Manmarziyan- Destiny…Passion …Obsession (Chapter 9)

Chapter 9
Destiny- you guys blame me for making your life complicated …but the truth is your heart and mind makes everything complicated…Sam thinks her heart is with Arjun but she cannot tolerate Neil with anyone…not even with her bestie…and to add Arjun will know of his dancing swan
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Mehra Mansion

Nandini was having breakfast with Arnav when a man in his late 20s greeted her…she gave one nod and asked him to sit…Arnav smiled he knew old Nandini was coming back.

Nandini; ‘’Rana…what update do you have’’

Rana; ‘’Radhika Mishra is off to US for a 1 yr exchange programme…she is in NYU…Arjun already met her… could not recognise her but likes her ’’

Arnav and Nandini’s face brightened up…Rana spoke again; ‘’Jai Khanna is madly in love with Radhika…they are planning their alliance once she is back’’

Nandini’s expression hardened; ‘’Jai Khanna will never get Radhika….she will become my Arjun’s bride by hook or by crook…and this time I will see to it…get Hudson on line…I want all the details on Arjun-Radhika while they are in US’’ Nandini spoke with so much command that Rana jumped he was already on his toes … Arnav was little surprised…this Nandini was the old Nandini a smart and hardcore business women…and he knew she will bring Radhika in Arjun’s life.

Nandini’s POV; ’I never refused my baby anything in this world… I will do anything for my brother’s welfare …he likes you…you will be my Arjun’s bride Radhika…Jai khanna will only watch’ Nandini turned to the butler; ‘’Ask the driver to get the car ready…I am joining Bird Song today’’

Arnav was little surprised; ‘’Beta are you sure…take your time there is no hurry’’

Nandini; ‘’No Chachu…its time…I need control in my hands…I know Arjun has come to like Radhika and once he knows her completely…he won’t be able to resist her… I believe your word…she is best for him and I don’t want to lose her to Khanna’s ‘’ Arnav nodded he himself wanted Radhika to be Arjun’s partner…after meeting Radhika first time 3-4 yrs back… he had made the arrangements to get all the details on her …and whatever he got impressed him more…he had decided once Radhika was of marriageable age he would himself request her parents for her hand…and now even Nandini supported him…he knew she was hard to defeat if she used her brain…Nandini quickly dressed up and came down…Arnav joined Nandini to full fill the formalities.

NYU Campus USA

Radhika was waiting in the discussion room for her mentor mentee discussion….Arjun leisurely walked towards the table sat opposite to her and spoke; ‘’Hi Bunny…how is it going’’

Radhika fumed at the name; ‘’My name is Radhika…will you please call me by my name’’

Arjun; ‘’Only if you say sorry for bluffing me that day…that to by holding both the ears’’

Radhika; ‘’I said sorry that day itself…no more now…call me whatever you like…and by the way I have completed the case studies…here are the solutions you can question me now’’ Arjun started cross questioning Radhika…the more he questioned he concluded that she was extremely brainy and that impressed him more…he watched her speak…Radhika at times would blush due to Arjun’s unblinking stare at her…Arjun enjoyed her discomfort. Arjun praised her work and gave her the new assignment for the week. She made a face and left…Arjun chuckled

Radhika had started making her mark on her professors by her hard work…they motivated her to do her best. After finishing her classes she went to library to do her job…she was standing on the ladder arranging some books when Arjun came to that section…he looked at her and fumed…she had lifted her hands up to arrange the books on the shelf which had made her short t-shirt go up…giving a tantalizing view of her naval and back…guys standing there seemed to have got glued to that section …Arjun gave one angry glare to each one of them and they dispersed…Arjun gave a kick to ladder…making Radhika lose her balance Arjun caught her before she could fall…he whispered; ‘’Come out… now’’ Radhika blinked…but ignored …he again gestured her but she ignored…Arjun went mad at that…he thought ’after today you will never dare to defy me’

The head called Radhika and told her to sort the books out from the boxes kept in the adjoining store room and arrange them before leaving…she went inside the store , opened the boxes and started….Arjun knew she is inside…he quietly went and locked the door of the store…and switched off the lights…he thought; ‘’you will never ever defy me bunny’’. Radhika panicked she had fear of closed and dark places…she wanted to scream but voice seemed to be caught in her throat…she was breathless…after fighting the fear for 15-20 min she collapsed.

Singapore

Neil and Hanna’s friendship was burning Sam…she found Neil working on his assignment and quietly went to him; ‘’Neil can we go out just for a drive’’

Neil without looking at her replied; ‘’tell me where you want to go I will ask the driver to take you…I am waiting for Hanna…we have a group assignment and she is my partner’’

Sam was furious; ‘’Why is she coming to my house…I won’t allow this’’

Neil’s fingers stopped on the keyboard; ‘’she is coming to my house…she won’t step in your area…so don’t worry…and I have to supervise one of the Bird Song shoot here in Singapore…so I am very busy right now’’

Sam felt hurt she softly asked; ‘’How will you feel if I call any male friend of mine to our house and take him to my room’’

Neil smiled; ‘’I will feel nothing…its your life…I never interfered …I am your friend and I know my limits’’

Sam felt like slapping him…she stomped her foot and left…next Neil heard the sound Sam’ room door which was closed with a bang

Neil smiled ..POV; ‘I will stay in my limits from here on…Radhika was right I made myself too available for you’’

Hanna came and Neil greeted her with a hug…all the time they worked…the door of Neil’s room was closed…Sam was restless…she would here their giggles and discussion…but was more puzzled when they both were quite…she could not handle more…she quickly made 2 cups of coffee and on pretext of giving them coffee and snacks…she barged into Neil’s room…which left Hanna and Neil little shocked…but Neil covered up; ‘’Thanks Sam…I needed coffee desperately…by the way she is
Hanna…and Hanna this is Sam my childhood friend’’

Hanna teasingly asked; ‘’Friend or girl friend’’

Neil smiled and replied; ‘’Only friend…I don’t believe in love anymore’’ That sentence left Sam shocked…she quickly excused herself …Sam couldn’t understand why it hurt so much…she should be happy that Neil is moving on…and since she loved Arjun she should not feel bad… she dialled Radhika… but she received no response…she went back to her room picked her things and went to college…she was not having any classes today but decided to do her project at the library.

Anna’s Dorm USA

Anna had tried Radhika 5th time…but she was not answering…it was 9:30 PM …she did not go to the bakery…she was not in library where the hell was she…finally Anna decided to check herself…Anna reached the campus and dialled Radhika’s no. she heard a vibrating sound near the lockers…that meant Radhika was not having her phone…she panicked more…she called all her friends everybody expressed ignorance…Steve called Arjun and asked him …Arjun realized he forgot that he had locked her…he called Anna and told her everything…she disconnected the call angrily and ran to the library with the guards… Arjun reached campus in other 15 minutes…when they opened the door they found her on the floor curled up…exhausted …here lips were parted indicating her struggle to catch breath…Anna asked them to open all windows…she rubbed Radhika’s palm…but she did not respond…she quickly called ambulance…once in hospital, Arjun came close to Radhika to touch her forehead but
Anna held his hand; ‘’don’t you dare’’

Arjun; ‘’Anna I am sorry…I never expected this’’

Anna ; ‘’Arjun she has fear of dark and closed places…she never shuts her room when she sleeps…why did you do this…just to make her bend down… your ego couldn’t handle a girl better than you’’

Arjun kept quite…he felt miserable…doctors informed Anna Radhika was fine but she needs to rest for 2 days …Anna helped her change and walked her to the car…Arjun was standing there all the time but Radhika didn’t give him a glance…yet she smiled at her other friends. Anna along with Cheryl and Cole took Radhika home…Arjun went back to his apartment…he ransacked his room…he was angry he could not handle Radhika avoiding him…but he didn’t knew the reason for the same ’Bunny I know I did wrong… but you will not ignore me…

I will not back down till you accept me as a part of your life’ . Arjun received a message from Rana…’attached is the picture of the girl you are looking for and mailed you her previous and current years RYTHYM performances ’ Arjun downloaded the picture and the videos…and to his surprise… Radhika was his dancing swan…he watched all her videos…Arjun’s heart was hammering in his chest …he touched the screen moving his fingers down her body ….his thoughts were going wild…blood in his veins seemed to have started boiling …he laughed danced and fell on the bed on his back laughing… then whispered; ‘’Now I know why you felt so familiar…why you avoiding me…hurt that bad Bunny…You were right in front of me for so many day…Neil tried to hide you…but destiny sent you to me… Neil…my friend sorry…but now she is mine…I will not let her go anywhere…I will win her …come what may’’

Arjun moved his finger on Radhika’s picture and stopped on her lips….he zoomed it and kissed it passionately whispering again; ‘’one day I will kiss you the same way bunny…you cannot escape me…now you are mine…and no one will come between us not even Neil’’ Arjun went and stood under cold shower…he had to calm his nerves…he stood there breathing heavily supporting himself by placing his palms on the wall… she had completely captured his heart and mind…and he just wanted her nothing else.

Neil called Radhika…it had been a week since they last spoke…she answered; ‘’Hi Neil…how are you’’

Neil; ‘’I am good…but you are not…you never call me Neil…you call me buddy or handsome…speak up what’s wrong’’

Radhika smiled he knew her completely, but she decided to keep Neil away from the matter; ‘’I am absolutely fine…just overworked myself so bit tired…you tell me…. Has your love story come on track’’

Neil took a deep breath; ‘’I don’t care anymore’’

Radhika understood; ‘’Good…now concentrate on you studies and work…be happy’’

Neil was busy with Radhika on call…Sam new it was Radhika…but somehow she burned inside…because Neil had gone in the balcony to speak to Radhika privately …Sam wondered what was the need for that sometimes their bond was beyond her understanding…On the other side Arjun dialled Radhika a couple of times… wanted to apologize…he was desperate to hear her voice but her no. was busy he …he thought for a minute and dialled Neil…when he got the same response on the call…he
banged his phone on the floor; ‘’I know you are talking to Neil….soon…I will take you away from everyone…you will only talk to me’’
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Hi there its me destiny again- So the Beast is completely aware of Beauty’s identity…and has gone head on heals mad for her…for Neil Sam was his first priority but now he seem to have backed out being hurt by her again and again…Radhika and Neil find solace in talking to each other about their troubles…but little did the beauty know that Beast had already marked her as his…and she was incapable of escaping him.

Credit to: Gauri

91 comments

  1. Sathya

    OMG.. now i am really scared of ARJUN. Gauri you did a knock out today by your episode. ITS is a FANTASTIC episode. MINDBLOWING…Ufff…i am breathing heavily and my heart beats are getting increased after reading this episode… Dear pls don’t do this to us yar…you are an fabulous writer….HATS of to you….:) 🙂 🙂

  2. Supriya

    Di it z just awsme I so loved it u r 1 of a kind di srsly the more I read the more I get curious wen I read ur updates di I feel butterflies in my stomach srsly di u know u r the best nd plz just keep on writing m so addicted to ur updates dat today I had my last paper but I was thinking kii u will update dis ff today…first thing I did after getting out of exam hall was dat I checked ur update….plz tell me wen will u update next 1???love u sooo much.tc

    • Gauri

      Darling Supriya…hope your exam went well…and thanks you so much for the lovely comment…I can feel your exictment in your comment…love you loads dear…stay blessed 🙂

  3. Rg

    Hi gauri u were right on track. Arjun is little more crazier than his usual.. My god u have given him character of an alpha male. I hate him for locking her up in dark place… Even I hate dark places… He is toooo possessive… And u gave him d right name he might not look like a beast but he is sure is one…With this possessive slightly sadistic arjun isnt radhika bound to get hurt??? How will she fall for him? I thought atleast arjun will understand radhika s and Neil’s friendship but it seems not to be… Sam, arjun, Jay none understand… Hey just curious gauri this arjun sounds dangerous , a bit broken down right possessive and mean… won’t he brk radz here… yet I love this story and chemistry btw them… I love this story sooooooo much….. Thank a million for writing this and sharing with us…. I live it. U r an amazing, awesome, fantastic, lovely writer… plz plz tell me whn will b d nxt update… I can’t wait….. once again such grt story… despite all his fault I do like arjun and d sooothing Neil.

    • Gauri

      Thanks a ton Rg…well he will not understand anything till she agrees to to be his…he will love her care for her…but will not let her leave him…will post soon 🙂

  4. Bhabya

    Gauri di it is awesome. Waiting desperately for the nxt chap. Ur story has some magic…..

  5. Amy

    Oh gauri where should i start……. it was just so amazing….. you are a wonderful writer….. every little moment was perfect and i enjoyed it so much……. i was waiting for you update….. it was worth the wait…… and now i will wait for next episode impatiently…….. love u… take care dr 🙂 🙂 🙂

  6. Aweiii….waiting for it like mad…it gave solace…so the beast is completely aware of beautiful…he should get many more ignorance from radz…idiot…my nerves are so…highly anxious to know what happen next…this is one of my fab ffs…n u also..
    Abha…no words for now…Awesome…flawless…loads of love..tc…n update soon plzzzzzzzzzzz

    • Gauri

      How are you sweety? don’t worry…she will drive him nuts …and thanks a ton for the amazing comment…loads of love and hugs for you 🙂

      • M Fyn…as ur update calmed me same time m eager for next one…love u dear…asked u something in my page..how r u…

      • Lol…m here again…don’t know how many time I changed pages…i wanted to ask you so many questions…but should stop myself from doing that…thought if I bore u…n why the hell I could not copy anything from telly update…

  7. Sejal

    Gauri di u r such a darling ….
    I jst love ur ffs … The last one u ended was feb and this is one is also amazing…
    The beast has finally decided to conquer the heart of beauty at any cost….
    A very bif fan of ur writing…
    Plzz update the next one ASAP

  8. Hope

    Omg!! Damn good..oh i feel lyk watching an engish serial..hollywood quality yaaar..i’m awestruck..one hell of a ff.

  9. Hope

    Omg!! Damn good..oh i feel lyk watching an engish serial..hollywood quality yaaar..i’m awestruck..one hell of a ff. UPDATE NXT RIGHT NOW…can’t w8 4 reading.

  10. roshini

    Arjun is mad for her and Nandini want to fullfill her brother’s wish…wow need to see what will Radhika do

  11. Sv

    Wow di u rocked . More more more updates . In searching for wods to explain my happiness.

    Soo nandhu is behind arjun for his love. I love this nandhini . Neil wow his behaviour changed towards sam and sam is hurt . Sam pls speak out your heart to neil else then the situation may go the other way round. Arjun found his swan yippiee but knowingly or unknowingly he has fallen for radhika . Anna super her concern towards her friend was awesome. Thank god jai will not only face arjun but also nandhini.

    Di u rocked love u my di bear hugs and kisses . Love u infinity time.

    • Gauri

      Thanks SV dear…and I am looking for words to thank you for being such an amazing support …loads of love and hugs for you:)

      • Sv

        Di make arjun to go crazy behind rads and she should make him mad before she says yes to him . I dont know y I said that but radhika is a precious gem she should be protected by arjun only of he knows her worth. Di love u but make tough for arjun not that much touch but some what small

  12. tanyaly

    Hi Gauri, I am Tanya from Hyderabad. I love the way you write. You write like a professional and take the story forward so interestingly. I really love it. I wish Manmarziyan would come back with season 2 having similarities with your story. I really want your story to be picturised. And finally I want to give a suggestion, can you please mention when would you update your next episodes so that we can relax and calm down our curiosity. Please do not stop writing this FF and try to make it regular. Again, I just love the way you write. Thanks a ton again. ?????

    • Gauri

      HI tanya, thanks for the comment dear…I will update on Wednesday morning…I wish some picks my story up and makes mmz 2 🙂 stay blessed

  13. happy

    hi dr….hw r u……wt r u doing……dont you know…..pls understand myself…….my heart beat raising………..cant keep calm….y r u doing this…….nw i cant write anything…….my hand shivering…….what ll happen……poor rad-neil…….dont hurt them….i beg u……..i loved them……i cant tolerate……pls yaar……arjun ding over…..he cant do like this…….nw he knew….wt ll happen hereafter…today epi good…..bt cant accept it……sry yaar……..

    only one last request……nw u have one ff…..so pls give as soon an possible……sry yaar i am hurted u…….sry….

  14. chandan

    Good one Gauri…didn’t expect that arjun will come to know of Radhika this early…twist in the story…Nandini giving hints to Arjun regarding Radhika…Anyway great going…now how Arjun going to win Radhika??
    Update soon n tc…

  15. Oh my darling I was eagerly waiting for ur ff 🙂 🙂 🙂 love u lot 🙂 🙂 🙂 at least arjun felt bad for hurting rads 🙂 🙂 now no one can stop arjun from reaching rads 🙂 🙂 but it’s not easy to win rads 🙂 🙂 asusual Neil n rads bonding beyond explanation 🙂 🙂 🙂 Sam now only she started to know about her feeling 🙂 let her b den only she ll know real love of hers 🙂 🙂 after all these I liked Nandhini part 🙂 🙂 really she rocked her part 🙂 in dat small part nadhini’s concern for her bro was really nice 🙂 🙂 🙂 loved it dear 🙂 🙂 take care <3

  16. Shree

    Di di di!! Loveeeedddd iiiitttttt!!! Why did Rana do that?! Neil and Nandini’s efforts went in vein…. Whatever he found his swan… How dare he lock her… I don’t know what’s running in Sam’s head… She is too irritating… I love Nandini’s determination to get Radhika into Arjun’s life….. Right on track di…

    I wanted to ask you one thing…. How do you manage to get time to write?! I’m struggling here… Post soon di…

    Love you loads.. Tc… Keep smiling… Bear hug ??

    • Gauri

      Hi Shree, Rana did it -you will know soon…and how do I mange…when you have such amazing writers than everything just happens …love you and thanks a ton 🙂

  17. Diya

    Woowwwww.. loving it.. love possessive arjun, hope his junoon does not hurt radhika more.

    Good going dear.. was waiting for ur updates ???

  18. aastha

    well i dont have words to express my joy……i loved every part of it…….hw dare arjun lock her in a room…..poor rads.anna s a very gud friend………i like niel better now….i immensely loved sam burning…..serves her ri8 arterall she hurt niel….now its ur turn…….nandini’s change ws awesome…….nw it’ll b more difficult 4 jai 2 get rads…….finally arjun came 2 know that rads was hs dancing swan……now i wonder how she’ll get away from hs cluches……..loved the last part too….ne-rads findig solace i each others company..eagerly waitig 4 te nxt chappy..n also eager 2 to see samrat’s reaction when nandini di joins bird song……….love u…take care……..

      • aastha

        di i forgot to add 1 thing………u’ll make it hell difficult 4 arju na?????????plzzzz dnt make rads fall 4 hm easily………….love u………

      • aastha

        hehe…….wen r u gonna update????????? sry 4 pestering u………bt what to do…im kind of addicted to ur story……..

        umm di yesterday i cotactyed telly updates to knoe whether we could expect a 2nd part of mmz jst like iss pyar ko kya nam doon in hotstar…..they told that its up to sp and production team of mmz………i wish they wud tik f it………

  19. Oh my god ….what a great lovely update…each every scenes superbdear…iam very happy arjun knows radhika is his dancing swan….pls update soon dear ….

  20. Vini

    Very good one 🙂 it’s shows more of jealousy feeling for Sam and arjun .. Waiting to know what will happen between ardika and nesam and how arjun will apologize her 🙂

  21. deeva

    Awesome epi desperately waiting for next update……………….. nd ur destiny part I always like that in fact I love each nd every word of ur ff……………… I just can’t wait for next update…………………. love u tc.

  22. Gauriiiiii super episode finally arjun ws found his dancing swan 🙂 Now i want to see, what will he do?
    I love the way of ur writing & connectivities. And ur definitions :O too gud ma. So, when will u post nxt update? Im waiting.

  23. Gauri it was fabulous yar with every coming sentence my heart beat was raising what will happen nxt…u nailed it yar…superb… loved it…nxt part soon pls…R- Neil bond is too cute yar…like it so much….love u dear

  24. neetz

    Wow wow wow just wow!!!!!!! I just don have words to say…..super awsome..this is the best ff of mms ..i ve been missing the serial b4 but after i started reading ur ff m not missing it anymore..:-) stay blessed.. :-*

  25. Sejal

    Dii i have a request everytime u come up with the next chap jst add the day on which u will upload the next one ..
    Cause it feels a kind of sukoon after knowing the day whn will the next one will come up….
    Plzzzzz

  26. Kanika Kamboj

    Waoooo….waooooo….just waooooo…it was worth waiting for…tremendous episode…waiting for more…<3

  27. Roma

    Wowwww awesome gauri dearrrr it’s mind blowing and superbbb episode. …loved nandini’s determination n her lovely attitude in this story. ..neil gave good lesson to sam …n she will know how important he is in her life n what role he keeps, friend or pure love….raneil bond is outstanding. …arjun very impressed with rads intelligence but also wants her to bow down for him….his act was awful n her ignorance punished his ego badly…very dramatic way you made beast identify the beauty…his dancing swannnn…I’m very curious to know how will he going to snatch what he wants…..but our beauty rads is the only one who will crash his ego in tiny little pieces but get hurt herself too in it….thx for keeping the good pace of this amazingly awesoooooome story….loved it very very muchhhhhh….keep it up honeyyy, eagerly waiting for the next episode, love you loads. muaaaaahhhhhh

  28. Yaar I am like fully mad and addicted to your story..you are just superb . love you a lot for writing such an amazing story making it more wonderful with your skills.

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