Manmarziyan- Destiny…Passion …Obsession – Chapter 41

Chapter 41
If you love someone set them free….If you can’t you never loved
Since the moment Radhika left Arjun couldn’t sleep…he laughed at the impossible that happened…he was deep down in love with her…he had drowned himself in work…he wanted to assign duties before he can go back and join her…but whatever he did she never left his mind…sometimes he would remember her…hanging on his back or curling against his chest…her cute antics to divert attention whenever he spoke something serious…they way she lighten the gravest situation with her single witty sentence…and above all her innocent brown eyes which reflected deep love for Arjun…Arjun smiled while working in his cabin…his POV; ‘Bunny please just don’t show your bravery around till I am with you…’

Mala had noticed since the day she came back….Radhika was different she was not the previous one she missed something dearly…Mishra’s were shifting from the govt apartment…Dilip had bought himself a nice flat for his later yrs…Mishra’ new residence was full of guests congratulating them on house warming ceremony…Sam and Neil both were present along with Prerna they had come to help Mala early morning….Sam had been watching Radhika for long…She caught hold of Radhika’s arm and dragged her to the balcony; ‘’Chashni are you mad…everyone can make out you are missing someone so badly’’
Radhika; ‘’Sammy he must be feeling very lonely…when I met him he hardly smiled…I am just worried’’
Sam smiled and hugged her from back; ‘’Oh my baby…don’t worry he will be here in no time…by the way your adopted dad is furious for you being so quite….go demand something from him…or trouble him and he will be happy’’ Radhika started laughing
Neil was talking to Diplip…Radhika came and snatched the laddoo from him which was about to go in his mouth…Neil smiled he was missing this Radhika; ‘’You are joining BS tomorrow I will pick you’’
Radhika; ‘’I am not a baby I can come on my own’’
Neil gave her a grave look…she very well knew the reason for his concern yet she behaved kiddish; ‘’I said I will pick you’’ Radhika gave Neil one look smiled and stuffed his mouth with a laddoo making others laugh….Dilip watched them and thought ‘thank heavens I never thought of this alliance…I would have spoiled a beautiful bond’ Neil tickled her and went back talking to Dilip
Sam smiled at them and then spoke to Prerna; ‘’Mom I have to shift my belongings …will go to Khanna residence before coming back’’ Prerna smiled and nodded… Khanna’s had not attended the house warming ceremony as ….they were didn’t wanted to face Sam

Sam pressed the door bell and Piyali answered…. She looked all opposite to her usual self…her clothes were not ironed …hair messy and lot of dark circles…Sam felt bad for her …she softly spoke; ‘’I won’t stay long…I am just here to take my things permanently’’ Piyali sadly looked at her and moved aside….Sam quietly moved to her room…and started packing…Sam was busy…when she heard her mother; ‘’Do you hate me Sam’’
Sam after a pause; ‘’No I don’t …but now it doesn’t matter…. …I got what I wanted…’’
Piyali; ‘’Question me Sam ask about my indifference to you…fight me….please’’ Piyali started crying Sam couldn’t control…she hugged her mother …Piyali cried vigorously ; ‘’I am sorry for everything…I know I was wrong but I just wanted to secure your future’’
Sam; ‘’lets not talk about it’’

Piyali; ‘’no today I will please listen to me or I will die….’’ Sam nodded…Piyali spoke in a shaky voice; ‘’Samrat is not jai’s father…he is my love child’’ Sam turned pale..but waited for Piyali to continue… “Samrat was my best friend he loved me…but I never reciprocated…after college he started BS alone and was doing very good…only he knew about my affair…even my parents were not aware of it …Samrat then got engaged to Nandini she was junior to us by 4-5 yrs…. I was happy for him….I too wanted to settle down with my love but he betrayed me…I lost myself completely…by the time I realized what had happened…I was pregnant with Jai…doctors refused abortion as my pregnancy had progressed….I stopped interacting…my parents never disowned me but they stopped talking to me….a week before his marriage Samrat visited my place….he understood something was wrong…I told him everything…and he as true friend…broke his alliance with Nandini and married me…to save my honour…and to give Jai a father…I prayed that I should have a son….I never wanted a daughter …because I didn’t wanted some other jerk to betray one more girl…

I was happy to have Jai…Samrat showered him with love ….after 5 yrs I was pregnant again…but I didn’t wanted the baby…I feared it being a girl…and I had a fear that Samrat might not love Jai the sameway once he had his own child…but Samrat didn’t agree and you were born….you were so beautiful…light brown hair ….pearl white skin…The first time I saw you a fear gripped me …..what if my daughter faces the same…what if Samrat stopped loving Jai…this thought got so deep rooted that I couldn’t part with it….I always felt Samrat loved you more as you were his own blood….I started giving Jai a little extra attention…but I couldn’t see what I was depriving you off…Sam I wanted you to be strong and not feeble like me…but you turned out be emotional like me…which I hated…Baby I was happy when Ayan asked for your hand…I wanted you get married before any mishap happens….but trust me I never thought he was this kind of man….I was just trying to secure you and Jai…I wanted him to do good in his life…this is why I wanted him back in Birdsong but my love made him stubborn or may be it was in his blood to hurt those who love him…I don’t know if this matters to you…but Sammy I am really sorry’’

Sam got up and hugged her mother; ‘’mom I love you….and I am glad you opened your heart to me… I just wanted you say that I am good…nothing more…Mom dad never differentiated…you misunderstood him….’’

Piyali; ‘’I know …he is the best man I have ever met….Sam I have more….This is Jai’s diary…I want you read it… and keep Radhika safe’’ Sam checked few pages…she felt like throwing up reading the nasty things Jai wrote about Radhika….Sam got up ran to the washroom and puked…she looked at her reflection in the mirror….her POV; ‘This means Neil is right…Bhai did tried molesting Radhika 4 yrs back…I should talk to Neil and Arjun.’ Sam came out hugged Piyali and promised she will come again…Sam had mixed emotions she got her mom but now there was disgust for Jai in her heart. After taking leave from Piyali Sam dialled Arjun…he should know all.

Hello dear friends …so here is the next one…do let me know how was it 🙂 this one might be little boring as I wrote in hurry and with a tired head…. tomorrow MMZ for sure loads of love 🙂 next one on Tuesday


This was the 5th time Arjun dialled her but she did not respond ….he was restless…he again picked up his phone but this time she was calling he quickly answered; ‘’Bunny I called you 5 times….where were you…I was so scared…don’t you dare ignore my calls’’

Radhika smiled and moved to the balcony ; ‘’I love you Tiger’’ 3 words and Arjun turned ice from being a volcano; ‘’Smart move….but please don’t do this again….I get worried’’

Radhika; ‘’Arjun we have shifted to a new place…and I was busy helping mom in attending the guests…my phone was in my room….sorry couldn’t hear it…now tell me why are you still up …its past midnight there

Arjun; ‘’because you are not in my arms….Bunny please take precautions…Hukum Singh has been following you since you stepped out of the airport….I am messaging you his no. please call him in case of emergency’’

Radhika; ‘’I don’t need Hukum Singh….I need you…’’ Arjun closed his eyes and smiled…’’I will be soon infront of you…tc’’ Radhika disconnected she couldn’t understand the reason of fear….she smiled and turned to go inside her room…but her legs stopped….without turning she realized she saw a familiar face …under her building watching her….Jai…. But being scared was not part of her life….she just walked in and locked the balcony…

Radhika badly wanted to visit RHYTHM….dance was her passion….after she finished helping Mala…Radhika changed…picked her bag and left for RHYTHM….once inside…she smiled looking at the room where she practiced…the stage where she performed…after changing quickly she started her practice….with some students…practicing semi-classical…for a dance play…Prerna watched her from outside and smiled…Radhika danced non-stop for 3-4 hrs and decided to leave as almost everyone had left …she went inside the green room…quickly freshened up and changed…she was keeping her things in her bag when she felt a shadow near the door…she went and checked but no one was there…but her mind was warning her…to move quickly …Radhika gripped the pepper spray hard….she quickly moved to the door…but was blocked by Jai…she moved back…’’What are you doing here’’

Jai; ‘’Stalking you….you left me no option….tell me why did you reject me…’’ he spoke as if he was in a deep pain…

Radhika; ‘’drop this mask Jai….no girl can love a guy…who misbehaves with her…I know it was you 4 yrs back…’’

Jai’s expression changed….and the face behind the mask was out he smiled like a devil; ‘’So you know….I don’t regret…I considered you mine then and also now’’

Radhika; ‘’I am not an object…now move out of my way’’

Jai; ‘’Not today…you will accept me by force or by love …I will finish this chapter today ‘’

Radhika frowned; ‘’Even if you finish today….you won’t be alive to write a new one…there is someone…who will rip you apart for eyeing me’’

Jai spoke with hate; ‘’Then he will watch me writing a new chapter with you in arms every day…’’ Jai moved forward and Radhika was ready…she hit him hard on his head by one of the props…he sat holding his head all surprised…she spayed his eyes he screamed…she turned the lights off accept one which was dim…she knew she had blinded him for good 15 min….’’Jai Khanna…you made me live in fear of dark for 4 years…today you will repent…and I don’t belong to your arms’’ She pulled out a wooden sword…which was used for dance plays….and started hitting him with all her strength…Jai screamed in pain….whenever he tried opening his eyes she would spray again… Radhika’s anger had doubled her strength…

Hukum Singh called Neil and told him that the guard was not allowing him to enter Rhythm and Radhika had still not left the building….Neil quickly drove to the RYTHYM and barged inside with Hukum Singh…the building was empty…he ran towards Radhika’s room and found her standing like Durga…with a wooden sword and Jai lying on floor…screaming in pain…He looked at her…took the sword…and pulled her in an embrace…Hukum Singh was murderous….he was a man in late 40s…he had worked as a Subedar in Army but after voluntary retirement…he became the head of security for Mehra’s who treated him like family….he knew Radhika was Arjun’s would be bride…he was ready to rip jai off….but Neil stopped ; ‘’Not today may be later…but the question is how did he enter without the id…he turned to Hukum Singh…Baba you throw him out…I will drop Radhika home….’’ Hukum Singh nodded…and dragged Jai out.

Neil hugged Radhika….’’Little one…you are sometimes too brave…I asked you to inform me about your whereabouts…why didn’t you tell me you were coming here’’

Radhika; ‘’you can’t leave all your work for me…plus I wanted to kill him for putting that fear in my head’’

Neil; ‘’But this can cause trouble…he is insane’’

Radhika; ‘’I am not scared’’ Neil just smiled…..but he knew Radhika’s bravery will bring more troubles….Hukum Singh meanwhile narrated Arjun the whole incident….Arjun was shaking with anger…he instructed Hukum Singh to be alert and disconnected; ‘’Bunny why?? ….you could have just sprayed his eyes… you never listen to me….I have to reach Mumbai now and soon…before something grave happens…’’ Arjun made a call and asked to book his tickets ASAP….

Radhika reached her home and stood under the shower to cool her mind…. She came out and changed into her night clothes…and sat on the bed…waiting for her phone to buzz…she was waiting for Arjun to scream on her…and she was dam right; ‘’Hi Tiger’’

Arjun screamed at the top of his voice; ‘’Will you ever listen to me….who asked you stay back at the studio beyond 6…why couldn’t you leave early….why didn’t you inform Neil…and why the hell you had to thrash him…you colud have spayed his eyes and left…I told you not to show your bravery …but you…!!! ‘’

Radhika; ‘’Are you done screaming at me…or more is there’’

Arjun; ‘’You are lucky I am not infront of you…today I would have punished you bad’’

Radhika replied angrily; ‘’Think of punishing me and I will leave you forever’’

Arjun froze; ‘’Can you leave me??? How can that thought enter your head…? Don’t you feel the pain’’

Radhika realized he was hurt; ‘’Sorry Tiger…no I can never leave you…I love you’’

Arjun; ‘’No you don’t….if you did you would have listened to me……but you didn’t…’’

Radhika made a face; ‘’will you stop screaming and say few words with love….I haven’t slept properly since I came back…I am dying to look at your face…but no…you just love to scold me… everyone loves to do that…no one cares….’’ She disconnected Arjun smiled…’Drama queen….’ He messaged her to come to skype…she quickly obliged but kept an angry face….Arjun smiled took a deep breath and kept watching the screen…Radhika got irritated; ‘’will you speak…?’’

Arjun; ‘’I miss you my doll…desperately want to hold you…I died a million times when Hukum Singh updated me what happened…please love….can you stay away till I am there’’

Radhika smiled at his pleading ; ‘’fine but come soon….I want to hug you’’ they wished each other and signed off

Neil was getting ready…Sam was watching him… he never dressed in a tuxedo….Neil smiled looking at Sam’s image in the mirror…’’Sammy am I looking that good’’

Sam; ‘’Yes you are….but what’s the occasion’’

Neil took her arm…and walked to Prerna’s room; ‘’Mom I want you and Sam to come with me…please’’ Prerna looked at Sam and they both agreed…Neil stopped his car infront of GLITZ office and took Prerna and Sam inside a big hall….there was a huge press conference…..Prerna blinked…as the cameras starting flashing on Neil…who smiled back at them…Sam looked at Neil….her thought; ‘why do you surprise me so much….who are you Neil’ Neil gestured his Mom to move forward and followed her with Sam…Neil took his place on the Dias…Neil started answering….and promised to make GLITZ country’s best fashion house…after the conference he took Prerna to his cabin and made her sit on his chair; ‘’So Mom….say something’’

Prerna; ‘’When did you grow so big…’’

Neil sat near his mom’s feet; ‘’your son is growing …just never did a show about that….but for this industry its required….and I need your blessings’’ Prerna hugged Neil tight she was so proud of him….Sam and Prerna took leave and Neil moved to board room… where Ayan was waiting for his sentence…

Neil smirked; ‘’you wanted to meet new owner of GLITZ here I am….’’ Neil loosen his tie…open top two buttons… took of his coat he sat across the table…with his legs on the table’’

Ayan; ‘’But Nandini Mehra bought those shares…’’

Neil; ‘’Nandini Mehra is my elder sister….she was representing me….leave that…I have 2 old friends who want to meet you…’’ Neil picked up the intercom; ‘’Send them in’’… Ayan lost all his blood when he saw Myra and Neera standing infront of him…he knew this was his end …. Neil walked towards Ayan and gave him a glass of water…’’you know why I ruined you…because you tried ruining my love….Samaira … now rot in jail…and now regarding your 10% remaining share…you accidently signed them to me…. on the pretext of getting a new contract….so you are broke…and my good friend Inspector Sharma is waiting for you…’’ Ayan was arrested on the statement of his previous two models…Neil gave away the proofs he had against Ayan….he promised Myra and Neera help in reviving their careers…they thanked them and left.

Next morning papers were filled with news about a rising business star…Neil Mehlotra ….Khanna’s were shocked … they considered Neil to be an ordinary boy who was just driving what he got from his father…but he turned exactly opposite….In their heart Piyali & Samrat were happy….Sam made a wise choice… Nandini smiled looking at Neil ‘s picture and softly said; ‘Proud of you my boy’

Jai was furious….a girl whom he thought to be delicate…turned out be a fire ….he couldn’t handle his insult…his eyes were still burning…he decided to hurt her …if he can’t have her then no one should

Neil picked Radhika from her flat…she was excited to join…BS…..she kept blabbering with Neil….and then suddenly stopped..Neil looked at her and spoke; ‘’What birdie…any problem’’

Radhika’; ‘’Will you help me convincing Papa on Arjun’’

Neil smiled ; ‘’What if I say no?’’

Radhika pressed her lips and gave a warning; ‘’then you will never have a second child…I will sleep between you and Sam….think about it… you know I can do that’’

Neil rolled his eyes; ‘’Second ??? what about the first’’

Radhika; ‘’That’s me….you only said that’’ Neil smiled ruffed her hair and said; ‘’I promise! …. you and Arjun will marry soon….now don’t jump on me’’ Radhika clapped…


Arjun was pacing on the airport…waiting for his boarding he just wanted this time to fly away….he was restless to see her…to hold her kiss her…since he had heard about Jai from
Sam ..he just wanted to break his neck for eyeing his love… his life his Radhika…no one was aware…about his arrival…he wanted to surprise his family and Radhika….as the announcement was made….Arjun walked toward his flight…his mind was made up to teach Jai a good lesson…Jai was not even aware that his nemesis had taken his first step towards him…yes Jai was about to face Radhika’s Arjun


Radhika left office …she decide not to trouble Neil….she was waiting at the bus stop when suddenly an arm pulled her back Radhika was shocked it was Hukum Singh….she looked at him; ‘’Baba what’s wrong’’

Hukum Singh; ‘’Someone was about to throw acid on you… look at the floor in the corner….’’ Radhika watched the fading tile of the bus stop with shocked eyes….Hukum Singh called someone and in a minute a SUV came and stopped infront of them…he quickly made Radhika sit and dialled Arjun…but his no. was out of reach….he left him a message and informed Neil…Neil scolded Radhika left Right centre for leaving without him….but Radhika was worried now…Arjun had kept Ario captive for days for attacking her…only god knew what Arjun will do of Jai….


Arjun is about to step in India…to keep his love safe….and to punish the one who wanted to hurt her…Sam had decided to keep Jai away from Radhika….and she will do this at any cost

Pre cap – still thinking

Credit to: Gauri


  1. Sammy


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    Omg god Neil and radhika are the best persons of your ff .. oh god second child thing …now I will marry Neil ..he will have 2 Sammy …seriously gauri di you are my radhika and iam your tiger ….I will abduct you and we both will fly on Pluto ….and u keep writing your ff from there and iam just staring you …gauri di see iam flirting with you…..amazing update and di make arjun and jai ..their meet a epic .Iam your jhalli pataka 🙂 🙂

    • Gauri

      OMG Sammy u are flirting with me I am all blushing 🙂 pluto… :0 we both will freeze there 😀 I will make their meet epic 🙂 thanks for the amazing comment 🙂 loads of love stay blessed 🙂

  2. Nita


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    Nice one di….neil and rads conversation is awesome….. Waiting for arjun to break jai bones

  3. shiva

    lovely dear eagerly waiting for arjun to step in india and radhikas courage was too gud And jai deserved everythin.But i loved Neil today u knw intelligent ppl dont show instead they shut others mouth with their action when the right time comes thats what exactly he did,
    Thank u 4 such a beautiful update.

  4. Sathya


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    Excellent…. Fantabulous… Gauri. WHT can I say for this lovely episodes. Very very well written. No can touch you the way u narrated. I am speechless dear. Rocking one… Keep going dear ???

  5. priya

    2 updates wow..thank you very much love u to moon…as usual fantastic episodes…radhika’s bravery loved it…piyali confession even..finally she realised..but suddenly piyali changed ..y?? Jai deserve even more punishment???arjun is going to bang him na?? Did prerna accepted sam??finally sam realised abt jai??hope she will take part in getting him what he deserve??
    Finally surprised by second one..ur outstanding..but will miss ur update Tues day as going to a vacation..? love u a lot??

    • Gauri

      Thanks a ton Priya 🙂 now your answers sweety 🙂 when u lose something….you realize its worth … same is with Piyali… Jai’s rudeness…and Sam’s complete detachment made her realize her worth …Jai will be punished 🙂 yup Arjun will make him swing like a pendulum 🙂 yes sam will side with Radhika 🙂 no problem I will share you the link 🙂 stay blessed 🙂 love you

  6. RituM


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    OMG……Just thinking about this and here you are….

    piualli…..stupid excuse but…..ok…we accept it…but still i hate her

    sam….she puked…..ahem ahem……and she become smart after marrying neil

    prerna…awwww… a proud mom…

    arjun….hudd hudd dabang…..

    jai….as**le….seriously i really enjoy the scene when radhika turn his bums redd

    radhika….oh god….what an amazing threat to neil…..second child….ohhhhhi agreed she can do any thing……

  7. Rosie

    Crap jai….punish him bad abha..else I will kill him…what kind of creature I don’t know…he doesn’t have a little respect towards himself also…atleast idiot can’t think about his prestige…when a girl didn’t show any interest on him,he should stop….oh god…I’ll be mad…yuck…

    Btw u got what u want??? I wish ur success n then grand party for me….aweeee…dreamy?

    • Gauri

      Thanks Rosie 🙂 don’t worry Jai will be punished and bad 🙂 I am trying the day I get my fav one I will share with first 🙂 love you dear 🙂 bless to have you

  8. Naaga


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    Thank u sooooo much Gauri ma. Jai & radhu portion semmma ???????
    Neil & radhu portion ws soooo funny ?????
    Nice twist ma & really samrat is a Great Man ?
    Im waiting for Arjuns Arrival. Pls post soon.

  9. Joona


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    Neil and radhika rocked it…I am eagerly waiting for Arjun and jay’s meeting…
    Today’s episode was awesome….
    Loved it di….

  10. amita singh

    awesome,fantabulous gauri di……………….this one is also gud like previous all superb I want next part full of romantic moments of both couples plz di it’s request

  11. dipika

    Gauri darling this epi left me shocked, numb,furious,fidget n more…all the human feelings…i have never thought in my dreams that Piyali hav this much dangerous past…just to save a daughter through her way is not right she made her own son mad…..n sam expression cud imagine how jai had gone mad…n Rads dirga awatar…what a courage she shown..really.. i never expected she will thrash jai like this..n Neil’s image as rising business man..omg..superb….Arjun anxiety to meet rads was brilliantly penned… Jai’s acid attack shows how coward he is…i want to slap hard him…now rads got aware how jai is dangerous n arjun fear is valid for her….you r amazing..n i don’t tired saying it every time.i always lost in ur story n forget abt what happening around have magic in your hand..they r just meant to write

    tightest hug for you…loadssssss n loadszzzzz of love for you…muhhhaa..

    • Gauri

      Thanks a ton Dipika 🙂 a big hug for you 🙂 sometimes we chose a wrong path to do right but we forget wrong can only take us to wrong and not to right 🙂 Neil is some one who never shows off 🙂 thanks for the lovely comment and encouraging me 🙂 loads of love and million hugs for you stay blessed 🙂

  12. dipika

    a daughter through her way is not right she made her own son mad…..n sam expression cud imagine how jai had gone mad…n Rads dirga awatar…what a courage she shown..really.. i never expected she will thrash jai like this..n Neil’s image as rising business man..omg..superb….Arjun anxiety to meet rads was brilliantly penned… Jai’s acid attack shows how coward he is…i want to slap hard him…now rads got aware how jai is dangerous n arjun fear is valid for her….you r amazing..n i don’t tired saying it every time.i always lost in ur story n forget abt what happening around have magic in your hand..they r just meant to write

    tightest hug for you…loadssssss n loadszzzzz of love for you…muhhhaa..

  13. Brin


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    Outstanding episode, I applaud you for bringing the issue of the acid attack. I want Arjun to teach Jai a big lesson. Waiting for the next episode and Gauri you nail it, well done. 🙂

  14. roshini

    Fantastic Gauri 🙂 if this what u call boring then I guess best one in your words would make me fly 🙂 keep it going

  15. Hope

    Plz don’t let any danger near my Rads…. Jai..get readz to face the ultimate Arjun….
    Di… Long tym no see…naa.. Its just i cmnted and a error occured.. Hws ur worklyf? My clg lyf is awesome… Now..
    Waiting 4 nxt u

    • Gauri

      Thanks Hope 🙂 enjoy your collg life to the max these are really wonderful days 🙂 stay blessed 🙂 love u

  16. Fanficoholic


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    Whoaaaaaaaaaaaaa amazing amazing amzingggggggg hw can u write such wonderful episodes di??????? And di loved radika’s braveryyy. And piyali’s confession jst made me cry. Radhika and arjun sizzled as usual. I am eagerly waiting fr the nxt epi. I think u knw ki the nxt epi is the most awaited episode. I want ti see arjun teaching radhika a lesson. I wll mis u sooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo much till tue di.

    Love you???????????

    • Gauri

      Thanks Dear 🙂 can I know you name 🙂 if you don’t mind …yes I knw next one is the most awaited … I will try and make it good 🙂 fingers crossed 🙂 thanks dear will be posting mmz tomorrow so u have to miss me a day less 🙂 loads of love stay blessed 🙂

      • Fanficoholic


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        Di actually i am registered so i thought tu wld send me a notification if u replied. Bt i did nt get one. And i cld nt criss check it until tday as i had sme wrks during the weekend. And di my name is vaishnavi. U can me call me tat r vaishu r anything else. And whn wll u post the nxt epi di?

  17. Ritu

    amazing dr..Jai is such a cheap man but m glad hukum singh saved her…really eager to know what will Arjun do with Jai..loved it to the core..and Piyali she was not completely right but her concern was genuine..waiting for nxt.

  18. natasha

    gauri di today i dnt have wrds to describe ur epi
    u nailed it as usaual i can say ony one wrd for writing skills its fantastic i cant say anyting more than tat di
    luv u tc muah

  19. Devi

    Gauri…no words.. u always surprisr me with ur each updates…always make me look fr words to praise u…bt i knw no words r enuff… so just one word fr tis epi…mindblowing…. u make me eagerly wait fr ur next epi wenevr i finish reading ur ff…u hav ta magic of attractin ur readers… lots love tv…

  20. suga

    Again n again same dialogue am tired of using all those words….now ditto of all previous comments 😀 😀 I tot jai ll attack but never expected rads reaction am all smiling after DAT scene 😀 😀 😀 arjun n right from his side its totally true never over mess with guys dats too dangerous……superbbbbbbbb darling 😀 as usual u r d best 😀 😀 love uuuu n hugs n kisses 😀 😀 😀

  21. Dev


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    Omg gauri…….wat an epi…..n y u accuse dat it wud b boring??? Actually it was osm….
    .lovd d selflessness of neil wen he said he is growing n dosnt wanna show off….n d confession was a bit off n dat 2 frm piyali…felt said n due 2 hr insecurities jai was mislead n sam dint get hr required love…..
    Loved d way radz fought jai….n nc use of pepperspray…….now she shud b careful due 2 d second attack as well as d injured snake jai….bt im damn sure dat arjun will definetely teach a nc lesson 2 jai…..n im waiting 4 d punishment hes gonna giv…hihihiii……
    N superb dialogue by radz dat she vl sleep in btwn nesam…..hahaha….dat was on spot……n nc blackmail 4 neil dus he wud support ardika relation…even though he wud definetely do it…
    Haa feeling happy 2 wri8 a long comment….sometimes projects….cultural practice…n lately my small acci n im happy dat i cud type …..hihihi….
    Love u in tones n loads……..hugs in 100of baskets……n 1000 roses 4 my cutie pie sis……muahhhh????????

    • Gauri

      Hey Dev thanks a ton for this long comment 🙂 hope you are doing fine and not hurt much by the accident 🙂 Arjun’s punishment will be bad… wait for the next one take care stay blessed 🙂 1000 roses 😀 u can see my smile 🙂 happy weekend

  22. Roma

    Gauriiiiiiiiiiiii, gauriiiiiiiiiiiii, gauriiiiiiiiiiiii. ….muaaaaahhhhhh… lovely darling….what n amazingly awesoooooome, marvellous, outstanding, mind blowing episodes. … I’m just spellbound n overwhelmed. ..can’t control my happiness n excitement after reading this fantabulous episodes. ..piyali’s confession was very heart melting n it also showed samrats good character as he left his own love nandini for saving dignity of piyali…very lovely scene…..also jai’s real face came in front of sam…nice… .rads beaten jai black n blue…become durga/kali to ruin him for torturing her….wowww. .loved it soooooooo muchhhhhh. ..neil owns glitz now…marvellous….rads warning to neil for not letting him second child n sleep in middle of nesam if he won’t convince dilip for arjun…lol…was hilaaaaaaarious….I was laughing like hell. ..rads n her techniques.. muaaaaahhhhhh. …hukum Singh was good, saved rads from acid attack… raneil bonding very very lovelyyyyyy…..arjun crossing oceans for rads.. .finally wait will be over soon…can’t control myself to see jai’s broken face n boned by arjun..maybe way more miserable state of jai , who knows what will arjun do to jai for eyeing his dancing swan, his ladylove………gauriiiiiiiiiiiii my sweeeeeet darling, you’re the best…keeping your promises n bringing the best of the best updates for us to entertain n give us extreme pleasure n satisfaction… you soooooooo muchhhhhh my sweeeeeethearttttt. …be like this always n forever….keep it up honeyyy. ..anxiously waitingggggg for the next episode, love you loads….lotssssss of hugsssssss n kissesssss … stay blessed n healthy. …take care sweetheart. ..byeeee 🙂 😉 😀 ♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡

    • Gauri

      Thanks my lovely frind 🙂 Roma you are just amazing 🙂 thanks for lifiting my spirits up 🙂 stay blessed 🙂 love you 🙂

  23. Rg2015


    |Registered Member

    Hi gauri missed ur update yaar. Finally got around to reading it. Today’s episode had loads of surprises. Right frm rads treatment of Jai. To piyalis confession. Both were executed pretty well. Neils cover to was blown . I was Glad to c so many things today. Jai deserved his treatment . Serves him right. Piyalis partiality is going to make her pay. And d best part is arjuns return. So it’s going to b a surprise wow. I can barely wait. Now for a few questions.
    Wat will arjun do to Jai?
    Will Jai succeed in hurting rads?
    Will dilip and arjun meet ? Wat will b dilips reaction?
    How is rads and arjun going to meet as they r not inUS but in India. How will they sneak into each other’s bedrooms????
    When is rads and arjuns marriage?
    Wat will happen to Jai?
    Will truth abt samrat b known to all?
    When will rads and Nandini meet?
    Will Jai again try to stop ardhikas marriage?

    Well gauri am stopping my barrage of questions here. You gave me a glorious episode today. Though ardhika were separate so many revelations were grt. Rads revenge on Jai was justified . Dilip moving into new house was a surprise element. I enjoyed ardhikas bantering. I did definitely miss their chemistry however.
    Gauri u r beautiful writer with a fabulous imagination which paves way for an enchanting , amusing, beautiful wonderful ,romantic and cheerful story. I Guess each of ur stories r unique in its own way with its own sweet and spicy flavour. I loved all d emotion u thoroughly portrayed. It was a joy getting to read this one. And it is a pleasure to know u through this medium. May u have grt life ahead of u.

    Waiting eagerly for mmz. If possible a double damaka for mmz sometime this week.

    • Gauri

      Thanks a ton RG 🙂 love you muhaaaaaaaaaaa 🙂 now ur answers … Arjun’s punishment you will have to wait 🙂 Jai will hurt her 🙂 yes they will meet soon 🙂 Dilip will give him a chance 🙂 I have a surprise regarding that…Arjun will recieve a set of rules from Nandini as she cares about Radhika’s reputation 🙂 you will knw what will happen to Jai 🙂 Samrat’s truth yes will disclose that in next 🙂 Rads Nandini will meet next 🙂 till that time Jai will be out of the picture 🙂 hope you liked my answers stay blessed 🙂 and thanks for supporting me 😀

  24. Gianna


    |Registered Member

    This chapter left me with mixed emotions, Piyali I understand her and happy with the effort she made to mend her relationship with Sam. Neil is just rocking and I love that, rads threatening about sec child lol. Am expecting a severe punishment for Jai, and I liked hukum Singh too. Loved the chapter, Keep rocking Gauri. Love u ???

  25. KK

    Hello Gauri. I am biggest fan of your Writing. from start to end. either is about narrating or detailing of the story.I was not following your story at the first. i picked from from last three episode. but i loved your story so much it made me go back all the way to beginning. it took me about 4-5 hours to find your this FF by page to page. so thank you.
    And yes this is my first time for commenting on yours. and in the future if don’t comment does not mean i don’t follow. sometime its depend on time. but i do read. i think your simply great and you also can be great scriptwriter and/or story in future. in short your are a good writer. you make your reader follow your story. Great..Great..Great…
    Good going…loved the today’s episode.

  26. VSK

    whoaa what an update yarrr
    really awesome….
    thanx yarrr for.writting such a beautiful ff
    luvvv uhhh soooo muucchhh
    😉 😛 :-*

  27. Supriya

    Hey glycerin…. Did I made you wait for too long kya???….sorry for late comment promise won’t do this again…….how dare you call this masterpiece boring?…. This z the best out of the box nd if you r calling this boring I m wondering what’s the definition of best in your dictionary….. Srsly you are crazy di…..but you r not the only one who z crazy I m crazy abt you……now let’s come to the epi… know I loved it….if I could I would have invented new words to praise you…..but darling today no word z deserving enough to praise you……the way you portrayed Radhika today that was incredible….. Srsly I think she was possessed by maa durga…..but this jai how can anyone be so cheap di…….di these people don’t spoil a girl’s face they destroy her whole life by throwing acid on her…..any punishment in this whole universe z not enough for ppl like jai…. I know arjun will punish him bad but still such ppl don’t have any right to live….they shud be hanged to death or shud be given the most painful death ever…..I have a suggestion…. They shud be left in jungle among the wild animals nd let that animals feast on them….then they will understand that girl’s nd her family ka pain….di I didn’t like piyali ka reason for depriving Sam of love and affection…. I still hate her that’s final……I love you Sam you have a largeheart…..Neil I can’t flirt with him becoz he z yours….but one last time…I will whistle for him…..arjun my angry bird srsly the way he screamed at her on phone was just mind blowing….. Omg he would have punished her I didn’t like that……
    Now my questions……
    1)will jai hurt radhika more?…
    2)what drama radhika z going to do to make dilip accept arjun?….
    3)will piyali won’t let arjun punish jai?…
    4)when will aradhika get married?….
    5)when will nandu nd sid get married?…
    6)will they marry before aradhika?….
    7)when will radhika meet nandu?….
    8)will arjun vent all his hatred he has for khannas in next episode?….
    9)will jai change nd ask for forgiveness?…
    10)z the end near?….
    Hey one more thing I loved the way radhika called herself Neil’s first child….omg that bond z fantastic… well I have a adopted mom but m yet to have a adopted dad…..hope I find my adopted dad soon?you know di I want someone like arjun who will always take care of me no matter what z the situation….. You toh know I always need someone to correct me,my decision… Sometimes m too harsh on people though I don’t like this trait of my personality I can’t do much abt it….chalo enough of my blabbering… Oh god y z this Tuesday so far…..will eagerly wait for your next update…. Love you di…muaaah…. Tc??????????????????????????????????????????

    • Gauri

      Thanks Supriya 🙂 Jai will hurt her and big one 🙂 drama I can’t tell u in one line so wait 🙂 Piyali won’t be able to save him 🙂 Aradhika marriage will be end of DPO 🙂 nandu and sid will marry soon 🙂 next update Radhika will meet Arjun 🙂 no …no hatred you will know why 🙂 Jai change I havent thought and end is near 🙂 stay blessed 🙂 love u to moon and back 🙂

  28. S.v


    |Registered Member

    Didi sry sry sry.

    Office work di couldn’t even thinking of getting some free time. Finally finished them and now i’m jumping. U r a rockstar seriously. A heart beat raising episode loved it. Radhika and Arjun missing each other and Piyali’s truth revalition was heart touching and the reason for her coldness towards Sam was now revealed and di jai yuck . Why is he falling as a prey for Arjun by trying to hurt Radhika. And acid i doubt does he really know the meaning of Love or is he doing it in the name of love gosh. Such a disguisting character he is Hate him to the core. So my eagerness is gonna fulfilled in the next part i guess. Arjun lands in India already Neil was total furious and now hukum bha bha bi hai. Picture abhi bakki hai.

    Di make a grand masti of that. I wanna enjoy that to the core. Even it is serious i’ll enjoy thats for sure. I want to write more but nothing is coming as u made me dumbstruck. Love you di and your words and bear my hugs and infinite kisses too. Love you lods.

    • Gauri

      Hey my cutie pie no need for sorry 🙂 I understand life can be busy 🙂 1000 hugs for you and bucket full of kisses 🙂 stay blessed and enjoy ur weekend 🙂 love u 🙂 stay blessed

  29. Dhara


    |Registered Member

    Gauri this was outstanding fabulous marvelous fantastic n all ? just loved radhika’s duraga avatar. It was much needed for her.

  30. Aastha

    Its superb di……………no wrds to express my feelings and applaud you………….never tot Jai wud do such a thing………..Piyali’s statement was shocking……………Samrat is a good man………………….

  31. Raaga

    Di it was cute 🙂 as alwayz…
    radz bravery , first child & neil’s tycoon entry to in total evrythn….
    di I know my comment s somewhat lifeless comment bcuz I m gonna miss DpO as it s endin :'(
    Di I know I m askin more ..plz do it 50 episodes di…if possible…let last b aradhika and nesam having baby …it just my request di sorry if u felt bad

  32. Anvee

    Seriously no second child…. I rolled over my bed yaar seriously….!!!!darling you are rocking…. love you as always and bless you with all my heart and soul buddy…. Finally thank you….

  33. Redshadow

    Hey just wondering, this story ia being published on wattpad are you, Yourself doing it or is it being done with yoy permission ot is someone copying ur work.
    The book on wattpad has tge same name.

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