Manmarziyan -Crossroads -Chapter 3

Hello frnds…….here is the next chapter….do let me know how was it …. Enjoy ur Friday and coming weekend 

Note: This story will have lot of flash backs….Sam’s Pov and thoughts are in memories darkness…thoughts ….I have written her part in a thinking mode…she is unable to speak…you will know in this chapter why.

Chapter 3

Sam was still fighting the dark….she was fighting with all her might…somehow she felt…Radhika was in pain…and was calling her with her heart…but Sam wasn’t able to reach her…Sam POV; ‘Rini….my Rini is in pain….this time I won’t fail you….I will stand by you come what may…’ Sam’s mind again took her to a memory….they were 15 that time Samrat came back from work all happy he called for his wife Rakhi and 2 daughters…..Sam came and sat next to Rakhi hugging her and Radhika hugged her dad from behind….Samrat smiled; ‘’Good news for my princesses …you both got admission in top Ivy school in London….you both are going…’’

Radhika squealed; ‘’London yippee…..Dad I am so happy….Sammy it would be fun’’

Sam kept quite…her feelings for Neil had been growing they had started meeting secretly…she dint wanted to leave…she spoke slowly; ‘’Dad…I won’t go…..I want to be here with you and mom’’

Radhika; ‘’Sammy have you lost it….who gets such an opportunity….and you won’t be alone…we will be together’’

Sam started crying…she felt helpless not able to explain….Samrat couldn’t see his delicate daughter crying; ‘’Hey baby…its ok if you don’t want to go….but can you stay without Rini’’

Sam replied wiping her tears; ‘’Rini too can stay….I don’t want her to go’’

Radhika responded in a strong voice; ‘’No I won’t….if you can’t accompany me to keep my dream…then hell with you’’

Samrat; ‘’Rini…check your anger before its too late’’

Radhika smiled; ‘’Dad ask your delicate darling to keep a check on her emotions and tears…one day she will drown in her own tears’’

Sam wiped her face looking down….Rahki hugged her; ‘’Rini…sometimes you are down right rude’’

Radhika; ‘’May be Mom…but what I said was true….if she keep on going being all delicate and emotional….one day someone will crush her heart and she will never be able to fight…’’
Radhika walked off all angry…..Samart just rubbed his temple…and looked at Sam; ‘’Rini has never spend a day without you….may be this is why she is angry…give her time’’

Sam smiled and followed Radhika….who was lying on the bed completely covered with her quilt….Sam went and threw her body over Radhika….Radhika screamed; ‘’Get your fat butt of me this instant’’

Sam; ‘’Rini…..scream as much as you want I won’t get up till you accept ….you are not mad at me’’

Radhika got up and sat facing Sam; ‘’Spit it out….why are you so reluctant to leave …..what’s stopping you’’

Sam looked away; ‘’I can’t stay without Mom and dad’’

Radhika; ‘’and you can without me…..Sam what are you hiding…’’

Sam smiled; ‘’I am not hiding anything stop being a detective….and living without you…we aren’t 2 we are one Rini’’

Radhika smirked; ‘’Fine…don’t tell me…One day I will find it out’’

Sam threw her arms around Radhika pushing her to bed….Sam pecked her cheek; ‘’you known Rini even if I drown in my own tears….I know you will bring me back….you will fight till you get me back…I trust you Rini…you will never leave me’’

Radhika made a disgusted face wiping her cheek…she watched her and replied in a determined voice…; ‘’first no pecking….this feels yuck….and second yes I will… come what may….but remember one thing….the one who gives you pain….will pay the price in a harsh way….I can be cruel too’’ Sam rubbed her nose with Radhika before hugging her tight….and planting numerous kisses on her face ignoring Radhika’s warning…

Mumbai Airport

Arjun pulled his hoody up while walking out of the airport….he was quickly surrounded by his security as he walked out of the VIP gate….the reporters kept pushing the security to reach the star…they were throwing questions at him….clicking their cameras to get a picture of him….Arjun waked calmly to his car…got in he smiled at Gupta who was already seated in the car..; ‘’How are you uncle’’

Gupta; ‘’Good and very good to see your son…..how was your shoot and where is Nivi’’

Arjun sighed; ‘’She left for UK…she had to shop for her cousin’s wedding’’

Gupta; ‘’Why are you marrying her….you deserve better’’

Arjun; ‘’Lets not talk about that….it will lead us nowhere…..by the way…any news on the media queen?’’

Gupta ; ‘’I have spoken to Snehal….I think she will meet us’’

Arjun turned toward the window and looked out; ‘’I am not interested in meeting Snehal….I want to meet her….. Radhika ….Uncle refuse the meeting if she is not meeting us in person’’

Gupta was surprised; ‘’How does that matter….we just need her ideas…..how does that matter whom we meet’’

Arjun; ‘’matters to me….’’

Gupta stared at Arjun for a minute; ‘’you are fascinated by her…like everyone else….you don’t want to meet her for your career…..you want to see her….in person’’ Arjun did not answer….neither Gupta asked he understood…Radhika had struck the cord of Arjun’s heart…Gupta’s POV; ‘he has never adamant on meeting any one before….I have to get this meeting fixed anyhow…who knows she might benefit us’

Neil’s Penthouse

Neil had been hit by temper issues….he had been haunted by media…over Ashutosh’s case….and in his anger he had slapped a reporter….but it went out of hand when the reporter asked his the whereabouts his girlfriend….who had been missing for 3 yrs….Neil lost his head and had beaten him black and blue…..his manger took care of the issue some how….but it did the damage….media decided to ban Neil…the union decided that will not let him promote his movies till Neil gives a written apology and apologise on Live television for his behaviour

Neil finished the day’s shoot of his latest romantic flick….he crashed on his expensive leather couch… closed his eyes and a beautiful memory struck his mind….Sam was busy with her friends enjoying street food she was around 17 and he was 20….and Neil was watching her from some distance…he always did this…he felt a need to keep her safe….she was so beautiful and fragile….there were many who eyed her…but she refused all….she was just his….Sam saw a poor kid watching her having food….Sam smiled and bought him to the food cart….she ordered whatever the kid liked…and made the payment….the kid looked at her with thankful eyes…..Sam without any inhibitions hugged the kid….her friends made a face….they too belonged to the same high society as Sam….but Sam had a heart of gold…..which was full of love….

Neil smiled and after Sam left he bought kid 2 ice-creams….next day…they had decided to meet in the nearby park…Neil was lying with his head on Sam’s lap…she was caressing his hair….and Neil was watching her face…. ‘’Sam I love you’’

Sam responded sweetly; ‘’I know….and I love you’’

Neil; ‘’Do you promise to be on my side always…even if your family disagrees …which they would I know that’’

Sam spoke in a soothing chirpy voice; ‘’Neil don’t be negative….my parents love me a lot they won’t refuse…don’t worry….once you make your career I will talk to them….and who will refuse Neil the superstar…’’

Neil got up and sat on his knees facing her; ‘’you believe that….can I become a star in the acting world’’

Sam; ‘’yes….I know you will be and we will walk the red-carpet as most beautiful couple…and I will stand by you come what may’’

Neil eyes were full of emotions….he watched her caressing her beautiful face….her eyes were honest…her feeling were so true for him…he leaned and captured her lips….relishing her softly lovingly….Neil pulled her close…and plastered her body to his….hugging her tightly…Sam was hiding in his arms all shy…..Sam whispered; ‘’Neil….I think we should leave….if someone see us together like this they might jail for making out with a juvenile’’

Neil smiled rubbed her blushing cheek and asked; ‘’Aren’t you scared that I might take advantage of you’’

Sam moved closer; ‘’Neil I trust you ….you don’t know how much….you will never hurt me come what may….and I will never leave you’’ Neil watched her for a second and pulled her again into a hug….

Neil opened his eyes coming back to present… ‘’Sam …..we both broke our promise….I had hurt you and you left me…I need you I am so alone….’’ Tiredness and grief took over him and Neil retreated into a slumber….

Rini was standing across the fire…..there was fire all round and Rini’s eyes were full of hatred…she was smirking….she spoke; ‘whenever you see trouble brewing around you….believe it to be me…you will pay for hurting Sam’ Neil jerked up….his was sweating his POV; ‘Rini….why does she comes to my head….please god let my Sam be safe’

Paradise View

The monitors started beeping abnormally….the nurse was shocked at sudden change she ran out of the room and walked into a big room…; ‘’ Ma’am….the patient is responding….please call the doctor….’’

Radhika smiled with tears in her eyes and ran upstairs with Snehal in tow….Radhika walked into the room….and watched her sister Samaira…..she had been lying unconscious for 3 yrs…..Radhika was breathing hard she bend down and looked at her sister; ‘’Sam….please honey wake up…I am tired seeing you like this…please Sam wake up for me…please Sammy I feel alone…’’

The doctor rushed in and asked Radhika to wait outside….Snehal dragged the reluctant Radhika out ….doctors checked on Sam and came out ….radhika questioned them; ‘’How is she’’

Dr; ‘’Miss Radhika….she has responded….but it will take time for her to be conscious completely’’

Radhika was furious; ‘’More time….are you kidding me….3 yrs she had been lying like this….I have told you a no. of times that when I speak to her ….I see tears flowing down…..she can hear me’’

Dr; ‘’Yes she can hear you feel you….she even can think….but her brain commands are not reaching her nerves which is why her body is not responding…..this happens….but since today she showed drastic improvement….I think…she can wake up anytime ‘’

Radhika; ‘’Will she be completely fine…I mean …’’

Dr; ‘’I know what you mean….but we can only comment once she is conscious…Radhika you have fought bravely….just don’t give up….you strength is making her fight…please’’

Doctor left and Radhika walked in …she sat next to Sam….touched the tubes attached to her body…and caressed her pale face…. ‘’I know you can hear me Sam….wake up please…wake up or I will do something I shouldn’t ‘’ Radhika screamed….and left the room crying….

Snehal watched unconscious Sam….she noticed the tears streaming out of her closed eyes….Snehal wiped them and gently spoke; ‘’Sam…..your Rini is losing herself she is turning heartless….please I need you to stop Rini….get up for her …..’’ Snehal pecked her forehead and left….she failed to noticed that Sam’s fingers moved….

Radhika came down and moved to her study….she was expressionless again….the reporter who was being thrashed by Neil was sitting there waiting for her…he stood up when she entered….Radhika gestured him to sit and took her King chair; ‘’Good work Mr. Patel….here is your prize’’ she kept an envelope on the table…Patel smiled and picked it up….he opened and his eyes sparkled…Radhika smirked

Patel; ‘’Do let me know if I can be of more help’’

Radhika; ‘’keep the issue burning….don’t let him sleep….and you will be getting such envelopes every week….and one more thing’’ Radhika walked to Patel and leaned closer…she ushered a warning; ‘’Don’t you ever dare to double cross me….I can be dangerous too…you will not know what will happen in a sec’’

Patel gulped; ‘’No Ma’am….I won’t ….do let meet know if you need any further help’’ He left wiping his forehead….Radhika lifted her intercom and spoke; ‘’Send Rana in…’’

Rana a middle age ex army man walked in; ‘’Yes ma’am’’

Radika; ‘’Please keep an eye on Neil and this Patel….people who sell themselves for money are not worthy of trust’’…Rana nodded and left…

Arjun’s bungalow
Arjun came back home and greeted his parents…his dad met him as if he was meeting his fan and not his son…..Arjun ignored and played along he was used to it now….he went to his mother’s room…Aisha Mehra….Arjun smiled looking at her sitting and reading….he softly spoke; ‘’How are you Mom’’

Aisha smile; ‘’Arjun…..give me a hug…’’ Arjun hugged her and Aiasha held him for sometime…; ‘’So how was everything…and how is Nivi’

Arjun faked a smile; ‘’All good….Mom why did you keep your relationship when it wasn’t working between you and dad’’

Aiasha; ‘’because we loved each other….and none of us thought of a life without each other….it might sound stupid to you….but even today….when nothing is like before…if I am late in getting up any morning….your dad panics….thinking he lost me…Arjun he might be stubborn….but he is my first and last love….and I am his….’’

Arjun; ‘’Is love that powerful’’

Aisha smiled and caressed his face; ‘’ Love can turn a personality around…..even a lamb becomes a lion for love….Oh leave all that….do meet Minu…..after you left the girl got sick…your father interfered when Mahesh was thrashing her and we all know Mahesh only cares for his son…and neglects Minu bad’’

Arjun got worried he hugged his mom and walked hurriedly towards the quarters of the domestic help….he walked in and found Minu lying on the bed …he caressed her head; ‘’Minu….look your bhai is here’’

Minu opened her eyes…and whispered in a weak and weeping voice; ‘’I missed you Sir….baba din’t let me go to school…he slapped me’’

Arjun; ‘’No more Sir….its Bhai….’’Arjun lifted her up and walked back into his mansion…Mahesh suddenly came infront of him …Arjun gave him a death glare…and walked off….he called for a doctor to get Minu treated….he caressed her head…and Minu asked innocently; ‘’Bhai…did you miss me’’

Arjun smiled ; ‘’everyday….and I brought you a camera….you wanted to learn photography…right…’’

Minu squealed and hugged him; ‘’will you teach me?’’

Arjun; ‘’Yes…tell me when to start’’

Minu thought; ‘’Today…’’ Arjun smiled and nodded….’’ Arnav watched his son from the door and felt proud of his golden heart…he wanted Arjun to be like Aiasha and not like him….he turned to leave….and found Aiasha watching him from the other corner….he just smiled at her….time had created distance between them….but they still loved each other

It was night….Snehal watched Radhika stuffing some clothes in a gym bag she frowned….’’don’t tell me you are going for swimming at this hour…..Rini its 10:00 PM

Radhika; ‘’Good …I love darkness…..it feels so me…’’

Snehal got irritated; ‘’You know what you are stubborn crazy and mad….who swims in a sea in the night’’

Radhika turned around…hugged Snehal and pecked her cheek… ‘’me…and I know you are coming ‘’ Snehal stomped and followed her…..

Arjun peeped out it was dark….he gestured Minu to followed him thy both were dressed alike….Arjun pulled out his small car…he knew no one would think that its Arjun driving that small low budget car…once out of the Bungalow premises Minu and Arjun screamed together….Arjun took her to all good places and helped her click pictures….finally he took her to the beach near Juhu …. Minu jumped clapping in happiness; ‘’Thank you Bhai….Ok can you click the pictures of waves for me…with night vision’’….

Arjun made the adjustments and focused in a direction….he zoomed and saw a girl sitting on the beach….Arjun could get only her side profile…..he clicked….he moved the focus onto the waves but he breath was caught in his throat…he could see someone swimming between the night roaring waves….Arjun removed it and blinked towards the waves….he couldn’t see due to darkness … he zoomed again and saw the swimmer….a girl….Arjun whispered; ‘’Brave ‘’ he kept focusing…the girl stood up and walked towards the other girl siting on the beach….she was dressed in a fitting black gym suit….after few minutes a black SUV came and stopped by….the girls got in and left….Arjun smiled….and zoomed at the picture he clicked….he smiled looking at the picture…she was looking down while walking….long hairs…clean skin….he smiled…..Minu was looking at him she finally asked; ‘’Bhai which one you liked…both were good….better than nivi ma’am…’’

Arjun watched her disgusted expression on Nivi’s name and smiled…..he pulled her cheeks threw her over his shoulder spanking her lovingly and walked to his car.

Neil’s Penthouse

Niharika knocked on the door but received no response…she gently pushed the door and peeped in…there was one of the most handsome man of the country…Neil….he was lying on his stomach shirtless…Niharika’s heart raced at the glance of his bare body….she looked around took her shoes off and tip toed ….she sat facing him….his dark hair tanned body and sharp features were setting her desires on fire….Niharika gently shook him…but he din’t flinch…she noticed whiskey bottle lying on the floor and smiled at her luck….she moved closer to his face and blew a warm breath over his face…her need for him rising now….she gently moved her fingers on his naked back…moving closer lying next to Neil watching him sleep…she whispered; ‘’All these years I have waited for your single glance….but you never noticed me…you were so lost in Samaira yes she was beautiful…more than any girl I had seen….I hated her….and I hate her now….Neil-Niharika suits…give me a chance Neil….no one will love you more than me…’’ She smiled thinking of her confession…she knew he hadn’t heard a word….Niharika pecked Neil on his cheek and walked out…neil stretched after few minutes and opened his eyes…he pulled Sam’s picture under his chest…he always slept with his heart on the picture….Neil smiled with his drugged eyes; ‘’I still can’t sleep without holding you…’’

Precap: Memories …. a fatal attarctaion 

62 comments

  1. Manolove

    |Registered Member

    Gauri please say is Sam in coma.. I can’t believe trust me I read that part alone atleast 100 times.. not only Radhika even if I was in her place I would have killed Neil by now to 1000 pieces…

    Unbelievable update.. I prefer u to start a novel..

    Just answer me one question.. how many brains u have? Please share them.. with
    me..

    Here I am getting scolding from my dad for still awake in night that late… Where do u seriously get these thoughts.. unbelievable…

    Sam please wake up.. I just can’t watch u like this… God.. guauri please do something soooooooon 😇😇😇😇

    • Gauri

      |Author

      Thanks Manolove 🙂 Sam is in coma….how you will know in later episodes 😀 do sleep in time and enjoy your weekend 🙂 loads of love 🙂

  2. Brin

    |Registered Member

    Outstanding episode, Sam is in a coma, how did that happen, eagerly waiting for the next update, you nail it, well done. 🙂

  3. ana

    Omg…Sam in coma..that WS smting unexpected.. BT Di. I am really liking this radhika the bold 1 ..bt will b more happppiiii while seeing old radhika..

    And snehal is true fend…waiting 4 ardhika meet …plzz
    Post soon
    Bye ..lv ya

  4. Dhara

    |Registered Member

    Sam is in coma? This is why Radhika is so furious. Superb Gauri. Again Arjun stole my heart.😉😉😉 I am in love with this Arjun.

  5. Sathya

    |Registered Member

    Omg…. Sam in coma…. Hmm well then rads anger, revenge is justified… No one can bare our beloved be a lifeless soul it will make us more furious when we see them daily n obviously we feel to destroy the person who is the reason for their wounds. You fabulously portrayed rads anger beautifully. I loved rads bold avatar n swimming in sea in the midnight…but that gets attracted by arjun cool…. U rocked it gauri… Tremendous episode. Love u 😍😍😍

  6. Jessie

    |Registered Member

    Did Sam hurt herself? How she ended up like this?? Nesam scenes were fantastic.. intense love.. !!! I admired Neil. He still loves her.. may be a misunderstanding or something else I think which Rads this cold. Arnav n Aaisha’s bond of love..adorable..!! Wish Arnav 2 stop Arjun’s wedding wit Nivi.. Arjun n Minu.. cutest!! I loved Arjun-sia in dpo.. now here it getting hell cutest.. U brought Radz pain clearly! Arjun got to see a glimpse of his lady..woohoo…!! Waiting 4 nxt one….

    • Gauri

      |Author

      Thanks a ton Jessie 🙂 more details on Sam in coming dates 🙂 well more on Nivi in coming updates 🙂 loads of love stay blessed 🙂

  7. Aasthu

    |Registered Member

    I simply love this Radhika……bold,daring and careful…….hmmm Arjun too loves her……nesam scenes were cute…..Sam truly has a golden heart……but I felt disgusted when Neil kissed her……felt like throttling him and cutting him into million pieces……….di when’ll ardhika meet ??????? happy that Sam responded…….make her fine soon…………

  8. Jewel

    |Registered Member

    U made me cry gauri… Rasam part was really emotional. Radhika’s revenge is justified. And Arjun he is really a sweet person. Why Neil hurt Sam?? When will ardhika meet each other?? The whole morning I was thinking abt this story only…. Beautifully written story loved it… Post the next soon

    • Gauri

      |Author

      Thanks Jewel 🙂 Neil-Sam more to come you will have wait you will know everything as story progresses 🙂 loads of love keep smiling 🙂

  9. Dipika

    |Registered Member

    Gauri what happened to sam…was she try to kill her self n now went into coma that makes rads so heartless…sam is so fragile n emotional… Her memories n FBs..awesome… I can visualize them n feels thier pain…ohhh now..aradhika’s first meet..means though arjun saw her tht to frm far..but story to shuru ho gyi na..i m so excited when this angry n agrressive tigress will meet to calm n cool tiger wht will happen…pls post soon..love u..muhhaa

    • Gauri

      |Author

      Thanks Dipu 🙂 thanks a ton for making my day 🙂 wat happened to Sam will open up once Sam open her eyes… 🙂 lot more to come… there willbe many flash backs 🙂 Arjun Radhika will be meeting in next and Arjun will get attracted to her like a magnet 🙂 stay blessed 🙂

  10. Naaga

    OMG Sam in coma stage? but how? & why?

    Neil Radhu bonding totally totally…different from other ff.

    I like snehal character, she is so caring. Is any relationship between twin sisters & snehal?

    What happened to samrat & Raki?

    And Gauri so many questions r running _in my mind.

    Waiting for the next pls post it soon.

  11. S.v

    |Registered Member

    didi it was a fantabulous update di seriously no one turns soo hard when they are soft and rini turned this bad guess that stupid neil would have done this bad. sam i thought she was away from rini but she is sleeping in coma for 3 years if i was rini i would have been as hard as rini was as she was a delicate flower.

    OOhhhhhhhhhh soo this was the stupidity he did and now is scared of rini ?? Am i guessing right di ?? or not oh god arjun’s parents a realistic one i loved the way arjun’s mom explained about her love and arjun has golden heart and neil is so short tempered he has lost his lady love does he knew that his princess has turned a sleeping beauty or he is thinking she somewhere and i have many doubts di if rini is going to use arjun what would she get as a benefit from arjun against neil ?? i am becoming the questioner now lol di cant help it coz u made the curiosity level too damn high.

    Arjun had made a glimse of radhika yippieeee i loved it he is gonna meet her aww aww awww im jumping happiness as my fav pari is gonna meet soon. jumping now. i love this shade of rads sry rini loved the name and also her attitude she is soft inside by covering a strong sheild . What will happen next ?? is a big question as u always make me jump in madness love u seriously di for this and waiting for the next part .

    Love ur words and always u with the same level of craziness or even more and always bear my hugs and infinite kissed muhhhaaaa take care di love u

    • Gauri

      |Author

      Thanks a ton SV 🙂 I want to give you a big hug …. and a peck on ur forehead 😀 Neil has done something which broke Radhika bad….. Sam will also know wat he did… 🙂 wait for few more updates 🙂 loads of love stay blessed 🙂 u are my darling sister

  12. Savera

    Wow Gauri…
    It’s really really superb. …
    Radhika’s dark…. n.. Arjun’s light. ..
    What a combination. …
    I think. .. there’s some misunderstanding. ..coz… Niel. ..loving so much to Sam. ..
    Radhika is totally right at her place. ..

    Waiting for next. …Eagerly. …
    Thank you for this. …

  13. Gianna

    |Registered Member

    Gauri, am speechless don’t know what to say, this was an amazing chapter, it was more than amazing. Didn’t know when it ended was just so engrossed in your words. Many many hugs and kisses for u, stay blessed n love u so much

  14. Chandana

    This is so amazing Gauri… Felt bad for Sam… loved Arjun’s parents love and care part… especially Arjun’s Mom… finally Ardhika..through that photographs, Arjun knows of Radhika as Snehal is a known face… keep rocking n tc

  15. Roma

    Gauriiiiiiiiiiiii my sweeeeeet darling sissyyyy. …it was really very heart touching, emotional n very outstanding update….with each update I’m getting addicted to this story more n more. …I don’t know how to express my feelings after reading this mind blowing dynamite story. ….each n every word coming out of your mind is very precious treasure for me…the way you narrated Sam’s condition. ..neil’s regret of hurting sam…Sam n rads fb of their unbreakable bond…and arjun’s fascination to meet rads….everything is very precisely n brilliantly penned… ….Sam is in coma from last 3 years?…ahhhh…n rads punishing neil for hurting sam…..arjun in this story very caring n gentleman, down to earth n has heart of gold…his care n concern for little girl minu was remarkable…the beach scene…n ardhika first glimpse was gorgeous. …when they gonna meet face to face?…I’m very curious to know. ….u know abha….u touched my heart very deeply n I thank god to find you as lovely friend, I feel lucky…coz of lack of time n also thinking of your n mine tight schedules, I couldn’t talk much to you personally. …but believe me I really adore u n u have a very special place in my heart. …I wanna say a lot. …but again lacking on words. …u just be there for me my dearrrrr. …..I love you soooooooo muchhhhhh….n again I want to request you to publish your stories. ..you have very precious talent and it will be hit n give u the fame n success u deserve….keep it up honeyyy. Love you loads. muaaaaahhhhhh Bear hug my sweeeeeetheart darling gauriiiiiiiiiiiii . …..lotssssss of hugsssssss n kissesssss. .. 😉 ♡♡♡ 🙂

    • Gauri

      |Author

      Thanks a ton Roma 🙂 Next update Arjun will meet Radhika 🙂 Roma you have a pure heart and you express words so beautifully that just makes me smile 😀 I understand you are busy 🙂 I no how hectic it gets… its ok darling I will be happy whenever we can catch up we will talk 😀 stay blessed darling and keep smiling 🙂 love u from the bottom of my heart

  16. Rossy

    |Registered Member

    Sam was in coma…ooh my god…how in the earth happened this…i don’t know why but I don’t think Neil is totally responsible…something is there behind lime light..and m loving this tigress radhika more n more…still in daze…Arjun such a gentleman here…good he should be gentleman not akdoo always….waiting for next…

  17. sravya

    it’s superb update. I loved it so much.I loved this Rads so much.I am excited for their Love story.
    eagerly waiting for the next one.loads of love n tc☺

  18. Silpa k sivadasan

    Amazingggggg………
    What a different approach ………
    What a different radhikaaaa
    My mind fell in love with her…….
    Superb work yaaaar…….
    And the convo b/w love and hate was just mind blowinggg plzzz keep up with that plzzzzzzzzzzzzzz

    And upload soonnnnn
    Will b waiting 4 u

  19. Jnana

    |Registered Member

    Awesome dear…… Really my head is spinning with questions…… Why did Neil do to Sam and why is Sam on coma….. Answer those fast please….. Of course with posting your chapters fast….. Lol….

  20. Aadia

    |Registered Member

    Im so sorry for commenting late di..
    Sam is in coma?What had happenedhappened really?? Im afraid if Neil ever get Sam’s forgiveness..she has her Rini the bravo..pls update ASAP di…and we are expecting some more OS di…..

  21. _Ritu

    |Registered Member

    Wow Gauri…a thrilling chapter.. 🙂 Sam in coma?? Bt we read her POV’s?? nd how she went in coma??? …and Niharika wid Neil…?? Arjun attracted towards Rads.. Wow 🙂 m all curious to know what will happen nxt. Post soon…loads of love. 🙂

    • Gauri

      |Author

      Thanks a ton Ritu 🙂 ok regarding Sam ….Sam’s POV is in thoughts its her soul who is talking … I have shown her in darkness which depicted her coma state 🙂 loads of love

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