Manmarziyan- Destiny…Passion …Obsession (Chapter 19)

Hello everyone…so here is chapter 19 will post next one on Sunday or Monday morning…pls pls pls let me know how was it…have an awesome weekend friends…and thanks for being such amazing readers. Sorry was little late as TU was not accepting article…so here is the next one…pls put your views becoz I love to read them

Chapter 19

Never say Never- Arjun Mehra never believed in love and was sure it will never happen to him…but it happened and turned him mad for a girl who is not interested in him even a bit…lesson…don’t challenge destiny… fight but don’t boast
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Khanna Residence

Jai was packing is his stuff…he called his agent and asked him to book the tickets for US…he was desperate to meet Radhika…Jai’s travel agent called and told him that total cost of to and fro would be close 1 Lac and he should do the payment by eod…Jai asked him to go ahead and book he will make the payment in a hour…Jai kept

Radhika’s pic in his wallet …he locked his suit case kept it aside when he heard his fathers’ voice; ‘’where do you think you are going’’

Jai; ‘’US I want to meet Radhika’’

Samrat; ‘’You didn’t think about meeting your sister but you are dying to meet her friend wow! So proud of you’’

Jai; ‘’Anything else”

Smarat: ‘’ She has not accepted your proposal…and good if she doesn’t …her life would be spoiled’’

Jai; ‘’I will leave her no choice…she will accept my proposal…now if you are done…I have to go’’

Samart; ‘’You cannot leave India…your salary account has been freeze and Nandini has filed and FIR against you for forgery in Bird Song…you need to be present till matter is resolved…I had to submit your passport to keep you out…otherwise you would have been arrested…now think how should we solve this’’ Samart left the room and Jai huffed in anger. Nandini played well

USA

Radhika had got good money as a part of her stipend…being an assistant in library was also helping her but she needed another job to support herself since going to bakery was no use Aliza no more needed her…she might hire her but that would be an extra burden on Aliza…but still Radhika decided to meet Aliza every Saturday…she had asked her friends and classmates about part time job …Radhika got ready and left for her classes…she finished her classes…one of her Senior Natalya…told her that there was a café near the campus they needed a waitress…Radhika decided to take the job…Cole had seen Radhika talking to Natalya she walked to Radhika after Natalya left….Radhika greeted her with a hug; ‘’What was that girl telling you…’’

Radhika; ‘’ nothing important…are you free’’

Cole; ‘ yes I will drop you back home in my car and that girl is a bad company’’ Radhika nodded and went along with her…Cole dropped Radhika home and called Anna she told about Natalya’s talking to Radhika ….Anna was worried now…Natalya was Ario’s friend…he hated Arjun and Arjun loved Radhika…first he won’t prefer Radhika interacting with Natalya…and second…Ario was waiting to hit Arjun…and Radhika was the softest spot…Anna knew talking to Radhika was no point…she believed world to be a good place…its better Arjun knows about it…Radhika had thought about what Cole said…but then decided t o take the job up till she gets the better one…

Singapore

Sam got ready for her classes…she got into the elevator…it stopped at 4th floor …Sam’s heart stopped…Neil entered the elevator he gave her a cold look and turned away…Sam gulped her pain…once they reached the ground floor Sam moved towards her car…but her ankle twisted and she fell down…Sam rubbed her ankle and tried to get up ….but it got sprained ….she took the support of the wall when a hand came to help her…she felt good thinking it must be Neil but when she looked up it was driver…. Neil was standing at a distance with his back to her talking on his phone…Sam closed her eyes in pain…Sam thanked the diver but decided to help herself…she took the wall support and got..she limped to her car and drove off.

Once in her car Sam quickly put her shades on to hide her tears she softly spoke; ‘’I am sorry Neil’’

Neil watched her fall, then the hope in her eyes and then sudden gloominess…he saw her getting up on her own without taking help he thought; ‘’You are learning to stay without me..I didn’t expect it would be so fast’’…but he was not aware that she was scared that if she asked for his help…he might pull back and she might fall again. Sam attended her classes…her pain was increasing…as she had not attended her injury…By evening it had swelled up…Sam was still limping…but this pain was nothing in compared what she had in her heart…the pain which she had herself gifted her by hurting Neil. The pain of being alone….she quietly went to her car…she had taken her shoes off…Neil was busy with his friends pretending to be all busy laughing and joking…He watched Sam limping towards her car holding her shoes…she did not look up…or sideways…she kept her eyes on ground …went to her car and drove off. Sam reached her flat she decided to call Radhika…but called Mala

Mala; ‘’Hi beta, how are you…and how is Singapore’’

Mala’s loving voice bought some calmness to Sam’s heart…she smiled; ‘’Aunty..everything is good but not as good as Mumbai…I miss everyone…and your food’’ Mala could make out the sadness in Sam’s voice she got worried; ‘’Sam don’t lie…what happen tell me’’

Sam; ‘’Nothing aunty…I am homesick….I feel alone…’’

Mala knew she was hiding something but still she decided not to push Sam; ‘’Sam remember one thing no one is alone yet we are…beta learn to be the best friend of yourself first…you will find your way very easily…and call me any time when you feel like..now cheer up’’ Mala decided to talk to Piyali or Samrat…but felt that they might feel bad that Sam called her and not her parents …Mala decided to speak to Radhika

USA

Radhika took the job …she knew Anna and Cole would be against it but 2 of her classmates were also working there plus she didn’t wanted to be dependent on Anna…she already did a favour by offering the dorm….Radhika gave her the rent but Anna refused…she decided to work till she finds something better Arjun’s anger was on peak…after knowing that Radhika had taken up the waitress job…and that to at Natalya’s café…today he will show her what he was capable off…what was she to him…Arjun took his car and drove off…

Anna asked Steve to go to the café and handle Arjun if required Arjun reached the café his eyes searched for her and finally found her…he gave her one look she was wearing the uniform like other waitresses a red skirt above the knee with a white shirt and an apron Arjun noticed how guys were leering at the girls serving them…Arjun fisted in anger, …she was showing off her legs to everyone…wow…! Arjun saw a guy extending his hand to brush Radhika’s legs when she was busy taking the orders…but before he could even touch her…Arjun held his wrist twisted and broke it…the guy screamed ….Arjun spat venomously ; ‘’don’t even think about it…I will kill you in your thoughts’’

Arjun held Radhika arm….she was all shocked….Natalya came; ‘’Leave her hand…she works for me’’

Arjun; ‘’Not anymore’’

Natalya; ‘’ I paid her advance for a week…plus her dress…she will not leave before that’’ Arjun glared at Natalaya…but Steve interfered; ‘’here is your money…now move your butt….before you hurt your pretty face’’

Radhika looked at Steve; ‘’Please Steve…stop him’’ Steve refused Radhika pulled her hand out of Arjun’s grip; ‘’You cannot force me…’’ Radhika rubbed her wrist…Arjun walked towards her…his eyes never leaving hers’ he lifted her up and threw her over his shoulder and walked off…Radhika was shocked; ‘’Let go Arjun…leave me’’ Steve just smiled Arjun made Radhika sit in his car…and Steve took the back seat…he kept on holding her wrist while driving…Radhika was hitting him punching him…but it all went in vain…once at Anna’s place he again pulled her out lifted her up and took her to her flat…Anna opened the door….she wanted to speak but Steve gestured her to be quite…Arjun took Radhika to her room he threw her on the bed and locked the door….Radhika was now angry; ‘’how dare you….who the hell are you to decided what should I do and what I shouldn’t’’

Arjun pulled her up held her hands and locked them behind her back…pulling her to his chest…he glared at her angrily; ‘’I thought you are an intelligent girl…you will understand why your friends stopped you from interacting with Natalya…but you proved me wrong’’

Radhika was trying to free herself…He was too close…his breath was falling on her face making her uncomfortable; ‘I would have changed my job once I got the better one…why do you have to interfere’’

Arjun; ‘’You will not work as a waitress…get that straight’’

Radhika was twisting her arms to get herself free…but she was in a very strong grip; ‘’What’s your problem…my classmates also work there….Cole has also worked as a waitress during her bachelors…then why not me…I don’t mind…and you are no one to mind’’

Arjun tighten his grip bringing Radhika more close …he whispered a warning;’’ I will mind everything which is not good for you…because you are mine…remember this…’’

Arjun’s grip was turning painful…but his words scared her…she saw madness in his eyes …pain was too much to handle and tears started pouring out….Arjun loosen his grip looking at her tears…she was crying now…he cupped her face and kissed her forehead warmly… she was shivering in fear… Arjun hugged her…he turned soft; ‘’Ok sorry now don’t cry….If you want to work…we will help you get a better job Bunny…but don’t put yourself as free show…I cannot handle that…I would have killed that guy if he would have touched you…’’ Radhika blinked and looked down at her dress…yes her skirt was short… Arjun made her sit and rubbed her wrists to ease the pain out…Radhika was no more scared of him…she could not hate him…he cared for her madly Radhika watched him the way he rubbed her wrists he blew warm breath over it to ease her pain…and those words that she was his had seeped deep into her body she could read his love in his eyes…Arjun opened the door and called Anna in; ‘’Anna ask her to change…and give these filthy clothes to me’’

Radhika with tears…. she sniffed rubbed her nose and spoke; ‘’Now why do you want my clothes…that to this uniform’’

Arjun; ‘’Will burn them’’…He walked out leaving Anna and Radhika alone…Anna patted her head; ‘’Cole told you…Natalya is a bad company…’’

Radhika looked at Anna; ‘’he could have explained me in a better way…he lifted me like a sack…that to in this short skirt…I don’t how much I flashed…I hate him’’

Arjun from outside the room; ‘’and I love you…don’t worry about flashing my hand had all covered’’ Radhika fumed and threw a pillow In his direction…she heard him chuckling

Anna; ‘’he loves you from the bottom of his heart…no one will ever love you the way he does…he has never cared for anyone this deep…I would have never told you this if his feelings were not true…now change before he suggests to help you in changing’’

Radhika quickly took the clothes and went to change…Anna asked her to sleep she took the clothes and went back to hall…Arjun took the clothes from Anna…but before he could leave Radhika came stood infront of him all angry ….Arjun smiled…Radhika didn’t like his smile; ‘’you deserve a punishment Hades’’ she stomped on Arjun’s foot hard and left for her room closing the door with a bang…Anna and Steve laughed…Arjun danced on one leg; ‘’crazy but cute’’…he wished Anna and left. Radhika was sitting on the bed…thinking about what Anna said…she knew his feelings were true …but she hated being tied down… her heart was still not ready.

Singapore

Neil was sitting In his apartment lost in a deep thought Rita came and knocked….he welcomed her with a smile…she handed him coffee; ‘’Neil you are not hurting her…you are hurting yourself’’

Neil; ‘’I know but can’t help….I want her to feel the loneliness I felt for years being around her….what I felt when she declared her love for my best friend…who is not even bothered about her….when she would need me…she would come to me and demand my attention and care…without caring what I wanted…she wanted my shoulder every time she wanted to cry…she wanted to be my world but on her conditions….I agreed…but she blamed me for something which wasn’t my fault alone….she broke me…its just that I can’t show the way my heart is bleeding right now…Rita…all my life I never let her tear touch the ground…now I will show her what pain is…and how it feels when your heart is crumbled’’

Rita; ‘’She looked miserable….I hate my self for giving her this pain’’

Neil smiled; ‘’Sam asked for it…now get ready…I know she is going out’’

Rita; ‘’How do you know….’’

Neil; ‘’I hired the car she is using they have my no.…every time she calls the driver I get the notification for the same’’

Rita; ‘’Don’t know how many times I have been cursed by her’’

Neil; ‘’You can’t even do that much for a friend….and dress in something funky party types’’ Rita rolled her eyes and left…

Neil saw the car arriving…he quickly wrapped his arm around Rita and went to the lift…he knew Sam will take the lift due to her hurt leg…and he was right…he entered the lift giggling joking with Rita…Sam kept on watching their joined hands …Neil wrapped his arm around his waist…and whispered something making Rita blush…Sam closed her eyes…’’while the hell it was taking so long to reach the parking….and how come Neil has turned so shameless…this girl is not suitable for him…why am I thinking all this…I have no right on him’’ As the elevator stopped…Sam let out a painful groan due to her hurt foot…everyone turned except Neil…he took Rita’s arm and drove off’’

Sam ;’’Neil ….you felt my pain even if I pretended to be hurt…but today…you just hate to give me a glance…punish me but please come back’’

Sam got into the car and asked the driver to drive to a clinic…she dialed Radhika…Radhika who was still thing about Arjun answered; ‘’Chashni…I am alone’’ Sam cried vigorously’’

Radhika closed her eyes; ‘’Sammy ….calm down you are not alone…you have me’’

Sam; ‘’I feel someone has dug a hole is my heart…its so painful…every night I just wish that I shouldn’t wake up to my emptiness…it pains badly Radhika…I don’t know what to do…help me or I will die’’

Radhika got worried; ‘’Sam…calm down…he will come back…just let him be…’’

Sam; ‘’Chashni….I wish he stays happy wherever or with whoever he is…I am a bane…I could never keep anyone happy….Mom dad and now Neil…I just want to complete these 6 months and go back…I will never show my face to Neil’’

Radhika; ‘’Sammy …listen to me call your Arjun…speak your feelings out…its necessary to close one chapter…you can’t just want him and cry painfully for Neil together…you will know all your answers…promise me you will speak to him’’

Sam; ‘’I will…miss you’’ they ended their conversation

Radhika POV; ‘’Neil Melhotra you need a lecture from Prof. Radhika’’

Radhika got a message from Arjun a crying emoticon asking for apology…Radhika pressed her lips to hide the smile she replied with a boxing punch…and a message…’hate you’…Arjun looked at the message and smiled his POV; ‘no bunny u don’t hate me I know that…something in your eyes changed today…you will answer my love’
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Arjun was protective and possessive about her…Radhika has started thinking about him…but her practical mind rules her more…well it should be difficult for Arjun…he deserves that. Now Neil well he is turning Arjun…torturing Sam…but he still loves her and cares for her…Sam…I will not blame her too much…she never got the attention she deserved as a child…she wanted to be pampered…we learn to walk only after we fall down.

Precap–still thinking

Credit to: Gauri

122 comments

  1. Dhara

    Superb.. I was waiting for your update since morning,, Ardhika again rocked today.. m becoming crazy day by day with ur story and this Arjun..

  2. Supriya

    Ohh di u just nailed it……the way arjun carried rads that was something out of the world…… Their cute nok-jhok z the best part of it…..Neil z srsly turning into arjun…..I love the sweet Neil who can’t think abt hurting anyone……arjun and Radhika are just made for eachother srsly and the spark u bring in them that z something like icing on the cake…..u deserve a big round of applause today……di but y I don’t know first time I felt epi was small…..but marvellous, awsme, outstanding, commendable….. I don’t have words like everytime……srsly hats off to u……will rads ever accept this sadu arjun?will Neil change into first one Neil?will this arjun ever improve? Jai…wen will u eliminate him….I srsly can’t bear him….he gets into my nerves….. Arjun z possessive but sooooooo sweet…..Sam I feel bad for her…..plz don’t make her cry soo much……..wen will this stupid girl realize her true love?abt precap you know wen I c ur update …..I first scroll down to c the precap…..but it z kk u r occupied by work……so won’t pester u more abt it…..srsly u r one such a grt writer…….m waiting for the prologue…… Don’t make me wait for too long……di I have one stupid question…… Who r u?some supernatural thing,I think…….srsly I love ur this ability to impress me every time………..one request plz two chp next time……even if late then to it z perfectly fn……but plz think abt my request…. ..eagerly eating for your update……. Love u soooooooooooo mucccchhhhhhhh…………….muaaaaahhhhh????????????????????????????????

    • Gauri

      Supriya a big hug for you…well about Neil…when you push someone to edge you evoke the dark side…yes Rads will accept him…and wait for her what she will make him do…I will try posting 2 chapters next time…can’t promise as I have not yet started..Jai will e eliminated by Arjun…Sam will realize her love soon…and dear I won’t make you wait for long love you …many hugs for you 🙂

  3. Sejal

    Ohkk… Just 3 magical words for you for giving a fantabulous chapter..
    I LOVE YOU …
    Loved every thing arjun turned neil… Alone sam…. angry but happy bunny… And our madly in love arjun …

  4. Rg

    Hi gauri loved ardhikas chemistry. Loved arjuns possessiveness. Loved their bantering… Poor radz doesn’t want to fall for him but will fall soon I Guess. I feel bad for sammy. Rita has a gud role I suppose. Nandini is too gud. Jai deserves it…. Poor radz she has started feeling for arjun… Gud. When will radz fall finally ??? Or rather whn will she admit it… It’s tooo gud. I can barely wait,

    • Gauri

      Thanks Rg 🙂 yes she will fall…but won’t confess…Rita is gud…and Nadini will go any length for her baby brother Arjun’s happiness 🙂 will post soon..tc stay blessed 🙂

  5. roshini

    This was an amazing update Gauri…I like Radhika…she never gives up she always gives Arjun back in her own sweet way…Sam I am sad for her…wish Nesam are together again soon …thanks for the amazing chapter waiting for next.

  6. Ananya

    Gauri,,,,,,, Its just mind blowing…. you are literally arousing the curiosity day by day….. Amazing dear… hats off to your creativity and drafting… Wonderfull… plss update soon with the next chapter…. sincere request….

  7. Emz fasa

    Oh i forgot about nandini aww i love her so much jai and samrat conversation i liked it very much

  8. happy

    hi dr….hw r u?….day by day……i addicted to ur update……3’o clk woke up in the morning to check whether u updated or not………….even for my exam i never woke up early……i liked ur update…loved it………..

    oh god….today super…….still laughing thinking of rad and arjun……thank you so so much……………i loved fully…..enjoyed….thank you so much dr……………..again felt bad for sam…pls unite sam-neil…..

    • Gauri

      Hi Happy dear, hw r you? well I am good and happy to see your comment….you woke up at 3′ o clock…OMG…I wanted to post last night but TU was not accepting article…so posted in the morning…thanks for liking it will Unite nesam soon 🙂 stay blessed 🙂

      • happy

        thanks for rply……i am fine…time doesnt matter compare to ur update…….i think u always smile whenever u read my comment…….

  9. ammuz

    haii diii its a lon tym i comment here my mob is so slow.. thats y i cant comment every tym..sorryyyy diii nd about the story its awesome outstandng superb excellant woww many more am not gettng wordsss….. really u r uniquee diiiiiii…………thanku for this story….cz its very helpful for me to relieve my tensionss……….waitng eagerly for nextt 🙂

    • Gauri

      Hi Ammu, no problem dear you don’t have to say sorry…I am glad you liked it stay blessed and happy …loads of love 🙂

  10. ammu

    again an amazing chaptr .. .waiting 4 d time when rads starts 2 listen her heart..0 u r amazing in expressng intense emotions…tc.

  11. shreyanshi

    Awsumm… Superb.. Nandini did her work..jai cant go to radhika
    I luv d possessiveness of arjun 🙂
    Sam z hurt… Bt she will understand 🙂
    M bcuming greedy…:p bt i know u postd long
    I wanted.. More.. 😀
    Waiting for next part

  12. Gauri this was too good ??? . I’m so addicted to ur story. And ur arjun character, ahhhh really well portrayed ? Ardhika portions were superb. Im waiting 4 next 1 ☺ bye ?

  13. Emz fasa

    Pls gauri and everyone read Sujatas – STAY AWAY … IM NOT YOUR HUSBAND fanfic story 🙂 its amazing

  14. M

    Huhuhuhu hu…….hahahahaha…..what to say…u mute me……only weird sounds are coming out from my mouth 😉 love u….coz I lov this…….

    • Gauri

      Maandey love you… after reading your comment….even my throat is producing amazing sounds …love you stay blessed…happy weekend 🙂

  15. aastha

    di I’m sorry but I couldnt concentrate….so I’ll comment after some time…..when I get back my concentration………..If I get it today I’ll comment today itself but otherwise I probably would be commenting in ur nxt chappy coz today I’m going to my cuz’s home…………………….love u………….umma………………TC…………..

  16. pankh

    awesome….. i jst loved aradhika`s cute fight.. nd neil`s care 4 sam even after hurting her was vry heart touching… overall fantastic as always.. waiting 4 nxt.

  17. Wow gauri dear….it was fantastic….lovely .. Cute update…today ardhika rockzzz..poor Sam…still Neil love her too good…over all amazing…I loved it very much…day by day story getting interesting..keep it up dear…am waiting fr next one…love u loads ..tc…

  18. Poor Sam feel bad for her ………..omg Arjun’s possessive is driving me crazy ………..loved it ……….:-):-):-):-):-):-)

  19. neetz

    I was refreshg the page early mrg.onwards but nothing came up so i thought u will.post it 2mrw only..just now i refreshed and when i found update i was sooooo happy u know ..cant tell u how much m addicted to this ff..its like a drug to.me now..
    Gauri dear u ve drugged me with ur ff..but m happy..love u loads 🙂 :-*

    • Gauri

      Hi Neetz 🙂 thanks a ton…I wanted to post yesrterday but TU was not accepting article so posted in the morning 🙂 loads of love 🙂 stay blessed 🙂

  20. Anvee

    My heart is aching whenever I read Neil’s feelings…. no one is at fault…. still they have to curse each other or themselves to live in peace….and it hurts….something hitting my mind now.. what will happen if Radhu got to know that sam’s man is her tiger….god knows how she will react…. love you as always and bless you…. keep on thinking and dreaming and fantasising….

    • Gauri

      Hi Anvee, thanks a ton dear 🙂 yes Neil is hurt…but will heal him soon…and the day Radhika knows the truth God save Arjun 😉 love you 🙂

  21. Gauri dear you r outstanding marvelous…you r great when dealing with emotions yarr..always i felt i have least vocab to praise u…Arjun is superb today… rads is very practical girl she is so different.. y she is so practical? do it hav any reason? neil is too good today…he has to be that way to get sam ..eagerly waiting for nxt..love you.

    • Gauri

      Thanks Dipika 🙂 well nice obeservation…well will let you know why Radhika is that practical…I don’t have enough words to thank you 🙂 love you dear 🙂

  22. Fantastic episode, glad that Nandini stop Jai from going to USA, love the way Arjun is protective over Radhika, and Rita helping Neil to get Sam to realize the pain she cause Neil. Gauri your amazing writer you always get me addicted to this story. 🙂

    • Gauri

      1000 times thanks to you Brin 🙂 you never fail to make me smile 🙂 loads of love stay blessed 🙂

  23. feby

    wowowowwwwww……u just did awesome thing di…..wat a fantasic episode…. i liked ardhikas part…i laughed out lout wid arjuns reply to radhikas anger….hahahaaaaa….and i felt good knowing that neil still loves sammy…..and the friends bonding..of radhika, anna, arjun, steve, cole r also awesome……..u r amazing di….. loved it…………

    • Gauri

      Hi Feby…big hug for you and thanks for the amazing comment…love you stay blessed….and have an amazing weekend 🙂

      • feby

        di….iam fed up of saying abt google hangout….wait i will tell u somethng plz do that….
        open google and sign- in( do in computer plz)…thn agan come and open google page and click google apps..in tat scroll down and click hangout…hangouts page will open…there u will find all contacts,chatbox plus my invitation…accept it…thn its simple…everytime u open ur mail u can c our chatbox…thn whnever u opn hangouts in ur phone u will find me…simple….plz do it….i want to talk to u…as i talk to others i miss u and mandey di in it……

      • Gauri

        So sorry…I compeletly forgot… got busy in office and then blore traffic…sorry dear…now done 🙂 happy weekend

  24. Awesome episode…u r making me curious day by day for ur ff ..even though my exams r fast approaching instead of my pre am waiting for ur ff…u r an amazing writer and am a huge fan of urs…love u loads..all d best

  25. Roma

    Awesome, marvellous, outstanding episode, gauri dearrrr it’s mind blowing and superbbb. ..just loved it as always. ..you’re amazingly awesoooooome writer. ..with each update it’s getting more n more exciting n interesting to read this unique splendiferous story….nandini took very good care of jai…wowwww arjun so possessive n protective for rads, loved his anger, care, n concern on her….but she got something change in her heart for arjun…loved their cute fight….lol….so sad for sam, but neil is more hurt than her….Rita is nice, helping neil, plz neil don’t become arjun…I love neil’s cute naughty smile….it’s really superbbbb n destiny playing very brilliantly. …..I’m totally addicted….cant live without reading it…you have some Devine powers to magically drawn all of us to your dreamland. …n I’m very blessed to be here with you…tq,tq,tq,soooooooo muchhhhhh honeyyy for updating it. …I’ll be eagerly waiting for the next episode, love you loads, muaaaaahhhhhh

    • Gauri

      Roma my sweet friend thanks for such amazing words darling 🙂 i don’t know about the divine power…but I have an awesome power which I get from you guys…love you for that…stay blessed and a big hug for you 🙂 🙂 🙂

      • Roma

        Thx gauri sweetheart. ..you’re really superbbbb. ..I can’t stop thinking about this story at all…always want more n more n more. ..plz next update make it double dhamaaka episodes…..love you loads. muaaaaahhhhhh

      • Gauri

        your words make me smile 🙂 I will try to post 2 chapters Roma 🙂 well still writing 🙂 tc

  26. aastha

    hi di…….I got my senses back…………I loved it to the core…..oh the way Arjun lifted Rads in his arms…..it was sooo cute and romantic………..loved steve too……..what a friend !!! Glad that finally Rads realized that she cannot hate him…happy that you wont make it easy for him………..I loved what Arjun told ” I had covered every thing with my hands…..” ……. I also loved Arjun telling love you when Rads told him hate you…………so opposite….Rads punishment was cute………..Nandini acted timely and correctly………can you tell me exactly what Jai did ???????? Y did he say that he has left Rads no choice ??????? Sad that Sam is unhappy………..Niel became too cold….but as Riya said he is hurting himself than Sam……..Riya is a good friend……..so is Sam gonna call Arjun in the next chappy and let him know her hearts feelings ?????? Happy that Niel is gonna get a lecture from prf Rads………….Y did Sam call Mala and not her Mom ???? is it bcoz Piyali never cared abt her ??????? so when is Arnav gonna put forward an official proposal to Rads family ???????? What’ll Rads do when she come that Arjun knows Sam and Niel ?????? What’ll Niel do when he come to know that Arjun’s love is Rads ??????? When is gonna come to US??? …………..one more doubt : Will Rads ever know that Jai is the reason she fears darkness ?????????……..

    love you…………….muah…………TC…………..

    • Gauri

      Thanks Aastha now your answers 🙂 Jai said he will not leave her a choice…he wanted to do something but got stopped by Nandini…Yes Sam and Arjun will have a converstion…Mal is very caring towards Sam ..Piyali neglected her for Jai…Arnav will put the proposal…once Arjun is in India.. after Arjun’s truth…you have to wait for that…Neil will come…wait for future chapters dear…love u tc and have a g8 weekend 🙂

  27. Oh my dear darling sissy u r really awesome 😀 😀 😀 😀 omg all time u come with fantastic plot 😀 😀 😀 no analysis n all bcoz I loved every part 😀 😀 😀 my frnd got jealous on u coz most of D time ll talk about ur writing skills n logic n everything of urs which impressed me a lottttttt 😀 I can’t stop talking about coz u r dat much awesome 😀 😀 😀 n he thinks I love u more than him my poor dude 😀 😀 😀 but I love u moreeeeeeeeeeeeeee 😀 😀 superbbbbbbbbbbb ff sissy just awesome 😀 😀 😀 😀 bear my hugs 🙂 😀 😀 😀 take care 😀

    • Gauri

      Thanks SUga…now I am laughing…tell you frnd that you love me as a sister her won’t be jealous…thanks for such beautiful words dear 🙂 love you tc stay blessed 🙂

  28. I am so happy. This is one of the ff I always wait eagerly. Mind blowing epi. Dying to read more. Its never enough. 🙁

    And I hate San fir hurting Neil. He is the bestest guy like the line “I never let her tear touch the ground”
    She desrves the punishment. Well, too bad of me.

    • Gauri

      Thanks Roshini 🙂 well poor Sam is paying for that…will post soon dear 🙂 tc and loads of love

      • She must..hehe.. Not poor sam but poor neil. He might be so hurt for hurting the one he loves. In the previous part I was crying, when rads controlled her tears while talking to neil. It was so hurtful.
        I am taking it so seriously lol

  29. Kavina

    I loved it. The care the love I am feeling like this is somewhat true in real life. I hope Jai finds someone else to love

  30. Gianna

    Awesome awesome awesome. Brilliant i really enjoyed this chapter so happy now after reading this. Loved Ardhika banters they are perfect for each other. Felt bad for Sam that she call Mala but not her mom. Waiting for Neil’s lecture from prof. Radhika. Lots of love to u . TC ???

  31. Bhargavi

    Gauri I am just loving the Arjun character though he is possessive, he cares a lot for radhu. I am waiting for them to become aradhika. What about Neil, he is punishing himself so much and am waiting for the class which Radhu want to give it to Neil

  32. Sravya

    Hy I am a big fan of Ardhika.this is really awsm.I saw this update toady.I searched for first updates but it has been removed.Anyways it’s really superbbb Gauri.wonderful job.you really making all the characters alive.everyone can’t do this.I am eagerly waiting for the next.
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  33. Sravya

    Gauri I am reading all those it’s really awsm.The characters are prefect very much thanks for the updates.it’s so nice??

  34. Dev

    Im really sorry gauri that i read now n commenting xactly nearly aftr 24hrs of upload……my true apologies for this buddy………..????
    I was not pretty well with my xam n just fell on bed n slept till mornin 7 n had 2 go with mom 4 eye check up……so im freee now……
    D epi was truely awesome n fabulous….with all d care of neil n mala???……n loneliness of sam.????…..possessiveness of arjun????……feelings of radz☺☺☺……..n frustration of jai…..????….lovd d epi buddy❤❤❤??n love u n lots of bear hugs 2 u..???

    • Gauri

      Thanks Dev …and no need for sorry, hope your exams well….and how is your health now…take ample rest and relax…thanks again stay blessed 🙂

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