Manmarziyan -Crossroads -Chapter 7

Hello there all the lovely people…her is the next part…do let me know how was this MMZ on wed evening 🙂 till then enjoy reading 🙂 love you all

Chapter 7

Neil woke up he decided to visit Khanna residence and have one to one talk with Samrat to know where he had hidden his Sam..Neil quickly dressed up…he hadn’t been shaving intentionally it will help him mask his identity…but Neil wasn’t aware the surprise waiting on the other side of the door…as he stepped out and moved to the lobby….he was greeted by flashes…..mikes and many hungry reports…with them there was his family….or people who should have been his family….Neil was shocked…how did the details on the trip got leaked…who did that….he was trying to figure out a new plan…but before he could think he was bombarded with questions ; ‘’Neil are you here for some shoot’’

Neil kept his calm; ‘’it’s a private visit…please respect my privacy…I need to leave

‘’So…did you intentionally leak about you visit….Is this a publicity stunt…’’

Neil; ‘’No comments’’

Reporter; ‘’Neil we have got a tip that you are here to take your girlfriend back’’

Neil just ignored….but questions never stopped; ‘’Neil people say that she left you because of your temper issues…’’

‘’there are rumours that she left you due to your alleged link ups’’

‘’But if sources are to be believed….you ex is now married and settled happily…..’’

One of them mocked ‘’seems she got a bored of him and settled for a better option…’’ Neil lost his cool….he snatched the camera and smashed it before punching the person on face….Neil’s body guard had to use al their strength to pull him off…..Neil screamed; ‘’Not a word against her…do you get that’’ his guards dragged him away….the injured reporter was rushed to the hospital….’’ Neil was huffing like a tiger ….he was least concerned about the repercussions….Brijesh watched all this a messaged Radhika

Paradise View

Radhika was watching the news…all the channels were just flashing Neil’s violent outburst…she laughed ; ‘’Neil you should thank me ….I made you famous….once in past you made me famous…I evened that….more to come’’ As a memory hit her…tears started pouring….she clenched her dress with one arm and covered her mouth with other….she didn’t wanted anyone to hear her…her POV; ‘Neil I know all about you … cannot escape me…you are responsible for the death of Rini….and Radhika will destroy you….’’

Radhika right now looked like a young simple fragile doll…who looked beautiful…but if someone touched her..she would crumble to dust….’Radhika’s POV; ‘what was my fault….that I loved with a pure heart….and the one I loved tore it apart….I have been burning since years Neil…you will burn too….I will not forgive you…for me…for Sam…for my family’ I won’t….you will know what a wounded heart does’’

It is said that if God gives you wounds he blesses you with cure to….Radhika’s phone buzzed…it was a picture message….the pic from the day of photo-shoot….Arjun had clicked Radhika without her noticing him….Radhika was sitting crossed leg on the chair…looking sideways…she had placed her hand under her chin ..appearing to be in deep thought …it was a perfect click…Radhika smiled…she got another message from Arjun….. ‘I want you in my arms…but till you say yes….I will be kissing this one…she is mine’

Radhika; ‘Crazy men its so easy to bring this breed down….’ She messaged him…. ‘we have to meet…its important’

Arjun; ‘Ah finally heiress …your place or mine’

Radhika; ‘Mine….BLING…do message me you availability….and yes check your social media profiles hope you like them’ Whatever it was…but Arjun made her smile

Radhika’s intercom buzzed it was Sam…Radhika relaxed and walked out of her study to be with her darling sister

BLING Office

Snehal watched the news in BLING office….she was still trying to figure out whether this was planned or it was an accident that media got the tip of Neil’s visit…Snehal’s POV… ‘if this is planned …then how does Rini get these details ….who gives her all these information…I have to find out what went wrong between Sam and Neil….I have to find missing links and speak to Badi ma….because Rini will not listen….and my own dad supports her blindly ….’’

Mumbai FLim City

Arjun was busy with in shoot…it was a hectic schedule…they had to shoot for an action sequence and it was a tiring one…Arjun’s character was supposed to be fighting some Ninja fighters, all the actors and fighters were tied to the harness…the constant pulling up and down of harness was sucking all his energy from the body….they had done 10 retakes as one of the actor was not able to wave his sword like a Ninja….the director was going mad…. Leaving Arjun everyone was irritated….Arjun made the new comer comfortable….the boy got nervous when asked to attack Arjun….Arjun offered him water and made him relaxed…he started conversing with him like a long lost friend…the boy started opening up…Arjun told him about himself his struggle…making the boy open up …after a half an hour break it was a perfect shot….the director clapped for Arjun’ s effort and his generous nature…

Arjun walked inside his vanity…he was exhausted he needed a quick shower…when he stepped out he found Nivi in a thigh slit dress sitting on the chair with her legs wide…Arjun gave her one look threw the towel in a corner and turned away from her….even her open legs were not inviting for him…Nivi got up and walked to him and gently started massaging his shoulder…Arjun got annoyed ; ‘’What are you doing Nivi’’

Nivi replied Innocently; ‘’easing you muscles…you look exhausted let me help you relax darling….’’ Nivi hugged him from behind… ‘’lets go out and enjoy’’

Arjun moved away towards his wardrobe and pulled a white full sleeve tshirt…; ‘’No I have committed my time to Minu…she has her term exams’’

Nivi moved her hands under his Tshirt; ‘’I need you’’

Arjun; ‘’You can take my card….but my time belongs to Minu…’’

Nivi got irritated; ‘’Why the hell you care for that servants daughter so much’’

Arjun warned; ‘’She is my sister….not a word against her….Nivi we have discussed this before…Minu is family to me and very dear to my heart….and now please leave…I know the reason for your sudden care ad love’’

Nivi; ‘’same pinch Arjun …I know the reason for you ignoring me…Radhika…you want her’’

Arjun went close to Nivi and whispered; ‘’Yes I want her…and I will get her….now just leave’’

Nivi smirked; ‘’Fine…go screw her..have some fun…end of the day you will have to come back to me…you know it why ‘’ Nivi left a disturbed Arjun behind.


Snehal received a mail about an urgent meeting of top media professionals…..they had invited Radhika…Snehal had been attending on her behalf….she messaged Rdhika about it…Radhika smirked and told Snehal that she will herself attend this year…shocking Snehal to core…

Paradise View

Radhika walked into Sam’s room….she was sitting on her wheel chair staring out at the endless sea….Radhika went and hugged her from behind; ‘’Sammy why so sad’’

Sam smiled; ‘’Rini will I be able to walk’’

Radhika walked front kneeling infront of Sam; ‘’Yes this is temporary..only till you gain strength…Sam…will you speak to Mom and Dad. Please !’’

Sam; ‘’I am ashamed …I broke their heart’’

Radhika; ‘’No you just followed your heart…we understand that…please…for them’’ Sam nodded getting a hug from Radhika’’

Sam; ‘’You took over STERLING HEIGHTS Nanu’s firm….girl you are rocking…Rini aren’t you scared of kind of people you deal in construction business’’

Radhika; ‘’No I use my brain….Sam I own BLING Entertainment too’’ Sam looked at Radhika wide eyed trying to figure out what she just said…Radhika smiled; ‘’you loved working in this industry…so I thought why not invest here’’

Sam; ‘’this that it Rini or there is more’’

Radhika knew Sam…she can never hide things from Sam…hence she changed her plan…the war was now out in open…Neil will see who Radhika was but Sam will know only things she wanted to hear…only this was the way in which Radhika could check Snehal and Sam both….Radhika gave Sam a loving smile; ‘’there is a lot more…but for that you need to be fine soon and sit on the chair of the CEO BLING…and from next week I will bring some work…you should start on to it ‘’ Sam’s eyes started filling up….this was Rini her Rini….who would do anything and everything for her loving sister…Sam extended her arms and Radhika gave her a tight hug….they had missed each other for very long. Radhika helped Sam to lie on the bed and walked out….her phone inbox was full of Arjun’s messages…she knew he was head on heels mad for her…but she won’t make it easy.

Media Board Meet

Radhika entered the board room minus Snehal….she knew Snehal was looking for one chance to stop her …but Radhika was something else….The board members greeted her…some knew her and others were meeting her for the first time…they were awestruck….she was so young to be so successful…Radhika fake smiles and gestures when anyone complimented her…she had come with an intention…she already had people in her support…once all were seated… the spokes person started; ‘’we are here to elect are chairperson for our Media board…we have 3 names…Mr Shrikant Oberoi head Zenith Media , Mrs Megha Singh President POINT Group and Ms Radhika Khanna CEO BLING Media and Entertainment…please cast your vote in next 15 min. Once the voting was done….the result was declared… Radhika won the majority by 50%….she knew that before ….all clapped for her and she raised her glass to the spokesperson…Ajay Nautiyal who did the work for her…he bowed…after a small celebration…the first board meeting started…Radhika took the place of chairperson…she spoke; ‘’So my question to all of you is…we need stars or stars need us’’ The debate started….and it went on and on for 2 hrs…Radhika spoke at the end; ‘’We make them stars…and we have been continuously blamed for penetrating their privacy…I mean we aren’t Gods…we get tips…and these tips come from the publicity hungry starts…for example last month a big star was visiting a holy shrine with his parents and kids…and when media followed and captured him he broke the camera…I mean if he wanted it to be private why did he make a post on social media about the trip…there are many more…..but its high time…we answer back….they need us.. we don’t’’

The meeting concluded with a decision for banning Neil completely…Radhika knew this step will force directors and film banners not to sign Neil…bringing him down completely…and today Radhika khanna posed for the camera…she came out open…

Neil’s Penthouse

Neil was back in Mumbai….the reporter he thrashed had filed a case against him…Neil sat on his couch leaning with his eyes closed…he was trying to figure and why everything was going against him…to divert he switched on the television…the news made his heart Sank….Neil was by being banned by media….his movies songs commercials were banned by print online media…no entertainment channel will be telecasting or promoting his trailers songs or upcoming movies….and this decision was taken by the board of Media personals…but what made him sweat was the one picture on the screen…the Media board chairperson Radhika Khanna…Neil pulled his hair; ‘’Oh God Radhika is Rini….yes why not she was never interested in working with me…all against me was by her…she brought Ashutosh down ….the first ban on me….public apology…and now she is the chair person’’

Neil crashed on the floor….he knew who was he facing now…his career all his hard work his life..she was snatching everything…Neil curled up he felt like crying…but then a thought struck him; ‘’If Rini is in Mumbai…so will be my Sam… no Rini you can’t keep her hidden I will take her back’’ But little he knew Radhika was thinking just the opposite

Radhika was driving back to her Bungalow…when her phone buzzed…she answered; ‘’yes superstar’’

Arjun; ‘’I want to take you out on a date’’

Radhika’s cheeks burned; ‘’Ok….that means five star hotel… candles …. expensive drinks music….not interested’’

Arjun; ‘’tell me your choice heiress ‘’

Radhika challenged him; ‘’you want me…then sweep me off my feet…success comes with hard work ..and Radhika is precious…think Arjun’’

Arjun smiled; ‘’Ah ! you said Arjun…it sounds so good…done heiress…wait for me’’ Radhika disconnected smiling…he was mad…but truth was she was waiting for him.

BLING Office

The clock had struck 10:00 PM and Snehal was still in her cabin… her mind was not working…Radhika came out in open…evening she spoke to Sam and Sam knew about Bling…Snehal was thinking hard; ‘’what is Rini upto…how did she manage to win that vote..I attended all the meetings..…she got Neil banned…and now he knows who she is …he will come for Sam…and she wants Sam to take over BLING….AHHHHHHA!…..Rini you will drive me crazy…’’

Snehal was still thinking ..she was drawing flow charts and trying to figure out Radhika’s plan when Sam called her she answered; ‘’Hi Sammy’’

Sam; ‘’Kiddo look at the time….Rini spoiled you…I want you back in half an hour…’’

Snehal; ‘’Had few meetings…Rini wasn’t there to attend’’

Sam; ‘’ No excuses I know all meetings got over by 6 PM…I have your planner’’

Snehal blinked; ‘’Ok will be out in a minute’’ she disconnected and thought; ‘WOW Rini…you placed a check on me…I don’t think I can ever be able to find out what runs in your complicated brain…but I will never stop trying’’

Paradise View, Radhika’s Bungalow

Radhika changed and she got a call again from Arjun it was midnight; ‘’Yes Super Star’’

Arjun; ‘’Ready for date…come down heiress I am waiting’’

Radhika blinked…She quickly changed into a one piece left her hair…and came out of the bungalow…Arjun was at the driver’s place in his SUV ….Radhika took the passenger seat…Arjun drove off took a full circle and brought Radhika to the beach behind her Bungalow…. ‘’you love it here…I know…I saw you first between the waves…come ‘’

He opened the boot and pulled out a portable table and 2 chairs…placing between the beach…he pulled out a battery light in shape of a candle and placed it on the table…then a box and a flask….Radhika kept watching him smiling wide…she have had previous dates…but this was unexpected from a super star…he played a soft music on his cell and extended his arm to Radhika…she took his hand …Arjun made her sit and opened the box….it had two sandwiches ….with a smiley …Radhika blinked; ‘’we are supposed to have two plates as well’’

Arjun moved his chair next to her; ‘’No …because we are not different we are one…now I made this…and the flask has canned Mango juice…hope you will like it’’

Radhika; ‘’What made you think this will sweep me off my feet’’

Arjun; ‘’Expensive parties and dinner are not your thing….I can read you heiress…you like small and simple things….and you never expected a super star taking you on date for which he won’t spend a penny’’ Radhika blushed…yes his simple gesture touched her heart…she averted her gaze…..her hair fell on her face making a curtain…hiding her blush ..Arjun moved her hair behind and kissed her cheek deep…..Radhika took a sharp intake of breath closing her eyes…his hand went on her waist puling her towards him…; ‘’you are beautiful and you know that…but know one thing more…my heart marked you as mine…now its your heart who has to accept this…’’ She looked up into his eyes…she was no more Radhika but Rini….Arjun pulled her up and joined their hands for a dance…he kept humming dancing with her…she smiled and then let out a crackling laughter…Arjun lifted her up twirling her around…Radhika was still laughing happily…she forgot everything ..every pain all tears in this one moment…

Arjun stopped and pulled her close; ‘’I don’t know but I feel I know you…behind this hard shell is a beautiful girl….Radhika I am not asking anything….but I want to ease you out of your pain….not now ..but tell me when you are ready…I promise I will be there…even if you push me back’’

Radhika watched him without battling her eyelids….she wrapped her arms around his neck hugging him tight…Arjun felt her need to be held, to be loved… he held her tightly around her middle holding her close to his body…Radhika buried her face in his neck….she wanted this moment to freeze….he wasn’t her first love….but his arms were different than the man she loved…now she wanted Arjun…the waves …the Moon the wind celebrated this beautiful moment….Arjun caressed her flying tresses she looked like the daughter of moon…her body was soft like that of a baby in his hard arms…but this felt home…to both of them .

Radhika broke the hug and Arjun loosen his grip on her waist..but he didn’t let go…Radhika pecked his cheek; ‘’you are a good man…why do you want a dark soul’’

Arjun cupped her cheek; ‘’you aren’t dark ..I will prove this to you…so how about a walk’’ Radhika held his arm and they both walked towards the waves….after few minutes she lifted his arm wrapping it around her waist…and wrapped hers around his..never speaking a word…Arjun pulled her close…after a walk…he spoke; ‘’Let me drop you home’’

Radhika ; ‘’some more time please…I am loving this…’’ Arjun took her back to his car..lowered the seats and Radhika adjusted herself on his shoulder…Arjun kept patting her head gently…she dozed off….and when she woke up it was about to be dawn….Radhika looked at the man whose arms she slept….she slept after 3 yrs of sleepless nights and numerous tablets…she slept…she moved close and caressed his head and pecked his lips…Arjun opened his eyes; ‘’that’s more refreshing than a coffee…god you are beautiful’’ Radhika smiled and hid her face in his chest….Arjun dropped her home..and drove back….Radhika entered her house…dancing jumping smiling like 16 yr old enjoying the feeling of first love

Love; ‘’look at them… so beautiful’’

Revenge; ‘’She gave you a place few yrs back…you left her in pain…she will get bored of him’’

Love; ‘’no …you don’t see the passion and fire….I feel it….start packing…he will make you leave’’

Revenge smirked; ‘’I have many hearts to settle…but hers is my favourite……will wait for the passion twig to burn off…’’

Pre cap- Enemies meet…A passionate affair


  1. Myra

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    Gaurii…i was so terribly missing ittt…….love you … you …..
    Finally, radhika acknowledged that she too felt for arjun….❤
    His date for her…..even swept me off my feet 😂
    Di, it was so beautiful…..
    What is Radhika planning?
    Neil is in so much trouble….
    Curious to know what happened ….
    Love you…update soon 😘

    • Gauri


      Thanks Myra 🙂 slowly things will unfold…Radhika’s past….trouble between Neil-Sam….Sam-Arjun’s friendship…. and more love u

  2. Jessie

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    She did it!!!! OMG!!! I simply loved the plan ..she nailed Neil.. just imagine me squealing in happiness.. the first topic.. my goodness!! Sam as CEO of bling…Fantabulous plan…Ah. the shrewd girl always comes with golden heart…isn’t…! When she lifts his hand around hers and asks to stay some more time…😍😘😘😘 Neil.. the devil.. Y did he Betray Radz in first place. Leave sam.. Why Radhika.. !! Gosh.. the girl is a ocean of pain… Am so connected Gauri..!! This is gonna be my fav of crossroads… The other side of superstar Arjun…!! I love that..! He could see the pain.!!

    Loved the epi.. completely..Arjun with new comer..n with nivi.. Radz part..and Rini one..well brought out…Now am eager 4 the next move.!! Wasn’t that the height of confidence to invest in film industry expecting this day.! U have framed the part so well…love u loads… Take care….stay happy

    • Gauri


      You made my day Jess 🙂 love you for that …. you will know the reason of Rini becoming Radhika…. Hmm Arjun and Sam are the angles here …true angles 🙂 Radhika will give Neil a final blow soon 🙂 loads of love to you 🙂

  3. Manolove

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    Gauri Radhika has already loved a? Neil lost the match a? Radhika came in front …

    Seriously unbelievable update god I truly love the arjun and Radhika part.. I have read many types of arjun but this Arjun is the best I love him a lot…

    Ready to do anything to ease Radhika pain brilliant truly beautiful

    Please appoint me as Ur helper at least so that I can understand wt ur Next update will be..

    Seriously can’t wait please make it faster and bring Arjun and Radhika more more more
    Loads of hugs to u sweet heart 😍😍😍😍😍😍

    • Gauri


      Thanks Manolove 🙂 I will update soon…there is lot more to come … Arjun will heal her slowly 🙂 there is lot more to come thanx for your wonderful words 🙂 stay blessed 🙂

  4. Jewel

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    This radhika is really different and difficult to understand. Her plannings, wow… She is making neil’s life as hell. Ardhika moments were really romantic… And the conversation btwn love and revenge was really nice… Liked it a lot…. Waiting for the next

  5. Aastha

    This is amazing!!!!!!!!!!!!! I wish to comment mre bt no time…I’ve to sleep and then get up early in the morning…… exams begin nxt Mon…….I still haven’t completed 1st revision……

  6. Brin

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    Outstanding episode, will Arjun’s love stop Radhika revenge for Neil? Eagerly waiting for the next update, you nail it, well done. 🙂

  7. KK

    Omg….I m struck with my mouth open…it was fantastic…fabulous and many more words…Radhika finoshed Neil…poor thing..he is still searching for Sam. Arjun and Radhika moments were very romantic. She feel his love..but arjun his mother her first love..wait..who is radhika’s first love?? Did neil betrayed Sam or radhika?? Plz gauri reply me..I think I read few last episode so fast…but I will go back ream them..but plz reply…thank you so much…I am in love with your story alteady..and its only 7 episode.take care dear…love you

    • Gauri


      Thanks Krishna 🙂 yes Arjun is not her first love….their past will unfold slowly …Neil did something he shouldnt in the past 🙂 wait for it 🙂 loads of love 🙂

  8. S.v

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    Radhika is crushing neil. God all the sodes are blocked. What did he do im feeling pity for neil ciz he is being trapped by hernin all sides and rhe worst is sye is the chair person and she is making him out of the industry. He is completely finished. Sam is gonna be alright na di ?? Will she come to know about neil and radhika’s face off ?? God this is out of world updat didi I was reading it again and again in watty and from last noght im reading and then arjun’s words for minu to nivi she is my sister woo I like that and u idior brainless nivi he will never come to u as rini loves arjun u stupid idiot dumb head give me a cricket bat I will blow a helicopter 6 and throw her away from my arjun’s life. I love him very much afyer my tiger he is soo cute. And then the daye wish I was in some stars or moo or in the ocean and enjoy my fav love birds view they were so cute and the date didi why why did u do that it was any words pls pls pls I am going all mad now and all here are giving me weird look as again did she turn mad as I am always mad at ur words. Lovely one didi rini is taking over radhika. Her heart is taking over her brain arjun never leave her coz she is all shattered. Just be her side. Neil came to know that radhika is rini so what is gonna happen next ??

    Didi I wanna hug u tight u forgot myself and was reading it again and I missdd fhe chance of first comment . Didi always love you and your words .Take care di and bear hugs and infinite kisses too. Muuhhhaaa. Mmz on Wednesday super so shiv and pari damakka yippiee. Love u so much.

    • Gauri


      Thanks a ton my cutie pie 🙂 you are an angle 🙂 you commented on wattpad..and again here…I am so obliged cant express my gratitude towards you 🙂 now well Radhika will give Neil a final blow …. Arjun Radhika many more moments to come 🙂 loads of love saty blessed and keep smiling

  9. Rossy

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    Radz loved before?? Whom ?? Neil?? Then m sure he didn’t love her but why played with emotion…. M still trying to find what exactly he did?? Something terrible must be…otherwise a girl won’t go to such limit…other than Sam’s case he did other things…that sentence” now u will know what a wounded heart can do”… Just…i loved such kind of passion…nivi…idiot…what she meant…ultimately Arjun will return to her…dream on girl…like radz believe Arjun slowly…but I really wanted her game on mode…this chuhe billi Ki khel me mazza Ata hai…sam will become bling partner…awesome..
    Loved every moment….thnxxxxxx dear

    • Gauri


      Thanks a Ton for the lovely comment Rossy 🙂 whom rads loved is a mystery but Neil was surely involved in her past 🙂 Arjun is bound in an unwanted relationship due to a reason….but now he is wanted by his heiress …well Nivi has a very tough competition 🙂 loads of love stay blessed 🙂

  10. Aadia

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    Di…..i am not getting apt words to comment…you are just awesome di…👍👍👍you perfectly portrayed Radhika’s emotions… I love this Gaurian story..Arjun..he is the solace of Rini’s wounded heart, isn’t he?.and the date…wow…it made me emotional..felt it by heart…I wonder if iam watching a far .better than a many queries are there..just waiting for next you di….

    • Gauri


      Thanks a ton Adia 🙂 Gaurian story OMG He.. he.. he 😀 Arjun will be her solace 🙂 will update soon stay blessed and loads of love to you 🙂

  11. roshini

    Gauriiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii! what should I comment here I am speechless out of words….what is this girl Radhika 🙂 she has 10 heads god….what did Neil do to her …. I am to curious …please update soon 🙂 love uuuuuuuuuuuuu

  12. Sathya

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    I am CLEAN BOWLED by this episode of yours Gauri dear. This Radhika is really dangerous..she simply knocked neil down for his sins he did for Sam and Rads…So Rads was in love already but with whom? What is the past for Neil and Rads…so intriguing dear. Ardhika part is the best ever…a simple date which can sweep the girl’s heart..he studied her very well and understand her nature that Radhika is a simple yet brave girl. She lost herself to him and impressed by his sweet gesture..aww every girl will fall for him yar. So sweet one. Gauri you did a brilliant job dear and keeping us glued for every episode. Fantastic. And last but not least End quotes on Love and Revenge…PERFECT abuot Rads or Rini’s nature.

    • Gauri


      I fainted out of happiness after reading your comment 🙂 Thanks a ton Sathya ….I think I am writing because I have frinds like you 😀 Rneil past willunfold but before that final blow to Neil…which he had’nt expected 🙂 love you to moon and back 🙂

  13. Starz

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    Di…it was awesome post.loved it to the core… Ardhika scenes were mind blowing….the way arjun showered his love was beautiful..I am now in love with arjun completely…..and rads loved someone before???….I loved the boldness of radhika… you portrayed her very you and take care

  14. Bhabya

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    Abha di it’s just magical.
    The way you presented the chapters gave me goosebumps.😘😘😘
    It’s just perfect……

  15. vini

    Hi Gauri , this episode was really nice and heart touching one .. did radhika love niel ??? aaargghhh i’m so curious to know about their past . ardika were hot .. awesome date , i cherished reading it .. my kinda date it was .. so good Gauri .. waiting badly for the next episode 🙂 🙂 🙂 post is soon

  16. Dipika

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    Gurrriio my angel..i always read crossword as soon as it uploads on watty n m so much happy again reading here on tu…Date..wht a date yarrr..our superstar is sooo down to earth..though he is soooo much famous stiill he did all simple thibgs just to pleased rads..touched my heart…ofcoursr radz too….now only he is the prsn who can sav her..sammmm..she is back…one min according to rads plan she is gonna make nesam meet..really..wht will happen with sam will react..n neil..omg…rads is on full mode to destroy his existant frm.industry… Ufff this girl is vry dangerous… Rads past..m eager for tht….so much to come na
    ..u writes like kaju katali..seriously.. Kitana bhi slowely njoy krte huye khao fir bhi aur khane ka man karta u darling.. Muhhha

    • Gauri


      Dipu u are my angle filling me with happiness and josh 🙂 Kaju Katli ….thanks thats my favrouite 🙂 your words make me write more and more ….love u and Radhika will give Neil a big blow…crushing his heart 🙂 love you million hugs 😀

  17. Fanficoholic

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    So finalllllyyyy this guy makes a lil place for himself in the heart of our tigress. Well cooollll. I jst loved the date. I jst loved the way in which radhika dozed off in arjun’s arms. And thn she opened her jeart to him. A very good development. And neil didnhe hurt radhima? And wat is gng on in radhika’s head? Ufffffff rhis ff is making me go nuts. I am totallllyyy lovinggg this. Thank u soooo much di for writing such an amzingggg ff.

    Love u loadssss

    • Gauri


      Thanks for the amazing comment 🙂 well you will have to wait for somemore time for detailed things 🙂 loads of love to dear 🙂 keep smiling 🙂

  18. swedha

    Hi gowri I am big fan of u….I was a silent reader today I can’t control myself so I commented….u r a fantastic writer…..I read all ur ff my favorite one is dpo….I suggested my frnds to read dpo….after reading they also said u are amazing…..I like ur story so much than some famous authors novel…..I don’t have any words to describe ur writting skills…..keep writting…u have a bright future in writing….thank u so much for fantastic episode….waiting for next episode….

    • Gauri


      Thanks a ton Swedha 🙂 I am glad u commented ….I am on the moon u gave me a big compliment 🙂 will post soon loads and loads love to you stay blessed 🙂

  19. Meen

    |Registered Member

    omg ….radhika!!!!! radhika!!!…..what a woman…..she loved someone…?….god..& aradhika romance… spell bound girl….u r amazing………i literally bow down to u….loveeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee u

  20. Anu-Annie

    |Registered Member

    wow wow wow. amazing. perfectly perfect. sweet. lovely. yummy.

    it was the best. couldn’t have been better.

    how could u write so damn good? han? tell me?

    doesn’t matter though. cos well that nothing else matters.

    i wanna hug u soooo tight for this one.

    love ya loads

    take care

    post soon. pls

    am.stilll. frozen. due to the extreme giddiness i felt while reading this part.

    i can’t.explain how cute and beautiful it was. out of words. i am.

  21. Shubhadha

    |Registered Member

    Wow finally radhika with arjun…awsome date…Neil betray Radhika…?Some misunderstandings in between them.. Nice bonding between three sisters..completely super…

  22. _Ritu

    |Registered Member

    Mind blowing Gauri…Radhika finally becoming Rini again through Arjun’s love.. 🙂 wow.. 😍😍 Nivi want to slap her hard …bt I guess she is blackmailing Arjun wid something…Radhika a shrewd businesswomen here…y didn’t u tried for business. …u will surely rock it coz imagining those deals nd den writing it so well..I can understand how much difficult dat is…waiting for nxt…post soon…loads of love. 🙂

  23. Roma

    Awesome, wowwww lovely marvellous episode. . . Gauriiiiiiiiiiiii my darling sissyyyy. ….superrrrrrbbb job…this story is getting very very interesting with each update. …rads trapped neil in reporter case n became chairperson n banned neil…ohhhh..n now neil knows her….arjun n his heart warming gestures to rads brought Rini back for some time….I loved this super star’s date….the way you narrating everything is really very very awesoooooome. …I’m totally addicted to it n just want to keep reading it over n over….I’m never get enough of you my sweeeeeetheart. …love n revange convo is my favorite. …keep it up honeyyy. Love you loads. muaaaaahhhhhh Bear hug my sweeeeeetheart darling abhaaa ♡♡♡♡♡ 😉

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