Manmarziyan- Destiny…Passion …Obsession (Chapter 25)

Hi Friends as promised…here is the next chapter pls let me know how was it…next one on Friday.
Hope you will love this one too….will post MMZ on Thursday morning….thanks you giving such lovely comments on each chapter love you all ..stay blessed

Chapter 25

Never Judge people on what you hear…as darkest clouds heal the heated earth with coolest water
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USA Arjun’s Farm House

The cook served lunch …for Radhika and Arjun he had made chocolate cake specially for Radhika…she jumped on the plate than stopped; ‘’David please take the share out for everybody first because if I start no one will get a pinch’’

David smiled; ‘’No worries my dear…Arjun had asked me to prepare two cakes one for you and other for everyone else’’ Radhika pouted at Arjun for embarrassing her…but then went back hogging on the cake…; ‘’Arjun how many families stay here’’

Arjun; ‘’3…. they stay here since we bought this place…when mom came for treatment I stayed here with her for 2 yrs and they became my family…when mom died I went back to India fro few years but came back again for my bachelors and Masters I vist this place 2 times a month….I love them’’

Radhika smiled; ‘’I can see that…One more point for you…’’

After spending some more time with the people there Arjun and Radhika took leave the youngest kid ,a golden haired 3 yr old boy came to him..arjun sat on his knees and hugged him…he wished all of them and drove back to the city…they both were quite during the drive…after a moment Radhika spoke; ‘’I would like to come here again before going back to India…if you don’t mind’’

Arjun smiled and replied without looking at her; ‘’You can come here n no. of times ….and you are not going anywhere….you will stay with me forever…I mean it’’ Radhika kept quite she knew he meant every word…that scared her; ‘’Why do you have to repeat that again and again’’

Arjun smirked; ‘’So that you remember that you are mine’’

Radhika got frustrated; ‘’I should have gone to Singapore with Sam and Neil’’

Arjun pulled up the car…he looked at her irritated face; ‘’You hate me for loving you or for being possessive about you…Let me make one thing clear to you…you will be spending your life with me…’’

Radhika; ‘’even if I am not happy ?’’

Arjun; ‘’ trust me Bunny … I can give my life for you…but I cannot see you with someone else…I love you…please be mine’’

Radhika; ‘’Arjun answer this if I was a girl with a scandalous past….if I would have changed boyfriends like clothes and then would have started a relationship with you a serious one …would your love me the same way then’’

Arjun; ‘’If a boy can have a past so can a girl…I don’t judge anyone on they being a boy or girl..we all are same…I never fell for anyone….but I never forced myself on any girl…whatever I did was mutual …if you had the so called scandalous past with the same heart…I would have loved you the same way’’ Radhika blinked she kept looking at Arjun ….his love so true and it had stuck the cord of her heart he was a gem not like other guys who wanted their love to be a virgin…Radhika leaped and plated a kiss on his cheek…now Arjun blinked..’’can I break the rule too ‘’

Radhika; ‘’No…I made the rule I can mend it my way’’

Arjun in pained voice; ‘’you can do any thing you like and You call me devil…but you play with my emotions…because you know I love you…’’

Radhika felt bad…she turned to him and kept staring at his pained face trying to say something …he smiled and waved his hands infornt of her ;
‘’Looks like you have fallen for me…wow the dialogue worked’’ Radhika punched him…Arjun pinched her cheeks.

Singapore

Sam woke up in Neil’s arms…her back was attached to his front and his arm was firmly holding her to him…Sam smiled she twisted herself to turn and face Neil…he was sleeping peacefully…Sam caressed his face lifted herself up and planted a chaste kiss on his forehead…Neil tighten his grip and brought Sam on the top…he opened his eyes to look at her face…’’Now my day…will be amazing…because my day started by looking at you’’

Sam; ‘’Really…. you feel I am that lucky for you’’

Neil; ‘’Yes Sammy…and you know that…then why doubt’’

Sam placed her head on his chest; ‘’Neil…you make me feel perfect…best…but all these years…I was always the second…how much ever I tried…I was never as good as Bhai…I started living when I met Chashni…she never put me down …she always made me feel special….you know I never liked coming home for vacations…I would spend time at Radhika’s place….because Mala aunty gave me what mom forgot…When I was in doon…Radhika gave me back my confidence …she made me strong and your unconditional support made me brave…But I miss something….I just want my mom to say that I am the best thing that happened to her…that I am a good daughter…I took this modelling assignment for her…I know you don’t like it…but I promise this would be the last one…don’t leave me’’

Neil tighten his grip…rolled over bringing himself on the top; ‘’Sammy you are special very special…I will never leave you…even if you want to leave me…I will not let you do that now…you don’t know how possessive I can get…’’

Sam; ‘’Thank you…sorry for hurting you for so many days’’ Neil smiled and invaded Sam’s mouth..clamming it completely …she giggled Neil moved his hand under her shirt…making goose bumps all over her skin….his gently moved his hands up …Sam closed her eyes…her breathing turned heavy…and her heart was thudding…she was holding Neil to herself…Neil smiled against Sam’s lips; ‘’its morning…lets go to the beach’’

Sam held his shirt; ‘’We have 4 months for the beach…I want to stay here in your arms…please’’ Neil pulled her in a hug and Sam closed his eyes to enjoy the moment

USA

Anna messaged Arjun to come to a theater …they had planned a movie…they still had one hour…and Radhika wanted to change…Arjun parked his car infront of Anna’s dorm; ‘’You freshen up …I will wait’’

Radhika; ‘’come up…I am giving you a coffee treat…’’

Arjun; ‘’Do you trust me..’’

Radhika; ‘’Bunny trusts you tiger…come’’ Arjun smiled and followed her… Radhika made coffee…and went inside to change…she came out in a skirt and boots…with a high pony tail…Arjun smiled ;’’Why are you so beautiful’’

Radhika with all expression ; ‘’ Oh that’s a secret…I apply so many packs… my strict diet which includes almost everything …then I trouble you and many others…all this makes me cute’’ she fluttered her lashes like a Disney princess

Arjun got up cupped her face ; ‘’I am sorry if I am breaking any of your rules’’ Arjun kissed Radhika’s cheek lightly & lovingly radhika wanted to pull back but she couldn’t… she wanted to stay… Arjun pulled back and observed her face…she had closed her eyes her face had turned pink…
Arjun planted one more chaste kiss on her forehead…hugging her tightly…Radhika lifted her arms and hugged him in response…Arjun was happy…this was the first time she hugged him this way…Radhika softly whispered; ‘Don’t be sorry’ Arjun chuckled Radhika moved back; ‘’I trust you Arjun…give me some time…because I don’t trust love…what if it fades’’

Arjun; ‘’Take all you time Bunny I will wait for you…and now can I use your room to change’’

Radhika; ‘’Yes …sure…but be quick’’ Arjun patted her cheek and picked his bag and went inside the room to change’’
India

Dilip was worried for Radhika…after meeting Samrat he didn’t wanted Jai anywhere close to his daughter…he was thinking if they should say yeas for NEIL…but he himself knew what kind of bond was there between Radhika-Neil…Neil was friend philosopher guide and at times Radhika’s shield…he didn’t wanted to spoil this bond he decided to keep quite till Radhika is ready to settle down

Singapore

Sam and neil enjoyed a the beach…had their lunch and went to the lounge to enjoy…Rita saw Neil she came and greeted him with a hug…Sam was uncomfortable…Rita turned to Sam

Rita; ‘’Sam…hi there I am Rita’’ Sam smiled and shook hands with her…Rita smiled looked at Neil and spoke again; ‘’Sorry about that day…I know you followed us…everything we did was to make you jealous…and I can see it worked…you guys are looking rocking together’’

Sam; ‘’thank you…by the way you can join us’’

Rita; ‘’Welcome…but sorry…I am with my boyfriend….he flew down to meet me…he is there at the first floor lounge…so you guys enjoy…and

Neil the new girl who moved in is a pain…tc buddy’’

Neil chuckled and waved her….he turned and found Sam glaring at him; ‘’What now’’

Sam; ‘’If that all was a drama…how could you let her give you peck on your cheek…and your arm was around her bare waist..you were happily spinning and lifting her…wanted to kill you’’

Neil; ‘’Wow…! I should have tried that earlier…Rita is an actress by hobby…she was comfortable and she made me too’’

Sam all angry; ‘’Why not….you got a hot girl to loop your arm around…you ought to be comfortable’’

Neil; ‘’Sammy …chill or your little head will be on flames…well I should have tried this before’’

Sam was all irritated…she punched Neil hard…Neil kept on laughing holding his stomach…after a minute or two of annoyance…Sam too laughed….They walked towards the room…Neil asked Sam to go on…and he will come in a minute…Neil pulled out his phone and dialled Nandini

Nandini; ‘’Hi dear…wats up’’

Neil; ‘’Di need your help and suggestion’’ Neil narrated about the Glitz contract…and his wish of Sam withdrawing from it.

Nandini; ‘’Neil give me 2 days…I will do something…but if Sam knows this she might feel bad….she wants to help her parents think about it’’

Neil; ‘’I am not stopping her from that…but not at the cost of herself respect, I won’t let anyone exploit her di…’’

Nandini; ‘’Done then leave it on me…we will speak tomorrow…by the way Jai Khanna is out of Bird Song for now’’

Neil; ‘’Now that’s what I call a good news…he has done enough harm to Bird Song’’

US

Arjun…went inside Radhika’s room to change…he saw her pictures pasted on the board..with her parents….Sam and Neil…there was a picture of Neil and Radhika together…Radhika was holding Neil from the back…hanging on his neck like a sack…the way they smiled at the camera…showed the depth for their bond… Arjun didn’t feel jealous…these were two people he loved the most…other than Nandini…he decided to understand them first. Arjun found Radhika’s anklet on the table…he picked it up and kept it in his pocket…’’This will stay with me now’’….he came out and saw Radhika again munching on chocolate…’’Bunny enough…do you ever get tired of sweets…you had a whole cake in the morning…its not good’’ Radhika nodded negative; ‘’No I left a piece for you’’ Arjun rolled his eyes…snatched the chocolates…he took her hand dragged her out to the car.

Arjun; ‘’Radhika our gang wants to see you dancing…will do that some day’’

Radhika; ‘’Any day…I love dancing…it makes me happy’’ Arjun smiled a messaged Anna

Anna and gang were waiting for them at the multiplex…suddenly Arjun an Anna looked a each other in realization and then at Radhika…she understood; ‘’Anna its not completely dark inside…and I know you guys will be next to me…so no worries…I only panic when I am alone’’

Anna; ‘’good then sit between us’’ once inside the thetre they waited for movie to being it was horror come Pyshcological thriller the Boy…Radhika took her place between Arjun and Adam…Radhika was watching it normally Arjun tapped her shoulder and asked her to look at Adam…he was chewing his finger nails all nevous and scared…oblivious of the fact that his friend were laughing on him…Suddenly Radhika and Cole pinched Adam from either and he screamed out of fear…audience cursed him and he cursed Radhika and Cole…who were busy controlling there laughter…After the movie…the gang took Radhika to a place …it was a theatre…with a capacity of 1000 people and an enourmous center stage…they knew she loved dancing…and all of them wanted to watch her once…Radhika was spell bound suddenly a light fell on Radhika bringing her in focus

Anna; ‘’Rads…we all know you love dacning…but we want to see you dacncing will you please dance for all of us…’’ Radhika smiled…and nodded…Cole gave her the dress Radhika came back in a free flowing one shoulder white jump suit…Anna played instrumental ‘’final count down’’….Radhika combined Ballet folk and contemporary making it stunning…her friends were spell bound…her leaps, somersaults were just perfect…everyone’s mouth was just hung open…Arjun heart was racing the same way when he first saw her video…but he had never imagined it could be so breath taking…Steve could not hold any more he joined her and she ended her performance with a quick ball dance movement with Steve he rolled her outward then inward…she leaned completely on his arm one side….her friends jumped clapped madly at her performance…Radhika came down and the three grils hugged her Anna; ‘’You looked like a magical being flying from one corner to the other…wow…and thanks you kept our request…’’

Radhika; ‘’I would do that again…because I love dancing…by the way how did you get permission to get in’’

Cheryl; ‘’My mom owns it…she kind of artistic’’

Radhika all surprised; ‘’Is there anyone kind of simple in this gang…I mean all of you are like treasure island or uncle scrootch’s relatives’’ they laughed at her comment Anna cupped her face; ‘’But you are the richest of all….because you are just amazing…love you’’ Radhika hugged her…

In all this Arjun kept his distance he didn’t even move a inch…his hands were in his pockets…because he wanted to control them…but his eyes were only on Radhika…with love appreciation, pride…and a lot of madness….after dinner…everyone started for their home…Arjun asked Steve for his bike and gave him his car keys….Radhika was busy chatting to girls….he cam there; ‘’Radhika will you come for a drive…’’ Radhika blinked and others smiled…Anna moved with others to give them privacy…Radhika agreed

Arjun took Radhika on a long drive…and bought her to the meadow again…he asked her hand and she gave…they walked for few minutes then sat next to each other under the sky full of stars

Arjun; ‘’You were stunning…I am speechless…and proud that I love you !…you love dancing ….for how many years you have been performing’’

Radhika; ‘’started learning when I was 7…in Doon school…then continued in RYTHYM in Mumbai…I started performing 4 yrs back…but this is a hobby…its never gonna be a profession…I do performances for Prerna aunty only’’

Arjun sighed he really didn’t wanted 1000 of people to know hw breath taking she was…he lied on his back looking at the sky…’’Do you want to learn more…I mean western forms…Steve can help’’

Radhika smiled; ‘’You won’t be jealous and will not kidnap me’’

Arjun smiled ; ‘’No… your smile matters to me the most…plus I know you are mine..’’ Radhika blushed red Arjun got up removed her hairs from her face cupping her cheek from one hand; ‘’Bunny I am learning and trying to be a good man…please bare with me’’

Radhika softly replied; ‘’Why do you think …I am here… with you…because I know you are trying and even I am…Arjun I don’t believe in love at first sight…for me relationship…needs time and understaning to grow…I want you to see my worst with my good…if it works…then we will be happy… Arjun I want this to be perfect’’

Arjun pulled Radhika in a tight hug…she hugged him back and closed her eyes…’’You complete me Bunny…I love you’’ Arjun again fell on his back…taking Radhika with him…she kept her head on his chest and closed her eyes…they stayed together for an hour or two and then Arjun dropped her home…before bidding her for night…he again hugged her…and she did not stop him.

Singapore

Sam was talking to Radhika and happily narrating her love story…Radhika was smiling at Sam’s excitement; ‘’Chashni…this feeling is so heavenly…I feel I am weightless flying in the sky’’

Radhika; ‘’Wow…so if you grow fat…you should fall in love again…no need to diet to feel weightless’’

Sam huffed; ‘’Will you ever grow up…Neil is right…you are a kiddo’’

Radhika; ‘’He called me kiddo??? How dare he??…he got you through my ideas and suggestions and he is calling me kiddo…he is so dead…I will call you later…need to talk to your boyfriend’’ Sam chuckled and told neil about Radhika’s anger he watched his blinking phone …he scratched his head and answered; ‘’Hi little bride…how are you’’

Radhika; ‘’don’t try to be sweet…I am going to scold you’’

Neil; ‘’Ya I can make that out from your voice…and I am shit scared’’ he tried hiding his laughter

Radhika chuckled; ‘’Fine…I am happy for you…so tell me how was your first kiss…not the drunk one the real one…how did you feel…share your experience’’

Neil opened and closed his mouth like a fish; ‘’Girl…you are turning shameless…look CHashni I treat you like a baby…so no non-veg talks with me…its irritating’’

Radhika beamed with happiness thinking about ARjun; ‘’Baby has grown up’’ Neil heard the difference and dreaminess in her voice his smile vanished

Neil; ‘’Chashni…are you hiding something….don’t hide anything from me’’ he ushered a warning

Radhika went alert; ‘’N …No buddy…you think too much…ok now I am tiered…will speak to you later…love you’’ But Neil had heard the change in her voice…and it worried him she attracted attention like magnet due to her lively nature and he did not want ant trouble around her….he kept her safe from Jai till date…no one knew how scared Jai was of Neil

Neil POV; ‘’Whatever you are hiding…I will know it…will not let you do any kind of mistake’’

Radhika POV; ‘’Sorry Neil…I want to give Arjun a chance…I like him…but if I tell you…you will ask 200 questions’’

Arjun; ‘’I am happy…you are giving me a chance…I won’t fail you’’

Sam; ‘’I cannot tell Neil…that I have accepted Glitz terms and conditions…he will be furious’’
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Who set the definition for good and Bad…they are part of same coin…we all have good and bad in us..nurture and love the good….bad will sleep for eternity

Precap: Nandini helps Neil & Someone warns Radhika on Arjun

Credit to: Gauri

104 comments

  1. shreyanshi

    Waiting for this epi..
    Till when radhika have to hide abt.. Arjun..
    I just hope neil will know abt arjun.. Only from radhika..
    Luv u gauri 🙂

    • Gauri

      Thanks Shreyanshi 🙂 well Neil will know once he is in US…Radhika won’t disclose that easilly…love you 🙂

  2. chandan

    Beautiful epi Gauri…all positive vibes in todays epi n i am liking it…but what future is holding for them??…anyway i want to see them holding together n solving the upcoming hurdles…slowly Arjun is stealing the show…the lines at the end show how good person you are…i am glad that i met you through this medium…GBU

    • Gauri

      Thanks Chandan 🙂 the pleasure is all mine to meet great frinds like you 🙂 stay blessed 🙂

  3. Kavina

    I loved it. I really love your timing of updates. Enough to make me wonder where you are but not so badly. Can’t wait for friday.

  4. I couldn’t sleep properly thinking about ur ff…m running short of words for praising you….my favourite scene of today’s chapter was Arjun being not jealous seeing radhika n Neil’s photos…well both are trying…one question after how many chapters radhika will know Arjun fake about not knowing Neil n Sam…when will Neil Visit. USA…waiting for the other ff also…tc??

    • Gauri

      I am so happy to see you back 🙂 thanks a ton dear 🙂 yes arjun is changing, Radhika has fallen she will confess in coming chapters…and yes Neil will visit USA…after Radhika confesses…other FF tomorrow for sure 🙂 love you:)

  5. chandan

    Beautiful epi Gauri…liked the positive vibes in today’s epi…don’t know what future is holding for them??…but if they hold on to each other like this they can face any hurdles…slowly Arjun is stealing the show…
    The lines at the end are very inspirational n shows how good person you are…’am glad that i met you through this medium…GBU

  6. ab

    Wow di this side of Arjun is wonderful….neil radhika’s bond awesome …….neil Sam’s love story amazing…..ardhika’s friendship very interesting……and your ff awesome amazing wonderful fantastic fabulous excellent superb…………..or koi word nhi mil tha ………love you so much ?……….

  7. M

    Oh……gauri……I love this….Neil….as always……rocking…..nd this tym arjun s super rocking…….in this episode he didn’t get mad or angry or jealous…… Huhuhuhu….radhika’s dance…..arrrreeee bachhe ki jaan logo kya…….

  8. roshini

    Amazing update dear….loved aradhika moments looks like radhika will fall for Arjun soon 🙂 🙂 B-) 😀 XD

  9. ab

    Di Neil radhika’s bond amazing ….neil Sam’s love story awesome…….this side of Arjun is wonderful……ardhika’s friendship is interesting………and this chapter awesome amazing wonderful superb fantastic fabulous……..or koi word bhi mil rha ……but Friday is too far please update soon……..

  10. My darling dear sweety killer 😀 😀 😀 u nailed each part 🙂 🙂 🙂 omg I love arjun soooooooo much 😀 😀 😀 rads tot abt love s really lovely and also a true fact she s really awesome 😀 😀 omg I think convincing Neil for aradhika love s gonna b soooo thought :O but best thing s arjun’s love won rads brain means it ll win Neil heart also 🙂 🙂 🙂 finally arjun s learning to understand D bond b/w rads n Neil s superb 😀 😀 I think now nadhu words to rana s coming true 🙂 🙂 🙂 I love his love 😀 😀 😀 😀 nadhu really awesome in all 😀 😀 😀 😀 I love dis nandhu more 😀 😀 😀 I think dilip should drop dat Neil alliance idea 🙂 🙂 🙂 rads finally falling for arjun 🙂 😀 😀 😀 dats sounds really awesome 😀 😀 😀 my darling sissy u are a awesome writter 😀 😀 😀 love u soooooo much 😀 😀 😀 take care of ur health darling 😀 😀 😀 have a happy day 😀 😀

    • Gauri

      Thanks Suga darling 🙂 thanks you for so many smileys I keep on smiling looking at you comment evertime 🙂 stay blessed stay happy 🙂

  11. Sravya

    Hi Gauri.Thanks for the morning treat.I am really tended that my results are coming on this week.Between all of those yr ff reading makes me happy☺.it was an amazing one.after all Radhika falling for Arjun.take care dear☺

    • Gauri

      Thanks Sravya 🙂 love you dear : ) and all the best for your result 🙂 stay blessed 🙂

  12. Supriya.

    Di I can’t tell u how happy i m after reading this…..There was so much to learn…..Arjun sentence that a boy can have a past so can a girl was srsly never expected from someone like him…..but

    • Gauri

      Supriya darling 🙂 the line Arjun said was once said by a dear frind of mine…I used it 🙂

  13. aastha

    Loved it to the core……………….I’m very very happy for nesam……..glad that niel is taking nandini di’s advice………I liked the dialogue which niel told abt jai……..bt y is jai afraid of niel ?????????? …………loved all the ardhika moments……her dance was very beautiful…..I liked Arjun today he was little less possessive………..rads giving a peck on his cheeks was very cute…………rads reply to Arjun on how she looks beautiful was also really cute,………..when’ll Niel realize Rads has decided to give Arjun a second chance ??????? what’ll be his reaction ????????? the precap looks happy and suspicious……happy that nandini di is gonna help niel……but I’m kind of worried for ardhika………who warns Rads against Arjun ??????? Niel ???????????

    • Gauri

      Thanks a ton Aastha 🙂 well neil won’t be happy and will display his anger to both ARjun and Radhika….Nandini…will help Neil and no the person is someone else…and becoz of that Rads will know her true feelings for Arjun 🙂 love you stay blessed 🙂

      • aastha

        hi di, so will Rads realize that she loves Arjun in the upcoming episode?????? is that person some1 we know already or will it be a new character ??????? wait is it Sam??????……love u too…………

      • Gauri

        Rads already loves him….but she is one tashan and drama queen…this person is just a guest appearence 🙂 love u

      • aastha

        I finally give up………you yourself tell me di who the person is in ur nxt epi………..love u too………so when r u gonna update mmz and then DPO ??????

      • aastha

        I’ll be here fresh and early tmrw mrng to read mmz……..ur staying in banglore ri8 ?????is it very hot in there ??????? r u an IT person ??????

      • aastha

        IT recruiter means ??? in wich company ?????? my sis is coming there after a few days…….and sometimes I’ll come there by the begi of June……..anyway have a nyc evening,,,,,,,,,

      • Gauri

        I do technology hiring for my clients…we help people working in IT sector find good jobs

      • aastha

        Oh I see………..so are you enjoying it ?????? how do you find time to update and comment in midst of ur busy schedule ???????

      • Gauri

        whenever I take a break I either read…or reply you guys…and I write in the night usually after dinner

      • aastha

        bt wot you b dead tired after office ?? for wich company do you work ????……who all are there in ur home ???????

      • Gauri

        I am thats why sometimes I don’t update for 2-3 days….but I love writing it helps me cope up with my stress…I work a consulting firm…wont discuss the name here 🙂 love you well next one posted

  14. Supriya.

    Di I can’t tell you how happy I m after reading this….arjun’s sentence that a boy can have a past so can a girl was so amazing and I had never expected it from him….today arjun was so different so much perfect I can’t explain how happy I am…..I thought he will create a scene seeing rads dancing with Steve but he kept quiet srsly a big change in him……Neil toh rockstar he z…..nandu superwoman love u……..arjun steal the show today di……now about complimenting u dan I don’t have words..
    ……I am spellbound today……..u have cast a spell on me through your ff and your nature………I can talk with u hours and srsly I won’t let u sleep……..I have so much to tell and so much to hear from u………not becoz u r not a open book but becoz our Sunday chat proved one thing dat u r one gem of a person……. I want to hear u out……and plz chat with me for hours on Sunday…….. I love to chat with u……..now enough of my blabbering……. update next one soon and also ur new ff………loads of love……muaaaaahhhhhh tc…..????????????????????

    • Gauri

      Thanks a ton darling 🙂 well everyone has good and bad…we are so busy critising the bad that we don’t look at the good….Arjun is good too…he is just alone…me spell…OMG…sure will chat on sunday…love a tight hug and stay blessed 🙂

  15. Bhabya

    oh gauri di it was fabulous…. di can u give me ur insta account name or fb account
    so i can follow u …. Please…… till then …tc

  16. Very gud morning gauri ? Wow ARDHIKA portion ws took gud ??? 1st time Arjun saw his dancing queen live performance ?Keep Rocking ? OK im waiting 4 the next update ☺

  17. Awesome episode, I liked what Arjun said ” if boy can have a past so can a girl” Gauri that was well written. I could see Radhika almost falling in love. 🙂

  18. Dev

    Hey gauri……..lovd d epi …????……n love u for posting it………?????
    It was a actually a romantic epi…..with no piyali or jai……n lovvd d way rads n arjun in meadow..???…her dance….d spellbounding reaction of hr frnds..????…n wen adam was frighten by rads n d laugh…….???.
    Good dat neil askd d opinion 2 nandini…..n lovd d nesam island scenes to d core……???
    Well how r u …….n keep smiling n writing. Love u n lots of bear hugs

  19. Wow Gauri….it was amazing one….ardhika moments superb…radu start liking him..even he change his behavior for her nice …they r made for eachother…ovral I loved every part… Waiting for next one…mmz too…love u loads …tc..

  20. feby

    di…iam falling for u day by day….i loved ardhikas part a lotttttttttttttt…………seems like radhika already fell for arjun tat she started responding to his each and every moves…and both r understanding eachother a lot….and like raneil talk also…ahhh…the way he called radhika baby..reminds me of my chat in grp whr all tease me by calling me baby….hahahaaa…whn will u update next…????

    • Gauri

      Thanks a ton Feby darling 🙂 u falling for me????…. well I will update on Friday tc and stay blessed 🙂 love you loads 🙂

  21. More than arjun’s love n madness for rads… There is my love and madness for you n your story … Plz never end dis ff.. I will die nahi to. 🙁 and i thought two chappy 🙁 i understand two ff so time distribution 🙂

  22. Awesome awesome no words to describe ur Ff& I luv d arjun&radzzz movement finally arjun understood neil’s bond wit radzzz….totally blast episode I luv it di….tc

  23. Gianna

    Loved everything about this chapter, Neil’s love and care, no jealous Arjun what a treat. Now I need chocolate cake too love u tc

  24. subha

    amazing episode…meduva radhika start pannita kadalai……..samrat mela kopathai nandini sam mela kotamattala…. eagerly waiting arjun radhika love scencs……please update soon…..tc

  25. Shree

    Diiii!! Lovely update!! Loved the positivity in the episode today… Ardhika!! No comments… I’m happy that she wants to give him a chance.. Love the performance… Sam knows it and why did she sign the contract?! Just because she wants to prove herself.. At the cost of her self respect?! No way!! Neil’s trying hard.. Hope Nandini can solve it… I’m happy that there is no Jai…. Nesam are so lovely… Rita has a bit of humor in her… Flatmate being a pain ??…

    On the whole put together.. It was a beautiful update… Muuaaahh to you

    Love you loads.. Tc.. Keep smiling… Bear hug ??

    • Gauri

      Hi my smiling Shree 🙂 how are you and thanks 🙂 Nandini will help you will see a more of her among these four people 🙂 love you stay blessed 🙂 keep smiling

  26. neetz

    Sorry dear M out of words to say :'(
    M sure u t gonna make it big one day with ur work of fictions 🙂 mmmuah

  27. neetz

    Can any one pls tell me y am.i.not able to search and find other ff marrid fate ..its not showing up :-(..i can get it only wit the help of the link gauri gave..can u tell me how to search it

    • Gauri

      neetz darling I just posted the first chapter…so you can visit that by link…will post 2nd tomorrow

  28. Gauri darling you are flawless n amazing.. every time i felt stunned when i read ur story…as usual rocking…Dhire dhire unknowingly radhika falling for Arjun…N m shocked is sam mad..y she except all term n condition of glitz….n precap is really interesting… so waiting for nxt..love..tc..muhha

  29. natasha

    gauri dhi awesum epsiode i read it mrng only but sum prob wid my netwrk i could not reply.
    Its wonderfull dhi if possible post another epsiode ton8 dhi luv u

  30. Rg

    Hi gauri sorry for d late comment. As usual it was grt . Romance btw both d couples r gud. I love ardhikas romance. Neil and Sam’s chemistry . Neil’s intution about radz is superb. Am glad arjun is changing… Has radz already fallen for him? Does arjun know it ? If so u hasn’t she admitted? Who is d person who warns radz? Will they get separated? Will arjun truth regarding his frdship with nesam and him being d owner of d store whr radz work come out? Will radz understand?? Will she persists with thoz conditions??? Am too curious gauri m I can’t help it. Am addicted to ur ffs… Am eagerly awaiting friday and tomorrow for mmZ. Pl update soon. You r too gud. Take care.

    • Gauri

      Thanks Rg 🙂 and no need to be sorry,,,yes Rads has feelings for him…he doesn’t know that…Arjun had a colourful life…this is just one dark colour …separation well lets keep that for future….Rg rest I am not answering wait for few updates all will be clear dear 🙂 love you dear stay blessed 😀

  31. Once dpo end send me all of its link …I’ll keep it like a book n read whenever I want…don’t want to search at tu…promise u will send me

  32. Roma

    Awesome, marvellous, outstanding episode. .. loved it to the core. …gauri my dearrrrr friend. …you’re amazingly awesoooooome. …the way you’re narrating everything it’s superbbbbb n so clear so I can watch literally. …nesam sweeeeeet moments were veryyyyyyy cuteeeee. …sam poured her heart out in front of neil n he too supported her…neil called nandini for help was interesting. …I’m curious what nandini di will do to this modelling contract. ….ardhika visit at farm house was really awesome…rads dance at stage was mind blowing. ..it was magical even I can imagine it…Ardhika moments were incredible….just loved it. …neil’s concern for rads is very heart touching. ….rads giving arjun a chance is really very lovelyyyyyy as arjun will prove his love for rads is very pure n endless…wowwww awesome, lovely, marvellous, outstanding, mind blowing narration. ..as destiny your words are really very true….I’m totally addicted to it…precap is very interesting n exciting. …keep it up. eagerly waiting for the next episode, love you loads. Take care……Muaaaaahhhhhh 🙂 🙂 🙂

  33. Gauri

    thanks a ton Roma 🙂 love you 🙂 posted the other part should be online in sometime 🙂

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