Manmarziyan- Destiny…Passion …Obsession (Chapter 33)

Hello there all wonderful people thanks for your wishes comments love and support and now sorry to keep you waiting….here is the next chapter…Wednesday morning MMZ for sure 🙂 do let me know how was this one love you all 🙂

Chapter 33

A beautiful quote- ‘’Ultimate test for love is the distance…the one who withstand it…define true love’’
Sam got up early and prepared breakfast for Anna and Radhika…she quickly got ready to leave for Arjun’s place ….Sam took a taxi to Arjun’s place…she got a call from Ayan; ‘’How are you darling’’

Sam; ‘’Behave….I am not your darling’’

Ayan; ‘’Well you will be…3 months from now is our engagement…after that you will be mine…how about a date…I am in New York for your shoot’’

Sam; ‘’Then lets have that date once I have your ring on my finger…good bye’’ Sam was irritated…she wanted to help Piyali but never thought she will land in this mess…Sam kept wiping her tears, once she was at Arjun’s place….she took 2 minutes to composed herself…and then pressed the door bell…Stella answered…Sam asked about Arjun nad Neil…and Stella informed they were still in study…Sam found Neil and Arjun comfortably sleeping in the study…the glasses and the ashtray showed that they had good time together…Sam smiled and left her room.

Sam threw her body on the bed and closed her eyes…she knew she was trapped by Ayan…she herself had taken a hasty decision in anger and now because of her Neil will be in pain…tears started smearing down her eyes….Sam didn’t realize when sleep took over her pain and she retreated into a deep slumber.

Radhika Arjun decided not to meet any further…they decided to prove their love…Arjun wanted to solve Neil’s issue…not to get Radhika but for his beloved friend…Neil knew he will pull Sam out of the mess …but he wanted to check whether the distance between Arjun-Radhika take Arjun on the wrong path again…2 months were enough for him

Sam was getting ready for her shoot…today Arjun had accompanied her instead of Neil…Sam was sitting infornt of the mirror watching her image….her pain worry everything was evident in her eyes Arjun watched her and then came in; ‘’Sam…you are not alone…nothing will happen’’

Sam nodded; ‘’Arjun why are you helping me…My dad destroyed your sister’s life….Mehra’s don’t like us’’

Arjun smiled; ‘’Someone taught me to punish the culprit and not the innocent associated with the culprit…more over Nandu holds no grudge against anyone’’

Sam smiled; ‘’Radhika!!!….she can only give such lectures’’

Arjun; ‘’Sam…why did you sign this contract…it’s a suicide’’

Sam; ‘’In Chicago…I thought I lost Neil…I wanted to punish myself so I decided to invite the hell and my stupidity resulted getting you all involved in a mess…I am sorry’’

Arjun; ‘’It happens….there are two people in my life who love you dearly…and initially I was helping you for them….but now you are a friend …don’t worry I will pull you out of this mess…’’

Sam studied Arjun for a sec; ‘’You love her too much…go meet her….I can see the pain in your eyes don’t know how Neil can be so blind’’

Arjun; ‘’He is not blind…he cares for her…and its ok…I will do anything for her…if this temporary pain can give me my Radhika for life…I am fine with it’’

Sam; ‘’Arjun…you have changed…Old Arjun would have forcefully met Radhika’’

Arjun; ‘’Love changed me I don’t want to force anything on her..she doesn’t like it….Sam why does Neil care so much about her….and how come I never met her….I mean we share common friends and I know all his acquaintances…then how come I couldn’t get a glimpse of her ’’

Sam smile; ‘’because she has always been his family… his birdie…little one…and what not…and with your reputation forget it….when people pulled Neil’s leg regarding Radhika…he would get angry…and about his care for her well…Initially it was because Radhika’s unconditional care for me…but then her mischief and honesty made them best friends ….and 4 yrs back something changed in Radhika …since then Neil turned overprotective about her….that day when he took Bhai’s name….I lost my temper…trust me Arjun Bhai can never stoop so low’’

Arjun smiled; ‘’Sam its ok…Leave all that…now go…I will be around’’ Sam nodded and left…Arjun pulled his mobile and rubbed his thumb on the screen saver which had the picture of Radhika…he knew Neil wouldn’t lie…and Arjun himself was determined to teach Jai a lesson

Radhika was busy in library… she had exams and then her last trimester…she had done good in all trimester and wanted to give her best…but she missed Arjun dearly his possessive and impossible nature…his care…his anger…and his habit to cuddle her…she missed all….it had been two weeks since they met…her gang was also busy in their respective jobs as they all were senior to her…but they would time and again give her company…and try to cheer her up. After finishing her job at library…Radhika went to the store Deepak had noticed she was not coming with Arjun and was curious to know the reason; ‘’These days you come alone…where is your boyfriend’’

Radhika; ‘’I think…my personal life has nothing to do with my job at this store….so I chose not to answer’’

Deepak ‘s ego got hurt; ‘’Attitude!!!…tell me how did you trap him…he had never stayed with a girl that long…what did you offer him’’

Radhika turned and smiled; ‘’Deepak turn around….you have your answers’’ Ron stood there frowning with his hands folded to his chest…Deepak gulped in fear…

Ron; ‘’Rads…you shift time is over…go my car is parked out…I will join you in a sec’’ Radhika nodded and left…Ron walked to Deepak in a way to warn him; ‘’You should never mess with your boss….Arjun owns this place…and if next time I find you using this kind of language with her…next would be Arjun standing infront of you’’

Ron fired the engine and drove off with Radhika…she was quite…Ron; ‘’Rads we all miss the old one…who use to talk nonstop and irritate us…you have also stopped your dance practice…why dear’’

Radhika did not answer…she kept looking down…she felt if she spoke her voice will give up…Ron stopped his car…Radhika looked around; ‘’Where are we?’’

Ron; ‘’Come out…’’ Radhika came out it was the famous Ice cream outlet where Arjun would bring her…she smiled…and followed Ron…when she came inside she was greeted by her gang and Samaira…they tickled her…pulled her cheeks..Bought the best ice-cream she like… Radhika felt better…suddenly Anna dropped her cup on Radhika; ‘’Oops sorry Rads’’.

Radhika; ‘’No problem…I will be back in a minute’’ Once Radhika left Anna and Sam gave each other a hifi ….Radhika went inside the ladies room…. and got busy cleaning the mess…suddenly her eyes went on the mirror…Arjun was standing leaning on the wall watching her with a smile…she blinked a couple of times…Radhika pinched herself and then rubbed her hand Arjun chuckled; ‘’Come to me Bunny…I am waiting’’

Radhika ran to him and hugged him; ‘’Arjun …I missed you’’ Arjun removed her clip to let her long hair lose…he moved his fingers in the tangled knots of her hair..holding her waist with the other arm; ‘’You are turning beautiful with each moving day’’

Radhika; ‘’tell me something I don’t know’’ that surprised Arjun

Arjun; ‘’You were supposed to blush…and tell me…that beauty lies in the eyes of beholder and all’’

Radhika lifted her head from his chest and looked straight into his eyes; ‘’I am meeting you after 2 weeks…and you want to waste time in my blushing…’’ Arjun laughed and pulled her up into a warm hug; ‘’I want to be old Arjun…and kidnap you’’

Radhika; ‘’Do it…I promise not to shout…we will make a hut in a jungle and stay happily’’ that made him smile more; ‘’Bunny I have to go….Anna will take you home….Neil allowed me to meet you today guess he saw your gloomy face….’’ Arjun kissed her forehead…he gently loosen his grip but Radhika tighten it…she went oh her toes and kissed Arjun lovingly..she whispered; ‘’then make use of the opportunity….Now hug me tight and let me feel your love…’’

Arjun smiled tighten his grip and hugged her tight…leaving no place for air to pass through them…after sometime he moved; ‘’Promise me you will start dancing again…I had actually fallen for your dance’’ Radhika frowned…Arjun smile at the confusion ‘’Bunny will you dance for me….only me…I want to watch you….all alone’’

Radhika; ‘’Tell me when…but take care of your heart…guys fall for me once they watch me dancing’’

Arjun rubbed his thumb on her lips; ‘’I said only for me….no guy will watch you dancing from now… I will chose the song’’ Arjun kissed Radhika passionately ‘’you are mine….I will marry you in soon…no more distance’’

Arjun started walking to the door…..Radhika; ‘’Arjun can we call this our first wash room date’’ Arjun turned a found her with a serious face…he understood opened his arms again she smiled and hugged him again….’’I should get a hug for each day I missed’’ Arjun lovingly patted her head and left watching her walking backwards…without turning his back to her.

Sam and Arjun reached home…Arjun asked Sam to rest and went to his study…he knew Neil would be there…Arjun found Neil reading; ‘’So bro…how was your day’’

Neil; ‘’Good News…Myra is on her way to India…but keep fingers crossed till she reaches’’

Arjun; ‘’Wow…great job Neil….you really love Sam…otherwise Neil doing something like this impossible’’

Neil; ‘’How is Chashni?…I hate giving her pain’’

Arjun didn’t look into Neil’s eyes; ‘’She is fine…she loves you a lot Neil…she will never hurt you’’

Neil; ‘’you are not jealous…??? That is something strange’’

Arjun; ‘’I was..I wanted to snatch her from the world…I made her busy that so that she couldn’t speak to you…but her honesty changed me…well stop all this I have some work will join you for dinner go and meet Sam….she missed you all day’’

Neil turned to the door but then stopped; ‘’I let you see Radhika for her sake….but from now you guys will not see each other till I am sure of your love…and remember Arjun…1 mistake and I will pull her away.’’ Arjun smiled but in his heart he was scared to lose her.

Neil stopped at the door and turned; ‘’Arjun what about the second restaurant opening in US…are we still on that’’

Arjun; ‘’yes Neil … we will have the inauguration party this Saturday’’

Sam was not liking what Neil was doing…she was constantly pushing Neil to agree for Arjun Radhika…she met Radhika today and her dull face made Sam worried as Neil walked into her room Sam was ready; ‘’You should meet Chashni…she never gave up dancing and now stopped it completely’’ Neil seemed to be deaf he kept on doing his work…he understood Sam’s anger ….Sam couldn’t control; ‘’speak something’’

Neil calmly replied; “I care for her Sam….I allowed Arjun today just for her’’

Sam; ‘’you are forgetting this is Arjun…if he decides he will get Radhika…he will not care for any of your conditions and rules’’

Neil smirked; ‘’Arjun can break my conditions…but my chashni won’t and I am waiting for one mistake…don’t forget…I am not that easy …and keep yourself free on sat we have the opening of our second restaurant in US’’

Sam huffed ; ‘’Fine do whatever you like…I will go and help Stella…but remember…I need my old chashni back’’ Sam moved to the door and smiled..her POV; ‘Devil Kitchen second restaurant inauguration …I will make Chashini meet ARjun …let Neil go to hell’

Radhika messaged Arjun; ‘’Missing you’’ he smiled and pressed his mobile to his chest…he responded…’’Bunny no meeting and talking or messaging from today….I really want to prove myself…please…don’t make me lose’’ Radhika had tears in her eyes….she responded in a single word; ‘’fine’’ Arjun understood she was pained….but he wanted to prove that a guy like him can fall for someone with his full heart and can keep every promise he made to his love

It was Saturday Arjun and Neil got ready at their best…Arjun wore a jeans with while shirt loosely tucked and a black half jacket…Neil was completely in black tuxedo …with his top buttons lose…Sam had left on pretext of going to the stylist ….but she went directly to Radhika’s dorm…Arjun had invited his gang too….Anna and Cheryl were trying to make Radhika ready…but she refused as neither Neil nor Arjun invited her…she was hell angry….and didn’t wanted to go…Sam reached her dorm and saw Radhika with an angry expression…’’Sam I am not coming…none of them invited me….I am done being good with both of them’’

Sam hid her smile ; ‘’That’s what I want to explain you…be bad and come….dance with all available guys and make Arjun jealous…and Neil…if you come there it would be a punishment for your adoptive dad as his little one turned a rebel…what say’’ Radhika thought and went inside the washroom’’

Anna; ‘’Wow that worked’’

Sam; ‘’She can’t stand anyone ignoring her…now let’s make her ready quickly before she changes her mind’’ Radhika dressed herself in the gown gifted by Sam and Anna did her makeup and hair…Radhika gave herself one look… and left with girls for the venue.

The second restaurant of Devil’s Kitchen in US was a grand ….Arjun Neil had included cuisines from all over the globe….it was on two floor space…on the open terrace and below that a closed one…….the open terrace had Aquariums with beautiful fishes in the pillars giving a soothing view to the guests…there was a bar on each floor…serving best drinks on the menu…Neil-Arjun were satisfied with their work….they were growing big …not as a Mehra or Melhotra but as Arjun and Neil…they were still in the discussion with their guests when girls entered the party….Neil huffed in frustration and Sam gave him a winning smirk…But then Neil realized he could test Arjun with Radhika right infront of him…Arjun’s expression turned soft…his face clearly showed his deep feelings for Radhika…but then he averted his gaze….went to bar table and took a seat…showing his back to her….Sam felt like punching Neil and slapping Arjun…A blonde approached Neil for a dance…he agreed to make Sam jealous…but

Sam was least concerned as all her attention was on Radhika….whose anger was on boiling point…Radhika accepted the dance invitation and danced freely with a guy… Sam walked to Arjun ….Sam; ’’I did this for you two….you are drinking and she is dancing …’’

Arjun; ‘’Thanks Sam…because of you I got to see her face…I couldn’t even invite her‘’

Sam; ‘’Arjun….kill all the rules go meet her…I will handle that devil’’

Arjun; ‘’No its ok…by the way go tell your Chashni to stop flirting….I will punish her bad for all this random dancing….this is the 4th… now 5th guy she is dancing with’’

Sam made a face; ‘’You have your back to her….then how come..’’

Arjun smiled and pointed at the black shining glass at the bar shelf….Sam smiled and went straight to Radhika and took her to the corner; ‘’Arjun will kill you for dancing like this…and your Neil will murder me for turning you into a rebel’’

Radhika all angry ; ‘’Don’t worry…I will kill them both in one go’’ Radhika turned towards Arjun and found him talking to a beautiful girl…all happy…..Sam observed this and then gave Neil an angry stare she knew Neil wanted to check Arjun-Radhika’s trust on each other……Neil watched everything with a smile…and Arjun’s gang was really worried about …upcoming War….Arjun joined the lady and walked with her to a corner of the terrace…Neil walks to Radhika; ‘’aren’t you angry…you tiger has found a different tigress’’

Radhika smiled took Neil’s arm and walked in the same direction….they found Arjun standing alone in the corner….Radhika looked at Neil; ‘’Don’t forget he is a Tiger…he never hides and Tiger is only for his Bunny…Neil its impossible to break my trust on him….now go because I won’t leave this party without hugging him…and I don’t want you rolling your eyes at me’’ Neil smiled pulled her cheeks and left…Radhika walked to Arjun and hugged him from behind…Arjun pulled her front..’’Did you doubt me’’

Radhika; ‘’not even for a second…I know Neil …I knew he had send that girl to you and more than that I trust you’’ Arjun pulled Radhika to his chest…she hugged him tightly…

Arjun; ’’Bunny… your adoptive dad is not that bad…he gave us few moments together’’

Radhika; ‘’Because he has started trusting your love…don’t worry he will himself send you to me…or I will kill him’’ Arjun chuckled at her cute blabbering and lifted her up so she could comfortably bind her arms around his neck….Neil watched the two from some distance and smiled his POV; ‘I wanted to keep her away….but she became his life…wow…hats off to you destiny’

Sam walked to Neil; ‘’So Mr Melhotra…why aren’t you dragging them away…’’

Neil pulled Sam in an arm hug; ‘’Who will understand the pain of separation more than me… Arjun made me trust him…’’ Sam smiled and kept her head on his chest….Neil wrapped an arm around her …’’Sam …did you feel bad when you found Arjun as Radhika’s boyfriend’’

Sam; ‘’Was surprised…but I never felt bad…because I loved you and most important…never forget Radhika and I are together since we were four…nothing can be more important than her’’

Neil felt proud; ‘’Sammy time to take you in the corner’’ Sam blushed and punched him lightly hugging him again.
Love also has shades sometimes its care…friendship…companionship…it can also be passion pain…surrender….but it never can be obsession…obsession only leads to destruction…and love never destroys

Precap : Arjun-Radhika reconcile…Sam takes a drastic step to save herself from Ayan…Neil decides to marry Sam ASAP.

Credit to: Gauri


  1. Sathya

    ??????no words yar gauri…. u r SUPERB…. it is a beautiful, lovely episode… m really loss of words yar.. what to comment… dont know… hats off to u dear… a tight hug for u… ?????

  2. shreyanshi

    i have no words.. to praise u… your writingbz alwyz awsumm…..
    neil is trusting arjun…. and finally.. radhika and arjun will reconcile…

    gauri.. how r u?? wat abt ur health?

    • Gauri

      Thanks Shreyanshi 🙂 I am better will be in office from tomorrow….. love you stay blessed 🙂

  3. Supriya.

    Di Atlast my long wait z over… are turning spectacular day by day… just delayed it by one day and it seemed to me as one year……call me crazy if u wish to but I am crazy when it z about your updates…..I was biting my long nails whole day waiting for it…….I was desperately waiting for this……one thing z clear……you think more effectively after getting a good sleep……ur creative sense and imagination power increased 10 times after sleeping for whole day…..m just joking u shud sleep becoz u r ill……it was stupendous di… you for this amazing masterpiece……. Wanna kiss u on your cheeks rightnow…..???…….Arjun’s possessiveness z always a treat to watch……Neil I m falling for him day by day…….Sammy loved her……rads my cutie pie… was worth waiting…… You did not chat with me I was so anxious to talk to you……but you sleepy head was busy romancing your bed?……you have to compensate now……you will chat with me for two to three hours when you are perfectly fine…… I won’t hear any excuse that time……m really very possessive about you……won’t share your attention…… Now my questions……will arjun spoil z friendship with Sam while hurting her good for nothing bro?…….how are this ppl going to tackle ayan?……precap makes me tensed……nothing will happen to Sam,r8?……when will rads fmly know abt arjun?…….will samrat pay the price along with piyali?…… I think he shud be punished for spoiling nandu’s life in ur story……now its all upto u……wen will nandu meet her prince charming?……will piyali create more obstacles for nesam?……. I have too many questions but m sleepy rightnow……wen z the next one?……di update mmz by tom’s midnight if possible….. Plz try m desperate……??????flowers for you my sweet lady…….?????u said u can’t eat anything spicy wanted to tease u a bit…..I m feasting on chocolates here… one knows m having them at midnight?……di u have still not called me…..m waiting…… Once again congratulations u stole supriya’s heart… you so much…

    • Gauri

      Hi Supriya 🙂 thanks darling 🙂 yes I can romance my bed anytime….specially bcoz of medicines 🙂 I accepted your kisses 😛 we will chat promise 🙂 No their frindship will not get spoiled 🙂 Ayan will be destroyed to dust 🙂 next update Rads family Arjun’s praposal 🙂 Samrat is a good guy…wait for the twist 🙂 Piyali will repent 🙂 Nandu will meet her partner in coming updates 🙂 next one on friday mmz tom for sure 🙂 I am keeping ur heart safetly 🙂 love and stay blessed 🙂

      • Supriya.

        Thanks for the wonderful answers di…..u know u r very sweet….I love u soo much….will be eagerly waiting for Friday….loads of love sweety…. Tc?

      • Gauri

        I know I am sweets…I am known as a fat ant in my family I can eat anything sweet 😛

  4. Awesome episode, where do you come up with good stories, this is so addicting, I’m always waiting for your update. 🙂

    How is the novel going and how is your health?

  5. Rg

    Hi gauri. How have u been? Hope ur cold is better. To frank and truthful, The middle days btw ur ffs have become truly difficult to wait for. I know u need ur creative space and time to present such master piece tat v r so crazy abt. And yet I wish every day I could read ur New chapter . Wether it’s DPO or MMZ u name it , I love it. I don’t care which ff it is as long as it’s urs.
    I loved today’s ffs. Arjun has suddenly become soft and patient. And rads has turned impatient. It’s a treat to watch this quite but a radical change. I loved Neil and Sam’s relationship. Their dynamics is superb. I loved arjun and rads sweet and silent romance. Yet I miss the old mad arjun any chance of or trace of tat arjun
    coming back? I hope so. I loved d way Sam
    stood up for rads. Despite her insecurities she proves to b a grt frnd.
    By d way what is going to happen to jai? Who is going to b nandini s pair? Will arjun
    and rads fight? Am just being curious. As
    they both love each other will arjun and rads love life b easier? Or will they have their misunderstandings like all normal couple and nesam?
    Each ff u prove y u r d best and y all of us
    pester u asking for ur nxt chapter. I hope u won’t b wrapping any of ur ffs any time soon. Ur ffs r worth all d waiting time. Thanks for making my day with ur ff. Waiting eagerly and impatiently for d morrow. May u always write such wonderful ardhika ffs. Truly a magical writer. Take care. Stay blessed and cheerful. Loads of hugs to u.

    • Gauri

      Hi Rg 🙂 I am better now… slept for gud 4 days 🙂 now office from tomorrow 🙂 thank you so much for your lovely words Rg a big hug for you 🙂 you will see the mad Arjun as Radhika is no less in irritating him 🙂 I am planning to make Jai a football …Nandini’s pair will enter soon 🙂 yes Arjun Rads will fight a lot becoz both are crazy in their own way 🙂 they will have some road blocks in their wedding 🙂 next one on Friday and mmz tomorrow for sure…thanks for making all my days so special with your comments 🙂 thanks for bringing out the best in me 🙂 loads of love 🙂 stay blessed 🙂

  6. my darling sissy ??. u rocked it ?? loved my fantastic four darlings part ?? its getting interesting day by day?? neil impossible…… arjun cutieeeeee? sam fabulous?? rads no words?? totally all mixed with magic?? love u?? seriously i dont have words to explain my happiness?? thanks for d ff?? love u?? loved it??

    • Gauri

      Thanks Suga darling 🙂 so many kisses for me OMG :-* love you loads a gig hug for you 🙂

  7. Sv

    Di di how could you make me feel with your update. Why are you making me to fall for your ff again and again. Im taking a deep breath and composing myself from the feast of your update. Im really falling for the honesty of Arjun and Radhika . Neil is seriously impossible but i loved it as the one cares is the one who can make us realise our value of ourselves.

    Sam she rocked to day by making my Ardhika to meet each other. You dont know di im now becoming more possessive with my ardhika . It is because of you. Im an addicted person addicted to your ffs .

    Can you say me from where are you bringing all those thought and feel while reading. Love you di love your words . Sorry for a small comment as im suffering with word o phobeia means searching of words to explain your art of writing lol . Love u always and how r u ?? are u fine hope so . Love u s much di bear my hugs and infinite kisses and love to you. Muhhaaaaa this is 1 from those kiss .

    • Gauri

      Sv darling …. even if comment in single line that would make me happy 🙂 not having your comment on the update makes me sad …Thanks a ton darlinf for the lovely compliment … I am on the moon now 🙂 well much better will go back to work tomorrow 🙂 Million hugs and kisses for you stay blessed 🙂

  8. Sv

    Di what step from sam is gonna take to save her from Ayan and is she gonna land in any trouble or is ayan is gonna hurt Nesam ?? Ardhika reconcilation means did they have any fight ?? Di pls say it as im really curious to know these

    • Gauri

      Sv darling I will keep that suspense you will know in next update 🙂 Ayan is over with his chances now its his turn to get hurt 😉 Aradhika will not fight Neil will give a green signal 😀
      Love you 🙂

  9. priya

    Fantastic episode as usual u nailed it out…ur viral kohli in writing nd ur beating him too..wonderful episode …arjun possessiveness for radhika is a delight..Neil smartness love it…this guy Na really wonderful turning awesome day by day..when Sam see d true shade of jai?? Neil test on arjun completed??will arjun take revenge from samrat??I am sure Neil would make piyali realise in his own way..will prerna accept Sam easily as she choose radhika??
    This precap made me too anxious may be can’t wait long for the next update..hope sam will be not drag herself again to any idiotic situation…

    • Gauri

      thanks a ton Priya 🙂 Virat Kohili 😀 Yes Sam will know of Jai with time…Prerna is not against Sam but yes she prefers radhika … well wait for that part 🙂 Neil’s test will finally complete in next update 🙂 no Arjun will not take any revenge why you will know soon 🙂 yes Neil will make Piyali realise her mistake 🙂 Sam will not drag herself but the contract will 🙂 loads of love 🙂

  10. Gauri darling wow…this is really beautiful chapter.. Aradhika’s trust on each other is unbreakable.. actually we all want companion like them for us.. you r outstanding as always….hey hows ur health now?? take medicines properly dearyyyy….hey i want to ask u a question….aap kis chakki ka aata khaate ho ?? itane brilliant ideas…ohhh..i too hav to contact that you

    • natasha

      dipika dhi wen will u post ur ff
      w8ing for never let u go plz post asap
      bye dhi luv u muah

    • Gauri

      Thanks Dipika 🙂 I am better now 🙂 well abhi to ashirwaad ka aata khati hoon 😉 … yes trust is the biggest strength in any relationship 🙂 and I am waiting for your updaate 🙂 tc loads of love and a big hug for you 🙂

  11. Raaga

    I am spell bound Gauri…I m in love with u ;-);-)
    ur imagination is fabulous….Actually I m searchin for words to describe u n ur writing skills…
    I felt very papa about Arjun …he was so calm n determined to prove himself…but he was disturbed when radz was dancing with guyz…loved that dialogue; -*;-*….Radhika, fully turned like impatient Arjun ( sangath ka asar)
    Sam helped her chashni it was very cute…
    neil – sam scenes cute n funny when she got angry on neil for not letting arjun to meet radz…

  12. Raaga

    I forgot to mention and their trust on each other….One should learn how completely we should trust the person whom we love….come what may…loved it….

  13. Raaga

    I forgot to mention and their trust on each other….One should learn how completely we should trust the person whom we love….come what may..Thank you for the One of the most wonderful chapter
    ..loved it….

  14. ammu

    Gauri di…mindblowing.Atlast arjun gained neil’s trust.anyone can trust such deep and passionate love.Sam’s attempt for ardhika union really nice after all rads is her soul sis.. Eagerly waiting for next epi.

  15. ???????u r just amazing u just killed it… every time I read ur ff…. the only thing that comes to me that I never stop…….. I m addicted to it………….. u r a magician…. every time does some magic on ur readers with ur writting…… love u yaar……. love u soooooooo much ????….. take care darling and plz update soon…….

  16. aastha

    Its hard to describe this wonderful story coz its that superb di……….ardhika in washroom, at the party everything was just amazing………..Ayan is so disgusting and so is Piyali…………ArNe plans are superb!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Rads anger at not being given attention was really cute to watch……….Rads following Sam’s advice and flirting with the available gentleman was also equally nyc…………Neil’s test was good……happy that Arjun succeeded in it…..equally happy that nesam too reconciled after their fi8………..the precap makes me more eager and restless to read it…………..plzzzzzzzzzz update soooon di………….love u……TC………

  17. pankh

    amazing… today Sam rocked it…. cant wait for nxt soon..and dear hope u r fine..take care of urself…love u…

    • Gauri

      Thanks Pankh 🙂 I am better now 🙂 will post Friday morning 🙂 stay blessed 🙂

  18. Emz fasa

    Awesome mindblowing 😉 you are such an awesome writer i am in love with you gauri todays chapter fantastic 🙂 ardhika scene was superb and sams anger on niel for not letting ardhika meet and now the big thing niel starts to trust arjun wow 🙂 nandini – i really miss her in your ff but where is her pair i really wanna know him and that scoundral ayan how dare he to talk to sam for a date ;->
    pls bring our posessive arjun back the devil ;-> i hate this sweet arjun sorry for that 😛 pls tell when will you give your next update 😉

    • Gauri

      Thanks Em 🙂 well Nandini’s partner will enter in coming updates 🙂 well once a devil is always a devil you will see him on and off 🙂 next one on friday morning 🙂 loads of love 🙂

  19. How is ur health gauri? R u fine now? &
    Wow Gauri that ws awesome chap ????? And pls don’t put full stop to this Beautiful story, & first tym i tell u pls drag the story, i love the each character.
    I’m waiting for arjun jai encounter sce.
    OK when ill u post next chap, eagerly waiting ma ☺

    • Gauri

      Thanks a ton Naaga 🙂 I am doing good 🙂 I will try writing till thoughts flow but don’t worry will share you the whole story in one go… you can read it whenever you like 🙂 next one on Friday morg tomorrow mmz 🙂 love u loads

  20. Really…a total mind-blowing..sam rocked today…u portrayed her like such a bestie…i always adore girls bestie…people used to say that if two girls are there much more difference is there also…but that is not true in all case…i v my bestie who can do everything for me…today chapter remind me the all nokjhok we did…thank u

    • Gauri

      Thanks Rosie 🙂 yes nothing is better than a girl bestie … me and my bestie are frinds for last 15 yrs and I love her 🙂 loads ove love and pls post dark fiction 🙂

  21. subha

    amazing episode….arjun noda love unmai endru neil nambi vittan.arjun radhika loveku naduvil varamatan thane?sam seium aradhika meeting scene super……neil- radhika care really super.sam last la sollum dia..scene awesome……. mindblowing episode.precap super .un health eppati irruku? .eagerly waiting next

    • Gauri

      Thanks Ton Subha 🙂 well I couldn’t undestand your comment completely but pulled the jest in bits and pieces 🙂 my health is fine will post the next one on Friday morning 🙂 stay blessed 🙂 love u

  22. Hope

    Best epi ever…. I’m getting senti.. I just love ARDHIKA..
    Made 4 each other.. Sam rocked it.. And Neil reminds me of my adoptive dad.. My chuddy buddy.. But now we don’t talk to each other.. Its just dat we are very carefree wid each other..smtyms acts lyk bf n gf to fool others.. Very possessive and protective.. And both our family knows all dis and they too don’t mind.. But last month.. Sm1 mu us as lovers and told to his dad.. His dad asked him to b careful bz it can affect my future..he only said dis out of concern..and he didn’t mean to stay away..he told dis all to me also…but dat monkey took it wrong n decided to stay apart..dis angered me and we had a ugly fyt..den he doesn’t lyk me being involved in campus fyt got bgger n bgger regarding all dis..
    )we r in dfrnt clg also) But I miss him…badly.. He started it all n not even apologising..let it be but avoiding me.. It hurts a lot when he doesn’t smile seeing me.. Stupid idiot..
    Sissy.. Wat will i do?

    • Gauri

      Hey Hope 🙂 first thanks a ton dear 🙂 now people who fight the most love the most….if he is not apologizing you go and talk to him if he still refuse punch him…make him talk fight till none of the words matter…clear all your misunderstandings …and you are not answerable to the globe just to your parents if they trust you let the world go to hell 🙂 go and talkto him a t the earlist 🙂 love u

      • Hope

        Dats d prblem.. Sissy.. He’s not even looking at me.. I tried a lot.. Now i’m getting tired of it.. These boys naa… They say dat “girls are complicated” ..but khud itne complicated hai ki sab kuch complicated dikhte hai…

  23. Sweetie

    Hello di,
    How r u?? Episode is awesome as always.. 😀 I don’t have any words right now to praise you.. I’ve to learn some new words for that.. 😀 Finally Papa Bear(Neil) accepted Ardhika.. Yayy!!
    Stay blessed and take care di.. 🙂 See you soon 😀

  24. Gauri di how is ur health??? ur impossible writer I love each&every word in ds FF im just gone mad fr ur FF its fantastic episode I wanna kiss u…….u making me fall in luv wit u again&again…….really happy fr aradhika honestly bt can’t see thr pain too…..precap is super so waiting fr next update. ……..muhhhaa….:)

    • Gauri

      Thanks a ton Gayathri 🙂 I am good now well on the moon reading all comments 🙂 loads of love and a big hug for you 🙂 stay blessed 🙂

  25. Gauri dear…how r u?…today episode was as usual amazing dear…u nailed it…each an every scene I loved it….waiting next one…mmz u…tc dear

  26. sweety

    Wow abhaa Howard’s to say abt u r ff yesterday u didn’t uploaded I felt very restless I’m addicted to u r ff and hw is u r health wat happens dear take rest don’t stress to much lots of love for u and hugs get well soon dearr:-)

    • Gauri

      Thanks Sweety 🙂 well finished writing yesterday evening …so posted in the night 🙂 was having fever now all good will be back in office from tomorrow 🙂 loads of love and hugs for you 🙂

  27. sreee

    so happy that ur health is better now………and the epi as usual superb…..wowwww my tiger and bunny reconcile….waiting for it….and di have u wrote any other ff previously????
    love u….take care…

    • Gauri

      Thanks Shree 🙂 yes dear I wrote an ff by name marmarziyan- journey of love and friendship

      loads of love stay blessed 🙂

  28. happy

    hi dr…hw r u…….sry….sry….sry….sry…..1000 times sry for not commenting…….today episode amazing…i loved it…..u r special one….brings smile on other face…… you…..thanks for giving such a super episode…..thanks….thanks…thanks…..

    • Gauri

      Hi Happy so happy to see your comment…how are you and where were you for so many days ???? well I am fine …..thanks for the lovely comment stay blessed stay happy 🙂 love you

  29. Kb

    Can anybody give me the link for yeh hai aashique by monica sehgal please….sorry for posting it here ….but if somebody could help….

  30. lavanya

    how’s your health di…hope you are good now…
    and thanks a lot for the wonderful update…loved neil like anything…and am so proud of radhika…she has changed a monster into a human…who now values everything in his life…trying his best to earn trust…and I feel Neil’s test is making ardhikas bond much more strong…feeling sorry for the girls…Sam…good that she came to know that she was baited..but can’t do anything…and rads…my heart wrenched seeing her state…this is a test to us too…seeing them in pain…but must salute arjun…he is like a military student…following orders…and wish to see all of them being together and making fun…and I liked Sam’s courage and thought making arjun and radhika meet…not even caring about Neil’s anger and her problems…and whatever may be the situation..all four have trust on each other..and that makes them true friends and best couples…love you di…take you lots….

    • Gauri

      Hi Lavanya 🙂 I am better dear ….will be in office tomorrow… 🙂 thanks a ton for your lovely comment dear 🙂 well this monster still needs improvement … you will know more 🙂 loads of love and a big hug for you 🙂

  31. Gianna

    Awww Gauri loved the update. Hope Neil’s test ends soon want to see my lovey dovey tiger and bunny. So excited to see how Neil and Arjun are going to destroy Ayan. Waiting for the next update. Stay blessed. Love u Gauri

    • Gauri

      Thanks Gianna 🙂 stay blessed darling and I am waiting for you to update as well 🙂 love you 🙂

  32. Swan

    Hello Gauri, I am a slient reader for your fan fiction. You are such a talented writer, stay blessed and never give it up. And i am finding really hard to dig into all your past episodes, could you please assemble all those episodes into a document or upload it to your google docs and share with us the link. I would love to read your story again and again. Trust me i was never addicted to a story like this, keep going girl.

  33. Roma

    Wowwww awesome, lovely, marvellous episode. …gauriiiiiiiiiiiii my sweeeeeet darling friend. …you’re amazingly awesoooooome. ….hat’s off to you my sweeeeeetheart gauriiiiiiiiiiiii. ….each n every word of yours is mind blowing. destiny you are giving very true meanings to love….I’m totally addicted to Youuuuuuuuu and Your stories. ….huge fan of yours. ..ardhika in so much pain being seperate…but obeying neil to prove their true, pure love….neil also watching their pain n allowing them few lovely moments together. …loved it to the coreeeee. …arjneil planning against Ayan is very powerful. ..I hope they get successful in it….precap is very exciting n interesting. ….I’m so crazyyyyy for this story, can’t wait for the next episode, plz post sooon. ….anxiously waitingggggg. …..keep it up honeyyy. …love you loads, lotssssss of hugsssssss n kissesssss. ..muaaaaahhhhhh ♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡

      • Roma

        Thxxxxxx my sweeeeeetheart gauriiiiiiiiiiiii. ….I’m totally addicted to Youuuuuuuuu and Your stories. …get well soooooooon. …love you loads. ..muaaaaahhhhhh, bone crushing hug. …. 🙂 ♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡

  34. feby

    awesome…… loved it…good to c arjun changing….but ardhikas pain is soo bad…neil bohut stubborn ho gaya…loved it…di…its very bad tat u didnt check hangouts….aapke reply keliye wait kar rahi thi.. well…my maths result also was good…do din pura masthi aur ahis kushi ka mahol tha…lol….i missed u di….and tis one also rocked…lved radhikas cuteness….and good recap too… u di…muahhh….

    • Gauri

      Thanks Feby darling 🙂 and sorry was not well for 4-5 days…my days went sleeping and reading updates came to office today….broke my phone too….no wats app…fb for kast 5 days 🙂 I am so happy…Feby you sound intelligent and mature by your words….I have confidence that you will rock in whatever you do… 🙂 thanks for the lovely comment loads of love and stay blessed 🙂

      • feby

        no di … not much matured….but whn pain and happiness comes together…we understand a lot of things… and whn harsh reality hits us hard we may surrender ourselves to the destiny…thats my situation… iam happy and proud coz of my results but still our world is very mean and lusts only for money and tats the time talent is not valued….well…take care of ur health di….dont become like me…i am sneezing frm morning and totally not under control…love u loads….

      • Roma

        Hi deariiiiiiieeess, gauri, feby…..get well soooooooon my sweeeeeetheartttttsss…take very good care of yourself. ….love you loads. muaaaaahhhhhh. …bear hug ♡♡♡♡♡♡ 🙂

      • Gauri

        Feby pain makes you realize happiness… bad makes u realize good….just go with the flow…take life as it comes ….and handle in ur own way … it works 🙂

    • Roma

      Hey sweetie amu, missing you soooooooo muchhhhhh. …love you loads, muaaaaahhhhhh, lotssssss of hugsssssss n kissesssss ♡♡♡♡♡♡

    • Gauri

      OMG am I dreaming 🙂 no just pinched my self 🙂 Thanks Ameena missed you like hell …thanks and loads oflove 🙂

    • feby

      ameena di… told something which we hate…still we r bearing coz we need ur good future… but di…atleast ek baar thoh aake mujse baath kar lethe….

      • Ameena

        Thank you dear. I’ll only try to come there once so I can talk to you sissy. Love ya! ❤

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