Manmarziyan – Hamari Adhuri Kahani Chapter 16


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Enjoy the ride….

Neil was totally broken he cried his heart out and straight away went to a bar and gulped many shots but his pained heart was in no mood of taking back his anger over sam. From his pov she always used him whenever wanted but once over she would throw him not only in the part of arjun but always for her he was a side kick but he was stupid to love her.

Sam was crying cursing herself for hurting herself and her idiot. She cried in the car and their situation was suited with this song

Pal Bhar Theher Jao, Dil Ye Sambhal Jaaye
Wait for a few moments so that this heart becomes steady
Kaise Tumhe Roka Karoon…
How should I stop You from going?
Meri Taraf Aata, Har Gham Phisal Jaaye
Every grief that comes my way slips (and I’m untouched by it)
Aankhon Mein Tum Ko Bharoon…
I want to capture You in my eyes
Bin Bole Baatein Tumse Karoon
Without speaking words, I talk with You
Agar Tum Saath Ho…
If (when) You’re with me
Agar Tum Saath Ho
If You’re with me

Behti Rehti… Neher Nadiya Si, Teri Duniya Mein
Like a river I keep flowing in Your world
Meri Duniya Hai Teri Chaahaton Mein
My world lies in Your love
Main Dhal Jaati Hoon Teri Aadaton Mein
I get dissolved in Your habits
Agar Tum Saath Ho…
If You’re with me

Teri Nazron Mein Hai Tere Sapne
There are dreams in Your eyes
Tere Sapnon Mein Hai Naaraazi
There’s dissatisfaction in those dreams
Mujhe Lagta Hai Ke Baatein Dil Ki Hoti Lafzon Ki Dhokebaazi
I feel that the talks of the heart are all fraudulent
Tum Saath Ho Ya Na Ho Kya Fark Hai
Doesn’t matter if You are with me or not
Bedard Thi Zindagi Bedard Hai
Life was painless anyways
Agar Tum Saath Ho (x2)
(Even) If You’re with me (or not)

Palkein Jhapakte Hi, Din Ye Nikal Jaaye
In just a blink of an eye, the day passes
Baithi Baithi Bhaagi Phiroon
Even though I’m sitting, I feel as if I’m running around
Meri Taraf Aata, Har Gham Phisal Jaaye
Every grief that comes my way slips
Aankhon Mein Tum Ko Bharoon…
I want to capture You in my eyes
Bin Bole Baatein Tumse Karoon
Without speaking words, I talk with You
Agar Tum Saath Ho…
If You’re with me
Agar Tum Saath Ho
If You’re with me

Teri Nazron Mein Hai Tere Sapne
There are dreams in Your eyes
Tere Sapnon Mein Hai Naaraazi
There’s dissatisfaction in those dreams
Mujhe Lagta Hai Ke Baatein Dil Ki Hoti Lafzon Ki Dhokebaazi
I feel that the talks of the heart are all fraudulent
Tum Saath Ho Ya Na Ho Kya Fark Hai
Doesn’t matter if You are with me or not
Bedard Thi Zindagi Bedard Hai
Life was painless anyways
Agar Tum Saath Ho…
If You’re with me
Dil Yeh Sambhal Jaaye
My heart becomes steady
Agar Tum Saath Ho…
If You’re with me
Har Gham Phisal Jaaye
Every grief that comes my way slips
Agar Tum Saath Ho…
If You’re with me
Din Ye Nikal Jaaye
The day passes
Agar Tum Saath Ho…
If You’re with me
Har Gham Phisal Jaaye

Neil entered the house with himself drowned in the drink. Prena who was eagerly waiting for neil to come was shocked to see him like that.
Prena ; neil what happened ??
Neil ; happened everything happened mom. She is still saying it was chashni who was behind arjun. Cant she open her eyes and see it was arjun behind my chasni……. Haaa i donno should i not fall in love mom ?? Have i done any mistake mom ?? Then why cant she se my love in my eyes ?? And cried. Prena was helpless. She just caressed his head and slowly she made him to get to his room. He was all the time blabbering and cursing sam. Prena had tears for her son’s condition.


Radhika and arjun reached arjun’s house . She was busy with her tv .
Radhika ; khadoos im starving bring the food quick. Arjun rolls his eyes.
Arjun ; panoti wait i have just started and may i know who is husband and who is wife here ??
Radhika ; of course im ur husband as i rule u. Arjun nods and starts his work and after half an hour he shouted dinner ready. She who changed came to the dining table and was about to eat. She thought for something and straightly she stood up and sat on arjun’s lap and ringed his shoulders and kept her head over his shoulders.
Arjun ; hey panoti what happened ??
Radhika ; khadoos i was longing for this day u and me to live like this with no known person and my wish came true. He smiled and caressed her and said ” panoti u r hungry can u pls eat.
Radhika ; no i wont i want to feed u food with my hand. He nodded and she took some food and she kept it near his mouth. He smiled and purposely bit her fingers. She gave a glare and he smiled with food in his mouth. She took a piece of chili and stuffed it in the food and fed him. He again bit her fingers and munched the food. Then slowly his face changed and he wad coughing. She laughed and took a spoon full of curd but his tongue was still burning.
Arjun holding his head because of burning feel with eyes full of water ; u still the same radhika. U never change. Give me some sweets.
Radhika ; but u dont like sweets na ??
Arjun (banged his head) ; i love chashni…… Now i want sweet soon and was coughing.

She laughed and took a sweet piece and fed him. They both looked at each other and they travelled to their past.

Flash back…….

Police officer – what kind of husband and wife are u guys….
Arjun ; sir wife she ???
Radhika ; he is not my husband…….
Police officer – chup…… Now stop talking lady……
Arjun ; she will not stop talking sir…..
Radhika ; sir now pls dont start……
Officer – now stop talking u 2….. U lady are u hungry ?? Radhika nods her so fast.
Officer ; feed him as his hands are cut he cannot eat and u (pointing at arjun) shut up and eat. Both gets mum and she takes some food and feeds him. He purposely bites her finger. She was like ouch and gave a glare to arjun. Then again he does the same . She was not frustrated. She takes a full fren chilli and stuffs that and feeds that to arjun. He who never knew her idea takes it and then he suffers with the burning effect………….

Both ardhika looks at each other and laughs their heart out.
Arjun ; that was the first time we were called husband and wife. I think he knows horoscope and laughs.
Radhika ; u ok now ??
Arjun ; hmm but i want more chashni and looks at her lips. She blushes and was about to stand . He holds her hand slowly he makes her to sit in his lap again. She was not able to see arjun. He pulls her chin up and slowly slips his hand and cups her face with his one hand and makes her to come close to him. They were about to kiss again the villian came , dont panic phone call.
Arjun (closes his eyes) and shouts ” who invented cell phone and why is that damn ringing whenever i want to kiss my wife and bangs his hand”. Radhika giggles at his helplessness. When he was closing his eyes she slightly peaks his lips and runs away. He turned rock and was just staring blankly.
It was rathore.
Radhika ; rathu…..with full excitement
Rathore ; aaha my sister is so happy so say me what is the matter ??
Radhika ; nothing yaar just my heart is happy donno why.
Rathore (smiling) ; dont find reason for happiness but i guess here someone is lost in thoughts….. And looks at teji. He was looking at sky and counting the stars.
Radhika ; who rathu ??
Rathore ; chashni come to video call. She turned on the video call and made sure that she was in a park by going to the lawn nearby arjun’s house. She signaled him that she will be sitting in the lawn.
Radhika ; hmmm speak..
Rathore ; chashni why out this night.
Radhika ; loo again now say me who is counting the stars ??
Rathore tuned hos mobile and teji and he was counting at the stars and waving his hand and again started his counting. Radhika busted in laugh. Rathore was watching her affectionately.
Radhika ; who is the girl ??
Rathore ; girl means then is he in love with someone.
Radhika ; do u need any proof ?? He is acting weird right ??
Rathore ; haa yaar chashni today morning he saw me and giggled at me and said u have beautiful eyes and was appreciating my looks i thought he was sawing about me but now that idiot was talking about some one.
Radhika ; eyes…. ur eyes beautiful ????? and was laughing like hell. Rathore pls no more jokes i may die laughing and she was holding her stomach and laughing. Rathore made a pout face but he too laughed at her and they finished their talks . She held the call and she came back and found arjun all the time staring at her.
Radhika ; hmmm what ??
Arjun ; i was so stupid that i made this beautiful eyes to shed its tears.
Radhika ; ooh fooo not again i hate these kinds of speeches.
Arjun ; ok no more speeches only action and pulls her mobile and switches off.
Radhika ; why are u switching it off ??
Arjun ; i hate if someone comes in between my way except my panoti. She presses her lips and nods her head with her eye brows up and said ” really ???” He too reciprocated the way she did and said ” really……” and comes close to her and locks the door from from behind and slowly held her face and kisses her and they share a romantic kiss and she after the kiss did not look at him and blushes and keeps her head over his heart.
Arjun ; i never knew kissing would be nice . Stupid arjun missed many times with u panoti. She giggles and rings his shoulder with her hand and smiles at him and said ” shushhh no more looking back they were smiling at each other.

Radhika was making a pillow pillar and Arjun who comes inside screams at her.
Arjun ; radhika what nonsense is this ??
Radhika ; what ??
Arjun ; why this pillow in between here like this and he waves his hand for more than 5 times. She giggles at him and his behavior. She pulls both his ears and smiles and says ” dear husband u r soo romantic today but we cannot do anything till everything between neil and sam is joining hands so chup chop come and sleep . He nods and jumps and sleeps she too sleeps .


Arjun and radhika were sleeping hugging each other . Radhika wakes up and finds herself was being hugged and was buried inside arjun’s heart. She smiles and kisses his heart and goes to kitchen to make coffee. Arjun who was sleeping wakes up stretching his hand and finds radhika was not there. Arjun panics and sees her stole over the bed and he looks at the other side of the bed and does not finds her. He panics and wakes up.
Arjun ; radhika……. Radhika ………and radhika who hears his call paniced as he calls the way he called her the way when she left him. She runs to the bedroom and he was in terible state. She panics and runs to him.
Radhika ; sir……. Sir….and within no time he who saw her hugs her tight and calls her name. She rubs his back till he becomes normal. Arjun was continuously showeing his tears. Radhika silently cursed herself for his state. She did not even move a bit and slowly he comes to normal and looks at her.
Radhika ; sir what so ever happens i will never leave u this time. For no one pls trust me.
Arjun(cups her face) ; that was a worst night mare radhika my days without u and pls till i wake up dont go anywhere coz even i am with u, when i wake up i want to see ur face panoti. She hugs him again and he relaxes his head over her head and comes to normal. They starts to the office .


Radhika coughs 3 times and arjun who heard that takes some file and goes to her cabin in the name of discussing about some projects.
Radhika was really tensed and bites her nail .
Arjun ; wooo woooo panoti relax now say me what happened
Radhika ; rathore and teji are coming back and makes a pout face.
Arjun ; ok now why r u keeping that face its really not nice to see like that….. She hits him .
Arjun ; radhika say me why r u upset ??
Radhika ; if rathore comes teji will also come .
Arjun ; ok now say me which i dont know…
Radhika ; noo…… See if they come then jow can we…. Like how can we ????
Arjun ; romance right ?? She nods her head. He smiles and says ” u know me right how stubbotn im so why worry Mrs. Mehra ?? She rolls her eyes.
Radhika ; how can i sleep without hugging my teddy bear ??
Arjun ; teddy bear ? Who ???
Radhika ; u of course how can sleep without hugging u ?? U spoiled me ….
Arjun (mischievous smile) ; actually not i did not do anything till date. She saw him coming and understood and pushed him he smiled and said he will take care of it.

She calls neil to know what happened.
Neil ; hello who is this ??
Radhika ; haa tumari nani…… Neil looks at the phone and confirms it is radhika.
Neil ; nani missed u soo much muhaa… Muhaaaa and was kissing the phone passionately. Radhika felt disguist and shouted ” neil shut up its me chashni….” neil laughs his heart out and ; i know it is u chashni just wanna make fun of u .
Radhika ; hope u are so romantic so say me what did she say ?? Yes ?? She will say yes i know her . Neil was quite .
Radhika ; neil is everything alright ?? Neil cried his heart and radhika was continuously calling his name.
Neil ; she still says that it was u who took arjun from her. She still loves him chashni what shall i do now ?? And cries.
Radhika ; can i come to canada ??
Neil ; r u out of ur mind i dont want her to hurt u anymore . Enough of u had with her. Leave that topic radhika .
Radhika ; how can i leave neil u r the most important person in my life . All are after u so say me what happened. He explains her everything.
Radhika ; i shouldnt have survived in that accident or i shouldnt have come to mumbai itself. It is all because of me all are suffering.
Neil ; pls chashni sam is killing me pls u too dont join her.
Radhika ; sorry neil. And shr boosts up his mood and finally neil laughs and the whole building was shaken by his laugh. Sam sees that and feels jealous the way he was enjoying the talk. She enters the room and he was kissing the receiver. Sam was in tears but she controls it. But neil noticed that and thought this is the better way to give back her.
Neil ; u do one thing come here na for 2 days.
Radhika ; u serious ??
Neil ; did i say a joke come here i wanna show u who i am.
Radhika ; neil dont neil i can understand that sam is hearing u so pls dont hurt her.
Neil ; im not gonna be some one’s dummy bear im gonna be me. U coming or not ??
Radhika ; did i ever said no to u but not immediately but next week. Only 2 days.
Neil ; done my lady. She smiles and helds the call. Uff……. ufff…. Ufff…..
Radhika ; not again how many kisses in a day ?? …….

Singapore airport.

Teji was out of mind thinking about the green eyes of hers but who will that be….
Rathore ; luna here have these i dont think we may have hot food there where is my brother ?? She points at him. Teji was looking at the departure board. Rathore slapped his head ; this teji is 2 much….. And luna giggles at him and rathore pulls teji to the flight.
Teji ; she has 2 beautiful eyes.
Rathore ; every one has 2 eyes teji . Now shut up and fasten ur seat belt idiot. Luna was continuously laughing at the brother’s conversation. Just then a airhostess comes to luna and sweetly speaks ; ma’am pls fasten ur seat belt. Teji was just blinking at that girl and she looks at him. They share an intense eye lock. Rathore and luna looks at teji and her and they look at each other. The airhostess comes back to sense when her co airhostess calls her “rose…… Rose ??” both teji and rose jerks and she smiles at her own cute way and she goes from there.
Rathore wanted to tease teji ; she looks beautiful.
Teji ; yes ahh ?? And he says ; she is ur sister in law so look her in that eyes..
Luna burst out in laugh.
Rathore ; fix ??
Teji ; yes i fox my option rose .
Rathore ( looks at luna) ;computer ji fix option rose and smiles at her. She nods at them and the flight starts to chicago…….

Thats it guys for today… How was it ?? was it nice ?? Pls do comment your views. Love you all so much… Always stay blessed and always smile.

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  1. Myra

    Awesome chapter…..loved it

    1. S.v

      Thank you Myra

  2. Kavina

    Loved it

    1. S.v

      Thank you

  3. Dev

    o yaar teji fix….rathore fix…..radu fix…..neil is left…..fix him soon buddy….
    Lovd d epi…..keep going

    1. S.v

      Buddy he will also be fixed but let him starts to believe in her again for which sam should trust him. So it will take time but that will also fix. Thanks a ton buddy.

  4. Wow that was realllly superb dear…romance and friendship moments so cuteeeee:-)

    1. S.v

      Thank you so much neetz love you lods.

  5. Sammy

    Oh god surely I will die of laughing ..all are mad ..and teji and rose are awesome ..ardhika they both are completely mad ..hubby u are awesome . Me now kissing the phone ..muahhh u more for this ..just waiting for the romance of 2 states 🙂 🙂

    1. S.v

      I wish i got those kisses from my wife. lol thank you wifie and thanks for those kisses too…. All are now crazy and haa tha tha tomo morning pakka dear. Sorry for make you wait. Love you my dear pyari

  6. Brin

    Awesome episode, waiting for the next update. 🙂

    1. S.v

      Thank you brin 🙂 and happy friendship day to you too ….

  7. Rossy

    Twin now m doing all type of actions…at first Neil…poor soul…i seriously wanna kill Sam..what kind of lady she is …not a ounce of trust on his friend…cut down that friendship…ardhika were naughty n awesome…i think there will be another phone call come on Arjun’s no.. Lol…and teji n rose…fixed…awwwww…happy wala chapter end…hehehe…waiting for next…update soon

    1. S.v

      Super dance hard. Neil will change his attitude totally different towards Sam now and she will curse why she hurted him. Arjun and Radhika will be in their romantic land. Rose did you like that ?? then im happy now and dear next part weekend . pls wait dear. Love you so much….. Muhhaaaa

  8. Jessie

    Sv.. idhu super… ! Loved d song with translation..Neil is 2 heartbroken.. make it tough 4 this sam.. adhu ena eppa parthalum nama dimple kanna va azha vachtu iruka..
    . Ardhika.. Aaaha!!! Pillow! Teddy bear a..aama konjam illa effiel tower sizeku oru teddy bear?????he makes food..aiyo kadavule ippadi1 oru nallavane enakum kudu ?? he got scared she left him..! Hmm..!
    Teji n Rose…and he counting stars..rofl.. avanum cycle gaple plane ye otuvan pola..seems rather n luna is also locked.. idhule ivaru teji choicea lock panraru..hmmm.. super..! 4 jodis n more mischief meets frm Ardhika ahead.. all interested.. eppo adhutha weekend varum?!!! ☺? TC1 n loads of love dear

    1. S.v

      Pakka this time sam has got some tough times. Yup dimple kanana inimey azha maatan. Wait and watch about that. Ardhika he he he they will do all crazy things which they missed when they were together in Mumbai. Aama yaa he is her teddy bear. Wish you get your Arjun soon 😉 my wishes for that. Cycle gapela auto ve too much planeahh ?? You are super awesome in comedy . Seriously i love the way you comment. More and more mischief of Ardhika for sure. Mee too i want the week end soon. Love you lods.

  9. Lakshmi05

    Superb epi sv.. Arjun n rads moments were so cute… Teji counting stars ….n sister in…feeling sad for Neil…waiting for next one.. Luv…

    1. S.v

      Thank you so much lakshmi. Will update soon. Love you

  10. Awesome Epi Akka superb one!! Waiting for next one

    1. S.v

      Thank you jara 🙂

  11. It was funny, in its own way am laughing so hard tnx for lightening my mood. Ardhika were cute n romantic, Rads saying she is Arjun’s husband and then feeding him was too good. Felt bad for both Nrik and Sam. Looking forward to reading more. Love u n tc

    1. S.v

      Gianna thank you so much and i’m happy for those cute words, she is his husband . Neil will be so cold towards Sam , sure will update on this saturday. Love you so much.

  12. Pankh

    Hey Sv..long time again..sorry captured in my hectic schedule…but I do read all ur updates..u r amazing dear…u make ur every story funny cute sweet and make the readers hooked to it wid ur fabulous writing..loved the chappy…Ardhika..superb..poor Neil..idiot Sam..Teji..aww…waiting for nxt..and when is Tha Tha coming?? tons of love and stay blessed

    1. S.v

      Pankh no sorry yaar i can understand. I’m really happy for your words and i’m really in moon for your words. Ardhika will be crazy and tha tha will knock the tu tomo morning . Pakka thank you so much.

  13. Superb update…plz nxt one post soon :)…

    1. S.v

      Thank you so much neha

  14. _Ritu

    Sv dear Semma!! 🙂 Ungala madri mulai yaarukum illai… Well honesty don’t know what does it mean..but still wrote coz I love to learn new new languages.. 🙂 🙂 anyways epi was superb.. NeSam bg song heart touching…I jst love that song…Duffer Sam…wanna punch her hard..Neil…cant see him lyk dis..hope they will patch up soon… ArDhika wow wow wow.. Husband Rads lol ?? 😀 and villain phone call.. I guess now Arjun Mehra will purchase all sim companies.. 😀 Teji and Rose hilarious an cute…fabulous epi dear..waiting for nxt and for 2 states as 🙂

    1. S.v

      Oh my god itni badey bath. That means the brain which you have no one has. Thats a big complement ritu thank you so much dear. I love that song so much and that was suiting their situation, nesam patch up takes time dear. Arjun mehra is capable of doing things like that …… 2 states half way through dear. will update once i finish. Love you so much

  15. Gummiebear

    Hey swthrt…. Words are not enough to describe how awsme it z…..all the good words of dictionary…. I m blushing here after reading it….aradhika part was so cute….nesam plz reunite them soon….hey I loved the way you made me travel through past when radhika feeded him nd he bit her fingers….plz include this past scenes often….I love them….Overall a masterpiece….you rocked it dear and waiting for 2 states too….hey you missed to give precap….I love it when you give it…it boost my curiosity….update soon otherwise I will pester you….

    Love You??

    1. S.v

      supriya my lil one awww missed you so much. I wish i saw your face while you were blushing Ardhika will do all crazy acts and nesam it takes time honey let her prove herself and yup we are travelling in the memory of our manmarziyan so i will include the past whereever suitable as they are close to heart of all of us so i will include them to cherish those moments. acutally did not thought the upcoming track thats why no precap dear. You can pester me always. Love you so much and always smile dear.

  16. as usual un style la kalakita……mindblowing episode da…..ardhika all part awesome..please contin ardhika romance ..pavam neil.sam konsam allatum..tej rose,rathore-luna love super,please update soon tc…….. un full name enna ?u r awesome writer please conti….chellam …bye

    1. S.v

      Aww subha thank you so much . Ardhika will continue their romance and nesam pls have some patients dear. Love you lods and my name is shri

  17. Gauri

    Awesome update my Cutie pie ….loved Aradhika moments ….Teji counting stars 🙂 LoL that was funny 🙂 pained for Neil 🙁 when will Sam realize her mistakes….please make her realize soon …looking forward to see NeSam together….SV you are a girl with golden heart and your words depict that stay blessed and keep writing 🙂

    1. S.v

      Didi thanm u soo much didi awww im reallg in pluto didi sam will surely realise her mistake but neil will be stubborn nkw with his decision didi. Love u soo much .Bear my tight hugs and kisses.

  18. Sweetie

    Jaan..It’s superb..Arjun’s fear,Radhika’s care,Neil making Sam to burn in jealousy and Teji’s love interest..All are superbly dealt.. 🙂 Love you loads jaan.. 😀

    1. S.v

      Jaan thank u soo much for those lovely words and love u soo much dear.

  19. Dipika

    Sv darling sorryyyy for being late dearryyy..stuck with office work…today’s epi is mind blowing… Song is just suited for nesam..i felt their pain..n but ardhika moment make it all desert… I just loved thm..their feeling n blush described so naturally…. Nw pls make nesam togthr naa…m waiting for their patch up….nxt one soon plz…love

    1. S.v

      Dipika darling thank u so much for ur lovely words well ardhika will be like this and nesam will unite but neil will be a bit stubborn this time dear. But they will get through but it takes time. Love u lods dear.

  20. Jnana

    Oh my god!!!! What shall i say…. No words…. I love ardhika…. I asked you to stuff something in Sam’s head…. U did not…. I’m crying now…. But really awesome epi ..

    1. S.v

      Jnana thank u so much and dont cry dear as sam will regret her mistake yet neil wil not tur around this time . Happy ?? Love u so much jnana .

  21. Sreee

    Akka..superb Epi…ardhika r the stole the lime light…woww just wowwww..they r becoming sooooo cute,sweet and lovely daya by day..and teji,haha he got someone…but neilnwhy the hell should his life has all these type of problems..while he is the most sweetest of all…haaa Akka i dont know..feeling so bad for him….am very eagerly waiting for next…sorry for commenting u so much..muahh?

    1. S.v

      Thank u so much thangachi ur neil will also his love back but let sam too prove herself that it is only her in neil’l life. Jist have a bit patients dear. Love u soo much.

  22. Awesome, wowwww sv it’s very interesting n beautiful story. Ardhika so lovelyyyyyy. …nesam in miserable state…n teji lost…wowwww so much going on. ..keep it up honeyyy. Love you loads, muaaaaahhhhhh Bear hug ♡♡♡

    1. S.v

      Thanks a ton roma. You will see more in future pls wait and do read and always be here to encourage me . Love you roma

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