Manmarziyan- Destiny…Passion …Obsession (Chapter 20 & 21)

Hello everyone…Thanks a ton for all the support…so here is double dhamaka for all of you…pls ignore my mistakes…because I typed this one in hurry ….do let me know how was it…bless you all.. 🙂

Chapter 20

Course of true love is not easy….well Sam realized that…she hates herself for hurting Neil…and Radhika…this crazy girl doesn’t believe in love…
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Arjun called Radhika …but she refused to answer his calls…Arjun smiled he found her anger cute…he decided to meet her in the campus…After attending his classes he went to the library to meet Radhika and found her working he smiled but she made a face in return…Arjun pressed his lips to hide his laughter…he held his ears and made a lip movement of sorry, Radhika in response pokes her tongue out and squint at him…Arjun laughs…the people in the library are amusingly watching this silent movie…radhika notices this and feels awkward…she decides to talk to him…and walks out Arjun follows her; ‘’Bunny stop…I am sorry for your wrists’’

Radhika; ‘’Wow and not for lifting and dragging me like a sack…do you know I got weird looks from everybody in my class today…almost everybody is calling me Arjun’s girl…I am so embarrassed’’

Arjun; ‘’You are my girl… …I will keep you safe even if it means you hating me’’

Radhika; ‘’I don’t hate you…Arjun…and I am sorry that I didn’t listen to all of you…I promise I will check with you guys before taking up any job… but your feelings are making me uncomfortable…my mind is not ready…I want to make career…love and marriage is not my thing’’

Arjun moved closer cupped her face; ‘’Make a big career for yourself…I have no intention of making you uncomfortable…but I love you and I can’t help it….and I will wait for the day you will use your heart instead of you mind…and I have a reference you will have a job in 2 days…love you Bunny’’ Arjun moved backwards without turning his back to her and left. Radhika kept looking at him till he disappeared… Jai loved her…but she hated that feeling…Arjun’s love bought a smile on her face

Singapore

Sam tied pressured bandage over her foot and got ready…she had made up her mind to be strong…Her driver informed her of his arrival…Sam quickly moved to the car and drove off to her campus…she had to give a presentation on best adds in the industry…Sam work was much appreciated by her professors…she felt good..She happily thought; ‘’Let me tell Neil about it he will be very proud of me’’ She pulled her phone out and typed message but…suddenly realized that she no more has Neil…Sam closes her eyes and in her heart says…;’’Neil I wish I knew how to get you back…’’

Hanna knew Neil had moved out of Sam’s flat…she was angry that Neil rejected her… she decided to take it out on Sam…Sam finished her classes and moved out to go home Hanna stopped her Sam greeted her with a smile…Hanna gave an artificial smile in return and taunted; ‘’I feel so bad for you…that you and Neil broke up…’’

Sam; ‘’broke up…excuse me’’

Hanna; ‘’Don’t act…I saw your face when you saw me and Neil together in that room…sorry but he couldn’t resist me’’

Sam smiled; ‘’Hanna I feel pity for you that you had to pleasure duplicate Neil…because my Neil will never touch a dirt like you…try this on someone else…I am grown up enough to understand your stupidity’’ Sam gave her a warning glare and walked off…Hanna was irritated…Neil had followed Hanna because he knew she would hurt Sam…but hearing Sam he thought; ‘’wow Sam…you still have guts to call me your Neil…well let us see for how long’’ Neil walked up to Hanna and warned her; ‘’If you trouble Sam …I will turn your life into a living hell…stay away from her’’

USA Radika’s Dorm

Radhika was working on her assignment when her mobile started buzzing it was Jai….she rubbed her forehead in irritation and answered; ‘’Hi Jai…how are you…and how is everybody back home’’

Jai; ‘’I am good dear…so is everyone…I was missing you like anything…you got so busy that you stopped answering my calls…you know how much I love you’’

Radhika felt mad at word dear; ‘’Jai…we are living at the time distance of 10:30 hrs….I have classes and 2 jobs …and above all I don’t answer calls if I don’t feel like’’ she knew she was rude but now this was necessary.

Jai frowned and fisted; ’’Is it same for Neil’’

Radhika knew this was coming up …she raised her voice; ‘’No one can be Neil for me…you can’t even imagine the bond we share…and Jai I had warned you that every relationships comes with dos and don’ts ….but you keep forgetting that…I had accepted your friendship not your proposal…I don’t have feelings for you and will never have…and now I am busy so good night’’

Radhika disconnected the call…closed her eyes…she felt angry…when she turned she found Anna standing at the door…Anna gave her a glass of water and said; ‘’I don’t know the whole thing…but who so ever this guy Jai is…tell about him to someone before its late…since last few months I have seen you all irritated when he calls…and he calls too much …so better you talk to someone’’ Radhika nodded she went back to work…her phone beeped it was sticker message from Arjun…a teddy holding a bouquet…Radhika rolled her eyes; ‘God why did you even create boys…this planet would have so good without them’

Natalya was having a drink with Ario and his girlfriend..she asked him ; ‘’Now what…Arjun took his girl…he won’t let her work with me…and she stays with Anna…and Cole warned me to stay away ….you know that gang…they watch each other’s back’’

Ario; ‘’I will hit when he is not ready right now he is alert…but I know she is his weak point…and I will take it out on her’’ He smiled thinking…that Arjun was strong but his girl appeared like a feather.

Natalya was right…the gang was very close…they cared for each other and now Radhika was a part of them…and not just Arjun…others were alert too.

Singapore

Sam reached her apartment…she was preparing well for the upcoming shoot on Saturday…Radhika was calling Sam regularly since Neil left her apartment…Sam’s foot was still paining…but she was getting used to her physical and mental pain…she warmed her dinner and sat down to watch television…when someone rang the door bell…she answered but could not believe it was Neil; ‘’Can I come in’’ Sam moved out of the way to let Neil in…she quietly went and sat on the sofa…looking down…she was ashamed to face Neil.

Neil gave one look to the apartment…she was keeping it well he sat opposite to Sam; ‘’Your father called…he wanted to be the part of LAKME colour range shoot happening here… be ready I will pick you’’

Sam without looking at Neil; ‘’Please leave the address…I will reach on my own’’

Neil frowned…he spat angrily; ‘’Oh! So now my company disgusts you so much’’

Sam; ‘’Please leave the address…I don’t want to bother you anymore’’

Neil held Sam by shoulder and pulled her up; ‘’I didn’t knew you could change so fast…I never mattered to you right…’’

Sam; ‘’I don’t want to be selfish anymore…you have done enough for me and I treated you bad…but now I want to be on my own…. the more people stay away from me the less I will hurt them…please leave the address….i will be on time’’ Neil looked at her…she was sitting with her head bowed down and her eyes on the floor…he knew

Sam never lied…she spoke her heart…but he wanted to see her hurt as much as he was…He walked and lifted her chin up…all he found were her closed eyes with wet cheeks…that should have soothed his bruised heart…but her pained face gave him more pain…Neil couldn’t stop himself…He wiped her tears and kissed her forehead; ‘’take care Sam’’. He left the place…Sam opened her eyes once he left…she cried more now. She touched her forehead where he kissed and then pressed her fingers to her lips…’’I am sorry Neil…but I deserve this punishment and you deserve happiness’’

Destiny;’ Sammy baby tell him you love him….and he will forget everything…well you need a second blow’

US Arjun’s Apartment,

Arjun was watching football match on the television when he got a call from Sam…his anger rose…she had hurt Neil and he hated people who hurt his loved ones…but he decided to answer

Arjun; ‘’Hi Sam…what’s up’’

Sam; ‘’I am fine Arjun…how are you…actually I wanted to speak something important’’

Arjun; ‘’Go on’’

Sam after a pause and a deep breath; ‘’after I met you for the first time…I harbored soft feelings for you but could never tell you…I don’t know if I should call this as love or attraction…but I wanted to share with you..Because I am looking for answers and you might help me get them…do you have any feelings for me’’

Arjun decided its time to end Sam’s infatuation ; ‘’No Sam you were just Neil’s friend for me and will always be…answer this Am I person…you think about first thing in the morning and before going to sleep…Am I the person you always look upto when you are in pain…can you selflessly give everything to me…will you always wish my good even if I shatter your heart…answer this Sam’’

Sam was speechless; All answers came down to Neil… her head started spinning her eyes were wet…she cursed herself…she always had him but she lost him…a sob escaped her lips…she covered her mouth to hide it and wished Arjun for the night.

Arjun looked at Radhika’s picture and said; ‘’the question I asked Sam…if I ask myself the answer is you…what have you turned me in to…I am turning a love guru…I love you bunny’’

Radhika was worried about Sam and Neil…but there was no point explaining Neil…he had turn stubborn…and Sam…the poor soul had retreated into a shell and was hell scared to come out…Radhika would call Sam and talk nonsense just to make her smile…but she really wanted Neil to forgive Sam…she picked up her phone and dialed his no; ‘’Hi buddy how are you’’

Neil; ‘’I am good…how are you…and have you called me to scold about Sam?’’

Radhika; ‘’Why are we talking about her…she hurt you I am mad at her for that…I scolded her and asked her to stay away from you’’ Neil realized Sam’s weird behavior…in past if they ever fought Sam would do anything to win Neil back…but this time she had completely withdrawn

Neil; ‘’She is alone…and now even you scolded her…you should have stayed by her’’

Radhika; ‘’No she hurt you…I am angry and it’s high time she should be independent….she has always been too dependent on you and me…’’

Neil; ‘’Are you helping me or her?’’

Radhika; ‘’Both…I am helping her to learn and live without you and punishing her for hurting you…and about you; I have freed you from years of pain…and now you can have a new life…what say…do I have a chance’’

Neil; ‘’Radhikaaaa!!! First don’t flirt with me…and second Sam is not a pain…I love her’’

Radhika; ‘’You never did…if you did…then you wouldn’t have left her alone knowing that she hated being alone in her life…I agree she is confused but that’s not completely her fault…she never got the love she deserved no one appreciated her decisions…you and I both know that…first you were all unconditional for her…you even ignored her mistakes and now you are doing everything to make her cry…if she is selfish so are you’’

Neil; ‘’But you told me I was too available for her…now you are scolding me’’

Radhika; ‘’Neil …why do you have to take the extreme, why not a middle path….first you loved her pampered her to the max…and then suddenly banished her…I asked you to create a balance…not to topple everything down….even if she ever loves you she will be scared that you will leave her. You are just making her insecure…you don’t know… she always had the fear of failing in eyes of her mom…now you are a addition to it’’

Neil; ‘’You enjoy giving third degree…but I love your truthful nature…stay like this always…tc Chashni’’ Radhika smiled she knew her words struck his heart…she knew now slowly he will go back to her.

Radhika was still thinking about Neil and Sam when Arjun called her…she rolled her eyes and answered; ‘’Yes Hades’’

Arjun smiled; ‘’Did you just roll your eyes at your phone’’

Radhika surprised; ‘’How do you know…wait are you spying on me with a camera or something…you will definitely get murdered by my hands’’

Arjun; ‘’there is no need for me to spy on you….I know you enough and don’t forget I love you…leave all that…one off my contacts own a retail store…they have a vacancy for a sales person…it’s a good place…be ready…Ron will take you there tomorrow and introduce you’’

Radhika immediately; ‘’Ron!!! Why not you?’’ then she banged her head after completing her sentence

Arjun laughed; ‘’Wow…! well I never thought you would miss me…but you don’t like me tailing around so I asked Ron…Good night Bunny and I love you’’

Radhika kept quite then whispered; ‘’Goodnight’’ After disconnecting the call she smiled at Arjun’s impossible nature she had actually started liking his company…and Arjun he simply kissed her picture.
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Well a true friend can change the course of your life…a good friend acts like a torch bearer …he or she shows you the right path..either by love or care or by a wonderful shock treatment…friendship is precious…live it cherish it
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Chapter 21

No one changes in a day….you cannot tame a tiger to behave like a lamb…the Tiger might like you… love you…but you challenge him and he will show his claws… Handle the Tiger in a tiger way
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It was Saturday…Sam had to go for her shoot…Agnello was ready he asked Sam to change and come fast…Sam’s make up and grooming was done quickly…she started posing for the camera…after few mistakes she quickly got into the mood…she remembered what Mala told her to be her best friend…and it was helping her…Sam was posing when she saw Neil behind the camera…first surprised but then she recalled there was LAKME shoot as well….She went along with her shoot without showing her inner turmoil…Neil was somehow not happy about the whole modelling thing…he loved her and believed that she was wasting her time…but when Sam posed with male models Neil’s jaw hardened…’’how dare she’’

Sam was not aware that she had to do the couple fashion shoot as well…but for experience she went along…Neil never removed his eyes from Sam…Sam felt he will burn her down…after the shoot they had to take a break…Sam looked in the direction of Neil he was busy with Agnello…but something caught her eye…she leaped and pushed Neil away but due her sprain she slipped…one of the lights came crashing down on Sam’s leg…the broken glass pieces…went into her flesh…everyone around were shocked…Neil saw Sam’s injured bleeding leg he rushed to her; ‘’Sammy you are bleeding…hold on everything will be fine…’’ Neil was restless but he was surprised when

Sam removed his hand from her and replied him; ‘’I am ok…don’t worry…it doesn’t pain that much…Jane please help me up’’ Jane moved forward but Neil lifted his hand to stop her.

Neil looked at her face…she was looking down…he scooped her in his arms and walked to the car…Neil took Sam to the hospital…the doc told that she already had swelling and now these glass pieces have made it worse…she needs to take total bed rest…till her leg heals…Sam thanked the doc but when she tried to get down and walk but Neil lifts her again; ‘’Neil no please put me down’’

Neil; ‘’We will fight later Sam…for now just Shut up’’ Neil carried Sam but she kept her hands away from his body…he had noticed that…he made her sit in the car…and took her back to her apartment once inside he slowly lowered her on her bed and kept a pillow under her leg.

Neil; ‘’I will get you something to eat’’

Sam; ‘’I will mange…its late you should leave’’ Neil turned at Sam she was still looking down…since morning not even once she looked straight into his eyes…Neil was not able to tolerate more…he cups her face and lifts her face up only to find her eyes shut again…and tears streaming down he lowered himself; ‘’Open your eyes Sammy…look at me please’’

Sam; ‘’Neil leave…I don’t want to hurt you anymore…being with me will only give pain…please go…I want to be alone’’

Neil; ‘’Will you open your eyes…please Sammy…I love you madly…hurting you is killing me…please look at me’’ Sam opened her eyes and looked at Neil…he found pain regret in her light eyes…Neil touched his forehead to Sam’s ; ‘’I missed you…Sammy…’’

Sam; “I missed you and I still care for you…but you should leave Neil I want to be alone…please go’’ Sam turned her face away…Neil threw her bag in the corner and left.

Destiny; ‘’Sam was always compared to Jai which made her indecisive about herself…she found unconditional support in Neil and Radhika she could ask them anything and they would happily do it…but now she feels guilty of hurting Neil…she has gone back being little Samaira…who hid in corners to hide her pain…What more should I do for these people…

USA

On Saturday, RON took Radhika to Brand Basket’s and got her introduced to the store manger…he asked his junior to give Radhika a tour and explain her duties…one Radhika went the store manager who was of Indian origin asked Ron; ‘’Why did Arjun asked to hide that he holds the franchise and is owner of this outlet’’

Ron; ‘’Because this tiny girl has a very high self esteem…she wouldn’t have take this job if she knew Arjun owns this place…and better keep it to your self…because if she knows Arjun won’t like it’’

Radhika came back Deepak asked her to join from Monday for evening shifts …Radhika nodded and left with Ron…she was super happy…Ron just smiled at her hopping and squeals. Arjun was waiting for Ron and Radhika….once they entered Radhika hugged Anna out of happiness…Arjun looked at Ron and he just gave a nod…Anna rolled her eyes…Arjun looked at Radhika; ‘’What?? I told you about the job…and I should get a hug too’’

Radhika; ‘’Ron took me there so the hug goes to Ron…’’ she gave Ron a warm hug…Ron lovingly patted her cheek Arjun didn’t like the refusal…but kept smiling; he took his mobile and messaged Radhika; ‘’Bunny you will hug me before the day ends’’ Radhika reads and smirks

As it was Saturday…Radhika decided to meet Aliza she went to her bakery…without waiting for Arjun…Radhika helped and chatted with Aliza when she came out in the afternoon…she found Arjun waiting for her… wearing a rugged jeans and a funky shirt half tucked and an aviator…she knew he was watching her…she quietly goes to him and waited for him to start his bike;

Arjun; ‘’you didn’t bake anything today…I thought I will get something to eat’’

Radhika; ‘’you don’t like sweets…and moreover whatever I baked I myself ate it…. was hungry’’ she made a kid like face and Arjun laughed

Once Radhika sat behind Arjun …he started increasing the speed…first she enjoyed but then she was scared; ‘’Arjun slow down you are scaring me’’

Arjun; ‘’Call me tiger and Hug me now’’

Radhika; ‘’Are you mad…please slow down I am begging you’’

Arjun; ‘’Hug me bunny…and I will’’ Radhika gave up she wrapped her arms around him and tightly hugged him from back …Arjun slowed down and then applied the brakes…she was still sitting hugging him…her eyes closed; ‘’Bunny get down’’ Radhika opened her eyes and quickly got down…he had bought her to a meadow…away from the city…it was all green with different colors flowers…Radhika blinked she was mesmerized at the beauty…Arjun leaned on his bike folded his hands to his chest and watched her jumping and running around…Radhika turned she found Arjun watching her she blushed and looked away…after sometime she walked back to him…; ‘’We should go its late..’’ she had turned crimson…

Arjun smiled…and suddenly screamed; ‘’Watch out lizard’’

Radhika jumped and threw herself in Arjun arms; ‘’pls pls pls I am scared…shoo it off’’

Arjun smiled hugged her tight and kissed her forehead warmly;’’ I told you… you will hug me before the day ends…’’ Radhika looked up to his marble cut face…he was looking down at her holding her in his arms…she moved but he tightens his grip; ‘’Stay…I won’t eat you…’’

Radhika; ‘’I am uncomfortable…please’’ Arjun lifted her chin up and tilted his head to close the distance between their lips…Radhika turned cold…her body gave up…Arjun watched her sweating Arjun smiled; ‘’This is called uncomfortable Bunny…I won’t do this till you say yes…I won’t leave you the day you say yes…and one day you will…I asked you a friendly hug you gave to Anna Ron and everyone ….but not me…I want to be your friend…is loving you a crime…that you keep refusing your friendship to me…why are so rude to me….you don’t know to what extent I can go for you’’

Radhika kept her eyes down …his arms were still around her…but she was no more uncomfortable…she kept on scratching his shirt button with a guilty expression and then mumbled; ‘’Sorry tiger…I was rude’’ Arjun arms slid away from her body she staggered and held his shirt..’’Now you should hold me you scared me …and my legs gave up…’’ Arjun smiled and pulled her into a bear hug…this time she hugged him back in a friendly manner…Arjun whispered on the top of her head; ‘’Do you know you are a doll…a live doll’’

Radhika ; ‘’Yes, Neil calls me that’’ Arjun burned but kept quite …he knew he had to get a yes from Radhika…once she says yes…he will tie her down for life. Radhika didn’t know what she felt…but whatever it was she felt nice…

India

Samrat was worried …Nandini for gaining control on his company…when Mehra’s invested in Bird Song he was thankful that they saved him…but it felt…Mehra were on a mission to gain control on his life…Samrat was still in his thoughts when Piyali barged in

Piyali; ‘’Samart…Nandini has filed an FIR against Jai for forgery in Bird Song…stop her’’

Samrat; ‘’You should ask you son…he has manhandled the customers money which should be in bird song account went to his account…Nandini has the proofs..you tell me if you have any bright idea to save your son’’

Piyali; ‘’this is jai’s company…he is free to withdraw his money…who is Nandini to stop him’’

Samrat; ‘’Right now owner of Bird Song…and don’t forget Prerna holds other 30%…even she is not happy about what Jai did’’ Piyali left the cabin in a huff …out side she saw Nandini greeting Prerna with a hug and taking happily; ‘’Sometimes I feel both these females are together in this…Arjun and Neil are also best friends so why not…I
should push Sam to convince Arjun for marriage..this is only the way now’’

Singapore

Sam was working on her laptop when she got Piyali’s call she was little surprised; ‘’Hi Mom..everything good’’

Piyali; ‘’Yes baby…was missing you…how are things at your end…’’

Sam; ‘’Good…but you sound disturb…what’s the matter’’ Piyali narrated everything…Sam was angry on Jai…but she knew Piyali will never blame Jai…and there was no point suggesting her the the same…Sam kept on listening like a good listener and then finally spoke; ‘’What do you want me do’’

Piyali; ‘’Convince Arjun Mehra to marry you…he is friends with you and Neil’’

Sam lost her cool; ‘’Neil loves me…and I love him’’

Piyali; ‘’Arjun will ,love you more…we need to save Bird Song…or else it will permanently go to mehra’s’’ Sam disconnected the call she was disgusted…Now when she knew she love Neil…it was impossible to think about someone else…even if neil never loves her…she will remain only his’.

Neil was coming back from a walk he saw Sam standing in the balcony he fumed; ’Doc told her bed rest…and she standing straining her leg’ he still had keys of the old apartment…he quickly ran to the 6th floor …unlocked the door and before Sam could understand he lifted her up…Sam was shocked she only uttered; ‘’Neil’’

Neil; ‘’Right now just keep your mouth shut’’…he placed her on the bed and supported her leg by the pillow…Neil came sat on the bed facing Sam…keeping his hands on either side of her….he glared at her waiting for her to speak

Sam; ‘’Sorry was little disturbed…I am fine now’’

Neil;’’ What’s going in your head…speak up’’

Sam ; ‘’Nothing….its late you should leave’’

Neil came close Sam moved back she turned her face away….Neil held her jaw and turned towards him; ‘’Samaira Khanna…I know how to get things done by force…speak up before I lose my temper’’Sam narrated the whole incident and also that Piyali wanted her to marry Arjun…Neil was pained again he lifted Sam’s chin up;
‘’What do you want’’

Sam looked straight into Neil’s eyes; ‘’leave Neil…it hardly matters what I want…’’

Neil tighten his grip; ‘’WHAT DO YOU WANT’’

Sam; ‘’You… but am I deserving enough”

Neil brushed his knuckles on her face…Sam closed her eyes…Neil leaned ‘’ Sam I want to kiss you’’ Sam blinked but obliged and he kissed her deep…she did not touch or stop him…she just went along following his lip movements…Neil broke the kiss and asked Sam to shift…she agreed readily he took Sam in his arms and switched off the lights…Sam hugged Neil desperately; ‘’Thank you…and I am sorry for hurting you…but I won’t survive without you Neil…please don’t leave me again’’

Neil brushed his cheek on Sam’s…’’you made your choice …now sleep baby…I am here with you and will always will be with you…’’

Sam; ‘’Then who was that girl on the beach’’

Neil smirked; ‘’you are jealous…just a friend I staged everything to burn you’’

Sam smiled and kissed Neil’s cheek; ‘’you succeeded I burned to death….is it necessary to sleep…I don’t want waste a minute sleeping’’

Neil; ‘’You need rest..ok you want to talk…we can talk for sometime’’

Sam; ‘’That night I was drunk today I am sober…can you hold me the same way’’ Neil smiled gently lowered Sam and kissed her forehead…and then kissed her passionately….

Sam; ‘’What should I tell mom’’

Neil; ‘’Nothing we will stay they way we are…you will not sacrifice yourself for Jai’s or Bird Song security…remember one thing Sam…you committed yourself to me …now you will not back out…because I won’t let you…and if you do it …I will ruin both our lives’’

Sam smiled; ‘’you are warning me….Never saw this side of your personality…now first thing in the morning get your luggage up… please’’

Neil smiled and nodded he moved his hand under Sam’s shirt on her bare back …Sam gasped…Neil smiled ‘’Do you mind Sammy’’

Sam had both happiness and fear in her eyes …but right now having Neil was important; ‘’No…I am yours’’ Neil pulled Sam in a loving hug and cuddled her till she slept off
Neil POv; ‘’Piyali Khanna…you won’t be able to sacrifice Sam for Jai…I won’t let that happen’ Neil nuzzled his face in Sam’s neck she smiled and titled her neck to give him the complete access.

Destiny; ‘’Phew…finally one story is on the track…thank heavens…over to beauty and the beast

US

After enjoying dancing in the spin Arjun and his gang had good dinner…Arjun watched Radhika she cleverly avoided drinks…she drank on everyone’s instance but did not sallow …other were too busy to notice that she actually was either throwing it off or pretending to drink…Radhika caught Arjun staring her…He smiled praising her tricks…she blinked in acceptance….Rahika had worn a noodle strap dress to the knee…her hair were in soft curls and she wore long silver earrings…she looked chic…and beautiful…Arjun wanted to wrap her long hairs around his hands…everybody was up for a second round of dance..before anyone could ask Radhika…Arjun pulled her and took her to the floor…his friends laughed but he hardly cared…Radhika was embarrassed….his feelings were growing day by day…and she was getting uncomfortable; ‘’Arjun you promised to be my friend…but you again started the display of your feelings…’’

Arjun; ‘’Bunny…I am behaving like a friend the day I start behaving like a boyfriend no one will be able to sit next you… or giggle with you the way they were doing’’

Radhika; ‘’then I don’t want you to be my boyfriend…I don’t like to be tied down’’

Arjun; ‘’Sorry Bunny…but I am your destiny…you can’t escape me’’ Radhika was shocked he had made it so clear that she belonged to him

Radhika; ‘’ Arjun every time I trust you …you scare me’’

Arjun; ‘’I don’t want to …but I love you…and can’t help that now…I admit I behave like a jerk…and I am possessive about you’’

Radhika; ‘’What if I fall for someone else…and refuse you’’

Arjun pulled her close gave a look to the dance floor everyone else was too busy he danced his way out of the floor to a dark private corner taking Radhika with him…Arjun locked her to the wall and kissed her cheek warmly…he spoke brushing his lips on her cheek holding her protesting hands; ‘’Baby…I am not a saint…I am a devil …you are a fairy…and should say an unlucky one that a man like me fell for you…if you fall for someone it has to be me…or else that person will never see the light..once I know about his existence’’ Radhika shivered…Arjun made his way to her neck and planted a wet kiss he pulled her strap down kissed her shoulder deep…making her gasp Radhika’s feet wobbled she was not able to hold herself Arjun knew she would fall…he left her hands and wrapped his arms around her waist and pulled her up hugging her tightly; his face was buried in her neck he whispered; ‘’Bunny I love you madly…marry me’’. Radhika didn’t knew how to escape this man…she had Sam to handle Jai..but arjun…yes he was not a saint…he was a Beast…and her destiny had her locked in the his castle…she had tears in her eyes…Arjun saw that but he couldn’t help… this distance between them…was making him wild…he decided to speak to Nandini…he wanted her as his for life…he didn’t care about Radhika’s refusal…he stood there holding her till her heart beat was normal…then bought her to the floor again…Arjun wiped her tears…which were visible on her face…pulled her to his chest and whispered on the top of her head; ‘’you have to trust me Bunny…I love you…I really do’’

Radhika did not break the hug…she stayed in his arms because if she moved back…his madness will increase….she closed her eyes and then thought for a minute…and when she opened them she had a decision.

Radhika’s POV ‘I trust your love and Iike you too….but hate your madness…I will give a chance to your love…but with my conditions…get ready to change Mr. Hades…my name is Radhika and I don’t give up’
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My dear Beast…this beauty will not tie herself down…she will change your heart… you scared her again…its now her turn she will drive you mad now…pushing you to change…now she will make the rules…watch out Radhika

Precap; Aradhika first date…and Bauty makes the rules…Beast decides to follow…

Credit to: Gauri

163 comments

  1. Gayu

    I am the first one to comment. Actually I was a silent reader but your story made me mad. Thanks for the update and really u have a very big talent. When u will post next one?

  2. Perfectly awesome omg finally 1 love story is successful ………….waiting for 2nd one plz ……. desperate to know wat rules radz gonna put ………..:-):-):-):-)

  3. Yayyy yayyy… Wow I was so much waiting… Finally.
    I forgot everything around when i read your story and every moment seems priceless.
    I always wanted to tell that i just love the way you write. The page and screen looks very neat and clear unlike others. They have good writing, good story.. But yours have an addition of ……. I dnt know which word to use.
    It was so amazing and loved d way rahika made neil understand. And finally nesam are now together. So cute
    And aradhika waiting eagerly for the next one. Lemme know when are you updating next.

  4. chandan

    Wooooooh Gauri….you are taking the story to an other level…I am liking the way you are taking the story…Awesome…Radhika is one such girl who shows the mirror of truth…she nicely showed mirror of truth to Neil n now its Arjun’s turn…I feel pity for Arjun but he needs…he has to change for good now…so happy for Nesam…the lizard hug reminded me of the show scene…enjoyed both the epi’s…waiting eargerly for next one to know what kind of rules Radhika made for Arjun n how he is going to accomplish them…keep rocking…tc

    • Gauri

      Thanks a million times Chandan 🙂 I am glad you are liking the way story is moving…will post the next part soon 🙂 tc

  5. Bhargavi

    Yahoo!!! I M so happy for todays episodes and my most awaiting update I would be watching in the next one. Thank you Gauri for such an awesome udpate

  6. Ammuz

    Diii thanku dii for dis double dhamakka 🙂 wt wil hapen nxt di? Jai nd piyali i just hate them both! Huuh selfish! Ardhika moments are nyc? Nd when ario hit him wil arjun fail? 😮 Noo i cnt see dt di nd hapy dt nesam united! Hee plz post soon di ur ff is lyk oxygen nw 🙂

    • Gauri

      Ammu dear…thank you so much 🙂 well Jai and Piyali will try to move things their way…but Radhika Neil and Arjun all are little too smart for them…wait for the next one…love you 🙂

  7. shreyanshi

    Finally neil-sam….. Luvd the sequence….luv 2 see d luv of sam for neil.. No need of sacrifice.. For jai
    N arjun need to chng his madness to get radhika.. 🙂

  8. Supriya.

    Wht can I say?….you are one such a great writer who has again proved the proverb..
    ….pen is mightier than sword…… Srsly di as usual I don’t have words to praise u…..I hate repeating same words again and again……you have made be crazy u know even today I was awake till midnight and I decided to sleep only after reading ur update …….thanx for keeping my request like everytime……u have typed this in haste srsly I don’t want to believe this even if it z truth di…..this z the best chp ever……I love you srsly and my respect for your talent keeps on increasing…… I loved everything…… Raneil bond was something eye-catching…… Sam has finally confessed her love for Neil….plz don’t hurt him again. M….I hate piyali….only she z responsible for jai’s behavior….. How can a mother discriminate between her kids…..she wants to sacrifice Sam for a scoundrel like jai…..arjun I know he z too much possessive but then to I love him alot……Radhika what a determination this girl has got…..I hope she tackles arjun her way…..now my questions…..will ario hurt Radhika?….. z arjun the same person to whom Anna wants to talk abt jai?….does Radhika has feelings for arjun?last time you had said that arjun z hiding something…… wen will that come out?what will be Neil’s reaction after knowing abt arjun and Radhika?…… So should I assume that nandini z going to talk abt arjun’s proposal to radz fmly?….well but they r already talking abt ranei….so how will arjun react to this?wen Neil,Sam,radhika, arjun will be together?di I have so many questions for now my eyes r blinking so I need sleep will talk on chat…..I loved it to the moon…….plz give time to yourself don’t write till 2…..u have to wake up early so don’t trouble ur body…..I love you from the bottom of my heart…..zillion hugs and kisses for u…….muaaaaahhhhhh….. Tc?????????????????

    • Gauri

      Supriya sweety…what should I sya more…you never fail to make me smile…love you for that…RNEIL bond is something I share with my childhood buddy..I have known him since pre school….well he doesn’t even consider me a girl….Piyali’s blind love for Jai is also I have taken from a real life experience…. I had scene this in one of my friends house…hated it…now your questions…Ario will try…but you have to wait for th outcome…yes Anna is indirectly asking Radhika to speak abt Jai to someone she trusts…Arjun is hiding his real identity…it will come out…Neil will be furious…others just wait…won’t disclose too much for now 🙂 love you swt hrt stay blessed 🙂

  9. Dev

    Hey gauri……a truck full on hugs n thanks for d morning treat buddy….d epi was so mind blowing n fab ….i lovd it 2 d core….im thinking how selfish is dis piyali who wants 2 get her daughter into a wanted relation for her dear son….yuk disgusting……n lovd d bike ride of ardika……n im greatful dat sam realisd hr lov n neil accepted it……n now since neil accepted it wud b neil with samrat against piyali……n neil wont allow 4 model shooting of sam…..bt sad dat rads cant flirt with neil…..im really waiting for determined radikas plan 2 bring arjun out of d world of controlling…..nc n pleasant 2 read epi…..bt i really want 2 know d reaction of rads wen she knows dat arjun is d bst frnd of neil…..n as u said in all kinds of relation frndship is d 1 which shd b most cherished n shud b held tim d life ends…..
    Love u n keep smiling n happy…..lots of bear hugs n keep on ri8ing…??????

    • Gauri

      a million thanks to you Dev for all the amazing words…Rads is smart and practical…she will handle everything using her brain 🙂 wait for the next one …till then tc stay blessed 🙂

  10. Awesome darling sissy 😀 radhika advice 😀 Neil n Sam part 😀 😀 arjun n rads convo it’s really amazing 😀 😀 😀 u r a killer 😀 love u 😀 😀 😀 each time u drive us crazy with ur words 😀 😀 but now for u so many arjun’s are here I mean madly love on ur words n u 😀 😀 😀 O.o O.o O.o start soon to write ur own story darling sissy 😀 😀 😀 am eagerly waiting for it 😀 n u forgot one thing wen ll b ur next ff??????? 😀 😀 😀

    • Gauri

      Suga my darling thank you so much :)…so many Arjun lol..well you guys are my motivation here and this is why I am able to write so thank a ton dear…next one on wed ..love you loads 🙂 stay blessed 🙂

  11. Rg

    Hi gauri. Thanks for d double dhamaka. I really loved today’s episodes… I loved ardhikas bantering. Arjun sometimes comes out as sweet and sometimes as d devil. Their library sweet fight was indeed cute. I loved radz and Neil’s bond. And her frankness is just gr8. I hate piyali and jai. Am glad for Sam and Neil. Finally Sam realizes her love for Neil thanks to arjun..
    Arjun though gud comes off a little interfering and possessive… Though his and jais love r both dark and intense radz likes arjun s love . She is scared by both but she wants give arjun a chance. Moreover when ever arjun gets physical with her she allows him to do so within limits. So tats smth. No women allows a man touch unless he is welcome to do so and d said women wants to b in his arms.m I think radz is more scared abt her feelings for him. But I don’t like it when arjun wants to tie her down to himself without anyone else. In tat he and jai r d same. Hope arjun changes for d best. Though he can’t have a full round about turn from his base character atleast just enough for radz… Plz update soon. I repeat u r a gr8 and fantastic writer.

    • Gauri

      Hey Rg …first of all thanks a ton dear 🙂 yes radhika prefers Arjun more than Jai…becoz Arjun’s care is evident but Jai is merely possessive…we say women have sixth sense…Jai’s presence irritates her but Arjun makes her feel protected everytime he is around…and yes she likes his company…he will change but only for her 🙂 love you a ton…wait for the next one on wed 🙂

  12. Kavina

    Ahh!!!! I loved it!!!!!! Neil and Sam was so cute finally Sam relized her love. I am happy Radhika is starting to love Arjun. I feel that Neil and Arjun will team up to get rid of Jai from their life and from their loved one. Please when you are free update even if it’s a small update.

    • Gauri

      Thanks a ton Kavina 🙂 Neil and Arjun are best frnd they will fight but will never break…I will update the next one soon 🙂 love you 🙂

  13. ammu

    its awesome gauri…i wish if dis story of urs was a book so that i could read it in one breath..cant wait dear..finally sam realized n confessed her love.waiting 4 our ms.practical’s cute tactics 2 chnge her tiger.

  14. roshini

    Gauri this was soooooooooooooo goooooooood….I loved each and every part of the story…can’t chose the best one 😀 love you for this update….do let me know when will you post the next one …love you

  15. Hope

    OMG!! A KILLER EPI.. I just wanna give u a bearhug and share a cadbury wid u..coz dats wat i do when i meet ma fav ppl in ma lyf… U should have been d cv of mmz… Tnk god atlast NESAM is happening…and ARDHIKA is on d edge.. I hate ppl lyk Piyali..who make others pay 4 deir loved one’s mistake..AND I LOVE NANDINI 4 Giving JAY what he really needs..dat bl**dyfool deserves 3rd degree..well..i’ll wait until Arjun comes to know abt it nd make jai’s lyf lyk hell.. I love Rads talk wid Neil..i really love a girl boy frndshp bond..I have a frnd lyk Neil but ppl even our mutual frnds mistakes us as lovers…first it irritated me now i don’t give a damn..coz we both know hw we see each other n our family knows it too,den y shud we sacrifise our bond bz of ppl who doesn’t even care abt us..so..he’s still my bff..and will b 4 ever..besides i played d cupid in his lovestory..he still owes me..;-):-P:-P
    I wonder wat will happen when rads know abt Arjun’s truth..he’s d same one she swore to kill.. And i’m waiting 4 rads CÖNDITIONS for Arjun’s UNCONDITIÖNAL LOVE… Love u lots…and sry 4 not cmnting 4 last epis..d thing is,i typed a very long one nd my lil cousin bro mistakely deleted all..i was angry and i threw my phone away..it broke..and my mom banned me to touch d phone for dat day..

    • Gauri

      Hope…thanks a ton dear for the amazing words..love you even I share such a bond with my childhood buddy…well radhika is smart…Neil is intelligent Arjun headstrong ….and Sam emotional…but all of them will find their way :)…and no need for sorry….lov you stay blessed 🙂

    • feby

      hey dear….u r repeating my same mistake…..lol……throwing phone whn u r angry….hahahaa….nice to hear tat i have a twin in this like doing the same things i did once a month ago…..but still iam without a good phone and just using a dabba phone just for my emergency….aftr knowing wat i did all my frnds called me crzy and still i laugh for tat…. and i too have a bestie like u have..and all mistook it for teenage love…u r good…dont bother na…i too didnt care abt tat…all last every1 had to agree to our bond…whn he started his lovestory…lol….and i laugh mad at him everytime he breakup…hahahaa…whn i was thr wid him a year ago he cud not evn do anythng widout me….now as we both r in different places coz of transfer i miss him….u reminded me of him hope….i was teary eyed whn i just read ur comment….

  16. ab

    Awesome wow gauri you are a superb writer it’s just amazing superb fabulous fantastic……..and word hi nhi mil rhe awesome ? dear

  17. Krity

    Gauri luv u so much…muhhaa
    thir chappy was amazing arjun he is jst awesome ahh bt his possessiveness bt wt to do he luvs her nd i think 80% crazy mens are possessive for their lady love..nd so are nesam r together bt plez yr do something to that jay he is annoying such person think like wtever they like that is their private property bt anyway’s wt that gang r upto if they r going to harm r rads bt wtever it is it was amazing luved it so much cm back soon dear u made my day…luv u nd god bless u…<3

    • Gauri

      Thanks a ton Krity dear 🙂 thanks for making my day too 🙂 loads of love and hugs for you 🙂

  18. Oh My god…what an epi…it surely double dhamaka
    .m extremely happy for nesam…finally they united…so happy fir them…now it’s turn of beauty n beast… super excited..loving it to the core…pls nxt one soon..love u..tc.

  19. Hey gauri ur impossible writer yarrrr it was just amazing episode just like pervious one i can’t stop reading it too ……pls don’t stop writing pls its a request frm reader luv a loads….tc

  20. Thank u so much for ur double dhamaka ? Gauri. Finally sammy reached her destination. Neilllll u made it man ? . Piyali mam ur idea is so cheap. Jai ?- 1st u need lesson from my Lovable Beast (lesson means punch ? )
    Interesting precap – i think our beast will fulfill her rules. Waiting 4 that. Pls post soon ☺

  21. Sravya

    wow dear no way it’s amazing.you r really doing an awsm work.Ardhika scenes were so good.this was really a mrng treat. happy for Niel.after all Sam realizes her love for Niel.U r rocking Gauri.When will u post the next update?☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺

    • Gauri

      Thanks Sravya 🙂 love you dear 🙂 will post the next one on wed 🙂 stay happy stay blessed 🙂

  22. happy

    hi dr…..hw r u……u r an amazing writer gauri…….its really really nice……its awesome…….super…..thanks for giving this wonderful update……thank you so so much…..

    best part today is sam’s confession……thank you so so much for sam-neil part….. its super super……i cant really expect this that too fast……thanks dr……..

    sry…..i hate arjun in today update…..pls change his character soon…..

    rad-neil part super…….i read this early morning…..till now i am imagining rad’s happy face after hearing sam-neil news……thank you so so much dr……..

    • Gauri

      Happy my darling frnd…how ar you? I am doing good dear and thanks a milllion time for the lovely comment…don’t worry will bring Arjun on the right path soon…love you lots of love and stay blessed 🙂

  23. Emz fasa

    It was amazing wonderful marvellous mindblowing epi :-* now nesam are together niel is right sam wont sacrifice her love for jai 😐 and piyali she is too much yaar apne bigde huve bete ko bachane ke apni beti ko mauth ke kuve me dalna chahti hai 🙁 Anna was right rads ko jai ke bare me apne gharwalon ko ya arniel ko batana chahiye and pls pls pls update next epi asap cant wait to see what rads gonna say to arjun eagerly waiting for the next 😉

  24. Sejal

    O mi god … Finally nesam are together atleast one story is on track ….
    Wonderful chapters…
    Arjun is not a saint he is really a devil i will be on cloud nine if i get a devil like him for me…
    Radhika has decided to change tiger lets see where they go
    i really hate piyali she just can’t do this to her only daughter.. Well now mr malhotra will surely takr cate of his future wife..
    I m deadly waiting for the time when bunny herself shares about jai with tiger… And the reaction of possessive angry bird …. Luv u thanku for the awesome chapters

      • Sejal

        Thank you maandey i too hope i get my version of arjun the one who has been born only for me..

    • Gauri

      Thanks a ton Sejal dear 🙂 well I would prefer a Neil…if I get a Arjun…I will turn into a witch…I don’t like control lol 😛 i am acting crazy….but thanks a ton honey for the amazing support..love you bless you hope you get your Arjun soon …but only after your studies 😉 love you

      • Sejal

        I pray to god u get ur neil.. And as u say di studies are always my priority… Then only i ‘ll search for my arjun .. The one who will be less possessive than bunny’s

  25. Dhara

    Awesome update Gauri. Finally Radhika is ready to give chance to Arjun’s love but with her own conditions. Well u always surprise with ur updates. Both parts were really awesome.

  26. Kusum

    Hello…
    I have recently started reading your fan fictions. Seriously i must tell you. ..you write awesome. …ur stories have become an addiction. Waiting for next chapter.
    This story should be made into a movie. It will be superhit.

  27. Amazing episode ..just no words to say ..the way u mend the characters in ur play was speechless..no word is perfect to describe hw amazing writer ur..I just consider myself to be lucky to read it ff..loads of love dear

    Finally Sam realised…very happy for that.I know niel won’t allow piyali to hurt Sam anymore for jai..arjun made same to realise very beautifully…
    Eagerly waiting to know what were the conditions radhika is going to put..the way arjun is going to accept nd follow…what would be nesam reaction aftr going to know abt ardhika….update soon…

  28. M

    Gauri………..today u disturbed my mind……ahhhhhh…….hope. Undrstand what I want to say…….I think I read Neil n Sam ‘s romance 30 times……..happy for Neil when he said I will ruin both of our life if u back out…….I lov hm whn he say u CNT sacrifice for jai or brdsong……

    Arjun n radhika……….today they faded away for me……dnt mind……their part was beautiful at its extreme but Neil n Sam kill it………

    I want to gv my views…..I want to speak up what I thought….so……just want to share my these views…..hope u help me to open up myself more……

    U knw very well how much I love you

    • Gauri

      Maandey Jaan thanks a ton…30 times…well that is a huge compliment..love you….I love the fact that you speak your mind…keep it going…now when are you updating 🙂 loads of love and hugs for you stay blessed 🙂 muhaaaa 🙂

      • maandey

        dnt knw sweety……nt in any mood to update….actually m litle bit disturbed……professionaly only…….ahhhhhh…….what to do………sometimes their is so much negativity around us…..hard….very hard to suffer that or take that out of ur mind……..these things are presently going on with me……hv off from 15 may to 15 june…..just waiting for that…….

      • Gauri

        I understand…too much negativity actually makes you block everything out…don’t worry everything will be fine…just don’t think too much about it take your tie and update when ever you are free…love you 🙂

  29. Anvee

    Don’t know why I love the love of Neil and yes I do feel that he is irresistible…. I am just like Radhu scared of Arjun’s possessiveness…. it would be like strangling for any other girl but it’s Radhika and she knew ways to handle it…. way to go girl…. best wishes and love for you….lock yourself in the room of creativity…. and open it with your writing as a key….love you and bless you….

    • Gauri

      Thanks a ton Anvee 🙂 yes even I would prefer a Neil over Arjun….but when god made women he said she has the power to bend down anything and anyone…with her determination…smile and offcourse her tears 😉 …if she knows how to use them properly…loads of love and plenty hugs for you 🙂

      • Anvee

        Yeah exactly like your writing is the key of your room of creativity…. woman is the key to a man’s heart…. at least I believe…. I mean man’s heart is very stubborn you see…. if it believes something then it will not change it’s opinion or perception that easily….so this task of Radhika is gonna be a very challenging one…. best wishes to her (you)….

  30. Vini

    Hi Gauri , i think i am writing a comment like this after a long tym 😛 Today’s episodes were simply awesome. no words to describe your way of writing , u have swept me to feet with your writing 🙂 🙂 . Ardika’s scenes were sooo cute and awesome, i couldn’t spot smiling but one thing what i felt is nesam’s proposal scene was just abrupt. it finished so soon , i felt nesam’s emotions could have been elaborated more. just a simple suggestion 🙂 🙂 .. waiting for ur next episode ?? and when are u gonna post ??

    • Gauri

      Thanks Vini 🙂 yes I kept it simple to show Sam’s desperation to have Neil back…but wait for future updates Neil is going to make it special ans Sam will speak her emotions more …thanks for suggestion dear…keep suggesting…loads of love and hugs for you 🙂 next post on Wed 🙂 🙂 🙂 stay blessed 🙂

  31. Wow….gauri dear thanx fr double damaka….it was amazing ….lovely …cute one….nesam confession moments superb…I hate this piyali..how selfish women…mother like her son…I always love raneil bond… They r amazing …ardhika part very nice.. Finally radhu gave him one chance…..she is very clever girl yaar…I like her decision…. Arjun pls change ur madness…when Neil knows ardhika truth …what his reaction…interesting…loved it core… Precap excited….waiting for next one…love u…tc…

    • Gauri

      Thanks a ton Susi dear 🙂 well Neil will be angry..but still time for that right now enjoy the romance 🙂 next one on wed 🙂 tc love you bless you 🙂

  32. niki

    Wow there are already lots and lots of praises done above..i don’t think Dr is anything left for me..I just wanna say you always touch my heart and throughout my day I just keep imagining ur update..it’s like a breath for me..u r the best

  33. vasuraj

    omg wat a episodeeeeeee
    really loving it to the core
    gauru u r fabulous
    congrats and best wishes fr ur ff
    stay happy and smile always…

  34. Gianna

    Thank you Gauri for the double dhamaka. Arjun arjun arjun this devil omg no words here somebody tame this tiger
    Nesam yaaaaaay!!!! So happy ??? loved Neil so much
    Piyali aaaargh
    Waiting for Rads conditions. Loved the chapters great work. Love u ????

  35. aastha

    sorry di for the late comment…………..how dare that Piyali suggest Sam’s sacrifice ?????????? whatever crime that oaf jai do she will only support him……….happy abt nesam……finally one love story is on track………..I loved Arjun’s dialogues to Sam to make her understand her love towards Niel………….felt sad that Sam had gone back to the little samaira who was scred to come out of her shell………..I never knew Niel had a a fiery side in him……..loved e-rads dialogues………….I’m a lil tensed abt Ario’s revenge plan………….is Nandini really aiming to control Samrats life ??????????? Arjun is too possessive abt Rads……..loved his challenge …….but din like what he did to her on the dance floor…………he should stop trying to tie her down………the precap is very interesting………..I love this Radhika who is determined to mould the beast into something she likes………so all together this epi was wonderful , amazing ………….. and every good word in the dictionary……………….love u…………TC………….muah………..

    • Gauri

      Aastha darling, first of all stop saying sorry…its ok if you comment late 🙂 now thanks a ton for your comment 🙂 don’t worry about Ario…niether Arjun is scared nor Radhika is stupid…he will improve very slowly…but yes he loves her from the bottom of his heart…:) loads of love and hugs for you 🙂

  36. neetz

    Just out of words dearrr….awsome it was i almost cried reading neil and.sam part..tooo good…u r tooo talented …love u loads 🙂 :-*

  37. pankh

    superb dr..the more we wait for ur post the more we enjoy reading it…. nesam was awesome.. glad dat finally sam realised her luv 4 neil.. waiting 4 aradhika`s reunion nd their cute nok jhok… post d nxt 1 soon…

  38. Bhabya

    Gaui loved the love guru dialoug. the episodes r so amazing that i can’t express……. U can say 26 letters are not enough to describe the beauty of the episodes. U just nailed it……… Luv u bear tight hugs n kisses tc…..

  39. aalia

    Seriously I’m one of the silent reader really the day I read ur 15 update I went back n checked the whole updates n I’m still reading them n truly n seriously tel u they were amazingly n beautifully written the way u described each n every moment of ARDHIKA it’s truly amazing to imagine n the story is truly well going on really loved ur update n the scenes r always fabulous n amazing to imagine just waiting for ur next update impatiently I know too much of gap u keep in between which is unbearable for ur readers to wait bcz it’s such a beautiful story n really we can understand it takes time to think n write such a wonderful n amazing story so it takes time……..
    Well had this much only to say Really loved it……
    Stay blessed. ….

  40. sweety

    Woww really awesome iam eagerly waiting for u r episode pls update fast yar I love u a lot dearr pls upload next one

  41. ame

    I m a silent reader n Gauri di i m a big big bigggggggg fan of urs i hv been following ur ff n itz aswm i wish tht u update everyday so tht my day goes happy happy……. love u from d bottom of my heart????? tc…

    • Gauri

      Thanks Ame for you amazing words …I will try dear…but you will see the update on wed morning for sure 🙂 love you tc 🙂 stay blessed 🙂

  42. subha

    as usual u r rocking yaar……. radhu-neil (advice),arjun -sam(converstion),arjun radhu ,neil -sam (love ) parts awesome….. keep writting ……. god gift for u………(talent)eagerly waiting next one……….tc

  43. feby

    finally…..let me tell u how crazy iam…lol…i knew u will update in at night and i had entrance exam in the morning…as iam an insomaniac i was awake at night studying and simultaneously checking tu for ur update…and whn i finally got ur update i read it…i think it was almost 2’o clock..thn i revised all formulas and slept without commenting here….and i woke up in the morning 5.30 again i read ur ff for atleast 5 times instaed of revising my concepts….thn i revised….thn got ready and went to the venue…i was exceptionally happy thr…tats DPO effect in me….i cud do exam well…. and came back in aftrnoon 1o clock had lunch and slept…as i got up i again read tis…saw tat it had already 96 comments…i refreshed the page..it turned 99 and again i repfreshed it became 105….i was bewildered…so at last i thought i will comment and then i thought shld i do or not….at last iam doing it coz i want to appreciate u and hug u like anythng…..u r unique and an antique piece…… no words to say…nesam part i think i read for almost infinite times…..i am sooooooo happy for thm…..iam really crazy tat i did these much things….and reading Hope’s comment i became bit emotional too…. i am missing my buddies so much…. i shld say tat all transfers shld b stopped… they dont know how much it hurts the ppl like me… i was always secured with thm… my buddies….iam missing thm like hell… now they might have forgotten me…but still iam not able to come up from my past…u know di…coz of my emotional nature and my love towards best buddies..now i dont make such bonding with anyone…its as if i made a shield around me…. totally changed aftr coming here…oh god….c…ur DPO effect…iam happy and sad at the same time…i became emotional today..lol…can u imagine tat now my face turned red and eyes teary and literally might burst into silent sobs…..hahaha….tq di…u r wonderful writer…..

    • Gauri

      Hi Feby….thanks a ton for the amazing comment…now how was your exam…hope you did very well… I was in 11th standard when my best friend relocated…I cried like crazy…I didn’t wanted to but …tears were not stopping…you can’t share same bond with everybody…and some bonds are really special…I am still in touch with some of my child hood friends…we all made a point to meet once in a yr and we still do that…being emotional is something rare and beautiful becoz you have the capability of standing in some one else’s shoes….love you….now take ample rest 🙂 million hugs for you 🙂

      • feby

        ya… it was physics and chemistry today…i did well in tat…and di…we r all in touch….thanks to technology…. i always got support from thm in the initial months aftr coming here….thn u know na…12th class pressures….we started concentrating on studies….but still i missed thm coz i was only the one who was separated..they still had other besties around thm..so they didnt feel much as i did…and god did one good thing to me… my best buddie’s native house is near the house whr i stay now…so he comes and visits me in vacation…i met him almost 5 times in these 11 months….u told na..tat we cant share that unique bond wid anyone else….tats wat we had…and its abt him i mentiond to HOPE’S comment…but all other buddies cant meet coz we all belong from different states… all states ppl were thr in my class….and so aftr 12th or college every1 will leave for their respective states..tats a sad point..well….love u too di….wow…i got million hugs from u today…..whn will u update next…..???? if its soon..thn i will get happy and do my kerala medical entrance well…like how todays went well coz of ur DPO…LOL….

      • Gauri

        Feby my bestie is from kerala we know each since 2nd standard…now we both are in blore…when we met after 8 yrs I never felt ta we didn’t see each other for 8 yrs…yes you can share tat special bond with anyone…and next one tomorrow morning. love you

  44. Sejal

    Thank you maandey i too hope i get my version of arjun the one who has been born only for me..

  45. From where to star …..even I don’t know….U r MARVELLOUS….earlier I used to give u the best copy writer award
    …But even that couldn’t define the Potential u have ….the way u write ❤ ..
    Not only this episode …Every episode is beyond superb 🙂
    Sorry for not commenting on every episode ….i m busy with the prep of aipmt n all other exams….still whenever i take a short break i do read ur complete story …bcs i can’t resist doing so ….
    Hey…what about the book u r writing…is that competed…r still working on it?
    ..even I m writing one …but didn’t get time to modify it ….
    Lots of love ❤(I don’t know whether I will get time to read them now onwards …bcs …i m busy till June )
    Anyway ….lots of appreciation too…wish u all the best …keep writing:)

    • Gauri

      Thanks Monu dear 🙂 all the best for your entrance test…do well…and no need for sorry…AIPMT is difficult I know…about my book I wrote the prolouge twice and then erased it…something is missing in it 🙁 well will write again…all the best again 🙂 bless you

  46. Jerly

    awesome………. episode Gauri……. loved it….. waiting 4 next…….. luv uuuuu………………. 🙂 🙂

  47. Fatarajo

    Lovely and marvelous episode really loving ur ff a lot and is also recreating Ardhika magic 🙂

  48. Ananya

    Gauri… . Gauri. … Gauri. …. too good dear. .. Amazing, mind blowing, fantastic, superb … ????? I was waiting for the update. … n I must say, such a wonderful story…. I don’t even bother about whose ever calling me or talking to me…. just engrossed in the story… eagerly waiting for the next episode….?????

    • Gauri

      Thanks Ananya 🙂 I am not getting words to thank you for such ans amazing comment 🙂 love you 🙂

  49. Raaga

    every time I ll b searching for words to express my happiness after reading …bcuz I m very poor in expressing… I feel especially with ur awseome fabulous ff ;-*
    love u loads dearrr…..
    and coming to today’s ff it was out of expectation ….superrrrrrrrrrr
    waiting eagerly for next one…
    As one of my frnd said take care of ur health too….ur mind needs enuf rest ..take rest dear…:-)

    • Gauri

      Thanks Raaga 🙂 and no problem dear…even I am looking for better words than thanks 🙂 love you bless you 🙂

  50. Sv

    Di sry for the late comment. Loved it nesam story on the track yippiee. Radhika to give rules and arjun to follow lol. Im waiting for that moment. Nandhini super awesome. Piyali argh…. neil and arjjn in one team to smash jai . Waiting foe that. Love u di and ur words. Cant write moore sry. But im happy to the core. Loved it. Love u di and bear hugs and kisses.

    • Gauri

      Sv dear, first of all stop saying sorry….its absolutely not required…and thanks you my swt hrt…happy to see your comment…hope your studies are going on good….tc study well…love you 🙂

  51. khushi

    m a silent reader but really gauri u r amazing, ek request hai pls more Neil and sam scene pls dear

  52. Roma

    Awesome, wowwww, superb, marvellous double dhamaaka episodes. …gauriiiiiiiiiiiii my sweeeeeet darling friend. …I’m just spellbound n overwhelmed after reading these mind blowing update….my dearrryyyy it’s superbbbb n beautiful narration n dialogues very awesoooooome. …ardhika cute fights r really very interesting. ..he made her hug him n we can see the difference between arjun n jai’s love, there is something that she feel good with arjun but not with jai…it’s really very hard for me explain but gauri your flawless talent made us fall for arjun’s love….
    nesam, nesam, nesam. …wowwww finally sam realized her love for neil…raneil bonding is very lovelyyyyyy…how beautifully rads pushed neil back to sam …..arjun’s reply n questions to sam was really awesome, made her finally confess her true love for neil….nesam convo n romantic moments were remarkable…muaaaaahhhhhh…gauri dearrrr you nailed it again my sweeeeeetheart…..you’re rocking….I hate piyali for asking sam for sacrifice just for jai…it’s disgusting….jai deserve to be in jail…..nandini di doing marvellous job by keeping him away from ardhika. …ario n gang has bad intentions for rads…i hope arjun save her before anything bad happened to her…the last scene was very awesoooooome when beast showed beauty his possessiveness n his authority on her…she is scared of his love but at same time feels protection in his arms….n now ready to give him a chance but on her conditions. ..wowwww that would be great n very interesting to see…..

    hats off to you gauri dearrrr it’s very beautiful n outstanding refreshing story n I’m addicted to Youuuuuuuuu and this story. …im so immersed into it n I love you soooooooo muchhhhhh for sharing your amazing treasure with us. …my all best wishes are always with you. ….you’re amazingly awesoooooome writer. … I madly in love with your writing skills n your imagination…keep it up. eagerly waiting for the next episode, love you loads. muaaaaahhhhhh..infinite number of hugs n kissesssss for you…. 🙂 🙂 🙂

    • Gauri

      Roma Roma Roma….my lovely friend thank you so much for this amazing comment…I am replying to you after reading your comment 5 times…thanks for making my day so beautiful…thank you so much Roma…I am looking for words to thanks you mt swt frind bless you all the happiness of the world 🙂 love u…..million hugs for you 🙂

  53. meghna shanti

    oday is Wednesday
    And I’m eagerly waiting for your update yaar
    Plzz post it fast
    I hope you’ll not disappoint me
    Tc dear

  54. happy

    hi dr….wt happened….cant wait anywore…from morning till now i continuously visiting this page…..pls…try to update soon….

    • Gauri

      Hi Dear…TU is not accepting articles even I am waiting….now will post double episode once TU opens up…so sorry

  55. Vini

    Hey gauri u can upload the same in some other site and send the link here once TU starts accepting you can upload here also

  56. feby

    iam fed up….whn will they accept it…iam going mad literally……iam waiting since strday night….

  57. Niharika

    Gauri di when will Neil come to know that Arjuns bunny is Radhika and when will radhika come to know that Arjun knows Neil and Sam. di you said you shall update on wednesday .

  58. Rg

    Hi gauri u wrote they r accepting articles till 29th … Does it mean they accept from 30 the of April or from 29 th morning they will accept which happens to b on d morrow. I am sorry am confused ….Sorry I know am pestering u. But thez 2 days tu tried my patience…. Am fed up with tu. I was so happily awaiting for wed morning only to stay put for two days. I love ur ff gauri… Sorry for d inconvienience…. Pls put mess once u update, thanks. Once again sorry for pestering. Am impatient, I know… But can’t help it dear..?. Take care. Be happy.

  59. anvitha

    hi gauri
    i m a silent reader of your ff
    it was awesome

    now u can submit your article
    please post soon

  60. Di di trY mail plzzz… Mine got posted hopefully yoursWill too… i am so sooooo eager to read. cant help. bringing suggestions :p patience limit crossed… 🙁

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