Manmarziyan -Crossroads -Chapter 6

Happy Bday SV….may almighty full all your wishes and blesses you with health wealth and happiness… 🙂 keep smiling and follow your heart . 🙂 This one is dedicated toSV…

So friends here is the next chapter and let mw know how was this 🙂 keep smiling stay blessed MMZ on Thursday. Sorry couldn’t post in the night as my internet was not working…enough…happy reading

Chapter 5

Paradise View

It was Tuesday the day of photoshoot….after finishing her day at Sterling heights…..Radhika came back home….she went inside Sam room and pecked her ..‘’Sammy I will be late today don’t wait and get worried….sleep or else you will get dark circles’’ Radhika got Snehal’s message and she walked into her room….and sat infront of the mirror ….Radhika kept staring at her reflection and then moved her gaze to the dressing table…Radhika lifted the khol and lined her big eyes….she applied little mascara curling her long beautiful lashes…..Radhika had beautiful flawless skin….she just applied a little glow to her skin….and painted her lips in shimmery pink….she pulled out her fitting noodle strap knee length flowing dress…she knew she looked beautiful in that….Radhika glanced at her image smirked she walked out of her room and passed across Sam’s room…..Radhika knew had Sam been fine, she would have asked Radhika 100 question for dressing up like that ….and had she known the reason….Sam would have reprimanded her for playing with someone’s heart…Radhika silently wished that Sam should get up even if it was to slap her…she swallowed her pain ….The revenge took over…she lifted her chin and walked out….

Darjeeling

Khanna Mansion was still bright….it was almost night yet the mansion was full of light….Samrat was still in his study and Rakhi was in her room…sitting on her chair engrossed it a deep thought….her heart was fluttering with different kind of feeling….neither she nor Samrat was getting sleep…they were worried for their daughters…..Sam… they didn’t knew where she was and Radhika…her anger and determination had power to burn down everything , but what scared them was that she was burning herself ….

Outside the Mansion stood Neil in a hoodie …..watching the bunglow…he had visited the place quite a few times….sometimes to drop Sam…sometimes just to watch her and at times to secretly meet her….all memories came back to him….Sam came back to him….there were times when Neil would be hungry….his step mother won’t give him food….Sam would cook for him…whatever time it would be she would never complaint…..Neil recalled how his step mother has falsely accused him of hitting his step brother and Neil’s father thrashed him mercilessly….he had been hungry for 3 days…..he called Sam it was 11:00 PM….Sam answered; ‘’Neil….what’s wrong’’

Neil; ‘’Promise me come what may you will never leave me…’’

Sam; ‘’What happened and where are you’’

Neil; ‘’outside your house…..my father kicked me out….I hate them Sam’’

Sam got up she was worried; ‘’Did you have your dinner’’

Neil; ‘’who cares even if I die….those people are waiting for it…..I am a burden for them’’

Sam wiped her tears….’’ Come to the back gate soon’’ Sam arranged pillows on her bed and walked out of her room….she tiptoed into the kitchen…pulled out food and a can from refrigerator….Sam switched off the burglar alarm…and walked out into the vast garden surrounding their Bunglow…she opened the small back gate and called Neil in….he hugged her the moment he saw her…Sam held him tightly rubbing his back and planting soft kisses on his shoulder….when he calmed…she fed him…..Neil stayed back till dawn…laying his head on her lap…and she kept caressing her hair ….he left pecking her forehead…..her love was precious ….and his heart craved for it like undying thirst….Neil’s POV; ‘I will find you Sam….they can’t keep you away from me’ He walked off towards his car deciding to comeback again to get the details about her whereabouts.

BLING Studio

Snehal was busy checking the arrangements of the photoshoot….but someone was irritating her …it was Zubin….since he had joined he kept on hitting on her….which she was cleverly avoiding….Snehal walked to the dress and makeup artist instructing them about the theme in which Arjun should be dressed….Zubin came and stood behind Snehal….taking a deep breath… ‘’You smell so good….’’

Snehal; ‘’Zubin… I have warned you…just stay away…’’

Zubin; ‘’Just one date honey and I will take you to a height you will never forget…’’

Before Snehal could utter a word….came Radhika’s warning; ‘’Forget about the height you are planning to take Snehal……think about the ditch I can push you into….and it will be dark…very dark’’

Zubin gulped …..the Studio was dead silent…Snehal would have smiled in normal circumstances but her eyes never moved from Radhika….Snehal’s POV; ‘’OMG I was right….she is trying to play and use Arjun’s feelings…..God help me….do something….Rini is losing herself….please God….I can’t stop her….Sam isn’t there and Badi ma… I can’t tell her….what should I do…..this feels wrong….’’

Snehal’s thoughts were broken by Radhika’s voice; ‘’Snehal….go home…car is waiting for you’’

Snehal replied in a low voice; ‘’I won’t go without you’’

Radhika walked to her and patted her cheek speaking softly in a whisper ; ‘’Please baby….Sam is alone…for me’’

Snehal felt trapped , her eyes started filling up…she looked straight into Radhika’s eyes ; ‘’You need me more…..don’t do this….you aren’t this Rini’’

Radhika gave her a painful smile and pecked her forehead; ‘’I am all this and worse….go I will be home in 2-3 hrs’’ Snehal had no option but to leave…Radhika closed her eyes once to leave Rini behind ….she spoke in a strong voice ; ‘’All set….call Arjun in’’

Arjun walked inside…he was dressed in a torn faded jeans …hair gelled properly …and his torso covered with a robe…..his eyes searched for Radhika and when he met her eyes….he gave her a warm smile…which she returned with a smirk…Arjun was being explained the theme for the first shoot….the makeup group removed the robe and sprayed his bare torso face and hair with water…the tiny droplets settled on his tanned body ….giving him a hot look….once they moved… Radhika moved her gaze all across Arjun giving him an appreciating look….and he started posing for the shoot… Radhika’s POV ; ‘’Arjun had I been old Rini…I would have drooled over that smile and look of yours….but now I am Radhika…and nothing affects me….specially a good looking rich male…but you will go out from here losing your heart to me….I will make sure ‘’ Even during the breaks their eyes never left each other…difference was Arjun lost his heart and Radhika was doing all intentionally.

Snehal….got inside the car….and leaned on the seat closing her eyes…..she didn’t knew what should be done….the driver who had been working with the family for long looked at Snehal through the mirror; ‘’Anything wrong kid’’

Snehal smiled; ‘’Baba tell me….if you know a storm is coming and will blow everything in its way specially the people you love…what should be done’’

Driver laughed; ‘’Then step into the middle of the storm and destroy the core…..but it might mean destroying yourself too’’

Snehal; ‘’I am not scared of that….but how do I reach the core’’

Driver; ‘’Don’t worry….relax and think….time and God will open doors for you’’ Snehal nodded and looked out….her POV; ‘Sam you need to wake up ….this storm started with you and will end when you interference …’’

BLING STUDIO

It was the second round of photoshoot…..Arjun was dressed in a complete black 3 piece suit….Radhika thought a moment and looked at Zubin; ‘’Zubin….make this one Black & White highlighting the contrast the most….and Arjun I would request if you give a little dark expression….just against your personality’’ Arjun nodded and Zubin gave a thumbs up…she was a genius in every sense….Radhika ‘s mobile started buzzing she saw the ID and walked out…. It was Snehal’s father Brijesh; ‘’Yes Kaka…all fine….Is mom-dad Ok’’

Brijesh; ‘’All fine Rini…ok you were right…Neil is in Darjeeling….its a secret visit…tell me what should be done’’

Radhika stared at her manicured nails smiling; ‘’Kaka….inform his greedy family ….but carefully without anyone knowing this is us and also the leading papers….make it difficult for him to visit anywhere or Stay in Darjeeling ….an you know how to confuse him regarding Sam I know why is he there’’

Brijesh; ‘’Done Rini….you take care…eat and sleep well’’ Rini greeted him before disconnecting….she walked inside and it was time for 3rd round of shoot and this one was a couple shoot…a famous model had been signed to do that with Arjun…Arjun had to do a good skin show for that….all the buttons of his shirt were undone….the model had to clutch his shirt hard…pulling him to her….with their lips parted and close….Arjun gave perfect shots and Radhika instructed Zubin to mail her the pics ASAP before packing up….Arjun changed and came to her cabin where she was busy with some work… ‘’So Heiress …..goodnight or good morning’’

Radhika took a step towards him smiling…she smiled looking straight into his eyes; ‘’Depends on your perception Mr Super Star….its 3 hrs past midnight and around 3hrs for dawn….so what does it looks to you’’

Arjun was kind of lost in her deep brown eyes he took a step forward; ‘’For me you look like a morning….a beautiful sunny morning…filling me with light ‘’

Radhika’s cheeks flushed…..she let out a small laugh …lowering her eyes; ‘’you are engaged ‘’
Arjun cut her off; ‘’Not married….and its just verbal pact ….I don’t have a ring’’

Radhika gave him a challenge ; ‘’I am not a girl made of petals ….I am bad….and can be worse’’

Arjun out of the blue cupped her cheek…he rubbed his thumb over her cheek; ‘’Then why doesn’t you feel that bad…..Heiress why do your beautiful eyes carry so much pain….talk it out…to a friend….someone you love…or let me love you till I erase all the pain’’

Radhika was caught off guard now…..she came with a plan but this man…was moving down towards her heart…which she had locked long ago…she looked at him wide eyed….trying to read his coal black eyes….they were calm true and carried affection for her Radhika’s POV; ‘you can’t hurt him….its not his fault….don’t Rini…..move back now’ But the revenge riding her head warned; ‘He is not that good….he has a finance and is fooling with you….there is no harm in using him…’ the battle between Radhika-Rini was broken by Arjun peck on her cheek….Radhika took a sharp breath moving backwards….Arjun caught her waist pulling her to him…he brushed his knuckles on her heated cheek; ‘’I thought there is no girl on this planet…who could make me lose my senses….but I forgot there is God….and miracles happen….and see now you happened’’

Radhika kept her palms between them; ‘’You don’t even know me properly….there are few things which might make you hate me’’

Ajun; ‘’Don’t know what things….but I can never hate you’’

Radhika looked into his eyes with a challenge; ‘’What if tomorrow you get to know that I put up an act of loving you to use you in my favour and then crush you heart’’

Arjun; ‘’Heiress tell me if I can be off any use to you…I would happily give myself up ‘’

Radhika; ‘’Aren’t you too fast’’

Arjun ; ‘’Life is short….I don’t want to waste it in you guessing and me impressing you….I know what my heart wants so why wait..’’

Radhika tried moving back but this time both his arms were wrapped around her tightly pulling her close to his face….Radhika couldn’t understand…why was she behaving like a ordinary girl….in such a scenario she would have broken the head of the man….but couldn’t do that with Arjun….her brain calmed her; ‘’Stop it honey you wanted this just play along….this is your plan….’’

Arjun lifted her chin up; ‘’ you are many things….a strong dangerous cunning business woman….but above all you are a beautiful young girl….whose heart is fluttering staying in my arms…I do affect you the way you affect me’’ Arjun hid his face in the crook of her neck brushing his lips on her baby soft skin….Radhika curled her toes when his hard subtle brushed her soft skin….evoking the desires and feelings she had crushed long back…Arjun lifted his head kissing side of her temple corner of her eye her cheek…and then turned her face towards himself; I want to kiss you….but wont till you want it too…and you will soon… I haven’t touched Nivi the way I touched you….give me a chance heiress ….’’ Radika was still quite but she got a chance to escape when she got a call from security…informing her about her vehicle waiting…she quickly walked out with smiling Arjun following her….as they got into the elevator….Radhika stood in the middle….and Arjun exactly behind her ….leaning on the wall…watching her….he spoke ; ‘’I wish this elevator breaks down for 5-6 hrs you get caught with me’’

Radhika; ‘’Arjun I am not the right one….’’

Arjun straightened his body and moved close ….Radhika could feel the heat on her back….he lowered his face to her ear level; ‘’Then I will make myself the right one for you….get ready heiress I am going make you lose your senses’’ Arjun glanced at the display it was just 2 floors for basement….he hugged her from behind….pecking her cheek deep….as the doors slid open….Arjun found his reality standing there Nivedita….she came tip toeing towards Arjun….he glanced at Radhika who smirked….Nivedita looked at Radhika….she found a challenge a fear building in her body looking at Radhika…..She jumped on Arjun; ‘’My Baby’’

Arjun pulled her away; ‘’What are you doing here’’

Nivi made a puppy face; ‘’Was missing you and who is she’’

Arjun turned and looked at Radhika…he introduced her proudly; ‘’The media Heiress…Radhika’’

Nivi could feel her fear growing more…..Radhika had everything a girl desired to be like…Radhika read her fear…she smiled cunningly moving forward and extended her hand…when Nivi accepted it Radhika gripped it hard…shaking it with power….making her challenge open…Radhika moved to Arjun now it was her turn to make him feel out of the place…..she pecked his cheek whispering huskily ; ‘’Goodnight Super Star…enjoy the company’’ Radhika walked towards her black Mercedes without a backward glance….she got in and drove off….once inside….she started sweating…..Arjun’s proximity was too much…she didn’t plan for all this….but going with the flow was difficult…Radhika asked her driver to turn the ac to max….she leaned closing her eyes to calm her heart…when a phone call gave her everything she wanted…

Arjun got into his car with Nivi….he could feel Nivi’s discomfort ….annoyance she asked him in an annoyed tone; ‘’What were you doing in that lift alone with her’’

Arjun answered without looking at her; ‘’ you tell me the use of elevator’’

Nivi; ‘’Arjun you know what I mean she kissed you’’

Arjun; ‘’That was a peck Nivi…..’’

Nivi; ‘’Arjun why are you acting rude……I gave so many years to you’’

Arjun replied; ‘’Nivi…..we both know the reason…who got what from our relationship…don’t push words into my mouth .and now I am tired so please give me some space…’’ Arjun leaned on the seat closing his eyes…and drowning himself in the thoughts of Radhika

Paradise View

Radhika rushed inside and ran upstairs to the corner room…she pushed open the door….she whispered between the tears ; ‘’Sam’’

Sam was still lying on the bed….doctor was checking on her….Snehal was sitting holding Sam’s hand…..Sam looked at Radhika she was smiling and tears were oozing out from the corner of her eyes….doctor completed his check up and asked Radhika out.

Dr; ‘’Radhika …. Sam has woken up after 3 yrs…she had been surviving on IV fluids….it will take time for her regain her strength….she will not be able to walk for few days….she needs rest and don’t stress her….no questions and no explanations…..just go with the flow’’

Radhika thanked the doctor…and went back into the room…she pushed the lever of the hydraulic bed so that Sam could come in a sitting position ….. Sam patted the bed asking Radhika to come to her….Radhika sat close to her…Sam touched her cheek….she forced words out for her parched throat; ‘’Rini…..I missed you’’ Radhika just moved close and gently hugged Sam …giving her numerous kisses….both sisters cried hugging each other ….Snehal clapped…. ‘’ you forgot me ‘’ Sam extended her harm ; ‘’Come kiddo….I missed you too’’ Snehal hugged them and the spoke in a kiddish way; ‘’Rini …feel like having somethnig sweet…shall I cook’’

Radhika; ‘’Ask the cook….you better don’t try or you will burn my kitchen down…’’

Snhela pouted; ‘’you are mean…’’ Radhika pecked her and asked her go and prepare sweet for all ….Snehal walked out happy …she folded arms infront of god’s idol… ‘’thank you God……now I will be able to stop Rini’’ Radhika smiled looking at Snehal thanking God….but little did Snehal knew that Radhika had something else in her head
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Love; ‘’Her heart fluttered ….I knocked the door’’

Revenge; ‘’Its all her plan…she will never open the doors to you’’

Love; ‘’Oh she will…she has plans with you….I have plans with Arjun ….and he has a plan for her and a stubborn one’’

Precap; ‘The war intensifies ‘

75 comments

    • S.v

      |Registered Member

      Best birthday gift ever ardhika woo woo woo a treat to watch and when it comes fron my di pakka super awesome nivi arfh di take a road roller and just crush her ayyayayyaaaaaa she is a big burden to my ardhika. Irritating idiot argh…..

      Arjun to radhuja oh my god oh my god wish I was there looking at their romance. Chai im Turing all shameless. Neil he loves her but why what happened to sam and what is the reason u should say di coz u r the bramha of cross roads.

      Didi totally a hapoy episode finally my sleeping beauty opened her eyes. Wish I get my rini soon just the wish of snehal. Love u soo much didi and ur words. Take care. Love u lods. Bear my tight hugs and infinite kisses too. Muuhhhaaa.

      • Gauri

        |Author

        Brhma of Crossroad LOL SV 🙂 hope you had a wonderful bDay 🙂 and thanks for making the day special for me 🙂 loads of love 🙂 stay blessed 🙂

  1. RituM

    its tooooo awsome gauri….today m gona ask u when will sam get up…but u listen my heart nd sam awake now….neil…hehehehuhuhuhahaha……..poor guy…

    arjun….i like this one…very muchh!!

  2. Aasthu

    |Registered Member

    I’ve been waiting for it the entire day……..its superb !!!!!!!!!!!!!! ardhika scene was just amazing……I’m happy that Arjun’s proximity is affecting her the same way she affects him………Arjun without a shirt is really hot……..I think one can even faint at that sight……..but not me……I wonder how Rads stood that………..lift scene when Niharika went on in a jealous rage was a really a sight to watch…………loved Rads acts in the lift in front of her………..but today’s best part is the last scene……..happy that Sam finally came out of her coma…….I wonder what’s cooking in Rads’s head………….hope it won’t hurt Arjun……………nesam scene in fb was nyc………..Sam really cared for him……..but y did he break her heart???????bye……love u……….TC………….

    • Aasthu

      |Registered Member

      di why does Rads revenge from Arjun???? or is that she wants to use him to crumble Neil ??????? I’m reading this for the 3rd time I guess…..but still I’m captivated……….ardhika scene in rads office was awesome…………I find it diff to find wrds to explain that……….when’ll u update nxt???????? will there b ardhika scenes in the nxt too??????????

    • Gauri

      |Author

      Thanks a ton Aasthu darling 🙂 OK Rads is not taking any revenge from Arjun…..she is using him against Neil…as only Arjun’s height can bring Neil down….lot more to come 🙂 thanks again love u 🙂

      • Aasthu

        |Registered Member

        ok ok….got it……so that’s y she told him that she is not a good person…….but then y act feelings????? she is an expert in it I mean in making people reach the heights…….then y act feelings????????

      • Aasthu

        |Registered Member

        I forgot to ask when’ll u update MMZ-Married by fate ????? di what was the name of the ff u wrote b4 MBF???????

      • Gauri

        |Author

        You will Know the reason for act and immense hatered for Neil…. MMZ tomorrow afternoon and last was DPO destiny passion obsession 🙂 love u

      • Aasthu

        |Registered Member

        no no not that b4 DPO………..I frgt to mention it yest………….so this 1 nxt Tue or Thur?? love u toooooooooooooooooooooooo……………………ummmmmmmmmmmmmmmmaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa…………………

  3. Brij

    Actually gauri dont find me in the wrong way
    But I want your help
    We have to give our hindi project and in that we have to write a small poem by ourselves
    And I am too bad in expressing feelings in writing
    If you could write a small Hindi poem for me
    It would mean a lot to me
    If you don’t wish to write then please say me no
    And if you do help me then please do
    I would be greatful for it
    And please it should be a self made poem
    Sorry for inconvenience

    • Gauri

      |Author

      Brij I would love to help you but poetry is not my thing….these are two different aspects of writing…rhyming never comes easy … and pls dont say sorry…and very sorry I cant help you with the poem

  4. Jessie

    |Registered Member

    Gauriiii… Bear hugss….. This is something out of the world.. I was like jumping reading the last part..woohoo.. Sam woke up.. yay!! Neil’s love.. sweet but kya kare.. he made something bitter too.. Snehal.. awwiee.. the best anyone can get.. and Ardhika.. muaah.. 3 themes.. costumes.. and lift and Arjun’s dialogues.. uff.. its hot ! dialogues se itne garami lagti… wah.. nivi is out !! Arjun threw her in a minute.. lol
    I loved his dialogue there.. i dont have a ring..rofl.. man.. so desperate!! Sisters love. !! wow!!
    Eager for upcoming twists.. You are simply the best.. Love u loads.. TC

    • Gauri

      |Author

      Thanks Jess 🙂 Radhika will learn how difficult it is to handle a man who is head on heels mad of you 🙂 thanks darling loads of love 🙂

  5. Brin

    |Registered Member

    Outstanding episode, finally Sam wakes up, eagerly waiting for the next update. You nail it, well done. 🙂

  6. Sathya

    |Registered Member

    Gauri..My dear…it is a PSYCHEDELIC EPISODE. I have no words to praise you. Ardhika couldn’t control their emotions with each other. yes their intensity is burning them inside. Love started playing games with Radhika to get her back as Rini but Revenge is holding her back as Radhika. Awww….wonderful…marvelous writing. Finally Sam woke up…the best moment in today’s episode. Love you dear.

    • Gauri

      |Author

      Sathya dear …before replying to you I go to google to check the meaning of the words you write …. thanks a ton darling your comment made my day… Radhika will play more..but Arjun will irritate her with his feelings 🙂 love u

  7. Starz

    |Registered Member

    Amazing post…loved it to the core….Sam woke up… waiting eagerly for next post….loved ardhika scenes… LOVE you and take care

  8. KK(Krishna)

    Gauriiii…oh my ghoooshhhh…i am speechless. you are fantastic and so was the update today. you nailed it..each and every word…it was overwhelmed…story is going so good and interesting. thank you so much…waiting on your next chapter…until that you take care…love and care..

  9. Dipika

    |Registered Member

    Gauri darling my magician angel…this is my 4 th time to read this awesome chapter.. I can’t get enough of it yarrrr….rads dressed to kill n she almost killed arjun i guess…omg arjun is so pur soul here…he confess so fast..n which caught rads offgaurd..thts unique frm ice queen if ours….nivi..i don’t like tht girl…n sammmm finally u woke up…rads planned to kick out neil frm.Darjeeling.. She growing danger day by day….arjun’s photoshoot…killer….m soooooo much more eager for next..want that its never should have ended. .love u loads. Tc of u n ur sis too..muhhha

  10. Myra

    |Registered Member

    Gauri di…..seriously, Kya khaate ho aap? …..that your writing is so magical.

    Uff, ardhika was intense 😜
    Finally, radhika was for the first time in this ff, taken off guard….arjun toh bas boss hai.
    Wondering what he will do about nivi.

    And now that sam is up and okay…its gonna be fun, watching her making radhika realise her feelings…..and radhika keeping her away from neil.

    I am eagerly waiting….update soon and mmz too…. Love you 😘😘

    • Gauri

      |Author

      Thanks Myra 🙂 Kya khaati hoon….philal diet par hoon to keval phal phool 😛 Nivi will not lose ARjun easily …and Radhika will not make it easy….neither will Arjun give up 🙂 loads of love stay blessed 🙂 and mmz tomorrow afternoon 🙂 love u

  11. Manolove

    |Registered Member

    Gauri seriously speaking u are dam brilliant… God I seriously can’t believe the screen play.. just a awesome one and truly honest …. I feel to hug to tight and say out of the world update..

    The screen between Radhika and arjun god… No words to express that part.. I love u dear.. brilliant brilliant brilliant brilliant brilliant brilliant brilliant brilliant brilliant brilliant…

    Thanks a lot as Sam has finally woke up…

    One request usually u use to give 2 update per week but now only Tuesday and Thursday… I know u are busy but wt to do we are addicted to Ur story..

    One true fact is.. when we read any story or documents that need to create an impact in us.. if it does it’s a beautiful wok.. urs have always done I have failed to inform u…

    Ur updates always have a impact on me.. every night that update will keep on running in my mind…

    Even now those arjun and Radhika movement are echoing in my mind…

    Please give us 2 update per week…

    🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗

    • Gauri

      |Author

      Thanks Manolove 🙂 I am so over whelmed after reading your words…thank u 🙂 🙂 🙂 I try to write but my 12 hrs goes in office ….I get only weeknds and some days weekdays to write if I am not to tired ….will try for sure loads of love 🙂 stay blessed and thanks again

  12. jewel

    This chapter is fantastic gauri…. Arjun’s words, wow…its intensity, it is like pulling her to his love… And arjun he shut the mouth of nivi with one sentence….. Snehal, she is really sweet… And atlast Sam wakeup. Hope that Arjun, Sam and snehal can change radhika to their rini. And I am sure that in this game love is going to win over revenge. Waiting for next chapter post it soon

  13. aarathi

    oh my dear gauri it is an amazing one.i dont have words to explain………..stay blessed and happy……….

  14. Rossy

    |Registered Member

    Finally Sam wake up…the bonding between sisters were so nice treat…it was heavenly bliss to have such caring sister… Looks like neil’s gonna trapped..lol…and i really loved this Arjun…calm,composed and knows how to handle situation or insaan…radz dressing to kill was a success then…lol…i think now she’s going to be little good towards Arjun but her war against Neil will continue…now we can know what happened as Sam will tell…and i loveeeeeed ardhika moments most,hayeeee…so sweet…😉😉

    • Gauri

      |Author

      Thanks Rossy 🙂 yes Rads war against Neil will continue… driving him mad 🙂 you will slowly know what happened to Sam 🙂 loads of love

  15. Sammy

    |Registered Member

    It was awesome di …ardhika soooooo hot …iam sweating … red it ten times …still again . I am going to read it again ….having this upadte and maggie ….. now whi want’s tv and you tube …….reallly ..magical ..love . .i am in a dream world 😘😙😙😘😍😘

  16. vini

    WOW .. Gauri .. hast off .. i feel like living with them and i feels so good .. Sam work up .. thats really good … ardhika were hot in this 🙂 🙂 .. you are making me go crazy on this again after DPO .. upload next chapters at earliest 🙂 🙂 a tight hug for you 🙂

  17. Brij

    Can you please give me a topic
    And some words I will write and then you could modify it
    And I would surely love to do it with you
    I wish we could have a different source for interaction
    And thank you so so so so much

  18. Aadia

    |Registered Member

    Yup…Sam woke up!!!
    ☺☺☺and Arjun, loved his words to Radhika..iam reading it again and again di….you are really a super woman…..love you….

  19. Fanficoholic

    |Registered Member

    So sorry di I am last one to comment. Though i read this i cld nt comment as i had a week full of exams. I am head over heels in love with this. Utterly amazingggggggggggg. Yah nw i am sure that i am gonna love tis like dpo. The chemistry between ardhika is sooooo gooood. And there was no delaying. Arjun expressed the words of his heart on the first day itself. Seems like he is becomingggg too fasstttt. R toooo eager. And poor radhika. Though her heart is fluttering she cant express it. She has to be cold and heartless for her sister. And sam wome up. Yahhhhhhh finallyyyyyyyy. Now sammy wll stp rini. Nly she can do that. And i am love wth the sister’s bond di. Though i am a single kid of my parents i hav many amazing memories wth my cousins. They r like my real brotehrs and sisters. Most of the best moments of my life hav been spent wth them. And whn i see the sister’s bond i remeber my days wth them. Though it may seem untrue bt if someone really does anything lyk tis wth my sister i wll hellbent on punishing no matter whatever it may take to do so. And ur story has inspired me mre to do that. Ur every story represents a human relation. Dpo was abt frndship. Esp the last wrds impressed me very much. This journey started with radhika and sam and wll end wth them. Though the wrding may nt be exact bt i hope the meaning reached u. And i am totally totally fallen fr tis ff. I dnt knw y bt i want to meet u once. Though it may nt be possible fr me in these two years i really want to meet u once. U r an mazingggg writer di. Never give this up. And yah never forget me ever even if i might disappear fr smetym. Nt tat i wll disappear. Bt if in case i diappear plz do remember me. U r one among my spl writers. I hav nly 4 of them in my list and u r one among them. I dnt knw y i limed u and ur story so much that without u my spl writers lists seemed incomplete.

    Love u loadsssssssssss
    😘😘😘😘😘😘😘💝💝💝💝💝💝💝💝💝💝

    • Gauri

      |Author

      You made my day …I am on the moon after reading your comment …feel like hugging you…yes relationships feelings matter to me ….a right now your comment made me too emotional 🙂 thanks for being with me 🙂 love u

  20. Meen

    |Registered Member

    hiiii gauri…im back…..welll till u keep writing & posting ur stories on tu….i will come back here…even if its after months or years……i missed u so much….as promised i will comment on every single update of crossroads…..this is not because i hv promised…….but only because i love to……..no matter first one or last one…but i will always comment ….regarding d update……..as usual…once again….u made me spellbound…..i dont hv a single idea how u look….but after reading ur stories i can telll …u r no less thn miss world from ur heart……loved d update….& love uuuuuuu

    • Gauri

      |Author

      Oh meen you made my day 🙂 I can’t tell you how happy I am after reading your comment ..overwhelmed happy…and what not thanks dear 🙂 I am too happy right now cant express 🙂 love u to moon and back

  21. _Ritu

    |Registered Member

    Amazing as always…. U r truly a gem… 🙂 Gauri…whether ur family knows dat u r such an amazing writer..??? They must be so proud of u 🙂 nd m so jealous from u 😉 😉 never want ur updates to end…bt ur boss..u jst give d no. Of ur boss to Rini…she will handle him so well… 😉 😉 Sam finally woke up…now god save Neil 😉 😜😜 God ka to pata nhi…bt u will definitely save him 😉 😜 loved it a lot…loads of love. 🙂

  22. Roma

    O my gauriiiiiiiiiiiii my sweeeeeetheart darling. ..finally I reached here. ..n I’m speechless and overwhelmed. …no words can praise your amazingly awesoooooome talent. ..it was really very very intense…ardhika were fantabulous. ..no sam woke up. .wowwww awesome awesoooooome. …keep it up honeyyy. .love you loads. muaaaaahhhhhh Bear hug my sweeeeeetheart darling abhaaa ♡♡♡

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