Manmarziyan- Destiny…Passion …Obsession (Chapter 13)

Hello Friends… Thank You so much for all the amazing comments and support… so here are chap 13… enjoy the ride….and pls pls pls do comment …love you all…next one on Wednesday 🙂

Chapter 13

Life is twisted…sometimes it bestows you with things you think you don’t need …but trust me everything happens for a reason…all the people good bad…you meet them for a reason…Neil-Sam are alone from everyone for a reason…Arjun-Radhika met for a reason…but they will realize that later
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Arjun reached the parking of Radhika’s flat in his Ferrari…he messaged her to come down…after 5 min she came down…wearing a knee length grey formal skirt with off white shirt hair neatly tied …and wearing thin strap kitten heels sandals…she looked at his car and thought; ‘’bl**dy show off’’ Arjun gave one look to Radhika from head to toe..his POV; ‘’God!!! she is so beautiful and delicate…I feel if I touch her…I might bruise her body…but guess I am the lucky one…she is mine’’

Once Radhika was inside the car he drove off…Radhika was in a awe of Golden Gate building…it was world’s best real estate giant…she felt nervous…she was so novice to all this…Arjun kept his palm on her thin waist and gently pushed her to move…’’Don’t worry…you are brainy enough to handle any kind of work’’

As he completed the formalities and got a temporary ID for Radhika…she noticed the female attention Arjun got…they way his female colleagues …fluttered their lashes and smiled at him showcasing their beautiful painted lips…she shook her head thinking ’’Silly girls’’ Arjun walked Radhika to his cubicle and directed her to the temporary system assigned to her right next to him…as he was briefing her he couldn’t help but notice that whatever girls he had met till date were artificial or interested in his resources…but Bunny she was beautiful real pure…and so flawless…he had a deep urge in his heart to protect her from the world. Radhika quickly got herself busy…Arjun asked her to read everything about the company….Arjun noticed Radhika’s blinking phone…she was completely into her work…he quietly stood behind her and noticed the name it was Jai…his temper was on peak now…he gently disconnected the call but it started again he curled his fingers into a fist…Arjun on pretext of helping Radhika…bend a bit and started explaining her the details to work on …he quietly picked her phone and kept it in his pocket…Arjun on the pretext of a break went to the smoking zone…he checked her call history…Jai had called her at least 50 times and he had been doing this on the daily basis…and no. of missed calls showed that Radhika was not interested in talking to him …but she was interested in talking to somebody by name handsome as that was most dialed and received no. other than her parents….he quickly copied the no. on his phone and dialled…Neil!!!…

Arjun burned…his POV ; ’’What is your relationship with Radhika.. Neil…why she trusts you so much…I don’t want to hurt you my friend…but I can’t leave her now…she is mine’’

As the day ended (both worked for 4-5 hrs being students) Radhika waited at the exit for Arjun…she still had time for her evening lectures and may be sometime in the library…Arjun unlocked the car and asked her to get in…once inside he fired the engine as they came on the road he spoke; ‘’Will drop you to your dorm’’

Radhika; ‘’Please if you can…drop to campus…I can take 2 classes and work in the library’’

Arjun was all surprised; ‘’you will climb the ladder of that library wearing a skirt…I didn’t knew it was a day for a free show’’

Radhika was furious; ‘’You are crude and shameless…none of your business…this is my body…I will decide what to hide and what to show’’

Arjun gripped the steering hard….he didn’t like her words…but he held himself back…he still cannot claim the right on her…he was not even a friend for her…but one day he will tell her that she belonged to him Arjun closed his eyes and took a deep breath to control his anger. He dropped her outside the building but did not respond to her farewell greetings…he drove off without a glance… Radhika just cursed under the breath; ’’Rude’’.

Arjun’s mind was still on Jai’s continuous calls to Radhika…and according Rana Jai wanted to marry Radhika but she seemed not be interested but her interest did not matter to Arjun …she belonged to him ..…so first Jai should be eliminated…then he will slowly take her away from Neil

Arjun dialed Rana he jumped looking at Arjun’s name; ‘’Get me all details on Jai Khanna…all means all…soon and I need details on Radhika’s family and friends too’’

Arjun POV; ‘’Slowly I will remove everyone from my way’’

Mumbai India Khanna Residence

Jai banged his phone…he thought hoe dare she ignore him…she disconnected his call 5 times today…where was she so busy… he pulled a picture of Radhika from his cupboard placed it on the bed he lowered himself on the picture said to the picture; ‘’Once I marry you…you will walk, talk smile and cry on my will…I will punish you for all the times you ignored me…denied me your time…I won’t even let the sunlight touch your skin…because your skin will be covered with my touch…you will be soon lying on my bed…same way as your picture….’’ Jai madly kissed Radhika picture and threw himself on the bed laughing thinking eventually he will win.

Samrat who had seen this behavior of Jai from the window was really worried…Jai was losing himself…and now it was very clear that Radhika was not interested in him…he had to do something before things go out of hand

Singapore University Campus

Neil had decided…he will no more be rude to Sam…even if she doesn’t love him back…he will live the best 6 months of his life with her…and cherish the moments…after their classes Neil was waiting for Sam to come…he was chatting with Hanna standing next to his car…Sam saw him enjoying with Hanna…her smile faded…she had decided…she will no more pester Neil…she quietly moved towards the car and exchanged polite greetings with Hanna…and sat inside the car…after some moments of discussion…Neil also took his place and they drove off…after few minutes Neil started the conversation; ‘’So Sammy how was your day?’’

Sam with a smile; ‘’Good how about you’’

Neil; ‘’Great!!!…best day till date actually’’

Sam thought Neil must have got a positive response from Hanna and he is happy about it she smiled and replied; ‘’Wow..that sounds good’’

Neil; ‘’Hanna is throwing a party this weekend and wants us to join…let’s go shopping…buy something good for you’’

Sam; ‘’Neil you go …I would prefer staying at home…’’

Neil; ‘’No you are coming…that’s final..we will buy a funky outfit for you…I want you to be the best girl on the floor That day’’

Sam; ‘’Ok let’s shop’’ Sam had agreed for Neil’s happiness but inside she felt she lost him to Hanna…but was happy that Neil was smiling.

Neil bought a beautiful one shoulder maxi dress for Sam with pearl earrings…once back home he asked her to try it on…Sam came out wearing the gown…Neil was mesmerized…she looked like a princess…Neil quickly controlled himself and playfully smiled; ‘’Sammy you look cute…let me take a picture of yours’’…Sam readily agreed for the picture…she posed for it…; ‘now I will be happy in what makes you happy Neil…your smile is so precious for me’ Neil clicked the picture and thought; ’Sammy…even if I never get your love…I will cherish these moments till I live…I love you Sam…wish I could show you how much’ They smiled at each other in a friendly way hiding all their emotions deep in their heart

Arjun’s Apartment…New York 10:00 PM

Arjun quickly showered…and dressed in a casual track pant…and a t-shirt he prepared himself a drink and leisurely sat in front of the television…but he could not divert his mind from what Radhika…said that she would do anything to her body as per her will….why was this simple sentence troubling him…the more he was trying to be good to her…the more she was testing his patience…Arjun smashed the glass on the floor and stood in the balcony to absorb the cool wind…yes he felt hurt today; ‘Bunny…one day I will tell you that you belong to me…from head to toe… each breath…your soul… in some days I will own each second of your life’

Anna’s Dorm

Radhika was reading…she suddenly realized she was very rude to ARjun…whatever he said was true she wasn’t appropriately dressed to work in the library…she picked her phone and dialled …Arjun answered after 3 trials; ‘’Yes Radhika’’

Radhika; ‘’Wow no bunny today…guess I should irritate you more’’

Arjun loved her voice…it was like wind chimes…he couldn’t help, he smiled; ‘’Any reason for calling this late’’

Radhika; ‘’To say sorry…I was rude…Sorry…am I forgiven’’

Arjun; ‘’Who am I to forgive you…I am not even your friend I should have been in my limits’’ he smirked

Radhika; ‘’you are one Melodrama queen…fine it was my fault…I was not appropriately dressed to work in the library…I was rude…SORRY…now am I forgiven…..please’’

Arjun kept quiet for a second then spoke; ‘’Yes bunny you are…will pick you tomorrow…goodnight’’

Radika irritated; ‘’Bunny!!!…you started again…well you won’t give up…fine will irritate you to the core…you don’t know me…goodnight no scary night to you’’

Arjun smiled…she was smart…fiery…difficult …childish….but amazingly cute…she had so much life around her…Arjun took a deep breath opened his arms…to him it seemed someone just gave him his life back…he had no plan how to get her…he just wanted her to trust him once and he will never break her trust…yes he loved her.

Neil’s House India

Mala had come down to meet Prema…they were having tea and snacks together…they discussed about the well being of there children…Prema desperately wanted to know about Mala’s opinion on Neil and Radhika’s match…she decided to ask now

Prena; Mala how is Radhika doing…’’

Mala; ‘’Good busy with her job classes…but misses RYTHYM and her two friends..’’

Prerna; ‘’I know they are quite close to each other…if you don’t mind I wanted to ask something’’

Mala; ‘’Why are you hesitating…we are friends go on’’

Prerna; ‘’Mala I have always liked Radhika as a student and also as a human being..do you think Radhika will ever think about Neil as a life partner’’

Mala was surprised…but happy…Neil was a kind of boy that any mother would want her daughter to have…she gently ask; ’’But he loves Sam’’

Prerna; ‘’Sam loves Arjun Mehra…and I can’t see Neil in Pain…I know Jai is interested in Radhika but I also know that Radhika is not interested in Jai…its my request whenever you think about Radhika’s marriage…please consider Neil too’’

Mala; ‘’But Neil and Radhika…their bond is different…I don’t know if this would be correct …and don’t know how will Neil Radhika react to this’’

Prerna; ‘’Their bond is unique…they understand each other like no on can…please think about it once…and about Neil and Radhika…we can make them understand when the time is right’’

Mala smiled and nodded…she was happy that she wouldn’t have to work very hard to find a groom for Radhika…now it is only Radhika’s opinion which was required

Singapore

Neil was ready for college but Sam was taking too much time; ‘’Sammy…today’s classes have to be taken today…they won’t re schedule for us again…please hurry up’’
Sam all annoyed came out; Neil…I have gained weight I am not fitting into my jeans…I will look ugly…I am depressed’’
Neil banged his head; ‘’Sammy we will talk about that in the evening…right now just wear something else..we are late’’ Sam curled her lip…Neil gave up he cupped her cheeks looked into her eyes and spoke softly; ‘’Lean or fat…jeans or sari…Sammy you are the cutest creature in this universe….you are more beautiful than the word itself…and I don’t care how you look at yourself and how does the world looks at you…for Neil Sam will be the best’’ Sam jumped in happiness and hugged Neil…he cuddled her like a kid…gently patted her cheek and said; ‘’Now go an come out fast’’

Sam POV; ‘No one has ever praised me the way you do…not even my family…I don’t want to lose your friendship’
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People are funny…Sam has the best guy in the world but she in running behind Arjun… ………
Radhika who never seemed interested in love has guys raining on her…Jai Arjun and now by Prerna grace Neil…how will this effect Radhika…she not interested in any of them…if you ask me what would I do if I was Radhika …well I would have packed my bags and would have taken first train to Himalayas 😉

Credit to: Gauri

102 comments

  1. Supriya

    Di srsly u made be crazy today….I love the way u have framed the whole situation… Di I want to c arjun’s reaction after hearing abt radz nd Neil alliance.. I also want to c arjun teaching gd lesson to jai…I know u will show all dis things in future updates but srsly I can’t wait…..I want to c it as early as possible…. What can I sae abt ur writing skills they r just out of the world….u r godgifted…I wish I cud write like u someday…I have 1 request… Plz post 2 chp in nxt1 it z perfectly fn if u don’t update early but plz 2 chp….I know u r busy but I can’t wait…. Plz put some sense in Sam’s mind…make aradhika frds naa…plz I wanna c more of jealous arjun…I love radz Neil bond a lot….. U r a magician nd u have cast a spell on my both heart nd mind…the more I read it the more I get addicted….I have only 1 wish now di dat I wanna meet u…srsly m sure u have a heart of gold…I wanna meet u will feel honoured if god gives me my dis wish…won’t bore u more now….plz think abt my request… Love u nd tc

  2. Hai darling sissy 🙂 🙂 🙂 🙂 superbbbbbbbbbbb superbbbbbbbbbbb superbbbbbbbbbbb 🙂 🙂 🙂 🙂 🙂 it’s simply superb ff 🙂 🙂 🙂 I like d aradhika phone conversation really nice 🙂 🙂 🙂 I think somehow radhika creating some feelings for arjun 🙂 🙂 🙂 but jai he s soooooooo obsessed dono wat future holds for him 🙂 it’s really good sissy 🙂 🙂 happy morning n take care 🙂

    • Gauri

      Hi Suga…thanks a ton dear…well Radhika is friendly but still not in love…actually she is more practical…wish you a great day ahead…loads of love and hugs for you 🙂

  3. I think we should keep radz ka swayemberlol……….;-).make Arjun the hell plzplzplz i me enjoying it ………:-):-):-). N sorry these many gaps later I m commenting actually I had been to my nani totally mast I time so…..
    ……bu t I could read it I would get time so sorry n I loved all your work genuinely u r really awesome ………….:-):-):-):-):-):-):-):-):-)

    • Gauri

      Hi Shreya, don’t worry…there will be no need for Swayamwar …Radhika will make her choice…bravely…and pls don’t be sorry…I am glad…you commented..loads of love 🙂

  4. neetz

    Awsomeeeee epii dear 🙂 please dont ever stop writing this in ths ff halfway..i l die ..u ve made me one crazy fan of this ff aswell as yours ..love you loads ..stay healthy :-*

  5. Sv

    I cant understand one thing . Y do always girls are claimed as a thing not as a person. She has her own views likes dislikes y she is always should go as per the will of a man. Jai is in the same state. Argh. The day arjun finds him in person he is gone because he is the best teacher for jai. How could a man go this cheep. Jai sjould chnage else no one one earth can save him. He is just like saral. Why many are like this radhika is precious. She should be taken care respected and protected. I guess arjun would do that as he respects her ( at tes he too forgets) protects her takes care of her .

    Neil and sam makes a perfect pair. They are friends for long time why cant they share their views . Come on guys say ur self out else u wont get the chance of it again. Prena and mala oh god ladies pls stop why should a girl and boy be always in love they have a pure relationship called friendship. Ladies grow up open ir minds pls rads and neil wont say yes to ur historic talks . Radhika need to learn from her how to.make others go crazy. She’s way oo sweet yet irritates arjun lol . I love that type coz they are the perfect people has all konds of emotions and one could be trusted.

    U nailed it di love u and one more thing sry to say here it here . I’ll update the next part of both my ff on saturday. Sry for the laaaateeee update.

    Di u made it love u more im really happy as u make every emotions perfect a perfect pack of everything.

    Love ur words bear hugs and lots and lots of kisses. Di love u more than my self . Love u di love u muhhhhhaaaaa………

    • Gauri

      Hi Sv, girls are claimed as object and things…because…girls don’t claim their respect…they adjust too much…only few stand up and fight…this has been running for centuries…it will take some time to improve…Arjun will give all what Radhika deserves but he too needs few lessons…wait and watch…loads of love and million hugs for you 🙂 Thanks a ton…you are one of the reason for my smile love 🙂

  6. Bhabya

    Srsly di the last 3 lines of destiny was awesome. The chapter was nice but di how u write so well. i’m addicted to the story. Bear my tight hugs.

    • Gauri

      Hi Bhabya, thanks dear…I really don’t know I am good or not…but you guys make me feel special thanks a ton for that 🙂 love you 🙂

  7. Don’t ever dare to go Himalayas…either its u or ur destiny I’ll pester you always no matter how much u irked with me….lol see u came back n my crazy mind started its work…n yes not to forget ice creams…m laughing like hell in my own stupid talk…hope u’ll not mind…enough of my blabbering

    Come to the chapter…i sealed my mouth much before…u v talent like bla bla———— plz find words by urself…just one request not vanish like before…even it’s 1 min or 1day…just stay linked…coz its one n only medium …love you ? ❤ tc?

    • Gauri

      Rosie my darling…I am not going anywhere…yes was quite busy for two days…so read the updates in the night…you can talk to me as much as you want…and now thanks for appreciating my effort…love you dear 🙂 stay blessed 🙂

  8. Sathya

    Gauri…. u r my mata devi…. ?seriously yar… u killed me today…. its just perfect perfect perfect. what a scenes yar… awesomeeeeeee girl. u have great heights to go…. pls make arjun to understand neil rads bonding soon. rads guts is tooooooo good and she is ruling the king now in all d ways… ha ha ha… its really fantabulous episode. ??????

      • Sathya

        u know what gauri… u r my inspiration now in writing… u have a great skills… i am. lack of words to praise u… love u soooooooo much dear…. i wish u get all success in ur life which u deserve ?????

  9. aastha

    di it was awesome………ardhika scenes were good…….so arjun has decided to do something about jai…..good…take him away from rads..no problem at all…….but plz dont take rads away from niel……………..nesam bonding is superb and they look cute together……….ardhika too looks wonderful together………loved Rads apology to Arjun…………..jai seriously is MAD…..he is yet another version of Saral…..and his words are really disgusting……somethig has to be done or he will be a maniac………so all together todays epi was blasting…….loved it sooooo much…………plzzzzzzzz update sooooooon…………love u…………….take care………

    • Gauri

      Aastha dear…no one will come in between Radhika and Neil…Jai will learn his lesson…and now thanks a ton dear…love you loads…1000 hugs for you stay blessed 🙂

  10. Hope

    Hai, Gouri…u make me awestruck everyday u update dis…byfar d best..i was lyk dying for to b monday to read ur ff…u r amazing..i’m not trying to flatter u..just stating d fact..I HOPE WE CAN SEE A ARJUN-JAI FACE OFF SOON…AND HOW NESAM ND RADS GoNNA REACT TO RAD-NEIL MARRIAGE..AND IF I WAS In Rad’s PLACE I’ll pack my bag but not to go to himalaya…I’LL GO ON A WORLD TRIP WID MY BUDDY Nd will b back wid a handsome guy from brazil…mostly Neymar..(coz..i have a huge crush on him..idc dat he has a kid..i’ll tc d kid lyk my own :-P:-P:-P)

    • Gauri

      Hi Hope…what can I say…so thanks dear…for the amazing compliment…these days I am lacking words to show how thankful I am to each one of you… your Idea of coming back with a handsome guy is a master stroke 😉 …tc and stay blessed 🙂

  11. Shree

    Aiyo!! One mixed update!! Cutie cute!! Arjun come on.. Eliminate Jai… This guy is too much.. S and Neil.. No Comments.. I loved the update!! Every single bit!! Post soon di!!

    Love you loads.. Tc… Keep smiling.. Bear hug ??

    • Gauri

      Shree dear…jai will get eliminated on time…love you and thanks a ton for your comment…tc loads of hugs for you 🙂

      • Shree

        And talking of Himalayas!! Lol… I already have my bags packed ??.. Is there any other place better?! I’d run there.. Sanyaas… Perfect thing…. Peace ??… Anyways… Let’s laugh out loud ??????

        Love you loads… Tc…. Keep smiling… Bear hug ??

  12. Rg

    Hi gauri. Grt episode. I dint like arjuns attitude Nor jai ‘s… Neither is bothered as to wat she wants… Though perhaps arjun has a slight edge I suppose . Poor radz… She has to deal with jai

    and Neil now, thou d last option is more soothing to her I suppose. I don’t understand y arjun has to begrudge neils and radz bond. After all Neil and arjun r supposed to b gud frnds… Radz doesn’t seem to b ready for arjuns taking. Gud… He deserves it. He should really stop being a jerk.????… Well raneil bond is too pure and shouldn’t b broken. And d sad part is neither Sam Nor arjun realises it though they both love Neil and radz respectively. Well Jai sound crude and spiteful. I don’t like him… Hey gauri when will radz fall for arjun? Any time soon. Plz give me a hint. Rocking update. Thanks for updating do soon. Looking forward to Wednesday mornings. Take care.. You r tooooooo gud, stay blessed and happy.

    • Gauri

      Thanks Rg, yes you are right…Arjun and Jai both need a lesson…but Jai is a hopeless case and Arjun will improve…RNEIl bond will never break…people who try to break it will break…Rads is not emotional one she will take her time to fall for him…one hint…Rads will bring out the tender feelings buried in ARjun’s heart. love you stay blessed 🙂

  13. It was perfecto writing, how do you do it, every time I read this story I feel so excited to know what going to happen next. I’ll eagerly wait for your next chapter. 🙂

  14. Sejal

    awesome update as usual..
    Arjun mehra is changing … Well that what’s love is it completely turns you into a different human being …..
    Rneil bond it is something beyond everyone’s expectations and imagination.. Why everyone want them to marry… When they know neil is madly in love with sam… Well time will teach everyone a lesson…. Especially jai khanna he needs to know that if he will even think of hurting radhika.. He will pay for this also.. She is only arjun’s bunny… What to say about our protective possessive and angry bird arjun he really have to understand rneil bond if he really want radhika to trust him and love him… Sam rather than realising her love for neil loosing hope … And our poor Neil he thinks sam’s happiness is not with him…
    Well gauri di if radhika goes to Himalayas arjun will track her there also….. finally he has got his bunny beauty and dancing swan he isn’t letting her go anywhere…
    The first thing after opening my eyes i read DPO and then my day starts thanku so much for this mind-blowing chappy ….
    How was ur weekend ?
    I missed u…

    • Gauri

      Thanks a ton Sejal…yes you are right Arjun will follow her every where…all these four people are very different and are reacting to same emotion in a different way…thanks again dear…My weekend was amazing …watched The jugle book…how about you?…Have a G8 day ahead..loads of love 🙂

  15. Omg today episode ws supper doopper hit. Today arj shows too much possisiveness & he said i want bruise her body, ohhhh this much hungry omg. And nowadays jai became a psycho, he needs a doctor, poor jai. Sam jealous ws good to read. Gauri ur writting skill …what to say? Ur blessed one. Im waiting for nxt one 🙂

  16. happy

    hi dr…..hw r u….today episode super……my most hated part…..jai scene and mala-prena conversation…..other than this….i liked all lines……

    now come to my most liked and loved part……arjun-rad phone call….and neil-sam in car scenes…..

    pls make understand arjun about rad-neil frdship…..give new scenes to rad-neil….i know..i am expecting more from u….bt u ly made this….sry….bt last…. give as much as you can…..

    i loved today episode….thank youuuuuu so sooooooooo much dr……

  17. chandan

    Good one Gauri…other day I was going through your other FF…a journey of love n frienship n I could see a glimpse of this FF in that…is so that?
    Any way keep rocking

    • Gauri

      Hi Chandan…thanks for the appreciation…and about the glimpse its possible because of my thought process…well I am trying my level best to keep it different 🙂

  18. Anvee

    No way to Himalayas…. just come to me I will hide you from the world….? girl I must say that I am impressed…. and head over heels in love with your writing…. ❤❤❤❤ Are you planning to make me crazy…. ???? just love you darling

  19. Jessie

    Hei I am a silent reader n I love your ff. Pls dont go to the himalays unless they have internet then it is ok…heheh U can updates the ff from there

  20. subha

    as usual awesome yaar…….neil radhu bond super……please update next one soon……. u r magical writer………..story interesting like a thirlling book..eagerly waiting next one…..tc

  21. Vini

    well that was really a superb chapter 🙂 🙂 u nailed it and i am out of words to describe your plot, your writing 🙂 .And this question is for the previous chapter .. why arjun doesn’t want her to work in bakery cuz if anyway he is picking and dropping her there is no point for him to think radhika not to work in bakery right ? it will actually help arjun to have some conversation with radhika on saturdays 😛

    • Gauri

      Thanks Vini…and now your answer…because he is twisted… he has a habit of controlling …and do you really think Radhika will listen to him…one chance she will do things her way……well he can only do that on weekends weekdays…he thinks its dangerous…but he will improve 🙂

  22. shreyanshi

    Hahaha…. Himalaya nyc choice gauri :p
    Anyways… Radhika is trying to understand arjun..
    And I am waiting, when will sam understand neil’s love :*

  23. Niharika

    Gauri di can you please give us a precap like how you used to do for your previous ff. Todays chapter was amazing.

  24. feby

    super duper as evr….i will say that tat stupid jai must get a damn big lesson…. i feel nice to c arjun melting away his egoistic ice bergs for radhika….its nice…and radhiks neils bond is the most beautiful thing…. loved it….
    well…how r u…????and how r the other good ladies of TU…???? I am desperately waiting to talk to thm….

    • Gauri

      Thanks Feby …how are you 🙂 how was the function …did you blush… hope you enjoyed the event 🙂 tc love you dear 🙂

      • feby

        iam fine di..and i enjoyed a lot….. function was also awesome…and blushing…no never…i was not much affected coz tis time situations changed a bit… many started seeing me as a big girl and wanted me to become a typical conservative malayali girl which i will never become… iam malayali but i have my own values and character…i dont like anyone changing tat….moreover iam a girl brought up in a military area which had a different culture and training… no one can ever break tat….and iam proud of it…seems serious na…s.. but i cant help it…i wish sooner or later every1 accepts tat … tat i am not the girl they expect..rather iam a girl of open mindedness and have all the defence values i got deeprooted in me……well love u too a lot…sometimes u ppl r the one who help me come out of situations as such!!! tq for tat…

  25. manju

    wow gauridi
    it was an amazing update di so beautiful
    really radz is very rude but its k soon what happen who know except u

    waiting for next one
    love u di

  26. Priya

    Hi Gauri..tat was a very nice Epi..luv u ?? i rarely comment on stories here..but i always never missed to read any of the stories..as lyk u ppl..i too luv Ardhika a lot??..today am writing this bcoz of ur character sketch on Arjun on this story..somebody who yearns for luv s definitely possessive abt the person whom dey luv a lot n also on the person who loves dem..i hope dis story wud tak it turns where this both person are Radhika for Arjun..der r many things on which arjun s to b taught acc to dis story..yes..but i req u let tat b ly through luv of Radhika n not by their separation.. wen some random person enterz ur lyf n giv al d happiness n suddenly dey leave u for one reason possessiveness..it s d big hurt tat a person mite face..sry if am boring..just thought to share my opinion..awaiting upcoming episodes..??

  27. Hey gauri…. I’m late ! Busy did exams….loved this one as usual..bl**dy show off huh could imagine the smirk ? on radhu’s face…God Neil and radz…noooo..prerna ji yeh ummidh nahi thi aapse? jai man…I pity u..but yeah arjun is no less ( though he has been controlling himself he needs a lesson and I can see that coming !! ?) Neil is back to his own self ….and the misunderstanding of Neil radhu relationship acc to arjun is increasing.. Hope he doesn’t take any adverse steps which would effect all of them..enough of my ranting now.
    Waiting eagerly for your updates..
    Take care..Loads of love ??

    • Gauri

      Thanks Sahiti 🙂 all the best for your exams dear… do well 🙂 loads of love and luck to you 🙂 stay blessed 🙂

  28. Gauri dear!!! first of sorry dear coming here late had too much work in ofc so….todays epi rocking one..as always u naileddddddd itttttt…..bichari radz boys r became diwane of her…me too will hv gone in himalaya.hahaha…but radhika is incomplete without arjun…only they each other make complete n became aradhika…super cute ardhika moment..m too fearing abt jai’s obsession yar..he has became so mad abt her..fingers crossed wht will happn nxt…waiting for nxt epi…love you..tc

    • Gauri

      Thanks dipika 🙂 now pls don’t say sorry…I know everyone has commitments…will post soon dear… tc love u 🙂

  29. Roma

    Awesome, marvellous, outstanding episode. ….very veryyyyyyy amazing n out of the world….I really appreciate your time and energy you’re putting into this amazingly awesoooooome story. ….just loooooooooooooooooovvvvveeeeeeeedddd it. ….this story is getting more and more interesting with each update. …arjun n rads convo very cute, he was restless n she apologized….wowwww. …at least she felt she was rude to him…little tiny place he got in her heart, I guess….jai totally mad and really jerk stupid thinking of having rads as his slave, how cruel…arjun will give him good lesson. …raniel bonding is so pure n prerna doesn’t know the depth of this bond…yes,they know each other very closely but they also know what they have in each other’s heart….n rads know Neil’s love for sam, similarly neil knows rads nature n very protective for her….it will be awesoooooome to see when arjun realized this bond how will he react to it…nesam were very veryyyyyyy cuteeeee, the way he praised sam, any girl can die for this sweeeeeet gesture n beautiful words…but sam will realize this later when she will see real face of her arjun n will find out what neil is for her….wowwww, superb, awesome, marvellous, lovely, very interesting story. …I love you soooooooo muchhhhhh honeyyy,….just want to meet you hug you n praise u for your awesoooooome talent. ….keep it up my sweeeeeetheart. ..eagerly waiting for the next episode, love you loads. . muaaaaahhhhhh

  30. Abha….bingo my lovely lady,congrats in advance for hitting again…i know not yet but when u’ll replied all these it will……n I want u to get 1000 s of comment…coz u r price less….n I wanted to know one thing….can u give me ur Gmail id for connecting only if u have no objections…if so then its ok…no problem…I know personal matters are there….lots of love ❤…tc?

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