Manmarziyan- Destiny…Passion …Obsession (Chapter 3)

Hello dear friends thanks for all the comments and thanks to silent readers too so here is the next chapter…sorry this would be short as I am bit tied up….do let me know how was it…waiting of your comments dearly.

Chapter 3

Life -Neil… isn’t he cute…he is a true friend an intelligent human being…but he took the definition of love too seriously… he forgot the additional part if you love someone truly you should fight for them…but no problem…there is still time for his lesson…let us take the story forward.
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It was RYTHYM concert…Radhika and Sam were again performing…Sam was performing an ariel act and Radhika freestyle….Neil came to wish them and was completely lost in Sam…Sam had to play the role of a fairy in the act and she was looking like one…Radhika watched Neil for 2 minutes ogling at Sam…Radhika waved her hand infornt of his eyes…no response …finally she pinched his arm Neil jumped…’’Ouch…will kill you Chashni…what was the need for third degree’’

Radhika curled her lower lip and replied; ‘’You are ignoring me…I am not liking it’’

Neil smiled he gave her an arm hug and said; ‘’I am sorry my little one…you look cute as always’’

Sam came and stood there; ‘’Neil who gave you the permission to enter the green room’’

Radhika; ‘’Sammy I called him…he is my good luck charm…my performance goes well if he wishes me’’

Sam smiled and teasingly said; ’’You guys look cute together’’

Neil lost is smile…But Radhika was witty; ‘’I know… someday we will think about it…right Neil…’’Neil glared at Radhika…Sam smiled at Neil’s expression…and went as her name was called Neil looked at Radhika angrily…; ‘’Do you even know what you just said…don’t say such things again’’

Radhika smirked …she coolly sat on the chair and asked; ‘’You will never have the courage to fight for her…she will marry the Mr. Bone of yours…and I will never love anyone…since you are my best friend…..so I think you are the best match for me…think about it’’

Neil knew Radhika was instigating him to fight for his love…he looked her and planted a chaste kiss on her forehead…’’I know what you are trying to do…but it’s not the right time…now get up next is your turn and I want you to be the best’’ Radhika hated to see pain in Neil eyes…she simply nodded and went ahead to perform…

RYTHYM was city’s best dance studio…their troupe had performed and accompanied many big starts across the globe…It was RYTHYM’s foundation day today…and Prerna wanted to make it the best…Mishra and Khanna’s were there in the audience to watch their daughters…but this time even Mehra’s were Present…Neil and Prerna shared a warm relationship with Arnav and Nandini…they had invited them as well…the auditorium was full…audience seemed to got glued to their seats due amazing dance performances one after the other…It was Sam’s turn she performed on instrumental song ‘’spirit of Rangeela’’ she performed like a fairy….doing all the acts in the air on the satin cloth hanging from the roof …Sam got a standing ovation’’ Next was Radhika she did an act showing the miserable condition of females in the society…her song was ‘’Lagaa Chunari Mei Daag remixed with modern beats’’…Radhika was dressed in a black body suit a with a red thigh slit chiffon skirt over it…less make up and high tied pony tail …Radhika’s theme attracted Nandini’s attention…she quickly turned on the recording mode of her phone…once Radhika started…all emotions pain hurt rejection..helplessness came so naturally and deeply in her performance that it brought tears to the eyes of the audience…she finished by curling her body on the stage…showing the tiredness and fatigue of her fight…the auditorium was dead mute…Nandini got up and clapped with full energy and other followed…soon the auditorium was filled with sound of appreciation…Radhika greeted them by a naamste and went back stage…Prerna hugged Radhika and Sam for making the evening successful…

Nandini was watching the video again and again…Arnav smiled looking at Nandini he said ; ‘’Isn’t she amazing’’

Nandini; ‘’Amazing? ….chachu she is out of the world…she is gifted…but the video has not come very good …due to distance her face is not visible properly’’

Arnav; ‘’Leave it on destiny Nandini…all faces will come clear when time is right’’

Nandini was confused; ‘’Chachu…I didn’t get you’’

Arnav; ‘’She is the beauty I chose for my beast Arjun…Radhika Mishra’’ Nandini again looked at the video she watched it keenly and then said; ‘’chachu she is like a fresh
drop of dew…and Arjun….he is like a dessert who hates rain…she will perish in his dryness’’

Arnav; ‘’Drop of dew!!….no she is the breeze that heals the dryness with its rain…you haven’t met her still her mere performance has affected you…I have met her…she is a bundle of positivity ” Nandini nodded..she thought for a minute and messaged the video to Arjun.

Neil congratulated all the participants…he promised them a grand party. Sam came to Neil who was busy talking the troupe members.

Sam; ‘’You are too busy toady…seems you have forgotten your best friend’’

Neil; ‘’You know…I am never busy for you..’’

Sam smiled; ‘’So how about a dinner and a long drive…just you and me’’ Sam extended her hand and Neil held it tightly…they drove off on Neil’s bike to Sam’s favorite place to have dinner…they were having dinner…when Sam’s favourite song started she extended her hand to Neil…Neil took…as they slowly moved on the song, Neil wanted time to stop…he wanted her in his arms for life…like this …he silently said a prayer…looking at his life grooving in his arms… Sam looked at Neil and asked; ‘’tell me something…if I never reciprocate your feelings…will you break our friendship’’

Neil countered her; ‘’Did I do any such thing till date….’’

Sam nodded negative; ‘’Neil sometimes I feel ….I am using you…but you and Radhika are 2 people I love more than my life….I may not be able to reciprocate your feelings…but Neil if needed I can give my life for you…friendship matters to me the most…please forgive me if I have ever hurt you’’

Neil cupped her face; ‘’It’s not required you know that…and now let’s finish our dinner …I am still hungry’’Sam smiled and they went back to the table to finish the dinner
Radhika after collecting all the accolades ….went to change into her regular clothes she took a quick shower… changed and came back she combed her long beautiful hair and came out of the green room…but he was startled by the sudden encounter with Jai….Radhika took a deep breath…

Radhika; ‘’Jai you scared me…’’

Jai; ‘’Sorry about that…I did not intent to…by the way you were amazing as always..couldn’t stop myself from congratulating you in person’’

Radhika politely replied ; ‘’Thanks…I guess you are looking for Sam …she is out with Neil for dinner…if you don’t mind I need to leave….Ma and Papa are waiting’’

Jai; ‘’Sure…mmm Radhika…can we be friends … like before…if you are ok with it’’

Radhika thought for a moment; ‘’We were never enemies…so yes we are still friends…but every relation comes with dos and don’ts …I believe in them…I hope you understand’’

Jai nodded Radhika wished him night and left…Jai felt happy about his revived friendship…he watched her till she was in her father’s car.

Neil Sam finished their dinner….Neil started his bike… Sam opened her arms to enjoy the wind and fill her lungs with air of happiness…Sam took support of Neil’s shoulder and slowly stood up…she screamed on her achievement…Sam’s happy voice made Neil feel on cloud 9…Sam again sat and hugged Nei l from behind…’’Thanks for being my friend Neil…my life would have been a barren land without you…I will miss you badly for these 6 months’’ Neil suddenly applied brakes turned to his side and asked; ‘’Will you really miss me Sammy’’

Sam looked straight into his eyes she had tears in hers; ‘’Neil if I am not returning your affection…it doesn’t mean I don’t care for you…do you think I am selfish’?’’
Neil gently touched her hand over his waist and said; ‘’Sam I loved you from the day I understood the meaning of word love…just know one thing I will never leave your side ‘’ Sam again gave him a tight hug and they drove off.

US Arjun’s apartment

Arjun checked his phone…he saw a video message from Nandini…he played the video…and he was lost in it…he tried to get the face..but the video was shot from the distance hence the face wasn’t clear…but the body movements were very clear…he would pause it at some places…rewind and then play…he wanted to meet this girl now…the way she danced…the way her body swayed..Arched …he was completely into it…he wanted to see her face…he paused at a place where Radhika had completely Arched her body backwards…lifting an arm in air his finger travelled through the arched body…his heart started racing….he whispered; ‘’Who are you…so elegant…so fragile…even without meeting you my blood is on fire…don’t know what will you do to me when I see you in person….’’ Arjun couldn’t control he dialled Nandini’s no..it was past midnight in India.

Nandini; ‘’What’s wrong are you fine?’’

Arjun; ‘’Breathe Nandu…everything is fine…tell me who is the girl in the video’’

Nandini smiled and sat on the bed; ‘’hmmm….so you didn’t call to check on me but on the girl’’

Arjun; ‘’you should have thought about it before messaging it to me …now speak up’’

Nandini; ‘’Prerna’s student…Neil’s friend…a beautiful girl…I don’t know her name’’ Nandini intentionally hid Radhika’s identity…she recalled what Arnav said …she wanted destiny to play its part… she knew Radhika was too innocent for Arjun right now…she lost her innocence and brightness years back…she didn’t wanted same to happen to some other girl

Arjun; ‘’Neil friend!!!…wow no wonder he doesn’t want to come here…wait a minute she is not Samaira…right’’

Nandini; ‘’No she is not Samaira…she is Neil’s best buddy…he is very protective about her’’

Arjun; ‘’She is something to be protected Nandu…but who will save her from me…I will find her…go to sleep…rest I will get it from Neil goodnight’’

Arjun’s POV; ‘who so ever you are…I will get you…should speak to Neil’

Nandini’s POV; ‘Chachu thinks you can bring light in my Arjun’s life…if this is even 1% true..I will do whatever it takes to bring you in his life’

Neil was still thinking about his moments with Sam…when his mobile started buzzing…he looked at the id and smiled; ‘’So Arjun…it’s not the weekend …how come you called me today…seems all your girlfriends vanished’’

Arjun laughed; ‘’I suddenly lost interest in all of them and gained in one…your best buddy…who performed In RYTHYM concert wearing black body suit with a red thigh slit skirt…on some Chunari song’’ Neil froze …he did not respond… Arjun again started; ‘’Nandu messaged me the video…but since it was from distance…I could not make her face out…Neil …I am restless…she dances like a mermaid..she is like a swan…she has set me on fire….who is she…’’ Neil felt a sudden gush of protectiveness towards Radhika…Arjun was a wolf and Radhika was a lamb…no way he should keep Arjun away from her…Neil finally answered; ‘’Arjun she is my best friend…and a good girl…she is not your type…so please don’t speak such words for her…and you will not get anything about her from me’’

Arjun smiled taking a challenge; ‘’You care for her….I thought only Sam mattered to you’’

Neil; ‘’Sam matters to me the most…bust yes I care deeply for my buddy too and won’t let anyone harm her’’

Arjun; ‘’Neil….Neil …I don’t want to fight you for a girl…if you care for her…I will stay in limits…sorry bro…so are we good’’

Neil; ‘’Yes…good Night Arjun’’ Neil decided he will not let Arjun know about Radhika’s upcoming year stay in US…he knew Arjun won’t give up till he finds Radhika.

Arjun disconnected the call and thought…Neil I am sorry…the more you hide her the more I will look for her…I will find this dancing swan…she will be mine. He looked at paused video and moved his finger along the curves of the picture….every time he touched it he wanted her more.
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Hi There …it’s me Destiny again… Chashni accepted Jai’s friendship again…good everybody should get a second chance…but what will happen when Arjun gets to know about his dancing swan…how will Radhika ignore Arjun…ignore nope I think the question is how will she stop him…from reaching her or hurting the people she consider her family….Neil is right she was a lamb in-front of Arjun…and the day he decipher her identity…no one will be able to stop him from getting what he wanted…and Jai how will he stop Arjun from taking the most precious possession of his life…Radhika!

Credit to: Gauri

93 comments

  1. aditi syam

    Awesome gauri no words to say update everyday yaar and plzzzzz make ardhika meet post soon will be waiting

  2. Aweee….m gone…i don’t know why but m lil bit more inclined towards this ff…it has its freshness…lov it to the core with the title…

    Arjun ‘ s obsession at its peak….waiting for their meet…but plz make radz bold n strong…luv u…tc???

  3. Abbz

    Am d 1st 1 2 comment .!!!! Yippppeeeee !!!!! Luved it soooo muuucccchhhhh !! Arjun s fire is on fire buddy !!!!!!! Pls update regularly ♥♥♥♡♥♡♥♡♥♥♡
    XOXO

    • Gauri

      Thanks Manju,…and I read the first chapter of the runaway writer…its amazing… loads of love 🙂

  4. chandan

    Hi Gauri…
    If at all their are chances of making MMZ-2 by production house or star plus …I want this story of yours…It is so amazing…Keep the thoughts flowing…
    Eargerly waiting for the story to unfold…
    All the best…

  5. Kanika Kamboj

    Hey Gauri..!!

    I am just a silent type readers but your work is so amazing that i couldn’t stop myself from commenting.
    You are doing a great job.Keep up the good work and yeah thank you so much for such lovely story.
    Eagerly waiting for next episodes.

    • Gauri

      Hi Kanika, thanks for commenting dear…I really like your name…your comment has alrady taken me to the moon 🙂

  6. Sv

    You are once again mind blowing. The words of life and destiny was really says about the life. Which part should I speak about di. All were outstanding. Neils love towards sam but concern towards radhika and nandhini is way more positive and realistic. Arjun’s eager to know about radhika was awesome. But she is delicate before arjun. Love u di. Love ur words. Bear hugs. Take care di

  7. The concept of this story is so good; I like how you describe each of the character. I am eagerly waiting for your next update.

  8. Rg

    Gauri .. oh my god… it’s toooooo gud… I loved it…. I liked arjuns possessiveness… At present she a person whom he needs to possess… Am happy Neil is protective abt her… well let CD Wat future holds. Plz don’t give up writing…

  9. Vivi

    Ohh….god…there is no word to describe hw beautifully u wrote….i mean it was jest amazing…i really enjoyed reading it…i was totally immersd in it…wen it ended i wantd more..more..and more…i may sound greedy but its d truth….hw u potrayed arjun was…….truly amazing….arjun is lyk d hungry lion waiting 4 his prey to walk in….and radhu is d innocent lamb..
    Loved it!!! Plz write soon!!!love you!!!!!!tc
    keep smiling!!!

  10. subha

    awesome gauri …….u r rocking ya….. i love it ….eagerly waiting next one..please update soon……..

    • Gauri

      Susi I will try…but can update only once I am done with office next post on Thursday 🙂 thanks

  11. lavanya

    it’s too intriguing….top notch episode….am gonna die with excitement of what’s gonna happen in their lives…freshness in every detail….didnt expect that arjun will like her in the first glance…which was not even clear…but I guess this not gonna be that easy…I have a feeling that you are going to make arjun give his best in winning his lady….if this is the situation of your hero…then what will be of our radhika….totally phenomenal….not even a ounce am able to guess…I really love this excitement….it’s giving me immense pleasure waiting with eager for your next episode….don’t know whether true or not…but I felt this was a little short update of yours…May be due to obsession of mine over your story….please update soon…otherwise my nerves are gonna break….

    • Gauri

      Lavanya…I don’t know what to say…thanks buddy…I am on cloud nine reading your comment..will update on thursday for sure 🙂

  12. @nky

    itas really awesome dear….wonderfully written. …plzz update soon ….eagerly waiting for next one..

  13. Shree

    Di di di!! Omg that was awesome!! Nandini likes her… Arjun on fire!! Ooh la la…. Nesam are just too cute!! Neil’s protectiveness for Radhika is superb…. I loved it di!! I loved it!!

    Post soon… Love you loads…. Tc…. Keep smiling.. Bear hug ??

  14. Amy

    This is too good……. wow!!!! I am lost for words….. every little thing about this is perfect……… thanku thanku for this ff…….. keep on writing like this….. good luck 🙂

    • Gauri

      Thanks a ton Amy dear…I don’t know what to say more..bless all of you for amazing support… lots of hugs and love for you dear…and waiting for your update 🙂

      • Amy

        I won’t be able to update dear….. i have exam tomorrow…. i am taking a break now from studying…. have to return now. But i will update an extra long episode tomorrow……. 🙂

  15. happy

    hi dr………..hw r u………i have lot to say today……..i am feeling excited…..what ll happen in future…..

    today episode super………i liked very much about neil and rad frdship…….neil and sam nice….but sam has to accept neil’s love…..then i wil be k k…..and last arjun…..oh god he is now uncontrollable….what ll happen to rad in future…..i dont know…..

    all scenes r as usual…superrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrr…thank you so so so so much….whenever i read ur episode smile comes automatically on my face……

    i think….you know now hat i want…….i m waiting……….

    • Gauri

      Hi Happy, I am good…how are you…thanks for commenting dear….ok a small hint for you it would be a rollercoster ride for all of them…thanks for commenting …loads of love and hugs to you 🙂

      • happy

        thanks for replying……..isnt a hint…….i ll kill u…..by your ff i am taking rollercoster ride whenever you update……..just joking……i am fine……and thanks for the hint…….

  16. Ameena

    You took my breath away.! It’s captivating and mesmerizing in every single way. You are Awesome, Fantastic, Amazing, and what else should I say? You are everything in the world. And I love you! <3 <3 <3 <3

    • Gauri

      Hi Ameena,…where were you…missed you like hell…getting a comment from you is like a medal for me…love you loads… XOXO

  17. Abi

    Hey gauri
    It s afirst time
    I m reading ur story
    Buti really loved it.. I think, i missed it…. Felt bsd for not read urs….. Hereafter i ll continue ur story… Bye??

  18. Sathya

    HEY GAURI…WHAT IS THIS YAR?…MIND BLOWING EPISODE. YOU ARE TOOOOOOOOO GOOOOOOD. I couldn’t control my eagerness …and i am scared for Radhika.. how will she gonna handle that lion being as a lamb….He will gulp her for sure 😀 😀 :D. Well Written dear. Love you so much and thanks for giving such a soothing FF. It gonna be rock yar….all the best dear 🙂 Keep rocking and your wrtings are too good and so stylish 🙂

  19. aastha

    Gauri di I lvd it……..rads motivation to niel trou hr wrds r gud…….wont she lve any1?????bt I bt she will as u tld…….aftr all none bt u knows watt life HS stored 4 HR……..sooo Arnav tinks rads s best 4 Arjun……i lkd nandini di’s tots…..abt HR innocence…….nesam dinner ? ws gud……..poor niel….bt glad tat she s open ?to hm………its gud tat rads revived jai’s friendship……ofcourse every 1 needs a 2nd chance………i knew Arjun wud fall for rads oops I tink I shud say feel for rads…u rightly cald hm a wolf ? through niel…….right now I feel tat Arjun doesn’t lve rads he s jst lost n hr beauty….coz hs wrds suggest it………niel hw mch evr u try to protect hr frm te beast te beast ll find hs beauty……..bt do warn rads na??????…..bt Arjun here s a piece f advice: Rads s a diff type….she s unlke te girls u ve seen n ll see…….

    Sry for blabbering di bt I lvd it…..infact u lifted my mood n brought a smile ? to my lips ?…….i ws crying ? after reading Raveender Singh’s “ur dreams r mine now”……y does he always write tragedy??????my dad says love ❤ stories r tragedies well majority bt I dnt want to believe tat…..wat do u tink di?????s love possible in real life????ll it b beautiful s in serials n movies?????

    If anyone s reading my comment plzz do share ur tots on te same…….im really confused abt lve…..sooo plzzz??

    • Gauri

      Hi Aastha…I believe in love…and not all are tragic…its just that we only remember and dicuss the tragic ones…half of the time if the story in incomplete its because of our own fears ego and insecurities…I have seen good endings…well not for me….if it doesn’t end well..then picture abhi baki hai mere dost…stay blessed…loads of love 🙂

    • manju

      hi aastha dear

      i think love never end in tragedy when people who were in love r want to make good relationship ‘appreciate similarities and respect differences’ btw them

  20. Raaga

    Outstanding ff gauriii…..
    no words to explain as usual….

    lov u loads….♥♥♥♥ … Thankkk uuuuuu sooo mucchhh

  21. Vini

    OMG , your FF is simply AWESOME 🙂 🙂 and i don’t know how to react too !! WOW . You portray the story very well and your words are like scalpel and it will touch everyone’s heart 🙂 clear , straight and crispy and what else needed ? . And i love your metaphor’s for radika in your previous chapter. the ‘destiny’ character i just loved it . you are so amazing and i wanted to read your other FF’s . kindly share your other FF names so i can go ahead and start reading it . 🙂 🙂

  22. Roma

    Omg gauri dearrrr. ..it’s really superbbbb n dynamite episode. ….wanted to watch these dance performances on screen. ..it’s breathtaking. ….n mind blowing. …nandini so lovelyyyyyy in this ff…I just loved her for sending rads video to arjun…wowwww arjun lost himself in her…soooooooo lovelyyyyyy narration. ..neil very protective for his bff…arjun wolf n rads so innocent lamb…..I just loved this plot n very unique interesting story…keep it up. eagerly waiting for the next episode, love you loads. muaaaaahhhhhh

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