Manmarziyan- Destiny…Passion …Obsession (Chapter 34)

Hello friends …as promised here is the next chapter…please do let me know how was it…and thanks again for being a brilliant support 🙂 Next one on Monday enjoy the ride 🙂 🙂 🙂

Chapter 34

Love makes impossible …possible…Love gives you the strength to fight odds…break boundaries and find new routes
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Mumbai , India

Rana stretched his legs … cracked his knuckles and neck joints sitting opposite to GLITZ’s 2 partners…they were Ayan’s cousins… he pulled his gun and kept on the table next to legal transfer papers….he looked at both of them and gave a dangerous smile…’’Sign the papers and take the money…make it easy…I have more work to do’’

Partner 1; ‘’Why should we sign our share…we build this company’’

Rana smirked; ‘’You will sign…because you don’t want to spend your life behind the bars…which Ayan will for sure…you should be thankful that we are paying you for this…or I would have done this easily without giving you a penny’’

The second partner got agitated…he got up and screamed; ‘’Do you even know ….whom you are dealing with…you are not aware of my contacts…one call and you will be lying in a gutter….your family will never see your body again’’

Rana took a deep breath leaned his back on the sofa..and took his hands behind his head…; ‘’I don’t want to know your contacts…because the one buying your shares is someone beyond your reach….and if you annoy them….your bodies will reach your families but in pieces…we will label each part and let your family know it’s yours… and mind you ….no one will be able to find the killers….now enough of your B grade dialogues….do it or I will start the chopping work now itself’’

Both looked at each other and signed….Rana handed them the money; ‘’Keep your lips sealed for next 1 month’’ he walked out and called Arjun…Rana ; ’’They have signed the papers…I will get the legal formalities done in a week to complete the transfer’’

Arjun; ‘’Good job Rana’’

Arjun disconnected and gave Neil a thumbs up…Neil’s POV; ‘Sam I will end your pain soon’

New York , USA

Sam was sitting in her room recalling a childhood event…. Sam was dangerously allergic to peanuts …once in childhood she just had peanuts to get Piyali’s attention…she still kept nut cookies in her bag…but now reason was something else …

Radhika was preparing for her exams…and she needed her mentor…as there were certain things which no one could teach her better than him….final trimester projects…. case studies and assignments…Arjun had been teaching and guiding her but since he decided to keep Neil’s word…they haven’t met accept for few moments in his party…she knew Arjun won’t come but she had her own ways..she smiled at her idea.

Radhika dialed Neil…’’ Buddy I need help with my assignments and projects…Arjun is my mentor…but he won’t help till you allow’’

Neil thought; ‘’Fine…but you need to meet him in my presence…’’

Radhika; ‘’Ok…inform Arjun…that I will be at his place by evening for few hours’’

Neil; ‘’Why me…you can do that’’

Radhika; ‘’I don’t want to break my and Arjun’s promise to you’’

Neil; ‘’You are one drama queen….fine I will…but will keep an eye on you two’’

Arjun came out of his study and got shocked…Radhika was sitting in the hall with Sam he kept watching her…he had not met her for days….Arjun watched from distance without blinking…Neil came and touched his shoulder…’’She needs your help…for her studies….but remember only studies’’ Arjun smiled…and nodded…and walked to her; ‘’Radhika wait for me in this room itself’’ Radhika nodded after sometime….Arjun joined her and Radhika briefed him on her problems and difficulties…Neil kept an eye on them….they only discussed studies and at time Arjun would even scold her for not doing things properly…Arjun went inside the library to get a book but when he came back Radhika was sleeping with her head on her book…he spinkled water on face and she jerked up ‘’Why did you do that’’

Arjun; ‘’Sleep when you are home now study’’ she made a face… kicked him under the table and went back doing her work…by the time they finished it was 11:00 PM…Radhika got up to leave but Arjun didn’t offer her ride…he wished her and went inside and banged his fist on the wall for being so helpless…he never wanted her to travel alone…Neil offered but Radhika refused she was upset…she wanted to be with Arjun….Radhika walked out of the building and found Steve waiting for her she smiled understood and looked up she found Arjun standing on the balcony smiling down at her…he gave her a flying kiss and she caught that…’’I love you Arjun’’ Radhika drove off with Steve

Sam who was watching this from the balcony of her room smiled and thought; ‘’Neil you Amrish Puri’’

Arjun watched Radhika’s picture on his wall and smiled…Neil was studying him from behind…’’Why Radhika Arjun ?’’

Arjun turned; ‘’because she broke all the walls around my heart….Because I don’t feel lonely when she is around…because she accepted me the way I am with my good and my bad….she never pretends…..and because I just love her to death’’

Neil saw Arjun’s eyes had tears…which did not come out he walked towards Arjun; ‘’You said you will marry her…will you keep her happy…she is not a girl who will again fall for someone…she is a one man woman…will you be able to keep her intact….and one more thing….her parents won’t agree so soon because of the status difference…are you ready to fight’’

Arjun replied ; ‘’She is my life…I never thought about marriage or love before her…her smile is my sunshine….and I will fight the universe to be with her’’

Neil smiled; ‘’Go Arjun…your bunny needs you’’ Arjun blinked for a minute ….then smiled and hugged Neil tight…picked his jacket keys and left….

it was snowing Radhika was sitting in the balcony…Anna warned her not to be out in cold…she nodded but stayed ….Anna heard the door bell someone was really impatient …Anna screamed; ‘’Hold your horses….you will burn the switch… Anna answered and Arjun hugged her….; ‘’Arjun are you fine…well go to your girl…she is again out in balcony’’ Arjun gave Anna a big smile Anna understood; ‘’GO now’’….Arjun went to Radhika’s room….he watched her standing with folded arms …and snowflakes deposited on her dark hairs like jasmine flowers…Arjun unbuttoned his jacket…gently moved to her and hugged her from behind…covering her thin frame with his jacket…Radhika smiled and leaned her head on his shoulder…’’Missed you Tiger’’

Arjun; ‘’Why are you here in cold and in shorts…. which are too short’’

Radhika; ‘’to fall sick…I know you would come breaking all rules if I am in pain…and today I desperately wanted you to break rules and be old

Arjun’’ Arjun smiled lifted her up and twilred her around….once on the floor she turned around and hugged him; ‘’Will you stay for some time’’

Arjun; ‘’How about complete night’’ Radhika squealed and jumped Arjun held her to him…he caressed her face and rubbed his nose to hers….and then Kissed her…a flood of emotions broke in their hearts…Arjun held her tightly by her waist…and his other moved its way to her bare skin under her shirt…she was cold….Arjun brought her more close and whispered; ‘’You make me something else…I never knew this Arjun existed…I love you Radhika Mishra’’

Radhika; ‘’I would prefer Bunny….your Bunny’’

Arjun smiled; ‘’Let’s go in…I will make soup or coffee…you are cold’’

Radhika; ‘’Just hold me Arjun…that what I need right now’’ Arjun never had thought that Radhika would love him same way the way he loved her…Arjun went close lifted her like a sack and brought inside…he closed the room came to her and covered their bodies with blanket; ‘’Sleep my love….I know you don’t sleep these days’’

Radhika; ‘’Not today…I have millions things to talk and share…we can play chess what say’’

Arjun; ‘’Stay close me …chess some other day…talk as much as you want…but stay near so that I can feel you ’’ Radhika smiled and moved her soft hand under his t-shirt…wrapping it around his waist…she kept her head on his shoulder and kissed his cheek; ‘’better now??…. tiger… we just have convinced Neil….my parents are hard nut to crack’’

Arjun; ‘’Leave that on my sister….now just let live my life completely in this one night’’ Radhika kept her chin on his chest and watched him….Arjun touched her face; ‘’What are you thinking Bunny’’

Radhika; ‘’If I had known you for years like Neil…I would have fallen for you long back…’’ Arjun pulled her up on his body…she was one girl who had fallen for a devil and changed him …he caressed her face; ‘’Sleep’’ she obliged kept her head on chest and closed her eyes…Arjun wrapped both his arm around her and spoke; ‘’I am still mad at you for dancing with 5 guys in my party’’ Radhika smiled and ignored…but she wasn’t aware Arjun never forgets a thing in his life…

Mumbai Mishra Residence

Nandini reached Mishra residence….the colony seemed to be awe of her…why not she was Nandini Mehra…a known name…Nandini asked her body guards to stay near the car and she herself proceeded to Radhika’s flat…Mala answered the door she was surprised; ‘’Sorry but do we know each other ‘’

Nandini smiled; ‘’Nandini Mehra…can I come in’’ Mala welcomed Nandini and they were joined by Dilip in few minutes…he was shocked to find

Nandini in his house…he had known Samrat since childhood…and he had attended Nandini’s engagement with Samrat…Nandini got up smiled and greeted Dilip with a naamste; ‘’How are you Dilipji’’

Dilip smiled; ‘’Nandini..its a pleasure to see you….I am glad you made a good name for yourself…tell me how is everything and how can I help you’’

Nandini smiled at the warm welcome; ‘’I have a request…please accept it because I won’t back out till you say yes’’

Dilip; ‘’first I need to hear you out’’

Nandini joined her palms to request; ‘’I want Radhika’s hand for my brother r Arjun’’ Mala and Dilip were too shocked to react…Arjun Mehra the prince of Mehra empire…one of the most richest guys in the country…and they were just an upper middle class family

Dilip; ‘’Nandini…thanks but…I don’t think this will work…our families are poles part…Radhika wont be able to adjust’’

Nandini; ‘’I understand…but please think on this once…we will take Radhika as our own daughter..she can study and wok whatever she wants to do…please Dilipji…I have been waiting to talk to you for 4yrs’’

Mala; ‘’4 yrs???’’

Nandini smiled; ‘’Chachu met Radhika is Samrat’s party 3-4 yrs back…and liked her positivity he had been praying since then to make Radhika a part of Arjun’s life’’

Mala beamed…it was like the king herself was asking for her daughter but Dilip was not convinced; ‘’Nandini I need time’’

Nandini; ‘’take as much as you want…but please say yes…otherwise I will be an unwanted guest ‘’ they laughed Nandini wished them and left…

Mala danced…but Dilip was worried…there was too much of difference…but he wasn’t aware…that his darling daughter had already made a choice, but Dilip’s decision was about to complicate the situations a little more.

USA

Sam reached her shoot location Arjun told her he will be joining her in an hour time….Sam went inside the green room and checked her costumes but she was shocked to find that she has to do lingerie shoot….Sam tries to move out but founds Ayan outside she overhears his conversation; ‘’Good she is alone today…make her do this shoot she is bound by this contract…these pictures will help us in presenting her to our clients…Sam brokes down she cursed herself for walking into his trap…she knew Arjun had to attend a meeting and Arjun had asked Neil to stay out of Ayan’s sight for sometime…and Ayan’s people were keeping an eye on her…. …She quickly picked her bag ….opened the packet of peanut cookies and finishes them in one go and then messaged Neil and Arjun…within 20 min Sam felt an excruciating pain in her abdomen and she falls…she heard the bagging on the door of the washroom but stayed in a corner…Sam starts sweating and pain took over her she collapsed on the floor.

Neil and Arjun received the message and left for Sam’s shooting location in a hurry….when they reached…they found Sam being taken into the ambulance….Neil glared at Ayan…Neil was about to punch Ayan…but Arjun holds him; ‘’not now…you will get this opportunity…go with Sam..go Neil’’

After Neil left Arjun casually walked to Ayan and threatened him; ‘’Pray that Sam should be fine…or people will forget that you even existed’’

Ayan; ‘’Who the hell are you…you don’t know me….I am..A…’’

Arjun cuts; ‘’a bastard Ayan Raizada…and I am Arjun Mehra…son of Arnav Mehra…hope now you know who stands with that girl’’

Ayan gulps….Mehras were giant…their contacts were not just in India but outside too…Arjun walks off leaving a sweating Ayan behind… poor lad didn’t knew more was coming…but Ayan had to plan his escape…

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Ture Love breaks rules sets history….Ayan had evoked a beast in Neil….a beast who was determined to destroy him.

Precap; Sam-Radhika decide to teach Ayan a lesson…new hope walks into Nandini’s life

Credit to: Gauri

104 comments

  1. priya

    Super episode….what a creativity u possess?? Ur made for writing…seriously a fantabulous episode…now I am tensed what would be d hurdle created bydilip??and for ayaan play with him like anything…hope there would me more play when radhika reach India??will piyali make any plans to stop nesam wedding??will she agree with them??wat abt jai??
    And thanks for d awesome episode eagerly waiting for the next as it is filled with suspense…I know ur going to thrill us with it…lots of love..

    • Gauri

      Thanks a ton Priya 🙂 Dilip will create confusion…there is lot more to come 🙂 Piyali will not be able to do a thing 🙂 loads of love stay blessed 🙂

  2. Superb di …u just nailed it ….lots of love …..sorry bit busy with my neet prep that’s why didn’t commented

  3. Emz fasa

    Awesome 😀 i love nandini alot wow she is amazing waiting for her pair 😉 niel finally he agreed now waiting for his beast avatar ;-> arjun omg he turned impatient to meet his bunny 😉 precap seems interesting not ar-iel but sa-ra taking revenge 😛 i think todays chapter is short now waiting for monday

  4. sammy

    Amazing gauri di…Ayan tu gya bechara…. nandini will also get someone not bad… radhika always pampered by her tiger.. and Neil lol…amrish puri…my god my stomach is paining.. gauri di you are awesome…love u a lot:-) 🙂

  5. aastha

    Di its superb !!!!!!!!!! Rads is soooo naughty…..she knows the best way to meet her love……….happy that finally Neil said yes to Arjun……………Nandini’s entry at Mishra house and her dialogues were most suitable and very nyc………..what is Dilip’s decision ??????…………..enjoyed ardhika scenes……….Rana’s dialogues with that 2 idiots was superb !!!!!!! loved his attitude………………….I too was shocked like Sam reading about the shoot……..poor girl……………..I hope she will be fine……………di I have a doubt: is Neil well known in the business field ???????????……………plzzzzzz don’t make that Ayan escape……….plzzzzzzzzz update soooooooooon………………when’ll you be able to update MMZ- Married by fate ?????????…………….anyway TC……..love u………..

    • Gauri

      Thanks Aastha sweety 🙂 Dilip will create a confusion … Neil is known …he is the partner in Bird SOng and Devil Kitchen..he also owns the best dance studio RYTHYM… but he is a simple person where as Arjun loves to hog limelight …Ayan will get punished nicely…you will enjoy 🙂 MMZ tomorrow for sure 🙂 love you 🙂

  6. Sv

    This is a perfect update of all. Thanks to neil for accepting ardhika. Nandhini rocked and thanks to mala for jumping. Dilipji radhika has fallen for arjun. Pls accept or radhika will make u accept. I loved the possessive tiger and the possessive bunny. They are meant to be together and sam im really feeling sorry for her coz she was longing for a true love and care but hope she gets it with piyali .

    Di u rocked it again with your words . Love u di and ur words.take care and Bear my hugs and infinite kisses too. Muuhhhaaa

    • Gauri

      Thanks SV, you always make me feel on the top of the world 🙂 stay blessed 🙂 may god bless u with all the happiness 🙂 love u

  7. Sravya

    sorry Gauri I can’t tell u that how was the last FF. It was a nice one☺ I really loved today’s update. Niel agreed to their relationship.it was so superb.The way u r describing Ardhika’s luv was lovely☺ U r such an amazing writer dear.Eagerly waiting for the nxt one.luv u??? n tc☺☺☺☺

  8. Dhara

    Wow finally bunny n tiger are together, Neil accepted them ? hope sam will be fine. And they teach good lesson to Ayan.

    • Gauri

      Thanks Dhara 🙂 they will teach an amazing lesson to Ayan 🙂 wait for it 🙂 love you 🙂

  9. just think. am all dancing n jumping in happiness???????wat to say u r awesome really superbbbbbbb awesommeeeeee fabuloussssssss mind blowinggggggg ????u nailed each part?? neil finally accetped???i dont have boundries for my happiness??love u love u love u?????

  10. Sathya

    Fantabulous episode. Ahhh finally neil permit them… yeah.. happiiiiiiii…. ?????i like the way they yearned for eac other… it s toooooo good… u r rocking gauri… keep it up ??

  11. neetz

    Awwwwwww…m in loss of words to praise ur writing skills… love youuuuu..stay blessed and write a lot like this ..mmmuah

  12. chandan

    Good one Gauri…At last Neil accepted Ardhika relation…eager to know who would be Nandini’s match…tc

  13. Maarr dalaa Diii.. Amrish puri role ka the end now.. Loved arjun’s dialogue threatening ayan. Feel so bad for Sam. cant imagine the pain she feels having a mother but not the mother-love. Waiting for Neil to be the devil. 😉

    I am offln nowa days but I never miss your updates.. Must say you alwaysstick to your words, a punctual one!

    • Gauri

      Thanks Roshini 🙂 missing you and your updates 🙂 stay blessed and happy :)million smiles to you 🙂

  14. Supriya.

    Hey glycerin….I have nicknamed you that…..dare you deny for this one….now ask y glycerin?…..ans it z very good and has combustible nature….it can adjust to any surroundings making them beautiful…. Yup m complementing you in my different way……omg I have so many ideas to impress you……God m so intelligent…. Lol…..but am a unique piece….. so r u……now coming to today’s epi…….it was fabulous…. fantastic….. mindblowing…..common I don’t have more words……m speechless……. Now this was just the trailer of my comment….. Real movie starts now…..bear with me actually darling you have to…….arjun I m going to vanish Neil from my heart now because angry bird has swept me off my feet……..m gonna kiss him…he z going to miss me…..lol m gone crazy….. Just was trying my hands on rhyme…..I guess not my cup of tea……rads ka pyaar ka bukhar hai Allah……baachi haat se nikal gayi……this z the reaction of typical parents…..But guess wht m not lalita pawar……hehehehe…..laugh now……arjun z baazigar for me…….baazigar o baazigar tu hai bada jadugar……lol…..I said m gone crazy today…… Neilu m gonna ditch my arjun for a min and give you a peek on your cheek……I became Bewafa r8?…….I have lost it today…….I was appreciating everything till now in a very funny mood of mine……I don’t know but m too much happy today…..ask why?…….you ask me on chat hehehe not so easily will I tell you…….m one naughtiest of all…..will trouble you……now my questions……. How will ayan face arjun’s wrath?……what z Neil upto?…….when will rads fmly take the screen space?……how will Sam recover from this?…….poor girl…..I feel sorry for her…….I use to hate piyali but now I pity her she z wasting her love on a scoundrel like jai…….give her some brains di……..how will nandu’s path collide with her soulmate?……. What z arjun’s punishment for rads?…….excited to read it……m requesting u to take it soon…….when will be arjun and Jai’s faceoff?……aap ho kya yaar di?……how do you manage to write beautifully every time…….I m not jealous of you becoz I love you……….m not Pinocchio to lie……c my nose z still intact till now……hehehe lol…..m mad I know it…….chalo I think m boring u now……let’s take your leave…… Will meet on chat…..catch you later……update soon…..love you…..muaaah…..tc????????????????????

    • Gauri

      Thanks Supriya 🙂 Glycerin :I Girl you are a bewafa sanam…jumping form Neil toArjun and again back to Neil… 😛 Ayan will first get a nice treatment my girls and then by Neil ….something he never imagined 🙂 Nandini’s soul mate you will know … 🙂 Arjun’s punishment just read he will scare her to the core 🙂 loadsof love a big hug for you stay blessed 🙂 and update the devil story 🙂

  15. Very Gud Morning Gauri ?

    Wow Gauri i enjoyed this ride. Really i apprieciate ur Precious Little Brain ☺

    Asusaul waiting 4 the next 1

    Bye…….. ☺

  16. Devi

    Hoo finally neil ta amirish puri became neil ta anupam kher…;-) waiting fr nandinis man…

    • Gauri

      Thanks Devi 🙂 Amrish Puri to Anupam Kher LOL 🙂 you will see Nandini’s match soon 🙂 load os love 🙂

  17. Omg…really what u r…u never cease to amaze me…each n every time u giving shock by shock…no words perfect for u…i should suggest people to find words for u….n did u leave hangout again….

    • Gauri

      Thanks Rosie 🙂 no darling… I am not getting enough time to come on hangout…. work pressure is at its peak… sorry but will chat over the weekend 🙂 stay blessed 🙂

  18. Jessie

    Oh wow!! This is just Awesome… I was a silent reader and a fan of MMZ..Gauri.. U are a brilliant writer.I just love d way u bring those sub plots n enough n strong importance to all characters when needed.. Thank u for writing such fabulous story on our MMZ.. Thanks to all other sweeeeet writers here…

    Waiting for Ra-Sam’s revenge plan.. Want Ardhika moments lil more.. (am getting crazy) I like Nandini in ur story..One powerful sister for both of our heroes.. Finalllyy.. Neil agreed.. Happy.. Happy.. I was thinking wat would be his next test..Glad tat he dint test more..wanna know piyali’s reaction for this lingerie shoot..will she regret in first place for pushing Sam for jai’s sake..Loved it like anything.. read more than 5 times.. woohoo am happy..

  19. Jerly

    wow!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! it was just an awesome episode……. loved it to the moon and back…..plz dear post next part soon…….. love u…. 🙂 🙂

  20. vini

    Hi Gauri 🙂 you know what i really wanted to comment only when you are completing this fan fiction , cuz then i would have words to describe you FF your way of writing else if i am commenting every chapter , i would have no words to describe 🙁 . but today you tempted me a lot to comment 🙂 🙂 😀 . Needless to say, this chapter was awesome Gauri. you thoughts are out of the box , out of world as well .. loved it 🙂 thank goodness Neil accepted them . “Arjun never forgets a thing in life ” ??? i find fishy reading this line .. i think something will happen cuz of that is it so??. i am just awestruck .. waiting for your next episode eagerly 🙂 🙂

    • Gauri

      Thanks a ton Vini 🙂 yup that line is fishy and you caught that kuddos 🙂 will post soon loads of love stay blessed 🙂

  21. sweety

    I’m bored of telling same words again and again have to discover new words for u r fabulous writing I can’t stop praising u I hate u abhaa I hate u lot u made be restless ,desperate ,addict to wards u r ff but I can’t hate u how can I hate u I love uu I love uuu dear a lot of kisses and hugs for u u had a great and bright future dear

  22. Awesome episode, finally Neil accepted Ardhika, now only if Radhika’s dad accept Arjun every thing could go smoothly.

    This story is addicting I always get excited when you update it. So badly want this to be on TV, hope one day it does.

    You are nailing it, hats off, well done. 🙂

    • Gauri

      Thanks Brin 🙂 Radhika’s dad will be creating a confusion 🙂 loads of love stay blessed 🙂

    • Gauri

      Thanks Vachana 🙂 yes i checked it waiting for the series to start 🙂 bless you 🙂

  23. Rg

    Wow gauri it’s d best one I have read so far, it’s awesome fantastic.. I loved tat rads and arjun got together… I loved neils role. Want c d fantastic four together. I hate Ayan… How is arjun going to pull rads leg for dancing with 5 guys? Am waiting for tat. And wat will their nxt fight be? Till now it’s toooo goody goody with arjun being toooo sweet… Yeeks…. Where d mad arjun gauri? Am not sure y am such a sadisit can’t accept arjun sweet… When u give a mad arjun I ask for a sweet one, when u give a sweet one I ask for a mad one. I Guess am truly pathetic….?… Your story is very gripping. I was so impatient since morning to read. I was updating tu every 5 mins… Waiting in btw for ur ffs now has become very difficult dear. From where do u get such wonderful imagination? U r truly blessed. And thank u so much for coming into my life like this and truly cheering me up with ur fabulous ff … Not every one can tell and describe such entertaining tale. A small request pls don’t end either of ur ffs soon. Few questions… How will dilip react to it? Will arjun and rads have a serious fight? Arjuns pulling rads leg for dancing with 5 guys … How will Sam come out of d mess… And when is d mad arjun going to come bac… Missing him……will d 4 go on outings together?
    Ur d best gauri…. Pls update soon. Am waiting for Nandini’s pair.
    Last but not least mmz pakka tomorrow ???? Pls…

    • Gauri

      Thanks Rg for all the lovely words 🙂 Mad Arjun….I wrote a line Arjun never forgets a thing …you will see that soon…resulting into fight between the two 🙂 now your answers Dilip will start looking for other options for his daughter on of them is Neil 😉 wait for the drama .. yes these four will be going on an outing together… you read my mind….was planning that 🙂 Nandini’s pair will enter soon next update for sure 🙂 tomorrow mmz for sure will finish and post 🙂 tc and thanks again for being so sweet 🙂 love u dear 🙂

  24. Gianna

    Yaay Neil finally convinced kisses for him and for u too. I see the plan to crash Ayan is on full swing but wasn’t a fan of Sam’s reaction, harming oneself is not cool though I understand her I have met ppl like her. This is why am a fan of ur writing coz it’s so realistic and easy to relate to. Loads and loads of love to u ??? stay blessed.

    PS: have u found a title for ur book yet? Just curious here

    • Gauri

      Thanks A ton Gianna 🙂 yes I took the one you suggested because I loved it in one go 🙂 thanks for that 🙂 love you 🙂

  25. Yipeeeee finally bunny & tiger together im happy di bear hug for u ……..totally mind blowing epi di arjun warning to stupid ayan woww….waiting fr radzz&sam to execute thr plan……. luv u di lot of kissssssss…….. 🙂

  26. VSK

    hii dhi
    i m mad at this ff
    bcoz i know each & every part of it in awesome

    i comment very rarely…

    dhi i think u should write a book on this …..
    i promise u it will become most selling book… really dhi

    & bye the way dhi i got 89% in my 12th board 🙂

    • Gauri

      Hey Congrats !!!!! 89% is very good …. keep it up 🙂 and thanks a ton for such a lovely comment 🙂 I am writing a book but on something different 🙂 loads of love 🙂

  27. Sweetie

    Hi di, How are you??
    Fantastic di.. 😀 I’m smiling ear to ear while reading this update.. I just loved the dialogues of Rana to both the cousins of Ayan.. 🙂
    Finally bunny and tiger are together.. Yayy!! 😀
    Ayan tho bachke rehna chahiye.. Hehe.. Arjun Mehra-naam hi kaafi hai.. Haayee!!
    I just loved the update di.. Stay blessed and take care.. 🙂

    • Gauri

      Thanks Sweetie….even I am smiling reading your comment 🙂 stay blessed 🙂 loads of love 🙂

  28. Gauri Some ppl r born to do the specific thing in which they spl..like that..you r born to write n making us mesmerise..hi can’t enough of your writting every time i wish i should never end..if i get chance thn i surely meet you n hugg you tight..epi is extraordinary… Arjun’s ans on neil question steal my heart…m excited that how arjun will impress dilip….Neil will turn beast..omg so much excitement.. can’t control.. love you my swt buddy..tc

    • Gauri

      Dipika muhaaaaaaa ! this one is for you 🙂 thanks darling for such amazing words I am on cloud 9 …if you are Bangalore we can surely plan and meet 😀 there is lot of drama to come 🙂 lots of love and hugs for u 🙂

      • thanks for the muhhhaa gauri…m dancing actually…whn i can come Bangalore thn my two dreams will true.one to explore n 2 is to meet you..wish that day come soon..love you..

  29. Hey Gauri di!! Its me Zara.. Though i have read your ff from the beginning and loved it, i remained silent. Yes. Finally i am breaking my silence and want to say that you are an amazing writer and different too! 😀 I haven’t commented in any other ffs so this is my very first one at TU but yes other ffs are also good which i cannot deny like Sathya, Amy, Rosie, Renu and many others. But like others say you are the best. So lots of love from me <3 <3. And yes forgot to say one thing, ArDhika in this ff is the cutest.
    P.S: forgive me for not commenting till now and plz plz update a double dhamaka when you are free <3 <3

    • Gauri

      Thanks Zara 🙂 glad you broke your silence 🙂 every story on TU is special and love reading all mmz and some other FFs as well…because mmz is the only show I watched and could connect too 🙂 and no need for sorry darling…I should be the one thanking you for your time and love 🙂 stay blessed 🙂

  30. Raaga

    Awesome Gauri…:-)
    no words in my hrt to really describe about u and ur skill…
    love u…:-)

  31. Roma

    Awesomeeeeeeeeee….gauriiiiiiiiiiiii my sweeeeeet darling. …I’m jumping n hopping around….yayyyy….neiluuuu accepted ardhikaaaaaa….I’m on cloud 9….noooo on mooooon along with ardhikaaaa…lol……lovely convo between arjneil……ardhika proved their true n pure love to neil…..awwwwww…..I’m so excited…..nandini diiii…muaaaaahhhhhh….asked rads hand for arjun….wowwww. …but dilip uncle making it complicated. …ughhhh….plz maan jaao naaa uncle…..poor sam took very drastic step….I’m gonna knock this ayan…..such cheaster, jerk, n all bad cursing words…..I hope sam get well soon….arjun’s warning to Ayan was very dangerous….loved it….the beast inside neil also awoke now…Ayan tu toh gaya……precap is very exciting n interesting. ..Sam n rads will knock out Ayan n then neil will give him best treatment for hurting his ladylove sam…the beast in neil yet to be shown…..lol…….nandini di too get someone special in her lonely life….I’m so excited my sweeeeeetheart gauriiiiiiiiiiiii…..you’re amazingly awesoooooome…..everyone n everything is perfect in your stories always…I enjoy it the most ….total entertainment package…….keep it up honeyyy. …I’m blessed to read your unique amazing awesoooooome stories…..God bless you my sweeeeeetheart. …keep smiling n writing…..how about your book, im waiting for that tooooo….anxiously……..waitingggggg for the next episode, love you loads. muaaaaahhhhhh. . 😉 😉 😉 ….. ♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡

    • Gauri

      Thanks Roma 🙂 you are a sweet heart 🙂 you just take me to a wonderland just by your beautiful words thanks a million times for making me feel so special 🙂 loads of love and big hug for you stay blessed 🙂

      • Roma

        Big hug to youuuuu toooo my sweeeeeetheart gauriiiiiiiiiiiii. …you make me happy with your stories n lovelyyyyyy reply…. the only way I can thank you for your hard work by commenting n open my heart in front of you…..u deserve all the appreciation n praising for your kindness n love for us….. I wish I could meet u in person n give u bone crushing hug in real…..be like this always…..keep smiling. …stay blessed…take care sweetheart. …love you loads. .muaaaaahhhhhh 🙂 🙂 🙂

  32. roshini

    Gauri this was a beautiful episode …loved Arjun Radhika moments –punish Ayan bad
    waiting for the next 🙂 tc

  33. sweety

    Guari u mentioned in previous comment arjun will scare her to core whom arjun will scare radika r ayan i am confused plss don’t put fight in btwn dem I can’t see dem like dat if u want put fight scene close fight in same episode plss dis is my humble request dear plss plss

    • Gauri

      Sweety dear don’t worry …its a cute fight they will patch up soon 🙂 loads of love 🙂 you are seriously sweet like your name stay blessed 🙂

  34. sreee

    wowwww di superb epi……am so happy for nandhini…..but the fight btw arjun and bunny on that dancing….would it be serious????

    • Gauri

      Sreee darling a big thank you 🙂 no it will be a small fight 🙂 loads of love stay blessed 😀

  35. Emz fasa

    Hey gauri 🙂 can i suggest you something bcoz i am big fan of one of swaragini ff RED STRING OF FATE -Ragsan by azure yesterday only she completed the story so its my small request to read her ff 🙂

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