Manmarziyan- Destiny…Passion …Obsession – Chapter 40

Hello all my lovely friends….here is the next chapter 🙂 hope you will like it 🙂 do let me know hw was it as you comments matter the most…next on on Friday as I really need time to write 🙂 🙂 🙂 enjoy the ride 🙂 Bless you all

Chapter 40

Destiny-When two people are meant to be together they are just meant to be….come what may…if I like the couple….I remove the obstacles myself

Sam was nervous on her way to her new home….Neil held her hand and gently squeezed it…once they reached Neil’s house…Sam’s throat went dry she felt…her heart would burst out of her chest..Neil extended his arm…Sam smiled and moved forward with him….Prerna answered but turned away…Neil called her out; ‘’Mom…won’t you welcome us’’

Prerna; ‘’Did you remember me when you got married…now why all this drama’’ Prerna was talking in a high pitch…her annoyance was clear

Neil smiled walked forward and hugged his mom from behind ; ‘’you always said that I have been a good son…then please forgive this one mistake of mine…Mom I had to take this decision …I will tell you everything…but please don’t just turn away’’

Prerna was emotional…she turned around and hugged Neil…she welcomes Neil and Sam with proper ritual…but made her mind clear; ‘’I have accepted this marriage …but complete acceptance will take time…don’t expect to be all normal….I need time…’’

Sam slowly moved forward; ‘’Aunty…I will try to match your expectation’’

Prerna; ‘’Sam…I am not a MIL from some soap opera.….I am a mother who had some dreams regarding her son….it will take time…right now both of you go and rest ‘’ Prerna left them…

Neil took Sam to his room Sam was still nervous …’’Sammy calm down…I am with you now rest for some time…I have meet my lawyer for GLITZ will nail Ayan completely’’

Sam ; ‘’I am fine Neil …you go …’’ Neil kissed her fore head and left


Arjun opened his eyes and stretched his arms …Radhika was not there…he turned around she was busy searching something in his cupboard….she was wearing his sweat shirt over her shorts which hid her short and this thin frame…she looked like a cute bird….hopping from one place to another… Arjun smiled ; ‘’Bunny what are looking for’’

Radhika; ‘’one of your old t-shirt which I can take with me…I will sleep in that…so that I can feel you around’’

Arjun was emotional; ‘’come to me love….please’’ Radhika hopped jumped and went to him …Arjun pulled her over his body hugging her . ‘’15 days without you will kill me…and tell me what should I take from you that I can feel your presence around me…’’ Radhika thought for a moment pulled her chain out and took her pendent with initial R…she kept it on his palm….keep this…I will be around…’’ Radhika smiled …but her eyes had started watering …Arjun hugged her tightly…’’I love you Bunny…just you and only you’’

Radhika; ‘’Tiger not more than 15 days….I will kill you if you made me wait for a single day more than 15 dyas…meanwhile I will start my drama infront of my parents…I have to prepare them for you…so that we get married soon’’ Radhika pecked his forehead…Arjun locked her in his arms…this one month he wanted to relive all the moments with her…and he had more to surprise her.


Mala Dilip were waiting for one of Dilip’s friends family Dilip was interested in getting Radhika married to his son but there was surprise in store for Mishra family….Rana had updated Nandini on prospective groom’s visit at Radhika’s family….Nandini decided to be a surprise guest….Arnav wanted Nandini to wait for Arjun to come and then they could talk….but Nandini wanted only her brother’s happiness and she would go any extent for that

Dilip and Mala were conversing with their guests when they heard the door bell….Mala answered the door but was shocked to find Nandini smiling at her….Mala was some where happy to find Nandini….as Nandini walked in Dilip was shocked to find her and his gusts were at awe…after all she was Nandini Mehra…Nandini smiled at the affect of her presence…. ‘’How are you Dilip ji’’

Dilip; ‘’Good Nandini …please have a seat…and meet my friend…we were discussing our children alliance’’

Nandini; ‘’Oh…sorry I came at the wrong time…actually even I came here to talk about Radhika and Arjun’s alliance’’ Dilip’s friend’s family suddenly went into shock Nandini Mehra had selected Radhika for her brother….and the look Nandini gave them was a kind of silent warning….Nandini after a friendly conversation left….Dilip’s frind asked Dilip for sometime to take a final decision….but Dilip knew they will never come back with a yes…

Nandini smiled walked to her car in a victorious way and left with Rana walking behind her…but Nandini was also about to get a happy surprise….Nandini walked into Mehra mansion which was into a total chaos…she looked around to understand but smiled at the reason of chaos….Sia was running around and all the caretakers in Mehra Mansion were playing with her on Arnav’s order who himself was enjoying watching the little thunder storm with Sid…Nandini caught hold of running Sia and lifted her up…she walked to Arnav and

Sid….she made Sia sit in her lap…’’How are you Sid’’

Sid; ‘’very Good…after meeting you…well I have a unique idea of making Sia accept you….I will be out of station for a month usually I take her with me…but it resulted in loss for her school…so I am leaving her with you….Sia you know who is she’’

Sia gave a cute dimpled smile’; ‘’Mom’’ That one word gave Nandini immense happiness…she gave Sia a loving peck; ‘’Yes baby now Sia will stay with her Mom’’

Sai; ‘’will sleep with you ……like my friends do’’

Nandini; ‘’Yes…we will play together, study together and lot more’’

Sia; ‘’will you tell me stories…will come to pick me from school’’

Nandini; ‘’Yes…I will do all…now what do you want to do’’

Sia; ‘’Play…’’ Sia dragged Nandini…She smiled widely and took Sia to the garden area.

Arnav watched Nandini’s happiness and gave a thumbs up to Sid….Sid left after sometime and Sia cried watching her father go…nandini took sometime but was able to pacify her.


Arjun took Radhika to the same store where they did Sam’s shopping…the manager greeted him….Arjun asked to call all the staff….he gestured a guy to come forward…he pulled
Radhika to him ..he turned to the guy; ‘’Do you know who am I’’

Sales guy; ‘’Owner of this place’’

Arjun smirked ; ‘’And who is she??….you forgot…let me remind you…She is the same girl who looked hot to you that day in silver dress…right….she is my would be wife…and no one dares to eye what’s mine….you know what can do with you’’

Sales guy; ‘’I am sorry Sir’’ Arjun was about to reprimand him more but Radhika held him….Arjun; ‘’Next time I will not give you a time for sorry…I will finish your career’’ Arjun left with Radhika…she smiled looking at him…’’you will fight everyone who eyes me right’’

Arjun; ‘’fight…??? I will kill them’’

Radhika; ‘’Tiger….its you Bday tomorrow….tell me what you want….’’

Arjun; ‘’Wear that same silver sari…but when we are alone’’

Radhika; ‘’But I need to buy that then lets go back’’

Arjun; ‘’I bought that the same day…you were happily seducing me that day…now I dare you do that when we are alone….who will save you now’’

Radhika; ‘’Do you know why am I with you? Just because I know come what may…you will not hurt me….and who the hell want to be safe around you ’’ Arjun laughed…’’ you are the best gift of my life… I couldn’t have asked for more.’’

Arjun’s gang prepared to surprise him….they decorated his apartment…Radhika baked the cake one of the flavour she learned from Aliza…Arjun came back from his work…as he unlocked the door he was greeted with whistles spray…..hugs and then Bday bumps…Arjun rubbed his back where he was kicked by his friends….but he liked it….as Arjun cut the cake….his face for smeared with cream….he understood…this was Radhika’s idea…as none of his friends ever dared this….Arjun decided to handle her later…but hugged all his friends one by one…painting their faces and dresses…at the end he chased Radhika…and rubbed his cheek on hers…;’’Bunny cake of awesome…but I bet you will taste more sweet’’ Radhika just rolled her eyes after enjoying his friends left leaving Radhika alone with Arjun…they knew he was stressed about Radhika leaving for India…after they left Arjun hugged Radhika; ‘’Thanks Bunny…for all this…I became 10 again’’

Radhika; ‘’So its past mid night and good kids should be in bed….now since you are 10 again….you should be tugged to bed’’

Arjun plastered her body to his and huskily spoke; ‘’ How about you make me sleep’’ Radhika blushed …she brought him a wrapped box….Arjun opened it it had a cubic with their 3d picture …he smiled and kissed the gift…’’Now bunny I have kept the dress in the room…go and get ready…I am waiting’’ Radhika came dressed out in the same silver saree…with backless top…and hair lose …she posed infront of him like a model without any inhibition….Arjun smiled at her cute antics…he circled her and moved her hair to front….Arjun brushed his fingers on her exposed back…. Radhika shivered ….Arjun turned her around…holding her from her waist; ‘’you know what’s going in my head right now…are you scared’’

Radhika cupped his face; ‘’No you don’t scare me…but you should be scared about yourself….as even I can get dangerous…you look mouth watering’’ Arjun smiled and moved his palm from her shoulder to her fingers brushing her skin all along….he rolled her out and then in plastering her back to his from….kissing her shoulder and neck and deeply her back…’’Bunny move in with me…its just 20 days for you to leave’’

Radhika; ‘’Arjun…its 20 days with Anna and others too…I won’t be able to meet them again…’’ She was emotional

Arjun; ‘’Hey my love….why won’t you meet them???…I will bring you here whenever I travel…Bunny promise me you won’t show your bravery around…and you will take precautions’’

Radhika; ‘’You started Again!!!….guess my attire didn’t seduce you enough… but this will’’ She pulled him and kissed him tight…making Arjun smile…he lifted her up and placed her on the bed…

Radhika; ‘’what no sleeping today…its your bday…I want to talk to you whole night’’

Arjun; ‘’I have something for you’’ Arjun placed a big diamond ring on Radhika’s ring finger….’’Now you are officially mine’’

Radhika looked at the ring all surprised ; ‘’We decided to do infront of the world…’’

Arjun; ‘’That’s for the world…for us I did it today…Are you not happy’’ Radhika smiled ; ‘’you are crazy Tiger and I love your madness’’ Arjun kissed her forehead eyes…nose lips…neck…’’do you know how madly I want you right now’’ Radhika ‘’ exactly the way I want you’’ She just hugged him…if he would have asked…she would have given herself to him…but he wanted to marry her…this relationship was his world…Arjun was worried about Jai…but he didn’t knew the girl sleeping in his arms…was something else.


Prerna asked Sam to visit her parents …Sam was hesitant but even she wanted to bridge the gap….Sam walked through the garden … the door was answered by the Khanna family’s old maid… she was so happy to see Sam..she just hugged her….Sam responded lovingly ….but loud voices from inside distracted her … Sam looked at the old lady in questioning manner…the old lady sadly bowed her head down…Sam walked towards the room of her parents ….Samrat and Piyali were screaming at each other ….Samrat; ‘’whatever is happening is your mistake’’

Piyali; ‘’My mistake….why aren’t you responsible???’’

Samrat; ‘’No ….I told you no. of times…not to full fill all demands of Jai…now he has completely stubborn….his whole cupboard is full of Radhika’s pictures….he has written weird things he want to do….your son is sick…’’

Piyali; ‘’this is because his love was never answered…he was thrown out of his own company…and his own father despises him’’

Samrat; ‘’No This is because … he could never differentiate between right and wrong….I wish you would have given 10% of your attention to Sam…she would have made us proud’’

Piyali laughed ; ‘’Like she did now by marrying without our consent….she was never good at anything’’

Samrat; ‘’Tell me Piyali…why were you always so indifferent to her…because you never wanted a second child…and I forced to have it’’

Before Piyali could answer Sam asked; ‘’So its true you never wanted me….I think that would have been better’’

Piyali; ‘’Even I think same…after the shame you brought to us….you couldn’t respect my one wish ’’

All the anger in Sam came out like a molten Lava; ‘’I think you would have been extremely proud when your so called choice Ayan Raizda would have made your daughter a high society escort…that would have made you happy…am I right Mrs Piyali Khanna’’ Samrat and Piyali were too shocked to react….Samrat moved forward … but Sam gestured him to stop….she was very angry….’’You know what my heart pained when I was marrying Neil because my family was not around and I felt I was hurting you…but guess that was the best decision I took…because I never had a family’’ Sam turned her back to leave but stopped…’’and Mrs Khanna…warn your son to stay away from Radhika…this time it could be dangerous for him…take this as my last favour’’ Sam left khanna residence in tears…without looking back….she quickly drove to the place where she was accepted and loved….Sam kept on pressing the door bell….Mala answered….Sam without a word hugged Mala…Mala rubbed Sam’s back who was inconsolable…..’’Aunty I missed you’’ Mala held her tightly to calm her down


Only one day was remaining for Radhika to leave…..Anna was the one shedding the maximum tears; ‘’Rads…can’t you stay..take admission in masters…2 more yrs it will be fun’’

Radhika hugged her; ‘’Anna I will miss you more than you know…Anna we will stay in touch…now stop crying…and marry Steve soon and I promise I will come for your wedding and you all will come for mine…please don’t cry…I am having tough time controlling my tears’’ Anna hugged Radhika they were still consoling each other when whole group jumped on them crushing them …they all shared a laugh… but between all this Arjun was restless…he kept standing in the corner staring at Radhika….Steve gestured all of them to come out ‘’ Rads we all are going for dinner….be quick..’’ Radhika nodded… she walked to Arjun and hugged him from behind….Arjun pulled her front with a jerk…invading her mouth…he was restless…impatient…mad….Radhika heart was in the same condition…she responded with equal madness….Arjun broke the kiss without detaching their bodies he whispered; ‘’15 days seems life to me….I will miss you with each breath…I feel alone without you’’

Radhika touched her forehead to his and cupped his cheek; ‘’Then come to me soon…remember Tiger I need you more than you need me…’’ Arjun smiled and nodded….the full moon in the winter night sky smiled looking at these two beautiful people and praised the destiny for bringing them together…after the dinner…Radhika spend a sleepless night in impatient Arjun’s arms…he hardly allowed her to breathe….giving her bone crushing hugs every minute….and not to forget the numerous kisses.

When flight landed on the Mumbai airport….Radhika wiped her eyes…for last 20 hrs her tears were flowing….she knew how lonely Arjun must be feeling….The way he held her in the night…was enough to understand his impatience…now she just had one thing in her mind to convince her parents for him and she was determined to do that…Radhika walked out of exit with her luggage …she knew who would have come to pick her at this early morning hours….Neil stood there with his arms folded and a smile spread across his lips….Radhika legs gained momentum…she ran and hugged him…He smiled patted her head; ‘’He will cross oceans for you…don’t worry Chashni Arjun will soon infornt of you’’
Two eyes were continuously watching her from the crowd…they had madness…something sadistic…Jai was happy to see her after 1 long yr…she had grown more beautiful…1 yr in US had enhanced her more…or it was just his thinking….he watched Neil holding her close to him and walking to his car….his POV; ‘Welcome back sweet heart….we will be one…. Soon’

True Love is hard to find…and if your are blessed it knocks your door…and colors your life in a rainbow

Precap; Radhika teaches Jai a lesson ….. Neil nails Ayan completely… Jai attacks Radhika….Hukum Singh saves he… Arjun restless to reach her

Credit to: Gauri


  1. Jasvin

    I am a silent reader .I just live love love your ff. Full of suspence love and most of all excitement. Keep up the good job . Just love it

  2. Nita


    |Registered Member

    So sad to see aradhika like this…… Jai and piyali need a lesson….. Friday is too far…. Still I wll wait

  3. shreya

    It lovely …..feeling sad for aradhika ….sam pity on her ………jai idiot …..loved nandni and sia they were cute …..overall very good …….u have very good grip on expressing feelings and emotion …….love u lods …….one more thing I need a favour that is give me a picture of sid n anuj so my imagination ll be good or u can suggest any actors … u take care

    • Gauri

      Thanks Shreya 🙂 ok Sid can be Ronit Roy…. and Anuj the one who acts as grown up Sushim in Ashoka I don’t know his name 😛 thanks dear stay blessed 🙂 love you 🙂

  4. Sathya

    Wonderful gauri… U nailed it. How many times u want us to repeat the same dialogues dear. ??? u know what as I said u r the queen here and u r proving that in each and every episode and ff. With Arjun even I felt too restless.. Plz don’t delay make him to reach I India soon. Fabulous episode.. Kudos to u ???

    • Gauri

      Thanks a ton Sathya darling 🙂 I don’t know I am queen or not but your comment does make me feel like one so thanks from the bottom of my heart … he will reach India soon 🙂 loads of love stay blessed 🙂

  5. Dhara

    Gauri, After reading this update I have fallen in love with story again 🙂 Love you and thanks for this amazing story.. Let me tell you I have read this ff 3 times already 🙂 I just can’t get bore reading this amazing story.

    • Gauri

      Thanks a ton Dhara 🙂 this is one of the best comment I have ever received so thanks for the bottom of my heart 🙂 loads of love 🙂 stay blessed 🙂

  6. vini

    achooooo .. i feel so pity for radhika and arjun 🙁 . they should get back soon .. and Jai i hate him the most …. teach a nice lesson to him and about sam , she needs to get her mother’s love and attention . her family should be back with her that is wat i hope for 🙂
    and by the gauri .. u simply rocked 🙂

    • Gauri

      Thanks Vini 🙂 they will soon together 🙂 Jai will get a nice lesson 🙂 Piyali will realize her mistake 🙂 loads of love and stay blessed 🙂

  7. roshini

    Awesome episode Gauri….Friday is a long wait but its ok 🙂 take ur time love you 🙂

  8. priya

    Totally out of words…ur r outstanding unique piece..I just really loved the portrayal of arjun’s emotion…lot of kisses nd hugs to you..
    Precap made me curious as radhika is going to teach a lesson to y will hukumsingh save her will she invite danger in lessoning to him..wat would happen when arjun comes

    • Gauri

      Thanks a ton Priya 🙂 yup she will invite trouble … wait for Arjun’s return 🙂 loads of love stay blessed 🙂

  9. suga

    Darling sissy all emotional 😀 Sam she s really fabulous today 😀 am really sad for me not having enough words to appreciate my darling….. Arjun oh god I love him like anything 😀 its coz of u 😀 ur words made so many magics on Words 😀 😀 am in moon after reading ur ff 😀 oh god its fabulous fabulous fabulous awesome awesome awesome spellbound 😀 I should bow head for ur words 😀 😀 u r DAT much awesome 😀 😀 😀 superbbbbbbbb darling loved ittttttttt 😀 muhaaaaaaaaa 😀 one big teddy hug for u 😀 so many kisses 😀 😀

    • Gauri

      Suga darling 🙂 love you for such lovely comment….I am on the moon after reading your comment…. thanks for making me feel this happy 🙂 load of love stay blessed 🙂

  10. Gianna


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    U are a genius Gauri, just brilliant, loved this update to the core. Loved Ardhika but loved tiger more ? and Piyali, I really doubt now that she gave birth to Sam, just hate, hate, hate her but also I just love, love, love my rock star Nandini, Prena’s reaction was normal and understandable just loved the update. The precap just hooked me more to ur story, can’t wait till Friday. Stay blessed, love u ???

    • Gauri

      Thanks a ton Gianna 🙂 all my teeth are dancing with happiness 😀 … Piyali has a reason for this indifference you will know it in coming updates 🙂 thanks again stay blessed 🙂 love u

  11. Jessie

    I was all emotional reading tiger-bunny part..prena aunt is all cute.. kudos to sam for speaking the right thing.. spellbound Gauri sis..I loved this excellent update… precap suspense makes me more curious n nervous.. and I just loved d lines of Destiny in the touching.. loved it… loads of love.. TC..

  12. Aastha

    felt sad for Sam……..but I’m very happy that she opened up the bottled frustration…….Piyali is disgusting…………………ardhika’s pain is unbearable………….Jai has totally gone mad…… is Rads gonna convince her dad for the marriage ?????????????? waiting to see how that Jai is going to be taught a lesson………………….the precap scares me to no extend…………………..

    • Gauri

      Thanks Aastha 🙂 Rads is a drama queen…she will start her drama very soon 🙂 how is your mom 🙂 loads of love 🙂 stay blessed 🙂

  13. M

    awww……i love anna….stevr…n their whole gang……incrediblr ppl…….backless blouse disappount me……lol……nd sam….. amazing reply to her parents…….neil……lovr his care towards radhika….n lastly…..jai…yuckkkkk

  14. priya

    no words to say diiiiiiiiii …………….. i’m totally spellbound …………. eagerly waiting for friday ……….. loads of love …….. tc

  15. Ananya

    Awesomeeeee Gauri diiiiiiii, ????? You nailed it….. ????? Please update the next one soon. … pls pls pls….

  16. Ritu

    u nailed it as always..precap sounds superb..and I m really desperate to watch Hukum Singh…amazing dr..but feeling bad for can a mother be so biased towards her one child..piyali is really disgusting..anyways loved it..waiting for

    • Gauri

      Thanks a ton Ritu 🙂 you will know the reason of Piyali’s hate 🙂 will post on Friday 🙂 loads of love stay blessed 🙂

  17. Sv

    Didi 40 episodes par muje aisa lagtha hai ki the plot has just started. Yippiee my wishes di aur im reallg happy and im speech less. What an update wow o wow u made it again today . Loved it. Sam finally found the reaso for her hatred and a pakka blast to her mom . Piyali I doubt is she really her mom or someone else. Prena acted as a normal mom. Loved it and ardhika oh my gosh pls make that love birds to join them soon then I can witness the most awaited moment of arjun vs jai coz I wanna see jai in the middle and arjun one side neil on the other side and hukum singh on the third side. He he he that was a most awaited moment for us.

    U always make me jump di always and today im jumping more and more. Love u di and love ur words and allways love u and bear my hugs and kisses too. Muuhhhaaa.

    • Gauri

      Thanks My cuite pie 🙂 love you from the bottom of my heart 🙂 you will know the reason for Piyali’s extra love of Jai…may be in coming updates 🙂 you have Arjun vs Jai… you always make me feel special thanks for that …love you and big hug for you stay blessed 🙂

  18. Fanficoholic


    |Registered Member

    Well they say that sabar ka phal meetha hota hai and it is absolutely ryt. Even though u update taking a few days gap in between u do full justice to ur absence gauri di. I seriously recommend u to write or modify the scripts of tdys serials. Most of them r off their track and r going haywire. Thats y i stoped watching them and i am mre into ffs as i found them mre interesting than serials. Liek arjun and radhika r madly in love i am madly in love wth tis ff of urs. And di hav u registered in TU?

    Love u loadssssss

    • Gauri

      Thanks a ton for the amazing comment 🙂 wish someone gives me a chance to write a story for serials 🙂 Nope dear I haven’t registered 🙂 any ways thanks for making my day 🙂 love you stay blessed 🙂 a big teddy hug for you 🙂

  19. Raaga

    Di u r out of the world
    I have completely bcum mad about ur ff…
    u r extraordinary talented person in writing ….:-)
    mind blowing…..:-)
    Love u love u….dii…♥♥♥
    I m thankful to god that I got to meet (not personally;-)) “YOU” in my life….
    waiting like mad for friday

  20. Devi

    Such a lovely epi….. soo happy fr nandini….feeling sad fr arjun n rads…but the seperatn wil mak teir bond more stronger…waitin to c hw rads gona teach jai a lesson n hw neil wil finish ayan… eagerly waitn fr nxt epi….tc….

  21. Sammy


    |Registered Member

    Sometimes I think no need to say anything ..when ever I read ur update …something that is all hollow inside me ..lil bit got filled ..really your ff di had the power to sooth someone’s mind ..the intense calmness ..after reading it again ..and again

    • Gauri

      Thanks Sammy 🙂 this was one of the best compliment I have ever got 🙂 love you dear 🙂

  22. Naaga


    |Registered Member

    Actually m tired Gauri, i appreciates u so many tyms i think u may also feel bored. But what 2 do U R Flawless – Best in Story & Script Writing ?

    All the Best for ur Future ma ?

  23. Aadia


    |Registered Member

    Di…you are doing emotional atyachar..making us sad.Im more sad because now I can read your update only after my exams..but then it will be a dhamakka for me..

    • Gauri

      Arre Baap re Emotional Atyachar ….Lol ..thanks darling 🙂 and all the best of your exams 🙂 bless you 🙂

  24. Harani


    |Registered Member

    God,this episode is very close to my heart dr ,the way Sam stood up or the way tiger and his bunny shared their love,I felt tears when Radhika left for India …Jai ..wanna see how radhika reach him a good lesson 🙂
    Di you are an amazing writer

  25. Harani


    |Registered Member

    God,this episode is very close to my heart dr ,the way Sam stood up or the way tiger and his bunny shared their love,I felt tears when Radhika left for India …Jai ..wanna see how radhika reach him a good lesson 🙂
    Di you are an amazing writer you loads

  26. sreee

    ohhh di what an update….. totally fell in love with it….loved it…restless tiger and a mad bunny….what a combo…feel so sad for sam…but thank god now she got neil forever..jai just screw him di…am eagerly waiting for the next in which rads is going to teach him a lesson and also that
    is going to make arjun mad….di
    now as said my questions will jais attack on rads will make arjun prepone his arrival? will rads help sam in teaching a lesson to piyali? will neil himself in pixture for making dilip accept arjun? will sam stand for rads in absence of neil against jai?and will she get to know the truth of jai molesting rds in past? and will there b an remarriage for nesam in grand way with family?and lastly will rds fmily would accept arjun only after knowing about their love or before it?
    i know di am just pestering u with my questions…..sorry but what to do ur story is so awesome that i hve gone mad for it……truly di u r just blessed with this amazing writing skills ……love u for that…..muahhhh…keep it up and take care

    • Gauri

      Thanks Sreee 🙂 yes Arjun will prepone his arrival due to his lady loves bravery 😛 Piyali will realize her mistake soon 🙂 Yes Neil will help Radhika in getting Dilip’s approval 🙂 Yes will save Rads in final attack after which Arjun will nail him down 🙂 remarrige … still thinking good idea but grand reception for sure 🙂 Dilip will realize the depth of Arjun’s love you will see how 🙂 no you are not petering me 🙂 a big hug for you stay blessed 🙂

    • Gauri

      Thanks a ton Gayu 🙂 I never thought I would make it too 40…thanks for all the love and support 🙂

  27. shreyanshi

    I got busy for few days…
    Now i am in vacation..
    Sorry for not commenting .. In previous chapters..
    Loads of love..
    Ur writing is always amazing :* :*

    • Gauri

      Thanks Shreyanshi 🙂 no need for sorry 🙂 and enjoy your vacation 🙂 I want one too 🙂 love you

  28. dipika

    Gauri darling pls send me sone dictionary full of praising words that i can use it to praise.. my kota of words emptied by now…Today’s epi is roller coaster ride…Aradhika’s duriya making me cry too..Sam answer yo piyali was outstanding.. seriously it was the heart stealing scene frm today’s epi..hats off for creating that scene… N wht precap says. radz teach jai a lesson. wow.. m jumping.. pretty much excited.. come soon..unable to wait..loads of love hugs n kisses to brilliant writer .take care.

    • Gauri

      Dipika darling …. you seriously don’t need any dictionary ….as each word you write brings a big smile on my face 🙂 thanks for making me feel on the top of the world 🙂 a big hug for you stay blessed 🙂

  29. Supriya

    Hii di….first toh sorry for late comment wanted to do it early but couldn’t make it….abt the epi you know how much I am crazy abt dpo…..nd now the end z near it z giving me heartache…..when beautiful things end they pierce the heart with their memories and right now I am feeling the same… was just incredible di….loved arjun’s possessiveness….his madness….his care for his bunny…..even his restlessness…. hate piyali how could she say such vile words to her own daughter….. she deserves to be awarded by the worst mother on the earth…..waiting for rads plan to tackle jai… my questions….. What z the reason behind piyali’s such kind of behavior towards Sam?…one side nandu who has not given birth to siya still z trying her best to fill the place of mother in siya’s life…..other side piyali z mistreating her own daughter….. When will arjun enter the scene?….will piyali hurt Sam more?…..will jai hurt radhika a lot?…..who will help her to face him in arjun’s absence?…..will piyali realize how wrong her son z?……will she try to speak to radhika about giving jai a chance?….will Sam forgive her mom for all the misdeeds?…. Will samrat punish piyali for all her demeanor towards Sam?…..will jai leave radhika alone after getting a lesson from Arjun?…..what will arjun exactly do to jai?….when prerana will accept Sam wholeheartedly?…… Will Sam ever have a proper moms daughter relationship with piyali?…..when will aradhika get married?….how will arjun prove his love for radhika infront of dilip?…..z mala on Arjun’s side?….I have many more but then I need a reason or a topic to pester you on chat….so will ask you later….
    Di you are true magician…..I mean it….the way you have portrayed their emotions z something magical and unbelievable…. I don’t have good words to praise but I am thankful to god for creating and sending you on earth….love you glycerin…..muaaah…. Tc???????????????????????????????????????????????????????

    • Gauri

      Thanks SUpriya 🙂 now your answers ..Piyali’s reason you will know…Arjun will enter in next update 🙂 Nope its time for Piyali to repent 🙂 Radhika’s bravery will invite some trouble for her 🙂 no Piyali will not speak to Radhika … 🙂 Neil he has always been there for her 🙂 yes Sam will forgive Piyali 🙂 Now rest in the updates…becuase I haven’t thought much …we unfold as story proceeds further 🙂 and thanks again for the lovely comment stay blessed 🙂 loads of love stay blessed 🙂

  30. feby

    awesome di….superb….. so saddy tat radhika too left like how iam leaving kochi…sooo heavy heart tat i am leaving today..but still i hav no othr go…. i belong to my native…. and with this heavy heart…i dont feel like evn commenting better… but true tat i will nevr forget u and will love u evn more…chances r less that i return back to TU … but still i will try my level best…. will miss u di…love u…. tc…..

    • Gauri

      Thanks Feby 🙂 and I will miss you a lot … happy journey and all the best for your career 🙂 stay blessed and see you soon 🙂 loads of love

  31. Sravya

    nic one dear☺ arjun was sooo superb.The way he luv Radhika was so nic.
    I like ur another FF mmz so much.It was so lovely☺

  32. Rosie

    ………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………..what should I say…plz fill up by urself…was very busy…so came later…i saw it yesterday but Ur’s n thena’s story a bit long…so I read it now….i wanna meet u n some bessing from u…u r truly blessed so utilize it…??

    • Gauri

      Hey Rosie dear 🙂 thanks for the lovely words even I wish we meet some day 🙂 blessed to get so many frnds love you 🙂

  33. Roma

    Awesome, marvellous, outstanding update. ..gauriiiiiiiiiiiii my sweeeeeet darling. ..ur each n every update is mind blowing. ..u r not letting us move from our spot before finishing the episode….I just read it in one go n still feel like, I didn’t get enough of it. ….keep reading it more n more n more…prerna forgave nesam…wowwww. ..nandini’s act at dilip house was so lovelyyyyyy. ..she succeeded in her plan to scare the another alliance for rads….lol….loved it….nandini is happy with sia…n sid so happy to see her love for sia…so sweeeeeet. ….arjun’s bday celebration was beautiful. ..rads n arjun not ready to leave each other. sad n emotional scenes …rads gave her locket to arjun for her memory… 🙁 ….the night before her flight both were so restless n sad…..felt their pain…Sam gave very good reply to piyali…she need to control jai otherwise arjun won’t leave him…..rads back to india… 🙂 I hope soon she will convince dilip for arjun n her relationship. ..neil’s words were soothing. ..jai deserves good lessons from ardhika n neil…precap is very very interesting n exciting….gauriiiiiii my sweeeeeetheart. …you’re outstanding….phenomenal job…loved it very very muchhhh. …keep it up honeyyy. ..thxxxxxx for sharing your amazing treasure with us. ..eagerly waiting for the next episode, love you loads. . muaaaaahhhhhh. . 🙂 😉 😀 ♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡ lotssssss of hugsssssss n kissesssss. … :*

    • Gauri

      Thanks Roma 🙂 now I am out of words … I don’t know how to thank you for such an amazing support 🙂 thanks for being my friend love you stay blessed 🙂

  34. sahithi

    Loved it a lot!! Too good could feel ardhika’s pain and sam did the right thing..piyali should realise her mistake…and jai will learn his lesson…I pity him
    Waiting for the next one eagerly
    Take care dii. Loads of love??

  35. Aastha

    Hiee !!! Gauri di
    you have nailed it di !! Happy that prerna accepted nesam n would also accept whole heartedly. Felt happy when sam answered back piyali… can a mom differenciate b/w her children…..
    Ardhika moments were emotional…. U have very beautifully expressed their feelings…..while reading i was wondering does true love exist in real or not ??
    Waiting when would Arjun come to India ….how would he convince Dilip….how would he beat or teach Jai his lesson’s
    di i had a wish…. I want to talk to u badly….want to know to about u …..
    And di how u celebrate your b’day…. Your bday is not so far….are u excited ???
    Love u di 🙂 🙂

    • Gauri

      Thanks a ton Aastha 🙂 you will know how will he convince Dilip… 🙂 baby I don’t clebrate or do much….just dinner with my sister….My granny use to do it in a grand way… but since I lost her I don’t feel like 🙂 this bDay I am working 🙂 bless you love you

  36. Rg2015


    |Registered Member

    Hi gauri am one of d last one to comment. Sorry for tat. I was pretty busy from yesterday even to till today morning. I got a new par time job. Hence needed to go for trainings this week. After updating tu quite a number times I was Glad to c ur update late in d evening ( am in Singapore. So it’s was around 8.30 in d evening when I saw ur update). It was fantastic. I thoroughly enjoyed it to d core.
    Especially ardhika. Arjun and rads tearful good bye made me emotional to. I really felt sorry for them. Their chemistry was just too gud. Awesome. They both couldn’t stay without each other. I enjoyed d romantic part of it d most?. Well Neil and SAMs homecoming was nice too though not warm enough. I felt very bad for Sam. I can’t believe mothers can b so cruel. She can’t justify Jais obsession that way. Seems piyali doesn’t know Neils capability I suppose. I can’t wait to c how all r going to unfold. Bye d way Nandini’s decision to marry and her entry to Mishra household was tooo gud. I enjoyed tat seen. I could actually imagine d confident Nandini walking in. Now for some questions
    When will piyali realise Neils capabilities? Will she apologise to Sam?
    What was there in Jais cupboard? Will u reveal it? Along with it wat all dirty stuff did he write abt? ( I know there r rads photos. . But wat did he do with those) He looks to b demented.
    Will rads and Nandini meet before arjun comes home?
    How will arjun convince dilip will Neil help?
    Will Jai be arrested?
    How r d love birds going to meet as they r not in us but in India, how r they going to keep up their romance and how r they going to sleep in each other’s room?
    Wat lesson is rads going to teach Jai.
    How will arjun make Jai pay? Will he listen after that.
    Will piyali truly repent?
    Will ardhika have any more obstacles other than all d above mentioned ?

    By d way gauri as usual a fantastic episode thanks to. U r too gud. Such a beautiful story from a marvellous writer. I really wish you would get more time to write. Btw office and house I Guess u have ur handsful yet u take time to write and give us a chapter on all d days u promised us in a week, I really want to thank u for tat. You have painstakingly updated each chapter on all said deadlines….? ( I mean it gauri. I know if u don’t update in morning as said you get so many messages asking u when r u going to update and pls update as its xxxday etc) yet u reply to all those messages patiently and also update ur ffs. Once again I appreciate your hard work and effort you have put to give justice to all ur ffs and also your patience in replying back to our comments beautifully and making us feel special. Am just trying to let you know that you r very special to me.. And I enjoy and love all ur stories to d moon and back. I also admire you for ur your home work juggle amidst which you find time give us stories and entertain us .. Always crossing above our expectation. You r fantastic. And best. Take care. Stay happy.

    Btw tomorrow when will u update mmz? ?????

    • Gauri

      Rg a big hug for you 🙂 congrats for you new job 🙂 thanks a ton for this amazing comment .. now your answers 🙂 Next update Piyali will know really Neil Melhotra is 🙂 She will apologise to Sam and will tell her the reason for this indifference 🙂 you will know soon what stuff Jai wrote about Radhika 🙂 making Arjun go completely mad in punishing Jai 🙂 Rads will tell him tell him fear of darkness 🙂 Piyali will repent…Jai’s punishment you will know 🙂 no more obstacles 🙂 Love you Rg for the amazing support so far….you have been an amazing frind …I always look forward to your comments…and once you comment it brings a big smile to my face 🙂 stay blessed 🙂 loads of love 🙂

  37. neetz

    How much ever i wait for ur updates u neva disappoint was.a.fabulous epi abha ..loving u.more each day 🙂
    Wish i could meet u once some tym 🙂

    • Gauri

      Thanks a ton Neetz 🙂 loads of love 🙂 some day we will meet for sure 🙂 Bless you 🙂

  38. Roshni

    The thrills, happiness, enjoyment i felt, nt only me bt vry1 here after reading dpo, the credit goes to one n only gauri di 🙂

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