Manmarziyan- Destiny…Passion …Obsession (Chapter 10)

Hello dearies…first of all a big thanks for all the comments and support…I am seriously on the moon now…I keep reading all the comments again and again…it’s like celebrating birthday everyday…thanks for making me feel so special…love you all…So here is the Chap 10 next one on Friday 🙂

Chapter 10

Hi folks…sometimes we think that giving everything to loved ones means love…no sometimes it means spoiling them…I am a mix of ups and downs and both are need to grow strong in the life…and when such people lose something they want desperately…there are chances of them going astray…..well enough of me…let’s move forward
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Radhika was tired of Jai’s calls…he was now pestering her… he had nothing sensible to talk…sometimes she would just let the phone buzz without answering…Anna made sure Radhika takes complete rest…it was Saturday Anna asked Radhika to take a nap and she will go the super market to pick few things…Radhika went to her room and slept off…the medicines still had the effect …Anna was ready to leave she opened the door and found Arjun standing…she spoke; ‘’Arjun please leave her alone …give her sometime…she will be fine…and right now she is sleeping….’’

Arjun; ‘’I will not disturb her…can I see her…I will leave after that’’

Anna nodded and showed him Radhika’s room…a known smiled covered Arjun’s face when he watched his sleeping beauty…her mid night black hairs were spread across the pillow…Arjun slowly kept his hands on either side of Radhika he took one look at her face her eyes her cute nose and her lips…gently bend down and kissed her forehead…and while doing this he closed his eyes… he was affected by the touch of her skin…Anna was shocked…she didn’t knew Radhika had grown so badly on

ARjun’s heart….when Arjun walked out of the room Anna whispered; ‘’you like her’’

Arjun; ‘’ Like???? No…. I am mad about her…’’

Anna; ‘’don’t ruin her…she is a good girl…’’

Arjun; ‘’She is mine Anna…good bad I don’t care…let me know if she needs something…and I want her to quit that job at the bakery …convince her or I will do it my way…which neither you nor she will like.’’ Arjun left…. Anna crashed on the sofa thinking…’’I have to stop Arjun …how will fragile Radhika handle mad Arjun’’

Khanna Residence Mumbai

Piyali was having tea with Samrat…she had been restless for quite a few days…Samrat noticed her disturbed expression; ‘’What wrong Piyali?’’ Piyali looked at him and said; ‘’I am worried about Jai’’

Samrat; ‘’What about him’’

Piyali; ‘’Radhika…what else…she has turned into an obsession for him…I am scared…if Radhika refused him he might turn violent’’

Samrat thought for a moment; ‘’I always asked you not to fulfill all his wishes but you never paid heed to my words…now he is out of our hands…he believes his demands are just…remember one thing…Radhika will not be forced to accept Jai…and I will see what I can do to handle him. Also, wanted to tell you as you were not in office…Nandini is the new Chairperson of Birdsong ..Arnav Mehra has transferred all his rights and Powers to her’’

Piyali was shell shocked….Nandini…she was engage to Samrat once…but Samrat broke off and married Piyali…she must have come to trouble them.

Singapore University Campus .

Neil after finishing his classes went near the car and stood there waiting for Sam…after some time he saw Sam coming out…laughing and hanging around a guy’s neck…Neil smiled and turned his back to Sam…he quickly got into the car next to the driver and started playing with his phone. Sam wanted to make Neil jealous so she pretended being over friendly but it backfired…Neil seemed to be least interested…and the guy Sam was hanging around was trying to be over friendly now…she excused herself and quickly got into the car and they drove of to their flat…once inside Neil place his stuff on the table and took off his watch…he was about to take his t-shirt…but when he turned around he found Sam standing with full angry expression with her hands on her hip…Neil raised an eyebrow’; ’’What?’’

Sam; ‘’Why are you ignoring me…?’’

Neil; ‘’Nothing like that’’ Neil tried to move away but Sam pushed him with force on to the bed and sat on his stomach with legs on the either side…Neil looked at the posture and then at Sam she was still angry ;’’Sammy this is awkward…just get up’’ he tried pushing her legs gently..but Sam held his hands and pinned them to either side of his head…Neil didn’t know he should laugh…or cry she came close to Neil’s face; ‘’Neil Melhotra…dare you ignore me’’

Neil; ‘’Sammy I am too uncomfortable…you should give one look to yourself’’

Sam; ‘’Don’t be scared Neil….I will not rape you …at least not today don’t know about future’’ Neil stared back at her shocked…and then started laughing heartily…after a sec Sam joined him too…Neil threw Sam on the bed next to him she fell on her back…once their laughter calmed down Sam wrapped her arm around Neil and kept her head on his chest…Neil tried to moved but Sam tighten her grip; ’’Stay Neil…stay’’ Neil did not touch her…he just stayed like a statue… Sam after a sometime spoke; ‘’Hug me back Neil…don’t think so much…I missed you badly this whole week…never ever ignore me again.’’ Neil knew this was nothing…as Sam was very hungry for affection she had missed for so many years he wrapped an arm around her and kept the other one on her head…Sam smiled and hugged him tightly…after few minutes she slept off in his arms still holding him tight…Neil knew someday she will hurt him again…but for now…he wanted to be there for her.

NYU Campus

Radhika had been avoiding Arjun completely she did not speak to him whenever he visited Anna place…he had apologized quite a few times…but she had told him that she had nothing to do with him…but it was difficult to avoid him in campus as he was mentoring her…she had to meet him today after classes…Radhika waited for Arjun to come all others were done with their discussion she was alone in the room….he came and sat on the chair opposite to her and softly spoke; ’’Hi Bunny how are you?’’ Radhika didn’t like the nick name ..but there was no point he wouldn’t give up…she handed him the project…Arjun went through all the details and said; ‘’Good work…try more examples next time…from next week you will do a live project with me at golden Gate…be ready from Next Monady…I will pick you’’ Radhika blinked in surprise…she wasn’t prepared for this; ‘’But I have classes…and my job’’

Arjun; ‘’Classes will be handled…you will get the brief on all the lectures… I have already got the permission…and what filthy job are you talking about…the one at the bakery…that is as good as not having one’’

Radhika; ‘’I need it…plus live projects are in the 3rd month…and we just started the first…’’

Arjun;’’ Because I feel you can do it…and you will be paid some stipend for all the hours you work…’’

Radhika; “I still need time…I am not prepared of live projects…’’ Radhika got up to leave but he caught her arm pushed her to the wall …Arjun came to Radhika’s ear level…’’you will never defy me…get this straight’’

Radhika looked at him frowned and replied in a strong voice; ‘’You are not my master…my mind rules my heart…and no one else’’ She tried pulling her hand out off his grip but he was way too strong for her…he pulled her closer…Radhika looked up surprised by this attitude….he was barely an inch from her face

Arjun smirked…he loved her courage; ‘’Brave…! Bunny…you will very soon know what am I to you…and leave that job at the bakery’’

Radhika; ‘’I won’t…. do whatever you like…what will do…lock me up in a dark room again’’

Arjun saw tears in her big eyes he softened a bit and smiled; ‘’Can you forgive me…for that incident?’’ Radhika was surprised at sudden change …she tried reading his expressions and replied; ‘’does my forgiveness matter to you’’ Arjun loosened his grip on her arm… his palm slid down brushing her arm to fingers , caught hold for her fingers without breaking the eye lock…he lifted her knuckles to his lips and planted a kiss on it…Radhika shivered…Arjun looked up straight in to her eyes; ‘’You know the answer now…tell me will you forgive me’’ Radhika tried to pull her hand away but he tighten his grip; ‘’Don’t pull…it will hurt you which I won’t like…’’ he smiled at her irritated face…then he gently let go , Radhika took two steps back and spoke; ‘’fine on one condition … you need to wear your clothes inside out…and in the reverse order for whole day tomorrow in the campus…if you do than I will think…and remember I will think…not forgive’’ Radhika turned to leave but Arjun blocked her way ; ‘’fine …if I fulfill your wish Bunny you will do this live project…deal’’

Radhika confidently looked at him; ‘’Deal’’ She left and Arjun closed his eyes…the feel of her skin was still there on his lips…and he wanted to absorb it completely

Radhika completed her work at the bakery…she locked the shop took the keys and started walking to her flat…Radhika took the longer route through the park it was crowded and properly lit till 10 in the night…she was scared to take the alley…she was walking with her head down and hands in the pocket of her jacket…suddenly someone came in front of her blocking her way…Radhika looked up a huge guy…with a tattooed arm and a dirty grin was staring at her…she knew he was one of those guys who would daily loiter about in the alley…she was nervous…but she didn’t let it come on her face…the man leered at her and mockingly spoke; ‘’so you started taking this route…the alley looks so dull without you sweety’’

Radhika tighten her grip on something in her pocket…it was pepper spray that Anna gave her…she kicked his manhood and spayed on his eyes..he screamed in pain…Radhika ran without a backward glance…after sometime she turned to see if he was following her but kept walking …suddenly someone pulled her and she collided with a strong chest…she looked up and saw Arjun standing in front of her…smiling down at her with his arms around her waist ; ‘’What are you doing here’’ she pushed him to free herself

Arjun; ‘’Stalking you…’’

Radhika was still breathing heavy due to constant running , he kept a hand on her head and softly spoke; ‘’Are you ok bunny?’’

Radhika felt calm; ‘’ …was scared…that guy…he followed me to this route…I kicked him and used pepper spray’’

Arjun looked at the tiny brave creature infront oh him…he loved her more now…Arjun out of the blue pulled her into a hug…Radhika did not protest…he softly said; ‘’you did right and you are very brave…I told you to call me in case of trouble…why didn’t you call me?’’

Radhika looked up to his face he was holding her protectively like a teddy bear, she replied; ‘’ …will keep in mind…can you please drop me home’’

Arjun patted her head and said…’’you don’t have to request… just ask….and I will do it…but please forgive me’’

Radhika pressed her lips mischievously and replied; ‘’complete my condition first…then I will think…’’

Radhika’s POV; ‘’People fear you …now they will laugh on you…welcome to my world Hades’’

Arjun saw the challenge in her eyes; ‘’you are one naughty difficult girl…I will do everything you ask me to… except one ‘’

Radhika; ‘’What’s that?’’

Arjun lifted her chin up so she clearly reads his eyes; ‘’You will know when time is right… come I will drop you home’’ He gently pushed her forward and walked off.
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Hmm they look so cute together… …but it will not be easy for him…Beast is madly in love with her he will do anything of her one smile…but will not let her go away from him…Poor Jai…but Arjun has to fight more…he doesn’t know the intensity of RNeil..bond…and Sam’s crush on him…and above all Radhika’s love for Sam’s happiness…its complicated…even I need a break.

Credit to: Gauri

102 comments

  1. chandan

    Oh Gauri….this is beautiful…beautiful n more beautiful…the lines which are at end making us more curious…the one thing that Arjun not going to do is leave her for anything/anyone…right??
    GBU…tc…update next one soon…

    • Gauri

      Thanks Chandan…. and yes Arjun will not leave Radhika even if she wants to leave him…Radhika will see his madness in coming chapters… tc 🙂

  2. Hai my darling sissy 🙂 🙂 🙂 thanks in previous for Friday ff 🙂 🙂 today ff was really good 🙂 🙂 🙂 so finally its rads turn to make arjun mad 🙂 🙂 🙂 sure she ll drive him crazy 🙂 🙂 jai I think he have no choice now 🙁 so sad 🙁 one great twist is waiting for arjun dats neil rads bonding omg am seriously waiting for dat one moment wen arjun get to know about this how he ll react??????? :O let’s hope for the best 🙂 🙂 should create some new words to praise ur ff darling and am working on it 😉 😉 😉 😉 u rockedddddddd ittttttt 🙂 🙂 🙂 love u darling 🙂 🙂 take care 🙂 🙂

    • Gauri

      Hello my darling Suga…well first thanks to you for waiting reading and commenting om my story…Arjun is mad…but Radhika will bring out his best out of him…wait for more loads of love 🙂

  3. For today ardhika rocked completely….but why Sam ….will she create any hurdle…if she will make Neil again cry…i ll not leave her…surely Arjun should witness about raneil bond…it will be more interesting…feel like Arjun’s lust coming to love slowly…but i want him to try moreee….i should stop here…don’t what m blabbering nowadays being mad…awesome mindboggling…wish if u could write daily…again started my blabber…i hope i don’t irk u…loads of love ❤ tc??

    • Gauri

      Rosie my cutie pie…what will poor Sam do when Arjun has already made a decision …don’t worry everything will fall in place with some twists…and you never irk me…love you dear 🙂

    • Gauri

      Thanks Shael, well thats a huge compliment my story is nothing compare to that of Faraha and Thena…but thanks a ton dear 🙂 love you

  4. Vini

    Hi , awesome episode 🙂 🙂 your words today were very catchy nd touchy .. I simply loved it 🙂 though niel try not to get hurt but that is not n his hand . destiny will play a role in his life .. But how comes out of it ?? That’s what will make him.strong rite ? About arjuns love/care to Radhika .. Still I’m not able to figure out what my heart feels for them .. I am in the same confusion for past 3 days .. I feel so pity/sad thinking about Radhika .. Out of Somewhere I feel Radhika will get hurt more cuz of arjun .. Dunno what will happen but let me wait isee the next episodes 🙂 thank you for the early update

    • Gauri

      Thanks Vini, well we don’t learn till we fall…Sam will learn her lesson slowly…and don’t fear for Radhika…she might not be a macho…but she uses her brain…so fear for Arjun 🙂 love you

  5. Supriya

    Di I wonder how do u do dis srsly u surprise me everytime….I use to think it z difficult to impress me but u do it everytime in ur updates.I was waiting for dis from the day u said u will update on wed nd u have to believe me on dis dat first thing I did after getting up from sleep today was dat I checked ur update… U can’t imagine how crazy m abt dis ff well I also should sae dat u keep ur promises and i love u for it nd abt dis ff it z simply mindblowing nd too gd.I think u will drive me crazy till last one but honestly I don’t want it to end sorry for such a long comment now my same question again tell me wen will u update nxt 1….love u sooo much.tc

    • Gauri

      Hi Supriya, Thank you so much…for the amazing comment dear…I feel on the moon to read that you wait for my updates…thats a big thing for me…I will try an update as early as possible dear hopefully friday… loads of love 🙂

      • Supriya

        Thanx for ur reply di nd I know Friday z just going to come day after tom but god know how m going to wait till den…I will have to hold my curiosity I guess but I know even u r busy so will wait patiently…pinky promise lol…love u soo much.tc

  6. Sejal

    Ohk… So firstly thanku di for completing my request…
    As usual a very nice chapter…
    Arjun’s madness is increasing day by day … A bit scared how radhika will react when she knows about Sam’s attractiom towards arjun…
    And than there is jai his obsession how will arjun fight for his beauty with jai neil… And with beauty herself to make her fall in his love….. to make her his..
    So much curiosity and excitement about the next ones…
    You are truly a sweetheart di…. Thank you for such a nice chap luv you so much for this…

    • Gauri

      Thanks Sejal 🙂 …Arjun will really work hard to get Radhika…and he daam cares about anyone else…Sam will soon learn her lesson…you will know more in coming chapters 🙂 loads of love 🙂

  7. Sathya

    no words at all… simply superb ???. mindblowing episode dear… too too good. and btw its a good n funny punishment for arjun ???

  8. aastha

    superb di!!!!!!!! no words to express my feelings…….so the beast has fallen completely for his beauty…..loved radhika’s challenge…..ll he really do that????????? i liked rads attitude n everything……so bold………1 doubt: soo 4 te project is rads gonna stay in his apartment??????….wonder hw the beast will b able to handle that…..bt hs beauty is nt sme1 who gives up easily…………loved arjuns kiss on her fingers……loved rads fighting that guy………..loved sams dialouge tat she wont rape hm…….bt din like hr……..she s soooo selfish…..she wants niel and at the same time hurts hm too……….y s this jai pestering hr???????i wonder wat’ll happen wen arju comes to know f it……….hw is samrat gonna change s obsession towards rads………1 mre doubt: is nandini gonna take revenge on samrat as piyali fears????????

    • Gauri

      Thanks a ton Aastha, well Nandini is not for revenge…she only wants to tame Arjun down…who is wild…Sam will learn her lesson she is an insecure person…but not bad..Jai’s fate we will know when he faces Arjun . love you dear 🙂 stay blessed 🙂

  9. Sv

    Oohhhh mmmyyyyy ggggoooooooodddddddd. That was freaky awesome. Super duper. Omg im scratching my hear to start with . Ya gotcha.

    Arjun is sometime mad but when it comes to hos bunny then he is falling even to hr feet wow . His weekness is his binny . Rads challenge was great. I guess that is going to be a new trend in the campus because it was him who is wearing like that. Neil and sam’s scene was a comedy one I loved the way sam was asking sorry for neil was a piece of high level comedy. I guess neil has not trusted her fully . Stupid neil she loves u but she is not feeling that she is in love with u .

    Soo this is going to be tough. All are tied to each other and ur last para says that it is really gonna be tough.

    Wow di loved it . I just wanna hug u really and di u are always rocking as u do always. Love ur words di the day I see you I will kneel down and say that di I love u . Lol di . U r a super awesome writer pls do write a big novel and publish it so that I may read my first novel. Take care di bear hugs and kisses too.

    • Gauri

      Hi Sv….now what should I say…you make me smile with your comments…love you for that dear…well Arjun will be hot and cold…yes she is his weakness and she will fuel his madness more…Sam and Neil will learn slowly… and 1000 hugs for you loads of stay belssed 🙂 and please don’t go on your knees…I was never able to handle that…if some one did I would tighten my running shoes and run without looking back 😉

  10. Dhara

    It was just superb. As I told earlier my beauty is really powerful then her beast. Today ardhika rocked.

  11. Rg

    Hi gauri fantastic chapter. I got with sooooo much of expectation of reading ur new chapter. And trust me u made my day. It cheered me up tremendously.. radz and arjs romance ws tooo gud. Radz naughtiness is infectious… Am re reading this one all over again. Their tashan is enjoyable. A thoroughly mad arjun… sounds gud. So possessive too. I don’t like jai. And I liked Sam today… I will be waiting for Friday. If possible plz give slightly bigger update. Gauri u rock. Take care.

  12. Gauri im sooooo happy 🙂 poor arjun 🙁 radhu pls forgive him, & what the condition is this? if he gets angry no one can save u from the beast hand, Better u understand. And gauri i want more & more ardhika scene 😉
    Today sameil scenes r 😀 😀 super.
    Jai pls try to forget radhu.
    Gauri im waiting for friday.

  13. Gauri what to say yar…epi by epi my words r vanishing to praise you… it is extra ordinary…this story has something that driving me crasy yarrr…you r very talented girl like rads in ur story…love u dear..can’t wait for nxt one…

  14. Shree

    Wow!! He cares so much for her!! I’m loving this Arjun!! Even Anna knows.. I hope Radhika can handle him… Please get Jai tamed… Sam just do something to her… I don’t want Neil hurt… Lol inside out!! He can do anything to get a smile on her face… I just don’t want Sam and Radhika to have a rift … Raneil bond.. Arjun needs to know… I fonno what arjun eill do when Radhika will back off for Sam.. I don’t want her to.. Please make Sam realize her feelings..

    Loved the update di!! Please post soon..

    Love you loads.. Tc… Keep smiling… Bear hug ??

    • Gauri

      Thanks Shree…Arjun will tame Jai when time comes…Sam will realize her feelings in coming chapters…loads of love…tc 🙂

  15. sweetylekha

    woww awesome superb no words to say cant wait for nxt episode plss plss upload fast yar i cant wait

  16. maandey

    gauri….will you tell me what the hell is going on with me….i come to know about your update just now….via comment section….eeeeeeeeeeeeeeee………………………..chapter is lovely like you…..muaaahhhhhh

  17. Ananya

    Hi Gauri,

    Way to go girl!!!! you killllllled it… Its amazing ‘story… Every time I login only to check if at all you have written the next update…. its just wonderfulllll…. keep going…. :-*

  18. Amy

    Hey gauri sorry for late comment but as usual busy 🙁 ……….. what should i say about your update…… i am speechless…….. it was amazing 🙂 i loved it…… update the nxt one VERY SOON…… love u loads 🙂 🙂

  19. Niharika

    Gauri di your ff is amazing. Just waiting for 12th then I can read your ff million times again and again.

  20. subha

    amazing episode …awesome…….no word’s to say …….. u r rocking……. i am always love u r ff……please update soon eagerly waiting next one……tc

  21. Sabila

    Ummm…
    I luved it.. I was a silnt reader but hav to say u did a grt wrk.. Ur writings r srsly.. . I feel lik m watching epi.. everything u mentioned with soo much details tht i can evn imagine d whole scene.. luv u loads.. Plz do post every day.. I evryday chk for ur update

  22. I’m commenting here for the first run hair I butvi always admired yr work today just couldn’t stop myself !! Ironically I loved the end cos it enlightened me on how smoothly u complicated the plot ! Wah wah! It went soo smoothly! Eagerly waiting for ur next update ! God obvio radz is gonna chose Sam ? plzz don’t hurt Neil more ! Bhandha acha hai yaar?( fangirling?)
    Take care .. Love u loads??

  23. happy

    hi dr…..hw r u……………..1st sry sry sry………for late rply…..nw ly come to this site……………read all lines………..ita amazing……10 times i read it repeatedly……its super………….

    1st arjun’s kiss on rad forehead…..never imagined…..super…1st kiss…..”mad on her”….cant express it….rad ignoreness….arjun ask forgiveness…..nice….rad condition weird….lets see…wt ll happen….ardhika closeness…..liked….next neil-sam….super….i liked sam…..smiling while remember those scenes…..amazing dr…thank you so much for this smile…..next arjun-rad meet…..arjun ll do anything for her…..hug….super…..i loved last scenes……dont make anything easy for arjun…..he must pay for his confidence…..

    thank you so so much for this wonderful episode…i liked it…..i loved it……thank youuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu sooooooooooooooooo soooooooooooooooooo much dr……today night….i ll get sweet dreams….thank you so much dr……..

    • Gauri

      Hi Happy I am good …hw r you? thank you so much for the lovely comment I was waiting for your comment….well I am so glad to hear that my story made you smile…keep smiling dear…loads of love 🙂 tc

      • Happy

        Thanks dr…..I saw ur reply in previous episode….thanks Dr….hereafter I won’t make u wait…thank you so so much Dr….

  24. Honeybee

    Gauri! Gauri! Gauri! You never forget to make me smile. Yep! All happy happy now! ? It was a heart satisfying update. Really! It is very complicated? But you won’t take a break until we say so. ? can’t wait for next wonderful chapter. Update sOOn!

  25. Supriya

    Hey di just wanna ask u something out of curiosity hope u don’t mind di r u in colg ??nd haa I know u will update on Friday but if possible will u update in morn and plz plz plz two chp plz it z kk if u don’t m just requesting anyways have a gd day love u alot.tc

    • Gauri

      My dear Supriya…I am working in Bangalore…my lovely girl I will try to update friday morning not sure on 2 chp but will try for sure …your enthusiasm makes me write…thank you for that…loads of love 🙂

      • Supriya

        Ohhh thanx di u r such a darling update whenever u r free I know u r busy person it z just dat my vacation has just started nd I find it hard to pass my time becoz my sis z studying in pune so have no1 to play with whenever u update u bring a smile on my face and believe me I keep reading ur ff whole day wen I get bored den I read the previous ones of dis ff u can say m obsessed to it….I think I will srsly cry wen u end it in real anyways let’s not talk abt end of dis ff…love u.tc

  26. feby

    oh abha di…iam so sry for the late….i forgot to comment after reading….i have to say tat tis was the most lovely chappy od DPO….. and whnever i find abt the profession and wat the ppl r doing in their real life ..i feel tat iam the real kiddu….hahhahaaa….no doubts u ppl call me baby and sweety and dear…hahahaaa….u know di… i have become mad with my schedules and still iam laughing….i itself dont know y……

    • Gauri

      Feby darling…my grandfather once told me laughter is the best medicine…I do it to…and sometimes for no reason and sometimes on my own stupidity….but that life…are your exams done?….its ok if you were not able to comment…but yes I did miss you… loads of love and a BIG THANK YOU 🙂

      • feby

        nice advice….i too laugh a lot on my stupidity tat now evn my parents find it difficult to understand me……funny na…i confused thm also….and my exams r not over..i told na…jee mains is on 10th..but iam thinking how to do it as i hav an important engagement function of my cousin on 9th…. i wonder y ppl become so eager to marry…our cousin gang is breaking because of marraige….i am very sad…and confused too….and dont thank me… u r all more than gud friends for me…so no more thank u btwn us…ok???

      • Gauri

        Ok first thing…no one takes any one place in someone’s life…we all have our own places…so don’t worry your gang will never break… and just give your exam with a relaxed mind…everything will fall in place 🙂 love you

      • feby

        tq di for ur encouraging words….ya…i will make sure tat our cousin gang doesnt break evn if they r getting married…..

  27. manju

    h gauridi

    sorry for commenting late
    i already read ur story
    now i m opened ur story to ask when will u update next one but after i came to know i didnt post my comment before

    i m very sorry i feel guilty dear pls forgive me

    tell me when is ur nexj update
    i m eagerly waiting dear

  28. manju

    sorry for the typos mistake

    i love u one and only di
    ♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥

    • Gauri

      why are you sorry…arre its ok…I know you love me..stop saying sorry…I will post tomorrow morning

    • manju

      k i take back my sorry

      even my bro is always tease me by saying i didnt complete any sentence without sorry or thank u

  29. Roma

    Awesome, marvellous, outstanding episode. …ardhika very lovelyyyyyy n her challenge….hahaha how will he fulfill it….that will be interesting n real funnnn….welcome to rads world arjun….but jai, neil n even sam so many hurdles for arjun….nesam very strange bond, Sam unable to realize her love for him n Neil well done man, loved the scene….destiny playing very precisely its game n I’m enjoying it very very muchhhh. …keep it up. eagerly waiting for the next episode, love you loads. muaaaaahhhhhh

  30. Congrats ? abha for crossing a century…actually it looked odd to me 98… So I made it to 99… Now its ur turn to answer Roma make it 100…. Yipeeee …….celebration time….i demand a treat….lots of love ❤…tc?

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