointing at radhika and said i was boarding my flight he called me and said he was rushing to see me so i cancelled my first flight and was waiting for him for the next flight. Then he came dashing the glass door with the mickey mouse pyjamas. Teji gave a look to radhika. She turned her gaze to the other side to avoid teji as that was her compulsion he was having that.
They were happily enjoying the time together…….

Canada….
Sam and neil were in the top of their apartment a terrace area. Sam was so much stressed with her work with others as they have to complete the shoot of an ad and that was a last minute preparation. They had a hard day and she was waiting for Neil to come. He came with a cute dimple smile and sat next to her and they were in their night suits. She smiles at him and keeps her head over his shoulder and holds his hand tight. Neil presses her fingers to ease the pain and to make her relax. Sam shows her leg, he smiles and slowly pulls every finger and the knock sound was tearing the ears.
Neil ; sammy u r seriously looking tired. She nodded and again kept her head over his shoulder and pulled his hand over her head and make it cares her hair.
Sam ; why are u doing this neil ??
Neil ; what ?? Without looking at her but again caressing her hair…..
Sam ; bird song ??
Neil ; how do u know ??
Sam ; news of course.
Neil ; saminder singh for me ur smile matters ur happiness matters so for that i will do anything. Sam saw his eyes and hugged him and holding him tight. He was rubbing her back.
Sam ; i love u so much neil wanna grow old with u will u be with me always ?? (without breaking the hug and keeping her face on his shoulder). He smiled and said ; so what should i want to say ?? she broke the hug and saw him and said ; say me i love u idiot. He smiled and pulled her cheeks and said dont u remember jahan saminder singh wahan uska idiot.
Sam ; argh idiot cant u for once say me i love u ??
Neil ; why should i say if i can feel it. She bangs her head and pulls her hand over the air and give a irritating look.
Sam ; say me once yaar i m acting like a teenage boy and u are like a girl for not saying i love u .
Neil ; ok u said 4 times and now its time for me to say.
Sam ; wait what are u saying 4 times ??
Neil ; i have proposed u till now 4 times. U now said 4 times i love u so made it equal. She stood up and said ; neil saaley u r so dead idiot and started to chase him and he was running the total terrace and she with her full energy pulled his shirt and made him fall down and she too fell on him and both were breathing heavily and were looking each other and she laid her head over his chest and he wrapped his hand over her. She felt safe. A lone tear escaped from her eyes and so was his. It was after so much struggle they are together that day. Both wished for one thing nothing should separate them.

Few days later.
Rathore completed his paper work for bird song and little did he knew that Nandhini is not that easy to handle and as he is coming she will spy him so he has to make sure no one will harm his family which he is building either be radhika teji nesam or luna or his friends even rose teji’s love.
Radhika did packing but she was restless. Rathore saw her lost in thoughts.
Rathore ; Chashni ?? Radhika stood up and hugged him tight and it was clearly evident that she was disturbed more of she was scared.
Rathore; chashni dont worry nothing will happen to me i will get that deal signed and will come back soon.
Radhika ; never talk to her. She is fit to do anything. Rathore smiled and pulled her nose and said ; chashni i will come soon. Promise u . She smiled a little and he left to his flight with Danny who was well known cool person as one face yet the other face known only to his close circle.

Next day
India
Nandhini was sitting in the main branch of the bank with a wicked smirk and was thinking how she got Birdsong.
Nandhini to herself ; Finally my wait is over u r finished Samrat for rejecting me and hurting me.
Nandhini used her ways and made bird song to sink when she came to know that neil and arjun left india and she was waiting for a perfect timing to make Bird song hers. She with the help of one of the opponent of Bird song by name Miracle made Bird song to lose the image that had and the head was stuffed with the money to make things done and he did whatever she said just like Arjun she used him as a poppet to make him dance in her tunes. She was lost in thoughts of what she did and finally the day of birdsong she will be in and samrat and piyali out. She made sure that no one is investing in Birdsong so that she bangs it as a trophy and pays him less and make him a bankrupt.
Her thoughts were disturbed by a voice of a office person informing samrat signing the deal with a American company. Nandhini was shocked.
Nandhini ; how is this possible ??
Person ; madam he has offered more than what we quoted so as per the bank norms Samrat has signed the papers and Bird song is being aquierd by Creative one of the top leading Ad agency of the world.

She rushed to the manager room of the bank but when she pulled the door she found Samrat was smiling wide with a tall guy of 6 feet and another person with him sitting near by chair. Samrat was hugging him and samrat saw Nandhini and her she was buring in anger to the disbelief after all again she was defeated. Samrat saw her with a smirk and rathore turned and saw her.
Samrat ; hiee nandhini Rathore this is nandhini. Rathore saw her with a winning smile and extended his hand for a cordial hand shake. Nandhini was burning in rage of losing in front of samrat.
Samrat ; come what may i am always surrounded by good people and u are always defeated by my people.
Nandhini ; i will not lose what is mine.
Rathore ; well sorry to interfere u were eyeing which was not at all urs. So its better u change the attitude else u will be defeated always again.
Nandhini ; i donno who u r …..
Rathore ; rathore my name is rathore , u can search me in google address and everything will be clearly available. He turned to Samrat and said ; uncle its party time wanna meet aunty and its been long time since i came to india im starving and if i wait for another Danny will kill me as he started to eat his nail and both saw Danny was biting his nails. Samrat and rathore laughed and Nandhini was least concered to them.
Nandhini ; Rathore i will destroy u mark my words.
Rathore ; ooh well the exit is this was ma’am. She left with a thud. Rathore smiled as she does not know that she is planning to hit a mountain which is not easy for a small took to break.

Precap – Thinking…..

Thats it for today. Seriously donno what i have typed , bear me for the typos as well Love u all stay strong stay blessed and dont forget to smile. Happy diwali…….

32 comments

  1. Brin

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    Awesome episode, yeah Nandini got defeated, and Rathore takes control, love it to the core, waiting for the next update. πŸ™‚

  2. Rossy

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    M first today i think…mr radhika and miss Arjun.. Soooo cooolll…twin u make their relationship fun filled, emotional, …it was another level…so Arjun helped rose to find teji…and that emo quite resembles me a lot…hai Ki nahin…lal wala my favourite….well who doesn’t know…hahaha…nesam part was good…nandini…i think some debris was there in her mind…won’t work always….cleanly swipe herπŸ˜‰πŸ˜ˆπŸ˜ˆ

    • S.v

      |Author

      he he he u are proving that u r my twin . did u like it yippiieeee im so happy now and lol nandhini will make trouble in future with rathore. WIll see what will happne next . LOve u so much muhhhaaaaa

  3. Nayan

    I waited for this update eagerly ……….. thank S.V for this awesome epi …… update soon .. God bless you πŸ˜€ πŸ˜€ πŸ˜€ And HAPPY DIWALI ALL!!!!!!!!!!!!

  4. gayathri

    Hey ponnie howtare you I missed u alot…… cumg to d stry its awesome update I like it specially arjun & radzzz part dr……. pls update ur other ff also…. wish you a happy& safe diwali for you darling. …… πŸ™‚

    • S.v

      |Author

      ponniee enga pona ivlo naaal aala kaanum romba miss panniten pidichudha im happy yup regular updates pandren paathutu sollu love u so much and thank u too

  5. Jewel

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    sv, this is a nice chapter…. rathore defeat nandini, i liked it… bt i am afraid she will do something to harm him. and feel happy for nesam at last they are together now. hope nothing will separate them again… waiting for next chapter, post it soon…

    • S.v

      |Author

      jewel thank u so much she will not accept her defeat that soon she is gonna trouble them but what how i donno lol me . LOve u so and will update all regularly. Muhhhaaaa

  6. Dipika

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    Sv darling awesome n fantastic… Reading ur stories means fun..always makes me smile by fun filled in it…i just love the way samrat n rathore answer nandu..she deserves tht…come soon with rocking one…love u loads..muhhhaaa..tc

    • S.v

      |Author

      dheeps thank u so much your words are really my energy booster. will update soon and she is just facing her first defeat will see more, love u tons. muhhhaaaaaaa

  7. Gummiebear

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    This z a very good update Di…loved Rathore so much….but Nandini won’t sit idle nah?!….she’ll do something to trouble them nah?!….loved the update a lot….they way u carried out everything that was really creative of u di….waiting for next….update soon….don’t make me w8 or else I’ll pester u…lol….love u…muaaaaaaaah… Tc😘😍

    • S.v

      |Author

      My lil one thank u so so much dear. Nandhini is going to face the storm called rathore. So yea she wont sit idle she will trouble them. Love u so much muhhhaaaaa.

  8. Aadia

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    Sissy…Happy Diwali….
    Yup..Rathore..you did it manπŸ‘πŸ‘ but Nandini will be dangerous ,right Sissy…and what was that??Mr.Radhika and Ms.Arjun!!shy boy..bravo Radz..both are really crazy. Nesam…so cute…Neil..atleast one time ,please say I love you to her.😊😊…and Rose..nice punishment for Teji,keep it up girl..

    • S.v

      |Author

      Lil sissy thank you for your comment dear. Rathore made it and nandhini will not be silent. Will update soon. Love u tons. Muuhhhaaa

  9. Jessie

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    Yay…Nandu defeated..happy deepawali Baby….catching ur update late… maaf karo bachi ko..hehe….loved this lovely update…Nesam part was sweet…Teji n Rose…lovely…Ardhika…sweet…Finally Rathore signing it..wow..Super shot..waiting 4 next…TC n loads of love…Arjun itna acha baandha ban gate…dil thadapoing..hehe…crazy fan..love u dear

    • S.v

      |Author

      Yov baby tamilah comment pannu. Un comment ennum inba velhathil neendhuvadharkaga ododi vandha ennai emathi pudadhey baby tamil baby tamil. Lol me maaf kiya mein tumney. YUp we know what will our dhil will be like lol all are same baby. Muuhhhaaa love u soo soo soo ooooooo much.

  10. Jnana

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    Late latif suits me right? Okay….. Now….. Thank you soooooo much for the nesam scenes….. I think this was only for me….. Am I right….. ? Well I will think so even if not…… And waiting to see how rathore gets off nandini from everything……. And yeah…… Post the next one soon…….

    • S.v

      |Author

      yup when i was writing nesam i was thinking of u coz u love them right. where were u these days ?? yup will update it regularly promise. Love u soo soo much

  11. Roma

    SV…my sweeeeeetu sissy. ….loved the episode. …missed this story very muchhhhhh. …ardhika n teji were cute. …even rose is with them…..all good ppl r together to defeat bad one. ..nandini. …finally rathore bought bird song….nesam were lovelyyyyyy…..keep it up honeyyy. Love you loads. muaaaaahhhhhh Bear hug my sweeeeeetheart darling β™‘β™‘β™‘β™‘β™‘β™‘β™‘β™‘ πŸ˜‰

    • S.v

      |Author

      Roma my spl friend i am blessed to have u as my frined. love u soooomuch and thank u for those wonderful words . Yup good all are one to wipe out the bad. will see what will happed soon love u sooo much. Muhhhaaaa abear hugs and thabks a ton my friend. love u

  12. Sweetie

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    Jaan,this is superb update.. πŸ˜€ Rathore acquired BS,lovely lovely.. πŸ™‚ Mr.Radhika and Ms.Arjun pair is so lovely and lively.. πŸ˜€ Rose and Teji are out of the world today.. πŸ™‚ Totally love it.. πŸ™‚ Love you loads and take care.. πŸ™‚

    • S.v

      |Author

      JJanu where are u sudden disappearance? ? thank u for those words . U loved the pair thank u so much waiting for misconception ddear love u so much. Muhhhaaaa

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