Manmarziyan 29th August 2015 Written Episode, Written Update on TellyUpdates.com
The Episode starts with Radhika asking Mala and Dada ji to what will she disagree. Dada ji makes excuses and tells about her earpain, asking her to clean his ear. Radhika asks Mala to say. Mala says someone is coming to meet you today. Radhika says she does not want to meet anyone, she will not marry. Mala asks her to settle down. Radhika says she won’t marry. Mala asks her to tell that person herself. The door bell rings. Mala asks Radhika to come. Radhika says she can’t love anyone else and recalls Arjun.
Arjun come to her while she picks the papers blown by air. She says she won’t come and asks Mala to go. He looks at her. Khwaishon pe likhi……………plays………………. He smiles and comes close to her. He holds her. He says your life is like blank paper Radhika, you are incomplete without ink of love. She turns and looks at Arjun. He asks why did she not marry. She says I m willing to marry, someone is coming to see me today. He asks such will with someone else’s signs. She sees mangalsutra and says I was removing it. He asks her to remove and give him. She turns and asks why did he come here.
He says I have to come to take whats mine. She says he can get other mangalsutra in Mumbai and asks him to go. He says he will go after taking his things. She says she has got her everything here. He holds her face and says you can’t lie well even today, if you got your everything, why do you make me feel your presence all the time……………… he asks why is her name in all his talk, why does his every moment wish to have her, I love you Radhika.
He says you left me and came here, but I could not leave you. She says Sam loves you. He says Sam does not love me. She asks then…. He smiles and says where there’s Samandar Singh, there is her idiot too. Sam eats food and Neil enters Radhika’s home. He says wife is resting when husband is working. Sam tells Dada ji about her choice, asking if he is good. Dada ji asks Neil does he know to clean ears. Neil asks what. They all laugh. Dada ji says love is great when there is friendship intact in it. Mala says she will get Radhika. Sam says let them be, even Lord should not come between husband and wife.
Radhika asks Neil? Arjun says Neil… no one knows how love happens, look at me, I fell in love with my way’s stones, I have my heart to my problem. Khwaishon pe likhi……………plays……………… He holds her close and kisses her. She says Sir… He says Arjun…. Just Arjun. She says Arjun and he hugs her.
After two years, scene shifts in Mumbai, Radhika wakes up Arjun romantically. He hugs her and she reminds him the schedule. He says he is getting best copywriter award today. He says you never used to take my name, and now whenever you call, you scold me and call. She says Arjun… and combs her hair. He says just name will not work now, and holds her close. Sam is sleeping. Neil wakes her up and she greets him good morning. He says now this is yours, and handsover the puppy….. They think what to name it, and suggest like Nesam, or Apple.
Arjun, Radhika, Sam and Neil come to Birdsong and greet Piyali. They all work together. Manmarziyon pe ab hum chale……………….plays…………. Arjun puts sugar in his coffee and they laugh seeing him. Some light moments while working are shown. Sam and Neil fight. Arjun and Radhika stop them. They discuss about work, while the title song plays in BG. They all hug and smile.
The show ended with a cheerful scene in Birdsong depicting their happy lives.
Update Credit to: Amena
2,074 Comments
@all- how was day guys? mine sucked big time and i think my cold got worse and also my mobile data is almost dead, dat means its taking forever to upload a page or site and soon der wil be no net. Hope u had a good day but not like mine 😀
der, haha dats a sad talk, well missing Manmarziyan lotssssssssss
@Anu- Hey I sent the emails with the given ids and thanks so much for da info and girl ur epis are awesome:D
Will update my stories soon guys 😀
Aww! Poor thing! Feeling sorry for you…:(…Try to update soon dear and hope for a better tomorrow…..
Hiii dear,
pls get well soon. I m giving u home remady 4 ur cold.
take 2 spoon of honey with half cup of warm water, just b4 going to bed.
after taking it sleep is must. so tek rest n get well soon.
To update d story. ha ha ha
Farah, drink lots of warm water through out the day. U will get will soon. Take care dear! .come back fast with your stories.
hey farha…feelin sad yaar….
its ok…just cold…ll get cleared soon…..
wish u 2 get well soon so tat v can njoy ur story….hahaha….
God bless u deary….
Hey all sorry I dinn cmnt actually to say I cmntd but dis stipid thing got deleted so guys now …….
Hey farha as usual ur a dhamaka love u !!!
Hey anu ur epi is now having a new twist n turn love it !!!
Hey savera ur too cool yaar I mean ur cmnts awsm !!!!!
Hey anaya d story ws !!muuuuuuah !!
Hey renu ur really an explosion u alwas cum with a new th love u also !!
N now thena anaya ur s r suchly intrstin yaar !! Missed u
hey
Hey natasha ur to ws very interesting !!
Hey samiha dear really yaar lov ur quotes n der inspirational !!!
Hey dipika missed u yaar !!!
Guys will b wetin 4 d nxt updates yaar so pls jaldi update kariye !!!!!!!!!!!
Thanks Mandy, and the quotes aren’t mine, I just translated them in English….
Heyyyy haha thanks and ur too AWESOME
Hey Mandy Hiii dear
I m fine . Thanks for liking it
hey savera….u melted me wid ur poem…..
Oh! GOd felt emotional dear…..love u loads
hey mandy…me 2 missed ur dear….
actually nt feelin well…ll post the nxt epi soon dear….
@Samiha- hey i saw dat and read ur parents are doctors dats amazing and dear wat is ur calling? u want to become a doctor too?
Yup, that’s what everybody wants so….
The episode starts with Neil and Sam having an eye lock and both hug tightly in water, but neil is still little bit annoyed. While our love buddies bit hesitant to get close in water, acts normal and enjoys swimming.. The duo couples after much enjoyment in water come out and walk for a while in the forest in opposite directions. Sam while walking in forest feels impossible to walk with high heels and hopping on one foot,she struggles to remove her high heel without tripping over. Neil finds sam not behind him & turns back & runs to her & offers his shoulder for support. Later he moves forward still being annoyed. Arjun and radhika find a small hut laid on wooden pillars. They go inside but couldn’t find anyone there, as it looked as some tourists made it on their own.
San follows neil and says thanks for the help idiot, but I would now like to get into your arms, forwarding her hands up to him and winks. He smiles and he wraps an arm around her back to lift her & he lifts and takes a breath while his face is buried in her hair. Sam wraps her hands around his neck and both have an eye lock. Its an awesome Eye lock which we have never seen it before(between them) having a meaning of apologies, care, love, affection and warmth.
Radhika peeps out through the small vent while rubbing her hair with towel and listens to BIRDSONG ( song made by sounds of birds). But it was bit dominated by the roaring sound of waterfalls. Arjun can’t divert his eyes from her and moves forward to come close to her making a chuckle. A low chuckle behind her causes her heart to jump into her throat. She turns around to find out , it is none other than her love, Arjun. He holds her so tight that the water drops fall down from their wet clothes even after a long time since they came out of lake. Radhika feels uncomfortable as someone can see them and tries to get out of his arms. Arjun notices this and goes out angrily..
Neil makes Sam sit on a knee wall, both hug each other and he kisses her on her forehead,followed by eyes, cheeks,nose.. When he was about to kiss her ears, she tickles. He smiles seeing her and hugs her followed by kissing on her neck. Arjun comes near the lake and calls out NS & radhika as they have to go back to their homes. All the duo couples were about to leave and joins at the place where they parked the car.
PRECAP : SAM along with ARJUN goes missing from the place and neil & radhika were left alone..
(THOSEGHAR WATERFALLS near THOSEGHAR VILLAGE in satara)…. <3 <3
Anu, very nice epi. You hv left it at interesting point. Looking forward to nxt epi. Great going girl!! Keep entertaining us!
wooooooooooow,anu i like ARDHIKA romance in the hut so sweet.keep it up yaar.eagerly waiting 4 next update.
hey anu njoyed ur epi dear…..still didn disclose the surprise…..
hmmmm….ve 2 wait 4 nxt epi….
Hey anu I got d answer yeah THOSEGHAR WATERFALLS !!!! Very romantic story but want ardhika romance !!!
Very intwresting yaar 😀
Wow renu…nice episode…waiting for more romance
itne sare comments oooooooooooooooo my god
Love me thoda aur!
Let me tell you tonight
When the stars are shining bright
Love me thoda aur!
Just take my hand in your hand
And then don’t you let it go
Love me thoda aur!
All I need is the time
When I promise that you’ll be mine
Love me thoda aur!
With you by my side
I know I’ll be fine
Hiiii Riya
nice one, dear
I loved it more n more
U r blessed sure n sure
Ur emotions r sooo pure
wow Riya…super…
with u by my side…i know i ll b 5n…omg…very touchin dear…
Wow riya. Its beautiful. Simply loved it. And why u r telling to love a bit more? Rather we love u a lot.
Its really very rhymin now I reLly want to give 101 hugs dear tight ones ha !!
Wow, nice…. You should become a lyricist….
Riya Dipika Savera as usual awesome yaar and u all talking in poems sooooooooo cooooooool 😀
I am posting my story.
EPISODE:4
The episode starts with niki saying we have to replace the letter and have to keep this report. Neil says are u a fool? dont u know that we cant go to dr arjuns room without his permission? Niki says i know and thats why i have brought these. Niki gives to all monkey cap. Sam says are we thief that we will go wearing monkey cap? Rahul says we dont have any choice. Niki tells them the plan. Anu says what? I cant do this. Niki says pls anu help me. Anu says okay. All wear monkey cap. Niki says guys we have to be very careful. They all go to hospital. Before entering to hospital parth says look the watchman is here. If we go to hospital at this time he will suspect us. Kirti says what can we do then? Neil says i know what we have to do. This mans girlfriend lives nearby if we bribe her then our work will be done. Neil goes and comes with watchmans gf. He gives her a cup of tea and asks her to give it to the watchman. She gives it to watchman and he falls asleep. Neil says this man will now sleep for 2 days. Niki says great. They all enter to the hospital. Parth says hey dr gupta is today on night guard. Kirti says if he catches us then we all will lose our job. Rahul says i know a weak point of dr gupta. He always fear his wife. Rahul sends a sms to dr gupta as his wife. He writes” come to home right now. I have find out about ur affair. Dr gupta recieves the sms and says what? what is she saying? Dr gupta leaves the hospital. Niki says wow rahul. U made dr gupta very afraid. Neil says niki now go to the dr arjuns room . Niki goes to the room and replaces the papers. Kirti says do fast niki. Niki comes out of the room. Someone is coming towards them. Parth hits the man on his head with a stick from behind. They all run out from the hospital. They all laugh. Anu says mission successful.
All are going to their home. Neil & sam are going together. Sam says i have found a new friendship after coming to swarage. Sam says i was shettered when yash bumped me. Now i again feeling happy. Neil says friendship is our world. We can get all happiness from friendship. Neil says u may also find ur love through this relation. I have found my love through this relation. He looks at sam and sam looks on. Samjhawan song plays………….
Anu comes to home. She thinks what happened at her first day of hospital. She recalls dr arjun and his words. She smiles and says sir is strict but not bad and thats why he saved me today from falling down.
Its morning. All internees are sleeping though its already 9:00am. Alarm rings and they all go to the hospital. Dr gupta calls them and says why r u late? dont u know the rules? Dr arjun says why r u all sleepy? did u go to complete any mission at night? They look at each other.
Dr arjun calls dr anu at his cabin. He says u have to attend a operation with me. Anu becomes happy.
Mala and dilip comes to mumbai. Mala says radhika always wanted to come to this city and work as a tpo model.
PRECAP:Mala sees anu and calls her as radhika. Anu dont notice her and gets into the car.
wow natasha wat a story….
i wonder if thr is anythin u left….ah! everythin is in ur story….love ,friendship,fun & mystery……
awesome work…..really enjoyed……
keep rocking buddy….
I am trying my best to give every u all a good story.
nice epi Natasha
I m loving d friendship of internees,
I m rly enjoin ur writing.
waiting 4 next
Internees are the main element of my story
Sooooo good…. Hope Mala and Dilip get their Radhu back….
Thank u for appreciating me
Very very interesting plotline
Thank u. Doctors are interesting in personal life as well as professional life. I am giving them salute as they work selflessly
Interesting yaar
Natasha very interesting episode. Thanks for entertaining us!!! Keep up the good work
Khushboo si hai baatein hamari..
DYM ki yaado se Judi ye Duniyadari…
Ye Dosti bani rahe ye hai arziyaa…
Salamat rahe Dosti…Yariya..Manmarjiyaan…
This is smalll try for our Friendship my deariess
pls tell me hw is it…..
@ mandy i missed u too dear…whr were u?
@ anu incredible episode…. liked Nesam romance today…. want more ardhika moment….
@ kfar u missed my name…jus kidding dear…its ok…n waiting for ur story…
@ renu whr r u dear…plz cum with u pov soon…
What a poem! so beautiful. U have every wourd beautiful with ur hands.
Hey Dipika
superb lines…..
khushbu spread ho rhi h
n ur Arziyan r already accepted
Hey dipika d poem deeply touchedme dipika its lovely !!!
Hey dipika thanx 4 d concern yaar kya bataun no signal no network n un4tuly battery dead it was a disaster yaar nnywas thanx puch ne kelie !!!
Wow nrtasha , just superb
Ummmmmaaaaaa …….
”Every small trial is the first step of a long stair which lead to success…” – Samiha Sarkar (me). Ha ha….
Dipika, I liked the poem a lot…
If you don’t mind, what is the meaning of ‘salamat’??
Inspiring 😀 u wil be a cool quote maker who will be also a dreamer and achiever 😀
EPISODE:5
The episode starts with arjun and anu going to the operation theater. They do a successful operation. The operation become suceessful because of anu. Arjun saysi want to give a tribute to u. Come to my cabin at lunch time and i will take u to a resturant. Anu happily says yes.
Sam and neil are in child ward. Neil and sam argue about to prescribe medicine. Sam says what do u know about medicines? U r a illiterate doctor. Neil says and what about u? U r a fake doctor. U r not a doctor but a witch. Sam says angrily what? Am i a witch? Neil says yes. Sam fetches a teddy bear from a child patient and hits neil. Neil hits sam with a doll. Sam pretends as if she get injurded. Neil runs near her and asks is she all right. Sam laughs. The children also laugh.
Its lunch time. Anu bumps with niki. Niki says where r u going ? Anu says to dr arjuns cabin . He will take me out for lunch. Niki says wow! He fell for u. Anu says no. He is giving me a treat as i have did a successful operation. Niki says congrates!
Anu comes to dr arjuns cabin. Arjun says lets go. Anu gets into the car. Mala calls her as radhika. Anu dont notice her and goes. Mala says to dilip i have seen radhika. Dilip says u r dreaming about her as u love her a lot.
Anu and arjun comes in a resturant. They order same food. They talk a lot about their life. After eating when anu stands up she slips and arjun hold her. They have a eyelock.
They reaches to hospital. Arjun says now go for work. Anu says thanks for the dinner. Arjun smiles and goes . Anu smiles and thinks about arjun.
All internees are in the looker room. They talks and laughes. They hear an announcement about go to the hall room. They comes to the hall and sees dr gupta, dr arjun and a lady. Dr gupta says this pretty lady is the head of administration of swarage and her name is dr jasmin maheswari. She greets everyone and says nice to meet u all. Dr gupta says she got award of best administrator doctor. So there will be party tonight at my house. All internees clap for dr jasmin. Dr jasmin says ur dress code is western.
All internees talks about the party. Niki says i am confused about which dress to wear. Kirti says i will have to parlour as its first party of hospital. Neil says everyone go and finish ur work quickly then we have to do preparations for party. Anu says i will not attend. Sam says no anu. U have to come. Otherwise dr jasmin will mind. Rahul,parth and all supports sam.
Its evening and anu is at home. She says to herself i will not able to wear western dress. Madhvi comes and gives her a very beautiful salwar. Anu becomes happy. Madhvi says ur dad brought it for u. Its very expensive and exclusive.
Sam is trying all her dresses. Piyali (sams mother) comes and says wear this dress. She gives sam a black western dress. Sam says its beautiful. She huges her.
PRECAP: All internees comes to dr guptas house.
Hey thanx 4 d fast update yaar natasha its quite interesting !!!!
Welcome.
Nice Nats i like it 😀
Thats my pleasure
Natasha – nice plot. Episodes are turning out very interesting. Keep up the good work! Keep writing
@Natasha thank you so much for apritiating my efforts…
this epi is awsome one…spl anu n arjun eyelock sceen…
@Savera thanks buddy its really great for me….love u….
@mandy thank you dear for such great word….
n feelin sad for battry n no network situation… may ths issues solve soon…n u can get back on tu….
Love u All…
Keep giving feedbacks
Thank u so much guys for the concern Samiha, Thena, Savera, Shub..I did try the remidies, and had also put two extra spoons of honey as I like it so much n I drank lots of warm water…my throat is still sore but the nose block is gone..love loads guys..
Dipika I never forget u dearyyyyy 😀
Since I have been havin a downer day, I listened to Pink, she has such a beautiful voice.
Dedicatin the song- Pretty pretty please, dont u ever ever feel that u r less than less than perfect….
Drawn Together
“Put on the earrings.” He whispered into her ear, his warm fell on her right shoulder, and neck.
She saw in the mirror, he held his hand near her hand, the box open with small ruby earrings, they were more like tops.
With held up breath, she removed the tops from the box, all the while aware of his burning gaze on her through the mirror.
Thoughts creeped into her mind while put on the tops, he looked so uncaring and nonchalant and the jewellery was so thoughful to bring, did he even buy it himself? or did he order his secretary to pick something up for his wife.
But, what could she expect from him, she is seeing him now after months. He never asked how she was doing? how her workshop was going or anything whereas she saw his whereabouts in the tabloids and magazines.
Only a week ago he was in London for a business venture, a beautiful lady on his arm and in camparision, Radhika felt herself completely inadequate.
All these thoughts made her to worry.
“Where are your thoughts?” Came a brazen enquiry which made her to jump.
He was standing too close to her back, his hands on her bare shoulders, he had took the wrap and was putting it around her.
“I…I..” She started to explain, but she halted, when tilted his head to the side a little and slid curious gaze all over her face, his hands surrounded her body, Radhika felt hitch in her breath.
“You’re like an open book, they’re going to eat you alive if you don’t wipe out that stricken look.” He said, a word of advice and a little admonishing in his tone.
He slid his hand up on her shoulder and glided his fingers on the rubies, his forefinger stopped on the beating pulse on her neck, he rubbed a little, just a touch of whisper, but it raked hot shivers all over her skin.
His other hand, held her right hand over the wrap, his fingers slid into hers, his front plastered with not an inch of gap.
“Always look sharp, never show your weakness or they are going to fall on you like vultures. That’s what happens in business.” He adviced her more on the worldly living.
Radhika’s twenty percent sane mind tried to grab his advice, but the other eighty percent of her not so sane mibd now was getting warmly aware of his delicate glid of touch over her pulse, aware of his heat at her back, aware of him all together.
Then it was all gone as he moved away, and Radhika was left cold, bereft and all alone and disturbed her no end that she felt all this. She dismissed the intense though as they came in her mind.
Look sharp, she declared his advice to her mind, she sqaured her shoulders and put on a brave face and turned around to face him.
He was just an inch distance to her, he peered down at her, his assessing gaze running all over her features, then he concluded in a word whatever he saw there written on her face in a pleased tone.
“Good.” He succinted and turned towards the door, and Radhika felt as if they were going to the border and fight for the country and get slaughtered in the process.
God, he was a complete drill master and what was he talking about vultures? were the people that bad since where they are going? if so why can’t they just decide to not go altogether and go to a restaurant and have a quiet dinner, but sigh, they had to appear publicly sometime or the people going to think if something is fishy, this all hurried marraige betweem them had already raised quite an eyebrows.
As she read in the morning paper after the night of their wedding, news like…
“The Black Hearted Tycoon Prince Had Finally Got Himself Hitched.”
“What’s the reason behind the hurried wedding.”
“The Business Honcho is spotted with other women hanging on his arm every week…We Ask Where Is The Wife?!?”
These all news made her feel disgusted. Why are the Papparazi so prying? Can’t they just take a hike, she thought, feeling like tearing of the news articles into pieces.
Hey farha wich story r u writin ???
Hey d drawn together kya arjun or radhika ek dusre se pyaar karne langenge ???
Itz Drawn Together dearyy 😀 n still early to telllll hahaha
hey farha….luvd it….
njoyed it the whole…..laughed out loud wen arjun askd”wr r ur thots” & “u r lik an open book”…..as m lil down 2day,urs is lik a medicine 2 me….
luv u loads dear…..
Heyyy tight hug buddy and get well soon yaar love loads too 😀
Poor radhika. Not at all aware that these papparazis could crawl too much into your privacy at times
Haha yep she soo unware and hey anaya like ur hindi english mix super cooooool story 😀
Enjoyed alot kfar…keep rocking
Sooooo good…. Hope Mala and Dilip get their Radhu back soon….
Hi al dearieeeesssssss……….
EPISODE 129:
SCENE 1:
title song bgm:
The office ws shown busy…..tejj & zubin sittin in a cabin,wer preparin the agenda….manya & kritika stood 2gether discussin on the room’s decorations…..piyali ws shown supervisin,claryfyin staff doubts & givin suggestions 2 decorators on hangin wallpapers…..she got a call 4m sam,hr face lukd delighted while talkin & ended hr call wid a glee of contentment……
She called all staff members,said tat nesam & ardhika wud b thr wid them 2morrow……every1 cheered up & ws sharin a smile wid 1 another……she applauded every1 on their work & wishd them gud luck 4 the nxt day’s meetin…..
NIGHT: (nesam & ardhika reached mumbai):
arjun unlocked the door & radz stood bhind hm…..the moonlight glimmered on the portico…..he opened the door & stretched hs hand 2 hrs lik a prince askin 4 a princess’s….she smiled & placed hr hand in hs……she tuk hr inside,both wer havin an exultant smile on their faces……arjun made hr lie on the bed & covered hr wid bedsheet….wen he ws about 2 leave,she called hm,hr upper frame wer lil upward wid a balance on hr elbows……..he uttered ssshhhhhhh,hs index finger on hr mouth…….raisin up hs eyebrows,he gave a sedate nod & went out…….she kept hr head on pillow,immersd in2 thots wid a beatific grin stickin 2 hr lips…..arjun came thr,hs r8 hand carryin a plate of bread slices & hs left,a glass of milk…..she ate all those slices as if she had been hungry since ages…..she drank the milk in a gulp leavin arjun 2 smile broadly…….he caressed over hr head & askd 2 tak rest sayin tat 2omorrow wud b a busy day in office…..he switched off the light & tuk hs place bside hr….he closed hs eyes & she ws all admirin hm……
Sam lukd exhausted as hr energy ws out of the box……she threw hrself over bed ,hr face fell on roof & feet touchin the floor…..
“neil….neeeeeiiiiiillllll…..idiiiiiiot”,she called while lyin in the same posture……
she bellowed tat she ws terribly hungry,lifted hr head up,hr hands clutchin hr 4head…..hr eyes stood still seein neil cumin thr wid food plates….she got up enthusiastically & sat on the bed…..in a minute she put down the empty plate & burped…..neil didn take off hs eyes 4m hr al the while & she smiled at hm 4m ear 2 ear……
SCENE 2:
A house ws shown outside….it ws a bungalow wid large gates & wide entance…..the garden alongside the parkin lot ws creepin 2 the backyard…..
A man ws gettin upstairs,hs hand ws shown havin a photograph….he knocked at the door of a room & went in……a lady ws shown hr back,leanin in a chair cross legged…..he gave hr the photo & made an exit….she tuk a luk at the photo & it ws of sam……
“i ll soon c u samaira khanna”,she said tappin the photo…..
SCENE 3:
sunrays fell in ardhika’s room thru the open window……arjun’s head ws rested on pillow & radz’s ws on arjun’s chest……hs r8 arm ws under hr head & left wrappin around hr waist at back……radz woke up 2 c arjun sleepin…..she held hr heaad up,kissed hs chest & smiled…..
“Oh!!!! cute baby is sleepin”,said radz pinchin hs nose……
she stepped down the bed & made hr move fast seein the clock…….she got a caall,hr screen ws shown ‘PRIVATE NUMBER calling…….’ …….she attended the call wid a ? of ‘who it might b’ on hr face…….
“hello Mrs.Arjun…..kaise mera bhai ‘Arjun Mehra’ hai?”,asked the other end…..
“aapka bhai!!!!!!!!!!!…..nandhini…..?”,radz wondered….
END of epi 129….feelin nt wel yaar …so slow updates…..keep ur feedback buddies….luv u loads
oops…hate mistakes…in bed hs r8 arm ws under hs head….else it wud b a funny posture..hahaha
Thena its suprrb yaar I no ur story will be more romantic n pls yaar koi twist lao yaar but all around ur A-MA-ZINNGG !!
niceeeeeeeee i liked it 😀
Thena yaar isi moment pe END of d epi kya yaar at least precap tah liko but nnywas jaldi 130 epi update want to c who dat lady was !!!!★★★
nice story,waiting 4 the next dr……………
Wow thena…super cute episode…enjoyed alot…update nect epi soon yaar
Thena fab writing! U hv detailed each and every scene so we can visualize like a live stream. Thank you for writing!! That lady shud be priya mehra I guess! Waiting eagerly for next epi.
Liked it all but loved the scene-3…. Amazing and mysterious…. Keep rocking…..
loved it 😀
yipppeeeeee….our mmz has got nw 6.3 out of 10 in IMDb……those who didn rate pls rate it wid 10 stars….it deserves 2 get more than 8 yaar…..
OMG really awesome news im gonna go rate
Maybe that’s the reason he was taking her out, to put rumours to rest, if so then Radhika should bear up to an act of her life.
“Are you going to come along any time soon or are you going to stand there like a statue for the rest of your life?” He enquired her annoyed, with an right eyebrow raise, standing near the door, like a tall, dark, avenging angel. A very irrirated dark angel.
Alrighty, She hurriedly grabbed her silver clutch and moved along.
Ten minutes later, in his black lambourghini, sitting beside to him in the luxurious interior of the car, Radhika felt herself go into an immense panic mode, it attacked her nerves into a furray of deep rooted tensed and anxious emotions.
She can’t do this? She can’t a wife to this silent tycoon? He already made it clear aboutnot nice people accounters.
Just then she felt a firm grasp on her nervous knee, she saw his hand hold on it. She didn’t realize she was doing it. It was a nervous habit, it a tell tale sign of how anxious she was.
She glanced sideways at him. He was looking at her, his expression, my god, for the first time, his edgy sharp expression was changed into soft lines. His eyes were light. He slid his fingers on her cheek. It warmed her cool skin and also awashed her with safe and secure feeling.
“Everything is going to be fine. I’m right here with you, yes?” He said slowly, soflty, giving her immense relief which made her expel out the tensed breath.
She nodded her head looking deep into his eyes.
There was a quirk to his lips, his eyes lightened more.
“There’s the colour.” He murmured, rubbing her cheek a little with his forefinger and thumb.
This made her blush several shades. His hand loosened it’s firm grip on her knee, just then the Limo jerked to a stop from it’s smooth glide.
Oh, heavens, the panic returned again, when the door opened, and he got out of the car.
Just as immediately there were blinding of several flash lights. She saw from wincing eyes that he streched his hand for her.
Radhika expelled a deep breath and got out of the car by putting her quivering hand on his. She looked around and several photograph fluttered up to them. They were desperate to click them together.
She felt a hand slid around her waist, pulling her to the side.
Radhika glanced up at him, and was shocked to see him smile wide down at her, god in heaven, this was the first time she saw him smile and it more blinding than the camera flashes. His white even teeth gleamed but not his eyes, indicating her it was a farce and fallacy his public image, immediately her guard went up high but not towards the people around but towards him. He was becoming a danger to her, she need to protect herself from his caring fake behaviour.
“Smile, darling, or the tabloids are going to think I beat you up behind the closed door. I don’t want another title as a ‘Wife beater’ in the headlines tomorrow, So act like you’re in love with me.” He whispered sweetly to her, his hands tightened on her waist, Radhika did not miss the warning in his tone, though he looked smiling happy.
She immediately smiled up at him a watery one……
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So, DaTs IT…
plsss do tell how it is till den..adios mi amigasss 😀
Fantastic!!!!!!!! Can’t wait for next episode.Farah u have an amazing talent
thanks Thena, Annie, Shub, tanya, deepa , mandy means a lot ur comments I gonna update soon i fell asleep writing half way haha
Farha, once again fluent writing. With every episode it is getting more interesting! Thanks for updating inspite of ur bad health! Get well soon!!
It is getting more and more amazing plot.
Farha amazing amazing…..just read it out yaar….
n again a coincidence with our thoughts dear…..me too did mention the same car in my epi & color too the same……just thrilled….y in this world should I ve mentioned the same color….
Haha dats becoz we think so much alike 😀 n I liked ur next epi and Priya Mehra’s hair style very cool description:D
pani is the bestttttttt 😀
Jane kaun ho
Par ho tum kayi
Hain dill ko mere yaakeen
Na hain Iptiida , Na hai Imteehan
Hai Meri dastaan Tu Wahi
Tera Sukuun , Ya Junoon tera
Teri kushi ya tera gham
Jo bhi Ziyaa who Jiyaa mene
Jo bhi kiya tujhse Kiyaa
Beinteehaan … !!!
Man ko behlaye ..Behkaye
Koi Khoyayish Khamkha
Palkoon pee Aye sapno ki Barish Khamkha
Abhi se Haal hai aisa Na jane Hoga kaisa
Jo ye Ho gaya
Beinteehaan !!!
Unconditional love
Zain & Aliya
At first both are hate each other …….
Marriage happen ………..
Again both are hate each other… …
They start help each other…..
Both are depending each other….
Start love…… ..
Zaya…..
Hey riya beintehaa my fav sefial hua kartha tha on xolors I tooooo loved it n yaa ur dis rhyme quote or pov its really touchin !! Love u yaar huggggieee!!!!!
It’s also my favorite……
Nice……
But what is ‘beinteehan’???
Beintehaa is a indian romantic serial,
Which telecast in colors….
In Colours? Still now??
quick question- what is ur comfort food guys? Mine is pani puriiiiiiii….Golgapppppa hahahahaha
tell tell plsss????
Hey farha yaar mine comfort food is pani puri / golgappa as well yaar wat to do I love da foods dat are fast wen I need watever it may b but my fav is pani puri !!!!!
What a co-incidence! Even my comfort food is pani puri/golgappa. In bengali, it’s called ‘Fuchka’…
hey farha…i wonder who in tis world ll dislike pani puri….cos mine too is pani puriiiiii yaar……just luv it….
My comfort food is pani puri and golgappa. We all like this food as it is very tasty and chatpata
Oh Thena my dear ,,
I missed U sooooooo much.
were U not OK? wht hpnd 2 U?
nice epi dear, U hv explained every thing with detail.
I liked it veru much.
Thanks dear , u liked my poem, it is for all of us.
I was really waiting 4 U dear
Tk rest thena…
ur s so interestng…n dnt worry abt typo errors…n thanx for d episode n entertaing us evn in dis conditn.
luv u
Sorry yaar…anu its nice episode….waiting for surprise
Pls suggest me a name which will be perfect for my story.
Hey natasha I donno I f its ok but d name I wud suggest is …
PYAAR MEIN DOCTOR !!!!
Tell me how it is I wont mind !!!!
Hi friends
l was always b silent reader
2say about manmarziyan 4 me this much.’friendship is like a deep sea it doesn’t have any end’
Hi Irene, just this much words are enough to express your thoughts…
”WELCOME”
Well said !!!! Irene !
What a co-incidence! Even my comfort food is pani puri/golgappa. In bengali, it’s called ‘Fuchka’…
Oh, and your story was reallllllly good…. Arjun, you natkhat mystery!!!
hey samiha…thank u sooooo much yaar…
oh u lik my mystery huh….am glad tat u mentioned it dr…..
keep gvng ur feedback bud…
@mandy,farha,jayaru,deepa,shub,savera,saji…….thank u al 4 ur lovely cmmnts dearies….really ncouragin & drives me a lot yaar……@shub hey keep guessing…@mandy hahaha tat ws hw the epi supposed 2 end budddy…..
@farha,savera,saji…thank u sooooo much 4 ur concern buddies…..hey savera caught wid cold yaar….n my throat oh it sucks…….cant evn swallow……tried 2 update more epi 2day bt cudnt yaar……hi deepa epdi ma iruka…..y r u late 2day ma…..
EPISODE 130:
SCENE 1:
Arjun came out of the bathroom,rubbing hs wet hair wid a towel…radz stood in front of the mirror dng hr hair….she had worn an usual attire,the white leggings plastered 2 hr legs & a red kurti on hr top…..hr gaze fell fixed sumwhr,the luks wer anomalous & hr hands kept combin though……sudden thr she felt arjun’s heat at hr back….he ws wrappin hs arms around hr waist,hs head on hr shoulder…..
“good mornin my dear panauti’,he greeted lukin at hr in mirror….
she smiled at the mirror & turned 2 hm…..nw hs hands were perched on hr shoulders & hr hands clutchd hs biceps…..she smiled partially wen he lukd at hr…….he askd hr if she ws alr8 lukin in2 hr eyes….she smiled & nodded in yep bt again hr gaze fell sumwhr….
“radhika kya hua?…..tell me”,he enquired hr in a firm tone….
she said nothin,hr eyes were avidoin contact wid hs……he held up hr chin,asked hr 2 luk in2 hs eyes & implored hr 2 speak out…..she hesitantly uttered nandhini bt b4 she cud complete hr’s,he interrupted & asked hr 2 nt take hr name in front of hm anymore…..he lukd upset,hs face filled wid the rays of emotional strain & in no time hs mood went off…..she held hs face,threw hm hr cutie smile & said tat she wud never ever utter tat name 2 hm…..he kissed hr 4head,hs xpressions wer impassive though…..he patted hr shoulder & left 4 changin over…..hr smile faded away once he left & she fell in2 thots, hr eyes kept movin side 2 side…..
NaRal (nandhini & saral) stood waitin at the beach…..nandhini shouted at saral if he said the r8 time 2 hm(mentionin sum stranger)……saral told hr tat he had cum pointin hs hand 2 a man approachin them….the man greeted hr & asked 4 the photograph……nandhini gave hm sam’s photo & warned hm 2 xecute their plan soon if he wanted hs ful commission…..
SCENE 2:
BIRDSONG:
the office ws the finest of its kind,shone wid a luk of top-class……staff members arrived thr in formals….manya had worn a white shirt & a black skirt xtended 2 hr knees top….piyali ws waitin 4 nesam & ardhika & kept on diallin…..just then nesam arrived thr…..sam wid hr usual style lukd astonishingly class…..she had worn a purple jacket clutched fit 2 hr top & a white mini skirt decorated hr down lik a barbie doll…….neil’s formal suit just embellished hs handsomeness……sam rushed 2 piyali,hugged hr & planted a kiss on hr cheek…..piyali embraced hr,askin the werabouts of ardhika….. sam assured hr tat they wud b soon thr….just then radz called sam & informed hr tat they wer stuck in traffic,wud reach thr ASAP…..
Piyali stood at the entrance, holdin an orchid bouquet…..neil,sam & manya wer standin alongside hr,the other staff members wer bhind them…..a black Lamborghini screeched 2 stop at the entrance…..
SCENE 3:
The driver stepped out & darted 2 open the back door…..PRIYA MEHRA ws evry inch stylish & elegant wid a sturdy muscular physique…..a woman of suave & self possessed she ws….. hr attire ws a stylisly draped saree & hr hair ws of gorgeous squiggles coiffure…..piyali ushered hr in wid the bouquet,carryin a persistent grin al over……piyali introduced the partners sam & manya 2 priya….they shakened hands & nw she enqiured about the 3rd partner Arjun mehra…..just then ardhika reached thr……..she turned back & tuk a luk at them……she threw a luk of scrutiny on radz 4m top 2 bottom…….
END of epi 130…….
I went out of station yaar….so din read ur stories for tdays ma….missed alot dr…2dy my first duty aft reaching my home i read all of ur stories yaar….so only late command ma……enjoyed the episode very much…..keep rocking….love u buddy
Niccccceeeeee……
Thanks for mentioning NaRal (seems real villain type)… Ha ha….
At last Priya Mehra. Now she would just start scrutinizing Radz, won’t she? And thanks for entering Manya, but what ’bout her crush for Neil??? Please clear that dear….
Very nice epi yaar main aur kya kahun I have no words to describe u yaar !!Love u THENA ♥♥★★☆♡
vey nice description girl awesome 😀
wow,waiting 4 the rest.
Wow good job guys nyc stories
The episode starts with AR & NS about to leave and car doesn’t start. Neil asks what’s wrong with this, how can we go now and says I’ll check wait. Arjun let’s him to check but Neil denies to check saying we can’t do anything now. Arjun says he wil call piyali and wil tell about the situation, she will send car for us. All agree to arjun. Arjun goes to call and comes back saying it takes time, let’s roam here and there til car comes.
They go for a long walk in the forest while talking, suddenly Neil and radhika notices Sam & arjun missing. Its almost late and they have to lit the light. Radhika&neil starts calling out arjun, sam and radhika starts crying. Neil consoles radhika and search there for a while, and says let’s go to car parking slot and nearby lake. They might have missed the route.
Radhika, Neil searches at car parking but couldn’t find arjun&sam there. They start to go to lake banks to search there. On the way Neil sees arjun’s watch fallen on ground and gets worried, while radhika gets Sam’s bracelet. They run to the lake and gets shocked and surprised to see campfire and tents and a beautiful table arranged with two bottles of champagne and few glasses and some stuff to eat. Tears roll down from Neil’s eyes and radhika’s as well.
Arjun and Sam sees them and comes out from hiding behind a tree. Both folding hands and standing with foot apart appear on the other side of the campfire. FB shows arjun removed the spark plug and fuel relay , so as to make car doent start.. Sam shouts I LOVE YOU NEIL, THIS IS FOR YOU. Neil gets spell bound and falls down on his knees having his eyes overloaded with tears of happiness and surprise. Sam rushes to him and hugs him crying. Radhika runs to arjun and scolds him for his disappearance for sometime. Arjun smiles and wipes her tears and asks howz the surprise. She turns to him and looks into his eyes.. Their eyes have spoken their DIL KI BAATEIN. Arjun hugs her and thanks her for being light to fill out his darkness..
Nandini comes home and plays with him.nandini greets her parents and talks to them. She feeds the kid, makes him sleep and thinks of arjun.
Not only Radz and Neil, but I also liked the surprise… I hope Nandini doesn’t turn that kid into another darknedd filled Arjun…. And the story was nice as always…. Keep rocking….
Thanq so much samiha for liking the surprise..
Its really very interesting ANU dear yaar !!♥♥♥ The surprise was worth that moment !!!!
Surprise was awesome! I feel nandhini would hv changed for the good! Waiting eagerly for the next epi! Anu loved it n thanks for entertaining us.
Anu Hiiiii
I liked d way Sam n Arjun surprised Niel n Radhika
nice epi …. waiting 4 d next.
woow i really like the surprise,keep it up ANU,WAITING 4 THE NEXT.
Niccccceeeeee……
Thanks for mentioning NaRal (seems real villain type)… Ha ha….
At last Priya Mehra. Now she would just start scrutinizing Radz, won’t she? And thanks for entering Manya, but what ’bout her crush for Neil??? Please clear that dear….
hiii friends,
wow thena good job.
as always ardhika scene like more than other. 🙂 🙂 🙂 priya mehra’s entry seems interesting . now sarandini back their davilious character .
waiting for next episode dear! !! keep going on… 🙂 miss u a lot ardhika nesam .
anaya waiting for HPDDAK written epi.. . please post it soon dear
I’m eagerly waiting … 🙂
anu where r u dear ?? also waiting for your episode dear …. come back
……… good night
Anu
i loved ardhika and nesam scene….and hope nandhini din spoil the life of another child…
Wat a surprising epi….loved it dr….waiting for next epi
Anu nice epiiii n thena awesome yaaar