Manmarziyan -Crossroads -Chapter 14

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Chapter 14 -The Cloud with Silver Lining

LONDON

Radhika woke up somewhere around dawn…she checked the time it was 6:00 AM….she tried moving but a strong arm pulled her close…Arjun slept with his front attached to Radhika’s back…she caressed his arm over her waist..Radhika eyes turned to the glass door opening into the balcony…the darkness had started fading as the tiny rays were piercing the sky…Radhika blinked….it was snowing ….she smiled…she was happy…very happy…somewhere the darkness that covered her heart was leaving…Radhika turned her face towards Arjun…he was still in a deep slumber ….he looked adorable…she watched him…and gently removed the dark lock of hair from his forehead….Radhika lisped his name ‘Arjun’ it gave her a sense of belonging….yes Arjun was right…he belonged to her as she to him….whenever he was around…Rini would come alive pushing the violent Radhika somewhere back…with him she was calm….there was no need for her to take sleeping pills or pain killers…Radhika smiled watching Arjun..she pecked his cheek….he lifted his arm and scratched his cheek …again looped it around Radhika’s waist…Radhika smiled she lifted her torso up and pecked his nose…Arjun squinted and scratched his nose.. Radhika utilized the time and quickly moved on the back of Arjun…Arjun extended his arm to loop it around Radhika…she found no one….without opening his eyes he stretched it more to get a grip on her…but nothing…Radhika giggle but covered her mouth ….Arjun understood..he pretended going back to sleep…Radhika after a minute peeped over his shoulder to check if he was sleeping….Arjun was waiting he caught hold of her waist turning around and brought her below him…locking her arms above her head…Radhika squealed then pouted; ”you cheated”

Arjun smiled; ”Really and who was troubling the sleeping tiger”

Radhika gave a confused look; ”who is a Tiger here… I can only see a muscular Rabbit???”

Arjun smirked tighten his grip on her wrists…he leaned close to her face; ”Muscular Rabbit ???…fine honey …let this Rabbit show you some of his skills” Arjun left feathery kisses from her face to neck Radhika moaned ….Arjun smiled and bit her ear lobe …she squeaked…Arjun grinned; ”Guess Tigress is too soft for rabbit’s bite”

Radhika blinked; ”was that a punishment ???”

Arjun left her wrist and dropped his body beside her pulling her on the top; ”No heiress …you don’t punish in love….its all about forgiving….when you punish your love….its you who feel the pain more…”

Radhika absorbed his words…she kept her head on his chest …Arjun wrapped his arms around her….Radhika’s POV; ”Yes he is right…OMG! what have I done…my Sam is going through all the pain I am inflicting on Neil….how blind I have been…Sam still loves Neil and just for me Sam is hurting Neil and in turn she is dying every minute’…Radhika bit her finger nails ; ”Sam is hurting herself”

Arjun; ”Yes she is …the way she loved Neil…she will not love anyone ….its not just Sam…even Neil loves her with all his madness….I have seen how they adored each other….”

Radhika; ”then why did he doubt her”

Arjun; ”Love makes you insecure….and Neil’s anger is his biggest enemy”

Radhika; ”Arjun I want to know all….why were you and Sam linked…where it started ….”

Arjun; ”I will tell you all….” Radhika hugged him tight closing her eyes….she wanted to correct all that went wrong….and she was going to start with Alex.”

Mumbai Paradise View

Sam had asked Snehal to get her few documents on Sterling Heights…in Radhika’s absence Sam was taking care of everything….Snehal started looking for documents in Sam’s cupboard…she recalled that Sam had asked her to search in the bottom shelf….Snehal….pulled few files out ..she picked the required one….Snehal stopped; ‘I will never get this kind of opportunity again…I need do know what Sam is hiding…may be I can sooth her pain….finish all this” Snehal then searched all the shelves…she got a box hidden deep between the clothes…Snehal opened the box and the contents in it left Snehal shocked….she quickly dialled Rakhi and updated her….Rakhi heard and directed Snehal on what should be done….

Mumbai BLING MEDIA

Sam was in her cabin…head leaned on the chair with her eyes close…but her mind was working…she was continuously pressing the stress ball…Sam knew it was Vinit who threw her off the road…Vinit worked in her team for Neil…before that he worked for Raizada productions …..Vinit was good friends with Niharika…. Niharika loved Neil…she even tried to erase Sam’s memories from Neil’s life by proving Sam’s ideas wrong….Sam opened her eyes ”Siddesh…Nivi….Niharika….you are so dead” ….she had Vinit now…it was Niharika’s turn… and then slowly she would get her hands on Raizadas. …Sam smirked…she heard a knock and Snehal walked in..Sam smiled; ”what Kiddo…you are too busy these days…we live together and I am seeing you after 2 days…looks like your boy friend is taking lot of your time”

Snehal; ”why would a budding actor date a servants daughter”

Sam; ”Say that again and I will slap you”

Snehal; ”But its true….leave me…here your files”

Sam caught Snehal’s wrist; ”Kiddo…I am your Sam…why are you hiding from me”

Snehal smiled sadly; ”That’s because you are no more my Sam …you are turning Samaira”

Sam walked to Snehal cupped her face and lifted it up; ”Kiddo I will never change for you..tell me why are you so dull”

Snehal gave up and tears started pouring from her eyes…Sam looked confused…Snehal hugged Sam; ”Sam Neil is hurting himself….he thinks you will be happy if he destroys himself….and he is doing that …in every possible way….please Sam save him and yourself”

Sam made a stern face and moved away; ”I have nothing to do with him….I don’t care he lives or die…..”

Snehal; ”Shut up Sam!!! ….whom are you trying to fool…me ….world or yourself …..do you think I am blind ….I see everything ….” Snehal turned around to leave…but then stopped; ”No wife would want her husband harmed….”

Sam jerked around; ”How did …you…know…?”

Snehal; ”I was bought up by Rakhi Khanna….and trained by media heiress Radhika Khanna… I may not be your blood….but I loved you both like sisters….you cannot hide things from me”

Sam turned her back to Snehal…she didn’t wanted to show her tears…; ”its not true…I don’t have feelings for him”

Snehal gripped the door handle; ”Sam I promised myself and badi ma…that I won’t let any of you take a wrong path and I will keep my promise…” Snehal left ….Sam watched the little girl she always cared for .. she had grown up…..Sam knew Snehal would try meeting Neil….that was dangerous….someone who want her dead..might target Snehal too…she dialed Rana; ”get Snehal a personal security ASAP”

Raizada Productions

Neil was sitting in the office of Raizada productions hearing the script ….the script writer went on and on…imitating each line with emotions…trying to prove his script worthy….Neil had not even heard a word…he was lost in his Sam….all his life no one loved him….his father loved his step siblings bit not him…reason..he never loved Neil’s mom…but Sam did..with all her heart and soul…she left everything for him…her family …her comfort…she supported him through the hardships of his career ….she was the one who made him Neil….a star

Neil took a deep breath he chided himself… ‘Sam gave me all she had…and in return I broke her heart…raised finger on her love… her character…..I deserve the worst….she wants me punished ..fair…I should be…I have been a horrible man….I destroyed Radhika….yes I never regretted that….because I needed that money for us…I was just thinking about my life with Sam…I had to move out my father’s house…or I would have died… ….I spoiled an innocent life…yes I deserve Sam’s hatred …”

Sidesh; ”So Neil…what do think of the script”

Neil looked as if woken from a deep slumber…; ”Ah Yes…its great”

Siddesh; ”Yes and it will be a blockbuster”

Neil smiled..he knew the script was junk….now he wasn’t interested…..all he wanted was to give Sam what she needed…his destruction; ” yes it will be…tell me when to start…but you know I am practically banned by media board”

Siddesh; ”That kid Radhika thinks she can rule….leave all that to me”

Neil; ”just be careful….she is no kid…she can bring the mountains down… I will send you my dates”

Neil was about to walk to out when Nivi blocked his way; ”Hi there Neil…long time no see”

Neil gave Nivi a disgusted look; ” good I didn’t see you… last time I did…it screwed my life”

Nivi just tapped her manicured fingers on Neil’s shoulder; ”Don’t cry on that b***c…she never deserved…”

Nivi was yet to complete her statement when Neil’s hand grabbed her neck ….she tried pulling his fingers off…so did the others in the room….but none could move Neil an inch from his place….he snarled; ”Listen to me very carefully….her name is Samaira…even if you roll yourself in the gold dust…you wouldn’t be 1/10 of her…so keep you filthy mouth in check…and sluts like you have no right to point fingers at others”

Neil jerked Nivi hard…she fell in the corner coughing gasping for breath….Neil gave Siddesh a warning look before walking out….he took the keys from his driver…he wanted to see Sam…he was desperate…. To hold her feel her soft skin against his rough one…there was no way he would let her go…she was his only his….

LONDON

Arjun had to shoot for his movie and Radhika drove off to Alex’s place…Alex who had been living in a castle all his life ..was living in a small 3 bedroom house….Radhika pressed the door bell….Alex’s sister answered she was shocked to find Radhika at her door…she gulped….Radhika walked in….; ”Alex”

Alex walked out …..Radhika smiled looking at him…she pulled out a set of papers; ”here your mansion papers…. that day it was a gift I had planned for you… today I am giving you back as a parting gift”

Alex; ”I don’t have enough money…..and I won’t accept it without it”

Radhika took Alex’s hand; ”I know you….you won’t keep a penny….I am not giving you a house …I am giving you memories….you have been and amazing friend Alex….i want to see you happy….take you family back to their house”

Alex’s blue eyes were wet now….he still loved her and deeply; ”promise me you accept the money” Radhika nodded….

Alex; ”Can I get one last hug….” Radhika watched him and then wrapped her arms around his neck….Alex held her close…his eyes were pouring….Radhika rubbed his back….Alex spoke faintly; ”I wish…I could erase all that….I wish I could bring you back….but I can’t and I don’t deserve you Rini….promise me….you will kill the hatred and anger in your heart…smile Rini…this is the gift I want”

Radhika; ” I will try” Alex pecked her forehead…Radhika patted his cheek….she walked off…feeling lighter better and happier…

Mumbai BLING Media

Neil barged into Bling office like a storm….the security tried stopping him but even they were hesitant in putting hands on a celebrity…Neil got into the lift punching the 10th floor…he stormed out ..the receptionist gulped…not able to think of any solution to the problem name Neil….Neil asked for Sam..the girl politely replied; ”Sir Ma’am doesn’t see anybody with an appointment”

Neil closed his eyes to calm his nerves; ”Look I really don’t want to argue…just tell her its Neil”

Receptionist was about to interrupt when Snehal spoke; ”Its fine …please come with me Neil”

Neil watched Snehal for a minute….she was Radhika’s biggest confidante….or may be even Sam’s ..he wasn’t ready to trust her…but he had no option….Snehal stood there unblinking waiting for Neil to move his steps…he did…Snehal smiled and took the lead with Neil following her…Neil stopped after entering her cabin; ”I am here for Sam and not to chit chat with you”

Snehal; ”and I am talking to you for Sam…I have no intention or urge to look at your scorned face”

Neil; ”you have so much of Rini in you”

Snehal; ”’So does Sam….and this is what you need to understand….Rini and Sam are alike…the only difference is that one loved you…and the other hates you…now if you are done with my personality anatomy …have a seat”

After patiently listening to Snehal Neil smiled; ”why are you helping me…why this sudden kindness”

Snehal leaned forward; ” Oh don’t try your luck….I will do no kindness to the man who broke my Rini and is not ashamed of it…but I can’t see Sam in pain”

Neil lowered his eyes; ”Look I am really sorry for what I did with Rini….i wanted to aplogise…but I knew she wouldn’t accept it”

Snehal frowned; ”Either you are dumb or too arrogant…when you are guilty you are suppose to repent and apologies…irrespective of the fact whether you are granted the apology or not….Rini would have forgiven you if you were sorry from your heart…which you are not…still”

Neil looked up; ”Rini never forgives…she is too proud”

Snehal banged the table; ”Not a word against her….and why do you expect her to forgive….who are you…she accepted you once in Sam’s life even when you scarred her …yet you went on being a jerk…ask yourself Neil..do you deserve this forgiveness”

Neil looked at Snehal angry eyes; ”You are too mature for your age…”

Snehal; ”And you are too stupid….to understand small things…now do as I say and don’t irk Sam…”

Neil got up and walked to Snehal he patted her cheek; ”Wish I had someone like you….as a family or a friend….then this Neil wouldn’t have been a jerk….see you kiddo”

Snehal removed his hand; ”I am kiddo only to my family…and you really have to work hard to be a part of it”

Neil smiled wide; ”fine then …how about Sis….I craved for one…since you are too young to be my mother figure…I will call you sis…” He pinched her cheek..and Snehal slapped his hand…. Neil laughed…he turned around and left..Snehal rubbed her cheek; ‘Why am I kiddo to all…God I want to grow up’ Snehal didn’t knew that Neil was serious ….he never formed bonds and relations just for words…he spoke only if he meant it with heart

Snehal’s phone beeped…it was Gaurav an upcoming young actor…she just closed her eyes and deleted the message…she was done….Vinit used her and Gaurav mocked her in his drunken state for being servant…. now he was apologizing ..realizing what Radhika could do to him…Snehal blocked his no… she knew it was just temporary before he would try reaching her from a different no. …but for now…she had to do something for the twins…whom she loved more than her life.

Neil’s Office

Niharika was busy blocking Neil’s date for the upcoming shoots….it was an outdoor schedule ..she was bubbling as she was accompanying Neil out of the country….and above all he had really been sweet with her…she had decided to make him hers once for all…and this outdoor schedule was the right chance….her phone beeped; ”Hi there”
Caller; ”you sound too happy….not good….you should have been worried since I am back….”

Niharika trembled hearing the voice; ”Sam….Hi …I am so happy you are fine”

Sam; ”How do you know I wasn’t?”

Niharika cursed her self; ”N..No I didn’t mean that….you just vanished …so thought….”

Sam; ”That Sam would have died….sorry to say I didn’t ‘….was taking a time off….to know who wanted me dead…you know what you should never eye things which aren’t yours…Niharika watch your back….who knows you might just vanish into the thin air…difference is like I did….I returned….you won’t” Sam disconnected smiling…..she turned her chair around to find a grinning Snehal ….Snehal gave Sam a thumbs up

Niharika’s feet gave up…she crashed on the floor….someone from her team offered her water…she took it with trembling hands…..she gulped the whole glass..with maximum spilling out…her breathing was hard…she asked her team member to drop her home..as she wasn’t well
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Love fanning itself; ”So someone was too sure of capturing Radhika’s heart…what now red face”

Hate with anger ; ”Red face …am I ???No I have colors I don’t show…I have venom you don’t know….some places you can’t reach….I lie there buried deep… ”

Love smiled; ”There is no place..I don’t reside…there is no corner for you to hide… I am on to finish you off…. watch your back…this will be rough…”

66 comments

  1. Aasthu

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    superb!!!!!!!!!….Arjun sooo naughty…..ardhika was amazing…..I liked Arjun’s words….Rads-Alex really nyc…….Snehal too brilliant……she is sooo cute……SneNe convo was nyc….I loved Neil’s dialogues….Sam-Niharika…..loved it……..hate Gaurav….sad for kiddo……plzz do find sme1 really awesome for her too……..umm di how many wifes did Neil’s dad have??? do check FB………….love u and tc…………wish me good luck….it’s Christmas celeb in clg tomr and I’m there for Carol…….

  2. Aasthu

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    di wasn’t it Nivi who was engaged to Arjun??? and she has feelings for Neil??????? Snehal’s and Neil’s dialogues about both of being too mature and stupid….haha…..when’ll u be updating MMZ-MBF?????????

  3. Shree

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    wowow!! di!! omg!! muscled rabbit.. hehe.. soft tigress.. from do you come up with such terms? awwiee aww.. I still feel bad for alex though he was wrong.. neil repents.. snehal is one mini detective.. sam on the roll.. nivi haha.. niharika will hide.. snehal is kiddo? naa re.. I understand that… you still be a kid though youre older and can prove yourself.. love and hatred have bomb lines and roles.. haha…

    meeting on he run.. this is hectic.. I need a vacation to mexico which my bros are taking me too.. *pouts and huffs annoyed*..

    next one soon di.. love you loads

    • Gauri

      |Author

      Thanks a ton Shree baby 😍😍😍😍😍😍 get me something if you r going for a vacation πŸ™‚ love u merry Christmas πŸ˜€

  4. Saran

    Awesome gauri… Loved it… Ardhika scene awesome.. Wait for next… When you will update married by fate.. Am wait for that… Pls update soon… Take care..

  5. KK(Krishna)

    it was outstanding…just loved it…again no words to describe.. but one thing i misses…Neil-Sam scenes..i got very excited when Neil came to see sam….hopefully we get to see in next update…thank you so much my dear…

    • Gauri

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      Thanks Krishna πŸ™‚ Neil Sam scenes in next ….I wanted to then wanted Snehal to get little exposure too πŸ™‚ loads of love πŸ™‚

  6. Amore

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    Wow! I was waiting for Snehal’s move and u did it… Radz gonna unite NeSam now yeppiee!

    But wait.. today’s chappy gave me a feeling that arjun has no hatred towards Neil… he is worried about him actually…

    Now Neil will try to destroy himself but Sam will not let him do that…

    You know what i always liked Snehal’s character as i always felt her to be strong one and finally u showed her strong…

    Gauri you have done a fabulously amazing work… keep it up

  7. Manolove

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    This is unbelievable.. update dear my head spins in all directions..

    Neil and Sam married a? Neil already has seen nivi and after that his life was screwed a? Nivi love Arjun or she love Neil or MONEY?

    God why did u give this much of brains to gauri I am not able to wait till the next update.. ti know what happened..

    Gauri u never forget to give a spectacular update..And to awastruck me.. but today u made me to wait like a love stuck puppy for u update darling…

    Most brilliant part wt I felt was Neil and shenal scene.. now Radhika will make Sam and Neil together a?

    Is Neil done with repandances because I feel bored to see Neil always sad.. πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚

    Angry note on u always i will ask u few questions but u might miss them to answer 😩😩😩 I know suspense are not supposed to be outed but u can answer as yes or no na?????

    Love u lots and loads.. big hugs to you darling πŸ€—πŸ€—πŸ€—πŸ€—πŸ€—

    • Gauri

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      Thanks a ton Manolove πŸ™‚ Neil will shoe his repentance πŸ˜€ Snehal and Radhika will make things right for them….Nivi has more shades..you will know what and how she did πŸ™‚ o dont be angry …. will post soon πŸ™‚ stay blessed πŸ™‚ love u

  8. Brin

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    Outstanding episode, Radhika is going to get Nesam together, Snehal needs someone who will love her for who she, bring a good man for her maybe Teji hint, hint, your story is alway brillent to read, I enjoy it a lot, Gauri you nail it as always well done. πŸ™‚

    • Gauri

      |Author

      Thanks a ton Brin πŸ™‚ yup Snehal will have someone good who will love her exactly for what she is πŸ™‚ thanks for the hint πŸ™‚ stay blessed πŸ™‚

  9. Jnana

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    Outstanding…… I’m really worried about nesam here . .. Ardhika are perfect…. Snehal is an aweome sissy…. Will she accept Neils proposal of being his sister.? Will the bond between raneil get its path…? Curious….. Waiting or the next…..

  10. Farjana

    Hi gauri..amazing update… hope rini n Sam set everything right..I like Senehal character too much… a true sister n an angel.. on the whole, just love ur story so much

  11. Jessie

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    Magician…!! This is. Truly amazing….!! Muscular rabbit..!!! Super ….!! Ardhika sweet….Neil….wow..!! I am like I wanna see how he gonna prove his worth….Neil and snehal…so nice….No words to describe….Radhika and Alex…wow..!! She gives it back.and the man scores saying those…!! And Nivi…serves good…!! Snehal…! Amazing …she stole the moment….last part super…whistle…I want Sam in action…..Fantastic move…Rads turns Rini…and sam into samaira…both because of love..!! My god!! I just loved it….you are a fantastic writer…!! Loved each and every part of it…. TC…loads of love

    • Gauri

      |Author

      Thanks a ton Jessie πŸ™‚ you made my day πŸ™‚ love you sweety for being such an amazing friend πŸ™‚ stay blessed

  12. Sathya

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    My CHICA…my pet name for you from now on.. πŸ˜›

    My most favourite is “Softy Tigress with her Muscular rabbit…best and cute antics by both. Their moment is like living in heaven..they are just perfect for each other or we can say Made for each other. The quote said by Arjun is 100% true when you love someone truly you cannot think to hurt them inreturn we will get hurt by hurting them…i am completely agree with Arjun and as far as my opinion is Forgiving is the best punishment we can give them…that will hurt themselves and gives relief to us…correct na…

    Next is Rini & Alex meeting….i am really pity on Alex but not sad for him…he sowed what he reaped…at first place he shouldn’t have doubted her unless he himself face the truth…that’s the biggest and lifetime mistake he did for Rini who loved him immensely. Coz trust is the base for love…if we lose it then it is very hard to merge it…and i really appreciate Rads move to reduce her pain by forgiving him in giving his mansion back to him. It’s a very emotional and practical decision.

    And here comes my another fav is our cute Snehal..kiddoo..lol she is not kiddoo…she found something and informed to Rakhi…too good. She loves the twins to the core and they too reciprocate the love on her..which is clearly stated that love comes to anyone ..it doesn’t need any blood relations. These three truly deserved to be a soul sisters.

    Neil & Snehal confrontation is like roller goaster kind of one…first Neil doubted her, then get angry then understand her point and craving for some love on him being a family member…he adopting her as his sister…that’s so cute and atleast by now he should really repent for his deed whole heartedly..then it is acceptable for us also to get forgive from Rini and Sam.

    Sam becomes hard heart woman now..but still she loves Neil deeply..i am sure she wil hurt Neil but not allow any one to harm him..there her love is.

    Vinit, Nivi, Niharika and Siddish..i don’t have anything to say…they will soon deserve what they should be…

    So Totally it is one of the blockbuster package with all dhamkaas,….love, forgiveness, angry, guilty, realizations, repentance, craving for love, pain of losing …what are you eating? now you tell me..everytime you are asking me..this time ..i am asking you..pls tell me what are you eating…

    “IT IS AN OSTENTATIOUS, APARATOSO AND GRANDIOSE EPISODE SO FAR.”

    TE AMO CHICA….. MUAAAAHHHHHHHHHH

    ha ha ha learning new language… πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜›

    • Gauri

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      OMG I feel like winning Ms Universe Crown after reading your comment πŸ˜€ I have read this one comment of your 10 times and every time I read I smile wide πŸ˜€ thanks for making me feel so good πŸ™‚ love your Sathya for being my friend ….I feel blessed πŸ™‚ love u stay blessed

  13. Amber

    That was superbπŸ˜πŸ˜πŸ˜πŸ‘
    I really luv snehal she iz soo sweet..Gauri u r amazing.. Thats really one of my fav fictionzπŸ˜ŠπŸ˜„

  14. Rossy

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    Nivi, niharika and siddhes…u all are sooo doomed now…aaargh😠😠😈😈….these people need good punishment for making others life hell…nesam married…awww…great turn…radz will be fine soon…oooh she should be happy just for herself…go baby and make nesam one ….Arjun is good here…snehal such an adorable kid…loved Neil and snehal conversation…full on rapchik bole toh dhasu update πŸ˜πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†

    • Gauri

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      Rossy darling you are seriously a rose… making others feel better and good about themselves πŸ™‚ love you and thanks a ton darling stay blessed πŸ™‚

  15. Sulbi

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    OMG Gauri darling… what a spectacular episode? Mindblowing.. Ardhika was fantastic… Muscular Rabbit… Tigeress…hehe… Awsme and lovely… Alex gentle man… Snehal Kiddo was outstanding… Sam was back to her revenge… and waiting for Neil and Snehal bro and sis bond… lovely… total episode was rocking… i loved it to the core… love you aloads and tc…

  16. Dipika

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    Angellll i in love with you yarr.. Lol.. Don’t scared.. As person i like you soooo much… You write so from. Heart that.. You make us like alex..n make. Us hate nivi.,niharika…u wrote it like its happening in real in frnt of my eyse.. M soooo eager to knw whole. Story as in one go.. What happens to sam.. Nesam married.. How thy kill her.. N now qht will radz nxt move.. Snehal.. Kiddo

    LOl
    .. She is nomore kiddo.. N. Neil. Consider her sis.. N said as she can’t be his motherly figure.. Lol… Totally mind blowing epi… Love u lots 😍 😍 😍

    • Gauri

      |Author

      Thanks Dipu 😍😍😍😍😍😍 yup she is no more Kiddo ….she will take some brave steps for the twins and will soon have someone really sweet in her life πŸ™‚ love you waiting for written on the stars πŸ™‚ love u

  17. swedha

    Amazing chapter Gowri….neil snehal scene was so cool to read…arjun radhika scene was amazing…want to know neasm past how they broke off…..waiting for MMZ…

  18. jenny

    Wow….this was fantastic …M New here n m really overjoyed to read such story…..but y my instincts are saying that ajrun is cheating radzz …I hope it’s not true …..otherwise who would be this much sweet …anyways …fingers crossed…eagerly waiting 4 next episode ….love u ..byeee

    • Gauri

      |Author

      Thanks a ton jenny πŸ™‚ ok Arjun is not cheating Rads…. he is genuinely in love with her and is a nice guy….slowly he will show his rough side to stand for her πŸ™‚ Stay blessed πŸ™‚

  19. Aastha

    Hello Gauri di… loved this story.. I have read all …plot..characters ketch are exclusive..you portraited all different shades of four…Radz all fiery.. naughty..Sam all soft…Neil angry young man… Arjun is such a darling…Loved Snehal… Arjun ‘s love brought out Rini.. their first date..wowww !!! …their moments are lovely…Radz rightly forgave Alex…Arjun crying scared of losing her and Radz consoling him..very special…
    Sisters bond.. awesome.. together they can do anything…my fav among all..the teasing fight between love and revenge….
    This chp also… awesome…now Radz would bring Nesam together….
    anxiously waiting for story to unfold…
    Di… please do share words apart from thanking…. I know you have tight schedule but would love to read your words…. love you loads.. take care..😍😍😍😍

    • Gauri

      |Author

      Thanks a ton Aastha πŸ™‚ yes now Rads will work in bringing NeSam together πŸ™‚ and glad to see your comment πŸ™‚ so hw is your life going πŸ™‚ keep smiling loads of love πŸ™‚

  20. Jewel

    |Registered Member

    Gauri, this is superb, snehal and Neil, his words to her, really nice…. Ardhika, arjun he is really a nice person, rads understanding Sam’s condition…. Sam, nivi niharika and sidhesh, they r going to suffer a lot….. Waiting for next one….

  21. Aana

    |Registered Member

    Superb episode Di….finally feeling ki everything is in right track.. Nd radhika is also turning too rini..good.
    Wt???? Married !!! Seriously …ohh god this was something unexpected….. Feeling sad for our dear kiddo… Arjun is perfect support for radzz…nd rini did a grt job by giving back the papers of Alex house….overall kamal ka episode…
    Love u …
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