Manmarziyan- Destiny…Passion …Obsession (Chapter 28 & 29)

Hello friends…as promised here is the double dhamaka….please let me know how was it….thanks for all the comments motivation and support…bless you all …next one may be on sat…I am too tied up in office… 🙂 sorry to keep you waiting:) now happy reading mmz married by fate will post tomorrow

Chapter 28

Each and every person who comes into your life has a reason or a purpose ….decided by destiny…they make you learn grow and fight the odds

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After Radhika left…Cole handled Em in her sweet way…these 7 were powerful kids of powerful parents…they had the guts and power to do things which others wont even dream of

Steve smiled sarcastically; ‘’Ario we warned you and your girls to stay away from our gang…now be our guest….just do as I say and you will be thankful’’ Arjun said something and the boys took Ario with them…

Arjun after dealing with Ario and Emily and went to Anna’s dorm…he had seen Radhika’s bleeding forehead and was worried…but he was about to get shocked….when he entered he found Cheryl and Anna holding their heads and Radhika prowling like a Tigress…Steve smiled; ‘I guess Rads was the injured one…what wrong with you two’’ Anna opened her mouth but closed again…Radhika looked at Arjun all furious…held his collar and dragged him… leaving his gang shocked…Adam spoke; ‘’She is made for him…now I believe in God’’ She banged the door closed and turned to face Arjun…he was too shocked at her behavior; ‘’Bunny what’s wrong…is this a way to behave’’

Radhika; ‘’Oh! really behave….you should be happy that I am leaving your bones intact …now you will answer my questions…what did you do with that girl Em..that Ario was mad at me’’

Arjun; ‘’ well I…ummm…few times you know….but she too wanted it’’

Radhika; ‘’yuck….now listen to me carefully…if I commit and you cheat…I will do something which will leave you ruined for any girl…am I clear….I am not the one to get scared ’’Arjun smiled at her anger…he saw love for him in her eyes…he pulled her nose…’’Never expected you to be dangerous…but I love this too’’ She punched him and walked out…Arjun followed her rubbing his chest…his friend lightly laughed…Radhika crashed on the sofa all angry …Steve asked;’’Rads tell me …how were you able to hit that huge guy’’

Radhika; ‘’Steve you shouldn’t be asking that…I am a dancer…and it needs a lot of power to dance…to hang jump…I have strength in my arms and legs and my buddy taught me few tricks to save myself from such perverts…I can fight for sometime ….if its not dark’’

Ron; ‘’did you try that on Arjun’’

Radhika proudly; ‘’he is still rubbing where I punched’’ All looked and Arjun and laughed…Anna picked up the first aid box; ‘’Now girl sit and let me put the ointment…you jump again and I am gonna spank you’’ Cheryl held Radhika tightly so that she shouldn’t jump and Anna treated her forehead…before leaving Arjun went to Radhika cupped her angry face; ‘’Bunny I was bad in the past…but now it will always be you…tc…and sleep ‘’ Arjun was about to leave but again spoke’’….one more thing you are a brave girl keep fighting the way you did today don’t let your fears over power you’’ He kissed her bandaged forehead and left…she kept her anger and pouted face till he left and smiled after he was out of sight.

Singapore,

Sam and Neil were loitering about the market…looking for a good Bday present fpr Radhika….Sam selected few but Neil rejected all…Sam was annoyed no; ‘’Neil we are not giving her a combined present…you select yours and I will find mine’’

Neil ; ‘’Fine….you will be sorry for pulling out because my gift will be the best one’’

Sam made a face…and she got her idea…modelling had given her a very good sense in fashion labels and tastes…she got into a designer out let a picked up a floor length black shimmery corset gown…Sam paired it with earrings and a bracelet and got it gift wrapped…she happily picked up the parcel and walked out of the shop and loving whispered; ‘’Happy Bday my sister’’

Neil wandered around but could not find anything worth his Chasni…finally he decided to give her not just one but 3 presents….Neil decided to check it online…Sam mocked Neil for not being able to buy any thing…’’Mr. Melhotra…I was supposed to be jealous or what did you say I will be sorry…for not combining our gifts…now what…you don’t seem to have decided anything’’

Neil ; ‘’I have I am going to order online…and it will be the best’’

Sam; ‘’Lets leave it on CHashni…and now I need to mail this parcel to her…so come’’ Sam couriered the parcel to Radhika she was happy with her work…and kept on teasing Neil…he was all irritated…finally after reaching home…Neil ordered a 3 layered white forest cake….a big bouquet a giant teddy bear of Radhika’s size …he knew she loved sweets…and teddy bear as she had many in her room in Mumbai..which mala hated…Neil wanted more but then decided to gift her in person

USA

Arjun spoke to his gang in Radhika’s absence about his plan to pull her out of her fear…after he finished it everyone was in a deep silence….finally Anna spoke; ‘’Arjun…if anything goes wrong we will spoil her bday…can we try this after her bday’’

Ron; ‘’Anna is right…last time she was sick for 2 days…lets do it after her bday’’

Arjun; ‘’Guys trust me…nothing will go wrong…Anna Cole Cheryl I need you all three to execute…and Steve need your studio…and we are doing this today evening tomorrow is her Bday and this will be our gift to her….we all should be at Steve studio by evening…

Steve Studio

Radhika changed and started practicing…..her friends watched her from the CCTV room…they all had a smile across their faces; Ron; ‘’She is seriously treat to eyes’’ Arjun lightly kicked Ron; ‘’Only for my eyes….now get to work…Anna, Cole Cheryl once the lights go she will come out you need to catch hold of her and pull her back into the room…she will fight today because she knows we are not around and I want her to…’’

Radhika was checking her movements infornt of the mirror when lights went off it was pitch dark her biggest fear…her heart started racing…she tried to calm herself; ‘’Calm down…you can do this …you are strong….go out of the door and walk to the exit’’ Radhika wiped her sweaty palms on her Tshirt and moved to the door she opened it and came to the corridor… …it seemed even emergency lights were out…she walked slowly…touching the wall to guide her…suddenly she felt a couple of arms holding and dragging her…she screamed but voice died…the panic feeling was covering her again…she was pushed inside her practicing room and the doors were locked…Radhika turned cold…she could feel 1 or 2 figures moving to her…she walked backwards but was held by two arms…she desperately wanted to scream…but her voice…why again…she knew no one will come to rescue her Neil was far and her friends could never imagine anything happening to her in Steve’s studio…it was very safe…’’I will not give up I will fight…’’ She closed her eyes and gathered all her strength and pushed her attacker…it worked…Radhika elbowed the one holding her from back…Neil had taught her this move…and freed herself and then she screamed for help running to the door…as she opened the door…light were on Radhika stopped an turned around to find Cole Anna and Sheryl rubbing their bodies and smiling at her; ‘’What the hell was this…you guys killed me’’

Arjun came from behind; ‘’No we pulled you out of your fear…you fought back Bunny…darkness could not defeat you today’’ Radhika blinked…yes she did..her heart was calm…she wasn’t sweating…she felt good…she gave a thankful smile to all her friends … then gave a tight hug to Arjun…he smiled and held her lovingly to his chest; ‘’Love you my doll’’

Cheryl ;’’ Not fair…we got the punches and he is getting the hug’’ All of them chuckled….Radhika hugged the three girls; ‘’This was the best gift I have ever got…thanks to all of you’’ They all had a group hug…Anna; ‘’So tomorrow is your Bday…we will party and hard…so now pack your things and move…its late’’ Radhika nodded and picked her belongings up…Arjun dropped Radhika and Anna home…Anna left the two alone…

Radhika gave Arjun a warm kiss on his cheek; ‘’Thank you Tiger you are an amazing friend…but I want one more gift…and that I will ask you tomorrow…don’t refuse’’

Arjun smiled and pulled her close; ‘’I will give you everything you ask me…just never ask me to leave you…won’t be able to do that’’ Radhika watched him and hugged him tight…Arjun pecked her forehead an left…Radhika POV; ‘I can never ask you to leave…I love you…you don’t know how much’’

Singapore

Sam was little upset since morning….she had spoken to Jai and his words were ringing in her head…Sam checked Neil’s room and heard the shower…she brushed aside her thoughts and went in her room to get ready

Neil was getting ready to accompany Sam …for her shoot…it was still 3hrs to Radhika’s bday …he wanted to be the first one Sam came to his room and found him checking his watch…she understood ‘’Neil its still 3 hrs to be midnight there…now come we are late’’

Neil nodded little distracted; ‘’yes lets go…I just want to be the first one to wish her’’

Sam; ‘’Sometimes I fail to understand your relationship with her…tell me Neil who is more important Radhika or me’’

Neil ; ‘’What kind of a question is this…The feeling for you are very different from what I have for her…I can never look at her that way…’’

Neil was cut short by Sam; ‘’ yeah I know the way you look at me…she is a baby…and all that…but seriously sometimes I feel you are not clear about your feelings for her….you jump if she is in pain…you are all worried since you found change in her voice…what’s your problem if she has a boyfriend…I think Bhai was right…you always kept Radhika away from him…for the reasons best known to you’’ Sam voice had annoyance anger irritation, acquisition and jealousy

Rest of the route was quite for both of them, Once at the location Sam did her make up and came out for the shoot…she was disturbed…she found Neil behind the camera watching her…it was a couple shoot…Sam gave all intimate shots getting a little extra involved with her co-model…she was doing this on purpose to make Neil jealous…Neil was annoyed…this lame behavior will pull her into trouble…he just walked out least caring about her shoot…he checked the time and dialed ; ‘’Hi little one’’

Radhika; ‘’Neil its still 5 min to go’’

Neil; ‘’I know dear…but can’t miss the chance to be the first one to wish you…Happy BDay my cutie pie’’

Radhika got up folded her legs and giggled all happy; ‘’Thank you Buddy…your call always makes my day special love you for that…and what gift am I getting’’

Neil ;’’Oh Shit…I forgot to buy a gift’’

Radhika replied in a angry voice; ‘’this is not done…you are coming here for concert be ready to pull your pockets inside out’’

Neil laughed at her anger…and heard the door bell over the call he said; ‘’Go your gift is waiting…let me know how was it’’

Radhika squealed; ‘’Thank you…love you bye’’ Neil smiled looking at the screen and turned around…to find Sam standing behind him with her hands folded; ‘’My second slot of shoot is in an hour…can we have lunch….if you are free’’ Neil did not like her tone….and Sam forgot he has changed…he looked at her gravely; ‘’No I am not free….I am leaving…you continue….and thanks for spoiling my day to the core’’

Sam was shocked….she hoped Neil will try to convince her but he instead walked out on her…her alarm went on reminding her of Radhika’s bday but she put it off…she was in no mood to speak to anyone right now. Sam was deeply in love with Neil…and her love was now making her insecure…she never had problem regarding Radhika Neil bond…but now his attention on Radhika was making her jealous.

US Radhika’s dorm

It was midnight and Neil had arranged for the midnight delivery for Radhika’s gifts…the delivery guy kept a box on the table….followed by a big bouquet and then a gift of Radhika’s size…Anna kept on staring; ‘’Who loves you so much’’

Radhika smiled; ‘’My adopted Dad’’ Anna and Radhika quickly opened the box it was a beautiful 3 layered white forest cake for Radhika…it had encrypted…’for my little Birde…bless you’ Radhika felt blessed…the girls heard the bells again and Anna got up to answer; ‘’More for you’’ and Radhika found all her friends with balloons caps and gifts…they were all shocked looking at the cake…and a huge teddy…Arjun was little jealous the way she hugged the teddy…he could not even handle the a toy around her… Anna placed 21 candles on cake…and asked Radhika to make a wish….but all were magic candles…the more she blew they again sparkled….Radhika got tired she bought a bowl of water and started throwing all
the candle in it…her friends laughed …they enjoyed cake danced with her wishing her happiness…and left early morning…Arjun was last to leave Radhika went to see him off; ‘’Tiger can I have 2 hrs with you today…just you and me’’

Arjun; ‘’You have my life…and yes I bought something for you skip… you classes today I will pick at 9:00 Am…and I didn’t like the way you hugged that teddy’’

Radhika laughed; ‘’fine then I will hug my tiger’’ She gave him a warm hug…going on her toes…Arjun held her close to his heart…and closed his eyes; ‘’Remember bunny…you are my life…I won’t survive without you now’’ Radhika buried her face more into his hard chest…silently letting know Arjun her feelings for him…he kissed the top for her head …and left’’ After Arjun left Radhika wondered why Sam didn’t call her this was first time …that Sam didn’t wish her…she felt empty….but all this never mattered to her she called Sam and Sam answered after few rings; ‘’Happy
Bday Chashni…sorry was busy so couldn’t call you’’

Radhika; ‘’No problem …and no sorry and thank you between us…by the way got your present…its beautiful…I loved it’’

Sam smiled; ‘’Ya I know …I bought it from a known label…well how are you…and what are your plans…you should find someone for yourself’’

Radhika felt annoyance in Sam’s voice she decided to end the call…she didn’t wanted to spil her Bday…but she made Sam realise her mistake; ‘’I will find when time is right….sorry I disturbed you and you had to take the pain to buy and send me such an expensive gift…please carry on with you work…’’ and disconnected Radhika’s sentence made Sam realize that she was rude to her; ‘’I am sorry Chashni…I shouldn’t have spoken to you this way’’…Radhika felt hurt…she decided to call Neil…but then stopped she didn’t wanted to be barrier between the two…she called Arjun; ‘’Yes Bunny…’’

Radhika; ‘’I need you…. now’’

Arjun understood she was upset; ‘’I will be there in 10 min…’’ Arjun reached her apartment and Radhika came down in a jeans tshirt and jacket it was 7:00 AM she left Anna a note…once she was inside…Arjun drove off; ‘’Bunny are you ok…shall I take you to my place’’ Radhika nodded…once inside his apartment he turned her around she was quite all the way and never looked at him…he cupped her cheeks and lifted her face up…he saw two glistering drops ready to jump out of her eyes…he hugged her…no questions no answers…he just wanted her to smile…’’Bunny you are 21 … grown up enough to marry me…will you say yes’’ Radhika giggled she punched him again…wiped her tears and nose in his T-shirt and looked up still staying in his arms; ‘’thank you’’ Arjun pinched her cheeks; ‘’not required… Its morning…I will make us both a good cup of coffee…then tell me what gift you want…by the way your gift which I bought is in my sisters room…have a look’’

Radhika checked her gift ; Arjun had gifted her a diamond studded beautiful watch …with a note our time together starts now…she giggled…

Radhika came out and found Arjun arranging coffee and breakfast on the table…she took her chair; ‘’Arjun can I have you phone….unlock it please’’ Arjun unlocked the screen and gave her…she checked the contacts; ‘’Who is Mr. Mehra’?’’

Arjun; ‘’my biological father’’

Radhika smiled; ‘’Time for my gift…call you Dad and spesk to him like a son…not like an acquaintance and now’’

Arjun froze; ‘’No sharing the blood doesn’t make him my father….he never cared and left me alone once my mom died…I hate him’’

Radhika; ‘’No you don’t …you are angry…Arjun what will you do if I die right infront of your eyes’’ Arjun clutched Radhika tight; ‘’Shut up…I cannot survive without you’’

Radhika; ‘’Exactly but he did survive… even after his beloved died and for you….if he was running from you… did you tried following him…no you never did…you just ran from him…both of you committed same mistake…you should have tried to sort it out….demand what’s yours…please once for me…and call him dad’’

Arjun looked at her and dialed Arnav…he answered immediately; ‘’ are you ok son…its too early for you’’

Arjun closed his eyes listening to his voice…he finally spoke; ‘’How are you dad’’ Arnav froze …his words died in his throat…he was happy overwhelmed…the father and son shared a silence but both understood each other…they spoke for an hour breaking all the walls…

Arnav; ‘’I am sorry Arjun…I could have been a better father…and thanks to you for forgiving me’’

Arjun; ‘’Dad you are amazing…even I was at fault…lets start all over again…and dad thank the girl who made me do this…I want to marry her…her name is Radhika…she is Neil’s childhood friend’’

Arnav smiled; ‘’then I guess I should bring my daughter home soon…tc of her she is precious’’

Arjun looked at the balcony where radhika was standing leaving father son alone; ‘’Yes dad I will always take care of her’’ after talking to his dad for good 1 hr Arjun ended the call and walked to Radhika; ‘’Bunny right now I want to break all the rules and kiss you hard’’

Radhika smiled; ‘’Try and I will punch you…but how about a hug’’ Arjun hugged her they both closed their eyes and stood there holding each other…Radhika today gave Arjun something he missed for years…and Radhika she was deep down in love with her Beast….she decided to confess on the day for her performance….Arjun lifted her up and took her to his room…he placed her on the bed and adjusted himself next to her…’’Thanks Bunny…you gave me my dad back’’

Radhika smiled; ‘’No need for that…you gave me my strength we are even…you will come to Chicago for my performance?’’

Arjun; ‘’Stop me if you can…I cannot miss that for anything ’’Radhika squealed and gave him a tight hug….Arjun was worried about Neil reaction…Neil would never let a girl as pure as Radhika anywhere near Arjun…but it was late…she was the reason for him to live…and now he cannot let her go…Arjun tighten his grip around her….
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Holding grudges will only give you pain….forgive and move on….and if can’t forgive just forget that person but not the lesson….

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Chapter 29

Love makes you happy secure…it teaches you to trust your heart….but love sometimes comes with a bundle of insecurities…stay alert
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Mehra Mansion

Arnav came to the Dining table all happy and humming….Nandini…was looking at ARnav all surprised; ‘’Chachu all ok right’’

Arnav; ‘’Arjun called….he called me dad we spoke for 1 hr…he said the girl he loves made him do that’’

Nandini smiled …tears filled her eyes looking at Arnav so happy after years; ‘’so finally beast has completely fallen for beauty…God answered your 4 yr old wish chachu….Radhika Arjun are together’’

Arnav; ‘’Nandini…I want them married…my son’s happiness lies in Radhika…and I will give him Radhika come what may…I don’t want any hurdle’’

Nandini smiled; ‘’Chachu….trust me…Arjun will get Radhika…this is my promise…I will not let anyone come between them…’’ Nandini had a strange determination in her eyes

Arnav; ‘’Nandu I want my daughter to be happy too’’

Nandini closed her eyes: ‘’Chachu I am happy…I got you and ARjun …I don’t need anyone’’ Arnav silently made a prayer…

Destiny; ‘’No Nandini…the one you need will be infront of you soon’’

USA

Radhika was in the campus… Natalya came to her radhika avoided her ….Natalya held her hand; ‘’Please tell me where is Ario….Em is not telling me anything’’

Radhika; ‘’What am I …lost and found bureau….and how can you expect me to help after what you guys tried to do with me’’

Natalya ; ‘’Please …he is been missing since that day…Arjun has done this…you don’t know how dangerous he is’’

Radhika could not take anything negative on Arjun…she warned Natalya; ‘’Not a word against my Arjun…and I don’t trust you…leave’’

Natalya; ‘’Em is expecting his child she needs him’’ Radhika froze but she didn’t wanted to show Natalya that it affected her; ‘’Not my problem’’ she walked off Radhika called arjun he had started working full time…his exams and semesters were over…only ceremony was pending…Arjun
smiled ;’’Hi Bunny…tell me’’

Radhika; ‘’want to meet you as early as possible’’

Arjun ; ‘’fine love….will pick you after your working hours at the library’’

Arjun messaged Radhika after reaching campus, she came out and greeted him with a hug; ‘’My shift at store starts in an hour…and I have something important to speak’’

Arjun; ‘’Ok baby…lets have a cup of coffee…and then I will drop you ‘’ Once in the coffee shop Radhika came straight to the point; ‘’Where is Ario…and don’t lie’’ Arjun wiped his face leaned on th chair and looked into Radhika eyes…Radhika watched at his posture and his smile He resembled a king who ruled the world…someone powerful majestic…Natalya was right he was very dangerous….Arjun smiled and answered; ‘’Still alive ….now don’t ask the reason ….he tried touching you’’ Arjun was angry recalling the past event…Radhika kept his hand Arjun; ‘’Tiger I am safe…pls let him go for me…and no one can touch me till I have you…’’

Arjun; ‘’No’’

Radhika; ‘’Em is expecting….what is fault of that unborn kid…Arjun never punish the innocent…’’

Arjun; ‘’Fine…What will I get in return’’

Radhika whispered; ‘’you already have me…what more should I give you’’ Arjun kept the tip…extended his hand Radhika took it he pulled her close…’’Only for you…’’ Radhika gave him a broad smile…; ‘’I know…thanks’’

Arjun; ‘’By the way….when are you flying to Chicago…Can I join you’’

Radhika; ‘’Neil has to mail me tickets…why are you asking…. you should’’ Arjun loved her honesty she was clear about everything….he pecked her forehead; ‘’I love you’’

Radhika could not hold anymore…she lowered her eyes and softly spoke; ‘’And I love you…’’

Arjun held her close…he felt his heart would burst due to happiness…he suddenly got everything he wanted; ‘’Bunny couldn’t you find a better way or place to confess…wow…I can expect anything when its you…you can’t even imagine how many things are going on in my head…you are not going for job today…I am taking you with me…and don’t talk about the rules…’’

Radhika kept her palm on his lips; ‘’I wanted to confess on my day of performance but couldn’t hold more …Now who is wasting time…shall we move’’ Once in his apartment Arjun opened his arms for Radhika she smiled and went willingly to him…Arjun held her close tightly in his grip…’’thank you love…you made my life…I thought your confession will be all beautiful arrangement.. flowers cute dress…then dinner and a romantic dance and here I get proposed in a coffee shop’’

Radhika; ‘’ ‘’First I didn’t propose I confessed…second…you love me because I am different then how can you expect all normal filmy date…dinner you will cook for me…I will again tell you how much I love you and I can have my first kiss’’ Arjun was spell bound…she kept on giving him shocks….she spoke again ‘’and now stop talking and let me feel the moment’’ Arjun chuckled and kissed the top of her head…Radhika lifted her head and kissed his chin softly and blushed…Arjun lifted her chin up…’’is it a yes…do I have the permission’’ Radhika nodded…he leaned and kissed her deep…she hesitated for a sec… for her it was her first kiss…Arjun understood; ‘’Trust me’’ Arjun kissed her forehead eyes cheeks and claimed her lips completely…but today he felt complete …Arjun hugged her again; ‘’Never leave me’’

Radhika smiled rubbed his back; ‘’I won’t but if I try to …. Abduct me…you have my permission’’

Arjun; ‘’I will…even if you don’t permit …you know that’’ Radhika buried herself completely into his embrace…finally Arjun got her heart. Radhika phone was continuously buzzing she checked it was from Neil he had already called her 5 times…Radhika tried moving out of Arjun’s embrace to speak to Neil…but he pulled her to his chest….Arjun nuzzled his face on her cheek and neck , gently took the phone…turned it off and threw it on the couch…’’Not today bunny…please just be mine’’ Radhika obliged she spoke softly; ‘’I want to take you on a date… my dream date’’ Arjun; ‘’when?’’

Radhika; ‘’in an hour …I want to pick something from my place and we can come back here’’ Arjun nodded Radhika called Anna and asked her to pack certain things…in an hour Anna send Radhika’s things to Arjun’s place

Singapore

Neil tried again, but now her phone was switched off; ’’Chashni….you confirmed my doubt…you are involved with someone…hope he truly loves you because I won’t tolerate anyone hurting you…you are a precious…but I am hurt that you couldn’t share your heart with me’’

Sam came to Neil….he had been annoyed with her since Radhika’s bday….she found him working and started the conversation; ‘’Neil…can we talk’’

Neil ;’’I am listening go on’’

Sam; ‘’I am sorry about that day….I shouldn’t have questioned your feelings for Radhika’’

Neil; ‘’doesn’t matter to me…I don’t give justifications’’

Sam got irritated; ‘’Do I even matter in your life….I feel since I confessed you take me for granted…Neil I love you….what wrong if I demand your attention or love…I can feel jealous too’’

Neil; ‘’Jealous of your own friend…who did everything to bring us together….I know you spoiled her bday…I came back that day to have lunch with you and overheard your conversation…Sam stop using people who love you’’

Sam; ‘you are calling me selfish?’’

Neil; ‘’Yes think on it….till you needed Chashni…you were all good to her…and suddenly you went rude to her…why…because you doubt my feelings…you never doubted them when you were head on heels mad for Arjun…but suddenly you feel insecure…’’

Sam knew she had hurt Radhika; ‘’I cannot share you’’

Neil; ‘’I am not your food…I have my choices priorities…my friends…I gave you your freedom…I will have mine…we are leaving for US in 10 days ..pack you things and all the details on your schedule’’

Sam; ‘’you are not worried about me you are dying to meet Radhika…’’

Neil; ‘’a minute back you were sorry for questioning my feelings for CHashni…now you started again…tomorrow you will ask me not to give time to my mom….now I don’t care Believe what you want to… I am going out for some work’’

As Neil walked Sam ran and held him from behind….she was desperately tightening her grip; ‘’Please don’t leave me…I will do everything you want me to’’

Neil turned around and hugged her; “speak up what bothering you…I know you can never doubt me or Chashni…share with me sammy’’ Sam did not utter a single word she just held Neil to her…Neil lifted her up brought her to the room and made her lie down….Sam kept her head on his chest…and held his shirt tightly; ‘’I am sorry…I don’t know I am too insecure…I feel someone is trying to separate us…Neil I don’t want to go back…we are so happy here…’’ Neil looked at Sam..who was staring at him with her hopeful brown eyes…he patted her back..she needed to relax…;’’Close your eyes…I am here with you…and I will always be’’ Sam smiled calmed and obliged…completely dissolving her self in Neil’s arms

USA

Arjun was on the moon..he wanted to share his happiness with Neil and Nandini…but right now he wanted all his time for his lady love… Radhika was getting ready…Arjun was waiting for her in the balcony of his hall….Radhika came out dressed in a thigh slit corset silver…gown curled hairs… and stood behind Arjun…without a word Arjun realised she was close…he turned around and fell in love again…Arjun started the music…extended his hand…he always wanted to dance with his swan…Arjun started slow…and then gained momentum…he rolled her out and in…lifted her up by waist…Arjun turned her around and pulled her close locking her back to his front…he deeply kissed her neck and shoulder…Radhika closed her eyes ’’Radhika promise me you will never leave me’’

Radhika turned around to face him looped her arms around his neck and kissed him passionately; ‘’hope you got your answer….so you didn’t tell me how am I looking…first time I dressed up for a guy…’’

Arjun went on his knees; ‘’Radhika you are the first and the last girl…for whom Arjun is going on his knees and if you want…I will stay on my knees forever…please be mine…I can do anything for you’’

Radhika; ‘’Will you cook for me’’

Arjun; ‘’If you want …I will’’

Radhika with palm folded and eyes closed all in praying position; ‘’Wow thank you god I always wanted a husband good in cooking and cleaning…’’ Radhika opened one eye to look at a Arjun and smiled

Arjun locked her to his chest ‘’You are so naughty..but too lovable….will you marry me this year’’

Radhika; ‘’answer… after dinner’’ Arjun nodded he moved but Radhika held his hand…’’who is going to take me to the table…I am tired’ dancing in 6 inches heels”’ Arjun smiled lifted her up and took her to the dining area….he was an amazing cook…Radhika enjoyed her dinner and Arjun watched her Radhika smiled; ‘’promise me …after marriage you will settle down in India…with your father and your sister’’

Arjun; ‘’What if I refuse?’’

Radhika gave a warning glare; ‘’I will marry you and then elope to India…tear my passport and throw it off in the sea…don’t take this as a joke…I can do this’’

Arjun smiled; ‘’Then why will you marry me if you want to elope leaving me behind’’

Radhika; ‘’If you are possessive so am I …I will marry you so you can’t marry some one else’’ Arjun walked to Radhika…cupped her face , kissed her deep he lifted her up and twirled her around…’’I love my possessive Bunny’’…after they were done with dinner…Arjun took her back to her dorm…before going inside…Radhika hugged him tight; ‘’I love you Tiger…and I can marry you any day you want me to’’ Arjun held her held kissed her forehead; ‘’ …go inside before I throw you in my car…and take you to an unknown place’ Radhika smiled ; ‘’fine I am ready…kidnap me’’

Arjun pulled her cheek; ‘’you are safe from me in your dorm…’’

Radhika; ‘’don’t talk of my safety…u are scared of me…’’ Radhika teased Arjun by licking her lips…Arjun with lightening speed extended his hand to grab hold of her…but she escaped giggled and ran inside….Arjun whispered; ‘’love you’’ . Arjun turned around to walk but Radhika came running and hugged him from back…Arjun pulled her infront of him…’’go now…I am seriously losing my control…and don’t wear that gown infront of anyone else’’ Radhika smiled; ‘’I bought it yesterday…to wear it for you…’’ Arjun lovingly hugged her and left after wishing her for the night…he had decided to marry her soon Arjun called Nandini; ‘’Yes my dear brother…tell me’’

Arjun; ‘’I want to marry my swan….Radhika’’

Nandini; ‘’Good choice….I am happy….tell me when’’

Arjun; ‘’Nandu her year in US finishes in few months…after that…I don’t want her dreams to be affected’’

Nandini little hesitant; ‘’Will you come back to Mumbai or will settle down in US’’

Arjun; ‘’Di I will come back home…and if I don’t my bride will elope leaving me behind’’ Nandini laughed she was very happy….Radhika brought her brother back…she disconnected the call and softly whispered; ‘’thanks Radhika’’. As soon as Arjun reached home…he got a call from

Radhika..’’yes bunny’’

Radhika; ‘’Sing a lullaby…I cant sleep…and don’t refuse I saw the guitar inmyour study…you promised me that you will not refuse me anything’’ Arjun was quite…after a minute…’’I will sing Bunny when you are right infront of me…now close your eyes and travel the dream world with me…love you’’ Radhika smiled.. but sleep was far…she was just thinking about Arjun….she wanted to share her happiness with Neil and Sam…Neil he won’t be happy due to Arjun’s past and one word of Neil was enough for Radhika’s parents to say no for Arjun…and Sam she had already created a rift…Radhika closed her eyes a lone tear escaped and made away to her pillow; ‘’I can’t leave you now…I will fight to be with you Arjun….I don’t care about anything’’

Singapore

Neil had tried Radhika a few times….he knew she had not spoken to Sam after her Bday…she was upset but this was the first time she didn’t answer his calls or called him back…he knew she was deeply hurt by Sam’s rudeness….Neil was in his thoughts…when he finally got Radhika’s call

Neil; ‘’little one are you upset with your buddy’’

Radhika; ‘’Can I ever be upset with you’’

Neil; ‘’Sorry on Sam’s behalf…I know she spoiled you Bday’’

Radhika; ‘’Its ok…she is just insecure…and I didn’t let her spoil it…Neil dad had called…he asked me cut all communication with Jai…well I am happy about it but something has happened back home which I don’t know…I am worried’’

Neil; ‘’don’t worry….I will handle that creep…he will not be any where around you…I know how to do that…Now answer this honestly….are you seeing someone’’

Radhika kept quite and then spoke; ‘’Yes…don’t ask more…just trust my decision…he loves me more than his life…rest I will tell you once we meet’’

Neil; ‘’Why didn’t you tell me’’

Radhika; ‘’because I knew you will refuse…and I don’t want you to judge him on his past without meeting him ‘’

Neil; ‘’Past!!!.Interesting…Promise me…you will back out…if I find the guy shady’’

Radhika was pained; ‘’Neil please trust me…don’t ask any such thing which is difficult buddy’’

Neil understood…this time his voice was strict; ‘’You are completely into him…but if he is not good…I will pull you away…watch me do that…now sleep good night sweety’’ Neil was not even aware that the man he was going to face was his best friend cum brother….who will not give up Radhika for anyone now…

Sam was feeling miserable for hurting Radhika…she knew Radhika never had any such feelings for Neil…but Neil’s undue attention to Radhika was making her insecure…Sam was in her thoughts when Jai called; ‘’how are you baby sister’’

Sam smiled; ‘’Bhai I am fine how are you…’’

Jai; ‘’How should I be….I am out of my own company…the girl I love madly keeps breaking my heart…’’

Sam felt bad; ‘’Bahi love cant be forced’’

Jai; ‘’No …Dilip uncle refused my proposal…and guess what Neil and Nandini are the reason I am out of Bird Song…and Radhika’s life….they have framed me and made me culprit’’

Sam; ‘’Bhai…it was your fault…why are you blaming Neil or someone else’’

Jai; ‘’Ok agreed…but do you know my rights and passport was freeze right before I wanted to visit US to have one glimpse of the girl I loved for years…Prerna aunty knew about my visit…she must have told Neil’’

Sam; ‘’Have you tried convincing Radhika on your feelings’’

Jai; ‘’Radhika…Ah! She keeps on disconnecting my call and now has blocked me as if I am a pervert…I feel like dying …and Neil warned me to stay away from her…I mean what’s his problem’’

Sam; ‘’Bhai don’t worry…I will speak to her’’ Sam disconnected the call…’Neil why are you hurting my brother…why do you want Radhika away from Bhai…you are giving me all the reasons to doubt your bond’

Jai POV; ‘Neil Melhotra…you will not get Sam till I get my Radhika…I will make a mess of your relationship with Radhika…a dirty mess’’
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Jai darling you are not even aware…she belongs to someone…who will kill anyone for hurting his princess…yes you will see him soon…he will teach you all the lessons you should have been taught by your mom…wait for Radhika’s Arjun

Credit to: Gauri

111 comments

  1. shreyanshi

    finally.. radhika.. confessed in swt and simple way… 🙂
    i love the cute scenes between radhika and arjun…
    n sam .. she shouldnt doubt.. neil-radhika..
    teddy 😀 😀 i luv teddy 😀 nyc gft from neil…

    n jai.. he need to get shock from arjun… he should pay for his deeds… how could he make rift between neil-sam …:(

  2. nita

    Wowww it’s just amazing I don’t even how many times I read it…I loved her Neils birthday gift……arjuns nd arnav conversation…….. His date wth her……raneil bond I thought Neil wll be mad at her for not sharing about the man to him till now…..eagerly waiting for Nxt one…. Want to see Neil surprise to radhika should become his shock whn he wll see her along wth arjun……waiting for arneil to face each other….. Nd radhika to go any extent to get her love……tht jai kill tht man…..how many ths sam wll feel insecure about her love nd raneil bond she should trust her love nd frnd eagerly waited to see it in your way…..hope nadini wll help arjun from Neil….nw no one can Seperate beast from beauty evn beauty is not willing to do it….I just loved it I don’t evn how many times I wll read ths until Saturday…. Love you di for amazing update <3 <3 <3

    • Gauri

      Thanks Nita 🙂 well Neil will see Arjun with Radhika but more than shock it will be anger…Sam wants to keep Neil to herself…well she will be fine soon 🙂 loads of love

  3. I am happy to see your update it is so addicting, your the best writer ever.

    Today episode was excellent, now I can’t wait for Arjun and Jai to meet, I wonder what Arjun will do to Jai. 🙂 waiting for the next update 🙂

  4. Darling sissy ??????? lots of hugs n kisses to uuuuu?????? u r really awesome ????? once again u proved dat u r a good writter ✌✌✌✌✌✌ am all happy for dat ????? arjun n rads omg omg u dono how much happy i am??????? am jumping n laughing with happiness ✌✌????? how rads come out of fear s really fab ?✌✌✌✌ i think dis s d best gift in her life ?✌✌✌ sam have more to know ??? still she s beleving her bro…… i think soon she ll realise dat✌???? rads confession…. arjun’s happiness ohhh wow its cute cute cute ?????3 determined people gonna fight for d happiness ??oh my god but they r equal in everything ✌✌✌???? ha ha ha i think for d first time arjun ll have fear of neil? ????dats so thoughtful but rads decision to fight for her love its superb?????son dad patch up s really cute ?✌✌✌✌every time wen i says about d character awesomness……. my mind says dat u only made them with such a beautiful tot ✌✌all credits ll go to u only ??u r dat much superb darling ✌?? love u lot lot lot ✌???? tons n tons of hugs darling ???love u take care ????

    • Gauri

      Suga darling a million thanks to you for such beautiful words of appreciation…you made me feel really special 🙂 loads of love and hugs for you 🙂 stay blessed 🙂

  5. natasha

    gauri dhi such a lvly update………………….:) :):):):):):):):):)
    and finally radhika confessed i hope neil will not becum a hurdle between ardhika
    and wat hapnd to sam y is she influenced by jai tat jerk any way dhi u nailed todays epsiode 🙂
    I MUST SAY THIS DHI I THINK U HAVE TO TAKE TIS HOBBY OF WRITING IN A PROFESSIONAL DHI U HAVE MAGIC IN UR FINGERS
    the way u write the story is really amazing dhi .ok bye cya luv u gauri dhi eagerly w8ing for nxt epsiode plzz post asap

  6. Rg

    Wow gauri last few words of Destiny is too gud. Thanks for d double damaka. Its fantastic. I loved it.. I loved radz confession and arjuns dedication, Neil’s care and love for rads. Am disappointed in Sam I thought she has come a long way. And by d way jai will b coming to US?? And will Sam b unhappy with radz and arjuns relationship? Will she find it difficult to accept d fact tat arjun chose rads but not her? Or will she b upset with radz tat she dint chose jai but chose arjun? Pls do let me know.. And how us Neil going to handle arjun and vice versa? Does radz already suspect tat Neil arjun and her arjun r one and same. If she doesn’t how will she feel and react? How will arjun pacify rads? I hope they won’t fight or stay away from each other either becos of arjuns lie or Becos of Neil or Sam… Pls do let me know.
    I loved this confident rads.
    I love this story of urs. Am finding it difficult to decide which is my favorite btw dpo and mmz so decide to enjoy it rather than deciding my favorite. I will wait eagerly for tomorrow. Tc.

    • Gauri

      Thanks Rg 🙂 now your answers…we tend to trust our blood more than anyone…irrespective of the fact that our own people can be bad…same is with Sam…she is too scared to lose Neil that she is getting insecured …Sam will again question Neil….Neil will be angry and will confront Arjun and make Radhika understand that sh should leave him….Jai will not be coming to US Arjun will go back to India…Radhika reaction you will ahve to wait 🙂 tons of hugs and kisses for you 🙂 stay blessed 🙂

  7. Supriya

    My darling di…..u don’t know how happy I m after reading this…… Today u explained the meaning of love in the most beautiful words of this world……I srsly love u for dat……how different love can be when it has no insecurity this I got to know through ur eyes……rads confession was simple yet unique….. even I don’t like dat dream dates and all that crap ……I feel u can enjoy a simple chocolate more if u r having it beside ur beloved…….arjun toh no words to describe him today……finally rads got a guy who loves her more than her father……srsly he can’t bear any distances between them…….Sam I don’t feel sympathy for her……how can she spoil her best friend’s birthday…… How can anyone be this selfish……insecurity from the girl who z responsible for her happiness….this z just a excuse…..I hate ppl who can’t trust anyone not even their best friend who has always been with them…….di you r making me fall in love with Neil now…….but he z all yours…. Lol…..now my questions…… When will Neil meet arjun?will Sam create obstacles?will she ask rads to speak to jai?di r8 now m too much confused many questions r running in my mind……. I don’t know which to ask and which to leave u to ans in upcoming updates…… will Neil and Arjun fight on radhika? when jai will know abt arjun?m eagerly waiting for that day……I want him to fear arjun……can’t wait plz plz do it soon……now abt complimenting u…..as usual I don’t have words……any word in the dictionary won’t be enough to praise u today…….so I won’t try…..u know me so u know how much happy m after reading this……I don’t have to put it in words,m I r8?love u……muaaaaahhhhhh….. Tc??????????????

    • Gauri

      Thanks a ton Supriya darling 🙂 yes don’t eye my Neil…he is only mine 😛 ….Neil Arjun face in coming 2 updates…Sam is too occupied by her own insecurities…Neil Arjun will fight yes..Jai will know when Radhika goes back to India….don’t worry Arjun will make Jai cry… 🙂 love you for the amazing comment stay blessed 🙂

      • Supriya

        Thanks for the amazing answers di…..I said naa keep Neil to yourself….arjun z a better option for me?…di now one more question….did I bore u by such a long comment?…..load of love….muaaaaahhhhhh…. Tc

      • Gauri

        No you didn’t bore me at all darling..I am just too busy this week this is the reason I am answering in short 🙂 love you

  8. Ammu

    Words are not enough to appreciate you di..day by day your magical creativity is stealing our hearts no !already stolen.The confession! It happened in the way it should be..in the most unexpected time..no more words di..n why no precap?

    • Gauri

      Thanks Ammu dear 🙂 Precap guess I missed it being tired -so here its is Neil in US…Sam accepts Ayan’s dinner invitation … loads of love and hugs for you stay blessed 🙂

  9. Harani

    Gauri I am again and again falling in love with your ff…bunny and tiger such a beautiful couple ..when Radhika said her feelings I was like what …is it a confession ..then got answer from Rads in her next line ..She is different na …Sam feeling insecure but hope it all get disappears soon. .Neil love you bestie 🙂
    gauri this is just amazing ..the father son convo ..nandhini all positive ..just wanna see more tiger bunny love 😀

    • Gauri

      Thanks a ton Harani 🙂 yes I wanted to keep her confession natural….and when you get something you always wanted suddenly…your happiness knows no limit thats what happened with Arjun 🙂 loads of love and hugs for you 🙂

  10. ab

    Di you made my day m..i am sooooooooo happyyy ? I can’t able to describe my feelings for todays episodes……..love you so much……di you are the best writer ever….neil radhikas bond my favourite one……..ardhikas mad love ……..di I can’t able to wait …update sooon if possible…..love u…..??

  11. Bhargavi

    Wow di! !ts just awesome. I can’t even describe hoe much happy I am after reading your update. I just can’t wait for the next update. I am so happy that radhika has confessed to Arjun and mostly the Change of behaviour in him. I just loved it.

  12. Sathya

    NO WORDS TO COMMENT YOUR SKILLS GAURI…TIRED OF PRAISING YOU DEAR 🙂

    My only request is keep writing..and don’t stop for any reason. you have a great skill and try to explore it more and more and more..God bless you 🙂 🙂 🙂

  13. chandan

    Awesome!!! The story has entered into the most crucial phase where their relationships are tested…n how they are going to stand by eachotther…
    The confession scene is simple n beautiful…more like Radhika’s way…n i like the way you write Radhika’s character…she is more clear of her thougths/feelings/doings…n i like woman of such kind…superb Gauri…tc

  14. Devi

    O wow woww woww…no other words….u r making it diff fr me to wait fr ur updates…keepin on reading ur old updates… u r a super writer….

  15. roshini

    Mind blowing Gauri…everytime I predict you give something much better than that…loved it …seriously make writing your career you will be famous 😀 :-*

  16. M

    Super……..lov every single word…..now one couple s happy nd another one s….ahhhhhhh

  17. Radhika’S Arjun. wow! That feeling! I am really waiting for the day when arjun will teach a dhan dhana dhan lesson To Jai. what will be Sam’s reaction to know that Radhika is dating Arjun, whom she wanted? though she loves Neil, but something strange might happen… its all upto your hands anyways… Its getting so tough to wait for your posts.
    thank you so much that you do a job but still manage to write and post for us just as said.. on time.. And thanks alotttt for the double dhamaka 🙂 🙂 stay happy

  18. Sejal

    Oh my god… Finally the beauty has committed her love to beast… I m so very happy… I m so sorry diii i was very bzy di so was not able to update.. Jai he is such a prevert cant he understand radhika dont want to be with him … Well now arjun has all the rights on his girl he will surely take care him He will pkka get 3rd degree frm him… And wht the heck yrrr how can sam dbt rneil bond…. Waiting for the nxt one
    luv u di missed u very badly

    • Gauri

      Sejal dear no need for sorry…I know how hectic studies can be…been through that phase….well but I missed you too 🙂 but studies first 🙂 thanks for the lovely comment 🙂 stay blessed 🙂

  19. Sravya

    soo happy n love u dear.U r creating magic. I am not tensed about my result cauze it come.I am so xcited to read the nxt update. Lots of love for Ardhika?.but hate that irritating idiot Jai?. He makes Sam against her love n buddy. Always u r rockinggg dear. Stay blessed n tc☺☺☺☺

  20. Gianna

    Brilliant just brilliant Gauri loved everything about this, every single part was amazing. Big hugs and kisses for u ???. Stay blessed darling. Love uuuuu

  21. ❤?Natasha?❤

    I’am totally and madly in love with ur story……?????……its awesome,fabulous,superb,mind blowing…….i’m not finding words to express my thoughts…..srsly its out of the world………gauri di u rock……
    .ummmah??????????????????????????

  22. Rg

    Oh dear gauri so will rads will b leaving arjun as per Neil wish is it ? Oh dear I really hope not… I thought to c more romance btw d couple? Will Neil understand. Will Neil succeed in convincing rads to leave arjun… Am so sorry I can’t wait… Pls pls tell me… Pretty pls.

    • Gauri

      Rg darling don’t be so tensed….just think like this Radhika you will have the answers….just replay her personality…and you will know … love you

    • Gauri

      Rosie darling, if you wld have written just nice also…I wld have been on the moon 🙂 why so many crying emoticons …you are cute…should smile always 🙂 loads of love 🙂

  23. Wow Gauri dear….fantastic double damaka….ardhika scenes are awesome…iam happy for them….Neil gifts for radhu superb…he is really amazing…sam always confusion…jai he is disgusting…overall fabulous episode….waiting for next one…n update mmz too double damaka pls dear…love u loads…tc…

    • Gauri

      Thanks Susi dear 🙂 mmz I will update tomorrow …double dhamaka over the weekend 🙂 loadsof love to you 🙂

  24. Krity

    Im in luv wid u swethrt this was ama9ing beyond anything jst wanna hug u tight nd say u r really a gem sent by angles for us trust me i wanna meet u nd really yr u r luvable while reading this i jst keep smiling nd my mom ask me wt u got early in the morning that u r smiling that much…nd arjun i jst luv him the way he adore his angle nd the bond neil nd radhu share i also share same bond wid my bestie im reall greatful to hv him by my side he always pamper me alot sumtime i got ireakd bt as always i luv him he is idiot nd i know him he is always there by my side hope u cm back soon im waiting for u cm sood luv u a lot stay safe stay happy god bless u nd me too hehe any ways a lot of bear hugs for u bye cm soom plezz..

    • Gauri

      Thanks Krity for an amazing comment 🙂 well now I am smiling reading you words 🙂 thank ufor showering so much love and appreciation 🙂 loads of love and a big hug for you 🙂

  25. neetz

    M out of words, out of words, out of words so m not saying anything abt the story as usual u rocked it nailed it painted it etc and all words in dictionary………..
    Lov uuuuu

  26. Hey Gauri darling i m going yo mad..what it is this yar…you r beyond the words this time…m just crasy like anything about this ff..actually m reading it in ofc…in middle of reading customers r disturbing me n m hating them for doing this..its not double its a thousand volt dhamaka…what to say n not..actually ech n evry bit i loved from todays epi..their first… wow..u make it spl…exquisite… n wht sam was doing is completely bullshit…how could she doubt reneil bond..hating her for this…n just eagerly waiting whn this fantastic four will meet..which will be a billion dhamaka….love you for this superb chappy…muhhaa

    • Gauri

      Thanks Dipika darling 🙂 well what should I say…you made me happy with you lovely comment….bless you loads of love 🙂

  27. pankh

    everytime my try to be d first one to comment go invain.. guess here r too many people who luv’s ur ff more dan anything..anyways awesome as always….aradhika jst superb..nd jai should be paired up wid nandini..only she can handle dat mad jai…lolz..waiting 4 nxt..plz try nd post soon..luv u dr..tc..

  28. Niharika

    Amazing Gauri Di it is mind blowing I am just waiting for the part when Neil comes to know that Arjun’s bunny is Radhika and Sam comes to know that Arjun love Radhika. Poor Jai . Please make him live a bachelor life of sadness and sorrow mourning that Radhika could never be his.Sorry I could comment earlier was preparing for my younger cousin Bro b day who has turned 6 today . For the first time he is celebrating his b day in Indian and I being the eldest of all cousins have a lot of responsibilitys to fulfill. Bye Gauri Di take care.

    • Gauri

      Thanks a ton Niharika 🙂 wish you bro a very happy bday on my behalf 🙂 may almighty bless him with all the happiness 🙂 stay blessed 🙂

  29. sweety

    Wow guari superb episodes I loved it no I’m mad of u r ff oh pls I had one doubt when radhika knows he is same arjun Neil Frend wat is d reaction radhika didn’t leave arjun na im worried pls don’t separate dem I can’t read r see dem going separate I can’t see radhika hated to wards arjun plss

    • Gauri

      Thanks Sweety 🙂 well you will have to wait for Radhika’s reaction 🙂 loads of love 🙂

  30. Raaga

    Fabulous Gauriii….
    no words to xplain about ur writing skills nor about U ….
    b happiee always …love u dear 🙂

  31. Aastha

    Hello Gauri Di
    Actually I didn’t know u write another ff also..
    As I am free nowadays was searching mmz page and found your DPO.l have read all chp in one go n u won’t believe I was jumping like a kangaroo…….. So excited…. U have written very beautifully expressing all emotions………… with great imagination and creativity..
    I m short of words…. How to explain your hard work..
    By each n every chp my excitement, curiosity increased n was pondering over what next would happen..
    I liked Radhika’s character the most ……….her innocence, live life to the fullest n daring nature .
    The way Di u portrait her character……… my inner voice was saying this is an ideal girl……….I really admire her…….whatever she does, does with perfection.
    Raneil’s bonding is great. ,they share a pure bond ,respect each other’s feelings n emotions, have trust, support and more over didn’t have any expectations…… They are best buddies.
    Ardhika’s first meet was awesome…… how Radhika fooled Arjun n wasn’t a bit scared……….I was in Anna’s place witnessing all scene….I surely would have given a tight hug to Radhika……..how she made arjun wear opposite clothes……I couldn’t stop laughing….. But wanna ask from where u got this idea ?????
    Her rules and conditions ……great
    And finally Arjun overcome his over possessiveness..
    And and. Nesam are good………but why always Sam questions Neil ‘s love. ?? He is so understanding and caring …. Can’t see him hurt .even when Sam knows about Jai’s nature then also she want to talk to Radhika ,………questioning Raneil ‘s relation…..why don’t Sam understand.??? Always. Confused why ????
    Di I wanna ask some questions
    When Arjun will teach Jai lessons ???? eagerly waiting……!!!!!
    When nesam would come to USA ?????
    Waiting for Neil’s reaction when he will know Arjun as Radhika’s boy ???
    When Radhika would give her performance ?????
    Liked the Arjun helped her overcome her fear.
    Radhika’s confession was unique………. really we don’t need candles n balloons to show ……. How much we care n love each other….
    And Di the lessons u gave in between are very much inspiring and important for life.. Thank you sooooooooooo much for sharing your experience, really u are a great soul.
    Di your story n writing has its own charm and magic…
    Loved to the core
    Love u Di. n take care………:) 🙂 🙂 🙂 🙂 🙂

    I know I have written a lot but what to do you are so awesome and great writer I have to compensate for all the chp u gave…… !!!

    • Gauri

      Hi Aastha 🙂 thanks a ton darling for the lovely analysis from starting till date…well the idea of all the characters here are from stories and some from my life…the kind of people I met…some lived their life to fullest like Radhika…some are dead arrogant and bad Arjun… but weh they fall they fall deep….Neil is a gem he is like my bestie…. Sam isthe emotional and the lost one…
      now your answers…when everthying has been uncertain around u …u behave like sam..she loves Neil too much to lose him…that makes her insecure….Arjun will teach lesson to Jai but still time for that…neil will be furious at Radhika’s choice…Radhika will perform….and a big thanks for for such a lovely comment…stay blessed 🙂

  32. vasuraj

    Gauri
    As always its interseting and amazingggggggggggg
    Ardhika scenes were fantabulousssssss
    Last one WAIT. FOR RADHIKA’S ARJUN
    Loved it truly yaar
    Keep rocking gauri

  33. Feby

    Oh god..plz hlp me..my 11th try for commenting…
    Di….lots of muah to u…i was so happy and i know i was the first persn to read…i commentd tat time itself but didnt get postd..strday i tried lot but again didnt get postd..only tat my daddys balance got ovr coz i didnt charge data pack… now aftr chrgng i am typing…my mood all went…i was happy whn i commented first time..well…strday..i was dead almost coz of my allergy…i get irritated..but coz of dpo i was calm…lol…oh..i didnt tell u na..dayb4strday whn i met doctr she found a new allergent in my body which is a content in chocolates..so as my farewell for my favourite thing in my life i ate it and lo!!!again szeezing strted..thanks to ur update..i read almost 30 times…tat too radhikas confession…my god…loved it…lots of hugs to u..i was jumping wid happiness…can u imagine whr iam now??? And i pray tis tine my comment get postd…plz..iam hell angry… but still calm coz of dpo..loved it di…i want to talk to u desperately…i will chat wid u once iam back…well..tq ..first for updating it tat night itself so tat i cud read and second for doubl dhamaka…love u lots di…if u wer here beside me…i wud hav squeezed u by my hug…love u a lot…muahhh….

    • Gauri

      Thanks a ton Feby 🙂 u tried so may times is a big thing for me … OMG how can some one stay without choclate…I am on the moon that dpo calms you…million hugs for you dear…and abig teaddy hug for you tc of yourself…loads of love 🙂

  34. khushi

    this is wrong, this tym sam is ryt. 1st episode se bs yhi ho rha hai ki sam hmesa sorry bolti hai nd manati hai us rude neil ko bt this tym sam is ryt pls uske character ko thoda self respect do gauri. hmesa use galat kyu show kar rai ho ek insan hmesa galat aur samne wala hmesa sai this is impossible

    • Gauri

      Khushi dear…I am not potraying Sam as wrong my point is when you don’t have an emotionally stable life…you tend to be insecure…and I dissgree Neil was rule he was only rude when she blamed him….but look at Neil’s point of view…he has always been with her…but she still distrust him…you will know the reason….these are different people…and I got thses characterd from the people I met 🙂 I am sorry if that hurt u 🙂

  35. aastha

    superb di………….I loved the 1st line sooo much ……….” 7 powerful kids……..”………..Adam’s dialogue was superb !!!!! loved that one too…….Arjun’s punishment and Rads answer to Steve was also enjoyable…..I was laughing reading those………nesam was incredibly cute…..the banters of Sam that her gift will be Rads fav…….Arjun’s planning was superb !!!!!!!!!!! happy that finally Rads was able to get over that fear……..loved that group hug too………..some1 plzzzzzz put some sense into her……..how can she even think like it ?????? she wanted Rads to patch up with Neil and now ……..ehh ….she knows Rads since childhood…and even then couldn’t understand her………..chee Sam’s behaviour sucks…….very sad that she spoiled Neil’s and Rads day……..if I ever get that Jai in my hands….he surely will beg me to make his death easier and less painful…Rads b’day gift from Neil was very cute…….I too love teddy bears a lot……the celeb of friends was also very nice…full of warmth….sad that she hurt Rads……..her gift from Arjun was really nice……happy that finally father-son made it………….Rads confession was as unique as her…glad that Neil tried to put some sense into Sam…..she is selfish………ardhika dance was really nyc……I too want a husband who’ll help me in cooking and cleaning….Rads demand to settle in India…….Di does Sam know abt Jai’s obsession towards Rads ???????? When’ll she realize that Jai is cunning ?????? one doubt : does Jai love Sam ?????

  36. aastha

    I forgot to ask…..when’ll Neil meet Rads and Arjun ???????? when Rads know that Arjun lied to her plzz make her some angry….I mean don’t make her take the “Its all ri8 dear u lied to get me only I’m impressed my dear” kind of attitude……………Who is gonna teach that Jai a lesson ??? plzzzzzz make him know the strength of arjun and neil……………show him that his rightful place is in the dustbin……………when r u gonna update nxt ???? ………..sorry for pestering you & 4 the late comment…………….love u…………….TC……………

    • Gauri

      Thanks a ton Aastha 🙂 now ur answers….Sam is not bad…but when a choice is to be made you tend to believe ur own blood first….and if you love someone…and are recieving a special attention…you will never want to share it with anyone else…Sam doesn’t hate Radhika Neil bond….she is insecure due to her intution that she might lose Neil….that makes her act in this way… Jai was never refused by his mom…that made him stubborn….he always got what he wanted but he will learn the lesson soon… he loves his sister…but loves himself more… now don’t say sorry you are welcome to ask n no. of questions….will update tomorrow morniging 🙂 loads of love 🙂 stay blessed 🙂

  37. Feby

    Di…chocolates r my life..i eat it evryday..i evn now hav so many packets of chocolates as all my mamas and frnds brng it for me as its my favourite…i already had dust allergy and i didnt know tis was also thr..tats y it increased..u know y my allergy shooted up once i was in 11th..coz i didnt get time to do yoga and once the rgular doing prson stops it its side effects r drastic lik in my case…so if u also happn to b a regular yogic prson nevr stop doing it ..i say tis to all..well iam happy tat my comment got postd…i was jumping..love u di…iam missing u…

    • Gauri

      Feby dear even I love chocolates…I was the permanent guest…od my family dentist when I was 7….god it was so painful when he filled those cavities…now I take a better care of my teeth…well my sis is allergic to dust and chocolates… I know hw worse it gets lookig at her…take agood care of yourself…loads of love 🙂

  38. Yours nishu

    hey gauri what’s up

    you know the way you are making this story its just fantastic

    I mean

    the characters are fantastic

    hey I want a favour dear give me jai description a little I mean its hard to connect with the character I knew its not saral

    so can u give me any seiral character pic which u find for jai or any description.

    coz I am keen to know his charactersketch

    I love the bonding of neil+rads

    along with nesam and neil arjun

    especially the character of rads is actually very strong and bold

    which I loved

    after a long time I loved each and every part

    girl you make me exciting in each and every part

    now its your fault you need to inform one more thing that when u are posting next chp.

    need the info

    well just ot inform u

    it may be happen that I sometime not reach to ur story

    but trust me its not like I doesn’t want to read ur story its just the fault of circumstances which sometime allowed me or sometime not.

    coz ur story is an Alister story which is worth to read each and every line penned very efficiently

    NOt any loophole in it just perfect

    love u gauri

    do clear my queries love u keep smiling

    love uuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu

    aasthu ammuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu

    manha natasha love u

    keep smiling
    guyzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz

    Once a friend always a friend.

    • Gauri

      Thanks Nishu daring 🙂 your comment made my day….Now about Jai ..well Jai is Sam’s brother in original shoe he was shown to be dead here he is an over pampered son… Piyali never refused him any thing and that spoiled him…Piyali is an attempt to bring Jai up forget to give attention to Sam which made her insecure…. Well you can choose any actor of ur choice (kind of a villian) for Jai role 🙂 loads of love to you dear stay blessed 🙂

  39. sreee

    di i am a silent reader of ur ff and wow after reading this epi i couldnt control myself from commenting…..and di u just have magic in ur fingers that just makes us mad for ur words…it is too good , but now i am hell worried on neils reaction on arjun,hmmmm god save tiger or u save tiger,plsssssss

  40. Roma

    Wowwww awesome, marvellous, outstanding, mind blowing episode. ….double dhamaaka episodes were very very lovelyyyyyy, splendiferous, divine, magical. ….rads bday celebration n gifts…..rads special gift for arjun n his dad……loved rads confession n ardhika’s intense romance ….raneil bonding n Sam’s insecurity….. just loved it to the core. ..I’m just speechless n overwhelmed, spellbound. ..no words to praise your amazingly awesoooooome talent. ….you made my life soooooooo lovelyyyyyy with your flawless writing. …your narration n dialogues, choice of words……wowwww I’m blessed to read such an unique master piece…keep it up honeyyy….God bless you my sweeeeeetheart. …eagerly waiting for the next episode, love you loads. . muaaaaahhhhhh ♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡

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