Manmarziyan- Destiny…Passion …Obsession (Chapter 31)

Hello dearies…so here is chapter 31…do let me know how was it …next one on Friday…and mmz on wed….love u all 🙂 happy reading

We all are flawed creatures…and we should open our hearts to accept the other person with their good and bad…this is what love is truly about
Chapter 31

Radhika woke up and found Arjun standing in the balcony…he looked worried…Radhika walked to him; ‘’Now …what’s the reason for your worry’’

Arjun smiled at her and pulled her in an arm hug; ‘’Radhika will you marry me after you bachelors…you can continue your studies or job whatever you want to do’’

Radhika; ‘’Yes I will…now come and I will prepare coffee…by the way I am leaving for Chicago day after tomorrow ..Neil messaged me the details..’’

Arjun; ‘’Fine I will book mine on same…give me your details….Bunny if Neil disapproves me then’’

Radhika; ‘’You are talking like a girl…leave everything on me…I have a confession….now I cannot be with anyone else…either you or no one….I love you Hades’’

Arjun laughed….he knew Neil will try to dissuade Radhika…and once his truth is out Radhika will be angry but she might not talk to him…but he had faith in his love…he pulled her into a bear hug…Radhika smiled and mischievously spoke; ‘’I gave you a happy morning….now prepare coffee for both of us…’’

Arjun Blinked; ‘’you said you would do that’’

Radhika lifted her shoulders; ‘’So!….my mood changed….you prepare…I will go and freshen up’’ Arjun rolled his eyes …nodded his head and went to the kitchen

Radhika joined Neil in his hotel… Arjun booked himself a different one…he had already received an invitation from Prerna…Arjun’s gang was joining them on the day of concert 3 days Radhika practiced for more than 8 hrs…and in night when everyone would sleep she would meet her prince…Radhika Sam met like long lost sisters and Neil had to plug his ears with cotton to prevent them from getting damaged… finally the day of concert arrived Radhika was too nervous…she got ready…but had turned cold….Neil came to her and found her sitting on the green room chair and shaking her legs…he knelt infornt of her; ‘’little one don’t panic…you are good I know that…and you will rock’’

Radhika gave him a weak smile; ‘’Are you sure’’

Neil ; ‘’Yes my Chashni can never lose…and your lucky charm is with you’’ Radhika finally smiled broadly…Neil asked her to get ready Neil was leaving when Radhika gave him a warm hug…Neil hugged her back ; ‘’Missed you Neil…wish we were born to same parents…no one would have asked the relation we share’’

Neil kissed on the top of her head; ‘’We share something more bigger than that…friendship…and people… they can question even purest of bonds…we are answerable only to our parents and the god within us….and I will always be there…now get ready…you have to rock’’ Arjun who heard their conversation from outside smiled…he understood what Radhika-Neil shared…and now he desperately wanted Neil to accept him as a part of Radhika’s life. Radhika got ready when she came out of the wash room she found Arjun in her room …she quickly locked the door; ‘’Who allowed you’’

Arjun pulled her close; ‘’I have my ways Bunny…now be a good girl and give me a hug…I missed you for last 10 hrs 42 min and some sec..’’

Radhika giggled she kissed him deep; ‘’I love you tiger…let me know how was my performance…’’

Arjun; ‘’Steve is recording it…’’ Arjun pulled Radhika to his chest and stood quietly for sometime he wished her and left…but Neil who was coming to escort Radhika to stage saw him leaving…Neil fisted…’’not my CHashni Arjun…you won’t ruin her…I won’t let you’’.

Radhika walked to the stage…Neil patted her head but he was angry…she felt him different …Radhika held his forefinger and smiled…Neil gave in …he smiled wished her….

….Sam hugged Radhika; ‘’Go make me proud and I want to meet your prince charming….’’ Radhika blushed and nodded’’

Radhika started and mesmerized everyone…she performed amazing kathak…her friends were totally into it…Arjun never blinked during her performance….she took 30 spins before finishing it and halted in the middle of stage…she greeted applauding audience with a namaskar and the curtains came down …Radhika went back stage she directly went to Neil; ‘’Buddy how was it?’’

Neil watched her innocent face and big eyes…he couldn’t hold his anger…cupped her face and pulled her in a protective hug…Radhika was surprised; ‘’Did I make a mistake…why are you so worried?’’

Neil; ‘’Even if you do I won’t let you do a mistake…go back to the hotel you have next performance day after tomorrow and Chashni…stay in your room…no more going out with your boyfriend in the night’’ Radhika was surprised…she thought no one knew and she left her room after everyone retired…and Arjun never entered the lobby he would wait at the reception…Radhika lowered her eyes and left. Arjun could not find Radhika after performance he finally drove back to her hotel…and went directly to her room…Radhika opened the door; ‘’Arjun you shouldn’t be here’’

Arjun walked in locked the door; ‘’I care a damm’’ Neil knew Arjun will do this he knocked Radhika’s room she answered….she made Arjun hide….Neil walked in with Sam; ‘’Come out Arjun’’ this sentence left Radhika and Sam shocked to the core….Radhika gave Arjun a questioning look…he lowered his eyes…Neil smirked; ‘’Looks like you didn’t tell her you are the same Arjun who is my childhood friend and was Sam’s crush’’

Sam; ‘’Neil why are we talking about it ….please don’t embarrass me’’

Neil; ‘’I told you Arjun…stay away from her…she is not your plaything’’

Arjun fisted; ‘’I made mistakes …but I love her deeply’’

Neil; “ tat means you were not able to take to your bed’’

Arjun lost it;’’ I love her dammit…don’t say such things for her…I want to marry her’’

Neil gave out a sarcastic laugh; ‘’Stop acting Arjun…you will marry and will leave her once you are bored of her…I know you ‘’

Arjun; ‘’Enough…before I forget you are my friend’’ Arjun and Neil were ready to fight but Sam stood in between; ‘’Both of you behave….Neil at least listen to him…he loves her’’

Neil turned to Radhika; ‘’Chashni….he is one of the richest guy of the country…think will your family be able to match up to them…Uncle has spent a life of respect… do you think he will agree for such a rich family …plus everyone knows of his adventures so think again…. will Uncle agree….no… you know that’’ Radhika kept looking down tears were streaming her face

Arjun stood in between ;’’ Not a word to her…talk to me….she was not aware who I am’’

Neil wanted to punch Arjun…but Sam again stood in between…’’Neil we can talk this out….Arjun calm down…both of you at least look at her…pity her guys’’

Sam turned to Neil; ‘’ what’s your problem…Bhai loved her…you shooed him away…Arjun wants her you are fighting him….why …are you interfering in her life…Neil let her decide what’s good for her…she is not a fool….and your over protectiveness towards her make people doubt your bond’’ Radhika was pained she covered her mouth to stop her voice but couldn’t

Neil was already angry Jai’s name made him bursts; ‘’Your filthy brother tried molesting Radhika 4 yrs back…in your house at your parents anniversary party…. she was just a 17yr old kid…he is an animal…I would have broken all his bones that itself if not for you and if you doubt my feeling you are free to leave…but get this straight…I won’t let anyone spoil her…she is my family’’ Arjun burned hearing Jai’s name he turned and found Radhika silently sobbing

Sam was shocked….; ‘Neil!!!’’

Neil; ‘’Leave Sam…’’ Sam stomped her foot and left…everything came back to Radhika her attacker had a face now…she cloud feel the same filthy touch again…Radhika got up ran to the wash room and puked…Arjun followed her …he removed her hair from her face.. …he helped her clean…Radhika collapsed on the floor Arjun lifted her up; ‘’Neil…I know you care for her…but can you please give me a chance to prove my love’’

Neil ; ‘’Right now just leave’’

Arjun placed Radhika on bed…kissed her forehead; ‘’I love you Bunny….I really do’’ Radhika kept looking at him with teary eyes…Arjun wiped her tears…he turned to Neil.. Arjun ; ’’I am glad…she has you…but this does not end here…she is mine and I will take her…’’ Arjun turned and looked and Radhika again…..he smiled and then hugged Neil.. and left…Neil covered Radhika and left for his room’’

Neil came back to his suite and found Sam packing; ‘’Now where are you going’’

Sam; ‘’I am shifting to other room…I have had enough’’

Neil ;’’ Sam you are again doubting me’’

Sam turned; ‘’I am not doubting…I know the reality…for some reason you hate bhai..but today you blamed him for a ghastly deed…which I can’t take ….I love you but that doesn’t mean I don’t love my family’’

Neil; ‘’I am not blaming him…I know he did that…this is the reason I kept him away from Radhika’’

Sam smirked; ‘’Is this the only reason?….or you hate him because he never approved of you’’

Neil lost his control …tears welled up in Neil’s eyes ‘’you will never trust me….I will not justify myself anymore’’ Sam left Neil’s room in tears…

Sam unlocked the door for her room and broke down ; ‘’Neil…why didn’t you stop me…I love you… you broke my heart…how will I survive I have no one…fine…I wanted to live for you now I will destroy myself for you….Sam picked up the phone and dialled Ayan accepting his 5 yr contract….Sam was not aware of Ayan’s intention…Sam had become famous and Ayan wanted to marry her to feed on her success and money and make use of her beauty and youth…he knew someone was trying to snatch GLITZ but didn’t knew the identity…

Radhika was lying on her bed all curled up and crying….Arjun had called her 50 times…she finally answered; ‘’Arjun….”

Arjun; ‘’Bunny…thank heavens..are you ok?…listen I know I shouldn’t have lied…but I had madly fallen for you …I didn’t wanted to lose…Bunny forgive me I will die without you ‘’ Arjun could only hear Radhika’s hiccups…it was enough he went back to her hotel and called her; ‘’Open up

Radhika now’’ She obliged…Arjun locked the door and took her into his arms…she did not pull back; “you should have told the truth to me

Arjun…’’why did you lie…Neil is right I am no match to you…’’

Arjun; ‘’Sorry…tell me what should I do….no one will decide my match…we chose each other…and it’s done now’’

Radhika; ‘’Right now…we have to leave each other…that’s best thing’’

Arjun was restless…s angry; ‘’because Neil wants.’’

Radhika; ‘’because I won’t hurt Neil…please do this for me

Arjun kept staring at her; ‘’do you still love me?’’ Radhika just stared back into his eyes…Arjun kissed her passionately he wrapped himself around her body completely…he just didn’t wanted to let her go; ‘’listen to me….I told you once escaping me would be impossible …don’t make me do this….don’t awaken the old Arjun’’

Radhika; ‘’I love you and will always love you…I accepted you the way you are…but for now we have to do this…I will set things right…trust me tiger’’ Arjun lifted her took her to bed and got in next to her holding her; ‘’I want to be here tonight please…tomorrow I will do everything you want me to’’

Radhika smiled; ‘’you have every right on me…I am still yours’’ Arjun pulled her close…she had become his reason to smile and live…Radhika buried her face in his strong chest and whispered; ‘’follow me to India in 4 months…please…I am joining Bird Song …Neil’s team…Join Bird Song with your sister …we can stay close…’’

Arjun; ‘’I will follow you anywhere…and yes I want teach Jai a lesson’’

Radhika; ‘’I don’t care about him…I never liked him…but tolerated for Sam…well don’t worry if he touches me..Neil will kill him’’…Radhika after a pause; ‘’What if my parents refuse? Arjun removed her dark hair from her neck..pulled her sleeve down and kissed her shoulder deep…Radhika gasped clutching his shoulder tight…

Arjun smiled; ‘’’Leave that on my sister…Let me make one thing clear…if anything goes wrong…I will abduct you…’’

Radhika blushed; ‘’Your wish is my command….now hug me tight Arjun…4-5 months without you is going to be a pain…’’ Arjun obliged ….as the darkness completely covered the sky…two hearts promised to be with each other come what may…and the other two were fighting a battle without a reason…Radhika trusted Arjun even after knowing he lied…because she believed his love she understood him …and Sam kept doubting Neil she feared she would lose him knowing he only loved her…but her intuition was not completely wrong…Neil- Sam had the biggest test coming their way

Arjun’s alarm buzzed…he switched it off and looked at Radhika sleeping in his arms…Arjun gently kissed her eyes cheeks nose and then lips…she smiled and responded; ‘’ I wanted this night to never end’’

Arjun; ‘’Thanks bunny I thought I lost you and sorry I lied’’

Radhika; ‘’I promised you will never lose me…Arjun my ego is not that big ….and I am not foolish to hurt myself by letting you go….you are forgiven…and I am breaking my rule…I don’t care for your lie now….I trust you…that’s enough…but Neil is my family…I will not hurt him….’’

Arjun kissed her forehead; ‘’Take a good care of yourself…because if I found you in pain…I will forcefully take you with me’’

Radhika; ‘’Arjun is there anything else that I should know’’

Arjun thought for a moment; ‘’The store you work in is mine….I am sorry just wanted you to be safe’’

Radhika leaped out of the bed and hugged him tightly; ‘’You are a sweet heart….let me stay like this for Some more minutes please’’ Arjun held her close…Radhika spoke again; ‘’Are you paying me more than others’’

Arjun stammers; ‘’Ah….yes…I never wanted you to look for other job’’ Radhika pulls out of the hug and watches him sternly…ARjun rubs his forehead…he feels she is angry…Radhika lifts his chin leans and kissed him; ‘’You are one crazy kind of man…but I love you for what you are’’ Arjun smiles and responds with a passionate hug …

Radhika; ‘’I have a confession too’’

Arjun; ‘’ and what’’

Radhika; ‘’I always doubted you… to be Neil’s friend….but liked you so ignored my doubt’’ Arjun smiled and caressed her head

Radhika’’Arjun I will be back to New York after tomorrow performance…will you attend the concert tomorrow’’

Arjun; ‘’No Bunny…I am leaving today…my heart is giving up now…I never knew staying away from you would pain so much’’ Arjun planted desperate kisses on her face and neck…

Radhika little worried; ‘’I am not stopping you from meeting me…Will you break your friendship with Neil’’

Arjun; ‘’Crazy girl…he is my brother…he cares for you I understand…other than you there is no fight between us…and I know bunny you will convince him’’ Radhika smiled

He gave her one lovable look and left…Radhika watched him leaving she got up freshened up changed …she knew come what may no one will be able to separate her from Arjun…he was impossible and she loved each and every positive and negative about him now. But now she had to meet Neil she Knew Neil and Sam must have fought…Neil sometimes was like a volcano and its time to support Sam
Love is a beautiful feeling but friendship is a blessing …Arjun –Neil share a friendship of 2 decades …even their differences can’t break them….Radhika-Sam…can fight each other but will never let anybody come in between them

Precap- Radhika scolds Neil for hurting Sam…Nandini breaks the wall between Arjun-Neil…Arjun-Neil plan to de-root Ayan….

Credit to: Gauri


  1. pankh

    finally got to see Arjun nd Neil face off..loved it to the core…nd precap is superb….can’t wait for next one…

  2. shreyanshi

    i liked arjun-neil face offf…..
    i just luv the way.. radhika trusted arjun…. and luv between them…
    yes… neil-radhika.. bond is beyond the thought of society and people…
    yup… waiting for nandini 😀 she is one of the best character in ur ff…..

  3. Supriya

    Di Omg u hav put so much curiosity in my head now…..wht to sae u told me u posted at abt 10 it got updated soon how z this possible??? But m on the moon after reading it….now many flying kisses to u di….m so much into it now……di the more I read it the more I get eager to know…..di loved rads alot today…..her decision shows how much brainy she z……now I want to c arjun thrashing jai…..atlast he z aware of the identity of that person who tried to molest his radhika now let’s c how he gives it back…..yup I know nandini z a imp character here she will surely solve everything between Neil nd arjun…..Sam I don’t understand this girl… ur both ff I don’t like her character that much……ayan toh god save him from Neil nd arjun… my questions………. Now rads will join bs so it means jai will meet her soon,r8?????but di no one to save her now…..arjun z not coming with her….how she will deal with him???? Will Sam get some sense in her peanut brains????when will Neil accept aradhika???? How will arjun convince Neil on his love for radhika????…… Di u r just ossum…..I wish I was a guy….I would have got the opportunity to propose u……I srsly love you for this wonderful masterpiece…. Di mmz tom r8?????Friday long w8 but I know u r busy so update in ur own sweet time……love you soooo much…….muaaaaahhhhhh……. Tc???????????????

    • sammy

      Supriya last night don’t know manmarziyan offs posted soon supriya …mine was also updated within 2 hours:-)

    • Gauri

      Thanks a ton Supriya for the lovely comment 🙂 see Sam is not bad…her reaction is a normal human reaction…now your answers 🙂 yes Radhika will be soon going back to mumbai…she will meet Jai again…but she has Neil….and Arjun will join her soon … now wait for Neil’s test for Arjun… OMG chalo I accept your proposal happy now 😀 … mmz tomorrow for sure …loads of love stay blessed and a big hug 🙂

      • Supriya

        Di thanks for your wonderful answers… have accepted my proposal omg m in the air someone pull me on ground…. Lol…..will eagerly for Friday….. m excited abt mmz too but last question….. Wen u will update mmz after tom’s update?…..loads of love and million hugs for you…..

      • Sv

        Di this is not fair i proposed u first . Supriya pls take care of my di. I should see only happy tears from her eyes. Where ever u are be happy. God bless u love birds B-)

      • Gauri

        OMG seriously you guys are too much…in person till date no one had the guts even to flirt with me here u too are on and on and on

  4. Gianna

    ???????? I think I will run out of emojis to express my feelings at this moment. My mom is asking if I have gone crazy coz am smiling to my phone ? Keep on rocking my darling. Love uuuuu ????

    • Gauri

      Thanks Gianna 🙂 🙂 🙂 🙂 🙂 🙂 multiply this by 1000…you made me smile that much 🙂 loads of love stay blessed 🙂

  5. Amy

    This was an episode i was waiting for…… nd i loved it 🙂
    This was so beautifully written…… keep it up n update soon 🙂
    Love u n take care dr 🙂

  6. Dipanwita

    U r amazing…. I jst become dumbstruck whenever i read ur ff….Luv it….Come wht may don’t let anything brk RNeil bond…Nd if u can plz give some brain to sam….Arjun rocked….Dear plz don’t make us wait hurts…update faster…waiting to see the thunderstorms of nandini nd clash between arjun-that creepy jai

    • Gauri

      Thanks Dipanwita 🙂 I believe true bonds never break come what may 🙂 Sam is not bad just little insecure but she is a true friend … will update soon 🙂 loads of love 🙂

  7. Super duper hit if this was in theatre this story would be shown over and over again like dilwale duliluya and sholey. 🙂

  8. Hima

    Finally it has happened!neils’s care for rads,rads trust for arjun,arjun’s strong determination,sam’s unpredictable nature..everything are just superb.precap is really interestng..

  9. Totally block buster…my wish fulfilled…nail Arjun face off fine…both are right from their own perspective…but the best is abha’s perspective…lol…sam don’t know when will that girl grow up…sarcastic …m waiting for India chapters…

    • Gauri

      Thanks a ton Rosie 🙂 my perspective thanks for that line 🙂 soon you will have India chapters 🙂 loads of love and a big hug for you 🙂 stay blessed 🙂

  10. ab

    Awesome amazing superb as always ardhika rocked Neil Sam fight oh so Sad ? but happy for ardhika love u di

  11. shiva

    hi! everyone i am new here i was a silent reader for such a long time but after reading this i culdnt control my fingers from typing. girl ur writing is awesome and 2dys epi was 2 gud hope u continue lk this and just for reading this i was awke till 11;30 but unknowingly dozed of so in the morning first thing i did was read ur ffs and now am busy reading it again n again.
    be smiling dude always n keep writing am a dire fan of ur writing.
    ok bye dear tc

  12. Dev

    U nailed as usual gauri…..sorry yaar cudnt comment on d last 2 updates….n a fantastic prologue of ur story…..
    D epi was a supr 1…cool portraying of radikas xprsns…..arjun n neils fight ……sams insecurity…….n ardika scene……promising each odr……
    Waiting for d nxt epi…..
    Love u lots….hugs…

    • Gauri

      Thanks Dev 🙂 and no need for sorry buddy….I know life can busy at times 🙂 stay blessed 🙂 tc

  13. Emz fasa

    Awesome 🙂 Finally the day has come Ar-niel face off and radhika now khow that the attacker was jai and waiting for ar-niel patch up

  14. Raaga

    I m gonna repeat same words which u have heard lot many times…
    u have magic in ur hands….
    u r out of the world sometimes….I don’t know how u manage to write so well…..even if some scenes are lil sad but u make sure it doesn’t affect readers so much….love u…
    I wanna meet u once dear…
    even I stay in bangalore
    stay blessed ….
    thank you thank you so much dear

  15. Awesome as always.. 😀
    Now Jai is in a grave trouble, he has to face Arjun and Neil together to get Radhika which is next to impossible.. That guy doesn’t even know what’s coming in his way and soon his nightmare gonna turn to reality..
    The trust Radhika has on Arjun is truly out of the world.. Loved it totally 😀
    I love the words of destiny so so much.. Those are just not words but lessons we’ve to learn in our life.. Thank you for those awesome words.. 🙂
    Stay blessed and be happy dear 🙂

    • Gauri

      Thanks Sweetie 🙂 well I should say let Jai face Radhika alone in day … she is no less 🙂 love you dear 🙂 stay blessed 🙂

      • Definitely.. 🙂
        As now Radhika has got to know the face of her molester she definitely gonna make his life hell.. 😀
        Oh! Now I’m eagerly waiting for the next episode.. 🙂


  16. M

    oh….oh….oh….my heart skipped so many beats……..this arjun……..radhika………muahhhhhh……
    sam…..need few punches….
    neil….awwwww my angry bird…lov his doll..i lov his possesivness…..

  17. Sravya

    wowww superb☺ I loved today’s update.after all niel n arjun faced each other.Radhika was superb.But worried for niel n sam?.thanks a lot for the treat.lots of love for u??waiting for the nxt one deeply.Love u dear n tc☺

  18. darling sissy ??? u kno when i was reading dat dialogue “come out arjun”? seriously my heart beat raced to 100 for sure ???? everyone in dis part s really bold n awesome ??✌✌ as usual u rocked everthing ✌✌ friendship-love-care ??? arjun wowwww he s really awesome ✌?? waiting for nandhu ??? i like her very much in dis ? love u ?? lots of love….. kiss…. n hugs for u??

    • Gauri

      Thanks Suga 🙂 a big hug for you 🙂 yes Nandini will effortlessly bring Arjun Neil together 🙂 loads of love 🙂

  19. aastha

    loved it di…………………superb as usual…………….finally Arjun’s truth is out……… glad that Rads trusted him..I thought she would be angry ..but as you said when we love some1 we love all their defects and positive things too……….Sam-Rads bond was depicted beautifully………………loved her trust on Rads that she’ll nt choose some1 bad………bt sad that she again hurt Neil and Rads by questioning their relationship………..y can’t Sam trust Neil the way Rads trust Arjun ??????? I felt sad 4 Rads………….the morning ardhika scenes was nice……………loved Arjun’s dialogue about his relationship with Neil……………the precap is what I’m looking for next…………………..will Sam’s life be in danger as she agreed to Ayan ?????????????? nesam are always fighting……….give it a rest and once again unite them forever………………………….love u sooooooooooooooooooo much…………TC……………

    • Gauri

      Thanks you my little sweet hrt 🙂 now ur answers 🙂 Yes Sam will be in danger… she has this intution of getting separated from Neil…she will learn… you too much sugar is also harmful Sam and Neil were too sweet for many yrs …. now little salt 😛 but everything will be fine 🙂 loads of love 🙂

  20. Waah waah kya baat hai? ????????? I know this much f Hindi only Gauri. Today each character u portrayed very well, u just nailed it Gauri & im so so happy, OMG I don’t think – radhu u love this much really arjun is lucky guy. Gauri, I said Thank U from bottom of my heart ❤
    Im Waiting 4 the next 1

  21. Dhara

    Awesome Awesome Awesome :). Ardhika are so adorable. Their trust is their strength. Ne-Sam still needs a lesson to learn. Hope Nandhini will play cupid in everyone’s life. Thank god she is not negative here. Loved it 🙂

  22. Sejal

    So finally the truth is out… U wont believe but frm the day arjun told the beauty that he is not the arjun her friends know… I really used to think what will be radhika’s reaction wht will be her decision and how she will convince neil to give arjun a chance for her… I cant understand wht is the prblm with sam and neil why cant they sit and talk everything.. Its not necessary to fight every single tym… And samrunder singh if you even think about hurting yourself thhen baby get ready becoz u will surely get punishment and you deserve this becoz its only neil malhotra right to think abt this… Jai i hate him lyk had h mujhe samajh nhi ata he is not here fr bhi creating problems .. I really want him to suffer lyk hell….
    A very very gud episode di.. Plzz try to update early if u get free friday will be verrryy lonngg.. Plzz plzz
    luv u di. Truck full of hugs and kisses for u

    • Gauri

      Thanks Sejal 🙂 Ne-sam too much sugar in the begining is the problem 😛 you seriously hate Jai….well Sam’s reaction was justified as no sister would believe that her brother can do this …. darling I will try my level best to update before Friday 🙂 loads of love and a big hug for you 🙂 stay blessed 🙂

  23. Sathya

    Ufffffff…..Ohhh MY GOSH…Gauri… you are killing us by ur updates. IT IS A FANTASTIC ONE. You know what now i am loss of words. i really don’t know what to comment only. Love is based on trust and you proved that trust between Ardhika how it is strong thought Radhika got to know everything about Arjun and Again you proved that how that trust is gone between Neil and Sam. you are wonderful dear. Hats off 🙂 🙂 🙂

    • Gauri

      Thanks a million times for such a lovely comment Sathya 🙂 love you 🙂 stay blessed 🙂

  24. Sv

    Di is this right for giving a mini heart attack in the update ad the medicine in the precap. I was worried. Di this is not fair. PLs put the disclosure before so that i myself can make me mentally ready.

    This is soo awesome.These many days of fear is over . Rads knew Arjun’s reality. I loved the way Arjun and Neil is showing their concern towards Radhika . Wish everyone gets friends like Arjun and Neil.

    Neil said the reason for Rads fear now its show time for Jai . Eagerly waiting for the day when Arjun would smash Jai’s face and Neil would rip him part by part.

    Cant sam trust Neil. Then why is she claiming that she loves him. Argh if u dont trust him then y hurt him, Rads as always super. She trusts him loved it.

    Loved it a ton di . Love your words and you. Take care bear hugs and Kisses and trillions of thanks to you

    • Gauri

      Sv darling sorry for giving you a heart attack and thanks for such a beautiful comment 🙂 I love the new ff you have started 🙂 post soon 🙂 loads of love stay blessed 🙂

      • Sv

        Didi u know how much ur ff. The fact was started it and couldnot read fully at a stretch. Then when i finished only i got my breadth back. My nails are totally gone by biting it . Di abt the new ff will upload it once i finish it di. Sry for making u wait and im in moon coz my di loves it . Thank u di . Love u

  25. Wowwwwwwwww…..Gauri you r really a rockstar..always rocks….you have this amazing skill to describe feelings… Today i liked Radhika she behaves such wisely today after she had warned arjun bt she trust him n believed on him though her bstfrnd told her to leave arjun..n Neil…i wished i would hav a frnd like he shud hav too trust arjun too..Sam…y she is so emotional always takes decision by heart..n get trapped.. well i knw all will be well prettw excited to precap…Love you shoo much Tu queen..loads of hugs n kisses for you..

  26. Bhabya

    Di sorry 4 not commenying on previous one. I m on a trip but got some time n read both the epi they were awesome n about the book the proluge is awesome

    • Gauri

      Thanks Bhabya 🙂 no need for sorry dear enjoy ur trip to the max 🙂 now even I need a vacation 😛 loads of love and hugs for you 🙂

  27. Niharika

    Gauri di this is amazing I was waoting for this ch for the time Radhika and Arjun met. Sorry i could not comment earler I went to mapsua with my nana i am from Mumbai but right now i am in Goa for holidays. Bye di take care.

    • Gauri

      Thanks Niharika 🙂 I love Goa B) been there 5 times…still cant get all of it…feels like making a hut near a beach and staying there till eternity 🙂 love you stay blessed 🙂

  28. happy

    hi dr…hw r u?…..its just amazing………….super episode……….finally got answer………thanks………..thank you so so much………..

    • Gauri

      Hi Happy dear….I am good… hw r u …after so many days….hope you are doing good….missed you…and thanks loads of love stay blessed 🙂

  29. Devi

    Hey Gauri..wanted to ask you if have written any other FFs other than this one n MMZ.. i hav read ur MMZ- journey of love n frndship….plz let me know if i hav missed any of ur FFs…would love to read them..;)

  30. sreee

    ohhhhhj di this epi was wowwwww…..atlast di u saved my tiger, wow what to say about radhika’s love or right thing to say is her trust on her tiger…….it was super……she is indeed beauty with brains ,knows where and when to use her heart and head, also di i dont know how u manage to bring out the perspective ,emotions ,and their heart down ur fingers………its just so cool di…keep rocking…… you di from the core of my heart( if i ever get a chance of meeting u my first word will be ”will u sign me an autograph??? ” )

    • Gauri

      Hi Sreee 🙂 I am speechless 🙂 I think I need to improve more to be someone who cld sign an autograph 🙂 but thanks a ton dear for making me feel so special…loads of love and a big hug for you 🙂

  31. Aastha

    Hello Gauri Di
    Di I am in love with your DPO and your writing….. Today’s part is awesome… am jumping in happiness… become a full mad and crazy…. from where you got ideas of writing such wonderful story…… ARadhika rocked….Radhika proved how important trust is… no one can separate them….. Neil too accept them soon…. while reading ARadhika part….I remembered you said when two different people fall they fall deep…… now Jai’s face out….waiting when Arjun would teach him a lesson……O God !!!! I am imagining Arjun punching Jai then passing to Neil ,he also punches then passes back to Arjun…..Lol !!!! I have become a total mad.
    Finally Arjun Neil face to face…….what Sam is doing doubting Neil,the one who only love her……
    Di you would post next one on Friday…. but can’t wait ….wanna read without any end…am so much addicted to it….
    And Di Congrats for 6 yrs….when you are going to post it..
    I wanna ask from where you belong from ????
    Di when is your birthday. ????
    Love you Di….take care
    🙂 🙂 🙂 🙂 🙂

    • Gauri

      Thanks Aastha dear 🙂 I am smiling wide reading your comment ….and ur imagination on Jai my god 😀 … 6yrs is a book I am planning …. I am from lucknow my bday 30th Jun … loads of love and a big hug for you 🙂 🙂 )

  32. lavanya

    marvellous di….I was awestruck…
    loved it…even an crying seeing both arjun and radhikas pain…thanks to you…they are together even in such a situation…but am worried for Sam….she is sometimes too hard to handle…don’t know how you are going to make Neil accept ardhikas relation…you have given their faceoff in totally unexpected way…not the stereotype where heroine intoduces hero to her friend or brother…and that faceoff turns to be a fight…couldn’t expect a much better way than yours…have to see how arjun wins Neil’s trust…I respect radhika more…as she has given importance to Neil’s…while still trusting the powerin her love…hope everything gets fine…and everyone will be happy with one another…hoping to see the next episode soon…

    • Gauri

      Thanks a million times Lavanya 🙂 you made my day 🙂 yes I wanted Radhika’s to keep Neil’s heart as having a new relationship doesn’t mean you forget the old ones… 🙂 just a thought and she trust Arjun and herself… and when u trust yourself things settle down fast 🙂 loads of love and thanks again 🙂

  33. Another awesome episode I don’t hav words to say abt u..becoz ur above all the words of appreciation
    U descirbed wonderfully abt Sam and radhikas’s bond..u hav shown two different love stories between d people who has different perception on love..Sam the one who is insecure after knowing Neil frm many years..nd radhika d trust shown by her..really yaar amazing ..hope radhika will come soon to India..who will tackle jai arjun or Neil or radhika herself..Sam when will she know jai’s reality??
    May I know ur hangout or Facebook user name…if u can provide me

    • Gauri

      Thanks a ton Priya 🙂 well I am planning to make Jai a foot ball 😛 what say 🙂 yes they will soon be india 🙂 yes with time Sam will knw about Jai 🙂 my name is Abha Dikshit 🙂 love you loads

  34. neetz

    Awwwwww that was a cuute epi…radhikas tears made me sad sad… friday seeems lyk a long wait. 🙁
    I know u.might b busy you

  35. Rg

    Hi gauri lovely update. A bit touchy I suppose. Felt bad whn rads cried. But loved her decisions too. Very practical.. After all y emotionally torture ourselves and our loved ones. … Neil’s reaction is acceptable. Will Neil accept arjun for rads? Will rads stay separate from arjun? For how long? I thought d four will have a nice time outings or sightseeing US… Will arjun b able to stay away from rads?… I hope d four months all will b together.. plz gauri let them b together. Will jai spell trouble for rads? Wat any d New guy in sams life? Will he trouble her? Am way too curious let me know soon.

    An awesome fantastic telling of a fabulous story by a wonderful writer… Thank u gauri for such beautiful gifts in form of fiction s… I will always cherish it. Take care.

    • Gauri

      Thanks Rg dear 🙂 was waiting for your comment 🙂 Neil will test Arjun in his own way 🙂 but before that Nandini with her intelligence will brk the ice between Neil and Arjun….they are will be together after few chap 🙂 well you shd ask will Radhika and her frnds spare Jai ? New guy he just a distraction …yes for now he is a trouble but this willl bring a positive change change 🙂 loads of love 🙂 thanks for all the appreciation and love Rg 🙂 stay blessed 🙂 😀

  36. nita

    Nice one the way radhika used her brains nd arjuns care for her is awesome…… Now what arjun have to do to convince Neil…ya I thought that nadhini wll help them in this…… Now want to see arjun dealing with jai

  37. sreee

    u r already too superb di……then improvising again to be ur best and perfect self….wow di way to go…..keep rocking…….

  38. khusi

    sam u did ryt by leaving Neil’s side he should understand u. he should talk to u but he shouted on u……….
    sorry gauri m not judging ur any of character u r a PERFECT writer and ur story is far better than any daily soap nd this is the first ff which I read regularly, but what can I do I love sam’s character more than others, bcoz ur all three other characters are just perfect in their own, but sam she is not perfect lyk other she has some merits and some demerits in her like the girls of real world and I love this part of sam and feeling connected to her character bcoz I love her IMPERFECTION. sorry if I hurted u………. m so sorry

    • Gauri

      Khishi darling 🙂 no need to be sorry 🙂 everyone has a personal choice and opinion and I respect that 🙂 and thanks a ton loads of love stay blessed 🙂

  39. As always u r amazing yaar…..marvelous episode…poor arjun…teji work really too good….raneil part superb…precap interesting can’t wait …pls update soon …love

  40. deeva

    It was just…. as always…. I m in love with…. ur just n amazing writer….. very talented dear….. and sorry for the late comment… but as usual…. u r awesome……. love u.. tc

  41. Roma

    Awesome, marvellous, outstanding episode, gauri dearrrr my sweeeeeet darling. ….you nailed it my honeyyy again. …sooooo sorry for late commet……episode was mind blowing…arjun n Neil clash….rads knows jai’s reality now n also arjun’s real identity, nesam fight….whoa so much happened. …but rads trusted arjun n forgave him. .loved it…neil very much protective for rads….n sam saying yes to Ayan’s contract….very interesting track n precap is very exciting n interesting. ….nandini will patchup arjun n Neil. …wowwww I’m so glad nandini is very lovelyyyyyy in this story. ..also both arjun n Neil will deroot ayan to save sam….kudos to you my sweeeeeetheart gauriiiiiiiiiiiii. ….you’re amazingly awesoooooome. ….your imagination and flow of words is extremely incredible, splendiferous, magical,…keep it up honeyyy. ..anxiously waitingggggg for the next episode, love you loads. . muaaaaahhhhhh ♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡

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