Manmarziyan Argh… I love her… few shots.. Shot 1

Hieee all now this time with a short story.. may have a max of few parts around 5 to 6… hope u all will like… happy new year to my friends… have a great year ahead… love u all… muhhhaaaaa…happy bday brin… i wanna give u a OS but this got stuck and so i am writing this for u and baby i wanna thank u as well why ?? u will see it in the end coz u are also the reason for this ss…. too much suspense right he he he u guys know me what level of suspense i have… he he he oki read and say me…

Enjoy the ride…

No.. not again…not again… not to temple pls… i was busy making a pout face but my mother was all the time busy packing her stuffs and gave me one word u r coming and no more talking shut up and come…

I cannot help but give a big breathe out and started to pack… why always temples… Argh… thinking so i made all the arrangements… It was for my brother’s wedding some rituals… let him go why me ?? thinking so made a final glance of my room and made a cry face looking at my bed…

Aww my bed is gonna miss me like mad… thinking so with the head hung down i sat on the Van…

We started from our place and the worst part was it was a van travel… Hell no… but thanks to the technology… my mobile was my partner and i was all the time busy with my mobile and i took the last seat of the van…

My brother was busy talking with his would be wife aka my sister in law a cute lovely and so friendly person but her sister was all the time busy stalking me… gosh it was all seen public and as i was the second son of my family… they thought of making a knot with me and her… not even in the wildest dreams… never… i have some thoughts of my future wife and she did not even suit to that… i shook my head and came back to sense when i saw her text… i silently avoided… and my SIL said one of her cousin will come to the wedding and will make all gala in the wedding…

Unknowingly i was curious… because my SIL was a bit shy type but when she spoke to her… she was all the time laughing and that made me curious to know more about her… but i knew nothing… not even her name… they had a pet name for her but i did not know even that….

We reached the place, sorry the temple area… It was actually my uncle’s house which is near to the temple so we stayed there…. that was a big flat… had many blocks… and we were in the ground floor… opposite to the back gate was a cute garden.. i was smiling wide… listening to the twitting of the birds… just then i heard a anklet sound… that was slow but was audible… then a voice… im back side mom…..that was angelic voice… when i stepped further i found a girl drying her hair… it was long… silky and she was busy beating and drying… and once her hand finished it she pulled her hair up by twisting her head…

Wooo came a voice… nothing my mouth… she was damn awesome… freaky beautiful… a t-shirt with a 3/4th midi.. she did not turn to my side but i was able to see her side face…and i was stalking at her busy without even blinking my eyes…she slowly went in and then i heard my mother’s call… Argh… i grinned my teeth and went in…

I hate those kinds of stuffs… temples… rituals… slokas mantras… argh why me… but thanks heaven there was not all these kinds of things… only few so we will start from here…

Then i came to know that we have to stay for 15 days… What i screamed and my mom was least bothered…

Mom i need to go to my office…

All gave me a plain stare…

When did u work in office… came a voice.. my dad… it was my dad’s company… technically my company… i gave one ooh look and went to the room… i knew all were laughing… least bothered… i want to sleep now…it was actually my mind was now traveling behind her… i turned and i saw her near my window… i can see her but she cannot… glass type…

I at once jumped on my bed and was watching her. I made sure that the room door is locked… she was mumbling something… so slowly i pulled the window so minimum amount and heard her singing… she was drying her cloth and with headset on her ears was busy singing…

Wow nice voice… i thought…but next scene made my eyes wide… she turned here and there and started to dance to the tunes… dancing a duet song in vacuum… i pulled my mobile and started to record her dance… she did all so cute and finally she went…

I replayed the video and was mesmerized and finalized she is my queen…

Evening…

I wore a kurtha half white and a jeans pant… i set my hair and started to the temple… and the next shocking was we have to walk… what the ?? it was a 5 minute walk even then how can they say that… but no other go need to do it… fine let me do it… thinking so i started.. but i did not find my mother… never mind she would be some where… my dad and the enemy.. no one my so called brother was walking in the front and then i heard my mother’s voice… when i turned i was froze…. she was there… same my queen… i was busy stalking… and she was busy speaking with her brother… she crossed me and then my mom came… my mother came and patted my shoulder and then i came back to sense…

What is happening ?? i was screaming inside… but she crossed me… i was flat… total flat… was a woman be ever simple yet this much angelic…

I need to know who is she… i was speaking to myself…

Why all are looking at me like this ?? Did i forget anything…. i was blinking… holy mother… i did not say my name right… my name is ARJUN…………….

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Tadaaa im bunnyaka ur Sv back with the short story series…. this is a fun filled yet a bit romantic short story with few parts… hope u all will like it…

So here is Arjun who was busy looking at her… but who ?? who is she ?? let us see what is gonna happen next ?? Hope u guys had a masti New year… stay happy and stay blessed… and as always smile wide… love u all….

34 comments

  1. Brin

    Brin

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    Awesome shot, love it to the core. Waiting for the next update, and thank you for the Birthday wish. πŸ™‚

    • S.v

      S.v

      |Author

      thank u so much brin.. u r a true support so wanna give u a sweet bday gift… love u so much and yet again belated happy bday…

  2. Rossy

    Rossy

    |Registered Member

    This is superb twin..awesome…fantastic…u haveso many ideas inside uπŸ˜ƒ…but short..only Arjun’s intro…m curious to know who is his sil ‘s sister who stalks him…lol…other girl is radz…
    And….why u late…update everything soon…and especially u said it’s a short story…so update it soon😈😈…

    • S.v

      S.v

      |Author

      twin well if i say thank u u will punch me so i wont and he he he arjun is the main part baba… ok madam ji will update all but as always late… u know me and also y … love u so much will update all including ur story as well and i love my fav emoji….awwww love u

  3. Chashni

    Sv akka this was nice.especially arjun mokka vanganappo.guessed that she is radhika.waiting for next akka take care

    • S.v

      S.v

      |Author

      chashni u r sweet… he he he semaya vaanguvan paaru lol…. aamam ava radhika dhan aana yaaru ?? neeye paapa… lol love u my dear… muhhhaa

  4. Jewel

    Jewel

    |Registered Member

    sv, this is amazing….. superb start…. u wrote that very nicely… waiting for next…. and ur other stories too

    • S.v

      S.v

      |Author

      jewel thank u so much for this lovely words will update all including ur lml soon promise sorry fro make u wait

  5. Sulbi

    Sulbi

    |Registered Member

    SV dear… it was simply superb… i loved it dear… the way u expressed was awsme… so curious for nxt part dear… update soon… tc… πŸ™‚

  6. Gianna

    Gianna

    |Registered Member

    Superb Sv, I read this first on watty and fell in love with it, now I read it again and I just fell in love with it more. Waiting for the next.

    • S.v

      S.v

      |Author

      the queen of mysteries thank u sooo much gianna i saw ur vote and now here ur comment awww im double noo triple happy…. muhhhaaa love u so much….

  7. Jessie

    Jessie

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    Finally….baby….Finally…..!!! Vanduten..!!! K…muraikadha…!!

    Arjun….darloo..we knew its you….hahah…recording her dance….ada paavi….!! Brother is his enemy…factu..factu…,!! Already one girl trying for Arjun…!! Ena pa…!! Nee aal apidi..!! Anklet…kurta…temple…..dance…singing..
    Nice ya….
    I remember one song…my fav.too….boss padathula…yaar indha pen than endru keten..!!

    Adhu pola…paya flat aaguran….!! Ok…Radz.,accounts padichurukala…illa CA inter a..!! πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰πŸ˜ˆπŸ˜‚πŸ˜ˆbaby….naangellam appave appidi…!! Adi dhool kelapu…bring the next one fasstt…..Arjun annan peru saral nu soliradha….naan azhudhuruven…!!! πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚loved it baby…..teddy hugs….TC….Argh….I loved it…!!

    • S.v

      S.v

      |Author

      unakkaga naa enna vena pannuvene…… lol aam aam adhey dhan boss padam song… lol….

      Adi paavi een unakkindha ratha veri ?? een maa ?? lol ava hmm velaikku pora… hmm aparam vera ennanu thaniya solren…. he he he

      Saral dhan nenachen…. sathyama avana nallavana kaatalamnu paatha vida maatengariye… he he he seri saral illatna yaaru ?? seri idha edhukku unna padikka sonnenu kadaiseela shotla theriyum… neeyum naanum serndhey sellum neramey….purinjukko… love u baby….

  8. _Ritu

    _Ritu

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    Sv another amazing story by u πŸ™‚ πŸ™‚ m really jealous πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ fabulous intro dear.. πŸ™‚ nd when I read Sam was shy..I was lyk πŸ‘€.she nd shy πŸ™‚ Rads d other girl.. πŸ™‚ waiting for nxt..loads of love. πŸ™‚

    • S.v

      S.v

      |Author

      Ritu thnk u so much… sam is shy… hmm let her once na… lol and i want u to come to wattpad as well…. pls do come there… will write this soon… lpve u muhhhaa

  9. Roma

    Awww….awesoooooome, marvellous. ..it’s incredibly beautiful my special. …I loved it from the bottom of my heart. ..arjun is so cute. ..he is stalking her lol…n I think she is rads ….his queen…awww….very beautiful narration n awesoooooome plot. …love u soooooooo muchhhhhh my sweeeeeethearttt. ..keep it up. ..muaaaaahhhhhh Bear hug β™‘β™‘β™‘β™‘β™‘β™‘β™‘ πŸ˜‰

    • S.v

      S.v

      |Author

      spl spl spl thank u so much muhhhaa ha ha ha yup it is rads… u will see in the next shot… muhhhaa love u so much ….

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