Manmarziyan -Crossroads -Chapter 2

Hello dearies ….I am happy as friday is here with a long weekend 🙂 No more blabbering….I am posting this for second time….becoz of some silly TU error ….I have wriiten this one as 3rd POV 🙂 hope u will like it 🙂 pls ignore my mistakes 🙂 loads of love

Chapter 2

Somewhere in darkness

When you have blank present and future…your mind lingers just in past and this what was happening with Sam…her heart was in immense pain she felt no one cares where she was and that hurt bad….Neil he seemed to have forgotten her…..even her parents….aren’t they worried??? Sam’s mind was pleading..her POV ‘’I know I broke their heart…and I am sorry…but why can’t they forgive…Please Mom your Sam needs you….I can’t reach …why I can’t feel them around…..I want to hear them….want them to tell me that everything will be fine….I am scared…I can’t see a thing…its all dark….I don’t know where I am and for how long I have been here….I am stuck and all I have as a solace is my beautiful and lovely past….’’ Sam’s mind takes her back to a sweet memory ….She was 5 years old and came back home all grumpy….her Mom smiled,; ‘’Why is my doll so sad’’

Sam pouted….’’Mom…my school name is Samaira.. and home name is Sam….and when teacher calls by my school name…I answer her….but this Rini is so stupid…teacher kept calling her name Radhika but she did not respond….everyone was teasing me …telling me that my sister is dumb….its so insulting’’

Sam’s Mom let out a laugh and pulled her in a hug but she was still angry….looking angrily at her twin…. Rini…and Rini…well she was busy licking chocolate off her fingers least bothered ….and slowly everyone started calling her Rini she was officially Rini Khanna…Radhika was just on papers a name known only to family

Rini was Sam’s best friend sister…Sam wanted to say sorry to her too …Sam wasn’t there when her Rini was in pain….Rini smiled because Sam was happy…she kept hiding her tears….she shared Sam’s smiles , sorrow….her happiness her achievements…even if no one is looking Sam’s heart knew Rini must be looking for her…she won’t give up on her…they were together even before they opened their eyes into the world…. ….Sam was 5 minutes elder to her…they were twins…yet different …Radhika looked exactly like her dad and Samira was the replica of her Mom…but they had one thing in common….brown eyes…. being opposite was their strength….Radhika was strong …Samaira emotional…Samrat would always say that Rini (radhika) would be a big entrepreneur…she had all in her…

Sam soul cried recalling their fight…Sam had called Radhika to a restaurant to let her meet Neil….but as soon as Radhika saw him her expression changed even Neil was little uncomfortable towards her…Radhika just exchanged greetings and left…she was very rude to Neil… Sam reached home…and questioned her; ‘’Why Rini….why were you so rude…’’

Radhika just kept herself busy…without turning back she replied; ‘’Sam…he is not good for you….I don’t get good vibes from him’’

Sam was furious he could never take anything negative on Neil…; ‘’Rini….I know him for 10 yrs…how can you judge him in a day’’

Rini turned around all furious; ‘’Are you kidding me 10 yrs….you never told me about him Sam….Oh now I get it your stupid email friend…and he is the one you used to miss your classes for???…Sam Dad won’t agree’’

Sam turned her eyes away… she was guilty of hiding something big; ‘’I…I wanted to understand my feelings for him’’

Radhika replied sarcastically; ‘’And you made a Nobel discovery that you love that trash more than your family’’ Sam started crying…Rdhika was never so rude with Sam….she was a short tempered girl…but not with her…..Sam spoke sobbing vigorously… ; ‘’I will die without him….’’

Radhika kept quite Sam could hear her anger in her haggard breathing….she spoke after sometime; ‘’Fine Sam…but don’t take a stupid decision…when time is right we will talk to Mom and dad…but I should know all….before you make a move’’ She turned away and stood looking out of the window…

Sam smiled…and hugged her from behind; ‘’Its just that you love me so much that you will never find a any guy suitable for me….he is good….can you trust me please Rini’’

Rdhika turned around and hugged am; ‘’Fine Sam…anything for you….but if you are in trouble I should be the first one you will call….do we have a deal’’ Sam squealed and jumped on her…Radhika could do anything which would make Sam happy….Sam missed her sister with every beat …

Paradise View –Radhika’s Bungalow

Another sleepless night…and Radhika’s morning started with a headache…Sam’s one decision compromised their family’s happiness…Neil… she left her family her parents for him…Sam was so madly in love with him that she turned deaf to everyone…can’t blame her completely …that jerk was at fault….

Radhika recalled how 3 yrs back Sam’s call shook her…Radhika was never so scared….she was in Singapore…attending a meeting for her Dad….after the meeting when she stepped out….there were so many calls from Sam …Radhika panicked and called her….she was crying…her breathless sobs and hiccups stopped Radhika’s heart…She tried to calming Sam; ‘’Sam…baby calm down…what’s wrong….tell me …I will come there right away’’

But in reply she got Sam’s sobs…Sam finally spoke between her sobs; ‘’Rini….he broke my heart….he said I am a sl*t….Rini it hurts bad…everything is finished….I walked out of his house….I…’’’She broke down completely

Radhika composed herself; ‘’Sam you need to calm down…its late…go back now…I will take first flight to Mumbai….Sam…………’’ But before Radhika could complete a shiver ran down her spine…Sam was not on call….the line went dead…she dialled back…but her no. was out of reach….. ….

The Alarm brought Radhika back to present …Her POV ‘I forgave you for what you did with me ….I won’t forgive you for hurting Sam Neil ….I will take back everything she gave you….will ruin you bad.…’ Radhika looked at the basin mirror infront of her…she looked horrible…her face clearly showcased the dried Tears…symbol of her agony … pain…. she hated being weak….Radhika turned the shower on…to let the cold water wash away her tears with all the emotions visible on her face…

‘’Morning Rini’’…. Snehal spoke from behind while Radhika was preparing her coffee….Radhika smiled she knew Snehal must be troubled about something….because…it was Sunday….and Radhika had given strict instructions to her staff about no work on Sundays… ‘’What wakes you up early Snehal’’

Snehal walked and stood next to her; ‘’Rini….you remember that director…Ashutosh Kumar…he had been targeting you for long now….he doesn’t even miss a single chance….yesterday it was the Premier of his movie…he indirectly passed comments about you and your personality…Rini answer him… please’’

Radhika sighed…. ‘’Personality ???….I guess it was something about my character…right’’ Snehal fidgeted uncomfortably…Radhika smiled; ‘’Fine…what is his new movie about’’

Snehal; ‘’ Women empowerment By name AshtBhuji (one with 8 arms)…but Why’’

Radhika smirked… turned around and looked at Snehal….; ‘’Well then… we will show him some women power…what is the name of the girl he is rumoured to have an affair with….set a meeting up with her ‘’

Snehal scrunched her nose; ‘’Shruti….a B grade actress….but Why?’’

Radhika…lifted her cup and patted Snehal’s cheek; ‘’because I think …its time luck shines one her’’ SHe walked passed Snehal and called an old friend he was a director in Marathi movies….he answered soon…. ‘’Sachin….I have a recommendation ….she is a good actress….but unlucky….you have been searching a new face launch her…she has worked in some B grade movies…but she has the metal…you won’t be disappointed…’’

Sachin chuckled; ‘’I trust you Radhika…just send me the details I will sign her…’’ He paused and then spoke; ‘’Radhika you have a beautiful heart….’’ Radhika smiled ; ‘’No Sachin I am doing what I feel is right’’ Radhika hung up … turned and found Snehal smiling at her all emotional; ‘’What???’’

Snehal; ‘’The old Rini is still alive somewhere…I heard her’’

Radhika kept looking into her eyes and broke into a roaring laughter….leaving Snehal confused … Radhika controlled myself and spoke; ‘’Snehal….what I said to Sachin was just a show….common baby we are a part of showbiz…and we all are good at acting….’’

Snehal’s face fell…she looked down…Radhika went close to her and whispered; ‘’Don’t build a hope….your Rini died long back…. Snehal retreated …she had pain in her eyes….she turned and walked to the door but then halted ; ‘’ No Ma’am… my Rini is still alive…..I see her everyday….and I have made a promise to myself I won’t let her go…..& Rini…I promise you something today ….I won’t let this darkness engulf you completely…I will stand in between this darkness and you…even if you hate me….have a great day’’

Radhika kept staring at her disappearing form….Snehal was stubborn….but only one who trusted her more than anyone did …and Radhika loved her…but the Rini she was looking for was killed by Neil ….

Thailand

ARjun had a tired month….his 15 days outdoor shoot in Thailand was completed yesterday…he just wanted to go back to Mumbai immediately…. But Nivi wanted to look around…he was irritated….she had been to Thailand n no of times…with her friends or alone…yet she wanted to look around…Arjun understood…she wanted him to shop for her…he obliged…money was cheap cost for peace he wanted….Arjun gave his card to her…Nivi squealed and hugged him…she was no more interested in his company she feigned her worry; ‘’Oh Darling I know you must be tired shooting day and night…don’t you worry ….I will go alone and will be back…Miss me’’ …Arjun got a cab arranged for her and she happily left ….leaving Arjun alone with his silence…he wanted to like her …but he couldn’t she was beautiful… well physically yes…but ARjun craved for something else…he wanted a girl who had the ability to set his heart on fire…

Arjun took a warm bath changed into a track pant and buried his body in the comfortable sheets of the hotel bed….but couldn’t sleep…he got up and decided to write….but hisbuzzing phone distracted him…it was Gupta his manger…Arjun answered ; ‘’How are you Uncle’’

Mr. Gupta; ‘’Good Arjun….just tune in to any news channel….there has been a big scandal’’

Arjun disconnected…and Switched on his laptop and tuned in….there was only one news flash on every channel ‘Ashutosh Kumar’s lies busted…’’

‘Man of double standards….caught between his own web of lies’

‘Producer/Director of women empowerment movie turns out to be a molester’

‘How safe is Bollywood for strugglers with no godfathers’ ….

These lines made Arjun curious…he scrolled for more details…and details left him surprised….a struggling B grade actress handed police a proof of Ashutosh harassing her…she recorded her ordeal after months of s*xual exploitation ..the clip showed director forcing himself on her after promising and threatening her…police had to filed a complaint against the Big shot director in the pressure of women welfare organisations and roaring media….many actress refused to work with him any further…showing their support towards feminism …Arjun smiled…his POV ‘’this gets better and better…till yesterday…all were leaning happily on him…and now everyone trying to hog the lime light…Poor Ashutosh…’’

He leaned on the bed smiling on the media Circus…Arjun had recently refused one of his scripts….thanks to his stars…he dialled Gupta back…Gupta answered immediately as if he was expecting Arjun’s call; ‘’Yes Arjun…’’

Arjun smiled and said; ‘’I mean how uncle…if she was going through all this for months…why couldn’t she do this before…and according to insiders she was like a second wife to him…he took care of all her expenses’’

Gupta chuckled; ‘’Son…if you believe the gossips Shruti had been signed as a leading lady for 3 movies with a top notch Marathi director…and she had a strong reference…guess who’’

Arjun frowned and thought for a moment; ‘’Holy Shit! Radhika…..Ashutosh was talking nonsense about her after she insulted him in her office…Wow ! I am impressed…she nailed her enemy bad…without even coming in the picture….’’

Gupta let out a sigh; ‘’ This is why I want her to work with us….she is good …very good….and worst part she knows that very well…in 30 yrs of my career I haven’t met a girl as strong as her…’’

Gupta ji fanned Arjun’s interest in this female…he had a sudden desire to meet her once…tiredness sleep..boredom everything left him in a second…he spoke after a pause; ‘’Uncle do whatever you can ….I need to meet her once’’ Gupta sounded delighted and disconnected…

Arjun left his bed and walked to the window overlooking the pool area….he was smiling looking into the vacant space…he had met many strong and stubborn females…but this one intrigued him so much….she wasn’t like those limelight hogging media females…who would deck themselves up more than an actress …pout at the camera…post stingy and meaningless one lines on their social media account…She did nothing like them…well she doesn’t have to…her actions were so loud…this why she ruled the entertainment section…she was being invited to every party …but she attended none she was mysterious……Arjun had a big fan following…but today he had become her fan…without even his knowledge his lips whispered her name ‘Radhika…’

Mumbai – Neil ‘s pent house

All the channels were flashing news about Ashutosh….Neil thought ‘whatever happened was Ashutosh’s stupidity….if he was snooping around with this female…he should never have met her at her place…Damm him… Neil had recently signed his movie and had blocked complete 2 months …He delayed another project for that…which finally went to Arjun’…

Neil cursed his fate and now his line and mobile phones were ringing continously…these were hungry reporters dying to know his view on it….Neil growled at his manager ; ‘’Idiots…what views should I give to these reporters about an irresponsible man screwing a back stabbing female…but I have too…I recently praised him in a press conference calling him a respectful man… praising his current movie about women empowerment….I claimed foolishly to know him well personally… having family ties with him…and now…I have to prepare myself for the stinging queries of the reporters waiting to be shot at me…’’

His Manger Niharika spoke after a break; ‘’Neil…can you brief me on your statement’’

Neil pulled his hair…and turned to Niharika; ‘’I pay you to handle this kind of chaos…and you are asking me??? …Get this sorted and no one disturbs me’’

Neil missed Sam…she was so good in handling all this…infact good in everything…he had never seen a single line of worry on her face…whenever he would be worried…she would hug him…peck his forehead and assure him lovingly; ‘’Leave it on me Neil…I will handle it…you just relax’’

Neil was so balanced with her…and so incomplete without her….he had a habit of doing things impulsively…without thinking….years back he did something to Rini Khanna which he regretted after he got to know she was Sam’s twin….the girl emitted fire…her hatred was so evident….Neil was scared when she walked out of restaurant without talking to him…he feared of losing Sam …he stole Rini’s no. form Sam’s phone…and called her once Sam left for home…He knew Rini would tell Sam everything and Sam will not forgive me… She answered in a minute…he started without a break; ‘’Rini don’t disconnect….hear me out…I love Sam…I really do…and I am sorry for what I did to you…I meant no harm’’

Radhika (Rini ) laughed sarcastically; ‘’Oh Dear…off course you meant no harm….you just meant money…you swine’’

Neil closed his eyes; ‘’Rini….Sam won’t survive without me…please don’t bring our matter into my love life’’

Next what he heard..shook him from within…Rini(Radhika) spat venomously; ‘’Dog!!! …Don’t tell me what my sister can survive and what she can’t ….I have enough brain to understand that…but hear me out loud and clear….Sam is my life…you hurt her I will burn you to ashes….that was nothing what you saw a year back…I am capable of ruining you bad….and Sam won’t be able to stop me…remember Neil…whenever you see trouble brewing all around you…by default believe it to be me’’

Neil’s buzzing phone brought him out of past….he still couldn’t forget her last words….she sounded dangerous…she was…Rini Khanna…Samrat and Rakhi Khanna’s daughter a shrewd business woman…her dad started training her once she was 15…Sam told him about her…she was better than her father…Neil threw his phone in the corner and walked inside his bedroom…instructing the servants not be disturbed…he threw his body over the stomach on his kind size bed…his eyes were glued to Sam’s pic on the side table… she was his solace…right now he just wanted to wrap his tired body around her soft one and inhale her scent..…he recalled how.he would tickle her in a maddening way to hear those jingles of laughter Neil smiled…and then lost it….every time he thought about Sam…Rini crossed his mind….he had a doubt That Rini was the reason he wasn’t able to reach Sam…and he was right.

Neil closed his eyes and opened them after a minute…infront of him was the most beloved face of his life …Sam…she smiled at him…Neil opened his mouth and she kept her finger on his lips; ‘’Hush my love…you look worried….you need to rest’’ Sam moved closed and wrapped her soft arms around him…Neil buried his face in her neck….he held her possessively…inhaling her scent… ‘’Sam why did you leave me….I am so alone’’

Sam; ‘’I can never leave you….I am in your heart…close your eyes and you will find me …sleep Neil…please’’ Neil relaxed and slumber took over him….but when he woke up…he was alone….Neil closed his eyes and tears started streaming down… ‘’I am sorry…please come back’’

Paradise View

Radhika watched the news sitting on king Chair inside her office …she had a smirk on her lips….it was live telecast….Ashustosh was being arrested he was hiding his face behind the palms…some female organisations threw some black ink on his face….there were actors…local people…activists all discussing about the women issue….Radhika smiled she looked at Snehal; ‘’Looks like these news guys got the fodder for next 2-3 days…now they will just go on and on with the discussions’’

Snehal; ‘’That’s there bread and butter….not everyone can be you’’

Radhika got up and handed Snehal an envelope; ‘’Few ladies will be visiting in an hour give this to them’’

Snehal checked it had money…good amount of money; ‘’What is this for?’’

Radhika; ‘’For blackening Ashutosh’s face…hitting him with slippers…throwing ink…and may be more’’

Snehal gaped at Radhika all shocked….Radhika smiled turned around and left the room…Snehal kept staring at the TV screen still flashing Ashutosh’s news….her POV; ‘Sam ….I need you to stop Rini…please come back before its late’
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Love; ‘’I think I left a soft knock on a Arjun’s heart’’

Revenge; ‘’No use….I possess Radhika’s heart’…she won’t let you in’’

Love; ‘’Oh she will…let fire meet water’’

Revenge laughed; ‘’and they both perish into vapours’’

Love; ‘’they will perish…..but into each other’’

Next Sam’s whereabouts

84 comments

  1. shreya

    Radz tough woman yaar ……..Arjun so calm nature ……so cute ……..radz n Sam sis …….wow ……..it just attracting ………plz. be soon yaar with mmz and cw ………I want to ask u something wat made u to turn into writer ???? U r inspiration n all??? Love u stay blessed

    • Gauri

      |Author

      thanks a ton Shreya 🙂 glad you liked it 🙂 writing was my hobby since 7 ….my inspiration….a frnd of mine….who taught me to do what I love … 🙂 and here I am 🙂 love u

  2. Manolove

    |Registered Member

    This was brilliant… Friend wt a plot and perfect screen play…

    I am just cross checking if I am reading a ff or a novel by great author…

    Truly u awestruck me and my mind has stopped working…

    One small request please say when is Ur next post… for both mmz and cross roads..

    Brilliant feel like hugging u😍😍😍😍😍

  3. Chandana

    Oh Gauri…. this is just fabulous…Neil is the reason for all their agonies??? Radhika ops Rini is slowly tightening his screws…!? But one thing is Radhika’s solace is Around…Oh this is superbly written…tc n post soon😃

  4. Brin

    |Registered Member

    Outstanding episode, Neil is the reason Radhika is in revenge mood, ooohhh this is getting good, I am hooked, and need to know what Neil did to Radhika, eagerly waiting for the next update, Gauri you nail it, well done. 🙂

  5. Jewel

    |Registered Member

    I can’t believe, radhika is deep inside the darkness. Waiting for Arjun to come to her life. Meeting of fire to water. And they eat the darkness together to reach to the light…. Just opposite to mmz serial…. And Neil he loves Sam this much and why he broke up with her…. Loved the characters and the story very much….. Waiting for the next

  6. Dhara

    You nailed it dear
    I was wondering where is Sam? But the end you mentioned it in precap.
    Poor Arjun. I have a soft corner for this Arjun 😉😉😉

    I am wondering what happen between radhika and Neil?

    Let’s see how story unfolds

    Great going

    • Gauri

      |Author

      thanx Dhara….one small clue….just read sam’s part again u will get a clue 😉😉😉😉 stay blessed ❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤

  7. Sammy

    |Registered Member

    that was so awesoome ..i loved it …perfect .first ff in which radhika and Neil are enemy ..i mean amazing di …superb ..i am still lacking words ..you rocked

  8. KK

    This is going amazing dear…I mean amazing…👌👌👍👌👍👍👍arjun such sweet…opposite of radhika…it will be very interesting to be witness their love story…am eagerly waiting on next one already….😃😃thank you for such wonderful update….

  9. Tara

    |Registered Member

    u knw what.. this page has got one of the finest writers…
    m so haapy that i m able to read all these ffs..
    loved ur ff tooo
    nd love u more…

  10. Sathya

    |Registered Member

    An APPLAUDABLE episode it is. My dear… Gauri…. You are a VIRTUOSO… Who is perfect in every step. I remember one quote… “WRITING IS THE PAINTING OF THE VOICE” and yes it is true after reading this episode I felt YOUR WRITING IS THE PAINTING OF YOUR VOICE, YOUR EMOTIONS, YOUR FEELINGS AND WHAT U WANT TO CONVEY TO THE WORLD “…. You are succeeded in your attempt. A very well done for this brilliant knock off… M keeping my fingers crossed that I want this crossroads to cross the records which already set by your DPO and I know u will beat your own records. Keep rocking the floor dear. Love u lots 😘😍😘😘

    • Gauri

      |Author

      OMG Sathya ☺ since you hve written such beautiful words pls suggest some to me tooo…..as i am out of it after reading your comment….thanx Sathya for being such an amazing friend love u😍😍😍😍😍💕💕💕💕💕💕

  11. manha

    Gauri no words to say. A complete change of attitudes and personalities. Feel fresh reading it. All their lives connected to each other. The showbiz was so gud. Ufff. Breathtaking writing and the weight of their past and present their problems, their decisions. Everything was so gud. Just amazing. it is one of the finest stories. Gauri you can keep this script with you and im sure it will be hit if you have a movie out of this story. Im not just saying This. It is cent percent true. Love you a lot. Waiting fof the next one.

    • Gauri

      |Author

      Manha ….thanx ….wish some one likes this as a script ….loads of love ❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤ all thses hearts for u ☺

  12. Dipika

    |Registered Member

    Gauri darling through i have read it as soon as i published on watty still i reread it here…so u can imagine how mad i am about ur writing…. You surely possess this magic of writing…every time i read ur stories i bowled over it n mesmerized…. Each n every sentence have meaning n deep essence of life…i m really lucky to read it…here arjun is kind one n rads is aggressive… She is all wrapped herself in revenge thing..Neil a top star still having no happiness… Sam…her fate betrayed her…m sooo Eger for this blockbuster story of showbiz industry… Next one jaldi jaldi….meri pyari gauri…love u babe.. Muhha..tc

    • Gauri

      |Author

      Thanks Dipu 🙂 rads is driven by revenge and she will be be growing crazy day by day 🙂 and she will drive all people crazy…. thanks for your lovely words and support ❤❤❤❤❤ love u stay blessed ☺☺☺☺☺☺

  13. S.v

    |Registered Member

    Omg omg omg omg I lojoved radhika sru saluted her a woman of all powers sloo much bravery wow wish I possess all those qualities of rads have and she does everything for her sam. Neil was a comedy piece today when he shouted what should I need to speak lol and what stupid he did so that rini turned to be furious radhika ?? I loved when radhika did everything with out showing her face loved it true guts was shown but she is having some grudge over arjun right ?? What is that didi ?? Arjun im really able to relate arjun soo much coz he is longing for a true love and nivi is soo not right to him. Wish his curiosity turns as the way all of us desires lol I lived the name rini but want a nick name for arjun as well u know me na di rhats why and sam she is soo fragile for her rini snehal a girl whom rini trusts I love snehal too. Neil I felt sorry when he missed his sammy but what stupidity he did ??

    Im sorry didi for not being first u know me how possessive I am when it comes to my didi and her ff .di next time I will be the first but tell me when is the next part lol sooo crazy of this ff and the last words woo so true by love when revenge said both will perish for which love said yes they will perish with into each other awww such a beautiful words.

    • Gauri

      |Author

      thax my cutie pie first a big hug 💁💁💁 and all flying kisses…. now rads has no grudge on Arjun…but she wont be easy for him tooo….she will drive him nuts and he will fall deep….but her intentions are hidden….she will use him…..wait for more …happy weekend stay blessed ❤❤❤😌😌😌😌😌

  14. Aadia

    |Registered Member

    Di….i don’t know how to keep patience now What have Neil done?this part is magnificent as you perfectly penned it..how differently you portrayed Rads from a bunny type to a stubborn one..Again I want to call you as a girl of letters.. Love you di…may god always bless you to nourish your creativity.. Love you di..☺☺😊

  15. Sweetie

    |Registered Member

    Di,mai kya bolu bataoo..I stood astounded after reading the darkness that’s brewing around Radhika..OMG!!She is shrewd,wicked and witty..I like these kind of women.. 🙂 Arjun got a soft corner for Radhika,well well,then he’s got a tough road ahead.. 😀 Neil and Radhika-Enemies from a long time;and Radhika is definitely keeping her word of destroying him..Sam is a sensitive girl,hmm cool.. 🙂 On the whole,it’s a blockbuster again.. 🙂 Love you loads and take care.. 🙂

    • Gauri

      |Author

      thanx Sweetie …you r actually sugar candy…yes arjun will reallly have to work hard….. loads of love big hug for you and happy weekend💕💕💕💕💕💕😍😍😍

  16. Jessie

    |Registered Member

    I just loved Radz..!! Am spellbound reading her characteristics.. it was oly Radhika in my mind throughout d chappy though it revolved around everyone.. n next is snehal..wish someone should be luckiest to have a prsn like her around. Mind blowing twist in d form of Neil! And each n every word of Rads 2 neil in tat phone convo..powerful! Especially d last one! Now she will definitely be with Arjun for pushing Neil down..I guess.so. I just admired the words n sentences complementing Rads character.!! One move to show Radz brilliance,enough 2 make Arjun fall 4 her n Neil 2 remember her threat…tats awesome! I turned as a jabra fan of crossroads in 2nd chappy itself.. TC n love u loads…
    Not 2 forget.. love n revenge.. ah..vapours..wondered wat after tat.. perish..but into each other!! Very thoughtful. How do u write this mesmerizing???! Stay happy!!

    • Gauri

      |Author

      thanx Jessie ☺u will love her maddness in coming chapters …..arjun will fall deep for her…. thanx again for such beautiful words ❤❤❤❤❤ love u ☺stay blessed 😍

  17. Aasthu

    |Registered Member

    simply amazing !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I loved it very much…….love this new bold fearless Radhika……….do update soooooon di………..

  18. priya k

    Awesome..outstanding..wat not..this of Radhika getting me on nerves..Neil nd Radhika r enemies..Sam was missing..these many mysteries..tough to handle..this crossroads will definitely make me mad at it…

  19. nitu

    di i am speechless after reading tis
    literally i am in short of words to praise ur story
    hatsoff to u di tis is the only ting i can say
    luv u di

  20. Roma

    Mind blowing, outstanding, wowwww lovely, marvellous episode. …it is very awesoooooome. …I’m loving this story very very veryyyyyyy muchhhhhh. ….you poured your heart out here. ..the way you narrating rads, sam, arjun n Neil’s characters in this story, it’s totally different from your other stories. …here I see more intense of you…very real n true face of society n ppl you presenting here….the dark truth n emotions of humans…the feelings of sam n flashback of sam n rads was really very heart touching….the true friendship bond between 2 twin sisters n trust was remarkable. ….what neil did to rads..it’s mystery….but how rads replied to neil for his act, amazed me….her hatred n anger clearly shown for neil….no doubt rads is in command here with all the authority. ..she taught very good lesson to ashutosh for insulting her….neil still remembers rads n regrets of his acts n losing Sam’s love….arjun is desperate to meet rads once…..also Sam very well knows that rads is her only solace….wowwww awesome awesoooooome awesoooooome. …..this story is really outstanding n rads role is very intriguing. ….I’m totally immersed into it…totally addicted to Youuuuuuuuu and Your stories. ..it’s my life line my dearrrrr. …I can’t live without it….n I can’t even find proper words to describe my feelings after reading this update. ..u touched my heart very deeply with your flawless talent…no wonder when asked i tell instantly that you r my favorite…no doubt there. …u r the best ….my lovely sweeeeeetheart darling gauriiiiiiiiiiiii you have a very special place in my heart and that is very precious to me…..just be like this always my dearrrrr….keep it up honeyyy. …eagerly waiting for the next episode, love you loads. muaaaaahhhhhh Bear hug my sweeeeeetheart 🙂 ♡♡♡ 😉 take care

    • Gauri

      |Author

      Thanks Roma 🙂 my lovely frind….OMG dont say u cant live without….I will keep writing 🙂 thanks for the amazing support darling stayblessed loads of love❤❤❤❤❤❤❤

  21. Meen

    |Registered Member

    simply amazing….im short of words right now………….im sure soon arjun’s love will overpower radhika’s hatred…..waiting for d day…….& neil….what to say abt him……..i love him so much….i know he will be again a show stealer in this ff of urs….& sam…..she will melt hearts by her love….

  22. Alice

    This was more than amazing. Loved the storyline. This is completely different and very very interesting. I liked this combination strong Radhika and emotional Arjun.update soon.
    love u tc

  23. Rossy

    |Registered Member

    Alice in wonder land…why god choose me to give exams always I don’t know…i think I will give those crazy exams till my death..lol…apart from that this is something very intrigued…so many suspense…rads in revenge mood …awesome…i m always on my toe when a girl took the step what boys think impossible…its crunchy like roasted almond…my fav…ohk dear..see u soon…bye bye.if u have time can u read mmz on mars…actually m waiting ur views always..greedy na…can’t help it

  24. Gianna

    |Registered Member

    Oh Gauri this is more than good more than amazing, I had my eyes glued on each word, felt chills while reading this. Girl am your fan, there is no one part that I can point out as the best one, the whole chapter was great. GBU my dear, love u so much 😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘

  25. shankari

    Again u amazed me … I really wanted a women to be as strong as radhika…i mean in a story and u came up with tat kind of women… This line “she wanst lk those limelight hogging media women…” this is wat makes u a very good writer and the best part is u know it already. She is as strong as koonthavi (raja raja cholan’s elder sister) in ponniyen selvan…sv & sathya would know it… U hav created a character so strong tat it wil live in reader’s heart for yrs and everyone admire her … And last few lines abt love & revenge – u nailed it. And who do u mean is fire & Water?? Though i am busy with my exams & Schedule i wait for ur update. U r amazing…

    • Gauri

      |Author

      Thanks Shankari 😀 fire is Radhika and water is Arjun…..there willl be lot of steam…. all the best for exams 🙂 stay blessed 🙂 love u

  26. KK

    Hello dears…Can someone please tell me what is thst FF name where neil is very big shot and deeply in love with sam…and his bff is radhika. Also niel does not drink with anyone but sam….at yhe end od the episode he misses both..
    please please friends tell mr the name onpf the ff. I appreciated.

  27. jiya

    I came across this ff today and it was one of the most nicely written ffs I have ever read at tu. I loved the balance of emotions here plus the last convo of love and revenge was like cherry on the cake especially the line about water and fire.I dont get much time to read all these ffs here but ur work made me to comment…bye for now and keep updating such asum chaps☺☺

  28. sravya

    wow yaar amazing one. how could you do this.sooo interesting.I can’t bear I want Ardhika’s face off.I began to love nesam love story more than before.please update the next one early

  29. _Ritu

    |Registered Member

    Wow Gauri….dear it was so amazing…. Gave me Goosebumps. 🙂 really a different nd interesting story… 🙂 Rads a shrewd entrepreneur here… Wow…loved every character here 🙂 bt what’s the problem between RaNeil nd NeSam???? All curious to know what will happen nxt…post soon…loads of love. 🙂

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