MANMARZIYAN: His Dark Secret ~ chapter 1

Hello everyone… m back !! as i promised… it’s Sunday.. so m here with my ff…. first thank u all for ur love and support…. and next… enjoy reading.. 😉
MANMARZIYAN: His Dark Secret
Chapter 1
Radhika was a young girl, a high school pass out who had taken admission in Adler University, Chicago, to acquire a degree in psychology. This is a subject which has greatly influence her over the years and as a result she decided to pursue this as her career option. It was the first day of her college and she was ‘EVER EXCITED’. But little did she know about her fate. She reached the college and the first thing she noticed was its great campus. A tour through the college corridor took her some 15 minutes to reach her class room. Thankfully the teacher had not reached then. She took her seat beside a guy. He had an innocent face and an ever calm demeanour.
“hi…am Neil” said the guy..
“Radhika..” she replied…
“Indian..right??” said neil.
“yeah..but I stay here…” she replied..
“ me as well” said Neil
“nice to meet u…” he added.
The teacher arrived and the class started. The topic for the day was—
Although radz had quite a lot of knowledge regarding the subject, she came to know more about human psychology. Like different person react differently when exposed to various surroundings…their emotions vary. For example, 50% of your happiness is genetically determined and cannot be altered, and another 10% is by circumstance ( income, educational level, married or single ), and again, is difficult to change. But the remaining 40% is yours! How you choose to live your life, your outlook on the good and bad, and the way you think about yourself and others can influence your happiness almost as much as genetics.
Radhika tried to relate her life with whatever has been taught in the class. Her mom and dad got divorced when she was just twelve. It was then that she moved to Chicago with her father. She used to miss her mom a lot, before she came to know that her mom has been paid an heavy amount of money for handing over Radz custody to dilip. This fact ridiculed her even today. Very soon she came across more shocking news. Her father married an American woman who started staying with them. Radz could take it no longer. At the age of 15 she decided to leave her dad’s house as she could no longer tolerate the daily war with her step mother, Christine. Dilip offered radz a new apartment but she refused. Since then she stayed alone by earning her own living. She did a part time job in Library and gave tuitions to few kids. She was a bright student and so got a scholarship, to the university.
Radhika actually was a very brave girl….who fought with the situations single handily.
Radz was sitting in the cafeteria when neil arrived.
“what’s up??” he asked…
“Nothing u say..” she replied…
Their friendly convo started. They discussed a bit about their personal life and few matters regarding the subject. Suddenly a girl came and bumped on Neil. She hardly looked like a girl, who was wearing a skinny three-quarter dungaree and a white T-shirt. Her hair was frizzy.
“idiot…u here.. and i m searching for u…” she said…
She then quickly rotated her eyes and glanced at radz. Radz looked confused.
“oh first day and girl friend??” the girl stated….
Radz was uncomfortable….. “stop it Sammy..” said neil cutting her short.
“she is my class mate…” added Neil..
“okay… “ said the girl..
“she is radhika… and radhika..this is samaira… my best frnd..” said Neil…
“hello.. radhika..” said sam..extending her hand…
“ hello.. samaira.. nice to meet u..” said radz..
“same here…btw call me sam..” said sam
After this the trio began to meet regularly.. it was as if it had become a daily routine. This new friendship and bond had created a observant change in radz character..she started to trust people again.. she wanted to be a part of this great world… she wanted to be ‘happy’…
One day while coming to the college radz bumped with someone on the way… she was in such a hurry that she somehow picked up her bag and said “sorry” and just went away….
After she came back from college she was so tired that she fell off to sleep.
The next day radz got a shock when she opened her door for the newspaper….
There was a small parcel with a note….
Radz opened the parcel and found a small diary which looked exactly the same as hers… but when she opened it.. it was blank… she hurried to her room to check her bag…to her great surprise it wasn’t there… then she opened the note…
“Precious things need care…
Now, all your secrets are with me”
Radhika was shocked….
To be continued
So did u like it?? Do tell me whether i should continue or not… m very nervous as its my very first attempt to write like this… so do comment and lemme know… m waiting…
Best regards

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  1. Jessie

    Taraaa.. oye.. why u got such a doubt?? Continue it…!! U had tempted us with 1st chappy..and no more stepping back..?
    The opening is awesome dear…diary missing.. tat Arjun… and tat happiness part was nice.. had no idea abt tat till now.. TC n loads of love lil sis.. and..and.. next chappy soon.!

    1. Tara

      sorry sorry jessie di.. i wont step back..
      infact i started writing the next chappy after i read ur cmnt..
      thank so much…
      glad u liked the opening.. 😉
      umm time will say who is that..
      and abt that happiness i guess its true coz i read it in a book..
      love u too di…
      next chappy probably on wednesday..

  2. Brin

    The concept of the story is very interesting, continue with the story, waiting for the next update. 🙂

    1. Tara

      thank u so much …
      m so so so happy..
      next chapter on wednesday..
      stay tuned..

  3. Starz

    Tara…you nailed it….I think I am addicted to ur ff…u have to update next one really soon….please that arjun ….love you and take care …stay blessed always??

    1. Tara

      oh gosh.. u r addicted to my ff??
      thank u so much..
      umm time will say who is that..stay tuned..
      next chappy on wednesday..
      love ya..

  4. Wow.. Loved it .. Plz update the next one soon

    1. Tara

      thanks a lot mini..
      next part on wednesday..
      stay tuned till then..

  5. Gauri

    I loved did…tell me Arjun stole her diary …. post soon

    1. Tara

      thanks a ton di..
      it means a lot to me..
      ummm firstly i wont say who it was.. bt the diary wsnt stole.. it was lost..
      will post on wednesday..
      stay tuned

  6. Jnana

    Awesome Tara…… Next one to be posted fast…… Don’t at all back out….. After tempting me with your first chappy, if you think of backing out….. Then…… I don’t know what I’ll do….. But will definitely do so.etching so that you write the next one fast…… Now….. Waiting to see what happens further…… Post soon…..

    1. Tara

      hahaha.. lol..
      u dk what u will do..but u will do so…
      okay do one thing.. comment in my next update.. okay??
      yeshhh m not backing out…
      thank u so much for this innovative sa comment..
      wednesday i will post..
      stay tuned.. love ya

  7. R.S.H.H.P

    Tara I found you here I’m happy it was amazing awesome episode waiting for next episode I became fan of ardhika by reading ffs plss post next episode asap I’m addicted to both ffs of urs love you dear ☺☺☺☺☺☺☺?????????????????????????

    1. Tara

      aww… this is like heaven..
      thanks a lot..
      will post soon..
      love u tooo

  8. Sammy

    The last line girl …you rocked …i am really shocked ..aruuu man he is adorable. .???

    1. Tara

      thanks.. nd sorry that u r shocked… 😛
      now who’s adorable??> lol
      stay tuned..

  9. Rossy

    Sweet heart u r really superb..u have awesome talent..u wrote so beautifully but what I didn’t want you know..i feel like why it ended so soon…plx Pl plz next time a bigger update…promise me…i got late in reading always…so bear with me that…loved first day friendship between trio…who had her diary??? Ok m waiting…see ya…take care

    1. Tara

      awww rossy di……??????????????
      ur cmnt made me smile wide…
      isse kehte hain der ay durust aye…
      i really dont mind if u read or cmnt late.. i want u to cmnt thats all
      and dont worry di..the next update will be LONGERRRRRRRR…
      all questions will be answer in next update..
      stay tuned..
      love ya

  10. Superb tara nice opening my six mara a one he he he. ……..very nice waiting for next update soon

    1. Tara

      thank u so much… hahaha
      idk bt glad u liked it..
      next update on wednesday

  11. Aasthu

    nyc……….do update soon………was that guy Arjun ?????? How did he empty her diary????? Want to say more……but maybe later……….my exams are up the sleeve………do pray for me….love u…….TC………

    1. Tara

      okay okay.. got u..
      u have a lot of questions…
      u will get all ur answers in the upcoming chppys…
      which will be posted on wednesday..
      btw thanks a lot for cmmntng..
      love ya
      and all the best for ur exams..

      1. Aasthu

        Thanks Tara……..I’ll wait eagerly wait for Wed………

  12. Sweetie

    You can’t leave us hanging after this super awesome entry of the story..Please continue Tara,waiting for the next.. 🙂

    1. Tara

      aww thank a lot ..
      , feeling blessed..
      yeah will post soon..

  13. Superb..dear…attractive plot

    1. Tara

      thank u so much..

  14. mindblowing

    1. Tara

      thank u sooo much..

  15. Myra

    It was amazing tara… your skills sweetie….loved it…..can we have a longer episode next time? *puppy dog eyes*
    And are you a psychologist or a psycho student?
    Well, you seem to know a lot.
    Loved it…update soon 🙂

    1. Tara

      thanks a lot myra..
      u ppl made me do so..
      aww dont worry..the next chappy is much longerrrr..
      no no.. neither m i a psychologist nor a psycho student… its just that my mom had it in her degree coarse and i kinda love it.. so hehe
      will update on wednesday..

  16. It was awesome .plz continue.waiting for the next one.update soon.

    1. Tara

      thank u so much…
      next update tmrw..
      stay tuned

  17. Prathi

    Are you the one who wrote Apartment??? Coming to the Epi id’s awesome Yaar loving it waiting for next epi

    1. Tara

      u here again..yes m the same
      aww thank u so much… ????
      this means a lot to me..

  18. […] but they r useful for my ff.. so no offense… Enjoy reading… Link of previous chapter …….. MANMARZIYAN: His dark Secret Chapter 2 […]

  19. Thestarkfromhogwarts

    Howdy Ho!
    I reckon you’ll be a great author in the future.
    ya know there is a magic in your story that keeps readers engrossed.
    i love your ffs please update soon

    1. Tara

      omg ruth.. ur comments always make me smile …
      thanks a lot dearie..
      the next chappy is uploaded… see the link above ur comment…
      love ya

      1. Thestarkfromhogwarts

        Thank you soooo much Di!

  20. _Ritu

    Hey Tara…girl it is really superb 🙂 RaNeSam became frnds …wow I guess u have keen interest towards psychology… 🙂 lil longer update dear…loads of love 🙂

    1. Tara

      hahha.. yeah i do have… lol
      ok will try to update lil i cant really promise…
      thanks for cmntng…
      love ya

  21. Meen

    hiii tara…..nice one….so now they became friends….looking forward for reading d next one…..grt going dear…loads of love

    1. Tara

      thank u so much
      next part is posted.. see the link above
      love ya

  22. Awesome episode, love you loads

  23. RANdomfANCreationz

    Tara this is so interesting i love it a lot do inform me when u publish the next part i really really loved it a lot

    1. Tara

      hey jo.. lovely dp..
      nd the next part is posted
      thanks for reading

  24. Tara

    thank u so much di…
    love u too

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