Manmarziyan- Destiny…Passion …Obsession (Chapter 39)

Chapter 39

Hello friends…so here is the next chapter…..thanks for the immense support….loads of love and million hugs for all of you 🙂 do let me know how was this one next one on Sunday 🙂

Chapter 39

Anger…setbacks…failure are part of life….but it should stop you from celebrating what you have…and fight for what you believe in…Sam will do the same now


Piyali was furious; ‘’Sam married Neil…stupid girl…I had selected a prince for her and she chose a peasant Neil’’

Jai; ‘’Relax mom…it can be in our favor…if Neil supports us we can be stronger in BS…just let me handle this…one wrong step…and Sam can sign everything in Neil’s name…

Piyali; ‘’You are not understanding…Ayan could have helped us with money to buy off our shares…but now Ayan will sue us…’’

Jai; ‘’let me handle this you relax’’ Jai’s POV; ‘I need to use this in my favour’

New york Airport

Aradhika and NeSam were at the airport waiting for the boarding….Neil went to buy coffee and Sam got a call from Jai…she excused herself and answered; ‘’Hi Bhai’’

Jai; ‘’hey baby Sis…congrats…I am so happy for you’’

Sam felt relieved; ‘’Thanks Bhai…atleast someone his happy’’

Jai; ‘’I know what it feel like spending life without the one you love…Sammy…don’t worry…I will make everyone accept your marriage…Sammy you need to do a favour for me …Pleas convince Radhika on my love’’

Sam felt betrayed again…one more bargain….she turned and looked at Radhika…she was animatedly talking to Arjun…and he was just watching her…forgetting everything around him…for Arjun..Radhika was his world…Arjun was giving her all the attention Radhika was demanding..he smiled lowered himself and pecked her cheek…Sam smiled and answered

Jai; ‘’Bhai its good if you forget Radhika…. she is into a committed relationship…and he loves her lot…I am ok with everyone’s anger’’ Sam disconnected and walked to Neil who had joined the conversation with Arjun and Radhika…she looped her hand around Neil arm and held it tightly…and got herself involved in the conversation.

Once the boarding announcement was made….all the four boarded….once they took off…Arjun spoke to Radhika; ‘’Bunny you promised me that you will do what I want you too…for those 15 days in India without me’’

Radhika; ‘’yup I did…tell me tiger what do I have to do’’

Arjun; ‘’I have hired a body Guard for you….his name is Hukum Singh…his family had been with us for 3 generations…he will be with you…till I am back in India’’

Radhika made a face; ‘’Are tying me down…??? Its not needed….and I am not a celebrity….what if my parents and others got to know…no ‘’

Arjun; ‘’Bunny you promised….and no will know even you won’t be able to see him…you are my life I can’t leave you unprotected …please…I don’t trust Jai’’

Radhika; ‘’Neil will handle him…and why Neil I can handle him too…why are you so worried’’

Arjun; ‘’You were Neil’s responsibility in past…now mine….and don’t ignore petty things…obsession can be dangerous’’

Radhika smiled; ‘’Can I kiss you’’ Arjun blinked she was smart she knew how to change the direction of conversation…but he had made his mind up…Arjun softly replied; ‘’Let us reach our destination Bunny….won’t allow you to breath’’ Radhika blushed kept her head on his shoulder and closed her eyes.

Sam had been quite after Jai’s call….she would smile but did not speak…Neil noticed she kept looking out at the clouds…but did not speak a word…he softly asked; ‘’Sammy what’s wrong…aren’t you happy with this marriage’’

Sam was surprised; ‘’Don’t be crazy…this is the best day of my life…its just that…today I again felt unwanted by my family …Bhai was bargaining family acceptance in exchange of Radhika’s consent for him…it hurt’’

Neil was furious hearing Jai’s demand…but kept quite…’he decided to divert her attention; ‘’baby…we didn’t get time to celebrate our marriage…so how about…’’ Neil moved his hand on Sam’s thigh getting it lightly slapped…he chuckled and got reprimanded for behaving this way in a crowd.

As the flight landed in Hawaii…the girls were excited and confused…Radhika; ‘’I never heard of camping in Hawaii Arjun pulled her nose ; ‘’you will know’’….as they walked into the hotels the girls were spell bound..Sam elbowed Radhika

Sam; ‘’Chashni…there are some benefits of dating and marring a rich guy…’’ Both the girls giggled…Arjun Neil took the keys of their suites ….

Arjun; ‘’So guys ready for beach’’

Neil; ‘’Arjun you guys carryon I will join you in sometime’’

Radhika smiled mischievously ; ‘’yes go lose your virginity…’’ Sam turned crimson….Arjun rolled on the floor…and Neil closed his eye….’’Radhika you are so dead….today I won’t spare you’’ Radhika ran with Neil in pursuit….Radhika ran around the furniture….pillars …and hid behind Arjun….who was still laughing like mad….finally Neil caught hold of her arm and pulled her ear hard; ‘’I have told you million times …no non-veg words with me…but you never listen to me’’ Radhika pleaded Sam and Arjun to save her but both refused…

Arjun walked to Sam; ‘’Come Sam….this will never end’’ Sam gave Radhika a mock anger look and walked….

Radhika finally made a kid like face; ‘’Sorry Buddy’’ Neil rubbed her ear to ease the pain…and moved towards their room…Neil enters his suit all laughing…Sam looked at him; ‘’Looks you punished her bad’’

Neil; ‘’She is naughty …but brings smile with her naughtiness…so what say…we can lose…you know as per Chashni’’

Sam gave him you are impossible look; ‘’Let’s go to the beach’’

Radhika happily got ready for the beach and came out …Arjun looked all wide eyed…she was looking smoking hot…Radhika read his face and before he could say a word…she spoke; ‘’don’t comment on my dress…I can’t enjoy on the beach wearing a ghagara’’ Arjun walked to her lifted her chin and lightly kissed her lips…’’bunny…I just want to keep you safe’’

Radhika hugged him; ‘’I know….ok will make you happy…I am ready for a body guard…but no one should know…and you will come soon’’

Arjun hugged her back; ‘’yup I will…can’t stay without you…’’


Jai was out of control after knowing that Radhika was dating someone…and is planning to take her relationship to next level…he had been drinking all evening …he came all sloshed ….and ransacked his room….Piyali tried controlling him but he was out of mind…he pushed her; ‘’You promised me that Radhika will get married to me…..but her dad refused and now….she is dating someone…I will that bastard….’’

Piyali; ‘’Calm down Jai….we will talk about this in the morning …just sleep’’

Jai; ‘’Ýou ? Will talk?….you couldn’t even handle emotional Sam…you are no good…now I will handle…jut leave’’ Piyali was taken aback by Jai’s behaviour…she quietly left


Arjun Neil were good swimmers…once at the beach they went to enjoy water…Sam Radhika were close to the shore as they took a break…happily talking to each other…Sam was continuously watching Neil…he was standing with a bare torso…his wet…tanned skin made him look super hot…Radhika was continuously speaking but realised that Sam wasn’t paying attention…Radhika laughed and spoke coming close to her ear; ‘’Sammy…he is yours al yours…so stop staring and go eat him….and Let me find my man….and he is dead….’’ Sam little confused looked in the same direction and smiled…Arjun was talking to a girl in a bikini…..and he just gave a side hug to her…Sam let out a laugh; ‘’Arjun god save you’’

Radhika walked towards Arjun…and kept her hands on her hip….Arjun turned and froze; ‘’Bunny was just helping her’’

Radhika; ‘’Why??? who are you…help center…and why so much of skin show…you can enjoy in water with a t-shirt too…if I can’t expose…same applies to you’’

Arjun smiled lifted her up…and walked between the waves….he put her down in the middle of water and held her from behind; ‘’Bunny…you will love this…look at those waves…a big one is coming and will go over our head…its fun…just keep your feet firm’’

Radhika all scared; ‘’Arjun I can’t swim….You want me to die for scolding you..’’

Arjun moved his lips over her face; ‘’Trust me’’ Radhika nodded…a huge wave came and went over their head….Radhika gasped..and then jumped; ‘’Once more’’ Arjun held her tightly as other wave approached them…Arjun suddenly turned Radhika around…held her waist and kissed her deep…suking her lower lip hard….as they wave went over them…

Radhika responded matching his passion…and smiled; ‘’I think…I am loving this…can try again’’ Arjun kissed her forehead and brought her back….he gave a his spare t-shirt…

Radhika understood….’’no one is looking at me…there are more pretty faces around’’

Arjun cupped her face; ‘’Not more than you’’

Neil took Sam for a Jet Ski ride….Sam enjoyed but after reaching somewhere in the middle Neil turned slow…her heart stopped…all she could was endless water land was far….her grip on Neil went tight…she spoke all scared; ‘’Neil let’s just go back…please’’ Neil smiled a turned toward the shore in full speed…once at the shore…Neil got down but Sam’s feet wobbled….she crashed on the beach….her body was shaking; ‘’Sammy are you fine….sorry didn’t wanted to scare you’’

Sam; ‘’Don’t know Neil…was just scared when I couldn’t see land..but better now will try that again’’

Neil; ‘’Baby can we just go back and spend some time alone…please’’

Sam; ‘’Ok let me inform Radhika’’

Neil pulled her; ‘’Leave her….that Bunny must be hunting her tiger…let them enjoy…and I don’t want more embarrassing comments from her ’’ Sam smiled and walked to the hotel with Neil…once they unlocked their suit they were surprised….the master bedroom was beautifully decorated with flowers and scented candles…there was a note on the table ‘whishing all the happiness of universe to my brother Neil and his better half Sam…hope you will like it’ – Arjun….

Neil looked at Sam…she was blushing….her heart was racing…she had been waiting for this moment from so long…and when she was standing with her moment….she was nervous….Neil walked to Sam….brushed his fingers on her pink face….Sam closed her eyes….Neil went close…kissed her cheek and neck….he wrapped an arm around her waist and in a fraction of second pulled off her t-shirt above her head…Sam crossed her arms over her chest…Neil lifted her up and dropped her on the bed….coming on the top….he whispered; ‘’look at me Sam…’’ Sam lifted her eyes to look deep into Neil’s…her heart calmed…she felt happy….she was where she belonged…Neil was the missing piece of her life and today she will complete it…..Sam opened her arms leaving all her nervousness…’’love me Neil’’ Neil smiled and removed the final barrier of clothes between them…uniting his body and soul with his love….Sam smiled and closed her eyes….hugging Neil tightly a drop of happiness rolled down and made its way to the pillow….


Arnav watched nandini as she served him dinner…’’nandu what have you thought of Sid’s proposal’’

Nandini without looking at Arnav responded; ‘’Chachu…why do you want to throw me out’’

Arnav smiled; ‘’You sacrificed a lot…not everyone gets a second chance with love….and it came to your door knocking….please beta…I am growing old…I want to see you happy….what will tell your father when I meet him in heaven’’

Nandini smiled; ‘’Emotional blackmail! Chachu you are bad with that….you are not going anywhere…ok I will marry Sid only if Sia is able to gel and accept me’’

Arnav smiled wide…he suddenly spoke ; ‘’Sid did you hear that….now it’s you job to get Sia and Nandini together’’ Nandini’s jaw dropped all the discussion was going on with Sid on the phone…she simply rolled her eyes at Arnav’s impossible nature….he was no better than Arjun ‘’


It was dinner time….Arjun had left Neil a message about the reservation….Radhika quickly freshened up and came out in a lovely tunic…with a flower tucked in her hair…she walked and hugged Arjun from behind; ‘’Thank you for this trip….but where is the camping part?’’

Arjun smiled turned towards her pulling her close; ‘’you will know in some time…and do you want Neil-Sam to have their honeymoon with insects…?’’ Radhika giggled …Arjun lost his senses in her smile and attacked her lips…she stumbled but he held her close….Radhika moved her hands on his bare back clutching his hair tightly with the other….Arjun kept on deepening the kiss making her arch and leaning on her completely…he moved to her cheeks neck and then her chest…but stopped and buried his face there….he pulled her up and hugged her tightly waiting for her breath to calm down…’’I told you….won’t let you breath’’ ….Radhika kept her palm on his bare chest kissing his neck lightly..’’I wish time stops….’’ Arjun gave one glance to her blooming face….pulled a shirt on…wrapped his arm around her and walked out of the room to have dinner with Neil-Sam…

Arjun had warned Radhika not to tease Neil-Sam more….she was sitting quietly making faces and thinking of random things to stop her itching tongue….but she gave up; ‘’Sammy looks like you had a nice time…you glowing without the facial’’ Sam covered her face and Arjun banged his hand on his head….Radhika finally looked at all three and made an apology; ‘’Sorry….had to speak something…and I couldn’t control’’.

Neil looked at her sharply; ‘’forgiven…but tell me why does your lips look swollen’’ Radhika dropped her spoon…Sam coughed and Arjun banged his head on table again…Neil smirked; ‘’how was the taste of your own medicine’’ Radhika gave him a mock glare…

Neil; ‘’Now stop that blushing act Arjun…you are Phd…in many more things…when are we leaving for camping’’

Arjun; ‘’tomorrow morning…the booking of cabins is done….and girls please pack necessary things…we will be back to hotel day after tomorrow’’ all four retired after the dinner….Arjun kissed Radhika’s forehead and wished her for the night moving to a different room….she held his hand…and gave a questioning look; ‘’Bunny I am losing myself….its better I sleep in the other room…I want to marry you before taking this relationship forward…I promised this to myself’’

Radhika hugged him; ‘’kissing me and holding me will not get you pregnant….and if it does….good we can marry in hawaii’’ Arjun threw his head back and laughed….she made the moment light just by a single sentence…he joined her on the bed and Radhika happily hugged him….Arjun caressed her head till she slept..he watched her sleeping form kissed her cheek and closed his eyes.

Morning they left for the near by Island for a day of camping …it was famous for natural flora and fauna….it was a reserve area…after reaching their they got their cabins….the place was also famous for scuba diving and dolphin sightings…the girls panicked …Radhika refused upfront; ‘’I am not doing this’’

Arjun; ‘’You were dying for camping…now behaving like a wuss…what a spoil sport’’

Radhika ; ‘’I am a the biggest wuss on the planet….happy…you guys go…I will stay in the cabin’’

Sam; ‘’Chashni let’s try…please’’

Neil; ‘’We have to be in a group…can’t leave you here…come now…’’ Radhika changed and agreed…once they were ready…the guide took them to the beautiful world of water….Sam was smiling from ear to ear…everything that she saw on television or pictures was live…she touched fishes and smiled…Neil was happy looking at Sam’s happiness….Radhika was not moving from her place…she pretended getting suffocated…and being breathless…but none of them were affected ny her drama …after coming back they mocked her but she was least interested…..the guide helped them make a small camp fire…they enjoyed …sang and had their dinner….Sam and Neil retired for the night…Radhika too went back to her cabin…but when Arjun didn’t come she got worried…she came out and found him standing near a tree…’’What’s wrong Tiger’’ Arjun smiled and lovingly hugged her…but he was worried Radhika was leaving in a month…and he feared her safety…he tighten his grip…

After coming back to New York Neil-Sam were ready to leave…..Arjun Radhika went them to drop…Radhika hugged Sam; ‘’Sammy be strong and everything will fall in place…and if doesn’t we will do it together’’

Sam; ‘’Come soon…will miss you’’ Radhika nodded Neil watched worried Arjun…’’I will take care till you don’t come’’

Arjun; ‘’Obsession is dangerous…till I marry her…I can’t be calm…but please Neil tc’’ Neil hugged Arjun and left with Sam…Radhika was little emotional…Arjun squeezed her hand; ‘’You will stay with me every weekend…and I will stay with you all weekdays for this 1 month’’ Radhika nodded

Obsession of any kind can be dangerous…..don’t ignore…

Precap;- Radhika back in India….Jai’s obsession rises

Credit to: Gauri


  1. Ritu

    awesome as always..nd loved Raneil bonding…this naughty Radhika..just loved her..and nesam part was superb..a cute and adorable epi..jai that duffer should get worst punishment..just superb dr..waiting for nxt u….good night…and a big hug for making my night gud…

  2. Chinmayi

    Romantic one…naughty radhika:D:D
    everything was perfect…you are miss perfect.i m scared of jai,plss teach him good u

  3. Super duper episode, Gauri get Ardhika married fast even I’m worried for Radhika. You nail it, well done. Eagerly waiting for the next episode. 🙂

  4. M

    awwwwwww…..waiting for this…….n its a veautiful chapter……radhika….oh god….she speak anything….but lastlt neil answered her very well….

    • M

      i love nandu here……o arnav n sid…..awwwww……….everyone s positive except that khanna family……obviously sam become malhotra now

  5. Gianna

    Loved it Gauri, I live Hawaii, am actually like a fish love water so much, rads is such a blabbermouth, laughed at her comments. Really enjoyed the update. Jai is a total jerk can’t wait for Arjun to smash his head. Loads of love to u

    • Gauri

      Thanks Gianna 🙂 same pinch 🙂 even I am a water lover…falls, sea…ocean it takes me to another world 🙂 I feel happy when around water bodies 🙂 But couldn’t learn swimming as some astrologer told my family that I will die of drowning….they don’t like me near water 🙁 thanks again for the lovely comment 🙂 love you stay blessed 🙂

  6. Omg omg omg wat u r made of darling sissy 😀 😀 superbbbbbbbb every part every words u penned s top of d awesomeness 😀 😀 oh god please create words to appreciate my darling sissy words 😀 all mixed darling its totally fabulous 😀 my fantastic four really rocked well 😀 😀 😀 love comedy romance obsession care everything was awesome 😀 😀 😀 love u love u love u 😀 😀 😀 sooooooo much 😀 loved it too 😀 😀 take care 😀 again gonna read it 😀 😀

    • Gauri

      Thanks my amazing sis 🙂 Suga you are darling 🙂 thanks for the lovely comment 🙂 love you to moon and back 🙂 stay blessed dear 🙂

  7. Wow Gauri i loved it ? & U have so much of Humour sense, i like radhus dialogues she is really naughty, still im laughing ????
    I dont know what will happen in next part, now m scared cox of jai ? yes Precap seems so scary. Im waiting 4 the 1 ☺

  8. Dev

    Hey gauri……awesome camping epi….n radz remark on nesam was just o d mark…..pity jai 4 his condition n piyali who made him like dat… dat real game about 2 start….eagrly waiting my dear buddy……
    Lotsn lots of love …..hugs….tc???

  9. natasha

    dhi such a wnderfull epsode its jst awesum i dnt have words to describe this epi dhi its marevellous

  10. deeva

    Hey gauri….. as usual this was awesome I loved it…… waiting for next….. till then take care….. love u lots

  11. sammy

    Awesome gauri di ..I love it ..each dialogue of this update made me laugh like hell badly want to see arjun and jai fight ..try to update it soon di 🙂 🙂

  12. Supriya

    It z just like you….so perfect…. though I had my test today I couldn’t stop myself from reading it…..I was worried abt my test nd after reading this one I thought as if someone breathe life in my body……oops that someone z you di……I am contended now……rads z so naughty even I tease my frds who r in relationships nd srsly they get embarrassed….. Who could escape me…..but loved the answer Neil gave her……you know while reading that scene I recalled my school picnic incident….. I teased om on his first kiss which he had in 7th std with one of our schoolmates nd I asked him kii was it a feather kiss or french kiss that too in front of our whole group…..I still remember his embarrassed face….I still laugh when I recall that incident…..this was all casual in our school…..becoz we were in one of the prestigious school of Mumbai but I didn’t like all this things…..forget abt kissing I didn’t even liked to get touched by any guy….though I was mischievous but not shameless…..srsly most of my male frds from school who must be little older to me lost their virginity in 11 itself….. Disgusting r8????…..arjun blushing nd Neil calling him PhD in all these things was too much hilarious….. Aradhika romance was asual hot as fire….now my questions….. Will rads tell jai abt arjun when she meets him?….will Sam be rude to piyali?….how will rads convince dilip for arjun?….how z sid going to get siya’s consent for marriage with nandu?….. will jai hurt rads inspite of her being protected by her bodyguard?…when will you show Arjun’s punishment for jai?….when will piyali learn her lessons?….will piyali create problems between nesam?…what will be samrat’s reaction to nandu’s marriage?…. Will rads punish jai in her own way?…becoz he was reason for her fear for darkness….how will Sam react to all this?….will she break her ties with her bro after knowing his misdeed?… the maximum when you will show arjun nd jai confrontation?…..Will jai give up on radhika after facing arjun?…..will he use dilip to break arjun and rads alliance?…. When will nandu enter the scene?…. Di you said end z near I m very sad abt that….plz console me on this too…..chalo now back to studies if I slip from rank 1 I m sure to get a good scolding from mom…..nd honestly I don’t like coming second third or fourth….rank 1 z the love of my life can’t give it to anyone….neither can I share it… I told you once I don’t like sharing my fav things….chalo will tell you my results in the evening they check the papers on the spot gud I will sleep with satisfaction….text me when you are free….love you always….. muaaah….. Tc???????????????????????????????????????????

    • Gauri

      Thanks question bank 🙂 congrats on result well done 🙂 Rads will threaten Jai 🙂 Sam will stand for her self 🙂 Siya’s consent you will see 🙂 Dilip Piyali you have to wait for update …I haven’t thought anything right now… 🙂 piyali can do nothing 🙂 Samrat has nothing to do with Nandini 🙂 I havent thought on so many things 🙂 Nandu is already there she will enter once her baby bro returns 🙂 chalo all the best for next test stay blessed 🙂 study well and sleep tight 🙂 love u

      • Supriya

        Thanks for all your answers di you have given the interview nd this reporter z very happy… now tell me z it a double dhamaka for mmz on sat????I m too much curious…. Love you…tc

  13. Lol…today’s chapter have everything…m very happy there is very much fun today…omg naughty rads,hilarious n neil teasing Arjun being phd in everything…if Arjun’s fear will become true?? Plz say no…hope that hukum Singh give some beatings to jai,n later Neil n Arjun can finish him…waiting for Sunday….why this Sunday is after two days??? Argh…?? b healthy ??

    • Gauri

      Thanks Rosie 🙂 good idea will get him beaten by Hukum Singh 🙂 loads of love 🙂 and sorry for responding late 🙂 stay happy stay blessed 🙂

  14. ab

    Love u so much di ? an amazing chapter ardhika as always rocked nesam superb a perfect chapter love it ??

  15. ab

    Love u di an amazingly beautiful superb episode ardhika as always rocked nesam superb a perfect chapter love it ??

  16. Rg

    Hi gauri an amazing episode . It’s awesome. It’s tooo gud. I loved it to d core. Rads naughtiness was enjoyable , Neils comeback ws awesome too. Poor Sam I really feel sorry for her. And Jai? Oh god ! I hate him. He is trying to spoil things. Piyali finally got treated the way she deserves. And arjun and rads r going to b separate for a month. I feel sorry for them. Hawaii islands were fun. I enjoyed each every enjoyable moment of both d couples. U write beautifully. It’swonderful to c such awesome episodes. Ur ff is a treat in itself. Now for a few questions.
    How will prernas reaction be? Will rads help Sam there?
    Wat has Jai planned for rads? Will he hurt her despite d body guRd?
    Will Sam come to know of Jais truth soon?
    How is rads going yo bear arjuns separation?
    How will arjun bare d same pain of separation.
    Wat r d difficulties Sam and Neil r going to face here?
    Wat will b dilips reaction to rads love.
    When is arjun and rads going to get married? Will arjun teach Jai a lesson? Wats going to become of Jai?

    Hi gauri a small request smth not connected to this story. its regarding mmz. Pls bear with me.Once u told me tat arjun himself will confess tat he forced rads to marry him. Did u write it in any of d previous chapters and did I miss it? Or ur yet to write it? Becos am wracking my brains wondering which chapter ws tat. Pls do tell me this gauri. Sorry for pestering u. Am unable to move on frm tat. My thot is just stuck there. Again sorry for pestering u gauri. It’s a humble request frm an ardent fan. Thanks.

    Well gauri I loved this one. U made my day with this ffs of urs. It’s fantastic, awesome as always. Am curious to know how this is going to shape up. I can’t believe tat so many episodes r over 39 episodes… Gosh. So Long. I hope u won’t end this any time soon. Pls don’t give up giving us ardhika stories. Your a good writer. Some day I hope I get to meet u and thank u in person for giving us such a wonder ffs and enriching my life. You r d best gauri. Keep well and happy. May god bestow his blessings on you. Be happy.. Tc. Cheers.

    • Gauri

      Thanks a ton RG 🙂 OMG so many questions 🙂 lets begin …well Neil-Sam wil face some anger…but no melodrama 🙂 people like Jai don’t plant they just attack 🙂 Hukum Singh will protect Rads 🙂 Rads will pester him to come 🙂 he will go mad once she leaves 🙂 a normal fathers reaction 🙂 he will take his time….Rads will shoo away her suitors 🙂 they will marry once they get rid of Jai 🙂

      MMZ- no I haven’t written that part…he will confess all his mistakes in frustration 🙂 and you are not pestering me at all 🙂

      Even I can’t believe I wrote 39 … thanks for supporting and loving my work so much …bless you …may lord bless you with all the happiness 🙂 I love your questions so you can ask as many as you not 🙂 stay blessed 🙂

  17. Love

    Wanted to add you in my friend list so can you please give me your original name nd as usual awesome update

    • Gauri

      Thanks Love 🙂 my Name is Abha Dikshit 🙂 i live in Bangalore 🙂 stay blessed 🙂

  18. feby

    wat a killer chappy…….aaahhh…radhika…i tease my frnds and cousins lik tis…lol..and reading ur ff with nice songs bring butterflies in me…aahhhh,… god..kya tha aaj…

    • Gauri

      Thanks Feby 🙂 how are you and how are your studies going???? how about your allergy …hope its better 🙂 tc stay healthy and happy 🙂 bless you 🙂 love you 😀

      • feby

        di…i cudnt comment properly….i was bz as i had to go out with my bestie paru..or parvathy is her name ( i call her paru)…lol….u know how good i felt….going out with frnds and exploring kochi…as my mood was down coz all my besties got admission and iam the only one waiting for govt. allotment….and my frnds came and took me out for an outing to make me alright…i must say i really felt good….ya…understood tat evn frnds can make us feel sooooo good whn we r depressed…as always they used to do…..and wats thr to study di….thats y iam evn struggling to read updates in TU.. as whn i come here parents peep and see…aahhh…and this chappy…i cant evn allow thm to c…lol…and allergy…u know wat my frnds did…they told they want to revive classroom memories and so brought our class duster and tapped it in front of me..and lo!! i started sneezing and they started counting…only thng was tat our teachers was not ther to count wid my frnds…horrible…i know they will do some naughtiness like tis so had my nasal spray with me….it became alright within one hour…but all they was i kept cursing thm loudly…lol….all r happy…all my besties got 93% and above but r going for courses…so their allotment and admissions r ovr…and above tat i will b leaving kochi soon…so i was depressed…allergy…its as always like tat…lol…ya becoming better… but iam now having a heavy heart…. again leaving everythng and going to my native…may b iam having a fate to b separated from my loved frnds…..
        love u also di……….

      • Gauri

        Hey Feby 🙂 no problem if your comment is not long … yes you are true…friends are like treasure you should always hold them close … I remember there was a phase when I was very disturbed…I had stopped interacting with anyone…my frnds had kept a get together during diwali…and I refused to go….they kidnapped me from my house…with my parents approval…and made me laugh till my stomach hurt…..we all are in different parts of the globe but we meet once a year…where ever possible…cherish the old old ones and open your heart to new ones too 🙂 take care of your health…stay happy 🙂 love you 🙂

  19. Gauri you knw i how i felt whn i see u updated chappy n though i have to wait to read it is like having basket full of chocolates n u hav to wait to get store reopen.. thats wht u feel..nw i hav read it n m satisfied.. you r only person who can balanced the story having two loving n adorable do proper justice to both the couple..i knw very well its really tough job to write for both couple equally…thts y you r best..i likr the way sam ans to jai..n beach part..scuba diving n all just awesome.. heavenly yarr..want to go for it..haha..i wished this epi should hav in visual format so i can watch it…n m too worried for u many times mention obsession is dangerous.. m afraid for rads yar…ohhh..cant wait for next.. eagerly waiting for sunday..lovr you loads darling..Teddy bear hug for u..felt lucky to read u.

    • Gauri

      Dipika a big hug for you and a cute kiss on your cheek 🙂 lts go together for Scuba diving we will have fun 🙂 don’t worry Arjun hai na … he will handle 🙂 loads of love for you stay blessed …and thanks again 🙂 million hugs for you 🙂 love you stay blessed 🙂

  20. neetz

    Oh my god what r u made of..seriously u r a superwoman..i remember when i used to work i just felt drained when i was back at hstl from office.only thing i used to do was sleep ..even i ve skipped food just to sleeep..look at u u complete all the works and writing two fabulous ff which looks almost edited aswell..u keep up ur word on the date of posting aswell..who does that..hats off dear..just love u more and more..

    • Gauri

      Thanks Neetz 🙂 it means a lot to me 🙂 the way you all have supported me and loved my work… makes me write more and more 🙂 love you swt hrt 🙂 stay blessed 🙂

  21. Sravya

    wowww Gauri superb update.An amazing one.I loved today’s FF so much.Thanks for this beautiful story.
    I love Ardhika scenes? I love Arjun’s
    all expressions.Radhika n Sam were soooo cuteee.I am eagerly n lots of love for u☺

  22. Jessie

    Gauri sis.. hats off for updating this in spite of ur works…and this chappy had everything.. loved it.. Arjun’s fear n care seems so reasonable.. Rads is all naughty.. guess Arjun hav any backup plan though he hires a Bodyguard.. Arjun’s care..,! No words 2 describe hw I feel whn I read tat.. love it.. Jaii.. so selfish n stupid guy..wish sam turns matured n clever to deal wit her bro.. waiting 4 Sunday now?thanks Gauri .. take care of ur health also., u seem 2 be so busy..loads of love..

    • Gauri

      Thanks Jessi darling 🙂 Sam will stand by right now 🙂 love you to moon and back 🙂 stay blessed and happy 🙂

  23. sreee

    di the epi was superb , fantastic……fully wow was so hillaroius di…rads really too naugthy..she doing all drama…commenting nesam…and arjun blushing was toooo good…..he worrying for radhika was soooo goood….piyali and jai let him go to hell…..neil countering rads…and bunny hunting tiger all was soo goood..atlast nandhini accepted…… di everything soooo good…..just am waiting for my tiger to b in india……love uuuuu…..muahhh…take care

  24. Roma

    Wowwww, wowwww, wowwww gauriiiiiiiiiiiii my sweeeeeetheart. …wonderful, fantastic, splendid, stupendous, breathtaking, flawlessly perfect chapter. ….I just loooooooooooooooooovvvvveeeeeeeddd it to the coreeeee. …ardhika n nesam mind blowing scenes n the trip to Hawaii was really awesoooooome. …all the fun, activities, teasing all were veryyyyyyy beautiful….ardhika wave scene, nesam romantic moments…. 😀 …..rads blabbering, teasing nesam n Neil’s counter back reply…lol….loved it…the camping, scuba diving, dolphins n allllllll…my goodness everything was just perfectly penned….I watched it literally as always…ur flawless talent takes me to your dreamland….Sam’s reply to jai was really awesome n he burnt with obsession.…but arjun’s fear is also correct…jai is psycho…pervert…obsessed jerk…he can stoop really low to get what he want…I hope the bodyguard hukum Singh protect rads well n arjun n Neil bash jai out blue n black give him good lessons….nandini n sid…wow…she agreeeeeed..yippeee….arnav no less than arjun…lol….my lovely sis gauriiiiii you’re amazingly awesoooooome….keeping balance in both couples n also other ppl as well…. 🙂 …. all of your stories are soooooo perfectly awesoooooome. …don’t know how do you manage to do this so flawlessly. …with every chapter intriguing more n more. …so marvellous Devine powers u have to make us spellbound n euphoric… you soooooooo muchhhhhh my sweeeeeethearttttt. …precap is very exciting n interesting. …keep it up honeyyy. Eagerly waiting for the next episode, love you loads. . ..muaaaaahhhhhh… :D. ..lotssssss of hugsssssss n kissesssss. … ♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡

    • Gauri

      Roma darling 🙂 you always make my day with your comments…I am not getting words to express my feelings so writing in bold THANKS 🙂 bless you 🙂 love you and a big hug for you:) mhuuuuuuuuuaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa 🙂 :-*

  25. Flattered.. This was fantastic!the way radz couldn’t control her tongue.. i also experienced it lots of time 😉 and rads comment on arjun :I cant come on beach wearin a ghagra” lol…. i loved evrything .. Even I want jai’s obsession to rise and eagerly want to see arjun’s wrath cause I know you will prohject it amazingly and I will get flat as always.. Howz ur writing on 6 yrs going?

    • Gauri

      Thanks Roshini darling 🙂 6yrs is going on but little slow 🙂 when are you posting your mmz update and kindle 🙂 do let me know ..I love both of them 🙂 loads of love stay blessed 🙂

  26. sweety

    Wow awesome gaurii i loved it o hoo I fallen in love with u I love uuu eagerly waiting for next episode pls dear upload nxt one as fast as u can plsss

  27. Sv

    Didi you made me blush the whole update . I was really blushing the whole time. For me more than neil i like Arjun very much. Of course i like Neil but Arjun more. i dont want any punches. Lol.
    Arjun is choo cute today. I love the way he was enjoying the time with Radhika and Nesam or talking about her to Neil or talking to her too. Lovely. A true love was shown there.
    Nesam awww they make a cute pair. Lovely. I really saluted Sam when she was able to find the intention of Jai. jai yuck such a kind of a disgusting brat. Yuck idiot. He will never even get near her shadow. Stupid.
    Radhika a cute piece of cute cake. I love her i love her i love her very very much. Loved it. Precap is making me nail biting. Di let the bodyguard make my radhika safe and im really waiting for the day Arjun and Neil join hands to just make jai terribly…… i donno but should do something for what he had thought and did to radhika.

    Love you di and your words. Always bear my hugs and kisses too. Muhhaaaaaa….

    • Sv

      Forgot to mention i’m really happy for the yes for nandhini to Sid. Hope siya says yes to Nandhini. Love you di love you . Muhhaaaa….

    • Gauri

      OMG my cutie pie was blushing 😉 wish I could see your pink face 🙂 Jai will get his part of punishment 🙂 love you sweety for making each and every update of mine so special 🙂 stay happy and blessed 🙂 love you 🙂

  28. Fanficoholic

    Hello gauri di. One mre amazing epi to ur kitty. U hav become a pro in romance. Well i am jst eagerly waiting fr arjun jai confrontation. I wld like to save some praise wrds fr that epi. Loved tis epi as usual. When wll u be updating the nxt one di?


  29. Fanficoholic

    Well sorry di. I jst nw realised u tld tat u wll be posting nxt one on sunday. Read that part bt i did nt register it.

  30. Devi

    A drop of happiness rolled down and made its way to pillow….awesome…whole feelings depicted in tos one sentence… just loved tis epi… love, naughtiness, care, fun, friendship…. everythn u hav narrated sooo well…just loved other words…

  31. Wow fantastic episode…radhika ‘s part was awesome …I luvd it….I think ur planning to become humour queen too..that so sweet..finally nandu said yes hope siya too agrees….how will Nesam going to face prerna??wat would be mala nd dilipreaction on knowing abt nesam??will jai used it for his benefit??,will samrat agree??how will radhika going to face Jai’s obsession??will radhika alone handle it??arjun too will be involved ??it would be nyc if radhika handle jai like ayaan…just waiting for d nxt …

    • Gauri

      Thanks a ton Priya 🙂 well Nesam will have to face anger of there loved ones….well you will see the meeting between Sam and Radhika’s parents….Jai will try….but his life is full of faliure…Radhika will handle him…but ARjun will put the final nail in the coffin 🙂 and no need for sorry its ok 🙂 loads of love and million hugs for me 🙂

  32. Pankh

    Awesome episode as always wish I also have joined them for scuba loved it and really sorry for commenting late

    • Gauri

      Thanks Shravanrisi 🙂 TU is not accepting updates …will submit as soon as it opens up 🙂

  33. mony

    hey where are you all? I m waiting for ff qhole day.I don’t know where to comment. so,I write it here.

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