Manmarziyan- Bhaiyas’ aur Bhaabhis’ ko bhadhaayi ho badhaayi .. (One Shot)

Hello…Hello…Am here again.!! This time for our Sree..!! our cute lovely Pikachu dp wali…Sree chella…Many many more Happy Returns of the day…Wish only the best to happen in your life…God bless you my little sweet friend….Have a great career in future..!! Love you loads my chella…And this is my gift on your birthday…..Its just fun intended…Love you girl…Happy birthday once again!

Dear Readers.,Pls ignore my Typos and Grammatical errors…Do share your views…

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One shot

“And.. hereby I announce that My son Arjun Mehra and My Nephew Neil Malhotra will hold the reigns of Star groups”,Ajay Mehra proudly said with a smile and a big round of applause greeted the two young men standing next to him…They sat opposite to each other glaring each other which went unnoticed by everyone present there as all were engrossed in the presentation slides a young girl was demonstrating,except these two…. The moment the meeting got over Arjun and Neil walked out swiftly avoiding each other…. Arjun stopped on his tracks reading a message,”My life is totally messed up…Help Pls…Very big problem”followed by six crying emoticons… Come to forum mall..in next half an hour”…He called the number,it went unattended.,he moved to his car…

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“Samaira…we will miss you buddy”,a girl hugged Samarira….but Sam was just looking another girl who walked into HR’s cabin…

“Good luck Radhika”,a guy extended his hand…Radhika smiled as she stepped out..”Hey.,are you both I mean, you and Samaira friends?..You both joined together now resigned together…but I have never seen you both interacting with each other”,he said in one go…

“May be coincidence”,Radhika walked away…

Sam and Radhika stood inside same elevator at either corners both pretending to be busy with their mobiles.. They both saw each other once before getting inside their vehicles…

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Forum mall

“Sir..the table booked for you is over there”,a guy guided Neil inside that restaurant…He was shocked to see Arjun waiting there…He sat opposite to him without a word…within next 15 mins,Radhika and Sam too came one after other and stood shocked looking others..The foursome pretended a nonchalant look and sat looking away…They fiddled with their mobiles,later called someone,on receiving busy tone from the other end,they saw each other to have their mobiles attached to their ears…Trying the same Person..!!!!

Now they were pretty sure why they were here at same place.,but their ego din’t let them to discuss…”Where are you chutki?”,Arjun messaged and “where are you choti?”,Neil messaged to the same number…

“Am here”,a girl faintly said reading the msg.,she was standing behind a curtain watching the foursome…”Speak you dumb heads”,she mumbled standing there..”Sreee”,she turned around listening a voice..

“sshh!!”,she silenced…Looking the guy’s reaction she said,”there they are, still the same”,she pouted sad…

“who is Arjun among the two”,the guy asked..

“The one who is standing..and Neil is sitting next to Radhika…”,she said…

Sam got up with a glass of water but slipped it on Neil when she hit on the table unexpectedly..”Happy now?!”,Neil asked her..Sam mumbled a sorry but Neil taunted her and that was enough for Radhika to argue with him..Sam and Arjun was equally surprised at that…”You should mind your words,Neil.”,she said at last and turned to Sam,”And you..why are you silent always.Just slap the person who irritates you”,Radhika huffed in anger..

Neil was confused.,he din’t say anything that bad,and how would he…He looked the girls.,Sam hugged Radhika,”Am sorry chasni..You left the job for me,isn’t”,she sniffed a little..Radhika couldn’t hold herself back seeing Sam’s tears,she saw the guys to look them intently.,she pulled Sam away and moved to the other table…Neil and Arjun had eyes only on them..Why should Radhika leave her job and what could be the problem…Neil turned his head and saw Arjun too looking him…They shared known glances..The girls by now saw them… The foursome looking each other reminisced their past encounters…

2 years back

Arjun and Neil being cousin brothers were doing Masters in Business..,They visited their aunty’s house for the birthday party of her daughter Sreemathi.,the only girl child in their family…Arjun’s chutki ,and Neil’s choti Sree is way beyond in her naughtiness.,so the guys decided to play a prank and accidentally they met two girls Sam and Radhika..Sam clutched Neil’s collar in fear when Neil scared her thinking her to be Sree…He was bowled over by the pretty girl in single piece murmuring something close to his face..when she opened her eyes,she gulped looking his dimpled smile…unknowingly she blushed deep red and Neil took incharge of his love…He circled her waist with his arm and enquired about her,Sam being mesmerized spoke like a kid to him,after a minute when he pecked her cheek,she got alerted and ran off from that place…

While the other side,Arjun threw cake over Radhika’s face mistaking her to be Sree and Radz stood annoyed a minute searching the person,before Arjun could apologize,she looked around and started licking the cake over her lips and twisted her tongue trying to reach the edge of her lips…He smiled a naughty one and came before her.,she being shocked seeing someone suddenly tripped over him locking her lips on his…She profusely apologized and ran away in a blink…Arjun acted to be annoyed which made Radhika to dance to his tunes…

“Sir..This is wrong..I did apologize that day itself…”,Radhika murmured when she got to meet him again..

“What you did is wrong..Okay..I will say to Chutki that you kissed me.,that too on lips…let chutki decide what to do with her friend”,Arjun said…

“Chi…will someone say this to his sister..”Radz said,but she was really worried for Sam who is no less than a trumpet in blowing things..and Sree her best friend,what if she gets her wrong and cut her ties…she blinked at him..He opened passenger side door for her.,she glared him as she got in..She sat wondering things.,what would he do.,Sree has told that her brother Arjun is a gem of a person,somewhere holding on that she budged for his request….She saw him as he drove,her eyes analyzed his features ‘stop thinking nonsense’,she controlled herself…She was shocked when he parked before a farm house…

“What are you going to do?”,she asked standing at a good distance away from him…

“What’s your guess darling?”,he winked at her…

She took a sharp breath and turned around,”Am going sir”,she took a step…

Arjun caught her from behind,”Darling Radhika.,Call me Arjun…”he husked in her ears..Her throat constricted at that and she nodded a no…”Then I won’t leave you..”,he said…

“Arjun..”,she managed to whisper his name…

He turned her around and lifted her chin saying,”Arjun loves you Radhika!!”..He locked his gaze with hers…Minutes passed in silence,and she was still not able to react…He caught her in his embrace out of the blue shocking her..

.”I will say this to Sree”,she said..but felt hers to vibrate along with his body as he laughed…

“Tell her..She will call you Bhabhi”,he pulled her nose and moved to his vehicle…

“I don’t love you”,she hissed when she got in..

“Then I will make you to love me”,he pecked her cheek suddenly…

‘Radhika shut up’..she calmed her mind..She decided to be in a nonreactive mode and irritate him

But nothing happened like that,within days, he did what he said and she fell deep for him in months…He left no stone unturned in impressing her…

“Are you searching me?”,Sam jerked listening a male voice behind her… she nodded her head negatively…

“Ok..can you do me a favor..Well..I want my sister to choose a girl for me from this..so..”,he gave a envelope and moved away…

Sam hid that in her notebooks and walked fast from Sree’s house citing some reasons…

“Why do you want me to stay single”,Neil asked as he blocked her way…he got down from his bike and stood leaning on it.. “Are you sad..upset?’,he asked…

“Headache”,she said irritated looking the girls over there passing looks on him….”You go”,she said…

“.Sam…You love me!”,he said with a smile…

“No”,she tried to move…

“And I love you too…A lot..!!”..he saw her face…She smiled and blushed biting her lip..”Am a good boy Sammy…Love me please”,he said with puppy dog eyes…

Sam giggled..”Will someone propose like this?’,she laughed holding her stomach when he made cute antics….He got on his bike and gestured her to,she accepted his offer after good 5 mins of hesitance….He parked metres away from beach and walked with her…

“If you don’t love me then choose a girl from that”,he pointed her notebooks…

“Actually no one was good”,she made a face…

“Really”,he asked her..”Lemme check”,he pulled the envelope and gave her the photos..She was surprised to see her pics,..”You should speak instead of blushing”,he held her by waist and pecked her cheek…

Days passed and the love birds chirped in love and happiness…

Arjun being over possessive had a habit of scolding Radhika for her friendship with boys which din’t go well with her.,One day it did played its charm fueling Radhika’s anger,”So you doubt me..”she narrowed her eyes..

“I din’t say so…You are mine..I have the rights to follow you..protect you..and to do everything with you.”,he pulled her to him and tried to kiss her.,but she held her head back…

“You don’t trust me then…Why din’t you barge into the hotel room to check if am with a guy or not”,she asked sharply…

“What nonsense..! when did I say so…I was worried only for your safety…You were with Saral and he isn’t a good fellow”,Arjun left his grip on her…

“And who said that…Its was a get together..Saral was one among them…”,she asked angrily…”you made my friend to be your spy..isn’t..I know its Sam..”She stepped back…”This won’t work Arjun…I fear what if you turn everyone against me…Sam..was msging my whereabouts..why…You should have asked me..You made my friend to suspect me”,she blinked her tears…

“Don’t speak like a idiot…You were stubborn so I called her..You need to trust me in first place…That I believe in you,…if not then as you said.,this won’t work”,he shook his shoulders…

Both expected the other to convince and it went the other way around when things din’t happen so…They completely avoided each other and Radhika kept herself aloof from Sam…Arjun fought with Sam when she spoke in favor for Radhika..

Sam already miffed with happenings around was more irked at Neil’s lethargic behavior of bunking classes and arrears…Her continuous talks on career,secured future irritated him and he spat in anger”So.,you value my money not me…You are worried what if I can’t be a chairperson for my company..Now I get you sam…!!”

The verbal war resulted a break up..Sree who got aware of all this at their final year decided for a patch up which turned futile…Her besties were in love with her brothers and they had a break up too.,she pretended a blind’s eye enjoying them playing around,but she din’t expect it to turn this worse…Even after a year.,though RaSam worked in same company they behaved like strangers..,and the same happened with ArNeil too… Neil’s efforts to make Arjun understand gained his anger..Sarcastic remarks on each others behaviors created a drift between them…”You both were always like this.,and suddenly what happened,you take each others words seriously”,Sree asked many times but there was no useful response…

Back to Present…

Arjun saw Radhika’s hand squeezing sam’s… “Chutki”,he got up when Sree came wiping her tears..She fluttered her eyes as glycerin irritated her eyes.,”What happened to your eyes”,Neil crooked his neck..

“Bhai..am crying”,she said…

“Oh!!”,the foursome said in unison…

“Oh???”,she faked a shock…

“Oh..why..No…Oh..No..why?”,Arjun stuttered a little while correcting his words..he saw Radhika to smile listening that… After a lot of cajoling Sree said sobbing,”I love a guy..”

“What?.”,who” both her brothers turned abnormal listening her…Radhika threw daggers with her look…Neil composed himself asking,”Did he cheat you…or did he..”

“Doubt you?If so throw him out”,Radhika spoke before Neil could say…Sree mentally facepalmed..

“What”,sree screamed confusing them,..she adjusted her bluetooth as she pulled her hairs faking to hold her hairs in tension..

They stood confused… “What…did you say?”,sree asked at Radhika and gulped before saying,”I can’t because am..am…”,she touched her stomach…She was confused whether to go with the plan or not…how could she utter something though its for plan….Stupid she cursed…But little was she aware that she was already rubbing her tummy in tension thinking about the word ‘Pregnant’..

Sam gasped aloud…ArNeil were rooted to their spot…Sree blinked at the sudden twist of her plan…she cursed her friend giving ideas through bluetooth….

“Don’t lie Sree…If you truly love him we will …no..I will get you married..No need for such lies”,Radhika came forward to her…

Arjun fumed at that…”We know to get our sister..no..my sister to get married to a good guy”,he said looking Neil…

“I will get her the best”,Neil spoke…

“But get her what she wants.”,Sam said…

Sree stood pitifully.,..This was not she planned but they were interacting..That’s the least good happened…So,she let that continue…

“What’s his name”,Neil asked

“Jai..He is so good..The problem is…he will marry only if his sister gets married…”Sree said…

“Then why he did…”,Arjun bit his tongue not to speak further..

“So..you want us to find a groom for his sister”,Radhika asked doubted…

“Actually…yes..but soon…coz..you see…”Sree stammered whatever she heard through bluetooth….

“Ok..One month..And I will have a background check on him”,Arjun sat on a chair..

“No before that”,she said hurriedly…

“why?”,Neil asked…and saw her looking him and Arjun…

“You want anyone of your brothers to…”,Sam asked pressing her shoulder…Sree gulped…The guys saw each other..

“But why you so soon for her…Listen Sree..we will assure her parents and get you married..”,Neil said…

Sree scratched her head…She din’t receive any reply from other side…”What to do”,Sree yelled in frustration looking the ceiling…All four followed her gaze and she quickly connected her call…”You say you idiot”,she screamed looking the ceiling..

“Are you scolding “,Radhika pointed her finger upwards…

“Oh god!”,Sam covered her mouth…

“Yea..yea..God..God…”,Sree stuttered…

Arjun came next to her and caressed her head…”Relax chutki!”,Radhika made a face at that..

“No…”,sree screamed confusing them…”She is pregnant”,Sree said…

“She too”,Sam opened and closed her mouth like fish looking Neil…

“Oh…God!! What is happening..I din’t plan all this…that devil”,Sree spat the truth in frustration but the situation gave it another look…..Jai.,her friend did suggest that if the girls express a word for their love,her brothers will melt..but how to was the prob…they were equally adamant in interacting,thats when he gave this idea..Sam was the only one who reacted for their plan correctly.

“Yep..who plans all this when in love,it happens by mistake”,Sam shook her head…

“Ok.I will take care of..”,Neil came to her side…

“Means you will marry that girl”,Sam eyes filled with tears in no minutes…

Sree smiled at the unexpected positive reaction… “good”,she appreciated her friend.,she thought the plan to be stupid when her friend shared,but now it worked…

Arjun stood thoughtful…Radhika looked him intent…He is no less to Neil..so what if he too decides like Neil…She couldn’t even think that..

“Are you a fool?…You want your brother to get married to some girl who is carrying someone else’s child…What to do with you? show me that Jai..I will break his bones if he spells the same reason and get you married to him…how dare..!! Haan…and wipe this idea from your brain..I won’t let your plan to happen”,Radhika said in one go….

Arjun bit his cheeks controlling his smile,but Sree smiled widely irritating her…”I think,you don’t love my Bhai!! “,she chuckled..

“Yes..so what…I will break his bones too if he supports you this time”,she gulped a glass of water…

“Double success!!”,sree mumbled.

Neil saw Sam in tears..

“Sree…who is Jai…We never got to know”,Arjun asked with a mischievous smile…

“Sam..Convince my Neil bhaiya pls”,Sree said acute…Radhika thinned her lips in anger…Arjun was amused looking her…

“Anything for you”,Sam’s voice choked a little…

“So..Your marriage will happen only if his pregnant sister gets married..that too before it gets too late to hide..isn’t”,Arjun asked and Sree nodded yes..

“We will find the guy who is responsible for his sister’s situation and get her married”,Arjun said unexpectedly… “tch..but that’s also impossible”,he smiled…The trio stood confused…”May be he isn’t available here or not even on earth”,he narrowed his eyes on Sree…

She smiled sheepishly…”Bhai…you may ..”,she shrieked when Arjun tried to catch her…Sree ran around them confusing more..Sam wiped her tears confused…

“You had no issues with my marriage”,Neil asked… “Then why you cried”,Radhika stood next to Neil…

They were disturbed when Sree screamed aloud,Arjun was twisting her ear muttering something…

“Stupid..Don’t hurt her”,Neil pushed Arjun and rubbed her earlobe…

“This pikachu crazy doll has planned this..She played a prank…what all nonsense she said..Neil..don’t support her”,Arjun said looking Sree…

“What did I say..Am not responsible if you all assume something naughty..chhiiii….Bad brothers and Bhabhis you too….am I not a kid”,she fluttered her eye lashes and the girls giggled at that…

“What was that for”,Neil asked imitating her action of rubbing her tummy…

“That means..Am Hungry!!”,she said and poked her tongue out….ArNeil laughed heartily when RaSam chased her.,they stood relieved…

“Am Sorry Arjun”,Neil said,…Arjun hugged him tight…”You can apologize”,Neil mocked him…

“Yea..Lemme try..S..O…R…R…Achoo”,Arjun faked a sneeze..and earned smacks in return… “I was angry that…you…said…I doubted Radhika…But Neil..Trust me…I never did..”,Arjun said…

“You need to solve this soon…”,Neil patted his shoulders.

“And get back your love”,Arjun said in return…

They moved to the door only to hear RaSam speaking with Sree…”So you both resigned your job”,Sree asked in high note..

“Yep..He did trouble me a lot..I mean not only work wise…moreover..There is a limit for everything..I felt I need a break”,Sam said with a humorless smile..

“Sorry Sam..Is it because of me too? I did behave like a stranger”,Radhika said..

“Definitely not..Tell me why..you resigned…”,Sam smiled..

“Iam not yet relieved Sam..5 days are left…I put papers after you only isn’t”,Radhika said in a sullen voice..

“What..Then why the hell you slapped him….you are the reason isn’t..he got injured in face..,Chashni…what yaar…”Sam hugged her…

“He misbehaved and badmouthed you”,Radhika sad pouted..

“Will tell to my Bhais'”,Sree nodded her head thoughtfully…

“No don’t…Leave it…They may take it wrong…”Radhika blinked her tears…

“Hmm…Yeah..”Sam said…”Shall we leave”,she asked..

“Not that soon”,they turned listening ArNeil…

“Seems you forgot your friend’s birthday”,Arjun said…

Sree smiled…”They knew…They did wish early morning”,she said…

“Come for her birthday party”,Neil called them in common…They nodded before they left…Arjun saw Radhika to wipe her tears…

Sree came down the stairs wearing a sky blue party wear.,stone studded neck design complemented her look….RaSam stood near the door….Sree smiled wide looking them..they followed her gaze..and there was ArNeil… A guy from nowhere came wishing Sree and Arjun asked his name.,”Hi am Jai”,he extended his hand…. He was terrified looking the guys glaring him…

“No..No..He is just a friend…But the idea is his…I thought you all will patch up if you meet.,but you stubborn heads din’t..so I went with his idea”,Sree said hurriedly…

..”And what an idea Jai ji”,he mocked..

“I had no other way… to push you brothers to the edge…then only bhaabhis will speak in possessiveness”,Jai said blinking….

“Really?”,Neil asked..

“Really Bhai..Trust me”,she said.. Arjun winked at Neil..”See..it worked..”,he smiled..

“So..you scared us”,Jai asked..

“Yep…Just for fun”,Neil smiled…

“Do you have a sister in real”,Arjun asked..

“No..”,Jai smiled wide making the guys to laugh…

Sree cut the cake amdist wishes and songs flowing through and Jai did few dance steps to impress…”May you get all the happiness”,Arjun kept his hand on her head and pecked her forehead..

“Yes..And Pikachu to never end”,Neil mocked her…”Choti…A very happy birthday…You did bring us together..We missed our fun…You are a angel!”,Neil side hugged her..

“Get my bhaabhis too”,Sree winked at them…

“Yep..definitely today..Its your birthday we met them”,Arjun said wrapping his arm on Neil’s shoulder..

The girls hit selfies pouting and enjoying and Sree went busy with her relatives and other friends…Sam stood speaking with Jai…When he left.,Neil came to her..,”I am not that bad…why can’t you forgive me please”,he smiled…Sam averted her gaze,”Am sorry Sammy..! I waited for this day..A day I myself proved
worthy enough to meet you…Forgive me dear..!!”,he went on his knees with a ring.. Sam smiled after a minute..”Get up”,she pulled him…

“Will you marry me?”,He asked…

“Make it hard Sam!”,She saw Prena to support her..Sam smiled with tears and nodded her head…Neil slipped the ring in her fingers and everyone clapped for them…

“My plan worked”,Jai raised his collar…”Ok..Our plan..”he said when Sree glared him…Sree said to him something and They played a song for the situation..

waah waah raam ji jodi kya banaayi
(Splendid, excellent, Lord Ram, what a match you have made!)

Sree circled around Nesam as the song played..

bhaiya aur bhaabhi ko bhadhaayi ho badhaayi
(brother and sisterinlaw, congratulations!)

sab rasmon se badi hai jag mein dil se dil ki sagaayi
(of all the traditions in this world, the greatest is the engagement of two hearts)
aapki kripa se yeh shubh ghadi aayi
(thanks to you, this auspicious moment came)

jiji aur jijaa ka badhaayi ho badhaayi
(elder sister and brotherinlaw, congratulations!)
sab rasmon se badi hai jag mein dil se dil ki sagaayi
(of all the traditions in this world, the greatest is the engagement of two hearts)

Sree danced with Prena and Jai and kissed Sam cheek and congratulated both…

mere bhaiya jo chup baithe hain
(my brother, who is seated silently there,)

She held Radhika’s shoulder and pointed Arjun..

dekho bhaabhi yeh kaise ainthe hain
(look, my sisterinlaw, at how he fidgets)

vaise bade hi bhale hain
(actually, he’s an excellent sort)

Arjun controlled his blush listening the lyrics and Sree’s antics

maana thode man chale hain
(a little bit moody)

par aap ke siva kahin bhi na phisle hain
(but he’s never fallen for anyone but you)

dekho dekho khud pe jiji itaraayi
(look, look, how my sister preens!)

She hugged Radhika and Arjun looked Radhika smiling at Sree…

bhaiya aur bhaabhi ko badhaayi ho badhaayi
(brother and sisterinlaw, congratulations!)
sab rasmon se badi hai jag mein dil se dil ki sagaayi
(of all the traditions in this world, the greatest is the engagement of two hearts)

Sree pulled Radz to Arjun and gave Radz hand to him…He held for a long time while Sree continued dancing with others.

Radhika searched Arjun after Sree’s dance and fun…She saw him speaking with someone…

“Have some cake ya”,Jai gave her a cake plate…She looked the Aquarium tasting the cake…She saw Arjun’s image in that aquarium glass… He winked at her…and passed a flying kiss…she swiftly moved away..’.How dare..he behaves as though nothing happened…its a year he spoke with me’…she muttered herself when she was roughly pulled into a room…”Leave me”,she said annoyed ..

“So you know its me”,he asked…She tried to free from his grip…

“Am sorry Radhika…Am so sorry..!!”,he said holding his ears..She stood in silence…”Will you forgive me?”,he asked..she nodded negatively…

“You know..I roamed with Saral daily”,she said gritting her teeth…

“Yep..I saw that..In your Pleasure..while he is still staying abroad..But..Radhika..you should learn to park your vehicle properly…you are too bad in parking”,he said as he ate a piece of her cake…

Her eyes widened at that….”you were…”she dragged…

“I did say..I will follow you…Protect you..and do everything with you”,he held her close…he saw her confused face..”Oh…My apology was for….I should have convinced you that day itself..”,he said thoughtful…

“So you din’t feel guilty?”,she asked….

“No..And what mistake did I do…I will keep an eye on you…Be it Sam or anyone I have my own ways to get to know about you”,he applied cake on her face…

“Devil…I thought..”,she was cut in…

“Darling Radhika…Call me Arjun”..He said and kissed her cheeks …She stood surprised …”tasty cake”he said… her mobile vibrated with a random number….He saw her to frown..He picked the call.,

“That’s my boss”,she whispered. hearing his orderly notes to her boss…

“So what..He will be quiet for next 5 days…”,he said ..she wiped her cheeks with cake…

“I won’t go there Arjun…He is a trouble”,she hugged him…

“Don’t go darling…I will handle him”,he responded…

“Really!!!”,She asked with twinkling eyes…He rubbed a piece of cake over her lips..”Arjun never lies…Arjun Loves you Radhika”,he captured her lips at that…She pulled back hastily.,
“Radhika loves you too”,she said…

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So…how was this….Sree…Chella,…Tell me…if you liked or not…Well…My laptop is half recovered…one of the hardware yet to purchase..but ppl say it isnt available..So am like using a brake less two wheeler…Waiting for the hardware…still I will try posting….Love you all loads…Take care….

45 comments

  1. Jewel

    |Registered Member

    Jez, this is awesome…. A very beautiful gift to sree. Sree’s acting part was really funny. I laughed a lot. Neil saying sorry and said Arjun to do same that part too, Arjun is naughty, I liked him. Overall it is superb jez.
    Ur laptop half recovered, I am so happy now i can see ur ff soon. Don’t worry ur laptop will get fixed completely soon. We r all praying for that…. Waiting for ur story….

    • Jessie

      |Author

      Shonaaa…..Teddy hugss….Thank you so much….First comment…Am smiling wide…and am glad that you enjoyed… yep..Arjun is..can’t say a sorry…you liked him…Yay…its a success…!!
      Thanks again… yep..half recovered…Oh!! am so glad reading your words…I was worrying a lot…My god…Have no words now…girl…love you loads…!! will post soon….TC..Stay happy…

      • Jewel

        |Registered Member

        yeeyy….. i didn’t notice that i am the first one who comment. i came here to ask about others ff, that time also i didn’t notice. u know jez this was my wish comment to ur story first. one day for ur one chapter i was very late to comment, i really feel bad. from that day it self i am trying to comment first. every time i think that i will be the first person bt when it get posted it was in 3rd or 4th. i thought same thing will happen today also. bt no today iam the first person…. yeeeey i am so happy….

    • Jessie

      |Author

      OMG..!! Shona…wat to say.Am so glad…I too will be waiting to catch the chap first and comment first..But very rare it happens..Yep..I know the feel we get..Am so blessed to have a friend like you…honestly…and yea…It happened today…Yipee..

  2. Nayan

    |Registered Member

    Wow nice os … shree is the star of the today’s show … rasam’s bond was treat to watch…. jai’s plan was outstanding … planning through bluetooth was really funny … jai make their plan hard to shree by giving stupid ideas LOL … stay blessed πŸ™‚ πŸ™‚ πŸ™‚ πŸ™‚

    • Jessie

      |Author

      Hey Nayan….Yep..birthday baby isn’t… Happy that you liked Rasam one… Bluetooth yaa…!! am so happy reading ur likes…Thanks a lot…TC and stay happy…

  3. arti viswanathan

    Excellent and marvellous episode jessie darling i loved it.. U are a excellent writter dear… I loved all scenes un thus episode. U should write a story lije this one jessie dear…

    • Brin

      |Registered Member

      Outstanding shot, Sree will definitely like this OS, she resolves there issues and bring the four characters together, Jessie you nail it, well done. πŸ™‚

      Happy birthday Sree, I hope all your wishes come true. πŸ™‚

  4. Dipika

    |Registered Member

    JBBBBBBBBB My darling jessssss this was soooooo super hittttt…. God i was laughing like maniac…. Sreee as always cute lil sisters.. N that nesam first crash.. N aradhika cake romance.. Lol.. N the way they asked their partners.. Wow wow.. Simply amazing.. But thts fight.. I was lik sab accha chal raha tha ye kya bich me jhagada.. N pikachu choti.. Lol.. She herself is pregnant.. N the guy.. Jai’s sis too is pregnant.. Lol.. What a plan… To make bhabhis possessive…. N after all sort out.. Tht ring ceremony n sab mahol.. Tht song.. Perfectly suited.. I started dancing.. Lol.. Arjun still spy radz.. God cake n romance… Maholll.. JB u r rockstar yarrrr… Love u lots darling 😘 😘 😘 😘 😘 😘 😘

    • Jessie

      |Author

      Thanks a ton Deeepzzzzzz…Mere judwa behna…. am so happy u enjoyed it… yep…hamare sree…lol speed breaker for fast love…. nope she isn’t…that s a lie…did she say so…she just rubbed her tummy being hungry…lol…. you loved the song…Yep…Arjun hai…how to change him…thanks yaar…Love you loads..TC…Cake romance..heheh

  5. Meen

    |Registered Member

    Marvellous……. Really rasam bond was beyond amazing…..& jai’s plan was super hit….sree is D lucky one……
    U know what Jess my Mac is not functioning….. I’m literally crying……
    Anyways love u

    • Jessie

      |Author

      Hey thanks Ya….. lucky sree…yea… Am happy u liked it my Tesoro Mio…

      What..God..!! make it work…No…MMK ke vaaste work hona chahiye…but really I know how it feels…still my lappy…gosh.. dont worry… ,may be a simple issue..fix it…Love you too dear…TC

  6. Aasthu

    |Registered Member

    nyc…………Shree’s plan was nyc……..Ardhika was superb!!!!!! nesam cute……..I loved Neil’s proposal……….cute……………..Jess was it frm ur exp?????????? Last scene too………..nesam dance and ardhika kiss…………………Jess u told a few weeks ago that u r working on a OS………did u post it?is that this???????????????

    • Jessie

      |Author

      Thanks a lot Aasthu….Am happy u liked it…No..Not from my exp…why do you have that doubt freq..hehe… thanks dear…. yep..That OS is half done…last part pending..will post it dear..No..thats not this one…That one is Ardhika…TC and loads of love

      • Aasthu

        |Registered Member

        The way you write makes me suspect the same Jess………….. who wouldn’t say no to a beauty like u????????????? Will I have to wait long to read that????? ie till ur lap is recovered???????????? plzzzzz update asap…………will u b able to post ur ff b4 ur lap bcomes normal??????????? love u toooooooooooooo…………………muaaaaaahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh…………………tc…………and tc of ur lap too………………u there in wattpad??????? same name???????

    • Jessie

      |Author

      Aasthu…I will post that OS within 2 weeks…the more I promise the more situation makes me to break it….isi liye…abt lappy…yes…I took a back up at last min..so this os is safe….Will post dear….

  7. Jewel

    |Registered Member

    Any one know about madumita, aadia, and hearty. are they having exam or something. is that the reason they are not posting the stories?? and where is rossy??. i am missing their stories…..

    • Jessie

      |Author

      Shona..Aadia is having exams..Hearty too I guess..she is a school student..Madhu…me too waiting for her…Rosie will be back from dec 2nd week….She is out of town…

  8. Crazy Girl

    Jas bby… hw r u??? Awsme episode… thr sepratn made me feel bad… evnthgh thy r strangers thy care fr each othr… Rasam bond was too good… and sree plyd her role so cute n lovable… n thy way neil proposed to sam wow… n cmng to Arjun he apologized for nt cnvncg b4 awww so cute… evrythng was so cute n luvable… i luvd it… n luv u alot jas bby… tc…

    • Jessie

      |Author

      Sulbhi…..am fine dear…howzz u? glad to get you here… thanks a lot dear… am glad you liked Rasam bond… wow..you liked sree kutty…am super happy… yay!! Sulbhi you know what…Arjun’s part is my fav…am so happy you mentioned it yaar…he was feeling bad for not convincing earlier but not for his doings.. πŸ˜‰ Teddy hugg for that. Thanks again dear….
      love you loads…TC…

  9. Gauri

    |Registered Member

    Jess you seriously are on a writing Spree…perfect gift for Sree and such a cute sister she is…trying to unite all four of them…and brothers will be brothers protective about chutki…..loved it darling… it was a lovable update …you are a star πŸ™‚ love u

  10. subha

    semma semma semma kalakal update ..mindblowing update……..really interesting story ………thanks da ..love uuuuuuuuuu tc

  11. Sangee

    |Registered Member

    Hey jessi.. Super come back first of all many more happy returns of the day sree… Have a blast 😍.. Coming to the epi… Cleanly penned one jessi seriously… Wah wah… Sree s plan was superb… Though she splied the beans her plan worked 😍 and jai super… Convo between jai and Arneil super hilarious πŸ˜‰ the word sorry is not in Arjuns dictionary… Lol… I was laughing here imaging that pregnancy revelation scene… She just rubbed her tummy yar come on ha ha jais sister too pregnant rofl… Rads telling to break his bones whoever support this idea ha ha ha ha sema sema… Finally arjun found the truth… No one can emathify arjun lol… Finally our couple have United 😍😍😍 idu podum ennaku idu podum eh Verenna venum… 😍😍😍 totally bang bang… Once again many more happy returns of the day pickachu walli 😘😘😘😘

    • Jessie

      |Author

      Thanks a ton Sangee Chellam….seekirama ungaluku oru pudhu peru kudka poren,,,tada… Am so happy that you enjoyed…. preg revelations.. hehe…yes..guys were shocked..Naan apidiye shock aayiten….lol…Rads…nammellam eppidi… yep..Arjun found with Sree’s smile…. Podhum a…sekama viduvena… Arjun ku sorry kum dhooram pa… thanks a ton again…Bear hugs…Loads of love..TC

  12. S.v

    |Registered Member

    theri baby kalakkita aanalum arjun konjam overah dhan pandran atleast neil sorry sonnan idhu ?? Ippavum naan pannadhu roghtunnu solludhu and sree and jai… lol super awesome sema timing prachanna lol super baby kalakkita as always. Muhhhaaa baby muhhhhaaaa love u

    • Jessie

      |Author

      heehhe…Baby…Arjun than thappe panalaye…He wasn’t wrong at first place…He did Say what Neil said about him…Freeya vidunga ji…. yep..Timing prachana than…hehe..Thanks a lot baby…love you loads..TC

  13. Chinmayi

    Awe.. It was very cute.. U r a genius Jessi…ardhika nd Nesam r lucky to have sree and it’s vice versa… We TU mates are lucky to have u 😘😘 Sry for late reaction 😐 luv u loads 😊 belated happy Birthday pikachu πŸŽ‚πŸŽ‰πŸŽŠπŸŽˆπŸŽ

    • Jessie

      |Author

      Heyya…Chinmayi…Thanks a lot for supporting and am glad you loved it…. Ah…Chinmayee…now flying in happiness…Am lucky in return to have readers like you dear…No sorries plz…. thanks again…TC and loads of love

  14. Kakali

    Jesssiiiiiiii !!!! m seriously jealous of u n ur longgg chappies.. !!!! urghhhh what u eat before writing… !!! huhhh … now plzzz excues meeee n let mee pull naughty Arjun’s cheekss…
    Sreeee !!!! she iss cuteeee n sooo funnyyy.. !!! hahahaha !!! Still laughing thinking about those scenes… CAKE… !!! goshhh they alone enjoyed … huhhh !!!
    Jesiiiiiieee it was adorable… totally love it.. !!!
    SREE HAPPY B’DAY DEAR… PLZZ SHARE UR TESTY DISHES WITH ALL..

    God bless u dear.. !!! always stay happy.. !!!. *pinch Jessie’s nose n run… !!

    Thnk u.. ;-*

    • Jessie

      |Author

      Hey my Surprise friend…see..you surprised me when I searched you..Chalo Teddy hugs…
      Am grinning wide reading your name…what do i eat…A lot..hehe…Foodie…excused…Pull to your hearts content…..Cake…Yep…ardhika first meet to had cake na…that s y…I am so so glad that you loved and enjoyed yaar…. Thanks again….My nose…Kyun…everyone does that..and now you too.. Love you loads and TC… Teddy hugs…

  15. Shree

    |Registered Member

    lol jess… that was one master blaster update.. wow.. sree kutty.. her brain.. lol pregnant.. ada these guys r seriously brainless.. pasiya poyi.. lol jealousy.. jai toh.. party hehe.. nesam lol.. ardhika.. ada enna ya.. vaalu payan arjun.. cake scene.. hehe

    lol.. using a brake less two wheeler.. reminds me of sathya ka.. hehe.. sathya ka no offense.. take your time ponne.. love you

    • Jessie

      |Author

      Shreeeee……Thanks girl….am happy to see you here….Yep..Sree endral arivali…hehe…. Pasikuthudunu ava enga sonna…. Jai sonnadha ketu tummy a rub panna…Pasanga bayandutanga…..VAalu paiyan…Aama ..

      Una ena panalam pulling SAtz legs.. heheeh aana sema ya…Satz…naa sollala..shree than solra…heheh .. am giggling at this one shreee…..heheh…Breakless two wheeler and Satz…ada rama…Lol,…Thanks again dear…Muaah…Loads of love ya

  16. Roma

    Awesome, wowwww jesssss. ..it’s so beautiful n adorable shot….sree did marvellous job to reunite ardhika n nesam….I was laughing at sree n jai’s planning…very interesting n lovely story….loved it very very much. ….it’s so obvious that just few misunderstandings leads to very huge fights n misconceptions but a simple talk can solve major issues….u showed it here very beautifully. …the plot, the way you narrated, the dialogues. …wowwww everything was simply superbbbb. …n like arjun said to rads…..I also wanna say you….Roma loves you soooooooo muchhhhhh Jesssss. ….muaaaaahhhhhh…very tight bear hugggg…. β™‘β™‘β™‘β™‘β™‘β™‘β™‘β™‘β™‘β™‘ πŸ˜‰

    • Jessie

      |Author

      Romaaa di……. Love you loads di…Thanks a lot…. Sree and Jai’s plan..yep…fun na…. am so happy you loved it di…yes di…the misunderstandings is common in love na… yea..simple talk…. thanks again di…. awww…di…. Jess loves you a lot Roma di…My elder sis… you are my biggest support…Love you to infinity di…Muaahh…Bear hugs and tons of love…

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