Manmarziyan-Destiny…Passion…Obsession-chapter-24

Hi Friends as promised…here is the next chapter pls let me know how was it…next one on Tuesday.
Happy weekend to all of you and thanks to all for making me feel on the top of the world…bless you all…and do let me know how was it

Chapter 24

A great man once said –‘to fulfil your destiny stay true to your heart’ this is what Arjun and Sam needs to learn
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As promised Arjun reached Anna’s dorm to pick Radhika up on Saturday at 7:00 AM…Radhika came out dressed in a tight knee length skirt and top…Arjun looked at her from top to bottom; ‘’That’s very short’’ Anna made an annoyed face at Arjun…Radhika stared at him for a minute went inside and banged the door…Arjun gave a winning smile…but what he got next left him shocked and Anna amused Radhika came out in denim shorts cropped top and trekking shoes…Radhika folded her arms to chest and raised an eyebrow at him, Anna pressed her lips to hide her laugh…Arjun ; ‘’Now what’s this?’’

Radhika; ‘’ no dress code remember…rules’’

Arjun; ‘’ fine I will be waiting down come fast’’

Anna; ‘’You guys should be back by evening…its friends day’’

Radhika; ‘’Yes Anna..will be back by evening…’’ Arjun made a face as he wanted to spend whole day with Radhika he had even packed few clothes…he walked out asking Radhika to come…Radhika cam down after 10 min dressed in a full length jump suit….Arjun smiled Radhika took her seat in his car Arjun…looked at her; ‘’Sorry will never comment on your attire…and why we have to come back by evening…we could have spend a day and back by morning’’

Radhika took a deep breath …it was time for Arjun to learn a lesson; ‘’Anna was hopeful … I don’t break hopes and also because…having someone new doesn’t mean you neglect the old ones now shall we move because we will come back by evening…’’ Arjun lifted Radhika’s hand to his lips she quickly withdrew and spoke; ‘’Do you want a rule broken on first day itself…you almost broke one up there’’…

Arjun surprised; ‘’Bunny this is not kissing’’

Radhika; ‘’Follow my rules or just move back…choice is yours’’

Arjun smiled ; ’’Why are you so different…I love you Radhika’’ Radhika smiled and they drove off,.

India

Dilip was busy in his office when the peon told him about a Samrat , Dilip greeted Samrat with a hug.

Dilip; ‘’How come in my office’’

Samrat; ‘’It was necessary…I didn’t wanted to speak infront of Mala or Piyali’’

Dilip; ‘’Samrat…what’s wrong is everything fine…something wrong with kids’’

Samrat; ‘’Dilip…Please never accept Jai’s proposal for Radhika…her life will be spoiled’’ this sentence left Dilip bewildered , Samrat always wanted Radhika as a part of his family but now he himself was speaking against this relationship’

Dilip; ‘’What’s wrong’’

Samrat; ‘’Jai has an obsession of Radhika…he just wants her for himself…if this happens it will make Radhika’s life hell…Jai needs to understand…please Dilip…hope you understand’’ Dilip felt proud of his friendship he hugged Samrat…because Samrat thought about Radhika first even before Jai. Dilip promised his support in case he needed him…Samrat left after that…Dilip decided to let Mala understand the same.

Destiny; ‘Now The suitor left for Radhika in her parent’s eyes was Neil….poor chap…Radhika was a baby for him…he could never look at Radhika that way…well but this will complicate or solve things you will know in future’

Singapore

Sam was getting ready…as it was her first official date with Neil…she had changed atleast 10 times…but nothing seemed perfect…Neil finally knocked at the door ;’’Sammy I think we should plan our date in the apartment…’’

Sam came out wearing a sleeveless maxi dress…she smiled at Neil…Neil appreciated her look wrapped his arm around her waist and walked out of the apartment….Neil took Sam to the famous Silso island…Sam was amazed…this place was the Singapore’s best tourist location…Neil gave Sam a bag and asked her to change…Sam checked the bag…it had a swimming costume…Sam’s jaw dropped; ‘’Neil…!!!!’’

Neil smiled; ‘’baby we are at a beach…and this is not too revealing…so stop popping your eyes go change and come’’ Sam went changed…she took a deep breath then stared at her image in mirror…Sam searched her bag and found a chiffon stole she tied it around her waist like a wrap…to hide her bare legs…once satisfied she came out to the beach and stood behind Neil…Neil gave one slow look to Sam and extended his hand he was also in ¾ bottom with a bare torso Sam for the first time just wanted to stand and stare at him he was so perfect…Neil lifted Sam up and threw her in the water…Sam gasped…she must have drank a litre of salt water…she got up all angry; ‘’Will kill you’’….Sam and Neil played in water enjoying each other’s company and affection…Sam hugged Neil; ‘’Thanks Neil…for this beautiful day’’ Neil’s palm rubbed Sam’s back; ’’Baby we have whole weekend thank me after that…well now I am taking you for a Jet ski ride’’ Sam kissed Neil’s cheek warmly. Piyali was continuously trying to reach Sam but her no. was switched off…Neil had done this when Sam went to change

Neil POV; ‘No one will come between us Sam…neither your modelling contract nor your mom’

USA

After 2.5 hrs drive Arjun brought Radhika to farmhouse…the place was very green…there was a small simple house in the middle surrounded by a beautiful garden…the place was far from city…it had amazing freshness…a man came an greeted Arjun and then Radhika…Radhika was mesmerized by the scenic view; ‘’What place is it’’

Arjun; ‘’it’s a farm house…it was my Mom’s now mine…she liked simple things natural beauty…she loved this place…she breath her last here’’ Arjun’s voice was sad…Radhika walked to him..held his hand and squeezed gently; ‘’Show me around’’ Arjun smiled held her hand tightly and showed her all the places and the people who took care of the place…

Radhika met a different Arjun…the devil had a heart…he was so happy and jolly with the kids around…no one could say that he was the spoilt prince…he gave the kids the gifts he bought…the kids pushed him to ground tickled him sat on his stomach….and he enjoyed all that…Radhika noticed that the caretakers family loved him….and so did he…but when he introduced her Radhika was shocked; ‘’Andrew meet your new would me mistress…she will own this place’’ Radhika blinked…she was too shocked to react…they greeted her and congratulated Arjun…Radhika knew Arjun and made his decision to marry her…she was little worried…as she was still trying to love him. Arjun took radhika inside the house…it was a simple place…Radhika felt a kind a warmth there which brought a smile to her face…she found Arjun’s mom portrait on the wall; ‘’Now I know where you got your killer looks from’’

Arjun; ‘’I thought I was an amalgamation of animals’’

Radhika; ‘’I think I whistled at you after that….so yes you look good…by the way why did you call me owner of this place…I have not promised you marriage Arjun’’ Arjun smiled came close and whispered; ‘’I told you Bunny…I will marry you come what may…your rules will not stop me…’’ Radhika shivered at the intensity in Arjun’s eyes…Arjun brushed her cheeks and pulled her into his arms Radhika wanted to move out but Arjun tighten his grip; ‘’You will not stop me from hugging you…this was your rule.’’

Radhika smirked; ‘’What is the point of these rules when you have already made you decision…lets just leave this sham…you want me…take me and just get over with your obsession’’

Arjun was hurt he immediately moved back…he loved her she was not just a body for him but his world…he inserted his hands in his pocket gave Radhika a pained look; ‘’I will be out….need to check on the farm…you can ask the cook if you want something…get yourself comfortable’’ Radhika went to the kitchen and was greeted my an old man david…he gave her a wide smile….it was welcoming..warm…David told Radhika that Arjun’s mom expired when he was 10…His father loved his mom so much that he couldn’t cope up with his wife’s death which resulted in Arjun getting neglected…In present scenario the father son only exchanged pleasantries…Radhika felt bad for Arjun..she could visualize the little Arjun eyeing for affection…finally David concluded; ‘’He is a very good boy…just little alone….he loves you from his heart…he never brings anyone here…don’t leave him’’ Radhika smiled and nodded she went to the porch …and found Arjun enjoying horse riding with the kids…he looked happy different…he was taking all the kids for ride one by one….Arjun saw Radhika watching him…he gestured her to come…Radhika looked sideways and gulped….noway she will not go for horse riding…Arjun smirked got down …Radhika’s eyes popped out; ‘’Listen Mr. Hades…don’t mess with me…you cannot force me’’

Arjun folded his hands to his chest; ‘’This was not there in the rules…so you are doing it…and why are you scared…when I am with you…trust me’’ Arjun extended his hand and Radhika took it little afraid…he helped her on the horse and took his place behind her she was continuously chanting hanuman chalisa…Arjun started slowly…but then gained speed…Radhika squealed in excitement….’’Tiger this is amazing….thank you’’ Arjun halted the horse and it lifted its front legs…for Radhika it was like adventure sport…he held her waist and bought her down like a doll… Arjun took her for a walk; ‘’These plantations and garden was done by my mom…she loved gardening…I still can feel her here…’’ Arjun leaned against a tree…looking at his mom’s remembrance around him….Radhika gave him an assuring smile; ‘’Then she must be around….lets have food ….I am hungry….’’ Arjun watched her for a minute intertwined his fingers with hers then took her back to the house..

Singapore

Neil took Samaira back to Siloso beach resort…he had booked a cottage for them to spend the weekend…samaira was spell bound it was a huge luxury cottage with greenery around…the had their own private pool…the porch was open yet private… it opened to the beach giving them a beautiful view of endless majestic sea…Sam turned to Neil; ‘’Why?’’

Neil; ‘’ because this is the date I have been waiting for years…because I wanted to tell you how special you are for me…you are the only dream I ever had…you are my beginning and you are my end…’’

Sam smiled broadly…wiping the happy tears…she hugged Neil tight… ‘’lets not talk about the end …this is our beginning….Neil I want to live a happy life with you…we will not talk anything sad…only fun, romance and love…Neil smiled and nodded…’’so what do you want to do’’

Sam; ‘’right now…just want to spend time with you …so can you just switch on that ‘do not disturb button’

Neil; ‘’Your wish is my command’’ Sam quickly freshened up she wore a knee length lose shirt dress…her hair were still wet she tucked a small white flower on one side and smiled looking at herself..she opened the door to the poach arranged two glasses and wine….she dialed Neil but his no. was busy…she smiled and decided to wait for him.

Neil was in hotel lobby he was talking to his lawyer…;’’So what do you have to say about the contract…are there any loop holes in it’’

Lawyer; ‘’it’s a strong one..Samira might have to pay a huge penalty if she backs out…but we can do something once she starts shooting…like she being sick or doctor’s advice to quit due to something…but that only when their doc confims…then they won’t be able to do anything. Neil…I wanted to tell you something…according to contract Sam cannot refuse any kind of outfits or couple or intimate photoshoot and she cannot marry or get pregnant…Piyali has accepted this without reading…’’

Neil; ‘’I will take care…don’t worry…look it to it again and let me know if you find something which I can use to end this nonsense.’’ Neil was desperate to marry Samaira…it was very easy for him to pay Khanna’s the money they needed…He was just not the owner of RYTHYM or partner in Bird SONG…he and ARjun together held a chain of restaurants in India and some south Asian countries…by the name ‘THE DEVIL’s KITCHEN’ …both wanted to do something away from what they got from their parents…they had started it after their graduation under Nandini’s supervision…she guided and groomed them..Arjun’s sharpness and Neil’s dedication with Nandini’s experience had made it huge success…Neil was expert in handling any kind of barriers only Arjun knew how twisted he can get…when he wanted to get the things done…he never forced Sam to be with him but now when she had accepted he wouldn’t allow her to leave….even if she wanted. Neil knew what has to be done and who will help them.

Sam saw around 20 calls from Piyali…she was about to call her when Neil entered the room snatched her phone ; ‘’Sammy this weekend I don’t want anyone between us…please…’’ Sam nodded Neil kissed Sam passionately …’’ how about a couple spa Sam smiled and nodded.They finished the spa bath….and were enjoying looking at the waves…

Sam was sitting with her back attached to Neil’s front and his arms around her locking her completely to him…Sam felt the bliss…she hesitated and then spoke; ‘’I have a confession’’

Neil; ‘’Go on’’

Sam; ‘’I thought you were in Love with Chashni…I am sorry’’

Neil gave a roaring laughter then composed himself; ‘’Chashni??? Couldn’t you find some one better…she is a baby …I can never see her that way…she is important for me she is my best friend…I love her but like a child…well she has a brain of a child only’’

Sam chuckled; ‘’Neil she is intelligent …we all know that…no child can have a brain like her…she brought you back to me ’’

Neil; ‘’Agreed she bought us together….but sometimes she is stupid too…’’

Sam warned; ‘’Dare you call her stupid…if she knows this she will chop you into pieces’’

Neil; ‘’Ok sorry ! Sammy…her happy go lucky ways over friendly nature and daring attitude lands her in trouble…well leave that if she knew we were talking about her on our date…then she will give us an ear bleed’’

Neil ordered dinner in the room…after having dinner he kissed Sam’s forehead wishing her for the night….Sam held his hand; ‘’Neil can I sleep hugging you…’’ Neil walked to Sam tucked her hair behind her ear…lifted her in his arms…and placed her on the bed…joining her in a sec…he wrapped his arms around her locking her body with his…Sam felt cared protected and like a queen she kissed Neil neck and closed her eyes.

Sam POV; ‘I don’t want to do this assignment I know you hate it …but first time in my life my mother has expectations from me…I want to prove myself to her after that I will marry you…no more distance’
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Sam just wanted a single word of praise from her mom …well she deserved it she was broken …but Neil will heal her…and Arjun he will learn lessons which no one taught him…this will calm him down…

Precap: Aradhika sweet moments and Nesam romance

Credit to: Gauri

100 comments

  1. chandan

    Awesome Gauri…both the couples spending time with eachother n understanding each other well…liked Arjun’s lively mood…enjoyed totally…tc

  2. Supriya

    Wow di…kya baat hai tusi toh chaaa gaye…….today we saw a child in arjun who craves for someone’s affection and love……I didn’t like radz for hurting him with words when she knows that he loves her…….I love horse riding scene……loved it…..even I know a bit of horse riding…what abt u??????so radz knows abt Arjun’s mom ka death and also his pain hope the girl makes him happy forever…..I loved the way arjun cares for radz he keeps on clutching her fingers everytime that z just cute……Neil and Sam were toooo gud but for me aradhika was best today……..I will be crazy if I don’t read ur updates even for a day…….I will srsly get pissed of but that day will never come overall it was icing on the cake…….big round of applause for u di………I m waiting for the prologue still…….do it at earliest don’t keep me waiting otherwise I will eat ur head……..now my questions……will rads accept arjun’s proposal in few days????I think so becoz the way she was enquiring abt him this displays that she has started feeling for him…….Neil rocks as usual…..Sammy such a cry bby…..girl needs some self confidence……. will jai create havoc?????what abt ario…..will he hurt rads????I have too many questions but m sleepy I have class so I will ask u on chat…….love u from the bottom of my heart……muaaaaahhhhhh tc?????

    • Gauri

      Thanks my Swt hrt 🙂 now your answers 🙂 yes Radhika will 🙂 Sam will gain confidence she is scared of losing Neil there is more to come…Jai well he will not improve easily…Ario in next 2 chap you will know …chalo tc …love you for your amazing comment 🙂

  3. nita

    Eagerly waiting for Tuesday…… Today’s episode was awesome you rocked it as usual I woked at 2.00 till 3.00 I was checking for ur update then I felt asleep… At 5.30 whn I was awake I found your update…I want you to post your update regularly dii but I knw it wll be tough as you wll hve your daily work if possible update before Tuesday…. Waiting to see whn radhika wll fall deeply to his TIGER love you di for your update

    • Gauri

      Thanks a ton Nita… 🙂 posting regularly is little difficult because of office…but I will try to post before Tuesday….thanks for your support and patience….well Radhika will fall for Arjun soon 🙂 love you 🙂

  4. Omg if u can pls fill dis _______________ with most fabulous words in D wold 😀 😀 😀 I need to find some words to appreciate u coz all time u coming up with most fabulous plot 😀 😀 wat to say darling ?????? It’s really amazing 😀 😀 did any one know Tamil pls translate dis cozzz I dono how to say dis in english I think naaga r shree can help me……. 😀 😀 guys pls help me 😀 😀 TOP TAKKARRRRRRRRRRRRRRR ma CHUMMA KIZHI KIZHI kizhichiteenga 😉 😉 😉 😉 😉 love u sissy darling 😀 it’s really amazing I felt each n words of ur ff really I lived with ur ff 😀 😀 arjun he s really awesome 😀 😀 😀

    • Gauri

      Suga love you and now thanks my lovely sis being an amazing support 🙂 well pls let mw know the meaning of what your wrote or some one else who can translate for me pls…loads of love and hugs for you 🙂

  5. Dhara

    Well Gauri as I say u always surprise with ur writing. Thus is amazing. So finally beast is showing his other side to beauty. Waiting for next part.

  6. aastha

    I loved it………….I ended up laughing seeing Rads dress when Arjun told her that the knee length dress was too short………………the farm house is very beautiful…you have described it very beautifully………………today you showed us the soft side of Arjun……………y is Rads afraid of horse ride ????????? the horse ride scenes were awesome….I could see them infront of my eyes……………..nesam scenes wre also superb !!!!!!!!!!!!! the cottage and the scenery is fantastic……………..when I read abt the deal that Piyali had accepted even without reading I was shocked………..happy that Niel is there to support and help her………..infact I love this determined and strong Niel………thanks for showing what Niel can do if he wants something……loved the bond between Arjun and NIel……..one of the best things Niel did was to switch off Sam’s mobile phone………….uff that Piyali would never give any peace to them…..happy that Niel has decided not to let anyone come between them………………poor Sam she really deserves a good applause from that Piyali but all she gets from that witch is comparison between herself and that good for nothing Jai…………….Samrat is a good friend……I felt proud of him when he told Dilip to refuse Jai’s proposal………..I conclude by saying that you are a rockstar……………love u……TC……………

    • Gauri

      Thanks a ton Aastha 🙂 she is afraid because she has never done horse riding…and thanks for calling me a rockstar 🙂 love u stay blessed 🙂

  7. roshini

    Nw pls compliment urself on my behalf Bcoz I M Out Of words…….amazing Update….love U :-* 😀 🙂 🙂

  8. Rg

    Hi gauri gud morning to u. Am Glad to c and read two stories of urs today. I was thrilled to read mmz married by fate, … I don’t know how u managed both d stories so well. U were able to do justice to both. You would have had to be in two mind sets to set d path for d stories to flow. Thanks for taking d time and suggestion to make it happen for us. You r Ineed a beautiful person. Am Glad to have met u here.
    Now coming to DPO … I was estatic to read abt ardhika and nesam. The way each pairs sweet moments portrayed was very sweet And romance in case of nesam was extremely natural and consistent with d flow….Arjuns possessiveness though scary is a treat to read… I like his confidence thou he sometimes come off as a jerk. I love radz confidence and d way she treat s arjun….. Yet finally she gives in to him but only after making sure tat he has learnt his lessons…. I hope piyali doesn’t create any problems for nesam … Will neils wish and SAMs wish to help her mom coincide to create problems btw them. If Neil comes to US to see radz will Sam come along? I badly want radz to fall for arjun soon. And I do want arjun to break few of her rules and yet I want her to fall for him…. ?… I really don’t know y am like this… But yes.. I want both of them to get together soon without rules…??.. Thou arjun deserves every one of d rules she has set before him.. Pls bring them soon together….. Unlike arjun radz is very much in control of d relationship.. Will radz stay from arjun if Neil request it? Wat is she going to do. How will she pacify arjun and make Neil understand too? Oh gauri I can’t help being this curious.
    I love all ur stories. They r all delicious…. I can just imagine all this taking place. U do have flare for words. You portray emotions beautifully. Radz is a strong character. And I like her tat way. Each of ur ff is very close to my heart and I cherish it. I still read d old one sometimes. As I loved tat one too. If u write book pls let me know I will definitely buy it … I love all ur ffs. Never give up writing my dear… U r born for it… I will miss u till Tuesday. Eagerly waiting for ur ffs.. My amazing writer u rock and u r d best..once again thank u for writing d other one soooo soon,. Take care. Stay blessed and be happy….

    • Gauri

      Thanks Rg dear 🙂 now ans yes Sam’s desire to help her mom will pull her into trouble but Neil will not leave her…Sam will come with Neil to US…and it would be a surprise for them to see Radhika with Arjun….Radhika will fall for Arjun…Arjun will break the rules …Radhika is a smart girl…she will use her brain again and nicely….Arjun will do any thing and everything for her…and pls don’t forget Nandini…Arjun’s sis for whom her brother is her priority 🙂 stay blessed dear…love you 🙂

  9. Sejal

    It was very nice.. Today nesam rocked it.. No problm.. Di plzz i want the next one to be a bit more of ardhika..
    Tuesday is very late … God how i m gonna survive till dat..
    Luv u :):*

    • Gauri

      Thanks Sejal darling 🙂 … I had office today so won’t be able to write will start tomorrow and post by tuesday 🙂 love stay blessed 🙂

  10. Gauri di its tooooo gud….arjun craving for mothers luv whc he lost n childhood itself so radzzz healing medicine fr arjun….nesam part is gud…luv u di tc …. 🙂

  11. Sravya

    beautiful one dear. Arjun was interesting day by day. the horse riding was so awsm.update the nxt one early if u can .

  12. Outstanding, mind blowing episode, you nail it well done.

    I get so happy when I’m reading your story, really you are an amazing writer, I wish your story would be on TV because I would love to watch this on TV. 🙂

  13. aastha

    I too agree with Brin….if your story is aired on TV……..all other serials will lose their TRP’s…….and audience would say ” finally SP got some sense “……………….

  14. Dev

    Hey gauri……u r osm once again in ur ff……i was thinking dis epi was faar too short n den rememberd dat it has only an epi rader dan ur 2 epis…..lovd d way rads changed into shorts n shoeswen arjun commented on her dress…????..n d happiness he got frm children..???..n d hotse riding xperiance……bt was hurt wen rads commented on arjuns love as obession.????….bt d words of d cook to rads made her open her heart a bit to know abt d lonely arjun frm childhood…..n now im sure dat she will make up for his childhood n youth……????
    Coming 2 d true frndship of samrat n dilip….its commendable to warn him abt his own son wud b a rashful beast if dey allowd jai to hav radu….so dilip is indeed fortunate…….???
    Cant dis piyali read through d document….????.she will do anything for jai dis is clear as frm d signing of d contract…..???.dat has all d things dat wud harm sams heart……
    N nesam lovd d duos holiday weekend resort????????let d love birds enjoy 2 d fullest….n piyali has 2 face neil to get sam.☺☺☺☺…..n does none know abt d devils kitchen grp…even sam????????
    Well feeling sad 4 sam ……to gt 1 good comment frm her mom she had to go through dese…..????
    Well ovral a fab n fun n emotional epi …..love u…????.n lots n lots of hugs frm me till tuesday……smile always???? n keep writing

    • Gauri

      Thanks Dev for the amazing comment and your analysis 🙂 yes Piyali will face Neil…and No one knows about Devils’s Kitchen Radhika dosen’t know Arjun is the partner and Sam doesn’t is not aware about Neil’s all ventures…you will see a positive yet twisted Neil 🙂 stay blessed:)

  15. Koi to rokooo…. I am dead yrr… I want this story o never end just like adrhika and nesam’s love. So much in love with this and truly and not obsession. Thank you so much For updating di warna aaj padhai nahi hoti. :* 🙂 byee see ya
    By the way when you going to post next??

    • Gauri

      Roshini darling…what should reply to your comment 🙂 thanks a ton and now go and study well..next one on tuesday 🙂 love you

  16. feby

    omg omg omg…was soooooo excited whn i got it today……i loved it……and di…i replied u in previous one….well….i have neet exam tomorrow….do pray for me…..

  17. Wow Gauri….it was amazing…lovely one dear ….I really loved it…waiting for next one…love u loads..tc dear ….

  18. Nice one Gauri ☺ my eyes r filled up with tears has i read the arjuns childhood ? and precap is very good. Waiting 4 next one ☺

  19. Super episode..u nailed it out..u didn’t mention whether arjun know abt nesam ??did radhika told him abt it?? Will same does assignment or Neil stops her frm doing?? Will radhika know arjun nd Neil frndship before falling in love with arjun or after??…so many questions eagerly waiting for rest of updates??
    For me I hav to go in dictionery or I hav to make new words to praise ur writing….such an excellent writer u r…NVR stop writing…l loved ur witting to core..by ur ffs u hav become part of my world..love u loads and loads..lot of hugs…u r awesome..

    • Gauri

      Thanks Priya 🙂 so nice of you dear ….Arjun knows Neil loves Sam and he doesn’t care about anything he only wants Radhika…..but he will know soon…now she will fall in love you will know more in coming updates 🙂 love you dear 🙂 stay blessed 🙂

  20. Sv

    Awesome. Yippiee. Radhika starts to feel that beast has a heart a good heart. Neil over protective. Wow im jumping. Di wating for Tuesday to come. Love u di and ur words. Take care di love you so much and bear hugs and kisses. Muuhhhaaa.

    • Gauri

      Hi SV dear, thanks a ton darling and so nice to see your comment hope your studies are good…study well take ample rest…and thanks love you 🙂 stay blessed 🙂

  21. neetz

    That was a fab epi dear…..u were my first thought aftet getting up in the mrg …lol … 😉 checked mobile immediately found ur update.and was toooo happy 🙂
    M a drug addict and that drug is ur ff 🙂 :-*

  22. Gauri darling when evr i saw ur ff’s name on list i always has tremendous excitement to read it…n u always fulfill it by ur amazing n extraordinary writting skills..u r fabulous n amazing writer…In today’s epi Aradhika is so cute..sply arjun stole my heart… how beautiful he was cherishing his mom’s memories…n nw got the pt y he is so stubborn n didn’t hear no frm any one.bt there is our rads to teach him some lessons…nesam was superb..i like how arjun neil started their business with nandini’s exp…nw one thing is clr neil will not allow piyali to hurt sam anymore..samrat n dilip convi superb…as usual will wait for Tuesday… love uuu…

  23. Devi

    I wa new to this ff….read one epi n could nt stop me frm reading all the epis…. Loved this story line….also happy coz u r regular in givin ur updaes whuch wil mak ur fans happy.Now eagerly waiting fr the next epi..

  24. ???…………………………………………………………………….???……………………………………?????…………………………???…………………………………………………???

    Figure out what is it….after exams read all of ur chapters at one breath….btw how are u….angry on me….lol…..missed this very much…tc?

    • Gauri

      Rosssssssssssiiiiiiiiiieeeeeeeeeeeeee……missed you how are you??….missed you yes and I am not angry becoz exams are more important….but happy that I will see your comments…love you

    • feby

      am i dreaming….????? my god…di…we all missed u sooooooooo much…..was r u??? and how was ur exam…????? soooooooooo happy to c u on TU……

    • Shree

      Mamma!! You’re back!! Yey!! How are you?! It’s been so long.. Exams?!

      Love you loads.. Tc.. Keep smiling.. Bear hug ??

      • Anyway m Fyn my sweeties….i didn’t know many people miss me….thanks….i also missed u all n this place a lot….now I’ll pester u all so much that u will get bored of me…hehehe ??

  25. Shree

    Diiii!! Sooper dooper update!! God this is going so well!! I don’t get how you manage…. Ardhika was superb… Loved Samrat Dilip convo… Nesam are cute!! Please chuck Piyali…. Farmhouse!! Cute!! So many confessions… Wow!!

    Dayum… Sorry for the late comment.. Short too… Sowwy… ??… Post soon

    Love you loads.. Tc.. Keep smiling.. Bear hug ??

  26. pankh

    another awesome chap…. keep going lyk dis always…..can`t wait 4 tuesday….nd 1 request.. plz post more aradhika`s part…luv u .,…

  27. Roma

    Hi gauriiiiiiiiiiiii my sweeeeeet darling friend. ….I’m soooooooo sorry for being so late to comment. …now only I could read the update….first the weekend being so hectic for me as its family time n then TU site went on server maintenance….ufff it was toooo annoying waiting for site to showup. ..I was dying to read your update….and now I can breath easily…the episode was awesoooooome n outstanding. …ardhika convo on dress code n rules was really incredible. ..we saw a hidden child in arjun who is yearning from long for affection n care…it was so sweeet….rads trying to love him but he already decided to marry her…rads’ words hurt arjun…she needs more assurance n arjun will do anything to win her heart….nesam were very cuteeeee. ….their date n fun activities were lovelyyyyyy. …the conditions of modelling contract n Neil’s rxn was very thoughtful. …I’m curious what will he gonna do to eliminate this…Sam in her dreamland having very blissful time with Neil…I just loved their trust, neil’s care n Sam’s happiness to be in this lovely relation…dilip n samrats meeting n convo showed a very good father n great human in samrat….ardhika horse riding scene was pretty amazing, I enjoyed it soooooooo muchhhhhh. …precap is very exciting. …keep it up. eagerly waiting for the next episode, love you loads. . muaaaaahhhhhh 🙂 😉 🙂

    • Gauri

      Thanks a ton Roma 🙂 noe even I can smile after reading your update 🙂 tc love you well you will see the next one tomorrow morning 🙂

  28. Now I want to make it a ton…but completely pissed off with tu now…why comments didn’t get posted at once…and why did u get me delete from ur hangout list…m sad

    • Gauri

      Rosie darling…I didn’t delete you from Hangouts…seriously…but I am sorry i dont know hw it got deleted….pls add me again 🙂

  29. What do u do when u feel that u lost some connection from ur stories…how u get that zeal back …do and me…n which update of mine u think should be update first…don’t worry much…cox I know my silly banters started again..???

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