Manmarziyan- Destiny…Passion …Obsession – Chapter 43

Chapter 43

Hello friends thanks for all your support 🙂 so here is the next chapter do let me know how was it 🙂 Happy weekend guys 🙂 love u all

Chapter 43

Be good in your deeds and God sends his Angles to protect you….Like the way he did for Neil& Nandini

Arjun was sleeping on his stomach … he felt a small soft weight snuggling around his body….he smiled ….he knew this was Sia…

Arjun turned …effortlessly looped an arm around her and made her sit on his abdomen; ‘’What baby….why are you hiding??’’

Sia; ‘’I want a bomb’’

Arjun jerked up.. Sitting on the bed holding Sia to him; ‘’Whoa!….Why baby and who told you about bomb?’’

Sia with a serious face; ‘’I saw in a movie… I Will blow my school…’’

Arjun laughed; ‘’Tell me why do you want to blow your school’’

Sia; ‘’I don’t like it…they give homework…boys tease me…and teacher asked to bring Mom today’’

Arjun understood…he lifted her little chin up ; ‘’What did you do ‘’

Sia looked up and gave Arjun an innocent doe eye look; ‘’Mamu its not my fault..Amit teased me …I pushed him …punched him….teacher will complain to Mom…I don’t want Mom to be sad ’’

Arjun pulled her to his chest and softly spoke; ‘’will you go if I come with you…I will handle your mom teacher… Amit too….and no more movies’’ Sia gave Arjun a cute smile….looped her tiny arms around his neck…pecking his cheek…Arjun loved this innocent affection…he never got anyone younger than him…And sia was filling that gap….Arjun got up with Sia is his arms and walked to

Nandini’s room who was busy packing Sia’s bag… ‘’Nandu I will drop Sia to school’’

Nandini looked at Sia and Arjun…she smiled; ‘’What story she gave you and what are you saving her from’’

Arjun blinked; ‘’no story….and come-on Nandu I am her mamu … I also have some right on her…’’ All the while Sia did not look at
Nandini….Nandini smiled; ‘’you are her mamu and I have been mom to you both….I know you both a little too much….don’t spoil her….fine go with her’’ Sia squealed and hugged Arjun…he smiled and winked at Nandini

Radhika was having breakfast with her parents…she looked at Mala and gestured her to start the topic …Mala nodded and cleared her throat; ‘’Dilip…The other day I had told you about Arjun and Radhika…did you think on the same’’

Dilip looked up from the newspaper towards Radhika and Mala; ‘’There is nothing to think…she will never be happy with him’’

Radhika without looking at him responded; ‘’I can only be happy with him’’

Dilip; ‘’then go and marry him …if you don’t care for my choice’’

Radhika knew it was no point arguing she started her emotional atyachar…she looked at Dilip with watering eyes and sadly spoke; ‘’fine papa….I won’t marry him if you don’t want…but I won’t marry anyone else either.’’ She got up to leave

Mala; ‘’At least finish your breakfast’’

Radhika made a sad face; ‘’I think I am full’’ She walked off with her bag…Dilip was surprised as radhika could leave anything but not her food…Mala looked at Dilip angrily ; ‘’Happy?’’…she got up but smiled at her own acting skills

Radhika came out…and dialled Sam; ‘’Sam I am hell hungry ….send me something with Neil’’

Sam was giggling continuously after talking to Radhika…Neil watched her in the mirror …turned around and hugged her from the back; ‘’What makes you laugh so much my lady’’

Sam narrated very thing; ‘’Your adopted daughter is quite smart…’’

Neil smiled; ‘’She is impossible just like Arjun….ok you need go on a shopping with CHashni…she has the details’’

Sam; ‘’What details’’

Neil brushed his knuckles on her cheek; ‘’Surprise my love…take care’’ Neil kissed Sam and left…Sam’s heart did a somersault hearing the word surprise…but suddenly she ran to Neil and hugged him…; ‘’Please take care of yourself’’

Neil drove off to Mehra Industries Head office and walked straight into Arjun’s cabin who greeted him with a smile….Rana and hukum singh were already there….

Rana; ‘’What do you want me to do’’

Arjun; ‘’Do you have details of his routine’’

Rana ; ‘’Yes…after his hours at work he spends his time in GYM , swimming and a well known Pub Purple…with some of his friends’’

Arjun; ‘’Then start with GYM…let him face fear….make him sweat and I want him scared 24/7 and Baba please don’t leave Radhika or Sam alone’’

Neil; ‘’Sam…Why???’’

Arjun; ‘’She transferred all her shares in you name…Jai lost his last hope to get BS’’

Neil; ‘’He won’t hurt his sister’’

Arjun; ‘’Why take a chance…let’s leave all that…all set for your reception….you are a rising name in the industry…don’t know how many girls will be cursing Sam’’

Neil; ‘’I don’t care…we should leave…we have a Board meeting at BS’’ Arjun nodded and left

Jai came out of the changing room…but the GYM was empty…he was surprised….it was late evening not and many use to come at this hour but it never had been this empty…he lied on his back…and started lifting the weight….suddenly it turned dark and he felt breathless….the weight he was holding…had suddenly tripled and was beyond his range…if he leaves the weights it would come crashing down on him…which could be fatal…Jai wasn’t able to remove the weight… when he felt someone was gagging his nose and mouth…after few seconds of fight he could feel air…he screamed ; ‘’help’’ …the trainer came running and helped removing the weight…Jai had hurt his shoulder bad…he screamed; ‘’Where were you? And why the lights were out’’

Trainer; ‘’Sir there was short circuit we were fixing that….’’

Jai; ‘’Were is the security out…someone just tried killing him’’

Trainer gave him a weird look; ‘’Sir you should go home you look tired’’ Jai hurled few curses and left…Rana watched him leave and smirked…

Arjun decided to drop Radhika home…once she was in his car…he kissed her knuckles; ‘’Bunny please tell me how to sneak to you room’’

Radhika looked at him wide eyed; ‘’ will get me killed..we have to wait’’

Arjun; ‘’Fine I am working on it will figure that out …by the way before dropping you home…I am kidnapping you for an hour’’

Radhika just smiled…Arjun brought her to a new place…Radhika looked around; ‘’How many places do you own’’

Arjun; ‘’Correction My dad owns this …and I can’t take the risk to take you to same place again and again…Nandu will kill me’’ …he pulled her close…’’enough of you talking …time for my kiss ‘’ radhika looped her arms around his neck and kissed him passionately…Arjun broke the kiss and rubbed her lips with his thumb…; ‘’Bunny …I can’t sneak into your room daily but once or twice in a week will definitely happen’’

Radhika; ‘’how?’’

Arjun; ‘’I took the flat just above yours on rent… got the agreement done..Rana just messaged me….your balcony is exactly below mine…you know what I am talking’’

Radhika was shocked; ‘’You will hurt yourself’’

Arjun; ‘’Anything to be with you….but don’t spill the beans infront of Neil….he will kill me’’ Radhika just smiled and hugged him…

Arjun dropped her little away from her building and watched her go in safely.

Radhika was sitting on her bed thinking about Arjun it was midnight….and smile covere her lips…but her thought bubble broke with her vibrating mobile..she read the message… ‘I am in ur balcony….open the door’….Radhika jumped out of the bed and slowly opened the balcony door without making a sound…Arjun walked in and Radhika locked the door…she was about to speak…but her closed her mouth with his palm…Arjun held from her waist moved behind hugging her from the back…he kissed her ear lobe radhika smiled taking a deep breath..Arjun whispered ‘’I told you….anything to be with you…I will leave before the day breaks…get in the bed’’ Radhika quickly obliged…Arjun moved next to her; ‘’I love your bed….its small and won’t give you space to shift’’ radhika pecked his nose tip; ‘’My mad Tiger…who wants space when its you’’ Arjun pulled her to his chest and dozed off…when he left
Radhika was in a deep slumber….he pecked her cheek and asked her to lock the door…he left the way he came in.

Radhika as usual left without having breakfast and with a gloomy face….Mala also made a face at Dilip….who was feeling guilty of hurting his daughter….

Bird Song

Neil was waiting in pantry….as soon as Radhika entered he handed her the breakfast; ‘’What are you made off….you are acting infront of you own father’’

Radhika pouted then smiled; ‘’everything is fair in love and war…and Mom is acting with me…’’ Neil’s jaw dropped….he rubbed his temples…radhika noticed this ; ‘’What’s wrong’’

Neil patted her cheek and smiled; ‘’Nothing birdie .. little headache…’’

Radhika; ‘’You have been getting those quite frequently….you should check with a doctor’’

Neil looked at her worried eyes ; ‘’I am fine …and I won’t die before playing with your kids’’ Radhika didn’t know what she felt but she hugged him around his waist; ‘’Stop uttering rubbish Neil…I can’t lose you promise me you will go to the doctor…or I won’t leave you’’

Neil answered her hug ; ‘’fine I will go but after the reception….now leave me or else staff will say I favor you more’’

Radhika; ‘’But that’s true….and I like it’’ Neil just rolled his eyes and left.


Sam was worried …she recalled the day when lawyer update Khannas about Sam transferring her BS shares to Neil…


Jai; ‘’blo*dy hell Sam….how can you just throw your shares outside your family’’

Sam; ‘’Melhotra Uncle was also one of the partners….and I gave my shares to my family’’

Jai; ‘’Oh ! so he is your family and we are nothing’’

Sam; ‘’I have the right to use my assets and properties the way I want to…and I don’t want any interference…hope you understand’’

Jai; ‘’You are not my baby Sam anymore you are just Mrs Neil Nelhotra’’

Sam; ‘’Yes I am Mrs Neil Melhotra and proud of it…and even you are not my Bhai anymore, my bhai was caring and a good person the one standing infront of me is selfish arrogant and a man who can go any length to get what he want.

Jai smirked; ‘’Was this about your bestie’’

Sam; ‘’Yes …stay away…she is not like me who would shed tears…she will give back and bad….and take this as a my last concern for you’’

Jai; ‘’Sam I never expected you will betray me…fine…keep your eyesopen’’

Sam came back to present when she heard a knock on the door…she knew what Jai said was a warning and she was hell worried about Neil.

Mehra Mansion Same evening

Arjun watched Nandini helping Sia with her homework but the naughty kid….was doing everything other than her homework…Arjun recalled how Nandini used to help him yrs back same way…in every sense she was a very good sister-mother….Arjun suddenly heard a sparkling laughter..Nandini was tickling Sia…who was twisting turning and laughing with the effect….He walked at Sat next to Nandini….’ ‘’ Nandu you are happy about this marriage thing… right???’’

Nandini; ‘’Yes …Why are you asking?’’

Arjun; ‘’no I don’t want you to be under any pressure….if you are not happy then please don’t go ahead with it’’

Nandini smiled and cupped his cheek; ‘’You have grown up….I am happy…I could have got this happiness before…but I kept crying over my stupid heart for so long’’

Arjun; ‘’It wasn’t your fault it was Samrat’s you just fell for the wrong man…. I wish I could teach him a lesson’’

Nandini; ‘’Samrat was not wrong situations were… he is a very good man…and I don’t hold any grudge against him….and about lesson…do you think Arnav Mehra would have taken everything this lightly …I am his first kid…the moment it happened Chachu started destructing BS…I somehow stopped him…’’

Arjun; ‘’Wow! Dad is just like me…but why did you stop him…because you loved Samrat’’

Nandini; ‘’because I knew what he did and why?…and no more questions some are better left unanswered…’’ Nandini turned and found Sia missing; ‘’there… she is again gone…she must be with chachu…’’ nandini got up and walked towards the study….Sia came out from her hide out…behind Arjun’s chair….Arjun lifted her up and threw her in air…to hear the sparkling laughter again.

Neil reception was being arranged in Mumbai’s best hotel…It was one of the best Pg 3 event… it was grand and a double celebration as it was Sam’s birthday too…Prerna was very happy with the arrangement…Nandini and Mala helped her in every sense… Khanna’s attended it and Prerna greeted them openly…Guest list included big names from ad and fashion world…all around there were camera flashes…clinking glasses… flashy dresses…& lot of sophistication… Sam had dressed in Ivory coloured designer lengha with diamond set she kept her makeup sober…and Neil looked a hunk in every sense in his 3 piece suit…Radhika was dressed in a sky blue floor length Anarkali …with her hair curled and dropping beautifully on her face from either side…she was there with Sam but her eyes were on the entrance…and in a minute…her face was full of pride…because a lot many girls had just stopped talking and giggling they were all looking in one direction from where Arjun Mehra made a grand entry with his father the King Mehra … Arjun was not the most handsome one in the party… but he was a head turner, stinking rich and single…for allexcept for Radhika…for her he was just her Tiger…for the first time in his life Arjun felt uncomfortable …he use to love attention in the past….but now he just wanted to be a simple man who could openly hold the hand of his girl…Sam elbowed Radhika; ‘’Hello…I am the one who should be getting complete attention’’

Radhika ; ‘’Sam I have my attention on you….I am just looking at the greedy faces…who are never going to have him…because he is all mine’’ Sam rolled her eyes; ‘’Crazy…. anyways he will be calling you in some corner’’ Radhika gave Sam a mock glare.

Nandini came with Sid making her relationship official….as predicted people were talking about her sudden decision and the kid in her arms whom she kept holding protectively…some even called it a business arrangement as Sid was a big Hotel baron… as predicted by Sam Radhika’s mobile vibrated…Sam smiled….before Radhika could open her mouth…Sam started; ‘’Chashni I understand… you had so many cold drinks your bladder must be full it’s an emergency…go I will if anyone enquires I will handle’’

Radhika giggled …pecked Sam and quietly walked off…but Jai followed her… this was his mistake…Radhika tip toed through the lobby and was suddenly pulled in a room….she looked up and smiled Arjun cupped her face and kissed her cheek warmly before hugging her…

.Arjun had already instructed Rana on Jai’s second dose…Jai was searching for Radhika when suddenly everything went dark…he was tied and thrown on the floor….he felt helpless.. Breathless…he couldn’t see a thing plus his mouth was gagged…. he was unable to call for help….he was scared….very scared…he felt this was his end…

Arjun; ‘’Bunny stay in this room for a minute….’’ Radhika nodded….Arjun walked out of the room and moved into another one….he smiled looking at the helplessness of Jai…who was figting to be free…his POV; ‘’My Radhika lived this fear for 4 yrs…you will have it for life….’’ He instructed Rana to free Jai after 20 min and went back to his Radhika…pulling her again in his protective embrace…’’ Today I just want to be simple man…atleast your dad will agree’’ Radhika caressed his face; ‘’Tiger he will…. I won’t leave him an option’’ Arjun smiled wide ;’’Let’s go I don’t want to be caught… but this hide and seek is fun’’ Radhika left before Arjun … Arjun walked back to the party and got a smirk from Nandini….he blushed…he looked around and found Jai drinking like mad at the bar….his hands were trembling being scared…Arjun POV; ‘More to come Jai Khanna’
Neil dragged Arjun along to meet Dilip….now Arjun was shaking…Neil; ‘’Uncle he is Arjun…the one you wanted to meet…please test him to the max….its about our Radhika’’ Neil winked at Arjun and left….Arjun just wanted to kill him….Dilip smiled looking at Arjun’s discomfort…; ‘’I am not going to eat you’’ Arjun laughed aloud to hide his nervousness….Radhika banged her head and Neil-Sam just turned away to mask their laughter…

Dilip was surprised but he laughed when Arjun wiped his forehead….he asked; ‘’Why should I marry off my daughter to you…she can do much better than you’’

Arjun; ‘’Yes she can…but she is the best for me…I cannot see a tomorrow without her’’

Dilip; ‘’Your reputation is my concern’’

Arjun; ‘’Sir… whatever I was its infront of you… but can you guarantee that the guy you chose will be clean as a new slate…if yes…I am ready to meet such a guy…but he should be the best….because Radhika is the best’’ Dilip kept staring into Arjun’s eyes…and Arjun never blinked…his affection was so clear…Dilip; ‘’Give me some time she is my only child’’ Arjun nodded …after

Dilip left…. Arjun took a deep breath…as if he escaped a death sentence…and Neil handed him a drink…’’Thanks …never thought this will be so difficult’’

Neil; ‘’Happens bro…by the way how long are you planning this horror program for Jai’’

Arjun; ‘’Few days more…and then he will meet his nemesis’’ Neil rubbed his forehead…Arjun gave him a look; ‘’Neil take some rest you are overworking yourself…you are not well…’’

Neil ; ‘’Arjun don’t tell this to Sam or Chashni…I get these violent headaches…sometimes I feel I will break everything around me…’’

Arjun ; ‘’Since when’’

Neil; ‘’Last one week’’

Arjun; ‘’Are you free after this party’’

Neil; ‘’Yup …I will be in GLITZ we have a winter collection release coming up’’

Arjun; ‘’Leave that…you will see doc tonight itself….I doubt… someone is trying to harm you’’
Sometimes friends become your shield in the times of trouble…a shield which can sense the danger before it approaches you…

Precap; Arjun makes Jai feel the fear of death….the face off

Credit to: Gauri


  1. Aastha

    di its just amazing……………I don’t know what else to say………..anyway it is a day of wonders……………..I’m very happy today bcoz of sooo many reasons…………….kfar and u updated , sammy updated LP…..and above all I had such a good time with my friends today………I became almost mad……I took 37 selfies in a single evening for an hour…………I never was like this………but don’t y I was just mad…………… u a lot……………..muahhhhhhhhhhhhhhh…………………….

    • Gauri

      Thanks a ton Aastha 🙂 even I am happy about other updates read all now will comment 🙂 bad start of weekend I slipped from the wet stairs hurt my back bad 🙁 enjoy your time and I will be spending it inside 🙂 enjoy you weekend keep smiling a big hug for you 🙂

  2. Ritu

    rads such a drama queen..loved the way she tried to convince dilip…Jai got a good punishment..want him to get punished more..loved nandini sia and arjun’s bonding…jst superb dr..u nailed it as always..Arneil scenes in the last were mindblowing…and it seems Jai is behind Neil’s headache..such a crap he is..harming his sister’s husband..hope Arjun beat him to death…precap sounds amazing…waiting for nxt…plz post weekend..

    • Gauri

      Thanks Ritu 🙂 Jai will be punished more … wait for it 🙂 loads of love and happy weekend 🙂 stay blessed 🙂

  3. S.v


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    Di……. super awesome. Radhika and mala’s drama and neil is bringing food and what happened to neil. Why is he getting headache ?? Is there something wrong for him . Nothing should happen to him arjun wooooowwwwww super . The way he came to radhika’s balcony. Loved it and the way he spoke to dilip hope dilip will say yes. What guess he will say yes and nandhini and sid with sia. Superb (whistle) . And maamu arjun lovely. Jai yippiee superb started his payment want him to pay more yaaayyeeeee.

    Didi this is the night time feast loved it and love u and ur words . Bear hugs and kisses. Muuhhhaaa. Muuhhhaaa and Muuhhhaaa

    • Gauri

      Thanks my cutie pie 🙂 About Neil you will know in next update 🙂 you are a darling like a sugar candy 🙂 thank you so much for making my day special 🙂 big hug for you stay blessed 🙂

  4. Dhara


    |Registered Member

    Awesome superb? arjun is cute at a time and dangerous at s time. Radhika is drama queen. Waiting for face off.

  5. Zara

    Amazing and cute! Today’s one was a mixture of every thing … Cute romance of arjun-radhika and entertaining because of Jai, I couldn’t stop laughing!! I wonder what else he is going to face 😉 😛 ..But please Gauri di don’t end it so soon.. I will miss this ff badly 🙁 🙁 Please please please!!

    • Gauri

      Thanks a ton Zara 🙂 Jai will face more 🙂 I will take it forwrad as long as I can 🙂 love you

  6. RituM


    |Registered Member

    look……o….how can u look at me……
    see….ahhhh…how can u even see me….

    read……hmmmm thts correct…… i love arjun n rads…..but dare you to do something with neil……. i will fill buckets of water with my tears….nd thn pack all that n courrier u……mind it!!!!

    • Gauri

      Ritu darling nothing will happen to Neil 🙂 you forgot I love him 😛 LOL you will courier me tears 😀 Thanks dear 🙂 stay blessed 🙂

  7. dipika

    Gauri darling i was hovering in tu site to read your update and here it is….I liked the way Arjun threaten jai for misbehaving with rads four years back…ye toh bahot kam punishment hai jai k liye…face off.. m so waiting for this moment.. when jai the vile creature meet beauty’s beast…neil’s headache.. making me headaches… pls m sooooo nervous for him yarrrrr ……each n everything was perfect.. dilip n arjun meets..haha…in laws k samane sab dar jaate hai..even arjun the tiger too.. haha..super, brilliant, marvelous… love you soo weekend…

    • Gauri

      Dipika you are a darling 🙂 love you 🙂 Jai will get more from Arjun …. nothing will happen to Neil 🙂 he has amazing frnds 🙂 thanks sweety you are an amazing support 🙂 love you stay blessed 🙂

  8. neetz

    Was feeling lil low but happy after reading ur update.thanks my lovly lady …mmmuah 🙂

  9. Brin


    |Registered Member

    Awesome episode, please don’t tell me Neil has a brain tumor, I hope not, so glad Arjun his bringing fear in Jai, he deserves it for causing Radhika to fear for dark. Gauri as always your nailing it, well done. 🙂

  10. Supriya

    Hii di….lalalala this z what I do when m very happy….this z my fav nobita’s song….I watch doraemon everyday nd do lalalala?….I m happy to the moon today to see your update at last……I was impatient to read nd now I feel it was worth all the wait…..omg arjun z hot as hell….m kidnapping him in two years after I turn 18?….the way he punished jai that was just incredible….. But the scoundrel deserves more….nd I know you very well know how to please me…..this lovebirds can’t bear distance at all….he sneaked inside her room omg ya Allah ye ladka humhe pagal karke chodega?hum toh aab arjun ke puri tarah se deewane hogaye hai….drama queen z just like me….even I use emotional blackmail on almost everyone….. Puppy eyes and few tears that’s what you need to get your work done?m so talented I do it so effectively….. Di I will eat your brains whole day if anything bad happens to Neil….mind it!….m dead serious abt this… better beaware no one can escape from supriya…..I will make you so irritated that you will remain scared of me…….lol….
    Di now my questions……
    1)will arjun save Neil in nick of time?….
    2)when will jai hurt radhika I mean after how many updates?….
    3)will Sam break ties with her bro after knowing his evil deed against Neil?….
    4)how will arjun prove himself to dilip?….
    5)no more punishment for piyali kya?….
    6)will arjun keep meeting rads like this….will it have a effect on her image in society?….will you show something like that?….
    7)when z aradhika’s marriage ?I mean after how many updates?….
    8)will you show samrat getting more punishment?….when you will show him good in everyone’s eyes?….
    9)will aradhika fight in future?…
    10 last but not the least when z the next update?….
    Di you are just too good….actually you know what I don’t have words to praise you…..di being good z not that difficult but doing good yet never boosting z very difficult…. you are exactly like that di….I have formed your image in my mind nd in every way you resemble some goddess…. I have given this compliment to my sis Pooja but I never thought I will give it to someone else but you deserve this compliment….
    Glyserin plz take care….don’t work and stress your body and mind more…..its a humble request to you….Get fit soon….so that I m free to pester you….love you dear…..muaaaaaaaah…. Tc?????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????

    • Gauri

      Thanks a ton Supriya 🙂 yes Arjun will save Neil 🙂 sweety I don’t know after how many updates but he will hurt her for sure 🙂 Sam will be the one to Nail Jaifinally 🙂 yes he will convince Dilip how you have to wait 🙂 Piyali’sbiggest punishment is the deeds of hr son :)Nandini will know of his sneeking in her room…wait for her to pull his ear 🙂 Nandini knws why samarat did and what and so does Samrat ‘s frnds so no punishment for him 🙂 next one once I am fine….I have bruised myself bad 🙁 and a big hug for considering me equivalent to your sis 🙂 love you darling stay blessed 🙂

  11. Naaga


    |Registered Member

    Gauri semm super.
    OMG ? What happened to Neil?
    Pls don’t put full stop to the Neil’s character r life.
    Seriously its aching me ????
    And i love the Arjuns_way of punishment, its installment wise punishment ?????
    Thank u so much Gauri. I’m waiting 4 the next Byeeeeeeeeee

  12. Dev


    |Registered Member

    Hey gauri… was an awesome fearful epi 4 jai…..?????
    tensed 1 wen arjun met dilip……????cuddling epi wen arjun hoped into radz balcony 2 sleep wid hr….?????dramabaz epi wen radz skipped brkfst n had it in office…..?????
    helping epi of mala as a co actor in radus plan ……..☺☺☺☺
    worried epi coz of sams change in ownership……????
    lovely epi of sias laughter n nandinis care……..????
    a friendly epi wen arjun tells 2 consult d doc dat ni8 itself……..????
    last bt not the least a bashing reception of nesam…….??????
    It was all in 1 epi……damn good 2 read n waiting 4 d nxt…..
    Keep smilng… u lots…….hugs….tc?????

  13. sammy

    Awesome gauri di is amazing out of the world ..poor jai..:-) 🙂 .radhika ..dilip..awesome ..just hope Neil is alright 🙂 🙂

  14. vsk

    Heyy diii …..
    Nice update… But I m not happy totally at the end…. I hope nothing goes wrong with niel…
    Thank you for writing this ff

    • Gauri

      Thanks darling 🙂 don’t worry nothing will happen to Neil 🙂 love you stay blessed 🙂

  15. Rosie

    Sorry for late comment dear…i thought I can’t come here…but don’t if I’ll be seen here for some days again…will miss u…one thing I want is dpo book…abha tc

    • Gauri

      Thanks Rosie 🙂 now why are you vanishing again 🙂 come back soon 🙂 loads of love stay blessed 🙂

  16. Chinmayi

    Its splendid!! As supriya ,even i hve imagined you..I can feel your goodness by reading your work…it shows your personality,i m glad to have known you 🙂
    plss dont let anything happen to NEIL..i know you wont,because in the very start of update you have given us a hint….
    Take care luv u 🙂

    • Gauri

      Thats so sweet of you Chinmayi 🙂 thanks a ton done 🙂 nothing will happen to Neil 🙂 stay blessed 🙂

  17. Jessie


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    Wats wrong in Neil.. has someone mixed something in his food… I loved Arjun’s nervousness.. hahaha and Arjun n sia was awesome.. the lil girl perfectly matches her violent mamu.. she wanna blow d school..happy abt d treatment jai is receiving.. dilip uncle soch lo jaldi… mala nRads drama.. wah.. this is d same emotional atayachar I carry so cared abt Neil oly..buddy is all happy now n wats this… is Ayan behind dis.. And Gauri sis.. my eyes always get glued with ur note section… I feel I will never forget this DPO in my life.. “a shield can sense d danger before it approaches” hats off.. Arjun asking Neil to meet toni8 was d thing.. did I miss something ..yesss.. Nandini..ah..the way 2 face ur life ..she is all adorable here.
    Now very much eager 4 ur nxt update with hoping tat Nothing goes bad for Neil.. TC n lotssa love.. I will read again.. this is a bright chappy.

    • Gauri

      Bingo Jessie you guessed it right 🙂 yup someone is trying to harm him reason are many you will know in next one 🙂 thanks for making DPO so special Jessie 🙂 nothing will happen to him 🙂 buckets of love for you stay blessed 🙂

  18. Raaga

    Di it was cery pretty episode loved it to the core :-)Di neil ko kuch math hone dena plzzz….I didn’t comment in mmz di as I m not well
    love u…:-)
    waiting for nxt one

    • Gauri

      Thanks Raaga darling 🙂 love you.. Neil ko kuch nahi hoga and get well soon 🙂 love you stay blessed

  19. rinki

    I loved SIa…even I wanted to blow my school :p loved Nandini in this….Gauri very good depiction of characters 🙂 love u

  20. subha

    mind blowing episode………….eagerly waiting next one………..pls pls update

  21. feby

    my dear lovely abha di…how r u???? ahh..its embarassing me di..iam commenting atr long time….i think first time aftr shifting….evn whn i talk wid tu frnds all time in hangouts and pestr thm and i update my self wid all mmz ff…i am feeling it soo awkward..well… admission will most probably will happn in trivandrum in govt seat for architecture may b i will shift to hostel soon…..and my life’s gonna turn hell now…..but iam fine..atlast my dreams r gonna get fulfilled…but 5 years…but i will msg u whnevr i will come for vacations…life;s changing soo fast…. its both khatta meetha for me…
    omg..for got to say of chappy…di..i read all ur updates b4 itself di..but didnt get time to comment…..well….it was awesome di….loved sia’s role here..and balcony scenes…remind me romeo juliet..shakespere’s….waiting for jai to get his trauma……
    love u di…and dont forget me if i dont comment….i am missing u ppl so badly tat i cant explain in words…….bye…tc…

    • Gauri

      Hi Feby dear 🙂 how are you ???? so happy to see your comment 🙂 Congrats my darling ! Architecture WooooooooooooW! I love that course …. I know you will rock and you will be be best in your batch 🙂 change is the only constant… change is the proof you are growing 🙂 so accept it love it and live it 🙂 no problem dear whenever you get time you can comment 🙂 loads of love and Stay blessed hope we meet some day 🙂 love u

      • feby

        iam fine di…. now a days sooo bz in native..i wonder how many relatives i hav..seems like the whole native area is filled of our relatives…i just know some ..means only the close ones..the ppl whom i hav seen these days i met thm in childhood and almost forgot thm..and these days whn i met these many ppl its like god…how will i remember these many ppl…and soo complicated relations..hahaha….only thng tat embarass me is the way i am being looked by jeans and sleeveless tops r as if irritating thm.. already i am using my t shirts at house coz many dont like it..and now evn my sleeveless kurti… iam gonna study somewhr else i may b having some of my choices it seems..yeah..but iam enjoying…got to see many thngs…. and u told correct..change is permenant…but di..dont forget me..plz…..i will msg u definitely….love u di..well…vahan(hostel) jaane ka aur ek month hae iam bit cool now..!! lol…

      • Gauri

        Baby I can never forget you 🙂 stay blessed mail me whenver you need me 🙂 love u 🙂

  22. Pari

    It was awesome di
    Radhika is just a drama queen ……and about neil i think its done by jai
    Isn’t my guess right???

  23. Aastha

    Hey are you ??
    I m back…. could not resist myself from opening TU…and am excited that you updated DPO….that day I got scoldings for reading in phone…

    Di Loved Arjun punishing Jai….Jai should also feel same terror like Radhika felt ………oh !!! Di Radhika’s acting skills and her mother also joined very funny
    Hope her father would agree soon…
    What happened to Neil ??

    Di are you on Fb wanted to talk to you badly….
    Love you Di ??

    • Gauri

      Thanks Aastha 🙂 hope your studies are going on good do well 🙂 glad to see you comment 🙂 stay blessed 🙂 and All the best 🙂 loads of love 🙂

  24. Lakshmi05


    |Registered Member

    Amazing update dear…Rads acting is cute..jai deserves this punishment…hope neil’ll be fine soon..luv

  25. sreee

    di….hope u r fine…pls take care of yourselves and dont forget updates can always wait but health cannot…so pls take care……i know i have to use this words again and again…but epi was just superb…amazing….i am falling in love with u again and again……how could u just write like this di….simply amazing…parts with sia werejust so cute and chweeeet…just loved it….muahhhh…tiger is just so cool and omg his ways to meet his…mad…nesam were just lovely…and jai the jerk…..waiting for the next one..take ur time…make it just amazing just like always…..muahhhh…love u loads…bear hugs…

    • Gauri

      Thanks a ton Sreee 🙂 thanks for the wishes dear 🙂 I think I can write and improve becauase I have support of sweet frnds like you 🙂 loads of love stay blessed 🙂

  26. pankh

    glad to see ur update gauri…loved it loved it loved it so very much..and regarding Neil I think Jai and that idiot Ayan is hurting him..waiting to know what the trio will do to save Neil..and hows ur injury dear..take proper rest..and dont stress yourself too much..loads of love

    • Gauri

      Thanks Pankh dear 🙂 yup you guessed it right 😉 you will know what trio will do 🙂 love you and happy weekend 🙂

  27. Rg2015


    |Registered Member

    Hi gauri how r u? Am doing gud. Glad to c DPO first thing in d morning. I loved arjun and rads chemistry here. Enjoyed d way Jai was punished. Radhika and her tantrums were a treat to read. Wow I had sooo much much reading abt arjun sneaking into rads room. Wow am going to enjoy this couple to d hilt.
    Now for few questions.
    Wats wrong with Neil
    Who did this to Neil? Will arjun save Neil?
    Wat will Jai do to rads?
    Will Jai hurt Sam?
    How will Sam nail Jai..
    Will arjun and rads go to US for a brief period? Say honeymoon or a pleasure trip?
    After how many episode will b ardhikas engagement or party?

    Wow pls do tell me as much as possible. Gauri I read from few of ur comments tat u fell down from d stairs and hurt ur back. I do really hope u r fine. Pls take care of ur health. R u in bed rest now? Did u get a chance to skip ur office ??, I mean u r forced to take a brk.. Hope ur parents r still with u.. Thanks gauri for updating this lovely piece despite ur accident. Hope ur pain has receded . U r a fantastic and stupendous writer. I really don’t want u to finish DPO. Am going to miss it … U r lovely gauri. Pls pls take care… Keep me posted .cheers.

    Pls pls tell me when will u b updating mmz tomorrow .????????.. Pls.. Pls pretty pls tell me d time gauri. I can barely wait…
    Waiting eagerly for mmz……..

    • Gauri

      Thanks a to Rg 🙂 yup I slipped …and slipped again while trying to get up … but after reading all the comments … i don’t think I will be thinking about the pain … love you now your answers 🙂 Neil made enemies … but he will be cured as he has amazing friends 🙂 Radhika will be injured by Jai… still 2 updates for that 🙂 no not Sam 🙂 you will see how Sam will nail Jai 🙂 yes they will go to US to spend time with there friends … 🙂 I am writing mmz will try and post by eveining tomorrow loads of love for such amazing words stay blessed 🙂 keep smiling

  28. Sathya


    |Registered Member

    Kamaal ka episode tha. You rocked it Gauri. :). Pls don’t give surprises and excitement every episode yar… i really what to comment. Marvellous, Fantabulous, Stupendous, Excellent, Fantastic and what else.. whatever the words are there for praising i am dedicating it to you…Keep rocking dear 🙂 🙂 🙂 Love you

    • Gauri

      Thanks a ton Sathya 🙂 love you darling I loved your new story actually I love all ….this one was very different … bothe bride and groom ran away… really want to read it pls update soon 🙂 love u

  29. Madhumita


    |Registered Member

    Finally, I completed reading all the chapters. I love the simplicity of your story. The way you handled each characters is simply awesome. Its a treat to read Ar-dhika in your story. The way you handle romance in both of your fics, I feel jealous after reading. How can you manage?? I am Mesmerized. Hats Off mam. Keep writing. Loads of Love.

  30. Fanficoholic


    |Registered Member

    Hey gauri di. Sorry fr my late comment. Bt excellent epi di. Awwwwwwww si was so cute. The dscription of sia is making me miss my childhood. I want to become a child again and do thise antics. Arjun and sia’s bonding is sooooooooooooooooooooooooooo nice. And finally that jai is being taught a lesson. I jst lived the slow pain arjun is giving to jai. Ppl like jai shd be dealt in such a way nly. And arjun as nervous before radhika’s dad????? That was sooo good. The man who brings nervousness in every one is nervous. Good.

    When is the nxt epi cmng di?


  31. priya

    Missed d episodes of d week..after reaching home first wrk I did is to check ur usual awesome..outstanding…nice punishment for jai.. I enjoyed while going through it..what happened to Neil?? Is d ilip going to take arjun any tests?? Waiting for d next update…when will u provide it??love u

    • Gauri

      Thanks a ton Priya 🙂 hope you had fun 🙂 Neil will be fine soon you will know more in next update 🙂 loads of love

  32. Roma

    Awesome, wowwww gauriiiiiiiiiiiii my sweeeeeetheart darling. …marvellous, outstanding, mind blowing episode. ..loved it from the bottom of my heart. …getting short of words to praise your amazingly awesoooooome talent. …u make smile, laugh, cry, sooth, enlightened with your flawless skills…hat’s off to you my sweeeeeetheart. ..I love you soooooooo muchhhhhh for sharing this unique amazing awesoooooome stories. …keep it up honeyyy. eagerly waiting for the next episode, love you loads. Muaaaaahhhhhh. . 🙂 ♡♡♡

  33. Manolove


    |Registered Member

    Friend when is the next update… Wednesday is crossed and almost Thursday tooo is done… Please update soooooooon 🙂 🙂

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