Manmarziyan- Destiny…Passion …Obsession (Chapter 5)

Hello all my dear friends…so here is the next chapter…let me know how was it….Beauty will meet Beast in Chap 6…next update will be of the old FF chapter 6 I will post on Tuesday and Wednesday…please let me know how was this one….pls your feedback helps me improve…love you all

Chapter 5

I am strange…I never give you what you want but what you deserve…but still …you keeping running after things which keeping running from you
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Radhika was leaving on Saturday for US and Sam was leaving 2 days after that…Mala had kept a get together to celebrate Sam and Radhika’s success…. Neil was trying to buzz off the girls both of them were irritating him like bees… Jai was standing in a corner watching Radhika …he was lost in her smiles and giggles he just wanted to grab her and taste her sweetness…she went about helping Mala and enjoying with Sam… Jai’s eyes took a leisure tour on her body….in his heart he was happy…one day she will belong only to him…Piyali noticed Jai staring Radhika…she angrily gestured him to stop at once…finally Mala called everyone for dinner…

Piyali; ‘’So Radhika…congratulations on 100% scholarship’’

Radhika looked down…she hated to lie; ‘’Aunty actually its 80% other 20% I need to pay’’ Sam pinched Radhika under the table… for blurting out the truth

Dilip; ‘’Why didn’t you tell this before…I will get the draft done tomorrow give me the details’’

Radhika; ‘’Papa actually …I want to earn and pay this 20%…’’

Samarat looked at Radhika who was looking down…’’And how are you planning to do that beta’’

Radhika ; ‘’Uncle all students do part time jobs…I will also do that’’

Piyali; ‘’That will affect your studies’’

Radhika; ‘’I will not let my studies get affected….pls pls pls Papa let me try at least’’

Sam; ‘’Please uncle…let her try once…’’ Even Neil spoke in Radhika’s favour….

Mala; ‘’When we can pay why do you have to work….’’

Radhika; ‘’Because I want to know the value of hard earned money…because I want to try’’ Dilip smiled …he felt proud of Radhika…he nodded affirmative.

Samart; ‘’Promise me you will come back and join Bird Song’’

Radhika chuckled like a kid; ‘’Pinkie promise’’

Prerna; ‘’And you both will always dance for my concert’’

Sam Radhika in unison; ‘’Big pinkie promise’’

The dinner ended with lots of humor and best wishes for the two girls…Jai had bought a gift for Radhika…she didn’t know how to refuse she finally took it…before leaving Jai went to Radhika; ‘’If you need anything …please let me know we are friends too’’ his intention was to remind Radhika that he was also her friend like Neil… but he could never understand Neil-Radhika’s friendship. Sam hugged Radhika…both of them decided to have night out before Radhika’s departure….

Neil was humming…while driving back from Radhika place…Prerna watched him for some time and then asked; ‘’You love Sam…but you trust Radhika…isn’t it strange’’

Neil; ‘’Mom I know what you want to say…but mom…my bond with Radhika is beyond explanation’’

Prerna; ‘’Just answer this why Sam…. Why not Radhika’’

Neil; ‘’Because I am in love with Sam…I am and always will love Sam mom…and please stop associating me with Radhika…I respect her a lot…Mom I can never look at
Radhika that way…I don’t know…I feel protective about her but not way I feel for Sam’’

Prerna; ‘’Radhika understood your pain…took an initiative to get you enrol in the course so you can be with Sam…why couldn’t Sam think that way’’

Neil smiled; ‘’Chashni didn’t do this just for me she did it for Sam too…but you see only story from your view…now leave all that and let me drive safely’’

USA an elite PUB in the city

Destiny; ‘’Arjun you find love a waste…but do you actually know that you have already fallen for your swan…which you think is just lust…now my game starts’’

Arjun wanted to calm his nerves down…he has still not got any update on his swan and it was killing him… he joined his friends in an elite pub…he watched some couples seductively dancing on the floor… he smirked all of them looked like a love stuck puppy…he felt pity on the boys who were so lost in the girls…that they had even forgotten that music had stopped…as it was the time for live performance…

Setve; ‘’Hey buddy you see that girl in electric blue dress…I asked her out but she refused telling me that she was already committed’’

Ron; ‘’wish I get such honest and committed girl in my life’’

Arjun; ‘’Shut the f**k up…she refused you because her boyfriend is way better than you…she has already changed 3 guys in a week…now watch…’’ Arjun got up and walked up to the pretty blonde …he gave her a confident smile and asked her for a dance…she readily agreed…Arjun winked at his friends …his friends jaw dropped…after being little formal with the girl he praised her committed nature …and told her that he secretly wished for a true love…the girl was already in awe of the handsome man dancing with her…plus he smelled money from every corner…she moved close to Arjun and wrapped herself around him…she without hesitation asked; ‘’your place or mine’’ The girl left the choice on Arjun…he waved to his friends and left with his date. Arjun knew how to get what he want and how to get rid of unwanted people in his life. But Arjun was wrong to judge everyone on one scale…there were people who believed in true and devoted relationships…it was time for him to learn his lesson now.

Arjun woke up next morning at girl’s place and found the girl still sleeping he quickly dressed up and left for his place…it was Friday today tonight he had a challenge to face…one of the guys had challenged him for a knockout kick boxing match…and tonight…he was in a mood of knocking his opponent out. Ario was a huge man…Arjun flirted with the girl he was interested in and girl responded positively …he challenged Arjun for a fight…Ario was double in weight of Arjun…but was a pea brain man…once they were inside the ring…someone asked ;’’What’s up for the bet’’

Arjun; ‘’If Ario wins he takes his girl…if I win I will kiss her hard right here…right now…’’ he looked at the girl…’’You’re ok with it sweety’’ The girl gave an affirmative nod

Once the fight started…Arjun understood Ario was a heavy weight …but was poor on stamina…he made Ario tired …once done he flung his leg hard across his face Ario collapsed…Arjun got the girl.

Arjun’s celebrated his victory lavishly at his apartment with his gang…his friend Steve broke the laughter and celebration; ‘’Arjun someday…Ario or someone will take this on your girl’’

Arjun smirked; ‘’Which I will never have…chill Steve…calm your nerves man…loosen up a bit’’ But he was wrong…she was already being chosen by destiny and was coming to him

Steve shook his head…and gave up

Colaba, Mumbai

Radhika was packing her stuff and Mala was helping her…someone rang the bell and Radhika answered…she was surprised to find Sam…’’You should be packing too…what are you doing here’?’’

Sam pushed her and got inside the room; ‘’you are leaving tomorrow …no way I am staying at my place…’’

Radhika; ‘’You should spend some time with Aunty and Uncle also…’’

Sam; ‘’More than half of my life I have shared with you…we are not going meet for a year…and you want me to go back’’ Sam was emotional…her tears were ready to pour out…Radhika leaped and hugged Sam tight..’’Sorry Sammy…I didn’t mean to hurt you’’ Sam hugged her soul sister tightly… not being with Radhika made Sam feel very lonely inside….but she wanted Radhika to achieve success….Sam broke the hug…I bought you a gift….Radhika with all excitement tore off the gift wrap….but when she opened the box she glared Sam with mock anger…Mala started laughing…it was an alarm clock…Sam had set a loud rooster sound for the Alarm…she pulled Radhika’s nose ‘’lady kumbhkaran…you will be needing this as neither me nor Aunty will be there with you’’ Radhika hugged Sam’s gift to her heart…’’By the way…I have a gift for you too…’’ Sam wide-eyed in excitement ; ‘’Show me …show me…quickly’’ Radhika switched on her lap top and turned to Sam…Sam read the contents and a soft smile appeared on her face…she jumped at Radhika taking her along and crashing on the bed.’

Sam; ‘’Neil will there in Singapore for 6 moths…that idiot didn’t tell me anything’’

Radhika; ‘’Oh God!!!…I spoiled his surprise for you…now listen to me…when ever Neil tells you about this …just pretend to be shocked… surprised and happy…please or else he will kill me’’ Sam nodded but she was very happy…. she actually didn’t knew why her heart raced…Radhika felt calm as Sam was more emotional of the two …and since Neil would be with her…Sam will be happy for 6 months

Prerna came to Neil’s room…’’Neil before you leave…please get in touch with the IT person and update him on the dance videos to be update on RYTHYM site with reference to this year’s concert…make sure the best ones are uploaded’’…Neil took the CD from his mom and nodded he quickly inserted the CD in his laptop…he selected the best dances but omitted Radhika’s performance…he made the CD to be uploaded on the site and locked the original in his cupboard.

New York, USA

Arjun after finishing his work and classes drove back home to freshen up…as he let the warm water touch his body he closed his eyes to soak the calmness…sometimes he really felt alone…he hated his father’s decision to send him abroad…he had everything…yet he felt empty…it had been years since he laughed heartily he missed his sister…he missed going out with Neil…the friends he had here …were nothing compared to the bond he shared with Neil…his buddy…they were complete opposite yet very close…he wanted Neil to join him when he left for US ….Prerna too had permitted but he stayed back to support his mother…Arjun respected Neil for that…Arjun would anxiously wait for his visit to India or for any RHYTHM concert happening in US that would give him a chance to meet Neil…Arjun’s mind was traveling through the memories when name RHYTHM reminded him of his dancing swan…he picked his phone up and played it again….he paused it again that was his favorite posture in the whole performance….he smiled ’’Why are so you important to Neil…just hope it’s only friendship…because if you are more to him…I might not care for his heart …I don’t want to hurt him… what to do I cannot resist you…come to me baby’’ Arjun laughed at his thoughts he knew he will find her come what may. He got dressed and left …for his evening entertainment…he didn’t even had a clue…that soon his dancing swan will be infront of his eyes…and this time it would be Arjun who will completely surrender to her.

Saturday Night, Mumbai Airport

Mala , Dilip and Neil had come to see off Radhika…Sam went too emotional…she cried whole night and was not willing to come to the airport…Neil asked Radhika to check all the documents again…it was time for Radhika to go inside…she emotionally hugged her parents.

Dilip; ‘’Make me proud’’ Radhika nodded and went to Neil…he looked her and then pulled her in a warm hug…’’One year Chashni…I will miss you like hell….remember everything I told you the other day…you have a problem call me…’’

Radhika; ‘’Neil…stop treating me like a baby…and miser you have enough money to buy a ticket to visit me… do that’’

Neil just patted her cheek; ‘’call me once you are settled’’

Radhika; ‘’Take care of Sam…if she cries I will break your bones’’ Neil laughed and Radhika waved all of them to go inside.
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I am funny isn’t it…Neil wants to keep Radhika away from Arjun…and she is going to him…Radhika hates the guy whom Sam loves …Sam wants Arjun to be with her…but is exited to spend time with Neil. Jai…he want Radhika in his arms…he is on the verge of losing control…but the arms which will be around Radhika will be so strong…that Radhika herself will not be able to escape them….ever!! So next Beauty meets her beast

Credit to: Gauri

68 comments

  1. Supriya

    U just nailed it m so addicted to ur update dat I can’t wait for them I hav 1 request plz I wanna c arjun jealous nd once again it z superb plz plz update soon

  2. chandan

    Hi Gauri
    Surprised by this early update…you came to know our anxiety?? Nice episode…but eagerly waiting for next one…keep rocking:)

  3. Happy

    Thanks thanks thanks…….I liked it very much…pls make special something in next chapter…..the most important moment of first meet…… All r nice…..I am in happy mood….I can’t expree in words……sry for that….thank you soooooooooo much……

  4. Shree

    di!! di di di!! too good!! what is arjun made of?! i dont get it at all?! neil and sam.. i just donno.. jai is out.. completely out…

    i loved the end.. too funny.. radhika hates sams bf but sh is going to him.. arjun losing his control day by day.. i donno about sam.. hope she doesnt hurt neil..

    post soon di.. love you loads.. tc.. keep smiling.. bear hug

    • Gauri

      Hi Shree my little darling…thanks for the lovely comment…will update soon 🙂 loads and loads of love and hugs for you 🙂

  5. What to say…my mouth sealed now….if I say anything that must b not enough suitable for u…but one thing I can say the bonding,the friendship n the purity in it…i had tears in my eyes for some moment…missed my buddies…

    I want to meet u…hug u…shake hand with u….autograph…loads of love n thank u for writing this…tc?? ❤ ❤?

    • Gauri

      Rosie sweety…I am sending lots and lots of hugs and love…thank you so much for the amazing support dear…tc love you 🙂

      • Now m just waiting for next…can u plz plz update it tomorrow….i know it’s over demanding but out of curiosity m saying…? ?

  6. Amy

    Oh wow!!!! It was awesome as always….
    This one update that i eagerly wait for
    ………
    Soooooo good…….
    Luv u….. update soon 🙂 🙂

  7. Sv

    What an update . Outstanding. Soo arjun a spoilt person gonna meet his swan very soon but he think he is just gonna have a date but she is not easy enough for him. I guess she is gonna be tough (I want her to be tough). Sam does not know why she feels happy when she heard that neil is gonna come with her but I guess she will surely feel that. Radhika does not know that thw beast is waitong for her yet its really protective when it comes to her. And neil loves blindly sam but his baby is radhika . Jai poor guy never knew that the hand over radhika is not only strong but protected and possessed by her. He has got really a tough competition .Wow relationships are complecated but you are handling them really nicely di. U rocked . As u always do im going mad by your story. And the next is the turning point of the ff. Im gone now. I love u di lots and lots of hugs and kisses to you. Take care

    • Gauri

      Sv my dear darling…I love to read your analysis more than my own story..thanks a ton sweety…love you loads 🙂 stay blessed 🙂

  8. Iam very happy dpo very fast update thanks dear , u nailed it.. It was fab…amazing update,totally I enjoyed to read, pls …pls…pls..write this update everyday dear…its my request…lvu..tc…

  9. Vivi

    Wow!!wow!!wow!!..
    Loved it to my core…awesome epi. Neil’s over protectiveness…. Sam’s dosti……plz don’t pair hr wid jai..he is just obssessed wid hr…wen i saw dis posted i had a stupid grin on my face…ohh…plz update soon…luv you..!!
    HAPPY EASTER!!!

  10. lavanya

    hai di…
    you have rocked it….how beautiful was your episode….emotions…love…friendship….lust…everything…I keep on reading it again and again…loved the way Destiny is answering arjun..but arjun…make him crave for radhikas love like anything…di..please don’t mind..arjun isn’t loyal to his to be life partner at this moment.. right??sorry if I had hurt you…but arjun going with other girls is something which I can’t digest…I know that you are gonna bring the change in him with radhikas love…and please do continue…awesome di..love you and your story to infinity…please do give your next episode a bit fast…can’t wait even a day without your update..

    • Gauri

      Hi Lavanya, don’t worry planning to that…I will make him go crazy for her…he will only think about Radhika…and don’t say sorry…your comments give me ideas…and I love reading each oh them.. love you stay blessed 🙂

  11. Ameena

    Wow! Just speechless! So excited for next one !! Love you! ?

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    “Happy Easter!”

  12. Bhabya

    Gauri di if u don’t mind I hv an idea.
    Do something like another guy is bestie of radhu who is also in the same college. She is very close to him . Both share a bro sis bond but Arjun takes it in wrong way n he can’t digest it her to be with someone else. I just wanted to help u. But seriously I can think how hard it would be 4 u to think the tracks, Twists n turns….
    Di you r awesome . U take every comment positively.

  13. Vini

    Gauri u simply nailed it 🙂 wow fell in love again with the story and ur way of writing . waiting for your next update

  14. Sathya

    Gauri u become a rockstar now yarr… u r creating n increasing our eagerness day by day. episode, is superbbbbbb????. just waiting for ardhikas meeting… n arjun reaction seeing her swan ???

  15. subha

    awesome.amazing eopisode yaar ….eagerly waiting next part…… u r story more more more interesting …….. u r great writer ya……….only one thing god always give all happiness in u r life…..work pannikitu …….story update pannukirai….. u r great

  16. neetz

    Its really interesting to read..and u ve got one fan (me) from kerala love ur chapters ..waiting for the next:-)

  17. Roma

    Wowwww awesome gauri my sweeeeeet darling friend. ..it’s really superbbbb n beautiful episode. ..Destiny’s word r very very cute…..I just loved the way you narrating this amazing story. …arjun so wild in this story but you gave the correct names for ardhika here beauty n the beast….raniel friendship very lovelyyyyyy…. Sam’s gift to rads was awesoooooome. …arjun very desperate to meet his dancing swan..but neil altered the cd for rhythms concent…smart n very protective friend. …loved it….anxiously waitingggggg for ardhika no no our beauty n beast’s meeting. …keep it up. Love you soooooooo muchhhhhh, muaaaaahhhhhh

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