Manmarziyan- Destiny…Passion …Obsession – Chapter 44

hello frnds …first of all thanks for all the lovely wishes you made my day so special 🙂 love you all so here is the next one…more to come 🙂 do tell me how was it 🙂 happy weeked

Chapter 44

I am good at mathematics and I pay you back with interest ….so watch your deeds

Arjun made Neil undergo test that night itself…and since he was a powerful man…getting reports early wasn’t an issue….but reports angered him… someone was feeding arsenic to Neil…a slow poison…Arjun was about to burst…he dialled Rana; ‘’Where is Jai right now’’

Rana; ‘’At a pub… he will leave in half an hour’’

Arjun; ‘’Fine keep an eye I am coming’’

Jai had left Sam’s reception earlier as the attack made him nervous and scared …he knew who ever it was that person was there in the party he just wanted to get out of there…but little did he knew that fear had fallen in love with him

Arjun reached the parking of the pub…it was 11:30 not many vehicles were there he bribed the security and waited for Jai to come to his car…Jai arrived singing some song…he was trying to unlock his car…when Arjun signaled his people…they covered their faces with mask…and suddenly Jai was pinned to the ground with his hands tied behind his back…a masked man punched his face so hard that it broke his upper lip… before Jai could understand …he saw a car approaching him with a very high speed…and the way he was being pinned looked as if the wheels were moving forward to ram his head below them…Jai could feel his end near…he closed his eyes …but after few seconds he could feel the car speeding away he opened his eyes and noticed that there was no one around…his hands were free….Jai got up rubbed his forehead…he was about to move when a speeding bike threw him in the air… Jai winced in pain holding his leg…he turned and saw the bike waiting… and what made him shiver were two angry eyes…watching him behind that helmet the rider threw a paper at him …and drove off….Jai lifted the crumbled paper….there was a note… ‘This is my Last warning….one more wrong….and you will be dead’

Arjun removed the helmet and jacket and gave it to Rana… ‘’keep an eye on him…I want to know everything about him’’ He walked and got inside his car …Arjun’s POV … ‘Jai khanna I wanted to break you bones for Radhika…but if my doubt is confirmed on Neil…I will kill you’

Arjun wanted to calm his head…he dialled Radhika; ‘’Where are you’’

Radhika; ‘’I am with Sam…. There are still some guests … plus my parents have left …now stop asking and come’’

Arjun smiled she knew him so well…she understood he was upset and answered all questions before even he could asked….Arjun reached the venue with Neil….Neil took a promise that Arjun won’t disclose anything to Sam … Arjun agreed…but he knew Radhika should know… the party was in full swing and only the young brigade remained…they were dancing like mad… Sam was rubbing her palms as Neil had been missing for more than an hour….Sam watched Neil walking towards her smiling….Neil pulled Sam into a hug… he feared her safety too… Radhika watched Neil’s body language … she knew him a little too well….but before she could question him….Arjun pulled her for a dance….he lifted her hand to wrap it around his neck…and his arm around her waist…he started his slow movements losing himself into her eyes…but he just ignored his sister’s warning…some one really jealous of them clicked a picture… a message made Arjun realized he should not be so close to her …he said something in her ear…. And changed the partners quickly…. One of the girls who was a daughter of a famous business tycoon ….had clicked the picture….she moved to the corner to upload with a caption…Arjun Mehra’s new adventure….she was smiling evilly on her deed but before she could succeed her phone was smashed on the floor…the girl hissed in anger and lifter her arm to hit Hukum Singh who had been on duty to protect Radhika…but before she could do that Arjun held her arm and twisted it..; ‘’look honey just stay away from my life….because I am a little more adventurous than you think… out last stint together….I recorded it …would you like me to premier the movie….online…’’

Girl; ‘’Do it and you will be force to marry me’’

Arjun smirked; ‘’No one can force me…I always have a back up plan…I won’t release only mine but yours with your previous and current boyfriends too…and you will be hiding in some foreign location for rest of your life’’

Girl ; ‘’you are lying’’

Arjun; ‘’Do the lie detection then….and you will know….I won’t let a scratch on that innocent girl’s reputation….but I will destroy you’’
Girl looked at Arjun with a horrified expression; ‘’you are a pig….glad…I got to know that’’

Arjun; ‘’Hell yes and a wild one….don’t try being nasty with me…now get lost. Arjun knew it wasn’t safe to meet Radhika tonight …plus Nandini will know all as all the people working for them were more loyal to her as compared to him…Arjun asked Neil to drop Radhika home.

Neil knew who could freely give him arsenic…he decided to tackle the person latter….he was looking the ceiling lying on his bed waiting for Sam….Sam after changing came and kept her head on Neil’s chest …wrapping an arm around him… ‘’Thank you Neil…you made my life so special’’

Neil hugged her tight and asked; ‘’Sammy if I die…. Will you be able to take care of Mom’’

Sam froze…her expression was like as if someone slapped her ; ‘’Neil I will end my life …I have no one…please don’t say such things… ‘’ Sam got on the top of Neil and Neil hugged her….. ‘’Neil I want to live this life…smile with you…have a family…I want to give my kids what I missed…please promise me you will grow old with me’’

Neil; ‘’Yes Sam…we will grow old together with a dozen of kids’’ Neil switched off the lights rolling Sam over… he held her tightly kissing her passionately….Neil’s POV ; ‘ I never wanted to be a devil…but Ayan and Jai you will have it now’

Mehra Mansion

Nandini walked in angrily with Sid doing all t pacify her….she screamed ; ‘’Arjun come out in a minute’’

Arnav…who was busy in the library walked out shocked at nandini’s temper…she hardly lost her temper…Arjun came down…with Sia on his back… his POV ‘Shit I am dead Nandu knows about Neil’s party’

Nandini; ‘’Arjun aren’t you ashamed…how could you do this ‘’ Arjun was looking for words but before he could answer…. Nandini spoke again; ‘’you scared a 5 yr old Kid because that kid fought with Sia’’

Arnav ; ‘’this is so you…Arjun’’

Arjun took sigh of relief; ‘’That kid kept bothering Sia…so I just scared him a bit’’

Nandini; ‘’A bit!….you told him…that you will send him to land of dinosaurs and you will click his picture in a way that his pants won’t be visible…that kid is crying for past 3 days…over being pictured naked’’ Arnav and Sid were laughing … Sia quickly left Arjun to go to the safer party Arnav

Arjun; ‘’Nandu…if you click a half portrait…I mean the torso…the pants aren’t visible….I just meant that…I never said I am stripping him… Sia baby you were right Amit is so stupid’’ Arnju’s explanation made Sid roll on the floor…no one cared for Nandini’s anger….she kept her arms folded to her chest but smiled after some time…’’this is a last warning for all of you don’t spoil my daughter’’ Sia who felt her Mom was happy now ran to her…Nandini lifted her and walked towards her room…but she halted passing Arjun; ‘’Arjun I know what happened last night…be careful…its about Rahika’’

Neil was sitting in the central city prison…waiting to meet Ayan….once the guard signaled him to go in the room…Neil went inside and sat opposite to Ayan…who was sitting with his head down his face covered in beard…he looked thin…Neil smirked ; ‘’How are you Ayan…enjoying your stay?’’

Ayan looked up and angrily replied; ‘’I would be happier if you would be dead’’ neil got up and smacked his face….and then sat quietly as if nothing happened…

Neil; ‘’Arsenic! Right….well you are caught….I know you lured Jai into your plan…. Too bad…it failed…Ayan you invited hell….now you will have the same what you were transferring into my body and I will make sure to pay you sweet visit when you wither in pain’’

Neil walked out and gave an envelope to the Prison head… ‘’you know what to do’’ .The head nodded and Neil left

Radhika was angry she couldn’t meet Arjun after the party…and everyone was facing her anger….first she vented her frustration on the breakfast and then on the taxi driver….

Arjun tried calling her but she banged the phone Arjun understood…but he was banned from Bird Song for few days…Nandini knew he wouldn’t stay in control with Radhika infront of him….Arjun wanted to be in BS for Radhika and for Neil… he messaged Radhika…about someone poisoning Neil and she should keep an eye on what he eats….Radhika was shocked she barged into Neil’s cabin; ‘’I am nothing to you?’’

Neil smiled; ‘’Now what’’

Radhika; ‘’Answer me straight who tried to harm you … I know someone was trying’’

Neil; ‘’Not confirmed..but I guess Jai and Ayan….Ayan is using Jai….otherwise Jai will never stoop so low…he cannot harm his own sister…’’

Radhika sarcastically; ‘’we both know how low he can stoop…does Sam know ‘’ Neil nodded negative and asked radhika not to tell Sam…but Sam who was restless since night after Neil’s weird words heard their conversation….her heart sank…she quickly left …Sam ‘s POV ; ‘ I have to do something to keep Neil safe ‘’

Radhika left after wishing Neil….she knew Hukum Singh must be around….she was walking on the pavement when a biker passing by her whistled at her….she turned but couldn’t guess who it was as the person was wearing a helmet….she ignored and started working again but he went on whistling at her after sometime the biker whistled and said; ‘’Where are you going my darling?’’

Radhika was already annoyed she turned and replied; ‘’To your cremation…but before I need to buy an iron rod…so that I can hit your thick skull with it …you know its easy to burn broken bones’’

Biker was stunned…but he spoke again; ‘’Then let’s go together’’ Radhika pulled her heel and threw at him she warned; ‘’If you want your bones intact just run….or else I will scream and you will dead’’ She was threatening him..when the biker pulled off his Helmet..’’Bunny you are one man army… cremation wow….that was a unique one’’

Radhika; ‘’Dumb….you could have been dead by my hands’’

Arjun rolled his eyes; ‘’yes why not…just hop on….we don’t have time…’’ Radhika quickly jumped and they drove off to Arjun’s flat…once inside he pulled her to him; ‘’why is my Bunny so annoyed’’

Radhika curled her lip; ‘’3 days…I didn’t see you for 3 days….you didn’t even come to my room ‘’

Arjun; ‘’Bunny …Nandu knows about all my adventures she warned me’’

Radhika went on her toes and gave Arjun a loving kiss…Arjun looped his arm around her waist and lifted her off the ground.. ‘’Bunny can we stay for an hour’’ Radhika quickly messaged Neil and asked him to handle if her parents call…she threw her phone in a corner …and hugged Arjun…. ‘’Tiger your wish my is my command…I have a question will you answer’’

Arjun; ‘’ No just be quite and stay in my arms…all your questions after words…’’ Radhika planted feathery kisses on Arjuns cheeks and neck and chin… ‘’Can I ask my question now’’ Arjun smirked at her trick and nodded but as opened her lips to ask he captured it lifting her up….Radhika forgot all her questions in his arms….and lost herself completely

Arjun came to drop radhika home…they shared a hug in the dark and Radhika and walked to her house…but someone else was also waiting there to have a glimpse of her….Jai fumed looking at Radhika in Arjun’s arms…he knew Arjun Mehra will never give up what belongs to him….but Radhika was his for past 5 yrs he waited to have her in his arms….and won’t let her go to anyone else…Jai moved he was moving fast to confront her….but he had completely forgotten about the danger looming on him….before he could touch her Jai was gagged tied and thrown in dark….Radhika turned because she felt sound behind her but she was surprisingly pulled into a beautiful embrace….Radhika kissed his chest; ‘’Tiger you said we cannot meet in open’’

Arjun; ‘’Looks like I don’t care…now go inside and tc’’ radhika smiled and walked inside her building….Arjun took the driver seat in which Jai was being thrown….he fired up the engine and drove rashly towards the direction of an unkown destination….Arjun messaged Neil… ‘’judgement day’’…..Arjun entered the a and the shutters were pulled down…Arjun pulled jai out and threw him on the floor Jai screamed in pain…

Arjun pulled the cloth off his face; ‘’Jai well come to hell’’ Jai was blinking to adjust to the surroundings….but before he could understand….he was pulled up by neck…and his head into a container filled with water… Jai was gasping for breath…. Arjun pushed him again on the hard cemented floor; ‘’You really thought…you can touch my Radhika…I will show you what happens when someone touches what belongs to me…’’

Arjun moved and picked up a log….by this time Jai got up; ‘’She was never yours…I have loved her since she was 17….I wanted her… and she loves me she is just fooling you….I have the proof….do you know she has a beautiful mole on the left side of her waist’’ Jai laughed at Arjun’s silence…. ‘’See….I can tell you more….how about I tell you about her long legs or her back’’ This time before Arjun Neil punched Jai… he laughed more…. ‘’One more toy of Radhika Mishra…you guys are just time pass….she will warm only my bed’’

Arjun had had enough…he lifted the log…and banged it on Jai’s legs ….he kept hitting him till Jai fainted….Neil pulled Arjun back ; ‘’Arjun calm down….we need him to nail Ayan….’’

Arjun; ‘’Rana get him treated….and leave him after a warning …keep an eye on him.’’

Sometimes a little misunderstanding can kill a relationship

Precap; Arjun Radhika fight… Sam warns Jai …. Jai’s plan

Credit to: Gauri


  1. abhigya

    Another rocking part from my Di love you. ..enjoyed very much loved the way arjun handle sia matter haha……. The cremation part ended me on floor. Di pls don’t extend ardhika fight can never see that. Want to kill that stupid jai. Thanks for the part love you tc

    • Gauri

      Thanks Abhigya 🙂 sweety the fight will be funny one… you will enjoy… you should pity Arjun 😛
      Jai will be punished 🙂 loads of love a big hug 🙂

  2. Umama

    Like it,apu.That pant warning is so funny.Nice 1.Curious fr d nxt.Update soon.Best wishes..

  3. Sathya


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    Great episode Dear. Radhika is so cute and so as arjun. They both are made for each other. Thank God arjun fund out Neil’s sick. Pls don’t let anything happen to our beloved ones. Precap s scaring me. Don that them to go in a big fight. U r an awesome writer gauri. Keep it up. ?????

    • Gauri

      Thanks a ton Sathya 🙂 don’t worry nothing will happen to them 🙂 and fight will be funny … can be expected from a firery Radhika …you will enjoy 🙂 tc and happy Sunday 🙂 love u

  4. Fanficoholic


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    Di you are late with ur update. Bt the epi was so r marvellous that ur late submission has been excused. The episode was just fantastic. The way arjun dealt with jai- it was jst awesomeeee. And loved the ardhika chemistry. U r pro in writing romantic scenes. And di plz dnt let a misunderstanding come between ardhika. Sorry cant comment mre as i am a lil busy wth college. Catch u later di.

    And when is the nxt epi coming?

    • Gauri

      Thanks a ton sweety 🙂 I no I am late and sorry for that next time will try and keep up the promise 🙂 don’t worry everything will be fine 🙂 stay blessed love you sweety 🙂

  5. Sammy


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    Awesome episode my sunshine …I was totally lost in it ..Neil and arjun are best ..iam loving it more day by day …jai is a strong cunning villian …waiting for ardhika fight 🙂 🙂

    • Gauri

      Thank you Sammy darling 🙂 only you are one waiting for fight ….hope you will enjoy it 🙂 love u

  6. VSK

    wow ..
    when i open tellyupdates to see whether DPO is updated or not & i saw there DPO. &i was like dancing like mad saying that ‘ yeah it is updated’
    you know why i become this much happy by only seeing that it is updated bcoz i know ‘Every Update Of Urs Is Awesome’ i just loved it
    thank u for writting such a beutiful ff 🙂

    • Gauri

      Thanks dear 🙂 thanks for liking it so much stay blessed and happy 🙂 million hugs 🙂

  7. gayathri

    Gauri di fantastic epi I luv it yarrrr. … precap is scaring again di pls ngth shld nt happened anyone… luv u di……. 🙂

    • Gauri

      Thanks Gayathri 🙂 don’t worry nothing will happen 🙂 stay blessed 🙂 love you 🙂

  8. Aasthu


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    oh this Jai is disgusting…………..sad that ardhika will fi8 over this misunderstanding……….y doesn’t Arju trust her ?????????? di if by chance Arjun asks her the explanation for this give him a tight slap…………………………the precap leaves me tensed…………

    • Gauri

      Thanks Aasthau 🙂 yup Jai is turning mad… needs some shock 😛 Arjun trusts her the fight will be a funny one 🙂 wait for the next one stay blessed 🙂

      • Aasthu


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        happy that fi8 will be funny………………..and ya give Jai a good dose….and give some from me too………..perhaps a punch or two………….love u….TC……….

  9. happy

    hi dr…..hw r u…..i also missed you too…..its super update… scared of ardhika fight only…..dont let it be long….cant see that…..otherwise i liked all… r a blessed person dr….always bringing smile on other person’s face and in heart…..

    i know i did a big mistake by not commenting…..sry dr….sry sry sry……be always smiling and make other also….thank you so so muchhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh…………..

    • Gauri

      Happy my dear friend 😀 where are r you missed you so much ….how are you ???? fight won’t be a long one 🙂 and no need for sorry just take care of ypur self and stay happy 🙂 keep smiling 🙂

      • Happy

        Thank you so so much…..fine Dr….exams…preparation…little busy….sry…missed you Dr….NW I am so so happy….thanks Dr…..

  10. Raaga

    Dii u r Awesome….u nail it everything so well 🙂
    and I m very upset about myself bcuz every time I fall short of words to describe u n ur writing skills bcuz my mind dictionary is empty now after using al avail words :-(:-(
    A big teddy hug to u di….love uuuuuuuuuu ♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥

    • Gauri

      Thanks Raaga 🙂 don’t be upset even a single word means world to me 🙂 stay blessed darling love u

  11. Rossy

    Jai crap…even m thinking what to do with him…such a moron piece…argh…it would be best if Arjun killed him n lighter the burden of earth…today m already in tempre …n this trash piece…

    • Gauri

      I will bash Jai on your behalf and what’s wrong why are you angry … hope all fine… tell me if you need a hand in hitting someone 😛 … thanks sweety stay blessed 🙂 love u 🙂

      • Rossy

        M angry on my little cousins..they made me go mad by devastating the whole house n my mind also…already I beat them but u know kids nowadays…totally impossible

  12. Suga


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    Darling sissy wowwwwwwwwwww it’s superbbbbbbbb 😀 😀 arjun care s amazing one 😀 arjun n sia part n arjun reasons ha ha ha from where did u get dat ???? Cute n awesome 😀 😀 jai he s really a disgusting idiot 😮 pls give him a extra punch as my behalf I really hate dat guy …….. But loved D way arjun punishing him 😀 😀 😀 party scene wow arjun s always arjun 😀 ardhika fight 😮 oh god dat jai creating misunderstanding in both pair argggggg sure ll kill him if I got chance :..……. Loved it 😀 😀 love u darling 😀 😀

    • Gauri

      Thanks SUga darling 🙂 million hugs for you 🙂 that Sia part my dad use to tease my cousin that he would click a picture in way that his pants wont be visible…and my poor cousin would cry buckets over it 🙂 fight will be funny 🙂 love you 🙂

  13. Ritu

    Awesome epi..loved Jai’s and Ayam’s punishment..but that crap Jai idiot..dont know how Arjun will react..hope they dont fight punishment was hilarious..overall superb epi..but plz dont seperate aradhika..waiting for

    • Gauri

      Thanks a ton Ritu 🙂 you will enjoy the fight 🙂 won’t separate them 🙂 loads of love stay blessed 🙂

  14. Brin


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    That Jai obsession OMG it is getting too much, how is Arjun going to handle him? Thank god Neil does not have brain tumor but who is trying to poison him? And who is this mystery girl that was taking picture of Ardhika? Gauri your stories are always addicting I like to read it again and again, hats off to you, waiting eagerly for the next update. 🙂

    • Gauri

      Thanks a ton Brin 🙂 you will know who was posioning Neil .. that mystery girl is one of the girls who wanted to be Mrs Arjun Mehra…..Arjun’s ex flames 🙂 you know more 🙂 stay blessed 🙂

  15. Brin

    When is Jai obsession going to stop and how is Arjun going to handle him? Gauri you rock I like to read your stories again and again, hats off to you. 🙂

  16. RituM


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    the first line of mathematics and calculation is awsome…

    arjun…hats off buddy…m proud on him…he took neil for checkup instantly….and then beat that jai before coming back to party…..and hoe much quick he is….super shaktimaan….

    radhika …awww so bubbly….shehzaadi….have her own style to getting angry also!!

    neil ….lov u baby…..!!!

    sam…..good going sweetie….u should come forward for neil…!!

    gauri….. a kiss on ur right cheek…..muahhh!!!

    • Gauri

      Thanks for comment and a big hug for the kiss on my right cheek 🙂 an big hug for you darling stay blessed 🙂

  17. Gianna


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    Wow Gauri, how do u do this? I was so engrossed reading that I didn’t want it to end. Amazing update, it had everything and loved it a lot. You always rock my dear. Loads of love

  18. Jessie


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    No words wud be enough 2 describe Gauri..the opening maths dialogue is superb.. I liked where Hukum singh breaks d girl’S phone.. Arsenic.. gosh! I wasnt wrong.. yay.. u ppl will make me brilliant I guess..Why Ardhika fighting? hope it will end soon.. I loved jai’s treatment but tat guy is more disgusting.. why Arneil leaves him alive..Arjun’s half potrait dialogue was super ??gosh.. i enjoyed tat part.. and Rads reply to Arjun when he had helmet was fab… Hahahha This is girl is a tigeress .. Glad tat Neil hadn’t been harmed much.. looking forward for d reason of Arshika fight… when is nxt update..loads of love n TC.. hope u got well is ur leg pain..

    • Gauri

      Thanks Jessie dear 🙂 Aradhika fight will be hilarious 🙂 Jai will be punished 🙂 loads of love sweety love u 🙂

  19. shiva

    di it was very good but the pecap got me worried dont make them fight, i cant bear it.
    Bye and take care

  20. dipika

    m full on worried by last could he belives that vile crap’s nonsense… he roamed n used hell lot if girl bt rads never questioned him n trusted him though many tries to manipulate her…if arjun will question rads abt this i m going slap him…see Darling how u impact me with yr writting…u r as brilliant as ever…m lost myself in ur stories…i think rads going to ask questions to arjun whn she was with may b related to this topic na….i guess…n rads forget ti ask…pls nxt one soon…hey hows bday celebration… tons of lovr Darling.

    • Gauri

      Thanks Dipika dear 🙂 baap re itna gussa , don’t worry Rads is not the one to cry 🙂 fight will be funny 🙂 hope u like that one 🙂 Bday celebration was awesome had good dinner with my parents and sis 🙂 a gig hug for you stay blessed 🙂 love you 🙂 waiting for ur update

  21. sreee

    wow di superb epi….loved it….nandu furious on arjun….omg was hilarious..he threatening a small kid and sia rolling on floor….just so awesome….but di i never knew arjun would that stupid to believe that jai’s word…if he is going to do that i swear that he should b dead in rads hands…ridiculous …..thank god sam got to know about jai….hope that she will control him….di pls end ardhikas fight in that epi itself di……or else in frustrating of chosing vile words for arjun i surely will break my head…..always being short tempered..arrrghhh….really what r u di…making us go crazy with ur words…thats simply awesome…..btw how much has 6yrs advanced….so eager to know…..di ur words r just breathtaking….really hatsoff to u…….i will always b honoured to tell that am ur little sissy….love u…bear hugs….muahhhh

    • Gauri

      Thanks Sreee darling 🙂 you will know the reason of fight and you will enjoy it … fight will end in that episode itself 🙂 6yrs is going on but little slow as I am not getting time 🙂 I am honoured by ur words… I think I have gained some pounds out of happiness 🙂 love you darling stay blessed 🙂

  22. subha

    mindblowing episode………thank u for updating……. eagerly waiting for u r ff……interesting.pls pls update soon…tc

  23. Nupur

    Hi Gauri di! awesome chapter and belated happy birthday!
    m currently reading the story from the beginning as m new on mmz page but ll be able to wrap up soon…update soon:)

    • Gauri

      Thanks for your comment and wishes Nupur 🙂 do let me know how was it once you are done reading all chapters 🙂 stay blessed 🙂 love you 🙂

  24. S.v


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    More than enough for the fight between arjun and radhika. Thanks to jai. Argh . Ayoooo I am keeping my hands over head. Di why this di ???? Im scared as what will arjun ask or how will will she blast him ?? Sure there is gonna be a biiiigggggggg fight between them . This is an unexpected twist in this episode but I know u will do something and bring all back to normal . Hain naa di ?? Di only 1 question will ardhika fight gets over in the same episode na di ??

    Love u lods di and ur words . Bear my hugs and kisses too . Muuhhhaaa.

    • Gauri

      Sv my cutie pie 🙂 don’t worry you will enjoy the fight its going to be funny one 🙂 yup Aradhika fight will get over in same episode 🙂 loads of love stay blessed 🙂 million hugs for you happy sunday

  25. Lakshmi05


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    Amazing episode dear…Arjun scaring kid was really hilarious..n How could jai do this to his own sister ….. he deserves severe punishment….will waiting for next one…luv u…tc…

    • Gauri

      Thanks Lakshmi 🙂 Jai will get punished 🙂 next one on wed or thursday 🙂 stay blessed 🙂

  26. Aastha

    Hey Di …how was your bday..???
    Chp is nice.. waiting to know who is poisoning Neil ??
    Update next one soon
    Love you Di… take care 🙂 🙂 🙂 🙂 🙂

  27. Niharika

    Hie Gauri di hope you enjoyed your birthday . So you have turned ???? I don’t know your age. Todays epi was amazing I have a doubt why will the beauty and the beast fight.And when will they marry . Sorry was late in commenting school started 3 weeks back 8th so many projects so completing them also I have decided to write an ff on Manmarziyan so was writing the intro .Bye di take care prayed for you on your Bday and when are you updating your ff next.

    • Gauri

      Thanks Niharika 🙂 Girls remain sweet 16 through out their life 😛 how is you school ,,, all the best for your ff stay blessed and healthy 🙂 love you 🙂

  28. sreee

    di thank god u saved me….my mood was getting so bad…..thinking that arjun is going to q rads….atlast now i would b in peace…..hmmm…see di what have u done to me….i was on two poles….the first one rolled on the floor thinking arjun exp to nandu about threatening a small…even now am laughing like mad….and the next one was searcing my head dictionary for wirds to thrash arjun…omg now they wont b necessary and i can sleep peacefully in night…..u just make my day…do u know how many times i refreshed the page for ur update and reply…u bet….now am eagerly waiting for the hilarious fight…..byeeee….love u….keep smiling…muahhhhhhhh….

    • Gauri

      LoL Sree 🙂 I happy now you can sleep nicely 🙂 thanks for so much of love and support it means world to me 🙂 stay blessed dear 🙂 million hugs for you 🙂

  29. pankh

    enjoyed a lot..loved the reply arjun gave to that girl..aradhika’s fight…pity Arjun..rads gonna irritate him to will Piyali and everyone come to know about Jai’s deed???u rocked..

    • Gauri

      Thanks a ton Pankh 🙂 Rads will thrash him 😛 everyone will know his deeds in next update … 🙂 loads of love stay blessed 🙂

  30. Sweetie


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    Di..It’s a mind blowing episode..Nandini and Sia’s equation was superb..Arjun wanted to take the photo of the boy half naked and his explanation for that was MASHALLAH..?I was in Sid’s place while reading that scene..I was full on ROFL..??? Jai deserve that punishment..Arsenic!!OMG!! I heard about that chemical being slow poison before and here I got to see the signs of it too..Ayan and Jai should rot in dark cells their entire life..?OMG!!The last words of destiny are scaring me to hell now..What??Ardhika fight????Sam warning Jai..??Waiting for the next dear..Stay blessed and lots of love..❤??

    • Gauri

      Thanks a ton Sweetie 🙂 don’t worry fight will be funny 🙂 and I love the name Gauri … well my name is Abha 🙂 but pen name is Gauri 🙂 loads of love have a G8 sunday …and waiting for another OS from you :)sty blessed 🙂

      • Sweetie


        |Registered Member

        Ok Abha di..So waiting for the funny fight then.. 🙂 Have a great sunday.. 🙂 Will surely update OS series soon.. 😀 Love you.. 🙂

  31. Dhara

    After reading this update I just hope that Arjun will really not check radhika’s waist for mole. Update was superb. Radhika is so cute?. Loved d face off fight ??? I hope jai face the hell ?

    • Gauri

      Thanks Dhara 🙂 do you think Radhika will let him check …she will disrobe him …wait for it 🙂 Jai will face the real hell 🙂 tc

  32. Supriya.

    Di no words to describe how awesome this z……I m speechless like every time……first extremely sorry for not commenting earlier but was too much busy with your gift….I just hope you like it……di I felt as Arjun z some officer giving third degree to jai to make him spit the secrets….. Srsly it was so intriguing…..I loved it to the core……so someone was feeding neil arsenic…..well we have that in our chemistry lab but everyone z forbidden to touch it….now I understood why… answered my question without even me asking you….see what a connection we have…..Rads and arjun lovely as usual….. What’s wrong with this ARjun… can he believe that mascot di…radhika accepted even after knowing his adventures then why couldn’t he trust her… I m disappointed by this arjun…now my questions
    1)will the fight get over in the episode itself?
    2)why z arjun so annoyed di?
    3)who was that girl who clicked aradhika pic?
    4)will she team up with jai?
    5)when will you nail jai forever?
    6)have you planned something for dilip to say yes to arjun?
    7)so when z the most awaited marriage!? I mean after how many updates?
    8)are there more hurdles to come?
    9)so z the tiger tamed now?or still he wants to tie up the beauty?
    Chalo my fingers r paining too much….I m sorry for short comment but promise next one will be the longest… you di….muaaaaaaaah…… Tc???????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????

    • Gauri

      Thanks a ton Supriya 🙂 I loved the gift and now your answers …yup fight will get over in the same one 🙂 he is annoyed becoz someone is talking cheap abut Radhika 🙂 Arjun’s adventure from the past 🙂 dont know …becoz I am going to nail jai soon 🙂 yes I have planned something for Dilip to say yes 🙂 marriage after I nail Jai 🙂 Tiger can never be tamed 🙂 he loves his beauty too much 🙂 wait for the next one…and baby the comment was not short 😛 stay blesssed and thanks gain love u

  33. Rg2015


    |Registered Member

    Hi gauri, sorry am one of d very last to comment. But as I told u am busy during weekends with my part time job. Well this one was a bit toooooo short. I really missed ur Long updates. But yet arjun and rads chemistry was as usual rocking hence enjoyed it. Thank arjun Neil tooo got saved in d end. Jai and Ayan together? Yuck . It’s horrible but not surprising. Birds of d same feather flock together. He very coolly forgot tat Neil was his Brother in law. I loved d WA arjun pampered Sia… I enjoyed Jai getting punched.
    By d way few questions.
    Regarding ardhikas fight… Will arjun start d fight or rads?
    Is d fight Becos Jai instigated arjun saying crappy things abt rads? Will arjun for a moment doubt rads?
    How will Sam react once she comes to know Jais deeds against her Brother?
    How d hell is Jai going to hurt rads where will arjun b then?
    How will piyali feel and react after knowing Jais true Colours?

    Well gauri, I feel very bad abt this story coming to an end soon. I really can’t bear without reading ur updates 4 times a week, u really make my whole week pretty meaning ful. Though d day between ur updates r truly a trail…. D reward is much sweeter when I finally read ur amazing updates… So I kindly request u to come with another superb story from ur fantastic intelligent awesome brilliant imagination…..or if u so chose it pluck it fromair?????.. As along as u come with a bang… I hoping this one has lot more to go before u wrap up….

    By d way pls pls pretty plz tell me when r u going to update mmz tomorrow or Tuesday…… Pl z plz tell me I can barely wait…( I badly need to know. Also if possible tell me wether it morning, noon ,night or late night. Thanks.. )

    U r fantastic. Stay blessedly happy. Cheers.

    • Gauri

      Thanks a ton Rg I was waiting for your comment 🙂 yup I know it was short couldn’t write was busy….ok now your answers 🙂 Arjun will start a fight and Radhika will end it 🙂 fight will be because of Arjun’s possessiveness towards her…but she will give him nicely 🙂 youwill see Sam’s reaction 🙂 Jai will hurt Radz after losing completely and Piyali will be broken 🙂 …Aastha asked me to write an OS on Arjun -Radhika … lets see…. I will start on it once I finish DPO 🙂 I have a thought a story of two different people strong yet weak…complete yet incomplete … well will tell you more 🙂 loads of love and MMZ on Tuesday or may be late night tomorrow 🙂 stay blessed love you dear 🙂

  34. priya

    Super episode as usual …jai should get more..Neil I think he is going to be fine..radhika nd arjun fight..hope it won’t be more serious…sry for late cmnt busy wid my sis as she is going to hostel

  35. Smiley

    Seriosly it was awesom can u plz tell me when u r going post next part of DPO plz update fast

  36. Roma

    Awesome, marvellous, outstanding, mind blowing. …gauriiiiiiiiiiiii my sweeeeeet darling friend. …I’m so sorry for late comment. …as always the episode was a killer. ..I’ve no words to describe my feelings.’s really superbbbb n dynamite. …I’m totally speechless n overwhelmed. …keep it up honeyyyyyy…love you loads. . . Muaaaaahhhhhh. …

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