Manmarziyan- Destiny…Passion …Obsession (Chapter 32)

Hello my dear friends so here is the next chapter…please let me know how was it…next one on monday …tomorrow MMZ-married by fate …and a big thanks for all the love and support 🙂 🙂 🙂 🙂 stay blessed

Friendship is a bigger relationship than love as love can sometimes be an obsession… madness but friendship is only about sharing…cherish your friends
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Chapter 32

Radhika freshened up went to Neil’s room…she was about to …but it was open she walked in and found it in dark…Neil was sitting on his bed holding his head…Radhika walked to him she pulled his hands off his face; ‘’Neil…what’s wrong’’

Neil; ‘’I gave you pain Sorry…but he is not good for you…’’

Radhika wiped his tears ; ‘’I asked Arjun to leave …I cannot hurt you’’

A tear escaped Radhika’s eyes and Neil grabbed it; ‘’You love him…but you are my baby..how can I let you take a wrong step…Radhika I had no one other than Mom in the name of family…but then mala aunty dilip uncle and you came in my life….I care for you the same way as I would have cared for my blood…do you doubt my feelings?’’

Radhika hugged Neil; ‘’Neil don’t be crazy…I can never doubt you….no one doubts their family.….I asked him to leave for now…but I promise you….one day you will believe his love…letting go someone who loves you unconditionally is stupidity’’

Neil smiled caressed her head; ‘’4 months your session ends…I am trusting you and leaving you in New York promise me you will not continue this relationship’’

Radhika; ‘’I promise…not to meet him and let him close…but I can’t promise you the end…because you will have to give him a chance….for me…’’

Neil; ‘’Why do you care for my opinion then…go you are free’’

Radhika held his forefinger like a kid; ‘’I got Arjun few months back…and I love him to death…I have you for around 15yrs…think about the affection for you…you are my family how can I hurt you…even my parents will only be convinced if you give green signal…I need you’’

Neil turned to look at Radhika she was holding his finger…and looking down Neil felt few drop on his hand ….he gave her an arm hug ;’’You are impossible….I am in US for 2 months for Sam’s shoot…don’t break my trust and stay in your limits….fine I will give him a chance’’

Radhika hugged him and looked around; ‘’Where is Sam…’’

Neil; ‘’We broke off

Radhika turned Neil around; ‘’Neil….you broke off for me…are you crazy…she is your life’’

Neil’; ‘’Not for you…she could never trust me…she thinks you and me we have a relationship…dam it disgusts me to even speak this…and this is because Jai told her this’’

Radhika; ‘’Sam can never think wrong about you and me….she just said that so you give Arjun a chance and Neil I know your temper too…if you hurt her you will have it from me…wait here …I will come back’’ Radhika went directly to Sam’s room and kept knocking the door …Sam answered she looked ghostly….Sam looked at Radhika ….and went Inside the room…Radhika followed and closed the door; ‘’Sammy what’s wrong…?’’

Sam turned hugged Radhika and broke down….she cried screaming her pain; ‘’Neil asked me to leave….he hates me….’’ Radhika patted her till Sam’s screams reduced to sobs…Radhika gave her water; ‘’do you think…I and Neil are involved’’

Sam; ‘’No….I am sorry it was just my anger when he spoke bad about bhai….I just wanted his undivided attention …I was provoking him…I was insecure…I was never anybody’s world…Dad’s world was bird song…he loved me but not the way he loved BS… Mom she had her precious son….I just had Neil…who loved me…and now I just have emptiness’’

Radhika hugged Sam…Sam was lifeless; ‘’Sammy…remember I will never leave you…I will speak to Neil…but you need to stop being insecure….’’

Sam smiled; ‘’Its late…Mom fixed my alliance with Ayan Raizada…I have to marry him in 6 months invited this myself…and now for 5 yrs I am a puppet in his hands…I accepted his contract…Chashni I am a bad girl’’

Radhika collapsed on the floor she rubbed her forehead’’ Sammy why you should have alteast told Neil or me as a friend’’….she thought for a moment…she needed to do something…Radhika picked up Sam…luggage…’’Come with me…you can’t stay alone’’

Radhika update Neil…Neil was now restless…Ayan had spoiled the life of his previous models but it never went out because…the girl pulled herself into Dark…Neil needed someone right now to get power on Ayan…Nandini was his only solace.

Neil dialled Nandini…she was surprised why Neil called ata this hour…but she answered; ‘’Neil are you ok’’

Neil; ‘’No di…nothing is ok…I need your help’’

Nandini; ‘’go on Neil’’ Neil narrated everything….Nandini was angry on Sam’s stupidity…neil also expressed his displeasure about Arjun and
Radhika…Nandini smiled’

Neil; ‘’Di I know you wouldn’t like me interfering in Arjun’s life…I am ok if you will not help me’’

Nadini; ‘’Right now I want to slap you tight…I never differentiated between you and Arjun…and you did nothing wrong I know Radhika is family for you test Arjun to the max…but right now call him and tell him Glitz issue…this should e solved his way’’ Nadini after disconnecting the call smiled; ‘’You and Arjun should stay together…I can help you but I want Arjun to do this…so you guys should break the wall between you’’

Neil was feeling awkward in calling Arjun….Radhika took his phone…kept the call on speaker and dialled Arjun answered; ‘’Hi Neil…wats up bro’’

Radhika; ‘’Neil needs you Tiger…but is reluctant to talk you because of me’’

Arjun; ‘’Bunny take the phone off speaker and give it Neil now’’ Neil rolled his eyes at the nick names that Radhika Arjun gave each other…he snatched the phone from Radhika and went balcony…Radhika went to her room to be with Sam.

Neil narrated the whole Glitz issue….and the 5 yr contract…Arjun though for a moment; ‘’Neil where is Sam doing her photo shoot’’

Neil; ‘’New York ‘’

Arjun; ‘’Come down to Ney York…and stay in my apartment…we cannot leave Sam in a hotel where ayan can reach her…we have 30% of GLITZ …we will make it 60% in coming 2 months…how will we discuss once you are here…and give the details of last two main models whom he ruined…I will get on the work.

Neil; ‘’Thanks…but I am still not ok with you in Radhika’s life’’

Arjun smiled; ‘’ I know…but that doesn’t change our friendship for 2 decades….leave all that…I will prove myself…let me know about your arrival to NewYork’’

Radhika performed on the 3 rd day doing free style…her pain brought the best out of her…her gang attended sans Arjun…Steve mailed him the video…Arjun felt proud of her…she was so good …Radhika got offers to perform for some US groups…but Neil gestured her to say no…Radhika knew he was way to protective about her moreover she never wanted it to be a profession…Radhika came back to her room and found Sam in the balcony…’’Sammy did you eat’’

Sam smiled; ‘’No wanted to eat with you’’

Radhika; ‘’Please order something I am too hungry…Sammy are you angry that I refused Jai’’

Sam held Radhika’s hand; ‘’No chashni…love can never be forced…by the way…Arjun really loves you…don’t know why Neil can’t see this…tell me something…how will stay away staying so close’’

Radhika; ‘’Don’t know Sammy…but for Neil I will do this…and Arjun he will do it for me’’

Sam; ‘’We are staying at Arjun’s place for 2 months…till this schedule is over…you can come over to meet me and see Arjun too’’ Radhika did not lift her eyes up…Sam knew she was is pain…Sam got up went to Radhika and hugged her…’’Chashni Neil will agree…your adoptive dad can’t see his baby in pain…’2 months is a big time’’ Radhika nodded with a weak smile

Arjun was sitting on his bed watching Radhika’s portrait on the wall…she was his life…he heard the door bell and Stella answered…Neil with Sam walked in…Stella greeted Neil with a hug…she knew him as Neil had often visited Arjun…Stella took Sam to the guest room and Neil went to meet Arjun in his room….Neil was shocked to find Radhika’s wall size picture…Arjun never did anything like this…Arjun came out of the wash room and stood behind Neil at a distance; ‘’Hi Brother’’ Neil turned smiled and Hugged Arjun tight

Arjun; ‘’Will you share room with Sam or me’’

Neil punched him; ‘’for now you…’’

Arjun rubbed his chest; ‘’Guess Radhika got this punching habit from you’’

Neil ;’’ No I got it from her…I am sorry…but I still think you don’t deserve her’’

Arjun; ‘’Thanks for giving me a chance to prove myself…now let’s get to work..Ayan is shady and a criminal…I don’t want Sam to hear all this we will move to my study…go and ask Sam to rest’’

Radhika’s Dorm

Radhika came back to her dorm after the concert…she had promised not meet Arjun…but this was painfull …winters had started setting in…and it was turning cold…Radhika got a message from Arjun; ‘’Bunny don’t sit too much in the balcony you will fall sick’’
Radhika skipped her classes…she was pained to stay away from Arjun…Anna watched her lying on the bed covering her face with pillow…Anna sat next to her; ‘’Rads get up…if you are not going for classes we will go out..comeon’’

Radhika; ‘’Anna you just got a new job…you should go…I will be fine…’’
Anna; ‘’go meet him…’’

Radhika; ‘’I will once he is free…I am not the one to suffer…you go see you in the evening…and Anna confess your feeling to Steve…he is an amazing guy’’

Anna blushed; ‘’I have told no one how did you know’’

Radhika frowned; ‘’Other than you and Steve all of us are aware about your feelings….now go before you are late’’ Anna hugged radhika tight and left….Radhika messaged Arjun…

After a good discussion with Neil…Arjun asked both of them to rest…got ready and left…he came to her dorm and before he could press the bell she answered…Arjun saw her innocent smile he walked in closed the door and hugged her; ‘’Bunny why are you so cold’’

Radhika ; ‘’I was sitting in the balcony…I missed you…but now I am warm in your arms’’

Arjun; ‘’Don’t get sick…I will not like it’’ Radhika sneezed and Arjun tighten his grip; ‘’Radhika I hate when you don’t listen to me’’ But she just kept hiding her face in his chest…absorbing his scent…Arjun finally smiled…;’’Can I kiss you Bunny’’ Radhika looked up like a robot; ‘’Why are you asking…Tiger I wanted to tame you but not so much’’ Arjun chucked and Kissed her…’’Why are you not in your classes’’ he whispered over her lips

Radhika punched; ‘’you spoiled my mood talking about classes’’ and she sneezed again…Arjun…touched her fore head …’’you are having temperature…come we are going to the doctor now’’

Radhika; ‘’No you are my cure…stay…’’ Arjun made her sit and got her coat …he pulled her up a took her to the doc…all the while she kept watching him…with love…the man who scared her…now was exactly the one she wanted…his care…his love…and his madness everything was just for her. Arjun brought her back to her dorm made her lie down and covered her with blanket…he prepared her soup and made her eat…Radhika threw her blankets and went into his laps wrapping her legs around his waist and hands around his neck; ‘’Tiger if you keep pampering me…4 months will be difficult…we have to keep our promise’’

Arjun rubbed her back; ‘’we will…I should leave Neil shouldn’t have a doubt’’

Radhika chuckled; ‘’Do you think he doesn’t know….he would have understood the moment you left your place’’ she kissed his cheek warm; ‘’Go…now…’’

Arjun; ‘’No going out in cold….tc’’

Arjun’s Apartment

Sam came to Neil who was in a deep thought; ‘’Arjun loves her…don’t be so hard’’

Neil; ‘’I am not hard…let him prove…I want to see for how long this love stays’’

Sam gave up; ‘’Arjun will be back from his work..I will get snacks ready’’

Neil smiled; ‘’He is with Chashni’’

Sam; ‘’How can you say that’’
Neil; ‘’I know both of them…and this fever of love is new …staying apart will be difficult…lets see..they pass or fail’’ Neil saw Arjun walking in and pulling off his coat…he smiled and asked; ‘’How is your Bunny Arjun’’ Sam punched Neil

Arjun smiled; ‘’Not well…she is having fever…she was out in cold…stubborn girl’’ Neil and sam got worried

Sam; ‘’Arjun is she alone…she gets bad headaches with blocked nose ans she will turn cranky like a two yr old’’ arjun blinked he was not aware of this aspect

Arjun; ‘’Anna will reach in sometime…I have put Radhika to sleep…don’t worry’’

Sam; ‘’She won’t sleep…I know her more than you…please take me to her’’ Arjun agreed to take Sam…Neil joined them…once at her dorm….Arjun pressed the bell and all of them heard her cursing…Neil smiled….Radhika opened the door…her nose was red…eyes swelled and hair all messed up…Radhika looked at Sam and hugged her; ‘’Sammy I was missing you’’

Sam; ‘’Neil…she has very high temperature…her skin is burning…’’ Sam kept her arms around Radhika tightly.

Neil touched Radhika’s forehead; ‘’Hey birdie ….you can’t stand clod…why were you out’’ but Radhika was cranky; ‘’Don’t talk to me you are bad …you don’t let my tiger meet me’’ Neil rolled his eyes Sam and Arjun giggled…Sam made Radhika lie down…Anna joined them…she was surprised at the attention Radhika was demanding…Arjun watched Neil caressing sleeping Radhika continuously…he cursed himself for doubting such a pure bond…

Sam; ‘’Anna if you don’t mind…I can stay back tonight’’

Anna; ‘’No problem…you guys have dinner a go…I have already ordered’’

Neil Arjun were happy ….as they wanted to discuss GLITZ in absence of Sam

India

Piyali;’’ Samrat…we need to do marriage preparations for Sam and Ayan

Samrat banged the files on the table; ‘’My daughter will not marry that creep…to save jai or BS…who the hell are to take this decision alone’’

Piyali; ‘’Ayan is a strong man….he will provide us the support we need…and its for Sam’s benefit she will live like a queen’’

Samrat; ‘’Its only your benefit…do you think I don’t know about the 5 yr contract…I know all…end this drama or I will do my way’’

USA

Radhika slept curled up…Sam watched her and smiled…she caressed her sister and pecked her forehead…radhika mumbled and placed her arm on Sam waist; ‘’Sammy missed you’’

Sam; ‘’You will never change…you were grabbing all attention pretending to sleep…and now you are all alert’’

Radhika smiled and hugged Sam tight; ‘’I love your attention…Sammy it will start snowing in two months we will go out together’’

Sam rubbed her back; ‘’Neil will murder me along with you….CHashni…I am sorry for everything’’

Radhika; ‘’I am sorry too..That I didn’t answer your calls….Sammy lets b***c about our boyfriends’’ Sam looked at Radhika all wide-eyed slapped her lightly; ‘’Sleep you are not well…we do that later’’

Destiny: Having a girl bestie another best thing on the earth

Arjun’s Apartment

Arjun prepared drink for himself and Neil…but when he turned he found Neil smoking…Arjun frowned he hated smoking…Arjun banged the glasses on the table and pulled cigarette out of Neil’s hand; ‘’How many times should I tell you it’s not good….and how come you started again’’

Neil; ‘’Long story…fine won’t smoke again…stop being by girl friend’’

Arjun; ‘’Would like to know the story…but later Now Ayan Raizada…let’s examine him’’

Neil smiled and started; ‘’Two yrs back Glitz’s face Neera suddenly vanished…I searched for her…she is settled in Pune…Ayan promised her love and marriage…and made her do horrible things in the name of modelling…she was offered to his clients even..when the girl protested…Ayan hit her family her father met with an accident and is bed ridden for life…the girl got scared and now completely withdrawn…second Myra…refused his advances and shady activities…she was travelling to Bangkok for a shoot but was caught in a drug trafficking case…and is jailed their waiting for her death sentence…this happened a month before Sam was offered GLITZ contract.’’

Arjun; ‘’Neil we need Myra…more than Neera…now how to get her out….so let’s take the twisted path…you know what I mean’’

Neil; ‘’Smuggle her to India…but that huge risk…meanwhile I have got Neera secured’’

Arjun; ‘’Good…I doubt she will speak…but for now…lets help Myra’’

Neil smiled; ‘’We are handling a shady guy…turning a shade darker than him’’

Arjun frowned; ‘’Neil..it would be better…if keep you this saint act in front of Sam and Radhika…I know you…and we have done this before…we have to be twisted to deal with twisted people’’ Arjun Neil looked at each other and laughed…Arjun dialled Rana and guided him…if this fails they had to be ready with Plan B.
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Meet the fantastic four…now they are together…they will fight with each other…fight for each other stand by each other…

Precap –Arjun helps Sam…Neil allows Arjun to meet Radhika for once…plans to test Arjun

Credit to: Gauri

124 comments

  1. Raaga

    nice dear….
    don’t know how ll Arjun impress or rather convince our adoptive dad of Radhika…
    Two months there s something interesting going to happen I guess…
    thank u Gauri ….
    loads of love …

  2. priya

    Another awesome episode..this radhika naughtiness I just loved it..Neil is too smart ..piyali what a mother she is..how could someone be so partial of their children that to a mother.?? Waiting for Neil’s test to arjun…and how would arjun nd Neil going to bang ayaan..really this episode made me more curious..
    Ur creative brain nd writing skill..what to say totally with loss of words…love u???

  3. hai darling sissy how r u???? ?? tu not updated my comment dono y ? i loved it ? typed my heart but tu broke my heart by not updating it? its awesome darling how neil protected both sam n rads ? rads always superb ?? she s ready to give herself just for her frndship?✌?arjun my darling always superbbbb??his dialogues r fab ??loved it???

    now comes to dpo??? fantastic four ✌? my prince charms n my lovely ladies wowweww??? no one can describe der good like u did??love u for dat? here i love arjun more than neil??? how he supported neil n sam? neil n arjun rocks? rads s awesome in her own way ?? her dialogue to neil “dont talk to me u dont let my tiger meet me”??? u r my precious sissy ?? love u lottttt?? loved it? take care darling? happy morning????

  4. Rg

    Hi it’s very nice. Though I missed ardhika romance a bit. Will they both survive d separation … Y is d separation essential? I was eagerly waiting since morning for the ff… Wished it was a double damaka… I couldn’t have enough of it. Will ardhika be able to withstand d separation period?. When will they return to India? I loved it to the core.it’s fantastic… Pls update soon.

    • Gauri

      Thanks a ton Rg 🙂 double dhamaka is little difficult with 2 FF and my job but wil try 🙂 there wont be a separation just a small brk 🙂 loads of love 🙂

  5. shreyanshi

    arjun-neil … superb… bond…
    i luv all of them… nandini radhika sam neil arjun
    u nailed it ….gauri…

  6. Supriya.

    Wht can I say now…..u know me…r8 now m all speechless….I love u like anything for this wonderful piece…..arjun nd Neil can’t stay apart srsly heart relations r more unique than the blood ones……first time m impressed with sam….omg rads z ill but glad she has her tiger nd adopted dad……di I love Neil alot but I sacrificed him for u becoz I love u more……u said u will keep arjun too becoz m just 16 that’s not fair…..now at least leave him for me… Lol……loved nandu…..but I hate her in mmz….anna loves Steve that makes me happy…….love z in the air everywhere…… Ayan such a scoundrel I hate him…..but Arjun nd Neil will teach him a lesson that gives me a relief….. you r r8 Sam z not bad but just insecure…….. Now my questions…how much time Neil will take to approve arjun?….how will lovebirds manage to stay apart?…..wen will nesam reunite?……wen will rads face jai?…..I wanna read abt nandu more…..wen will nandu get her soulmate?…… Wen will piyali learn her lesson?…… Waiting for arjun to thrash jai…..how much time Neil and arjun will take to eliminate ayan?……I have many questions but r8 now having difficulty in typing with left hand……it z damn slow……will ask u later……loads of love……muaaaaahhhhhh….. Stay blessed…. Tc???????????????????????????????

    • Gauri

      Thanks SUpriya 🙂 sorry darling but will answer all ur questions may be in eveing ,,,,hope you understand 🙂

  7. M

    wow…wow…wow…..radhika…so cute….obviously who d hell on d earth dnt like being pampered…..moreover she have 3 loving ppl do pamper her…..

    arjun……mind blowing…….smart guy..

    sam……thank god she share about glitz and ayan witg radhika….

    neil……raise my temper…no smoking yaar……..but in any case i love him

    last……..one of the most beautiful content of this story line is the bond between neil nd radhika….ppl dnt even care for their blood relations…..but their relation is much more pute thn anything…..blind trust….blind faith……nd someones opinion matters to you blindly……its a fascinating thing for me!!!!!

    uff i think i am improving my english communication skills now a days……hahahaha……what u say butter????

  8. Very gud morning Gauri. Asuaual nice chap. Neil already told u na dont smoke, see my tiger ? sorry radhus tiger he is gud boy. And Thanks to u Gauri.Waiting 4 the next 1.

    Actually now only (yesterday) i complete ur 1st ff omg thank u thank u …… for giving beautiful story ☺

  9. neetz

    Mmmmmmuah …that was an awsone cute lovely epi…..u made me wait 4 days 🙁 ….but its ok it was worth the wait 🙂

  10. This is the best fanfiction ever, it is so addicting, I wish I was watching this on TV. Since manmarziyan went off air no serial is interesting. I am always eagerly waiting for your update on both of your fan fiction. You have talent in writing and I wish you all the best on your book and hope you get notice soon. 🙂

  11. Sathya

    MARVELLOUS EPISODE dear 🙂 I love it. I like the bond between Arjun & Neil and Nandini & Neil. It is a great thing yar…But it is very difficult to have this kind of relationship in real..but you aremaking it in reel and i am so so happy for that. Neil started to believe Arjun and he is ready to test his love. I think Arjun cleared his first round of testing what neil given. All over it is a great episode 🙂 🙂 🙂

  12. Yay…all four are together…they will b our fantastic four…ayan chi chi…so chepo…hope before everyone I could smash him….u r really a fantastic fabulous awesome….forget words or they didn’t come out from my mind….don’t know what to say…i want dpo book…??

  13. Simply wow!!!! Gauri this is what i m waiting for…now this fantastic four are together they can beat any Ayan Raizad…M sooooo happy..NeArj bond is so good.. bromance..hehe..RaSa bond is so cute it reminded me of best buddies frm school…Neil giving chance to Arjun thats so great…n y this piyali is over obessed for jay
    ..n egerly waiting for precap..love you Darling.. God blessed u..keep smiling..

  14. Sejal

    I was checking from 5:30 for the update.. Although I m very late in commenting…..
    So the fabulous four has been united i m very happy finally our team will rock and every problm will be solved by them …….
    I m jealous of Radhika she has got a best friend cum sister and an adoptive dad who cares for her little bird madly… And the protective tiger whose priority has always been his bunny… He will overcome any trouble to be with her…. Crazily waiting for the next one… U really never fail to amaze with ur writing.. Luv u thank you…

  15. Priya

    I am a silent reader… Following ur fanfic daily…. U r the best… One of the many best quality of ur fan fic is that… U tell wen is the next… Otherwise daily I would open the page n be sad that u didn’t update… What to say i really get speechless whenever I read ur fanfic… That is just outstanding superb fantastic n this is not just for this one episode for all those which u have written…. U r really good… I really think u r a good actually outstanding writer… The way u express each and every character… Like their nature, their different shades… N yes the important lessons that Destiny says… U have well expressed Neil as adoptive dad of Radhika… U now that was the best… Actually wen I miss ur fanfic.. I re read them… U r my fabulous writer…. Please try giving double dhamaka….n post at least thrice a week… I really like n love ur fanfic… U r a great expressive n good writer..

  16. chandan

    Fantastic you…fantastic story n Fastastic four all together…what else to say…its all Fantastic…tc

  17. Harani

    Missed bunny and tiger so much Dr ..now you made my day .thank you so much Dr ..love you loads ..the fantastic four of your story is so awesome Dr ..boys gang and girls joy are awesome

  18. lavanya

    really awesome di….loved it….soo good seeing all of them together…they are power pack…whatever feelings or emotions they have over others relations…they stay together always….its great seeing arjun and Neil working together…they are like the protectors of world…avengers type…and girls being being girls…are the supportive system for each other…only waiting for them to be a complete team…without having any hard feelings…and must say…di…you are too sweet..didn’t imagine nadhini’s character can be this graceful…she is the backbone for all..you bring out positiveness from every thing and being….love you lots…and want some nokjhok…if you don’t mind…like girls having fun…teasing boys…because girls are exceptionally best in all types of fun…

  19. Deeva

    Gauri ur amazing darling…… u r awesome….. every time I read ur ff’s…. I can’t control myself from appreciating ur talent…… u r such a darling….. love u a lot take care…… ??

  20. Awesome yaar…….what to say just amazing…. I loved very much…I appreciate ur writing skill dear…eagerly waiting for next one…love u…tc…

  21. shiva

    gauri awesome writing yaar …….. really cool and loved NEIL 2day……..waiting for the next epi eagerly.ur ff is my solace from this busy life…luv u dear…keep writing…

  22. Sravya

    nice FF☺ u r rockinggg.no one can write as u do.I am breathless when I am reading. thank u for making me happyyy☺☺ every time when I am reading it.keep going like this?Loads of luv n hugs for u dear☺☺☺☺

  23. aastha

    di I’m sorry for the late rply…………..I had an exam……..I loved this epi soooooooooooooooooo much…………………loved ar-ne bond…….and not to mention ra-sam bond……….the convo btwn ne-rads was nyc…………and also rasam………..loved ur term fantastic four………………happy that finally Samrat raised his voice……now I’m convinced that nothing bad will happen to Sam and her family……….and I’m alsi glad that Nandini considers Neil like Arjun itself……….happy that they are working together on this……….now I’m very very excited to read the ext epi……………plzzz update sooooooooooooon………………I too agree with you abt having a girl bestie……………love u a lot…………………..TC……………

  24. Gauri di ur amazing asual no words fr ur writing skills….. I luv d epi especially tiger&bunny part I luv it di………pls update soon dieing to read next one luv u a lot tc ……..

  25. natasha

    dhi no wrds to describe ur ff dhi such a lvly epi
    i think u shld giv tis script to any channel and u shld direct the show it will becum a super duper show dhi
    ur just amazing ur fingers have sum magic dhi

  26. Gianna

    Am in love with the fantastic four what do I do? Will be waiting for ur updates for one. Nandini keeps on rocking wow wow wow. This was just one amazing update am really running out of words to explain how happy I am and how awesome u are. Love u Gauri hugs and kisses for u ????

  27. VSK

    god cant control myself to comment
    actually i m a silent reader
    it is sooooo awesome dont know jow to express it
    thank u a lot to write such a beutifull ff

  28. Dev

    Gauri…..AN AWESOME EPI…..lovd it 2 d core….n nc bond of all….n now shady part starts….????

  29. Sv

    Diiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii u rocked it again . Arjun and Neil are back again. Man arjun why are u making me to fall for him again and again. I really love the way radhika demands for attention . Man she is one of my kind same as me. Even if i get a very tiny hurt , i will keep the a speaker and shout it to the whole world. LOL .

    Arjun an caring lover but he is respecting his friendship for Neil and so Radhika . They make a perfect pair di . It was awesome.Di can u say me what is 1 kg of brain . I personally myself will buy around 10kgs to her so that Sam may use atleast 1 gm of the brain. Why is she always ending in trouble. She should change for heaven sake. Who is that Ayan Raizada ?? Is he troublesome ?? Does he gonna hurt Ardhika and Nesam by him . And piyali is she really the mother of Sam i doubt . I never thought a mother would play with daughters life ???

    Di as usual u rocked it . Love ur words and u . Trillions and trillions of hugs and kisses to u di . Pls stay healthy for ourself .

  30. Aastha

    Awesome Gauri Di
    Its easy to fall in love but to understand, care support each other in odd situation s is true love…..I excited how Neil will test Arjun… Liked Radhika- Sam together….. And now all four are together…. Its real fun to see them by each other’s side….Really excited for… How Arjun Neil would destroy Ayan …nobody can stand when both are together…. Really friendship is more precious than love…
    Love you Di …take care
    Update soon

  31. Hope

    Missed me sissy? Actually last sunday i ended up having a headache and doc said its due to my eye strain and mom put ban of 5 days on my mob..tab..tv even my “one hit wonder” the book i’m currently reading.. But i loved those 5 days..
    Getting pampered..eating my fav dishes..playing silly games wid my lil cousins..frnds day out..listening to KAILASH KHER,1D,CARRIE UNDERwOOD.ARMAAN MALIK.then enjoying Election.. I lyk local politics and my mom is really afraid dat if i ever went in dat way and speak abt my pov, i’m gonna end up as a martyr.. And i’m a communist with a very loud voice.. Maybe dats y she’s scared.. Well our party won and i have a lot of frnds who r comrades of our party..we celebrated..
    Giving my mom a heartache..
    I’m a rebel and i really think i got carried away talking politics.. I’m sry..
    I really love ur ff and u always make me dumbstruck after every epi.. So i love u di.. And u r d best.. Mmmuah..

    Plz tell me if i’m doing wrong if i join politics in my clg widout telling my mom? My dad approved and my campus is very famous 4 all d protest and bloodshed..mom hates campus politics..

    • Gauri

      Hi Hope 🙂 nice to see your comment 🙂 hope yiu are doing good 🙂 and its nothing wrong in politics ..its all about the approcah and your motive which can be right or wrong …so follow the right and fear none 🙂 love u

  32. Sweetie

    Amazing update.. 🙂 Can I call you ‘Di’ ??
    Wonderful update with many emotions.. 🙂 Nandini is such a sweetheart 😀 She broke the wall between brothers 🙂 Neil got a shock by listening the nick names Arjun and Radhika gave each other.. Hahaha.. Poor lad 😀
    Aww!! Arjun’s care for Radhika is truly awesome 🙂 I’m already obsessed with the name “Arjun” from a long time dear and you are making me fall for him again and again.. My parents are going to have a tough time searching for my Man.. 🙁 😉 😀
    Ayan is such a b*****d.. That’s the least I can curse him openly.. You are right we have to be twisted to deal with twisted people.. This fella is not a little twisted,and so he should be straightened right away..
    Fantastic Four on the move.. Yayyy!! 😀

    Stay blessed and be happy 🙂
    Happy weekend BTW 😀

  33. subha

    amazing episode…………ardhika part super………nearj plan ,nandini – dialogue super eagerly waiting next one.tc

  34. From now onwards i should just keep mum… Every words are lame infront of ur ff.. my god! I WANT TO MEET YOU ANYHOW.. AND JALD SE JALD… The amazing writer of telly updates … I dnt have words to describe how awesome you are! Blessed to read this

  35. naaz

    Hy dia its funtablous
    mark my words u will one day be famous…no.no.u already are coz me am from Africa,county called Kenya I don’t know if u’ve ever heard….n I know u though not ua face..have a blessed week end…lots of love

  36. Azure

    I binge read this story between yesterday and today after recommendation from emz fesa and I must say it was worth it. This is an amazing your and you are a fabulous writer! Looking forward to your next update. I will read this regularly from now,

    • Gauri

      Hi Nita sorry dear was not able to complete the chapter …will post late evening tomorrow or tuesday morning

  37. Roma

    Awesome, wowwww, superb, marvellous episode. …gauriiiiiiiiiiiii my sweeeeeet darling friend you nailed it again my honeyyy. …..arjun n Neil back together. ..yayyyyy..thx to nandini di…rads n her tantrums. …drama queen. ….loved sam n rads soul sisters, ardhika romantic moments n raneil bonding…..arjneil planning for Ayan must be very interesting…..n if not then what’s the plan B?…precap is very exciting n interesting. ….I’m immersed into this story totally. …very very curious n crazyyyyy for it….mad fan of yours my sweeeeeetheart gauriiiiiiiiiiiii. …keep it up honeyyy. …eagerly waiting for the next episode, love you loads. muaaaaahhhhhh. ..lotssssss of hugsssssss n kissesssss. . ♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡

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