Manmarziyan- Destiny…Passion …Obsession (Chapter 27)

Hello friends so here is the next chapter…thank you for your comments on both the FF…pls have a look and let me know how was it…next will be double episode for you on Tuesday or Wednesday have a happy Sunday 🙂

Chapter 27

If someone loves you…respect their love…if you are lucky that person will accept you with all your flaws and call you amazing….this what Radhika thought about Arjun
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It was time for Radhika’s second live project…Arjun took Radhika to a place….it was old age shelter come orphanage…Radhika blinked; ‘’What kind of project is this…I am studying management and not social studies’’

Arjun smiled;’’ Management is all about handling the most contrast situations with zeal…a good manager is someone who manages all kind of situations not just business or professional but other too….you have two biggest contrast here….kids who have started the journey of their life full of energy and the old folks…who have lived their life and are now tired nil in energy…engage them in a way that both are benefitted you have 10 days’’

Radhika blinked…this was difficult….she took one round of the place…but nothing came to her head..she turned around; ‘’Are you testing me….do you want me to fail’’

Arjun; ‘’Yes I am testing you …and No I want you to be prepared for any kind of situation …you are my mentee…and its my job to train you to best….lets go….I will being you here tomorrow again’’

Singapore

Neil was doing his college assignment…after that he had planned to go through Sam’s contract himself again to find loop holes…he was determined to find a solution…Sam asked
Neil to have dinner; he joined Sam for dinner…Sam got Radhika’s call; ‘’Hi Chashni how are you?’’

Radhika; ‘’Bad…confused…I have got a live project but not able to find the solution to it’’

Sam; ‘’Chashini…I am putting you on speaker…elaborate your project and problem’’ Radhika described the situation…Sam made a face; ‘’Is you mentor mad’’

Radhika; ‘’He is…sometimes I feel like chopping him into small pieces…and feeding him to crows’’ Neil covered his mouth to hide is laughter

Sam; ‘’Is he handsome?’’

Radhika; ‘’Girls say that…I find him ordinary…leave all that do you have solution to my problem’’ Sam gestured Neil to speak

Neil smiled; ‘’Its an intelligent problem…Chashni…children have energy…innocence and elders have experience patience…children can fill the dull life of elders with smile with their innocence, smile…and elders can teach them how to face life can share their experiences with children as lessons…now think of bringing them together…which you have to do’’

Sam smiled; ‘’Neil I am so proud to be your girl friend’’

Radhika; ‘’Buddy …a big teddy hug for you…you are just the best….muaahaaaa’’ Neil made a face and Sam chuckled….NeSam could actually make out that Radhika was jumping…Neil disconnected the call; ‘’Mad girl’’

US

After 10 days …Arjun visited the place and found that elders and children were interacting with each other…children who first irritated them were now friendly with elders…Elders helped them in studies and told them stories. it was easy for helpers to mange than before…there were still roadblocks…but her idea worked…Arjun saw Radhika teaching kids paper art…he smiled he met helpers and manger and took the feedback on the amendments she made..they praised the idea…Radhika came to Arjun; ‘’So Mr Mentor…what is my grade’’

Arjun; ‘’A…well done…you really are good’’

Radhika smiled lightly; ‘’its not my idea Neil helped me…you can rethink on my grade’’

Arjun; ‘’A+….+ for your honesty, I liked that took an effort to find the solution…whatever the way was….looking for solution and trying is more important ….come I will drop you’’

Singapore

Sam was bathing and her phone for continuously ringing…Neil checked it was jai he answered

Neil; ‘’Hi Jai…how are you well Sam is bathing right now…I will ask her to call you’’

Jai; ‘’You will not stop interfering in my life…you instigated Radhika not to answer my calls’’

Neil gave one look to bathroom door and warned; ‘’Let me make one thing very clear…you do something nasty…I destroy you completely…stay away from her’’

Jai; ‘’If I don’t get Radhika…you will never get Sam…I will make sure of that’’

Neil smirked; ‘’it’s a promise…you will never get Radhika…and I will marry Sam…now get lost’’ Neil threw his back on the bed and closed his eyes…after few minutes he felt water droplets on his face…Neil smiled without opening his eyes…Sam watched him…and then Kissed him…Neil branded his arm on her waist and rolled up bring Sam down; ‘’Sammy you wanted to be an event manger…lets plan…show me your ideas…we will start slowly’’

Sam blinked then smiled..happy tears followed out for eyes…Neil kissed away her tears…Sam took a deep breath and softly spoke; ‘’Neil…no one asked about my dream till date ..and you are planning to make it true…I feel blessed..thank you’’ Neil leaned to kiss her But Sam’s phone started again..Neil made a face….Sam looked at the screen…it was Jai…she disconnected…switched off her phone and threw it in the corner…Sam pulled Neil to her wrapping her arms around him…Neil covered her lips with his …Sam’s surrender gave Neil an assurance…after breaking their kiss Neil stayed there touching his forehead to hers…and their eyes closed…

Sam spoke; ‘’Neil I will move in with you once we are back in Mumbai…I don’t care on anyone’s opinion any more’’ Neil pulled Sam to his chest…she hugged him….Sam was happy as she was someone’s world finally.

US

Steve has offered his studio to Radhika for practice…Radhika didn’t wanted to let down Prerna she was practicing very hard …she was preparing one classical and one freestyle…Arjun was really worried about her…she worked non-stop…never compromised on her studies job project or on her practice…Radhika was practicing Arjun met Steve and then went to room where Radhika was practicing he watched her ….she worshiped dance…. everything she did was nothing less than perfect…Radhika started her spins….she slipped….but before she could fall Arjun caught her; ‘’Bunny….careful’’

Radhika all breathless; ‘’hi when did you come…and thanks’’

Arjun; ‘’Will you breath…you are straining yourself…come sit’’ Arjun made Radhika sit…she sat but her tiredness was visible on her face…Arjun gave her water; ‘’Can I do something for you’’

Radhika; ‘’Will you dance in my place…I can teach you’’ arjun smiled and rolled his eyes….Radhika again said; ‘’Ok take me out for a ice cream treat….and by the way next week is my Birthday…I need a present’’

Arjun; ‘’What do you want…I will bring the sky down for you’’

Radhika; ‘’What will I do with the sky??? I will tell you on my Birthday…but promise me you will give me whatever I ask’’

Arjun; ‘’You have my word…now if you are done shall we move for your ice cream’’

Radhika got up; ‘’you don’t want to hug me today??’’ Arjun looked into her big eyes and smiled he pulled her into a warm hug…Radhika smiled she liked it too; ‘’Am I sweaty and smelling bad??’’ Arjun chuckled and pinched her cheeks he asked her to change… she changed and came out…Radhika intertwined her fingers with Arjun’s and gestured him to move…Arjun was on the moon…he gripped her hand gently touched his forehead to hers and moved out with her.

Singapore

On Neil request Nandini interfered and changed the contracts term and conditions the borad knew what power Nandini Mehra had if she acquired 30% she will completely eat them….Neil wanted Samiara to continue her studies… her next 2 schedules were planned in Singapore itself and 4th one in US…Neil was waiting for that…he could accompany

Sam there and help Prerna with the concert also he wanted to know the reason for the change in Radhika’s voice…he was determined to keep her safe…he loved her in a different way…she was his mirror image like a twin…and he won’t compromise on her life….Neil moved to Sam’s room and found her working on her project; ‘’Sammy how is it going’’

Sam smiled ; ‘’Good Neil…I am happy they changed the contract…otherwise my studies would have been affected…now shoots will only be on weekends…how about how is your course going on and how is your best friend Hanna’’ Sam teased him

Neil smiled looked at Sam; ‘’Oh she is doing great…we went out for coffee then some shopping…then to her place to have some good time together’’

Sam got up and punched Neil hard; ‘’Are you trying to make me jealous…please don’t try it won’t work…I am no more insecure with any other girl….and Hanna…no way…even if you were not with me…the also Hanna would not have been your choice’’

Neil; ‘’Ok if not you …what type or who could be my choice’’

Sam; ‘’someone like Chashni…’’

Neil warned; ‘’Sam…don’t associate me and Radhika in that way…my feeling for her are very different…I wish could explain you…but I don’t like she being paired up with me not even as a joke’’

Sam; ‘’Neil!!! Calm down…I am sorry…but the way you care her anybody would misunderstand your relationship with her’’

Neil jerked his head; ‘’She is my twin…well born with a smaller brain…she is still the 7yr old Radhika for me…the girl who kicked me off the chair to make a place for you…you will not understand…we are so honest with each other…because we don’t share soft feelings…we share a bond and this is un breakable’’

Sam smiled; ‘’I know…I have seen that for years…she loves me but when I hurt you she gives me left right centre…I love her honesty…and I am dying to meet her…I want these months to get over fast…plus she is performing too…won’t miss her performance for anything’’

Neil nodded…he knew she was hiding something…and if this is regarding guy…then God save him… because one flaw and Neil will make him leave.

USA

Radhika after her ice-cream took a deep sigh of relief as if someone just gave her a new life…Arjun laughed at her drama…they were talking when Radhika’s phone beeped…her
hands were messy she asked Arjun to put it on speaker; ‘’Hi Papa…how are you’’

Dilip smiled hearing her voice; ‘’I am good beta…how is everything at your end…well I wanted to speak something important…are free now’’

Radhika; ‘’yes papa go on’’

Dilip; ‘’Radhika don’t receive and make calls to Jai…just stay away from him…and in case he troubles you please do let me know or Neil…well I have already told Neil’’

Radhika closed her eyes she never expected this conversation…and now Arjun was giving her a questioning look…she knew after this call…Arjun will nicely take her class…she answered Dilip; ‘’Why did u tell Neil…fine Papa I have alredy told Jai that I don’t want to be friends with him…you don’t worry I will take care…will call you again..give my love to ma’’ Radhika disconnected cleaned her hands and sat infront of Arjun with her head down waiting for him to question her….she watched his fist and gently touched them

Arjun lifted her chin up; ‘’I want to know all Bunny…no secrets remember’’ Radhika nodded and narrated everything from the day Jai proposed 4 yrs back till the day Radhika scolded him over the phone; ‘’he is just obsessed with me…’’

Arjun; ‘’are you scared of him’’

Radhika rolled her eyes; ‘’If I am not scared of you then who the hell is he’’

Arjun smiled at her confidence; ‘’But he was bothering you …why didn’t you tell me’’

Radhika; ‘’Arjun I am no damsel in distress….that I need a prince charming to rescue me I have my own ways…but I promise…The day I need help..I will scream your name out loud’’

Arjun; ‘’Good Girl…By the way …..is there anyone you are scared off’’

Radhika; ‘’mmmm….yes lizards, cockroaches dark closed room and Neil’’

Arjun; ‘’Neil????….Why’’ This was shocking for him too…for Arjun… Neil was a glacier

Radhika; ‘’ You don’t him…one mistake and he pulls my ear…even my dad listens to him more than me…actually he is a sweet heart…if Jai is in his limits its because of Neil….now don’t be jealous’’

Arjun smiled ; ‘’I am not….but you have a strange relationship with him…well leave all that what should we do’’

Radhika; ‘’Drop me home…my legs are hurting need some rest’’

Arjun; ‘’Will you come to my place….only if you are ok’’ Radhika smiled and nodded she trusted him…Arjun entered his apartment he made Radhika sit and prepared a hot bath for her legs…he massaged her feet and pressed them to release the pain …Radhika protested…but Arjun went on she smiled and dozed off…Arjun found her sleeping he lifted her up and placed her on the bed…Arjun kept caressing her head…he could not remove his eyes from her…his POV; ’’Bunny this Bday I will pull your fear out of your heart this is a promise’’ he pecked her forehead covered her and got up Radhika mumbled; ‘’love you tiger’’ Arjun froze…his heart stopped….all things surrounding him disappeared…Arjun closed his eyes and a drop tricked down his face…he took a deep breath…he knew this was sleep talk he decided he will wait for her full hearted confession.

Radhika opened her eyes once Arjun left she smiled; ‘’I know you want to hear it again…. I will confess on the day of RHYTHM concert…when 2 most important people of my life will be there…yes Tiger I love you…. …I hope there are no lies between us…’’

India

Khanna Residence

Piyali was working when maid updated her someone wanted to meet her….Piyali went to the guest room…she found a tall dusky and very handsome man in late twenties waiting for her; ‘’Hi ma’am I am Ayan Raizada….owner of Glitz’’

Piyali; ‘’Oh yes please have a seat….’’ Piyali asked her maid to get refreshments

Ayan; ‘’Piyali ma’am…I have seen Samaira’s work she is good…we would like to work with her in future…but I am not here for that….I like her…I would like to make her a part of my life’’

Piyali was surprised; ‘’Ayan thanks but she is studying…I cannot promise you anything…I guess we should wait for her to come back’’

Ayan; ‘’ya sure…well I would like Samaira to be face of Glitz for next 5 yrs…this is the contract…please have a look and let me know if it suits you…and wanted to tell you…Nandini Mehra is now 30% holder in Glitz…I know she is in partnership with you too’’

Piyali was happy for the 5yr contract but angry that Nandini was a part of Glitz; ‘’Ya she is…well I will ask Sam to go through this a let you know’’ Ayan greeted Piyali and left

Piyali POV; ‘’Ayan Raizada and Sam…should think on this ‘’

Poor Piyali she didn’t even know that it was Neil Melhotra who was the 30% owner…Nandini was only the face and soon Neil will demolish her dreams of securing Jai with Sam’s help

USA

Radhika had skipped her shift at the store…she was still in the campus…she had to work on few assignment and needed books….she looked at her watch it was 9:30 PM…she checked her phone it was on silent with 50 calls from Anna Arjun and her gang…she messaged all of them that she was is campus and now leaving ….the gang worried for her because of Ario…. Arjun after reading her message quickly started towards the campus …Radhika was near her ladies locker room…she was taking her stuff out…she felt someone standing behind her; ‘’Hi swty…is your boyfriend around’’ Radhika closed her eyes she knew they didn’t had cctv here being ladies room…even if they had Ario came prepared she has to use her brain now…she gathered her strength and turned around

Radhika; ‘’Ario!!!…not happy to see you what do you want’’

Ario; ‘’right now you…’’

Radhika; ‘’You want me because Arjun took your girl….well you should thank him that he freed you from a girl who would willingly cheat on you’’

Emily; ‘’Arjun fooled me’’

Radhika smirked; ‘’Ario you really don’t want to live…trust me whatever happens today …Arjun will punish you bad…and you are the one Em right?…if he fooled you…then why the hell you were claiming in being love with Arjun still…and Ario you are fighting for her…you can do better’’

Radhika had made a call to Arjun …while interacting with Ario…she knew he will come…she was engaging Ario…to buy time… Arjun heard the conversation and messaged his gang…he knew if it’s not dark Radhika will fight…but one thing was sure…after today he will turn Ario’s life a living hell.

Ario gave a sharp look to Em; ‘’B***h you lied to me’’

Em; ‘’don’t listen to her…she is misguiding you…please baby’’ it was enough for Radhika to make a plan…she already had a shun gun in her hand….Ario just wanted to teach Arjun an lesson…he leaped at Radhika….she was ready…as he came close she shot at his groin and he was on the floor…he was in deep pain…she spayed his eyes…and looked at

Emily….Emily was surprised at Radhika’s intelligence….Radhika moved to her…’’next would be you…and it will pain more…now be a good girl and tie his hands at the back using your scarf and now…’’ Emily obliged…but Ario was a strong man with a little brain…he jerked Emily and got up…he caught Radhika from behind…she bit his hand and pinched is arm pit till it bled….he pushed her being in pain but push was not gentle…Radhika fell flat hurting her forehead

Ario; ‘’will teach you a good lesson…girl’’

Radhika; ‘’I am waiting’’ Radhika knew some moves which Neil taught her she watched him from the corner…when he was near she used all her strength and kicked his shin bone hard and he slipped and fell on his face…she kicked his stomach and ran…Ario followed her when he came out he found Radhika in Arjun’s embrace and Arjun with a murderous rage with his gang.

Arjun; ‘’Anna take her home…I will come after finishing this….Cole stay I need you’’ Radhika held Arjun’s hand ; ‘’Teach him a lesson he never forgets …and two punches as a bonus from me’’…

Arjun smiled…she was the first girl he had met who asked him to get into trouble; ‘’Go home…I will come to you love…go’’ Anna and Cheryl took Radhika with them.

Singapore

Neil was helping Samaira with her assignment….when he got a call from Prerna, he went out; ‘’Mom…how are you’’

Prerna; ‘’Good son…well leave all that it’s a concert in US we have big names sponsoring and performing…it would be 3 days event…I want you there on time and Radhika is also performing …she is little nervous this is her first international exposure’’

Neil; ‘’Chashni nervous….Mom she is a drama Queen nothing more…well I will there a week before concert don’t worry but don’t tell this to Chashni…she knows I am reaching US a day before want to surprise her’’

Prerna ; ‘’Fine…its between you 2’’

Neil POV: ‘Get ready for your surprise little one…see you soon’
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A perfect partner gives meaning to your life….Neil is the perfect partner he made Sam feel on the top of the world …he is making Sam what she should be.

Pre cap- Double Dhamaka : Arjun pulls Radhika out of her fear…Radhika confesses Her love…Jai puts a doubt in Sam’s head

Credit to: Gauri

121 comments

  1. Supriya

    Di a big round of applause for u…..I know I told u dat I will sleep nd read in morn but sorry I lied…..I kept waiting till it got updated around 2…..I was just too much curious….. Whenever I closed my eyelids….. only thing I could think was dpo…..I have started loving the ff to the extent I myself don’t know……di the day u end this….I will srsly cry buckets….dat day u will hav hard time consoling me….m sure abt this fact….di love rads attitude towards jai….gud she z not afraid of that scoundrel…. u hav portrayed a jhasi ki rani in her…..loved arjun as usual….. I m having hard time believing the fact that piyali z Sam’s real mom…..I mean she wants to trade her own daughter…… How could someone be so much disgusting??….. Jai toh I don’t want to utter a word about him…..I might say something which I should not……I want rads confession to be something extraordinary….. Now my questions……How will rads react after knowing arjun’s secrets? will she leave him?no I don’t want a separation……di I want you to punish jai more please….. Now why Sam has doubt that also because of her good for nothing bro?srsly di real damsel in distress z this Sam…..I mean how much weak she can be?I hate people who can’t stand up for themselves…… I believe it z all about attitude…..one should just know to show attitude where it z really necessary…… I don’t show to ppl I love but yes god save ppl who mess with me…di now about complimenting u than as usual m speechless……. God has srsly taken special time to make u……u know the best in u z ur heart after dat ur brain…..ppl who stay in ur heart r very lucky…..m happy dat I m one of them…..ur brains r splendid…… Now enough of my blabbering…… When will u update next one???love you from the bottom of my heart……stay blessed dear…..????????????????

    • Gauri

      Supriya darling now I am out of words …tell me the best word to express my gratitude to such a lovely comment ….I just have THANKS 🙂 Rads reaction you will have to wait 🙂 Jai will be punished wait for sometime…right now enjoy Ario’s punishment 🙂 no one is born weak or strong….love care and their sourroundings make them weak or strong….Rads was never deprive of love…Sam had everything…yet she looked for love 🙂 well for now only this much you will know more in coming chapters 🙂 stay blessed 🙂 love you 🙂

      • Supriya

        Thanks for the lovely answers…..still I have many doubts….. I hope I get my answers in upcoming updates…… For now m enjoying my curiosity…… m waiting for ur prologue too…..well I know u r true to ur words so there z no need to tell u update soon…..I know u will…..love you dear….tc

      • Gauri

        Jaaneman if I clear all your doubts you will predict the story 😛 ur little brain is too sharp.. love you wait for the next one 🙂

  2. Gianna

    OMG Gauri what is this Super Duper Hit this is. It’s like I have seen an entire movie in this one update. Drama, romance , action all in one. Can’t say which part I liked best coz it was all good. Radhika is all cat woman wow wow wow. Am writing this comment after reading the chapter for the third it was that good. Precap makes me more happy. Loads and loads of love to u sweety ??? stay blessed and happy always love uuuuuu.

  3. nita

    Wowwww it’s amazing….. Loved arjuns unusual project…. Neils plan for project……… Radhika saying love you tiger nd her intelligence nd bold nature to ario……. Nd finally arjuns anger nd saying go home I wll cme to you<3 <3 <3 I can imagine wt wll happen to ario nw hahaha poor guy pity him……. Eagerly waiting for Nxt update it seems like Tuesday is tooo far…I can't wait till thn but if it s Tuesday Lil ok Wednesday no way plsss try to post it on tue itself….. Love you for amazing update

  4. shreyanshi

    radhika loves arjun 🙂 :* :* finallly.. m xcited for confession 🙂
    radhika is multitalented… her self defense skill 🙂 superb..
    Neil is going to give surprise… but he doesn’t know … he will be surprised … 😀 hahahaah…
    jai.. so obsessive .. 🙁

    can’t wait for next epi … 🙁
    update soon 🙂 gauri..

  5. Rg

    Hi gauri today is extremely special for me. As it’s my birthday I am so happy to read dpo today. U made my day gauri. Finally radz confession…. I loved arjuns reaction for it… I hate jai. And Sam has a new guy? Oh my god. How can piyali sell Sam for jai. Is she a mother r there really mother’s like
    this one. Well so rads will confess sooner than planned wow. Am waiting for it.. when I hope it’s on her birthday.. By d way nesam is coming to us… Wow grt. By d way so radz learns abt arjun will they fight? Pls tell me? And also abt New guy in Sam’s life.
    I hope rads won’t stick to her rules…. Pls tell me…?. Thanks for updating stay blessed.
    ..

  6. Hope

    Yippeeeee…… Finally d day i waited… Neil-Arjun confrontation is nxt ryt? I’m damn sure..Arjun needs to work harder 4 impress Neil… And Jai and Ario deserves wat Arjun is gonna give’m… Piyali is gonna blow her head out if she comes to know abt Neil n glitz..
    I’m proud of u Gauri..and u inspire me.. Stay blessed.(its ur dialogue..but i really mean it..and u need to understand dat its coming from an athiest.. 😛 B-) )
    TC…LOVE U..MMUAAH…BEAR HUGS…

    • Gauri

      Thanks a ton Hope 🙂 Arjun will work hard 🙂 you will see in next how dangerous Arjun can get for Rads …Piyali is gonna faint once Neil shows his real colors 🙂 love you dear 🙂 I love the name hope 🙂 stay blessed 🙂

      • Hope

        I love dat too…
        Hope… It means
        Hold On Pain Ends…
        It says… Don’t cry i’m there 4 u..
        It symbolise…the happiness coming after the worst storm… And mostly d word dat makes me live…

      • Gauri

        Hope is only thing which keeps you going…and you should always hold on to it 🙂

  7. It’s really superrrrrrbbbbbbbbbbb darling sissy 😀 😀 😀 I always admire rads character she s pakka really fabulous her brain get moves her attitude everything s superbbbbbbbbbbb 😀 😀 😀 how she managed when she met ario s really awesome 😀 😀 😀 I really love dis girl n d one made dis character too:D 😀 😀 😀 😀 😀 😀 😀 jai idiot he ll never improve…….ario stupid pervert……… Arggggggg……. Oh pls teach him a good Lesson:) 🙂 🙂 🙂 ha ha ha Rads scared of Neil :O :O Finally out bunny loved tiger Yipeeeeeeeeeee 😀 😀 😀 😀 waiting for D rads confession 😀 😀 😀 in ario n rads part omg I really worried for rads 🙁 our brainy s really cute n awesome 🙂 🙂 🙂 superbbbbbbbbbbb superbbbbbbbbbbb superbbbbbbbbbbb 😀 😀 😀 lotssssss of loveeeee:D 😀 😀 love u darling 😀 😀 😀 take care 😀 😀

    • Gauri

      Thanks darling 🙂 Suga you always make me smile:) love you dear 🙂 stay blessed 🙂 stay happy 🙂

  8. Meghna shanti

    Superb episode
    Waiting for radz confession
    Plzz update the next update asap

  9. Niharika

    This is amazing . I told eairler that today is my grandparents 50th anniversary. So now the parlour lady is doing my hair and I am reading. Please keep my grandparents in prayer.

    • Gauri

      Hi Niharika 🙂 a very happy 50th anniversary to your grandparents….may god bless them with 50 more…and thanks for the lovely comment 🙂 love you 🙂

  10. natasha

    gauri dhi awesum episode i am sure u have magic in ur fingers dhi loved the epsiode keep writing ur ffs bye dhi luv u wen will upload nxt episode dhi

      • natasha

        ohh kkkkkkkkkk dhi i hope radhika will not get angry wid arjuns lie he was hiding abt sam and niel nah plz xcuse him for tis tym make radhika confess her feelings and ask neil and sam to mov to us so tat all 4 can stay together bye dhi luv uuuuuuuuuu

  11. Abha….yo yo darling what is it….don’t make me so weak to give comments…where are are words…plz plz guru Mata come here n teach me some lessons….tusi badi great ho jaanu…ab Mai Hindi Mai try karti hun…kuch din bad ye Japanese,Korean,Spanish bhi ho sakta hai…coz m lacking words in English now…tc??

  12. Ammu

    Oh…its awesome gauri.. Finally rads realized her feelings.. ‘love you tiger’!she is really a drama queen.. N d project..that idea really nice n neil’s words were well written. piyali n jay..now what mess they r gonna create?d precap is a much awaited one..just waitng..i dont know how to appreciate u for makng us crazy wid ur superb creativity..u woman of letters…

    • Gauri

      Thanks a ton Ammu 🙂 woman of letters….wow that is one of the most amazing thing I have heard 🙂 love you 🙂

  13. Sravya

    awsm one.I loved today’s FF very much.The way Radhika dated her love was so beautiful.I am excited for the next one.Thanks for the mrng treat dear.next one is double dhamakka.so excited.After all the day is coming when niel realizes that Radhika called for Arjun.Sooo happyyyy.☺☺☺☺

  14. aastha

    its superb !!!!!!!!!!!! my herat too stopped when Rads mumbled ” I love u ” ……..bt I dint know that she wasn’t sleeping………naughty girl….she wanted to see Arjun’s reaction………..happy that Radhika was able to complete her 2nd live project…..it was indeed difficult…..bt I knew she would succeed in it……..and I liked her honesty……loved nesam and rads friendship bond……….I loved this dialogue in particular “……..the girl who kicked me out of my chair to make a place for you….”….ardhika outing was also nice……..Radhika’s demand for a present….Neil warning Jai was also nice to read…………y does some1 always come as a hurdle in nesam love ??????? happy that Piyali din’t say yes without knowing Sam’s decision………Rads is intelligent…..and I liked the way you presented it….she faced everything boldly……………you proved that any1 can irrespective of their size and gender take down any1…………Rads dialogue to Arjun was also nice………………….the preacp is very interesting…………
    so here are my doubts : 1) What’ll Neil do when he knows that Rads love Arjun ??????
    2) What’ll Rads do when she realizes that Arjun lied to her abt Neil and Sam ????????
    3) Will Piyali n Jai once again be a hurdle in nesam love ???????
    that’s all…………………..love u…………….TC………………

    • Gauri

      Aastha cutie pie thanks a ton for your lovely comment 🙂 now your ans hurdle in nesam love is due to Sam’s low confidence and fear…but slowly she will overcome and soon … yes more than strength attitude matters….and right attitude can help you win any situation 🙂 Neil will mad at Arjun more than Rads for lying to Rads ….Rads reaction you will have to read…many secrets will be out…Neil will eliminate all herdles with help of Nandini 🙂 tc love you

      • aastha

        Thank you for the reply to my queries…………soo when’ll they meet ??? I mean in which episode ???????

      • aastha

        I’ll wait……..so frm next epi romance is on air ???????? Are u working in whitefield??? you need not answer if it is personal..n you don’t want to share….

  15. Wow awesome episode..l was left with no words to praise u hav crossed al d words only I can say is am huge fan of urs.. Nd u hav become d part of my beautiful word love u loads…..loved d live project challenge..nd Niels protectiveness towards Sam and support for achieving her dream..d way u explained Neil and radhika relationship to Sam. I think finally arjun not jealous of niel..hope he understood Neil nd radhika relation…finally radhika confessed her love may be in sleep..
    When will Neil come to us before or after or at the time of confession..eagerly waiting for Neil’s reaction..and radhika way of dealing when she knows abt arjun nd Neil frndshp..
    When r u going to giv nxt update??

    • Gauri

      Thanks Priya 🙂 love you for the amazing comment 🙂 confession will happen soon 🙂 Neil and Sam will be in US … and how will Radhika deal with it you will know in coming chapters…but she loves Arjun dearly 🙂 stay blessed 🙂

  16. ab

    Oh di it’s just awesome ? feeling happy and neils explanation was superb about elder and children oh Arjun so cute radhika the drama queen…….sam is so innocent oh and precap is amazing…..love u so much ? and waiting for next update……….uuummmmmhhhhhhaaa

  17. Dev

    Hey gauri……happy sunday dear 1………n an awesome epi…..lovd d epi on d whole…..n d defence of radz on ario is too good …….n d bonus points to arjun to kick him too was really good???……n d way she acted sleep n confessed was truelly lovely……???
    Lovd d way neil cherishd sam……n warning jai……
    Love u lots….hugs…..tc….
    Ps waiting 4 double damakka

  18. Dhara

    Well Neil’s surprise will create havoc in Ardhika’s life. Before that Radhika’s fear pulling out and Radhika’s confession..

    Gauri plz write Novel on this 🙂

    Love you

    • Gauri

      Thanks Dhara 🙂 I love your profile pic 🙂 happy mothers day to you and all the others 🙂 well you will know on Neil’s surprise and will see Neil-Arjun encounter soon 🙂 love you stay blessed 🙂

  19. Jaaaaaiiiiii….. !!!! Ise koi maar dalooo….
    loved it when radhika says i love you tiger.. Awww they shared such a lovely moment in this epi.. and I am actually eagerly waiting when Arjunas Neil will teach Jai a big lesson… Sam baby should not get trapped with her brother’s words … 🙁
    lots of love to you gauri di.. I wnt you all happy and healthy with a wide smile… 😀

  20. roshini

    Gauri..this Was just Mindblowing Loved It…thanks Bear Hugs Fr U ♡♡♡♡♡ 🙂 🙂 😀

  21. M

    Arjun: how heart touching moment when he listen i love u tiger…..awwwww

    Radhika : how confident she s that arjun will reach their to rescue her….lovely

    Neil: this guy…..ahhhhh…..i m in love with him…..so beautiful when he admit that radhika s like a twin for him…nd also when he warn jai

    Sam: right on the track…..confident on his love and more over when she say that after reaching mumbai she will shift with neil…..wowwww

    Gauri : my butter who arrange and give this kind of life and nature to these characters….even original writers of this series fail to do this…..imagination…..everyone imagine any random thing….but the way u portray ur imagination
    …….i bow down…..really

  22. nisha

    Worth reading this part too

    NOthing less than perfection dear

    when it comes to ARdhika I love each and every bit.

    I love to read ardhika moments

    and your story writing made them more special

    waiting to see some more twist and turns in ardhika life

    which makes their bond more passionate

    I know you can do it so well.

    love u dear

    keep smiling

    hey aasthu amuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu(ameena) , missing manhaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa

    naty (natasha)are you the same naty from where is heart there is life. if yes miss you and love u and if not

    then nice to meet u dear keep smiling

    • aastha

      Nishu…………………..hey where are you my jan ???????? its been a looooooooooooooooooooong time since I saw ur comment…………….I’m soooooooooo happy……..how are u ???????? how are ur studies ???????? u free now ??????? or on the verge of exams ??????????????………….plzz reply…………I’d be happy if u do…………….love u a lot……..muah…………………….

    • natasha

      no nisha i am not but still u can say i luv u to me i dnt mind ( jst kidding )
      hi nisha i am another natasha not the 1 ur tinking luv u honey cya tc

  23. neetz

    Awzomeeeeeeee …gosh hhow do u do this…seriously the way u pen down ur imagination is really coooll..hugs and kisses for u 🙂 :-*

  24. neetz

    But i donno one thing y has rads not even given a hint abt arjun to.neil or sam whom.she considers very close ..she knows they do gud things for her..after confessing to arjun letting them know is.just lyk declaring and by the depth of ra neil bond for me.that luks weird..
    Just wanted to know ur.point of view so asked..afterall they r ur characters so u might have thought something 🙂

    • Gauri

      Yes Neetz there is a reason for that…she also carries a fear that there are some lies you will know everything once all secrets are revealed…actually she doubts Arjun on something you will know on what …but hats of you caught that 🙂

      • neetz

        Lol 😀 thanku dear .. i m so much into ur story i guess ..k mouth sealed now :’) ..will wait forstory to unfold ..

  25. Gauri today no words left with to praise you….Today’s episode is marvelous…… Radhika actually taught something me that is don’t fear if such kind if situation come n to face it with intelligence… women are no more coward… why this aryan has to come? will jai succeed in spoiling nesam relation…can’t see neil in pain again ..idea of project handling superb… Reneil bond superb as usual… excited for double dhamaka..sending lot if love n tight hug.. tc

    • Gauri

      Thanks a ton Dipika 🙂 Sam is emotional yes she will get affected….Neil has changed since he was badly hurt…he is stronger now… yoou will more thanks a ton dear 🙂 stay blessed 🙂

  26. Your nishu

    hey aasthu is that happened that i forget u and ammu and you all.

    no way dear

    just that getting busy in some work

    on last page too I greeted you and amu I think u all didn’t see it

    its ok dear I am so happy too too see u here how ru my sweetheart aasthu

    hmmmmmmmmmmmmmm looks like u are free

    hey enjoy this time dear

    love u aasthu tght hugsssssssssssssssssssssssssssss for u my lovely jaanemann .

    love u dear aasthu keep smiling

    Once a friend always a friend.

    • aastha

      hiiiiiiiiiiiiii nishuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu ……………sorry I din’t see the greetings in the last page……….I’m all fine……………actually I’m a bit tensed coz my exam results are coming today……………I’m really scared….if I don’t score well it’ll affect my admission to college…………………….and ya I’m free………..soo I started 2 fan fictions…..I would be extremely delighted if you would read those…………
      here are those names: ” enemies frm childhood ” and ” my search ends in you” …..both are ardhika ff’s…………………..if you would like to read I’ll give you the links………….and sorry for the late comment…………and ” ONCE A FRIED ALWAYS A FRIEND “…………………love u…………..infinite flying kisses to u………………loads of teddy hugs…………………….TC………love u……………..di are you there on FB ??????

  27. Bhabya

    Di u r awesome writer… I was in train all the night thinking about your ff. I thought u would have posted on sat but u posted today. By the way the epi was superb n the surprise which neil is going to give i am waitining. Luv u…tc??

  28. Niharika

    Thanks Di for your wishes. I told you my grandfather’s sistrs 50 wedding so 10:30 mass then 12 o clock mass it was double dhamaka I am soooo tired. Bye Di take care.

  29. krity

    Hey swethrt,im back im on the holidays wid my mom so unable to comment so sry for that bt now i hv read all the last epi nd as always u rocked it girl jst luv them nd this one was also amazing so our bunny has fallin for our tiger jst luvd it so im jst hoping nothing should go wrong i mean after knowing that arjun konws neil nd sam jst hope that she stay calm…anyway’s luv u god bless u cm soon waiting for u nd dear im really pissed off coz im jst unable to take proper nap nd i luv my sleep sso much ufff ye hetic shedule bt wt to do wrk is also important anyway’s bye take care..lots of hugs for such an amazing episs

    • Gauri

      Hi Krity 🙂 hope u had a nice holiday…now please take ample rest…and thanks for alovely comment 🙂

  30. chandan

    Awesome chap Gauri…Yay the day of Radhika’s confession has come…much excited thinking how different it would be…n i guess you will make one like that…waiting for tuesday now…be happy n tc

  31. Gauriiiiiiii im so sorry for the late cmmt. Actually yesterday, im busy (home town festival- chitthirai thiruvizha) so now only i read ur ff. Ahhhhhhh chap ws asusual superb ma ☺

  32. happy

    hi dr….hw r u….this one is super…i liked all part…..i want to see neil-rad-arjun scene…..waiting so long….pls….make it fast….i really loved all scenes of arjun-rad…thank you so so much….when ll u update next one…..

    • Gauri

      Thanks Happy dear good to see your comment, how r you doing? … I will update MMZ-married by fate tomorrow morning after that I will be updating this one 🙂

  33. Happy

    Thanks dr for rply….fine…..waiting for ur update….thank you so so much for spending ur valuable time for us…..

  34. Roma

    My goodness gauriiiiiiiiiiiii. ..what an amazing, awesome, marvellous episode. …just loved it to the core. ….ardhika moments were veryyyyyyy awesoooooome. ..n nesam were really lovelyyyyyy. ..ayan wants to marry sam n 5 years contract….hmmmm now piyali thinking about sam n ayan….this is new twist. ….rads encounter with ario was quite interesting, rads knocked him out…..wowwww….kudos to rads….arjun won’t leave ario now, ario toh gaya…lol….eagerly waiting for neil’s visit to NY and his face off with arjun….precap is very interesting n exciting. …keep it up honeyyy. …. eagerly waiting for the next episode, love you loads. Muaaaaahhhhh 😉

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