Manmarziyan- Destiny…Passion …Obsession (Chapter 18)

Hello frnds …Bangalore has turned into an oven…I loved this city for its climate…we actually should take this as a warning…and save our nature… Now as promised here is the next chapter…next on one on Friday or Saturday morning for sure….thanks for your comments pls read and let me know how was this one…happy reading

Chapter 18

Have you ever wondered why are some people so loved and others are not even noticed…well because these few loveable folks never allowed the child in their heart to die while growing up…Radhika was one she was matured yet childish and this was the reason …she could make friends easily….so be a kid at times…try new things…some goof ups can actually bring smile to your face
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Arjun took Radhika on a long drive…Radhika let her hair lose to enjoy the wind…Arjun watched her in the mirror…he was happy that she was smiling…. moreover she was trying to trust him again…now he should control his anger and possessiveness…he was in his dreams about his future when Radhika suddenly jerked him; ‘’Stop…stop..stop’’

Arjun; ‘’Are you ok’’

Radhika; ‘’yes…I will sit facing backwards…my back to yours’’

Arjun blinked..he was seriously in love with a nut case; ‘’Bunny that’s dangerous…now be a good girl and get back to your place’’

Radhika; ‘’I am not a good girl and I didn’t give you a choice…I told you that I am doing it…’’ She quickly sat facing back…Arjun took off his jacket and tied her waist to his…Radhika chuckled…Arjun started driving he was driving very slow…Radhika kept quiet for few minutes then spoke; ‘’I didn’t knew that you were previously a bullock cart driver…if I run beside your bike I will be faster…can you please stop insulting such a beautiful machine’’

Arjun rolled his eyes and increased the speed, Radhika; ‘’yoooohoooooo’’ Arjun smiled broadly…yes this is what beautiful is…and she was the most beautiful girl in his life…after a good bike ride…Arjun took her to a hyper market and asked her to buy whatever she needs to treat him…she made a fec….They drove back to her dorm..she hopped down and gave him a thankful smile; ’’thank you I needed this outing’’

Arjun; ‘’Any time Bunny…are going to bakery tomorrow’’

Radhika; ‘’Yes now don’t be a stalker again…I hate when you do that …why do you have to fall for me’’

Arjun; ‘’I can’t help it…I never wanted to…but you are something else…I can’t stop myself from loving you…and will always love you’’

Radhika with little fear; ‘’And when I break your heart you will abduct me…right’’ Arjun found fear in her beautiful brown eyes…he smiled; ’’Bunny…I don’t like fear in your eyes…and regarding my heart….you will accept my love…before this year ends…I will win your heart…this is a promise…now Time for my treat…I am hungry’’ Radhika was irritated…he still remembered about treat …she helplessly nodded .

Radhika after thinking for some time prepared vegetable biryani…for ARjun…he smiled widely…folded his sleeves….and started; ‘’ummm….Bunny this is the best biryani I have ever had…’’ Arjun had two plates…Radhika went inside to get water for him…she could not believe that she prepared something good…she tasted it and was shocked…Radhika came running to ARjun…he was still hogging she held his hand; ‘’Arjun its not good…its pathetic…its too spicy…why are you eating it…just to keep my heart’’

Arjun smiled; ‘’No…because after 12 yrs…someone cooked for me not as a job…and don’t say it’s bad…I loved it…now let me eat’’

Radhika ; ‘’No its not good…you will fall sick…I will cook for you again…but leave this please’’ Arjun smiled patted her cheek; ‘’I loved it…and its nice…and about you treating me again…Bunny…you will cook for me all your life…’’

Radhika rolled her eyes…’’If you planning to make me cook all my life…hire a doctor because your life will be spent in a wash room then’’ Arjun smiled wished her for night and left

Singapore

Sam quickly got ready she needed to find where Neil was…she had to speak to him….she called the driver and came down…she saw Neil with a girl he was happily laughing with her…Neil was casually dressed in ¾ bottom and tshirt and the girl wore a denim shorts with a tshirt…they got inside a a cab and drove off…Sam asked her driver to follow the cab…Neil and Rita got down at Monorail station Sam followed them..Rita took two tokens for Sentosa… Sam took the token for same…they reached Sentosa and quickly moved to Siloso beach…it was one of the main attractions there…Sam kept her distance…but what she saw next was totally unexpected for Sam…Rita got rid of her clothes she was in a bikini…and Neil took of his t-shirt… …they played and enjoyed in water together …splashing water at each other…at one point Neil lifted Rita in his arms and threw her in the waves…he held her from waist and playfully twirled her around…Sam couldn’t believe her eyes…was he the same Neil who would not even hug a girl properly was now being all playful with someone unknown…she pulled her phone out and clicked his pictures with Rita…Sam was busy clicking pictures when at one point…Rita looped her arms around Niel’s neck and gave him a warm kiss ….Neil hand his hand wrapped around her bare and wet waist. Sam felt disgusted she left wiping her eyes…once she left Neil turned to the direction where Sam was standing and smirked; ‘’Samaira Khanna I will burn you the way you burned me for so many years…you will feel my pain’’

Sam came back to her apartment and broke down she cried vigorously…but today there was no one to wipe her tears or calm her sobs..she went to Neil’s bedroom…took his pillow smelled it deep …hugged it to her chest and fell on her back on the bed…Sam closed her eyes curled her body and tighten her grip on the pillow…;’’ Neil …you left me alone…I don’t know what to do…how to bring you back….I miss you’’ Sam got up connected her phone to laptop and transferred all the pictures…she messaged all pictures to Radhika and called her asking her to be online now…Radhika was asleep but hearing Sam’s voice alerted her…she logged in and what she saw made her rub her eyes…’Neil what are you doing what’s wrong with you…why and how’ Radhika dialled Sam; ‘’Sammy tell me everything from the beginning …you will not hide a single word…’’

Sam narrated everything starting from Hanna’s party till Neil’s moving out…she started crying vigorously again…Radhika actually wanted to scold Sam but hearing her crying Radhika melted…she tried to console Sam and then said; ‘’Sammy stop crying…he is badly hurt I warned you regarding this…Sammy he could have taken advantage of you but he did not…he never forced himself on you…Sammy you broke his heart…we lost our Neil…I cannot promise you but let me try now go take some rest’’

Radhika Dialed Neil…he smiled looking at her name flashing on the screen; ‘’Hi my little one how are you’’

Radhika; ‘’do you really care…if yes you would have shared your heart with me rather burning yourself this way…why Neil?’’

Neil; ‘’Dear I am not burning myself…I am fine’’

Radhika; ‘’Now you started lying to me…great…Neil I know you enough to make out you are happy or sad’’

Neil; ‘’I am much happier now…don’t worry…you tell me everything is fine at your end’’ Radhika kept quite…she didn’t know what to tell him…she closed her eyes and two drop of sadness tricked down her eyes…Neil answered her silence; ‘’Swty…wipe your tears…you don’t have to cry…’’

Radhika; ‘’Neil tell me what should I do…I cannot see anyone of you in pain…right now I want to slap Sam and you too…Neil she is alone…I beg you’’

Neil; ‘’Chashni…if you want I will go back to her be her dustbin again…but then you will never find your buddy again…you decide Sam or Neil’’

Radhika; ‘’Neil can I make a choice???…I want you happy Neil… how should I prove that you’’ Radhika covered her mouth to silence her sob.

Neil; ‘’swty first wipe your tears…don’t cry….I know you care for me …I was and I will be there for you …go rest will talk to you later’’ Radhika silently disconnected the call…he knew Neil and Sam both were in pain and their pain…gave pain to her heart.

Neil POV; ‘’Sorry darling…but I am no more same Neil something has changed in me…I don’t want to hurt you…you are still part of my life and you always will…but Samaira Khanna is no more important’

USA

Radhika’s night went sitting in her balcony…Anna saw her sitting there; ‘’Rads you didn’t sleep …what’s wrong’’

Radhika smiled; ‘’Nothing…woke up early…I will get ready need to go the bakery’’

Anna knew something was bothering her…but she wanted Radhika to speak herself; ‘’Ok don’t be late…we are having dinner out’’ Radhika nodded got ready and quickly came down…Arjun was already there waiting for her…he gave her a smile…Radhika smiled back…but ARjun read her face…she sat on his bike….Radhika noticed they were not on the route of the bakery; ‘’Where are you taking me?’’

Arjun; ‘’Treasure hunt’’

Radhika; ‘’What???’’

Arjun; ‘’Need to search your smile sweety’’ Radhika could not hold anymore..she covered her mouth to hide her pain…Arjun stopped his bike in the parking of a posh building. He asked Radhika to come…she followed him…Arjun unlocked the door of his penthouse brought Radhika inside…he made he sit on the sofa..and gave her a glass of water; ‘’Now Bunny…speak up…I cannot tolerate your tears…’’ Radhika looked at him sniffed and narrated everything…Arjun was himself shocked…if Neil is hurting Sam then he must be badly hurt…in his heart Arjun cursed Sam for hurting Neil…but he could not show that to Radhika…he asked;’’ who do you think is at fault’’

Radhika; ‘’No one its destiny’s fault… why the hell Sam is in love with a guy whom she met 2 yrs ago…I mean that man must be giving her some hints that’s why she is hanging on to him and hurting Neil again and again’’

Arjun POV; ‘Great now she is cursing me…but I never gave Sam any hint that I like her why would I….Neil is best friend my brother…’

Arjun patted Radhika’s head; ‘’May I suggest something’’

Radhika; ‘’If it eases their pain…then please go ahead…I will do anything’’

Arjun Smirked; ‘’Fine marry me first and then I will tell you the solution’’ Radhika’s jaw dropped…she was shocked to the core…marriage she thought she was just a new interest for him…she brushed aside everything and lightly slapped him; ‘’Are you crazy…do you know what you just said’’

Arjun; ‘’Yes… you said you would do anything…so I thought why not try… you might say yes to me for your friends’’ Radhika made a face picked her bag and started walking to the door…Arjun grabbed her arm and turned her around; ‘’Bunny ask Sam to ignore Neil…give him space…he will come around…if he really loves her…he will not leave her’’

Radhika looked at Arjun;’’ Neil left her…I know him…he never takes a U turn’’

Arjun; ‘’he will…I hated the word love…and now I am deep down in it ’’

Radhika pressed her lips he was expressing his feelings every minute….she lowered her gaze and said softly ; ‘’ if you keep confessing your feelings every now and then I will stop talking to you….I will leave now thanks for your advice’’

Arjun held her arm; ‘’you are welcome…and why do you keep threatening me about not talking to me…do you think you can scare me’’

Radhika felt light after talking to him; ‘’Yes I can…you already are thinking of a plan to save yourself from me…now bye ’’

Arjun smiled; ‘’after a cup of coffee…I will drop you…please ’’ Radhika quietly went and sat on the couch…Arjun went to the kitchen and asked Stella to prepare sandwiches and coffee…his phone buzzed…he answered the call…it was from India…Arjun had started involving himself in Bird Song and other business of Mehra group …The call lasted for 15 min and when he came to the hall…Radhika was sleeping in a sitting position…she had not slept in the night …Arjun walked slowly to her…took his phone and clicked a picture…and she opened her big eyes; ‘’Now don’t start obsessing about me’’

Arjun; ‘’I love you…you are not an obsession…. you are my life…well one day you will believe me’’

Radhika giggled; ‘’Now you are all filmy …like bollywood heroes…luv shuv…yuck’’ Stella came with sandwiches and coffee…and greeted Radhika with a smile

Arjun smiled; ‘’finish this whole sandwich and coffee…I know you haven’t eaten anything in morning’’ Radhika glared at him for his authoritative voice…poked her tongue out at him. He just chuckled…Arjun freshen up changed and came out in a funky jeans and fitting white t-shirt his hair were properly gelled he was searching for something…and yes he was tall, muscular and very handsome…Radhika gave him one look from head to toe and whistled…Arjun froze…what was this girl made off…he turned and looked at her; ‘’What was that ???’’

Radhika made an innocent face and said; ‘’That’s what you do when someone looks good…’’ and she laughed…Arjun wanted to capture that laughter…he was getting too possessive about her…he walked to her and sat on his knees facing her ; ‘’you are beautiful beyond my imagination…and I love you deeply beyond your imagination’’ Radhika turned crimson and lowered her eyes…Arun lifted her chin with his forefinger; ‘’let me drop your home or else Anna will call 911…blaming me for your kidnap’’

Singapore

Sam got call from Samrat…there was a bird Song shoot in Singapore and he wanted her to attend it …Sam promised Samrat she would visit the shoot…once she was at the shooting sight she saw Neil giving instructions…she wanted to speak to him she walked to Neil…but he ignored her and walked off… after an hour Sam went and stood behind Neil; ‘’Neil can we talk’’

Neil; ‘’No’’ he again stated walking away from her…Sam held his hand; ‘’Please Neil…only few minutes’’

Neil; ‘’No…means No…you don’t even deserve a second of my life Samaira Khanna’’

Sam; ‘’I know …but can you listen to me once please… I am begging you’’

Neil smirked; ‘’If you want to beg …go do it somewhere else…now leave before I lose my temper and you lose your respect’’

Sam tried again but he jerked her so hard that she staggered …Sam decided to do as Radhika suggested…she will leave him alone…Sam quickly got herself involved in her work…the chief camera person was checking the camera frame when he saw Sam through it…he kept watching her for some time and then walked to her; ‘’Hi I am Agnello…you are Samrat Khanna’s daughter’’ Sam shook hands with him and nodded.

Agnello; ‘’Vogue India…is doing a shoot in Singapore an different scenic locations…would you like to model for that’’

Sam after a minute; ‘’Vogue is a Big brand…and I have no experience…why would they go ahead with me’’

Agnello; ‘’We are looking for a fresh face…we have 6 models doing the shoot…wanted one more…your are very photogenic…plus you will be paid’’

Sam; ‘’Modelling is not my thing…I mean…’’

Agnello; ‘’I know what you mean…but this for their latest formal collection to be launched for Indian females…here is my card if you are ok call me shoot is next Saturday’’
Sam took his card but was is in two minds…she wanted to do the shoot as it would be her first earning but was scared of trusting the wrong guy…and since Neil was no more with her to guide her she decided to call Samrat…Samrat gave his approval as he knew Agnello for 10 good years…Sam smiled she went to Agnello and gave her consent …Agnello gave her an address and asked her to be there on time….Neil watched them discuss from the distance and later got to know Sam accepted the modelling assignment. Neil’s jaw hardened …he never wanted Sam to do modelling…he knew the industry and Sam was way too innocent for it…he wanted to slap Sam for that…but moreover he was angry on Samrat for allowing Sam

Neil got into his car to leave after the shoot…he watched Sam waiting for the cab…but he turned his eyes away from her and drove off…Neil’s harshness was breaking Sam down…yes she deserved to be punished…but the pain had started taking toll on her…After she reached her building she saw that the elevator was crowded she decided to take the stairs…her apartment was on the 6th floor…Sam was walking up…when she heard known giggles…she saw Neil coming down with Rita holding hands…Sam lost her battle… tears came streaming down…she quickly climbed the stairs unlocked her apartment …got in closed the door and then broke down. Why was this so painful…Sam was in no mood of having dinner…she threw everything in the bin and dropped her body on the bed. Neil had seen tears streaming down her eyes…he smirked.

Neil’s POV ‘’Never thought I would love your tears more than your smile…you will cry more…I will make sure you do’’
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Sam claim to love Arjun…but since the day Neil left she has not thought of Arjun even for a minute…but crying buckets over Neil. Radhika baby why did you blame destiny…you guys have the power to change me with your determination…but…Alas…you don’t believe in yourself.

Precap: Nandini handles Jai , Neil hurts Samaira more…Arjun furious at Radhika’s new job

Credit to: Gauri

82 comments

  1. ammu

    gauri sis…u r making me 2 fall in love with ur story..actualy im already in love with it.n u always keep ur words cy updatng regularly. Eagerly waitng 4 nxt one.

  2. Plz punish Sam more ………plz unite ardhika ………n heel the Neil soon cnt c him in pain yaar ……loved it jaanu…….:-):-):-):-)

    • Gauri

      Hi Shreya …thanks dear…will punish Sam…and ARdihika…they will have a bumpy ride 🙂 love you

  3. Supriya

    Ohh dii I loved it……I was awake becoz I knew u will update today….my eyelids were closing but I kept putting water on my face……didn’t wanted the curiosity to die…..now atlast m satisfied…. I loved the dialogue you r beautiful beyond my imagination and I love you deeply beyond your imagination….. that z worth a clap….I srsly did it 5 times….will do wen I read it again and again……Neil I feel bad for him….the guy has changed in a day…..Sam I know she deserves it but still I can’t c her in pain…..I wonder what will be rads reaction wen she learns that arjun z the same guy…..god save him that day…..I hated nandini di first wen I use to watch the serial but now becoz of u I like her…..the woman z just too good….arjun needs to hold his horses I guess….. I loved the part wen he challenged her that she will confess her feelings in a year’s time…..I guess now it’s Sam’s turn to run behind Neil…but still I can’t see her pain…..I want to c arjun’s reaction wen he comes to know dat jai z the same guy who misbehaved with his radhika….he will kill him that day….I hope rads wins against her fear for dark…..I talk too much,r8?still can’t help it….u r just one unique piece….god made u both beautiful inside and outside….. ur ability to think and imagine z something beyond anything….. well I don’t have any new words praise u r8 now I will just say u r truely god’s masterpiece and even mine becoz I did the best sketch of my life yesterday because I was happy doing it and the reason was I love u alot……will not bore u now….eagerly waiting for next update…….love u sooooooo much….muaaaaahhhhhh… Tc?????????????????

    • Gauri

      Supriya…you stayed up to read my update?? now How should I thank you….ok you tell me what should be rads reaction after knowing Arjun is the same guy? well a hint…Rads is a good girl…but practical too she can do anything for her loved ones…but she is not a sacrificing queen…well Arjun will surely kill Jai…and thanks for complementing me…beauty lies in the eyes of the beholder…so you should be praised for that…love you from the bottom of my heart…stay happy and stay blessed 🙂 🙂

  4. Wow woww woww fantabulousticalLy fantastic. Shabd hi nahu rahe di… Raat ki ullu bamke apke story ka maza le rahi hu… You are such such such an amaziiiiing writer.

  5. Dev

    U nailed it again gauri….it was a fab epi… Nif radz comes 2 know dat sams arjun is dis frnd of hers den i wud love 2 c d reaction of her n wen neil comes 2 know abt ardika wat will he do…..n d angr wen arjun comes 2 know dat jai was d 1 who misbehvd with radu….
    Now ….how r u……n keep on smiling n writing

    • Gauri

      Thanks Dev 🙂 well Neil will be furious on Arjun…Jai can’t eve dream what Arjun will do to him…and Radhika well I am still thing how will she handle the mess 🙂 have a G8 day

  6. shreyanshi

    after reading your ff m in luv with neil….
    waiting for the confrontation of neil n sam
    and radhika-arjun 🙂

  7. Rg

    Hi gauri a grt morning. Thanks to u. Was extremely happy to read ur ff first thing in the morning. Impressed with arjun and way he handled radz. Despite her uneasiness around arjun radz seems to trust him and going back to him. It seems she can’t help truly but get attached to him. They both have a wavelength which radz doesn’t want to admit to. When will she fall for him? Is it any time soon ?, The precap look grt.
    I feel sorry for Sam and Neil. And Neil d gud boy had turned bad. Will he come back to original self ? By d time he is through with Sam will he lose himself totally or will Sam realize her love for him?
    And when radz realise tat d arjun she is cursing and d one she has fallen for is one and same? Way will she do? Hey by d way I keep thinking radz will realise tat Neil s arjun and her arjun r one and d same only after she is too deep into it. Will it b like tat or will radz realise tat both d arjun r one and d same very soon. Hint pls… Well plz update asap . Loved ur flow of writing. Take care. Stay blessed.

    • Gauri

      Hey Rg, first a big thanks to you…yes Radhika likes Arjun’s company..he is able to make her comfortable easily…Sam will realize her love for Neil…but Neil will be a changed person now…something in him is broken completely Neil will furious about Aradhika…and you will see a face off between a-Neil…and when Radhika realizes Arjun’s truth…well she will be confused…but being an intelligent girl…she will handle situations nicely…wait for the next one 🙂 love you

  8. Love u from bottom of my heart my darling sissy 😀 😀 😀 ha ha ha I think each time like arjun all confessing the love on u 😀 😀 😀 u rocked darling Sissy 😀 😀 😀 😀 I loved aradhika part it’s really really really fabulous 😀 😀 😀 😀 u r such a killer with ur words 😀 😀 😀 😀 love uuuuuuuuuu 😀 😀 may b I ll come to Bangalore for my pg n work both if dat so sure ll come to meet u 😀 😀 😀 😀 😀 let’s c my luck 😀 😀 😀 love u stay happy n take care 😀 😀 😀

    • Gauri

      Thanks a ton Suga dear…he will keep on confessing till she comes to him…and whenever you are coming do let me know 🙂 🙂 🙂 🙂 thank you love you 🙂 stay blessed 🙂

  9. rasha

    Its really superb. I like the conversation between arjun and radhika.it ws cool.and off course its gng really nice.im waiting and excited to read the next chapter. Be blessd dear.you got a nice talent. I love ur writing.

  10. Dhara

    Superb dear. Ardhika are rocking ad of now. And arjun confessing every time is too much so embarrassing for radhika. But I know he will do untill she says yes. But he will have wait for it.

    Waiting for next part. Sorry but I don’t read nesam part interestingly so I won’t comment on them.

  11. Sv

    Just got my mob. Wow that was super awesome cant explain my happiness.
    I can’t write more but u nailed it. Sry for small comment but this was great. Love u di ur words. Take care. Love u too. Bear hugs and kisses.

  12. Hai gauri, very good morning. U made me crazy. Todays each part ws just wow. And radhu whistle part – im laughed 😀 ya she said correct. And when he said marry me oh im also shocked.
    Im waiting 4 nxt 1 ma. Bye…. 🙂

  13. pankh

    mindblowing.. nw even d dictonary is lacking words to praise ur writting… today i loved every part every line.. thnx dear… waiting 4 nxt…

  14. happy

    hi dr…..hw r u……its so emotional……i cant see sam-neil pain……in one day he totally changed……ya change is good..bt….i dont like this neil…..he is behaving so different…..ardhika super…..bt i dont like arjun’s talk about always confessing his feeling…..today so emotional…cant write more….felt very very bad for sam…..

    • Gauri

      Hey Happy…you know I really like that you express your heart so nicely…don’t worry they will be together…thanks again dear 🙂 stay blessed 🙂

      • happy

        today you forgot two things…..one ur rply for my question “hw r u”……2nd one ur question about myself…..u didnt ask…..bt my ans….i am fine…..small things make life more beautiful…..like….this line in ur update….”someone cook for me not as job”……i liked it……u r a true writer…….again waiting started……today i got one idea…..i must abduct you….because….i cant wait for ur ff…… thank you so so much dr……you r most lucky person…..you got so many blessings…….god ll give u bright future……

      • Gauri

        Well sorry dear I am good now double good….and how are you….I felt you didn’t like my update due to NeSam part…but now i am all happy…an you want to abduct me 😀 thanks for making me feel so special 🙂 have a G8 day

  15. Supriya

    Thx for the answers di…..I really loved them….did I bore u by such a long comment?I wonder if there would have been a award for most talkative person then I would have surely won it…….di u r so much beautiful both inside and outside that anyone can’t stop loving you……love u sooooo much….muaaaaahhhhhh??????????????

    • Gauri

      Lol no you are not at all talkative…I have an army of chatter boxes in my family dear…so don’t bother love you 🙂

  16. Wow this great day for me…amazing..lovely …osm dear ….ardhika part just wow..I loved it…Neil teach good lesson for Sam..ovel all amazing..waiting for Fri update..love u loads..tc..

  17. aastha

    superb di…………….u r n extraordinary creature,,,….how do you write so flawlessly????? so Sam told Rads abt what happened………….glad that rads spoke out to arjun……….his idea of marriage was shocking but good…………….never knew Niel would change soo much………..rads whisling at arjun was superb!!!!!!! i too was awestruck at her behavior…………….and i loved arjun’s dialouge ” you are beautiful beyond imagination and i love u beyond imagination “…….. tell me the truth di was this the dialouge ur admirer told wen he proposed u ?????????? there are chances coz ur very sweet………….I loved the precap………..so what’s Rads new job ????????.. and how exactly is nandini gonna handle that MAD jai ??????????? will samrat know that she had hand in this ???????????

    • Gauri

      Thanks Aasatha….and no no one said such words to me …Lol…I am laughing…and about you answers you will know everything in the coming chapters…love you dear 🙂 1000 hugs for you 🙂

      • aastha

        really ???????? oh come on di…… dont tell me that one 1 hs proposed you till date …anyway heres a teddy hug from me……………love u………

      • Gauri

        even if I say the truth you won’t believe …so what should say loads of love and big hug for you

  18. aastha

    sorry the comment got posted before i could complete it…………….love u………..TC……….muah..

  19. Bhabya

    Gauri di u rocked it again. I’m sure nxt epi is gonna be interesting. Please try to post on Friday please.

  20. Anvee

    Oh my god!!!! Neil’s pain is beyond my imagination…. I mean I can feel it in the way of hurting Sammy…. usually in this situation most of them think Sam is at sympathy cause…. so many reasons…. but in actual Neil is the one in immense pain…. it is not easy to hurt your first love you see…. love you for another wonderful one….

    • Gauri

      Hi ANvee 🙂 thanks dear 🙂 yes its Neil who id undergoing the maximum pain..by hurting Sam…love you and many hugs for you 🙂 stay blessed 🙂

  21. Gianna

    This is too good. Loved it very much. Arjun is getting all filmy and hitting dialog after dialog and i love that Radhika enjoys his company. Neil ooooh dear Neil love him too good but a bit sad for Sam. Keep on writing like this dear . God bless u love u take care ??

  22. neetz

    Ohhhhh gauri gauri dear …ummmah..that was nother woderful epi..loved it..i ve already read it 5 times 😀
    Waiting for the next epi…
    Love you loads ..

  23. OMG Neil is that much hurt that his behavior is completely opposite of his nature…don’t belive that neil is change this much…but this behavior Nel makes sam realise her love for him…great yar ..Gauri u r driving crasy abt this couples…u r fantastic dear…Radhika whistle at Arjun she is too cool and bindaas yar….waiting for nxt bcos next epi is always unpredictable in your story…love u babe..

    • Gauri

      Thanks from the bottom of my heart Dipika 🙂 thanks for making me smile…will post next one soon 🙂

  24. Kavina

    I loved the episode. Sam is growing to love Neil and Arjun is now more in love with Radhika. Please update soon.

  25. Emz fasa

    Mindblowing :-* and ardhikas part was awesome i love this niel sam deserve more pain than this

  26. Roma

    Awesome episode, wowwww loved it very very much. ….ardhika convo n bike ride was really awesome. …neil hurting sam….awwww…but she needs this lesson…she haven’t thought of arjun since neil left her….n it hurting her when he is with someone else. ……but neil is also hurt way more than sam…..I’m hopeful arjun’s idea for sam to ignore neil would work n this modelling assignment bring nesam closer….arjun had rads treat happily n didn’t complain. ….n his console to rads in nesam matter was excellent…….precap is very interesting n exciting. …keep it up. eagerly waiting for the next episode, love you loads. muaaaaahhhhhh

  27. feby

    di…..i woke up till midnight and thn slept coz i wanted to read it tat day itself…but i cudnt comment tat day as it was so late…and thn i bczme bz too…so iam commenting now…..aha….it was awesome di….thanks for such lovely update too….. but nesams part makes me hurt….i dont want thm to break up….but ya…sam shld understand the pain tat she gave to neil…so its good in one way…..well…i like arjuns transformation….and radhikas toughness….it was very nice di…..and di….u havent accepted the hangout invitation….did u just c tat…..????and i felt gud tat u liked the pic of my…its the real me two months back…!!!

    • Gauri

      Hey feby thanks a ton dear….i accepted your request and added you to my firnds list…let me chk once more…I am also one absent minded person…you can expect any stupidity out of me…I love natural people…love you 🙂

      • feby

        no di…u accepted friend request but didnt accept hangout invitation…..if u dont accpt tat we cant chat!!!! and u will c more of my stupidity…hahahaaaa

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