Manmarziyan – Commando Khadoos….. Shot 2 (Last shot)


Hiee all here is the second or last part of the shot. Thanks a ton for all those lovely words and pls do comment your views as they are really my energy boosters. Love you all….

Enjoy the ride….

Radhika was sleeping in her room. Just a shadow entered her room. The curtains of the window were dancing with the flow of wind. Radhika who was brought back to a hill station as per her father’s instruction but she never left the house. She turned so quite always stays in her room and writes something. Her room were filled with empty books and pens. She would write, write and write……… And lock the door of the cupboard in which she kept her books. She was allowed to go out but ahe restricted herself to go anywhere and would just from his face again and again and look at that face.

The shadow saw the face of radhika. She was glittering in moon light. Her face which used to have all fun was now missing. Her face turned pale week sad but still she was beautiful. He sat on the bed and gently caressed her head and corrected her hair. She felt his presence after months and smiled in her sleep. He smiled and he found a diary which she was hugging in sleep. He tried to take that. But she was in no mood of leaving that. He pulled the diary and instead she was about to wake up. He pounced and made her sleep again as he does not want to hurt her again. She slowly wrapped her hand around him and kept her head over his heart and slept. He too hugged her he was sitting slantingly and opened the diary.

His eyes were wet when he saw what she wrote.

Arjun where r u khadoos today I saw a person who was like u and ran from my room to see u but it was not u . Why did u leave me arjun. U said u will come to me but today it is 5months 21days 5hours 35mins and 38seconds over from u left me. Pls i cannot live in this den take me away and give me my freedom. He turned the pages and saw she was totally writing everything to him. Like on a daily basis she was writing to him and she was conveying him how much she missed him.

Arjuj to sleeping radhika ; i never knew u would miss me so much radhika…….. Once after i left u i found that i too loved u and came to know that it was your mom who had set up the goons for money. I was shot and was almost dead but thanks to the forest people who saved me so that i can always be with u radhika. He left her before she woke up and he made up his mind to take care of her even if not being together.

Radhika’s father pleaded her to go out of the room and go out so that she can have some change in her mood. Radhika drove to some place and sat there in the place with a coffee on her table. She was continuously staring at something and she started from there. Suddenly someone snatched her bag and hurted her in the course of snatching the bag. She held her hand in pain and some one from behind ran to the direction of the way the thief went. After few minutes he came back and she was staring at him.
He ; radhika are u hurt ?? Show me ur hand. God deep cut. And held his fist in anger and looked at the way where the person ran away. Radhika was continuously sobbing and she was shocked to see the person who was claimed as lost maximum no more.

Radhika with tears touched his face and cheeks and his hands and her sight went to his legs.
Arjun ; what are u looking at?? Im human only see i have my legs. She giggled and hugged him. He too hugged her back and she was continuously calling his name.
Arjun ; radhika……… Radhika……….. Relax now im here …. How could u think that i will leave u ?? I promised u that i will come back to u so i came back. I always keep my promise. She was searching for words. Finally her arjun was back. She hugged him and he too hugged her back.
Radhika ; ouch arjun. He jerked and then realised she was hurt. He took her to a nearby hospital and did the treatment to her. All the time radhika did not take her eyes from him and holding his palm tight. After they came out,
Arjun ; radhika here have it….
Radhika ; what is it ??
Arjun ; movie tickets. Tomo we r going ok.
Radhika ; but how can i get out from there ??
Arjun ; tomo u will come i know how to do it …….she smiles and starts from there. She covers her wound with her dupatta and goes to her room and jumps in happiness. Just then arjun texts here.
Arjun ; repair radio im ur khadoos.
Radhika ; who is repair radio ?? U r the one who was talking nonstop and they continue their talks and she was blushing looking at the screen.

Days passed…. Ardhika were lost in their world and some how radhika’s mother came to know about that. She wanted the property but there was a legal issue that the heir cannot give the property to other’s in the name of power and once married then she will have the full access to the money and the guardian will not allowed to spend even a penny.
She does not want to loose a penny so she decided to get the property transferred in her name for which after many discussions they came to know that the owner of the property if dead or physically or mentally not state then then guardian has the full access over the property. Her first plan of kidnapping went the other way round as radhika’s dad hired arjun to take care of her case .

It was the first case he was taking in his hands after he resigned from army because of his friend who pleaded him to come and see him once before he bids bye to earth. But arjun did not come. Arjun felt miserable when his friend was eagerly waiting for arjun’s glance once. So he took a voluntary retirement from the army even though he had good track record. Arjun worked in a normal company but then he got an offer to work in private deductive firm . First denied then he took the job and radhika was his first case. He saw her in photo and lost his heart in the cute round brown eyes. No one would even dream to hurt her but her life was in danger. That’s why he took her to the forest and that was a beautiful 1.5 month time they enjoyed.

Radhika was enjoying the wind thinking about arjun only arjun. Just then her father came and patted her shoulders. She turned and smiled at him. He rubbed her head with a smile.
Radhika ; pa what pa ??
Dad ; nothing dear i never knew my little daughter turned out to be a fragile flower. She smiled . He hugged her tight. She could feel he was disturbed.
Radhika ; dad anything wrong ?? He nodded nothing.
Dad ; take care radhika and left her. She was confused with the behavior of her father. She called arjun.
Arjun ; hey its mid night what do u want now ?? Ohh soo desperate to hear my voice i never kniw that.
Radhika ; stupid khadoos when on earth I said those words to u ?? Too much imagination not good for health. He smiled
Arjun ; so why did u call me radhika ??
Radhika ; arjun it is dad ….. He was disturbed. Some kind of insecurity was there when he spoke to me…… Arjun now alerted..
Arjun ; radhika what did he say ?
Radhika ; he said he never knew i was grown like a fragile flower and he said to take care of me and hugged me. I guess he weeped but for what ??
Arjun ; shit radhika get out of the house now
Rafhika ; haa why ??
Arjun ; do as i say now get out and instructed her to do some things to make them believe she was sleeping. Arjun rushed to her house as he made a temporary hut for himself to safe guard her. She was about to come out but saw few unknown people was proceeding towards the room. Just then she was pulled to a corner….. It was arjun who pulled her and they started from the house. Radhika was not able to understand what was happening ?? A guy found them leaving alerted the others. They were being chased and one point there was a bridge and it was fully flooded. Arjun saw radhika and said ” do u trust me ??
Radhika (nodded) ; yes always.. He held her hand and jumped of the bridge and as that was nigh no one was able to find where they went.

Few days later…….

1 corpse was found and they claimed that it might be radhika and closed the case and her mother shed soo much tears in front of the camera and her father stepped aside and took his mobile and dialled a number.

Dad ; did u see ur mother’s acting in tv ??
Radhika ; yes dad i guess she should get Oscars and laughed.
Dad ; sorry radhika for this i did not have any other option to save u by faking that u r dead.
Radhika ; u did what a lovely dad would do
Dad ; can u give the phone to arjun.
Radhika ; arjun phone from dad…..
Arjun ; coming and pinched her cheeks and took the phone
Arjun ; sir ??
Dad ; take care of my precious arjun. I will never forget the help u have done to me arjun .
Arjun ; sure sir always. And pls dont separate like that sir even she is my responsibility i will take care of her and after few minutes he held the call. Arjun turned to Radhika and she was munching some carrot pieces and was watching tv again. He smiled at her childish behavior.
Arjun ; radhika do u like this house ??
Radhika ; like it ?? I love this house. He smiled at her excitement.
Arjun ; here radhika ur fav and he gives a glass of hot drink to her. She takes that from him and he too relaxes himself in the sofa and she sat beside him and drinks the hot drink and relaxes her head over his shoulders and they closes their eyes as they are now where they have to be and they are known to no one around. They are now in a remote place in Himalaya’s region and arjun works there as a farm supervisor and radhika was now the wife of arjun and she lives the way she wanted to…………

Thats it guys. I guess its a filmy way…… Pls do spare me for that . Love you all always smile and always stay blessed and stay strong……….

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  1. Kavina

    Loved it

    1. S.v

      Thank you

  2. Sv darling wat made u to write ds beautiful stry I luv it to d core dr especially dairy wala part……. so whn ur going to update ur other ff waiting for HAK dr pls update sooon. …….. luv u a lots tc ….. πŸ™‚

    1. S.v

      Thank you so much gayathri . HAK updated and 2 states started and i will update that tonight max and tomo u will read that too…… Love you so much

  3. Brin

    I love the story, it was beautifully written, one question is that Radhika’s step mother or biological mother who wanted to kill her for money? πŸ™‚

    1. S.v

      Thank you so much Brin well she was Radhika’s biological mother only not step mother. Thanks a ton again…

  4. Jessie

    Super… super… ! Arjun is back…and Ardhika together..!! Loved it. Tat lady is step mom or what? TC n loads of love dear.. since its weekend eager 4 ur updates…

    1. S.v

      Jessie awww thanks a ton my dear and your HAK is updated sorry for the late update. Love you lods dear. She was her own mom.

  5. Lakshmi05

    Superb story sv dear. Ardhika r together n safe too. U r fabulous writer dear.waiting for ur next updates. Luv u…tc..

    1. S.v

      Thanks a ton lakshmi. Love you soo much.

  6. Sammy

    Oh my god hubby ..let’s elope to the place where our ardhika is …so cute …Amazing …superb ..I loved it diary part was too god … it was like a fairy tale love ..awesome job hubby u more for this πŸ™‚ πŸ™‚

    1. S.v

      Come on dear hold my hand and we will elope and go to the place where our ardhika is there. Love you so much my wifie . Love you lods……….

  7. Mica

    luv it dear

    1. S.v

      Thank you mica

  8. Jnana

    Yippee…. Whatever the reason was… What I said was true…. Its her mom… Who hurt arjun…. So I’m happy my guess was right…. And about the story…. Marvellous….

    1. S.v

      Yup u r right……… it was her mom who was behind Radhika…. and Arjun who went out as he heard something wrong was shot by the people who was behind radhika as her mother wanted radhika’s custody…… thank you so much Jnana and love you so much.

  9. Gauri

    SV darling fabulous …I had been waiting for the last shot πŸ™‚ hope you are writing more shots like this … amazing concept stay blessed and keep writing my sweety pie πŸ™‚

    1. S.v

      Thank you so much di for now i did not think of other story but i will write once after 2 states. Sure di i will write more shots for my fav di. Love you so much di ………..

  10. mindblowind episode……..

    1. S.v

      Thank you subha

  11. _Ritu

    Sv dear it was superb…ArDhika finally together…yipee..? and Rads’s mom..punches for her..disgusting women..hurting her own daughter..anyways I jst loved the story..u r amazing dear..ur every story is sweet cute write more and more would love to read..waiting fo ur ffs as well…post πŸ™‚

    1. S.v

      Ritu thank you so much. Sure dear will try to update after i finish my 2 states as i have not thought anything more. Love you so much dear. HAK posted dear and 2 states will be update tonight. Love you so much dear.

  12. Dipika

    Sv it was marvelous… I was hell eager tht y Arjun left rads but bcos of her devil mom…omg..she so devil to kill her daughter… But the end was cute..loved it…love u dear

    1. S.v

      Thank you so much Dipika . I’m happy for those words. Love you so much…..

  13. Sweetie

    Wow Jaan..It’s superb..I just love Khadoos Commando and his Repair Radio a lot.. πŸ™‚ Love you loads.. πŸ˜€

    1. S.v

      Jaan thank you so much . He he he he was a khadoos and she was his always his repair radio. Love you so much.

  14. Rossy

    Happy friendship day twin…hogaya…meri raita n bharata…oooh…i did it…only few ffs left…omg….
    Superb dear but still I doubt if she’s rads real mom or step mom..happy that ardhika safe…yay…write these stories more n more…make ur twin n wife both happy ?…lol????

    1. S.v

      Happy friendship day my dear twin . Love you so much and she was his real mom . Sure dear will update once i finish my 2 states . Sure anything for my twin and my wife sammy. Love you so much.

  15. Dev

    Lovely ending sv …….. Osm

    1. S.v

      Thanks a ton buddy.

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  17. S.v

    Thank you

  18. Sreee

    Beautiful ending akka..u stole my heart…muahhh…love u..muahh????

    1. S.v

      Thank you so much thangachi . love you s much

  19. SV…it was such a cute shot….I enjoyed it soooooooo muchhhhhh. …ardhika very cuteeeee. ..rads father was nice but mom very cruel….but I enjoyed the ending …ardhika married n living happily in their Lil cozy lovely world….brilliantly narrated. …love you loads. muaaaaahhhhhh Bear hug. πŸ™‚ β™‘β™‘β™‘ πŸ™‚

    1. S.v

      Roma my spl friend thank you for your comment. U r always encouraging with ur words. Thank u so much. Love u so much.

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