Manmarziyan- Destiny…Passion …Obsession (Chapter 1)

Hi There all the lovely people , please find the first chapter of the new FF…and let me know your views on the same…will post the other ff in 2 days…You guys have given me amazing support thanks for that …hope I will get the same for this story as well. Please do comment…pls ignore my mistakes

Chapter 1

Mumbai- Colaba Railway Officers colony

Radhika ; ‘’Ma …I am leaving…need to submit my admission form today….Sam is also waiting downstairs’’

Mala; ‘’Ok but what about your breakfast….you are turning careless …and why is Sam waiting downstairs …call her up’’

Radhika was about to speak when Sam interrupted; ‘’Aunty here I am …what’s for breakfast…I am hungry…’’ Radhika made a face; ‘’What you didn’t eat anything at your place…’’ Sam huffed and after a minute of silence said; ‘’Breakfast of bro’s choice…so I didn’t eat …you know’’

Radhika smiled and said; ‘’Stop whining…you always get what you want…and now get your butt moving need to submit these forms today… it’s our final year of graduation…plus we have to apply for exchange programme as well’’

Mala gave Sam a paratha roll…and Sam’s eyes shined with happiness…she hugs Mala; ‘’love you aunty…’’ Mala ; ‘’love you too beta…drive safety’’. Radhika and Sam left on Sam’s bike…they were happily enjoying the ride…when two guys started following them passing lewd comments at …Sam started cursing them …Radhika thought for a moment and whispered something in Sam’s ear…she understood she drove as per Radhika’s instruction…Radhika started pretending that she was frightened …she wiped the imaginary sweat from her forehead…Sam fumbled with the bike a bit to show her fake nervousness…guys thought the girls were scared to hell …and will not confront them…they followed the girls blindly making weird gestures and when they stopped they realized they were at a Police Station….A constable standing outside understood the situation easily…. Romeos were nicely welcomed…. they got nicely bashed by the police and got locked up…the constable congratulated the girls on their intelligence …

Girls reached their college and quickly parked… they Ran towards the admission office…Sam looked at the queue; ‘’Chashni we are so dead…’’ Radhika gave a glance and turned; ‘’You know that body builder standing in the corner…’’

Sam turned; ‘’Ewe …No Radhika not again…’’

Radhika pushed Sam …Sam walked like a model towards a tall bouncer like guy….she smiled broadly at him and said softly ; ‘’Hey Rajat…how are you?’’ Rajat’s eyes popped out; Sam …the most happening girl of the batch was talking to him…he responded twisting his muscles and pumping air into his chest…to impress Sam ….‘’Sam…oh I am so happy…you know I had promised 2 kgs ladoos in hanuman temple …if you would speak to me once in this Bachelor studies’’ Sam kept smiling …but inside her head; ‘dumbo…hanumanji himself is celibate…why will he help you getting a girl….you should offer those ladoos to Radhika ’. Radhika was hiding behind the wall covering her mouth to subdue her laughter….

Sam; ‘’Rajat…you are a student leader here…need small help…can you please submit mine and my friend’s forms…its last day today plus we have to apply for student exchange programme as well and its so hot and the queue is long ’’

Rajat was watching Sam like an Idiot; ‘’Sure why not… anything for you …I will be back in 10 min and give you the receipts…till then you enjoy this coldrink..’’ Rajat left to submit the forms and Sam took a deep breath…she pressed her jaw it had started paining… smiling for so long….she thought ‘Radhika you will give me an ice cream treat today for this drama’ Rajat came back as if he had just lifted world cup for India and handed over the receipts to Sam…’’ Sam your work done…let me know if any other help is required…I am always there for you’’ Radhika almost fainted hearing that….Sam smiled and replied; ‘’Sure will…you are a good man…I will vote for you…once you decide to contest the elections ’’ she waved buy to him and ran off…she came to Radhika who was standing there in a serious expression…Sam gave one angry look…and the both bursts out in a roaring laughter….

Sam; ‘’Come… our work is done…now treat me’’

Radhika; ‘’ Sure my darling….tell me where shall we go’’

Sam; ‘’Chowpati…we will talk and have some fun’’ Radhika nodded and they drove off…after reaching their destination…they happily enjoyed a walk at the beach and then made castles like kids…as promised Radhika bought ice creams for both…Sam kept quiet for some time and then spoke; ‘’What if you qualify for exchange programme and I don’t….how will I stay without you for a year’’

Radhika; ‘’Why do you always take a negative track…even if we qualify…what is the guarantee that we will both get same university for this 1 year…and Sam does distance really matter between us …and if bothers you so much then I will not go without you’’

Sam; ‘’Dare you do that…Chahsni I want you to go even if I don’t qualify…it’s your dream …I want you to go and make me proud…and I can have Mala aunty’s food all for myself’’

Radhika; ‘’Or you can have Neil all for yourself and I will not be disturbing you guys’’

Sam ; ‘’Nothing like that…you know I like someone else…Neil is just a friend’’

Radhika; ‘’He loves you unconditionally…don’t lose him…and the one you like is not even aware of your feelings…and who knows he might have someone in his life…’’

Sam; ‘’But I want to try once…leave all that answer one question…if ever we fall for same guy who will you chose…me or the guy’’

Radhika without wasting a single minute responded; ‘’You …you and only you…and one bonus answer for you…if the guy is not right for you I will stand in between you and that guy…I will be the villain in your love story…even if you hate me’’

Sam; ‘’I can hate myself but not you…Chashni …. Bhai likes you…’’

Radhika; ‘’I know..! That’s why I avoid him…I don’t want to give him any false hope…for me right now my dream matters other things can wait…I will not do anything which I don’t want to do…and no one can make me do anything against my will’’

Sam; ‘’I know that boss…and don’t do anything against your will or I will myself thrash you…ok now get up we need to go for our dance class…’’

As the two Soul sisters watched the sun set… both of them waited for a new sunrise of their dreams…which would colour their life with the seven colours of Rainbow…but whatever the next sunrise brings… these two had an unbreakable bond…they will fight each other and for each other…they had been doing it since they were 3.

NYU Campus USA , Business Administration Department

A tall guy with a strong physic and handsome features walks through the department into a professor’s cabin…he knocks; ‘’May I come in Mr. Burton’’
An old man in his mid 60’s looks up to the door and answers ; ‘’Come in Mr Mehra…have a seat’’
Mr. Burton; ‘’Congratulations to you for the amazing CGPA for the trimester…you are a genius my son…but why do you have to be so notorious…Arjun you will do good in your life…but sometimes why do you behave like a total brat’’ Arjun smirked he did not respond …he heard everything old man had to say… greeted his professor and left…he hell cared for anyone…he only understood one thing that was victory…whatever it was he just wanted to be no. 1…be it studies sports or any kind of trouble he topped everything…that’s what his father wanted…that Arjun should be the best and after spending 10 yrs away from his family he was the best in everything be it good or bad…But these 10 yrs had made him rude…brash and a total bad boy…once he sets his eyes on something..he wouldn’t stop before getting it…nothing seemed difficult for him…money, women, luxuries all were at his feet…but his heart was empty…he missed his sister Nandini and his best buddy Neil who refused to study abroad to stay with his mom…they would talk every weekend …only for those 30-40 min he would be the Arjun he used to be…rest all the time he would be someone else…a total jerk…who would break anything which he cannot have. Arjun stood at the balcony of his Pent house watching the night sky…inside his apartment there was a party going on to celebrate Mehra prince’s mood…he wanted to enjoy at home today and he did’

Andheri West Mumbai
Neil parked his car outside his mothers dance academy…he was already late Prerna had asked him to pick her up at 8:00 Pm Sharp but now it was 8:30 PM…he ran towards her office and dashed against Radhika coming from the other side…both fell on the floor opposite to each other… Radhika rubbed her head got up and gave her hand out to help Neil…he took her hand and said; ‘’What are you made off girl…steel or something…god it hurt bad…are you even a girl’’ as he was about to get up Radhika pulled her hand away and pushed him again to the floor…’’Now… I am not a girl ….but what are you Nazuk Nawab…who gets hurt so easily Neil’’ Neil gave a cute dimple smile to Radhika …he got up pulled her cheeks …’’How are you dear…and how is your preparation going for the exchange programme …I am sure you will qualify…once you do…I will tell my friend in US to help you’’

Radhika made a face; ‘’Why the hell everyone is so sure about my success …. about your friend after whom Sam is mad and giving you a heart ache…do give me his address I will murder him in sleep…freeing you from all the heart ache’’

Neil wrapped his arm around her shoulder…’’You don’t know him…he never loses’’

Radhika smiled…as if accepting a challenge; ‘’He doesn’t know me… there is always the first time…and the day he meets me….he will have to book himself a room in mental asylum…I will make him go crazy….and clear your path…because you are the best…you deserve Sam in every sense…I know that….I have seen the dedication you have for her….she wouldn’t find that in anyone in this life…and one should feel blessed to have the gift almighty blesses you with….Your so called friend in US might turn out be a pain for her…plus I have told her a no. of times that if she is not interested in you…she should stop being dependent on you…it hurts you and I am not liking it’’

Neil; ‘’Ok then why don’t you reciprocate Jai’s feeling for you’’

Radhika frowned and countered him; ‘’Do you think he is good enough for me….say yes and I will trust your instinct and go ahead with him’’

Neil thought for a moment and replied ; ‘’No… he is not right for you…don’t go ahead with him …you deserve someone… mmm…different! … you are too mature for you age…who would say that this 20 yr old thin girl can talk like a grandma…and Radhika about my feelings for Sam… love never comes with conditions…I love her that’s my
problem…she shouldn’t feel forced about it…I will be happy in her happiness….I am satisfied being her best friend’’

Radhika shook her head; ‘’Devdas ji…I am practical…her happiness lies with you..and mark my words one day…I will prove it to you and your Paro’’

Neil smiled and replied; ‘’I trust you…come I will drop you home…Sam messaged me that you were still practicing’’

Neil Drove off with Radhika and his mom Prerna…she watched Radhika and Neil animatedly talking…she knew Neil loved Sam…she wanted her son to get all the happiness he wanted…but somewhere in the corner of her heart..she wanted Radhika in place of Sam…Radhika could make Neil smile in any circumstances…she respected him…and he treated Radhika like a baby…Neil Dropped Radhika to her building and waited till she was inside her flat and waved him from the window…

Jai was the apple of Piyali’s eyes being the first born he was the prince of Khanna family…Pilyali never refused her son…he was a good guy only issue was he had fallen for Radhika..who seemed to be least interested in him…Jai shared his heart with his parents and sister…Sam explained herself loud and clear that she will not force Radhika if Radhika is not interested…Samrat knew Radhika had few dreams he wanted to wait…he promised Jai that once Radhika completes her studies and settles in her career he will himself talk to Dilip about their alliance.

Jai had gone to Sam’s college to pick her up…it was just an excuse to have a glimpse of Radhika…he waited leaning against his car…he watched Sam and Radhika walking towards the exit gate…Radhika wore a noodle strap top over her long skirt…colorful bangles in one wrist and her long hair tied in a high pony tail…she was talking to Sam and laughing about something…Jai’s heart started racing…she was breath taking in every way…he watched her movements…the walk…the way of tugging her hair strands behind her ears…the gleam of her eyes…and when she bit her lower lip…that would make him go mad…he had known her since she was kid…she was his sister’s best friend only till the day of the RHYTHM dance concert where Sam and Radhika performed together she was 17 then…they danced on the same song Radhika doing Kathak and Sam matched the steps with hip hop …she was dressed in white completely …she looked like a fallen star…he could hardly hold himself …he left the concert in middle to breathe and normalize himself….After a week he proposed her …she politely refused …he knew she was a focused girl and wanted a serious career for herself…but he felt she was made for him…he had once shared this with Neil…who countered him stating Radhika deserved something different…but his heart always said…she belonged to him..plus their parents were friends…his path was convenient he just have to wait for 2 more yrs.

Radhika knew Jai liked her…but she never had feelings for him or any other guy…guys would like her for her inner beauty and goodness…but she would distance herself from them the moment they showed interest in her…she didn’t wanted to fall in love with anyone…she had seen Neil in pain…that hurt her…love was a big NO…NO for
Radhika…she wanted to fly high … she had been friends with Jai …but as he proposed she started avoiding him after that …she would speak very little to him…unaware that she was slowly becoming an obsession for him.

Hi there my name is Life and I am strange..I never go according to your plans…I go with my own mood hell caring about your plans…I will take all these people on an adventure ride…

Arjun … Wow he is just so handsome…well he wanted to be the winner…but he will lose his heart…and soul to one girl.

Radhika the butterfly or I should say 20yr old grandma…never wanted to fall in love but she will…deeply

Jai …Mama’s baby….felt his path was easy…no it will not be …

Sam the brave who believed herself to be in love…will know the real meaning of it

Neil or Mr.cool…Oh I love his dimpled smile and hate myself to trouble him…but I will… because that’s my job …he will know it’s easy to say but difficult to sacrifice….

I will enjoy their struggle and so will you… happy reading

Credit to: Gauri

54 comments

  1. manju

    wow!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! so beatifully described…amazing dear

    u r such a darling gauri di……..i just fell in love with ur stories…..superb

    _/\_ pls update that ff next chapter soon

    ♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥i love u di♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥

  2. lavanya

    am spell bound….it’s marvellous….so many interlinks ..don’t know how situations will be when arjun comes into picture…eagerly waiting how you will unfold the story….right now am not able to guess even 1%…that’s really amazing….you have nailed it perfectly…all the best…you have made a wonderful start….please do carry on..
    I would like to mention guari dii….your short synopsis sort of update on this story…where you have said.. arjun will fall for radhika deeply and madly….am waiting damn crazily for that to happen….thanks a lot for giving us what we want…always taking our comments in a positive way…replying us…you are great human being..

  3. Its flow less really good……… I really don’t remember that jai so suggest someone ………. lik we really know him or well known face from the TV Ind ………;-):-)

  4. Sorry for late…u r too awesome…coz of ur writing mi never said anything…itz great..

    I liked radz character…strong n Arjun brat…well I love brats..

    2 requests…plz don’t make any difference between Sara coz of Arjun….n make Arjun fall n go head over heels for radz first…tc??

    Sorry if u have other plans…

    • Gauri

      Thanks a ton Rosie 🙂 and now stop saying sorry….if you have suggestions please put forth… it helps me in improving…we don’t know each other by face but still now we share a bond…so be open about anykind of suggestion 🙂

  5. Happy

    Hi….am again here to share my happiness….you know onething…. Renu is the writer who wrote many moments while telecasting manmarziyan serial on TV…..at that time she is in peak…..she wrote very well …..after renu….I am liking each and every lines of yours…..amazing….am waiting both ff at the same time….but this is over…I know….BT I can’t wait….at least 30 times….I am seeing this page in a day….I am madly waiting for your ff….if I said anything wrong sry my frd…..this ff very nice…..thanks for all happy moments….

  6. Shree

    Di!! Sooper update!! I’m Loling here… That bouncer guy… Yappa.. ??.. Too good..
    Loved it di… Post soon.. Please..

    Love you loads.. Tc… Keep smiling… Bear hug ??

  7. Sv

    ooh my goooooooooodddddddd. what kind of magic do you have. It is a total ulta of your other ff and i’m really sorry for the very late reply , i am not able explain but mixed feeling . for whom should i feel Radhika ?? Sam ?? Neil ?? Arjun or Jai to whom . i’m really scratching my head who will be whose ??Samrat wants Radhika as his bahu , prena prefers radhika over Sam but neil has fallen for Sam. Oh my god omg omg

    • Gauri

      Thanks SV …loads of love 🙂 and the magic is motivation by all of you…loads of love and hugs for you

  8. Roma

    Omg gauri dearrrr it’s mind blowing and superbbb episode. …what terrific start…I’m already addicted. ..want to read more n more. ….interesting n refreshing exciting story….arjun, radhika, Sam n Neil all others as well showed up with huge baaaanggggg….loved raneil pure friendship n Neil’s love for sam…jai loves rads n she wants to achieve her goal….wowwww awesome plot. . . I’m totally immersed into this story. …keep it up. eagerly waiting for the next episode, love you loads, muaaaaahhhhhh

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