manmarziyan (crazy four)

Hey guys am new here I wanted to create story
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The story starts in Mumbai
Sunlight hit her eyes,she woke up with a smile.
Maa:radhika have u woken up…..radhika…..
Rads:coming maa…. She ran into the washroom got ready fast(she wore a red&white chudidar & left her hair & applied light make up) she ran down
Rads:sorry maa am late again
Maa:don’t tell sorry to me tell it to your cousin
Rads went into the living room
Radhika’s cousin sis Sam(she was wearing a black &white jumpsuit)was sitting with rads dadaji.
Sam:see dadaji atlast she came down
Rads:sorry Sam
Sam:I’m used to this sorry come lets go.Bye dadaji
Dadaji:wait,get me samosa’s while coming from college&ha come fast from the college,can’t wait to eat samosa.
Rads:ok dadaji.bye maa
They come out and got into a Nissan car.Sam was driving& rads was sitting beside her.They zoomed away.
Rads opened the top window on the roof of the car and stood up.the cool wind hit her head she bent her head back slowly her duppata sliped & flew away becaudse of the wind rads got down and asked Sam to stop the car
Sam:why rads what happened?
Rads:Sam my duppata flew away.
They both got down the car ran to catch the duppata

PRECAP
Entry of Arjun & neil

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Hope u all like it.Please comment & let me know how it is.It is actualy the 1st time i’m writing a story.
Pls comment

Credit to: Yuktha

17 comments

  1. Manha

    Yuktha first welcome to manmarziyan world n thank u for writing. Gud start. Hope it would be a blast and crazy.

  2. nisha

    hey my yukhta dear.

    I haven’t read ur name before dear. But really glad to see ur name with a surprise package . Woooooooooooooooooooooooooooooow.

    Welcome to manmarziyaan ka Jungle.

    In this jungle you got so many animals. Some are cute , some are naughty, some are cool, some are hotty.

    What a nice story plot . Dil lut liyaa yaar.

    Luv u. Eagerly waiting for arjun and neil entry Dono hotty ki entry another woooooooooooooooooooow.

    Luv u dear Welcome again and congrats to u for having your own house. Luv u dear.

    Always with u Keep writing keep smiling keep updating.

    Once a friend always a friend .

    A song from my side as a gift to ur house for rads and sam Fadu entry

    Hmm…. hmm….

    Ham toh bhai jaise hain, waise rahenge

    Ham toh bhai jaise hain, waise rahenge -2
    Ab koyi khush ho, ya ho khafa, ham nahin badlenge, apni adaa
    Samjhe na samjhe koyi ham yahi kahenge
    Ham toh bhai jaise hain, waise rahenge -2

    Hmm… ham dil ki shehzaadi hai, marzi ki mallika
    Haan… ham dil ki shehzaadi hai, marzi ki mallika
    Sar pe aanchal kyun rakhe, dhhalka toh dhhalka
    Ab koyi khush ho ya koyi roothhe, is baat par chaahe har baat toote
    Ham toh bhai jaise hain, waise rahenge -2

    Hamein shauq mehendi ka na shehnaai ka hai
    Ho.. hamein shauq mehendi ka na shehnaai ka hai
    Hamaare liye toh apna ghar hi bhala hai
    Sunta agar ho toh sun le kaazi, lagta nahin kabhi ham honge raazi
    Ham toh bhai jaise hain, waise rahenge -2
    Ab koyi khush ho, ya ho khafa, ham nahin badlenge apni adaa
    Samjhe na samjhe koyi ham yahi kahenge
    Ham toh bhai jaise hain, waise rahenge -2

    Aa aa ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha, oh ho ho ho ho ho …

    • Roma

      Oh my dear musical friend nisha, kya kahoo tum to bas kamaal ho…kya song chuna hai,,, mahol bana dia… love you loads my deariiiiiiieeess. …
      Tumhara liye ek gaana meri taraf se… but don’t know all the lyrics 🙁

      Naa jaane kahan se aayi hai
      Naa jaane kahan ko jaayegi
      Dewaana kise banayegi ye ladki….

      Badi chhoti hai ye mulakaat
      Bade afsos ki hai baat…Hooooo
      Kisike haath na aayegi ye ladki…

      Love you sooo much nisha….take care and be like this always…

      And yes plzzzz update your story meri jaan… eagerly waiting. ..

  3. Aru

    Hii yuktha…welcome to the manmarziyan world dear…
    Firstly,i liked ur name ..bcoz i hve a friend in this name
    ..now one more yuktha..
    And coming to the story..it wad short and sweet..pls continue

  4. zayn

    Nice story…….. Drr
    Awsome start waiting some thing really intresting. ……. Nice name…… Actually I never heard dis name……
    Lots of love and a warm hug
    And once again welcome to manmarziyan world…… Will be eagerly waiting 4 ur update

  5. Roma

    Hi yuktha dear,,, very cute intro. Loving this plot already. ..and the entry of heroes should be blasting. …plzzzz continue dear…eagerly waiting for the next episode, love you loads

  6. nisha

    Luv u roma dear . Always loving u dear.

    Loved ur song ooooooooooooooooooooooh So hot song. Suits on u too my girleeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee. Luved it dil lut liyaa.

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