Manmarziyan: The Art Of Love (chapter 1)

“When two people are meant for each other, no time is too long, no distance is too far, no one can ever tear them apart.”
This simple quote has an important role in the up-coming of my story.
A great relationship happens when two people truly understands each other.

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She settled herself on the lake side. People used to say this place is quite comfortable but it didn’t provide any comfort. And especially now, when everything is unstable. Nothing was fine. It was a lost war. Ain’t it funny that how time slips away in just a blink? And good time, especially, don’t stay for long. How we thought things would end up like. Well, isn’t life is about many unexpected twists and turns? You never know what more is awaiting for you there. But sometimes it hurts. It is cause of tears. It really hurts a lot when your life start hating you.

It only took six months for everything to change. Now she was in love. Deep pure love that’s what her friends used to say. She thought of his sweet caring attitude. And oh, how he used to say that she is his life, his light, his whole world. But now nothing. Absolutely nothing, she thought.

Here, he is stuck in something. Something unusual, indeed. Can we call it memories or something else? Maybe lost love. Maybe hatred, maybe.

He was here since morning. Just on his sofa. “Go away. Away from me. Away from my life” these words kept ringing in his ears since like forever. It was like a reminder to him about almost everything. And thought deeply,” Why did you do this with me Radhika? Why!?! Answer me. Why?” He cried loud.
He got up and moved around, towards their room. Well, not their room anymore.
Oh pretty pictures of her hanged up on every wall. Pretty smile, huh? He went close to one of them and slid down his hand, while touching the frame. Oh no!

“Was it my fault to fall for you? Was it my fault to smile seeing you smile?” He took a deep breathe, and turned around to other side.

“I hate you too. I hate you Radhika Mishra.”

She was still here in her thoughts. And when now someone came behind her. He breathed heavily. Of course after running in this huge city, Mumbai.

“Radhu Radhu! Oh god! Here you are!” He said, still breathing heavily.

A drop or two ran down her cheeks silently. He had a shrewd glance on her.
“He hates me,” he said in a low, despairing voice, “Right?”
Never had anyone seen her crushed like this before. He seized her hands, pretending as if he was hurt seeing her like this. But deep inside, he was happy. Very happy that now he can have her all by himself.

“Radhu! Let’s go now” he said dryly.

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There are two guys here. One is Arjun Mehra. And other..not a thing to reveal soon. Should I continue or not? And guess me. Who can I be most probably? And sorry for the short update.
Hint: Many mmz fans already know me.

Credit to: Guess! Who am I?

66 comments

      • Amu…..sweetheart….i knew u…but got confused coz of ur pic….i always saw satz with varieties of pic collection….so…

        N not to forget ur humdard…n the other one u just gave prologue….complete everything ….I want to read each n all…post soon….it would b very chillax moment by which I can divert all my tensions…..

        Best of luck baby….update soon…n not to forget manha….my heart says u know her n she ll b back

        God bless u both…tc?? ❀ ❀ ? ? ? ? ❀ ?

      • Ameena

        Awww thank you so much! ❀ I’ll update other stories. Idk when but I will. Thanks again! Good luck for your exam! πŸ™‚

      • Gauri

        hey Bhagwan…!!!…Ameena meri jaan…I am not professional …its just the motivation I got from you guys…I was reading all the mmz fanfic …yours Humdard too…was very sad when you stopped it…one request can you continue that one too πŸ™‚

      • Ameena

        First, admit that you are professional. πŸ™‚ And second, I’ll definitely continue Humdard:)

      • Gauri

        Girl you are witty…and I love that…chalo anything for you … I admitt…now post humdard soon πŸ™‚

  1. Shree

    I know you!! So well.. Too familiar… Shall I say it?! ??

    Loved the update… Keep rocking baby!! Missed you a lot… Don’t run away again.. Update soon..

    Love you loads.. Tc.. Keep smiling… Bear hug ??

    • Ameena

      You don’t have to say anything. I told about it by myself πŸ˜‰
      Thanks! I hope I don’t run away. I’ll try to update soon. πŸ™‚

  2. lucky

    Hiiii friends I am also a mmz fan like you all I am a silent reader who reads all ff of mmz and I love all .By reading it I also was thinking to write abt it but I don’t know how I need to post it

  3. lavanya

    it’s amazing….the yearning which both radhika and arjun are feeling….it has got many emotions….you are really awesome in bringing out the perfect scene…please do continue….will be waiting for you regular…long updates….

    • Ameena

      I’m on cloud 9 right now. Oh thank you thank you so much! I’ll definitely continue and will also try to update soon

    • Ameena

      Hey Fatarajo! It’s me. Remember me? I’m the one who used to write humdard. You also commented there. And thank you so much❀

  4. Yours nishu

    hey ammu dear howr u

    Sweetheart very happy to see you here.

    You know mujhe toh aana hi thaa tere paas na jaane kaise uper waale ne mujhe aaj yaahan bye chance bhej diya bola jaa ammu ki story read kar

    Well it is by chance that I came across this page

    Want to know how.

    To see ur name

    yes dear on the right hand side I just see ur name and as I promise I came for friends.

    I came dear to meet you but here I noticed something spectacular

    Another master piece from my sweetheart jaanemann

    Loveeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee uuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu

    ammu. Sweetheart I thought you and all left so I also gone but came for meeting you all.

    Love u dear.

    Words are magical thoughts are extremely touch to my heart.

    and I feel each and every word this is the magic of ammu heart. what say meri jaan.

    Love u ammu always with you dear.

    Keep smiling Tight hugs to you meri jaan. Guess who am I hmmmmmmmmmmm ammu

    once a friend always a friend.

  5. Yours nishu

    Love u shree laxmi, manhu where are you meri saviour, roma, mansi chinni zara, nemi,

    and many more and mostly naty you too left why dear. missing u a lot.

    love u richu .

    keep smiling

    Once a friend always a friend.

    • Hey…nisha where r u….m new here but I always read ur comments n ur naadan dil as silent….plz come back na?? n plz complete ur story….even I stucked with the hands met ta save the kalas….tc..??

    • Ameena

      Thanks susi! Will let you know about the another guy in up-coming chapters πŸ™‚
      Love you! Take care!

  6. Ameena

    Nisha Nisha…nishu. I’m really mad at you. Why did you left me?! Why?! Why?! Why?! If you were in front of me, then even god couldn’t help in saving you from me. ?

    And now,Idk how to thank god. For sending you by chance here or else you forgot me completely.

    Okay let’s calm down a bit. Cause at the same time, I don’t want to kill you cause I love you. And morever, you are my wife πŸ˜‰ so I don’t wish to spent my whole life in jail πŸ˜‰

    Thank you! Thank you! So much! Love you too! And don’t leave me again like that. ❀ πŸ™‚

    • Lakshmi

      ??Don is here…??.n yeah even god can’t save anyone from this don??. We’ll save u from without getting into jail ammu if u do anything wrong as don.lol.

  7. nisha

    hey rosie dear very happy to meet a silent reader dear I too a silent reader in past and trust me

    its just the love of friends in between conversation what makes us came out and being a non-silent reader

    and say your heart louder dear

    always say everything by heart.

    Sweetheart I love u sooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo much that you came out and comment Dear gets more and more and more love with all of us.

    Sweethart Solt like a rose petal huh rosie.

    loving ur name too.

    Dear I can’t commit when I came I try but can’t commit to anyone. Coz the real life is heavy on me.
    I get more and more busy

    You know after a long time I came accidently to my own house comment box.

    But I try dear I try for u my sweetheart for sure. Love u always by heart.

    keep smiling

    dear

    once a friend always a friend.

    and yaa keep reading Manmarziyan The art of love ameena sweetheart ammu spectacular story and being a non-silent reader and

    Its a pleasure of all of us to have a friend like u dear.

    Ammu and all of us will love u alot.

    and Keep smiling

    Once a friend always a friend.

    • Omg nishu…i just saw in past abt ur inner gud qualities…but don’t know it’ll flow for me in this way…a hearty hug for u…loads of love…❀ ❀ ❀ ? ?
      N m not commenting only…in fact I started my ff new dimension…inspired by mmz authors…they all r too gud..including u…i salute all of them…

      N thanks for saying u will try to update…m on cld 9…thank u for liking my name also…m blushing like rose
      ..u r the 1st one to like my name…

      N about amu’s ff …her ff n I won’t read
      ..that is impossible….i admire her a lot….specially for her bold n wittiness…demanding nature…a true frnd qualities….n I miss manha also….though I got Roma lately…

      Enough of my blabbering…i shd stop here…feeling happy chatting with u….if u v time…then just give a look to my ff..I’ll b obliged…tc…luv u…???

    • Ameena

      What you guys want to kill me right now? I’m blushing all red ? Thank you guys!! πŸ™‚ I’m blessed to have such friends. ‘Rosie’…hmm this name is too familiar. Love this name too. Love y’all. πŸ™‚

  8. yours nishu

    hey ammu I always near by you dear but a little busy

    somehow I remember you 2 story name s and now 3rd story too.

    Always Guess who am I loving u a lot .

    And Be happy stay happy and keep smiling meri jaaan.

    Once a friend always a friend.

  9. Roma

    Oh my amuuuuuuuuuu ….loved it very very much. ..this is awesome. ….the second guy is none other than saral, the jerk…..

    I missed you sooooo muchhhh my dearrrr…how the things going…I see lots of comments here…n my whole mmz gang is here….nishaaaaaaa my dear missed you a lotttttttttt. …manha still missing. …gauri, rosie, ruby,sathya, angel, roshini, astha, laxmi, manju, dhara, lavanya, mishti, hope, lucky, fatarajo….And Many more….how are you all… β™‘β™‘β™‘β™‘β™‘ love You Loads My Sweeeeeet deariiiiiieeeeessss..

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