Manmarziyan- Destiny…Passion …Obsession Chapter 53 (Epilogue)

Hello friends 🙂 so here is the Epilogue for DPO ….and Neetz this is for you….. hope you will like it 🙂 happy weekend friends


The Closure

After 3 years

Khanna Residence

A cute 3 yr old girl hopped on the bed and gave Jai a peck ….she opened her story book and started reading a fairy tale to him…..Jai smiled…a tear came down his eyes….the girl softly wiped it and spoke in a cute voice; ‘’Papa says friends can make each other happy….I am your friend Mamu….we will play soon together…’’

Neil walked into room and called out; ‘’Jiya …come baby time to leave’’ Jiya kissed Jai again Neil caressed Jai’s forehead with love…..Jai was looking at him with a lot of hope….Neil kept his hand on his forehead; ‘’Jai we have forgiven you….and you will walk….that’s a promise of your childhood friend ‘’ Jai’s eyes started pouring with repentance….Neil understood… ‘’Radhika has also forgiven you turst me….I will ask her to visit you….’’ Neil lifted his doll up and walked out after giving Jai a consoling smile …

RHYTHM- Evening

Radhika was teaching a group of 10 girls….and one of them was doing it perfectly….she was youngest in the group and Radhika’s favorite ….her sweet hrt 9 yr old Sia she was growing into a beautiful girl…with big dark eyes sharp features …..once the practice was over…Radhika dismissed the class…Sia hugged Radhika from behind; ‘’Mami I am tired….can we have an ice cream….but please without these guards…I feel trapped’’ spoke Sia pouting

Radhika turned her around ; ‘’Yes baby have I ever said no to you….and these guards are there because your Mamu and dad loves you’’

Sia; ‘’I know you love me the most…. this is why Mamu is jealous of me’’ Radhika laughed hugging Sia…

Arjun watched them from the door….and let out a storm from his arm which slowly tumbled towards Radhika…’’Bunny’’

Radhika banged her head; ‘’ Arhaan its mummy not bunny ….leave all that…how is my baby….’’ Radhika pecked her 1.5 yr old son…Arhaan wriggled out and held SIa’s finger…’’
Didi’’ Sia loved her baby brother her only teddy…she cuddled him and Radhika turned to Ajun; ‘’Stop calling me Bunny….you look tired’’

Arjun; ‘’You should have seen your parents house….if you are masters in creating chaos your son is a Phd….me and dad were lying dead on the floor !….so you and Sam are having girls evening’’

Radhika ; ‘’yes and you and Neil will take care of kids….’’

Arjun; ‘’As you wish Ma’am…come Sia baby time to go home’’ Sia smiled but ARjun found her smile little artificial…he grabbed her arm waved Radhika and left…..once in the car….Arjun asked; ‘’Sia what’s troubling you’’

Sia; ‘’Mamu I don’t want to go for a boarding school…..I want to stay here..with all of you and Arhaan’’ Arhaan clapped hearing his name

Arjun applied breaks; ‘’What??? Where did that come from….???’’

Sia; ‘’Dad wants me to write the entrance examination for top notch schools….and once I am done…he would send me to US…he said its good for my future’’

Arjun looked at Sia…he recalled his childhood….he was 10 when he was sent abroad….he knew how alone he was…but this won’t happen with Sia…Arjun caressed her head and softly spoke; ‘’Give me a hug doll…’’ Sia obliged….Arjun held her protectively; ‘’I promise you will stay here till you are ready to go and study abroad….and your Dad….I will handle him…now smile…..’’ SIa squealed loudly hugging Arjun tight…. ‘’Mamu you are the best…..and I love you’’ Arjun pecked her forehead; ‘’And Mamu loves his baby the most’’

Sam was busy in her office cursing herself for being late again….her business had grown by folds…she was one of the best event managers…Sid had invested in her business…they made a great team…Sam looked at the watch ; ‘’Chasni will rip me into pieces’’ She rushed out to her car and drove off to the decided venue….Sam entered the coffee shop holding her ears…. ‘’Sorry got stuck’’

Radhika; ‘’Forgiven….Sammy I am so proud of you….you are one of the young achievers this year’’

Sam; ‘’SO are you….Mrs best copywriter…plus director RHYTHM’’

Radhika smiled and asked; ‘’Neil asked me to visit Jai….why couldn’t you do that….he is your brother….’’

Sam; ‘’I didn’t wanted to….I couldn’t forgive him…for breaking my trust and using me’’

Radhika; ‘’Can you if I request’’

Sam looked at Radhika keenly; ‘’Why….because you feel obliged to me that I shot my own brother for you’’

Radhika folded her arms to chest; ‘’Right now I can shoot you point blank…dumb I want a closure…plus he got enough punishment’’

Sam smiled; ‘’Only if you promise’’ Radhika raised an eyebrow…Sam again spoke; ‘’Please keep Jiya with for a month and teach her some of your talent of bothering Neil…they made a team together leaving me alone’’

Radhika rolled her eyes; ‘’How about I teach you and the one rolling in your tummy comes with a Phd’’

Sam blushed; ‘’Guess he likes you too much …I can feel that’’

Radhika; ‘’He has too after all he is my AB’’ Sam gave a questioning look…Radhika smiled; ‘’Adopted Brother’’

Sam coughed over her juice and laughed ….’’you will never change Chashni’’

Neil was having his boys time with Arjun….but with kids…Arhaan was busy destructing whatever Jiya was making out of blocks…and she being a Neil’s true daughter…would explain him calmly that its bad…Arjun smiled at Jiya…he looked at Neil; ‘’She is an angle….so cute….wish Arhaan learns something’’

Neil; ‘’Arhaan is just like you…had he been like my Birdie….he would have been angle ‘’

Arjun gave him an unbelievable look; ‘’Who said your Birdie is an angle….Arhaan is male version of your Birdie….he seem to have inherited all her mischief above that Nandu and dad are spoiling him like anything’’

Neil ; ‘’Not a word against my Birdie !!! …..Arjun can you forgive Jai’’

Arjun; ‘’If you and Radhika can…yes I will….’’

Neil got up and hugged Arjun tight; ‘’Thanks bro….’’ Arjun too hugged him…’’Neil you are my family …there is no way I can refuse you….’’ They were still talking when there was a sound of something breaking…Arhaan had thrown his ball at the table….breaking the Arjun-neil’s coffee mugs…and he clapped at his achievement…Neil smiled and ARjun scratched his head looking the mess Mehra prince had created….’


It was family day and Sid nandini had come for dinner….Arjun looked at Sia and then Sid….Sia was restless….Arjun spoke; ‘’Sid why do you want her to go to US write now she is just 9’’

Sid smiled he understood…he gave one look to Sia and then ARjun; ‘’because its good for her’’

Arjun; ‘’Sid…it will just make her lonely….she will go but when she is ready….not by our will…plus I can’t stay without her…and can you stay without her’’

Sid smiled and replied; ‘’out of 12 months I guess 11 my daughter spends in Mehra Mansion….so yes I am getting into a habit… will surely miss her’’

Sia looked up; ‘’Dad you won’t miss me ???’’ Sia’s big eyes were already full of tears…just a word more and they would jump out…Radhika rubbed her back…

Arnav had enough; ‘’Sid …Sia is not going….I gave ARjun 10 lonely yrs I am not letting you give it to Sia…this is final…’’ Sia was still looking at her dad….Sid finally gave up and opened his arms…Sia jumped and cried…Sid rubbed her back; ‘’Baby you are my reason to live…I was just joking plus your Mom will kill me if I send you far’’

Nandini; ‘’Finally ….this discussion is over…and Sia who is Abhishek….he called on the line no.’’

Sia; ‘’Mom our sports captain….I am participating in marathon…he is in 10th standard….he says I am cute….’’ Sid coughed….Arjun’s eyes snapped up and Arnav made a grave expression….

Radhika; ‘’Sia take Arhaan with you….I will get ice-cream to your room’’ Sia smiled and took Arhaan with her….Nandini and Radhika stood with their hands folded….

Nandini; ‘’All 3 of you….just chill he is a 10th standard boy he might have said thinking her to be a kid’’

Arjun; ‘’All shitty things comes at this age…. Specially in a guys head’’

Sid; ‘’And did you ask why did he call ?’’ Nandini just kept her hand on her forehead….but Arnav added fuel to fire

Arnav; ‘’Even I proposed my wife at this age… keep an eye on that boy …I will ask rana to get all the details’’ All the 3 left the table….

Nandini took a deep breath and crashed on the chair…’’Great! Rana has no better work than to spy on 15yr old boy…..’’

Radhika; ‘’Di no point stopping them ….let them do what they want to…I have a news….Sia will do a solo performance for RYTHYM concert this year and she will be the youngest one to do’’

Nandini was brimming with happiness…her eyes reflected that; ‘’I think….without SIa there is no meaning to my life’’ Radhika wrapped her arm around Nandini; ‘’Our life di…she belongs to all of us’’

Neil’s Residence

Sam was feeling tired she was sitting in her room with her eyes closed….Neil left Jiya with Prerna and walked inside his room….he watched her and pecked her nose; ‘’Sammy
everytime I look at you I fall for you’’

Sam; ‘’I know….I have a 3 yr old proof….and another one growing inside….I am the one paying for all the love’’

Neil huffed; ’’So you met Birdie…your words have all of her’’ Sam chuckled….Neil made her sit and massaged her feet…Sam looked at him with gratitude; ‘’Thanks for forgiving Bhai’’

Neil; ‘’Not required….I did what was right….and I love you’’

Mehra Mansion

Radhika moved to her room to find it in complete mess….Arjun was having a pillow fight with his son….Radhika angrily spoke; ‘’What have you done’’
Both father and son made a comical expression and said ; ‘’Bunny’’

Radhika; ‘’’when will he call me mom…he keeps on calling me bunny’’ Arjun laughed….Radhika pushed him to bed and warned; ‘’Teach him to call me mom or he will call you hades’’ Arjun laughed more that irritated her…she took a pillow and started hitting him….and in a minute a small pillow hit her head….that was Arhaan saving his father….

Arjun smiled; ‘’God protects the weak’’ Radhika made a face picked Arhaan up and put him to sleep… Arjun held her from back kissing her neck….’’My bunny… I love you so much….’’

Radhika; ‘’I know….ummm Arjun will you come to see Jai with me’’

Arjun turned her around and cupped her face; ‘’Yes…off course I am also responsible for his condition….I want a closure too’’ Radhika smiled and hugged Arjun tight….


All four were there at Khanna residence to meet Jai….Sam had already met him….next was Arjun….Radhika wanted to but it wasn’t easy….Neil moved forward held her hand; ‘’I will help’’ Neil took Radhika inside…she was meeting Jai for the first time after that fateful day…..Radhika looked at his condition….her heart pained….but more for Piyali and Samrat…being a parent she understood Piyali’s anger on her….Radhika moved forward….she lifted Jai’s limp arm and said; ‘’I forgive you….get well soon….for your Mom and
Dad….they need you jai’’ All jai could do was answer through his tears….which reflected his repentance….Radhika wiped them….; ‘’you will walk….I know Neil has promised and he will keep it….don’t give up’’ Radhika turned and looked at Neil….he smiled and hugged her; ‘’This is why you will always be my little one….thanks Birdie’’

Radhika; ‘’You don’t have to AD….I will do any thing for you…’’ Neil pulled her cheeks and she warned not to do infornt of kids as they never took her seriously… Neil bought

Radhika out and all four went for coffee….Radhika started; ‘’Anna is marrying Steve finally after 5 breaks up and 10 proposals….all of us are invited….till that time…junior Neil too will be out lets plan’’

Neil; ‘’I am in….then we can have a campaigning trip’’

Sam; ‘’with kids….I think you all go I will stay back’’

Arjun; ‘’Sam don’t worry…..if we can handle Radhika Arhaan we can handle anyone’’ That was it….Arjun got up and was running around the table with Radhika in pursuit…..Sam trying to intervene and neil he cared a dam he just sat there enjoying sipping his coffee….he just wanted his Birdie to win….his phone buzzed and asked everyone to be quite…..he took the call on speaker; ‘’yes Dr. ’’

Dr. ; ‘’Mr Melhotra ….Jai needs treatment…but after that we need a very good physiotherapist….I have mailed you her details….but careful she is too strong headed…..her name is Neha ’’

Neil picked his phone and downloaded the profile….he raised and eyebrow and looked at Arjun….Arjun too gave a glance and whispered ; ‘’Who wouldn’t want to be sick to be treated by her’’

Neil smiled and watched two girls busy chit chatting and then looked at Arjun; ‘’True …Lucky Jai….’’ They both laughed and gave each other a hifi

Repentance- forgiveness gives you the actual closure….
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  1. S.v


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    Di………. is this u ?? Yes u really god im shaking myself and finally saw the cover pic my bunny and tiger is back. Wait di I’ll read it and come back.

    • S.v


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      Wow di bunny and tiger. He he he bunny was called by both father and son. Cute. Sia is again a show stealer and a guy said she is cute. And a guy said she is cute wow more than enough for the mehras to scream and jai is trared by neha woo super and di why u make me smile and now im crying terribly as I will surely miss my bunny and my tiger. For nesam it is birdie who is the first child.

      Di love u so much di . I always love ur words and u always.Bear hugs and kisses. Muuhhhaaa.

  2. RinaSivaguru


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    wow…… Gauri, it was the best ending for this ff…….forgiveness….. not everyone able to do it…… gonna miss this ff a lot…..

  3. Sweetie


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    Didi..I’m really gonna miss this story so much..I’m crying now..Repentance and forgiveness are two great emotions that gives us a real closure.. 🙂
    Neha-Ahem ahem!!So Jai is gonna be treated by a hot doc,not bad,lucky lucky Jai.. 😀 😉
    Arhaan-he is such a cutie,jab papa and mama itna crazy hai toh beta super crazy hi banega naa.. 😉
    Jiya-Another cutie,she’s explaining her little brother with all the patience..So lovely.. 🙂
    Another naughty head growing in Sam’s tummy,haayee haayee,Bravo Neil.. 😉
    Last but never the least,my all time fav Sia,she’s too adorable.. 😀
    Love you loads Di and take care.. 😀

  4. Jewel


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    gauriii… i was waiting for this from morning…. it is really really awesome…. the starting,wow that was beautiful, jai and jiya’s scene…. and naughty mehra prince arhaan, he made me laugh…. and sia,now also she is sweet baby of her mamu. 3 men’s reaction towards abhishek’s statement, it was really funny. and last “lucky jai” comment…. after reading this i am soooooo happy…. u made me laugh gauri…. bt the thing is there is nothing left in dpo now. that thought making me sad… now i am waiting for crossroads…. please come with that soon…. thank u once again for giving this beautiful epilogue, and story….

  5. Brin


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    Outstanding episode, I will miss dpo, it was really a good ending, loved it to the core, you nail it and hope this story gets notice, all the best. 🙂

  6. Jessie


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    Oh..My.. Gaurii… Am..chalo.. Bear hug..this is best.. pleasant.. sweet.. words fail…
    HAPPINESS OVER LOADED!!!! wow.. who doesn’t love 2 be happy.. RaSam meet..sweetness.. Sia Radz.. cuteness.. Arjun-Arhaan.! I admire..! Loved how Arnav n Arjun took sia’s side.. Sid..boy he made me cry a sec..
    Well.. Arjun,Arnav, Sid behind 15yr gosh .. I laughed on Arjun’s dialogue.. who wud know better than u😉 and Jiya d sweet babe..! Had no words 2 describe d feel reading everyone forgiving Jai.. good tat he repents! Last part was fab..Anna n Steve.. woohoo.. party..And small pillow hits Rads n he calls her bunny .. sweet..cute.. and ArNeil n their dialogue on Jai’s therapist…Seriously.. Men are always Men Isn’t… 😬😈😱😝😎 had a feel 2 twist Arjun’s ears.. how dare..umm.?!?!?

    Had a wonderful Journey of DPO..and Epilogue is d icing on d cake..! Wat 2 say..had a extreme level of happiness while reading..will always stay close 2 my heart..Thank u Aabha.. Love u n wish u 2
    stay happy forever..

  7. Savera

    Today one more beautiful story not ended….completed. ..
    I loved each n every dialogue. ..every character. ..
    Yes. ..very true..repentance..forgiveness gives you the real closure. …
    Thanks my dear for DPO. ..I always waited for it…
    I am sure. are a person of beautiful hearts. ..
    Who always wants everyone ‘s happiness. .
    I pray to God to bless you with true love n happiness. …

  8. shali

    Hello, gauri i hv always been a silent reader and i m really grateful to u to make me read of such wonderful luv story u hv art of writing present in every nerve of yours may b i might sound weird bt i would lyk to kw u as a person if u could tell me ur real name or something from which i could identify u on fb it would b an honour fr me and i would completly understand if u dont want to give me and yes ofcourse i read every chapter of yours twice or thrice as they make me belive in true luv ur fan fiction is personally my favorite… thanku is all i can say to u at this moment i will b waiting fr crossroads…

    • Gauri



      Thanks a ton Sahli 🙂 I am greateful u commented 🙂 my real name is Abha 🙂 I am wearing a black top on fb 🙂 love u

  9. roshini

    Oh Gauri 😀 this was so amazing …. you gave us such a beautiful gift DPO will be in my heart 🙂

  10. starz

    awesome di i loved it so so so much…u r amazing..u know what di i feel like hugging you and kissing ur little brain which has full awesome idea …love you so much and ha i read mmz just now..that was too fabulous…no words to describe…i just want saral and his brother to get punished very harshly …nesam part was funny …a small request i want little longer beautiful, caring and romantic moments between ardhika..i know i am being greedy but still cant resist…..sorry if i said anything wrong …loads of love and take care…stay blessed di

    • Gauri



      Thanks a ton Starz 🙂 Saral will get punished 🙂 next a longer Aradhika 🙂 no need for sorry u can demand 🙂 love u

  11. shankari

    Gauri, i was awesome. Was missing this story… Plz write another one… Really missing ur writings…u r an amazing writer…i assure u tat…and i keep checking the page if there are any updates… Plz write one and dont stop writing.

    • Gauri



      Thanks a ton Shankari 🙂 I am writing the other one first chp on sep 5 th it will cross roads hope you like that too 🙂 stay blessed

  12. Vini

    Wow .. tat was really nice gauri . The wat u ended it was perfect.. I pity jai … I loved jiya and sia … even arhaan they were so cute eee 😊😊😊😊. I will obviously miss this one … thanks for giving a nice story gauri .. love you to the loads .. and a tight hug for you ..

  13. Gianna


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    Gauriiiiiiiii am sending u many many hugs and kisses for this wonderful epilogue, I loved each n every part but I laughed so hard and am still laughing when Arnav said he proposed his wife at such a young age, poor Rana has to spy on kids too now.
    Thank u for this epilogue, love u so much 😍😍😍😘😘😘

  14. Happy

    Thank you so so much Dr….u gave super epilogue….loved it to max level….l loved kids…arhaan….so so cute….thank you soooooooooo soooooooooo much…hw r u….

  15. Dipika


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    Gauri darling you are angel yarr. And this update proved it true….. Its so lovely n overwhelming.. Its really very hard to bid good bye to dpo…i had tears in my eyes…you reached to the very height…. Nesam having cute daughter n upcoming jr cute..aradhika with arhaan qho is naughty like his parents.. Thts so adorable… Finally Jai got forgiveness frm all…n he is sorry for his deeds..qht can be better ending thn this…This is perfect ending ..Thank you for writing this awsome phenomenal n lovely story… N touching our hearts with ur magical writing… You r the awesome n lovely person inside out..m ur jabra fan…always will eager to read your words.. So waiting for next striking story.. Loads n loads of love to you..n bone crushing hug n lots of kisses…

    • Gauri



      Thanks a ton Dipika 🙂 you never fail to make me happy with you sweet words 🙂 I am hell nervous about cross roads 🙂 stay blessed 🙂 big hug for u

  16. Sammy


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    haha last line was epic ..true lucky jai still laughing badly Arjun and Neil will never change ..and Arhaan taking his father’s side against Radhika was an epic …he breaks everything…sooooooooooooo cute gauri di …..sam expecting her second child and rana spying 0n 15 th year old kid …di that was level of madness …wao ..amazing ..and now i am crying tooo …like a 1 year old baby …want crossroads now

    • Gauri



      Thanks Sammy darling 🙂 I want all your updates and I have been crying like hell …but you keep on breaking my heart 🙁 pls post na 🙂 love you

  17. Myra


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    Yaar di….roolaoge kya?….. Love you even and even more from this epilogue.😘😘
    Gosh! 5 break ups and 10 proposals??!!!! 😂
    A perfect fun filled end to a perfect story…
    I dont even have words to descibe what i feel right now….
    Its just……i love your words so damn lot…they have a different magic… know what, i still recall lines from the previous chapters of dpo….well, after all it was this ff which forced to start visiting this page and more importantly inspired me to write….and i can never to grateful enough..
    Love you more than you can ever imagine 😘😘 (but dont you worry…am more of a silent type 😂 )
    Please be back with crossroads and apna married by fate…

    • Gauri



      Thanks a ton Myra 🙂 thanks for all the love and support….I wouldn’t have written without so much support 🙂 love you

  18. KK

    What a surprise….totally unexpected…the update was amazing as always….love it all the way…thank you my you and your writing…God bless

  19. neetz

    Wow gauriii…thanku so.much …i just loved it..and m out of words now coz u said its for me …u all.emotional …
    The chapter was superb and now i felt that its kinda complete ..ufff arhaan jiya sia prgnent sam it was all so perfect there is no othr perfect way to end the story …mmmuah dpo will b so special for me not that i dont like ur othr ff but m partial towards dpo ..donno y 🙂
    Love uuuu

    • Gauri



      you are most welcome Neetz and thanks a ton for all the love 🙂 even I am partial towards DPO its my story and I wrote it with heart 🙂 love u

  20. Jnana


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    Hi…… I’m new one…. Right…… But have read all your stories with my sisso……. How come rasam did not hear arjun and Neil commenting on a girl . …… That is impossible right ……. And jai…… Lucky to be forgiven by everyone…… I loved the part where the Prince and the king of mehras torchered radhika…. And nesam they are always cute birds……

    • Gauri



      Thanks Janana 🙂 givemy wishes to your sister …. 🙂 ok girls didnt hear as I mentioned Arjun whispered 🙂 love u loads

  21. Rossy


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    Now…ever …n forever…most adorable love story…i loved each n every part..especially those last line…jai is lucky ..n who?? Neil n Arjun wanted to be hospitalized for Neha…lol…both girls beat them I my kiddos are carbon copy of parents…awesome dear…thank u very much for writing this 😃 😃 😃 😃 😃

  22. Fanficoholic


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    Amazinggggggg. U dnt even knw hw happieee i am whn i saw that u posted the epilouge. I was jumping and doing a happy dance. Sia is grown uppppp. Wohoooooo. And arhaan is a replica of his mom. Oh no i think neil wll nt spare me fr saying tis😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂
    Jiya is so calmm. Love her. Arhaan calling hia mom bunny was the funniest. So they all forgive jai. Good. Finally he is repenting. U hav perfectly shown in the last scene that boys remain boys. And arnav sid and arjunnn. Ohhh god. They reacted too much. Bt i liked it. Even my dad reacts in the same way. So i can understand their over protectiveness. The epilouge is perfect jst like all ur episodes. Bt i am tooo sad that tis is endinggg. Bt i guess everything tat has a start shd hav an end.

    And di can u pl tell me the name of ur nxt ff and whn wll u posting it?

    Love u loadsssss

    • Gauri



      Oh darling thanks a ton for the lovely comment 🙂 my bro reacts the same way even if I talk of a friend … 🙂 stay blessed and keep supporting me 🙂 next cross roads on sep 5th 🙂 love u

  23. Sathya


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    Hey my dear friend… You never missed to impress me n everyone… It is a perfect ending for the beautiful ff. DPO is always a very very special ff which sticks in our heart forever. Actually I m loss of words to praise you… Seriously… You always make me fallen in love with u n ur writing. Well I won’t bore u with my words… You have a special place in my heart gauri n as I said already I want to see u n heights n I will say to others that proudly that u r my friend… Just waiting for that day where I can see u in achieving ur goals… Al d best dear I wish u from the bottom of my heart… Love u 😍😍😍😍👍👍👍

    • Gauri



      Sathya I Love you 🙂 thanks * 1000 and million hugs for you 🙂 I would have hugged you tight had you been infront of me 🙂 now I am out of words 🙂 million hugs for u

  24. Nina

    Hi gauri iam a silent reader ….your writing skills are amazing….this is superb end to the wonderful story …..I still couldn’t believe it ended ….long back you said you are writing book…is it completed.?and please don’t stop writing …you are marvelous in that…thank you for writing such a story…..hope I will also find my soul sister …and remain till the end like rasam ….stay blessed ….

    • Gauri



      Thanks a ton Nina 🙂 book is still going on …. you will surely find ur soul sister 🙂 I will never leave writing 🙂 love u

  25. Naaga

    Wow Gauri, superb final touch_ i loved it 👍

    & so sorry for the late cmmt_slight weekend busy.

    Thank u so much for such a Beautiful Story ☺

  26. sravya

    As usual u rocked it yaar.superb ending.The cute kids were so nice☺
    Thanks for one more chapter.keep going like this☺
    Luv u n tc☺

  27. Roma

    Awesoooooome. …my gauriiiiiiiiiiiii…you’re amazing. ….the epilogue was incredibly beautiful n mind blowing. …..nesam, ardhika, nandini-sid…n kids…sia, jiya, arhaan n lil neil…wowwww it was really very superbbbb n beautiful narration. …I loved it to the coreeeee. …all forgave jai for his dirty deeds. ..n he also repenting it truly by heart….you even found a strong head physiotherapist Neha…I loved it…arneil bonding so beautiful n Rasam very cuteeeee. …..the last note of destiny was really awesome….I’m totally addicted to Youuuuuuuuu and Your stories. ..i m hoping your new ff will also give me same peace n happiness. …..keep it up honeyyy. Love you loads my sweeeeeetheart. ..muaaaaahhhhhh Bear hug…stay blessed n healthy alwaysssss 🙂 ♡♡♡ 😉

  28. _Ritu


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    Gauri….❤❤❤❤❤❤ loads nd loads of love ❤ to u for writing this wonderful story.. Every part was stupendous nd ur each update was a masterpiece…. Every bonding u showed here was out of d world..cant believe DPO got ended.. Now m really crying 😭😭 wish u a very bright future ahead..nd now waiting for cross roads…love nd keep writing 🙂 🙂

  29. Bhabya

    Loved it so sorry for not commenting for so many epi was busy in studies plus mom don’t allow to touch phone

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