Manmarziyan- Destiny…Passion …Obsession – Chapter 51

Hello friends ….apologies as I am late again…. this is the next one….Last one I am writing and will post soon…MMZ on Sat for sure 🙂 do let me know how was this :) loads of love

Chapter 51

Don’t fear the dark….it isn’t powerful…..a small beam can kill it in a sec


Anna was smiling going through the wedding invitation….she was excited to attend the wedding of her two best friends….she had pestered the other 5 like hell….their tickets were done….Arjun knew of their arrival they wanted to surprise Radhika…Steve walked inside the room and pecked Anna’s cheek…they had moved in together and were planning to marry…Steve; ‘’You look happy’’

Anna; ‘’I never thought someone could tame Arjun…and now he is getting married to one of the most wonderful girl I have known…I am happy Steve’’

Steve; ‘’We are leaving in an hour….others will be reaching airport directly…let us start too’’ Anna smiled nodded and walked out of room following Steve…

Mehra Mansion

Arjun was having his breakfast with his dad sharing a light moment…Arnav shared his love story with his son…and how marriage is the most beautiful event and bond of one’s life…Arjun went on keenly listening to his father….Nandini made her way to the dining area….and hugged Arnav from behind…surprising him; ‘’How are you Chachu’’

Arnav was all happy; ‘’Nandu…I am all fit ready to participate a marathon….my kids really make me happy’’

Arjun; ‘’Wow! Nandu I am here too..’’

Nandini; ‘’You deserve a tight slap for spoiling SIa and scolding one or the other person daily in her school…Chahcu I will be in Mehra Mansion till Sia’s Mamu get married’’

Arjun smiled at his sister’s anger.. ‘’By the way where is Sia’’

Nandini; ‘’In school and dare you go there today….’’

Arnav; ‘’What about Sid…?’’

Nandini; ‘’He will have dinner with us but will stay at Rathod Villa’’

Arrjun; ‘’Nandu you have one stubborn husband…but my niece is cutest…and I will be picking her from school….because I promised to take her out…you can scold me later for that’’ Nandini ran after Arjun but he escaped laughing giving her a flying kiss….

Radhika was in full mood…doing everything to look perfect…she would time and again scare her parents with her face covered in face packs…..she was being pampered by her parents and her AD…who was ready to get her wedding attire altered any no. of times she wanted…giving GLITZ designer a head ache….but they obliged smiling as Neil was the boss… Radhika was standing infront of the mirror trying her necklace….Mala watched her smiled and walked in; ‘’You look happy Radhika’’

Radhika replied; ‘’I am Mom….but also sad that I have to leave you guys…why can’t ARjun come here’’

Mala; ‘’because this is the way it works…but you should be happy that you will be staying in the same city as us…we can meet you whenever we feel like’’

Radhika beamed; ‘’Yes I can come down over the weekends’’

Mala banged her head; ‘’Why did Arjun agree to marry you…you are an idiot…’’

Radhika; ‘’Don’t be mean mom’’

Mala; ‘’if you come here on weekends…what is the need marrying him…you can go on dating him for eternity..stupid girl’’ Mala just walked out leaving bewildered Radhika behind….when intelligence dawned on her she realized what her mother meant…and smiled; ‘’Dad must have had a gala time with you Mom….WOW what a rocking mother I have ’’

Sam was going all busy…Nandini’s trust on her making the marriage perfect was motivating her….Sam knew Nandini could have hired any experienced planner for Arjun’s wedding but she decided to go ahead with Sam …who was novice…and also the daughter of the man who left nandini mid way….Sam smiled thinking of the love she got from all the people who weren’t her blood….Sam had become good friends with Sid….he had taken care of her in the hospital till her parents and other reached…and now since the venue was Sid’s hotel…she was interacting with him on daily basis forming a bond which she wanted to be the one with Jai….Sam was inspecting the big hall and suddenly turned blank…she looked around the grand hall but nothing came to her head….she wiped her forehead and collapsed on the chair….someone extended a glass of juice to her and Sam took it…she looked up and jumped off her chair; ‘’Sid so sorry…I…’’

Sid patted her head; ‘’Cool down girl…why are you stressing… tell me where are you stuck’’

Sam; ‘’I don’t know what decoration will fit in…it was a beach side wedding previously ….now I have this hall I am confused’’

Sid; ‘’Sam its still beach side wedding….hall is for sangeet ….and go the simple yet elegant way….for marriage…we will put the mandap up on the beach….with beautiful lightning…and dinner in the adjoin garden area…what say…..’’

Sam with a disappointed face; ‘’Then I why am I hired… have such a wonderful idea’’

Sid smiled at her child like face; ‘’Because I can talk and you can do…and no one can make it as perfect as you…because this is for your best friend’’ Sam smiled wide….Sid caressed her head and walked out of the hall instructing his staff to assist her

Neil had double work….Arjun had been emotionally blackmailing him…chiding him for being partial towards Radhika…which Neil was…but Arjun was his childhood friend….and Neil couldn’t disappoint him too….they had planned a boys evening ….Neil had bought his clothes to office…he didn’t wanted Sam to know or else she will bomb his evening with

Radhika….Neil changed and walked out of his office getting greedy glares from the females….they had never seen their boss so casually dressed….and he looked smoking hot….Neil thought for a moment… smiled and waved at them signing off for the day…jaws dropped and some felt dizzy….Neil POV; ‘if Sam witnesses this she will rip me off with bare hands…’ Neil entered the elite pub…he smiled at few known faces….and just threw some attitude at drunk hungry female eyes….it felt good to be like this….such evenings were only with Arjun….Neil walked towards the bar table…and found Arjun sipping his drinking and moving his head with the music….few girls approached him but he refused…

Neil’S POV; ‘Stop it silly head…he really loves Radhika….he will never look at someone else’….Neil cursed himself for doubting Arjun again….he smiled walked to Arjun slapping his back; ‘’ Hello Mr. Groom….’’

Arjun; ‘’You don’t trust me ….I know you were standing there checking if I am fooling around with other girls…’’

Neil; ‘’Old habits don’t die easily’’

Arjun; ‘’Was that for me or for you????’’

Neil smiled; ‘’Both….leave all that….how about being a bad boy for the evening….its too good to feel like a bachelor again…’’ They gave each other a known smile….a girl approached Neil and he moved to the dance floor….Arjun shook his head and joined another chick to enjoy the evening with his best friend…

Amid all happiness….Khanna residence was in dark and dead silence….Jai was paralyzed ….doctors said it would be miracle if he walked again ….Piyali had completely withdrawn…..she kept sobbing looking at Jai lying on his bed….Samrat decided to be by her side….he apologised to Dilip for Piyali’s behaviour and informed Dilip about his inability to attend Radhika’s function….yet he personally called her and blessed her.

The Sangeet

Radhika got up and yawned and then scratched her head….she heard some sounds and quickly peeped out of the room….her jaw dropped ….she rubbed her eyes quickly freshen up and ran out; ‘’Anna….??? Am I dreaming’’

Anna got up from the chair and hugged her tight; ‘’No darling you are not…..I wouldn’t have missed this for world’’

Radhika looked at the other 5; ‘’should I invite you guys to give me a hug….’’ They all laughed got up and hugged her tight….they noticed her scar on forehead…but didn’t question it….Arjun had already asked them not too…..Radhika decided to get all her friends dressed in Indian attire and took them shopping….

Sam completed the decoration and instructed the staff over the phone about ushering the guests….she had decorated the hall as if starts had come down on earth to celebrate….Sam quickly got ready in a purple and golden combination outfit….Neil entered and found Sam infront of the mirror…his eyes went from her head to toe….and he whistled….Sam smiled; ‘’ Thank you now get ready Mr Husband’’’

Neil frowned moved and hugged her from behind; ‘’Baby can we go after an hour….will give traffic excuse’’

Sam; ‘’Your Birdie will cross examine you so dangerously that you will vomit the truth’’

Neil; ‘’Yup thats true….fine….will continue later….’’ Neil was about to leave but he stopped and held Sam’s arm…he pecked her forehead; ‘’Sammy….I never imagined that you can be so strong…so much has happened and you are still smiling….I love this Sam…’’

Sam smiled squeezed Neil hand; ‘’This Sam is because of Neil….your support made me what I wanted to be…and about smiling….what I missed from my MOM I got from Mala aunty….Chashni was never a friend she is sister for me and always will be….and she is the reason I got you….she deserves all the happiness and I deserve to be a part of it….and I want to move forward be happy….now if your emotional banter is done…lets move and don’t forget to welcome me I am from the groom side….and remember you need to fold your hands and bow your head…’’ Neil pulled her nose and went out when Prerna called him….

Radhika got dressed in off white silver embroidered floor length dress and twirled around infront of the mirror….she would pout and then suck her cheeks in ….she was practicing how to pose for the pictures…Mala huffed and Dilip smiled….he looked at Mala; ‘’She will never grow up’’ Mala pulled Radhika and dragged her out to leave for the venue….

Guests had started pouring in….many praised Sam’s effort….Nandini smiled looking at the arrangements….and felt happy when ARnav praised it…Radhika entered all happy and jumping but Mala held her arm; ‘’behave like a bride’’ Radhika quickly composed and pretended all nervous and shy….

Neil watched her for a minute and whispered; ‘’Bride you are the worst actress I have met…stop this overacting…’’

Radhika frowned; ‘’What am I supposed to do….Mom tells me behave like a bride…you are asking not to…..fine play the music want to dance’’ Radhika was still fighting Neil when Arjun entered with Sam and Sid… as the party progressed….more than guests the bride herself wanted to dance….which was being kept under control…by Neil and Mala….Nandini announced the next performance…she took Sia’s name….and all clapped for her….Sia looked around and found everyone looking at her….she turned nervous and ran off the stage and hid behind Nandini….Arjun pulled her out; ‘’willl you dance with Mamu…çome’’ Arjun took her to stage and she found some confidence when Arjun came to her level and did her movements….everybody clapped to boost her confidence ….Sia happily danced and pecked her Mamu’s cheek….Radhika watched Arjun with lot of appreciation… was time for Bride and Groom to dance….but they didn’t go alone…Radhika held Neil’s arm and Arjun took Sam hand and brought them to stage….Arjun Radhika pushed Neil Sam together before coming together for the dance….Nandini requested the DJ to play an old no. ‘Tera Mujhse hai pehle ka nata koi…’ and the 2 couples did a slow dance on that…and after few minutes…song changed….to a peppy no. to Punjabi wedding song….Radhika pushed Arjun on Neil…and pulled Sam to her…the boys looked bewildered at the girls….Sam smiled and joined Radhika…..they danced the way they always did during Rhythm days…..Prerna smiled looking at them…all their performances for so many years came infront of her eyes….they danced freely without any inhibition….as if no one was around….they finised their performance hugging each other lovingly getting a big applause from everyone….Sam cupped her face and pecked her forehead. Sangeet ended with lot of fun and blessings being showered on the couples…. After the guests left

Sam came to Arjun; ‘’there is a little fun only for all of us…’’

Arjun; ‘’what??’’

Sam gestured Arjun and his friends to follow her….she took them to the beach….a part of it was beautifully decorated it had a huge table in the middle….live music….Sam turned around; ‘’this is only for the friends of the bride and groom….’’ Everybody applauded Sam….Neil joined them after seeing off the remaining guests….they danced….had fun…and recalled the moments in US…

Mehendi and Haldi were kept in a simple function as per Mala’s request…While applying mehendi on Radhika’s hands….Mala decided to do it for Sam as well…after all it was Sam because of whom her daughter was safe….Radhika got her Mehndi done till hell elbows…..she happily showed it around to everyone….but only Sam knew the reason for Mehndi upto elbow was to cover her scars….Sam knew Radhika’s over enthusiasm was only for others to believe that she had left all bad memories behind but in reality she still had those scars in her heart…which she hid perfectly .

Cole was too excited….she captured even the smallest of rituals in her camera….Mala was happily answering all her questions and Cole suddenly decided getting married the Indian way

The Wedding

Radhika was dressed in red and gold embroidered velvet lehanga….she was dawned with beautiful jewelry from head to to toe….her hair were tied in a bun covered with white flowers….her dream was coming true….she was marring the man she loved…Radhika smiled looking at her reflection….a year back she had made her mind up not to marry till she was 26….yet she was standing dressed as a bride even before turning 22…Radhika walked out of the room….and hugged her dad….after today she will not be Radhika Mishra she will become Radhika Arjun Mehra…..she wanted this but leaving behind 22 yrs is not easy….

Arjun got ready….Nandini watched him from the door as he was busy giving himself final touches… he was younger to her by more than a decade ….and she had loved him like her own child….nandini was emotional….a year back it was hard to convince ARjun to be back in India ….he had made up his mind to settle down in US….he was cold towards Arnav…..but things changed when Radhika stepped in…Nandini smiled as she recalled Radhika’s name…..she remembered how she had shared Radhika’s video with him….and Arjun’s curiosity to know the girl….but she never knew….her small step will bring her Arjun back….Nandini was still thinking when Arjun’s voice broke her thoughts; ‘’Nandu….you need to help me with final touches….I am still your baby brother….’’ Nandini smiled and walked to Arjun she pecked his forehead and made him ready for his d day….

Sam looked like a some royal princess….she had worn a yellow colour elegant Sari and gave herself a soft look….she was busy over the phone when Neil hugged her tightly from behind….kissing her neck; ‘’do you really want to kill me with your looks….’’

Sam; ‘’yes that’s the plan…..but for now dear husband….just move back….I have worked very hard on my look don’t ruin it’’

Neil turned Sam around with jerk holding her tightly; ‘’Sorry honey….you can touch up again…’’ Neil leaned capturing Sam’s lips in the most passionate kiss….he had been gentle always….but today he was dominant….Sam broke the kiss breathing hard and blinked at him; ‘’you are mad ….’’

Neil kissed her neck ; ‘’That I am….now touch up and calm your heart….I will be waiting out’’ After he left Sam looked at herself and cursed Neil for smearing her hard work.

The decorations of the wedding venue stole the hearts….Sam had put the mandap on the beach…. The poles were decorated with pink and white flowers….Sam had decorated the guests place with dim yellow lights….wind waves everything was adding to the occasion….Sam was over looking the dinner arrangements….and gave one look to the final sitting arrangements….she patted her back and decided to check on Radhika…today she had switched her place with Neil….he was coming with the groom….Sam entered Radhika’s room who was all ready waiting for her marriage…she smiled and sat infront of her; ‘’Chashni you look breathtaking’’

Radhika; ‘’Thanks! Sam why am I nervous’’

Sam; ‘’Happens…because when he will look at you today…you will feel exactly the way you felt the first time…it’s a new journey….’’

Radhika; ‘’promise me you will never leave me’’

Sam; ‘’We cannot leave each other darling….ours is a unique bond….un breakable… take a deep breath….we will be walking on aisle in next 10 min….and today….I kicked off your AD….because this is my place….with you’’

Arjun was standing with Neil and Nandini waiting for his bride…..he looked handsome in his beige sherwani….he would time and again turn towards the door from which Radhika was supposed to come…..and then his heart stopped….his lady walked down the aisle with Sam…Anna CHole and Cheryl… Sam had arranged flower shower for Radhika….as she walked the aisle to the mandap she was showered with rose petals…Arjun moved forward and extended his hand….Radhika took it they exchanged the garlands and the rituals started….to make Beauty & Beast as one…

Well there were many guests big and small names…..but I was there too….watching them with a smile….Oh sorry let me re-introduce myself I am Destiny…..I pay visit to each one of you….I paid a small visit to Jai too….trust me I felt bad….but I don’t forgive ….leave all that I stand here all happy witnessing the beautiful moment… I move my eyes….I fell proud looking at one of my favourite couple…NeSam why??? because they are personification of the word friendship….there eyes were set on Arjun-Radhika all smiling and emotional…and about beauty and beast… me I heard Radhika scolding ARjun in whispers…and he simply rolled his eyes….

Precap-Last Chapter


    • S.v

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      Di im all emotional as my gang of friends have came down to the wedding and this was a ride which made all one. A beauty who made realise that even that beast has a beautiful heart and this bunny and tiger are always my fav and di the marriage was so awesome was a dream wedding beach setting i love it .

      Ok now im having more thoughts fine leave me but jai got what he paid for. Hope the scars of bunny is removed by her tiger and her ad and am . Mala was so cute today and my bunny was all the way she was and tiger gosh that was cute of him when he was pampering sia and radhika is always pampered by all lovely.

      Neil fwww ad you are great dear and sam poor her you ruined her makeup and lovely all the gang are making all happy. Cole cute and wants to have a indian wedding that is the specialty of our culture. Lovely did want to hug you tight and bury in my heart as you are always make me go made with your words di.

      But the sad part is this awesome journey is going to reach its destination. A beautiful journey which had everything a realistic story which had every thing and which is loved by all and which will always be in all the mmz fans heart as a fresh green tree. Didi i have mixed emotions. Cant type more as my fav tiger and bunny is going to say good bye to me with Nesam and also Anna cole steve.

      Love you soo much didi. Love your words always and also you till i live and always smile and bear my hugs and infinite kisses……… muhhhaaaa…………………

    • Gauri


      SV ….I love you from the bottom of my heart and here is my gift for you 🙂 cross roads I will try and incorporate the names tiger bunny in the later part 🙂 so smile now 🙂 love you a big hub for u my cutie pie

      • S.v

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        Cross roads ?? Didi did u update that ?? God didi im desperately waiting to read that u said that I will love arjun hate neil pity sam and slap radhika god didi I am waiting for cross roads. Love u so much didi.

  1. Sammy

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    di iam crying …omg i am crying is goiing to end i mean this ff of yours had everything ..friendship ..possessiveness…madness…hot romance ..hatred..jealousy..revenge..action.. misconception. what to say further… everything was perfect …and the last lines of destiny ..superb ..mindblowing ..awesome…now this is also added to my favourite list ..because i liked your journey of freindship little bit more ..but seriously di hats off to you for writing such a mindblowing ff

    • Gauri


      Sammy darling don’t cry 🙂 every thing has to end 🙂 will write more hope it turns out good 🙂 loads of love to you 🙂

  2. Dhara

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    OMG. Such a lovely and ravishing update 🙂 . I lived this wedding. Radhika is adorable. Waiting for last chapter. And also sad that this beautiful journey is going to end and I am sure that you will come up with the new amazing story 🙂 God bless you. All the best. Keep writing. Keep smiling.

  3. KK

    dearest Gauri, it was breath taking. I enjoyed each and every word of yours….i cannot believe that it has come to end!!! i am sad but i am also excite about your new story….again thank you so much…

  4. Jewel

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    this was awsome…. i am so happy now. finally ardhika get married…. and the marriage…u describe that very nicely…. this chapter fill a lot of happiness inside me….

  5. nitu

    gauri di 1st i am mad at u for ending my fav ff i am really very upset di but at the same time excited to read ur new story i srsly love ur writings
    and cuming to todays episode it was amazing di wow ardhika are getting married (yeppe ) sia’s and arjuns dance awww hw cute.
    I always tink of mine and my mamus bond wenever i see arjun and sia’s bond
    nesams romance is amazing .over all it was is fantastico update di but i am feeling very sad bcz tis update dii
    will miss dpo alot
    write a season 2 after ur dne wid mmz and cross roads
    but plzz dnt end mmz soon plzzzz plzzzzzzz
    luv u di bye

  6. Shree

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    Loved it!! Do you have to end it?! Damn no..

    I loved it.. everything.. Sia be the show stealer.. sorry. Im being partial as I love kids.. I see my Vidhisha in Sia… I loved everything di.. Steve and Anna! Finally… Can’t Jai die?! Ok I’m not talking about him.. Sam and Sid are cute..

    Post soon di.. Love you 😍😘

    • Gauri


      Thanks a ton SHree 🙂 yes baby it has to end … I love SIa too… Jai no becoz death is easy life is difficult 🙂 loads of love and a big hug for you stay blessed 🙂

  7. vasuraj

    Omgggg …. U nailed it gauri…
    I m a silent reader here
    Can’t stop myself from commenting
    A lots of applause to u…..lived it so much😃😃😃

  8. suga

    Am jumping with happiness 😀 😀 dis s full of happy happy happy moments filled with soooo much joy 😀 mind blowing one 😀 Sam she became do matured n Neil ad always awesome 😀 arjun cute 😀 nadhu fabulous 😀 😀 each n every moment u penned D a art darling sissy 😀 u t awesome 😀 loved it 😀 love u 😀 missed u sooooooo much 🙁 but my personal n professional life kept me busy 🙁 so only no comments 🙁 now everything on place finally 😀 😀 😀

  9. dipika

    Ohhhhh my god Gauri darling m having tears in my eyes right now…really… My eyes r watery… You just stole my heart with this really amazingggggg n most lovely story i ever read…m feeling very small n empty to praise u…bcos i knw whatever i say it will not describe how much i love this story n ur writing.. N honestly whn u became a bestseller author it will b happiest moment of my life…n Today’s chapter i wayyyy beyond the perfection…. Each n every word,sentence n para make me love it…Rads excitement, Arjun n neil party, sam…she so cute n lovely…now m more attached to hrr frm last few episodes… I felt like was too at wedding venue…m soooooo much happy tht i m the part of this beautiful journey n enjoyed all the moments.. Reading u is treat always…this is epic…You r awsome writer..n m waiting to read ur book with ur autograph.. N honestly i want to meet u…Loads n loads of love to my dearest darling… Teddy bear hug for u…

    • dipika

      N yess i forget to write abt destiny part…tht was really heart touching.. U r right..destiny always give fare chance to every one..n it is upto us to deal with truly… N u r right.. Nesam r the most lovable couple n best example of friendship…..

    • Gauri


      Dipika everytime I read your comment I know you more….you are such a wonderful person who has this ability to make people smile ….I am blessed to have known you and befriended you ….we will meet for sure one day :)thanks for blessing me with your friendship loads of love swt hrt keep smiling

  10. Dev

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    O gauri… was 1 happy wedding of a true beauty who changed d arrogant beast into her loving prince….💗💗💗
    It was funny in sangeet function…..wer radu was literally jumping…..funny…haha😁😁😁
    N it was good of neil 2 smudge sams makeup….n sam plzz bear him….😜😜😜
    Bt im damn sad dat its gonna end…..😭😭😭
    Bt always will definetly love u like a bst buddy…..bear hugs….n tc…..kiss.n pecks😍😍😍💕💕💕💕

  11. Aadia

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    Loved & loved & loved it di..what to do with this shyless bride?we are really gonna miss this naughty bunny and her tiger..not only them but Nesam,Sia and everything abt our favourite story..i wont say to update soon ,because i dont want you to end it soon.bye bye

  12. Gianna

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    I feel so overwhelmed right now, this was a beautiful update n i loved everything about it. Finally beauty n beast became one 😍😍😍 the way u have described the functions felt like I was present. I still don’t want to believe that this story is going to end, I will miss it, will forever keep this in my heart.
    Love u lots 😘😘😘😘

  13. sravya

    I don’t know what to say I am sad😓 n happy too☺.the DPO will end u remember I read it first when it was 19th chapter but u gave me it’s all other chapters.I am really mad for it.but it’s come to an end.sooo sad😓 haa.
    Today’s FF rockinggg yaar.mind blowing.I really seen it on my eyes.the last one touched my heart that ‘ oh sorry let me introduce myself Iam Destiny. Really Awsm yaar.This DPO contains every emotions that makes me happy n sad.Thanks for the wonderful MMZ-DPO.
    I wait for the nxt one n your new story.loads of ❤ for you n tc☺

  14. Alice

    Beautiful update .i love this story.Still can’t digest the fact that it is second last episode.will miss bunny and her tiger alot.

  15. Sathya

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    I have mixed emotions now… Don’t know whether to feel happy or sad…. Today’s episode I was just mind blowing… Truly it is mind blowing n it looks a royal wedding. Awww ardhika looks cute n best when they r together. Congrats once again for this beautiful journey gauri… Will definitely miss this ff a lot. It gonna be in my favorite list for sure… Love u dear 😍😍😘😘😘

    • Gauri


      Thanks Sathya 🙂 I don’t have words to express my gratitude for the amazing support you have given 🙂 stay blessed 🙂

  16. Jessie

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    Gauriii.. bear hug.. had tears at last.. god..!the last part. Abt destiny.. failed 2 control my tears.. its gonna words 2 express wat I feel.. each and every word made me 2 experience those situations..I laughed along with Arnav,Nandu.,Dilip n mala.. I felt emotional along with Nandu..Sam.. enjoyed with Rads n her friends..Admired d decors along with guests.. sid n sam👍true raksha bandhan gift.. she got a bro!! Was giggling seeing Rads antics.. Thanks 4 this..I can never forget DPO… loads of more bear hug..

  17. Myra

    |Registered Member

    Finally is all i can say right now 😍
    I fell in love with it di……you know what di….since u had promised to post yesterday…i kept checking the page for your update all the time and since i had joined this page when dpo on its 22nd chapter and finished reading all the previous one…
    I would express my love for you and your writing….but hayyee kya kare….there just arent enough words in this world to convey my feelings….uff….that was cheesy…😂😂

    And coming to this update, the destiny’s dialogue in the end was absolutely apt…..the timing and the way you wrote it down was perfect.
    This very dialogue was the highlight for me…..nesam…..i mean, you should be friends more than lovers…..uff.
    I dont understand why do i keep forgetting that we live in india where we dont meet the one we are to marry until the day of the wedding 😂😂
    No offence…i am just kiddinggggg 😜
    I am cloud nine di…..but you now a part of me is literally a bit depressed knowing that the next would be the last…..
    I feel like crying thinking that why do all the good things come to an end…
    And hopefull, we’ll see some intense ardhika in the next….right?…..please please….i counting on it..*fingers crossed*
    Love you till infinity….dont you worry wont be obssessive as jai 😂
    Take care di
    Di, you would be posting cross roads as soon as you end this ….right?
    Di, dont trouble us anymore naaaa…..just post it….post mmz….post dpo….post crossroads… everything!
    Love you….love you so much….😘😘😘

    • Gauri


      Thanks Myra sweety 🙂 I never expected so many comments to be frank when I started DPO… but thanks a ton to all of you, intense Aradhika …yes I kept that for last and trust me I am sweating …. 😉 I am not very good with intense scenes …. Cross roads I will post around 5 or 6th of sep but will get a glimpse of it with next one …. love u

  18. Starz

    No no😥 not the last episode..Di the story is so awesome that I really never want it to’s was mind blowing di..loved it..waiting for mmz u and take care😘😃

  19. anandi

    finally the final curtains are about to fall…sad but there’s a certain satisfaction about how the story shaped.. wonderful fantastic… beauty finally weds beast…nesam gets best ultimatum..

  20. devi

    Omg…wot an update…il defenitly miss this ff…ur awesome dear…ur writing make us feel it soo natural… keep writing n.keep entertaining… tc…

  21. Naaga

    Wow this ws full & full Marriage Celebretion, i feel im also one of them in Ardhikas wedding 😜

    Im so so so Happy 😊

    Thank u sooooo much Gauri ☺

    Im Anxiously waiting for the Last Update pls post it soon ☺

  22. Savera

    Hey Gauri …
    What an episode. .. marvellous. …
    NeSam is my favourite too….
    Yaar …. please. …publish your book. ..
    Waiting eagerly for next. …
    Always be happy. …

  23. Brin

    |Registered Member

    Outstanding episode, I am going to miss this episode alot, but every story has to come to end, I am waiting for your crossroad hope its good as this story is, I still have hope that you’ll bring this story for season 2 not now but much later, trust me this is a award winning story, I hope one day this story gets notice because you deserves the best. Waiting for the last chapter and Gabriel you nail it, well done. 🙂

    • Brin

      |Registered Member

      Sorry Gauri I wrote your name but the Android I’m using changed the name to Gabriel. Sorry about that

    • Gauri


      Thanks a ton Brin 🙂 even I am keeping my fingers crossed …hope cross roads comes out better than dpo 🙂 thanks and love u 🙂

  24. manha

    Gauriiii hiii. Loveee you dear. This is superb. Everybit of it was perfect. A perfectly etched portrait. No matter how we see it, it is always perfect. Sia n mamu dance awesome. Radz glitters as a bride, not behaving like a bride. That was superb. Over enthusiasm. Lol. Sam from grooms side. Telling neil to put ur hands together n bow ur head for welcome. 😉😉😉 .

    Friends from newyork. Really special it is. All enjoying their best friends wedding. AD gone mad n making employees work for radz dress. Sooo cute. Bachelors party. Whoaaa rocking.

    Sangeet ceromony. Fun intended. Neil saying act normal. mala saying act like a bride. Poor radz. Radz practisinh pose for photos. It was sooo lovely. Mala telling you can go on date with arjun. Whats the need of marriage if u come here for weekends. Super cool mom. Loved her. Samrat torn between friendship and duty. It was so beautifully written.

    Nandu super happy seeing his baby bro getting married n her involvement in planning. Those were sweet memories which are ready to be fruited now. Really superb affection betn nandu n arjun. Loved them. Neil became naughty these days. Stealing kisses from sam now and then. They have become lovey dovey couple lately.

    Marriage day. What else to say. Perfect. Perfect. Perfect. Bridal shower with flowers. Whoaa she sure is a lucky girl. Waiting for the upcoming moments of their marriage now eagerly.

  25. shankari

    Hi gauri. I am not an northindian. I am from TN. And i am one of the craziest fans of mmz. When i was surfing something i read ur 50th chap first and knew i wanted to read this ff. Completed ur all 50 chapters in two days. I really did nothing except spending time for ur ff and was checking for 51. U are really a very good writer…its in ur blood…i can feel tat…u hav the capacity to write a novel…hav read the prologue of 6yrs. To be honest u need to improve more to become one of the best and i know u can do it…i would suggest u to read dan brown’s and amish tripathi’s.If u are a tamilian i would suggest u to read Ponniyen selvan. If u read this book u wil know how to handle books… Life ur passion and i feel becoming a writer is ur destiny.i am a silent reader and dont comment. This the first time i am doing. i am a little busy person so dont mind me.

    • Gauri


      Thanks a ton SHankari 🙂 I am obliged that you took time to share your thoughts thanks darling….well I am lucknow…and yes I have to improve a lot working on that 🙂 will read Dan brown … I love Nicholas Sparks 🙂 love u

  26. Rossy

    |Registered Member

    Yipeeeeeeee…m all over excited…pucho kyun??? I saw Ann n Steve n gang after a long time…some where m thinking about them…it would be incomplete without them..and regarding story n ur thoughts to describe as words u know m wordless much before…i don’t how much u believe my words for u…don’t know how much you trust me…but one thing m sure we meet or won’t that is not a matter but my biggest request don’t stop writing…even if u feel like u reached saturation point u continue…i want u to b higher…everything is perfect…i wanna share some suggestions as writing is ur passion…but bit hesitate..person like me giving u suggestions,sounds odd…if u r going to write book let me know sure..n a big no for stop ur writing…no…no …no…seems I have gone crazy by thinking u stop writing as u told more blabber of me..I’ll blabber more in next last chapter..and remember ur promise ✋ ✋ ✋ 😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 …happy happy staying

  27. Sweetie

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    Didi,I love you-Samjho I can say only this to you because if I start to write everything about this chapter,I’m dead sure that I’ll miss one or the other emotion..So please accept this love from your little sister..Loads of love and take care..❤💛💚💙💜💞💓 [Di,I’m sure Jiju will be jealous,haha.. 😉 ]

    • Gauri


      Sweetie darling I love you too 🙂 pls don’t bring Jiju in between us 😛 I don’t know who that item is 😉 big hug for you stay blessed 🙂

      • Sweetie

        |Registered Member

        Didi!!Next will not bring him in between us..Item?? lol..😂😂😂 You are too cute di.. 🙂 🙂 🙂 love you loads..😘

  28. Happy

    Hi dr….hw r u….I want to see u once…u r a different person….I am reading all ffs….bt there is something in ur ff….always waiting for ur update….this update super….loved nesam….super…. waiting for nxt one….thank u so so much…

  29. Adu.nupur

    |Registered Member

    Gauri di this was just out of the world:):):)
    So so so happy…Ardhika’s marriage celebration, Nesam so adorable:* And lastly destiny’s monologue. Such a heart warming chapter:’)

    Will be waiting for the last one because I know it will be bang-on just like the whole series:) Lots of love and hugs for u:) Tkcr

  30. Lakshmi05

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    Gauri darling just awesomeeeeee…dear..Everything is perfect …Why not, afteral it was written by fantastic ,fabulous,,amazing n great writer like u.Every scene is epic.Neil crazy behviour along with rads antics …really superb. Sia n arjun’s dance n ardhika n nesam dance that’s so lovely…nesam changing positions from arjun to rads…superb… nesam r really true friends….ardhika n nesam wherever they r they only prays for remaining three happiness n wellbeing . Newyork gang…they joined to see beauty n beast’s wedding… woww. So nice sam got every relation for which she’s longing since her childhood…Beach side wedding n shower of rose petals…it’s too good…Destiny part was soo nice… Waiting for their marriage….luv u…tc…

  31. Chandana

    Hi Gauri…while reading this chappie I was getting glimpse of all the previous epi’s…going to miss this FF much…you are awesome… Keep writing more… Tc

  32. Jnana

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    Super….. Awesome….. Beautiful and wat not…… Will Sam plan for my wedding too but still with SIDS asostance …. Ask her na please….. Okay… If neil doubts Arjun’s again i’ll kill him…. Hash bhi hota hai yaar…. And you are finishing this…. Please come up with a new one fast….. Waiting for the last epi

  33. Raaga

    Di lack of words…..
    It was so amazing….even I feelin I m part f that wedding…. very emotional nd heaet breaking episode di….
    love u loads …..from bottom of my heart I m tellin this journey was so realistic …I m sad :-(:-(:-( only 1 episode is left aftr that v al miss our bunny tiger AD nd sam…infact al the relations whic u showed us… r sooooo sooooo goodddd….
    Di u r best…:-):-) gonna miss Manmarziyan- DPO
    A beautiful journey …..:-(;-(

  34. _Ritu

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    OMG…DPO going to end…cant believe it dear..had tears at the end…Gauri..dear u gave us a beautiful story…it was a full paisa wasool journey…u showed every relations extraordinary…and now I don’t have words to praise u….love u to infinity….Chappy was amazing….Rads Neil Sam Arjun every character here made a special place in my heart…. 🙂 never stop writing else 👊.. 🙂 the wedding events were fabulous….I totally enjoyed beauty and beast wedding and now I want to enjoy ur wedding 😉 do sent me the invitation card okay 😉 am already ready with my stuff to attend ur wedding… And I guess the decorations scenes u have mentioned here is exactly what u want in ur own wedding ri8.. 😉 😜 okay don’t worry I will do that… 🙂 OMG don’t know what all I have written…now plz don’t kill me or else I will complain to Jiju 😉 ..dying to read crossroads too…love 🙂

    • Gauri


      Ritu main Kasam Khati hoon ki khabi writing nai chodo gi 🙂 My wedding Grrr why is every body after my wedding….I love my independence …. I will my self kill this Jiju ….you and sweetie seems to be in love of Jiju and not me 🙁 ….. thanks and happy weekend 🙂

  35. Roma

    |Registered Member

    Gauriiiiiiiiiiiii….my darling sissyyyy …wowwww, superb, marvellous, outstanding. ..n very many praising words. …I’m just spellbound n overwhelmed with all the decorations n wedding preparations….Sam did marvellous job planning the whole event…ur narration very beautiful, I can imagine all the beautiful venue n sparkling lights, flowers…wowwww. …rads excitement. …arjun’s happiness……nesam, nandini, sid, sia, arav, dilip, malah all very very veryyyyyyy awesoooooome….Anna n friends also joined…wow…henna, sangeet, boys outing, and now wedding at the beach….my goodness everything is so prettyyyyy. 🙂 …lil sad for jai but he deserved it…I’m so happy to read this unique splendid awesoooooome story but sad too as I’m gonna miss it a lotttttttttt. …you nailed it with extreme perfection…I’ll be waiting for your mmz and new story “Crossroads”…I hope that will be another epic one…all the best my darling. …keep it up honeyyy love you loads. muaaaaahhhhhh Bear hug n lotssssss of kissesssss. ..:) ♡♡♡ 😉

  36. Fanficoholic

    |Registered Member

    So sorry fr the late comment di. And yah amazing epi tis is i tell u. Jst wonderful. Hw can u write so well? And ur vocab its so amazing. U vividly describe evrything. U r such an otstanding writer. I jst loved tis epi di. Sorry cant comment mre as a lil busy. Bt wll post a lng one fr the last epi. There is so much i need to tell and so much u need to hear.

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