Manmarziyan- Destiny…Passion …Obsession (Chapter 11-12)

Hello Friends…first of all Thank You so much for all the amazing comments and support… so here are chap 11 & 12…and now next update on Sun or Mon…sorry but need some time to write…so enjoy the ride….and pls pls pls do comment as that is a treat for me …love you all

Chapter 11

Hi there..its me again…missed me…oh yes you did…Radhika feared the dark and closed doors…every fear comes with a reason we will know it later…well but she is brave enough to face them and smile again…Neil just want to be Sam’s friend…Sam is confused if Neil has lost his heart to Radhika…And the Beast…well he will do anything and everything for beauty now… 🙂 😀
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Arjun dropped Radhika home…she wished him night and went in…Arjun watched her till she was in the lift…he smiled took a deep breath and said to himself; ‘’Arjun take this slow…she is different…you cannot win her by force….you have to be easy with her’’ he smiled at his thought and drives off.

Radhika went inside and freshened up she recalls her condition… to forgive Arjun and a smile covers her lips…suddenly she realizes ; ‘’the guy Sammy loves is also Arjun…and he is in US….is he the same person…should I call Sam? No she is where she should be with Neil…may be she realizes Neil’s love…and if he is the same guy then Sam might lose her senses hearing about him….I will speak to Mr. Hades myself’’…She decides to speak to him in the morning but then she gets restless for her answers and calls him Arjun smiles looking at his phone….he answers; ‘’yes bunny tell me’’

Radhika gets annoyed at the name; ‘’I am not a bunny…I have a question do you know Samaira Khanna and Neil Melhotra ?’’

Arjun Knew if said yes he might lose her and he cannot afford that; ‘’No…never heard of them…who are they?’’ He asks pretending all ignorant

Radhika; ‘’Both are my best friends…Neil had once told that his friend Arjun studies in US in NYU’’

Arjun; ‘’Are you sure on NYU?’’

Radhika; ‘’Actually no…he told me few yrs back…after that we never discussed…I hate that man’’

Arjun little irritated; ‘’ Why do you hate him…when you have never met him?’’

Radhika; ‘’Because Sam loves him…and it’s because of that man my Neil is in pain…I cannot tolerate Neil’s pain’’

‘My Neil’ hits Arjun hard…he feels jealous…;’’Has that guy ever told Sam…that he loves her’’

Radhika; ‘’Don’t know…but if I find him…I will murder him in sleep…and Neil will be free from the pain’’

Arjun in a slightly pained voice; ‘’Is Neil that important to you?’’

Radhika; ‘’Neil is my buddy…he knows everything about me my fears…my pain…everything…Ok leave all that…I just wanted to confirm if you were the same
person…don’t forget my condition…and thanks for today’’ She disconnects the call and thinks ‘why the hell I was telling him everything…Radhika control your motor mouth’

Arjun after disconnecting the call gets irritated…’’Why do care so much for him…you are ready to kill for him…but soon it will only be me and me in your life…Neil what kind of relationship you have with her…you have Sam be happy with her…you will have to leave my bunny…because she is mine now…I cannot see her with anyone…not even you’’. Arjun switches on his laptop…and plays a video of Radhika’s old performance…she must be 17 or 18…dressed in white ethnic attire…she looked like a celestial nymph….he brushed his fingers on the screen…and whispered ; ‘’Why didn’t I meet you before…? Neil kept you hidden from me…but now who will stop me…you don’t even know what you do to me…don’t know how will I hold myself from loving you bunny…I don’t want to scare you…but I am afraid if you don’t agree I might abduct you’’

Arjun was lost in Radhika when he received another message from Rana….’Jai Khanna loves Radhika…they might get married in future…’ Arjun now smiled sardonically…he rotated his neck to calm the burning nerves…’’I will destroy everything which will come in between me and my Radhika…Jai Khanna is nothing…he will have to live with the pain which my sister suffered for years.’’

Mehra Mansion

Nandini was reading in her library…butler told her about Rana waiting for her…she asked him to be shown to the library…once Rana was in Nandini without looking up asked; ‘’Give me a good news’’

Rana; ‘’Arjun knows about her…as per your instructions I have shared the videos. Photographs and also about Jai’s fascination for her…’’

Nandini smiled; ‘’Good…now Arjun will himself do the rest…but be in touch with Hudson…and let me know if Arjun asks you to do anything secretly’’

Rana stood quietly and then spoke hesitantly; ‘’Can I ask something?

Nandini looked up ; ‘’go on’’

Rana; ‘’Why did you held the information from Arjun for so long…you knew she was right in front him…you could have told him long back…and why did you share now…I am not getting it’’

Nandini got up smiled ; ‘’Because I wanted to be sure on Arjun’s feelings…Arjun liked her without even looking at her…I knew he would ask you to find about her… Hudson told me about his growing interest in Radhika without knowing she was the same girl, then I decided..it’s time for Arjun to know about the girl he had fallen for…now no one will be able to stop him…and about Jai….I don’t want their families to even think about their alliance…and after Knowing about Jai’s interest in Radhika…he will not let Jai to come near her…because he wants to hurt Khanna’s…’’

Rana; ‘’Are you taking your revenge?’’

Nandini; ‘’No…I am not interested in that….I am doing what’s best for my baby…keep in mind what I told you…and keep an eye on Jai Khanna.’’

Rana; ‘’Don’t you think we are doing wrong with Radhika’’

Nandini; ‘’No one will love Radhika the way Arjun loves her…and no one can calm Arjun the way Radhika can do…I am doing right…they will understand with time’’

Rana smiled and left…Nandini was satisfied with her job…she knew Arjun had hopelessly fallen for Radhika…and she wanted them together.

Singapore Neil Flat

Neil was enjoying the wind in the balcony…Sam came from behind and tickled him…he smiled…Sam sat the balcony railing…facing Neil; ‘’who are you dreaming about Neil?’’

Neil smiled; ‘’Can you guess’’

Sam; ‘’Me…who else’’

Neil thought for a moment; ‘’that’s an old story…new story is Hanna…I was thinking about her’’

Sam a little jealous; ‘’do you like her…I mean do you have feelings for her’’

Neil still smiling dreamily; ‘’don’t know…but will know soon…I still have 5 and half months’’

Sam was annoyed; ‘’She is not suitable for you’’

Neil; ‘’I don’t agree on that…well leave me…you tell me how is it going with Arjun …till where have you progressed let me know you if you need any help…’’

Sam got more annoyed; ‘’It’s going good one day I will be with him and you will dance in my wedding’’

Neil gave a broad smile; ‘’Yes I will along with Chashni…and may be my wife’’

Sam; ‘’You will marry before me…I thought you loved me?’’

Neil become serious suddenly; ‘’I am a human Sam…for how long I can go along with an unanswered love…I will marry the day I find a girl who will be my best friend love me for who I am and I have right to be happy…but don’t worry…I will always be your friend’’ Neil left Sam bewildered she couldn’t understand why it hurt her so much…he wanted his life partner to be his best friend…Sam suddenly thought if was Neil thinking about Radhika,

Sam’s POV; Do you love Radhika…it’s possible ……Hanna is just to cover up…he always shares his heart with Chasni…there are no walls between them…yes it has to be Chashni. They both are my friends but why I don’t feel happy about it’ …Sam was still thinking when she got Radhika’s call…she smiled and answered; ‘’Chashni my love…how are you’’

Radhika; ‘’Don’t talk to me…since the day you have reached there you have not called me once…only I call you…I am angry…now placate me…’’ Radhika spoke in a childish voice Sam smiled

Sam; ‘’Chashni my darling…I am sorry…who will I go to if you will be angry with me…I miss you Chashni…’’ Sam’s voice was little sad Radhika could sense this she waited for Sam to calm down and then asked; ‘’Sammy what’s wrong…tell me’’

Sam; ‘’Neil has changed…I am no longer important for him’’

Radhika; ‘’Sam you will always be his first priority…but you need to understand him too..he has loved you for so long without expecting you to love him back…he too deserves to be happy…Sammy ask your heart what do you want…if it’s your dream man…then only think of him…you shouldn’t be jealous if Neil is interested in someone else…give time some time…you will understand what is right for you….Now smile because your smile matters to me the most…’’

Sam smiled and then laughed so that Radhika could hear her…Radhika was right…she should understand her heart first….what if Neil’s heart has started beating for Radhika

NYU Campus USA

Radhika had the ability to make friends easily…Ron Adam, Steve had developed and instant liking for her…they treated her more like a baby since she was younger to all of them… specially Steve…Radhika pestered him to teach her how to ride a bike…initially he didn’t wanted to but slowly he himself started enjoying…because Radhika lived every moment… she was sitting in the lawn area with her classmates engrossed in a discussion…when one of her friend tapped her shoulder and asked her to turn around…as she turned around…Radhika’s smirked … Arjun was wearing his clothes inside out…and his undergarments over his clothes and he was still so dam confident…he gave her a smile and gestured her to come to him…she walked to him as if she won a battle…she looked at him …Arjun smiled , looked into her eyes…’’Now you will do the live project….and am I forgiven?’’

Radhika smiled ; ‘’I will do the project…and regarding forgiveness I will tell you end of the day today…you should attend your classes in this superman attire’’
Arjun was shocked; ‘’Do you want me out of this place!…my teachers would die of shock’’

Radhika covered the two steps between them and whispered; ‘’you punished me in the dark…I will punish you in light…you want my forgiveness…then you will full fill my condition…otherwise just be my mentor and after 3 months we will be strangers’’

She turned to leave but he pulled her back, Arjun had never met a girl like her… the more she challenged him the more he wanted her…he asked ; ‘’If I wear this for whole day can we be friends?’’ Radhika stepped back she knew he was trying to be to close with her… …she looked up and said; ‘’I need time to trust you…hope you understand’’
Arjun smiled and covered the distance between them; ‘’I understand bunny…take your time’’ Radhika quickly walked off…Arjun watched her walking away…she was seriously a live doll…and he was ready to anything for her. Steve fainted after looking at Arjun’s attire…Arjun attended 2 and skipped rest of his classes as already the campus looked distracted looking at his attire …some girls felt he still looked hot…crazy females…and boys could not think anything they just applauded his courage.

Radhika went to the library to work…she thought; ‘Good job Radhika…now he will know…who he had messed with…I am too good…should tell this to Anna’’ Radhika kept on blabbering and the librarian gave her a warning…she finished her work and started for the bakery she saw Arjun in the parking …she took her mobile and said; ‘’Smile Hades’’ Arjun looked in her direction and she clicked the picture; ‘’this will be remembrance of my win….Go fix your superman attire…I forgive you but we are not friends’’

Arjun smiled…She left for the bakery…she was walking when she heard a honking behind her…she turned and found Arjun following her she shook her head; ‘’I told you I need time…then why are you following me’’

Arjun; ‘’because it’s dangerous…you already messed with a guy yesterday…and don’t think I am doing this to gain your trust…you are a good girl and I would have done this for any good girl’’ Radhika gave up and took the sat behind him…Arjun dropped Radhika in front of bakery she thanked him…

Arjun; ‘’9:30 I will pick you up…now don’t tell me you can manage’’

Radhika; ‘’this won’t help you win my heart’’

Arjun; ‘’I know…but I will pick you…because I want to…and will try till you accept my friendship’’ Radhika rolled her eyes and walked into the shop

Radhika got busy in helping Aliza…when she came out she found him waiting for her…it seemed he never left…Radhika smiled…but she was not the one to fall so easily she knew till what limit guys can go to win a girl…she just gave him a friendly smile and sat behind him and they drove off…he dropped her outside her building and left…Radhika entered her flat and found Anna waiting for her…Anna smiled; ‘’Honey you are late…it’s not good to stay back at the bakery so late’’

Radhika; ‘’Mr Hades dropped me’’

Anna smiled; ‘’Well I should congratulate you…you made him do something he would have never done for anyone…I got to know about the superman attire today…’’ Radhika and Anna looked at each other and started laughing…between her giggles Radhika spoke; ‘’I thought he would never complete my condition…and I will be free…but surprisingly he did it…anyways I will praise his confidence no one could laugh on him…well leave all that…I will change and join you for dinner’’ Radhika went inside to change.

Anna POV; ‘No one mocked him because most of them fear his power…he met you condition because he is hungry for you Rads and I don’t know how to tell you this…but will keep an eye on him…will not let him ruin you’

Radhika came out after sometime she and Anna finished the dinner watched the television for some and wished each other for night…Radhika was doing for preparations for morning …her phone started buzzing…she saw the screen and her face lightens up; ‘’Hi handsome…how are you?’’

Neil smiled; ‘’I am good little one…now tell me what happened that day…you voice was different I know you made up the excused of being tired’’

Radhika closed her eyes and then spoke; ‘’I got locked up in the library store room…and someone switched off the lights…I fainted’’

Neil got worried; ‘’Give me your roommates no. I should have something in case of emergency…’’

Radhika; ‘’I am fine now…buddy just answer this one will I always fear dark… when will this stop? This all because of that fateful day’’

Neil; ‘’Hey sweety…don’t worry…one day everything will be fine…and I am there for you…now message me your roommate’s no. and going forward don’t hide anything’’

Between Radhika-Neil conversation Arjun dialed Neil…but his no was busy…Arjun was restless he dialed Radhika and he got call waiting…his nerves were on verge of bursting…he banged his phone on the floor…well this was the 3rd one in a row….he was angry; ‘’first time in my life I felt something so true…I won’t let anyone ruin it now…you don’t know Radhika till what extent I can go for you…’’

Radhika after disconnecting Neil call thought; ‘’I wish I could wipe that day of my life…if not for you I would have completely lost myself Neil…thanks buddy’’

Singapore

Sam’s POV; ‘’who is Neil thinking about…Hanna or Chashni…? I have to find out’’

Neil; ‘’I wish I could wipe that day off your life Chashni…I could never tell you the culprit…but I promise to keep you safe…’’
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Confused are you? Don’t be…because this is my game…when I want you to have something I will make you go crazy for that…so you may know it’s worth…Arjun’s feelings for Radhika will go to its peak level…and yes this might test his friendship with Neil or beauty might set him on a right path…and Sam poor soul she doesn’t even know what’s coming in future.
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Chapter 12

Love can never be forced…its accepted by heart and felt by soul…you love someone its your choice…but if your love is not returned…then it’s your destiny not to have that person two people should learn this Arjun and Jai
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Bird Song Mumbai

Jai scolded his assistant and shooed him out…the poor lad ran away from there all scared about his job… Jai was frustrated , this was fifth day in a row when Radhika had not answered his calls…she was ignoring him…he wanted to punish her for that…but he was helpless…if he does anything right now, it might affect his plans of marrying her…once he gets her he will make her understand how she made him feel.

USA

It was Saturday…the day of friends get together…Radhika was still at the bakery…Monday she will start her project she wanted to help Aliza to the max…she had already told her about this… the old lady was sad…but she was happy for Radhika. Radhika promised to come every Saturday to help and return after 2 weeks of her project…it’s was 1:00 PM Radhika came out after finishing her work she found Arjun waiting for her…she walked to him…once she was close enough he asked; ‘’Why can’t you leave this job?’’

Radhika huffed; ‘’Can you come with me for a minute ‘’ Radhika took Arjun inside the bakery…Arjun found a thin old lady sitting at the counter…busy working she gave a warm smile to Arjun when Radhika introduced him…Radhika spoke; ‘’I took this job because I needed it…. I know I can get a better one…but now Aliza needs me more…and I am continuing for that reason. I will come here every Saturday during my live project as well…now don’t question me on that…because I won’t back out’’ Arjun smiled…he felt proud …she was indeed different…now he liked her stubbornness…he walked to her took her hand and walked off…once they reached her flat…he got down held both her hands; ‘’you are amazing…I will not stop you from going to the bakery and you will not stop me from being your pick up and drop…promise’’ Radhika nodded positive and walked to her building

Arjun(determined) POV; ‘After 2 weeks you will not be working in this bakery…I know what to do’

Once they were inside the flat…all their friends were ready…Anna pushed Radhika to her room; ‘’Get ready soon…today we are gonna dance till our legs hurt’’ Radhika smiled widely ; ‘’Dance.!!!!….I’ll be out in a minute’’ Radhika quickly changed she came out in a emerald green shimmery short dress…she looked breath taking…but somehow Arjun didn’t like her skin show…Anna read Arjun’s expression…before he could say anything she spoke; ‘’girls are going with me in my car…and boys you can come along with Steve’’ Arjun was burning…he didn’t wanted eyes to be on her…he just wanted to take her away from all the eyes…he knew he had to be calm with her now…once she accepts him…he can tell her his heart.

Singapore

Sam was tired of Chang…she befriended him to make Neil jealous…but it backfired…he was getting too close…he was asking her personal questions…Sam was busy in her flat when Chang called, she answered; ‘’Yes Chang..tell me’’

Chang; ‘’Hey sweety…I was wondering if we could meet up for a coffee…we can discuss our project too’’

Sam thought; ‘’Fine see you at 5:00 PM today and Central coffee shop’’ Sam got ready and left for Central coffee shop…she left Neil a message about her location. Sam and Chang met at the coffee shop and saw Chang waiting at the corner table, she joined him and started discussing about the project…but Chang was only ogling at her assets ..Sam was uncomfortable…but she pretended not to notice…Suddenly Chang moved his chair closer to Sam…she flinched but kept quite…he pretended to be listening to her…but suddenly his hands pressed the flesh of Sam’s thigh…she started sweating…she didn’t know how to react…Chang came close and whispered;

‘’Easy baby…don’t be scared…you will like it just loosen up a bit

Sam replied between tears; ‘’Please don’t do this…I am not that kind of a girl’’

Chang; ‘’Oh come on…just let me in baby…I will take you to heaven’’ Sam tried to remove his hand but she was not able to…suddenly someone pulled Chang’s chair and he was on the floor…Neil looked at him with a murderous rage…he bend down pretending to help him and warned him in a very soft voice; ‘’Touch her again…and I will rip you off into pieces’’ he turned to Sam …’’Out of this place now’’, All these years Sam had never met this Neil…he was hell angry Sam quietly came and sat beside him and
they drove off towards their flat.

SPIN New York

Once inside the disc…Radhika was jumping with happiness…she was dying to dance she pulled Anna to the floor…they started grooving Arjun went to the bar and watched Radhika happily dancing…she was enjoying every beat every Rhythm…he had never met someone who would dance this beautifully…he could watch her for ages… Steve extended his hand and Radhika danced with him Steve was good in ball room dance…and Radhika was a quick learner… she matched his steps perfectly…the people around clapped for them once the song ended. Arjun burned looking at Radhika in Steve’s arms…he wanted to snatch her from him..but he kept calm…he didn’t wanted to scare her right now…many on the dance floor would come one by one challenging one another to show their moves in the middle of the floor…Radhika happily matched them…they applauded her for her spirit…one of the girls did a s*xy move with her hips and Radhika matched her…Arjun coughed all the drink in his mouth was on his clothes now…all her friends got tired Anna lifted her hands to show she gave up…but Radhika wanted to dance more….Radhika caught hold of Steve but he was hell tired he begged her to leave… Arjun didn’t wanted anyone else to dance with her…he came to her extended his hand to her…Radhika thought for a moment…she didn’t wanted to create a scene…but was not comfortable …Arjun moved forward .. looped his arm around her waist but took care that she shouldn’t be uncomfortable…he gently pulled her close and whispered in her ear; ’’you look better in jeans and t-shirt’’

Radhika made a bored face; ‘’I didn’t ask your opinion on my looks….I am out to enjoy…if you want to bore me then I will change my partner’’

Arjun tighten his grip…pulled her closer and whispered in a warning; ‘’ I am not the one to be replaced…no one will replace me in your life…’’

Radhika looked into his eyes and replied; ‘’You still are not a part of my life…we are just acquaintance not even friends…and you don’t scare me.’’ Radhika kept grooving with Arjun…without being scared……she was becoming a challenge for him…he actually had never met someone so fearless yet so fragile…

Arjun smiled; ‘’you will accept me as your friend soon’’ Radhika; ‘’We will see’’

Anna watched them from a distance and Steve interrupted her thoughts; ‘’Our friend is deep down in love’’

Anna; ‘’You believe that?’’

Ron; ‘’Anna it’s so visible…he has never looked at a girl the way he looks at her…’’

Anna; ‘’He just want to bed her…but she is difficult…and I won’t let Arjun ruin her’’

Steve; ‘’Anna you are wrong…mark my words she is the one…for whom he will fight the world…but yes I care for Rads too…won’t let Arjun do something wrong with her’’ Anna prayed that she should be wrong…but even if ARjun truly loves Radhika…handling his possessiveness would be a challenge for Radhika too.

Singapore

Neil entered his flat with Sam he closed the door with a bang …Neil was breathing hard…his anger was at his peak… he just wanted to break Sam’s neck for her stupidity…Sam slowly walked to him and touched his back gently; ‘’Neil….I am…’’ but her words disappeared somewhere when Neil caught hold of her shoulders and pulled her up hard; ‘’Your stupidity would have destroyed your life…you wanted me to be jealous…for what…why are you behaving like a girlfriend…you are not my girlfriend…YOU.ARE.JUST.A.FRIEND…so behave like one….Sam let me make this easy for you and me I am no more in love with you…get this thing in your head’’ Sam blinked…it felt as if she was hit by a meteor… her world just ended….Neil pushed Sam with a jerk and she fell on the floor…Neil walked off from there…next Sam heard was the bang of his room door she shivered at the sound and then broke down. Neil was sitting on the floor with his back supported by the closed door…tears were streaming down his face…it killed him to tell her that he didn’t love her…but it pained more to hear that she never will have feelings for him. After few hours Sam arranged their dinner on the table and with little hesitation knocked on Neil’s room door…he answered within a minute…she looked at him…he was still angry Sam shivered; ‘’Sorry…just wanted to call you for dinner’’ Neil joined her…once they started…Neil noticed the shivering of Sam’s hand….she was spilling food on the table and herself…he knew she was nervous…Neil took a spoon full of rice and lifted to her mouth…she looked up to him…all tears which were held came streaming out…Neil could never handle her tears;

Neil; ‘’I am sorry…shouldn’t have scolded you…but keep in mind not everyone is good…’’

Sam wiped her eyes; ‘’I am sorry…it was my stupidity…I never was good in reading people ’’Neil patted her head and fed her with his hands…he got up to leave…but Sam caught hold of his hand…she went wrapped her hands around his waist and hugged him tightly…Neil just kept a hand on her head….Sam felt the distance between them she desperately wanted her Neil…she kept on tightening her grip…finally Neil gave in…and he hugged her back…Sam took a deep breath as if she got her life back…she softly spoke; ‘’don’t love me…but please don’t leave me…’’ Neil took Sam to her room and put her to sleep..but she did not leave his hand…Neil sat there next to her and closed his eyes…after few hours Sam was sleeping with her head on Neil’s chest with her arm wrapped around him.

New York

Arjun came to drop Anna and Radhika home as Anna was drunk…they helped Anna to her room…once Anna was sleeping comfortably Radhika came to see Arjun off to the door… he stood there for some time and then asked.’’ Can I have a dance with you?’’ Radhika looked at the time and then at ARjun; ‘’Now?’’

Arjun; ‘’yes…if you don’t mind’’

Radhika; “Why?’’

Arjun covered the distance between them; ‘’You are not stupid…you know why…I like you’’

Radhika smiled; ‘’And you think I will believe you….I have heard enough about your adventures and as you said I am not stupid…I am not the one you will be able to bed…on the contrary don’t fall for me …I might break your heart’’

Arjun did not reply he just repeated his request; ‘’Can I have the dance?’’ Radhika refused… Arjun extended his hand and Radhika refused again Arjun smiled; ‘’I am not that bad Radhika…I am not asking your hand for wedding…just a small dance…please I beg you’’ He extended his hand and Radhika took it, he grooved with her for good 15 min without music and then suddenly stopped…. he gently pulled her close and said; ‘’I know trusting me is difficult…but I really like you…please try to trust me once.’’ He backed off without turning his back to her …he kept looking at her face…and moved out of the door walking backwards…Radhika kept looking at him till he was out of her sight. Radhika could not sleep…she knew he was trying to gain her trust…but why …She knew he never did any serious relationships…he changed girls like clothes…then why he wanted her to trust him.
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Arjun loves Radhika with his soul… she doubts him…but beauty uses her brain more how will beast win her heart..…Sam cannot tolerate Neil’s anger… she loves him but doesn’t know this herself… let us see…where will all this take them.

Credit to: Gauri

112 comments

  1. Hope

    U makes me want more in every epi…and i luv ur pov abt beauty n beast..I HAVE NEVER LIKED RADs MORE..RADS ROCK..i really liked Neil’s new attitude twds sam…i luv d fact dat everyone wants Rads..keep it up..keep smiling…

  2. Thank u soooooooo much darling sis to kept ur words 😀 loveeeeeeeeeee uuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu loooooooootttttttt 🙂 🙂 🙂 🙂 I was madly refreshing dis page from morn 5 to c ur update 🙂 🙂 🙂 so finally u updates yipeeeeeeeeeee love u lotssssss 🙂 🙂 first ll read n come 🙂 🙂 after dat ll comment about ff 😀 : D love u darling sis 🙂 🙂 🙂 <3

    • Gauri

      Suga dear you got so excited that you commented before reading…thats a gift for me love you 🙂

  3. Sejal

    Thanku… For the double dhamaka.
    Arjun accepted the challenge for his beauty…
    God.. Whn will sam realise her love for sam … And poor phones they dt even know why they are getting punished…
    Thank god arjun has realised he have to go easy with rads…. But his possessiveness …. How will poor radhika deal with him….
    Whts the secret between neil and radhika about dark place
    and… Jai the poor lad he dont even know whom he is going to face…
    So much suspense….. So much curiosity…..
    Ohk now no more bak bak it was my thanks to you gauri di for making my morning … Bear hugs… :-*

    • Gauri

      Hi Sejal, first of all thanks a ton for the amazing comment….secret you will know in upcoming post…yes Arjun has to use his brain because this girl is little impossible….Sam will realise her love but slowly…and thanks again dear. loads of love 🙂

  4. chandan

    This FF is making me go crazy…you are an awesome writer Gauri…too good…
    What happened to Radhika in past in the darkness n how Neil helped her…NeSam part is good..but feeling very bad for Neil..hope soon Sam realizes her love…n by the way Sam thinking of Neil loving Radhika has something to do with Arjun thinking the same…n Arjun…what to say about him…he is totally lost…it seems like you are revealing something but that rvealing has so much suspence attached to it…totally rocking Gauri/Abha…keep rocking n tc…

    • Gauri

      Thanks Chandan…sometimes to realize the worth of a person one should go through the pain/fear of losing him or her….that is what is happening with Sam and Arjun is crazy 🙂

  5. Shree

    Lovely episode di!! Two back to back chapters!! Lovely!! Please get Jai tamed soon… Pleeeaaassseee.. So it was Nandini eho asked Rana to do it… Good… Totally out Arjun is… Lol… His care.. Possessiveness.. Everything!! He fulfilled the condition!! Wow!! Party thsting was awesome!! The dance in the end was too cute!!

    Nesam… I donno… Both of them just hurt each other and themselves with their stupid activities… How can Sam be so dumb?! Doubt raneil friendship..

    Loved it di!! To the core!! Happy Ugadi!! Post soon di!!

    Love you loads. Tc.. Keep smiling… Bear hug ??

    • Gauri

      Hi Shree, my jumping queen how are you I don’t know but every time I read your comments I feel energy balloon bursting around me…loads of love and hugs for you…and thanks a ton 🙂

      • Shree

        Hehe di!! I’m fine.. What about you?! Energy balloon?! Hehehe… Chhooo chweettt!!

        Love you toooooo.. Laooaaadddssss… Tc.. Keep smiling.. Bear hug ??

      • Shree

        So sweet of you!! The same goes to you!! My energy boost!!

        Di do you drink boost?! I hope you do t mind this stupid question of mine..

        Love you loads.. Tc.. Keep smiling… Bear hug ??

      • Gauri

        I use to love bourvita and cadbury drinking chocolate …but no more 🙂 it made me fat 🙂

      • What….no….lol in my thinking abha u even don’t know how i potrayed u….just like Monica not radhika…she is multitalented n happy go lucky person with great humour…that’s why i like her…

        N lets do it again. Bebes…. Second century…it irritated me when it’s in 90’s…u r nt sachin to b out in 90’s to make India win…what say..

      • Gauri

        he he thanks for making it a century for me….and Monical Sehgal is really talented and beautiful…and in looks I am very simple too comfortable in my own skin The only positive about me that I don’t give up…negative…I don’t accept change easily

  6. Darling seriously u r a killer when it comes to writing :-O one tight hug for ur ff 🙂 🙂 🙂 🙂 it’s really really really really really superrrrrrbbbbbbbbbbb 🙂 🙂 I like the nadhini POV that logic u kept in dat it’s was really amazing 🙂 🙂 🙂 feeling good wen it comes to arjun he don’t want to scare before she accepts 🙂 😉 🙂 dat was really awesome 🙂 🙂 🙂 🙂 radhika dancing part was pakka superb 🙂 🙂 🙂 🙂 🙂 I like D way others frnds of arjun treated her like precious one 🙂 🙂 🙂 as usual Neil n rads bonding amazing 🙂 🙂 🙂 I loved arjun’s super man attaire 😀 😀 😀 ha ha ha 😀 in all these sam poor soul she didn’t understand her own 🙁 feeling sad for her 🙁 hope she ll understand soon 🙂 🙂 🙂 Neil did his part as best as ever 🙂 🙂 🙂 as a frnd n also a human 🙂 🙂 I loved him 🙂 🙂 hope arjun ll understand the pure relation between Neil n rads n should value that 🙂 🙂 🙂 after all this ur ff in single word is PEERRRRRRRFFFFFFEEEEEEEECCCCCCCCTTTTTTTTTT 🙂 🙂 🙂 LOVE U darling sissy 🙂 🙂

    • Gauri

      Hi Suga, if the update is killer so is your comment….love you dear for making me feel on the top of the world…love you sweety pie, stay blessed 🙂

  7. MANNU

    Hah Gauri u have an amazing talent… addicted is a small word to compare my love to ur this ff.. love this ff and luv ur writing style moreover luv u dr… god bless u…

  8. roshini

    First what is Radhika’s past, how will Arjun make her leave the job at the bakery…please post soon or I will go crazy thinking 🙂

  9. Rg

    Wow gauri thanks for the wonderful two. U r d best. Too gud.And plz take time to write it OK if u post by Monday too. For d way u shape ur story we will wait as long as it takes. Well jai is d new saral in making. Why is radz afraid of d dark?. Well Sam comes of innocent and sweet today. Finally Neil has broken his image of devdas. I wish Sam realize s her feelings for Neil. She can’t tolerate if he falls for radz .. y isn’t arjun understanding raneil bond. I thought atleast he will. Whn will radz come to know tat both d arjun r one and d same? And Wat will happen with tat revelation? By then will she b already in love with him ? Then wat happens …Ah gauri I can’t wait plz tell me. Soon. U r an amazing writer. Ur plot is toooo gud. Way to go. Tc. Waiting eagerly for ur update. I couldn’t wait for today morning to come faster.

    • Gauri

      Thanks Rg, Sam is actually the innocent one you will know more for her in coming updates…I believed Neil should make sam realize the worth of true love …RNeil bond id beyond explainantion…but Arjun loves neil too…its my way of making him mad… 😛 thanks buddy load of love 🙂

  10. Absolutely brillent, hats off to you, your story has magic and I’m addicted to it….. Why is Radhika afraid of dark and how did Neil save Radhika from whom….. I feel there is an incident that happen to Radhika that only Neil knows about, and I can’t wait to find out. Waiting for your next update. 🙂

    • Gauri

      Hi Brin, thanks a ton…and Radhika’s fear will come out more in upcoming chapters …will try and post soon 🙂

  11. Ooohooo….always ur update brings a huge smile ? on my face…n my tensions n worries vanish like magic…i wish if it could polarise that u update regularly…but I can understand ur pressure…about update mouth sealed…won’t blurt out anything…I know it will not sufficient if I speak…just one wish now plzzzz write a book….so that I can able to meet u in future n ………………………….now no words…thanks for writing this ff….love ❤ u…tc?

    • I did something in ur precious post…don’t know if u like it or not…but plz visit ur previous one n go to the last….be happy ? ?

      • Ooh…no…no darling I know u aslo looked like ur name…brightness everywhere…n as m jobless now…make sure u pay for it….lol…m crazy again?

      • Gauri

        Rosie…everything has a reason…relax …but take a job which you like …love you darling 🙂

    • Gauri

      Thanks Rosie darling….first the comment on previous update…thanks for making a century…now where do you want me treat you or what do you want for treat….daily is little difficult…but will still try… 🙂 Rosie thanks for the amazing support darling I am sending you 1000 hugs love you stay blessed 🙂

  12. Sathya

    OMG… u nailed it Gauri. You know what.. whenever i read ur ff… my bp is getting high. i really love rads guts.. she is too good in ur creation. And about arjun… i can see that day by day he is going mad on his beauty. he is ready to go at any extent for rads… he s ready to break his friendship also with neil.. oh no pls dont do this. already neil is suffered a lot by sam now pls dont snatch rada n arjun’s friendship from. neil. i want Arjum to get his love without hurting neil feelings. he should balance his frindship n love equallyy… its a rocking shocking wpisode gauri.. hats off to u ????????

    • Gauri

      Hi Sathya…thanks for the lovely comment…and dear don’t worry…RNEIL bond will never break…because neither Radhika of my story so sacrificing nor Neil so giving they are really smart 😉 love u 🙂

  13. ohhhhhhhh myyyyyy goddddddd
    …what an epi gauri….now i m jabra fan of urs yar…amazing..beyond the word….Neil is doing great yar…sam needs to understand him now….Arjun n rads r super cute today..wished it would not end so soon

    …dil mange more…hehe…love u n tight hugg dear

  14. Raaga

    wonderful gauri …..
    waitin for the next one rather waitin for sunday…

    curious about radz past…

    tq for the lovely ff gauri….love u loads 🙂

  15. feby

    wowwwwwwwwwwww……..wat an awesome one….2 chappy….loved it…..superb….its nice to c arjun struggling sometimes….but i felt bad for neil and sammy….u r a wonderful writer di…..no words to say….well…. iam leaving today and will come only after two days coz tomorrow its engagement and sunday exam….well…will u give me ideas to not get shy before my mama jis and auntys and cousins whn they tease me…coz they often start teasing me telling of my marraige…and whnevr they see the handsome young guyz they show me and tease me…i try a lot not to show my blush and smile but it comes out finally….uf…any ideas????

      • feby

        aaaaa???!!! my god….and engagement is of my cousin…and so every1 came today morning in my native…i will reach there in evening…and evry1 in the house wid full on masti…we all cousins rock!!!tats y i was sad..coz one by one aftr marraige is leaving on…no worries..i will not let her go so easily…today tat jiju is also coming to meet all cousins…we will nevr agree to him if we all dont like…we all made a gr8 planning to confront him…u all pray for him tat he dont get frightened seeing us…v r supr naughty cousin gang…….lol…. ;-p
        and u r telling me to blush..my god…its my time to make her blush….but these ppl dont leave me..especially my all mamaji …i am thinking how to escape from thm…the gr8 thing is tat the didi who is getting married is not at all having any sort of shyness…and iam sooo sensitive to these things….funny na…

    • Gauri

      Hi Feby dear, thanks a ton…have a wonderful trip and weekend…ok now tips when some teases you on marriage just I would like to laugh it out…it would be best…All the best for your exam stay calm and do well… 🙂 and when they show you handsome guys ask them if you can whistle or wink at guys…trust me no one be able to tease you…loads of love dear 🙂

      • feby

        tq..tq tq…..ya…i will do…its a nice idea….and tq for exam wishes also…i wish i do well…but i will b in hangover it seems….love u too!!! muahhhh….. 😉

  16. U make me emotional today…… I love u baby….. I love when he love her…..I love when she starting…….Neil is always been a cute Pie….but I love him to make Sam realise the reality….

  17. Anvee

    Love you love you for this Gauri I was reading previous episode again and again yesterday as I badly missed it thank you….

  18. Thank u so much for double tucker.
    Ahhhhh i just love this guy(arjun) thought, feelings, dialogues etc., when he said “u r mine” my heart is jumping, really soo powerful word.

    Today neil ws action hero & he did correct.

    Gauri, chap- 12 def. ‘Love can never be forced its acceped by heart & felt by soul’ so so true, I like the lines.

    Ok bye gauriiiii. Im waiting for next one 🙂

  19. Oh god !!!!!!Maha update it was morning surprise for me… Thank u dear…no word to say iam speechless, ossum , lovely update…hole part amazing….waiting for Monday episode….keepit up…tc…

  20. Supriya

    Di thanx for keeping my request….u promised it on Friday..I asked for morning ….u promised morning then I asked two cup…u said u will try..I didnt knew people can take my kiddish demands so srsly becoz my fmly they say m not matured enough ..Now abt the ff wht can I sae…loved every inch of it…u have put each and every emotion in it…love,friendship,passion,obsession.I don’t think der can be anything better dan dis 1.I have 2 question di may I ask? I know u will not refuse so asking…Does arjun know dat he loves radhika?nd Do u read my comment full? Honest answer haa di…it z kk if u don’t read it full don’t worry I won’t mind di…my love and respect for u won’t decrease becoz I believe rule for happy life z never expect from any1.Now my same question when will u update nxt1.U can’t imagine how crazy I m after reading dis…I think u know so plz update as soon as possible….love u alot.tc

    • Gauri

      Supriya dear..first your answers…Arjun knows he loves Radhika…and yes I always read your full comments…all the comments give me a kind energy to write more…and more…I love your enthusiasm ….I have a younger sister…she is too a jumping jack…and now my dear darling Supriya thanks a ton for the comment loads of love and hugs for you 🙂

  21. aaliya

    Seriously it was awesome I’m one of the silent readers just can’t kept quiet so thought to comment plz update it on Sunday eagerly waiting for next episode u don’t know day by day I’m becoming mad for this ff I have never thought I’ll be going to this extent but seriously the way u explain n all it properly fits in mind reallly loved this update
    Just try to update it sooner
    Thanks for this wonderful update

    • Gauri

      Hi Aaliya, thanks a ton dear…I will try but cant promise about Sunday…loads of love and hugs for you 🙂

  22. happy

    hi dr….hw r u….today come earlier to comment…..dnt make u wait…..i have lot to say….today episode…so good….i loved each and every line……

    before about episode….pls promise me….u never break neil-rad frdship……u know i love them…..i cant tolerate anything between their friendship…..if u do something like that…that day ll be last day i love ur ff…..sry dr……for hurting u….i dont have any friends….i always separate myself from others….bt this frdship make me feel good….sry dr for hurting u…..

    now episode…..tight hug for u….u make my day full of happy….smiling…smiling…..if anyone see me..they think i am mad…..thank you so much dr…..1st call between rad-arj…i didnt like it….arj hate neil for rad….then nand-rana conversation good….without doubt rad make arj calm….nand idea good….nxt neil-sam conv….sam doubt on rad….i hated sam today….bt loved neil….arj attire…oh god…bakery pick up-drop…..nice….then most loved part neil-rad phone conv…amazing….what happened before…again mystery….reveal it…pls…dance among friends…i loved rad…..arj possessiveness….i loved all scenes..super…sam frd i hate him…neil angry..felt bad….when ll sam learn about her love…it gives so much pain to neil…..and final arj-rad dance in dorm …..amazing…..thank you sooooooooo sooooo much for this episode…

    i loved over all….hw is my comment…if it somewhere hurt u sry dr…..thanksssssssssssss…..

    • Gauri

      Hi my lovely friend Happy,,,how are you…I promise I will never break Rads-neil friendship…so please keep commenting on future updates…I love your comments happy and whenever I read your comments its brings smile on my face …loads of love and big hug for you 🙂

      • happy

        thanks for rply…i am fine….thank you sooooooooooooo muchhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh for giving this episode………i am waiting for next…untill i repeat this ff whenever feel bad……by doing this…a big smile come on face and mind get relax……thank you dr…

  23. Hiee… Double dhamaka!! Wow ugadhi special? it’s gonna be touch for radz to handle arjun …sammy I have never seen a girl more confused than u..plzz don’t doubt radz …arjun…it’s gonna take tym to understand radz Neil relationship but I’m sure once he understands everything will be fine… Neil and Radhika share the purest bond..its faithful than friendship…loyal than love …UNCONDITIONAL….
    Jai..poor man ..I pity him! With Neil , arjun and his own father he will not be able to win radz? …
    Loved today’s update gauri…u r an exeptional writer!# keep going..
    Take care.. Love u loads??

  24. neetz

    Just like the name this ff is an obsession for me now gaurii..dear wat have you done to me.. :-* even though i know u l post only friday how many times i just checked to see whther u have posted early ..:-D love you …keep on going ..wishing this ff neva ends 🙂

    Just out of curiosity may i know whr u r from ..gauri is ur real name…sorry if the question is too personal for u to share..

    • Gauri

      Thank you Neetz, I feel on the moon reading all the comments …I am from Lucknow…my name is Abha…i am working in Bangalore… Gauri is my pen name…I personally love this name 🙂 loads of love dear 🙂

  25. Dhara

    Thanks for d double bonanza. It was superb asusual. I am falling in love with beast. The way he cares for radhika is just awesome. But I know beauty is touch not to crack.

  26. Chinmayi

    Gauri,i saw the update early morning,but i wanted to read it in full peace…aaj hamari yaha festival hey,,,,i dont know whether u guys know abt it,its UGADI..yea…happy ugadi
    i was busy in morning,now got time ,i hve read each line thrice…bcoz i wanted to enjoy it to the core…omg!!! I m liking this avathar of arjun…he is pleading radhi for a dance,ye dono episodes sooper se ooper hey,,luv u ,luv u ,luv u…….

    • Gauri

      Thanks Chinmayi…happy UGADI to you too…for me its navratri first day so fasting…loved your comment…tc stay blessed 🙂 love you 🙂

  27. Gauri

    Hi Friends Wish you all a very happy UGADI and chaitra Navratri to all of you may almighty fullfil all your wishes…happy weekend…I am going for jungle book tomorrow so super happy 🙂 love you all 🙂

  28. aastha

    het gauri di………well no words to describe the epi………..it was awesome, wonderful…..well whatever I say ll not b enough to describe ur story coz its…..I loved every part f it……..I never thought arjun would wear his clothes in the reverse order as rads asked him…..but I knew he wud coz he wud do anything 4 hs beauty………………nandini’s plan s good…..but as u said it wont b easy………….what does this jai want????????? y is he pestering rads???????? I only hope rads say no to the engagement………….the dance bar scenes wre all superb!!!!!!!!!! finally beast danced with beauty………I ve a doubt: as anna doubts does arjun want only to bed her?????????or does he love her?????????? ….. I liked the final words f rads…….can u give arjuns pov wen rads told him that she doesnt trust him n that she mi8 break his heart………..I too have doubts like rads …….y does he wants rads to trust him…..and I liked that last sentence…….ll he really do like that to rads??????? I mean change rads like he changed clothes…….this sam is so stupid……….lucky that niel was there otherwise……………..I love niel more now….love that niel is no more a devadas ………so sam still loves arjun?????????? rads as usual a non stop chatter box…..I loved her convo with arjun…..asking whether he knew nesam….what’ll she do when she comes to know that arjun lied to her…………..I ve another doubt: for the live pgm ll rads have to stay in arjun’s apartment??? will anna tell her fears abt arjun to rads???? as anna doubts does arjun want only bed her or does he love her???? I ve a request: will u give arjuns pov wen rads told that she doenst trust him????

    • aastha

      sry di for the late comment…..I saw it in the morning but cud nt read as I hd to make arrangements to go to native place……….finally I reached hd snacks ten lunch n now commented…happy……

    • Gauri

      Darling Aastha, first don’t say sorry…and now thanks for the lovely comment…Rads is brainy…yes Arjun loves her and will go mad for her…Neil is behaving as a normal human would behave…about Sam I will reveal why she is so insecure…wait for the further updates love you cutie pie 🙂 stay blessed

  29. Honeybee

    Yayyyyyy! Yaaayyyy! Yayyyyy!!!!!!!
    I’ve gone crazy. I’m dancing ???.
    I’m laughing ??? I’m flying ?? I’m crying ?? I’ve gone totally mad ???

    Yayyyyy! Yayyy!! Yaaayyyy!! Ppl come and dance with me. ??

  30. Sejal

    You know what di i read every single rpl of yours to every single comment so i can get to know when will be the next update……
    I m suffering from the addiction of your ff…
    Cant keep my nerves under control untill the next one..
    Untill the next update i will replay the entire update in my for atleast 2-3 times… I m really crazy mad for this….

    • Gauri

      Sejal thank you so much dear…all your words are like honey 🙂 I will update on monday for sure 🙂

  31. Bhabya

    Di what is this???? How u write so well? Every time I read it I feel it awesome. Please keep on writing…..

    • Gauri

      Thanks Bhabya…I think I can write because I get the encouragement from my readers…loads of love 🙂 stay blessed 🙂

  32. Amy

    OMG!!!!!!! What an awesome update……….
    I love u gauriiiiii…….. that is what i call a real treat………. i don’t even have words to express what i felt when i read your ff……..
    Just saying that it was woth the wait……
    🙂 🙂 🙂 🙂 🙂 🙂 🙂 🙂 ♡♥♡♥♡♥♡♥♥♡
    What made radhika afraid of the dark so much? I have a bad feeling that most probably sam or someone radhika loves is involved in that………. whatever it is reveal it soon…….. the wait will kill me…………. 🙂 🙂 🙂 🙂
    I wish it was monday already. Eventhough i hate mondays i can bare it if i get to read your ff………..
    Love u….. take care and be back soon with more awesome updates like this……….. ♡♥♡♥♡♥♡♥♡♥♡♥♡♥♡

    • Gauri

      Amy thanks a ton darling 🙂 and I can’t express how I feel after reading your comment…love you Amy… you will know the secret in coming updates…will post on monday for sure…happy weekend dear 🙂 stay blessed 😀

  33. Sv

    I’m stupid soo soo stupid for not coming online today . Sorry for the late reply.Wow di u r super awesome wanna hug u and kiss u for the same . U made my day . Now im not able to sleep. Where should i start from . Here i start. Arjun – he is desperately needs radhika’s trust and wanna live with her. A pure love. So nice but he is too possesive which is radhika should handle. I.love his care and his jealosy and his longingness of her trust . Nailed it. Jai has got a tough competitin and thinks of hurting rads after marriage which is not gonna happen and should not happen(my request). Arjun will rip him apart if he ever comes to know that he is gonna think of hurting rads Radhika – again awesome. Should learn from her how to make others go crazy . She is a brave bold yet soft nature . She mingles easily and make friends love her. She should make arjun go crazy to the core. He he he ….. Sam – stupidity to the core wanna make neil jealose but backfired. Should take a big brick and bang her head and shout on her eaes and say ” you love neil u stupid”. But feeling for her when neil avoids her. Neil – super hero saviour. Im not able to understand why he is hurting her when he feels for her. Sam i meant to him but y he is avpiding her but feeling for her inside. Nandhini – rocked it. Yippie she is concerned and i love her because she is the one who is gonna make arjun and rads together . Wow love her. Jai – argh no words to say but will face arjun soon . Wow di wow im gone now. U made my day and im really sorry for late reply. I love u . Love ur words and di take care bear hugs and kisses from me. Love u di

    • Gauri

      Hi SV dear, I missed you too…now I am happy…Arjun yes he has fallen for her…Neil is learning and yes you will know the reason for sam being like this… Jai will face Arjun and learn a lesson…Nandini…yes she loves her brother a little too much…love you dear…and pls pls pls don’t say sorry…loads of love and hugs for you 🙂 bless you

  34. Roma

    Wowwww gauriiiiiiiiiiiii my sweeeeeet darling, it’s superb n epic double dhamaaka. ….it’s beyond my expectations. …I’m just speechless n overwhelmed n watching the show with full of excitement n concentration. …nobody should disturb me…biting my finger nails n while reading each n every bit of this story…I’m totally immersed into this story n can’t think now….it’s really superbbbb n dynamite story….blockbuster n nobody can beat this amazingly awesoooooome unique marvellous, outstanding, mind blowing…..no words to describe my feelings. …whole dictionary is very small to praise your imagination….my standing ovation to Youuuuuuuuu n this story…hat’s off….bowed down…..ardhika n nesam both splendiferous, divine, magical, killer narration. …..Breathtaking scenes n stunned dialogues. …wowwww. ….keep it up my sweeeeeetheart. ….never read or heard such an amazingly awesoooooome story before in my life…eagerly waiting for the next episode, love you loads. . muaaaaahhhhhh lots of hugs n kissesssss. ….

    • Gauri

      Rosie I am here…already posted the next one….sorry dear was busy for two days…loads of love 🙂

      • Yipeeee…hurray…i thought u vanished coz of my ice cream treat demand…..lol….see u r back n my crazy mind works again…actually I couldn’t see u for 24 hrs that’s why…n don’t mind my banters regarding ice-cream….m teasing ??

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