Manmarziyan- Destiny…Passion …Obsession (Chapter 17)

Hello frnds hope you all had a nice weekend….so here is the next chapter…next on one on Wednesday morning for sure….thanks for your comments pls read and let me know how was this one…happy reading

Chapter 17

Sometimes we tend to hurt people we love the most…well it is not intentional every time…Arjun scared Radhika…but he loves her too and he is trying to improve… well he deserves a chance…BUT some take advantage of others love this what Sam did…no one improves in a day….
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Radhika was getting ready of Golden Gate it was her presentation today…it was also her last day for the live project…she came down and found Arjun waiting for her…Arjun didn’t like the dullness on her face….he loved the girl who made the fool out of him and ripped him off his looks…he opened the car door for her…Radhika quietly Sat and Arjun drove off…he wanted her smile back…he looked at her and said; ‘’Bunny I scared you…now I will give you your smile back before today’s day ends’’ Radhika did not respond

They reached office and Radhika was shivering this was the first time she was giving a corporate presentation…that also in the biggest Real Estate giant…Radhika was sitting at her place with her hands folded and eyes closed…Arjun kept his palm on her head and softly spoke; ‘’Bunny trust yourself…you are good and now come its time…everyone is waiting in the board room…enter with a smile’’…Arjun wrapped an arm on her shoulder and gently pressed it …Radhika felt someone pumped energy into her body…she picked her laptop and walked inside the board room with a smile…once the presentation started Radhika gave a synopsis of her survey about people’s choice on houses apartments…and finally she gave the punch line; ‘’We build houses…so you make a home’’ she ended her presentation…looking at the members of feedback….everyone was discussing among themselves at the end James spoke; ‘’Good work…we liked you tagline this will go out in the brochures ….we had 20 presentation today…from different live project temp interns and you spoke everything in one line…well done’’ Radhika smiled broadly…she shook hands with James and went back to her desk…she found Arjun waiting for her with a broad smile; ‘’Congratulations Bunny’’

Radhika; ‘’How did you know…you were not there in the presentation’’

Arjun smiled and covered the distance between them cupped her face from one hand and softly said; ‘’I don’t need to see your presentation to know that it was the best…you forgot I am you mentor…and now don’t forget my treat…’’ Radhika nodded happily…Arjun asked Radhika to go and wait for me downstairs I will be there in a minute…Radhika took the lift…due to some technical issues the elevator turned dark and door got jammed…Radhika panicked…Arjun came out and got to know lifts were jammed he took stairs but could not find Radhika..he dialled her no…she answered but was breathless….she just spoke ‘’elevator’’. Arjun ran towards the elevator maintenance department….he explained them…they told few people were caught…but in one the lifts there is just one girl…Arjun knew she would be hell scared in dark with a jammed door…he told them her medical condition…they did whatever they could do and finally when door opened Arjun found Radhika crumbled in the corner…He without a word lifted her up…and sprinkled water on her face…she gasped for breath and opened her eyes…she felt calm after looking at his face…Arjun helped her to his car…and drove of with her…Arjun brought Radhika to her dorm and made her sit; ‘’ why did you take elevator when you were alone…you always take stairs’’

Radhika; ‘’was kind of tired …but I was not alone when I got in… others got down before me..bad luck’’

Arjun; ‘’ Bunny do you need me to call a doctor’’

Radhika; ‘’No I am fine….thank you’’ Arjun nodded and got up to leave but Radhika held his hand tightly…’’Please stay till Anna is back….I am scared to be alone’’

Arjun felt her fear….He cupped her face and gave a peck on her forehead; ‘’I told you not to request….just ask and I will do it…how about a coffee’’ Radhika nodded…Arjun took off his jacket and moved to the kitchen…after 2 min Radhika followed him…she watched him preparing the coffee he was quite comfortable with the kitchen…she came and stood next to him; ‘’You are ok working in a kitchen…I have not seen many boys doing that’’

Arjun; ‘’That’s because I have been living alone for more than 10yrs , plus you should know little of everything…it helps…do you mind if I ask you a question…answer only if you are ok…I know you don’t consider me your friend’’

Radhika smiled; ‘’No…go ahead’’

Arjun; ‘’Bunny why do you fear dark…I want to know…I can help you coming out of it’’ Radhika looked at him thought for a moment…’’do you really think I can get rid of it’’

Arjun; ‘’If you can trust me as a friend…I promise you will’’

Radhika; ‘’I don’t think it will leave me…even Neil tried…but nothing helped’’

Arjun; ‘’Is there any harm in trying again’’

Radhika nodded…she herself was tired of feeling breathless and scared…they went to the hall with coffee Arjun sat opposite to her so that he can watch her expressions completely Radhika closed her eyes for a second and started; ‘’3.5 yrs back I attended a party with my family…it was Sam’s parents anniversary…everything was beautifully done…me and Sam we both did the arrangements…on that day when the party was on full swing a waiter dropped juice on my dress I went inside to Sam’ room to clean it, since the party was in the garden area…no one was inside the house…once I was in the wash room the lights went off…I thought of moving out…but someone pushed me inside…I fell on the floor….that person gagged my mouth…and….he tried to…I just escaped his grip and hid in the corner…I knew once the lights were back…he won’t dare such a thing …I kept sitting in the dark covering my mouth to mask my breathing…I was scared…I had never faced anything like this before… I hated being a girl that day… I thought I will die by continuously holding my breath …2 hrs or more I prayed someone should find me…and Neil did…he could not find me anywhere and came searching for me…he found the door locked …broke open the door and called out for me…I ran to him…told him everything…he pacified me and to our surprise only the fuse of that room was manhandled rest house and garden were properly lit…my parents thought I was enjoying with my friends so they didn’t check on me…we kept this hidden from our parents…and since then…Neil had been my constant support…I would not sleep in the night being scared of dark…Neil would talk to me over the phone till I slept…he never let my sprit die he made me a stronger person…if not for Neil I would have stopped smiling after that incident…that day when you forcefully took me with you…you evoked the same fear…’’ Radhika lifted her eyes to face Arjun he saw them wet with fear…a fear which he evoked…he felt sorry

Arjun closed his eyes..he wanted to kill the Man who tried misbehaving with her…he quietly thanked Neil for being there for her…Arjun got up went to Radhika sat on the floor held her hands and said; ‘’If ever I find that guy…I will kill him…I am sorry for that day…I will try to improve myself…I promise to be your friend till you are able to love me…Bunny I am sorry…. I cannot stop myself from loving you…can you trust me one last time and if yes..please give me a hug…a friendly one’’ Radhika looked into his eyes…every word he spoke was from his heart…she knew he was dangerous…but she felt protected more than scared she nodded; ‘’I trust you …’’ Arjun gave a broad smile hearing and opened his arms…Radhika gave him a friendly hug…Arjun ruffled her hair and made her sit; ‘’Anna will be back only in evening…what do you want to do’’

Radhika; ‘’Take me for a drive…but not in your car…I want to go on your bike…because l love bikes…and I need some air’’

Arjun nodded;’’ My Bunny is quite adventurous…fine I will be back in 15 min be ready…can you manage alone for 15 min…you go and sit near the window’’ Radhika nodded…she felt light…somewhere in hear heart she knew he will protect her.

Arjun picked his jacket thought about something and spoke; ‘’By the way what about my treat…remember high calorie food…you will prepare’’

Radhika made a face; ‘’You will spit everything out …I am not a good cook….why do you want to torture yourself’’

Arjun knelt to come at Radhika’s eye level; ‘’Try and I will eat…and I know it will be good…because you will prepare it…’’ Radhika smiled and kept looking into his eyes …Arjun got up patted her cheek… ‘’15 minutes be ready….after the drive…you will cook something…I will have my treat today…..we will buy whatever you need on our way back…now go and get ready…I will be back soon’’ He left to come back

Radhika POV; ‘’Tiger you are dangerous…but very sweet…I know come what may you will protect me..I value your friendship…but your love still scares me’’

Singapore

Sam was in the balcony thinking how to speak to Neil…about the incident…everything had become so complicated…she was feeling embarrassed to go infornt of him…Sam felt Neil should have stopped her as she was not in her senses …but he went along …they should talk it was necessary…she saw Neil going to the kitchen to get coffee….She quietly went and sat in the hall waiting for him…

Neil was worried for Radhika he knew she was hiding something…but right now talking to Sam was important he quickly freshen up and made himself coffee…he saw
Sam standing in the balcony…he decided to talk later as he knew what was coming up…Sam watched Neil going to kitchen …she sat in the hall to wait for him to come out…Neil saw Sam sitting in the hall…he quietly went and took a seat opposite to her…;’’Yes Sam tell me …what do you have to say’’

Sam was not looking at him; ‘’Neil I just want to say…whatever happened…I mean we…’’

Neil completed for her ; ‘’It was a mistake…yes I know’’

Sam; ‘’You should have stopped me…I am so ashamed …why did you allow…I know you love me…but I don’t you should have forcefully stopped me….it was my first kiss…it should have happened with someone I love…I feel I cheated Arjun…It was a bad decision to stay together…I shouldn’t have agreed….I felt you will stop me from committing a mistake….but you yourself went ahead with that’’

Neil’s temper was rising now…how dare she blame him…he had had enough…he could have taken her completely because she was so ready…yet he did what was right…but now…he felt he was done…he glared at Sam and replied; ‘’I never initiated it…you were waiting for me in MY ROOM ON MY BED…you wanted me Samaira Khanna…you were hungry for me…but you here are putting everything on me…if you don’t have control on your emotions and actions…then please confine yourself to a room ,lock it and then get drunk…I would have taken you easily…because you were so ready to rip your clothes off…but I stopped myself……and this is what I get…I am so done with you…don’t step an inch closer to me now…it would be good for you…and from now we are just two people living under one roof till I move out…coming to Singapore was my worst mistake…I should have stayed in Mumbai or gone to US with Chashni….but I came for my idiotic love….I deserved it…. NOW! no more friendship no more love…we end everything here and now’’

Sam was shocked at this outburst Neil went inside his room and banged the room shut. He quickly showered changed and left he made a call to the agent and asked him to arrange for a new apartment ASAP…Neil bought himself a packet of cigarettes ….he had taken this bad habit at 15 but had quit it after Arjun pestered him to…but today he wanted something…he came back to the apartment …Sam was sitting in the hall holding her dead…he went inside his room and latched it…the face which was most dear to him had today turned ugly…he stood on the balcony smoking…he thought; ‘’After all you are a Khanna…you guys enjoy destroying lives Samrat Khanna destroyed Nandini di…Jai tried destroying Chashni 3 yrs back….and you selfish Samaira Khanna you killed Neil today…I gave you my unconditional love…now I will teach you all the lessons you have forgotten…you want Arjun…but he will never fall for you…because for him you were my love only…god I was so stupid’’

Neil got a call from agent he told him a room in a flat was vacant in the same building…the other person was a girl doing her masters in the university…if he is fine he can shift today… Neil without giving a thought decided to shift…he gave his consent packed his backed and came out. Sam was surprised to see him with luggage…she thought he was angry that’s why he spoke of moving out…but she couldn’t imagine he would actually do that. Sam went and stood infornt of him

Sam; ‘’Where are you going’’

Neil; ‘’None of your business…and off my way because I really don’t want to see your face’’

Sam felt like crying; ‘’Neil I understand your anger…I am sorry…but you don’t have to move out’’

Neil with a sarcastic smile; ‘’Living at a same place was the biggest mistake we made…you said that right…so even I agree on that…but my biggest mistake was to fall in love with you…I curse that day I met you…but I know how to correct my mistake…so I am doing it now…’’ He started walking to the door but stopped turn and said; ‘’You once asked me if you are selfish…let me answer you yes you are …if you think Arjun will ever love you…the you are wrong…he is already in love with someone…you were just Neil’s friend for him…and now you won’t be even that… goodbye Samaira Khanna’’

Sam broke down after Neil left…her ears were paining hearing that he hated her now…she kept on crying sitting on the floor… she still had a hope that he would come back and call out for her…make her smile…but Sam was wrong…Neil had decided to throw her out of his heart…when Sam woke up it was morning…she quickly got up to check if Neil had returned…she was quite sure on it…but only emptiness greeted her…he had left her completely…she was alone now.

Neil pressed the door bell…A smart dark hair girl with beautiful features answered the door..she smiled warmly at Neil; ‘’you are Neil right…Hi I am Rita your flat mate…please come in’’

Neil; ‘’Hi Rita…hope you don’t mind a guy sharing the place’’

Rita; ‘’No…not at all…If the guy is good…and I know how to protect myself…I am from Bangkok and good at martial arts …I cannot pay the rent of whole place…so needed someone to share…your room is on the extreme right…make yourself comfortable’’ Neil smiled, nodded and dragged his luggage to his room.
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Life is strange Arjun who never knew how to smile….was smiling and doing everything which would make Radhika smile….on the other hand Neil…who cared for everyone made everyone smile is now with a broken heart and an injured soul…Sam doesn’t know what she lost…because even if Neil comes back he will not be the same…

Precap: Neil hurts Sam…Radhika treats Arjun

Credit to: Gauri

102 comments

  1. maandey

    wow wow wow……its a treat…i actually text u on twitter asking about update and here it is…..its a flow….which compel us to flow with it…..my mind start living these characters like this only….arjun is not so arrogant or rude or jerk……n sam is more stupid that our expectations….radhika is more mature then i expect and if neil really clear his mind then he will become best out of them all…….waiting for wednesday…….to get something wonderful with DESTINY PASSION LOVE OBSESSION….love u loads….stay well…sleep well….nd 🙂 well

  2. happy

    hi dr…hw r u?……oh god….its fabulous……super….arjun-rad part amazing…..sam-neil part so sad…..sry for neil….bt today he did right……bt felt bad for sam…..2 person she lost today….one lover and neil…..rad past….bt she shared with arjun super…..bt i cant understand one thing…..hw rad trust arjun…..she knows he never back off……i have a doubt on this…..other than amazing…super…..episode…………thank you so so so much………………

    • Gauri

      Hi Happy…I am good, how are you doing?… Radhika trusts Arjun becoz she felt whatever he spoke was from his heart….yes he will never give up becoz he really loves her…thanks for commenting dear…loads of love 🙂

      • happy

        hi dr…..i am fine…..thanks for rply……nw one question in my mind……what ll rad reaction after knowing sam-reil fight……you make me mad…..i am sure about myself…..sometimes i smile without any reason…..bt feeling good……only some people give this happiness in our life….and you gave this by ur ff…..i really cant think this ff was an imaginative…..bt i felt its happening in real……thanks…..

      • Gauri

        Happy dear so nice of you to say that…well Radhika will be sad and worried about her friends…will try to help them…will post tomorrow for sure…tc dear 🙂

  3. Dhara

    Well turn around in the story and this is called fate and destiny.. The day Arjun will come to know that the person was Jai, I am sure he will kill him.. Ardhika bonding is increasing but Neil is heart broken,, Sam needs a lesson now of losing d loved ones.. Awesome chap..

  4. Sv

    oh my god oh my god ……. pls say me from where on universe you come up with this thought. The way the track is going is just awesome . This is the right thing. you know Neil was right Khanna’s did not have hearts but sam is soo stupid to hurt Neil as Neil was the perfect one for Sam. The value of anything would be known only if we dont have it or lost it. Neil was a precious gem but sam has lost it. Im feeling sry for her as she left the thing in her hand and dreaming about the thing in the sky which is never possible to obtain it.

    Ardhika rocked it …. Arjun and Radhika makes a perfect pair and i love the genuineness of Arjun towards his bunny. Wow this is true love which will make him to fce the world if that is going even against him. Oh god radhika’s fear coz of jai argh ….. Arjun dont ever leave Jai if you find him in person and Neil is the best friend does anything for his loved once but he is done with sam now it is her payback time i guess. Di please dont hurt sam much as hurting sam is hurting Neil himself and Neil walking out because of Sam was worthy as he is also a human who has likes and dislikes and even if he comes back will not be the same Neil . The words which you are saying in the starting and end are the worthy words for life coz these are the things which are required for the life………

    Di you nailed it . Made it it was fantabulous outstanding marvelous rocking ….. god everything was so damn true……. Love friendship taking for granted everything.

    Love you always love your words take care stay blessed bear hugs and kisses…………

    • Gauri

      Sv dear…thanks a ton for the amazing analysis… 🙂 well your first answer I think I belong to earth itself 😉 Sam needs a lesson…everything will be fine but after sometimes…and thanks for liking the destiny words 🙂 loads of love 🙂 stay blessed darling

  5. maandey

    foolish me cnt stop myself commenting again and again…..i love neil’s POV about khanna family……one latest news for my own self is i started watching krishandasi coz f our neil…..n haaaaayyyyyeeeee…oyyyyeeeee…maaarr e daala chhore ne to………kati kasuta lagrya h….. <3

    • Gauri

      I have not watched many episode…but yes I only watch scenes where Shravan Reddy is there…I jus love him…he is too good…and thanks again…. 🙂

  6. Shree

    Ummmmm… May I please know what you’re made of?! I really fail to understand every time I read your update… K fine… I was joking…. No offense…

    Di!! I loved it!! Too good it was!! Arjun managed to put up a smile on her face… She opened up… Jai!! The nerve of him!! ??.. Thanks to Neil… Wow!! A ride and treat!! High calorie!! Lol… And Sam!! Wth… What has gotten into her?! Some bu gone into her?! I’m not asking.. Why am I?! Pakka.. Confirmed.. He hates her!! And I be so happy… I’m gonna go get a chilled beer now!! Ok fine a red bull… Time to celebrate!! Though I know he won’t hate fr for too long… I loved it the way Neil told that Arjun will never fall for her and he loves someone else… Yey!!

    I’m waiting di!! Update soon… Eeeeeeeeeee…. And I forgot to tell!! I’m so happy!! My presentation was the best today!! Full marks!! Yippie!! I came here in that excitement!! And I see your update!! Now I’ll go tell Paa and hell get a pastry!! Eeeeeeeeeee.. I’m going high calorie now!! Bye now!!

    Love you loads.. Tc… Keep smiling..
    Bear hug ??

    • Gauri

      Hi Shree, first of all a big CONGRATULATIONS!!!!!! for full marks….keep it going….now have my share of pastry too… and thanks for the amazing comment…yes for sometime Sam should bear Neil’s pain…Arjun Radhika…well their ride is not gonna be easy it will be smooth bumpy at times…becoz no one is less… love you bless you 🙂

      • Shree

        Eeeeeeeeeee di!!! Thank you!! I ate it and it was good…. Paa got me a tiramisu…. He bought fruit champagne too… Shocking.. He hates it when I take it…. I know I’m such a spoilt one… Normal chocolate cake would have been fine.. When my brothers who are Switzerland found out they fordd Paa to get me something else…. Poor Paa…. I hate myself for being the youngest amongst them.. And my sister is jealous…. Oops… My brothers get me lindt chocolates when I ask for a perk, get a Parker pen when I want only a normal pen and a lot more…. I get more than what I want… I’m happy they’re not here…

        Hehe.. Anytime di…. Thanks for the spoiler ??…

        Love you loads… Tc… Keep smiling… Bear hug ??

      • Gauri

        Thats the benefit of being the younger one…my sis also enjoys all the attention…well now even I want to have a pastry…I will get it now…love you 🙂

  7. feby

    amazing di…..really….first part was really good….but nesams fight made us sad….and neil behaving in tis way really hurts…..and smoking is very bad….i didnt want neil to do it….very bad boy….and arjuns care towards radhika was very warm…….. it was an awesome chappy….and…how r u abha di…..???? and once i mentioned u tat i feel tat my cousin gang is breaking…but now aftr meeting wid our new jija and thn all other cousins i felt tat it was not breaking rather was becoming stronger….i was happy…and all enjoyed a lot…and thank u tat u helped me realise it….love u loads di…..

  8. Bhabya

    How u present the complications so easily is what makes me read your stories. It is just out of the world epi.. When I read about rads incident i was sure it was jai. The epi was 10 on 10.Di today it was flawless……… BEAR TIGHT HUGS N KISSES

  9. Mind blowing dear…ardhika part was amazing…sad for Neil …I think Sam needs some lesson..over all iam very happy to read it..waiting for next one …love u loads ..tc.

  10. Gianna

    I did not see this coming. Loved it loved it loved it. Loved the Ardhika part, loved the Nesam part looks like Sam is gonna learn her lesson the hard way.
    God Bless u dear, take care ????

  11. Awesome episode, Arjun and Radhika rocked, I am 100% sure it was Jai who put Radhika in the dark room.

    Glad that Neil moved out, maybe then Sam will realize that she love Neil not Arjun.

    Gauri how is your novel going, have you finished your first chapter? 🙂

  12. Di di… i just cant tell you how happy I get when I see your post like seriously I feel like being in heaven. …. cannot describe in words my excitement. i havnt read it still ..thought of commenting before. i am now very eager to read.bye bye

    • Gauuriiiiii…..
      gauriiiiiiiiiiii……
      gauriiiiiii…..
      Mai tera naam japdi firan
      you are blessed and you know thatright? My day is the best whnvr i read your stpry. How i wish the real manmarziyan must have this story with you as their writer.

  13. Supriya

    Dii it z just fantastic…… Arjun and radhika were something i can’t explain in words…I hate Sam for hurting Neil….I want her to get hurt now…..I believe that you should never anyone till the person changes into someone who he can never be……I felt it pierced my heart when radz secret was revealed……srsly can’t even imagine what she had gone through….. even I get scared in dark and when I watch scary movies…..I don’t sleep whole night……di I think I will have to invent new words to praise you…..you are soo much full of perfection…. I love only few writers…Charles dicken,ravinder singh and you…….my fav book z your dreams are mine now….someday u read it di…..I want to be the first person clapping for you in your first book launch…..I will be jumping in happiness that day…..I talk so much right so I will not bore u……update soon….love u soooo much…..tc muaaaaahhhhhh….?????????

    • Gauri

      Hi Supriya, first thanks for the lovely analysis…Charles dickens is amazing leo tolstoy is also good…and will share the prolouge once I am done …love you loads…stay blessed sweety 🙂

  14. pankh

    as always awesome gauri..!! today i m happy 4 neil.. finally he took a stand 4 himself..poor sam ..!!!! and today arjun rocked… got 2 see a very different side of him other than his usual passion nd hunger.. nw surely radhika`s gonna like him…waiting desperately 4 nxt update dear…!!!!:)

    • Gauri

      Thanks Pankh, yes every body has two sides….you hurt them you meet the other side…wil post on wednesday..thanks a ton dear 🙂

  15. Raaga

    Awesome update dear…..
    waiting eagerly for next one. ..
    love u loads ….
    wonderful super fabulous marvellous ..
    sam should learn to respect others feelings too…not like taken for granted …..
    thanku so muchh 🙂

  16. Rg

    Hi gauri. …. Thank u for such an amazing episode. I really wish mmz2 if would start this yr with cvs asking you for your story… I mean it gauri … This was such a fantastic episode. I loved ardhikas chemistry… Arjuns care for radz is plainly superb. Radz is so sweet.. Though a confident and an amazing gal she is vulnerable too.The bossy manipulative selfish arjun is slowly getting polished to shine par excellence. … I am looking forward to experience their rollercoaster ride filled with love, anger,passion, disappointment, joy,hurt,and happiness…
    I really loved Neil character today… One makes u wonder y he has to b this gud to Sam. But I do feel sorry for Sam too. Such a lucky gal but yet unlucky too. Stupid little cute fool. This ignorance of hers makes one read her as selfish… Neil poor guy. Most vulnerable of all. So bad. As per ur last lines is he going to change for Mr best guy to Mr not so gud after all kind of guy?… Oh god .. gauri I can hardly wait till Wednesday…
    Will arjun being Neil’s frd b out sooner? How will Sam react to arjun s new found love? And when she comes to know it’s radz will she understand or try get arjun from radz?? And how will rads react to arjuns truth and how will she chose btw her best frd and lover….

    • Gauri

      Hi Rg, thanks for the lovely comment….I just wanted to say that ever body has two sides one good one bad…Arjun’s love for Radhika brought the good in him out….and Sam’s negligence towards Neil brought his rough side….well life also brings our diffrent colors out…well I haven’t written next part will write tomorrow…well your answers I am still thinking…but one thing is sure Neil will not like Radhika’s choice… so wait for them to come f2f…loads of love and hugs for you 🙂

  17. Anvee

    I freaked out when I forgot that you will be posting it today…. Finally I read it and now am feeling the pain of neil…. loosing first love at its peak is something that can turn you up side down…. and as always it is amazing to read it…. thank you and love you…. may God bless you with all the creative ideas…

    • Gauri

      Oh Anvee…this is so sweet of you dear…yes loosing first love is like breaking into pieces…even if you join them you are never the same…Thanks a ton for making me feel this good…love you 🙂

  18. OH my god..what she did yarr..sam was complete jerk…Heart of person who love her unconditionally she torn it in many pieces.. whatevr neil did sam deserves it…n coming to rads incident it was shocking that jai did this to her..this is not love…whn such kind of incidents happen that time girl loose her innocence.i hate n want to kill person lije jai…
    you r superb marvelous dear..u rocked it again… love u..waiting for Wednesday..

    • Gauri

      Thanks Dipika…yes the incident I wrote about Radhika is something 90% girls faces in some part of her life….and for one moment she hates being a girl…people should learn to respect a girl…thanks a ton dear 🙂 love you 🙂 loads of hugs for you 🙂 will post on wed 🙂

  19. Bhargavi

    Gauri I just loved arjun character today. Though I felt bad for Neil, whatever he has done is good as at least by now Sam should be realising her mistake

  20. Jerly

    Hey , Gauri….. it’s really very awesome dear…………. Neil’s reaction was superbb…….and I loved it…………..

  21. Kavina

    I loved it. Can’t wait to see what Neil does and what Arjun does when he finds out that Jai was the one who started his love fear. Does Neil new room mate play an important role or not?

    • Gauri

      Hi Kavina, thanks dear….Neil’s new room mate will be a guest character…you will know more on Jai and Neil’s equation….will post soon 🙂

  22. chandan

    Superb epi Gauri…I feel like earlier chaps were all preparations and the story entered into its original track now…one side relationship is building n the other side the long run relationship is going through testing period…awesome…I am liking the pace of the story n the way you are potraying the characters feelings…keep rocking

  23. OMG Gauri todays epi wow fantastic, mindblowing, marbulous, fabulous, awesome, very nice wait im searching another words really gauri today both heros did great job. Arjun is a saviour. Neil…… really he did correct & pls dont smoke. Sam u.r. stupid. And Who is that man? Is it jai or some other?

    Gauri keep rocking & All the very best 4 ur future updates. Im eagarly waiting for nxt 1. Pls update soon.

    • Gauri

      Thanks Naaga 🙂 for the lovely comment…well I just have one word thanks….yes the guy is Jai 🙂 will post on Wednesday for sure..tc stay blessed 🙂

  24. Dev

    Guari 2des epi was a fab so if im ri8 than it was jay who gaged rad…n neil knows it…..n its sad dat neil broke his heart ….bt a vc decision as much sam doesnt accept her involvement……n ardika scene was too osm….love u n ur ff

  25. aastha

    I’m sorry for the late comment………but I was busy reading my fav parts in the novel I finished yesterday…..I want to remember all the scenes where the love birds where together……I never knew reading a historic novel would be so delighting…………I loved that novel sooooooooooooo much…………………..
    coming back to ur story…………..finally Radhika spoke out her fear of dark……i wanna trottle that Jai Khanna……………i loved niel today…….hated sam…….how can she blame niel for what had happened ??????????? it was her mistake and how dare she put the blame to niel ?????? glad that niel retorted…………………and i liked what he told abt the khanna’s…………….all of them only know how to destroy others …………….. i never tot jai would try to do smeting like that to rads…………..cheee how dare he??????????? i feel like spitting on him……………..happy that arjun is gonna help her recover her fear of dark………….i too felt tensed when rads collapsed on lift…………..liked his care towards rads and his decision to make up his amends by improving himself………………….the precap looks interesting………….happy that niel moved out of the flat…..TC……….love u…………..muah………….

    • Gauri

      Hi Aastha, thanks dear….well which novel were you reading…well Jai is obsessed with Radhika he doesn’t love her Arjun does…wait for next 🙂

      • aastha

        hi di……..I was reading Michelle Morgan’s ” Cleopatra’s daughter ” ……….its a wonderful novel and once we start reading our eyes will remain glued to its pages and we would be in that world…………………have you read it di ???????

      • aastha

        oh di…do read it…….its WONDERFUL SUPERB and every good word in the dictionary………my sis’s bestie has promised me that if I loved this book then surely she will give me ” Nefertiti ” to read…………

  26. The way you expressed. Abt Neil’s feeling was wonderful..when will Sam realise ?? Will Neil’s roommate play any role in uniting nesam?
    Finally radhika trusted arjun..will their bond remain same when radhika comes to know abt arjun being neil’s frnd and Sam’s love

    • Gauri

      Hi Priya, thanks for the lovely comment…..yes Sam will realize…Neil’s roommate will have a part…Well I have not thought of Radhika’s reaction when she learns the truth about Arjun….still thinking 🙂 stay blessed

  27. Ameena

    Ah gauriii, you always do that. Make me wild, crazy, anxious and……….HAPPY!!! ??????
    ARJUN IS TOOO AMAZING. NOTHING MORE TO SAY. I’m in love with this guy ?? Rads is no less. A kindhearted tigress.

    Sam..you little meanie…how could you do this to Mr. Cool? You didn’t do good ? I swear I’ll complain about you to gauri and she’ll punish you,, right gauri???? ??

    It was a wonderful update.????

    • Gauri

      Hi Ameena….nice to see you back…missed you…yes I will punish Sam and thanks for the lovely comment 🙂

  28. hai darling sissy 😀 😀 😀 😀 Sorry for the late comment 🙁 loved it like always 😀 rads trust over arjun oh woooooooowwwwwwwwwwww really awesome 😀 😀 😀 😀 sam deserves dis she s too much sometimes…….. rads only understand neil well i think 😀 😀 😀 if she s present at dat moment then sure sam ll get nicely from rads……… love u darling sissyy 😀 😀 😀 Take Care n keep SMILE 😀 😀 😀 😀 😀 😀 ll wait for ur next ff 😀

    • Gauri

      Thanks Suga dear…was waiting for you to comment…love you loads and million hugs for you 🙂 stay blessed 🙂

  29. Niharika

    Gauri Di do you know where Rosie is she is not commenting on any ff either have she posted her ff . I am missing her ff.

    • Gauri

      Niharika dear even I miss her…Rosie has taken a break to prepare for her exams she will be back in some time …don’t worry 🙂

  30. vasuraj

    wow wow fantastic one…
    nesam broke up, ardhika patch up…. 🙂
    i think sam deserves it, its all bcoz of her
    afterall neil is a human and a cool guy na
    its not lik tat he always cool
    someday he hav to lost his cool……. 🙁

  31. subha

    awesome episode…. i love ardhika part……… u r rocing eagerly waiting next one.please update soon.tc

  32. Roma

    GAURIIIIIIIIIIIII, it’s really very Awesoooooome n outstanding, mind blowing episode. ….you nailed it again. …soooooooo sorry for late comment. …I just loved the way arjun consoled rads n his love for her is getting deeper n pure n he is trying to be better….rads also trusting him now….very heart touching n horrifying past of rads….neil was really life saver for rads n his bonding with her is beyond any praising. ….Sam never gonna have sense in her head…she’s blaming neil for her stupidity….neil did very good, moved out, now she will know what she lost….neil’s each n every word was crystal clear n his last dialogue to sam about arjun was really… blasting……above all you as destiny doing fabulous, phenomenon, mind blowing job…….hat’s off to you. ….keep it up. eagerly waiting for the next episode, love you loads. muaaaaahhhhhh

    • Gauri

      Roma darling thanks for the amazing comment…love you …you just pumped energy in my body …well posted the next one do let me know how was it 🙂 love you 🙂

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