Manmarziyan- Destiny…Passion …Obsession Chapter 52 (last chapter)

Hello my dear friends….so here is the last chapter….I don’t know what I wrote….so please bear me as you always have…..Myra shreya…. Hope I match your expectation…. Love you all 

Chapter 52

My final quote- The Happily ever after

Sam was smiling looking at ARjun –Radhika performing the rituals….Neil came and stood by her and wrapped his arm around her shoulder….’’Mrs Neil Melhotra what are thinking’’

Sam smiled sweetly; ‘’Just recalling our wedding…..I felt so happy that day….and now I see same happiness on CHashni’s face’’

Neil; ‘’Yes they both are happy…and that makes me happy too….’’ Neil looked at Sam for a second…and then lovingly spoke; ‘’Can we go for a second honeymoon’’

Sam looked at Neil with a smile; ‘’Neil…..everyday is a honeymoon with you….but if you say yes’’ Neil gently moved his palm from her shoulder towards her waist and pinched it …making Sam jump but she composed herself…and just looked sideways to hide her blush…she quickly detached herself from Neil and moved towards the mandap to get Radhika and ARjun as the rituals were over… Sam helped Radhika and took her to the dais with Arjun ….the dais was dawned with chairs like thrones….and the background had white silken curtain with re-election of beautiful blue lights….giving the appearence as if the king and queen of water world are seated …

The guests one by one congratulated the newly weds…. Neil kept on making weird gestures at Sam…and she kept blushing…..Radhika made a lip movement and Neil understood he walked towards them and hugged Arjun and slowly gave Radhika a Chocó bar…..Radhika smiled and quickly took… making Arjun frown and Sam chuckle ……Radhika quickly finished the bar and gave a satisfied look….Sam whispered in her ear; ‘’Don’t burp Chashni….guests will run away’’

Radhika smiled; ‘’will burp in night…when Arjun will be full mood’’ Sam blinked and then laughed covering her mouth….

After all the guests left it was time for Radhika to say bye to her parents….she hugged her Mom and dad….Radhika asked her parents to take care of themselves….Dilip gave
Radhika’s hand in Arjun and said; ‘’Nandini ji promised me that Radhika will be accepted as the daughter in Mehra house….I believed her but more than that I believed you….take care of her’’

Arjun; ‘’I will and thank you papa’’

Neil gave Radhika a big box of chocolates cupped her face and said; ‘’keep smiling Birdie’’

Arjun Radhika left in a beautifully decorated Mercedes which Arnav gifted to his new daughter and today Rana decided to be their driver…..Radhika was emotional….Arjun held her hand and squeezed it gently ; ‘’I know you worry for your parents…but they are now mine too’’ Radhika gave him a thankful smile….

Nandini welcomed Radhika with all rituals …..Radhika stepped in as Radhika Arjun Mehra ….Sia clapped when Nandini welcomed Radhika…..Radhika smiled….Nandini did the remaining rituals she made radhika comfortable….Sia kept staring at the new member getting all the attention….Sid pecked her cheek; ‘’What’s wrong my girl…she is you mami….Mamu’s wife’’

Sia; ‘’like mom is yours’’

Sid; ‘’yes….you are turning smart….go say hello’’

SIa; ‘’will mamu love me like before’’

Arjun took Sia from Sid…; ‘’You are Mamu’s favourite ….and you always will be special….and even Mami will love you go say hello’’

Sai walked to Radhika and stood at a distance and forwarding her arm ; ‘’hello’’

Radhika; ‘’Give a hug to your mami….’’ Sia looked at Nandini …Nandini nodded….sia went close and gave a doubtful smile…Radhika closed her arms around Sia and pecked her….Sia finally smiled and hugged Radhika; ‘’Mami you will play with me like mamu’’

Radhika; ‘’I will play more than Mamu….we will be one team…give me a hifi’’ Sia happly gave her hifi and Radhika gave her a chocolate….Nandini looked at Sia; ‘’off to bed ….you have school tomorrow’’

Sia with puppy eyes; ‘’Who will take care of Mami if I go’’ Nandini raised an eyebrow at her oversmat daughter…making Arnav stifle his laughter

Nandini; ‘’I will take care of your Mami…no skipping of school’’

Sia gave a tired look to her Mom and then a pleading look to Arnav….he was about to contradict Nandini…but Nandini interfered; ‘’Chachu…she is going to school and Sid will drop her … arguments…’’ SIa turned and looked at Arjun….he winked at her….Sia smiled and left after giving peck to each member of the family…Nandini raised an eyebrow at jumping Sia and then looked at Arjun she smiled; ‘’Ok…. But let me see…what time you get up tomorrow’’ Radhika turned red….and Arjun just looked sideways…inviting a roaring laughter from Sid and Arnav…

Nandini escorted Radhika to Arjun’s room… she kissed Radhika forehead; ‘’Thanks for accepting Arjun….come to me if he toubles you’’ Radhika gave Nandini a loving hug…..Nandini left Radhika and walked out. Arjun who desperately wanted to be with his bunny was trapped between his over excited dad and his brother in law….who had suddenly decided to stay back and Mehra Mansion for the night….Arjun was just looking at his watch…he saw Nandini coming down towards them…she had a mischievous smile….Arjun’s curled lip and colourless face made her chuckle….she finally decided to rescue him….Nandini extended her watch to Arnav making him run like a kinder garden kid….and then looked at her husband; ‘’You Need to drop your darling daughter to school…..if you don’t sleep…she will have a picnic…’’ Sid huffed wished Arjun and left…Arjun happily jumped throwing his hands up in air he pecked and hugged nandini; ‘’This is why I love you the most Nandu’’

Nandini; ‘’Ya right….drown me in butter now….go before I decide to trouble you’’ nandini laughed watching exited Arjun running to his room…

Sam kept humming after coming back from the marriage venue….Neil smiled and tiptoed to her…he looped his arms around her waist from behind and pulled her close…Sam staggered a bit due to the force; ‘’Neil ….is everything fine with you’’

Neil; ‘’yup….why are you asking that’’

Sam; ‘’Off lately you are becoming Shakti Kapoor…. From Sanjeev Kumar’’ Neil immediately backed out….Sam pressed her lips to hide her smile and then turned around she found
Neil with a frown …and his arms folded to chest….Sam with and innocent expression; ‘’What???’’

Neil; ‘’No more spending time with birdie she is spoiling you….wait did she call me Sanjeev Kumar…???’’ Sam just laughed in response….. Neil banged his head…he enjoyed
Sam’s full hearted laughter and then pulled her to his chest…. ‘’I will show you today …what I am Sanjeev Kumar….or Shakti Kapoor’’ Sam wriggled to free herself laghing….neil lifted her up and placed her on the bed…locking her below him.. he leaned on her ….but Sam had more mischief in her head

Sam; ‘’ bhagwan ke liye mujhe chhod do !!!! ’’

Neil blinked and looked at Sam all wide eyed… then smiled; ‘’Itni pyaari cheez Bhagwan ke liye kaise chod doon ‘’ now was time for Sam to blink ….they looked at each other and broke into a laughter…Neil laid over Sam hiding his face in her neck ….once Sam’s laughter clamed…Neil palnted a feathery kiss on her neck….Sam closed her arms around
Neil…held fistful of his hair and pulled his head up to look straight into his eyes…Sam spoke like a villan ; ‘’No one will save you Jaani’’ she pushed Neil on his back coming on the top….and leaned on him….Neil opened his arms…; ‘’Who wants to be safe tonight…’’ Sam captured Neil’s lips…and his hands worked to get her out of her clothes ….Neil rolled

Sam over…. ‘’look at me Sammy’’

Sam obliged and cupped Neil’s face ; ‘’I love you Neil….Like no one ….like no other…’’ Neil lowered himself on Sam joining their bodies….drowning in the endless sea of love.

Arjun walked into his room and found sitting figure covered in veil waiting for him….Arjun couldn’t believe this was Radhika…..he started calling of her looking around in dressing room, wash room…and the balcony….Radhika closed her eyes in frustration….she threw her chunari off….walked off the bed…held ARjun’s collar and turned him around; ‘’I was creating all romamtic mood…but you….i used to call you hades then tiger and now ….jerk

Arjun mischievously; ‘’radhika that was to hard to believe you all shy that to when alone with me’’Radhika gave Arjun one mock glare and started hitting him….Arjun tried saving himself….but she wouldn’t stop….he turned her around and locked her arms to front holding her tightly from behind… ‘’look at my fate bunny….Arjun Mehra who scares people is being thrashed by his beloved wife….and on his first night’’ Radhika giggled leaning herself on Arjun….Arjun….moved his finger from her neck down to her waist….he smiled when she shivered….Arjun pulled the tucked chunari off her waist and threw it on the floor….leaving Radhika ‘’the first time I saw you I didn’t know you… I was lost in your dance….second in your eyes….3rd in your heart which cared so much for others….and then I realized….my heart was missing and I lost it to you….’’ Arjun turned her around to face him….he watched her face cupped her cheek and kissed her scar….Radhika was overwhelmed…..he eye automatically drooped at this and tear rolled out….Arjun brushed it off with his thumb…. ‘’No Bunny….you shouldn’t cry….’’

Radhika looped her arms around his neck hugging him tightly; ‘’That day I felt I lost you….I didn’t wanted to….’’

Arjun; ‘’And you didn’t ….because you had decided in your heart….I know how stubborn you are….you made me run behind you like a love struck puppy….I never thought I would go mad behind a girl’’

Radhika smiled; ‘’I know I am too cute to resist’’ Arjun smiled and scooped her ….he placed her on the bed….showering kisses on her face and neck before smashing his lips against hers …..radhika looped her arms around his neck responding passionately….Arjun looped an arm around her bare waist and rolled over bringing her on top…never breaking the kiss….his hands worked on the buttons and strings of her wedding attire….Radhika gasped when he unbuttoned her top completely….Arjun looked into her eyes for acceptance and she gave a small nod….he smiled pecked her forehead and removed the clips letting her dark hair loose….he rolled over again bringing Radhika below …as he removed her jewelry his lips paid homage to each part of his goddesses body…Radhika clutched his shirt tightly breathing hard…Arjun stopped he felt her nervousness and fear….he whispered in her ear… ‘’I won’t hurt you Bunny trust me….’’ Radhika nodded in acceptance Arjun kissed her passionately …..trailing towards her belly….Arjun pulled of her dress….making Radhika conscious…she crossed her arms over her chest…and lowered her gaze….Arjun yanked his clothes off and spoke; ‘’Bunny you are beautiful and all mine as I am yours….’’ Arjun left trial of kisses from her face down her body…making Radhika arch her back…….finally she let go all her inhibitions…..pulling Arjun to her….Radhika gave herself up to her love….As he entered her….Radhika moaned in pleasure and pain….Arjun pecked her gently soothing her pain…she relaxed and followed him….as she experienced his loved physically…..her heart was filled with warmth….she felt complete ….she travelled with Arjun to peak…they hugged each other tightly…before slipping into deep slumber.

Radhika slept peacefully in Arjun’s arms….and he kept watching her….she was precious in every sense ….Arjun cocooned Radhika in arms…he caressed her face….he pecked her forehead ; ‘’Bunny I have said this a million times….but will say this again… complete me Bunny…..and I love you more than my life….’’ Radhika scratched her nose in sleep…and then adjusted herself comfortably on Arjun’s shoulder…Arjun smiled and closed his eyes….

Radhika opened her eyes as the alarm started….she looked beside her and found Arjun….in a calm sleep…she ruffled his hair and kissed his cheek; ‘’Tiger…get up or di will send Sia to school’’

Arjun replied without opening his eyes; ‘’Don’t underestimate Sia….what’s time’’

Radhika; ‘’6:00 AM’’

Arjun; ‘’fine…exactly in 30 min you will hear a knock…’’ Radhika smiled and got ready….and as ARjun said…exactly after 30 min there was a knock….Radhika opened the door and find Sia all ready in her smart navy blue school dress with 2 cute pigtails…. Radhika smiled moved out of her way and Sia hopped on Arjun who was sitting on the bed… she made a cute face; ‘’Mamu papa is not going to office….Mom is alos not going…..then why me’’

Arjun; ‘’Baby promise me only today after this no more bunking’’

Sia; ‘’Pinky promise’’ Arjun smiled and lifted her and walked out to Nandini’s room…who got shocked seeing Arjun up so early….Arjun gave her a winning smile and said; ‘’Nandu….everybody is going to stay back at home….and she will be all alone at school….not fair….she is a good student ….please’’ Nandini smiled and looked at Sia who was looking down….Nandini smiled and nodded….Sai squealed and hugged Arjun; ‘’My Mamu is the best’’ Arjun loving hugged his little angel…

Prerna watched Sam working and smiled…. ‘’Sam RYTHYM concert is coming up in 3 months I want you to organised it this time’’

Sam; ‘’Mom I can’t….you have beem doing it for more than 10 yrs…I can’t match you …. ‘’

Prerna; ‘’Let’s do it together….and I want your performance this year as welll….I can’t ask Radhika now…but can ask you’’

Sam; ‘’Mom just order….I will perform for sure’’ Sam thought something and messaged Nandini

Radhika served her new family for the first time and then closed her eyes praying almighty to bail her out….she heard nothing and opened her one eye….she found everyone looking at her and Arjun holding Sia’s mouth who wanted to say something….Radhika quickly composed herself and stood like an obedient DIL…. Arnav smiled; ‘’Its really good

Radhika….right Sia’’

Sia frowned at ARjun….who removed his palm from her mouth…; ‘’Mami this halwa is awesome….I will give something sweeter’’….she walked and asked Radhika to bow….Radhika squatted down and Sia gave her a cute peck with a hug….Radhika lifted her up….Sia again spoke; ‘’Mami ….mom says you dance….will you teach me’’

Radhika; ‘’Any day my sweet heart’’

Nandini; ‘’Fine then…. You will join RYTHYM agin and participate in the concert’’ Radhika blinked fumbled and looked around at every one…she had stopped going to RYTHYM after Jai followed her there…also she wasn’t sure if Arjun will allow her….

Arnav got up and kept his palm on her head; ‘’You did us a great favor by accepting our family you don’t have to change…you can just be yourself I would love that’’

Radhika looked and Arjun he blinked in acceptance….which made her squeal and then she went all attentive again making everybody laugh….

3 months

Mishra Mehra melhotra and Khanna’s were seated in audience it was 15th anniversary of Rythym….and all the performance stole audiences heart….it was time for the final performance….Radhika and Sam were dressed alike…they performed classical mixing it with contotion ….they ended their performance with an Ariel movement on a stain
cloth…..Rhythmically moving towards each other and holding their hands…..and smiling at the audience….

Do you want to know why I ended with Radhika-Sam and not with Aradhika or Nesam happily ever after….because happily ever after is not about never facing any hurdle….but its actually about facing everything together making it happily ever after….but this happily ever after is just not about your soul mate….but also about your soul friend….your family…. this story started with radhika Sam and should end with them
Cross Roads a Glimpse

Radhika; Brash arrogant….shrewd…..she is beautiful, good and she knows it- but she wasn’t like this always…

Arjun; A kind hearted super star….believes is keeping a relationship…..breaks his own heart to make others happy….engaged to Anjali a producers daughter …. Poet at heat

Neil; An upcoming superstar …..Success rides his ahead….has a negative image in media…

Sam; Kind loving …a sweet heart….always covers up for people whom she loves…..even bears punishment….never loses her hope

One heart break….one accident changes the roads….and starts a journey of repentance….revenge…agony pain….and love


    • S.v

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      Didi u made it . Im speecheless di. So true the journey of 2 cute friends of sam and radhika. Im all emotional.

      Arjun – a ruthless arrogant beast but had a cute and kind heart. He was a person every girl likes but his heart was not for any girls. He was faked in a bike ride by a cute girl. She used him for that ride with her fake panic and then the video which was given by his lovely sister. Then the journey starts. He started to hunt who was that abd finally found that she was the one who fooled him. He was not angry but in turn was happy. Then she called him hades and he helped her to come out of hef fear and saved her when his so called ex lover and her boy friend tried to hurt his bunny. He was made a list of instructions by his bunny and she made him to obey it and he proved himself and she totally accepted him but this stupid who did not know the real color of his bunny he doubted her and she made her own way to make him apologies and also she made him stand on thw snow area so that she was a but convinced. Her ad instructed them to stay away intill he says yes . Then after many chaos he got the hand of his bunny.

      Radhika – the one of her kind a precious gem. Best friend of sam and adopted daughter of neil . Their relationship was always questioned. But they never cared. Even the one wjo truely loved questioned but they did not give any explanatik but instead they proved the others wrong. She was the beauty who made the beast to fall on the feet. She made him the way she wanted. She has her own way to get things done and was scared of dark reason was jai who hurted her that to ger respect but her tiger made her to come out of the fear with the help of all her friends. They she convinced her ad and also her dad then when she was insulled by jai she fought back and made herslef strong and she was loved by all and she now took the hands of her tiger.

      Neil – a kind hearted person always loved sam and waited for her to realsise his love for her and does anything for his adopted daughter radhika . Goes to any extend to save her. Did that when jai tried to hurt her and also stood as a rock between her and arjun even though arjun was his best friend. Married sam and saved her from a trap created unknowingly by her mom and always loved by all.

      Sam – best example for a best friend. She sacrified her own child for her best friend. She wanted to prove herslef to her family bur she was always ignored by her mother. That hurted her verymuch and she took some stupid steps to make attention. Alergic to peanuts and had a crush on arjun but truely loved neil which she did not realsie till a point of time. She wanted her brother to be her side but never knew his true color till a point when hus true color was revealed. She was the best wife and also the adopted mother for her soul sister

      Nandhini – she was a caring sister. Never differentiated between arjun and neil. Sacrified her love for piyali and she was loved by sid. The main reason for her marriage was sia the beauty angle. Nandhini wanted her brother to be the person whom radhika made. Does anything for her brothers. A sister whom every brother would love to have.

      Jai – a person who had lust on radhika who claimed that as love. Wanted her at any cost. Out of mind and also wantwd to make her slave for his needs. He was humiliated when she ignored him. Went to the max extent to make radhika his but he never knew when it comes to radhika he has to face arjun and neil.

      Sia – a cute daughter of sid and also the princess of mehra mansion. She is an intelligent kid and always mamu’s fav and also the darling of all. She was the rwason for nandhini and sid’s marriage.

      Di tried my level best to bring the moments of dpo. If I missed something sry . U are an exceptional writer. Im all emotional now as u donno how much I will miss this ff. Love u lods di and always be happy and strong for our sake. Love h tons didi. Eagerly waiting for crossroads and alzo my fav mmz.

      Always a slave for ur words and also u . Love u tons bear my hugs and kisses too. Muuhhhaaa. Im all emotional now. Love u didi.

    • Gauri


      SV I am speechless ….you make me feel special everytime…..I want to hug you once and peck your forehead 🙂 you are a blessing for me 🙂 you summarized everything so perfectly and big hug for you stay blessed

  1. Starz

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    I don’t know why every one chose today to post last update😥😥😥first you and then Sathya di…not fair…… anyway awesome episode Di…I loved it😘…sad that it got end 😥 waiting for mmz married BY fate … LOVE u di and take care😃stay blessed..

  2. Sathya

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    Lovely lovely lovely gauri…. Awww… M feeling so bad that my most favorite ff is ended… But in A very beautiful way…. Gauri I m gonna miss this very badly…. Seriously u know what after reading ur ff…. I even pray to God for asking a man like arjun ego loves his girl selflessly… It’s very hard to get like him but still ur ff gives a confident that a girl can make a normal person as a love struck puppy like rads did for arjun… 😉😉😉😉 I m so thank full for u for giving this wonderful ff which has love, obsession, sorrows, brother sister bond, friendship n especially sia dear… She is the diva in Mehra family which completes each n everyone…. I m actually loss of words n I think I m repeating the same words…. Gauri.. U r an excellent writer n it is a God’s gift for u… I request u to never ever stop writing n I m expecting u as one of the best seller in near future… I wish u all the very best to achieve all ur dreams n goals which u deserve… Love u so much from the bottom of my heart…..
    And yes glimpse of crossroads is very interesting… Fingers crossed for the first episode… Pls post soon.. God bless you.. Love u 😍😍😍😘😘😘

    • Gauri


      Sathya 🙂 you made my day 🙂 I really wanna hug you tight 🙂 I am brimming with emotions there are so many things going in my head wish I could express 🙂 love you stay blessed 🙂

  3. Raaga

    Di hats off to uuuuu……love u…..I m gonna miss DPO….
    This story ll always remain in my hrt forever as bestt…..I m overwhelmed nd I consider myself lucky that I got to read ur stories especially DPO …. I love you diiiii……miss DPO……

    • Gauri


      Thanks a ton Raaga 🙂 I am lucky to have lovely readers like you 🙂 I feel blessed 🙂 thanks darling stay blessed 🙂

    • Gauri


      Love you Brin 🙂 thanks darling 🙂 waiting for ur update …will write a short epilogue too 🙂 stay blessed 🙂 love u

  4. Alice

    Wonderful ending…this is one of my favourite stories..will really miss it.waiting for mmz and cross roads.

    • Gauri


      Thanks a ton Alice 🙂 will post MMZ on friday DPO epilogue on Sat and cross roads 1st chap on sep 5th 🙂 love u

  5. RinaSivaguru

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    Wow…. its was a perfect ending …… just love it… I just goanna miss this ff a lot…. every words described very well about their feelings and bonding….. how they stood for each other in every moments…. thank u for this superb ff…. please come back with another ff like this…..😘😘😘

  6. kusum

    Gauri ….its sad that dpo has come to an end …..iam going to miss it badly…..good thing is that u r coming up with cross roads…..character sketch looks great…..u r an amazing writer ….continue to keep up the good work. Are you there on whatpad and if yes what’s ur name there …?

  7. Hearty

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    😢😢😢😢 I’ll die now…i have turned greedy..i want was my favourite..anyways..loved the plot of the next story..hope this all keeps my heart intact as ur dpo has kept till you di..

    • Gauri


      Thanks a ton Hearty 🙂 I hoping cross roads turns good too 🙂 love you stay blessed 🙂 DPO Epilogue on saturday

  8. Jessie

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    Gauri… 👏👏👏This is Fantastic..! Nesam cute love moments in Ardhika wedding.. ! Radz asking for choc.. Rana became.driver.
    n emotional moments.. cute lovely sia’s doubts n naughty moments..gosh.. u made it absolutely real.. Nesam had fun time reading each Ardhika’s .. u nailed it.. it was very beautiful to read Arjun expressing his love beautifully ..Awww..Arrogant man turned all lovely boy..! The cherry on d top was RaSam performance!! I secretly wished 2 have some Rasam scenes bt dint expect it..Yes.. ending with Rasam is d best one..!! U have given a best story on Manmarziyan.. Hats off 2 u.. Rasam frndship was spoiled in d show.. I always felt bad on tat.. but this one made me.2 forget it… the place where Sam.realizes her attraction on Arjun m Radz patience towards Sam. ArNeil’s absolutely admirable bond even when they know abt sam n!! This made
    me more interested on ur writeup..! Friends staying together in all kinda rigorous twists..I really loved d end.. I expected Gauri’s touch in climax n got it..

    Crossroads intro is interesting..! Love d character sketch. Gonna be a treat..eager 2 read ur writeup..! I love ur magical writeup..pls never change tat! It very well mingles with reality..Never think to stop writing…!!it’s a small request.. I really admire d way u bring d story in a flow.. loads of love n stay happy..Thanks a ton for DPO.. I love tat destiny part in ur work.. Good job Destiny..! U destroyed d Obsession n Gifted a new life for Passion..!!

    • Gauri


      Thanks a ton Jessie 🙂 I believe in friendship more than love 😀 I promise I will never change …please be with me in cross roads too 🙂 and yes DPO epilogue on saturday hope u will like that love u

      • Jessie

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        Yay!!!!Epilogue…! Pls add ur magic.. I mean tat1 destiny part.. gosh.. tats a real surprise..!! I read again n just was left in tears.. I crazily read few old chappies.. where arjun consoles Rads on her b day..Anna warning Arjun..the way he scared Radz.. n dark room treatment..Anuj wala treatment… his farmhouse moments..where she develops feelings 4 him.. And Skype chat of RaNeil n last 2 chappies.. felt like bidding a farewell 2 someone spl.. no doubts.. am already in 4 d ride in crossroads..🚗 bear hug Aabha.! Fantastic writer u are! Love u..!! Am getting emotional..! 🍫🍫🍫

  9. Aadia

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    The ending was really perfect di..this story portrayed every relationships in its real colour…may the friendship, love ,bro-sis relationship…but we are gonna really miss it di..this became part of life.. Thank you for giving us such a unique and wonderful story..A big salute to your punctuality also..waiting for you di…

    • Gauri


      Thanks a ton Aadia 🙂 you made my day sweet start do check on saturday for Epilogue DPO 🙂 love you sis stay blessed

  10. Dhara

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    The story which started with friendship ended on a same note. 🙂 that’s why you are unique. Loved Siya a lot. She is the heart of Mehra family. DPO is one of the only story I have book marked and will read it any time 🙂 Waiting for Cross Roads, I have Crossed my fingers for that. I hope it will break the record of DPO 🙂 All the best. Keep Writing, Keep Smiling, Be Healthy and Stay Happy.

    • Gauri


      Dhara I am honored and feel like being on moon after reading your comment 🙂 Thanks for all the suppport and love and please keep helping me with crossroads too 🙂 love u

  11. Gummiebear

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    Finally Atlast!!!!..You have no idea how long I have been waiting Glycerin…. You didn’t even told me yesterday that you are going to post, like you do every time….why so???😓😓😓😓….I think after seeing this update my mood changed from 40 degree to 360 degree….

    I think my jaw dropped on the floor after reading it… Kkk enough of my drama…otherwise I know you won’t miss a chance to tell me later how immature I m….

    Glycerin, I am really feeling very sad for the end…. I always knew this prior to any one else but still I need time to move on with it… You know the reason for my excitement behind this chp was that it will be the last and after that no Dpo😭😭😭😭….NO ME PESTERING MY GLYCERIN…. NO BUNNY AND NO TIGER…..that’s thing I’ll miss most….I have and will always love you for this beautiful concept….

    You know though you might say “Suppu, I am not as good as thena or farha.”…. But you know what I felt that time….I’ll tell you now….Glycerin you maybe or may not be as good as them, but the way you describe emotions naa No one can do it…..Di its not always abt the words but its abt the scenes you show….its not always abt writing good but its abt writing to strive good in society…. You do that darling…. I know you may think m buttering you but that’s not the truth….I am truely and genuinely appreciating you….

    Dpo Journey can’t be describe in words….the journey of Arjun from a flirt canosova to a loving, possessive husband of his bunny….the journey of Neil Malhotra from being the best friend of his love to the best husband was incredible… You know you made me love Rads and Sam more than anyone else….you are r8 it started with them and shud end with them….

    1 month back, you were like” I don’t know if I’ll take it to 50 or not”….I was like Glycerin I just know it that you’ll take it beyond 50….Remember the day I told you Di take it to 70 naa….you were like😨😨😨😨….’Na Baba Naa 70!!!’….this were your words that time….see my prediction came true you crossed 50…But its not abt the No r8???…its abt the millions and zillions of heart that met through your ff…..I met you….Dpo gave a big gift to me….YOU!!!!….
    You got a amazing gift like me….hehehehe…I won’t leave a chance to do self flattering….

    You know when I was reading….tanu was disturbing me every time for teaching her profit and loss….I literally screamed on her when she was like teach me now…..I can’t tolerate anyone BTW me and Dpo….also not BTW me and my glycerin….

    Now let’s come to the update….. You know I have Read it almost 15 times before commenting finally… know after Rads and Sam part….Sia stole my heart…..lovely kid….I wonder how were you when you were a kid…

    Abt their love part….it was not external but it was eternal love….hats off to you baby….I srsly loved the way you described it….I was still not sure that you are going to write hot stuff….I was laughing first but now you zipped my mouth by your amazing writing skills….

    Destiny quotes were the mind blowing part….I felt actually destiny z speaking…. I think I’ll always love this ff more than any other….abt the intro of crossroads m excited… But sad that No Dpo from today….kk no more emotional talks….Glycerin…. I love you from the bottom of my heart….muaaaaaaaah… Tc

    Love You😍😘

    • Gauri


      Suppu Baap re what should I say ….yaar I am seriously lacking words your comment mad me emotional….I typing with tears in my eyes 🙂 thanks sweety for all the love 🙂 hot stuff I am done …it gave me high BP 😛 now wait for EPILOGUE DPO

      • Gummiebear

        |Registered Member

        Oh Glycerin don’t cry… love for you shud bring a smile on your face. . ….PUSHPA I HATE TEARS….lol….I will srsly miss dpo alot….are you going to come up with season 2 in future????…. Plz don’t end mmz after completion of 50 updates, I really wish and want you to complete 100 updates on that….pretty plz Di….I m not going to pester you to do something in which you are not comfortable dear….so as you wish no hot stuff….well we both agree on this part as even m not comfortable writing mature content…. Once I did now I am done with it….Also I promised you that I won’t be writing any such things……waiting eagerly for epilogue…. When z mmz???….

        Suppu loves Glycerin a lot😍😘

  12. Jewel

    |Registered Member

    Beautiful ending…. Nesam, ardhika moments, sia’s cuteness rasam’s friendship everything was superb… This was a beautiful journey…. I am feeling so sad that it is ending today…. Bt l am sure this will be there in my mind forever… Because ur words have that much power that kept that story inside the heart…. Thank u for giving this beautiful ff…. Waiting for cross roads

    • Gauri


      Thanks Jewel 😀 your words are like your name they will stay with me for ever love you loads 🙂 stay blessed 🙂

  13. Adu.nupur

    A perfect ending to a perfect story:)
    Each one of the many characters of the story had a role to play to make the story reach that pinnacle of success that it had reached today. Whether it was Ardhika, Nesam, Nandini, Sia, Sid or even Jai, all of them were important and really fantabulous. And I can’t miss these two
    things~ RadSam bonding and RaNeil adopted father daughter relationship. Those were for me the highlights of the entire story. M surely going to miss this gem of a story:’)

    Now about ‘Crossroads’… the intro is intriguing. M thinking of a certain way that it might progress but u know what u are the best in story telling so surprise all ur readers once more with ur lovely twists and emotional words. I seriously can’t wait for it to start:)

    One question for u di, how do u manage ur busy life alongwith providing regular updates? Seriously if I get a free day from my topsy turvy life I would sleep like a log the whole day xD. Please do tell me how do u manage multi tasking?

    Tkcr and lots of love and hugs for u:)

    • Gauri


      Thanks a ton Nupur 🙂 RNeil was my personal favrouite I have an AD too…and he is crazy 🙂 yes alos SAM and Rads ….there is nothing like ur girl gang 🙂 and Nupur I write becuase I am greedy about all the love I get I want to keep it 🙂 love u

  14. roshini

    Awesome Gauri 🙂 that was unique way of ending the story with Radhika and Sam….you wrote a master piece and I loved every bit of it….wish you could extend it a little more….I know that sounds greedy 😛 … All the best with cross roads…waiting for MMZ love u

  15. Sweetie

    |Registered Member

    Haayee haayee Didiiiiii,I loveee youuuuuuu….. 🙂 🙂 🙂 I can’t say more than this and you know it already.. 😉 So waiting for Crossroads..Di,did you read “How about a sin tonight” by Novoneel Chakraborthy??That book is too good,when you wrote about film stars and all,I just remembered that book.. 🙂 Love you loads and take care.. 😀

    • Gauri


      Thanks Sweetie 🙂 I have read Novoneel Chakraborthy strager triology and hw abt a sin tonight….I love his writings 🙂 I love you too honey …thankfully today no item between us 😛

  16. Naaga

    It was Outstanding Gauri & this z the Best Ending 👏👏👏👏👏 ma

    I really & Thoroughly Enjoyed it.

    Thank U so much for giving Lovely Story 💐

    And Cross Roads seems something Unique, All the Very Best for ur New Project. Thank u my Friend.

  17. RituM

    finally a super fantastic story comes to an end……like a novel….a poem….a picture…it capture my heart…..

    it almost contain everything…love…hate….jealous….care…

    i really want to define more what i feel….but seriously words r nt cming out ryt now…..feeling sad that i comes to an end now….but….obviously…its a happy ending…so me also happy….!!

    • Gauri


      Thanks Ritu darling 🙂 and next one is from the idea you gave me long back about Bad Neil-Radhika and good Arjun Sam … 🙂 hope it turns out to be good …. love you tc and keep smiling 🙂

  18. meen

    aaaaah gauri,it was incredeble….you made me cry……i’m a silent reader…..everyday i used to wait for ur updates…and believe me this is the first time im commenting on any ff……u made me helpless to do so….the moment i read ur lines “its about ur soul friend” tears started flowing down my eyes………u may not belive it, but whenever i read ur updates …everything came to picture in front of my eyes………..i cried with neil,felt sam’s pain,arjun’s love and ofcourse radhika’s cute tantrums………its really hard to find an adopted daddy like neil……..pure love like arjun……and a soul friend like sam……..damn radhika was so lucky………………..u inspire me……loads of love ……hats off girl..
    “khuda ne ki y inayat …kaha maang le dosti ya muhobbat, maine jhuka kr palkein dosti usse maang li, y riyayat sun k ussne apni dhadkane tham li….pucha usne fir jara muskuraaye kya kami thi iss muhobbat me, kaha maine fir sir jara jhuka kaaye………iss muhobbat p to m do jahaan har doon…par .aade aaye agr dosti ke to uspe aisi carodon muhubbatein vaar du”

    • Gauri


      Meen thanks for the lovely comment ….. I feel I succeeded after reading ur comment 😀 and yes for me friendship matters the most 🙂 love u

      • meen

        waiting for ur next ff……i know u will make it a benchmark again………will always love DPO and u…and yes just to let u know… inspired by your story….soon ill be writting a ff on manmarziyaan….do check………..update soon married by fate and crossroads ….will b waiting….loads of muuuuhaaaaaaaaaa

  19. shreya

    Gauri 1of all thankyou for keeping my wish ……really u stood up to the mark ………love u buddy ……dop wat to say abt this ………this my last comment for dop…….can’t believe yaar ….I really did connected to this story … that I can’t say …….u rocked it buddy … this u have added or gave justice to everything everyone every relationship……. frdz like rasam every 1 wishes to get frdz like them the partner in the crimes total masti girly type beyond everything soul sister ….ranil if someone has frdz like them no one need an Angel yaar …….arneil frdz come bro oh girls might have gone mad watching these to together …….love beast fell of beauty that’s really true I really loved the 1st meet the nok jhok Arjun radhika loved it yaar loved them ……..nesam really cute yaar them supported each other really well ………I used to be sooooo Eger to read it yaar waiting like anything …….oh god ……I ll miss it badly love you …….u know you I like this to much because In this ff their is know saral heeeheehee ………loved ever character ardhika nesam Anna Cole Steve…….nandu sid arnv the cute baby sia mala aaa wat mom patak Dilip srat piyali jai I don’t hate him coz it also Hart him also to loss the one u love the most ………but the way he chosen to express his love was wrong …….everything was awesome ……….
    New story radz arrogant Arjun soft Neil bad boy n Sam sacrificing oh wow never expected buddy I thing it is swap of jodi …….lol … u lots bey n thanks for giving such a awesome gift dop

    • Gauri


      Oh now I am relaxed 🙂 I felt I wrote crap ….but your comment made me feel on the moon 🙂 there will be no Saral in next too 🙂 thanks a ton honey love you to moon and back 🙂 🙂

  20. Myra

    |Registered Member

    gauri diiiiiiiii <3 ……….I have tears streaming down my cheeks….literally…….
    di, this update highlighted that yes, love is important….but friendship is a far greater force having a more special place in one's heart……loved the fact that you ended with rasam….
    this it was a blast of an episode…… 🙂
    you know di, when I read the title which said last episode……it just brought back all the memories of dpo…..about friendship….about love…..and about standing by the one's you care about….
    di….it has been a hell of a journey!!!! cheers!!!!
    love you more that you can ever imagine 😛
    eager for cross roads……I know it is imprinted and affect our minds…just as much…
    Your fan forever…

    • Gauri


      Myra sweety pls don’t cry ….. I want you to smile from ear to ear 🙂 I am greatful for all the love and support you have showered on me 🙂 ok I will write and epilogue may be sat for sure 🙂 stay blessed 🙂 love you my darling

  21. Aastha

    every1 has given u long appraises…….but I’m unique….so I will give u a short one frm my heart……..u r an amazing writer…….loved this last chappy……..and looking forward to your new one………..wishing u all the best……bye……… u…….TC………

  22. Lakshmi05

    |Registered Member

    Awesome dear.. DPO is unique n it’s ending is amazing with rads n Sam’s performance…that’s so lovely 🙂 🙂 Nesam romance in ardhika’s wedding is so nice.. Rads wants chocolates at that time …she’s really crazy. Dilip’s words n arjun’s promise too good.

    • Lakshmi05

      |Registered Member

      Sia’s cute n sweet antics r so nice. Arjun expressing his love to rads ..that was too nice. Lol..really… Rads being shy never… Ardhikan nesam n friendship n their bonding n their struggle to get their true love. .each n everything… Is really amazing n perfect… Sad it ended but this is very nice eending.You r really fantastic n amazing writer dear…u know how to steal our hearts..😉 Cross roads intro is suoerb.Will be waiting for cross roads…luv u…tc…😘😘

  23. neetz

    Omg cant beleive its the last…mmm i am crying nowwwww… please cant u write one more chappyy like a winding up ..may be a brief abt their pregnency or kids or something..pls pls pls … 🙁

    • Gauri


      Neetz darling please don’t cry …. even I am emotional….ok done I will write a epilogue for you check on Saturday morning 🙂 now please smile 🙂 love you loads 🙂

    • neetz

      Wow thanx my love i l wait ..hufff i think i ve read this chappy 10 times already ..i think m gonna take printout of this ff and keep it wid me.. 🙂
      Waiting for one cross roads ..mmuahhh

  24. KK

    i am speechless my dear….you are brilliant in all the ways…it was just super chappy…again i am love with your writing… if you ever write a book in future please let me know. i will give you my email address and you can email me. just loved everything about this FF. the character was just perfect in every expect….it was happy ending and your ending Voice was really meaningful….so again i am thanking you. lots and lots of love from me(Krishna)and best in future.

    • Gauri


      Krishna ….that’s the name I have believed in all my life and his teachings too 🙂 thanks a ton dear 🙂 sure honey if ever I publish a book will mail you the copy 🙂 loads of love and thanks a million ton 🙂 love u

  25. Gianna

    |Registered Member

    Am speechless right now, I don’t know what should I say am a rainbow of emotions right now. First thank u for this beautiful story, enjoyed this journey of destiny passion and obsession, I laughed cried, was sad and happy too, I also made me learn. This story will always have a special place in my heart. I know u have told u many times but am saying again your words are magical and u shouldn’t stop writing. May God bless u with success, happiness and love.

    This was a happy n perfect ending to a beautiful story. What I loved the most about this chapter is the way Sam n Radhika went back to dancing, the story started with them n ended with them. Loved ur happy ever after.

    Love u so much n stay blessed 😘😘😘
    Eagerly waiting for Crossroads, the glimpse u gave left me wanting for more.

    • Gauri


      Gianna 🙂 what to say ….I am overwhelmed write now….there are so many emotions running in my head …. thanks for all your love and support dear 🙂 please be my support in next one too 🙂 will write one short epilogue for DPO …. tc and a big hug

  26. sravya

    I can’t believe that DPO is over. I think that there is an another chapter 53.but nooo so sad😓 Anyway it is a wonderful journey which ended with a lot of happiness.Today u are rocked’s an amazing episode.The way u ended it with Radhika n Sam was superb☺
    Waiting for ur Crossroads n mmz.loads of luv☺☺

  27. Dipika

    |Registered Member

    Gauri darling u knw when i have seen dpogot update i thought as its last chapter of my most fav story i will read it in the evening peacefully.. But u knw my eagerness didn’t let me seat properly n i went to reading dpo in ofc..chupate chupate padha liya…tht i didn’t cry but ab ghar pe hu to..m crying yarrr..its the same feeling jab mmz end huwa tha…i can’t believe k itani beautiful journey khatan more tiger n bunny,birdie,AD…i m just going thru memory line of dpo each n every has special thing..whn rasam clg masti,arjun saw rads first dancr video,aradhika encounter, she making him fool…nesam ki fights n lovr,arjun ki diwangi…neil knowing abt aradhika,jai’s obsession, nesam marrige,attack on rads by jai

    All the things just fresh as morning dew..i m crying like hell..i knw everything has end..but u knw u taught me a lot things by this beautiful story…its ur inner power or light makes u good or bad or can give ability to change beast intinto king…i owed u soo much..thank you soooo much for writing this Amazing n most beautiful story..n touching our hearts..i am ur die-hard fan deary…N yess pls batao mujhr main kab aau Bangalore tumhara autograph lene….loads of love waiting ur next story…muhhhhaa

    • Gauri


      Dipu yaar I am all emotional now….you know what I was feeling that now story was turning boring but after reading your comment even I am emotional …. well neetz wants me to write down an epilogue …so I will do that….and kabhi bhi aajao….you will get a big hug 🙂 love you hope next one alos turns to be good 🙂

  28. vsk

    hiiii di remember me…..
    di so sorry for not commenting to your ff…..
    I was so busy for admission you know what I got admission in government MBBS college …..
    as it is last update of my sweetest ,. favorite, loving, beautiful etc. etc.
    I had comment…
    it was awesome…. I really don

    • vsk

      I really don’t have time …
      I only know how fast I commented…
      so sorry diii
      & now coming to last epi as all above frndz have expressed feeling s same feeling are from me tooooo…
      bbye see u …
      will miss uh too

      • Gauri


        I know medical studies are really hectic ….I had once prepared once 🙂 and you got in I can imagine you lying under books 🙂 love u tc

    • Gauri


      Yes darling how can I forget you 🙂 and million congratulations so proud of you do well …. love you stay blessed 🙂

  29. Sammy

    |Registered Member

    it was like a new beginning in the end ..i can’t believe that di you ended it after knowing from weeks ..i still have hope that it will be there for atleast 60 chappies …as usual every chappy of this ff was awesome..i loved both all three ffs of yours …
    1) i loved the character of vicky a lot in friendship one
    2) here i loved nandini .
    3) in married by fate ..i love Shivansh
    mindblowing ..but now soooooooooooo excited for crossroads ..update it soon

    • Gauri


      Thanks meri jaan 🙂 Sammy now post your s too 🙂 I am dying need some tonic 🙂 ok Epilogue DPO on saturday 🙂 love u

  30. Chandana

    Oh God!! It ended… It has become a habit reading and waiting impatiently to read DPO…It ended perfectly and u made it one… This is one of the best works of your’s Gauri… I thoroughly enjoyed reading it…keep writing more n keep entertaining your reader’s…

    Cross Roads seems interesting… All the characters are so different…anything you write is a treat….addicted to your writings… GB…tc

    • Gauri


      Thanks a to CHandana 🙂 thanks for being such and amazing support and frind dear 🙂 will post soon 🙂 stay blessed 🙂 and pls keep giving me ideas 🙂 stay blessed DPO Epilogue on Sat

  31. chashu

    hi di aap kaise ho.Main yaad mein hoon yaa muje bhool gaye .Main sorry nahi bolunge kyunki no tnx and sry between sisters hain naa . Ok ab point pe aayein thoh mmz ka dpo katham ho chuka hai muje mumma aur papa mere phone ko choone thak nahi dete . Aaj bus aisehi main ne tu check kiya thaa aur muje pehle jhalak main hi shock de diya aapne . Teekh hai di papa kaa aane kaa waqt ho gaya hai bye pathaa nahi ab kabh aapse baath ho paayegi … Thabh thak ke liye alvidah .
    Pathaa nahi ye april kab aayegi aur ye school band hogi …
    Byyyyyeeeeeeee ab jaake padnaa bhi hai .
    Agar ho sake thoh ek help meri bff ka bday aane waala hai usse main kya gift doon ring yaa diary yaa teddy ye sab sochke thoh mera chota sa dimaag bahot thak chuka hai aap answer kardo di mein kaise bhi karke time nikaal ke padloongi aur haan agar aapke pass koi isse atcha idea ho tho pls iss nanni munni choti si batchi ki madath kardo di pls…..

    • Gauri


      baby why would I forget you….its ok darling padhai bhi zaroori hai 🙂 uske pictures leke ek collage banvalo a good gift or by an album and on first page paste ur picture with her 🙂 she will like it 🙂 stay blessed 😀 and study well love u

  32. nitu

    Gauri di ended my fav ff I am really very upset today very very upset di luved the way u ended the ff it is story of to bff’s and u ended it wid them only after ur ff ill miss sia a lot her cute lill antics I luv her so much .
    Luved the intro of crossroads eagerly w8 to the read the upcoming tracks di
    I wish u jst keep writing like and dnt stop ur habit of writing di I must say u shld publish dpo novel also and ill be the 1st person to buy it . I became a huge fan of urs di
    Will miss dpo alot I always open mmz page wid a hope tat ill find a post of dpo or mmz but frm today we cant find dpo plz go for season 2 after mmz di plzzzzz plzzzzzzzzzzz
    But dnt end mmz fastly giv atleast 70-80 updates
    Ill stop my self here only bye di
    Will miss dpo a lot
    luv u

    • Gauri


      Nitu darling all good things come to an end 🙂 but will come back with a new one season 2 let me think if I can 🙂 MMZ for sure tomorrow 🙂 thanks for your love and support sweety stay blessed 🙂

  33. Happy

    I want to see u nw….sry for late comment… much happy….tears forming in my eyes….miss this ff soooooooooo soooooooooo much….nesam and ardhika too good…loved all scenes….from starting till today I waited for dpo….something special this ff for me…as a habit I ll wait again for dpo for some days……felt soo bad dr….be happy always….thank you soooooooooo soooooooooo much..forgot it….hw r u….

  34. Vini

    Wow ..tat was really nice gauri … just loved it to the core .. if there is any word meaning more than awesome / awestruck then I dedicate that to your story .. i never thought I would go crazy for a story like this … cuteness overloaded.. and many things .. gauri you are seriously such a nice writer … and I wish you will write a book n near future . Looking forward for your other ff’s

    • Gauri


      Thanks Vini 🙂 I have a long list to thank each one you ….. you guys motivated me so well …. I guess I am short of words 🙂 stay blessed darling love you 🙂

  35. Rossy

    |Registered Member

    Sorry for for the late dear..coz of earthquake my network gone..thank u for this story..rasam bond the most adorable n lovely bond u showed me ..u r a genius writer..the ending was superb perfect…i love ur all rasam bond..seriously I love ❤ ur girly bonds..what about ur six years??m excited for crossed road…btw m always in fear what if u stopped ur writing? Waiting for epilogue..then another promise u made ,remember…u will give me ur dpo links..yay…

    • Gauri


      Thanks a ton Rossy and don’t worry I won’t give up writing as I am too scared of you 😛 I myself love girly bonds….I hate when people say that 2 girls can never be together for long…. Six yrs I don’t know…I have already stroked off 2 chapters after writing it…will write again 🙂 yes I will maile you the DPO link 🙂 stay blessed 🙂 love u

  36. Dev

    |Registered Member

    Hey gauri…..soery late as usual… nc ending 2 d awesome plot of an fab writer……love u lots n waiting 4 nxt

  37. Savera

    OMG..Dear Gauri ….
    Awesome awesome awesome. .it’s really an awesome episode. ..
    Finally arabhika marriage done….
    Cute Sia….n her menu nmami…
    Nesam….their filmy dialogue scene. …was superb …
    What do I say about your style of writing. .
    You are my one of d favourite writer. ..
    Thank you for giving such a wonderful story….DPO. ..this version of MMZ. ..
    Always be happy. …my darling n get all d love. ..

  38. Roma

    Gauriiiiiiiiiiiii my honeyyy my sweeeeeetheart sissy…. you’re awesome, awesome, awesomeeeeee…….what a marvellous ending you gave to this stupendous, splendid, breathtaking story…..the marriage ceremony was really incredible. ….nesam and ardhika so lovelyyyyyy n passionate. …wowwww. ..lil sia so smart getting all the love n care, attention.….cuteness overloaded. …family, friends, love and happiness…all dreams come true….the best part of this story was you ended with Rads n Sam’s dance performance. ……I just loved it from the bottom of my heart. …u know Dance is my passion. …I always loved it but never got chance to do it or learn it….in my family dancing n singing r not allowed and treat it as a bad professions… is my weakness. …where ever I listen music…I start dancing in my heart….I wish I could learn dance n perform in public…..but I know it’s only my wish which never going to be completed like my lots of other wishes…….sorry for my blabbering. … 🙂 …I loved the glimpse of your new story cross roads….intro of characters is very interesting. ..I’m so excited my dearrrrr for this upcoming adventure….I know you will give us your best again like you always did….a very veryyyyyyy loud applause n standing ovation from me for this unique amazing awesoooooome story…I salute youuuu…you’re Excellent, terrific, splendiferous, fabulous, superb, supreme, magnificent, outstanding…..Devine …I’m blessed to be here n be a lucky reader of yours….keep it up honeyyy, stay blessed n healthy alwaysssss,…love you loads. muaaaaahhhhhh Bear hug my sweeeeeetheart gauriiiiiiiiiiiii. …keep smiling n writing n entertaining us with your amazing treasure of stories. ….lotssssss of hugsssssss n kissesssss 🙂 ♡♡♡ 😉

    • Gauri


      Thanks a ton Roma 🙂 love you 🙂 million hugs to you 🙂 same pinch I love dancing too wanted to learn but never got a chance 🙂

  39. monica

    gauri it was an amazing episode loved the way you ended it we will miss dpo alot
    love u so much
    by the way when are you posting mmz -married by fate

  40. Priyal

    Nice update gauri till nw i was a silent reader i cld restrict myself frm commenting today i luv both ur updates
    W8ing eagerly for cross roads dear
    And mmz also

  41. Fanficoholic

    |Registered Member

    Sorry di. I am so late. The last one to comment in the last episode. But as usual this episode was epic. Not only this every episode is epic. While reading ur ff i never felt dissatisfied by any episode. All were upto the mark. Never once i felt that tis episode cld be much better. Ur vocab-this amazes me. I can understnd ur vocab very well. But the way in which u arrange ur wrds is wat which gives them their beauty. I am jst awestuck by ur writing skills. I am reading mmz married by fate also. I like it. But i dnt knw y i am connected to tis ff very much. Though mmz is very good tis one stuck a chord in my heart. I used to be so involved in the story that whenever there was a sad sequence gng on i used to cry. Whn there was a happiee sequence i used to feel happiee and smetyms squeal wth laughter. Whn there is any instance which evokes anger i used to be very angry. I am so involved wth it. I dnt knw y. The way u describe scenes is very vivid. I can imagine all the story. Whn i am reading tis there is a visual track gng in my mind parllely. Ur writing makes us imagine the scenes. Nt all hav tis skill. U r one amng the few who possess tis.

    Cmng to the story as u said the story started wth rafhika and sam and wll end wth them. Friendship is one of the most unique feelings in life. U hav a spl bond wth ur frnds. U can tak ethem fr granted bt still u can be sure that they wll be ryt there… Waiting fr u. Sometyms they become our mom,smetyms our dad,smetyms our sis or bro. They r a mix of all relations. U depicted the friendship in a fabulous way. I also loved destiny. It reminds us that nt evrythng is in our control. We may hav sme plans fr us bt at the end of the day we do wat destiny has planned fr us. Sam might hav made a few mistakes. She might hav taken neil’s love fr granted but usne apni dosti khoob achhe se nibhayi. She fulfilled all the duties of a frnd. Ahe even fought against her own family fr her frnd. Whn the person doing the wrng is our family member it becomes very diffiult to fight wrng. Bt she did it. She even made a very big sacrifice fr her frnd. She sacrificed her unborn child. Sam had mre affection wth Mala rather than piyali. Sometyms realtions made by heart r stronger than those made by blood. And u hav very rytly shown tat no one shd be lyk jai otherwise they wll hav to bear the brunt of destiny.

    Coming to nesam there were sme heartbreaking moments. Bt finally whn sam realised her love it was mostly a happiee story. Ofc they had sme sad moments. Bt which road doesnt hav bumps in it? Their romance was so cute. While cmng to ardhika they bth did very unexpected things. Arjun thought he wll never fall in love. Bt he fell for radhika. And radz thought that she wll marry in her mid twenties. Bt look at her by the tym she is 22 she has become a bride. Sia was a cuteness overdose. And nandini is the perfect girl wth smewat dull lyf. Sid is the guy who has added colors to nandini’s lyf. An unconditional lover. Radz and arjun’s frnds in US also define frndship in their own way.

    Overall i wld give a 10/10 to ur ff. Well i But she never listens to me want to award infinity marks to ur ff. Bt as tat is nt possible i am giving the above score. Tis ff i the best among ardhika ffs along wth manmarziyan a new story. I rank tis no 1 along wth manmarziyan a new story.

    Last bt nt the least can u give me sme names of good ffs on ardhika.

    Love u loadssssssssssssss di and am gonna miss ur ff sooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo


    • Gauri


      Thanks a ton dear 🙂 this was one of the most beautiful comment I have ever received 🙂 you know after reading you comment I feel I did justice to the story ….thanks for blessing me such beautiful words stay blessed 🙂 and yes I have updated the epilogue for DPO as well ….love you keep smiling

  42. _Ritu

    |Registered Member

    Gauri….. Ri8 now my expressions are lyk 😊😊😊😊 👌👌👌👌😭😭😭😭 ☺☺👏👏👏👏 ….in the whole journey of DPO u were stupendous , fantabulous amazing, awesome, breath taking and many more….Love u love u love u so very much and really cant believe DPO has come to an end bt I know u will come up wid another … It was a perfect ending of a perfect ff…. RaSam bonding was d best bond among all the bonds shown here…. 🙂 U have amazing talent dear nd I m really getting jealous from u 😉 😉 and since dis is the last one so let me include my topic of Jiju here too.. 😉 😉 So, I guess the decorations nd wedding event u mentioned here is exactly u want in ur own wedding ri8.. And don’t worry u will get ur Arjun Mehra soon.. 😉 😉 bt don’t forget us after getting him… 😉 😉 waiting for d Epilogue..loads nd loads of love… 🙂

    • Gauri


      Thanks a ton Ritu 🙂 phir se Jiju …..I want Neil …. pray I get Neil….ok honey I did post Epilogue for DPO …. do let me know and no more jiju between u and me 🙂 love you stay blessed 🙂

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