Manmarziyan- Destiny…Passion …Obsession – Chapter 50

Hello friends …so here is the next chapter little early… may be 2 more and I will finish this one ….thanks for blessing me with so much of love and support…MMZ on monday next on wed 🙂 stay blessed 🙂 🙂 🙂

After the darkest night …arrives the brightest morning…

Chapter 50

A week later a phone call shook Khanna residence…Police informed Samrat that they have found Jai in a serious condition….Samrat and Piyali rushed to the hospital…Jai was lying with all tubes and equipments attached to his body….according to the eyewitness Jai was robbed and brutally assaulted by a group of thugs while he was on a run….Police explanation made Neil smirk who had accompanied Sam to the hospital….Piyali cried looking at her son’s condition….Sam had tears too…but she was composed…Samrat suddenly felt aged…he had a hope of bringing his son on a right path…but all looked like a dream now…Piyali heart was burning…she stormed out of the hospital with Sam and Neil in Tow…she snatched the keys from the driver and drove off….Neil knew what was she upto…he quickly followed her ….Piyali kept banging Mishra’s door till it was answered and to Radhika’s bad luck she was the one to do it….Piyali glared at her with pure hatred; ‘’You …you are the reason for Jai’s condition….what was his fault ….he loved you….wanted to marry you…but you ….you had rich plans….you caught hold of Arjun Mehra…why would you look at Jai…he was nothing infront of him’’

Dilip interfered; ‘’Enough Piyali…talk to me not to my daughter’’

Piyali; ‘’Why not??? your daughter used her beauty quite well…she kept on luring Jai and then when she got a better option…she just chucked’’ Radhika closed her eyes to hide her pain

Sam who entered after few minutes stood infront of Piyali; ‘’Mom you should leave’’

Piyali; ‘’You too are responsible…you shot your own blood for this girl…’’

Sam; ‘’Mom let’s leave’’ Sam tired taking Piyali with her but she jerked Sam away…Sam stumbled and Neil held her…but by now Dilip was furious

Dilip; ‘’Only you are responsible… son tried molesting and then killing my daughter…and you have guts to stand inside my house and point your finger at my daughter….Piyali you are the biggest mistake Samrat committed…and we all the bearing the pain…your son cheated his own father…his company….stalked a girl…what did you do…nothing….he played with the trust of his own sister ….he is the reason Sam lost her child….what did you do…nothing….I understand your pain….but no one has the right to scar my child…please leave’’ Radhika walked inside her room and closed the doors…Neil knew she will again seclude herself….

Sam took Piyali to her car she calmed herself and looked at Piyali; ‘’For once open your eyes and differentiate between right and wrong….Uncle is right you are responsible…this family stood by us in our thick and thin…you always knew Radhika was innocent…you knew what plans he had for this innocent girl…yet you did nothing……Mom! You created this
Jai…you should have stopped him…stop hurting others…’’ Sam dropped Piyali home….and left …she stopped her car on the side and leaned on the steering crying hard… ‘’wish I could change everything’’

Radhika was not herself again….she was quite…she dialled Sam…; ‘’Sammy I am sorry…I never wanted anybody hurt’’

Sam spoke in a soothing voice; ‘’Chashni you did nothing wrong…stop being guilty…and I am sorry for Mom’s behaviour’’

Radhika; ‘’If I knew my rejection would cause this….I would’….’’

Sam cut her off; ‘’ you would have said yes…and then you would have committed suicide due to his insane desire for you …Chashni its not your fault…now listen to me…I have to get back to your marriage preparations…this is my biggest project…you have to help me…now go rest and tc’’

Radhika’s disinterest in marriage preparation was worrying Mala…she knew if she spoke to Arjun…then Radhika might get angry…Sam and Neil were the right people to handle her…Mala called Sam and told her everything …Sam asked Mala not to worry…Radhika got ready and came to breakfast table…Dilip looked at Mala and she finally asked; ‘’Are you going somewhere’’

Radhika; ‘’Bird Song ‘’ She quickly finished her breakfast and left to avoid further interrogation…but her parents were happy that she decided to start over…Radhika was walking to the bus stop when a SUV came and halted near her…she was scared…but her fear vanished looking at the driver…Neil gave her the most welcoming smile; ‘’Jump in Birdie…I have a meeting’’

Radhika obliged; ‘’I would have managed ….there was no need for this’’

Neil; ‘’I am your GPS AD Handsome…I will pick you whenever I feel like…no one can stop me not even you’’

Radhika went quite…she spoke lowering her head; ‘’Neil I am resigning today…I don’t think I can continue ’’

Neil slowed his car…and moved off the road…halting it ; ‘’Why ??? Because of that moron…’’

Radhika; ‘’Everyone knows….and…BS belongs to Samrat Uncle and Piyali aunty…I..’’

Neil turned her face to him; ‘’Birdie you fought him and that made me proud of you now don’t victimize yourself …regarding BS it belongs to your tiger and AD ….khanna’s lost it long back’’

Radhika; ‘’Neil you lost your baby…Sam shot her own blood…all because of my carelessness…you were right my nature and my guts have always invited trouble…you all should stay away’’

Neil ; ‘’You are my baby too…I don’t want to lose you…’’ Radhika looked at Neil…he was watching her with pure affection….they never gave a name to their relationship…and it wasn’t needed…. Neil softly assured her; ‘’I am there…won’t let you break …that’s a promise’’ Radhika knew he will not let her break…he kept his promise 4 yrs back he will keep it now….she smiled and nodded…Neil ruffled her hair; ‘’OK time for office….Arjun will kill me for being late’’ Neil never displayed his affection for Radhika in office… but today was different…when they entered he wrapped his arm around her shoulder and walked in demonstrating his affection and fondness clearly…he gestured Radhika to smile….she did because neil’s single move gave her strength…

Rathod Villa

Nandini was tired of her daughter…Sia would some how threaten or push the driver to take her to Mehra Mansion directly after school….which meant all day play session…since Arnav had completely retired ….he would enjoy with his grand-daughter the most…and infront of him no one dared to question or scold Sia…little girl understood that fact quite nicely…she was her parents princess…but she was her nanu’s queen…Nandini was sitting in the huge hall of her house holding her head…Sid watched her entering the room…he sat next to her; ‘’What’s wrong nandini ?’’

Nandini; ‘’Sia…she is at Mehra Mansion again…I mean how does she think of all the new ideas…you know what she did today…she directly called Arjun from her school feigning stomach ache……and her dear Mamu was there in a minute to take his princess with him..feel like pulling his ears too…I made her learn those no. for emergencies and look how she used it’’

Sid laughed; ‘’Stop worrying …she is a smart Kid…and if she likes there let it be …we both are busy during the day…it isn’t her fault’’

Nandini; ‘’Sid chachu and Arjun will give her more than required…’’

Sid cupped Nandini’s face ; ‘’No Arnav uncle brought you up perfect…my SIa will be perfect too’’ Nandini just rolled her eyes…Sid spoke again; ‘’Nandini …I bought Sia home when she was just 6 months old….when I first time saw her…her big dark eyes captured my heart……I hired governess and staff to take care of her….i would take her with me while travelling…but as she started growing…it was difficult….when ever she wouldn’t find me around…she would turn cranky…I started fulfilling all her demands to keep her happy…but since the day you walked in…Sia never turned cranky she just loves in Mehra Mansion…I never imagined someone could love her more than me…after all she was adopted….’’

Nandini interrupted before Sid could complete; ‘’Don’t use that word…no Mehra would like it…including me…she is ours and my daughter… no one can question that…! Sid what if her real parents come and claim her…sometimes it scares me’’

Sid; ‘’Nandini Mehra Rathod and fear…doesn’t suit you…well frankly I had that fear too…before bringing her home….I used all my sources to find about the her….and got to know some one left her in a temple….she was dressed in very nice clothes means she came from a nice family….but nothing more….I day I brought her home finally….I made sure that no one comes to me to claim her….these details are confidential…now she is Sia Rathod my heiress …’’

Nandini smiled; ‘’Thanks for Sia……Sid I pity the guy who will date her…. He will be rejected bad by her father mamu and Nanu’’

Sid; ‘’ýes even I pity him…wait my daughter won’t date…we will get her married at 20 ‘’

Nandini; ‘’Sid !!! 20 are you kidding me’’

Sid; ‘’No I am not….I am damn serious ….now leave all that…Nandu lets use the opportunity….lets go for dinner and let Sia let stay at her nanu’s place…’’ Sid winked and nandini glared at him before walking to her room to get ready.

Arjun decided to bring his Radhika back himself…he was too tired of her teary eyes…he asked Radhika out but she declined….Arjun smiled; ‘’Bunny I have decided to meet you…. now I will… come what may ‘’ he smiled at his idea and left office…it was around 1 AM and Radhika was still awake…. she just couldn’t sleep…she was sitting on her bed with her eyes closed when her vibrating phone drew her attention…she checked there were few messages latest from Arjun; ‘open up I am in your balcony’

Radhika replied; ‘’Go back then’’

Arjun; ‘’Bunny stop playing message-message with me and open up…if you don’t…I will jump onto your parents balcony and let them discover me in the morning…’’

Radhika banged her phone on the bed marched to the door…she opened with the intention to blast him…but he was prepared….he covered her mouth with lightning speed…and kept holding her till she stopped her struggle…Arjun pecked her nose.. ‘’Anger is injurious to health’’ Arjun quickly locked the door but when he turned he banged with angry

Radhika….but it hardly affected him…he pulled her cheeks… ‘’you should have thought about this before refusing to meet me…’’

Radhika; ‘’Arjun I want to be alone’’

Arjun cupped her face; ‘’I know but I don’t want you to be alone…I am here to bring my Bunny back…’’

Radhika sobbed; ‘’I am lost…I never wanted anybody hurt…I am the reason for all this’’

Arjun pulled her in a hug…; ‘’No you are not …just stop blaming yourself…you did nothing and please don’t ignore me ….I am trying my level best to be a good boy… if I turn bad…no one will be able to find you…’’

Radhika smiled…and Arjun felt that…he rubbed her back and whispered ; ‘’Are we standing like this for the whole night…’’ Radhika smiled and moved to bed…Arjun kept her head on his shoulder and patted her head…after some time radhika asked; ‘’I wish Sam wouldn’t have lost her baby…just hope she conceives safely & soon’’

Arjun; ‘’Well that depends on Neil’s performance’’ Radhika looked at ARjun wide eyed…he was smiling at her lazily…she just shook her head at his shamelessness…Arjun brushed his knuckles on her cheeks he softly spoke; ‘’Call me tiger…dying to hear it’’

Radhika smiled went close and whispered; ‘’Tiger…My Tiger’’ Arjun wrapped his arms around her ; ‘’Yes Bunny only yours and forever …’’ Arjun watched her face….she was beautiful…even when she was not herself her face was pale …yet she looked angelic…he thought …no wonder Jai went mad after her…even I am ….Arjun caressed her hair; ‘’Sleep…you need some beauty sleep for our wedding’’

Radhika held his hand pecked his palm; ‘’I don’t want to…I recall everything what happened in past few days’’

Arjun tighten his grip; ‘’Today you won’t…I am here …trust me…’’Radhika believed him…she quickly hugged him sagging against his strong chest…Arjun kept patting her head softly till she slept …he tried to stay awake as he had to leave before dawn…but past few days were tiring for him too…and having her so close…made his eyelids droop into a beautiful slumber…and when they woke up it was bright morning…

Neil was continuously on the phone and Sam was tailing him…finally Neil hung up and turned to Sam; ‘’What’s wrong with you’’

Sam; ‘’We need your help’’

Neil; ‘’We????’’

Sam took a deep breath; ‘’Ok…me Arjun and Chashni’’ Neil raised an eyebrow and Sam narrated everything in one go… ‘’So Arjun couldn’t get up early in the morning …and now he is stuck in her room its 8:00AM already’’

Neil gave Sam an impossible look; ‘’He was there in Radhika’s bedroom for whole night…has he done this before’’

Sam nodded positive but said; ‘’No!!’’

Neil; ‘’I will deal with you guys later and I am not doing this for CHashni you or that Arjun…this is only for Mala aunty and Dilip uncle I don’t want them to get a shock….come with me…and ask Radhika to sleep or frankly to put up a sleep act till I reach there’’ Sam quickly obliged….

Radhika was pacing the room…and Arjun kept sitting on the bed with his lip curled….guilty like a 3 yrs old….Radhika was scolding him in sign language half of which he couldn’t interpret he just would hold his ears in response….Radhika wasn’t satisfied….she pulled a paper and wrote in bold…. ‘YOU MESSED UP….’ Arjun nodded and then held his ears… she wrote again ‘ALL UR FAULT’ … Arjun nodded positive…but his submission was making her more angry….’she again wrote … ‘ You are an IDIOT big One’ That hurt….he was

Arjun Mehra…no one dared to call him an IDIOT…

Arjun frowned picked up a paper and wrote.. ‘I Came here for you….Its your fault’

Radhika’s reply; ‘@#$% …. Who invited you’

Arjun understood she was cursing; ‘You refused to meet me…I had no option’

Radhika wrote; ‘Were you a thief in previous life …that you keep jumping in my balcony’

Arjun wrote; ‘Yes and you were the washer woman…whose house I used to jump in daily…and she would cuddle in my arms’ Arjun smiled at his reply and Radhika’s face colour changed…washer woman…

Radhika wrote her reply with lot of grudge; ‘Arjun Mehra you are so dead….live your life as much as you want….I will make it hell for you soon after marrying you’

Arjun wanted laugh loudly at Radhika’s expression…she went on cursing him in mute mode….she looked like a cute angry bird and all Arjun wanted was kiss her hard…but doing that now was a risk….Radhika was continuously….moving from one corner to another throwing her hands in air….whispering curses….Arjun quietly got and kept walking behind her…once they were close to the washroom….he pushed her in getting in with her and locked the door….Radhika gave him a questioning look….Arjun pulled her in a bear hug and whispered in her ear; ‘’my little Angry Bird…you were looking to cute to resist….couldn’t keep my hands off you….now be a good girl and smile…you know I love you’’

Radhika finally gave up and whispered back; ‘’I will kill Neil for being late’’

Arjun; ‘’Bunny…your AD is going to kill us both….but till he comes…just stay close…its so soothing in this war like situation’’ Radhika laughed hiding her face in ARjun’s chest….after a minute they heard the door bell and hugged each other as if it was Independence Day….Neil walked in with Sam and found Dilip ready to leave…he greeted them and asked Mala about Radhika….

Mala; ‘’if you can wake her up do it….she is seriously turning a sleeping Giant ….I pity Arjun’’ Sam sucked her cheeks in to hide her laughter ….Neil glared at her…he gestured Sam to get Mala busy…Dilip left for office asking Mala to double check on Radhika as she might not be well…

As soon as Dilip left Sam started her act; ‘’Aunty….need your help ….lets go to your room….I have few confusions regarding the marriage preparations….’’ Mala agreed and asked Neil to try and wake Radhika up ….Neil dialled Arjun; ‘’All clear…now get your butt moving’’

Arjun peeped from the room and found only Neil in the hall….he quickly walked out of the front door…as Sam kept Mala busy…Arjun ran to his rented apartment just the floor above
Radhika’s in a lightning speed…he laughed after getting inside with Neil following him… ; ‘’’bro this was fun’’

Neil; ‘’Arjun…what was the need to jump in her bedroom….I didn’t like that’’

Arjun; ‘’I know….but she was too gloomy …she refused to meet me…and I can do anything for her smile’’

Neil; ‘’you are forgiven….now get ready reach office on time’’

Sam after good discussion with Mala walked into Radhika’s room….and found papers scattered around and Radhila busy collecting them…she asked; ‘’What is it Chashni’’

Radhika handed over to Sam…. ‘’Our conversation’’ Sam frowned and read the words they said to each other ….she rolled with laughter reading washer women…Radhika was angry… ‘’Sammy are you my friend or Arjun’s’’

Sam tried controlling; ‘’Radhika you must have been a really hot washer women to get Arjun’s attention…’’ Sam did some dirty moves pretending washing clothes…but both froze looking at Neil standing at the room door…he came inside and watched the two girls… ‘’both of you are shameless’’ Sam tried controlling her laughter but couldn’t ….

Neil smiled ; ‘’Birdie ….till you are married no more balcony adventures’’

Radhika pouted; ‘’Don’t scold me ….go and tell this to that thief that jumped into my balcony’’

Neil pinched her cheeks; ‘’Good to see you like before…lets move Sam …will drop you to your office’’

Radhika hugged Neil and Sam tightly; ‘’My life can never be complete without you guys….promise me you both will never leave me’’ Sam and Neil closed their arms around Radhika….pulling her tightly into a loving embrace….

Neil felt Radhika was again getting emotional…he spoke; ‘’I will always be there for you…but not if that thief again jumps in the balcony of his washer woman’’ Radhika pouted angrily …Sam laughed giving Neil a hifi.

No one knows you better than you….just try and understand yourself ….

Precap; Jai paralysed for life…Beauty weds Beast


    • S.v


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      Didi it is a celebration time 50 episodes. Muhhaaa……. this one is for you by me for making my wish come true 50 episodes and Wow didi i’m soo happy now. Sia is soo cute. She makes all fake reasons to have time with Mehras and sid do not say that sia is a adoptive daughter she is the cute daughter of Nandhini.

      Tiger and bunny always steels my heart. I loved the way he jumped over her balcony and the mute conversation you donno i was laughing with tears in my eyes and holding my stomach. If i laugh big then thats it will take me more than 5 minutes to control my self . Love you so much for that and piyali was impossible but from her point she was the mom whose child was hurt at that time she was out of mind natural but then thanks to Sam she made her mother realise her mistake. Arjun is seriously impossible for making radhika normal and their conversation god seriously impossible.

      AD was great to save tiger and bunny and waiting for the next part as that was my tiger’s and bunny’s marriage. But i’m feeling sad as it is gonna end. It was a cute ride of a ruthless beast controlled by the beauty. A beautiful journey and didi will anna, ron, steve and other friends will turn out for ardhika’s marriage ?? Wish they too come and make the marriage with great damaka and i’m feeling both happy and sad as it is a beautiful journey of this DPO but didi you always made us happy with your words and also i want to thank you so much for this ff didi. But pls start your next ff di i dont want to loose even a single day without reading your ff di a small request from a crazy sister of yours.

      Love your words always and always love you soo much . Bear my tight and teddy hugs and also my kisses to you. Love you di

    • Gauri



      SV darling you are a sweet hrt 🙂 thanks for such a lovely comment ….I am short words to thank you you know your love and support make me write more and more thanks 🙂 yes Anna Ron and whole gang will be attending Radhika-Arjun’s wedding….it will be a grand affair 🙂 with lot of fun 🙂 thanks a ton my cutie pie loads of love and a big hug for you 🙂

  1. Niku

    Wow Gauri di mindblowing. Radhika call Arjun a thief jumping into her balcony. beauty weds beast sounds interesting waiting for the next one.

  2. Jessie


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    OMG!!!! Gauri… hugs..hugs.. bear hugs…
    Hahahah.. I laughed like mad reading this chit game.. God.. she cursed in written.n washer woman.. rofl…and sam’s moves….
    Neil 2 their rescue.. oh .. tats highlight!!!
    Dilip said right.! Its high time some one needs 2 point her mistake.. Rads s getting back her self… relieved ya.. Sia the super girl! Woohoo.. next is wedding spl.. wow.. feeling as though its one of my cousin’s.. so attached..Gauri.. one request.. can u write one chappy full of fun n masti spl.. wish 2 laugh n enjoy with this AD, AM, bunny n Tiger once.. Am getting kinda nostalgic.. I will miss this.. am not
    demanding.. jus wished 2 ask…
    I came expecting any update in MMZ n and a jackpot!!! DPO is jumping.. last part I read again n again…hahaha.. how dare he called her so… Thank u so much yaar.. TC n Keep smiling..

    • Jessie


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      Gauri…. 🎊🎆🎈🎉🎇🎆congratulations n celebrations 🎆on ur 50th epi🎆🎈🎈🎊🎉🎇🎈…one Amazing writer u are..👑🍫🍫🍫🍭🍭🍭🍭🍫🍫🍰🍰🍫

    • Gauri



      Oh Jessie dear thank you so much sweert hrt 🙂 next chapter will be full of fun and masti 🙂 sure darling you have all rights to demand …your motivation made me write 🙂 next one will be fun 😀 MMZ tomorrow for sure loads of love stay blessed 🙂

  3. Sammy


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    lol gauri di ..washer woman ..oh god i will surely now ..still laughing stupid of me started imaging Arjun as a thief jumping in balcony of radhika …washer woman …hehe this line was epic and when you write sammy ,…i was like me and she both were thinking the same washer woman …haha too funny ..when neil used to call himself AD me my heart beat jumped above 200..rofl ..piyali ,.i don’t pay attention on her …and jai paralysed ..deserve it for molesting a girl ..stupid …Arjun’s bold comment ….Neil’s performance right …sid getting romantic and a shock ..Sia is adopted..really shocking ..both sid and nandu are great u di ..for such a rocking episode you rock and me shocked ..sad you are ending it crying now …update next soon beauty weds beast ..such a nice line ..lost in some historical romance. hehe funny me ..good night di sweet dreams

    • Sammy


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      and congo di for completing 50 episodes ..i think this ff is the first one who cross 50 chappies ..really we still want more ..see your effect

    • Gauri



      Thanks Sammy darling 🙂 yup SIa is adopted becoz Sid was always in love with Nandini he never married waiting for her and adopted Sia …who became the reason for bringing Nandini and Sid close 🙂 Next one will be fun 🙂 historical romance OMG 🙂 yup ending it as I can’t think more 🙂 thanks for all the support Sammy love you

  4. nikki

    Was vry amazing…i loved everything about it…so cute ardhika and nesam no you for updating so soon..I m sad dat u are ending has bcm my addiction my life…I’ll die if u do this 😢

    • Gauri



      Thanks Nikki 🙂 don’t worry sweety will right one more hope you will like that too 🙂 thanks for all the support dear 🙂 love u

  5. Alice

    Thanks for updating was amazing. Loved it.don’t want it to end..too much in love with this story.

  6. Happy

    Hi dr…hw r u….u know I smiling like a mad….my mom continuously scolding me….its so fun….loved full chapter….is there any word more than love just take it to this chap….u r amazing….love u dr….I fully enjoyed….thank you soooooooooo soooooooooo soooooooooo soooooooooo much….

  7. Sneha grewal

    Wow…really nice episode…thanks for update… finally jai got punishment for his deeds..he deserves this..
    Naam Aradhika bonding is too good..

  8. shreya

    It was the cutest ……..among all your writings ………wat a s*xy jodi thief and washer woman ……..loved it BUT feeling sad coz it came to end …….I m gonna miss it badly …….
    Mmz by fate it is rishi n manya ………find complete irritating girl for ankush ……like some way as anika of ishqbaaz…….u have romantic aradhika jodi ………friendship wala love nesam …….cute niji …….but no nok jhok love love that’s y ankush n ………plz try to fulfill my wish of aradhika s passionate love making plz plz plz
    ..,……love you n stay blessed

    • Gauri



      Thanks Shreya for all the love and support 🙂 ok Shreya I will try and write Arjun-Radhika passionate union but pls spare me incase its not as per expectation 🙂 stay blessed love you

  9. neetz

    Omg omg an.emotional epi it was . 🙁
    I was cryingggggg reading radhikas part..u r awsome dear …love uuuu

  10. Umama


    |Registered Member sia..Actually i’m fond of baby girls.aradhika part is so funny,enjoyed nesam more..awaiting for d nxt.babay..

  11. Gianna


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    Gauri am writing this comment after reading this update thrice, just can’t get enough of it. Now what do I say about this update, marvelous, brilliant just amazing. Jai deserves what he got n Piyali needs to understand that. Neil as Rads AD was superb as always. Ardhika took my breath away today, tiger n bunny turned thief n washer woman and fighting each other in writings it was too hilarious. Loved it very very much. Waiting for the wedding of the beauty n the beast.
    Love u lot’s n stay happy n blessed always

  12. Brin


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    Outstanding episode, Jai deserves what he got and Dilip is right Piyali could have stop Jai from going after Radhika instead of blaming Her, I will miss this ff a lot, I hope you could bring this back for season 2, lots of hugs for you Guari and as always you nail it, well done. 🙂

    • Gauri



      Thanks a ton Brin 🙂 season 2 I might be some time later but next would be Marmanziyan- Crossroads 😀 hope you will like that one too 🙂 million hugs for you

  13. Dhara


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    Awesome update Gauri. Congratulations for 50. Waiting for the big fat wedding. Ardhika convo was superb. Liked k

  14. Dhara


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    Awesome update Gauri. Congratulations for 50. Waiting for the big fat wedding. Ardhika convo was superb.

  15. sravya

    first of all a very big👏👏👏👏👏 n Congrats for completing 50 episodes
    amazingly.Today’s FF is OMG I haven’t any words for it.I love the thief n washerwomen so much😍.I am eagerly waiting for the wedding of beauty n Beast.Thanks for this beautiful update.Love u yaar.

  16. Aadia

    Wow di,50 th chapter. we would have been blessed if you write a 50 more..but every good things have an ending today or just consoling myself.about this chapter, Dilip gave perfect answer to Piyali.. then Radz’s AD-he is just awesome as well as waiting for the thief’s and the washerwoman’s wedding..that scolding part was really funny di..
    Bye bye,happy holidays di.

  17. Dipika


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    Gauri darling you made my day..u knw m sick lil bit but in this situation u brought a smile on my face….CONGRATULATIONS for golden jubliee of DPO..m soooo happyyyyy u did this miracle to us by writing dpo….Today’s epi is cherry on the top n i lost my self in it..n wanted it never end…Sam n dilip confronted to piyali is really real n emotional.. At the end she is mother ….n our tiger n bunny is back..i can’t tell u how happy i am…n neil knws verry well abt his birdie…m so happy for them..n wht sia is not sid’s biological daughter.. Omg..pls don’t mke her real parents to come in the story…. N ohhhh noooo dpo is ending.. I can’t imagine.. Frm few months i got addicted yo wait for ur update n get lost in its ending.. Its like heartbreak… Bt i knw u will come up nxt amazing story soon..n u hv to come….Love you till ants wear pants….muhhhaa. Tc

    • Gauri



      Thanks Dipika 🙂 what happened to you dear ???? tc of yourself sleep well and take your medicines on time 🙂 dipu you are a sweet hrt a true friend in every sense … you have supported and motivated me like anything …bless you darling… you are like ur name spreading light 🙂 yupp in previous chap I had mentioned Sid had bought SIa home and he never married as he loved Nanindi and waited for her….no SIa’s parents won’t be coming …she will remain nandini’s princess and her Mamu’s doll….next one is Manarziyan cross roads …little rough story 🙂 stay blessed and take care of yourself….dipu I really want to meet you once and hug you tight bless u

      • Dipika


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        Gauri darling I can’t explain how nice m feeling whn i read ur reply..m so happy n small smile crawled on my face automatically… I too want to meet you yarrr…i wish some day i happen to came Bangalore to meet u n hug u tight…n m already waiting for mmz cross road.. N wow yar now m admiring sid for loving nandu so much…you are really very awsome person… I hav ever knwn…love u..muhha

  18. Sweetie


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    Didi..Firstly congratulations and celebrations for golden jubilee episode..🎉🎊🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎊Di,history banne do because I’ll definitely kidnap you one day,I’ll deal with the case alright.. 😀 I just love u di..I was laughing like hell while reading the entire episode..Washer woman,seriously,God!! I’m laughing hard now.. 🙂 Thank you Di for this beautiful chapter and you did keep your word by making me laugh hard.. 😀 😀 😀 lots of love and take care.. 🙂

    • Gauri



      Thanks Sweetie 🙂 Chalo I am redy for kidnap…will keep my suitcase ready 🙂 thanks so much love sweety stay blessed 🙂 million hugs 🙂

  19. Myra


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    Di you rocked it… was beyond perfect….so real…..washer woman…hayyee 😂😂
    Finally! Finally, ardhika gets married… loving it….
    Gauri di…yaar golden jubilee ho gyi….party toh banti hai 😜
    Di, dpo sacchi mein khatam ho rha hai? Seems like a really bad nightmare to me….
    I want you to come up with another ff the instant you end up with this……okay??
    Love you loadssss…. 😘😘😘

    • Gauri



      Thanks Myra sweety 🙂 yes darling party to banti hai 🙂 😀 I will come back with new one Manmarziyan cross roads — but in a months time 🙂 loads of love sweety stay blessed 🙂

  20. roshini

    Congrats Gauri ! for 50 chapters ….and this was just awesome 🙂 please give us more such ff I am waiting for your next one 😀

  21. Gummiebear


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    Hii Di…first thing toh congo for completing 50 episodes… darling it z a great achievement… If by god grace i come to Bangalore next year for education you owe me a treat glycerin…. I mean it…

    Now let’s come to the update… Marvelous… Out of the world…I feel m on the seventh heaven…. Stars dancing in front of my eyes….arjun z so cool and hot as hell….radhika…washer woman….lol…

    Piyali…argghhhh… What kind of woman she z….she z the only one responsible for Jai’s condition…. I think even she deserves punishment… Plz I want you to show her punishment…

    Sam…awww cutie pie I love her….Neil always in Ad character…. Wedding bells….wow… Waiting eagerly for the next one darling…

    Jai paralsyed…wow serves him r8….no sin z as big as trying to rip a girl’s dignity…. Muaaaaaaaah to you for this punishment… Now I m very happy but I m very sad too…

    So the end z near….omg my eyes are moist now….but I know it was bound to happen so no pestering you anymore for extension…

    Glycerin you are an exclusive writer….I love your writing skills like anything….words are not enough to praise you today…bring the next one soon…

    Love You😍😘

  22. Lakshmi05


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    Congrats for completing 50th epi of this story dear…Awesome epi dear..Each n every word is simply superb. I’m laughing crazily while reading ardhika’s god no one saw me like that or else they’ll confirm i have gone mad… Sam caught by neil…while doing that moves…lol….Ahh neil’s .words..’you r my baby too…i don’t want to loose u’…that was heart touching…n that promise ‘ I’m there…won’t let u break ..’that one promise is enough to feel secured n safe…Aww…loved neil more than arjun in this story…Sia n her antics…so cute…Rads n arjun fight n rads cursing silently…rofl…that was superb…Thanks for this master piece n thanks for giving us a chance to read ur wonderful stories dear 🙂 🙂 🙂 …luv u….tc….

    • Gauri



      Thanks a ton Lakshmi 🙂 I am glad you loved it ,,,even I love neil more 🙂 million hugs for all the support and love …I feel blessed 🙂 tc and keep smiling 🙂

  23. Jewel


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    gauri… paper chit conversation of ardhika was so superb… as usual the chapter also very nice… and u completed 50 chapters … congrats gauri… and thanks for the beautiful words and stories u gave through these 50 chapters….

  24. Jnana


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    Omg!!!!! Wat yaar meri dictionary mein koi words hi nahi nikal paayi…. It was soooo soooo sooooo awesome…. I loved ardhikas part….. Radhika and washer woman…. Super….. I laughed out loud….. And the bond these four share is so beautiful…. Totally superb epi

  25. Sreee


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    Piyali..god i dont know what to tell of her…..and arjun ,the theif😂😂😂…..thank god neil came to their rescue…but soooo sweet arjun…i loved dilip’s fitting answer..oh di cant wait for the beauty and the beast to be next one u…muahhh😍😍😍

  26. KK

    It was completely pleasure to read your update my dear….you are a brilliant writer. I hope you go far that you imagine in your life….it’s a God gift…I love the entire chappy….and i m more excited for next one as you mentioned in other’s comment….thanks a ton…love

    • Gauri



      Hey dear I am overwhelmed reading your comment 🙂 thanks a ton dear 🙂 I am grateful for this love support and appreciation 🙂 stay blessed 🙂 loads of love 🙂

  27. priya

    fabulous update..congratulation for d fifty episodes..any number of episodes u write I never get bored of still I want more nd more..u r such a talented author..even I read already completed episodes Den to I won’t get pissed off ..u r amazing..sorry for being irregular in comments

    • Gauri



      Thanks a ton Priya for the amazing comment 🙂 no need for sorry dear life can be busy I understand that 🙂 stay blessed 🙂

  28. Rossy


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    Congrats dear for hitting half ton…wish it will be hit a century…like ur name ur updates spread light…enlightenment everywhere…m too happy getting old radz back…may god filled ur all wishes…n let me know about ur promotion…only then I can get a treat from u…hehehe…greedy me😉😉😝😝…so when will u start ur next story Bollywood wala…don’t say u will not write..I’ll give a good beatings n ranting then…lol…hope u don’t mind my crazy talks…c ya …advance independence day..m too much excited for it

    • Gauri



      Thanks a ton Rossy 🙂 you know what I was planning not to write but then I thought its a stupid thought to miss so much of love and I am too scared of your beatings n ranting 😛 ….I will start that bollywood story and it will be called MMZ- crossroads 🙂 you will get the first chp by 1st week of sep 🙂 loads of love 🙂 stay blessed 🙂

  29. Fanficoholic


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    Amazing epi di. It was lovelyyyyyyyyyyyyy. Jst fantastic awesome fabulous and wonderful. I loved sia’s cuteness. And the way sid and arjun pamper her. Bt wait r u gonna end tis? Tis is sooooooooooooo bad di. Plz dnt do it. Plz plz olz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz
    Dnt end tis. Atleast start a new one before ending tis di. I cant write anymore as i am still sad ki u r ending tis. I have to cope up wth tis

    Whn is the nxt one cmng?

    • Gauri



      Thanks Swt hrt 🙂 yes I will be starting a new one soon 🙂 don’t be sad … thanks for all the love stay blessed 🙂

  30. Savera

    Hey Gauri..
    Awesome. ….yaar. .
    Congratulations. …
    Thanks for giving such a nice story.
    I will miss it…very badly….
    Never told U ….that reading it was best SOLACE….
    Thank you. .very much. ..
    May u get all d happiness ….
    Be blessed always my dear ….

  31. _Ritu


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    Gauri dear stupendous epi..congrats on ur golden jubilee..really wish it could be diamond 💎, platinum and many more jubilees.. 🙂 Glad dat Rads is back to her old self ..Piyali duffer…bt still cant blame her completely coz she is a mother…Jai. A perfect punishment was given to him.. 🙂 Washer women and thief’s fight was hilarious 😀 😂…NeSam amazing…Gauri dear what aunty ate that u r so amazing..😜 really wanna know d secret.. 🙂 😉 Sad dat its going to end bt I know u will come up wid another interesting story.. 🙂 now waiting for the fun in beauty nd beast wedding and then waiting for d fun in ur wedding 😜😜 🙂

    • Gauri



      Thanks a ton Ritu 🙂 I told my mom abt your comment she is laughing hearing that 🙂 thanks for lifting my spirits up and making me smile 🙂 loads of love to you stay blessed 🙂

  32. Sathya


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    My hearty congos for u my dear gauri to reach 50 episodes. This is fabulous episode and rasam combo n raneil Bond n ardhika cutest hug n converse… Everything is just simply perfect. U just nailed it. Hats off to u n I m waiting for ur crossroads. Love u 😘😘😘😍😍

  33. Roma

    My goodness Gauriiiiiiiiiiiii. ….very veryyyyyyy veryyyyyyy awesoooooome episode. …and a biggggggg congratulations for 50th episode…yippeeeeeeee. …Golden Jubilee…. 🙂 I’m proud of you my sweeeeeetheart. best wishes are always with you. …achieve all your dreams my dear…..this epi was mind blowing as always. …arneil gave very good treatment to jai…dilip’s reply to piyali was really awesome…Sam’s words were also very true to piyali…..raneil convo was very lovely n sweet…ardhika meeting n convo on paper so hilarious. ..arjun theif n rads washer woman…lol…so cuteee. …precap is very exciting. …finally beauty will be married to the beast…keep it up honeyyy love you loads. muaaaaahhhhhh Bear hug. …I’ll be waiting for your lots of upcoming stories since this is going to end soon 🙁 I’ll miss it a lotttttttttt. ….

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