Manmarziyan- Destiny…Passion …Obsession (Chapter 7 and 8)

Hello my all dear friends, first of all Big Thanks for supporting my previous FF so nicely….so as promised here is the next update I am giving 2 chapters together as I will be busy in office on saturday as well…next post will be on Monday or Tuesday….do let me know how was this one .Pls pls pls do comment… 🙂 Special thanks to Maandey you gave me the idea for a nick name thanks again …keep smiling dearies

Chapter 7

I know you must be dying to know what will Arjun do…trust me Arnav gave a suitable name Beast he was …when it came to winning…but Beauty was about to break the first wall…and put her mark on his heart
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Ney York USA

Arjun was furious not because…she fooled him but because she wasn’t scared even a bit…she faced him with so much confidence that he was himself taken aback…he wanted to teach her a lesson…he should meet Anna today. Radhika settled herself in Anna’s dorm..she was hesitant first because it was a luxury dorm like a 2 bhk…it was expensive to get one like that…Radhika thought of moving out but Anna made her comfortable;’’ Rads…oh your full name might not come correct …see you don’t have to pay…its already done by my dad…I don’t allow anyone…because they befriend me for their benefit…but I saw a truthfulness in your eyes…so make yourself comfortable…pay me what you can…and if you can’t I am cool with it’’

Radhika; ‘’You read people pretty quick’’

Anna; ‘’Experience honey… my father is one of the biggest attorney here and my mom …owns a fashion label…they are famous… busy perfect people…they are everything but my parents…I just have their name not their love….my sister eloped with a guy who was nowhere close to my parents status…but she is happy…she could never handle that pressure being an average daughter to extraordinary parents …then I decided…I will be on my terms.…I have met people who pretend to know you from ages…that is because of money…behind your back they are jack a*s…’’ Anna took a deep breath she had never spoken so much to anyone…but something about
Radhika made her comfortable to her. ‘’tell me if I bore you’’

Radhika; ‘’No…that’s ok…I never thought I could get a friend so soon…ok let me arrange my stuff’’

Anna; ‘’Thanks…ok you are vegan right…make yourself comfortable… kitchen is on the left…I ‘’ll take you to supermarket on weekend you can buy whatever you like’’

Singapore

Sam and Neil had reached Singapore…Sam was looking out of the cab like a kid and smiling …Neil was simply enjoying his lady love’s happiness…suddenly Sam turned to him…Neil quickly composed himself…she knew he was watching her she ignore that and asked; ‘’Where am I going to stay…dad said you did all the arrangement’’

Neil; ‘’With me’’ Sam was shocked

Sam;’’Neil…that’s not correct…I am not comfortable…and how come dad allowed this’’

Neil gave her one look ,he felt bad that she did not trust him; ‘’We are not going to share a room Samaira… you will have your separate room …it’s difficult to get a dorm or a university hostel here…and one more thing…you will have all your privacy I will never enter your room…and will give you all the emergency numbers so that you feel safe around me…and even after all this you don’t feel safe I will get you a different flat’’ Neil ended the conversation…and turned away Sam wanted to speak but his lifted his hand up gesturing her to be quite. Sam closed her eyes she had again hurt him…once they reached the building….Neil quietly paid the cab…pulled the luggage and moved towards the lift…with Sam behind her…the agent who got them the flat handed Neil two pairs of keys…Neil unlocked the flat and gave Sam a pair …he made sure her room door ‘s lock were working properly….he picked his luggage and got inside his room…he locked it and fell on his back on the bed…he closed his eyes…a lone tear trickled down and fell on the bed.

Sam was feeling miserable…she knew if she called Radhika about this…she is bound to get scolded she decided to talk to Neil herself. Neil freshened up…he was adjusting his cupboard…when his phone started ringing…it was Arjun…Neil answered; ‘’Who gave you my new no.’’

Arjun; ‘’Prerna Aunty…who else…and why the hell you chose Singapore…you should have chosen US NYU…I am mad at you for that’’

Neil in a dull voice; ‘’You know why I chose…leave all that how are you?’’

Arjun; ‘’Why are you dull bro…is everything fine?’’

Neil: ‘’Yes….all is good…how about you’’

Arjun; ‘’Bad start of the week…a tini-tiny girl made a fool out of me…I am still in shock…over that she is not even scared of me’’

Neil chuckled ; ‘’Wow…that’s a news…so how is she…I mean in looks’’

Arjun after a pause; ‘’Since no one is around I can speak the truth…Cute…very cute…I fell for her beautiful eyes…otherwise it’s not easy to bluff me’’

Neil; ‘’So what’s next…taking her on a date’’

Arjun; ‘’One day yes…but for now she needs a lesson’’ Arjun and Neil ended their conversation after few minutes. Arjun dialled Anna…she did not answer his call he decided to speak to her tomorrow first thing…Anna was one the 3 female friends he had…and they were close like buddies…she was a no nonsense girl…and Arjun respected her for that…he was confident she won’t refuse him…but he was about to be shocked.

Next morning, Arjun rang the bell of Anna’s dorm she had not answered any of his calls, and when the door opened his jaw dropped, Radhika was standing infornt of him wearing a track pant and a lose t-shirt…her wet hair still dripping water…Arjun’s heart skipped a beat…his pov; ‘why the hell enemy has to be so cute…and what is she doing here’…Radhika watched him for a minute and then spoke; ‘’What are you doing here? Arjun jolted out of his thoughts

Arjun; ‘’Same pinch…what are you doing here’’

Radhika; ‘’I live here’’

Arjun all surprised and little sarcastic; ‘’Now what story did you cook up to get into this luxury dorm’’

Radhika was about to give back when Anna spoke; ‘’Raa—dhi—ka… wow that came quite correct…go finish your breakfast or you will be late…and hi Arjun’’

Arjun ‘s POV after hearing name Radhika; ‘Oh she is Steve’s mentee…great ‘

Radhika ‘s POV- ‘Arjun….sounds familiar who cares he is more of a Duryodhan…’ Radhika moved towards the kitchen…turning with a jerk hitting Arjun with her long wet hairs…he just made an annoyed face…’’Anna… you too …she is bluffing …don’t believe her…why did you allow her’’

Anna smiled; ‘’ 2 reasons with a plus One she fooled you which is difficult…two- she was not even a bit scared of you…plus is she is an honest and a good girl…and Arjun…she is my friend now and don’t hurt her’’ Arjun lifted his hand in frustration gave one look in the direction of the kitchen and left…Anna just smiled

Radhika got ready she wore a floral midi frock …with a broad belt at the waist… Anna watched her packing her bag…she smiled and said; ‘’You are very pretty Rads…’’

Radhika blushed ; ‘’Thanks Anna…see you in the evening’’

Anna; ‘’Call me if someone troubles you’’ Radhika waved her and left she had to meet her mentor today…but she was about to be surprised…Arjun had requested…Mr Burton to change his mentee…the old man was so fond of Arjun that he readily agreed…and looking at Radhika’s credentials he felt she should get the best mentor as she was an intelligent girl….Radhika moved to the discussion room and sat on the table allotted to her…there were others waiting for their mentor sitting on other tables…Radhika started reading…after sometime she felt someone standing across the table…she lifted her head up…she blinked all shocked , surprised and irritated. Arjun smiled at the confusion on her face…he enjoyed it he took the chair; ‘’Radhika Mishra…I am you mentor Arjun Mehra…welcome to my hell honey’’ Radhika understood he did this to trouble her but she was not the one to give up…she smiled accepting his challenge; ‘’Thank you Mr. Hades’’ Arjun liked her wittiness…he kept a bundle of paper on the Table; ‘’these are 100 management case studies you need to read them ….and at the end there is a problem for which you need to write a solution for…you have time till Sunday…Monday I will see you again and question you on your answers be prepared’’ Radhika got up Arjun dropped the bundle on Radhika’s hands…she staggered a bit and then gained controlled… gave him a glare and walked off…Arjun watched her and chuckled; ‘’So cute ….She can’t even handle the weight of these papers …how will she face me’’

Singapore

Neil had ordered food once it arrived he arranged it on the table…he did not knock the door of Sam’s room…Sam heard some sound and herself came out…she tried speaking to him …but Neil took his food and went inside his room and locked it…Sam felt bad…but now it was enough she started banging his door…’’Open up Neil…I know I hurt you…I am sorry…please Neil don’t ignore me like this…you promised you will never leave my side…I am not moving till you open the door.’’ Neil closed his eyes…first time he felt he should have never fallen in love. He got up and opened door and found Sam sitting and sobbing…he lifted her up by her shoulders Sam hugged him tight…Neil consoled her and took her to the table for dinner…Neil wiped her face lovingly and made her have food…Neil became normal with her…but somewhere it hurt him…that Sam couldn’t trust him till date. After the food was done Sam asked; ‘’Can we go out for a drive…or a walk’’

Neil replied; ‘’We can go for a walk in the building premises…I have applied for a rental car from tomorrow there will be a driver here…you can go anywhere you like…now let’s go for a walk…from tomorrow our classes are beginning we have to sleep on time’’ Sam noticed that Neil spoke to her but there was something missing. Neil was walking around the premises with Sam listening to her continuously …suddenly his phone beeped indicating a message…he checked and his mood changed a smile covered his features…it was the message from Radhika stating- ‘Handsome you forgot me after getting your love…you didn’t even send me your no…but I managed to get it…now save mine…swt dreams buddy’ Sam saw the change in Neil’s expression …she felt little jealous…when Neil’s attention diverted from her to the message . Neil quickly replied…’I can never forget you little one…stay blessed…missed you’ Radhika looked at the message and smiled and then she looked at the bundle of case studies and made a face she spoke under her breath…’Arrogant fool’

Arjun was busy in his personal gym…he still had not got any update on his swan and hi desperation was on the peak…he dialed a no and angrily spoke; ‘’How much time do you need to find a girl’’

Person on the other side; ‘’The performance you shared is not there in the url of RHYTHM…they have not included this performance…’’

Arjun; ‘’Are you nuts ..you can directly check in RHYTHM’’

Man; ‘’I tried to get the information…but the RHYTHM members are asking the reason for this kind of inquiry…cannot let them doubt…they might go to police to protect her privacy… will update you in few days’’

Arjun banged his phone on the bed ; ‘’I know Neil…you on purpose omitted her performance…but I will find her…because I want to’’

The same man went inside a huge library and updated his master; ‘’I told Arjun what you asked me to…I have all details on Radhika…let me know when to share with Arjun’’
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So now beast has decided to trouble the beauty but he also attracted to her… she already has cracked the first wall with her confidence….Neil is hurt by his unanswered love…will his pure friendship with Radhika cause trouble in his and Sam’s relationship with Neil…. how will Arjun react on this RNiel bond.
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Chapter 8

Hi there its me destiny again….When we try to hate something or someone…you tend to think about them always…which might make you fall for them…so next time before hating someone think again.
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US NYU

Radhika was ready for classes…Anna knocked her room door…Radhika gave her a welcoming smile

Anna; ‘’Radhika why don’t you shut your door…when you sleep…I mean air conditioning would be better…plus you keep a lamp on Why?’’

Radhika pressed her lips and answered; ‘’I am scared of dark and closed places…I get panic…sorry if that bothered you’’

Anna shook her head; ‘’No nothing like that…if you want I will switch on my room light as well… now get going…by the way would mind working in a bakery part time’’

Radhika; ‘’Not at all…let me know when to start…and from today I will be working in the campus as well…as assistant librarian’’

Anna; ‘’Kudos girl…see you’’

Singapore

Neil and Sam quickly got ready…Neil had rented a driver and a car for 6 months of his stay…Once both of them were in the car…their phone beeped together…they knew who it was…’’Chashni’’ Sam said softly she read the message-‘Sammy rock the campus…love you and miss you :)’ Sam quickly replied ‘miss you too…now don’t mess with someone’ Radhika smiled thinking she already had messed with Mr Duryodhan…God save him now. Radhika received a similar message from Neil- ‘stay out of trouble’. Radhika rolled her eyes and messaged him a sticker of a saluting solider with a ‘ yes boss’ . Neil smiled widely…he knew she had the capacity to make him smile even from the distance…and that was because they never had expectations out of each other. Once they were in campus…Neil helped Sam find her class He turned to leave but Sam caught his hand; ‘’Neil can you just forgive me one last time…please’’ Neil caressed her face and said; ‘’Sammy I am not angry…go or you will be late…I will meet you after the classes’’ Sam out of the blue stood up on her toes and kissed Neil cheek warmly…Neil closed his eyes….he knew it meant nothing….Sam was still close to his face she whispered softly…’’Have a great day…and please be my Neil…I cannot handle this one’’ Neil stood there dumbfound for a minute after Sam left…she had never done something like that…but he decided he will not think about it…as she had feelings for Arjun.

Mumbai , Khanna’s residence

Piyali was supervising the maid in getting Jai’s room cleaned…maid handed her an envelope kept under the pillow…Piyali opened the envelope and found Radhika’s pictures in it…The picture seemed to have been taken without Radhika’s knowledge…Piyali started sweating …Jai’s obsession was increasing day by day…and over that Radhika never seemed interested in him…Piyali thanked the almighty that Radhika was away for an year…she decided to keep Jai diverted from Radhika…one year might change his preference…he might stop obsessing about that her….Piyali decided to speak to Samrat on this soon

US NYU Campus

Radhika’s classes had ended she was supposed to work in the library till 5:00 PM and then 3 hrs in a bakery run by an old lady. She was sleeping only 3 hrs…classes, library and bakery above all that the 50 case studies…she could get back home only by 8:00 PM and after dinner would start on the case studies….Anna watched Radhika tirelessly working she came to her and kept a glass of milk shake on her table; ‘’bottoms up’’ Radhika made a face she never liked milk or milkshakes…and Anna was slowly turning into her Mom. Anna amusingly watched Radhika taking all the effort to finish her glass up…she smiled and spoke’; ‘’Arjun is troubling you right…but don’t worry he is a nice guy…once you know him…you will like him’’

Radhika; ‘’he is just extracting his revenge for fooling him…let it be I don’t give up easily’’

Anna; ‘’That’s why I like you…hey no work on Saturday…I have a small get together with my friends here at our place…and I want you to meet them’’

Radhika; ‘’Mr Hades too’’

Anna laughed at the name she gave to Arjun; ‘’Yes honey…but I will handle him ‘’

Radhika; ‘’Morning I will be at the bakery…but will come by afternoon’’

Anna; ‘’She pays you for 5 days…then why are you working a day for free’’

Radhika; ‘’Because she is very old…plus money is not everything’’ Anna smiled and gently patted her head…she thought world should have more people like you.

Mumbai India, Radhika house

Mala and Dilip were enjoying their evening tea…Dilip spoke; ‘’It’s so empty without Radhika’’

Mala; ‘’I know….but I am happy she is working hard for her dreams. I wanted to speak to you about something….we all know Jai has always been interested in Radhika and Samarat and Piyali also like her…I think we should think about it’’

Dilip; ‘’Mala I married you when you were pursuing your Phd…and my daughter has a year left for her graduation…she is way too young …wait for now…and last decision will be of Radhika in this matter.’’ Mala decided to end the conversation for now but once Radhika is back she will try and talk on this matter again

Singapore

Neil was really happy about the course..most of his batch mates were professionals…he got many new tips on writing…he interacted with people from different fields taking the course…he knew this exposure will help him in great deal. It was easy for Neil to make friends…he was a polished handsome guy…he befriended a girl Hanna who sat next to him…she was a columnist and a freelancer. Sam after finishing her classes was looking for Neil she found him near the car laughing about something…her heart felt good looking at his smiling face….but when she looked at his companion…her smile faded…Hanna was a smart knowledgeable girl…and it reflected well in her personality…Sam was annoyed that he did not notice her she dialed Radhika…it was 5:00 AM for Radhika….she quickly answered; ‘’Morning Sammy’’

Sam; ‘’Everything is bad chashni…Neil is not talking properly to me…he is ignoring me…and now he is busy with some hot chic…he didn’t even notice I am standing so close to him’’

Radhika smiled; ‘’Sammy don’t overreact he is your friend not your boyfriend…let him live….and if you are annoyed go pull his hair…and show the girl you are important in his life’’

Sam; ‘’Thanks chashni…I will definitely show her…miss you’’

Radhika; ‘’Miss you too honey’’ Radhika disconnected the call she felt good that Sam is jealous .

Saturday Morning US

Radhika quickly freshened up she had to leave for the bakery ..she was helping the old woman without taking any money for Saturday …she got dressed in jeans and T-shirt waved Anna bye and left…Radhika was walking down the alley when some guys whistled at her she ignore them and reached her work place …she wished Aliza a 65+ lady who owned that shop…it was difficult for her to mange everything…Radhika helped as much as she could…Aliza had started liking Radhika…and was even teaching her some nice recipes…Aliza asked Radhika to deliver an order to a nearby place…Radhika quickly took the packet and left…when she was crossing the alley…the guys who whistled at her..passed some comments…she just looked down and walk…Radhika was walking towards her destination when a palm brushed her back she screamed and threw her free hand in air…to hit the jerk who misbehaved…suddenly she heard a known laughter…and a big palm caught hold of her wrist….Arjun had been following her on his bike slowly…he was laughing holding his stomach..’’What are you staring at…you got scared so easily …mice are better than you’’

Radhika kept her palm on her chest to calm her heart down; ‘’What the hell was that…I thought its…’’ she left the sentence mid way. Arjun’s smile vanished, he himself didn’t know why he did that but he cupped her face and lifted it to his eyes..’’What is it…speak up’’ Radhika felt different she felt good protected…she quickly removed his hands from her face; ‘’I need to deliver this…I am getting late’’ Arjun caught her arm; ‘’hop on…I will drop you and now no arguments’’ Radhika gave one look to the alley and sat behind him….little did she knew he already read her eyes. Arjun dropped her to her destination and waited for her to come back…Radhika was surprised to see him waiting her cheeks went red…she quietly walked to him…’’you can carry on I will go by myself’’ Arjun looked at her blushed face and said; ‘’Anna asked me to pick you ….your work hours are over…so let’s pick your things and get moving…’’ As they passed through the Alley…the gang hooted again…watching her with some guy…Radhika kept her eyes down…she picked her bag wished Aliza and left with Arjun…Once they reached building…Arjun stopped her; ‘’leave that job it’s not safe…that alley is dangerous in the evening’’

Radhika; ‘’I don’t take that route in the evening …I take the longer one through the park’’ She spoke nervously …twisting the strap of the bag…Arjun watched her …she was a treat to eyes…he took her hand and dragged her along to the lift…when they got out of the lift …he just spoke one line…’’call me in case of trouble’’ Radhika stood there like a statue…but why this attitude king was worried about her.

When Arjun Radhika entered the party was on full swing…Anna gave them a roaring welcome…she dragged Radhika to her and said; ‘’Guys…silence…she is my rommie and my friend Radhika….hell I got your name right…but I call her Rads…and only I can call her that…and Rads…this Steve who was supposed to be your mentor but you were snatched from him…this Adam..Ron and these beautiful ladies are Cole and Cheryl’’ Radhika greeted them all..and then Steve spoke; ‘’Now I know why were you snatched’’ He looked at Arjun who glared at him…Cole spoke; ‘’By the time we get you name right…can we call you Rads…if you don’t mind.’’ Radhika nodded affirmative…Suddenly Arjun spoke; ’’But I will call you Bunny’’ All were shocked at that

Radhika fumed ; “Why will you call me Bunny….oh ok I get it you are mocking my small nose…have you ever looked at yourself in the mirror…your nose is like that of a hippo’’ Arjun’s jaw dropped hippo no way….others in the room suddenly took their seats with chips and drinks to watch this live drama.

Arjun got up and stood infront of her towering her; ‘’look at yourself …you are just a Thumbelina’’ Radhika jumped and stood on the sofa coming to Arjun’s eye level…she
angrily answered; ‘’And you… you are a giraffe…and your eyes…god they are so tiny…I feel like peeling some skin…so that you can open them…your ears are that of a monkey….and your nose…it resembles a wood pecker’s beak…who said you are good…if I am a bunny you are an amalgamation of different animals…dare you mock me’’ Arjun pulled his hair…others watching this drama were almost on the floor laughing…Radhika had ripped Arjun of his looks completely …she was still angry….Arjun out frustration pointed his finger out at her; ‘’Dare you mess with me’’ Radhika looked at his finger and bit it hard Arjun jumped; ‘’Owww…hell you bit me’’

Radhika; ‘’dare you point that finger out at me…Anna I will freshen up…ask this man to be in his limits’’ She closed her room with a bang…Pin drop silence in the room…Arjun looked at his friends and all of them burst into a laughter…after some time everyone except Arjun was quite he was laughing like a kid…they knew him for 10 yrs but he never laughed this …his friends felt happy…finally he controlled wiped the corner of his eyes and said; ‘’I called her Bunny…because she is hell cute’’ Anna folded her hands to the chest…’’now Arjun stay in you limits when she is out’’ Radhika came out dressed in a blue frock upto the knee…with her hair half hair tied in a ribbon…she looked like a Bribe…She made a face at ARjun…Arjun decided not to stare at her…she was already angry and he didn’t wanted to spoil her mood…

Radhika went to the kitchen…and bought a cake with candles signing ‘Happy Bday Anna’ Anna was surprised she never celebrated because…when she wanted to her parents never had time…she just met her friends on her bday… none of them ever asked her birthday as she always ignored the question….all were looking at Radhika…she kept the cake on the table and looked at Anna; ‘’What…I learned the recipe and then made it… you are not refusing this…I am happy you were born and I got you…now please I am hungry’’ Anna smiled and hugged Radhika tight…they celebrated danced and enjoyed and Beauty gained a bonus point in Beasts heart…
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Beauty had started breaking down all the walls around beats heart…but what will happen when beast will want beauty only for himself…

Credit to: Gauri

82 comments

  1. Sathya

    it is so cute and lovely episode. hero started caring for radhika. so. nice it is. i must say this Gauri… u r an awesome writer dear. i loved it to the car. m literally waiting for ur updates. hats off to u my dear. keep rocking????

  2. neetz

    Awww soooo cuteeee story…gauriii u r amazing…mmmuah ..cant wait till next update 😀 greedy greedy

    • Gauri

      Thanks dear :)sorry dear little busy…got some break for lunch so now replying…will try and update soon 🙂

  3. suvi

    Vow dat was an awesome Epi.but a small suggestion. pls don’t Make rads fall very soon for arjun.make him work harder wid all his sincerity,love n loyalty to sin her heart.jUST a suggestion ☺

  4. chandan

    Hi Gauri
    This is hell beautiful…by the way tje guy and women are Rana and Nandini right…Keep rocking…waiting for monday now…don’t make us wait us long….tc

  5. krity

    Lol this one was amazing im laughing like hell luvd it to the core the way u describe the imotions of neil was amazing in short beyond anything luvable….god bless u keep going keep rocking…♥♥♥♥♥

  6. Rg

    Hi gauri am so happy to c two chapters today. I was a little miffed as ur other ff had got over. So today I was excited to read this. This too is close to my heart. I loved both arjun and radhika s bantering. I feel really sorry for Neil. Sam comes off slightly ungrateful , selfish and careless. I liked Anna. But am curious as to whn arjun comes to know his dancing Swan is radhika. Am impatient and excited… if possible plz solve arjuns mystery too. Grt ff update soon.

  7. 2 Mangoes, 1 Stone. Thank u soo much gauri, for giving 2 chap. Today epi ws fantastic. Really u r a good writer. Ardhika scene ahhhhhh super. Sammy jealous …..nice. neil, make hr more jealous. So, nxt chap u post on mon/tue 🙁 . Im waiting.

    • Gauri

      Thanks a ton Naaga…and sorry to keep you waiting till monday…stuck with work no time to write…but Monday is a promise. 🙂

  8. Darling sis one kutty ( small ) tight hug 🙂 🙂 🙂 love uuuuuuuuuu 🙂 really superbbbbbbbbbbb 🙂 🙂 I like Sam jealous 🙂 it’s cute 🙂 hope soon she ll realize Neil’s pure love 🙂 🙂 🙂 and asusual Neil n rads bonding cute cute cute 🙂 🙂 🙂 arjun’s care on rads wow seriously I imagined everything while reading really Its awesome 🙂 🙂 🙂 🙂 arjun n rads fight ohhhhhhhh woooowwwwww dats really funny 🙂 🙂 🙂 my early morn starts with ur superbbbbbbbbbbb ff and a big smile on my lips 🙂 🙂 am really jealous of ur parents n frnds they r really lucky to have u near them my darling pls do write 🙂 🙂 🙂 don’t stop ur writing 🙂 🙂 God ll bless my sis with full happiness n smile 🙂 🙂 🙂 love u looottttttsssss 🙂 🙂 take care my dear darling 🙂 🙂 🙂 🙂 🙂 🙂

    • Gauri

      Suga my dear…thaaaaaaaaaaaaaaakkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkk youuuuuuuuuuuuuuu so much for such a lovely comment…it makes me feel happy that my story brought smile to you lips keep simling …loads of love dear 🙂

  9. Chinmayi

    Gauri…..awesome yar,u r too gud in narration and the plot ia just wooow…i was visualising each n every word of urs and it suited the characters very well..chirpy rads..kadus n caring arjun,emotional neil ,confusd sammy!! This sam na,even in mmz she was so dumb sometyms…
    Any way ,u r busy….so v need to wait till ur nxt update…….keep up d gud work… good mrng have a nice day manmarziyans

  10. Once again u amazed us…hats off to u for ur flawless writing…don’t make radhika to fall in love easily…m waiting for the day when Arjun will know about his dancing swam…anna is a very good friend indeed…Neil I feel sorry for that guy…why samaira did this…plz make her more jealous…all in all m waiting for Arjun to see raneil bond n jai’s obsession…omg I even can’t imagine what will happen…fingers crossed…luv u …tc??

    • Gauri

      hi Rosie….how are you sweety…just some more time he will soon know about her…any ways thanks…love you 🙂

  11. Sv

    Di it was super awesome. Soo sam is jealosy yippiee I loved it . Neil’s reaction was true as he was done . But I know he will come back. Pls hit jai’s head hard and say him that radhika is never his never will be him. Radhika and arju rofl max. I cant control my laugh holding my stomach. Its too awesome. I was scared of anna but she is a sweet heart. Arjun is mr duryodhan call him karn na might be suitable for the character (just kidding). Rads is bunny and he is giraffe . I guess u watch more of discovery channel getting many names lol I loved it di.

    U made my day di love u di take care bear hugs love u soo soo much.

    • Gauri

      Dear SV….thank you so much…I guess I should multiply thanx by 1000 because everytime you comment you make my day special…sorry for late response…thought of replying everyone as took a break for an hour…love you muuuuaaaah 🙂

  12. Bhabya

    It’s is simply awesome. Please Gauri di start writing novels. I will be the first to buy it . Ur words hv magic. Please ! Please ! Di write soon. Luved both the episodes.

  13. Roshini

    this was a fun ride…amazing..loved their fight…if possible please update on Sunday tc

    • Gauri

      Hi Gayathri, thank you so much….let me think of a story…ok you suggest a scenario and I will write it down 🙂

  14. Dhara

    OMG.. Ardhika fight was sooooooooooooo cute.. Why I feel that Beauty is more powerful than Beast.. No words to describe this episode. Keep it up..

  15. Shree

    Di!! I loved chapter 7!! Too cute!! She has the guts to face him.. Lol… So many case studies?! I hate Sam.. Why cant she trust him?! But she wants him by her side.. Always.. Well it was a cute one..

    And chapter 8…. The caption.. In my case the last two sentences are wrong.. Hate means literally hate…. No second thoughts at all.. Well I’m sorry.. i just put my thoughts.. SORRY if I hurt you..

    He being a stalker… So caring!! I loved the argument.. She jumped up to match him.. His looks.. Lol.. Lmao… Too good di!! I wanna bug you tight for this!! Please post soon.

    Love you loads.. Tc.. Keep smiling.. Bear hug

    • Gauri

      Thanks a ton Shree… my dear I can never imagine you hating someone…I always imagined you like a teddy bear personality…anyways where is your story…please update soon…loads and loads of love stay blessed 🙂

      • Shree

        Di!! I submitted long ago.. NOt yet posted.. I’m forced to hate di.. Teddy!! Me?! Awwwiiiieee!! That to you and everyone except for that one person… It’s k di… Happens..

        Love you too di!! loaadddsss

  16. aastha

    first of all thanks for the double episodes….hope you’ll continue like this….what to do just like jai is obsessed with radhika i am obsessed with your story……

    i feel sorry 4 niel….sam if you dont love him then why do you go behind him????leave him alone yar……rads is a good friend….even at distance she can make him smile…….i knew arjun would exchange his mentee for rads………..i liked raan bonding…….she is sooo hardworking……
    sooo the beauty already broke the walls around beast….. ardhika fight was sooooo cute…..well i liked every part of it…………plz reveal who that man is….

    • Gauri

      Thanks Aastha 🙂 will reveal about the man in coming episode…and when are you posting your story…waiting for it …loads of love 🙂

  17. Vini

    wow !! awesome one gauri !! couldn’t control my laughter 🙂 🙂 enjoyed the chapter tooo the core 🙂 🙂 . Bunny and Hippo woowww . ardika’s cute fight and his care towards her were awesome .. thanks for the update .. i am longing for ur next episode 🙂

  18. Anvee

    OMG I am obsessed with this darling I love to read and you are making me fall in love with your writing thank you so much for this story I love it to the core….

    • Gauri

      Hi Anvee, that’s a huge compliment thanks dear…now I am out of words 🙂 thanks again

  19. Wow…. Its really treat for us…lovely episodes…ardhika tashan cute fights superb..waiting for next episodes…

  20. Anu

    I was a silent reader. But Ur stories are irresistable to comment. Superb yaar. Liked both ur ffs. Keep rocking

  21. happy

    hi dr………hw r u dr………….pls give some words to compliment you….i cant have anything to say about you…..so so nice to read today episode……

    first anna……nice to see her friendship with rads….so anna will get love from rads which she missed so far…..then neil and sam……sam again hurt neil….sry for neil….bt i loved rad msg which bring happiness in neil…..super…..i loved neil-rad frdship……i loved it so so much……………………..bt i dont like mentor change concept……i dont know for that…..bt i liked it because of you……jai i hate him…..rad parents missing their child….nice….rad hardwork….felt bad…..arjun-rad meeting-drop-speech all r c…..fight is the best scene…….anna birthday wish …….amazing……in overall update….neil-rad is killing me…..thanks thanks thanks……

    hw is my comment today….afetr manmarziyan serial today only i described all scenes for ur beautiful update……thankyouuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu so so much dr…………..

    waiting for ur rply……

    • Gauri

      Happy dear…first tell me how should I thank you…you always comment so beautifully that it brings a big smile to my face…you are so amazing Happy…thanks thanks thanks dear for the amazing support…god bless you dear… 🙂

      • Happy

        One way to thank me always is give ur update as soon as possible…..there is no other way….no choices also…..thanks Dr….thanks for ur rply…..NW I am smiling seeing ur rply…..thanks Dr….NW a days ur update ly brings smile on my face….thank you so much for everything…..

  22. Supriya

    Di u know today I was thinking abt this ff only I really wanted u to update becoz I was sad dat journey of love nd frdship ended…..but u made my day today di.u hav no idea how desperately I wait for ur updates di nd abt the dis 1….I don’t know wht to sae I will just sae dat u hav some magic in ur hands…aradhika were grt nesam I just love them plz plz update soon love u alot di

    • Gauri

      Darling Supriya…I am so greatfull to you for your lovely comment…thanks dear for being so amazing and lovely…love you loads 🙂

      • Supriya

        Thanx for ur reply di u know ur thoughts r just like my elder sis Pooja srsly u r just awsme…di u r 1 gem of a person I would really love to meet u someday…u r just so much positive vith ur thoughts dat m amazed dat how cud any1 be so much positive nd lovely ..love u alot di.tc

  23. Gauri its splendid dear…can’t found words to praise u dear.each and every bit i liked in this epi….its exquisite… wants more n more n more…love u…keep going n rocking like this

  24. Roma

    wowwww, wowwww wowwww it’s superbbbbb n awesoooooome. …I’m speechless and overwhelmed…can’t express my feelings as I’m very amazed with your writing skills. ..you’re amazingly awesoooooome…..this story is really outstanding n unique n very very interesting n exciting. …ardhika n nesam so lovely n different in this plot…I’m just addicted to Youuuuuuuuu and Your stories. …I knew arjun will swap the mantee n make rads punish..but loved it so much as she never going to give up….wowwww neil very angry n hurt by sam n she missed him badly n now jealous by other girl…lol…loved ardhika teasing each other n rads mocked arjun for his features very much. ..I was really rolfing ….keep it up. eagerly waiting for the next episode, love you loads. Muaaaaahhhhhh

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