Manmarziyan- Destiny…Passion …Obsession (Chapter 30)

Hello friends….thanks a ton for all the love and support…so here in the next chapter…next one on Mon or tues…do let me know how was it…and I need your honest opinion…I am sharing a short prologue of the book (6 yrs) …I have started….suggest a good name and let me know how is it…pls it’s a request…help me live my dream 🙂 🙂 🙂 happy weekend

Time tests you and relationships time and again…but you get annoyed…don’t be fight it because …if you win…you will be awarded with best gifts

Chapter 30

Radhika had already got her dresses for concerts…as she had to do her dress rehearsals atleat five times before the main show…she was practicing her classical performance in her costume…sans makeup and hair tightly tied in a bun….Arjun watched her… he was recording her practice….Radhika stopped and smiled; ‘’you will see me live…record the final one’’

Arjun; ‘’I want all…by the way you look mouth watering in this ghagra…the dress is so nice that little make up you will like a bride’’ Radhika rolled her eyes and sat on the floor to rest…

Arjun came to her ; ‘’Bunny promise me…nothing will break us apart….I have done mistakes which you don’t know…will you leave me if you get to know of them?’’

Radhika; ‘’No …and even if I leave you will kidnap me…so it’s better I stay with you happily’’

Arjun smiled; ‘’By the way I don’t like your top….it’s too deep from the back…’’

Radhika frowned and warned; ‘’You utter a word on my dress and I will wear backless…and 1000 people will be drooling infornt of you on my back’’

Arjun’s nostrils flared…he moved closer to her …held her neck from the back and pulled closer; ‘’then I will scoop those 1000 pair of eyes out of their sockets…you try wearing backless and will show you the Arjun you have never met’’

Radhika smiled; ‘’Tiger…you don’t scare me and you cannot hurt me…you are helpless when it comes to me…but I love you’’ Arjun grip loosen and his palm moved from her neck to her waist….he wrapped it around her waist pulled her close….kissed her; “yes I am helpless when it comes to you…but I am also dangerous when its about you…so don’t test me’’ Radhika smiled and kept her head on his chest to hear his heart which whispered her name with every beat.

Neil and Sam landed in US, they checked into the hotel…Prerna was coming after 2 days…Sam had to go for her shoot…she was annoyed with Neil for misbehaving with Jai…but

Neil was least concerned. Neil freshen up and got ready after taking rest for 5-6 hrs…Sam came to him; ‘’Where are you going’’

Neil; ‘’ Chashni’s campus to meet her’’

Sam; ‘’Radhika… …you will meet her in 5 days in Chicago…then what’s the urgency’’

Neil; ‘’ Because she should be surprised…or I should say want to catch her red handed’’

Sam huffed; ‘’Neil this is wrong…she said she will introduce him…you are impossible’’

Neil smiled kissed Sam’s forehead and left. Radhika was not even aware of his arrival….she finished her job at the library …she was supposed to meet Arjun for a date….and was happy about it..but she was about to get surprised….Radhika got a message…’’Come out Chashni’’ Radhika was little taken aback it was a different no….she walked to the parking and saw Neil with a dimpled smile…messy hair…rugged jeans t-shirt and a jacket…Radhika happiness had no limits…but then she realized Arjun was close she didn’t wanted them to meet this way…she gestured Neil to wait and called Arjun he answered; ‘’Bunny all set’’

Radhika; ‘’Arjun Neil is here….pls don’t come now…I will meet you once he is gone…pls’’

Arjun gripped the wheel hard; ‘’Why should I give my time to some else…’’

Radhika; ‘’I will make up for that….please tiger understand…’’

Arjun; ‘’Switch your GPS on….I want to know where ever you are…and you are spending night at my place’’

Radhika; ‘’Ok…and thanks…love you’’ Arjun slowly drove near the campus but did move the glass down…Radhika came to Neil he hugged her tight and pecked her forehead…
Arjun didn’t like it …why the hell she was so comfortable….Radhika got inside Neil’s car and they drove off Arjun followed them…In the car

Neil; ‘’tell me something about your boyfriend’’

Chashni; ‘’He can do anything for me…and he means business…wants to marry me by year end’’

Neil was shocked; ‘’You are a baby…no he should wait’’

Radhika smiled; ‘’So is Sam…so even you should wait…and for how long will I be a baby for you’’

Neil gave Radhika a weird look; ‘’ forever… ….what is the limit of your relationship’’

Radhika all wide eyed; ‘’Neil!!!! Want to kill you for that question…do you think I will do anything like that’’

Neil; ‘’if you are talking about old chashni then no…but this one I don’t Trust her’’ Radhika started punching and kicking Neil non-stop….Neil laughed…held her hands and pinched her cheeks… ‘’I want to meet him’’

Radhika; ‘’You will… in Chicago’’

Neil; ‘’Why not today…and what’s his name’’

Radhika hesitated on the name part; ‘’ I am not ready for his post-mortem yet…you surprised me…you will know all once you meet him…let me enjoy my 5 days with him’’

Neil smirked; ‘’I came with the intention of catching you red handed…shit missed it’’ and Neil got one more kick

Neil loitered around the City with Radhika visiting different places …both looked too happy….Arjun heart was giving up…he followed them he was scared what if his truth comes out…Neil dropped Radhika to her dorm after dinner once he was gone…Radhika pulled her mobile to call Arjun but before that she was caught into a desperate grip…Arjun was hugging her madly; ‘’Is Anna home?’’

Radhika; ‘’No she is at her sister’s place she will directly join us in Chicago’’

Arjun; ‘’then let’s get in fast before I do something bad’’ After getting inside the flat Arjun hugged Radhika crazily he walked without breaking the hug and dropped both their bodies on the bed…bringing Radhika below him….he moved his hands into her shirt over her waist to feel her bare skin…Radhika could feel how insecure he was…she tighten her grip on him kissed his cheek; ‘’I love you tiger…calm down…I am here in your arms’’ Arjun went on his elbows and lifted his half body up up…he watched her face…she was smiling calmly….Arjun leaned and invaded her mouth….taking control on her completely…she responded with all the love she had for him…he broke the kiss and planted desperate kisses on her face; ‘’I am mad for you…I don’t want to lose you’’

Radhika; ‘’you did not have your dinner…let me get it done…’’ Arjun was not ready to let go…she smiled; ‘’Fine come to the kitchen with me…’’ he obliged…he kept on holding her from the back while she cooked for him…Once the dinner was done…Arjun took Radhika to bed he hugged her and closed his eyes..’’Tiger…you don’t trust me’’

Arjun kept caressing her hair; ‘’Bunny I do…. but don’t trust my luck…I will burn the world if I lose you’’

Radhika; ‘’Listen to me carefully Arjun mehra…I am yours …and I am not leaving you…you will never lose me I promise you that…’’ Arjun smiled and pecked her cheek…Radhika’s phone started buzzing it was Sam’s call…Arjun seemed annoyed… ….turned her phone on silent…and went back to her love; ‘’Happy …now smile…Arjun you are no better than a 5 yr old kid’’ Arjun smiled caressed her face and switched off the lights…Arun’s POV ; ‘’See you in 5 days Neil…..but I won’t leave her now’’ he watched sleeping Radhika and smiled…’’be ready to be my bride …I will make you Radhika Arjun Mehra’’

Sam was prowling like a tigress…Neil was gone for hours she had million thoughts running in her head……Sam got a call from an unknown no…she answered ;”Yes’’
Caller; ‘’Hi Samaira…I am Ayan Raizda…owner of GLITZ …I am in New York…your mom told me you are in New York can we meet for dinner now…I am in the restaurant area of your hotel’’

Sam thought; ‘’Will join you in 10 min’’ Ayan was happy he was completely in awe of Sam. Sam changed into one shoulder light blue dress…made a sideways fish cut braid and left to meet he Ayan…Samaira entered the restaurant…and looked around…Ayan stood up looking at Sam….he was mesmerised…she looked ravishing…Sam greeted Ayan with a handshake…Ayan like a gentleman adjusted chair for Sam; ‘’Samira you look beautiful…you are more beautiful than your pictures’’

Sam blushed; ‘’Thanks’’ Ayan asked Sam about her studies and interest to make her comfortable…after 10 15 minutes Sam was comfortable she went all chirpy with him…Sam failed to notice Ayan’s growing interest in her…he was watching her…but someone read his face Neil…who came searching for Sam found her busy talking to Ayan…Neil had seen

Ayan’s expression…he didn’t like he left for his room he thought of speaking to Sam once she comes back to the room…

Ayan ordered dinner; ‘’Samaira I wanted you to be the face of GLITZ for next 5 yrs…all ours shows promotion will have your face…you will have a chance to travel the world…I already had the discussion with you mom…just wanted to know your decision’’

Sam got worried…she had promised Neil that she will give up her modelling career and complete her studies…she thought; ‘’Ayan …I want some time to think can I get back to you in a weeks time’’

Ayan; ‘’No problem dear…take your time…can I have a dance’’ Sam agreed and gave her hand…he started gently but then gained momentum…and Sam started enjoying…after a dance and a walk in the garden…Sam wished him night and came back to her room…she found Neil standing by the window; ‘’So finally you are back…how is Radhika doing’’

Neil without looking at her; ‘’Good…she sent you a present…I have kept it in your room’’

Sam smiled; ‘’Gift???? Seems you could not catch her red handed’’

Neil; ‘’She is smart…but for how long…’’

Sam ran and hugged Neil from behind; ‘’ …I love you…please hug me … …are you regretting loving me’’ Neil turned around caressed her face and hugged her…Sam felt calm…’’Neil never ignore me it kills …’’

Neil; ‘’Sam you look tired sleep…we are leaving for Chicago tomorrow’’

Sam; ‘’Is Chashni joining us’’

Neil; ‘’No she will come with her boy friend’’

Sam; ‘’with her boyfriend ?? did you meet him…Is he good..I mean he should not be taking her as lightly’’

Neil knew Sam was happy that Radhika has someone…; ‘’Why are you discussing her….when you don’t like her between us’’

Sam; ‘’I care for her…she is my friend…who is the guy’’

Neil; ‘’Don’t know….will meet him in Chicago….now go change and sleep’’ Sam wanted to tell Neil about Ayan’s proposal…but decided to speak later…she hugged Neil tightly and kissed his cheek…’’Neil stay with me’’

Neil gently removed her hands…and patted her cheek; ‘’Sleep Sammy you are tired …I am here’’…but Sam followed him to his room…Sam went on her knees holding his hand; ‘’
Neil Melhotra…will you marry me please’’

Neil pulled Sam up in a hug; ‘’Sammy…you are the only girl I have ever loved…or want to be with….its either you or no one else…and it hurts when you doubt my feelings…we have known each other for more than 10 yrs…You know I have never ever looked at any other girl…then why are you so insecure…trust me Sam…just me…don’t let anyone put doubts into your head…listen to your heart…and it will guide and Samaira Khanna I will marry you ….very soon now sleep’’Sam jumped happily

Sam; ‘’What has CHashni sent me’’

Neil; ‘’Check for yourself’’

Sam opened the gift; it was a cook book Sam gave Neil a questioning look….Neil smiled; ‘’I told her you have started cooking for me…this book has dishes which she likes…get ready…she will make you cook of her’’ Sam banged the book on her head

Ayan’s Room

Ayan was smiling thinking about his dinner with Sam…when he got a call; ‘’Yes Samaira will agree…she is innocent and her family needs money….Once she is in my grip…we will bend her the way we want to’’

Ayan was not even aware…that Neil was slowly eating GLITZ with Nandini’s help…and soon he will show him who Neil Melhotra was.

Neil thinks Sam and Radhika are not on good terms…but he forgot Sam and Radhika were sisters more than friends…and they can fight 24/7 but will never stop loving each other

Precap ; Arjun-Neil face off…Radhika’s decision….

6 yrs Prologue

Mumbai Raheja Heights

Sipping coffee I was enjoying the breeze at window of my apartment at 6th floor…a smile crept on my face…yesterday I won the best employee award for the 2nd time…My eyes suddenly moved to the calendar and I realized the date May 9th ….6 yrs back….I died on the same day….I was punished for the mistake I didn’t commit…and I am still suffering the pain…if not for Sneha and her mom…I would never have been what I am the best PR agent in the city…I am Arunima …Just Arunima…and nothing more

London Heathrow Airport

My flight is delayed by 2 hrs….I hate being late or second…6 yrs… Ah! after 6 long yrs I will be stepping in India…I left the country after a betrayal…but in my anger I punished a 18 yr old innocent girl…I destroyed her future ..her dreams for the so called honour of my blue blood…I am going back for her…to amend as much as I can …because I can’t handle this guilt anymore…diwan ji update me she is in Mumbai….she made herself a good career…so my Rooni has grown up…and Oh! By the way I am Ranveer…official name His Highness Ranveer Jai Singh…a born noble ….and I enjoy my power and status.

Pls let me know how was it pls pls pls


Credit to: Gauri


  1. Sathya

    wonderful, marvelous episode gauri…. u blasted it my dear. OMG arjun is insecure but i like that and the way rads consoling him… its awesome baby… keep rocking ???.

    coming to ur prologue.. it seems intersting yar…. pls continue and name will think and suggest.. u will. get lot more options now.. just wait ??

    • Gauri

      Thanks a ton Sathya 🙂 yes pls do suggest the name as I myself don’t like 6 yrs 😛 … loads of love to you 🙂

  2. ❤?Natasha?❤

    Its mindblowing yaar………andvur new books prologue is just out of the world…….i am in love with it……..and 6 yrs is an apt name…………it makes it more intresting and intriguing…….

    • Gauri

      Thanks Natasha 🙂 pls do let me know if you can think of any other name also 🙂 loads of love 🙂

  3. Firstly, I really loved the concept of 6 yrs.. I can make out a little through this para… I am really looking forward for it. Sounds very interesting.. Since you have got the talent, utilise it in the bestest way you can 🙂
    And thank you! thank you! thank you! For the epi. Oh god!I just loved it .. Arjun’s possessiveness.. He is scared to lose his love..his life… And neil, he wants to save his baby from all evils.. Hope he doesnt mind ardhika.. Sam is so innocent , I mean every girl will get to know the intentions and read the face of a man…

    Dii all the best for the book! Love you loads

    • Gauri

      Thanks Roshni 🙂 can you think of a different name for the book…do let me know 🙂 and one requset whenever u post kindle leave me a message 🙂 I don’t want to miss it 🙂 stay blessed 🙂

  4. Kavina

    I love the chapter. A little confused on what the prologue is for. Can’t wait to see what will happen when Arjun and Neil meet.

    • Gauri

      Thanks Kavina 🙂 I have started writing my own book its the prologue of that book 6 yrs 🙂 let me know if you have better name in ur mind 🙂 love you 🙂

  5. Raaga

    nice …even arjum is feeling insecure. ..only neul nd radz s confident …
    It was simple n lovely episode dear…
    Gauri monday give lil bigger one…plzzzz

    • Gauri

      Thanks Raaga 🙂 I know was really tied up whole week so couldn’t write as expected… next post a longer update 🙂 loads of love 🙂

  6. Supriya

    Di u don’t know but srsly I did not sleep properly yesterday u know why…..but after reading this my mood has turned grt now….arjun z srsly madly in love with rads and m madly in love with ur ff…..I don’t know how u manage to please everyone I can never do that….m such a rebel maybe becoz of that I get into problems… was something beyond everything di……I loved all of it…..u know here everyone z r8 on their own side so can’t dislike anyone….arjun loves rads but has a scandalous past but that does not mean his love for rads z not true……Neil he z srsly radhika’s adopted dad…..he z r8 on his side abt protecting his little girl….rads z torn between two most important people of her life… z the one who whom she loves madly while other z the one who treats like a baby…..can do anything for her happiness…… I hope she gets a relief soon… i didn’t like Sam….I hate ppl who brk their commitments…..u know along with update I have even read ur prologue 10 times…….it z mind blowing di….u will create magic in this world by your writing skills…..all will be crazy after u….don’t forget me that time…..I will proudly say that author z my sis and a very gud frd…..ppl will be so jealous of me…..I can’t w8 for that day…..srsly….now di ur title z gud but not as good as ur prologue….. Think abt adding something emotional before that 6 yrs… shud be…..those….that word which u will add…..6 yrs……this z toh my suggestion u decide……u consider if u find it worthy enough……chalo now my questions……. will Neil arjun create a scene after meeting each other? Whom will rads support Neil or arjun?how will Neil react after knowing abt sam’s secret? Gud u did not bring piyali and jai today……both r monsters….. What will be Sam’s reaction after knowing that arjun z the same guy whom rads want to marry? Will she feel jealous that arjun chose rads over her?will she support or oppose rads plans to marry arjun?how will rads fmly react after knowing abt arjun?will they face many problems…..I m waiting for jai’s reaction too……di mmz tom naa?u take rest nowadays u r constantly working…..I can c that when u don’t spare second to reply to me……m not taunting u…..just saying… do u manage to give regular updates I don’t know…… I won’t say update soon I know u will…..loads of love…..stay happy…..stay blessed always…… Tc???????????????????

    • Gauri

      Thanks Supriya 🙂 its a pleasure to know that my update made you happy 🙂 pls suggest a name for 6 yrs becoz I am tired bangging my head 🙂 and will not forget anyone…I never do people forget me 🙁 …. Neil’s reaction regarding Sam will be handled by Radhika 🙂 well she will use her brain after Arjun-Neil face off 🙂 Saam will not be jealous …. well Arjun will introduce Radhika to the world in a grand way…time of that :)Rads family reaction in coming updates…don’t forget Arjun has a sister who will finght the world for her baby brother 🙂 and now 1000 hugs for you stay blessed and happy 🙂

      • Supriya

        Thanks for all your answers really happy after knowing them….will help u in thinking abt title for ur novel….promise… Did u like my idea abt title? So mmz tom naa???loads of love….tc.

  7. Awwwweeeee……u wrote something n nobody like…will that ever happen…u r simply toooooooooooooooooo awesome that I even can’t describe…me n my lacking of words…omg Arjun don’t worry tiger…nobody dare to snatch ur bunny…but I like Neil n rads bonding…care affection love purity…everything in it…making rads bride. .control control dear…she’s just 21…lol…??

    • Gauri

      Rosie darling thank you so much for your comment… 🙂 and I am not that good just trying to improve 🙂 I am looking for words to thank you 🙂 pls suggest a name for my book 🙂 loads of love 🙂

  8. Ammu

    Oh di..ur prologue is making me excited to read the rest is nice di..and trust me everyone is going to give such comments that you will be in cloud9..
    N how insecure is our lover boy?because the great neil is in front of him or against him..waiting for next part.

  9. Krity

    Swethrt u rockd as god how much insecure arjun is i must say he is really a crazy lover boy bt anyways that girl would be really lucky who had a kind of man like arjun..hatts off to u dear nd ya do start that new story also it’s gud to read a story of your’s bt do tell me that is it a love story or something else..luv u take care cm soom waiting for u…

  10. happy morning my lovely star darling sissy ?? its like always fabulous ????? i loved d way how rads n neil made der partners comfy ??? both really awesome ??? so. sad of ayan how he ll react??? after knowing about neil ? i just want piyali to learn good lesson. for her doing?totally enjoyed all the part??? love uuuuuuuuuuuu 😀 😀 ???

    • Gauri

      Thanks sister 🙂 stay happy and blessed Suga 🙂 loads of love and hugs for you 🙂

  11. Its again me ??? new start s really awesome ✌✌✌✌ its totally realistic ?✌ wen i read dis new story…. i was really imagine d the whole part its really awesomr dear ???

    • Gauri

      well new one is a book…. hope some one likes it publish 🙂 keeping my fingers crossed 🙂 loads of love 🙂

  12. Joona

    Gauri di,I think I am first time commenting here…I must say u r simply awesome… No words… Amazing storylines.. I loved both…plz update next part soon…

  13. aashna

    I love ur writing style ………………. Episode was awesome
    And ur prolouge is also nice
    Keep writing…

  14. Dhara

    Gauri is his the proloague if a book u r going to write on DPO? This is superb.

    The episode was damn good. Arjun’s insecurity is more dangerous. But radhika knows how calm him down. He is in fear of lossing her.

    Finally next episode arjun and Neil’s face off. Waiting for radhika’s decision.

    • Gauri

      Thanks a ton Dhara 🙂 6 yrs is a different book…its the story of emotions, strength determination and ego :)hope it comes out to be good 🙂 loads of love to you 🙂

  15. Bhargavi

    Di it was just awesome. Just can’t wait for Monday.
    Coming to prologue, I just loved it

  16. Chinmayi

    Woooooow gauri u r sooooper….i hve missed this page for some days….from yesterday i m reading all stories in one go…u r a true tallent,the emotions each character carrying here like insecurity,mad luv,caring nature,obsession n jelousy (jai),blind love (piyali),and looot many,is very well narrated,i like Rads character more..her confidence is inspiring….she is indeed beauty with brain…luv u loads for sharing ur work with us…..the prologue is very interesting,i ll definitely read ur book,u ll get all the love n success frm people.i m proud to have known u.u r staying in bangalore ? I m frm mysore….my cousins r living in banglorë…hope one day i cän meet u…love u jaaaaaaasthi :*

    • Gauri

      Thanks Chinmayi 🙂 hope ur words come true 🙂 yes I am in blore and hope we can meet some day 🙂 loads of love dear 🙂

  17. Awesome episode and also the prologue is very interesting, I know you’ll do great with the novel. So excited for you keep it up. 😉

  18. M

    Arjun n radhika…..awwww….fascinating……u know what i mean…..
    I am angry with this stupid sam…..a all time mistaker…..
    Neil……mouth zipped…….n my heart beat…

    about book……i love to read tht…….sachhhhhhiiiiii… u

    • Gauri

      Thanks Maandey 🙂 I understand very well 😉 Sam is nice …you will know soon 🙂 thanks again 🙂 loads of love 🙂

  19. Shree

    Di!!!! Looooovvvvvoliiiinnnnggg iiittttt!! Lllooovvvveeeedddddd iiittt!! Gosh Neil and his intentions… Fail…. Lol…. Arjun is one psycho lover!! It’s cute!! I wonder…. Backless lol…. I’m not surprised…. What is with Sam?! Ayan… One more idiot… Can someone tell me when will he be killed?! Ok I know Neil is shareholder of glitz with the help of Nandini… I don’t like him… Sam and her insecurities… Argh… Get a grip woman… Hes not gonna leave you… Look at that idiot Ayan.. Omg I’m just ranting.. Help me!!!!.

    I’m scared of Arjun and Neil face off now… Radhika’s decision?! Whaaaaat?! Don’t tell me something wrong… I know Arjun can’t survive without her… Please Neil understand him…

    I loved the prologue… It was too good… Seems like people just take up a lot of blame on themselves.. All the best di!!

    Post soon.. Love you loads.. Tc.. Keep smiling… Bear hug ??

    • Gauri

      Thanks a ton Shree 🙂 I love your DP 🙂 Ayan is a creep Sam is insecure due to her intution … don’t be scared… pls suggest if you cab think of a better name than 6 yrs 🙂 loads of love and million hugs for you 🙂 stay happy and blessed 🙂

  20. Gayu

    Superb episode gauri and the prologue it’s really nice u r more talented. All the best for your future.

  21. Kanika Kamboj

    Episode was as always great….speechless…!! Could u plzz tell me the other ffs written by you…!!

    Prologue is as great as your episodes. It was quite interesting. You must go ahead with it. Will love to read further and admire .

  22. Kusum

    Awesome episode….awaiting neil arjun face off …..prologue sounds interesting…..keep up the good work….

  23. Rg

    Gauri “wow”… Am afraid any words will fall short to describe d update today. I was waiting impatiently for ur update today. I loved d passionate arjun who is sooo insecure. Sam arjun seems to share tat quality…. Unable to understand raneil bond. And d way arjun caught her was hot
    and passionate. I loved it cherished it read
    it several times. By d way few questions. Will Sam feel jealous tat arjun choz rads and not her? I As u told me last time I ‘re thought on d way rads is and felt she might get miffed with arjun but won’t cut ties or stop loving him… Still am worried and I need to know wat happens. I can’t bear d wait gauri. Pls tell me wat will b rads decision.. Will Sam b pissed off Becos rads. Can’t love jai? I hope not. Will Neil stop rads from being with arjun? Will d 4 have gala time?, will rads forgive him or will arjun get hurt.. Pls pls tell me.

    • Gauri

      Thanks Rg 🙂 even I was waiting for your comment 🙂 No Sam won’t be jealous Radhika is more important for Sam than Arjun 🙂 Rads reacyion you will know…but she is brainy 🙂 Sam will never force Jai on Radhika 🙂 Neil will ask Radhika to pull back and will confront Arjun 🙂 but thereis a woman by name Nandini…she uses her brain too…wait for the next one 🙂

  24. Rg

    Hi gauri ur books new prologue is awesome. Fantastic and exciting. Am eagerly waiting to read ranveer and ronni s. Story.. roni is short for arunima… When will u b writing this in full ? I can barely wait. U have whett my appetite. I can barely wait for u to finish… Pls release d book soon. Love u loads.

    • Gauri

      Thanks again Rg 🙂 can you please suggest a good name…I am not liking 6 yrs 🙂 …pls pray it comes out good 🙂 loads of love 🙂

  25. nisha

    fantastic sweetheart

    I had read both last and this part

    Awesome loved it waiting for next. eagerly

    love u gauri keep smiling

    love u aasthu , ammuuuuuuuuuuuu ,

  26. Sravya

    your prologue is nice one n one more thing the name Ranveer was my favorite.cauze I love Ranveer Singh a lot??.today’s FF was so nice☺.Finally Arjun or Niel will face each other.waiting for the next one.U take my breath when I am reading.I wish after knowing all Radhika doesn’t leave Arjun.All the best for ur prologue. U r going good on ur writing.Keep it up n tc ☺.Happy week end.

    • Gauri

      Thanks Sravya 🙂 will post the next one soon 🙂 loads of love and million hugs for you 🙂 haapy week end 🙂

  27. chandan

    Good epi Gauri…i felt short for the first time…donno may be due to weekend…n i got lots of leisure time over this weekend n most importantly got used to your double dhamaka..

    Coming to prologue…it is very interesting…is the story based on aspirations of a woman or a relationships based one?? You have a way with your writing n I admire it alot…All the best for your book Gauri n GBU

    • Gauri

      Thanks Chandan 🙂 yes its short…had a very long and tiring week….I myself don’t know what I wrote 🙂 but big thanks to all of you for the support 🙂 stay blessed 🙂

  28. pankh

    amazing dr..ur episodes nd prologue both r jst awesome..nw we will get to see ur triple dhamaka with ur two ffs nd a book..can’t wait for them….desperately waiting 4 d nxt one….nd hats off to u dr for ur writing skills.. nw I m ur jabra fan 🙂 ..luv u .nd keep writing..

    • Gauri

      Thanks Pankh 🙂 a big hug for you Jabra fan OMG 🙂 i am on the moon 🙂 loads of love

  29. Gauri, today’s part ws sooper dooper. Interesting precap, i think radhu will accept arjun, i dont know my fingers r crossed. And Big round of applause for ur thinking Gauri ???????
    All the very Best for ur Next Story ?

    • Gauri

      Thanks Niharika 🙂 hope u enjoyed ur cousin’s bday 🙂 u will know about Jai 🙂 love u

  30. natasha

    Gauri dhi i dnt have wrds to praise u u jst nailed tis epi i tink starplus ppl have to strt telecasting dpo

  31. Gauri Darling M proud of you yar..just can’t express my feelings wht i am feeling.. feeling like m lucky girl,got chance to read ur stories… today is epi fantastic.. eger to knw wht happen whn neil n arjun will meet..n abt is excellent.. i wish it get publish n i can read whole…like to read further you loads.. muhhhaa…tc

    • Gauri

      Thanks Dipika 🙂 you will see the clash of titans in the next 🙂 hope the book turns out to be good 🙂 loads of love stay blessed 🙂 tc

  32. roshini

    Gauri darling you are truly gifted …amazing episode and prologue looks interesting all the best for your book … keep rocking 🙂 :} 😀

  33. aastha

    poor Neil’s trick din’t work……….loved every part of it………y is arjun insecure?????? happy that sam and rads don’t have any issues btw them…………….glad that soon eil ll take hold of glitz…………..y din’t sam undertsnad the fact that loon head was hitting on her ??????? ……….loved all parts di……..I’ll comment after some time……

      • aastha

        The beginning scene was very cute…… ne-rads dialogues were nice…….y did he say he don’t know the new chashni ????????? y did Arjun fell insecure???? bcoz he tot she would’t forgive him 4 lying??????? happy that sam din’t say yes to that ayan……she is too innocent to understand his tricks………… I’m nt worried coz Neil is there with her & he’ll pull her out from any mess……………….loved nesam dialogues……..whom did ayan speak to ???????????? z………………I loved ur update very much………..plzzz update 6yrs……loved that one too…………….TC….love u………..

      • Gauri

        Thanks again Aastha 🙂 well all your answers in next update and 6 yrs will be a book 🙂 do read it 🙂 love you 🙂

  34. lavanya

    firstly…here are my apologies…am really sorry di…had been forced to stay away from outside world for one month totally…and its because of my exams…my parents were worried that I might get distracted…so had to be away from all of you for their sake..and now finally am free…and must say…since yesterday night am reading..
    still there are many ff’s of might take till today’s night…
    and see the wonderful story of yours….it shows clearly how much each character is moulding themselves for good…we can easily and perfectly understand their emotions..insecurities…and most importantly…their true love and friendship….can’t wait for further episodes…and am once again sorry for disappointing you…

    • Gauri

      Hi Lavanya 🙂 first no need for apologies as studies are more important than my stories and updates…hope your exams went well and u rocked it 🙂 Thanks for the lovely comment dear and no you didn’t disappoint me in any manner 🙂 stay blessed and don’t say sorry 🙂 love you 🙂

  35. Wow awesome episode..arjun is feeling insecure abt Neil..just waiting for next update so that I could no Neil’s would radhika handle this and Sam I think she would be shocked on knowing arjun loves radhika…
    Prologue was awesome.I am going to read it when ever it releases.eagerly waiting for that day and d book as ur writing it..I know God has made u out of words to make others out of words on reading ur writings ..seriously ur woman totally equipped wid words..and I think u can search some apt title other than 6 years to make everybody curious on seeing d title of d book..when dey read it I know dey will fall in love with ur writing skills nd d book…
    Love u loads..

    • Gauri

      Thanks Priya 🙂 love you for such a warm comment and thanks a ton for such lovely wishes…Priya I am obliged 🙂 thank you so much 🙂 love you loads 🙂

  36. shreyanshi

    M excited.. For neil-arjun face offf..
    N truth of arjun to radhika..
    What will be her reaction ??

    I will be waiting for ur update …
    Luv u.. 🙂

    • Gauri

      Thanks Shreyanshi 🙂 you will have the face off next :)loads of love and hugs for you 🙂

  37. Sv

    diiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii…………….. im back. Did my exams well but 2 to goo . No problem for that i have 1 week for those exams. I’ll stop myself from my blaberring and start with the comment.

    Wow diii you rocked as you do i loved it and i read all the chaps in a stretch . Loved it . I missed it soo soo much. Your precap is nail biting. Super di super. 1 doubt is the prolong is related to our DPO or seperate one coz it is confusing me.

    Neil is really caring about radhika i loved it. His birthday present and his care about his chashni is super oooo super . Radhika had finally fallen for her tiger yippeee loved it and i did not want anything to happen to tiger and the bunny. Di you dont know 1 thing. i came across a word bunny bond in my subject and i thought of our bunny radhika and was just staring at the word for more than 5 minutes and rewind all the episodes of the dpo.

    Arjun wow im really falling for the possessiveness of radhika he had and having and will have. i guess there is lot of competition for Neil . Lol .

    Loved it to the core . Im searching for the words to express my anger . Love your words , and you too dii and the other ff of yours . im going mad because of you. Pls god pls always stay blessed so that you can always write more fabulously. Dii and one more thing i missed you very much. I wish to hug you a trillion times di

    • Gauri

      Hi SV dear 🙂 missed you so much…I know you must have done amazing in your exams….and will do amazing in coming 2 🙂 All the best for that…first about the prologue is of a book I am writing … hope it turns out good pray for me 🙂 u seem to be a Bunny fan 😉 now honey why are you angry…. Do you exams well and come back with your ff soon missing it 🙂 love you SV stay blessed and rock ur exams 🙂 and a Big hug for you … love you my dear 🙂

      • Sv

        Di im done with my ff gonna upload now. Di u rocked the floor. My prayers are always for u di coz I never thought reading would give such a great pleasure. And I will surely get ur signed copy edition. And that is my promise.

      • Sv

        Yippiee then i will meet you that day. That would be the best day of my life di.. you dont know how im really mad at you and your ff so that, that day i will make you sit and here what will happen next so that i may feel the inner peace in me as you are driving me crazy and about the married by fate pls say me did you update the next part as i wanted to see arjun and sam in jealosy if you want i myself personally add ghee in their jealosy fire as i love the way he is feeling jealose for radhika ha ha ha ha ……. im laughing big now…. very big. Make him burn in that jealosy and i wanna see more success to neil as he is the one who can bring the truth out. Love you soo soo much

  38. Gianna

    Gauri darling hw r u first of all sorry for commenting late these meds make me sleepy?. I loved the chapter so much ?Arjun is insecure coz he knows Neil but am not worrying coz I know bunny is a brainy one and also Nandini is a rockstar in this one. Precap is very intriguing waiting for the face-off. ?

    Coming to ur prologue is very interesting leaves me wanting for more. Am sure ur book will turn out great I have faith in ur talent, u have the potential to be a successful author. Will be waiting for ur book to come out. The first word that came in my mind after reading the prologue was REMNANTS as in things that were left over, some unfinished business or remains. Don’t know if it’s apt for ur story just thought of suggesting though. Will tell u if something else comes to mind.
    All the very best for ur endeavors may God bless u with all the success in the world. ?Love u so much ????

    • Gauri

      Gianna love u to moon and back…what a name…bless you…now why meds hope you are doing good …tc for yourself and no need for being sorry dear 🙂 and now a big thanks for such a wonderful comment 🙂 won’t bore you more tc of yourself and I will be waiting for more suggestions from you 🙂 loads of love and hugs for you 🙂

      • Gianna

        Just a little fever but today am much much better than yesterday. Don’t worry will sure suggest if something comes up in my mind. Love u too ?

      • Gauri

        Tc dear 🙂 and I loved the name…it struck the chord of my heart 🙂 loads of love

  39. sreee

    di i am so worried for my insecure tiger….how would rad respond after knowing the truth of him from neil…. what to tell di ur magical words tied me to a fic char….ur fic is too awesome….. also ur book prologue was too good….and its title is too perfect…actually interesting.

    • Gauri

      Thanks a ton Sreee 🙂 don’t be scared..he is the tiger won’t give up easily 🙂 loads of love 🙂

  40. Neetz

    m a lil late to comment ..sorry my mob got stuck up …
    the update was super awsome..
    the prologue looks very much interesting.keep it coming 🙂
    love u loads

  41. Wow Gauri dear…as usual u rocked it…ardhika love part makes me crazy….n excited for Arne face off…pls update soon…n 6yrs prologue very interesting ….all the best u

  42. Devi

    Woww superbbb…. will arjun reveal rads tat he knw sam n neil…. hope tat wont create any issues… great goin…

  43. Meghna shanti

    Plz diiii
    Update it on mon morning morning
    We can’t wait anymore fot your ff

  44. Hi Gauri,
    I was a silent reader to ur FF’s.. My bad I didn’t comment, so sorry.. 🙁
    Story is so awesome and the way you portray every emotion is really awesome.. 🙂
    Btw prologue of ur story is really nice..

    Stay blessed and be happy.. 🙂


  45. Roma

    Awesome , marvellous, outstanding, mind blowing episode. ..gauriiiiiiiiiiiii my sweeeeeet darling friend I’m soooo sorry for late comment. …I’m totally immersed into this story….can’t have enough of you….I’m just crazyyyyy for your stories. …as soon I see your stories update my face light up with broad smile…God bless you my sweeeeeetheart gauriiiiiiiiiiiii…always stay healthy n safe…today’s episode was awesoooooome, neil’s plan failed to catch rads red handed…lol….raniel convo n bonding is amazing. ..arjun feeling insecure n scared if rads knows his truth then she might leave him….but he won’t let her go…sooo possessive n madly in love with rads….I didn’t like ayan..but sam so innocent to know his evilness….but our neil n nandini have already planned everything against Ayan n glitz….Sam n her insecurities……neil gave very good reply to her…I’m loving him soooo muchhhhhh. ..ardhika romantic moments were veryyyyyyy cuteeeee…precap very exciting n interesting. …anxiously waitingggggg for Arjun n Neil’s faceoff…wowwww. …just loving it sooo muchhhhhh.

    ..gauri my dearrrrr you have Devine powers in your fingers…when you write, it comes with all the magical beauty…your prologue of book is marvellous. ..I loved it to the core. …arunima n ranveer’s story….will look for title for it but I loved Gianna’s suggestion very much, it suites perfectly. ..keep it up honeyyy. eagerly waiting for the next episode, love you loads. Muaaaaahhhhhh

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