Manmarziyan- Destiny…Passion …Obsession (Chapter 35)

Hello my dear friends…so here is the next chapter ….do let me know how was it…and thanks for all the amazing comments on the previous updates …loads of love to you all 🙂 thanks again 🙂

Whatever may be the case….nothing beats the bond which you share with …your childhood friend

Chapter 35


Radhika got to know about Sam through Arjun…she rushed to the hospital and found unconscious and pale Sam lying on the bed with drips and equipment…Neil sitting by her bed holding her hand…and Arjun sitting on the couch watching Neil sadly…she walks to Neil; ‘’How is she?’’

Neil; ‘’better …she consumed whole packet of peanut cookies…to escape that man…I failed her chashni…she was scared to be alone…and I left her alone…’’ Neil sobs

Radhika wipes her tears…cups Neil’s face; ‘’You never failed her….punish Ayan and pull her out of this mess neil and soon…we cannot let this go on for more’’

Arjun; ‘’we will…Neil take care of her…I will pace up things now we will close Ayan’s chapter before you guys leave for India..’’

Neil ; ‘’Arjun take Radhika home’’

Radhika; ‘’No I will stay’’

Neil; ‘’only one can stay…come in the morning I can go back then….now go’’

Radhika took place beside Arjun in his car…she was angry on Ayan for Sam’s state and scared too

Arjun; ‘’I will drop you to your dorm…and tomorrow morning to the hospital…’’ Radhika did not respond once they reached her dorm…she asked;
‘’Can I stay with you?’’

Arjun; ‘’If you are fine’’

Radhika; ‘’wait her for 2 minutes I will be back’’ Radhika came back with a small bag and Rajun took her to his apartment…Radhika quickly changes and ties her hair in a bun…she walks to Arjun’s room and finds him standing in the balcony…Radhika hugs him from behind; ‘’No one will come between us …right…?? I don’t want the pain what Neil and Sam are going through’’

Arjun pulled her to front; ‘’no one…I won’t let anyone close to you…stop worrying Sam will be fine…and Ayan will be punished…now smile…please for me’’ Radhika smiles but not fully…Arjun hugs her again…’’Bunny my sister met your parents…I don’t think they will agree easily’’

Arjun felt Radhika’s tightening arm around him and her tears on his t-shirt…’’Bunny stop crying…we will convince them…I promise you’’ Arjun brings her inside…makes her sit…wipe her tears; ‘’thank you for loving me so much’’

Radhika; ‘’get one thing straight either it’s you or no one …you don’t know my extreme’’ Arjun hugged her tightly… Arjun smiles; ‘’you are something else…I love everything about you…don’t worry..I marked you as mine…no one takes what belongs to me’’ Radhika finally smiled….she knew he will not let her go anywhere… Arjun hugs her patting her back…Radhika makes a decision; ‘’Ayan Raizada….I don’t what
Arjun Neil will do …but once Sam open her eyes I am going to teach you a lesson for life….Sam I shared my childhood with you I will make you stand again wrong now’’

Neil watched sleeping Sam she looked so weak…he was angry now…first he had decided just to pull Sam out but now…it will destroy Ayan Raizada completely …he knew what has to be done Myra had already been secured…and Rana somehow threatened the remaining partners to sign their share of to Neil as Ayan’s was bound to be punished..and it would involve his partners too…Neil came to Sam touched her forehead she slowly opened her eyes and smiled…

Neil; ‘’Sammy this is the last time you suffered pain…now I will end this…we will marry soon’’

Sam eyes started flowing…she was weak…her voice came out in whisper; ‘’Promise?’’

Neil kissed her forehead; ‘’Yes my life…we will marry I don’t want to leave you alone again…Radhika will be coming to give you company…I will be back in afternoon’’ Sam held Neil’s hand and kissed it lightly

Radhika got up and found herself alone on the bed and Arjun on the couch…she smiled , walked to him and poked him…Arjun lazily looked at her; ‘’Bunny let me sleep…you kicked me off the bed…don’t know what were you angry about’’

Radhika smiled and again poked him; ‘’move and make place for me’’ Arjun opened his eyes smiled an shifted…she happily adjusted herself next to him….Arjun lovingly hugged her…’’Sorry tiger…I was angry on that Ayan…I kept on kicking him in my dream’’ Arjun laughed…and Radhika could feel the his body vibrating against hers; ‘’God! he is still safe…and poor me got kicked…Bunny seriously you are giving me all reasons to love you u more…and don’t dream about anyone except me ….now get up you need to go to Sam…’’ Instead of getting up she moved closer to him..hiding herself in his chest; ‘’2 minutes pls’’ Arjun hugged her like a teddy bear…well 2 minutes turned into an hour…and these love birds were woken up by Neil’s call…Arjun answered; ‘’Yes’’

Neil; ‘’Where the hell is Radhika…and you were suppose to drop her here’’

Arjun jerked up; ‘’Yeah…will pick her up In sometime…we will be there in 30 min’’

Neil; ‘’Pick her up??…do I look like an idiot…I know she is with you…now both of you be quick’’ Arjun smiled at his phone..and then gave a look to Radhika…he ruffled her hair ; ‘’wake up my doll….your adopted dad will kill me’’

Radhika stretched.. smiled and hugged him; ‘’will be out in 5 minutes….love you’’ Arjun dropped Radhika to the hospital….Neil’s irritated gaze
moved from Arjun to Radhika….he pulled her ear…’’I accepted him doesn’t mean you are free to do all kind of circus….take this as a warning’’

Radhika rubbed her ear…curled her lip and went inside….Arjun wished Sam and took Neil with him.

Radhika was welcomed by Sam with a smile; ‘’Chashni…why did Neil scold you’’

Radhika; ‘’Because he loves to do that…leave him…how are you feeling’’

Sam; ‘’Better’’

Radhika; ‘’Sammy you ate full packet of peanut cookies…you could have died..’’

Sam kept looking down…and then spoke; ‘’That would be best part…who needs me…mom pushed me into this without reading the terms and conditions…Neil is going through so much…I even questioned your pious bond… I am not a good person’’

Radhika cupped her face; ‘’I need you…before Neil and ARjun…it Sam and Radhika…and it will always be the same…Sam you need to stand for yourself…stop justifying yourself….do what you believe in…rather than eating these cookies you should have messaged me …I would have chopped that guys balls off…’’ The nurse who entered Sam’s room dropped the tray hearing Radhika’s sentence…and Sam laughed…. Radhika made a proud face…Radhika helped Sam in breakfast and entertained her…she noticed continuous calls on Sam’s phone; ‘’Sammy why is Ayan calling you now’’

Sam; ‘’for compromise he is scared of consequences’’

Radhika thought for a moment and spoke; ‘’Lets meet him once you are fine’’

Sam blinked; ‘’Chashni…Neil will kill us both’’

Radhika whispered; ‘’Remember what we did with the guy in doon ….who kept drooling on you for 6 months…we will so similar thing with him…but in a polished way’’

Sam; ‘’No Chashni…Neil has asked me not to attend his call’’

Radhika; ‘’Sam…he is your boy friend not your master…be a 21st century girl’’

Sam pressed her lips; ‘’Drama queen…sit down before someone throws you out…for organizing opera in a hospital’’

Radhika; ‘’First promise me you will listen to me’’

Sam helplessly nodded…Radhika clapped….her Pov; ‘I will give you such a punishment that from now on…you will think 10 times before hurting any girl’

Arjun and Neil reached Arjun’s apartment….Neil directly went to Arjun’s bar and made himself a drink…Arjun snatched it; ‘’No Neil not early morning…calm yourself down’’

Neil pulled his hair; ‘’I want to kill that man.. Ayan’’

Arjun; ‘’Destroy….killing will free him off with pain….it will take sometime for the legal formalities to get you the complete ownership of GLITZ till then stay calm’’ Arjun was still trying to calm Neil when he got Nandini’s call; ‘’Yes nandu’’

Nandini; ‘’Put me on speaker…need to speak to both of you’’ Arjun obliged ‘’Neil…listen marry Sam before stepping in India…don’t worry about anything I will handle…if she has you legally it would be difficult to harm her…we need to keep her safe….and Myra is difficult…she is not ready to open her mouth she fears that Ayan may harm her again…prison in Bangkok was a nightmare…she is too scared’’

Neil lost it; ‘’What the hell di…we helped her out…and now she is refusing us …won’t leave her’’

Nandini; ‘’’Neil calm down…and do as I say…Arjun make him sleep and from today Hudson will be with Sam till she is in US…Neil do you trust your di?’’’

Neil huffed; ‘’Do you really need an answer di’’

Nandini smiled; ‘’Good now rest…Hudson is in hospital where Sam is admitted and this is for both of you…Ayan will try to get in touch with Sam to buy his safety… beware ’’ Nandini disconnected…. Arjun and Neil looked at each other and decided to keep an eye on Ayan closely

Ayan was restless….Sam was not answering…and Arjun Mehra was standing to protect her…plus he didn’t knew whom his partners had signed their shares off…he had to get to Sam to save his neck…but how…he was thinking….when he got Sam’s call; ‘’Thanks Sam…can we meet please’’

Sam; ‘’Ok will message you the venue once I am free’’ Sam disconnected and Radhika gave her a thumbs up.

Mumbai Mehra Industries head office

Nandini was in the head office of Mehra group…discussing something with Arnav…well 6-7 yr old girl dashed into the cabin and hid under Arnav’s table…both looked at each other surprised and amused…about the little disturbance…Nandini heard a knock…and turned to the door a tall man with wheatish complexion dressed in a tuxedo entered…;’’I am so sorry….Sia come out’’

Arnav smiled; ‘’Its ok Sid…have a seat…Sia is quite comfortable’’

Nandini smiled; ‘’Sid when did you get married…bad you didn’t invite me’’

Sid; ‘’I never married…but Sia is my daughter’’

Nandini smiled and pulled Sia out; ‘’Come out SIa aunty will give you chocolate’’ Sia came out holding her doll and chocolate in other hand….Nandini looks and chocolate and then Arnav…’’Chahu!!! its not good for your health’’ Arnav smiles…and calls his PA…’’Please take Sia to kids play zone on ground floor’’

Nandini; ‘’Sid you never married then Sia?’’

Sid; ‘’I adopted her…and now she is my daughter’’

Nandini; ‘’Get married…give Sia a good mom’’

Sid smiled; ‘’Will you marry me Nandini’’ Nandini froze and Arnav smiled…she excused herself and left.

Arnav ; ‘’Sid are you serious’’

Sid; ‘’I have always been serious about her…she refused then…and I am still waiting and will always wait’’

Arnav; ‘’Sid …convincing her has always been difficult but you have something which will melt Nandini….Sia….I want to see her happy before I leave this world’’ Arnav smiled gently he wanted his daughter to be happy…Nandini had been an amazing daughter and sister…but now it was time they should think about her too…

Sid or Siddharth Rathore was Arnav’s friend and business associates son…he had done his professional studies with Nandini…and had like her since then…she was intelligent full of life…and extremely beautiful..whatever may be the situation she smiled…what attracted Sid was Nandini’s love for kids Since her college days..she was able to gel with any kid…she still took care of an NGO which was working in the betterment of under privileged kids…and it was Nanini’s idea…to start a day boarding in Mehra Group of Companies…so that employees could work and take care and stay close to their kids too

They always had been friends …Sid wanted to be a part of Nandini’s life…but before he could confess…Nandini got engage to Samrat…and Sid decided to be happy in her happiness….It was 2 days before Nandini’s wedding…Mehra Mansion house was full of celebration…Sid would go there as a friend and helping hand…just to see her…her smile mattered to him the most…but a phone call changed everything…Samrat married his college friend Piyali 2 days before his marriage to Nandini…she broke down…she had come to love Samrat…Arnav and his wife were devastated and their beloved Niece’s condition…

Sid proposed after 2 yrs but Nandini refused….he couldn’t marry someone else….Sid opened his eyes when someone knocked his cabin door…and when it opened he saw Nandini smiling at him.


Arjun decided to pick Radhika up from her campus he had to drop her to hospital as Sam was getting discharged…Arjun parked and walked to wards the building…but the view in front of him made him mad….his curled his fingers into a fist…Radhika just hugged one for her class mate…

Arjun POV; ‘’I was trying to forget your last mistake of dancing with 5 guys in my party and now this…time to teach you a lesson’’

Sam was getting discharged…Radhika was with her in her room..Sam came out after changing and softly spoke ; ‘’Chashni…I spoke to Ayan now what?’’

Radhika; ‘’tell me what kind of punishment he deserves…’’

Sam; ‘’he should be stripped naked…the way he keeps doing with girls…Chashni…how about a male striptease’’ Sam and Radhika smiled each other…Neil observed both the girls smiling…his POV; ’don’t know who is about to die’

Radhika Neil took Sam back to Arjun’s apartment….Neil took Sam inside and made her rest…Radhika looped her arm around Arjun’s waist and brushed her fingers on his waist..Arjun smiled; ‘’Bunny what are you doing’’

Radhika; ‘’trying to take advantage of the situation and you’’

Arjun pulled her close ; ‘’let’s go out somewhere… just you and me’’

Radhika took a sigh of relief; ‘’Thank god you understood’’ Arjun smiled….gripped her hand and walked out of the apartment…

Arjun took Radhika to Steve’s studio…he latched the room…’’you promised me…you will dance for me…will you do now’’ Radhika nodded and
ARjun played the song ‘ye fitoor’….Radhika danced stretching …curling….opening her body and curves….she started spinning on one leg then curled in a sitting position giving Arjun a flying kiss…Radhika again picked up the beats and went spinning to Arjun…and sat on her knees bowing her head in front of him…symbolizing her complete surrender to him…finishing her performance…Arjun lifted her chin up….’’your place in not in my feet…its here in my heart….but sometimes you forget that ’’ Arjun held her palm over his chest…Radhika got up and hugged him; ‘’Did you like it …’’

Arjun watched her face but his eyes were different…they were hungry…wild; ‘’Time to show you’’ Arjun stood up holding Radhika tightly to him and invaded her mouth… but the aggression was something that Radhika had never experienced before….he had never been hard on her…but this was something else…she felt disgusted because she couldn’t feel love…it was mad …she tried to push him away but he went on deepening it more tightening his grip Radhika was terrified…his grip was too painful..and he didn’t care of her low sobs…she wanted to be free..but his grip was way too strong…Arjun pulled back and observed her face….she looked nervous …her face bloomed pink….she was scared… …Radhika’s eyes had tears…’’What was this’’

Arjun smiled…pulled her in a protective embrace and spoke at the top of her head; ‘’This was the punishment for dancing 5 Random guys at my party and hugging that creep in your campus ’’

Radhika looked at Arjun all shocked..she felt insulted; ‘’you still are holding onto that party…you are impossible Arjun’’

Arjun; ‘’This my problem…I don’t forget a thing…and I pay back’’

Radhika; ‘’Pay back??? Am I your competitor or your enemy…that you need a payback…. Do you care…how scared I was in that mad grip of yours…let me go now’’ she struggled but he held her tight

Arjun; ‘’Easy Bunny….This is was the 10% what you make me feel…I had seen your RYTHYM video…even before you came to US…I went wild….I wanted you like crazy….but then met you…and fell in love with you…now you are my madness… I am not sorry…because can never see you with someone else…’’

Radhika was still scared ‘’ Arjun if you didn’t like it.. you could have spoken about it… but what you did was insulting …’’

Arjun smiled and lifted her eyes to meet his; ‘’Next time you flirt …I will punish you very bad….this was nothing…. you can’t escape me now…I don’t want to hurt you’’

Radhika ; ‘’you just did…leave me I want to go home’’

Arjun pulled her close..rubbed her back; ‘’Do you trust me’’ She did not answer him…she was hurt by the way he punished her….she felt insulted…if he was stubborn and she was no less….Arjun smiled at her silence…he pulled her in a hug…she did not respond…he knew she was angry…but he was helpless…yes he changed but for how long a Tiger will behave like a kitten.

Radhika gathered her strength and pushed him…Arjun was surprised …he walked to her but she stopped; ‘’No… stay back….’’ Radhika walked off leaving Arjun behind ‘’
Love is not just about right on a person….but also about the rights and freedom of that person…respect your love.

Precap; Still thinking

Credit to: Gauri


  1. i think it arjun girl frd who warnd radhika before i thk he will become like old arjun she will get scaed and tell neil and he would seperate

    • Gauri

      Thanks for the comment Swetha 🙂 you will know what happens in the next one 🙂 stay blessed 🙂

  2. Rg

    Hi gauri grt morning thanks to u. Your ff was fantastic. I saw this d first thing in d morning and it truly made my day. It was awesome to read ur ff . I loved it to d core. Poor Sam, I really wish she would get well real soon. Wow so Neil and Sam r going to get married wow awesome… It’s grt. I can’t wait for tat one. Nandini rocks. Glad to c someone for her. And d very cute gal. Am waiting to c how their love shapes up.
    Glad to c old arjun back on track. And ur one liner how Long can a tiger behave as a kitten? Was a superb comparison. Well am feeling Low for both arjun and radhika.. Well as questions go by… Why did arjun react d way he did with aggression ? He knows rads is new to intimacy. And y would rads feel uncomfortable ? She knows wat she has in hand is a tiger tat can spring its claws though it has sheath its claws doesn’t mean it’s devoid of claws… I think she should have expected it or suspected it. But then it’s also true tat it’s always d one whom u Love d most hurt d most… If rads can’t stand his intimacy with agression how will she get along with him? Arjun being arjun is bound to b like tat. Though he loves her and can’t really hurt her I think being aggressive is In his nature…I think his kiss was meant to convey in a way of punishing lu#t… All he could have done was let her know but no, he had to do it this way… How is rads going to handle him in future… Once again my question rises will rads get used his agression in love and intimacy or will arjun change( I can’t imagine tat) … I hate wat he did, though not surprised. The poor gal tried to push him , but he dint allow her to go away intimacy should never b forced. No matter wat. Pls tell me wats rads going to do… Will she tell Neil and make it a mess? If so sad… Thr r certain things tat u just can’t share with anyone no matter who it is( in my opinion ). .. I think they shd solve it themselves. I hope they will… Yet I loved their chemistry.. I hope arjun apologies and they patch up soon. Looking forward for their patch up.
    By d way how will rads and Sam punish Ayan. Hope neither gets hurt. I loved ur ff gauri. When r u updating this ? And will u b updating mmz tomorrow . Pls pls tell me. I can barely wait. Lovely episode . Looking forward for future. Take care. Stay blessedly happy.

    • Gauri

      Thanks Rg for the fantastic comment 😀 now your answers well…Radhika knows she has tiger in hand….but she is upset because he said he punished her…she could not stand that…Rads has her own ways she will handle him…now you tell me do you think a man like Arjun can change…no mess don’t worry…she is not the girl who runs around and complain she will find her own way…wait for the next one 🙂 I gave a hint how Sam and Rads will punish Ayan…you will soon see that coming…I am still writing MMZ and DPO….I havent written a single word…so may be Thursday morning 🙂 loads of love 🙂

  3. chandan

    This one is awesome Gauri….loved the bond b/w the four…what Chashni going to do with that Ayan…excited!! Ardhika scenes are cute today…Arjun back to his Tiger avatar…the lines at the end just awesome…enjoyed totally…keep writing n keep rocking…tc

  4. Devi

    Tat kicking off bed scene…sooo cute… hope rads n sam wil teach ayan a lesson he wil nevr frget in his life….n thn comes first fight btwn rads n arjun aftr bein in a relation…eager to c hw arjun gona bring bak rads…;-) superrr epi…..thnk u…

    • Gauri

      Thanks Devi 🙂 Rads and Sam will teach Ayan a very good lesson 🙂 well Arjun will not let her go so easily 🙂 loads of love 🙂

  5. Awesome episode, can’t wait to read what Radhika and Sam will do to Ayan and will Arjun apology to Radhika for mistreating her?

    Well done Gauri your nailing it as always. 🙂

    • Gauri

      Thanks Brin 🙂 lesson would be something Ayan will remember for life…and Arjun will aplogise or not ???? wait for next one 🙂 loads of love 🙂

  6. sammy

    Hehe gauri di when Neil spoked Sammy …I was getting a heavenly feeling…love arjun’s possessiveness..awesome chappy:-) 🙂

  7. Dhara

    Thank you 4 updating early ? excited for ayan’s punishment nd Arjun should learn lesson again. ? Girls rocked this part. Waiting for nandhu’s happiness?

  8. Hope fav writer/ sissy.. Sry cudn’t cmnt on last epi.. Coz i typed a long story..and got deleted..
    Well.. I’ve decided not to talk abt d ff.. Coz everytym u amuse me giving a new twist n the way story developes… Love u infinity..di…
    Gud news.. Me n my buddy patched up.. He didn’t apologised..instead gave me chocolates.. He knows i can’t say no to dat.. We had a frnds day out.. They emptied my purse in a cafe.. Di..waiting 4 mbf and nxt dpo update.. TC.. Keep smiling..

    • Gauri

      Hi Hope 🙂 happy to hear that you guys patched up good 🙂 well somewhere in my heart I knew you would patch up….because come what may some bonds can never be broken 🙂 stay blessed and happy 🙂 love you 🙂

  9. What is Sam and Radhika called ? Sardhika? Then I really loved their part today ..
    😀 when Neil says ‘someone’s goin to die today’ was awesome.. And really waiting for the punishment for ayan.. Hope they dont get themselves into trouble ..
    and last part.. arjun is just losing control,. Wild nature really a tiger.. but worried for ardhika..
    Loved each and every scene gauri dii…. And yup I love the name ‘abha’ more than ‘gauri’ .. Aise hi kehdia 🙂 hope you dnt mind

    • Gauri

      Thanks Roshini 🙂 Saradhika…sounds good….welldon’t know about the trouble but they will for sure getting scolded 🙂 if Arjun is tiger Radhika is ring master 😉 Why would I mind ….Abha name was given to me by my late grandfather…its special for me…yes I hated it in school being roll no. 1 …. I was the one to get sacrificed first…but miss all that 🙂 anyways loads of love and missing your updates 🙂 tc

      • Hahahha diii yeah I feel for the ‘A’ starters… I didnt face that and I felt so lucky.. 😀 I am back anyway.. will update kindle soon 🙂

      • Gauri

        It was horrible….I didn’t even get the experience of copying in exams….my place used to be the first one ….right infront of the invigilator 🙁 …do let me know once u upload kindle 🙂

  10. neetz

    Every tym i see a dpo update i just donno what i feel till i read it …i think its just lyk a hungry kid seeing a chocolate 🙂
    M so.much attached to this story dear and todays epi mindblowing…oh my god all this story and ideas just lyk that flows into ur head…i think if i cud i will steal ur brain lol :- D but still m happy i have u as a frnd and read what evr u write.. love you loads …

    • Gauri

      Thanks Neetz 🙂 that was so sweet of you 🙂 thanks for making my day 🙂 loads of love and a big hug for you 🙂

  11. Gauri di I luv u I can’t praise u anymore im searching words fr dt…..ur d best writer di… again I fall n luv wit u…….muuhhhhhaaaa bear hug fr u di tc ……… 🙂

  12. Jessie

    Awesome epi.. loved Rads cheering Sam.. waiting to know how they are going to punish him.. but surely if ArNeil watches it., they wud realise their girls aren’t easy.. Tiger back to himself., u know war., I was waiting when he wud show this., I may sound stupid., bt as u said how long can a tiger stay as a pet.. Arjun’s move was so realistic..Hmm.Time for bunny to show her tigress avatar.. Am sure. She will make him feel regretted for being this aggressive..

    Had a gr8 time reading.. Thanks Gauri..

    • Gauri

      Thanks Jessi 🙂 you will love the punishment for Ayan …. 🙂 well ArNeil will be angry for getting into a mess 🙂 Radhika will make Arjun realize his mistake…. 🙂 thanks again 🙂 loads of love 🙂

  13. vini

    what i guessed was correct .. i hate that part of arjun who insulted radhika >:) about ayan’s punishment woowww 🙂 i am excited to see what radhika and sam gonna do 🙂 🙂 .. about nandhini excited to see what is she gonna tell sid 🙂 🙂 and when are u posting the next chapter ???

    • Gauri

      Thanks Vini 🙂 I am planning a good punishment for him… I myself hate guys who love to dominate…which is impossible with some girls…Arjun needs a lesson and he will get it….next one on thursday 🙂 love you

  14. Nowadays Arjun took contract that I should visit him n giv a smack on his face…lol…leave that…m not going to tell about u know…m really curious about those girls besties what are they upto…sara I liked their bond most…n not to forget that dialogue…uuufff when Neil said now who is gonna die??? Lol the best sentence of update…when girls together nobody should dare to mess with them ??

    • Gauri

      Thanks Rosie 🙂 yes you are bang on …when girls decide….pls don’t mess with them…Ayan will get what he deserves 🙂 loads of love stay blessed 🙂 love u

  15. Supriya.

    Omg what was this glycerin???A stupendous…. Fabulous…. Fantastic… lovely… Just out of the world…. I don’t have words to praise you…..still gave it a try…. Loved it to the core…di I loved the last line…love z not just abt the rights on the person but also abt the freedom and rights of that person….. Loved Sam nd rads…. I know how imp it z to have a girl bestie….I cannot leave without my bestie madhura….you can call her my adopted mom….becoz actually she treats me like a baby…..we talk for hours still I keep on missing her……can’t help it….even you r my bestie but first you r my sis…..I loved nandu today…….I liked sid too….I wish samrat had never been in nandu’s life……but look at the gud side she z getting a child free with a husband…..hehehe I know m funny…..I didn’t like Arjun today….I mean I know he has a impossible nature but wht he did today was not justified….. I could feel how disgusted rads felt after that……Di will he ever change???…. Di now my questions….. Will rads be the target of arjun’s anger ever again in life?……what will be his reaction to Sam and rads plan against ayan?…..will nandu accept Sid’s proposal?……will arjun punish rads again?…..will he apologize?….., when r you bringing rads fmly?…..will arjun accompany rads to India?…..will Sam brk ties with piyali after she her objection to Nesam relationship?…… Will you show some coldness in btw nandu and piyali?……will this tiger change?…… I mean how can you expect your girl to cut of ties with all her male frds?……this z madness….we love to read abt such lovers but in real life it seems total torture….how can we hurt someone we love?…..I don’t like such brutal love?… know i had read a novel titled the hell I experienced… that the husband claimed to love that wife but when she went against his will…..he used domestic violence….. In that one scene was that he whipped her with his belt when she met her old Colg frd….he tried to burn her with himself but she got saved in the end……srsly it z a heart touching story….but you get scared while reading it…..di I know arjun loves rads truely but wht he did today was not gud…but you know even arjun has the impossible nature in my Jaanemaan nd love you forever ff…..I guess we all ppl portray arjun like this only…..di m talking too much r8?…..actually wanted to read your update in the morn but got a gud scolding from mom when I was snooping my phone screen while getting ready for classes….. Atlast I m relieved after reading it….now when will you update next one?… you….muaaah….. Tc?

    • Gauri

      Thanks Darling loved your comment 🙂 now your answers 🙂 yes he is changed and he is not a guy to beat her …. he will realize his mistake 🙂 they will have fights but small … I don’t prefer guys dominating their partners …they should be taught a lesson soon 🙂 Nandu andSid abhi to shuru hua hai…thida wait karo darling 🙂 yes Piyali will be very cold when she gets to know of Arjun Radhika’s alliance….I disagree Arjun is possessive strong headed but not a women beater…he is just the way he is … next one you will see a side of him a different one … tc and stay blessed love you loads 🙂

      • Supriya.

        Thanks for all your wonderful answers…..I loved all of them…..well I know arjun can never hurt rads but just wanted to confirm this…..di when will you update next one?….loads of love?

      • Gauri

        Thursday dear….I haven’t written a single word …plus have to finish MMZ for wed 🙁 all tied up 🙂 pls bare with me 🙂

  16. Sv

    Didi i loved sam and rads part. they are the best today. neil should not spare that nonsense ayan and arjun why the hell the beast is coming again to him. i want rads to beat him badly but i dont want them to break their lovely journey. coz u know how crazy i am with this ardhika pair. di make rads to kneel down arjun and stand in the same position for 5 hours for his punishment. i know my punishment is at school level . but that would be fair enough for arjun and if more then radhika should not meet arjun for 1 week. yup di this sounds a bit better. sid is the pair for nandhini ?? rite . yippiee i wanna see them together soon coz i love this nandhini. sam and radhika should teach a good lesson to that ayan.

    di always love u di this was a fantabulous update. love u di and ur words . take care and bear hugs and kisses di love u .

    • Gauri

      Thanks Sv darling 🙂 thanks for making each and every word so special 🙂 Arjun will be sorry and Sam and radhika will teach Ayan a good lesson 🙂 love you my cutie pie ..stay blessed 🙂

  17. Gianna

    Gauriiiiiiii amazing amazing amazing update this was. Loved rads sam bond ? waiting to know the lesson they will teach that stupid Ayan. Loved Sid a lot am so excited with for his track with Nandini who as always rocked. Tiger tiger tiger uffffff I knew he will do something like this. Now waiting eagerly for ur nxt update. Stay blessed love u

    • Gauri

      Thanks Gianna 🙂 I will make Tiger a kitten soon 😛 🙂 will post soon 🙂 loads of love stay blessed 🙂

  18. Harani

    Just loved this chap ma ..Arjun is so possessive over his bunny’s all right to be possessive but he should understand her feelings ..Radhika could have felt guilty of he have made her understand how much it pained him to see her flirting ..but what he did made Radhi (my darling 😛 ) feel disgusted ..
    and Sam and Neil part was so emotional and lovely ..why should Sam always hide her brain somewhere in distant island and get herself land in trouble dii…
    I am happy for nandhu a new pair is introduced to her ..she is such a good hearted soul who deserve that 🙂
    wanna see ardhika or tiger and his bunny to romance 😀
    Awesome work di ..hats off to you 🙂
    love you loads 😀

  19. Gauri i lost my words Actually I’m searching now, OK i got it, 1sr Thank u sooooooo much gauri.

    Arjun welcome back to Angry Bird World ? Again i saw my Angry Bird. Feel bad 4 radhu, arjun destroyed her Trust ? & i don know how ill recover herself. I like Neil s POV.

    Waiting 4 Ayen punishment segment.

    OK bye Gauri ?

  20. sweety

    Ooo hoooo Abha u always put me in to tension now I’m again feeling restless WHR ever I goo I’m thinking only one thing if der fight will end up in next episode r would take some episodes pls plan in next episode only I always reading u r ffs from first to last again I want to wait for Thursday oh my goddd 2 days 48 hours oh hoo noo ha abha u didn’t uploaded double damaka from long tym Iam missing u r double damaka episodes pls Darling plan dat one and make arjun realize his mistake early plss Darling I love u alott waiting for mmz and a lot of kisses and hugs for uuu love uu dear if I bored sryy

    • Gauri

      Thanks for your love Sweety 🙂 what to do I am writing 2 ff not getting time for double dhamaka + office ….I havent written a single word for next one….but will still try 🙂 now don”t take tension everything will be fine in next update tc 🙂 loads of love 🙂

      • sweety

        Ya I know ofc den ffs but u r handling very beautiful I know handling all is very difficult but I can’t hold myself towards u r ff in which way arjun is mad in radhika same iam also same mad about u r ff love u

  21. Rg

    Hi gauri sorry for pestering. But I can’t help it. By any chance mmz tomorrow? Did u by sheer luck finish writing???? thanks,…

  22. sreee

    u kept us all hanging in the midway…THIS IS NOT FAIR AT ALLLL……but the episode was so gooood and chweet…and am so happy for nandu, as u have always wanted a guy for her like this…..and neils comment on the girls smiling…..rads telling him to move in couch to make a place for her..she kicking him off dreaming of ayan…..sia with choclates….all soooo cute…exceptttt the last part….i wish he wouldnt have dine that and have punished her someother…..but now no prblm no worries but di just plsss patch them up soon…i cant stand the thought that bunny is disgusted with her tiger’s behaviour……pretty plsss???

    • Gauri

      Sorry darling wanted to right more….but cldn’t time constraints ….don’t worry no one is separating ARadhika …love you 🙂

  23. sreee

    and i want arjun to change too…..never loved his madness thats sometime too much out of control…

  24. Ritu

    another awesome chapter..loved it..waiting for our girls to teach Ayan a lesson..and nandini’s scenes was just superb…hope she gets all the happiness she deserved..dear plz teach a lesson to Samrat Khanna too..he must pay for ditching Nandini for Piyali…love u..

    • Gauri

      Thanks Ritu 🙂 everyone will get their share of lessons …. time spares none 🙂 loadsof love 🙂

  25. priya

    As usual u rocked..really it is difficult for a tiger to be kitten but radhika is not less hoe she will find her own way that mend arjun…will Neil find any fault in arjun due to this?? I think radhika is going to bang ayaan.?? Waiting for d next update words queen? will Nesam marry before going to India??

  26. Bhabya

    Sorry 4 the late comment but the epi was superb n dhaamakedar. Di what is ur book name which u r writing now?

  27. m

    hello beautiful lady……oopsss girl…….its amazing epi……arjun……ohhhhoooo…let him justify his name tiger……hahaha…radhika…….let her realize his worst side also……

    sam…..get well soon…… with ur brain also….

    neil…….iye…his dimple…….muahhhhhh

  28. sreee

    di dont take anything i typed seriously , i just wanted to tease u that’s all… i am sorry if i have hurted u… u…..take care

    • Gauri

      Sree darling no need for sorry….and don’t worry…I don’t mind anything love you 🙂 sleep tight 🙂

  29. Sweetie

    Hey di!! Amazing update as always.. 😀 Now what these devils(Radhika,sam) are upto?? Jo bhi ho, I’m up for it because it’s about punishment to Ayan.. I’m super duper happy to see such strong girls..Hehe.. 🙂
    Yayy!! Finally Nandini’s man has come into the picture..Aww!! How he loves her so much.. Nandini is such a lucky woman.. 🙂 Little Sia is too adorable..I so wish to pinch her cheeks.. 😀
    Keep smiling di.. 🙂 Bye 😀

  30. hooooooooo hoooooooooo? just imagine am all looking liks dis now???? ha ha ha ? its really fabulous??? awesome???loved sam n rads bond??✌ its totally superbbbbbbb darling? how rads kicked out arjun s fab?? loved dat convo?✌ i really need ayan ? pig should b punished well✌ i just want his head as football so dat i ll kick it nicely⚽⚽ now its getting interesting ✌✌ loved arjun madness?✌ tooooooooooooo goooooodddddddddd?? love u darling sissy??? loved it???

  31. Sravya

    nice one but don’t want the fight bw them.As always u r good.Loved the FF.when will be the nxt one?Stay happy n tc☺

  32. nita

    Nice one waiting for Nxt one….. Wanted to see radhika dealing with arjun for his act and punishing ayan

  33. ab

    First sry for late comment n this is an awesome chapter di my love fir you increases day by day love you soooooooo much ??

  34. Dev

    Hey gauri…..1st of alll……a Big SORRY BUDDY……i was late ……..n a superb epi… comes d masti of radz angr n sams justice……
    Love u lots… plzzzz…….tc??????

  35. Roma

    Awesome, marvellous, outstanding episode. …soooooooo sorry sweeeeeetheart gauriiiiiiiiiiiii for late comment….the epi was mind blowing. …rads n sam were amazing. ….neil n arjun’s anger for Ayan will destroy him completely. .. .but before that rads n sam will punish him badly….rads dance for arjun was very lovelyyyyyy but arjun’s punishment to rads was really wild n aggressive, rads shocked n hurt, angry on him… 🙁 ….I’m curious for the next update. …plz update sooooon my dearrrrr….love you loads. . . Muaaaaahhhhhh. …♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡ 🙂 ;).:)

  36. Hello. I was browsing through some fanfics and i saw this one. I am just in love with ur fanfic gauri di. I read all the episodes in one go. They are just awesome. Please tell me the name of the other fanfic u r writing. I will follow and comment on even that. From today i will comment on each and every episode if urs even if i read them long after they are uploaded cause my college will be starting from monday. Love u di for ur wonderful fanfic. Please continuee this????????????

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