Manmarziyan- Destiny…Passion …Obsession (Chapter 38)

Hello there all lovely people …here is the next chapter …so let me know how was it 🙂 thanks for all the support and lovely comments 🙂 Next one on Thursday … I will be out on a client meeting for 2 days….so won’t be able to write anything … please bear with me 🙂

Sometimes we have to take decision which are hard and might anger our own people but ….doing right thing is the hardest thing to do 
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Radhika came for dinner at Arjun’s place…all the 3 were looking at each other how to break the new of Ne-Sam wedding…Radhika was busy munching….she looked up…’’Are you guys trying to put an evil eye on my food…well it won’t work’’

Neil smiled; ‘’Chashni me and Sam are getting married this Sunday…’’

Radhika froze….she looked at Arjun then Neil and Then Sam; ‘’When did he propose’’

Sam gulped; ‘’last Friday’’

Radhika; ‘’And everyone else accept me knows about it….so I am nothing for you 2’’ All the 3 nodded….Radhika frowned twisted her lips…got up picked her bag and zoomed out of

Arjun’s apartment Sam followed …Arjun got worried but Neil stood there smiling…Sam looked at him; ‘’I told you…let’s tell her…but you….go stop her…’’

Neil without a word gestured Sam to be quite and asked her to come to him…Sam frowned but obliged…Neil took of his slippers and tip toed to the door and suddenly pulled it open…Radhika fell flat on her face as she was trying to eavesdrop on their conversation to know who will come to pacify her… Sam and Arjun controlled their laugh…Neil folded his arms to chest…’’done with your drama…now come on get up’’ Neil extended his hand and Radhika took it…Neil pulled her in a bear hug…he gently tugged her messed up hair…and kissed her forehead; ‘’Little one…you are my family…and I know you a little too much …so please keep this drama for Arjun’’ Radhika smiled like a naughty kid and hugged
Neil…she then gave a tight hug to Sam…’’Sammy lets go shopping’’

Arjun; ‘’Where is my hug….I am still waiting’’ Radhika blushed…but Sam pushed her to Arjun….

Neil; ‘’Arjun our group camping is still on’’

Arjun; ‘’Right after your wedding you guys can have your honeymoon in a camp…’’ This time Sam punched Arjun.

India

Nandini was is the kids play zone…she used to monitor the staff on timely basis to check if the kids were comfortable….Nandini watched them with affection….their cute tactics would make her smile….Nandini eyes suddenly caught Siya…she was mischievous ….she picked fight with some boys and made them cry….Nandini laughed….Sid was standing at a distance he watched her and then walked forward…’’You still love kids’’ Nandini; ‘’they are pure souls free of any bad…they are so true…who wouldn’t love them’’

Sid; ‘’Even you are like them…true…you always were like this why shouldn’t I love you’’

Nandini was uncomfortable she was about to speak but Sid stopped her…’’its not necessary to forget your love to marry someone else…marriage can also be a lifelong friendship …I am offering you the same…be a mom to my Sia and my friend for life…nothing more’’

Nandini looked at Sid….he was so true about his words…she composed herself…and replied; ‘’Please give me sometime…’’ Nandini walked off…and Sid danced in happiness…Sia clapped watching her father danced…Nandini peeped from the corner smiled and left…

USA

Arjun took both the girls to and Indian designer store…they were marrying in a temple…both Sam-Neil wanted it to be simple…Arjun was going mad…and the Bride and Brides best friend were trying outfits and asking his opinion and then discarding it…Arjun POV; ‘’Neil how clever of you…if I had little idea of this pain…I would have dragged you’’ Arjun was messaging Neil all vile words he could think off…but suddenly stopped….looking at the feet of someone standing right infront of him…Arjun lifted his eyes and blinked…Radhika was wearing a silver saree….with a backless top….Arjun’s jaw dropped as she turned around…to show her complete look…his throat went dry…he looked around and found some…people ogling at her…he quickly got up and stood infront of her covering her from ogling eyes; ‘’Bunny…what are you doing’’

Radhika; ‘’Seducing you’’

Arjun; ‘’I am and badly…please go and change…enough of skin show’’

Radhika; ‘’You didn’t like my look’’

Arjun was restless and she was busy teasing him; ‘’I loved it…wish you would have dressed this way being alone with me…I would have shown you what effect it had on me…now please go and change..’’

Radhika smiled pecked his cheek…she turned to go but pulled all her hair to front giving a tantalizing view of her back to Arjun…he gasped….she was impossible…both the girls changed and came back..Arjun asked them to move and he will clear the bill…after they left e bought that sari which Radhika had worn..’Will make you wear this’ Arjun was clearing the bill when he heard one sales guy…’’Man that girl in silver sari….smoking hot…couldn’t take my eyes of her’’…Arjun looked at him and his ID and walked out…he was boiling with anger…how could someone dare to set his eyes on his Radhika…Arjun saw Radhika and Sam waiting for him …he made a call…’’Hudson…I have messaged you the details of a store…get me all details… you have time till evening….need to buy this one’’

Sam was doing a kind of fashion show infront of Neil…but Arjun was only looking at Radhika….she was enjoying Sam’s happiness….she turned and looked at him he gestured her to come the other room…Radhika left Neil and Sam alone and walked into Arjun’s room…he was standing in the balcony…she hopped and hugged him from behind…Arjun smiled at pulled her infront….’’Bunny you are very beautiful….and I hate other eyes on you’’

Radhika cupped his face; ‘’Sorry I shouldn’t have done that modelling act in the store… it was for you and no one else’’

Arjun hugged her ; ‘’I know…and now I am scared to send you back without me…Radhika will you for once do what I want you to do’’

Radhika got on her toes and gave him a smacking kiss; ‘’Anything…..now Don’t be scared…I can handle worst…I am marrying you because you are impossible to handle…so chill my love…lets go we just have a day for wedding and I bought something for you’’ Arjun smiled and followed her

It was Neil’s wedding he wanted it to be simple… Arjun had made arrangements in the temple….Sam wore a designer red sari with minimum jewelry and Neil was dressed in a simple sherwani …Radhika wore a blue sari and Arjun kept it simple with a kurta over his jeans…Radhika kept on flaunting herself infront of Arjun…he just smiled but did not compliment her …just to annoy her… everyone was ready to leave Radhika came to Arjun he was helping Neil; ‘’Neil I need my boyfriend alone for a minute’’

Neil; ‘’Shameless…’’

Radhika dragged ARjun with her and opened a box…it had gold plated beautiful Kurta buttons with matching cuff-links…she tugged the buttons and cuff-links in his kurta ….Arjun was overwhelmed….this gift made him too emotional….as Radhika tugging buttons….she spoke without looking at him…’’Arjun this is gold plated and not real gold…I could only afford this with my earned money….I know it doesn’t match you standards…but please where it for today’’

Arjun caught her wrists ; ‘’My Standards??? Bunny I don’t what they are….please don’t treat me like Arjun Mehra….let me be Arjun…your Tiger Hades or whatever you want to call me….this is special…and you are talking about today….I will wear it till eternity…’’

Radhika smiled…they were lost in each other when Neil coughed; ‘’Guys I really want to married today…you have ample time to romance….Chashni Sam needs you’’ Radhika left and Neil stood infront of Arjun…’’what now….you look worried…speak up’’

Arjun; ‘’Neil I cannot join her immediately in India…and I don’t trust Jai…’’

Neil; ‘’Neither do I…and your concern is not baseless….I will take care’’

Arjun; ‘’Please Neil….keep her safe…she will not listen to me…but Jai touches her and I will kill him’’ Neil smiled wrapped his arm around Arjun’s shoulder; ‘’He will not be able to touch my birdie till I am alive….Please bro I am dying to marry can we move’’

Sam was standing like a statute near the window looking into space….Radhika came and understood; ‘’Sam what’s wrong’’

Sam; ‘’Chashni I too had a dream with all my family around…I wanted them to be happy for me…I wanted to be pampered….but it all remained just a dream….I tried Chashni…I tried being a good daughter…good sister…but why I had to bargain affection….and today is the best day of my life …yet I feel I am betraying my family’’

Radhika picked up Sam’s phone… dialed Samrat’s no. keeping it on speaker …he answered all happy ; ‘’Bacchu everything good …?’’

Sam looked at Radhika closed her eyes and answered; ‘’Pa I am marrying Neil in next 1 hr…thought of informing you ….please do tell mom…I know she will be angry….but this what I want’’

Samrat; ‘’Sammy ….if you wanted to marry Neil…you should have told me….but why like this…never expected this from you’’

Sam smirked; ‘’Pa…I expected love but got it as a bargain….and part of conditions….so I decided to do something for me …hope you will understand’’ Sam disconnected….Samrat felt his daughters pain….may this was the way of destiny to punish him as he broke the heart of someone’s daughters ear back….and now his daughter took the biggest decision of her life but didn’t consider him or her mother worthy enough to be a part of it…’

Radhika hugged Sam and rubbed her back….Sam took a deep breath; ‘’I am ready….’’

As the ritual started in the temple….Neil-Sam face had amazing glow… each step today was towards the bond of eternity….they will officially be together….Neil held Sam’s hand and they started their vows around the holy fire…Arjun watched them with a smile….Radhika looked at Arjun and walked to him….she held his hand…’’Arjun its still time for both of us….but I am promising all these vows to you today’’ Arjun smiled gently squeezed her palm…and held it tightly….yes he made the same promise to her…once the rituals were over….Arjun and Radhika congratulated NeSam…

Arjun; ‘’Guys we are leaving today for our camping trip’’

Sam; Arjun…camping in winters? That’s weird .’’

Arjun; ‘’Dear adopted mother in law….having ice-cream in winters is more fun as compared summers…let’s move we need to pack….and I am taking you to a place where winters won’t kill you ’’

Radhika; ‘’Wait…this poor daughter is yet to have picture with her adopted parents’’

Neil rolled his eyes…Sam and ARjun laughed….Radhika kept on blabbering and Neil closed his ears with his fingers and ran from there…with Radhika after him…Sam walked to Arjun…

Sam; ‘’Thanks Arjun for everything….you helped us in dealing with Ayan….my marriage with Neil…and above all it was you who made me realize my love…Arjun…my dad did wrong with Nandini di….yet you helped me…I will never forget this….you are a good man’’

Arjun patted her cheek; ‘’Sam I am not a good man….I never liked you ….because you are Samrat Khanna’s daughter…and I also felt you used Neil…but guess I judged before knowing you completely …and you helped me win Neil’s heart…you kept on pushing him to accept our love…Sam I don’t like your family but I can’t punish you for anything and now you are friend…and my friend cum brother’s wife….so welcome to my family….now stop being formal…lets go…we have flight to catch’’
Neil and Arjun had made this plan ….they went out camping as friends…and Neil really wanted to spend time with his two best friends…Arjun smiled looking at Neil’s happiness;

Arjun; ‘’Neil…call aunty and tell her she shouldn’t know it from Samrat Khanna…do it now….you always have been a good son…she will forgive you’’

Neil dialed Prerna ; ‘’Mom ….can we talk for a minute’’

Prerna in a stern voice; ‘’ you got married to Sam…Samrat called….’’

Neil; ‘’Mom I know I should have told you …but ma the situation was such that I couldn’t delay…will you please give me a chance to explain’’

Prerna; ‘’Neil I atleast deserved to be informed….and right now I am in no state to understand or a say a word…bye’’

Neil disconnected he felt guilty…..Arjun patted his back ; ‘’Aunty is a darling don’t worry…she will understand…now think about Sam she already has gone through a lot…and its time make these girls have fun our way…’’

Neil nodded…picked up the luggage and walked out of the apartment.
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Neil-Sam are married…but this marriage will bring anger for Sam….Sam is ready to face that…Radhika will be back home soon….let’s see how will Arjun keep obsessive Jai away from Radhika in his absence.

Precap; The camp fun NeSam leave for India….Sam signs off her share of Bird Song to Neil…

Credit to: Gauri

91 comments

  1. Dev

    Gauri lovely buddy…..an pretty simpl epi with shoppin n weddin……
    Love u lots….hugs….tc???

  2. Supriya.

    Hii di…..I have read it almost 20 times before commenting…… It z just mind blowing…..no dear actually I don’t have words to express my emotions…… Wedding shopping part was awesome…… rads teasing nd seducing Arjun….he getting all angry watching ppl eyeing her……loved this tiger a lot……..nesam such a cute pair……finally they married…… But they have to face many things……. Arjun worried abt rads that’s something I really loved……Neil best buddy ever…….nandu and sid such a ossum pair…….I really liked sid when he said its not necessary to forget your love to marry someone…… He z such a matured man……nandu deserves to be happy…… hope she agrees soon…..I m eager to know more……samrat got his punishment…….. But I want you to punish him more…….now my questions…….when will you show arjun nd jai confrontation????….. I mean after how many updates?…..how will arjun protect rads?????…….when will piyali get punished……. When will dilip accept arjun????…..will arjun punish jai a lot?????…..will jai scare rads when she returns to India???….when will jai know abt arjun????…..what will rads do without arjun to protect her?????……I m too much curious……. Di you are achieving great heights of perfection with each update of yours……let’s name you something…….’Queen of Perfection’…….hats off to you darling…… I m thrilled nd impatient to read more right now……..kiss on your knuckles…… will peck you on your cheeks…..one more question…….how will you manage to write mmz nd dpo in just three days nd on the top of it you have client meeting…… Glycerin update this on Friday if you are too much busy……. you will drain yourself I know it……think about it……everyone loves you more than your update….. I just don’t want you to get ill again…..chalo enough of my blabbering ……..love you to the moon nd back…….muaaah…….. Tc??????????????????????????????????????

    • Gauri

      Thanks darling 🙂 have ever thought of journalism as career…you will rock… 😉 …. you are too gud with questions….so here are your answers …. Samrat will bear more 🙂 …Arjun Jai first confrontation may be chap 40-41 …. U will see how will Arjun protect his Radhika …….Sam will give Piyali a shock after going back ….How can someone say no to the handsome face of Arjun ……Jai willl Know Rads is dating someone but not whom she is dating…and he cannnot scare her 🙂 …love you for all the amazing comments 🙂 loads of love stay blessed 🙂

      • Supriya.

        Thanks Glycerin?journalism one more talent in me well you are already aware of all my talents…..I need to hunt best in all of them…..omg God made me so talent that I m having difficulty in choosing a perfect career….but m one proud princess in real life…..srsly I mean it……well chp 40 z not that far…..but tell me when z the next to next update?????……,I won’t even utter double dhamaka from my mouth…..I know how busy you are……first time I m not pestering you…..I need a reward its very difficult to avoid pestering anyone…..lol….love you di…..muaaah….. Tc?

  3. Rg

    Wow gauri it was superb . I loved today’s episode. Glad to c it today. U made my day with this one. Nesam marriage was Sweet yet painful. Felt very bad for Sam. Rads cuteness is too gud. I loved her and arjuns bond. Am looking forward for their camping trip. Wow man gauri, u r too gud. But I missed piyali and Jais reaction today. By d way few questions.
    Will prerna accept Sam? As she previously preferred rads.
    Why can’t arjun join all d 3 immediately?
    How will Neil keep Jai away till arjun comes? How is Sam going to accept Jai obsession and rads treatment of Jai? Will Jai try to hurt her?
    Will all come to know of Jais behaviour?
    Will samrat repent for his treatment of Nandini? Poor Nandini. And wat abt arjun and dilip how r they going to get along? Well wat r d new plans tats on rise here I mean other than angst Sam is going to face i meant? Any new plot brewing? Pls tell me soon.
    Gaur ..gauri.. Thanks for making such a wonderful story. It’s always awesome. to read ur ff. I can’t wait to know when will u b writing d nxt one. Pls tell me soon. Until then take care. Keep well.

    • Gauri

      Thanks a ton Rg 🙂 now your answers 🙂 Jai will try using Sam ‘s wedding in his favor but it won’t work…Piyali will be furious but Sam is out of her hand 🙂 Prerna will take time to accept Sam 🙂 Arjun had plans to settle in US he has his set of business and a job too….he will wrap things before joining them…but he wont be able to stay aloof very long… Neil will be handling jai…but Arjun will be making arrangements to keep her safe…Sam will ask Jai to stay away….I have more wait for next one …Jai will hurt her and bad…yes everyone will know of Jai’s behavior… Arjun Dilip… well Radhika is the biggest drama…she will turn things in her favor……next one soon 🙂 loads of love for so much support 🙂 bless you 🙂

  4. ammu

    Really nice di.Funny bunny and her tactics. Finally nesam married. Now Sam got her strength forever.eagerly waiting for next one.

  5. Hope

    Di… Finally ne-sam is married…oof.. Ardhika was fun 2day..waiting 4 camp and ofc..nesam romance..as a nwc..
    Idk how will i control myself till ur nxt update…tc..all the best..bon voyage..

    • Gauri

      Thanks Hope 🙂 I am sorry for making you guys wait …but will be out of station and won’t get much time to update or write 🙂 stay blessed 🙂 love you

  6. M

    arjun n radhika will bwcime qlone again n that backless saree…..awwww….plzzzz make it a romantic one……ting tong!!!

  7. Devi

    Awesome awesome…all strted gettin settlin in…neil n sam… nxt nandini n sid n finally arjun n radika… radhika is realy cutiepie…her initial drama thn she seducin arjun…poor girl she doesnt knw wat arjun is gona plan wit tat saree…;-) im soooo happy fr nesam…hope prerna wil understand n accept tem soooon…. tc gouri n kp entertainin us.

    • Gauri

      Thanks a ton Devi 🙂 love you for the amazing comment 🙂 stay blessed love you 🙂

  8. Raaga

    I really don’t like to use same words to express my happiness after reading ur ff but still I don’t have words to show my happiness. ..
    Ur ff’s are tremendous and takes me to completely separate world of mmz where I forget about everything n enjoy ur treat …:-*
    ‘U R OUTSTANDING’ gauri :-*:-*
    love u loads:-*
    coming to today’s ff – I liked al the part and all the emotions u showed…:-*
    sorry I couldn’t comment for last ff 🙂

    • Gauri

      Thanks Raaga 🙂 I am glad you liked it and thanks for commenting 🙂 love dear 🙂 stay blessed 🙂

  9. chandan

    Lovely one Gauri…now waiting for the drama that is going to start in India…amazing writing skills Gauri…keep rocking n tc

  10. Jessie

    Rads is all naughty n full of life.. Beautiful chappy.. loved it.. am gonna read it again n again.. Arjun’s concern n worries.. he stole my heart..lol Rads shld take Anna., cole., cheryl on d pretext of some reason to India.. waiting 4 d blast btwn jai n Arjun.. plsss.,Gauri sis..give a very good punishment for this Jai.. I wanna rejoice.. rads dialogue saying she wud handle d worst is jus a dialogue..she appears 2 be strong.. tats y Arjun s worried.. eager 4 further updates.. I love this story like anything., few things I feel so realistic.. had a lovely time reading..

    • Gauri

      Thanks Jessie 🙂 loads of love dear 🙂 thanks for making my day 🙂 love you 🙂

  11. Gauri today’s epi brought tears in my eyes..Don’t knw why..but yes my eyes r teary now…marriage is really big dream for every girl from childhood.. we always think of our dream prince to be like Neil n Arjun..The way you describe Sam state of mind while being bride.. hats off to you..if you would have been in front of me i surely would have give you bone crushed hug…Radhika’s gift was really very precious… Now itching to knw Jai reaction n how Arjun handle him by ‘his way’.. n hey what abt your book?hav you decided the title?? Loads loads loads of love my darling..Take care..

    • Gauri

      Thanks Dipika darling 🙂 I really want to meet you once 🙂 trust me the day I meet you I will hug you first and talk later 🙂 love you for making each update special for me 🙂 yes I am writing that one…have chosen a title… Gianna suggested 🙂 ‘REMNANTS’ I loved it 🙂 million hugs and kisses for you stay blessed 🙂 love u

      • ohhh thanks Gauri for lovely words..m really overwhelm.. i too wanna meet amazing person like you..Title is really sweet n amazing…when book will be published i wanna signed copy by you..love you sho much..tc

  12. I always loved your update….my heart wants more n more …hope one day u will tell ur story nonstop n I’ll listen it….aweeee me n my dreams…lol…what about ur 6 yrs…m excited for next …..thanks a ton abha for writing again…n promise don’t leave ur writing….now I will not request u coz u r lil than me,so think it as my order…lol…don’t mind…I would like to read ur stories till the eternity…

    • Gauri

      Thanks Rosie 🙂 I wish I can write million stories 🙂 I promise I will never leave writing as its my soul 🙂 and my darling we are frinds you are free to speak your heart this is what friendship is 🙂 love you 🙂 waiting for ur update 🙂 stay blessed:)

  13. Ritu

    very cute epi..each part was fun and emotional..RaNeil awesome and loved aradhika part.finally nesam git married..now waitimg for aradhika nd SiDini….love u..take care..and have a happy journey..

    • Gauri

      Thanks Ritu 🙂 loads of love 🙂 please update your story so that I have something to save my head during boring meetings 🙂 loads of love stay blessed 🙂

  14. Harani

    Aww …nesam wedding was so simple but could be viewed ..such is your writing dr di ..I am out of words ..waiting to watch the camp fun and the more emotional drama that’s going to be held in India :-*

  15. priya

    As usual another awesome episode what to say abt u nd ur stories as I totally out of wrds..I think brahma left some powers and u…want to read ur ff all d tym how many tyms I read I will nvr get bored off..I still wanted it..what r u made of..ur making me curious,eager,crazy wat not..completely edited to u nd ff..love u to d core…always admire u …nd to d ff wat is jai reaction??will jai start torturing radhika aftr coming to India??how would arjun take it??will sam know abt jai??hw would piyali react to wedding nd jai??and will di lip find radhika even loved arjun??will nandu accept Sid?arjun would know of it or not??
    Finally love u master piece?

    • Gauri

      Thanks Priya 🙂 your comments are like your name priya…lovable 🙂 love you 🙂 Jai will know Radhika is dating someone but will know of Arjun a little late 🙂 yes he bother her…torture…well Radhika is no less 🙂 Sam will soon know about Jai 🙂 Piyali will create another drama …yes Radhika will herself confess 🙂 now for rest you have to wait 🙂 loads of love stay blessed 🙂

  16. Sv

    Didi sry sry sry , internet failed here. Just now rectified. U rocked so much. NEil is such a darling . Wishes for NEsam’s wedding and Arjun awww i really loved his concern sry possessivenes for Radhika. Radhika is one big drama queen. Loved it, full swing to pull Arjun’s Legs. Wish prena is not that mad on Nesam. Di i want to see JAi and Arjun in person, the most awaited moment of the ff. Wish that happens and that would be the damaka for us.

    Di love your words and u soo soo much. Di next one some hint of Arjun vs Jai pls. Even if that isin precap also i’m happy or your planning something else also im happy di. Love you di bear hugs and kisses too.

    • Gauri

      Hi Sv 🙂 no problem dear 🙂 and no need for sorry 🙂 Jai and Arjun will meet and very soon 🙂 may be after 2 chapters 🙂 loads of love dear 🙂 stay blessed my cutie pie 🙂 love you

  17. sreee

    wow di….cute epi…totally loved it….waiting for their camp trip….loved nandinis scene so much…it was so beautiful….that saree scene was superb…even i wish that she would have worn it alone…would have just loved arjuns reaction then….and di take all the time u need..afterall it is a wonderful work u r doing by writting these ffs..dont stress too much….love u sooo much

  18. Gianna

    Amazing update Gauri loved it very much. Radhika is such a drama queen and Arjun is just too much, buying the store? Ufff So happy for Nesam but am scared for them this marriage will anger many. Looking forward to the camping trip and I loved Sid. Stay blessed Gauri, love u….

  19. Di i luv u a lot.. Its a blast epi di radzz teasing & seduce to arjun was best part di ……waiting fr camp outing pls update soon its was best & minblowing chappy di ……luv u Di big hug fr u ……, 🙂

  20. pankh

    As always fabulous…sorry for not commenting on previous chapters bt I love all of them..and when will Sam come to know that it was only Jai who tried destroying Radhika…post next epi soon..loads of love

  21. Roma

    Wowwww, wowwww wowwww nesam married. ..I’m dancing in joy…yippeeeeeeee…all the preparation, rads drama, shopping…ardhika romantic moments. ….all was incredibly beautiful. ..muaaaaahhhhhh. …loved it very very muchhhh. …nandini n sid convo was really awesome…sid’s proposal was soooo cuteeeee nandu he danced in happiness. ..lol….nesam wedding brought lots of stress in their families but we know it will be soon cool down…it will be fun in nesam n ardhika camping trip….can’t wait for the next episode, precap is very exciting n interesting. …gauriiiiiiiiiiiii my sweethearttttt your each every word is worth zillions….mind blowing narraion…keep it up honeyyyyyy. . . .eagerly waiting for the next episode, love you loads. Muaaaaahhhhhh .. lotssssss of hugsssssss n kissesssss. 🙂 😉 😀 ♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡

    • Gauri

      Roma meri Jaan 🙂 muaaaaaaaaaaaaahhhhhhhhhh….feels so empty without your comment…now I am all happy love you meri jaan ….love you 🙂 stay blessed 🙂

  22. Fanficoholic

    Hey gauri di. Fanficohlic here. I started commenting in your previous epi. Before that i was a silent reader. Srry fr the late comment. Somethng came up so cld nt follow up abt ur ff. Coming to the episode i am short of words. How come u write so beautifully??? Pl give me some of ur writing skills so that i can get 5/5 fr my writing task????
    Ur ff is jst amazing. Actually everything abt u is amazing. And di i am waiting fr the track whn arjun will treat a lesson to jai. I am jst so excited fr it.

    Love u and ur ff loads dii
    ???????????

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