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Manmarziyan 29th August 2015 Written *Last Episode* Update

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Manmarziyan 29th August 2015 Written Episode, Written Update on TellyUpdates.com

The Episode starts with Radhika asking Mala and Dada ji to what will she disagree. Dada ji makes excuses and tells about her earpain, asking her to clean his ear. Radhika asks Mala to say. Mala says someone is coming to meet you today. Radhika says she does not want to meet anyone, she will not marry. Mala asks her to settle down. Radhika says she won’t marry. Mala asks her to tell that person herself. The door bell rings. Mala asks Radhika to come. Radhika says she can’t love anyone else and recalls Arjun.

Arjun come to her while she picks the papers blown by air. She says she won’t come and asks Mala to go. He looks at her. Khwaishon pe likhi……………plays………………. He smiles and comes close to her. He holds her. He says your life is like blank paper Radhika, you are incomplete without ink of love. She turns and looks at Arjun. He asks why did she not marry. She says I m willing to marry, someone is coming to see me today. He asks such will with someone else’s signs. She sees mangalsutra and says I was removing it. He asks her to remove and give him. She turns and asks why did he come here.

He says I have to come to take whats mine. She says he can get other mangalsutra in Mumbai and asks him to go. He says he will go after taking his things. She says she has got her everything here. He holds her face and says you can’t lie well even today, if you got your everything, why do you make me feel your presence all the time……………… he asks why is her name in all his talk, why does his every moment wish to have her, I love you Radhika.

He says you left me and came here, but I could not leave you. She says Sam loves you. He says Sam does not love me. She asks then…. He smiles and says where there’s Samandar Singh, there is her idiot too. Sam eats food and Neil enters Radhika’s home. He says wife is resting when husband is working. Sam tells Dada ji about her choice, asking if he is good. Dada ji asks Neil does he know to clean ears. Neil asks what. They all laugh. Dada ji says love is great when there is friendship intact in it. Mala says she will get Radhika. Sam says let them be, even Lord should not come between husband and wife.

Radhika asks Neil? Arjun says Neil… no one knows how love happens, look at me, I fell in love with my way’s stones, I have my heart to my problem. Khwaishon pe likhi……………plays……………… He holds her close and kisses her. She says Sir… He says Arjun…. Just Arjun. She says Arjun and he hugs her.

After two years, scene shifts in Mumbai, Radhika wakes up Arjun romantically. He hugs her and she reminds him the schedule. He says he is getting best copywriter award today. He says you never used to take my name, and now whenever you call, you scold me and call. She says Arjun… and combs her hair. He says just name will not work now, and holds her close. Sam is sleeping. Neil wakes her up and she greets him good morning. He says now this is yours, and handsover the puppy….. They think what to name it, and suggest like Nesam, or Apple.

Arjun, Radhika, Sam and Neil come to Birdsong and greet Piyali. They all work together. Manmarziyon pe ab hum chale……………….plays…………. Arjun puts sugar in his coffee and they laugh seeing him. Some light moments while working are shown. Sam and Neil fight. Arjun and Radhika stop them. They discuss about work, while the title song plays in BG. They all hug and smile.

The show ended with a cheerful scene in Birdsong depicting their happy lives.

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2,074 Comments

    • Annie on

      I will not forget u.. u r the khabri (journalist) afterall.. who updated us at all moment with sp s move.. thank u for being such a sweetheart!! Will miss u 🙂

  7. Devga on

    But same time tears are rolling down
    Without my knowledge… :”(
    Just now realized I am crying

    • Nakshatra on

      Wish u d same..be happy always.. this is d first time that I’ve connected so much to some people who I don’t know actually..love u so much…miss uuuuuuuuu……

  15. V.Jayanthi on

    The serial started well. The story could have been carried for more episodes.Anyway it was wonderful & radhika’s character i like the most. Postivity,brevity & paddionate are rare in yhe society.

  17. Annie on

    What a mind blowing end!!
    I cried I laudhed I said aww I got surprized I felt every emotion in this episode. . The wah we wanted it ended in that way!! I am having loss of words.. I thought that I will be criyng today.. but no.. I felt very happy and proud to b cnncted with such an amazing show!!

    Thnk u star plus for gifting us mmz.. that doesnt mean that I will forgive u sp…

    Manmarziyan rocks!! Love it and eill alwayz love ut!!!

  18. V.Jayanthi on

    The serial started well. The story could have been carried for more episodes.Anyway it was wonderful & radhika’s character i like the most. Postivity,brevity & paddionate are rare in the
    society.

  19. keerthi on

    Miss u all guys. Manmarzian is a wonderful show. I never forget Arjun, radhika, Sam, Neil. Love u ahem. Miss u. There is no words to explain.

  21. Twinkle on

    How super romantic. Gonna miss u veryyyy much manmarziyan.
    I have a confusion that it is such a good serial then how come it got such less trps

  24. Samiha on

    I missed today’s episode!! Gonna download it tomorrow and watch. Till then, I’ll just enjoy your comments.
    @kfar: the story you are updating currntly is great…but what about the one with Sam-Aarav, Neil-Ruby and ArDhika? Hope you’ll update that too. That too was awesome.
    @all my friends, wishing you a very good bye. Hope to keep in touch with you…

  26. Ruth rodrigues on

    Liked today’s episode of manmarziya. Can’t believe that today was d last episode. Will miss manmarziya specially Ardhika.

  29. Rads on

    Miss u manmarziyan…come back soon with season two….hopefully not on sp….stupid channel to axe such a wonderful show……

  30. Deven on

    I miss to manmarjiyan seriel and miss too arjun’s character miss u radhika
    GOODBYE GUYS MISS U ALL BYE
    BYE

  31. Annie on

    Will miss all of you guys here! Hope we get in tch soon… wish luck to each and every one…!!

    Want to see the leads again together in same od some other show!! These 4nd a half months was awesome with mmz .. got to learn a lot!! Hope I wil b able to apply it in my lyf 🙂

  32. kaira on

    I miss u a lot
    Luv u manmarziya
    My day starts with reading manmarziya spoiler.
    I misssssssss u arjun radhika Neil and Sam.
    Luv u bahut saara

  33. rose on

    aradhika <3 nesam <3 *_*
    can anyone give me the video of full episode /just aradhika moment… plz plz plz plz 🙁 i'm not sure if i can see this episode in Monday so plz help 🙁

  34. Swapna on

    Miss you arjun and radhika soooooooo much was loving the show so much but it ended so soon it’s sad but was a short and awsum show

  35. sugan on

    till the last second my heart is hoping fr a miracle that manmarzian doesnt end
    this show has made me crazy n nw thinking that it has ended is literally hurting have never felt this much fr a show ending
    manmarzian had always rockd n will cntnu to do so evn aftr gng off air
    manmarzian will always stand fr its name n will b our heart’s desire
    lots of love n wishes fr the whole manmarzian cast n crew fr gvng us a wonderful journey with a beautiful story
    usually television serials end due to poor script, direction, trp etc bt the reason fr ending of manmarzian is the foolishness of the star plus officials
    coming to today’s epi arjun stole the show. absolutely perfecto acting n dialouges . hats off to the cast n crew
    gonna miss u all
    manmarzian rockzzz frevr

  37. Sneha on

    Can you tell me guys , in what time manmarzian will be shown . Please someone tell me till morning in this page. Where I have written comment. Please.

  38. MANISHA on

    come on guys we will not give up join everyone in fb page dym telly friends we want manmarzian 2 or in a new show as monica aham in lead pair

  39. happy on

    super episode………………………….wow….ardhika confession………………………oh god………………..after 2 yrs…………….morning moment of ardhika………………………amazing……………in last scene nesam fight…..i cant express my feeling…………………..thanks….thanks………..thanks cvs………..100…1000…..1c…………….1 billion thanks…………………..you showed all whatever we wanted……………………..thanks…………thanks……………..

  41. rupali on

    please firse chalu karo manmarjiya serial. muze ajib lag raha he manmarjiya k bina. ap please serial chalu karo ya to koi nayi story leke arjun or radhika ki serial chalu karo. please or ye to koi baat he k april to august itna chota period ka serial banaya kam se kam ek sal tak to rakhte. please i request u mene jo bola he wo karo plz.

  42. Nakshatra on

    Will miss u frnds..Will miss ur comments..Will miss ur stories..
    Mitty,renu,abi,any,Annie,happy,ireena,kfar,Mandy,nish,devga,sonamohan,araadhika, natasha & all of u..each & everyone..all mmz fans..I read ur comments everyday.. but now I’ll miss u guys…wish u all d best for ur lives..stay blessed & be happy guys..

  43. Ira afroz on

    Oh God…Manmerziayan is end.
    The worst part of today’s episode is No Precap…..Manmerziayan is just Rock…No idea…In future will we get opportunity to watch this kind of Rocking TV Show with Unique Story Line…Fantastic Actors….Mindblowing Location….Awesome Dialogues…..And it’s Amazing Title Song….

    Hats off to our All Manmerziayan casts and whole team……a great journey they made for us.

  44. fouzarshi on

    omg I can’t believe that dym not any more on sreen.miss u badly aradhika nd nesam . tears rolling down.no more words just wanna say love u the entire crew story especially the actors aham monika

  47. vinu on

    Wow… The episode can’t end more beautiful than this.its just awesome….awesome..i just dont have words to express my excitement.I just love it to core.every scene is beautiful. This is the best.atlast arjun confess and radhika too called him arjun.hope u guys enjoyed it as well.I loved every frame of today’s episode..love it.@all i wish you all to get best in your life and have your manmarziyan fulfilled in your real life.wish you all good health and wealth.

  48. Praiselin Kanaga on

    THANK YOU SO SUCH MANMARZIYAN TEAM , GIVE A BEAUTIFUL SHOW. THIS SHOW REMIND MY SCHOOL AND COLLEGE FRIENDS. I MISS THIS SHOW VERY MUCH. THE LAST EPISODE PART IS VERY VERY WONDERFUL.

  51. pakhi on

    the lovely pairs and the lovely show . . the show which touch the heart . . . feeling very bad after reading the last episode . .its the last . hard to believe . . its painful. . . lost the best show . . . ;(

  52. Lavanya on

    No words to describe the way cvs showed the last episode…..only pyaaar pyaar pyaar nd dosti dosti dosti….
    Finally, wen arjun made his biwi tell his name….amazing ;only love it was…..
    nesam ka bachu dog wala scene so cuteeeeee…….ardhika wake up scene…mashallah it was over all another level…
    birdsong khatta-meeta funny asli dosti part…kya bolun mein
    fallen in love wid this cast..
    Gonna miss mmz,ardhika nd nesam a lot
    a happy climax….mmz stars deserves applauds for their talent.

  54. happy on

    star plus………………….hate you…………….go to hell…..at 11 switched off tv………….today your death day…………………very happy for u…………………..never want to see u again……………………..

  55. tasnim on

    of hw cute al d scens vryvry nice lots of luv i l mis it n rmbr it in my whole life like iss payar ko kya nam du.ek hasina thi, nisa aur.,.desh ki beti nandini of i mis u a lot hi@samiha am also 4rm bangladesh which dstrit u 4rm again manmarziyo pe hum chale

  56. Kisholoy on

    I haven’t seen much, but what have seen is enough.
    I haven’t felt much
    what have felt enough for me.

    I haven’t laughed much how much i laughed is enough for me.

    I haven’t watched much ,

    what i did watch means alot for me.
    Thanks star plus for making us angry,happy,shy,loved.i am feeling blessed being a fan of mmz.thanks swastik pictures.it was a wonderful journey.every moment gave us the new taste of life, new hope, new passion.
    I am feeling like losing a better part of my life.

  59. Nakshatra on

    I would like to keep in touch with u guys..all mmz fans..my fb profile name is *Akhila Nakshatra*…

  61. Saima on

    Wow what an episode but miss u radu and Arjuna I hope to see same cast in another show but feeling v sad for ending of the show missing dym so o o o o o o o o o o o o o much hate u sp

  62. abi on

    I REALLY ENJOYED TODAYS EPISODE,BUT i cant beleive that my fav show….endED,,,……….OMG…….i never fet like this b44 (SO MANY SERIALS WERE FINISHED OR ENDED BUT!!!!!!!) …….wwhy am feel like this……i luv mmz…ardhika…nesam….eventhough there s incompletion…..this show won my heart………..

    And i miss u sweethearts frnds……HAPPY,MITTY,ANNIE,NATASHA,AFROZ,RENU,ANU,THENA,NAKSHATRRA,DEVGA,IREENA,KFAR,RRAASHI,SUJI,ARADHIKA…EVERYONE FRM THIS CIRCLE….I REALLY LL MISS U GUYS………………………FINAL GUD BYE,,,,,WITH TEARS,,,,,,:-(((((((((((((((((((((((((((((((((((((((((((((((((((((((((

  64. Gargi on

    Gonna miss manmarziyan sooo much!!! Ardhika scenes gonna miss…I can’t believe it’s gonna end

  65. rita on

    hi frnds im not a regular commenter but i do read all ur comments like comments of mitty Ireena,Riya,Mandy,Renu and others i too comment some time.and iam a great manmarziyan fan i love the show so much even though i dont know the language its very close to my heart. love all cast of the show and im gonna miss the show terribly 🙁 and miss ur comments and 2days episode was the best enjoyed each and every second of the show 2day cannot believe its over miss u

  66. deepthiram on

    i love u so much manmarziyan team . each and every one of mmz team giving wonderfukl show we will miss u lot we hope mmz 2 will coming soon love u monica and aham u both of them r best on screen couple in serial industry . and also i hope in ur future projects u both of them again pair with best show in best channel

  67. riya on

    I will mid manmarziyan and radar and nesam loves I hope fr next season 2 day last epi I burst into tears happy ending…… too I want this serial 2 continued but all romances r stopped anyway create another lover story serial like this plz I love radar so much I m happy by Sam Neil marriage
    bye 2 everyone comments I m going 2 mis u all guys
    bye love u alll

  68. happy on

    ardhika ardhika ardhika……………………thanks………………..thanks ahem and monika……………..love u so so much……………………thanks for giving wonderful pair…………………..i cant forget u……………..love u so much……………………

  69. Sneha on

    Please someone tell me i want to watch the last episd of manmarzian. Please someone tell me In what time manmarzian will be shown.

  70. daisy on

    love u ardhika n nesam…. gonna miss u all… esp arjun…. all d best n hope u cum back with season2… pls i want to say this on behalf f all youth dat watever b d trp’s , manmarziyan has achieved its goal- TO REACH OUT TO YOUTH N LEAVE AN AMAZING MESSAGE ABT FRNDSP N LOVE….. U HAV CREATED A BENCHMARK MANMARZIYAN…. u may not hav those, i dnt know wat, needed fr trp but u hav reached us… the audience u actually targeted for… will remember u always….HUM H RAHI PYAAR K, PHIR MILENGE CHALTE CHALTE:) 🙂 🙂 🙂 🙂

    • Annie on

      Well said!! They have truely achieved their motto of of spreading essence of dosti yaariyan and manmarziyan. ..

  71. kubi on

    Aweesommme episode..manmarziyan d best show till now..cant belive it ended…

    Such a beautiful ending..all d scenes were jus perfct..i hve strted manmarziyan frm now itslf

  72. kubi on

    Aweesommme episode..manmarziyan d best show till now..cant belive it ended…

    Such a beautiful ending..all d scenes were jus perfct..i hve strted missing manmarziyan frm now itslf

  73. tasnim on

    twinkle n’t 2 wory dis trp r radiculus our heart has a trp n thats d real in in this trp dym in the 1position….i think u al guys r agre with me

  75. rizwan on

    miss u radhika arjun sam piyali samrat neil nandini di dadaji mala all cast of manmarziya u all give us best tv show and prove that indian tv show also has the potetial to do something new and great miss u lot manmarzia I wish u to see u all in next tv show
    aur ek bat kahena chunga star plus per mat aana
    they have old brains of ladae ghagda wala mind they only play stuppid seriels as every one knows they runnig from yr and yr
    best wishes especially to monica and shravan they have too much potentiol they will go on top of telly world
    keep it up
    by

    good night

  79. Annie on

    I am having a mixed feeling.. ryt now tears r oozing out of my eyes and at thr same time I am having a bigg smile on my face reading your comments!! Manmarziyan has made me crazy! Love u mmz. And will miss u lyk anything!! The best show I have seen evr (no offence I too lyk eht ipkknd1) but thus one is best among best.. loved the way radz called arjun by his name.. loved when neil gave that puppy to sam( thought it was their baby..the way it was coverd and brought) seriously last epi too had xcytmnt .. but wanted to know sam arjun cnvo.. nvr mynd!! Loved arjuns lover boy look.. loved yge way he was putting sugar in his coffee.. loved the way rads blushed!! I one word LOVE MANMARZIYAN

    (I know I am talking lyk a pagli but could stop myself writing this.. sorry if felt bad )

  80. kanthi on

    Miss you a lot manmarziyaan!!!!!!!!!!!really!!!!! Such a good serial!!!! I sincerely hope that you come up with season two! Really miss a good plot and brilliant actors !!! Want to see ardhika and nesam once again!!!!!!

  81. anju on

    OMG…..! Its ending.. This was the best serial ever, there was everything here friendship love sacrifice enjoyment and mainly understanding loved it…love the whole cast mainly NEEEEL AND ARJUUUN…..

    Ameena thanks for your updates as i live in PG I always imagined manmarziyan through ur writing…. Thanks again……
    Bye manmarziyan come back with colourful story we all will be waiting…….!

  82. Tamanna on

    Sneha its repeat telecast is at 8 am …………misssssssssssss u manmarziyan………..miss u ardhika………really we all miss u……..please come with the 2nd season…..we all will be waiting……. nd todays episode was outstanding….luv u Ahem sharma

  83. Sooeaj on

    Nice story plotted well. I wish all the actors for there further endurance .I am happy they didn’t drag like other serials. The story is short and sweet .

  85. devi on

    I like manmarziyan serial sooooo much ,i like arjun radhika pair so much,but now this serial is over today .i feel so bad and sad as this was the last episode.and i loved a dialouge in todays episode that arjun saying i have my heart to my problem ,and i like neil sams pair too,i hope for the season 2of dosti yaariyan manmarziyan soooooooooooooooonnnn,,,,

  86. ramya on

    frnds I cnt sleep I m dying becoz of ending I always wish that plz make season 2 with same actors and bye frnds I wish we all cmnt in season 2 love u all and this story will never get end in our heart 🙂 🙁

  88. Kisholoy on

    Thanks all the frnds.i am going to miss u too.kfar u…juzt …grt.renu u are also included in grt bracket.thank to all unknown frndz.overall we are here always for appreciating new story,new script ,new zeal of life.thanks again

  97. Bhavu (bhavani) on

    Hmmm lov u mmz nd ardhika neesam d most ♡♥♡ gonna miss u infinitely the rocking shocking loving show fr evr

  98. ☆Twinkle05★ on

    Super …………….. wonderful…………. Romantic…………. Lovely ………….. Happy…………… Episode i will miss u lot DEARS i am really happy to watch today epi but after epi i am crying ;( ;( ;( no more manmarziyan plzzzzzzzzzzz ya come again i am praying 🙂
    STAR PLUS I HATE U I WILL NEVER WATCH ANY SHOW FROM U R CHANNEL GOOD BYE .

  99. dipika on

    wow such beutiful gift today i got by mmz..superb,mindblowing,amazing, awsome epi it was….great job cvs…loved the way arjun came n hug radhu….n how romatic moments… love ardhika…mrg moments r so mch lovely… want nesam confession too…n how beautifully arjun makes radhu to call his name… finally radhu call’s arjun..so mch love fill in it…

    Now m nt tht mch sad… like the ending…bt definitely miss the aradhika nesam..
    love u Ahamica great actors….wish u guys a successful lyf ahead. wish wiill see u both again together..
    n my manmarziyan Ira,ireena,renu,kfar ardhika,Mandy, mitty,najshtra n all the friends hete i got will miss u guys badly..big hug for u all…loads of love…hav a happy lyf..n hope we will remain in contact…Good bye..muhhh..

  101. barathi on

    Feeling so so so sad for my manmarzian…. i ll miss ths show so much… greedy starplus….. i hate sp for this…. i love aradhika and nesam…. nandu acting…

  102. Samiha on

    I am very happy to know that it had a good ending. So I am finally bidding all of you a very happy and good bye and a good night. I hope your life fills with all the colours… Thank you…

  105. Nesla on

    Misssssssssss u so much mmz……….great epi. Ahem monica u two r wonderful jodies and my favourite. luv u sooo much and miss u as well.

  106. Samiha on

    I am very happy to know that it had a good ending. So I am finally bidding all of you a very happy and good bye and a good night. I hope your life fills with all the colours… Thank you…
    @farha:hope u post ur story tmrrw mrnng.
    @mandy,renu,riya,anu,thena:waiting for your comments.
    But for now, GOOD NIGHT GUYZ….

  107. rosy on

    Cant get it out of my head…oh wow THE BEST CASTING BEST SHOW EVER THE BEST FLAVOUR IN ITS ESSENCE….MISS
    ARJUN ND RADS
    SAMANDAR SINGH N IDIOT….MY HEART IS CRYNG TO REALISE DAT NEVER I WUD B SO EGAR TO STAY WAKE TILL 11PM TO WATCH
    MANMARZIYAN
    Hats off to the cast nd writter to gift us such an wonderful story of friendshp love nd life leading….bt we expectd a little more…
    Sp ditchd me so nw im going to ditch Sp…

  109. devi on

    I like aham sharma more ,i want to see him as a pair acting with monica shegal in a same story line like this manmarziyan serial ……and i am in a very bad mood today as this serial is over.i can’t believe this ….i like this serial very much.please can you soon make another. Love hindi serial with aham ,monica as a pair.i want to see that story next month itself …..its just a request ,and it needs to be like manmarziyan season2. I like arjun morrre in this serial and radika is the best pair for arjun….about that there.is no doubt..i like u arjun(aham sharma) plllllzzzzzz act again in a serial like this that too with monica shegal.

  111. Deepa on

    I cant believe tat tis show ended……i cant control my tears……love u ardhika and nesam….hope u 4 come in another show eagerly waiting for ur arrivals alll……hope u come very soon with another project…..till them i will b waiting…….and all my friends,,,renu, nakshatra,sugan,devga,ria,ira.mitty.anu and all manmarziyan family misss u and love u all…….bye tc all

  112. devi on

    And THANK YOU to you telly updates for updating Hindi serial in english written updates…its very useful to understand the story .thanks

  113. rani on

    Lovely super episode
    Still cant believe this beautiful unqiue show is ending today i wanted to see more romances n love between them especially with arjun n radhika tear rolling down how can the writer end something so beautiful n lovley like this
    Really going to miss u guys radhika?,arjun,???neil?n sam???u guyz will always n forever be deep down in my heart??
    Miss u guys already good good bye?????

  114. Manu on

    Tears :'(:'(:'(.. i dono wat i ll do frm monday.. i have been addicted to this show for past 4months.. Aham (a) Arjun, you r the only reason y i started watchin tis serial.. and ur the oly reason y i started commentin here. I am gonna mis you to the core ..love to c you soon wuth monica sehgal again..love you ahem..

    Next Neil(a)Shravan, you r god’s gifted actor yaar.. you presence will always brings smile on our faces.. such an entertainer of the show. . Gonna mis tat character “neil”… long way to go man..

    Next both beautiful gals of the team..radhika(a) monica, never exlected clear cut performance from a new comer.. your smiles is awesome..you ll reach heights for sure.. and sam(a) sammy(a)saminder singh(a)kashmira, lits of name and lots of shades..you carried out beautifully kashmira.. no doubt u r an amazing performer.. wish to c you back in a diff avatar….

    Mis u 4 a lotttt♡♥ we wish to c u all inthesame show. I dont think it is possible ..bt fingera crossed.. love u guys .you all deserve best channel than sp..

    Thanks for teleupdates and all updaters who gave us a visual impact through writing.. specialy ameena for manmarzian♥..

    And finally star plus, go to hell.. yoyr trp will drop down for all the saas bahu bakwass dramas.. mark our words.. you have broken many hearts you ll be paid.. good bye star plus..

  115. devi on

    Can u reply for my question……that will u guys take another hindi serial with aham ,monica as a pair…….pllllllzzz reply

  116. Sowmiya on

    I really miss this serial very much .and arjun and radhika wht a perfect pair .I love u both .Sam and Neil I love u too I am really miss it

  118. ff on

    Bluddy hell!!!!y they ended it!!!they would have ended that bluddy sathiya,ye rishta…..
    Plz star plus recommence the show n make viewed happy….

  119. janaki on

    I miss arjun radika sam neil.wow i am getting tears and smile also. Starplus wouldhave given atleast 200 more episode to complete but they proved they can end the serial in decent

  120. RANITA on

    I LOVE YOU NESAMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMM…UR THE ONLY REASON I WATCHED MANMARZIYAN..I LOVE YOU SAM/KASHMIRA..UR A CHARMER.. A CLASS TO WATXCH..I LOVE YOUR EYES NEIL,,,YOU DEPICTED LOVE IN FRNDSHIP SO WELL…PLS BE IT SESON 2,,,,,I WAS ARRESTED TO THIS SERIAL..IT HAD SUCH A URBAN INTERNATIONAL FEEL ALL DUE TO SHRAVAN AND KASHMIRA….UR INDIAN FRIENDS..LOVE LOVE LOVE U BOTH..PLS COME BACK GIVE US SOME REAL ROMANTIC MOMENTS..UR THE BEST COUPLE IN THE WHOLE WIDE WORLD….

  122. Ira afroz on

    @@@Amena…
    This massage For you….
    Thanks a lot yaar.It’ll not be enough to thanks to u.Becoz of u ….we always got Super Fast updates.
    And u r such a sweetheart.No idea u read our comments or not.
    But U help us to make a good Telly Friends here…..

    [Annie…anu….renu…mandy…happy…mitty…dipika…abi….kfar…Samiha…Natasha…Samiha…and Readers of telly updates ]
    Miss you all….always Stay in my heart….

    And About show……Best TV Show in my entire life.
    DOSTI YAARIYAN Manmerziayan…..

  123. devi on

    Luv u arjunradhika ……..i want another hindi serial like this manmarziyan…

    I want aham and minica to be a pair in another hindi love serial …..i am completely mad about this dosti manmarziyan serial .

  126. dumi on

    Wow what a episode. Why are u ending it men. Really they should end sath nibhana sathiya. Not manmarziyan.
    But I must say this show will remain in my heart forever.
    And radhu arjun samunder idiot I’ll never be able to forget all of u. Hope to see u again.
    Really going to miss manmarziyan so badly. Love it soooo much its the best.

  127. Natasha on

    Happy,raashi,abi,ireena,mitty,samiha,mandy,farah,anu,kubi,devga,sonamohan,nakshatra and u all ()pls forgive me if I have not write anyone’s name) going to miss u so much. Pls visit this page till next 2 weeks.

  129. devi on

    Why did u guys end this manmarziyan serial so quick,there could have been some episodes after arjunradikas mrg and after their love,and after nesam mariage also .then this serial would have become a great hit

  130. xahraah on

    Awww.. Oh ma gosh.. Am soo heartbroken.. Am gonna miss samandar and ovcos luvely neil… One different story aside ek hasina thi and Everest.. Love manmarziyan nd its casts..???

  131. raashi on

    Manmarziyon pe ab hum chale
    Hum manchale hain mann ki kare:)
    Manmarziyon pe ab hum chale
    Hum titliyaan hain udti phire:)

    I was irked with d cvs for butchering all d 4 leads n screwing up d basic storyline but now m super impressed coz of d treat dey presented dis entire week n redeemed themselves….if Manmarziyan had to end….this is d best possible way!

    Omg what an episode!! Dis entire week was lyk a piece of cake for me n this episode became a cherry on d top….d passionate Ardhika scene…Arjun saying jo mera hai use lene aaya hoon…wow…..that hug…….someone plz put on d ac…..Arjun kissing Radhika’s forehead…her eyes n chanting Arjun…Arjun…..n Radhika simultaneously chanting Sir…Sir…n den finally saying Arjun….wow..wow….

    Ardhika morning bedroom scene….they took my breath away….n Arjun again impressed me wid his” waking up from sleep act” he’s so natural….d hug on d bed…uff…dey r gonna kill me now….n den when Arjun said pehle toh mujhe naam se bulaati hi nhi thi..ab hamesha daant k bulati ho….ohh my baby….he looked such a cutiepie and said that dialogue sooooo cutely like a kid:):-*

    N now Nesam….ohh my goodness these two cutiepies are still kids…loved d opening when Neil comes in calling Sam…n I was actually patting myself on d back for guessing it was a pup…n den their cute argument over its naam karan…aww!!

    Office scene…awwwww..how I loved to see d four of dem together n glad to see Radhika pursuing her Manmarziyan…n she looked very pretty…so did everyone else…their dosti, masti n yaariyaan in d office was tooooo good…Neil n Sam r still fighting lyk kids…good they’ve got Arjun n Radhika as referee….n Arjun seems to have come a long way from main meetha nhi khaat hoon se ab main sirf cheeni hi khata hoon…I loved dat scene:)

    I know I’ve written a novel by now but it feels I’ve no control over my fingers today n they r working of their own accord….I was smiling while reminiscizing some of these things however didn’t realise when that smile gave way to tears….its only now dat m almost done with my typing dat I realise my whole face is wet with tears…however dat lump in d throat still searing painfully, choking me and refusing to get washed away by those tears:(

    Manmarziyaan…I’m gonna miss it badly…it came…it won over my heart…made me fall in love…but once I fell in love…it left me lonely…but m not gonna hold dat grudge against u…I know u didn’t want to leave….n however much I didn’t want u to abandon me…I’m happy that u bid goodbye on a positive note…love u loads…:)

    Awesome show…awesome star cast…awesome team…soulful bgm:)

    But i hated how there was no precap after today’s episode…can’t help these tears rolling down my cheeks:(:'(:'(:'(:'(

    Manmarziyon pe kaise chalein:'(
    Dil ki hum kaise karein:'(:'(

  134. kfar on

    @all- My god guys I’m crying already. I missed watching the epi, hate myself for it. Can’t imagine how nice the scenes would have been. It’s killing me dearies. I will miss Ardhika, Nesam , dadaji and the story very much.

    Almost crying guys, no, I’m literally cryin….warm hug to all of you all…love u miss u miss da show. Miss u lots. Miss ur love.

    @Mandy @Ireena @thena@ raashi@zara@ira afroz @mitty@rose@devga@renu@anu@ure@Riya@Samiha(wil update dat story soon ya)@ Natasha@Annie@dipika-love all ur comments,views,reviews everything..may all ur dreamz come true 😀
    wil mizzzzzzzda showww lots 😀

    • Riya on

      Our most favorite show end I can’t believe this.
      Kfar really I miss your explanation
      Miss you all guys.. basically renu
      Renu I can’t forget your descriptions really it’s amazing….

    • Thena on

      @farha…badly gonna miss u dear..pls provide sum link & post ur story ther..am here 2 read it lik a mad my bud…

  135. lea on

    wow wat an epi!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!loved arjun’s diag” i came 2 … . ………….”i am very hapy at te re-union f aradika& nesam.mere wrds can’t express my feelings………………bt at te back f my mind i’m sad tat sch a wndrful serial came 2 an end so fast……………..

  136. badhon on

    Chorom hoisa aj ker episode ta.juat mind blowing. Just love today’s episode .after today miss u manmarziyan a lot.love all the cast of manmarziyan.

  137. zara on

    hiii everyone.
    impressive wonderful happy ending they shown…
    miss u a lot MANMARZIYAN here on sp n other no one serial could compete you.
    Manmarziyan always superb all casts are act sincerely along with their heart .
    Ahem Monica you both are mindblowing love you ♡♡♡
    Sharavan karishma maan gaye aap ko..!!!!
    bemisaal manmarziyan chapter gonna end today but best thoughts, moments will close in our heart….♡♡♡

    • Samiha on

      Can I ask you something frankly, hope you don’t mind…How old are you??Please tell me, I am trying to assess myself…

    • Riya on

      Don’t worry kfar we all are friends like sam,nill,arjun,radhika, we stay in heart of each other
      Bye …….

  139. honey on

    I miss arjun and Sam conversation my ears are eggariy waiting for that conversation arjun tells to sam idontlove you love adhika

  140. star on

    Already missing DYM. It was my favorite show on star plus. I never felt this bad for a show, star plus has been very unfair towards DYM. The only revenge I could take on SP is to stop watching other bakwaas serials and I am doing that 😀 ..I was crazy about NESAM couple,I miss them very much 🙁 LOVE YOU NEIL..looking forward for your new shows:D

  141. zara on

    me 2 kfar ..
    miss you all badly….. 🙁 🙁 🙁 ….
    tears rolling down …. what should I do don’t no friends

  143. kfar on

    raashi- Fantastic review 😀
    i was shamelessly wondering where he kissed her hehehehe sorry i hv a drain mind. And dear u cleared my confusion. Nicely written(sory if im making any typos here, im typin fast and excited)

    woh cute lagrahatha? Arey yaar miss kardiya sab 🙁 anyways beautiful description raashi.

    • Samiha on

      OMG!!!Once again I just wrote the same thinf to Rashi about my nasty thought and even you…What a co-incidence!!

  144. Annie on

    Khwahison pe likhi dil ki yeh arzian
    Kaisi yeh manmarziyan. …..
    Dastan ek nayi khwabo pe saji
    Bekyad manmarziyan

    Got to know the real inner meaning now!! This serial has the best soundtrack ,best cast ,best crew and WORST CHANNEL!!!

    Manmarziyan will alwayz remain closr to my heart do u all friends!@ goid bye all!! Take care and have a great future ahed!! May all ur dreams come to as life is nothing but living your dreams and fulfilling it!!!

    Will miss u all!!!

  145. raashi on

    Guys along wid this show m gonna miss u all…loved commenting here…loved reading everyone’s comments…d wamth out here..it felt lyk family…dat I was chatting with some long lost friends….@ Farha…Ireena…Natasha…Mandy…Mitty..Thena…Aru..Renu..Anu..Abi..Ira Afroz..Nish…Happy…Annie…Nakshatra…Saji…Zara..@all…m gonna miss u…sorry if I’ve missed ne names…

    I didn’t watch dis show from d first episode but when I started watching I came out here to check the wu….n I loved reading d comments as well..I remember some names…devga…sonamohan…sukriti…patanga ….it was reading their comments which gave me this keeda to start commenting as well…@ devga…ur cute dp of tweety caught my attention..i know m talking foolishly but always wanted to tell u dat…..

    I started watching dis show one n a half months down d lane when I got to know Aham was in it…then got addicted to it…just 1 regret…I wish I had watched it from d 1st episode:( hmmmm but koi na…hotstar zindaabad!!! Gonna miss dis show…d entire cast…n especially Aham Sharma…damn m gonna miss him:'(

    • Nakshatra on

      Hey..same pinch..I watched this show from the staircase scene of ardhika..when i got to know it was ahem’s show,then I hooked to this show…and then I have watched the starting episodes in hotstar..

  148. arohi on

    ;( ;( ;( ;(
    I was watching the end of the show. Still God knows how much I wished for a mahaepisode.
    Will miss this show and all your interpretations n imaginations. Will miss all of you…..any,renu,dipika,Mandy,kfar,happy ,amina n all of u over here.
    ;( n my aradhika n nesam……;( ;(
    Y sp?!! Y u broke our heart without a second thought after our sincere attempts to save our DYM

  152. MANISHA on

    HEY GUYS GUYS ALL OF YOU JUST WAIT N LISTEN TO AN IMPORTANT ANNOUNCEMENT WE CAN BRING THE LEADS AHAM AND MONICA IN COLORS POPULAR SHOW CHAKRAVARTIN ASHOKA SAMRAT PLEASEEE I NEED ALL OF UR SUPPORT WHOEVER IS WITH ME MAIL COLORS REQUESTING WE WANT AHAM SHARMA AS SAMRAT ASHOKA [email protected] n phn no is +91 22 24581818

  153. lreena on

    Mitty,thanks for what u did.but i have no fb account.I think that many of here have no fb account. What will they do?plz make a solution.and thanks a lot again for ur effort.

  154. Sree on

    manmarziyan last episode……….. really feeling sad …….. i used to see this serial daily and i used to evn wirte about this serial in my dairy…………really gonna miss radhika sam arjun neil and all others……….my first serial which i like the most………..
    need a ”ek baar phir” for manmarziyan ……………..
    LOVE THIS SHOW……… MISS MANMARZIAN

  155. Mandy on

    Hey evry1 guys I love today’s epi more than dat I love Farah Anu renu Samiha Natasha nakshatra happy Annie Devga Raashi Ireena thena rose Zara Mitty Riya Dipika Ira afroz ure n all n evry1 in fact I m feeling to cry like a waterfall n give huge huggies to my lovely friends !!????????

    N guys pls stay connected to dis place for 2 more weeks plssssss I hope at least 5 of my frends cum !!

    Will miss each n evry1 of u !!???????????????❤️❤️

  158. saji on

    Guys dnt feel like commenting anything…so depressed n sad abt mmz endng..

    miss u mmz n,whole cast n crew of mmz…for givng us sch a quality soap…it was really a treat for us…

    will miss all d frnds who comment here…thanx all for sharng der views..will miss so mch..:-(:-(:-(:-(

  159. Asha mohammed on

    Oh my God i still cnt belive it has ended…This is the best hindi serial of all tym!!Unique in its message,and most of all its perception of friendship!!
    I will surely miss aham sharma n monica…Ouch loved their chemistry..
    OOH n shravan n kashmira..i will surely miss them..
    Mostly i will miss telly update friends n the person who writes the updates gosh i never knew the name!!
    All the way frm kenya i will surely miss u guyz

  160. lreena on

    Thanks for all of my friends who remembered and named me.Really I m not able to reply all because it will take a full night.but don’t be angry at all.okay??????

  161. raashi on

    @ Farha….do watvh d episode…its damn good!! Shamelessly wondering where he kissed her..haha…..but thank u so much for liking it:)

  165. Samiha on

    @Mandy: Is it possible that they pair up the same couple of previous show on another? Then I would definitely want Ahem and Monica to be given a chance together…

  166. lreena on

    Anyone plzzz help me.plzzz give an adresss to DOWNLOAD the episodes of manmarzian.
    *plz don’t give the adresss of watching online,because I wanna watch it whenever I want, wherever I go
    *plz don’t tell me to download it from hotstar. As I tried many times to download hotstar app,bu it didn’t work

  168. raashi on

    @ Annie…@ Samiha….thank u guys for loving it….@ Mitty…gonna miss u too..Goodbye to all…

    But den m also planning to visit dis page for d coming two weeks..i.e. as long as its there…want to read Farha’s remaining story n would love to catch up wid all u guys n wanna abuse starplus some more…I don’t want to do d abusing bit now instead just wanna focus on dis beautiful show n its review.

  169. sneha on

    Shit…..i missed dis serial very badly man… Arjun…..love ur personality….ur acting n u was great man…… Radhika ur beautiful..best of luck

  171. aish on

    Ohhhh no this is last episode. But I luv this story. Misss u alllllll. But I feel sad because today onwards I feel borning. Because this is the only sereal which I only watch.

  172. eshwar on

    my day ends with watching mmz episode. another day starts with reading its comments. first thing nd last thing of day both r mmz. i miss every thing in the show i dont know how i can get my sleep wit out watching mmz. how i can smile in the morning which i can get only because of comments of mmz. i will miss all of them in and out of mmz team and comments sections. i wish all the best for all ur future guys. this is eshwar a passing cloud of mmz comment section signing off with lots of love. miss u…….

  173. kfar on

    @all- I’m risking it all for you guys. I’m sitting here in the dark, trying to update my story, Hope nobody comes in the hall or else it will be the scolding of my life. I’m afraid someone might wake up and scream terror of seeing a ghost but frankly I can’t come in the morning. It’s sunday n family time so Im typin out now…

    ******

    Chapter-2 (Radhika gets a surprise looking at Arjun’s house- pls read from previous page guys)

    Radhika frowned in cofusion, he knew about her all these years but still pretended he didn’t know her, why?

    Weird wasn’t it.

    “And don’t you want to know about who might be the mysterious topper of our class?” He asked lazily.

    She frowned. Of course, she knew who it was, Kabeer, a stout weird guy with big round glasses perched on his nose. It covers half of his face. He has shoulder length hair that he wears as a ponytail. He sticks his hair in a style. Not one hair strand moves aside till the evening. She herself sets right her crow nest hair before speaking to him. He has this blank expression on his face whenever she asks him a question or a doubt on any subject. Radhika cursed his stubborn perch on the number one positioned chair since two years. She was always second. She asks him an account question and he answers in a loopy kind of way about farming and animal habitats. He took microbilogy as bachelors degree for God’s sake and now he was doing MBA. How did he top each semester? she can only wonder.

    “Of course, I’m aware, it’s Kabeer, The weirdo, I hooe he fails next semester and next after that….well, the while next year and then he would realize it’s pointless to take up management science and decide it was better to grow vegetable marrows in the countryside he always talks about and bores people to death during power point presentation.” She scowled.

    Arjun stared at her without any expression for a full minute and then he dropped his head on her shoulder. He removed his seat belt and pulled closer to her.

    His body was shaking. Oh heavens, was he having a dizzly spell?

    “Arjun? Are you alright? What’s wrong?” She shook his shoulder.

    He nuzzled his face into her neck and he seemed to be laughing pretty hard, silently that too.

    His laughter vibrated into her skin. Seriously?

    Radhika didn’t know what was funny.

    “God, you’re funny.” He croaked out.

    His breath was hot on her neck. She felt weird sensations course through her body from where he was touching her.

    His laughter stopped altogether. She guessed, he felt it too, but, he didn’t let go or push her away.

    He was being sweet, warm and something else. His hand slid to her waist.

    They stayed there like that for a while. Radhika couldn’t move.

    Arjun pulled away but only a little. He took hold of her face and kissed on the lwft cheek on the corner of her lips, then at the right cheek, her nose.

    “I’m sorry I didn’t talk you before, but now that you got in, there is no going back, sweet heart.” He murmured looking intently at her flushed face.

    Radhika snorted, he didn’t talk to her? More like he behaved as if she didn’t exist.

    He laughed lightly at that.

    “Yeah, well, get used to it.” His lips got closer to hers.

    Oh, god, he was going to kiss her. Radhika closed her eyes.

    It was feathery light touch. His lips were soft and tasted as apples.

    “Open your eyes.” His voice turned husky.

    She obeyed and opened her eyes slowly and looked straight into his swirling depths of brown eyes.

    Just when he moved closer a car honk propelled her away from him. Crap? What was that again?

    She was breathing heavy and so was he.

    What was that? What was she doing?

    Crap, she needs to run. It was getting way more complicated and…

    “That was your second kiss.” Arjun’s flat tone floated through the fog of her thoughts.

    “What?” She turned her head to the side and gave him a what the hell look.

    “You are so inexperienced, my sweet.” He said amused.

    His eyes gleamed as his lips lifted up in the corners. He pushed back his hair from over his forehead with his fingers.

    Blood pooled in her cheeks.

    “And how did you conclude that?” She asked him hotly, annoyed that he dare he call her naive. Men are all the same. Chauvinist idiots.

    Oh hell.

    She closed her eyes immediately regretted blurting that one out of her mouth.

    “I know naive one, when I kiss one, and also, I know you very well. You don’t go out much. You work in the library after college hours. You have a nill social life and I don’t think you even have time for doing….” He tried to go on more.

    Radhika covered his mouth with her right hand before he could say anything further. She had been throughly embarrased. It was enough for one night.

    Chapter-3

    Arjun paeked his car far away from the mansion. There were trees lined up in a row on either side of the road. It was quite dark and cold. She should be at home right now. It was well past twelve. What was she doing here? Frankly, she didnt have any idea.

    Arjun came out his parked car.

    “Arjun, I think, I will take a taxi and I shoudln’t have…

    He put his forefinger on her lips.

    “Shh…relax, just stay for a while alright.” He turned her around and lead her up the stairs of the porch.

    She stopped at the top step and stared at the window. She can make out the silhoutte of lot of people. She narrowed her eyes to observe more closely.

    What was happening?

    There were loud soubds coming from behind the wide mahogany door. It blasted open and four or five guys bursted out. Radhika jerked back and hit Arjun’s front. He put his hand on her waist to steady her. The guys. They were their college studsnts. They looked absolutely wasted but still were drinking up from the red plastic glasses they were holding to their mouths.

    Radhika looked at Arjun shocked. He pushed aside a guy who grabbed her shoulder. The guys were dead drunk.

    He was having a party? Like seriously?

    “Arjun, you are going to party in this state?” She asked him loudly through the music. She put her hands on her ears.

    “What?” He asked.

    Radhika cannot believe this guy. He was injured and bleeding and looked totally wiped out but still he wanted to party? Unbelievable. But what could she expect from a rich college brat. Alright he was not a brat but still.
    Before she coukd ask him again, she pushed inside from behind. She was pushed and pulled by hnds. Lots of girls were dancing about in circles. They were drinking and smoking in the large hall……..

    *****
    Hey, PuTTing a StOP to It before i get caught..

    Soooooo, HoW wAs IT?!?

    Plssss do tel 🙂

    Til den, guys keeeep rockin

    • Samiha on

      As always, just great. I wonder how he was injured and what was his real intention of bringing Radhika to his house…

    • Samiha on

      @Farha: As always, just great. I wonder how he was injured and what was his real intention of bringing Radhika to his house…

  174. kfar on

    Sorry lot of missed out words and spell errors 🙁
    I make them often dont i. Its only my stupid phone again pls oversee the mistakes in it.

  175. sanyu on

    Feeling like to kill the writer yaarrr….how can they end such a nice serial with d best cast….only d problem was show timings…..they should should have xchanged yrkkh n mmz…
    I ill miss u Arjun n Radhika..
    Neil n sam….love u guys…

  179. Munu on

    Nice ending to the show. I always read the written update in the morning. But sadly it’s over. All the best to the four leads.Eagerly waiting for Aham n Monica’s come back.

  182. Dil on

    Dym is my favorite serial in sp..feel soo sad and miss lot cant believe its already end.. Hats off to your mind blowing acting my favorite couples ardhika and nesam.. U will b in our heart’s forevr… Pls com back in season 2..lov the chemistry of ahem and monica.. Also i lov ur comments guys.. Renu u r Amazing…i nvr misd to read yr comments.. i really appreciate the bond between all the guys of this loop..mis u evryone.. Mis u. Manmarziya..lov u lot..

  185. renu on

    hiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii friends,…

    Renu s crying,…please help me friends,…2n8 i ve 2 attend my friend’s bday party but still m not get over the thot i gonna miss u all n this s my last post,…..actually m happy that my show sorry our show ends with happy note n it makes me 2 feel pleased but the thot of missing u all n 4m 2morrow i ll never ve a chance 2 wake up at 3.00 am n started writing my long review in a hurry n after posting it,..i again used 2 sleep till 8.30 n getting ready hurriedly 2 attend my class,…n top of all,i gonna miss u all badly,…

    friends,…is there any possible 2 comment or post my pov after show ends here cox i dinn post my pov 4 earlier ardhika scenes,…wenever,i watch ardhika scenes,i ll get new thots yaar,…such a magical couple,….n i ve 2 admit 1 fact here,…i got appreciation 4 writing sth ly 4 this show 4m all my friends here,…i never ever write sth b4 in my life except formal letters like leave letter,…ur encouraging words makes me 2 write n post my pov without any hesitation,…even sometimes i cant reply 2 ur loving comments but never missed reading ur comments,…infact i loved every1’s comments,….especially kfar’s story,anu’s imaginary predictions,theena’s pov,raashi’s pov,riya’s poem,mitty’s,afroz’s,ireena’s future updates,…n so many,…which i cant express fully in this comment,…..

    m literally crying friends,..so,i cant post my pov 4 my last epi yaar,..cox it ll b my last post na,…i wanna post my last pov after watching it 4 atleast 2-3 times that’s the honor i must give 4 tis amazing show,…it sounds like a movie 2 me,…so,m not posting my pov 2day yaar,….it scares me while typing n so,i need a break,..first i ve 2 come 2 reality n i must attend my friend’s bday party without any distress,….

    • Samiha on

      Hi Renu. Don’t cry, we all are feeling bad. But thanks to the cvs that the show ended smoothly,much completely. I always read your comments and just loved them. Your POV turns out to be exact every time. Good news is that we can still stay connected at the fb pg Anu prescribed yesterday. And we can also communicate in some other pg of telly updates. Finally, Thank you a lot for your writings. I loved how you had tightly answered ‘gufe’ earlier even though he/she was talking much ill. I even like your long comments. Lots of love and a tight hug from me….

    • Thena on

      @its k dear…njoy ur bud’s brthdy party…thank u so much 4 luvin my pov..ll wait here 2 urs dear…

  186. mira on

    I loved this show so much that I used to dream abt this show day n night
    Nice ending…
    Hoping 2 see the 2nd season. The chemistry betwn the actors was awesome
    As always mmzn rocked….
    I am always a fan of mmzn……….

  187. anu on

    sorry guys, i couldnt make time to write my pov as my data ended yesterday.. a very good morning to everyone..
    i was shocked to see the comments count 237 in just few hours… ufffuuuu.. i just finished reading all the comments just now..

    First i wanna thanq everyone for the unconditional love and support that u gave me..thanx would be a very small word that cant show my gratitude.. i am blessed to have such a huge number of frens here..

    BTW guys we can stay connected on fb page.. those do not have fb,dont worry guys we can try to chat on someother pages here… But dont forget that fb page will be waiting for you forever.. love you loads…

    coming to todays episode, i am gonna write my pov…

    arjun-radhika : when arjun came into the room we all know radhu thought it was her mother.. few moments later she realised it was arjun,not her mom.. she didnt turn to him as to hide her love for him.. she knows arjun can easily know that she loves him if he turns..

    arjun holding her from her back.. ufffuuuuuu, that passionate touch has showed much more than what arjun has spoke..

    I WANT TO PASS MY LIFE WITH YOU,
    WITHIN YOU MY SOUL RESIDES,
    SINCE LONG THERE ARE SOME UNSAID DESIRES IN MY HEART,
    LISTEN TO THEM & PAINT THEM WITH THE COLOURS OF LOVE,
    WHY DO I FEEL THAT I LOVE YOU SINCE LONG,
    DO ME A FAVOUR BY MAKING YOURSELF MINE……

    Radhika- arjuns eye lock :

    when arjun askd her to call him arjun he was deeply wishing to hear it..radhu closed her eyes, but arjun was watching tooo close to her lips…He was saying like,

    LISTEN TO ME, O MY LOVE,
    I HAD A THIRST TO HEAR,
    IF YOU CALL ME, I WILL FALL FOR YOU LIKE A FLOWER,
    SHOWER ON ME YOUR LOVE,
    I’D GET DRENCHED IN IT….
    I AM YOURS, JUST YOURS
    CALL ME,I WOULD BE COMPLETE..

    after few times calling him sir,radhu called him arjun, a passionate hug showed you are my love, my life, my evrything..

    coming to after 2 yrs part :

    arjun-radhu waking up scene :

    I WANT TO SLEEP WHILE LOOKING AT YOU,
    I WANT TO WAKE UP WHILE LOOKING AT YOU,
    I WANT TO MAKE MY DAY,FEELING YOUR PRESENCE SORROUNDING ME.

    LOVE YOU A LOT RADHIKA… ♥♥♥♥

    DOSTI…YAARIYAN… MANMARZIYAN
    ♥♡♥♡♥♡♥

  188. mitty on

    Oh god I really donno how vil I stay without mmz. ..more than mmz my going to miss u guys. ..Thank u so much for all the love and friendship. …I vil neve forget u guys…. its really hard to say goodbye but……I vil neve watch ny shows nymore . ..I don’t want to cry ….. Annie. ..deva. ..nakshatra…thena…..natasha….twinkle. …arjuni. ..ira afroz. …ireena….happy. …abi. …anu. ….raashi. ..renu….kfar. …samiha. …dipika. .riya. …rita. ..dipika. …devi. ..kubi. ..Manisha …hippi nd all my friends …..love u alllllllllllllllll…….definitely m gonna miss u …allllll….gonna miss ardhika love lyf also. …..Thank u so much guys 4 an amazing 4 months bye urs mitty ???????????????????

  189. Samiha on

    Sorry guys, but I think you are gonna have to bear with my reposts. Me and my stupid phone….

  191. sowmiyasakthivel on

    Cute ending of the serial but I hve one problem what means I can’t watch the serial fully because this serial time will not suit for me but any how I love ths serial very much nd once again sweat ending…………

  192. jasmin on

    Happy ending…….but missing the most amazing show on sp. Hope they will make manmarzian 2 with Ahem,Monica,Sam&Neil.Bye all the friends who posted their comments and who read those… Love you all….,…..,..

  193. kfar on

    I have got a little time, I have come straight here to the comment section, to write a little I hope without any mistakes..

    *******

    They were all drinking and smoking in the large hall.

    Radhika put both of her hands over her nose and glanced around.

    The antique pieces on the walls and the interior decor of the hall was fabulous. She saw a girl throw up in the concave shaped wall corner vase that she was admiring a second ago.

    Radhika made a face, shuddered and looked away.
    Bodies moved around her dancing in sync with the beat of the music. Smoke clouded around, it entered into her lungs and she started to cough pretty badly.

    She cursed Arjun for bringing her here. Her eyes watered because of the poisonous fumes.

    Heavy alcohol smell hit her nostrils. Someone caught her waist from behind and lifted her up in circles.

    Radhika screamed.

    “Let go!”

    “Come on baby, you’ll like it.” A gruff drunk voice whispered in her ear.

    He put his nose of her neck and smelled deeply. He moved his body on her back.

    “Ah, you smell delicious.” He groaned.

    Shit, crap, creepster alert!!!

    She caught his hand at her waist and struggled hard to get out of his hold.

    “Arjun!” She screamed with all her might. The music was too loud. Nobody seemed to care. They were dancing pretty crazily around now. Goodness, it was a full blown party hard club scene.

    Almost immediately the sleezy creep let her go and Radhika fell on the floor.

    “You touch her again and I’m going to break your neck, you heard me man?”

    She heard Arjun’s very angry voice.

    Radhika scrambled up and saw him holding the guy by the neck. The sleaze guy looked like he was about to die of strangulation. His face was all red. He was wearing black leather, Tshirt jeans and jacket with piercings on his lips and eyebrows. He had a buzz cut hair style. He really was very thin and pasty looking. His eyes were unfocussed. Goodness, he was stoned.

    Oh,my god, Arjun was killing him.

    “Arjun, let him go.” She caught his arm.

    Arjun’s fingers tightened on the guy’s neck. She chanced a glance at his face. He looked murderous.

    Radhika gulped hard.

    “Arjun, please, you’re killing him.” I pleaded him to let go.

    “Yeah, you’re killing me, man.” The guy choked out.

    Arjun then looked at her face and down her body. His eyes settled on her baffled stare. His nostrils flared as he loosened his death hold on the guy’s neck……

  194. saji on

    Hi renu

    u can write ur pov on earlier ardhika scenes also
    .
    as dis space s available fot nxt two weeks…i think so…

    waitng for ur pov on yesterdays n previous ardhika moments…

    waitng dr…

    n thanx others for their pov…its really nice to read..

  195. Thena on

    hi my dearies………..want 2 start here wid a positive mood…….

    wow wat an epi it ws…cant xpect anythn more 4m creators….thank u so much cvs 4 havin gvn us such beatiful memories……

    cumin 2 2dy’s epi…evr1 rocked it…very much deligted 4 arjun as he finally won in achievin hs princess & made hs own…

    oh wat an intense scene it ws… wen arjun ws puttin hs face on radz neck 4m behind,hs stillness,hs calmness,hs tranquility wer lik as if al hs lyf tim burden rushed out in the very moment…..it seemed lik he cudnt take hmself off 4m hr cos in an instance he felt the worldly peace in hr arm wich he nvr evr xperiencd…then he ws damn passionate & went on in2 hr firmly…he ws obstinate as if he ws in a battle of snatchin hs princess…he ws obstinate tat the battle ws ly meant 4 winnin… hs evry move ws intended 2 make hs doll confess hr feelin…evn in tis state he tricked hr askin hr mangalsutra…wen she said sir,he bcame more stubborn & in all of a sudden said”I LUV U RADHIKA” oh God! hs voice ws trembling(i ws completely broken here & cried yaar)… it showd hw desperate he ws.. hw pure hs luv ws…hw hard he ws strugglin 2 survive withou hr & al above hw badly he neede hr 2 make hold of hs lyf.hs breath.hs soul…poor radz struggled hard 2 escape hs feather touch bt cudnt get rid of hm…wen she ws clarified about nesam, oh!thr won our prince hero…

    he won the battle…he owned hr..kissed hr 2 assure tat she ws hs…hugged hr so tight 2 assure tat no1 shud dare claim hs doll,2 asuure hr tat she ll b al hs 4evr…oh!i luvd tis scene..such a passionate 1…ufffffff…radz melted & lost tis battle…she surrendered hrself 2 hm…hugged hm back so tight…pierced hr face in hs bosom lik diggin it deep…lik sayin tis is my sheltr,my support,my strength,my protection,my safety,my happiness,my WORLD…her hug ws so intense as if she ws tellin taht thr is no place 4 hr in tis world othr than hmself,hs clutch,hs cuddle…called hm ARJUN 2 assure he ws hrs..touchin & emotinal yaar…

    atlast it ended lik a fairytale wer the prince carried away hs princess 2 liv a lyf of own…truly,madly,deeply,really i felt a very big relief in me aftr witnessing arjun regained hs ladyluv,hs dearest,hs doll,hs baby,hs LIGHT 2 mange evry dark…cudnt b happier more…

    hey guys our NESAM(name we gave) has reached its far…in tis epi neil used it 2 name a puppy…luvd tat office scenes…ARJUN & NEIL HUG..Oh!luvd it 2 the core of my heart..craved 4 tis scene since long back…gonna miss tis cute neil..badly impressed by hm yaar…grievin bt don want 2 b lik tat as the creators hav gvn our mmz a very gud ENDING…

    it hurts badly 2 see the pink line in WU but cant b more happier than tis tat i ws supposed 2 watch tis wonderful epic series..littl tim it ws though….let us give a good FAREWELL 2 our DYM guys…

  196. Natasha on

    I think u all are fond of youth shows. I’m giving u a suggestion to watch a youth show named miley jab hum tum which once telecasted on star one & it ended on 2011. Starring by sanaya irani,mohit sehgal,arjun bijlani & rati pandey. It’s a show based on college life,friendship & love. You can watch it on youtube. It was a hit show & I remember that everyone was fan of it. I am still now its fan & often watch its episodes on youtube.

    U also can watch nisha aur uske cousins which ended in this year due to low trp.

    My favorite shows are miley jab hum tum,nisha aur uske cousins,manmarziyan. Which are your favorite show?

  197. Natasha on

    We no more will able to keep in touch. We are talking since long but we don’t know each other well. So can you tell me your real name,occupation,age,home town etc (if you have no problem). Reply me quickly I’m eagerly waiting.

  198. Riya on

    The passionate romance between Arnun & Radika really amazing. …………
    I love you both a lot & whole cast of mmz
    It’s a heart touching story
    ( friendship+love+romance+sadness) a combo pack entertainment.
    It’s make a history in telly world
    MANMARZIYAN
    M-madness for friendship
    A-addicted with love
    N-naughty in life
    M-mesmerizing character
    A-Arjun
    R-Radhika
    Z-zigzag way of life..
    I- I love you ( 3 magical words)
    Y- yaariyan
    A-aim of life
    N- Nill & sam. Ha ha ha
    bye bye mmz ,wish a bright future all the cast of manmarziyan….
    Also I miss my most favorite TU friends
    @anu,@renu,@kfar,@mitty,@mona,@natasha,@Annie,@raashi,@samina,@ireena,
    @ mandy………

  199. raashi on

    @ Riya @ Nakshatra…thank u for liking my view dearies….n Nakshatra, I started watching MMZ from Ardhika’s first lift…when Radhika smears vermilion all over Arjun’s white shirt!! I read d wu for all d previous episodes but now m planning to watch it in hotstar..

    @ Renu..thanks a lot yaar dat u like my pov..feels good:)

    @ Farha d story is as usual rocking..so he got Radhika to his house to give her a taste of social life?:-\ n how did he get injured…fill in d jigsaws dear…excited to read more!!

  200. lakshana on

    gonna miss manmarziyan…… wat a nice show it was…it is nd will remain nice always…. 🙂

  201. Esha on

    Hey all do you know that in bangladesh manmarziyan will happen today for one hour……. Because Bangladesh is one day late… But it will happen for one hour.. I am not able to understand this… Pls help me

    • Samiha on

      Really, are you sure? I don’t think so. Bangladesh is just half an hour late. What do you mean by today? Sunday? When?

    • ArShi on

      Esha, thn plz tell us wht is hpening in tday’s epi in Bangladesh???? plz….plz…plz tell us. I’m also a Bangladeshi. Bt I liv in a hstle & thrs no tv. I hve to see DYM in Hotstar. So plz tell us abt tday’s epi.

  202. raashi on

    @ Farha u know my dirty mind was going haywire with all kinds of wild imagination when Arjun brought Radhika home….but then d party thing entered lyk a kabaab me haddi n kicked all my wild imaginations to I don’t know where….hmmm….I need to get my mushy n wild thoughts straight..hehe..

    @ Anu…u know I love d verses that u write..interpreting d thoughts of each character….I get touched whenever I read them!!:)

  203. Meena on

    Hi everyone !when I have to say” bye” Iam saying “Hi”!!! Iam not only going to miss the show but also all of you!!! Like most of you mentioned this was one of the best shows,even though lots of loose ends and unbelievable incidents!then,as I was watching the show,I became addicted to it and being the great fan of Aham (only because he was there,I started watching).Then I thought why go deep into the mistakes,just enjoy the show.I never missed one episode as I have the recording facility,and that made me watch Aham and Monica’s scenes over,and over and over again!!!!!!I can’t tell you how much Iam going to miss the show.Hope to see anther show with Aham and Monica.As someone suggested,Colors should consider Aham for chakravarthy Ashoka.he will be the ideal person as he has rugged look that Shaeer sheik lacks.

  205. Sana on

    A die hard fan of manmarziyan I am, and visit this site regularly even after seeing the episode I read about it I even download the videos of it and watch Arjun Radhika moments again and again…. Love you both your chemistry is just out of this world,wish the makers come out with its second season once again and we get to see these lovely on screen couples once again ….. Miss you love you come back soon manmarziyan as your fan list is long and they wish to see you rocking once again on screen….. Mmmuuuuuaaahhhh ??

  206. kfar on

    @raashi- hahaha trust me itz gonna get der.eventually befr the night wears off 😀

    Samiha-thanx a lot ya for all the nice comments and yes im gonna clear da confusion about his injury,

    there will be fight, few curses and punches n *clears throat* much more dan dat…

    Guess who fights who, hehhe

    i dont wanna left u hanging but busy day sunday 🙁

  208. Nakshatra on

    Did anyone create a Facebook page?Pls tell me..waiting..my fb profile name is *Akhila Nakshatra*….

  209. Samiha on

    The abbreviation is just awesome. I like most the Z: zigzag way of life(’cause it actually decribes all the others)… Will miss you too dear. And how did you set your profile pic? Please tell me, I don’t like mine much…

  210. Thena on

    @mandy,raashi,samiha,farha,renu,mitty,zara,natasha,devga,nakshatra,anu,abi,ireena.ira afroz,riya,dipika,happy,evr mmz fan & evr1 cmmntng here…i made a strong bond wid u all…gonna miss u all…5ting hard 2 digest tis fact bt nothin can b done & hav 2 move on…i read evry cmmnt in tis section & luvd each of it..it has bcum a part of me…thank u evr1 who read my cmmnts & 4 ur appreciatin words my dearies…wish u all 4 a happy & successful lyf ahead…chase ur dreams & wish u al gud luck buddies….will b in touch until tis page is alive…

  211. kfar on

    @Thena @Renu and Anu as usual you kill me with ur comments. Love ur deep thoughts n poems, amazin amazin 😀
    Raashi@ samiha- love ur views and how you described the words of show samiha.cool

    @ireena- sory i didn’t ask u befr? Are u wel now. U said dat u were sick.

    @Mandy and Mitty dipika natasha and all gonna mis ur povs n guys u all dont leave here ya der is a futire waitin for u all. Hope all of u get ur fairy tale in lyf dearies.

    @all- Dedicating something which came from my heart.

    Though we part,

    it’s not like we’re apart,

    stay u miles away,

    Gonna never miss without a pray,

    Hope ur hearts stay beating,

    Without a miss and greetin,

    There is a someday,

    Hope to cross paths,

    Wen it comes again,

    With da same breezy story hath,
    Till den, a warm hug to start,
    For a new life of tearless lark….

  212. Natasha on

    Pls forgive me if I have hurt ur feelings by my comments. Just watch the last episode I just love the scences after two years. Full of friendship. Specially when arjun said to radhika jaha sarmindar singh bhaha uska idiot. Last scences when they all were sleeping and neil wake up them and finally when all hug.
    Going to miss u guys. Feeling the same as when my last day of school.

  214. riya on

    Love ❤ u my dear MANMARZIYAN
    I will always follow ur message’apni manmarziyon pe hi chalo’
    TSM will never be able to take the place of our dear MNMRZN

  215. Samiha on

    HEY GUYZZ! DID YOU KNOW ABOUT MONICA SEHGAL’S(RADHIKA) SHOW ”JUGAAD”? JUST TYPE ‘MONICA’S JUGAAD’ ON GOOGLE AND YOU WILL FIND AWESOME VIDEOS OF MONICA MAKING MANY SIMPLE AND BEAUTIFUL CRAFTS…PLEASE TRY GUYS, YOU’LL FIND IT FUN….

  216. dipika on

    @ Nakshtra,Thena Kfar thanks for mentioning me..badly miss u guys…plz join fb page DYM telly friends page so we can syay connected..
    @ Renu missing ur pov. plz u too join the page dear so that can read ur povs more n more….
    @ kfar nice poetry u made…awesome. ..
    tears in my eyes…unble to concetrate on other thing…missing mmz badly….
    love u all.

  217. dipika on

    hey friends m not able to watch mmz epi form any website for eg deshitashan,apnetv.com source not found this msg is getting…pls tell me wht to do…should i have to dwnld any vedio plyer?

  219. deepthiram on

    i really miss u team of manmarziyan aham and monica u both of them doing fablous job and u both of them best on screen couple in 2015. i am from south side i really dont know hindi and i dont watch any hindi serials but in my life i watch starplus because of aham . aham doing karna character very well and also i continue to watch aham another show manmarziyan i watch each and every episode of manmarziyan and also i fall in arjun and radhika pair. now i am really crying lot because of my favourate show ending i hope same couples with manmarziyan season 2 coming soon with valuable channel. miss u lotttttttttttttttttttttttt aham and monica love u lottttttttttttttttt

  221. Mandy on

    Hiiiiiiiii guys pls don’t feel bad n sad kyon ki when a gud serial finishes a new mazedaar serial cums liking for us so guys want to thank ;;

    @ Farha @anu @ renu @ samiha @thena @ireena @natasha @nakshatra @dipika @riya @mitty @raashi n all yaar sorry agar Maine name nahi Lika toh bcoz der r lot of ppl !!??????

    Hey guys wish u a great happy future ahead !!! ?????????

    Hey guys will u like cum d bdt dil cmnts place if u r free plssssssszsss OR is der any Oder place wr we can be still frends if der is pls let me yaar don’t want to live my first internet frends!!!!!?????

  222. Ireena on

    @farha,so sweet of u.but i m nt well even today[looks like the side effects of manmarzian ending].so i didnt come earlier.but now i came and read all of my friends comments.feeling frustated

  225. Samiha on

    Finally watched the episode and just loved it. I liked everybody’s performance. Seemed so much real!!
    Firstly liked dada ji making excuses.lol, did he think his Choti will believe it? Then liked Mala-Radhu convo too.
    When Radhika was picking the papers, Arjun’s looks and smile had much words in it. It expressed how much he missed her LIGHT!!
    Then when Arjun was hugging her from the back, his vibes reached Radhika, she was feeling it too, very much. And when Arjun confessed his love, the expressions were so real, tears fell from my eyes. Radhika kept calling him Sir and finally Arjun, after the long wait Arjun’s wish fulfilled…
    Also liked Sam and Dada ji’s jokes and Neil’s entry. I laughed my heart out on that part. Ha ha, still gives me a laugh.
    The leap was very nice. Radhika was looking so good in that dress… I just loved Radhika repeating Arjun’s dream and waking him up with her wet hair… That part was too good..
    The office scene was just awesome… I never mentioned it earlier but every time they show Birdsong, it looks like a real office. Hats off to the crew. Well Arjun, Radhika, Sam and Neil seem to be handling the office pretty well, as well as themselves…
    Finally, the group hug. Whoa ho ho, just awesommmme. I was smiling and crying together at that part. The Happpy End…….
    But somethings are unsolved which I mentioned earlier like Riddhima’s relation with her in-laws after the ‘Saral Mishap’ and Manya’ crush for Neil. Else than this, the show ended perfectly and I am very happy for it.
    Bad news for me. Exam is incoming and my mom restricted my phone-tapping. My PC, laptop and phone–all are gonna be seized tomorrow. So from now on, I will have my phone only in Friday nights. So please guys don’t miss friday nights in Badtameez dil telly updates. Again, a warm hug and a very good bye………Hope you guys tolerate me every friday and my comments…

  226. lreena on

    @farha,I m not well even today(seems like the side effect oh manmarzian ending. Having a headache,eyes are heavy…..oh!disgusting!!so I didn’t come earlier.but coming here,reading comments, really feeling much frustration.everyone is saying goodbye.
    Anyway, guys can u guys come tonight ???I will try to come if feel good.

  227. lea on

    I lovd tdays epi soooooooooooo mch.
    I simply lovd every part f it.Renu as usual ur expl s wndrful.I lovd anu’s poem & also kfars story.kfar where ‘ll u write the remaining part f it?????????u write very good.

  228. lreena on

    Sorry for double comments guys. @Natasha, u asked for our personal introduction. Though it’s okay, feeling little uneasy….u guys plz carry on first

  229. Thena on

    @samiha…hi my friend..luvd ur opinion on bs lukd like a real office…so tru…me too ve felt the same yaar…AL the best 4 ur xam

  230. Samiha on

    Excuse me Shah, choice varies from one person to another. So, you might dislike the show wheras we all are liking it. Can’t blame you for that, but I’m explaining the show.
    The show was about Youth, Frienship, Love , Sacrifices and Life. The concept was ver good and the filming was also better than many others. The actors were much experienced and the debuts did very good too. That’s why I like it and that’s why we all like it sooo much that we are crying at it’s conclusion. Hope you understand it…

    And about the TRP- as much as I know, the TRPs depend on the viewers at 10:30. But most of us are busy or unable to watch at that time. So, the main reason of low TRP is the time slot. And about fans, you can definitely see that in this page. In other pages, there are not even a hundred comments or responses in 20-24 hours. But here, it’ been about 17-18 hours and the number is already above 300.
    I hope I haven’t hurt you, I didn’t mean to. But I could not stand the blame against my favourite show. Sorry.

    • Mandy on

      Don’t worry I m sure nobody is hurt I too can’t stand if smone says anithin abt mmz so ur rite from ur point of view n loved d cute mmz story !!LOL as possible!!????????

  231. Ruhi on

    @mandy are you the same Mandy whom I know ? Coz ur pattern is changed!! Don’t mind if I’m mistaken!!!!!

  232. Ruhi on

    Hi Mandy!!! 🙂 😀 how are you?? Missed you too!!! Actually I was fed up with matsh track tats y was not commenting for few days!!!

    This is ur fav show right!! I’m to feeling sad for you!! As manmarziya ended!!!!

  234. Ruhi on

    U know wat, it’s little boring to comment!! As our comments are being posted little late… This way we can’t even chat.. It’s like slow motion chatting 😉 😛

    • Mandy on

      Xatly me too I m not even cmnting on matsh bcoz of dis track !!
      Lyk s we cant even chat well n d bad thing is stimes some cmnts get deletd !! I also don lik dis n u want to chat come on hinditvadda manmarxiyan n select d first thing n wen u select some more topics will cum so select a topic cald drawn togther n read n cmnt in dat place we can chat hope u understand !!!

      Hey Ruhi aka shabbu r u wachin swargini if ur not den pls start wachin it bcoz its very nice a new chemistry is starting btw swara sanskaar into swasan !!!!

  235. kfar on

    As usual I had come straight back here to the comment box, but today I donno why I feel so down, letz just forget it. I’m always so resentful about myself, why I donno but man i shouldn’t. Again letz just forget it. Im being an idiot..

    Updating from where I left off..
    Originally the story had revolvd around Jason, Sarah, Dustin and Jen…i totally inspired Viren from Dustin because of his flying temper. Jason as Arjun, Sarsh is Radhika and Jen as Ruby..other characters I thought about them. All are my own. I changed a little as wanted to write a fanfic on Ardhika. Hope u hv read my story since wen I started…I’m talking idiotic again..ignore me.

    Chapter-3 (Party on mind)

    Arjun’s nostrils flared as he loosened his death hold on the guy’s neck.

    Thank god.

    “Get out of my house.” Jason grabbed his jacket and pushed him away.

    Radhika saw the poor guy stumble on the bean bag.

    My god, Arjun’s anger was worse than Viren’s. Remind her to never mess with him. The girls moved away from his side. They seem to feel his temper too. The music which had stopped for a while started yet again, and the party will not stop come whatever may.

    Well, seems like the people here had experinced such events very often.

    Radhika heard some muted whispers.

    “Who is she? A girl whispered.

    “Maybe some tramp, he picked up to make his girlfriend jealous. Whatever comes and goes…he always goes back to her.” Another girl snickered.

    Radhika stiffened, her body went hot with anger.

    Damn, Of course, they were famous for make ups and break ups.

    Arjun very unware to the whispers grabbed hold of her hand and pulled her away from the frantic dancing and pushing of hands and legs.

    “Come on.” He muttered under his breath.

    He pulled her on the steps of the staircase.

    “Arjun, where are we going?” She asked him.

    “To my room.” He replied flatly.

    Oh, no, no, I’m not going anywhere near his room.

  238. Sabrina on

    Guys,write on google just search up man,arziyan and then it shows the first day date but not the last! Whats going on?

  239. anu on

    hey frens i just saw an update regarding “KAISI YEH YAARIYAN” ….
    sorry , it is not related to our show but i want to tell you it has ended on thurday and SEASON 2 of it is starting from 2moro on same channel(MTV)…

    within few days they are airing season2…

    why this stupid sp is not reacting to our requests???

  240. ArShi on

    My name’s Arifa. I’m frm Dhaka, Bangladeh. Stdnt of Induatrial & Production Engineering.

  241. zara on

    good evening friends …
    yesterday I forgot express my felling abou you people guys… so I decided this last comment I want to share my felling about our comment viewers , amazing writers, master piece story writer, mindblowing explanation, heart wining future predictors, giving information about spoilers. …etc

    ♡♡ Afroz ,abi,anu, ireena, happy, mandy, metty, natasha, nakshatra, thena, riya, samiha, ruhi, raashi, dipika, annei, saji, mona, divya, honey, saji , kubi, devi, tasnim, tamanna, daisy, sware, sneha, sre, rita, arohi, manu, anjali, saima, asha, manisha …..all the manmarziyans fan, ardhikas fan, nesam fan even silent readers. .
    Renu, kfar ♥♥ thnx for joining here, older friends you have give a special thanks for your such a excellent comments no doubt that you have great calibred … here on this page Awsome comment I read daily.
    renu you explanation was amazed . I really miss you and your comments.
    kfar you and your story ……. actually I don’t have word to express …. addicts… keep it up .. you are master piece of story writing !!!!
    Afroz, ireena, Natasha- your’s future prediction story awesome like it coz its your opinion. .. don’t mine if not happened. … atleast you tried 🙂 :-)..
    other people sry if I forget anyone.
    《 YOU ALL PEOPLE ARE MEMORABLE AS MANMARZIYAN 》
    AS I ALWAYS SAYS MANMARZIYAN IS ROCKING ….
    Goodbye friends may god bless you all .I hope you have great future as sunshine. .. make every day joyful… an every step success in your feet
    🙂 🙂 🙂 🙂 🙂 🙂 🙂 🙂 🙂 🙂 🙂

    spacial thanks to
    @Amena ji- thanks for this whole four moths you give written telly episode update an exact time …I don’t know how could you do it mean its very fastly …. just accept my thanx I don’t want anything els ..if you read comment.

    with heavy heart- manmarziyan’s fan # zara #

  242. suvi on

    Hi friends,
    this is the first time I am commenting here.but I regularly read all ur comments here.I will really miss u all.KFAR u really love ur story so much.I want ur story to be telecast as mmz 2.RENU I really admire u .ur comments r simply superb.and some other frnds THENA, MITTY ,IREENA, NAKSHATRA, NATASHA,DEVGA,ANU, MANDY, RIYA.none of u know me. But u know u all .bcs u never miss reading ur comments .MISS U ALL. PRAYING FOR MMZ 2

  243. kfar on

    Radhika pulled at her hand. He stopped mid step.

    He looked back at her in question.

    “What?” He asked.

    “Look, I only accompanied with you in the car because I don’t know why. It had been a bad day and I wasn’t thinking proper. I don’t want to be here. I’m not a tramp you can string along. This is your party. This is your life….this…”She looked around. “Isn’t my standard, and I better be get going now.”

    His eyes flashed when she finished, Radhika didn’t know what to make of such look. He dropped her hand and nodded his head.

    Radhika felt a little dissapointed that he let go so easily. But, it was for good, she didn’t want to be a means of some use, between his girlfriend and him, she didn’t want to be plaything and become a laughing stock.

    This partying. His reckless behavior and his brutal point of view of people those beneath his social status was way too much to take in for me. He was someone whom she looked at from distance and that’s about it. She didn’t want him to enter into her life and change it forever. She can’t take it if he was good now, but scorned her later. His lifestyle and hers were very different. Way miles apart.

    Radhika moved past the crowd of the dancers, but before she could reach the door, she was spun around. Arjun. He looked really very tired now.

    Great, her life just sucks big time tonight.

    “What’s wrong? You were fine before. What happened now?” His eyes gleamed in curiosity He pushed aside the hair and slid the locks over the shoulders.

    Why was he touching always? All rational thoughts evaporate from her mind when he does that.

    “It’s nothing, it’s pretty late and…”

    “Stay the night.” He cut her words and put his hand on her waist and came closer.

    Radhika gave him an ‘are you for real’ look.

    “No, Arjun, I don’t think so.” She stepped back and opened the door.

    “Radhika, dammit, listen…” He muttered frustrated.

    She turned around and got into the porch, Wow, the party spread here too. She walked faster to avoid Arjun.

    She was looking over her shoulder, she saw a girl attach herself to Arjun’a chest. God, girls never seem to stop getting attracted to him, she scowled.

    She stopped dead and abruptly hit hard with a wall. Hell, her arm.

    “Whoa, careful there, babe.” The wall spoke.

    What? Oh, good grief. Her eyes widened.

    • Thena on

      @farah…my dear bud…as usual awesome…cud visualise every scene yaar…but confused with last convo in the above update dear…liked both of ur stories so much..can’t stop reading bud…pls provide a link wer u ll post story in future….here is a mad fan reading it without missin any chap..hehehe…& thank u so much 4 such great words 4 my POV buddy…warm hug..

  244. Ruhi on

    S Mandy I watch swaragini.. I really miss swalak… I hate ragini to the core.. I can’t tolerate her face on screen.. Just feel like hitting her.. U know she is same like ritika… Both should be tortured yaar…. But ragini should b tortured more… How innocent she was before n now really hating her to the core.. How smartly she confessed her truth but stupid laksh dint even gave a thought !! But still hoping for her tRuth to come out.. But it will not happen so soon.. May b next year they will expose her.. Till then draaaaaaaaggggggiiiiinnnnngggg..

  245. Janu on

    Really sad to see manmariziyan last episode. Gonna miss the crew for sure. Great acting and it was a great serial. Love this show.

  246. kfar on

    “You have to see where you walk, not look behind.” The voice said amused.

    The night couldn’t end better than this.

    Why don’t you earth open up and swallow me inside tonight. She grumbled inside her head.

    She pushed aside her half curled hair which annoyingly fell over her face again. With guilt written all over her features, she looked up very reluctantly.

    Viren’s grin faded as he looked at her shocked.

    She gave him an uncertain smile.

    He opened his mouth and closed it again. She frowned and looked him uo and down. When did he change? The evening he had on something different.

    He was wearing a square boxed green buttoned down shirt over a white T-shirt and hems. He was a casual king. His black hair gleamed in all directions like someone slid their fingers and pulled at the locks. Well.

    He seemed to come out of the shock as he shook his head.

    “What the f**k?” He whispered brazenly.

    “Radhika, what the hell are you doing here?” He asked, his voice filled with surprise.

    She just shrugged her shoulders and looked anywhere but him.

    “You’ve got to be kidding me right now.” He muttered.

    “How did you get here? You were at home, right?” His stern mouth didn’t soften.

    She got annoyed.

    “What? I shouldn’t attend parties now?”

    He still looked like he didn’t believe that she was here.

    “It’s all night party, Radhika, and I don’t think you ever stepped out of the house after nine.” He said in a matter of fact tone.

    Awesome, Now he too was deducing facts about her.

    What is her life, an open book for everyone to read? It’s like they are dissecting, remarking and noting down points in a book the aspects of her not so exciting social mingling.

    Well, there is nothing here but her an ever dispassionate living, guys.

    Seriously, geez. Give her a break.

  247. dipika on

    Thanks you verryyy much zara….love u dear..n i will miss u too…if possible then join the fb page made by anu to our friendshp

  248. lreena on

    Guys,heard the news of opening kyy,but as of we know, star plus is completely a disgusting channel what never allows any good serials to reach its home.so I m watching no hope…….
    Bye,friends.not feeling good.missing u all….???

  249. kfar on

    And, what the hell was he doing here? He doesn’t like Arjun or his parties and stuff.

    Radhika put her right hand on her hip.

    “Yeah. Leave it about me, but the main question is what are you doing here?”

    Viren looked at her amused and a little patronising.

    “Oh, right, change of topic, hmm, not going to happen, darling.” He replied to her dryly.

    Well, she tried.

    Oh, now, she understood.

    Viren can gate crash any party. He was ever enigmatic. He stayed most of the time at the Uni hostel. It was only few miles from the girls hostel. Rumour has it that, he tried to sneak in into that block but the warden caught him and it was hilarious to see how she taught him a lesson the other day in the college. He was a big mischief maker. She heard Misha talking on and on during the evenings about gatecrashing parties along with Viren. It was a bet or sorts between them.

    “You shouldn’t be here. It not safe for you.” Viren broke into her thoughts with a firm voice.

    Since when did he care about her?

    “I’m not a child, Vir, you know that right and I should go out….more.” She said the last five words a little unsurely.

    Viren stared at her, then he put his hand over her forehead.

    “Radhika, I don’t think you’re fine, lets go the hospital.” He joked and grinned.

    She didn’t know how to react to this version of his again.

    “Haha, very funny, Vir, I just wanted to….” Right in the middle of the sentence her hand was pulled and she was falling aside.

    She was turned around unceremoniously. How rude. What the hell…

    Crap.

    “Shit! You scared the hell out of me. I thought you had left. It really is pretty late and I don’t think you’ll find any taxi out there.” Arjun’s worried face came into view.

    He caught hold of her arm.

    “Look, I didn’t invite these guys over here let alone plan a party.” He said in explanation.

    He looked genuinely worried and she felt bad about it all that happened.

    “It’s okay, I didn’t mean to be rude about it.” She smiled at him.

    He didn’t smile back but seemed a little wary.

    “Yeah, well…” He looked over her shoulder and his body straightened.

    Damn. She tends to forget everything when he was around her.

    Arjun looked back at her curiously.

    What do I do now? Her mind went blank.

    Radhika turned around and glanced up at Viren. His arms were folded on his chest and he looked back at them placidly.

    He was staring at Arjun. Arjun was an inch taller than Viren, but she could see the difference now that they stood opposite to each other.

    “Hey, man, what’s up.” Arjun nodded his head towards Viren and broke the tensed atmosphere.

    “Radhika, can I talk to you for a minute.” Viren didn’t look at her but stared daggers at Arjun.

    He kept his icy stare at Arjun. The latter only held his gaze nonchalantly.

    “But, Vir…” She began to explain.

    “Now, Radhika.” He looked at her and took hold of her hand.

    Arjun stiffened beside her. His face was a close stutter. It was scary though. Like a calm sea before a storm.

    Viren looked no good. He wouldn’t even let her explain. He was an action kind before a thinking one.

    Dammit, he was angry. His fingers tightened on her wrist and she winced in pain.

    “Hey, easy there, mate.” Arjun intervened.

    He came closer to Viren, shielding her from him. He put his hand on the side of her waist.

    Crap, what was happenning here?

    “Let go of her hand. You are hurting her.” His voice full of warning.

    Viren looked down at her wrist then at Arjun’s hand on her waist. His stance got more dangerous as he glanced up at her eyes.

    His searing accusing gaze made her really very guilty. She opened her mouth to explain the situation, but closed it.

    Viren stood more straighter and he pushed his chest out. His face really closer to Arjun’s.

    “What I do with her is none of your business.” He levelled his eyes at Arjun’s.

    Arjun didn’t look like he was intimidated by Viren’s body. Vir was being brutal. His biceps flexed tight within his shirt, like he was getting ready for a fight. Arjun was too lean and Radhika didn’t him to be hit by Viren.

  250. kfar on

    Even though Arjun looked harmless, his demeanor was like a stealth predator. Almost everyone including her could sense a vibe when he walked past. She sees girls fluster up and move around him like butterflies gets attracted to a flower.

    His gaze now was like silk. He glanced down into her eyes and back at Viren’s black eyes.

    “It is my business as she is with me.” He drawled.

    Radhika’s eyes widened.

    What?

    She couldn’t possibly breath now, could she?

    Viren’s jaw ticked. His glare was full of fire and hate.

    “I’ll rip your arm off if you ever touch her.” He growled.

    Arjun grinned abruptly.

    “Oh, I did more than touching her, trust me.” He nodded his head in her direction.

    Radhika’s mouth gaped open in shock. The idiot was deliberatly baiting for a fight with Viren.

    It happened really fast. Viren’s hand raised up and he punched Arjun right in the jaw.

    Arjun’s head flew to the side as his body propelled backwards. He only took a few seconds to steady himself as he put his hand over his jaw. His reaction was instant. He aimed his fist at Viren’s nose.

    Viren moved back an inch. He shook his head and his nose started to bleed ing instantly. He chuckled and wiped out the blood.

    “Stop it both of you!” Radhika shouted and looked around helplessly.

    The music stopped but nobody seem to care or make them stop, instead the guys around only shouted ‘fight!’ over and over and laughed aming themselves. Crazy drunk losers.

    “Viren! Please stop it.” She cried out and caught his arm as he got ready to hit Arjun again.

    He just pushed her away. She fell down on the floor with an impact.

    Arjun was breathing heavy and his body locked tight as he saw her lying on the floor. His eyes hardened.

    “Dammit, I said don’t touch her.” Arjun punched Viren in the stomach.

    Oh, no, no, She scrambled up.

    Viren grunted in pain as he bent forward. His eyes watered. His face all red, he straightened and flexed his arm.

    Radhika with widened eyes got to know where he was going hit Arjun. She remembered seeing blood on his tshirt and if Viren hit him there, then Arjun would go straight to the hospital and she couldn’t let that hapoen. She reacted fast.

    “Oh, no, please, Vir, don’t.” She put her body before Arjun’s right when Viren’s fist took a hit.

    Her body reeled back and she felt immense pain shoot in hwr stomach to all over her body from the middle. Her eyes popped out and she gasped for air. It felt like she was dying.

    “Shit! Radhika….” She heard Viren’s shocked voice before everything went black…….

    *******

    whoooooo, cliffhanger…hahah tht’s it for today guys…

    NeXT paet WOuld be Very Veryyyyyy interestingggg…

    How do u like it?

    Tell me plsssssss..

    Til den, kEeP Rocking Guys.

    • lea on

      Ur story s superb! im waiting 4 the rest f it……….i should also add tat ur r write vry well……….where ‘ll u cimplete it???????here???????……..anyway wautng 4 the rest.

  251. anu on

    I have been a silent reader at wu of dym and have been reading all the comments since the last few weeks……
    @kfar I have to say that ur writing skills are marvelous and at the same time ur story too is wonderful… I wish you continue writing such stories…… and I really wanna read on and on……

    @renu. u really write gud review and one gets to know about the episode in detail. u precisely describe every detail of the episode in your review

    @mandy. @rashi. @thena. @Annie. @anu.
    guys I’m gonna miss you all and ur reviews really

  253. kfar on

    Ireena- hey get well soon dear!!! Cm here n cmnt often.
    Mandy- Yaar thanx for publicising my story to others means alot.
    Samiha- Sorry, i didnt much comment. I have been writing the story. And kudos to u for defending the show, dats great ! Nice view about the story.

    Thena- heyyyy thanx for bein the story fan. Made my day. Hugs tight.

    And about that convo- rads feels arjun was using her as aplaything to make his girlfriend jealous as he is always patching up with her and breaking up so she though he was a rich brat using her for his benifit. Hehe i hope it made sense.

    Zara- Heeeyyyyy wowwww it wud be dream come true if such a thing happens. Sigh. Haha thanx soo much for likin the story.

  254. kfar on

    Suvi- thanx soo much for sayin that and yes i wil try to complete it soon but i hv les time in da day to do it. I’m sure I wil soon complete it. I hv the whole storu im gonna post it somewhere soon.

    Thena- i lv ur comments i read dem always 😀

  255. renu on

    hiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii friends,……..

    MY TAKE ON DYM GRAND FINALE,….

    i dunno how 2 express my gratitude 2wards cvs of this show,…they gave us a happy ending 4 this awesome story within this short span yaar,….A big salute 4 u CVs,…

    Actually friends,…i gonna discuss wat they showed us n what we have 2 imagine simultaneously,…again cvs understood us so much yaar,..so,they skipped revenge revealing drama n radz sam patch up drama,….instead they satisfied us with blushing n breathtaking ardhika moments & joyful n cute nesam scenes,..so,again hats off 2 u cvs,….atleast they understood v ve brains 2 predict wat ll happen next r8 unlike other SP shows,….

    1.NESAM:

    Nesam got married without radz,…oh my gosh how its possible yaar,..s radz dinn attend sam’s marriage as she thinks her hubby s sam’s groom,….so,she decided 2 live with arjun’s memories all her life,..wat an idea madamji,….oh its nesam topic ryt,..i 4got,…So,NESAM married cox of arjun n sam s feeling 4 her lost friendship in birdsong n neil teases arjun that he still ve doubt on him,…

    they dinn showed nesam confession cox they exchanged this ‘i lov u ‘ many times n so,i think its not necessary but loved neil’s encounter with dadaji,…he teases my neil badly,…dadaji, its too bad,..u r asking my neil 2 clean ur ear,….so,neil too came 2 rishikesh with all baggage just 2 go 4 a holiday vacation with all the 4 ,..they r sure about arjun that ardhika ll b joined,..neil came late as he s more concentrated in BS,…

    Btw,…Friends,…cvs tried 2 show SAM-ARJun Friendship like Ra-Neil Freindship yaar,…tat’s the reason they focused more scenes on sam in previous suspense wale epi,..Arjun came inside sam’s room n sam taking arjun’s hand like a parental figure as she felt she s responsible 2 join ardhika forever as arjun s afraid 2 meet radz,..(i ll explain arjun’s IMO in ardhika part),..She planned 2 arrange a meeting with these 2,..so,she joined hands with dadaji n got answer that radz s lost in her love 4 arjun,…tat’s the reason dadaji constantly asked her y she dinn remove her nuptial chain n y she stuck in life without moving n he some how success in finding radz love 4 arjun which makes her live like a heart broken soul,…tat’s make sam 2 give arjun some confidence 2 meet radz n she depicted it in the car scene,..Still Radz loves u n she ll cry as she s stupid,…wen arjun asked her whether she ll 4give them,..she assured him tat s she ll as she s her friend n knew her that she has big heart,…so,cvs proved 3 friendship n 2 love btw 4 leads yaar,…if this story dinn end they might ve shown these developing gradually but now its jet speed,..i ve no complaints friends cox v can imagine watever cvs wanna show ,..hei na,…..

    After leap,…

    OMG,…how many of u thought that nesam ve child,..i doubted at first but gave up wen the argument started btw these 2,…loved how neil came in with the baby(puppy),..loved how they still argue with each other like friends yaar,..they r the best friendship wala love couple,…i was pretty shocked wen neil says NESAM as their child (puppy) name,…(r cvs reading our fans comments) n sam again named it as apple,..wat sam its too bad, how can u name ur child as apple n how ll u call the child( puppy )with neil’s petname,…its not fair dear,…i couldnt stop myself in laughing louder wen the camera showed wat it s,…cox its not child renu,..its puppy,…i said 2 myself n chided my gutter mind 4 thinking like that,….hehehe,…

    LAst BGm part:

    Loved nesam so much yaar,..loved how they watching b grade bojpuri film in laptop tat too in office n loved how arjun sneaked in often 2 ve a glance at the film while talking in phone (business convo),..Arjun,…v know u dear,…dont act as a gentleman,…but u ve 2 b cox of ur biwi r8,….N loved how neil makes radz 2 watch the film in laptop n loved how radz blushes away ,..she s still naive yaar,….

    btw Nesam,…doing romance in office,flirting with each other,….tooooooooo bad,..where s ur professionalism babies,….See my ardhika babies who acting as nothing happened n behaving as a gentle couple,..(cox arjun ll bcom wild ly in their room privately),…jokes apart,..loved how neil wore scarf coming out of the bathroom like b4,…its reminded me the earlier epi,…where he wore it b4 samrat 2 scare sam n now he s doing truely cox of sam,…sam u r too fast yaar,….even loved how u too fight 4 silly reasons again n loved how arjun n radz tires 2 compromise by holding u both on each side,…i knew neil,..its samendar singh ka mistake,…but no need 2 mention r8,…loved that scene too,….

    N thank god they dinn show baby 4 nesam n ardhika cox it was too early 4 both the couple 2 get married as they ve 2 achieve in their career first then babies next,…this s apt 4 real life n cvs showed this without making any flaws like other shows,…such a realistic ending in such a short span of time,…its highly commendable move 4m u cvs,…

    2.ARDHIKA(this s my last review on this heavenly made couple):

    lemme start with previous epi first,….loved how arjun searched 4 radz after their emotional bonding previous n8 in their bedroom n shouted her name after waking up 4m his bed n loved how radz hear his shouting b4 arjun could find her,…the letter which radz wrote 2 arjun,…friends,…do u remember wat she wrote apart 4m asking his n sam’s happiness,…its all his words 2 her which affects her badly n ve got a solid proof 2 this in this letter,… friends,please try 2 remember the store room scene of ardhika,..wat arjun told s happened acc 2 her,..A STORY OF A GIRL,…So,she felt guilty n tat makes her 2 write those words exactly,..his every words panouti,raaste ka pattar,(badluck,stone in his path) really affects her very much,…She took that seriously in2 her heart,…So,she decides 2 execute her decision of leaving him,……

    Loved how arjun read the letter with angst n teary eyes,….he started 2 run behind her 2 stop her 4m leaving him then he stopped in the midway after seeing sam,,…Now comes a big question,..wat makes him 2 stop chasing his love 4m leaving him n y he dinn tried 2 meet her b4 sam’s arrangement,…wat makes him 2 stop ???? Answer s very simple,..wen he found sam,he felt guilty 4 not trusting radz wen she spoke truth n tried 2 reveal the fake relation b4 him n so,he wanna bring back sam’s lost happiness 2 her by making Nesam marry n revealing her sacrifice 2 khanna’s family n he wanna make everything clear in sam’s life which he created b4 4 his meaningless revenge,….

    Further he was afraid of a big thing,..REJECTION 4m Radz,..He can even live without radz by walking dead but he cant stand 2 face her rejection of his love,..the very thot which hitches his mind s wat if she dinn ve such feelings over him,..this fear stops him 2 meet radz but after sam’s assurance that radz too love him gives him some courage 2 meet her,….

    Even i doubt,he revealed nandhu’s drama cox some secrets should b kept as secrets 4 life long 2 save many lives,…that’s y radz dinn disclose this truth 2 every1 even after knowing it n so,arjun who s in synchronization with radz ll do the same yaar,..He might ve disclosed by putting all the blame on himself,..cox if the truth came out means,..piyali ll never say that Samrat n herself make arjun as BS partner just 4 radz sacrifice without any hatred 4 samrat 4 his extra marital affair,…r it may b he revealed it n samrat accept his mistake,..may b its one sided 4m nandhu’s side n so,he made arjun as partner 4 his genuine move after revealing this truth n flew 2 australia with manya,…

    k enof of my imaginary revenge drama revealization which s not at all necessary now,…V ve 2 discuss more about EPIC LOVE CONFESSION EVER in TV of our magic couple,…

    Radz telling her mom tat she dinn wanna meet any 1 n she cant love any 1,..please leave me like this,…r8 then Arjun entering the room,..i swear u all guys that radz ve some radar 4 arjun yaar,..She sense his presence n loved how wind blows n makes empty papers 2 flew all over the room,..its not a wind,..its a love breeze,..m i r8 guys???,..next coming breath taking moments of our ardhika,…

    loved how Arjun caressing radz arm n back hugging her with all passion n loved how radz closed her eyes after feeling arjun’s touch n loved how arjun too closed his eyes 4 a moment n leaned his head over her neck,..as these both dont wanna end this moment as radz thot she s dreaming about arjun until arjun uttered his words,…’ur life s incomplete like these empty papers without ink of love’ brought radz back 2 real sense n she turned back 2 find her hubby,…

    Again loved their light tom n jerry fyt yaar,..arjun found that she s in love with him ,…

    Arjun,…’y u dinn marry till now’
    Radz,…’2day a proposal coming 4 me 2 see’
    Arjun,…’oh then u go like this wearing some1’s nuptial chain n sindoor’
    Radz,…’i gonna remove it’
    arjun,…’then remove it r8 now n give it 2 me’
    shocked Radz turned her back 2 hide her feelings 4 him,…
    Radz,…y u came here
    Arjun,…2 take wat’s mine,…
    Radz,…u can get many nuptial chain in mumbai n go away 4m here,…

    omg,…omg,…she s still naive yaar,…wen i heard this dialogue 4m radz,..i dunno how 2 express my feelings 4 her,…arjun understood that she ll never understand his feeling unless n untill he confess,..Nice move CVs,…this leads arjun 2 confess his feelings 2 his wife n the way he holds her cheek n stating how he feels 4 her n how her presence haunting him ceaselessly,…N finally confessed ‘I LOVE U RADHIKA’ without taking breath in his husky voice,…omg m literally dead by tis confession man,…

    then,..my chasni thinks about her sam’s love n arjun cleared sam (real Raste ka pattar)btw them by revealing Nesam love,..radz surprised 2 hear this,..n finally loved how arjun explained sam’s love like himself being fallen in love with his panauti,moongfali,raste ka pattar,…loved it man,…Next Radz has 2 confess,…now there s no1 btw them,…so,Arjun wants her 2 confess her love,…Radz calling him ARJUN = I LOVE U,…all ardhiak fans n arjun knew this r8,…Another breath taking moment,…

    friends,…how many of u felt diff btw radz kiss n arjun’s kiss on forehead,…There radz kissed him 2 assure him the support he needed as a child n Here arjun’s feather kiss on her forehead,eyes n leaning 2wards her lips s 2 make her confess her love n kill her hesitation,..as they ve their life time 2 get intimate but confession s much needed now,…i loved it a lot,…call me ARJUN,…Sir,..ARJUN,…Sir,,…Arjun,….ARJUN,…Radz arjun makes my lover boy 2 fly in cloud n he hugged her tightly with full passion yaar,…HAts off 2 Aham n Monica 4 this epic scene,…

    After Leap,…

    Friends,..i ve 2 admit 1 fact that i got all the scenes which i expected 2 see btw ardhika,…thank u cvs,…K,…Arjun’s dream came true yaar,…Radz waking him with her wet hair n Arjun pulling her closer n Radz calling him ARJUN,Arjun,ARjun, in her each line,…M really loved hearing arjun,..k my lover boy wants 2 take leave n spend all his time with his wife,..how cute arjun,…but ur career oriented biwi scolding u n btw,..ly1 dialogue showed us that Radz achieved her dream by getting best copywriter award,…

    then loved arjun’s dialogue,..he s complaining like a kid yaar,….’b4 u even dinn call my name,…n now u r always scolding me by calling ARjun’,…even loved radz replying him ARJUN,…hmmm now i understood who’s hand s high,…chasni,..arjun,..u ve no way that u already lost with her in ring finding rasam,,…so,chasni’s hand ll b always high dear,…but u know how 2 lose her,… n 1 sec my heart stopped wen u closed the door cox i thot whether nandhu re-entered,…..as i thot she went 2 london with Rana…but later found that its ur way of making her nervous,…

    N they both kissed,…Even radz was expecting this as she left her hair brush,….BTw Arjun,..u kissed Radz without brushing n bathing yaar,..very bad dear,…my chasni s clean always so,better kiss her after taking bath man,…so,she ll not get ur bad smell,..n u ll get a long lasting romance dear,…hehhehe,….

    LASt BGM,…

    Friends,..i felt radhika a bit shy in last part yaar,…btw loved how arjun continuously adding chasni in his tea,…nesam noticed it n they teased arjun,..n loved my chasni blushing all over,..

    Loved sam-radz hug n ARjun neil Hug n last but not least Group hug,..i felt that hug as not character hug but it sounds like all 4 lead actor’s hug,…with this my amazing show comes 2 an end,…

    Asusual dinn read wat i wrote n sry 4 many grammatical errors here n there,…n i hope u never mind like always….

    • Nakshatra on

      What to say?u r amazing renu…nice description…AHAM SHARMA is fabulous in romantic scenes…good to see him in such scenes..

    • Meena on

      Renu,that was a superb write up of the last episode,(inch by inch,I would say)really, really good!You have done a great job for the producers of the show,who hurried to end the show abruptly for the reasons known only to them!I think they have to pay you for this wonderful job!(ha,ha,ha!)It was very,very nice to read and felt good as what we missed was told beautifully by you !!Iam sure the director himself wouldn’t have been able to make us feel what you have made us feel!

    • raashi on

      Renu…..loved ur explanation….of what happened in d show….& what d cvs left for us to decipher…fantastic!! N I felt d same dat d last group hug was more of a actors’ hug than that of characters.

    • Nisha on

      @Renu I luv all ur comments… One last request from me
      All manmarziyan fans vl b very happy if u cn recall nd update all the ardhika moments once again..so v cn bid a farewell to our favourite show by refreshing our memory abt our most loved couple..
      I knw it vl b difficult BT I luv the way hw u explain each nd every moment.
      So plz update it if u cn….itz my request yaar

  256. kfar on

    Suvi- sorry i mistook comments must be my sleepy eyes and hey wil be dream come true if such a thing happens. Thax sooo much for sayin dat 😀
    seems like im the only owl here readin comments hehe i think everybody izz asleeep.

    Wondering only till yesterday diz comment zone was buzzing wid loads of comnts til now, coz of serial update but now i really feel like itz over. The show ends. Da curtain falls…sad sad sad..cant see ardhika nesam frm tmrw:(

  257. kfar on

    @all- Oh, hell whatever I tried and I didn’t get any sleep.

    Updating since where I left off…

    Chapter-4 ( He and I)

    First thing Radhika heard before she opened her eyes was an argument and it was going on in whipers. She slowly opened her eyes. A wide ceiling of a room came into view. It was all dark and she squinted her eyes to look around as she tried to get up. She winced, shit her stomach was really very sour. She looked down at herself, she was still wearing the same white tank top and blue denim shorts of the morning. Ugh! She needed a shower. Like badly. Like immediately right now.

    She was in a bed and it wasn’t her small one. That bed was narrow and this was king size, with soft comforter and silky sheets.

    Radhika got up difficulty. Her head spun around and she felt immensely dizzy and extremely nauseous. She put her legs on the floor and got up with the support of the bed.

    Where was she? She switched on the bedside lamp. The room flooded with light yellow new colour. She blinked and looked around in wonder. Wow! If was huge and strangely it was all black.

    The sheets. The bed covers. The recliner. The floor was smooth shiny marble black except the ceiling and the small library racks at one corner. They were deep red in colour.

    It was male and edgy with none soft hues and shades. The large glass windows opened wide. The thin red see through curtains moved as the cool breeze pulled and pushed them with its invisible strings.

    Radhika walked towards the window.

    The whispered conversation can be clearly heard now.

    There were two voices. One was Arjun’s and other was….Saina? His girlfriend.

    She was here? Radhika moved closer to the window.

    “I don’t know why you’re making it as such a big deal, I mean, you always have parties here like every night except you didn’t have one since three months. You had a fight with Rahul, I don’t know what he said made you two roll on the floor and punch each other to death….God, with all the temper fits, I needed a break. We didn’t have time for each other and….” Her annoyed voice travelled in the room.

    “And I thought what could better be to cheet you up than a all night party.” Her voice now turned seducing.

    “I didn’t tell you to, Saina, and there is something called personal space.” Arjun replied to her sugary outburst.

    His voice was quite different with her than he used with Radhika. Very familiar and friendly.

    She then heard a movement.

    “Since when do you need space from me. You had always come back for more.” Her previously seductive voics turned smoky.

    Radhika drew back. Her face burnt hot.

    How did she get here? She frowned in confusion. Her forehead cleared of the crinkle.

    Oh, sweet god, The fight, dammit, how did she forget? Well, you just got punched in the stomach and blacked out completely, how will you remember it, her mind mocked her. Yeah, yeah whatever.

    Her eyes widened, Oh crap, Vir. He must be really very guilty for punching her, though accidently. The guy had temper yes, but he was not a bad guy. He was just too protective. His parents gave him the responsibility of both hers and Misha’s safety, so he had to feel obligated to duty.

    Where was he? She needed to explain the situation or else he would go blurt out to his parents.

    Where is her bag? She looked around but she couldn’t find it. Did she even bring one? The room was slick and there was no chance of anything feminine, that too being related to hers.

    Heck with it, she will just leave like this. She hoped Viren was here still.

    Radhika walked up to the door of the room hurriedly. She opened it and rammed her straight into someone’s chest.

    “Whoa! Where is the fire?” Arjun’s chest rumbled under her ears.

    Radhika could hear his heartbeat. He was warm and he smelled delicious. Both of her hands were on his waist on either sides. Saina was around, her mind reminded her. Crap. She pushed herself apart from his body.

    “I need fo leave. Is Viren here still?” She asked him.

    She looked up at his face. He seemed wryly amused. So much has happened in one night. It was like a casette going fast forward.

  258. kfar on

    Radhika didn’t want to create a scene here and she really want Saina to haggle her about ‘making use of the situation. She was a big bully in college and whoever touches Arjun is a big enemy. Radhika has seen girls being the victim of the humiliation she pours evilly. Radhika didn’t want that. Her hateful ire. Nope.

    Arjun was truly way out of her league. Saina has got big blue eyes, pretty face, lady long legs and all. Hers were boring brown eyes and black curly hair and she was minion campared to her. But Radhika in appearance was just like her mom and she wasn’t boring, Oh, no, hsr mother had been far from it. The resemblance between them had been quite uncanny. People used to get confused if her mother was her sister and stuff.

    She shook her head and put her arms protectively around her waist.

    She tried to walk past him, but he caught her bicep before she could take a step any further.

    “Where do you think you’re going?” He asked her with raised eyebrow.

    She tried to remove his hand with hers but he wouldn’t budge.

    “To find Viren, is he still here?”

    Arjun’s eyes turned steely.

    “No, he is not here and I don’t think you’re meeting him anytime soon.” He said firmly.

    Excuse me? Did he just order her?

    “And you look pale.” He narrowed his eyes and slid them all over her face.

    If he observed the sadness that settled in her eyes, then he didn’t comment on it. He only pushed her into the room and closed the door shut.

    Abruptly, the pain came back of the punch, her stomach hurt and she felt extreme nausea hit her. Oh, god, she was going to be sick.

    “Arjun…” Radhika fisted some of the soft fabric of his tshirt. ” Bathroom.” She coughed.

    She was going to puke on his beautiful looking brown hued carpet if he wasn’t going to do anything but stare at her wide eyed.

    “Arjun!” She urged him again. He muttered out a curse under his breath.

    First the dry heaves attacked clenching her intestines painfully tight and Oh, god, here it comes, the morning breakfast and afternoon lunch.

    Just as immediately Dustin caught her up in his arms and Radhika squeaked surprised. Fast paced he dropped her into the bathroom and she instantly puked her guts out in the pearly white wash stand.

    “Get out. Get out. Get out!” Radhika shouted.

    She didn’t want him to see her like this. But he didn’t move away. Her hair was lifted off her flushed face.

    Arjun rubbed her neck and back gently. She washed her face with the cool water and the soap Arjun handed her. She rinsed her mouth with the cleanser. He gave her a towel which she dabbed all ovsr her face.

    “You came here with me in the car just so that I don’t black out and now it’s my turn of concern.” He whispered softly in her ear.

    He wants to see her puke? Well, be my guest, she thought as she didn’t even have the strength to argue with him let alone protest him being here.

    He held her to his body as support and she felt a little better after a while.

    Radhika stood there in his arms. Her back to his front. He slid his arm around the front of her waist. He hesitated but let his fingers inside her tank top, and put them over her stomach and touched his cool fingers lightly all over where it hurt like hell.

    “It’s going to be fine.” He whispered, his soft lips over her right ear.

    “Hmm.” She mumbled sleepily.

    “Are you going to nod off?” He whispered again, his fingers rubbed gently in circles all over the hurt spot.

    She only mumbled inaudibly, sleepily as his touch felt good. She didn’t feel any pain now accept a few twinges. He chuckled into her neck.

    He moved his lips along her ear shell.

    “Feeling better?” He asked huskily.

    She didn’t reply but turned around into his arms and laid her head on his chest. He put his arms around again and held her tight.

    Her hands were around his waist. They stood tightly held in poignant silence, very familiar with each others touch and without any barrier of tensed up muscles. His body offered strength and comfort to hers. It felt nice to be dependent on him. Well, only once because she felt bone tired and if he did let go of her now, she was bound to fall flat on her face.

    “Why did you do it?” He asked her moment later.

    His chin rested on her head.

    “What?” She whisper asked.

    “You know, take a hit for me.” His voice sounded with husky curiosity and something like wonder.

  259. kfar on

    Radhika’s eyes flew open and the haze of peace and quite cleared from her fogged up brain.

    Why did she take a hit for him? Well, that’s a good question. Why did she?

    Because she can’t see him hurt, as simple as that. That is the reason she took a punch from Viren. The force of such realization jerked her back.

    Radhika let her hands fall from around his waist. He didn’t let go and but held her body tight.

    “I have got to go.” She said and and tried to move away.

    “You aren’t going anywhere tonight.” He stated, his face serious.

    Radhika ignored it.

    “I know Dustin will be here still. He will take me home. You don’t need to worry about it.” She pushed away and got into the room.

    “I sent him away.” He announced, following her out of the bathroom.

    She snorted, as if he could sent away big buff Viren. The thought was ridiculous.

    Arjun put his hand over the small of her back and turned her around to the way of the plush looking bed.

    “Come on, let’s get you to bed, you need rest.” He said in a gentle tone and pushed down her body forward.

    He removed the covers aside and sat her down on the bed.

    He then put two square pills on her hand and offered her a glass of water from besie the wooden table of the bed.

    Radhika frowned.

    “What are these for?” She asked.

    Arjun sighed and rubbed the back of his neck.

    “Painkiller for the hurt and Vomikind for the nausea.” He explained.

    Radhika meekly took those and emptied the glass thirstily.

    He was looking at her smiling.

    She couldn’t believe he lead her here. It was his gentle voice and his comforting touch. She felt like a whining child being scolded.

    “Don’t patronize me, I don’t want to ne here. I will walk if Viren isn’t here to take me home.” She grumbled.

    “Not in a million years, Sweety.” His eyes and voice flat without humour.

    Radhika sighed, giving up.

    “I…I want to shower first.” She conceded and wrapped her arms around her waist again.

    And he needs one too. He looked wary and tired. His jaw has the fresh punch mark. He slid his hand over his dishevelled silky black hair. it fell back over his forehead messily. And he needs a hair cut too. But, his jaw still looked smooth and soft. She wanted plant kisses all over it. Ohhhkay, where did that come from? did she hit her head too…she blushed and looked away.

    “Good.” He said, and took hold of her hand in his.

    She got up as he wrapped his arm around her waist.

    “Where are you going? She asked him confused.

    “To shower.” He replied with wry humour.

    His eyes twinkled mischievously as his lips twitched into a smirk.

    Radhika narrowed her gaze.

    “Not funny.” She bristled.

    “Why not? We both need to shower.” He said amused, and kissed her nose.

    He slowly moved away. Her eyes widened. He looked into her eyes with the smirk still playing over his lips.

    He removed his tshirt over from his head. His lean body and abs flexed, but she saw a fading gash mark around his ribcage. it looked angry red.

    Radhika stared mesmerised. The tshirt flew over the room and landed on her face. She removed it and clutched it over her chest.

    He smiled boyishly at her and She was at that instant became hook, line and sinker. The charm in his smile blinded her eyes with its thousand volt bulb brightness. His jeans hungs low over his hips.

    His hands opened the button of his jeans as he looked straight into her eyes hotly.

    Radhika felt feverish rush of feelings run all over her body. Goosebumps rose on her skin. The zipper went down smoothly slowly next and she let out a muffled whimper. Radhika grabbed the Tshirt, covered her eyes and ran hard towards the bathroom.

    She heard a booming laughter behind her before she locked the bathroom door. Her heart rate spiked up and she was breathing quite heavily. Jerk, he was playing with her………

    ***********

    Hahaha, arent deY CuTe 😀

    How do U like it?

    plssss reply, worked hard for u guys onLY 😀

    k den Im wiped…goin sleep finally….

    pls tel me how was it…

    • Shub on

      I hv been a silent reader all these days. Cant wait for the next chapter. i wake up reading your stories. It is racy. Your story is kind of solace for missing manmatzian these days. Please keep at and post more.

    • raashi on

      Farha we appreciate all ur hardwork..sweetie:) M in love wid ur story….n my day is made if I read a part of it….feel soooo happy when I see one of ur updates n my excitement knows no bound then!

      N now d story.well it was fantastic as usual…..m loving d Arjun- Radhika track!! I’m liking d caring n concerned Viren but den I also liked his snarling self….but Viren doesn’t like Arjun:( but koi na…I toh love him:D

      N Farha m bowled over by ur writing skills..would love to read ur book someday!! Lots of love:-*

  260. kfar on

    hey sory guys in one of the sentence i wrote ‘Dustin’ by mistake.. its Viren..as usual typos hate em :-X

  262. tasnim on

    hai @all frnds gd mrning i thought u guys stoped cmnting bt thre is dfrnt… @zara thanks a lot ur xpresing was vry nice….@kfar i didn’t have time fer vi i try my bst 2 read ur stry u r vry talentented…keep it up i think u became a writer like radu….best of luck

  264. manmarziyan fans (manmarziyan) on

    Suddenly I miss this show omg i feel like crying. Star plus should have given this show another chance. Come back with manmarziyan part 2 with same cast and writer specailly.

  265. dipika on

    Renuuuuu feeling like hug u dear…how beautifully describe all the moments again…nw m falling in lobe witb ur pov…great yarrr….no words to describe hw much i like ur pov…pls join the page dear i want more pov by u…plz DEAR….MISSS U FRM CORE…N THANKS FOR THE BEST POV…

  267. saji on

    Renu
    thank u so mch for ur POV …so beautifully u explaind characters n situatns…

    hope u will continue in dis space with ur povs abt previous ardhika moments or any previous episodes…

  268. tasnim on

    hai@anu i dn’t have fb acount bt i.l rmbr al of u anu dn’t u guys see anyothr serial plz infrm then we cn al guys join on that page

  269. kfar on

    @Nakshatra- thanx alot dear 😀

    @Tasnim- Heyyy thanx sooo much for sayin that 😀

    @Dipika- thanx yaaar means alot comng from u guys

    @Ireena @Anu- Best people in da world thanxxx lots dearies n loveliessss 😀

  270. kfar on

    dipika- sorrty i took ur compliment hahaha my eyes r actn up hehe
    @renu- verrry nice dear 😀

  271. kfar on

    @tasnim- hey…im never going to stop commentin here haha im a very big chipku.ek baar chipak gayi toh chipak gayi..

  272. kfar on

    ireena- yes i too heard about it but woud our show come out wit scnd season? it wud be nice if such a thing hapns. i lvd ispkkd1 but 2nd season came out wit odr chacters:(

  274. arohi on

    Miss the show sooooo much.;(
    Anu…u r just fab.
    Farah, lv is in the air…..nice work. Keep it up.
    I miss my aradhika n nesam… ;( ;(

  275. anaya on

    Miss mmz..
    I went to watch the 10.30 time slot yesterday just hoping a 1 hr mahaepisode though I new aisa kuch hona wala nahi tha.;(
    Luv u mmz…………

  277. kfar on

    manmaeziyan fan- hey dont be sad and i hope da show cms out with another season too. fingers crossed.

    i hv only ten minutes now den im gone for day :'(

  278. kfar on

    im walkimg n typin hope i dont hit anythin n fall down..thanx Shub..n i was waitin if anyone liked da part n ys wil post the oder part soon but time compels i only hv time at night dear and Arohi- lv truly iz in da air thanx 😀

    im out in the air n m feeln it.

  281. Riya on

    Friends just imagine
    If you got a chance to invite a character of
    Manmarziyan then which one you choose
    1-Arjun
    2-Radhika
    3-sam
    4-Nill
    5-Nandini di
    6-Dada jii

    • Thena on

      @Riya…hey riya…2 me its neil yaar…cos ly wid tis guy ter is no need 2 face a circum of who ll break the ice 1st know…he is such a loquacious,naughty,charmin,easily approachabl& above al a SENSIBLE guy….r8?

    • raashi on

      It would b Arjun for sure!! N if he comes to my house…I’ll make sure he can’t leave:D But den that’s never gonna happen:( …..hmm but still sochne me kya jaata hai;-)

  282. kfar on

    mitty- thanx ya im going right der now
    Riya- Oh my god- Hands down Itsz Arjun, imagine being starstruck, my own anti hero at home. iwoud die of heart failure hahaha

  283. kfar on

    Riya- face palm, you did not mention wer to invite but I went head first and told home haha if arjun(aham sharm) crossed our street haha der wud be loads of traffic jam.all my frinds crazyyylikedat.

  284. Riya on

    Manmarziyan. Manmarziyan
    Manmarziyan. Manmarziyan
    Manmarziyan. Manmarziyan
    Manmarziyan. Manmarziyan
    Manmarziyan. Manmarziyan
    Manmarziyan. Manmarziyan
    Manmarziyan. Manmarziyan
    Manmarziyan. Manmarziyan
    Manmarziyan. Manmarziyan
    Manmarziyan. Manmarziyan
    Manmarziyan. Manmarziyan
    Manmarziyan. Manmarziyan
    Manmarziyan. Manmarziyan
    Manmarziyan Manmarziyan
    Love you manmarziyan…………………………….

  285. Natasha on

    I am happy with mmz’s ending but didnot understand a lot of things.
    1. What sam told arjun on the day when radhika left mumbai?
    2.Did arjun told the truth of revenge to all?
    3. How could nesam marry without radhika?
    4. Why writters didnot give us a scence of dadaji and arjun?
    5. Why they didnot show a scence with all birdsong employees?
    6.Will reallythe second season of mmz will start with the same cast?

  287. dipika on

    obvious riya i will call ARJUN
    n will fall in his arm by seeing him coz chkkar tu ayega hi na….hehehehe…i imagined it…Thanks riya

    • raashi on

      Hey dipika….thanks for sharing dear! I voted for MMZ 2 wid d same cast….so excited at just d thought of it……..n I don’t want my happiness ka balloon to b burst!! Wish they really give us MMZ 2 it doesn’t get confined to just a poll!!

  291. kfar on

    Natasha- 1)The show cvs needed to hurry up the show so just gave us a gist about wht might have happened.
    dats the reason dey couldnt show a full on confrontation between sam and arjun but just us a glimpse dat at least dey talked. see wen dey paused a bit wen arjun opened da door. Both had tje expression as ‘let the truth be come out’…dat is Arjun about his revenge and Sam about realizing her true love..sad dat becoz of the hurry up we didnot get to see the supposed controntation. I bet it wud have been an amzing scene if da actors only got to act it..

    2- Agaiin CVs hack job to hurry up the end. They cud have shot the entire truth confession with sam, neil, sams prents and all but how coud they help it the cvs. they dint hav much time to shoot the scenes yaar and we obviously missed out much becoz of it. Arjun’s plan of revenge reveal would have been good, becoz Radhika’s innoncence would hv come into light and I was dying to see everyone’s reaction to it. Their gulity faces would have been treat to watch. Sam’s facial reaction to Radhika’s eternal sacrifice(well not eternal as arjun went to her atlast) woukd have been awesome to watch. Now, take that Sam, you should be ashamed for insulting her and we could hav finally heard her say very brokenly and wit tears…”arey chasni tumne ye kya kardiya….”

    But instead it was all hacked up.

    3, And frankly Natasha, I would have killed for Arjun and dadaji’s, Rads brother and her father scene together . The cvs would have written nice scene im sure but time ran out man. I hate it that sp couldn’t have extended it more for a week so that we could have seen all nice long ending.

    4- I was wondering too, den I got to a conclusion. Arjun had confessed about his revenge. it was hard to digest that by everyone..sam would have been hurt knowing he didnt like her but she wil be hurt obly a little becoz she realized she didnt love arjun at all. it was some one else. so it may have taken time to settle the info and guilt knowing dat she didnt believe her friend wen rads actually time and tried to save her since start. She is shameful and embarrased and couldnt muster up the courage to talk to her. Days went by but still even with Neil persistence she couldnt call her even her marg neared. Neil in turn thought time heals everything and he didnt to come in between friends. Sam should apologize to her wen she ready to come out of the guilt. Now he couldnt do and contact rads becoz sam isnt ready for the apology so he too went alibg the marraige and stood supporting sam to finally come out.

    He respcts sam and rads frindship too much.

    Arjun totally guilt ridden, he had hated and hurt her alot. He is ashamed and he is guilty. He couldnt face her so he waited too to muster up the courage to see her. It would have been great watching move around his house like a lost soul without rads but hurried hacking again.

    Both the people , Sam and Arjun very dear to Rads travel bocz they both insulted and hated rads da most. They need to apologize to her big time….Neil didnt accompany and came later becoz he never doubted Rads and he knows rads will always feel his friendship no matter the distance, time and silence….

  293. kfar on

    even though with all less time the cvs created a nice finale episode. loved it 😀
    sorry for all the misses out words Nat( sorry i shortened ur name Natahsa) 😀

  294. Bushra on

    i will miss u all.i cant stop my tears.thank uuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu alll.hope to meet u all somewhere.i will miss this serial also…………………………………..Bushra ,a silent fan of u all

  296. tasnim on

    o@ kfar heavy wala welcome….i’l also check d cmnts of u guys….chipku nice….am too much with my study…by d way what do u do…?n do u have any othr name.,..n keep cmnting we al wil be vry happy to read it n sry 4 rplying late…

  297. tasnim on

    too much busy,…mistake o dn’t u watch any othr serial….today in my cntry a lot rains so have 2 stay at home.,. N hope ur drm cme tru with 2nd part me 2 fingr crs ha ha ha @riya undrstnd hw u gona mis it….

  299. Thena on

    @farha…oh my dearrrrrrrrrr….searchin 4 words 2 stress ur brilliance yaar…cant ask 4 more buddy….i cudnt make it here since mornin…loads of work in college…total mood off…aftr finishin al those came here straight & read ur full story in a single breath…luvd it,luvd it,luvd it..really njoyd wen arjun said”i did more than touchin hr..trust me”…LLH…seems lik u r always typin…wud really require such strenuous effort….omg feelin lik huggin u tight dear…and njoyd many more convo esp viren-arjun encounter…i take a lil pity on viren too…oh i ve said a lot…u keep gng buddy….bt pls post the link wer u r gonna post tis story in future(always askin hehehe..)..cos v don know wen tis page ll b closed my friend…watevr BIG SALUTE 2 ur work…

    @renu…oh my dear renu…didn miss evn a single shot..amazin review yaar…

    @anu…hey u said u were a silent reader…thaks 4 sharin ur opinion tat u likd 2 read my cmmnts yaar…thank u so much buddy…

  300. Mandy on

    Hiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii guys !!???

    Hw’s evey1 n hws d day goin ?????

    Hey Farah guess I’m late I was readin ur stories n de wer very unsual n special I guess !!?????

    Hey Renu read ur thing dat u wrote it ws stupendously great !!???

    Hey Anu Raashi Riya thena Ireena Dipika will miss ur povs guys !!??

    Hey Arohi Natasha nakshatra like ur beautiful cmnts !!???

    Guys I will miss u n ur povs plssssss be online I don’t have lot of friends so dat I can cmnt n chat !!?❤️❤️??

  302. Thena on

    @farha..heyaa 4got 2 mention 1 thin..thanks a lot 4 tellin again & again tat u read al my cmmnts & likd it…LOADS OF LOVE….

    @mandy…thanks yaar 4 likin my pov…heavyheartedly writin in tis page these days…ll miss u badly buddy…

  305. Mandy on

    Hey tasnim after long time !! Hw r u ??

    Hey Zara Anu suvi thanx for mentioning my name dearies will miss u guys a lot !!!???

  306. Riya on

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  307. dipika on

    my name is Dipika Bargat
    from nagpur maharadhtra, India
    nw placed in Punjab national bank waiting for joining date till date m free…
    my age is 23 years..
    nw natasha u tell abt urs whrabts plz

  308. dipika on

    hey Mandy thanks byddy…m too missing ur pov n u too….
    friends do u hav notice that 421 comments count here…can u belive that….its power of mmz n ardhika ahamica

  309. nish on

    Sorry guys couldn’t connect to all on the funeral day of star plus their was net banned in my state for 6 days 🙁 so no data plan or mobile plan was working. Love u ardhika to the core miss u to the deepest core

  310. lreena on

    Riya,I must say u have a great designer mind. What u have made manmarzian is just fabulous.

  311. tasnim on

    hai@ mandy am fine by d grace of almighty ya long time i bt i cmnted in the mid hw r umandy.,..?wher r u frm…n what do u do,…?

  313. anu on

    mitty accept my fren request in fb.. i’ll give u admin rights of the page, so that v both can post all the updates regularly..

  314. Samiha on

    Hey, anybody online? My ammi just handed me my phn for 20 mins. Trying to make the best use of this time…

    @farha: enjoyed your story. Can I guess a little? I think that Vir is much injured by Arjun for hitting Radhika. When Radhika goes home, she will be pampered or thrown out be her foster parents and she will even with Vir. Hope you don’t mind my horrid imagination…

    @Natasha: i told about myself, now tell us about yourself..

  315. Samiha on

    Guys, the comment number is much high, feeling happy for that. Let’s comment more and more and let it reach thousand…

  316. Samiha on

    @Riya: What and where is GRAVETAR that you mentioned? Please reply fast. And who is that girl in your profile pic? Is that you?

    • Riya on

      You can add pic by Google+ , Graveter
      Graveter is sites , if you search in Google you can also found graveter.
      She is Priyal gor my most favorite telly actress since 2010…..

  317. Bushra on

    ur comments have touched me emotionally.Btw would u all like to tell me where are u all from??thanks Renu,Anu,Natasha,Kfar and all the fan of this serial those i didnt mention.sorry for that.

  318. chinna on

    Hi…
    Renu ur explanation is superb dear…. U have a great career as a writer…from Saturday I was eagerly waiting for ur explanation….today I don’t I started missing this serial alot…just can’t imagine my situation at 10:30 our fav show tymm..

    Coming to the episode it was so good and freshening…i loved the scene of Arjun proposing radz…and how radz replied by saying Arjun…its so epic.. And new..
    Nesam.-it was so cute btw them and loved the convo btw them…asual Neil rocked the show…
    And finally when the last few minutes of the show where there is only bgm with our fav actors working made to feel so sad…as we couldn’t get any chance to hear their dialogues anymore…

    Sham Sharma u were amazing man…the way u express ur feeling thrg made me ur fan…and Monica ur smile has some magic dear..and I could say u will have a very bright future..

    Missing mmz alot…..???

  319. Annie on

    Hey guys!! No mmz from today!!

    I just wanna erase mmz from my mynd for few days s it is very difficult for me to move on as I was very much attaced to mmz..
    On top of yhat from yesterday dome incients r occuring which is making me feel lyk crying and msde me miss mmz lyk hell!!!
    Yesterday my mom msde pineapple chutney(made me remember pineapple and chasni ) and unexpectedly today in mah tutn a new biy got admitted.. and guess his name!! Its arjun!! This made me remember my arjun..

    Oh god!! Plz save me!!! Cnt stay without mmz :'(

  321. tasnim on

    @samiha in riya’s profile pick it is nisha aur uski cousin’s nisha anari rajviani dn’t watch d serial n tel which cls do u read in.,(?

    • Samiha on

      I am sure it’s not Aneri Vajani. Riya said it’s priyal. I read in class 8. Where do you live in Sirajganj? Please tell me….

    • Samiha on

      @Tasnim: I am sure it’s not Aneri Vajani. Riya said it’s priyal. I read in class 8. Where do you live in Sirajganj? Please tell me….

  322. tasnim on

    dn’t u mane u ta bad gia cilo wow banglai talking krlam tmi to bujbai special kemon aco samiha…?

  326. Riya on

    ???????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????
    ???㊙㊗?????????????㊗㊙????????????㊙㊗?????????????????????????????????????????
    Manmarziyan manmarziyan manmarziyan manmarziyan………………………

  328. tasnim on

    hai@natasa am jerin tasnim 4rm sirajgong bangladesh,student of cls 11 ;scince/ nw tel us about urslf kfar whr r u.,?

  329. Manisha on

    Guys the popular show of mtv kyy season 2 is strtng n evn satrangi sasural of zee tv got extension thn y sp is playng games uid us y d hel did they abruptly end our fav show mmz dts rly nt fair n i don thnk so dey vl agree for mmz 2 ht sp u don rspct the flngs of ur fans

  330. kfar on

    @Thena- Heyyyyyy finally a someone with my heart and mind haha i knwright i had fun imagining that line told by Arjun, and oh my god, i never thought i cd share my imagination n humour by someone dat is u..great hugs back thanx for loving my story thattt much dear..means sooo much a lot. N it might come out as a comtempory romance story one day..i hp it woukf be soon..i hv sent chapters for publishing houses..fingers crossed for it..

    @Mandy- Heyyya been a while and thanx so much yaaa

    @Dipika- I dnt hav an account dearryyyyy 🙁

    @Samiha- itssss nice dat u predicted the story further feels good but its kinda wil be light hearted dan dat. no i dont mind at all. 🙂 n thanx for readin from start n u write good i hv read al ur comments.

    @raashi- heyyyy ur not here?how did u like da chappy? hehe im kinda greedy here to know ur point view on it.

    @all- guys i never imagined anyone liking my story dis much n it made me write bettr. itzz only u guys who inspired me. ur encouragement. u are sll amazin. great. outstanding. inspiring

    • raashi on

      Farha that comment of urs made me so happy that u…..that u r greedy to know my pov..that u care about my comment..aww……n bud I’ve already given my comment as reply to ur last story update:)

  331. Riya on

    ❇❇❇❇❇❇❇❇❇❇❇❇❇❇❇❇❇❇❇❇❇❇❇❇❇❇❇❇❇❇❇❇❇✳❇❇✳✳❇❇❇❇❇❇❇❇❇❇❇❇❇❇❇❇❇❇❇❇❇❇❇❇❇❇❇✳✳✳✳✳✳✳✳✳✳✳✳✳✳✳✳✳✳✳✴✳✴✴✴✴✴✴✴✳✳❇❇✴✖

  332. Riya on

    मन्मार्जियां मन्मार्जियां मन्मार्जियां
    Manmarziyan Manmarziyan Manmarziyan
    我想起伏筆 我是誰家 起碼後者

  333. kfar on

    Manisha- yessss every oder show is opening as second season n extentions n seriously how cud dey end a show in four months guys dats ridiculous.

    • MANISHA on

      now i dont trust sp nemr n i don think so they will brng back mmz 2 n tht too uid the same cast i cld swstik productions several times bt they too r nt intrstd so now m mailing colors requestng thm to brng aham sharma as ashoka aftr the leap wch is played by siddharth nigam now cos he will be the perfect actor for portraying the role of samrat ashoka. what do u say? ?

  335. tasnim on

    o@samia in sirajgonj district main town sirajgonj dhanbandhi which schol u read n live where?

  339. Mandy on

    Hey natasha sorry 4 d late !!
    My name is Grishmitha V.(mandy my puppet name) I m studin 10 class n m 4m Andra pradesh nellore in lndia !!!

    Hiiiiiiiiiiiiiii !! Samiha anu farah mitty tasnim riya mitty annie dipika thena ireena raashi n all oders hws ur day goin after d last day of mmz ??

  340. Riya on

    Happiness is a butterfly, which when pursued,is always just beyond your grasp, but which, if you will sit down quietly, May alight upon you……………..

    • Mandy on

      D proverb is vry tochin yaar bcoz I lov to listen, write ,read proverbs so it ws mesmerising !! ♥♥♥♥♥♡♡☆☆★★

  342. tasnim on

    @samiha govt clg of sirajgonj samiha tmr time waste kra thik na samne jsc xm so valovabe poro banglai bllam jate r keu bujte na pare so dear valo vabe poro kmn….

    • Samiha on

      @Tasnim: thik bolecho apu, kintu ei serial show ta te etotai addicted hoye gechilam je eta shesh hoye jaoar poreo mon manche na. Ammu amr esob dekha onek agei mana korechilo kintu majhe majhe dekhtam. Jai hok, ekhon theke shudu 15-20 mins phn hate pabo. JSC exam er jonno dua koro…

  343. Riya on

    BENEFITS OF LAUGHING
    1-Reduced heart disease
    2-Natural pain killer
    3-Improves breathing
    4-Helps you lose weight
    5-Gives good sleep
    6-Decrease stress
    7-Makes you look young
    8-Boosts relationship
    ………?????????

  344. Thena on

    @farha..oh u toooooooo?…wat a coincidence…hahaha…yday I told I had sum confusion wid 1convo…it ws radz hitting wid the wall hard(thot it ws arjun…wyaaaaack my thot)..actually I read it again then & laughed at myself…oooooh

  345. tasnim on

    hai mandy ur name is vry uncmn n dificlt bt nice…d day was nice n today is my last day of cmnting…

  346. anaya on

    @mandy :Really horrible n painful….every now n then mujhe mmz khatam ho gaya he sochke buraa lagta jaa raha tha.I just wish it hadn’t. Ouch. It really hurts to think otherwise

  347. Natasha on

    I am Natasha. I am reading in a college.

    What do u think about my age? Thanks everyone that u gave ur information only because of my request.

  348. dipika on

    Mandy its jst like sum left me whom i loved the fullest…All day m on my phn jst watching previous epi n commenting on this page…my friends asking me y m nt talking to them frm last two days n whr is the cheerful n smiling dipika…y r u so sad..bt whn i told them the reason they were lsughing on me….can’t understand my situation.. vo mujhe pagali bol rahe hai n consoling me that it jst a serial y r u so upset bla bla bla…so feeling like crying…

    • Riya on

      Same problem here dr
      Saturday night at 11.15 I’m lonely in my room,at that time my mom & bro also come here & saw I’m crying,then my mom tell me what happen ,I told her my favorite show just now ended my bro laughing on me & mom tell it’s just a serial don’t worry
      But they don’t know it’s not a serial it’s a super heart touching story…..

  349. Manu on

    Its 10.30.. Manmarzian time.. hereaft no ardhika nesam moments, no updates, no comments, no sp… manmarzian has been moved to finished serial..feel like crying.. gonna be hell at 10.30..

  350. Clara on

    @kfar Hey!! 🙂
    I’m an avid reader of your writings . You are just amazing. And the formation of your words is such that it grips the reader and mesmerizes his mind. Eagerly waiting for you to update your story further.

  351. tasnim on

    hai@all guys am going to post my last cmnt i cn’t mention al d name bcz the space is n’t too much abroad to hold my al frnds name…it was a vry nice time with dym n with u al guys….hope almighty bles u guys n be happy with ur frnds n famliy n …plz pray 4 me @all…keep smiling ….good bye all frnds n waiting 4 d dym 2….take care…gd ni8 have a sound sleep with sweet dream..:-)

  352. anu on

    The Episode starts with AR & NS having light moments in BIRD SONG. Piyali comes to them to remind about party timings(arjun winning award ceremony). The duo couples leave for their home and gets ready for the party.. Arjun infront of the mirror wearing a dark blue shirt and a black blazer, combs his hair. meanwhile radhu comes to his back and he sees her in the mirror..He gets stunned by the mesmerising look of radhika in a beautiful black saree,looking hot… 😉 😛 … He turns to her and utters ufff… and holds her close, but she calls arjun in anger,he says call ARJUN with love,then ill leave.. she doesnt and he holds her even closer& kisses on her forehead..they start to leave..

    Neil in white tshirt with a black blazer and a black scraf around his neck.. as usual looks naughty and handsome. he waits for sam,and she comes in a cute white dress looking like a barbie doll…. ♥♥♥

    All the 4 along with piyali and samrat join the party and arjun gives credit to his team for the award and dedicates it to them.

    Its morning a lady wakes up and sees the nature from balcony shown from her back.. scene shifts to AR’s room. They wake up and both argue having a sweet nok-jhok..
    While in office, radhu’s phones beeps up with a mail,she checks it &is from an unknown sender saying “hope u both are fit and fine,its been a long time and i’ll be praying for you both. bye take care” ..

    Radhu sits thinking and Neil comes to her to call for presentation… he sees her worried and asks is evrything fine? she tells about the mail and he says O MY DETECTIVE CHASINI, lets go for presentation now, we can sort/find it out later…

    PRECAP : samaira gives presnetation. radhika sits worried and dull. Arjun notices her and a lady was shown from her back..

    heheheheheh tried my best to cheer up you all… love u loads…

  353. Latha on

    Wow! Manmarziyan Fans! I am amazed that you are all writing still about this serial! Many of you have stood out with your comments on this page!

    I did post a tweet to StarPlus about activity here .. Pl check it out https://twitter.com/latha_swamy/with_replies

    Analysis, appreciation and take-off stories .. and best of all to see that some of you have become friends just by chatting on this Tellyupdates comments!

    Let us see if a second season of Manmarziyan happens with the same cast!

    Thanks all! You have been another source of entertainment too!

  354. anu on

    @anu. u r doing a great job buddy…… thanks for the hypothetical wu of mmz hope you continue writing such wu’s. and sorry that i also share the same username as u do

  355. anu on

    I am so happy that there are many people like me who write imaginary episodes by themselves ….😍😍😍

  356. anu on

    hi anu… thanq so much dear…. dont fel sorry.. feeling happy that i found another buddy with the name i use.. ♥♥ 😉 😛

  357. Daisy on

    Heyy guys…..I know i m commenting today after the show has ended.Till now i had never ever commented to any tv show.But today i could not stop myself from sharing my feelings..Everyday at this time i used to wait to read comments from u all guys bcoz i loved the discussion which u all did here…..Renu, i loved to read ur explanation for every episode bcoz r ur explanations were so nice that i felt as if i m actually watching the episodes. Happy, annie, ireena and all others, i will miss u a lot…….

    I had never been such crazy after any tv show like manmarziyan…..i used to complete all my stuff before 10.30 and sit in front of tv.i would nt miss the show for even single minute…
    and after 11.00 i eagerly wait for next episode….the whole day i wud spend imagining for the further story..i luv ardhika a lot…i hav gone crazy for aham sharma……..don’t know how will i liv without manmarziyan…..someone plzz kill me…..i m dying for ardhika……

    And all this is happening bcoz of that stupid,idiot starplus…i hate u a lottttt.i hope i future sp will beg for youth shows but will not get any1..from today i have stopped watching all the shows on star plus…..i they wanted to end such a beautiful show then why did they started it and made us love it so madly……why dont they end stupid saas bahu sagas like sns,yrkkh,dabh. it’s my humble request to all manmarziyan fans that plzz plzz stop watching star plus…..if u want to see any of it’s show then watch it online…once the sp trp’s go down then only it will realize our feelings………

    A big thankzzzz to swastik productions and all the cast which gave us such a beautiful story……
    plzz it’s a request come up with a season 2 with the same cast…and don’t give it sp find sum other channel for ur show.we want it back….

    All we can now do is to pray that we get manmarziyan season 2…….guys plzz send an email to [email protected] or call at 022 – 42226555 and request them for season 2.i hope they listen to us……i m eagerly waiting to see aradhika onscreen again……

    Lastly i dinn knw wat i wrote…i just wanted to share my feelings….i knw many of u might be feeling like me after manmarziyan end…..so good bye guys …..I’ll miss u all….

  358. Daisy on

    guyss can anyone tell me from where can i get the manmarziyan whole episodes..i want to download all the episodes from starting…i m thinking to watch the whole series again……plzz anyone let me know…..

  360. anaya on

    @anu. Thankyou from the bottom of my heart. Everyone of mmz is alive in our heart that we can visualise the show switch your help. N the mysterious lady is probably nandini di, who learned what her bro’s lv meant to her nw only…

  363. anaya on

    @latha. Thankyou latha for the effort. Sp …..pls hear our cries. We need them. Each n every cast of mmz together. N same pairing.plsssssssss

  366. anu on

    thanq so much evryone…

    since 2days i saw all frens commenting we r sad, crying and worried… frankly speaking i too was literally crying..

    gave a thought to imitate ameena and wrote the wu, so that a little smile can be seen on my DYM TELLY friends faces… love u laods…

  367. anu on

    The Episode starts with AR & NS having light moments in BIRD SONG. Piyali comes to them to remind about party timings(arjun winning award ceremony). The duo couples leave for their home and gets ready for the party.. Arjun infront of the mirror wearing a dark blue shirt and a black blazer, combs his hair. meanwhile radhu comes to his back and he sees her in the mirror..He gets stunned by the mesmerising look of radhika in a beautiful black saree,looking hot… 😉 😛 … He turns to her and utters ufff… and holds her close, but she calls arjun in anger,he says call ARJUN with love,then ill leave.. she doesnt and he holds her even closer& kisses on her forehead..they start to leave..

    Neil in white tshirt with a black blazer and a black scraf around his neck.. as usual looks naughty and handsome. he waits for sam,and she comes in a cute white dress looking like a barbie doll…. ♥♥♥

    All the 4 along with piyali and samrat join the party and arjun gives credit to his team for the award and dedicates it to them.

    Its morning a lady wakes up and sees the nature from balcony shown from her back.. scene shifts to AR’s room. They wake up and both argue having a sweet nok-jhok..
    While in office, radhu’s phones beeps up with a mail,she checks it &is from an unknown sender saying “hope u both are fit and fine,its been a long time and i’ll be praying for you both. bye take care” ..

    Radhu sits thinking and Neil comes to her to call for presentation… he sees her worried and asks is evrything fine? she tells about the mail and he says O MY DETECTIVE CHASINI, lets go for presentation now, we can sort/find it out later…

    PRECAP : samaira gives presnetation. radhika sits worried and dull. Arjun notices her and a lady was shown from her back..

    heheheheheh tried my best to cheer up you all… love u loads…… ♥♥♥♥

  371. anu on

    can anyone help me out..
    actually i wanted to watch the Last episode of mmz but I can’t.
    I tried searching at hotstar. com and at YouTube as well but they end up showing useless videos…..
    @all : can u please solve my problem
    it may sound hilarious or ridiculous but really trust me I am not able to watch the episode

  372. Sonya on

    This was a lovely serial. Too short a time. I wish the cast all the very best they will do well after this, it was just the beginning.

  375. raashi on

    :'( M missing Mamarziyan yaar!!! It was Monday but no episode…its hurting…never thought I’d feel such pain for a tv show:(:'(

  376. Savera on

    A big hiiiiiiiiiiii to all my Manmarziyan friends.
    @Raashi yaar me too. I really dont know, when & how the vacuum of Manmarziyan ll fill.
    I am feeling like someone has snatched a very dear part of my life. But…..
    really thanks to all of you, for for posting your comment,it is a relief..
    tera ghum mera ghum ek jaisa sanam,
    hum dono ki ek kahani,
    aa jaa lag jaa gale dil jaani.
    A biiiiiiiig hug……… to all of you my friends.
    @ Anu yaar really thanks. You r taking story further in a nice way. while reading I was visualising each n every scene. So please…… keep writing .
    @Renu what an explanation…. wow its really wonderful. After reading d last part I am still smiling. Very true Arjun should kiss OUR Chasani after brushing n bathing.
    @ Kfar I am really happy for the story. post the next chapter soon. All the very best for your coming book. I ll buy it definitely.

  378. Thena on

    hi all my dearies…..want 2 get out of tis mess…so hav cum here wid a new idea of imaginin the vry anticipated “AFTER LOVE CONFESSION” scenes & gonna giv it a try here…thos who liks 2 read, here it is….so my dear buddies just 4giv me if u don lik tis & pls pls pls bear wid tis post..k am gng nw

    aftr confessin their luv 4 each othr ARDHIKA came out of their room…arjuns arm around radz shoulder & hrs around hs waist wid hr head rested on hs arm….both immersed in2 each othrs eyes…suddenly they gave a lil jerk & ripped apart by a bashin sound made by NESAM….total embarrassment there…arjun ws lukin in2 hs watch as if he ws learnin hw 2 read time…radz turned hr face & busy in collectin hair strands 2 the back of hr ear…nesam shared a teasin glances on ardhika wid our naughty dadaji….malaji wid head down made an xcuse 2 bring snacks 4 al…

    its NIGHT….

    evr1 ws sittin in dinin table…nesam sat adjacent 2 each othr…in oppo it ws arjun & dadaji in adjacent…dadaji wid al hs wittiness spoke 2 arjun…arjun found it difficult 2 manage hm & ws dumbfounded wen dadaji askd hm if he knew hw 2 clean ear…he ws totally clueless thn & placed a glance on nesam 4 help bt 2 hs dissapoinmnt,they also were njoyin the counter gvn by dadaji…oh God! 2 hs relief radz came thr wid a plate ful of poories prepared by mala…dadaji askd radz 2 serve hr hubby 1st wen she ws about 2 serve hr ddaji….arjun,wid ful glee cudnt tak off hs gaze 4m hr wen she ws al busy in servin…again she ws interrupted by dadaji askin hr 2 feed hr hubby…radz ws totally blushin & pleaded hs dadaji by hr eyes…bt she cudnt escape as thr ws nesam too…she pinchd a lil piece of delicate poori & fed arjun….hr face has gone scarlet wich ws turnin away 4m hs wereas hs gaze were totally on hrs….”ouch”,radz uttered…oh! arjun bit hr…she saw hm wid eyebrows raised….she told tat the poori ws so hot wen dadaji enquird on hr rattlin…”ah ah ah..oh yes tis is vry hot”,it ws sam winkin at neil…

    now it ws bedtim…arjun cudnt control hs dreamy mind & waited 4 hs doll 2 cum…but malaji came there & hesitantly told hm tat it wsnt an auspicious day 4 hubby & wife 2 start their new lyf(she meant consummation…bt cudnt tell hm straight)…arjun understood it wel & assured hr,”no problem mummyji…you carry on….i don mind & i respect ur rituals”,wid a respectful grin on hs face…ajun & neil in 1 room…sam & radhika in othr room…

    sam ws restless… waitin 4 radz wid hr mind ful of guilt…sam jumpd out hr bed wen heard footsteps of radz & huggd hr tight….. gvng radz no time 2 manipulate wat ws happenin,she sobbed in hr arms vry badly lik a kg babe…radz huggd hr back tight aftr tryin hard 2 make a talk…radz gave sam hr own tim 2 console hrself…..she stood still until sam hrself releasd her clutch on radz…sams face ws all red wid runnin nose…radz ws removin sams tears whil weepin hrself & nodded in nope lukin deep in2 sams eyes….both people cud manage 2 c a blur image of one anothr….again a tight hug…nw both cryin badly as if they were conveyin their heart 2 each othr witou utterin a single word…tru it ws…they smashed all their bitter past moments in tat hug…..”Oh! my chasni..i wont giv u up anymore evn 2 God”,said sam in a childish slang still weepin…” i wont leave evn if u wish 2″,radz ws intended 2 console sam…both huggd each othr again…sam planted an impetuous kiss on hr chasni’s cheek wid a broad smile….havin flushed out their bitter memories, they slept toghether lik soul sisters…

    still thr is a part remainin…ll continue it later…happy noon buddies..

    • anu on

      @thena : it was awesome buddy… i was stuck when u said arjun waiting for consummation… 😉 😉 😛 😛 ….. very good imagination… love u loads… miss the show… 🙁
      many fans have been writing imaginary stories,but i dont know why the production& direction crew of manmarziyan were not responding… feeling lost in the imaginary scenes… making us much more depressed… 🙁 🙁 🙁

    • renu on

      thena,,….loved it dear,….n u r too good sweat heart n please continue dear n m eagerly waiting 4 ur comments,…

    • Thena on

      anu thank u so much yaar…luvd it tat u likd my imagination…me tooo missin the show yaar..tat ws y came here wid the thot of tis… atleast it ll giv sum pleasure…loads of luv dear..

    • Mandy on

      Hey thena I ws feelin ly ki ws really watching d epi on d TV n I was just imagining a single single sentence n was feelin so gud after crying so much in d nite nnywas THANKS A LOT N LOL ????☺️☺️?????

    • Thena on

      @mandy…hey kiddy..got surprised aftr knowin ur age…thank u so much 4 always ncouragin tis di…u r nt allowd 2 read evry line..kid u r..hehehe…thanks tat u can imagine sentence by sentence…warm hug dear….

    • Shub on

      I hv been a silent reader all along. Awesome writing. Thank you so much. Was feeling like watching the next episode. Could imagine each and every line you wrote. Keep going! Look forward!!!

    • Thena on

      @shub…heyaa..vry much glad tat u came here 2 appreciate me as u wer a silent reader al these days….means a lot tat u cud actually imagine….loads of luv buddy..

  380. saji on

    Hi thena

    awesome yaar…dnt stop ….pls continue with ur story…gives a feelng dat v are watching mmz…its nt off air..

    continue dr thena…waitng for upcomng episodes..

    • Thena on

      hey SAJI…u wer the 1st 1 tellin me 2 cont tis…thank u so much tat u feel tat mmz is still airin…actually tis was my intention yaar…cant b happy mor than tis dear…

  381. saji on

    Forgot one thing@anu…great thought n start on mmz 2 story…u too continue with ur story dr…

    waitng for ur upcoming episodes…eagerly..

    • anu on

      thanq so much saji… if u r in fb try to follow our page… we will continue DYM2 with ur support guys… we will start there when this comment page shuts down.. miss u lot.. 🙁

    • renu on

      anu,….i read urs too,…i already said na that i loved ur imaginary thots n please continue ur writing dear,…i too loved 2 scribble sth but i cant swear cox of my studies n so ur’s n theena’s comment ll please me after mmz,….

  383. sara on

    I miss this show badly!!! I love ardhika …nesam….rip sp forever!!! Long live dym…expecting your rebirth!!! Missing all my telly friends…renu mitty anu nakshatra riya ireena and many

  384. mitty on

    @thena superb superb superb awesome dear. …spectacular imagination my dear buddy. ..plz continue we want more ☺

    • renu on

      mitty,..ill try 2 b active her dear,…but busy in studies now,…

      ll always b in touch with u all friends,…

      mitty,..please read my comment below 4 tb,..is this a good idea 4 us 2 remain in contact 4ever dear,….

    • Thena on

      @mitty….heyaa such ncouragin words dear…glad tat u likd it yaar…n s i ll continue it my dear buddy..

  385. dipika on

    hey thena imagination is mindblowing dea..superbbb
    ..waiting for further progress…
    sp u ignore our referendum abt hw mch v like mmz…
    Renu missing u dear..where are u? plz post the story of ardhika frm starting by ur pov

    • renu on

      dipika,…sweat heart,…miss u too dear,..one of friend’s name too dipika,…

      n ill try 2 post my pov starting 4m their first meeting dear,…n i hope u like it n now m busy in my studies so,i cant comment here often dear,…but ll read all ur comments dear,…

  390. BUSHRA on

    oh Thena u have done such a greeeaaaat job.wishing u a very bright future.btw i wanna read the next……………………….°•°•°•°•°•°•°•°•°•°•°•°…………………

    • Thena on

      @bushra…oh dear..no words 4 u..thank u so much 4 wishin me a bright future…thank u soooooo much tat u likd mine…s am continuin,,,hope u lik it buddy

  391. raashi on

    Awesome Thena!! U r giving us what d cvs couldn’t coz of time constraints….loved it all…Dadaji n Arjun………Sam n Rads moments….Ardhika together….Nesam wid their teasing………I’ll b waiting to read ur remaining part….n m sorry for giving unasked opinion..but can’t resist hehe…I’d love to read about some Neil n Arjun moments too n ofcourse about both d cutiepie couples!

    • Thena on

      oh oh oh…tis is my raashi…tellin me scene by scene…oh dear..u made my day buddy….s i too ve planned 4 neil-arjun scenes dear…no sorry pls yaar…warm hug…

  392. raashi on

    Hey Farha where r u?? M waiting for ur next update!!

    There’s no end to my demands!! haha..

    N bud how can it b that I don’t give my viewpoint on ur updates….I posted my comment as reply to ur last update:) U can’t get rid of me so soon:D

  393. saji on

    Hey anu,

    im nt,so,active in fb…bt iv joind our dymtelly fb page…il try to login to get all d updates regardng mmz n our frnds…thanx

  394. aradhika on

    From last 4 days I was not commenting I felt very sad on ending the show so I tried to resist for few days so I could come out of mmz but our mmz fans comments made me to reply and mmz remains best forever ..but in these days I was reading ur comments esp theena, annie ,anu ,renu ,kfar ,rasshi u r amazing people who will cheer up the fans even the show ends great job people

  396. lreena on

    Till when we will comment here without manmarzian episode,friends?I always feel empty without it.we r nt ??regular,actually that passion is nt coming from inner.we may comment till twelve days,but there is no passionate feelings without manmarzian.all wishes have finished with the ending of MANMARZIAN.⁉❔❓❕♦〰〰

  397. renu on

    hiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii friends,…

    i already typed my pov aboout previous ardhika scenes here but accidently i pressed back button in my lap,..n my long comment got deleted,…now m not in a mood 2 retype the same but ll try 2 scribble their first meeting alone,…

    MY MAYBELLINE GIRL Is,…i dunno but i still love this dialogue yaar….Arjun saw his soul partner 4 the first time n he felt attracted in their very first encounter,…this makes him 2 stop his presentation 2 ve a long stare at radz that he even 4got every1 s looking at him n his long staring,…Neil understood arjun’s stare n so he made a comment 2 cool the hot situation prevailing there,…’wat an entry chasniji’,..i love this too yaar,…

    Still arjun s not out of his glance,…v knew arjun,..ur heart’s screaming yaar,..n ur eyes requesting ur mind 2 not end this stare as it gives immense pleasure 2 them,…

    But this makes every1 2 look wat makes him 2 stop his presentation including piyali n sam 2ve a look at chasni,….Arjun,clever man understood the situation n makes himself as a rude boss b4 all n he chided radz 4 his mistake,…but i liked his dialogue,…’Either come n sit inside r go out,…n its better if u decide it by 2day itself’

    Radz entered inside with coffee with some glances at her rude boss n also loved how he distanced himself 2 give way 4 her 2 sit,…i felt arjun’s spark in his eyes 4 her in their first meet itself,…He wanna introduce sam as his maybelline girl but irony s his heart wants radhika as his maybelline girl n he succeeded in attaining his goal yaar,…

    @ all,….I ll write old scenes wenever i get tym yaar,..cox i made my self busy by engaging myself in studies yaar n no more daily soap now so,if i get bored i ll come here 2 share my thots n read all ur comments,…

    @TELLYUPDATES,…PLEASE DONT CLOSE THIS SITE N PLEASE OPEN A FAN PAGE 4 MMZ N WE LL DISCUSS LY ABOUT THE STORY WHICH REMAINS INCOMPLETED WITH MANY FILL IN THE BLANKS BY CVS,…SP IGNORED OUR EFFORT N HURTED OUR EMOTIONS BUT I HOPE TB LL HEAR OUR REQUEST N FRIENDS PLEASE REQUEST TB 2 OPEN THIS SITE 4 FEW MONTHS TILL V REMAIN ACTIVE HERE,..WAT SAY GUYS,…I DONT WANT 2 LEAVE THIS SITE YAAR,…PLEASE TB,…

    • mitty on

      Anu has created a fb page for telly update friends. ..If u r intrested I ll ask her to send a link okay Wat u say

    • mitty on

      Renu mind blowing. …my maybelline gurl is ……. meri maybeline gurl hai….. dat was the best part of the show dear….ny way renu waiting for more. ….do well in ur studies. …god bless

    • Thena on

      my dear RENU…thank u so much tat u likd 2 read mine…means a lot my buddy…visit here at times…al the best 4 ur studies yaar…i lik ur idea of stayin in tis page dear…

  398. kfar on

    @All, Heyyya, it’s me again, I’m so sorry for the delayed update of the story. It had been a busy day and I have come straight here to my dear comment section.

    Yesterday night I had tried to write here, but due to the frantic typing my dear old friend gave it’s last breath. Yes, it’s my three year old mobile battery. So, I gave it a proper burial by putting it deep in one of the drawers of my cupboard and baught a new one.

    I’m talking idiot again.

    Well about the story, hmmm, it’s going to get just a little steamy. I wonder If you guys are ready for steamy. Well, I have told that, now please don’t ready further If u like such u kbow what.

    So, shutting up and updating from where I left off…here we go…

    Chapter-3( He and I)

    The hot shower was a balm to her very haggard and tired body. She turned down the knob of the shower and looked around for a towel. She put on the same bra and panties but she couldn’t wear the jeans and tank top. She needed something lighter.

    Well, she wouldn’t get any PJ’s now, would She? She looked around and saw that Arjun’s bathroom was bigger than her own room, It elongated horizontally with tiles and deep red walls. What’s with the colour combination?

    It had a large see through glass shower corner. She wondered what was the smaller circular holes were for on the glassed walled corner when she entered it. As she turned the knob up, the hot water sprayed from everywhere. It made her shriek and giggle continously.

    She bit her lower lip and saw Arjun’s T-shirt hanging by the shower wall. Well, better than this small towel. She smelled it. It was musky and sweaty and mix of spicy Arjun related cologne. Immediately, his s*xy smirk pictured in her mind.

    She took it off from the wall hanger and slid it down her body. The blue looked too colourful on her pale skin as she observed herself into the large clear mirror. It was too large, the tshirt on her small frame, just about reaching down to mid thigh. It repeatedly slipped down her left shoulder. Radhika tugged it up. Her heart shape face looked tired with light dark circles under the eyes. Her brown eyes looked huge on her small face. Her waist length, long half ringlets looked lifeless.

    She looked like a homless person. Her shoulders shrugged. Whatever. Hmm, She was wrong. Arjun’s tshirt reached till to the knees. She was almost covered full. God, how tall was he?

    Opening the bathroom door slowly she stuck out her head first. The room seemed empty. Thank god, Arjun left her alone.

    Radhika sighed in relief and opened it completely, she walked out smiling.

    Her legs slipped on the smooth floor and she was about to fall hard when her flailing hand caught an arm for support.

    Thank heavens!

    “Are you always this clumsy?” Jason’s voice reached her panicked thoughts.

    Of, course, who else but him before who she makes a fool of herself. First she was a blubbering fool and now she was a clumsy blind idiot.

    She stood straight and let go of his arm.

    “I’m so sorry I’m being a pest and a burden to you, I already said that I will walk but you wouldn’t listen, But I can call Viren. He will pick me…”

    Arjun wasn’t paying attention to her nervous talk, his body stood frozen and so were his eyes. He was looking down at her waist or something. What? Something wrong? She glanced down.

    His tshirt rid up on her thighs. She pulled it down immediately. The shoulder sleeve slid down and she tried to pull it up but unsuccessfully.

    Flustered she stared down on the didn’t look up. She peaked a glance up. He was naked up from the waist with grey track pants. He seemed to have showered too. The red scar mark over his ribs stood out from his tanned toned body. It looked a little healed, but just only.

    He cleared his throat and she looked up and her gaze settled on his head. His hair was damp as it stick to his forehead. If she could only slid the locks out of the view of his eyes.

    He moved away abruptly. Her eyes blinked at the empty space. God, she was mooning over his and he didn’t even look at her.

    Well, he did but looked away interested.

    “Soo, uh, where is Saina? Is she..um gone?” She asked hesitantly, trying to break the tensed atmosphere.

    He visibly stiffened at her question, his expression still blank. His back muscles bunched up. Crap. Did she make him angry?

    Why, oh why did she open her mouth and ask him something she shouldn’t. Glueing her lips with instant sticking gum would do a lot good to her safety and sanity. But, that would hurt, right? So, she should just keep her mouth and mind shut.

    “It’s really late.” He said placidly, avoiding her question.

    He didn’t turn around to the side, where she stood. He only told the unemotional words over his shoulder.

    Right. It hurt a teeny weeny bit. Didn’t expect a reply, but still.

    “I’ll take the recliner.” She mumbled to herself.

    “No, you aren’t.” He sighed, his voice strained, and he turned around fully.

    “I’m not?” She frowned.

    But where was she going to sleep? He seemed to be really very agitated about something. His hands were folded over his chest. She followed his broody gaze to the clsed door. Outside? He is sending her outside? Oh, how humiliating.

    “Okay, Fine.” She said in a low tone.

    She was thinking, he didn’t like her questionibg about his girlfriend, but she didn’t say a word against her. She only asked if Saina was here. God, she didn’t know he that sensitive bout her.. Well, it wasn’t her position or her business, was it.

    Walking uo to the door, she opened it and took a step outside.

    Damn. It was dark. The party packed up and there wasn’t any music or ear bleed blaring sound in high pitch from the speakers. She walked straight into a wall. Her forehead hit the cool smoothness pretty hard.
    She rubbed the spot wincing, she put her hand in a strech to feel where she was going. Where was she going by the way? She didn’t even know wherw this room was. Upstairs? Downstairs? Where? She tried to remember.

    If there were any stairs near by here, She didn’t think she will be surviving walking down on them.

    The lights of the corridor were switched on abruptly. Oh, thank god. Her eyes blinked due to the immense brightness of the light.

    Radhika looked down. She gulpled audibly, and the stairs started right on her next step.

    “What are you doing here, Radhika?” Arjun asked in the silence.

  399. srju on

    hello every 1 me srju .i hve been silent reader of this site since 2 months i lov ardhika so so much &now missing them so much u guyz r amzg @renu ilov r reviews @anu ur predictions @,kfar ur story so great
    i wis i cod folo u all in fb after tis site stops
    pls provde me fb adress someone

  400. kfar on

    Radhika looked sideways at him. She had no idea what she was doing? He proposed her to leave, didn’t he?

    Well, guess, what, she will sleep in this corridor. It looks fine. She just needed some sheets and pillows.

    “I’ll sleep here.” She said in decision.

    Arjun came closer to where she stood.

    “Where?” He asked a little annoyed.

    “Here.” She looked down at the floor in indication.

    He sighed and shook his head.

    “Are you this crazy always? or it is just your humour? because if it’s the latter, then I don’t think I have the energy to laugh right now.” He said wryly, smiled wryly, his eyes too dancing in wry amusement.

    Radhika narrowed her eyes and folded her arms under her chest.

    “Are you making fun of me?” She asked.

    “Wow.” He shook his head. “Was I that apparent?” He asked sarcastically, teasingly, and rubbed the back of his neck.

    Fine, she was a piece of an amusement to him. She bristled inside in exasperation.

    He smiled suddenly and put his hands on her waist. She was pulled closer to his body.

    “You look really very s*xy in my tshirt and I was praying for some self control, but I don’t think it’s working.” He expelled a deep breath. His breath was minty and warm as she took it in as her breath. “And you’re obviously uncomfortable with me still.” His voice took a several notch down husky.

    Please lose control. Please lose control, her mind kept chanting breathily.

    “So, will you stop being incredibly cute with your expressions. It hard not to kiss this frown line away on your forehead.” He took hold of her face in his hands.

    The kiss he planted on her forehead was sweet and hot at the same time.

    “Or these expressive lovely brown eyes.” He put a kiss both of her eyes.

    “Or the pink tinged dimpled cheeks.” His hot breath was making her crazy.

    “Or this independent lift of your chin which tells me to back off and this small nose which flares up in anger.” He laughed low in his throat. His lips lightly touched hers.

    “Or these red berry lips which invites me in.” He slid his hand behind her head. He fisted his paetly wet hair.

    Radhika closed her eyes. Her stomach grumbled loudly in protest at the same time.

    Oh, my god.

    She froze with eyes closed and with pouted lips. Arjun’s body stiffened, then it shook and vibrated. Radhika opened her eyes a little ashamed. Her face was all red. Arjun threw her head back and laughed hard.

    She bet, he is going to take back all those hot and heavy words he just said to her, except the one about her nose. Well, it’s not small nor it’s not long for that matter, Oh whatever, it was normal sized.

    Arjun wiped his eyes.

    “I was wrong about you earlier.” He smiled wide, his voice pleased.

    “You’re way adorable than incredibly cute and I find that really very hot.”

    His eyes burned into hers.

    He put his forefinger over her lower lip and popped it free from the nibbling on of her teeth.

    He kissed her hard then. She put her arms on his naked shoulders and drew nearer to his body.

    The kiss went from deep to very wet one. His hands slid down her hips and lifted her up. Her legs went around his wasit as she held on tight.

    Radhika’s stupid, traitorous stomach grumbled again. Arjun pushed away his head and put his forehead on hers.

    “Alright, you’re hungry.” He grinned, his voice low, affected, husky, breathless.

    Oh, god, he was really hot as she looked at his lips. Sliding her hands in his soft hair, she pulled his head back to hers again.

    “Oh, no, I’ll be unable to stop myself, Radhika.” He groaned and chuckled at her eagerness.

    She pouted. Who is telling him to stop.

    His eyes seemed to read hers.

    “I’m hungry too, so, let’s go eat something, before….” He drawled ad dropped her on the floor.

    “Before I take you to bed.” He declared in a husky whisper and stared straight into her eyes with intensely smouldering look.

    Radhika’s body turned to stone when he said the word ‘bed’.

    Arjun laughed shortly again seeing her wide eyed look.

    “Don’t worry your naievity status will be safe with me…..well, only tonight…there are other ways to….”

    Radhika’s ears burned and her cheeks heated super hot.
    “Oh, my god. Shut up.” She put her hands over her ears.

    Her brearhing got laboured and her body flustered up in agitation. He sure knows how to push her buttons. He held her tight and warm, his body strong and safe.

    She scowled at his handsome face and he looked amused as he guffawed loudly. His body vibrated with it…….

    ****

    Dinner break..

    How do u like it, guys? I typed hurriedly so ignore typos plsss

    • Thena on

      hey farha…really njoyd buddy…laughed out thr wen radz said”here”,showin the very floor tat she stood on tat time…luvd it wen she ws just a step above the stairs wen lights wer on…hats off 2 u dear…

    • Shub on

      Wonderful. You made my day. Loved the lines about her worry about nose comment in that critical juncture. Great writing. Thank god ur phone is back with u. Was refreshing this page throughout the day to read ur stories.

  401. Thena on

    @saji,anu,mandy,shub,deepa,mitty,dipika,bushra,raashi,aradhika,anju,annie,renu,all silent readers…thank u so much..i know tis isnt enough…actually i thot 2 giv it a try 2 make me feel better & am very much glad tat many of my dearies feel better raedin tis imaginary part…soooooo happy buddies…..

    let my last post b epi 119 n tis post b epi 120 my dearies…

    it ws mornin…radz woke up 2 find sam ws missin aside hr…thr ws a chocolate kept in the bed…radz took tat & she ws sure tat sam placed it…an uncontrollable rays of grin were seen on radz face as she ws reminiscin hr past moments wid sam …the moments of sharin chocolate in office,sharin single house 2gether,spent 1 whole n8 sleepless…evrthin flashed back in hr mind which left radz 2 cherish the moment…clutchin the bedsheet,radz laid hr head on hr lap wid hands foldin hr legs & a face wid grin 4m ear 2 ear…

    neil woke up 4m hs sleep abruptly as if a loud rumblin passed straight in2 hs head….it ws the knock of a door….he opened the door wid eyes half open 2 see sam standin out thr…he squeezd hs eyes 2 get a clear image of hr….sam said tat she came 2 meet hm as she felt lik eatin an apple,winkin at hm wid a broad smile…she clutchd hs shirt,slid hr fingers inside & pushed hm in2 the room….he movd 2 steps back & balancd hmself 2 stand firm…she went in2 the room & locked the door…she askd hm tat if he didn wish 2 taste orange & went on 2 kiss hm…”oh sammy!….arjunnnnnnn”,neil whispered in hurry….she tugged back in sudden, closed hr eyes wid hr hands….she saw neil in a gap btw hr forefinger & middlefinger wereas neil stood wid a ? on hs face…he ws facin 2 the corner of a bed were arjun slept the previous n8….he ws wonderin wr arjun wud ve gone….”ohhhh!!!!! pineapple has went 4 chasni 2 get a delicious drink”,they said in unison & gave themselves a tight hug….clutchin hs shirt,sam laid hr head in neils bosom…neil had a long gaze on hr,hs eyes filled wid tears of contentment….

    radz made hr out 4m the warmth of bedsheet….stretchd hr arms high wid a lil bent on hr body….in al of a sudden she felt a tight grasp on hr waist…really tight….she said ARJUN in a warnin tone withou turnin hr face..”yeah its arjun baby”,he uttered at hr neck…hr hands wer tryin hard 2 release hs grip bt in vain…he lifted hr up n spun hr around…hr hair strands hit hs eye wich made hm 2 fall on bed wid an impact….nw radz on arjun wid still hs hands not leavin hr waist…again she tried hard…but arjun wsnt redy 2 leave hr instead switchd hs side on bed….nw radz ws under arjun,al stuck in hs clutch wich ws never meant 2 giv an escape….thr ws a firm hold on radz wrists,leavin hr fist rotatin ….he went on 2 kiss hr….”arjun pls,arjun,arjun,no pls”,radz murmured wid eyes closed…..”oh!dadajiiiii”,said radz wid hr head up….sudden thr arjun yanked down the bed & slid hmslf under it….he cud see radz peepin under the bed wid a winnin smile on hr face…she greetd hm gm & stretchd hr hand still wid the same smile….arjun came out of hs own wid a grimmd face…she ran out of the room b4 he came out….

    arjun came out of the room ly 2 end up wid neil….neil stood thr wid hands folded,seein arjun 4m top 2 bottom….”wat r u dng here man?”,neil gestured wid hs eyes….

    thr is remainin part…ll continue later sweethearts…

    • Annie on

      Too good!! I am imagining what u hve written and hvn grt fun!! Thnk u deat.. and please write the nxt part soon… 🙂

    • Shub on

      Too good. It was like watching continueous episodes. Great imagination. I loved the apple, orange and the pineapple delicious juice witj chasni lines. Keep going.

    • Thena on

      hi ARADHIKA…but tat ws al b4 luv confession dear.. tat ws y i said “after luv confession” scenes yaar….now let us njoy romantic avatar of arjun buddy…

  405. raashi on

    @ Farha…..awesome…n I don’t mind d steamy scenes at all…bring it on!! Buy I don’t understand Arjun’s equation with Saina…..if he doesn’t want to go out with her anymore….why doesn’t he tell her that…..n also agar chaar saal se Arjun Radhika k bare me info rakha hua hai…then why did he make Saina his gf in d 1st place? He also doesn’t sit with her in classes…if he doesn’t feel for her..toh gf kyun banaya??

  409. Mandy on

    Hey guys !!

    Hi Farha nice story yaar what should I say u r so like indescribable I mean in a gud way !!!???????

    Hey Anu u were very imaginative!!?

    Hey renu u too were like mesmerisingly deeply into d pov wich is great !!?????

    Hey thena dat was a joke wannet to c ur cmnts on my joke coz I m 23yrs studin medical !!! ????
    Ur lov confession is very like I m watching it in d TV but unfortunately it’s ended but I m sure u guys will never end !!??❤️❤️??☺️

    Hey will miss all !!!???

  410. kfar on

    @raashi- Heyyy i went on the page n read ur comments. First of all big hug. I feel real good dat ur reading it much enthusism. Luv ur wuestions very much dearrrr. Hmm, radhika toothinks da same like u. why if he knw hr from before den why didnt make a move nwhy n on off gf? well itz arjun to clear da confusion. u’ll see his another shadeand also da answers. filhal toh radhika bohot confused hai aur woh ageh jake use maloom hoga….avhise bol diya toh mystery gone…haha hapoy happy happy dat we are discussibg my story buddy. 😀 means a lot.

    Thena- Yyar thanx abd i read da story parts….thats realllly nice deary 😀 liked it. Very cooool all characters are loved dadajis interruption everywhere wen ardhika are romancing haha.

    and heyyy tumhe bhi amusing laga i too felt da same while wrting. lv dat u observe small things 😀

    @Mitty- yaar thanx so much for commenting.@Savera- Oh my god, u’ll buy da book wen it comes out…oh so sweeeet of u 😀 thanx so much.

    @Clara- thanx for describing my wrting so well. means a lot 😀

    • Clara on

      Well..talent should be appreciated!! 🙂
      I think you should pursue a career in writing. You’re damn too good at writing skills.

  412. dipika on

    @renu u r great yarr beutifully u notice ech n evry part of our lovely couple ardhika…meri Maybellen girl hai….still in tht moment….n nice suggestion too dear…will rqst tb….
    @Thena u rocked it buddy…tooooo gooood….imaginig our romantic arjun…. wooooo loves is in the air….waiting for nxt epi dear..

  413. kfar on

    Riya- Hey so cute smileys…hw can u hv so many? my stupid only has limited.

    Dipika- bank job? amazing yaar main toh utni hard wrking bhi nahi hoon aur utni talented bhi nahi 😀 same age as u aur mba.

    and guys our comment section is sky rocketing wit comments….CONGRATULATIONS ALL FOR CROSSING 500@@@

    serial kyun band hua yaar 🙁 koi spwale yahan ake dekhetoh sahi

  414. Manisha on

    N guys nw sp wil beg on road for trps nxt mnth dey r gng 2 end evn tere sheher mein d last episode wil air on 31st oct so nw sp is in a mission 2 end al youth shows suck plus ur dwnfall hs alrdy strtd

  415. kfar on

    @srju- thanx yaar but fbacnt not der dear.

    Mandy n Samiha- hiw was ur day?s. Mandy, my day was hectic. it was filed with headache and my mobi battery dead made me verrry irkful all day :/

    ireena- hey hw ru nw? i tired to comment yestsrday but i couldnt.

    • Samiha on

      Thanks dear for remembering me. I saved the whole 20 mins just for you. I read the story. Now i have just 5 mins. Please update it fast, it’s at an interisting turn in the story. But everywhere Arjun is the MYSTERY…

  416. Riya on

    There was a Boy ‘n a Girl,They were best friends for years ‘n years,They could Talk for hours on the Phone ‘n text each other for days,

    When They were Together;
    Not a single Sad Thought could cross their Minds, everything was Great, But One Day;

    The Boy did not Answer any Call or Reply to any Text for a Day,

    The Girl was worried that something was Wrong..:(

    At night She couldn’t Sleep.., She was sitting in her Room Crying, ‘n It was then that She Realized how much He Means to Her..?

    The next Morning;
    She woke Up from a Phone call.., It was the Boy..:)

    Boy: Hey..,
    Girl: I’m so glad that you Called Me, What happened to you yesterday ??
    Boy: I was Busy
    [ The GIRL Understood that;
    Something was Wrong but could not Ask]
    [silence]

    Boy: You know..; We should Stop talking..!
    Girl: What??.., But Why ??
    Boy: I am Sorry, Bye..!
    [He Disconnected the call, ‘n She Felt as If Somebody
    had Slammed the door on Her face]

    Everything else Flashed in Her Mind,
    Tears :’(
    Cars running by Her..
    Roof of some building..’n Sunset..
    She couldn’t understand anything..
    She started Feeling Lonely, Dejected, ‘n broken..:’(
    That was the answer to everything! His words were pouncing on her..
    Her heart wanted to jump out!
    He was the One..! “Why..??”
    She Screamed at the Top of her Voice;

    Then She made up Her Mind to make a last Try to get Him Back..!
    [She called Him Up]

    Girl: hi…
    Boy: Why are you calling Me?
    Girl: I need to tell you Something..
    Boy: Go Ahead.
    Girl: I Just Wanted You to know one thing before we stopped talking!
    Boy: Tell me..!
    Girl: Are you All right?

    [She broke off..!

    She tried but may be he doesn’t really Care about Her,
    She Thought!
    She wasn’t His friend in the first Place…

    Tears were slowly running Worst :'(
    She left the House with a Note..!

    [5 hours later]

    Phone Rang in the Boy’s Room,
    It was the Girl’s Mum,
    The girl was lying in the hospital, Got hit by a Car, :’(

    The Boy rushed to the Hospital where She was.

    She Opened Her Eyes with the Boy’s name..,

    He took her Hand..
    Boy: Im so Sorry Its all my fault..! But;
    I promise when U get better I’ll make It up to You..:(

    Girl: I wont get Better..

    Boy: No..! No Don’t say that..:(

    Girl: just tell me one thing Why did you do it?

    Boy told her that He had a Heart problem ‘n he did not want her to be worried;
    ‘n there was a risk that he could have Died..!

    Boy: I did that because I…..I…..I Love you..

    Girl: I LOVE YOU TOO..‘n After That her heart Stopped Beating…:O
    She Died..! :’(

    The Boy died 10 mins later from a Heart Attack..:’(

    He could not live with the thought that;
    She died Because of Him.. :’(

  417. anu on

    The episode starts with radhika and neil leaving to presentation hall and sam starts her presentation. radhika sits worried and couldnt concentrate.. arjun noticies her and gets restless. sam completes the presentation & evry1 gives an applause. Radhika leaves the hall congratulating sam followed by arjun. sam asks neil i feel they are worried.. neil tells her about the mail. arjun asks radhika whats the matter, what is making u worried?

    radhika tells about the mail and arjun says its just a mail dont worry about that. neil and sam join them and says the same..they have a talk and NS teases arjun about his care for radhika. Meanwhile radhika’s phone again bangs with a beep. she feels tensed and reads the mail congratulating arjun for the award. arjun & nesam say that sender might be his fan.. radhika stares at them and they tease her saying the sender might be girl. they have a light moments of laugh and they enjoy with their coffee..

    In Hrishikesh, dadaji asks mala to know whereabouts of ankush and dilip comes saying i called him & he is fine there. Ankush leaves for abroad for further studies and scene shifts to ankush in london. He & his frens plan to visit an orphanage to offer fund, clothing and neccessary accessories as it is one of his fren’s birthday.. so, they leave for orphanage. Receptionist calls a lady on phone & tells her thar some people has come to meet Mam. The peon goes and calls Mam, and a lady turns back and it is none other than nandini. She comes and meets Ankush & his frens. ankush was shocked to and he couldnt utter a word.

    Ankush and his frens play with the kids and gifts them with the things what they bought.They have a happy day with the kids. Nandini from far observes ankush and moves forward to meet ankush. Ankush notices this and gets tensed.

    Precap : nandini moving forward to ankush to speak and ankush feels tensed.. both the duo couples chat at birdsong.

  418. kfar on

    @savera- weny back n read ur comment again, haha tumhara gum toh hamare dil me bas gaya,abhitoh isse samjha lenge filhaal dilse tumhe lagalenge aur mmz ko yaad karenge ( im a bekaar shayaribaaz,pls dont mind me)

  419. mitty on

    Really proud of u guys….u guys r really talented. ..keep going. …keep going keep going keep going. ….

  423. abi on

    hello guys…….i m really happpy nd proud abt u an me……becoz i goy u ppl as frnds…..how wonderfull imagination,,,……..seriously…….

    now i feel really better becoz of ANU nd THENA,,,…..u guys rocking yaa….pls continue ur immagination pls….pls….pls……..pls……pls……..its a medicine for my broken heart…….now i really feel gud….pls…..update ur(ANU nd THENA) imaginary story….I M WAITING FOR THIS nd wll waiting for this…….if the page not active…means,,,then come to ourr FB page to update ur story fnds,,,,,,,by the way,,…how r u my sweeties MITTY,HAPPY.AFROZ,NATASHA,RENU,NAKSHATRA,DEVGA,IREENA,KFAR,RAASHI, AND VERY ONE………….:-))))))))))))))))))))))After read this comments only i smiled……

  425. anu on

    The episode starts with radhika and neil leaving to presentation hall and sam starts her presentation. radhika sits worried and couldnt concentrate.. arjun noticies her and gets restless. sam completes the presentation & evry1 gives an applause. Radhika leaves the hall congratulating sam followed by arjun. sam asks neil i feel they are worried.. neil tells her about the mail. arjun asks radhika whats the matter, what is making u worried?

    radhika tells about the mail and arjun says its just a mail dont worry about that. neil and sam join them and says the same..they have a talk and NS teases arjun about his care for radhika. Meanwhile radhika’s phone again bangs with a beep. she feels tensed and reads the mail congratulating arjun for the award. arjun & nesam say that sender might be his fan.. radhika stares at them and they tease her saying the sender might be girl. they have a light moments of laugh and they enjoy with their coffee..

    In Hrishikesh, dadaji asks mala to know whereabouts of ankush and dilip comes saying i called him & he is fine there. Ankush leaves for abroad for further studies and scene shifts to ankush in london. He & his frens plan to visit an orphanage to offer fund, clothing and neccessary accessories as it is one of his fren’s birthday.. so, they leave for orphanage. Receptionist calls a lady on phone & tells her thar some people has come to meet Mam. The peon goes and calls Mam, and a lady turns back and it is none other than nandini. She comes and meets Ankush & his frens. ankush was shocked to and he couldnt utter a word.

    Ankush and his frens play with the kids and gifts them with the things what they bought.They have a happy day with the kids. Nandini from far observes ankush and moves forward to meet ankush. Ankush notices this and gets tensed.

    Precap : nandini moving forward to ankush to speak and ankush feels tensed.. both the duo couples chat at birdsong.

    guys it was just my imagination of DYM2.. 🙂 🙂 🙂 .. cheer up guys…

  429. renu on

    hiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii friends,…

    M really impressed by all ur comments yaar,…such a talented fan ship of this amazing serial,…no words 2 describe all urs participation yaar,…

    Writing a Story -Kfar,…
    Writing an imaginary prediction – Anu
    Writing an imaginary episode – theena
    Writing n posting poems n simile – Riya
    Writing appreciation n encouraging all our crew – My all friends here including me,…..

    I love you all & i Decided 2 watch old epi just 2 write sth deeply about our magic couple which we have missed while the episode aired,..n i too ll try 2 join u all in this witty ship sooner with my pov hoping that i may entertain u all by remembering such wonderful scenes here,…

    Thank u guys 4 all ur love & i dont want this site 2 b closed n please tellybytes open a fan page here in this site like Desitvbox.com,…

  431. kfar on

    Yeah, so readers updating since where I left off…

    (Still in the same chappy guys i;e 3- He and I)

    “Hell, I haven’t laughed this hard since ages.” Arjun said, while pulling in deep breaths.

    “Awesome.” She muttered annoyed.

    He took her hand in his and started to walk.

    “Come on now, don’t be annoyed.” He said in a conciliatory tone.

    “Where are we going?” She frowned at his back.

    “We have to eat something when we get hungry, right, So, towards the kitchen.” His tone mockingly sweet.

    Radhika made a face on his back. He is always making fun of her.

    They walked hand in hand past a few corridors. Then they reached a large space. The kitchen was spectacular. It had all the modern equipments an amatuer cook would die to have and work comfortably in.

    Arjun let go of herwalked and went behind the kitchen counter. It had a attached oven, steamer, boiler, cabinets for spices. cabinets for pots abd pans. A small hand sized potted fresh green herbs.The pans werehung from the ceiled kitchen. It was indeed spectualar. And it also has a dishwasher. Amazing.

    Radhika sat on counter chair. Arjun was in the kitchen cooking up them a meal. The counter seperated them.

    Radhika put her hand under her chin over the silver gleaming counter, she observed him in fascination and aldo bewilderment. Arjun seemed to be veru laid back and happy. He wasn’t like the brooding guy from college. He wasn’t anything like she him. A rich stuck up guy. But, he wasn’t. He was a nice guy , that she knew from deep within. He wasn’t a jerk. Not exactly., but he was irritating and quite smug with his ‘I know better than you’ attitude.

    He was still in his track pants. It hung low over his hips. Minus the shirt. She didn’t mind though. He was realky very toned and also a little tanned. Too handsome for his own good.

    He opened a cabinet and took out some bread. He took out a knife from the wooden board from beside his right hand. He cut the bread into diagonal slices.

    “What are making?” She asked him.

    He was baffling her with his smoothness here. He seemed like he had done it a million times. The clean smooth slicing of bread. He thinly sliced the dill pickles and cooked turkey.

    He spread some yellow mustard on the bread cuts. Then layered turkey, swiss cheese, dill pickle, and he put it all in the sandwich presser.

    “My own take on the traditional Medianoche, meaning midnight. Hence, becomes the best meal to have now. A Cuban sandwich, also famously known as.” He smiled at her, and cleaned the counter with a small cloth. He put all the ingredients back in the cabinets.

    It started to snell very tasty. He took out the sabdwiches and put them on the hot burner counrer of the other side.

    The sandwich cooked and sizzled, Arjun slid out the done pieces on a round white plate.

    The cheese seemed to have melted and the aroma of the turkey and dill slices were making her mouth water.

    Arjun came around the counter and sat on the counter chair beside to hers.

    “Are you going to gawk at the plate forever?” He asked her dryly.

    Radhika ignored that remark.

    “You can cook.” She asked, still staring at the plate.

    “And you can’t.” He countered, and picked up a sandwich.

  434. renu on

    friends,…i ll not type long comments yaar,…

    Since i bcame addicted 2 this show,…

    wenever i remembered sth about ardhika,..i ll come online 2 share that with u all as u all know i love sharing with my friends n my loved ones,…so,please bear with my one liners too,….

  435. kfar on

    (crap, forgive the typos)

    Radhika turned into the chair and saw him taking a huge bite. He closed his eyes and shook his head in pleasure.

    “Amazing.” He said. His jaw working to chew on it already.

    She gulped and hurriedly picked up a sandwich too. Taking a huge bite she groaned in appreciation.

    “It’s soo good.” She gobbled half of it already.

    It was so tasty and delicious. That bread was melt in the mouth. She loved the cheese and turkey.

    He grinned at her compliment.

    “How do you know I can’t cook?” She asked through the bites.

    “The sandwich is just putting together the ingredients and that’s it. There are limited skills invovled like cutting, boiling and braising or baking. Real cooking is different than that, baby.” He smiled and ate the rest of his sandwich. “With that, I conclude, you can’t dice and cut a thing or boil egg for that matter.” He smirked, his voice smug.

    Radhika glared at him with her mouth full.

    His lips twisted more up in the corners. She knew a good Cuban sandwich to make needs a good hand, it wouldn’t that tasty if it’s just putting together ingredients and she also got to know, he wasn’t that well with praise. He had a talent. He doesn’t like to be noticed. Hmm, strange.

    She bristled and fumed too at his comment on her not so great cooking skills, but her bristling thoughts evaporated when he said the word ‘baby’ so intimately. So, she just mock glared.
    Arjun pushed his four legged wooden chair closer to hers.

    She gupled down a glass of water and frowned at him. What was he doing?

    He took the empty glass of water out of her hand and put that on the counter. He leaned closer and pinched both of her cheeks between his forefingers and thumbs.

    “Cute.” He said endearingly.

    Radhika’s face burned.

    “Stop it with the cute thing, I’m not a kid to be cute.” She thought annoyed.

    Altleast call her pretty. litle kids are cute, puppies cute not twenty something girls.

    “Oh, you’re far away from being a kid. I wouldn’t have such thoughts, like things I could do to you right now if you were one, trust me.” He glanced down at her body.

    His gaze ran heated all over her from tip toes to her face.

    Radhika felt a deep stab of pleasure slid across like warm honey over the areas he was touching her with his eyes.

    He put his large tanned hand over her pale thigh. Spreading his palm open, he moved his fingers over her skin ina gentle caress.

    It burned hot trial of liquid fire all over her body. The sound of her hitched up breath came out loud in the silence that enveloped them. His breathing grew heavy. His hands slid up and she stopped breathing altogether.

    Arjun looked up into her eyes. The brown grew more dark in colour as he licked his lower lip. In matters of moments, she was in his lap kissing him wildly.

    He kissed her back with equal fervor. His naked chest was like hot fever on her skin. He groaned when she opened her mouth. The tip of his tongue touched hers and she whimpered in desire for him.

    His fingers fisted up into her hair and hers were clutched in his short soft locks.

  436. kfar on

    He put his hands under her thighs and stood up. She tightened her legs around his waist. He walked out of the kitchen. All the while kissing wildly.

    He pushed open his bedroom door and pushed her body against it.

    He abruptly pushed away.

    “Whao, Radhika, baby, stop…” He gasped, and put his forehead on hers.

    He gentled his touch and only trailed his breath into her hair.

    He chuckled lightly looking at her dazed expression, his breathing started to turn normal.

    “I have to take you on a date before we do it.” He mumbled over her lips in a low tone.

    “What?” She breathed, still in a passionate haze.

    He kissed the corners of her lips.

    “I’m. going. to. take. you. on. a. date.” He said each word with a deep kiss and nip of his teeth on her already swollen lips.

    “A date?” Her voicd turned way down husky.

    It wasn’t her voice at all. It was all smoky and well, sounded much like she was in the throes of passion.

    Why was he talking about dates right now.

    He moved his head back a little.

    “Yeah, a date. Like going out and having a nice conversation over dinner.” He explained flatly.

    Oh, god she knew what a date is, she really did want to wipe out that smirk from his lips.

    “God, what do you do with that library boy of yours over on the weekends then?” He asked after a second.

    Library boy who?

    Oh, right, Dhruv, he was the same scholorship student as her, he too worked in the library.

    Wait a second, how in the god’s name did he know about Dhruv? What the heck is happening here? He observed everything about her too, just like she did, but how she miss him watching her?

    Was he hesistant too because of the social barrier that they had between them?

    She didn’t ask him that but put that question back for enquring later.

    “Dhruv, he is really sweet and helps me with the financial accounting subject. I’m rather poor in it.” She pursed her lips in annoyance.

    Arjun still held her up and she was still attached to the door, her back to it.

    “You scored 39 marks out of 80 in the last surprise test. You’re not poor in it, you’re worse.” He drawled.

    Huh?

    “How do you know about my score.” She asked him surprised.

    “I keep track on my not so talented opponents. Enough of that. This Dhruv, guy, he doesn’t try anything?” He asked, and cocked up his left eye brow suggestively.

    But, Radhika didn’t know what he was suggesting.

    “Try what?” She asked confused.

    “Good, lord, woman.” He shook his head in exasperation and continued.

    “You’re one clueless lady, babe. He doesn’t try anythin on you. Never touched you or kissed you I gather. Though, if he

  438. kfar on

    though if he tried now, I would kill him with my bare hands, but let’s not stray from the topic.” He shook his head and continued.

    “He is sweet, friendly and kind but he is not your boyfriend, what is he then, gay?” He laughed.

    Radhika’s temper flared. Why did she kiss him again? She should have thrown her slippers at his over inflated egoistic head when he touched her.

    “Dhruv is not gay.” She said hotly.

    “Yeah. right and how do you know that?” He abandoned his mock laugther and asked, sliding his hand into her hair.

    She blinked. Oh, yeah, how does she know that?

    “Well, he isn’t. I just know.” She shrugged.

    Does she? Hmm, Dhruv always smiled and looked at the girls who come to the library. Heck it, screw Arjun for messing with her head.

    “Yeah and darling..” He sighed. “I’m stuck here forever to educate you on the matters of the world your ever so small a brain can so far take.” He said disappointedly.

    Oh

  439. kfar on

    Oh how dare he.

    Radhika punched hid shoulder hard. He did not just call her brain small. He laughed and grunted in pain when she punched again. This time with much force. He deserves a fine beating for being a jerk.

    He suddenly caught her failing arms and pushed her hands up on the wall and held them tight.

    His eyes flashed and his voice burred.

    “If don’t stop hitting i’m gonna take you right here. You’re abosl*tely not ready for that.” He said this very seriously, huskily.

    “So, is it only to sleep in bed or…” He warned her looking at her lips.

    He seemed to be on the edge of control. Stress more on the edge. Yikes

  440. Riya on

    ??????????
    ??
    RADHIKA
    ???Life without love is meaningless. Love was born even before mankind was born and it still exists in all kinds of organism, including humans. Though love is expressed in various forms and between different relationships, eternal love is accomplished between a man and a woman. Love is one trait that never diminishes as long as you give it to others and keeps on growing. ??
    MANMARZIYAN
    MANMARZIYAN
    MANMARZIYAN
    MANMARZIYAN
    MANMARZIYAN
    MANMARZIYAN
    MANMARZIYAN
    ⛪⛪⛪⛪ pray to God for manmarziyan please come back………?

  441. kfar on

    No, option one was better.

    Arjun grinned abruptly and nodded his head in understanding.

    They were both locked in an embrace. Neither of them moving away. She combed his hair with her fingers feeling the soft texture of his black gleaming locks.
    He was gently rubbing his hand on her back soothingly. She felt sleepy.

    “Can we just sleep?” She asked tiredly, yawning a little.

    He laughed amused.
    “Yeah, we can, but for that you should let go of me. You’re getting heavier by the minute.” He replied smugly.

    And he was back to his annoying self.

    “I’m not fat.” She dropped down on the floor.

    “Oh, no, you’re too thin.” He still has his arms around her.

    She moved away, but not he didn’t let go. She rolled her eyes at him.

    “I will take the recliner.” She said.

    He stared down at her and narrowed his eyes.

    “Don’t be ridiculous. You and I are going to sleep on the bed.”

    “No!” She protested in high pitch.

    She didn’t know what will happen if she got into bed with him, probably more than what happened just now. She didn’t trust her traitorous body with him around so close.

    He took her face in his hands and looked into her eyes.

    “What happened before will not happen again.” He said intently and she blinked at that, he half smiled and kissed her lips softly, and continued.. “Well, not anytime soon but I promise not to touch you in that way again, alright?”

    She sighed ahd hugges him. He rubbed her back.

    “Alright.” She agreed.

  442. Riya on

    1-Renu
    2-Kfar
    3-Anu
    4-Theena
    5- all of the gays
    Really your imagination skill was amazing
    All are just fabulous……
    I like your story so much, please keep it dr………

  443. Riya on

    Khwaaishon Pe Likhi
    Dil Ki Yeh Arziyaan
    Kaisi Yeh Manmarziyan
    Daastaan Ek Nayi
    Khwaabon Pe Saji
    Bekaid Manmarziyaan

    Aaaaa…..

    Daastaan..Ek Nayi…………

    Nafraton Mein Mili
    Tu Muhje Iss Tarah
    Dil Yeh Sambhal Na Sakha
    Teri Baaton Mein Hai
    Ajab Sa Nasha
    Badli Yeh Manmarziyan

    Daastaan..Ek Nayi………..
    Friends good morning with the super heart touching track……..

    ??????
    MANMARZIYAN
    ??????
    Kings in telly history. …………….

    • Ireena on

      despite knowing its funny,i m asking.plz tell me the meaning of these words “dastaan,saji,badli”. (sorry for this stupid question )

  444. kfar on

    They both slid under the covers. Ah, finally. She yawned loudly and streched her tired body on the soft bed. Her stomach didn’t hurt anymore but she will be having one mighty bruise in the morning.

    Arjun chuckled.

    “Come here sleepy head, you’re way too far.” He said pulled her into his side.

    She giggled.

    “Arjun, you promised.” She protested mildly.

    “What? I cannot touch you now?” He asked in mock surprise.

    “Yes.” She said and put her head on his chest anyway. Snuggling closer she put her hand on his waist.

    He put his arm on her shoulder and brought her more closer to his body.

    “Correction, I said I wouldn’t touch like that. Pay attention, Sweety.” He scolded her teasingly.

    She rolled her eyes.

    “Yes, sir, Mr. Mehra.” She obeyed sarcastically, sachharine sweetly.

    He was smiling now she knew. His chin rested on her head and he slid his fingers in her hair massaging her scalp soothingly.

    He was smiling now she knew. She hummed in pleasure as he increased the pressure of his fingers.

    “If that was your docile and subservient tone, I wonder how you sound in bed. At my mercy.”

    Her eyes flew open.

    “Shut up, you perv.” She said irritated.

    He was impossible.

    His laughter vibrated into her body.

    “I think you had enough for tonight. Sleep now, baby.” He kissed her head and pulled the covers higher over us.

    She closed her eyes.

    She heard his breathing even out aftwr ten long minutes of silence.

    “Arjun?”

    “Hmm?” He mumbled sleepily.

    “Don’t be so reckless and get into fights, please, because…” She paused.

    He didn’t make a sound. He fell asleep.His chest rose and fell peacefully with the steady beat of his heart.

    But she completed the sentence anyway.

    “Because, I don’t want to lose you, now that I got you.” She whipered with feeling. Tears filled up her eyes but she closed them and fell asleep in the arms of the man she HAS FALLEN IN LOVE WITH TONIGHT…….

    *******

    dats it fr tdy…im wiped to the extreme. Wil tone down the romance completely if u guys dont like it. reallg guys I will just tel me to.

    hmmm, Quick question: wich television actors do u see while readin about Ruby, Viren, Arav, Monty n Rohan?!?
    had asked dis questn but nobody answered it…plssssssss answer 😀

    (Quick fact- do u guys know that der is place in spain(i donno name) wer r no mobile networks n n even radio signal catch. people had seen flying fireballs in da air n voices are heard time n again…da place is marooned..isnt dat spooky n scary…just go in google n search for 10 most spooky places on earth-u’ll be surprised)

    Gdnite and plsss tel how its it, the story 😀

    • Shub on

      Kfar loved it. I am ok with the tone. It was very racy. Thanks for taking time n posting it . hv you written any where else. Want to read Ur stuff more.

    • Samiha on

      As Ruby- A girl of my own imagination(I have a stock full of characters in my imagination)
      As Viren- Sahil Mehta
      As Aarav- Aarav but a little younger from Iss pyar ko….(can’t remember his real name now)
      But who are Monty and Rohan?
      Thanks for the spooky info, will try…

    • kfar on

      Hey thanc i just sent searched who Sahil Mehta is i didnt know he was yuvraj of suhani…
      Monty n Rohan are the giys Neil fought with..thanx for reading it dear

    • Abbz on

      Kfar!!!! u r amazzzziiiiiiinnnnnn …. u hav no idea how I wait 4 ur stories …. luuuuvvvv mmz ….. vth all of my heart .

  445. dipika on

    @Renu waiting for ur pov dear….n take ur time..
    @ anu ur imagination is suberb dear feels like m watching mmz…
    @ friends i too want to watch mmz frm starting pls help guys.
    .i couldn’t found it on any site…main jab b desitvbox,desitashan.com opn karati hu tab video unable msg dikhate hai…n hotstar app pe its nt playing properly yarrrr…plz tell me wht to do…..

  450. Natasha on

    @Riya are u protesting for ssl? When coming to this page I saw ur comment on that page and I curiously entered to that page and saw that u r protesting that show .

  451. Thena on

    Hi al my deariesss…….

    EPISODE 121:

    arjun rushed out of the room ly 2 end up wid neil….neil stood thr out wid hands folded…placed a vacant luk on arjun 4m top 2 bottom…”wat r u dng here man”,neil gestured wid hs eyes(ufffff….hs eyes speak a lot…u guys know it very well)….arjun askd neil wat ws he dng thr…hs tone ws real clumsy….hs legs were al busy as if ws in a hurry 2 catch train….neil mockd that he got scary on missin hs dude since mornin as he thot sum1 has abducted hm & so came straight thr 2 chasnis room…neil didn take off hs stare 4m arjun…still wid foldin hands.he thrw a stern luk stright in2 arjuns eyes demandin a reply 4m hm….”meh yaha..meh..meh…”,oh shit,arjun has lost hs vocabulary skills in a moment…he ws lukin evrywer except neil….analysin evry nook & corner of the room as if he ws gonna buy tat house….hs r8 hand rubbin hs neck back & left on hs waist….neil dissolvd in2 a bashin laughtr…..hs hands clappin & hs body bent 2wards the floor…..arjuns face turned pale,he ws al perplxd….”oh come on man…i kew it wel tat the audacious prince made a secret exit 4 hs princess”,neil gave a soft punch on arjuns stomach wid hs r8 arm wrappin around arjuns neck….neil tuk arjun away 4m thr….arjun threw a gaze at back bt cud ly c an empty zone thr…

    Dadaji ws sittin in sofa,callin radz 4 tea..,radz came thr al fresh as she has takn shower just b4…. thr ws a broad smile on hr face…water droplets wer clingin 2 the end of hr hair strands…she ws dashin in tat red saree as if a newly blossomd rose came straigt thr…she xtended the tea cup 2 dadaji wid the same grin still pastd 2 hr….bt it soon faded away wen dadaji teasd hr on the secret visit of arjun….she struggld 2 hold words…..”woa dadaji…woa… ap…woa…”,radz cud ly manage 2 utter these words….hr mind ws obsessed wid ‘hw cum dadaji came 2 know tis’….she glancd at hm & surprisd at hs gaze fell sumwhr at oppo…thr ws a naughty smirk on hs face….hr eyes widend 2 c sam sittin thr in a chair oppo & understood the moment….with a hand on hr waist,hr neck glidin 2 side,she threw a shrinkin stare on sam…sam turned hr face 2 othr side & made hr busy in clearin hr hair locks…sam passd hr quick glances on radz at times….gulped hr throat & 2 hr relief neil came thr….sam cud atleast divert radz thru neil…yaeh she did as neil askd radz 2 brin hs buk tat he kept it 4gotten in hs room,winkin cute at sam….

    the room ws open….nipping hr lowr lip,radz gav a sneak peek in2 the room as if she ws searchin 4 a hidden thief….contended she ws & made a quik entry…ah! 2 hr relief the buk ws just on the bed…she stretchd hr hand 2 take it & hr heart stoppd its beat wen she heard the sound of door being lockd at hr back….b4 she cud make a ful turn, she ws pushd hard on bed….oh! she cud feel the whole weight of arjun on hr….he put hs nose on hr neck & smelld hr deep….the aroma ws as sweet as rose petal….he ws al fresh wid ly a towel wrappin hs lower body as he too has taken the shower just b4….tis tim she succeeded in pushin hm away,uttered it strong,”ARRRRRRRJUN”….omg arjun ended in hittin hard wid the door….he stood still,hs head hung down….nw came our concerned baby…went fast 2 hm,tryin 2 attend hm…God! a tight clutch on hr waist as if hr bones wer breakin….oh! she ws deceivd by arjun….she tried hr hard 2 escape hs grip…he ws lik a wounded tiger as she ridiculed hm in the vry morning….so no way 4 release 4m hs wild grasp….he movd forward wid the same grip…nw hr right hand on hs shoulder,left around hs waist….both immersd in2 each othrs eyes….killin silence thr….

    KWAHISHEIN PE LIKHI DIL KI YE ARZIAN
    KAISI YEH MANMARZIAN……….

    arjun pinned radz 2 the wall…locked hr in2 hm…hs gaze spread al over hr face….ten it went down 2 hr neck…the water droplets stimulated al hs senses as they lukd lik a mornin dew drops scattered over a rose…he smote a droplet lik hittin the carrom striker….radz closed hr eyes & turned al red…he kissed othr droplet leavin radz 2 press hs bare shoulder hard….he held hr more tight…hr legs lifted up…..

    tak tak tak…a knock on door….

    end of episode 121…ll continue the upcomin episodes dearies…..@all…no words 4 ur loving responses…glad tat i can entertain u all…gud noon buddies..ll come soon..

  452. Savera on

    A big Hiiiiiiiiii to all my Manmarziyan friends.
    See the magic of manmarziyan, we are creating our Manmarziyan with so much love.
    last 2 days I didnt feel like watching tv. Only i am connected to this with all of you, n enjoying our chat.
    @Thena post the next epi soon… good going yaar , u have maintained the grace which Manmarziyan had.
    @Anu nice restart of the story , keep writing. I m liking it.
    @Kfar I think it should have soothing effect as well as sensuousness. So many characters r going in to my mind.
    @Riya good story ,it touched me.
    I am watching old epis on hotstar n singing…

    Iss kadar pyar hai tumse ai humsafar…….
    ab to jeete hain hum bus tumhe dekhkar…..

    thank you guys for taking Manmaziyan further.

  453. Deepa on

    Thena wat a romantic sequence…..wow wow its so amazing to c arjun as romantic guy……waiting for ur newxt epi…..update it soon yaar

  456. Ireena on

    @thena.I m really loving ur story.but dear this manmarzian will end too within 10 days.???
    *waana watch some sameil moments,and make some mysterious and naughty scenes.OH!!I FORGOT TO TELL PLZ MAKE THE ENTRY OF PRIYA (ARJUN SIS)WHICH WE WANTED TO WATCH ON MANMARZIAN.
    *FOR MANYA,MAKE A NEW MALE LEAD*
    I think I m demanding a lot.sorry,but it’s my wish.another thing, can u post the story within 11.00.then we will feel like the real story.
    AWESOME STORY ????

  457. Ireena on

    [email protected] missed one of ur story parts.anyway, have u kept the story?and have u selected for Neil,rad and arjun characte?I think Ahab Sharma won’t look good for it as its the story of college students.I think some young will suit here.
    may be I m thinking over

  459. Abbz on

    Kfar u r amaaaazzzzin !!! U hav no idea how much I wait 4 ur stories …….. dis feels like hom.ver people r as crazy as I am but mmz …………

  461. Meena on

    Oh my God,how much everyone is missing the show!!!!!! Imagine me wanting to read about it,4days after the show has come to an end!!This goes to show,that the TRP doesn’t matter,but what an impact the show(especially the actors )has made on the viewers,and how they are crazy about the show!!!!!!!that is worth a million that Starplus would have made!!!!!Am I not right?

  463. Thena on

    @FARHA…hey dearrrrrrrr….thank u so much 4 luvin my part lik dadaji interruptions…warm hug buddy…
    about ur story u rockd it as usual dear…luvd it wen arjun said,”u r nt poor in it, u r worse”…oh LLH my dear…and i ve no issues wid ur storyline…keep gng my dear buddy….
    4 viren, upen patel strikes my mind…he is taller than aham tho
    4 ruby i can imagin a girl…she has acted in ad(but don know which 1)..its the ad 4 a drink..tel u later buddy…
    @mitty…thank u so much buddy…s am gng..hope u lik my future updates too dear

    @annie…hearty thanks dear..means a lot tat u can imagin & hav fun..loads of luv buddy

    @nisha….oh…u made me excited tat u feel mmz is still gng on…great words dear..

    @shub…being a silent readr al these days…nw u came here 2 appreciate evry1…means a lot dear…thank u so much tat u likd al those fruit thins buddy…

    @aradhika…hey bud..thank u so much 4 readin mine & sharin ur opinion dear..

    @saji…2dy i ve posted it dear..read it & giv ur feedback..hope u njoy it bud

    @deepa…thank 4 ur gr8 words….glad 2 c ur eagerness dear..

    @RAASHI…oh my dear friend…thank u 4 likin evry part…4 u i ve gvn sum light moments ofneil-arjun…more ll cum buddy…ask ur wish..i don mind sweety…

    @savera…hey thanks 4 luvin it..s am continuin bud..hope u lik it…keep givin ur feed back dear

    @MANDY…heyaaa u made fun on me…my God i believd u…its k yaar…u know wat? nw we r of same age buddy…no kiddy hehehe & thanks a lot tat u luv mine…loads of luv

    @deepika…oh u made me happy…thank u 4 welcumin romantic arjun dear

    @riya….thanks a lot tat u likd mine dear….ur story ws vry touchin…got emotional bud..

    @anu…ur story seems interestin dear…lik 2 c anothr version of mmz here…keep gng buddy

    @abi…glad tat u can cum out of ur mess readin tis dear…tat ws my motive & m happy 4 tis buddy

    @anaya…thank u so much tat u feel am fillin the gap dear..loads of luv bud..

    @RENU…oooh u r my 1st friend here….cant b mor xcited than tat u lik mine…m a big fan of ur pov…b it either a single line r bunch of paragrapha u can rock it…no objection wid ur 1liners buddy…giv urs here…v r waitin dear

    @SAMIHA…wr r u buddy…need ur feedback on my story continuation…hehehe… pls come dear…

    @ireena…oh luv u loads…ll definitely try 2 fulfil ur wish yaar…n am a girl deary hehehe

    @abbz…oh God! thank u so much 4 luvin it buddy

  464. kfar on

    @All- Hey guys fast fowarding the story a little. I’m gonna write about what happend in two days of ardhika but that woould come in flashes,,,like if arjun broke up with gf or not n stuff..

    So,now our friends all are gathered for some friends time..

    Chapter-4 ( Movie Night)

    Ruby walked hurriedly towards Arav’s place. This was the third time they had cancelled movie night, and this time they’re not going to avoid each other anymore.

    After that stupud kiss with Neil, she just ran away pushing him off her and had not talked to anyone. She had texted Arav that night about her not making it. But, she was surprised that it was cancelled because Radhika couldn’t make it.

    Ruby felt uneasy that, she thought that Radhika was still hurt by her and Neil’s comment on her personal life.

    When she was about to knock the door she saw that, Radhika too was hurrying up the stairs.

    She was relieved so her smile up at her, Rads was wearing as usual, pink tank top, blue denim jeans and a blue checkered shirt on the top. She had mental bangles, a dozen in one had and mental round loops as ear rings. Hmm there she had changed her style, and her eyes and smile were vibrant. Intresting. Something has changed about her. Two days she stayed she cooped up in hostel, also avoiding to college, she had missed Radhika transforming into a happy swan.

    Radhika met her up at the top and hugged her tight.

    “Hey, girl, whoa, somebody is little miss sunshine tonight.” Ruby said laughing a little, and hugged her tight.

    “Oh, Ruby, I missed you, babe. You did not come to the opening day of intercollege fest, why? You know I have to tell you something really important….”

    Just as Ruby thought, Rads was going to say something, Neil bounded up the stairs and pushed apart and burst open the door. Both her and Radhika fell to the sides on the porch.

    Great, she thought, that’s good opening to an awkward evening.

    “Ouch! Neil you idiot! Can’t you see we were standing there.” Radhika rubbed her shoulder and got up the floor.

    Neil who, very nonchalantly munching on snickers while he obviously was out excersing and running in black track pants and tshirt just blinked at both her and Ruby unaffectively from inside the hall.

    “What? you two were there. Sorry, if two were so unnoticable. Work on those asses chicas.” He said through muches.

    Radhika mouth hung open, her cheeks flamed as looked at her own back in doubt. Had she gained weight.

    “Ugh! Don’t let the fool get to you, rads. He is a piece of work himself.” Ruby snickered from beside her.

    Radhika glanced at Ruby and nodded her head in agreement.

    Yes, he was a piece of work.

    Then she blazed, she march into the lrge hallway with Ruby at her heels.

    She took the fastrack back she had hung to herright shoulder. She beat the black hand bag repeatedly over his head.

    “You did just call us fat, idiot Neil. Take the words back!” She glared at him.

    Neil ran, and tried to avoid Radhika’s crazy hits with the bag. Jeez! what did she put in there? Rocks?

    “Stupid crazy lady on the loose, Arav call the mental institution.” Neil ducked and ran towards the kitchen.

    Radhika stopped dead. Arav and Sam were already at the dinner table. It was spready lavish with food. There burgers, sliders, sandwiches, pizzas, Biryani, nan, breads……holy moly, Arav had went out of the way to make it a memorable night. It was going to mouth watering.

    “Oh, my god, Arav, thanks so much for this.” The anger of before drained out of hwr body as she went on hugged their best friend.

    Arav got up from the chaiir and recieved her hug, holding her tight.

    He laughed into her hair.

    “We have avoided the movie night, forever. I wanted to do something more.” He said pleased.

    Arav was wearing grey denims and white buttoned shirt over a tshirt. He was very laid back now, with his hair all dishevelled. His dimple came out relaxed, other he was always straining himself with college work. He was studying hard to get an idea about the naunces of business. Lot of pressure, the guy has not like Neil. God, sometimes he was so irresponsible.

    Sam came around and hugged both Ruby and her.

    “How was day guys? Mine was hectic. I hate managerial economics. Four hours of torture.” She mumbled tiredly and slid on the chair opposite to Neil’s.

    She looked disgustedly, as Neil, gobble down all the cheese sandwiches from the plate.

    “Are you going to leave anything.” She asked him scowling.

    Radhika and Ruby sat down too. Ruby snorted and Radhika shook her head, Arav only smiled.

    Neil grabbed a glass of chilled orange juice with the other hand.

    “Sure, you want some.” He grabbed a sandwich, mussed it up in his hand, mayo falling out of his hand, he offered it to Sam.

    Sam’s nostrils flared.

    “Ewwe, you’re disgusting.” She shook her head and pushed his hand away.

    “Good, it’s mine then.” He said flatly, and pushed the glob of mess into already full mouth.

    That lead to four auidble disgusted groans from across the table, even from Arav.

    Neil blinked at them all.

    “What? I play national basketball, I need my strenght.” He shrugged, and gulped down the gobbled sanwiches with the helo of orange.

    Ruby muttered low in her throat.

    “He is a farm a guys, give him some fot not having table manners, though I think his farm friends have much more good entiquette than him, right Neil.” She said scarstically, smiling wide at him.

    She blinked several times at him sweetly. They both were sitting side to side.

    Sam and Radhika gave each an eye roll.

    There they go again.

    Neil grinned suddenly and leaned towards her.

    “I can show you a real animal, just….”

    Right then, Radhika needed to put this to a stop.

    “Oh, shut it both of you.” She cut Neil’s words to a stop.

    Arav got up hurriedly when his phone started vibrating.

    He smiled at Neil, and patted his back.

    “Easy there, bro..” He said and left.

    Radhika and Ruby glanced at Sam looking worriedly at Arav’s walking back.

    Radhika then saw Neil grab something from Her plate. She snapped her hand at his stealing fingers.

    wackh!

    Neil howled.

    “Ow! Rads, geez,” He held his hand looking at her irirtated.

    “Wow! Rads, that’s fast.” Ruby and Sam grinned.

    Thank god, Sam lost that sad look.

    Radhika looked straight and said dangerously.

    “Thats what you get for stealing my pizza.”

    Neil stared at her and leaned back in his chair.

    “Is it that time of the month.” He asked with raised up eyebrow…..

    • Thena on

      @farha..oh wow…don’t feel wid those typos dear….I thoroughly njoyd it….Neil pushing them apart,2 exercise on their asses,ruby referred him as an animal,Neils reply tat he can show hr a real animal,radz hurting his hand….& more….LLH mybbuddy

  466. Thena on

    @ireena…heyaa i doubt yaar…u want it just b4 11 r anytim bt b4 11? hehehe clear it buddy

    hi all my dearies,just giv 10 stars 4 our mmz in IMDb buddies…nw it is ly 5.3 out of 10 yaar…bt it deserves more than 8 r8? so pls do it buddies….

    tis is a request 2 telly updates…PLEASE KEEP THIS PAGE ALIVE ATLEAST TO FOUR MONTHS & PLEASE PROVIDE A NEW SITE FOR MANMARZIAN FANS…..this is a kind request…please do us a favour

  467. kfar on

    crap guys lots of spell errors, missed out words and wrong sentence formation, I’ll updateagain, much cleaner parts than the above one..mistakes mistakes 🙁 my mobile officially sucks for typing.

    Samiha, Riya, irrena, saji.anyaa, Abbz, subh, ure,..(Thankkkkkkkkk u alll) Nisha, raashi, thena, Natasha

  468. Riya on

    Girl: let’s meet up I miss you a lot.
    Boy: Okay, later babe I’m drinking with my boys. Let’s meet up around 12:00.

    Girl: You started drinking again? /:

    Boy: Yeah don’t worry about me babe, I’ll see you later though my phone battery is about to die.

    *boy turns phone off* He continues drinking and loses track of time. At 2:35 he comes home to find his brother outside panicking. He says “A Hospital just called me your girl was shot to death.

    * Boys begins crying and turns phone on* last message from his girl.

    1:45: I have been out by your house for a while now I guess your phone must have died. I’m leaving all I wanted to do was see you, but I hope you’re having fun with your friends. Text me when you get home babe… I Love You.

    1:55: babe some guys are following me I’m scared!

    2:00: voice mail*
    Babe I’m scared some guys are chasing me irk what to do.

    * Shots go off * Silence

    Appreciate what you have, because you never know what you truly have till it’s gone. . . . .
    ??????????????

  470. Savera on

    Hi Shagun,
    Welcome to Manmarziyan friends group.
    Manmarziyan last episode was shown on star plus on 29 August. It is not showing on any channel now.
    here we r honouring our favourite serial. that,s why..
    Thena is writing from where Arjun confessed his love for Radhika.
    Anu is writing as Manmarziyan season 2. after 2 years leap where story ended.
    Kfar is writing a contemporary romantic novel with the same character,s name Arjun ,Radhika, Niel n others …..
    I think I have made everything clear to you.
    Enjoy all the story over here.

  471. srju on

    great story kfar u seen to be a pro writer is it true? i m just curious about u
    @thena ur episode no 120 was superb
    @anu tnx for fb ac
    u guys don’t let me miss dym

  474. Savera on

    Hiiiiii Thena Dear,
    superb epi , really enjoyed it, waiting for the next part. god bless you my dear.
    Thank you very much for entertaining us. Keep writing ….. keep dreaming…

  475. Savera on

    Hi Kfar, our budding novelist,
    good going, you are an amazing writer.
    Today in the morning at 5:30 I was reading your novel , so interesting.
    eagerly waiting for the next chapter..

  476. mitty on

    Renu waiting for ur explanation. …only 9 days left dear plz do it fast eagerly waiting ……….@happy devga arjuni nakshatra afroz where r u all?

  477. Deepa on

    Guys only9 days left for our friendship to b continued…..;( feel like crying…..already am brokendown by manmarziyan end…bt our thena,anu predictionery story and renu pov gav me alot of happiness tat our show s still in running in our hearts…..miss u guys i dont knw how i will b aft 9days…..;(

  478. Ireena on

    @thena,actually I wanted to read the story b4 11.00 so that I can feel the presence of manmarzian.nothing else Dear. . .

  479. Ireena on

    farha,I wanted to keep a name 4 ur story.how’s it ‘mitha hai yeh pyaar (love is sweet) ??❤?????? I think its very bad,isn’t it??don’t tell me.because my choice isn’t that good.
    anyway guys,u guys keep a name for this lovely story.

    • kfar on

      I loveeed it deary very niceeee i really do. Thanx for thinking the title. Next update putting the title up 😀

  480. Samiha on

    Hi guys!! Giving my 20 mins a try..
    @kfar and Thena and Anu: I want to tell the three of you that I read all your comments verry attentively. But I can’t always comment for my buisiness… Thanks a lot for remembering me, love you guys a lot. Just know, I am always reading your comments and will always do so, even if I am unable to comment…(curently loving the story and DYM-2 by you). Keep it up guys…

  481. kfar on

    @aall- Cutting down all stories short, I’m going for a one short, so sorry guys I’m bombarding you with random stories here…hehe I had been writing for mself since really long, and now that I got you guys im gpin to write only for u…

    Drawn Together (One Short)

    Radhika didn’t know what to make of her supposed ‘husband’s letter. They were married four months ago. She didn’t see him since the night of the wedding. Yes, she had signed the papers. She bought herself freedom by giving up the land. She also signed the papers, because she had seen gleam of desperation in his black eyes when she had paused looking at the papers confused with the pen in had. It had been a cold caluculating business proposition to him, but to her, he just handed out the world. She was baffled, her workshop, two years of free practice with oil paints and charcoal, to put her hard work on canvases. And freedom. Independent. Her own exhibition in New York. Free from her abusive father, she could do all that. Everything of this wasmaking her wary.
    Only one question vibrated . What was the worth of all this? What was he going to do with it? But when she looked at him, every doubt evoparated. He was sat before her calm and composed. His left hand perched on the arm of the sofa, his right hand over his chin, rubbing it, as if assessing her in quiet curiosity. His lean back posture said nothing about the storm brewing in those eyes. She could a desperation in them becasue of her delayed reponse.

    That thing of his connected to her desperate attempt of freedom. Ah, finally, something which made them equals. He seemed to be more at lot of loss here than her in this business propsition.

    He seem to read her assesment of his, so he wiped off every emotion from his eyes. It now only reflected her curious image in his black brown eyes.

    Commendable job, she thought, but she didn’t care about him, nor the land. She signed the papers in mute silence.

    Thetensed cloud cleared from the room just as immediately.

    He gathered the papers and stood up and turned but not before hurling a warning over his shoulder like a typical dominant male.

    “Remember, we stay clear of each other’s path, until only publicly, other those events, I don’t want any other interference, or I hope you don’t hav to face consquences in this marraige contract.” He said the words dangerously , completely brusque.

    He walked then just as he came, Radhika snorted.

    He just talked to her as if talking to a business adversary but not his wife.

    Radhika jerked back to the present, four had passed, she never saw him much, because his room was downstairs and she stayed upstairs. He got out before seven in the morning, Radhika worked in the workshop since from ten to four of the evening. Hcame home late. Say 2 or 3 at night. Guess what, he worked all days of the week even on a sunday.

    • renu on

      kfar,….i missed somewhere at the middle dear,…

      if u ve soft copy please post it 4m starting in some page dear n post its link dear ,….

      please please please,….cox of my busy schedule,..i missed ur story dear,..

      please do this 4 me na,…

    • kfar on

      Hey thanx so much dear and yes i have all the parts together. Safe n sound in my tablet so i just need to reedit it and im gonna provide u wit the link soon. I wil surely do that for u n more yaar :D.

  482. Bushra on

    Riya what can i do to keep touch with u all?????u r brilliant.•°•°•°•°•°•°•°•°•°•°•°•°•°•°•°•°•°•°•°•°•°•°•°•°•°•BEST OF LUCK

  483. kfar on

    And now she read this letter of his. ‘Be ready by nine’. Short and curt and also must say very rude. he did say about appearing in public events together.

    She glanced at the white box perched on the bed. It had been there when she walked in. He must of sent it through a servant. Wow, rude much, she thought.

    When she opened the paper cardboard box, she gasped in surprise. It was a long black gown with off shoulders, which may leave hands and shoulders naked, it elongated down to the toes, it was a beautiful black colour. It would hug her body so prettily. Hmm, definitely a suit party. A boring business meet.

    But, Radhika became nervous. She had always worn traditional clothes, salwar kameez at home and jeans and tops outside.

  484. abi on

    hello sweeeties………happy to hear the respose from u my frnds…….i ll always connected with u,…….dears….

    ANU …….superb,……pls dont stop d stories……..keep going onn pls……

    THENA……u……..r………….chanceless…..superb….pls continue our manmarziyan…..its amazing…..yaa …..i really nd completly enjoyed by ur 1211 th episode……hope u ll rock……

    BYE GUYS….WITH LOTS OF LOVE…….i ll come again….bye

  485. Riya on

    M
    A
    N
    M
    A
    R
    Z
    I
    Y
    A
    N
    ARJUN
    A- A lot of love for
    R-Radhika ,it’s
    J- just a
    U- unconditional love &
    N- Natural feeling….
    RADHIKA
    R- Rose like girl with
    A- a heaven like heart
    D- danger for evil people’s &
    H- heartily love’s her friend.
    I- innocent mind which sacrifice everything
    K- kind of people like
    A- Arjun & sam……
    ARJUN?RADHIKA..

  487. dipika on

    Hey Riya awesome meaning u hav discover for our aradhika..Great work…
    @kfar ur story is minblowing dear…eagerly waiting for nxt chapter…

  489. renu on

    @theena:
    omg dear,…i loved ur episode sooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo much yaar,….
    & eagerly waiting 4 ur next update,….

    A small suggestion 4m ur friend,…if possible try 2 maintain arjun n radhika real characterization with deep insight yaar,…

    After posting my pov n discussing the earlier epi,…if time permits,i ll try 2 give some suggestion 4 ur story,….cox i think u r going on a right track till now,…which makes me 2 feel connected,….n i love posting my pov 4 ur epi too in my free tym but i cant swear u as i told u na tat m busy in my studies now reading Economic survey of india,..My head spins dear,…i got relaxed after reading ur imaginary epi,…

  490. Mandy on

    Guys I m really sorry I m late today hope I dinn miss nything !!☺️☺️☺️
    Hey all !!!!!!!!????
    Riya jus mind blowing meaning n u no wat now I m missing it too much yaar!

    Natasha u shuld write quickly b4 it’s late so i m waitin !!??

    Hey @farha @renu @anu @ Natasha @riya @dipika @mitty @raashi n @all sory dinn mention !!??????

    Hey if nny of u wrote any PoV u r d best thin dat has ever happen to me n if lot of ppl wrote Dan dat means u guys made my day n life !!???????????????

    THANK U GUYS n lots of love ❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️????????

  492. shuvi on

    woww!! what a lovely fulformmm its just awesome yaar….
    now its for u Riya…
    R – real & true thoughts by an
    I – intelligent girl, whose mind is
    Y – yare
    A – a lot…
    🙂

  493. Ireena on

    seems like that all of my friends right being creative more day by day.anu,Farha,thena,riya,renu…now Natasha,u r goona join also.love u all,keep it up….?☺???????

  495. abi on

    hey RIYA………..

    ur explanation for ardhika….s just awesome………the people who r all named arjun nd radhika….if they see this xplanation….they may get shock……becoz its an unepectable nd unimaginable ………..really superb…nd congrats u for this….:-))))

  498. dipika on

    Hey Mandy thats such swee thing u say…i met u all that is best thing in my life…so muccccccc buddiessss…muhhhhaaaa…

    @ Renu i read sumwhr in fb page that jodi fights is one of reason for closure of mmz…n m nt agree with it…thy r saying ppl thinks samarj is pair bt whn thy shw ardhika as couple many ppl left watchin the shw..on this pt i want shw them ur pov how beautifully u describe 1st meeting of ardhika to them…Thanks dear for such nicest pov…

  499. dipika on

    Hey Mandy thats such sweet thing u say…i met u all that is best thing in my life…so muccccccchhh buddiessss…muhhhhaaaa…

    @ Renu i read sumwhr in fb page that jodi fights is one of reason for closure of mmz…n m nt agree with it…thy r saying ppl thinks samarj is pair bt whn thy shw ardhika as couple many ppl left watchin the shw..on this pt i want shw them ur pov how beautifully u describe 1st meeting of ardhika .Thanks dear for such nicest pov…

  501. anu on

    The episode starts with Ankush playing with kids and he suddenly notices that nandini di is watching him from bit far. Nandini moves forward to talk to ankush and he feels tensed. Meanwhile scene shifts to Arjun and radhika at home having dinner. Radhika removes evrythng from the dining table and arjun helps her. Arjun waits for her in bed room while watching tv. But radhika sat on the couch in hall and writing the locations for the next day ad shoot.Arjun calls her & she says few more minutes plz. Radhika blushes by arjun’s calla and feels shy. Arjun thinks to play a prank and screams out Radhika, she runs to him hearing the sound.. she sees everything messed up and starts scolding arjun. Arjun wont listen to her and sees her with a glazed look.. radhika collects all the papers that were flown on to floor by the air from window.arjun too joins her in collects the papers and they come back-back and turn towards eachother having eyelock of lots of love,care & affection..

    One of his frens comes to ankush and asks can we leave, ankush replies yeah sure. While nandini is near ankush and about to speak she gets a call and saying it’s emergency please come to children’s playing room. She immediately leaves with without talking to ankush. Ankush & his frens leave from there as its getting late to reach their Rooms.

    Radhika moves away and stands up keeping the papers back on table. Arjun stares at radhika with a bug-eyed look. She feels shy and arjun comes close to her holding her hand and laying another hand around her neck. She blushes with her head down and arjun holds her chin and asks her to call arjun with love. She doesnt,but he repeats. She punches his foot and goes to get water. He utters ouucchhh in pain and goes to bed and covers himself with a blaket. She comes and closes the door keeping water at the bed side down. She wonders why arjun slept so fast in a short span and switches off the light and takes the blanket to cover herself. Radhika in inclined position moves close to arjun and caresses his hair staring at him with love. Arjun suddenly opens his eyes and holds her tight around her waist,so tight that even air cant stay between them. He collects her hair strands and keeps back to her ear and asks her to call arjun with love. She blushes and calls. He is very adamant and asks to call again looking in to his eyes. She shivers and calls and he holds her even tighter and he gets up slightly to kiss….

    Sam and neil in their room fight about the puppy, apple. Neil makes him rest on the bed laid for him and they switch off the lights. Neil comes close to sam and asks for hair band. She gets puzzled and asks what. He says hair band to hang my self and acts naughty as she is not feeling romantic.. they have a nok-jhok and end up kissing eachother and love making… ♥♥♥

    PRECAP : Ankush saves all the photos he has shoot at orpahanage in his laptop and sits brooding..

  507. renu on

    s dipika,….

    they r such irritating fools,…..most of SamArj fans r Kashmira’s fans,…they want kashmira 2 b paired with aham(arjun) cox they look good 2gether acc 2 them,…..n they never wants the story dear,..but v must appreciate cvs cox of SP’s pressure n some unwanted comments,…they dinn change the essence of their original track n maintained it n end it well dear,…

    They even bashed monica sehgal who portrayed Radhika character as Boyfriend stealer & how could you romance with your best friend’s love,…& Even mentioned her with xxxx words in live chat with monica n posted bashing comments in her instagram,twitter too.,…

    But monica dinn reply anything n she just ignored those comments yaar n felt disguised when Kashmira’s sis retweeted,…N i felt Monica as a down to earth person n she s such a gem in real life too with much talents yaar,…I felt even Sam aka KAshmira too dinn stole our hearts like monica with her debut entry,…N its highly commendable,…

    • Annie on

      Yeah renu.. u r ryt!! I saw karshmas debut serial but I was not at all impressed by her!! But I am very very impressed by monica aka radhika. . She acts really well… who will tell dat mmz was hr frst serial seeing her acting skill!!

  508. deepa on

    Anu…..fabulous episode………..:) yaar…….keep going….waiting eagerly for ur next epi….tc dr

  509. anaya on

    NATASHA.. of course do it. Eagerly awaiting your story. Please jaldi shuru karo..
    ANU. I am watching the episodes going in a proper sequence n its lvly. Thank u.lv u
    FARHA. Thank you for a faster update of so many chapters n thus providing a continuation to the story …

  512. Deepa on

    Thena…wru…come on yaar….waiting for ur updates….

    Natasha……eagerly waiting for ur upcoming medical ardhika romance

    renu…..hope u vll soon convey ur thoughts to us….including our new episode yaar…..

    Kfar……waiting for ur story…continue soon yaar…..ur a best story writer…..keep rocking yaar…..

    Riya…….i lik ur explanation regarding our lovable couples ardhika…..ur jus outstanding yaar

  513. Deepa on

    Renu let them tell yaar….they are cracks…..bt within these short period of time monica has reached our hearts v all knw abt it ri8…..surely she vll shine in future….u dont take into regard tat unwanted blast na ll yaar…..be cool8-)…..and entertain us by ur amazing thoughts yaar….all the best for ur studies….keep rocking dr

    • renu on

      i dinn take it much yaar but i read such comments in twitter during lonovla track in twitter n it makes me 2 laugh nothing else,..u r r8,..they bcame nuts i think so,…watever it may b,..Ardhika ends up 2gether gives nice ending 2 the story which ended abruptly n it over shaded the fill in the blanks of cvs too,…

      & thank u 4 ur wishes dear n ill try 2 post my povs in my free time dear,….

  514. Ireena on

    actually Kashmira was more famous than Monica before manmarzian. after telecasting manmarzian, all have noticed the potential on Monica.to be Frank, samarj Jodi was good as well.and Neil would also pair good with Monica.but shravan is ni as famous as aham

    • renu on

      s dear,…i too agree with u,..Sam n Arj makes a good pair look wise but not character wise,..v all wanna watch the story with characters not actors,…

      S dear Cvs should b blamed 4 the story not the actor,…y some ppl r so illogical n double standard ,..i dunno,…. further cvs showed ardhika as the final game r8 4m the starting,…just read my pov of their first meeting,….

  516. renu on

    hiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii friends

    i already posted my pov on first meeting of ardhika separately,…Now a little character wise explanation 4 Arjun,Radhika,Sam & neil,…Though i wanna remember ly ardhika,…But Nesam characterization too imp as ardhika story starts with Sam,who act as a bridge btw them till their love confession n Neil’s characterization s required as Sam’s character needs one person in all her walks of life which was her idiot,..Without him her life ll b incomplete,… Hence lemme start with individual characterization before going deeply in2 our ardhika’s old scenes yaar,…

    First let us starts with most grey shaded person ARJUN,…

    ARJUN: A man of mystery,…He has a painful past deep down his heart and the only thing which occupies his mind donkey years is his Revenge over khannas family,…Which he assumed as his medicine 4 his pain by giving the same pain 2 the 1(sam) who is responsible 4 it,…He was emotionally cliched by his psycho sister who grown him with all care which he needed wen he was an orphan n that too being an eight years old child,…he saw her tears all his life & he attained adult age with same angster in his eyes which his sis seeded in his childhood 2 avenge 4 her meaningless revenge,..He saw ly his sis’s pain n he dunno anything other than that all the years,…He was in full revenge mood,..He thought that his charm ll affect any girl 2 fall 4 him whoever it may b SAM or Bonnie,..& he suceeded in it,…He never think that he cant affect a girl using his charm n good looks untill he met Radhika,…It was the first time he felt affected by Some one like radhika,..His fear of letting out his revenge by his unknown feelings for radhika makes himself 2 get rid of her by continuosly taunting her with his misbehavior,…But wen radz started digging his innerself despite his manhandling n threatening ,which he hide 4m the whole world makes him wonder n he couldnt stop himself 4m feeling 4 her,..As she starts to see his Goodness which he himself never ever tried 2 see all those years inclined him 2wards her more,….Her every reaxn had an huge impact on him may b as irritation, annoyance, love,anger,hatred, care, affection,….He was so loyal 2wards his ly family,world r watever i.e.,his sis NAndhu,..where he found this same selfless loyalty 4m radz 2wards her family n friends,..Both were not living their life 4 themselves,..Their synchronization makes him 2 remove his facade b4 her & he himself felt free b4 her n he was himself without any pretending of his fake mask wen he was alone with her r8 4m the start even b4 acknowledging his feeling 4 her,…

    He even started 2 4get his lifelong goal of his avenge 4 nandhu b4 her many times,…As deepdown he needs some1 like radhika badly who understands him which he himself puzzled at times,…He has same telepathy with radhika even within few encounter with her r8 4m the begining,…He knew wat she is up2 n he flirt with many girls without any feelings 4m his side as he does it mechanically with an intention in his mind but wen he tried 2 do the same with radhika he failed cox he was much affected by his flirting attitude 2wards her more than Herself,…He never crossed her line r take advantage over her just 2 hurt her,…

    At one stage of his life,he understood wat his heart wants n his mind fails 2 compete with his heart’s desire,…& his goal in his life has been changed after falling in love with Radhika completely & he was ready 2 do anything that ll bind him with radhika,…

    First he was afraid of losing his revenge cox of radhika & later he was afraid 4 losing herself cox of his revenge,…He was just wants 2 lead a normal life with radhika who can bring sun 2 his incessant night,…

    Friends,..This is a short review 4 Arjun’s character so far & i ll continue with others sooner,…

    • kfar on

      I like how u write such a detailed and so clear a person’s point of view. How actully a character feels and his or her thoughts. Keep going bud. Started my day readin ur view.

  519. dipika on

    renu u r absulatly true dear…those fools r kashmiras fan…n we all r knw that no 1 can portray radhika mishra than monica coz she did so splendidly n ya she is nice hearted person really whnevr i check her insta she is such gem n all alwys post abt happiness in lyf….Loads of thanks Renu for such fab review of Arjun our lover boy…Waiting for Radhika intro..

    @ Anu wow wht romatic epi u wrote… great job

  522. anu on

    @dipika and @all : that was posted by manmarzian – star plus page in fb. that post became controversial, so they removed those posts yesterday.. but few days back We gave an answer to them.. many supported us. so,dont worry. A slight line of difference makes everything awkward and controversial. We accepted what CVs have showed with true heart and we loved it, but those people didnt. they might be karishma irani’s fans. it is just a misunderstanding by her fans that she was side-lined from the lead pair.

    IT DEPENDS ONLY ON HOW WE RECEIVE THE SHOW..

    manmarzian – star plus, i am neither criticising u nor bashing u. thanx for the post and we hope u understand whsts the reason for low trp/ show closure after reading our comment.
    Thanq.

  523. kfar on

    @Renu @Dipika- I was shocked to read the information u guys provided. I hv nevr felt sam n arjns chem onscreen. Dat had been a total no go. Dats the reason the cvs felt to change tracks. N itz an absolute riduculous thing to blame Monica for it. Dats just unjustified yaar..

  524. saji on

    Hi renu,

    superb explanatn detailed n frm heart..

    regardng contreversies…afterall its a character..wats monica as an individual responsible for dis…dis s vry rude..

    as renu said…d very first meeting.””my maybelline girl is”””dis line itself shows who s gonna pair up in f soap in future…any person who watchd dat scene wud understnd dat..den wats d prblm to b created n wats d confusion….
    .dats d storyline..im happy cvs ddn change d core of storyline for fans happiness…den wats d importnce of original story or script…
    i loved all the four leads…as watever dey wer in soap…all four are extremely talented…n dey lived der character well…may b emotions or der pairng…

  525. deepa on

    Renu…….Awesome view abt our lover boy arjun……..loved it dr…….keep going…..waiting for our charming and lovable chasni views dr……keep rocking…….:):):)

  526. Thena on

    Hi al my deariessss……..@mandy,renu,farha,raashi,deepa,savera,dipika,saji,shub,anu,mitty,bushra,annie,aradhika,anju,nisha,samiha,Riya,anaya,ireena,abbz,abi,natasha,nakshatra,srju,hony,zara,shuvi,dimple,all silent readers,all mmz fans…..

    EPISODE122:

    Arjun kissd the othr droplet leavin radz 2 press hs shoulder hard….he held hr more tight…hr legs lifted up…nw she ws in hr tip toe…he placed a glance at hr face…oh! it al turned scarlet & made no diff wid hr attire…al red….he loosend hs grip a lil & she opened hr eyes…cud manage 2 stand on hr feet nw….he rested hs head on hr shoulder,hs face 2wards the wall…hs eyes wer tighly closed lik as if a child takin a deep nappy in its mother’s bosom…he stood still…did nothin…hs tranquility ws fearsome…radz huggd hm & rubbed hs bare back soothingly as if a mothr rubbin an infant…..

    sudden thr,the door quivered wid rapid knocks….both came out of their clutches & lukin each othr wid a ques of whom it might b….oh! neil askd hr 2 brin buk…hr tounge tip ws seen out as she bit hr tounge,hr hand ws on hr head….arjun went on 2 open the door & radz hid behind it….wen arjun opened it,she peered thru the gap formin in the door….Oh! she ws r8..neils back ws seen….she sprinted in2 the room in a pretence of searchin the buk…..

    neil swiveled wen arjun called out….hs face ws al tensed….hs luks wer anomalous…arjun cudnt interpret those bt it ws dangerously contagious…s it ws…nw arjuns face ws filld wid rays of emotional strain….

    “kya hua man”arjun askd in an urge….

    neil whispered shhhhh & threw hs gaze in2 the room…hs left hand rubbin hs forehead & hs r8 on hs waist….nw arjun felt more pressure & implored neil 2 utter… arjun tuk neil aside, clutchd hs elbows & lukin straight in2 hs eyes…neil again threw hs gaze 2wards the room 2 ensure tat radz wsnt cumin out thr…Oh! God tis man ws killin arjun.

    “Oh commmmmm on neil…open ur mouth man”,arjun shakened hm…

    neil tuk a deep breath & said tat dadaji fell unconscious on hs way 2 room….nw it ws arjun who lukd back at the room….he left hs grasp on neils elbows…hs hand rubbed hs forehead & hs body felt lik burnin as it ws al spread wid anxiety….radz evry word on dadaji flashed in hs mind…
    ‘hw ws she gonna bear tis,hw cud he inform hr,Oh!! she wud badly hurt if she cums 2 knw tis’,these wer the thots runnin in hs mind….sudden thr hs eyes stood still as if he has gotten an idea…ah! he got it….he proceeded 2 neil,grabbed hs shoulders & askd hm 2 not utter any word 2 radhika…hs eyes demandin an assurance & neil nodded in yep….

    bt 2 hs upset,radz stood thr wen they turned back…she had a buk in hr hand which hung down…

    “radhika…..tum…..”,,thr ws a bewilderment in arjuns tone….

    he ws clueless if she knew anythin….she sensed the apprehension thr & besseched them 2 speak out the truth….arjun gestured no 2 neil….neil cudnt resist as he thot tat radz heard ovr their convo…he assured chasni tat dadaji ll get well soon & not 2 worry….

    “neillll….wat!…wat happnd 2 dadaji neil?”,radz eyes filled wid pool of tears,hr hand loosened its grip on buk…

    plssssss do reply & leave ur feedbacks…only then i can move further buddies….

    • Thena on

      hey farha…appreciation 4m u means a lot buddy….

      m on cloud9 tat u likd romance in it dear….tight hugs…

      wr is ur story yaar…am waiting dear…
      1 thing ya..u said gender can b found by profile name na…bt guess wat… 1st i thot kfar ws a boy…hahaha…i read ur story at 1st bt ws hesitant 2 cmmnt(hehehe…laughin at me)…bt wen u said thins lik girls wid simple make up & chocolate in tea,i concluded u wer a girl…..thats y i lik 2 call u farha…hahaha….

  527. Thena on

    @RENU….oh dear…thank u soooooo much yaar….am pleased 2 get ur suggestion…pls leave ur suggestion 4 tis friend….i ll b glad if u giv ur pov on my writings buddy….u.r.welcome 2 analyse mine dear….wenever u ve time pls giv ur pov on my story dear….i ll wait here bud…
    Oh ur analysis on arjun touched me…so true it ws yaar…totally agreed buddy…n tat mandap scene,favourite of mine too…as i said ur 1 lines ws also awesome dear…keep rockin

    @ireena…heyaa..vry sorry yarr..cudnt make it ydy…4m 2dy onwards i ll post one epi b4 11…2 complete the story i need 2 post mor than 1 epi…so bear wid me dear..bt sure i ll post 1 epi b4 11 buddy…

    @natasha…hey hw did i leave ur name dear…hittin my head in a wall yaar….felt vry sry…4giv me dear..pls post ur story..v r al waitin…

    • abi on

      hey…THENA…PLS continue ur story sweetie…….becoz i really luv it….daily i m waiting for ur update……so pls continue……..i appriciate u for this……

      ” wat ll happen next……..dadaji!!!!!!!!!!!!”…….thena i m waiting for u…..:-))

    • Natasha on

      Dont hit ur head i will feel bad. What is the problem if u didnt write my name? U have considered me as ur friend and thats enough for me.

  528. Thena on

    @nisha,anaya,aradhika,anju,srju,abbz,abi,Riya,samiha,natasha,nakshatra,zara,shuvi,dimple…oh! these names got erased wen posted…thank u all buddies

  529. kfar on

    Savera, deepa, dipika, Riya, mitty, abi, Natasha, shub, anaya, ure, clara, tia, ira afroz, happy, zara, sara, n if forgetting someone..thanku all deariesss.

    Ireena- irz reallly cooool title thanks..next update putting up the title. Means a lot a that u thought about it.

    Thena- thanks for writing about further epis. Awesome dear really.

    Anu- like ur writing style 😀

    Mandy n Samiha- how are u?

    Raashi- kahan ho? How itzz going??

    • Samiha on

      Thanks kfar, but where is your story? You didn’t update it till now! I like both your stories. The 2nd one(where Ardhika marriage is a 2 year contract) how many parts did you update? 3? Please tell me… And the other one is awesome too. Whom do you imagine while eriting about Aarav, Ruby, Viren, Misha??? I wonder what happened to Viren that night. So pleaaase update fast…

  530. Deepa on

    Thena……ur a great writer,,,,i become fan for many of u yaar….. i was waiting for ur story since last ni8,,,bt nw am happy by reading the story….eagerly waiting for wat happens next….keep going yaar:)

  531. dipika on

    @anu @ kfar m too thinking wht u guys are thinkng…nw shw goes off air n there is no pt in making controversy over the reason of its closure…. ardhika touch my heart so deeply thats y i got hurt by reading ths kind crap abt ardhika…n i reacted on tht post….
    though this four actors r super talented n they did best job….Hope mmz return with ths 4 again to meet us….
    @ Thena m too worried yarrr wht happened to dadaji?
    Ardhika chem is really really awesome one….
    keep going dear…

  533. Riya on

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    MONDAY
    AT- 10.25 PM
    Mom scolding me, & say close the TV.
    Me- please please please mom ,it’s last one
    Pleeeeeeeeeeeeees……
    Mom- okay, but only 10 minutes.
    Me- what 10 minutes, ummmmm please mom ,it’s 10.30 omg mom just leave me…..
    STAR PLUS
    MANMARZIYAN START
    ( MOM LEAVE )
    It’s morning,Arjun & Radhika in bed both are awake. They have a eye look to each other & Arjun holds radhika hands & gives a sweet kiss. Radhika blushing and close her eyes.
    ( back ground music play khwahishon pe likhi dil ki ye arziya …………………..)
    Phone was ringing ,Arjun pick tha phone & glad (like in krish 3 movie when Hritik know about his baby )
    Arjun holds radhika tightly &thanks to god.
    NEXT- Arjun say i can’t believe radhika…
    BREAK START
    AMBIPURE……
    SURFEXEL……
    AMAZON SHOPPING………..
    BADTAMIZI DIL……
    BACK IN -1.30 MINUTES……
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    BACK IN -0.00

    Arjun tightly hold radhika & say i can’t believe radhika our dreams going to fulfill.
    Radhika (confusion face ) what happen arjun.
    Arjun take radhika in his arms & start moving on the bed. Radhika loudly say arjun stop it,stop it.
    Say me what happen ,arjun say we have a baby dr……..
    Radhika just shocked…
    At that time door bell was ringing…….

    POWER CUT
    Me-what the hell, blo*dy power system…..

    Waiting the repeat at 8.00 Am
    Start listings title track of Manmarziyan…..
    & sleep…….
    Zzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz………….

  534. Natasha on

    In my story u will find charecters named arjun,radhika,samaira,neil but u will not find any similarity between the charecters of dym and my story. In my story there will be Dr. Arjun Mehra,Dr.Ananya Sharma, Dr.Samaira khanna. Dr. Neil malhotra,Radhika Mishra.

    The story starts with all the internees including neil,samaira,neeti,kirti,rahul,tammanna,anjali,nikita are waiting in the hall of swarage(name of the hospital) todays their first workday at hospital. At 9:00 dr gupta (the head doctor) comes with dr arjun. He greets everyone. At the same time ananya comes . He says i dont like whom late. She says sorry. Gupta gives a sppech on the rules of hospital. He goes. Arjun says i am ur trainer senior doctor. Sattu(hos staff) comes gives keys of lookerroom .

    All are in the looker room. Neil says sam i mean samaira and me are friends. Kirti says dr gupta is so rude. Nikita says guys u can call me niki. Ananya says my friends call me anu. Rahul says wow every girl have nick names. Neil says girls i am handsome but dont love me. All laugh.

    Anu coming to ward. She stumbles and fall on the arm of arjun. He says cant u see while walking? she says sorry sir . He says ur sorry will not set everything right. He goes angrily. She becomes upset.

    Sam says neil idiot lets go to canteen . I am hungry. Neil says as u wish sarminder singh.
    The scence shifts to hrishikesh. A lady is crying holding a photo. A man comes saying whats the use of crying for whom can never come back? he says stop crying our daughter radhika will never come back. She is dead.

    Are u guys liking my story? You can tell me without hesitation if u dont like the story. If u r not enjoying my story then I will not continue writting this story.

    • Thena on

      @natasha…seems interesting buddy…arjun said ur sorry ll nt set evrythin r8…oh! so nice dear..keep gng..

    • abi on

      hey NATASHA…this story seems very interesting yaa….so pls continue nd finish it off……starting itself mystry…ah….very nice….i also imaggine d persons….to the charecters….pls….pls…continue sweetie…..:-)

  535. Savera on

    Hiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii Dear Mandy,
    I am perfectly fine…. n enjoying . How are you dear?
    Its really great that Manmarziyan has given such a nice friends.
    you people are treasure for me. Enjoy our Manmarziyan n be happy always.
    bye bye dear..

  536. Savera on

    Hiiii Natasha,
    nice start of your story. pls continue it , I am sure , we ll like it.
    remember one thing that …when it comes from heart, it definitely touches the heart.
    All the best my dear… keep writing n keep entertaining us.
    bye bye my Manmarziyan friend.

  537. Savera on

    Hi Thena the Manmarziyan writer,
    A hug to you my dear for the happiness you hv given to me n all.
    you are taking the epi with right pace n also at right track.
    bye bye dear Thena.

    • Thena on

      oh savera…thank u sooooooo much dear…big hug back buddy….posted 123…hope u lik it dear..leav ur feedback bud…luv u loads

  538. deepa on

    Riya……..great dr…..great applause to u yaar….ur explanation s lovely and super….cant express it in words…..u really drowing us crazy yaar…..

    Natasha….. story s nice dr……pls continue…..waiting for ur next update

  539. Thena on

    EPISODE 123:

    when the buk fell down,arjun yanked 2 hold radhika…bt 2 hs surprise she stood still & kept on insistin neil,tears runnin down unruly though …neil responded,”nothin chasni” wid a nod of assurance,hs hand pressin hr shouldr…., wid usual grin stickin 2 hs face,he ensured hr 2 not get flustered as evrythin ll b 5n soon….arjun nodded in yep wen neil gestured hm 2 get ready….he made a quick exit 2 hs room…

    sam came thr & gulped hr emotions 2 cheer radz…she held radz face & made fun of hr…

    “oh! chuchuchu……. chaaasni shudnt shed tears lik tis, else honeybees ll b gathered here baby….”,sam said in a babyish slang & smiled broadly 4m ear 2 ear….

    she removed hr tears & budged tat if she wsnt gonna stop cryin,then she wud tell dadaji tat hs choti ws weepin lik a toddler….she cleared radz hair locks 2 perfection….he huggd hr tight & planted an impetuous kiss on hr cheek….

    “oh! cho chweeeeeet”,sam said still holdin the same grin….

    she tuk neil & radz 4m thr….they came 2 the room…thr mala ws seated bside dadaji al cryin….radz knelt down, askd hr mom 2 nt cry as hr dadaji ws very strong & assurd hr tat dadaji wud liv many mor years….radz hands clenchin hr mom’s hands & hr lips holdin a convincin smile….sam ws sittin in the chair’s arm & ws al rubbin mala’s back wid hr head placed on mala’s head…..mala said tat she had informed dilip & he ll arrive in an hour…..

    “No need mummyji….then y v peopl r here…”,arjun entrd the room tyin hs watch

    he went on straigt 2 the bed & carried dadaji in hs arms….neil darted 2 the car 2 keep the door open….sam stood up along wid mala 2 provide support,hr hand still rubbin mala….radz ws al busy in admirin arjun…she didn tak off hr gaze 4m hm weras arjuns gaze fell ful on dadaji….arjun made a cautious exit 2 nt hurt dadaji which made hm 2 hit hard wid the door….oh! hs arm….radz got concerned & cauht hs arm…..arjun threw hr a “am ok baby” luk & carried dadaji 2 hs car wid utmost care….neil opened the back door…..arjun sneaked inside & made dadaji 2 lie comfortably on the cushion…arjun drove the car & neil 2 hs adjacent….

    HOSPITAL:

    mala,radz & sam rushed to the hospital…..neil stood in the entrance waitin 4 them wid a cool posture, hs hands in2 hs pant pockets…..sam & radz were contented cing neils composure….mala rushed 2 neil & implored hm about dadaji…..hr hands clenched neil’s…..

    “don worry mammyji…doctor said tat dadji ws ovr xcited & v hav brought hm here in time…evrythin is 5n nw…”,neil said in an assurin tone….

    sam ws al smilin & radz ws al emotional….she threw hr gaze evrywr in search of arjun…

    END of epi 123

    124 cumin….loads of love my deariesssss

    • abi on

      hey..THENA…

      really superb yaa….pls continue to update….becoz i m reading urs….nd….waiting for its……..iits unpridictable….i really enjooed wwhhile reading ur story……..again awesome….:-)))

  540. anaya on

    Hey friends..
    I am just trying out a storyline that came up in my mind. I just want to try out. pls 4give me if i am a failure at this.
    Ye kahaaani dilli ke ek college me shuru hoti he….Vardamaan college of arts n science.Here our story is mostly focused on the chemistry n physics class. Physics class ke 3 gems(best buddies) he jo bohot hi mashur he college me: ansh, parth aur jagat. Wahi doosri aur chemistry class ke 3 jigri dost he(jo ki ab tak tumne man me soch hi liya hoga ki sadu he). Wo padhaaku the. Ekdm silent types in the class. Unka detail baadme.
    Episode 1:
    Pehle dikhta he Physics ka class room, jaha ek ladka(parth) ek book ko fold karke mike banaakar gaa rha he ‘zindagi…do pal ki….(to be frank wo bohot besuraa gaa rha he)- Class me sab bohot zhor se haste jaa rhe he aur parth isse aur zor se gaaye jaa rha he. Itne me Thaapar sir enter karte he. Parth bhaagke apne seat jake baithta he.sab ekdm silent. [Unki class ke sab diwaane the. Itni safai se sab samjhate the ki humne na padhne ki shapat le rakhi ho tab bhi unke class ko unsunaa nahi kar sakte. Bas isiliye har koi unka aadar karta tha. Ye ekmaatra class tha jisme hamare 3 MEN ARMY pehli bench par baithte the. So once again back to our story.]
    Ab frame me hame ek jhalak chemistry class ki dikhai padti he. Poora class uthal puthal machaa rha he, siwaye hamare reeva, sana aur panchi ke. Ye 3 SP ke naam se famous the college me (Acha laga naam? Usse pehle full form to jaan lo…..3 Sadiyal Padhaakoo) Wo to us waqt bhi kisi book me ghuse padhai kar rhe he. Is time class ke macho Sid ne aake panchi ki book cheen li aur usko kutte ko biscuit khilane se pehle jaise log tadpaake mazha lete he us tarah chida rhe the aur hamari panchi ko gussa aur ronaa dono ek saath aa rha tha. Par wo kar bhi kya sakti. Bas khadi rahi. Class me Sakshi mam ki entry hui. Unke aate hi sab log apni apni seat pe laut gaye. Panchi ka book bhi waaps.
    Ghadi me waqt dodta dikhaaya jata he . Is beech hamare 3 MEN ARMY class bunk bhi karte dikhaayi padte he screen me(ek ke baad ek karke ansh, parth aur jagat seedhe khidki se koodke baahar aur fir canteen me. Kuch masti aur hasi mazhaak ke pal n on half of screen the scene of chemistry class with the 3 sp jolting down notes. Meantime, the background music ‘Saath hum jo chale, bann gaye kaafile… Aur koi hamein ab mile naa mile,Mauj hai roz hai, Roke se bhi naa ye rukte kabhi silsile…’
    Again, Ghadi me waqt dodta dikhaaya jata he. Now, it’s evening. Sab ghar jaane ko taiyyaar.. Hamaare 3 MEN ARMY( abse 3MA) ansh ke jeep(dark red n black combo color) me shor sharable ke saath campus se baahar ko aur isi waqt hamare 3 Sp slowmotion me chalte hue gate ki taraf badh rahe he. Sab apne frnd circle me gum, gossips, expectations, day to day gupshups n all….BG ‘‘Saath hum jo chale, bann gaye kaafile… Aur koi hamein ab mile naa mile,Mauj hai roz hai, Roke se bhi naa ye rukte kabhi silsile…’ Pause.
    Precap: Parth n Sana r arguing. Sana-“meine tumse madat mangi?. To fir?”

  541. Nisha on

    Hi all manmarziyan fans nd my dearest frndz
    I hd deactivated my Facebook account an year ago, BT I hv opened new account to join u all on Facebook. .BT I couldn’t see ny of u…
    Plz guys v cn b connected through Facebook if ths site gtz closed

  542. Mandy on

    Hiiiiiiiiiiii evry1 !!

    Hey Farha ur story was very exiting now !! I m fine how r u !!????

    Hey renu read urs to it’s really cool n fun !!??

    Hey Natasha wat superb start !! Pls continue n tell us who was cryin in Rishikesh !!❤️??

    Hey Anu ur really cmndble !!??

    Hey Riya u r very cool !! ???

    Hey thena wrs ur story ?? Waitin for 123 epi bcos I don’t have words to say dat ur very??????

    Hey Ireena hws erg goin !!??

    Hey savera Abi Deepa Mitty Dipika Annie jus love ur povs n cmnts dat u give !!???

    Hey Samiha hws evth goin widout mmz ????

    Hey guys missed evry1 a lot !!??????? THNX GUYS !!❤️❤️❤️

    • Samiha on

      Without MMZ? I know you know how it feels without MMZ. In fact, eveybody knows how hard it is!! Actually, we got so much attached to MMZ that we can’t forget about it even after it’s end. You know, missing MMZ…..;(

  545. deepa on

    Thena……wow dr,,,,,u gav us heart touching episode ma…..a tight hug for u……its really awesome…..hope next epi full of ardhika romance
    eagerly waiting dr….:):)

    • abi on

      hey NATASHA….really ur story s nice…..so pls don’t feel awkward…..nd proceed further dear….i m waiting for ur story….becoz it s abt my profession…so i want to know,,,,……wat ll happen…pls.. dear update the balance story……waitinng for irs with lots of friendship……:-))

  547. anaya on

    Deepa….oops
    I 4got that. Lemme try.
    This sotry begins is a college: Vardamaan college of arts n science, Delhi.Here our story is mostly focused on the chemistry n physics class. Physics class’s 3 gems(best buddies) Who r very famous in college: ANSH, PARTH & JAGAT. On the otherhand, 3 close friends in Chemistry class(whom u might have by now thought of as the most boring ones). They were studious. Fully silent types in the class. Their details wold be available later.
    Episode 1:
    1st Physics class room is in frame, where a boy(Parth) is holding a folded book like mike n singing ‘zindagi…do pal ki….(to be frank it’s hilarious)- everyone in the class is laughing out loud and seeing this, parth starts singing it more aloud. By then, Thaapar sir enters . Parth hurries towards his seat and settles..every1 became silent. [His class is the most outstanding one. Everything is conveyed effectively in the class that even if we have took a vow not to study, we will still not be able to avoid his class.So evry1 respected him. It was the only class, where our 3 MEN ARMY took a front bench. So once again back to our story.]
    Now a glimpse of our chemistry classis shown. Full class is chaotic , except our REEVA, SANA & PANCHI.. They were knows as the 3SP in the college (Feels good to hear the name? B4 that, just hear the full form…..3 sadiyal padhaakoo(approx. meaning 3 boring bookworms ) They were still reading some book & studying. That thime, the macho guy in class, Sid , took Panchi’s book and started messing with her.Our Panchi was angry & at the same time, she felt like crying. But what could she do? She just stood there.At that very moment, Sakshi mam entered into the classi. Every1 went over to their seat & panchi’s book also got back to its place.
    A clock is shown with time running. Meanwhile, our 3 MEN ARMY bunk the class-one after the other thoruhg window and then in canteen. On half of the screen, some happy n friendly moments of 3MA are shown and on the other half, the scene of chemistry class with the 3 sp jolting down notes. Meantime, the background music ‘Saath hum jo chale, bann gaye kaafile… Aur koi hamein ab mile naa mile,Mauj hai roz hai, Roke se bhi naa ye rukte kabhi silsile…’
    Again, time is runnung. Now, it’s evening. Every1 is ready to go home.. Our 3 MEN ARMY( 3MA) are leaving the campus in Ansh’s jeep(dark red n black combo color) making noise.and at the same time,our 3 Sp are proceeding towards the exit in slowmotion. Evry1 lost in their own frnd circle- gossips, expectations, day to day gupshups n all….BG ‘‘Saath hum jo chale, bann gaye kaafile… Aur koi hamein ab mile naa mile,Mauj hai roz hai, Roke se bhi naa ye rukte kabhi silsile…’ Pause.
    Precap: Parth n Sana r arguing. Sana-“Did I ask u for help?. Then?”

    • Mandy on

      Anaya I ❤️ U yaar yeh kahani bohathi mazedaar thi n I so wish yeh such mein ek serial hota SP pe n d story bohat funny tha !!! Thanx made my day !!! U jus kild it !!??
      Pls quikly update d next epi cos I m loosing patience !!!!!!!

    • Samiha on

      Hey Anaya, could you please translate your story in English? I understand Hindi a li’l but don’t understand phonetic Hindi…

    • abi on

      hey..ANAYA…

      STORY S NICE starting…..so plls continue…nd pls update in english dear…becoz i dont knnow hindi sry,…ya 😛

    • Shub on

      Farah where r u. I am addicted to both ur stories. May b I am demanding too much. But missing ur racy story update. Post it soon dear
      Thanks for posting in English.good beginning. Very youthful. Keep going. Waiting for ur nxt epi.

  550. deepa on

    Anaya,
    thanks for translating in eng yaar..
    Story s very interesting dr……i took me back 2 my clg days wer i used to bunk class;)……continue ur story yaar….keep rocking dude

  551. Savera on

    Hiiiiiiiiiiiii Thena My dear,
    Thanks thanks n thank you soooo much dearie for epi 123.
    I enjoyed it, like imagining each n every scene in front of my eyes.
    its totally admirable, how you are maintaining the true spirit of Arjun , Radhika n all other characters. I always love to see Arjun as an angelic person, n Radhika as epitome of sacrifice ,love n friendship..
    waiting for next epi dear, bye bye. Keep dreaming… n keep creating… my dear

  552. saji on

    @thena…cud feel each n every moment of ur story…continue dr

    waitng for anu,,kfar,,renu upcoming episodes n pov’s…

  554. anu on

    hi evryone, many have been requesting SP to be back with manmarziyan season 2. in reply to our mails, they told they will surely send the requests to PROGRAMMING & CASTING TEAM @ STAR PLUS for their review. so dont delay, make sure u request them more often. who havent mailed them yet plzz do mail and we can get a result..

  555. Savera on

    Hey Anaya Hiii,
    I am Savera, I read the 1 chapter of your story, I think its going to be very interesting.
    one suggestion for you , please name the story. So think for appropriate title which deserve your story. Nice start.. pls continue. bye bye Anaya.

  556. Savera on

    Hey Anu hi,
    wht is d email id address of star plus. pls send it to me, I ll surely send mail to them.

  557. Natasha on

    Did all read my story? If not then pls go to the previous page and read. Dont forget to give ur feedbacks.

    • deepa on

      Hello Natasha,,,

      i read ur story….. starting itself so amazing yaar…..move t story forward dr…..waiting for ur updates……keep going going n going yaar:)…..i liked arjun scene very much yaar…..

  559. zara on

    hiii …
    anaya I like your story….
    wow three sadiyal padako n three man army…..wow …
    plzz keep going on ….its interesting
    eagerly waiting for next epi—–

  560. zara on

    hiii …
    anaya I like your story….
    wow three sadiyal padako n three men army…..wow …
    plzz keep going on ….its interesting
    eagerly waiting for next epi—–

  561. deepa on

    Thena,kfar,anu,natsha,renu,amaya u guys r always rocking dudes8-)8-)8-)by entertaining and sharing us with ur pov.romantic story….am happy tat i got urs friendship drs….hope our relation stay longer…..tc guys……hope u all update t next part of stories soon….till then waiting.waiting and waiting……for ur arrival….
    Love alots dudes:*

  562. anaya on

    Thank you… I am happy Mandy, deepa n savera that u liked it …….
    Thena…got emotional …..
    Natasha: gd start n anu fell? I thought it would be radhika. 🙂

  564. Samiha on

    Hey Anaya, could you please translate your story in English? Because I am really eager to read your story after readin praises from Mandy. I understand Hindi a li’l but don’t understand phonetic Hindi…

  565. Samiha on

    Where are you Farha??? Are you alright? I want to tead your story sooo badly. I have a request: Please update your stories at a fixed time and let us know the time. Then it’ll be better for me as my mom gave me a limited time window for so called PHONE TAPPING… Please do, okay? Waiting for your reply…

  567. anaya on

    Thank you for the suggestion savera.
    I have just come up with a name. Hope u all like it. I am open to suggestions. Pls feel free to provide any corrections too.
    The title that came to my mind is ‘hoto pe dabi dil ki ankahi baatein'( English translation could be like ‘hearts talks not revealed by words’. Though the story might turn around with feelings expressed too.

  568. anaya on

    Samiha I have translated the story in English at around 4.17pm. Just have a look. It is just below your comment for Natasha’s story. 🙂

    • Samiha on

      Sorry, actually I saw it later and wanted to delete it but it got posted. Anyways, nice story…

      Another thing, your title sounds awesome, love it… Just the perfect title for your story. Later we will have to call it ‘HPDDKAB’…

  569. dipika on

    lil bit bsy today nw got time to read all ur povs n stories…
    n happy that bcoz of mmz we r getting more n more budding novelist….
    @Thena fab epi yarrr…m too get anxious whn dadaji got admitted… Arjun our lover boy did good job…n neil n sam ur the best supporters of ardhika…
    @ Anaya nice story dear….Recalling college days…
    @
    Mandy missing u dear…love ur pov too…

    love u all my telly friends…muhhhhhh

  571. Nisha on

    Natasha waiting fr ur nxt part to b updated
    I always gt connected to stories based on doctors…so I evn like ur story
    Plz continue updating ☺

  574. Savera on

    Hey Anaya,
    Good Title. It sounds perfect.
    So I am waiting for the next chapter of HOTHON PE DABI DIL KI ANKAHI BAATEIN.
    Thank you 4 liking my suggestion.
    bye bye dear.

  576. Thena on

    Hi all my deariesssssssss………

    EPISODE 124:

    sam ws al smilin & radz ws al emotional wen they heard tat dadaji ws safe & sound….mala askd neil if she cud c dadaji nw….neil said visitors r nt allowd as dadaji needed complete rest,shrinkin hs eyes in humble….she thanked hm wid folded hands & tears rolled down hr eyes….

    “Oh! mummyji…pls…mothr shudnt fold hands b4 son…”,he lowered hr hands in haste…

    he further added tat she shud thank hr son in law as he ws the 1 who brought dadaji thr in tim….he said tat arjun went 2 buy non stock medicines, wen mala askd hm arjuns whereabouts…..Oh! radz ws al melted….she said tat she wsnt hungry wen neil calld evry1 2 canteen as no 1 has eaten anythin since mornin….

    “Ohhhhhhh!!!! s…..s….i cud c a strong appetite in ur eyes baby…then hw cud ur stomach ll b hungry….”,sam blew satires on radz…..

    Oh! hw cud she said tat…radz wonderd if hr face ws so open 4 sam 2 read…she ws al perplexd….nw in a firm tone she assured tat she didn feel hungry 2 avoid the clumsy atmosphere & askd evry1 2 go & eat….wen mala insisted hr 2 cum,she denied hr wid a convincin smile on hr lips…neil askd if she ws ok 2 stay alone…she nodded in yep,still wid the same convincin smile….nw evry1 left 4 canteen…she ws lil fatigue & felt exhausted in actual…

    Radhika ws sittin cross leggd in a circular construction under a giant peepal tree….she ws al tired…the end of hr pallu ws contiguous wid the soil….she kept hr eyes fixed back 2 the entry gate…hr r8 hand pressed against the cement surface,hr left ws in hr lap wid palm facin hr face….thr ws a cheapo sittin thr oppo in the waitin hall….he passed hs creepy luks evrywhr on radz…hs luks droold in2 hr deeply lik achievin hr badly….he lukd so weird,hs elbows rested on hs thighs…hs thumb & index fingers caressd hs beard….he ws starin at hr 4 mor than 15 mins…she ws totally unaware of the cheapo as she kept hr eyes fixed back 4 the same 15 mins….hr tiredness turnd in2 enervation….thank God! she cud nw hear the horn beep of arjuns car…s it ws hm….hs car gave a smooth entry in2 the hospital main gate & ended in a parkin lot…arjun came out of the car….radz felt lik runnin & huggin hm tight….Oh! arjun saw hr…he felt sumthin strange in hr as he hs nvr seen hr tis tired & made hs legs fast….radz stood up xcited & in sudden she felt hr pallu stuck sumwhr…OMG the cheapo stepped on it….being clueless,radz whirled around thrice…

    .”RAAAAAAAAADHIKA”,arjun screamed…he made a quick run wid hs r8 hand stretchd 4ward…

    sam,neil & mala yanked in shock as hs scream reachd the canteen….

    radz ws gyratin & ws about 2 b prostrated…arjun cud manage 2 catch hr b4 ….hr saree ws spread stretchd on the floor…Oh!!!!she ws stripped….he held hr tight inside hm…hs r8 thigh ws carryin radz,hs left knelt down 2 the ground….he cuddled hr tightly 2 hs chest…hs chin ws on hr head…..enervation mixed wid anxiety left hr faintd….hs eyes turnd red….

    END of epi 124
    hiiiii my buddies….vry much glad tat u lik tis series…read al ur lovely cmmnts & tat really drive me yaar…..pls leave ur cmmnts & feedback so tat i can modify it acc 2 ur taste…i ve lot of episds kept in mind…also u can tell me if u want me 2 stop dearies…watvr bt pls tell me….if possible,pls share ur favourite scenes buddies cos i think deep 4 u… hahaha…want epi 125?pls pls do share my dearrrrriessssss……

    • Deepa on

      Thena thena thena,,,,

      fabulous dr…..no words to explain yaar….ur fantastic ur creation s very enthusiastic dr……am in cloud nine dr…..eagerly waiting for next epi ma….post it soon yaar

      tc…..:*:*

    • Thena on

      @deepa….oh my dear..thank u 4 always leaving the cmmnts rite away yaar…this drives me a lot buddy…

      Warm hug buddy…luv u loads ma…tc dear

    • Thena on

      Hi Samiha he calls hr mummy out of respect yaar(think so)…hahaha

      Thank u soooooo much fr feeling this nice yaar….

    • abi on

      oh….yeah THENA….as i told b4…..it s medicine for me nd also for other mmz fans……so pls continue without hesitation…..by the way i luv this epi…..neil’s caring….nd arjun’s luv for radhu nd her family with hi handsome style……:-))

    • Thena on

      Oh abi…so sweet of u yaar….

      Thank u so much fr luvin the characterisation buddy…

      Keep giving ur feedback bud…loads of love

    • Shub on

      Enjoyed the episode. Was able to imagine every frame through your writing especially when she fell off and arjun holding her. It was like watching live on TV. Great job! Thanks for entertaining.

    • sara on

      Amazing theena! Your stories are really good!! Keep posting it!! I loved ur stories nd nw i m addicted to it!! Good job!!

  577. Thena on

    @ireena…am postin nw 4 u yaar…at 10.30. i ll b a sleepin babe..hahaha…read my story & leav ur cmmnt dear…

    • Mandy on

      Hey thena it was very relaxing but I want more ardhika romantic scenes n pls remove Dadaji n Mala dis is makin d story very boring so plssssss !!????????
      I hope I dinn hurt u but if I did pls tell me !!!

    • Thena on

      Oh MANDY…u r welcome dear…please feel free 2suggest me dear….am touched wid all ur cmmnts yaar…tight hug to u…luv u loads…

      And wait…soon the scene ll move to Mumbai….luv is on air buddy

  582. saji on

    Thena,,

    its hard to wait till tomorrow for upcoming episodes…feels like readng it continuously…thanx for entertaining us…

    great thena

    • Deepa on

      Ardhika romance in mumbai….is going to tak place soon….hmm….am floating in air yaar…….love u buddy….gn thena

  583. Dil on

    Hi im a silent reader.. I nvr missed this site and yr comments frnds.. Pls keep continuing..Thena ‘ Anu wooow i lov yr stories jst like still im watching MMZ..Renu you hv well described about Arjuns character..its great and vry true.. Pls keep continuing… U r amazing.. Lov u all. Good job… And Riya what a thinking pattern of each and evry letter of MMZ..lov them

    • Thena on

      Hi Dil…welcome to mmz friends group dear….

      Being a silent reader al these days & cmmntin here to appreciate us….oh it means a lot buddy…..

      Thank u soooooooo much yaar…

    • Thena on

      H dipika thank u sooooo much fr always leaving ur cmmnt dear….

      Keep giving ur feedback buddy…

      Love u loads…

  586. anu on

    The episode starts with ankush and his frens leaving to their rooms from orphanage. Nandini @ orphanage goes to children’s playing room ands sees a boy sitting and crying on the floor. She sees his hand swollen & rushes him to the hospital. Ankush &his frens get fresh and they leave for dinner. After having done with their dinner they all have a talk abt how they enjoyed playing with the kids. Meanwhile Ankush gets his lappy and saves all the pics they took with kids. He sees all the pics scrolling down one by one. He sees nandini in a pic and sits brooding. Many things flashing in his mind about nandini. He remembered the past and sits questioning himself. “Why she moved forward to talk to me? What she wants to talk? Is it about radhika di and arjun jiju? Or just for a casual talk?”

    Nandini talks to doctor and doctor asks her to take care of the kid as he had a fracture at collar bone. She assures him and takes the kid back to orphanage. She asks how did he fell down, boy replied I was climbing the window and suddenly lost the grip and fell down. She talks to the boy with much love and care, and asks him not to repeat it.

    One of his(ankush’s) frens asks him to sleep, its too late and they have to getup early as they have to attend a seminar the next day. ankush stops thinking and says to himself to be careful and he shuts down his lappy and goes to sleep..

    It’s morning radhika feels dizzy and asks arjun to getup first and searches for him with her hand, but she couldn’t find him and sits up thinking.. Arjun makes an entry with a hot coffee wishing good morning to radz. She takes the coffee wishing him good morning and goes to the balcony followed by arjun. Its almost all cloudy over the sky, even sun doesn’t want to disturb them with his rays. Radhika still feels dizzy bcoz of the climate and leans her head on arjun’s shoulder. He turns his face and kisses her forehead. She rests for a while on his shoulder and talks to him with innocence filled over her face and childish looks she has with dizzy face. He stares at her, smiling. He holds her and hugs her asking her to be in his arms forever. She raises her head and winks at him. He smiles with love filled over his face.

    Neil and Sam still on bed, they both get up by the screams of Apple. Sam asks Neil to go and get him food. Neil asks her to do it herself. She pinches him on his waist and runs, followed by Neil to catch her. He ends up colliding Sam in the kitchen and she asks him to have eyes on the floor and walk. Neil says how can I have my eyes on floor when u r in front of me. He acts romantic and makes coffee for both. They hurry up for birdsong.

    PRECAP : nandini takes care of the kid, and some unknown elderly couple/people were shown from back..

    • Thena on

      @ any superrrrrrr dear….

      Thank u soooooooo much fr carrying dym2…..

      Esp likd nesam kitchen scene buddy…..awesome dear….love u loads….

    • Shub on

      What should I say! We lost 1 mmz. Now we get to feel and experience 3 -4.mmz shows all different versions. Seriously this page is a medicine for all broken souls. Thank you so much mmz2. Loved the cofee scene.

    • sara on

      Heyy anu !! Even your are very good!! I was crying when mnz ended!! Thank u so much!! Plz do post ur episodes on fb as well……

  587. mitty on

    First time in the history of Indian television channel starplus lost their no 1 position nd colours beat them. …colours 5shows r slot leaders nd sp 2 shows. ..sp show gulmohar grand is going off air nd tsm is in danger zone. …

    • Deepa on

      Wow its great news mitty….sp should go to hell for breaking all our hearts……tis channel should b shut down or either they should beg for survival…..even tis not enought…..they hav to face lot of consequences…..

    • Thena on

      mitty is it tru tat this is the 1st time sp gng down…if it is oh am on cloud 9….soooooooo happy fr this news dear…

  588. zara on

    wow !!!! interesting n awesome episode thena…
    I love this episode. just imagine ardhika scene 🙂 🙂 😉 its energetic yaarr. thank u soooo much for giving fabulous update
    can’t wait for next plzz post it soon.

    • Thena on

      Hi Zara…..thank u fr ur great words dear….

      means a lot tat u can actually imagine buddy….

      Keep giving ur feedback dear….

  589. Ireena on

    guys,it’s time to celebrate. our curse have been successful.STAR PLUS HAS LOST ITS FIRST POSITION.HURRRRRAAAAHHH!!!!!!!Its time slot leadership,being first in overall,and channel trp all have been snatched.oh!!!!star plus has hurt us a lot by stopping manmarzian.now it’s journey of going down has been started.(ha..ha….sorry for being naughty))))???????

  590. Ireena on

    hiiii,friends.anu and mitty ,really u r doing a great job in fb page. though I m connected on fb,I m checking d page regularly. keep it up??

  591. Savera on

    Hi Thena,
    fabulous epi 124 my dear.
    what do I say? yaar… you hv written everything so well.
    For this, love you sooooo much my dear dear Thena.
    Now I am also going to sleep. So bye bye … keep dreaming ….. n also keep writing.
    good night.

    • Thena on

      Oh savera….tight hug my dear…..

      Thank u soooooooo much fr always leaving ur cmmnt here buddy….

      Keep giving ur feedback & keep cmmmntng dear….it means a lot….luv u loads…

  592. zara on

    Hiii anu,
    In today’s episode first time I like nesam scene yaarrr… its soo cute sam always ordered neil clumsy girl but cuteee…also she pinches my shyly boy neil.
    wow ardhika scene too good, arjun makes coffee for radhu yeepii
    pyaar mein kya kya karna padega dono handsomes ko..¡¡¡
    keep going on dear it is awesome…
    waiting for next episode
    good ni8

  593. Savera on

    Hiiiii Anu,
    this epi has increased my curiosity , I m thinking … what is going to happen.
    You are taking story forward in a very interesting way, I m really impressed.
    you are awesome my friend… just awesome.
    keep writing…. n keep entertaining…. my dear friend.

  594. Deepa on

    Anu,,,
    great job yaar……i enjoyed ardhika and nesam romance dr…..
    I want ardhika and nesam romance for one full episode dr….hope some good news s on t way for ardhika;);)

  596. anu on

    @ireena : thanq so much for regular visits to fb page.. miss u der buddy.. hopw u’ll join us soon..

    @zara, savera : thanq so much for the lovely comments. it means a lot to me.

    @deepa : i thought to post a full romantic one, but later thought that story may be sidelined bcoz of it.. i’ll try to post it soon, as i have planned it after next 2episodes. i’l cut down the story and wil post it for u..

    love u all.. 🙂

  597. anaya on

    Thena… Thank.you so much….
    Mmz is going very good n that pervert who was looking at radhika. :@
    Arjunnnnnnn yaar uska my tod do. How dare he scan your wifey!!

    • Thena on

      Hi anaya…..thank u soooooooooo much fr ur story first dear…..oh I likd it n can imagine the atmosphere of college yaar
      …

      n thank u soooooooo soooooooo much fr likin this story dear…luv u loads…

  598. anaya on

    Anu. The balcony scene reminded me of the blanket fight they had in the lonavla hotel balcony n how they woke up in the morning cuddled to each other. Also I could see radhika’s cute innocent smile while leaning on arjuns shoulder. Nesam… I could just hear sam saying ouch when they collided in the kitchen…. 🙂 lv u.

  599. Shub on

    Farah where r u. I am addicted to both ur stories. May b I am demanding too much. But missing ur racy story update. Post it soon dear

  600. dipika on

    Hi friends
    verrrrry goodwali morning to all sweeties
    Anu doing great job yaar…love hw cutely she learn her head on arjun shoulder…Perfect morning for oir perfect couple…..NeSam romance is also nice bt want more frm them coz still they looks like freinds than husband wife….
    great going….keep entertain us with ur amazing writing skill…
    @ renu whr r u dear…pls update ur nxt pov…eagerly waiting…

  601. Thena on

    @farha…heyaa..wr r uuuuuuu? can u hear my scream dear…r u alr8 …hope u r wel my dear buddy…pls cum here soon & post ur story…ur diehard fan is waitin here……god bless u….

    @natasha…hey wr is ur story yaar…. am waitin here…post it soon buddy

    @renu…y didn u cum yday yaar….i know u r busy wid ur studies dear….wenevr u find time pls suggest tis friend & giv ur pov buddy…ll luk 4ward my dear

    @raashi…oh my dear…wat happend 2 u yaar…y r u nt visitin here these days bud…v don ve much tim yaar…so pls cum buddy…

    @shub,sara…omg…great words yaar….feelin addicted 2 tis story & feelin lik watchin liv in tv…ahhhhhh….those wer great words buddies….very much glad am…keep leavin ur feedback dearies…it drives me a lot…

    @ireena…..so tru yaar…tis sp deserves tis dear…am celebratin on tis news..m on air bud…
    bt y didn u suggest me anythin dear…hahaha…

  602. Natasha on

    I am posting my story.

    The episode starts with ananya(anu) coming to the canteen. Sam calls her. She goes to sam. Other internees are sitting with sam and neil. Neil asks anu why she is upset. She tells them what happend when she was going to ward. Niki says wow dr. Arjun holded u. Anu says stop it niki. Sam says but why u r upset? She says because my boss yelled me at my first workday. Rahul says thats not a big deal. Just chill. Sattu comes and says dr arjun has called u all in his cabin. Neil says lets go. Boss has called us. All go to arjuns cabin.

    Arjun says i have called u all to divide ur work. Kirti and niki will work in ward 1. Rahul and parth work in ward 2 and sam and neil will work in child section. And u ananya will work with me. Now go back to ur work.

    Anu is with arjun. She walks behind arjun and copying his every movement. He gets angry and says i told u to observe me not to become a copy cat. He goes and anu stands like a fool.

    Neil and sam is in child ward. Neil says why this boss send u with me? A child patient requests them to sing a song. They sings.

    Its night. All internees going to the home. Anu comes to her home. Her is very luxerious. She greets her parents. Her mother says dear hows ur day? She says quite fine. Her father says it had to be. As u worked a hard to become doctor. She says i will go and change. She goes. Madhvi(her mother) says to mohit(anus father) sometimes i fear. If anu gets know about the truth then? He says dont worry. Nothing will happen.

    In rishikesh mala(radhikas mother) saying to dilip(radhikas father) i am her mother. I dont belive that radhika is dead. Even looking to her dead body it was impossible to recognise her. Her face was fully destroyed. Dilip says but the truth is our daughter is dead.

    It is the magazine office ”diva” sheraya says today my daughter is successful because of u tiya. Tiya says thank u mam. Its my pleasure. Shreya says if u hadnot done that it would be possible.

    • abi on

      wow…NATASHA….superb yaa……very nice story with some suspenses ……

      u really rocked….by ur story…..i m shocking that becoz…..during internship…..nothing intresting……boring only.:-(..u know,,,……..
      i don’t have words to describe abt the wards…….only scoldings r there in wards…..like anu got from arjun in ur story…..(but arjun s handsome…..in real none of the doctors…..like him…all they know ,is ” HOW TO SCOLD AND SCARE STUDENTS “….) anyway leave it…!!!….but u made our proffession has somthing interesting by ur story…..i m eagerly waitng for ur next episode…so pls continue to update…….MISS U BUDDY ……i ll catch u later bye wwith lots of friendship

    • Natasha on

      Abi i just tried to show the real life of doctors. I really respect this profession. I think it is a very difficult job for the students but if they have real friends then this profession also become a great one.

    • Deepa on

      Wow natasha

      story s getting interesting day by day…..i lika t pairing very much dr….i hope there s lot of fights love emotion are on t way….keep continuing dr….waiting for next part yaar.tc

    • Shub on

      Natasha, very interesting. Keep writing. It is very interesting to read about doctor profession stories. Look forward to ur next episode.

  603. Samiha on

    Wow Natasha! Great job!! I like this story very much ’cause my mom and dad both are doctors and I go to their workplace a lot… I see the students and interns having different talks and thoughts. And your story seems so real…

  604. Riya on

    Dear commentators, know the value of MANMARZIYAN.
    1-Jab dil kisi ke upar ajay,par dil ki baat juban pe na aye to ek bara apne dil ko Manmarziyan pe chalane ka izazat de ke to dekho, dil ki baat kese juban pe atahai.
    2-zindagi mein kabhi kabhi esa mood ajata hai ki hum aage jane ke liye soch bhi nehin sakte aur piche lootne ka himmat hamare paas nehin hota hai, tabhee ek bara dimag se sochna band karke dil se sochna suru kar denge to ek neya umeed ke raste mil jayega,kyunki agar hum sare pabandi ko dil ke upar se hata denge to dil apne marzi pe chalna suru karega, yehi to hai Manmarziyan.
    3-jab koi apna dhokha deta hai to dil tutt jata hai, tute huwe dil ke sath chalna bohot muskil hotahai. tabhi tute huwe dil ko samet ne ka ek rasta hai,pichle batao ko bhulakar dil ki dikhai huwi raste pe chola
    dekho subkuch kese thhik ho jatahai.

    Toh friends hum apne dil ko atleast ek bara Manmarziyan pe chalney ka moka dena chahiye.
    My dear ARJUN,RADHIKA,SAM,NILL
    really tumsab ne jindagi me chalney ke liye ek neya rasta dikh diya…..

    ..?????

    • abi on

      i think,ur thouths right only,…….!!!!still i didnt understand anything….(I don’t know hindi)…..sry….but i know ur talent….

    • Savera on

      Hiiiii Riya,
      totally agreed, by your thought,
      life is always compared with the River,which always flows,if we try to block its path,she discovers new path always, nothing can block its way. She always follow her Manmarziyan.

      JEEVAN KI YE BAGIYAN AISI
      JITANE KAANTEIN PHOOL BHI UTNE
      DAMAN MEI KHUD AA JAYENGE
      JINKI TARAF TU HAATH PASAARE

      EK ANDHERA LAKH SITAAREIN
      EK NIRASHA LAKH SAHAAREIN
      NADAAN HAI WO ,
      JO JEEVAN SE HAARE

    • kfar on

      Riyaaaa oh yaaar kitna acha likha tumne, i loveeed it.
      Before too in my life I never felt sure about wrting, ke no it’s not right posting stories and all but I told myself heck it all and did what my heart said and that is Man ki marzi..

      love it yaar, dilki baat boldi..:D

  605. anu on

    @sara will try to post on fb too… thanq so much for liking DYM 2..

    @Shub : thanq so much for comments buddy. i am not a healer , but i was trying my best to make all my frens smile.. i got many frens here and on fb after creating a page, many have been commenting and liking our posts..

    stay connected on fb as well guys..

    http://www.facebook.com/DYMTELLYfriends.999

    @renu : we were missing u buddy. do well with ur studies. all the best.

    @thena : awesome dear. loved your story. if possible post ur story on fb page too…

    @farha : missing ur story.. come fast buddy..update soon.. miss u 🙁

    @mandy : missing u too buddy. u r not coming online often.

    @mitty : thanx for the post about star plus’ raking. hahahahaha felt happy after reading it..

    @natasha @ anaya : update ur story soon,loved it.

    @savera : thanq so much. u said it impressed u a lot and u were thinking,that means a lot to me…

    @zara,@dil and evry one on this page thanq so much again for the comments.. a big hug to all of u.. love u loads ♥♥♥♥♥

    suggestions to ur fren are always welcomed and i would rcv it whole heartedly.. thanq once again..

  606. mitty on

    @ yes thena thz is the first time sp is going down…They deserves it coz they treated mmz fans like beggers. ….

  607. Savera on

    Hey Natasha Hiiii,
    What a splendid work. I am liking the story , its suspense …
    Some guessing is going in my mind, but I want to go with the flow of your imagination.
    Give the name to ur stry n also epi no. So anyone who joins later, can connect to the story in a proper way. Just a suggestion, if you like
    thank you for writing this for us. waiting for the next interesting epi.
    post it soon. bye bye…. once again keep dreaming …. n keep writing.

  608. dipika on

    Riya nice thought… We have to walk on our manmarjiyan which leads to happiness…
    Superb dear…thanks for sharing ths beautiful thought with us….

  609. Tanya on

    Hi everyone!I am a silent reader of mmz in telly updates since it started.I have read comments and I couldn’t stop myself from commenting how brillantly you all write like i like reading sections of kfar,natasha,anu,thena.Thanks to tellyupdates.

  610. Riys on

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  611. Asha alam . on

    Radhika and Arjun are best couple.and Samander singh and her idiot are best couple.Radhika u r soo sweet.I love u soo0 much and arjun too.
    Love is a thing which happaned in a moment and doesn’t know how to forget from one’s heart.

    Wish all the members of man-marziyaan a best and happy life.Specially Radhikha,Arjun,Sam and Neil.Love u all soøo much.

    And wish to see u all again.

    GoØD BýE…

  612. jayaru on

    guys there is a poll in TELLYEXPRESS web site.vote 4 MONICA and AHAM 4 popular actress and actor.currently monica IN 1ST place and AHAM in 2nd place.

  613. jayaru on

    hey THENA i really like imaginations about future episodes,plz update sooooooon.and ANU i really like ur stories too.all the best guys.RIYA what an explanation yaar,i really miss ARDHIKA sooooooo much.i heard that our sweet MONICA is not well.i feel very sorry 4 her.

  614. Dais on

    This must the first serial jiski itni zyada fan following hone ke baad bhi off air ho gaya just bcoz of star plus hate u sp
    And I love this DYM2 keep posting guyz

  615. ☆Twinkle05★ on

    Yahooooooo Star plus go down colours become first position i am really happy STAR PLUS DESERVE THIS 🙁 🙂 🙂

  616. anu on

    Annie where are u?? u r not visiting this page,missing ur comments dude 🙁 🙁 🙁 …. kfar we are eagerly waiting for u story update buddy… come soon.

  617. Samiha on

    @kfar: Girl, it’s enough now. You didn’t visit for almost 2 days now! What’s the matter?? Now when you come, you’re gonna have to pay your fine… You will update 10 parts of your story!!

    Seriously yaar, where are you??? Missing you and your stories terribly…

  620. Mandy on

    Hey anu sorry yaar late hogayi I was sleepin bcoz raat ko 3:00 ko soyi raat ko hope u understand n I missed u seethart !!

    Hey thena ireena dipika samiha mitty natasha riya savera deepa abi jayaru farha renu !!!!!!!

    If I missed eni1s name pls jus tell me I ll add dont 4get !!

    Natasha d story was very lik real life of how docs work in hsptal so its worth it but if u don’t mind pls can u tell me d name of d story n pls write d epi no so dat ppl wont get confused plsssss na !!

    Hope I dinn hurt u if I did pls let me no ok !!!

  621. Mandy on

    Riya yaar jus read dat pov it was wat rvry1 thinks of so it was very brilliant !!

    N hey wo puree serial ke naam ftom 2000 till now was very senti hogayi bcoz some of dem were my favrte n tumne yaad dilladiya but now thanx 4 dat I love u yaar 4 dat !!!♡♥♥

  623. anaya on

    Hoton Pe Dabi Dil Ki Ankahi Batein
    Episode 2:
    It’s sunrise . Scene now has Vardamaan college gate and Ansh’s jeep with 3 MA enters college . Some class are filled with students whereas, some have just 4-5 lstudents. Some couples ped k neeche gutargoo kar rahe he aur some students canteen me guppe ladaa rahe he(chatting). Our 3 MA are also enjoying . Today Jagat is narrating one of his stories to his friends. “….Jhat se some1 from behind caught anushkaa’s neck and….”. Parth: “Yaar , u pls continue . I will come ” Parth is walking towards washroom. On the way, he hears some one coughing. When he is just about to cross lab, the coughing became severe as if someone was breathless…. He ran. Inside,1 ladki(Our Sana), was trying to get rid of the fumes that was surrounding her and trying hard to breathe. Parth rushed and took the test tube from Sana and threw it in the sink.He turns on the pipe. Fumes lessen out within a few minutes.As soon as coughing stops, Sana looks at Parth and asks: “who told u to throw away that test tube?” Parth is shocked. “What! I helped u out and this is what I get back?!!” Sana: ”Did I ask u for help?. Then?”. Parth looks annoyed-“ya, right! I definitely should be slapped for having tried to help out a person in trouble. Dekha hi nahi ki wo insaan he ya koi sadiyal padhaakoo bhootni. Sorry.”. Sana is wide eyed and her mouth flung open!!! She thinks ” how dare he call me bhootni?” But, before she could say something, Parth was out of sight. Just then, Sana remembers something and with her palm on her forehead she stood watching the test tube n the sink with a sad expression.
    Meanwhile, after some time Parth joins his friends. His friends notice that he is upset .
    Ansh : ” Kya hua Parth?”
    Parth: “Kuch nahi yaar. Bhalayi ka to zamaana hi nahi raha. 4get it. Chalo Jagat kahani kaha pahuchi? Aage sunao”. They all leave the topic n proceed with the story.
    There, Sana straight away goes to Reeva and Panchi. She was very angry.
    Reeva:” Kya hua Sana?”
    Sana: “ Meri pure din ki mehnat ek ullu ke patthe ne aake kharaab kar di. Now, how will I complete everything by day after tomorrow? I didn’t even note down the work progress. ;( ”. Panchi understood the situation and suddenly handles it.
    Panchi: “Don’t worry Sana. Hum he na. Hamara to abhi adha kaam ho gaya he. You complete the lab work once again. By then, we will complete our work and enter all data into the record and then we will handle your record work too.Right Reeva?
    Reeva:”ha” .
    Panchi:”Theek he? Ab khush?”
    Sana smiles with tears still in her eyes. She is overwhelmed. They come together n have a group hug. BG ‘‘Saath hum jo chale, bann gaye kaafile… Aur koi hamein ab mile naa mile,Mauj hai roz hai, Roke se bhi naa ye rukte kabhi silsile…’
    ‘After 2 days’ is displayed on the screen and in the chemistry class, all submit their works, even our Sana , with the help of her 2 best buddies.Pause.
    Precap: A study tour is being planned and the leader from chemistry n physics batches are about to go get sanction from the Principal.

  626. anaya on

    Hey all. I am awaiting your comments. If it is ok I will continue with the next part or I will stop this here itself. Please feel free to tell me your feedbacks

    • Deepa on

      Hi anaya…

      Ur story s very interesting….am enjoyong alot dr…..i hope parth and sana vll paird up in future….eagerly waiting for their tour…..hope some bitter fights continues between them……keep going yaar…..waiting for next part to b continued….tc ma

  627. Thena on

    hi al my deariessssss………..

    Ohhhh!!!!!! 2dy wsnt a gud day 2 me….engaged wid loads of work….said tat ll cum here soon bt cudnt keep my promise buddies…i hate tis me yaar…. pls mujhe maf karto dearieeesssss….

    ok no mood swing…here is the nxt epi…

    EPISODE 125:

    mala bcame highly strung on arjun’s scream of ‘raaaaaaadhika’….neil & sam pacified hr, assured nt 2 worry tat they wud c on the matter & rushed out of the canteen….

    NESAM reachd the spot in agitation…..sam’s eyes widened,hr hands were on hr open mouth….

    arjun stood erected thr…hs legs wer kept wide apart,lips tightened…..eyes,face wer al red….hs arms carryin an unconscious radz…hr hands hung down….he passd an aggrieved stare 2 the cheapo standin oppo….he cudnt c hs face as he ws showin hs back….

    neil sprinted 2 arjun,borrowd radz 4m hm & rushed in2 the ward…..sam followd neil aftr collectin radz saree 4m the floor….arjun’s stare ws nvr off 4m tat cheapo….nw he darted 2 hm,clutched hs shoulder & twirled hm wild, b4 the cheapo cud make any move….arjun ws al shocked 2 c tat pervert’s face…omg tat ws saral moron….he ws wild wid dense beard,hs lips threw a smirk….Oh! tat idiot had done a big mistk….arjun’s left hand clutchd hs collar,hs lips shrank & converged….he pummelled hs face terribly wid hs right fist….nw sarl’s face ws al of blood,hs hands pressed arjun’s shoulder in an appeal of release….arjun bcame more aggressive,hs r8 hand went back,hs fist became more tight,hs lips converged more….nw hs fist pointed straight at saral’s mouth….b4 he hit ,neil clasped hs elbow bend 4m back…saral scampered 4m thr while arjun dealt wid neil….neil askd arjun 2 leave tat milksop & tuk hm away 4m thr….

    BIRDSONG:

    it ws the conference hall…..Piyali gave an instruction 2 the employees on note of a new contract…..tejh,zubin,kritika & al employees wer seated in circle….she asked evry1 2 cum up wid a new idea 4 the promotion of ‘GUESS seductive home’,a perfume… they were instructed 2 come in formals 4 the nxt day as the head PRIYA MEHRA ws an etiquette & so impressin hr ws of paramount importance….

    HOSPITAL:

    arjun,mala & nesam wer waitin outside the room…doc came out,said tat sudden anxiety left hr fainted & hr consciousness wud b retrieved in an hour…..he gave the prescription sheet 2 arjun, patted hs shoulder & left…..neil seized the sheet 4m arjun & askd hm 2 go in…arjun nodded in yep….

    radz ws lyin in bed,covered wid white bedsheet,hr r8 hand ws injected 4 glucose supply….arjun opened the door & came in wid a sedate move….he stood bside hr,hs eyes filled wid tears…thr wer lesions seen on hr elbow & toes….he kissd hr 4head,hs hands holdin hr cheeks,hs tears fell on hr face….he tuk a seat in the chair bside,rested hs head on hr neck’s crook,hs left arm wrappin hr waist..he ws so still,.the moment ws paused…SILENCE…

    END of epi 125….leave ur feedback buddies….

    • Deepa on

      Oh my dr thena,,,,

      was waiting for ur story since morning….tat was amazing episode dr…..todays epi s full of emotion yaar….i hate tat idiot saral….arjun should hav killed him….i loved neil sam arjun radika part,,,eagerly waiting for mumbai romance…….keep going yaar….asusual u rock……love lots…tc

    • Thena on

      deepa dear…..thank u soooooooo much yaar……

      hahaha ya tat saral ws idiotic…..

      mumbai is soon cumin buddy….cool my dear…..

    • Thena on

      oh ireena dear….thank u 4 ur suggestion….

      glad tat u likd priya’s entry..actu it ws cos of u…hahaha

      & ur cmmnts on sp trp…oh i laghed out yaar…s v ll nt allo its trp 2 rise….yipeeeeeeeee

    • Samiha on

      Nice episode dear, I had a feeling the cheapo would be Saral. And thanks a lot for entering Tejh, Kritika, Zubein… Keep it up…

    • Thena on

      hey samiha i wonder hw did u guess it dear…..wow great yaar…m happy too….

      thank u sooooo much 4 likin tej,zub & kri entry…..

      keep guessin & leave ur cmmnts buddy….

  628. kfar on

    Heyyyyy, I’m here thank god, finally, sorry I couldn’t come here before, because as usual life happened. So, about the story, let’s twist it a little, I want to write a story to the hot headed guy ‘Viren’. Let’s move the story to say two weeks before to the fight(if u remember) i:e Arjun and Viren’s fight.

    Chapter-3 ( Unknown to each other, but closer than they know)

    Jasmine perched her hipster glasses up her nose, they keep sliding down which irritated her to no end. She was in the Industrial Management class, listening and noting down, the points of ‘How to handle crisis in industry’. Just then, her iPhone in the back pocket if her jeans vibrated. She took it out and put it under the table. It was the message from Radhika.

    “Hey, I couldn’t make it for library work today. Please, can you fill in. I will make it up to you, Jazz, I Promise” The message read.

    A huge blossoming smile widened her lips. Yay! The whole evening at the library. It was a better than going to her lonely house and lonely room.

    It was now clear that Jasmine liked the library, actually love was a better word. Books, she loved to lose herself in the fascination of classics, adventure, mystery and lot of those mesmersing pages.

    It was as if she was in the stories, playing a character herself. Say, it maybe, she dare assume herself as the lead character Jane from the novel Jane Eyre. She felt herself living in the place Thornfiled Hall. Her accounters with the owner of the place ‘Mr. Rochester’.

    Jasmine sighed, there were plays going on in the college too, and to her delight one particular was on the novel ‘Jane Eyre’, and the Arts block students were looking for leads for ‘Jane’ and ‘Mr. Rochester’. Oh, if she could only dare to audition for the role of ‘Jane’, it would be a dream but alas! It’s her parents. She didn’t trust them to stay at one place, they always on the move.

    Jamine’s mother was a fashionista, her father was a businessman. They were both. They had elegant parties at their luxurious house. Yes, it’s a house, not a home and it never will be, because her parents never stay in it. They had always left her alone. In the big. With a platinum credit card. But now that Jasmine was twenty, she stopped caring long ago, though their absence made her feel inferior, more hesitant and less confident. It was apermanent damage. She cannot speak with stuttering or stumbling. That lead to a thought, that her parents resents her existence, which was obviously not a good thought.

    In Uni too she had no friends, she was fine with it, as making friends and connecting emotionally then moving far away from them would only hurt her more. It was better that she was a loner. But, from all this sad story, she liked Radhika and her group of friends. She was the one who talked to her first when Jasmine arrived as a new student. Her wide engaging smile drained out Jasmine’s tensed frayed emotions.

    But, she only talked a little to Radhika, afraid that everything will mess up. They met often in the library. Jasmine had offered to co-work with her in the library and to her utter delight the former accepted it.

    “Can we know, Ms.Mathur, about what you are smiling about?” Mr. Reeves, the subject Professor’s stern voice wiped out her smile completely.

    Jasmine hurriedly got up from her seat and fumbled with words.

    She peaked a glance at the professor and saw that he was looking at her with deepened annoyance written all over her face.

    His right hand was on the hips and the left had a white chalk, he was peering up three rows of benches.

    Jasmine gulped hard, all fifty classmates of hers were looking at her with interest. It was a break from mundane for them, great, just shoot her down now someone.

    “Ah…I…” She stuttered.

    That’s when the professor’s face reddened, his eyes fumed up, blazinf her with angered fire, his chest rose up and down, the grey hair stood up more sterner for a minute, Jasmine wondered if he was having a heart attack?

    “Out my class!” He raised his angered voice a pitch higher, and pointed his chalk held hand towards the door.

    Ohakay, alright, jeeez, she felt sorry for his wife and children. Poor souls must be patient with his blood pressure. Jasmine put the notebook in the bag, strapped it on her shoudler and hurried out of the class…

    Great! What utter humiliation, her face burned up.

    Cursing heavily she walked towards the lockers. Next class was in twenty five minutes. What does she do till then? Roam around like a lost soul, her mind whispered sarcastically, and Jasmine irritated told it to shut the hell up.

    Great, now she was arguing with her mind. Can she get any ‘loser’ than this.

    Just as she put her bag in the locker, a great commotion jerked up her attention, the aisle opposite to the locker had lot of sudents gathered around.

    What was happening there?

    Jasmine was 5’4, she couldn’t see thing with the tall students stood so close together, so she pushed way towards the interest of everyone’s attention.

    She got towards the noise and her eyes widened and her mouth gasped open. Was she seeing a live MMA fight or what?

    Their two students. One was larger,buff and meaner, and the other was tall and leaner. Both of them were punching each other to death. The fights wwre kind of usual since she joined ‘Rosemary Grounds’. That was not what drew her attention.

    Her eyes stayed to one guy, only. His face, sweaty, covered in blood, was contracted

    • Deepa on

      Wow,,,kfar i was waiting for ur story since 2dys…..nw am happy dr…..keep continuing dude…ur story means alot to me….dont give break try to update it daily yaar….8-)

  629. kfar on

    with such hatred that pulled away her eyes in fright and put them on his rough hands. Crack.Smack.Jerk, the other guy god help him why he got into a fight with the ‘hulk’ supreme, but was getting rattled up. Jasmine cringed when the buff guy’s fist punched in the ribs of the leaner guys and she heard with hair raising on her skin ten audible cracks. That’s the breaking of the leaner guy’s bones. Shit! Was nobody going to help?

    She looked around in helplessness, crap, yes nobody is going to help, she concluded.

    So, she jumped in.

    “Hey, stop, you too.” She said, well nothing happened, she looked around , to see if her voice was of any affect but it was like as if a scream of an ant in an elephant trampling.

    She took a deep breath, walked up to the buff guy, moved more closer and held his bicep firmly. This was in slow motion, but it happened so fast, she didn’t even realise when she had crossed the space between her and the fight scene.

    What the…..

    Jasmine’s body froze in a tight lock, her facefrozen too, her widened and half gulped breath hung heavy on hand which had it’s painful grip on the buff guy’s arm.

    She realized it was not buff but it had enough power to punch out her breath, make her dead, and also burry her dead body deep in the centre of the Uni ground. A whimper stuck in her throat imagining it. How was she capable of spending a life less life to a actual dead life in matter only minutes. Seems, like the stars in heaves hate her to the core.

    With slow shivering creeping over her body, Jasmine very reluctanty, unwantingly, oh so more slowly she moved her gaze from the buff arm, to an incredibly more worked out muslced shoulder. The lump in her throat became in a boulder. The incredibly worked out muscled arm attached to a more sinuous, toned very angry viened neck. Her lips quickwred in fright. The angry veined neck gave way to more very dangerous angry working of a jaw. Her hands tightened on the sweaty flexing shirt covered arm in a terrified grip. Her eyes strayed up more and settled on a long aristrocratic flaring nose. God in heavens, the guy was not angry, he was burning. Jasmine’s incredibly widened, fearful, frantic, terrified green eyes settled on a pair of deep coffee brown seriously pissed off eyes.

    The caught up boulder of deep inhaled breath gulped down, giving her a heart skip. She could hear the thundering of her heart through her ears and out in the open. She feared the guy would rip it out if he knew how frightened she was.

    “Y…y..y..you..ar are k..ki..killing..h…hi..him

    • Shub on

      Farha ur writing is too good. I loved that sentence” was he having a heart attack”. Also the thought of the going to be buried in thd univ ground. I was laughing while reading. Ur flow I’d fantastic!!! It was worth the wait.

    • kfar on

      Thankssssss so much Deepa and Shub , ure and ireena means a lot ur comments yaar missed ya all…big warmmm hug 😀

    • Thena on

      hey farha…b4 gonna ur story, m vry happy tat u came here my dear buddy….seems lik u heard my scream..hahaha….oh i missd my bud badly…..

      and ur story….no words….such a talent in articulatin words dear….pls make it a novel & i ll b the 1st 1 2 buy it….tight hug dear….loads of luv….

  630. Deepa on

    Hi anaya…

    Ur story s very interesting….am enjoyong alot dr…..i hope parth and sana vll paird up in future….eagerly waiting for their tour…..hope some bitter fights continues between them……keep going yaar…..waiting for next part to b continued….tc ma

  632. anaya on

    Heyyy farha….finally!!! Where were you????
    Thanx 4 coming back. 🙂 n pls …..awaiting the next episode eagerly…then a…..its saral!!didn’t expect that though

    • Thena on

      hey anaya s it ws saral dear…..

      don worry yaar…our chasni is 5n…hw cud arjun leave hr unwell buddy

      thank u sooooo much 4 ur response dear….

      i lik ur story verrrrrrrrry much…pls cont dear…waitin…

    • anu on

      she didnt enter in DYM show. ryt??? have arjun said he has sister priya mehra in any episode of DYM??

    • Deepa on

      No yaar…bt i raed in wiki tat arjun had a younger sis her name s priya mehra…bt b4 her entry….sp ate our show;(

    • Thena on

      hi anu dear….deepa ws r8 yaar….

      actually priya ws shown in mmz but it a planned 1 bt cvs cudnt show due 2 time constraints dear…..

      n post ur nxt epi soon….can feel diff atmosphere in urs & tats realllllly cool buddy

    • Thena on

      ooops so many mistks….hi anu priya wsnt shown in mmz…it ws a planned 1 bt cvs cudnt show it yaar….

  635. Deepa on

    Renu,,,,,wru yaar,,,,,hope ur busy in ur stidies…..bt here many of us are eagerly waiting for ur unconditional thoughts yaar….hope u give us soon yaar…till then waiting…bt b soon yaar

  636. kfar on

    She stuttered at every word, her tongue felt heavy, and she wondered if the glaring daggers guy even heard it, if he did hear, would he burry her dead body here or out of the campus? it was his decision , based on the various black looks he was giving, Jasmine translated all to one…which was ‘I WILL KILL YOU RIGHT NOW FOR INTERRUPTING MY FIGHT’ and which also her thundering mind to conclude that he would go for option one, that is kill and burry her here deep in the ground of the lockers, which also made her conclude he wouldn’t waste his anger on that too but shook her off his shoulder like a fly and she would land far away face down hard on the ground with broken equal broken ribs, broken nose and broken neck as just equal to the poor lean guy.

    But all these bewilderingly frightened morbid thoughts came to a halt when she saw the guy’s coffee swirling eyes brew a light hue colour. With a gasp of breath, she saw the lightened angerless eyes soften his brazen feautres, the angry scowl diminished slowly, quirking up his cheek muscles and lips in a whisper of amused expression, it bizzared her out. Her hand loosened on his arm, but when the quirk of lips of turned into a half unseeing smile her hand slipped altogether as her body fell off, the smile, easy going, spark flying, happy pigeons singing, oh well if the bird sing, made her lips to quiver up too. They were smiling up at each other, totally impropriate, in the middle of a fight, he was not frightening, she was not hesitant, it made the world disappear from around them.

  637. dipika on

    Hey @ Mandy hi thanks for mentioning dear…hw r u….
    @Thena epi was really emotional one…cant see. radhu n arjun like ths….thts stupid saral will pay for ths our arjun will nt let hm go mch easily….
    @ kfar whr were u dear…missed ur story….nice chapter….
    @ anaya superb dear….
    hey all i read on fb that batamiz dil is also going off air in november….

    • Deepa on

      Let them watever they want deepika…..one day sp channel itself vll go off air……its going to happen very soon

    • Thena on

      hi dipika….s arjun ll nt leave saral easily yaar….

      thank u soooo much 4 leavin ur cmmnt & suggestion buddy

    • anaya on

      Thank u thena… Meri pehli koshish he. Meri kahani ki tarah. Dil me bohot he. Par likhna aasaan kaam nhi he na. Islie try karne ki himmat nhi thi

  638. kfar on

    just then a fist came flying and it landed on the buff guy’s left cheek bone in a hard bone crunching hit, which made his head flew to the side a little and which made her gasp as her hands went to her mouth, her eyes widened in fright and hurt, just then the buff spit out the blood which made her cringe more.

    His eyes went icy hardened and his stance got more tighter, as his right fist raised up into one hell of a puch and which made the guy drop down as if a dead fly.

    Jasmine then went running no flying with her back to them. She ran so hard even a athlete would be ashamed of her speed……..

  639. Ireena on

    guys,i m really confused.all of u guys writing very well.thena,Natasha,farha,anaya (did I forget anyone) all of ur writings r amazing.but plz keep a name of ur story.
    and one more thing,the page is getting overloaded.sometimes we r missing posts. what to do of it????

  640. saji on

    Hi thena,,

    great gng…full of emotions…cud visualise each n every momrnt..

    entry of priya mehra…new twists waitng for d fans…right..

    • Thena on

      hey saji…its great tat u cud actually visualise dear….means a lot….

      thank u sooooo much buddy…

      keep leavin ur luvly cmmnts dear

  641. Ireena on

    guys,have u heard it??
    SP HAS DECIDED TO TELECAST ALL THE SERIALS IN WEEKENDS TOO.BECAUSE THEY HAVE TOTALLY GONE MAD AFTER LOSING THE FIRST POSITION.
    ha..ha..it’s really funny to watch SP becoming mad due to trp.don’t worry at allllll!!!!how hard u try,we r there to decrease it.MIND IT!!!?????

  642. mitty on

    Renu dear where r u? @thena @kfar @anu @riya @natasha @mandy u guys r amazing. …outstanding talents ????????????

    • Thena on

      mitty thank u sooooooooo much dear….those claps were cute….

      n spgng dwn 4 1st tim….omg am flyin….hapieeeeeeeee

      keep updatin dear

  643. Samiha on

    Hey everubody, CONGRATS ON 1001 COMMENTS!!! The SP people should come here and see this, I feel so happy:D

    • kfar on

      Heyyy anaya thanks dear for reading my story 😀

      Mitty..thanks yaar for likind da story and thanks yaar for providing da email of sp..i had been searching for it.

      Samiha and Ireena Congratularions guys and all for crossing of 1000 cmts 😀

      samiha- Hey down wit sneezes bud hahaha i will update more yaa 😀 im fine though how ru?

      Thena- heyyyyyyyy loved the epi 😀

  644. zara on

    hiiii anaya love todays story.
    I like parth sana lab scene. .. 🙂 🙂 😉 heheee parth call sana sadiyal padakoo bhootni… funny yarrr
    waiting for meeting other two guys with their respective ones. … luv all characters ♡♡♡
    anaya can you plzz post full bg sound. .” saath hum jo chale ban gaye kaafile….aur koi humein ab mile na mile, mauj hai roz hai, roke se bhi ye na rukte silsile….” !!! luuuuvvv this song !!!
    please continue it . waiting for tomorrow’s episode. ..

    • anaya on

      Thank you Zara. I am happy that you are able to connect with the story.
      Uaa.parth did call her so bhootni

  645. Natasha on

    Guys i had never wrote any stories but because of u i started to write. But i am now clueless if i should write it or not. Are u guys really liking it?

    If u r liking my story then pls suggest name for my story.

    • anaya on

      Lv ur story Nat’s…naam…. Bs WO nhi dhund paa rhi…. Creative log yha he…mil jayega. Don wry….. Safed coat air rangeen nazaare. 😉

    • Thena on

      hey natasha…plsssssss cont yaar…

      i cud feel the atmoshere is vry authentic in ur story…..it pulls me a lot dear raellllly….

      keep gng buddy

  646. Mandy on

    Hey guys !!! SORRY I m late in cmntin !!

    Hey Anaya I m a fan yaar ur HPDDKAB is very youthful wich type I love d most n I fil u shud continue bcoz der is another feature dat is ur story is very hilarious !!!???????

    Hey Farha soooooooorrrrrrryyyyyyy I m cmntin late but ur story is faduuuu performance yaar !!??????

    Hey Dipika I m fine n missing u !!!

    Hey thena I m confirmed dat ur very cool in writing epi of mmz end !!!??

    Hey Deepa very happy bcos I got a new friend !! ???

    Hey Anu renu Zara Samiha Mitty missed u guys a lot n love ur n cmnts !! ❤️❤️❤️❤️????????

  647. Mandy on

    Hey Natasha pls yaar u shud cntinu bcoz I m studin medical so want to no doctors life so plsssssss write more !!! ?????????????

  648. Riya on

    Manmarziyan top fans list in tu…
    ®®®®®®®®®®®®®®
    @Renu-Head of the department.
    @kfar- A sharp minded writer.
    @anu-A top level imaginative writer.
    @mitty- superman of the department
    @mandy-Deep thought writer.
    @Thena-Core of the department.
    @Ireena-Just mind blowing …..
    @savera-Amazing talent…..
    @Deepa-fabulous,fabulous,fabulous ……..
    @ Dipika- Monitor of the department
    @ sara -sweet ,sweet,sweet only sweet
    @ Natasha -New comers, but superb..
    @ Riya- mad…………..

  649. Samiha on

    Soooo true, Riya… So true. You have an amazing talent of analysing and expressing your thoughts… Just faboulous dear. Renu should know that she has been selected HEAD OF THE DEPARTMENT. Well done…

  650. Thena on

    EPISODE 126:

    HOSPITAL:

    nesam wer at the medical counter…..sam tuk hr vibratin mobil out….hr screen ws shown ‘MA CALLING……’…she smiled broadly,came aside & attended….she seemed enthusiastic & al smilin….bt hr face lost its delight gradually & hr smile nw turned in2 an anomalous 1….she threw hr gaze at neil in the midst….he ws payin in the cash counter….

    “tomorrow!!!!!!!!!!!!……now!!!!!!!!!!!!!……lekin…..ma…ok ma….luv u tooooo”,sam seemed bewildered……

    BIRD SONG:

    piyali ended hr call & lost in2 thots tat sumthin ws wrong in hrishikesh…..she ws deviated by a door knock….

    “xcusssssssssse me mam….may i cum in?”,manya peeped in2 the room wid a broad smile….the door ws half open,hr hand clutchin the knob…..piyali smild back broadly & nodded in yep….she made a call 2 inform the employees 2 gather in conference hall immediately…..

    all gathered in the conference room…piyali & manya sittin in adjacent….piayaii started tat she had called evry1 2 share 1 happy news….she lukd at manya,hr palm perched on manya’s shoulder & announced tat they had gotten new partner now…….evry1 applauded & wished hr gud luck……piyali nodded & smiled at manya….manya stood up & thanked evry1 wid broad smile……

    HOSPITAL:

    neil came 2 sam while keepin wallet in hs back pocket…….neil read hr face in a moment & askd hr about convo wid piyali…..she said tat a new contract has cum 4 bs (bird song) & partners had 2 attend the official meetin….he lukd clueless & askd hr wat ws the problm wid a teasin grin on hs face…..

    “but the meetin is 2morrow & v ve 2 depart 4 mumbai nw idiiiiiiiiot”,sam clamoured wid hr eyes & arms widened…..

    neil whispered hr ssshhhhh & gave a quick glance at the surroundings….Oh! evry1 ws starin at them…..he dragged hr outside 2 the open space…..neil caught hr indecisiveness & again askd hr the same ques wat ws the prob….nw hs eyes & arms wer widened,hs stare fell straight in2 hrs wid a lil bent in hs body…..he pulled hr close,wrappin hs left arm tight around hr waist,hs r8 on hr cheek & hs 4head rested on hrs…..he assured hr tat he wud clear al mess thr in hospital & planted a much impulsive kisses on both hr cheeks……hs eyes gave a naughty roll,hs lips holdin a cutie cheshire cat grin….sam nodded in yep & hugged hm tight…..neil tightened hs clutch on hr waist,pulled hr more close….sam rested hr head in hs chest & hs palm spread over hr head…..

    END of epi 126….ardhika scenes r cumun dearrriieesssssssss…..scene ll soon shift 2 mumbai…..leave ur feedback….b it +ve r -ve….but pls leave buddieeessssssss

  651. Dil on

    Hi frnds its great to see our ccomments increased more than 1000. Anu as u rqstd i already joind in yr fb page.. Hey guys whts the progress of that signd petition to the director of DYM? Im reading all of yr new stories..grt job guys.. Pls keep continuing.. Good luck. Please keep in touch..

  652. dipika on

    @Riya thanks for fabulous tag dear..U r creative ,cute n lovely poetess n designer dear…..love u….
    @Deepa yup buddy soon sp found out f the list of channels….
    Hey guys CONGRADULATIONS TO ALL FOR CROSSING 1000 COMMENTS!!!

  655. anu on

    The episode starts with Arjun&radhika in birdsong and waiting for sam&neil. They too reach birdsong but few minutes late. All the four goes to canteen to have breakfast. They discuss about the places they marked and back to arjun’s cabin. They finalize 3locations at last and sam&neil fight over it. Meanwhile birju brings coffee for them and smiles seeing them fighting. Arjun&radhika likes one place and sam likes other one and neil loves another one. AR hold their heads seeing NS fighting.

    Scene shifts to london, its morning Nandini wakes up and goes to the injured kid. She caresses him and sits thinking. FB shows arjun and nandini taking care of each other. Her eyes get wet due to the sorrow & pain as she was very far from their hearts. The boy gets up and sees nandini infront of him crying. He asks her y is she crying and wipes her tears. She answers u were too small and you had an injury, how wil you go to school now. The boy answers Thats not a problem, i know u’ll teach me and winks smiling. Nandini hugs him and she remembers arjun and cries missing him a lot. An elderly couple(not too old,age could be around 50yrs) calls nandini beti and they were shown from back.

    Ankush leaves to his college with frens and they attend a seminar. After the seminar all enjoy chating in the classroom along with other frens. Classes were dismissed for that day asking them to prepare for cultural activities for freshers party a few days later.

    Asusual neil compromises after fighting. Meanwhile, piyali comes to them and asks is evrythng ready for the shoot. They say yes and they all discuss. After finalising the location they all plan to leave tomorrow early morning. So they call up the direction team and asks them to meet in conference hall. They reach and a meeting goes on showing the pics of the location and arjun giving presentation. Later they were askd to start at early morning for shoot. All the four go to arjun’s cabin and they plan to go out for shopping in the evng. So they finished the work fast and the duo couples leave for shopping after having lunch.

    Nandini meets some donors for the education of children and they ask her to give quotation tomorrow. She says sure and fixes meeting at 10am.

    NS & AR at shopping mall roaming here and there and trying some dresses. Finally they complete shopping and plans to go to beach. @beach neil&arjun folds their pants up and all the four take a selfie with sunset behing them (just imagine how cute and romantic it was,,,,,,,,, ufffuuuuuu fell in love). Neil moves bit forward to get drenched in the water. He later pulls sam. They both enjoying playing and teasing eachother. AR were lost in their thoughts looking at eachother. Neil acts naughty and throws water on them. They comes to senses and both blushes. Neil pulls arjun, arjun holds radhika’s hand. AR both get drenched in the water.. they all leave for the home after much enjoyment.

    PRECAP : AR & SM gets ready & are about to leave in car. Nandini giving presentation.

  656. Riya on

    ?????????????
    HAPPY TEACHERS DAYT-Talent
    E-Education
    A-Attitude
    C-Character
    H-Harmony
    E-Efficient
    R-Relation

  657. Nisha on

    I feel like screaming “hey u sp people cm nd c the fan following of our most dearest serial mmz”
    I feel like taking a screenshot of our comments nd send it to sp.they must regret fr wht they hv done…..
    Today it is at 2nd position, if it continues the same, the day s nt too far tht it vanishes frm the trp chart itself…
    I may forgive sp on only one condition tht it vl cm up with mmz
    @all…congrats fr mmz 1000+ Comments

  658. Deepa on

    Wow anu……i enjoyed todays episode alot…..especially t beach scene….how romantic it was yaar….hope nandhini bcome positive…..waiting for next epi

  659. renu on

    hiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii friends

    Sorry 4 the late guys,…due 2 my studies,i cant comment here 4m yday,..kindly bear with me,….Further my data card also needs recharging,…now ly i came online n happy 2 see our comments crossed 1000,..yippie,……come on u all rocking guys,…

    2day i gonna say sth about our chasni n u all knew Radhika is my favorite character of mmz,…though i emphasize more about arjun,but i love radhika above all the characters in this show,…Cox i felt myself connected with radhika in so many situations in my real life,…tat’s the reason radhika’s character attracted me more than others,…k lemme review sth about our sweet Radhika mishra aka chasni,choti,panoti,raaste ka pattar,Mrs.Arjun mehra,…..

    RADHIKA

    A Girl of aspiration,altruism,naivety,…. Radz who will do anything for her loved ones i.e.,for her family & friends,…She will not back out of the things she engaged unless n untill she complete it fully despite the hurdles coming her way 2 stop her mission of achieving it,…She never cares about anything which affects her in personal when it comes 2 her family n friendship,….She is the proper definition of Being selfless 2 her beloved ones,…At the same time,she is too naive when compared 2 others,…She never see beyond the goodness in others which leds 2 her in trouble voluntarily at most,…

    She is fun loving person & will always try 2 clear the air in the ppl surrounding her by her antics n philosophy,…even sometimes end up by being hurt 2 bring light in other’s darkness by fading her light like candle,…She ll 4got the wounds given by her loved ones sooner as she ll ly b hurt by the fact that she was unable 2 save them 4m the destruction b4 her eyes,…Her definition of friendship itself differs 4m others as she ll b a protective shield to her friends rather than being a supporter 2 her friends in her life,….

    She identified her dreams ly when sam entered her life as a friend & her words gave a big strength 2 achieve her dreams of being a writter & also gave guts 2 live in it,..She dinn wanna marry some1 b4 living her dreams but at the same time she cant go against her parent’s wish 2 fulfill her wish,…That’s the reason she engaged 2 saral b4 landing up in mumbai,…Though radhika bcame friend of Sam n Neil,but it takes time 4 her 2 understand their craziness & she loved Sam n understood that sam’s past hurts her 2 move on in her life & radhika cleared all the mess in her life n succeeded in bringing back the light in sam’s life as her priority changes infront of sam,…

    She loves sam as her bestie n she never let any wounds 2 reach sam infront of her eyes,…this is the time Destiny makes Arjun to enter her life through the bridge SAM which connecting her 2 him,…Radz dinn ve any sort of feelings about arjun as she dinn like his rude jerk attitude but she tolerated his presence cox of the fact her bestie loves him,…But in her subconscious mind she found sth fishy about arjun within their few encounters,…She started digging his innerself 2 find his real face behind his facade 2 save her friend 4m being hurt again in her life,….

    By her unique quality n her spunky nature,she followed arjun despite his warnings,manhandlings,threatening,rude behavior,taunts,insulting,… 2 get answer 4 her doubts n tried 2 find his deep innerself which he hiding it 4 a longer time,…His proximity dinn affect her cox wen she concentrated in her mission, nothing ll distract her 4m her path,…

    She is too naive in understanding Arjun’s proximity at times as her womenliness inside her been awakened by arjun makes her perplexed n affected which she fails 2 understand,…She considered arjun’s inclination 2wards her as his goodness in him & at one stage of her life she started trusting arjun above all including her friends,..She never discussed anything about arjun with her friends b4 confronting him with some solid proof of her doubt on him,…

    She tolerated Saral’s misbehavior 4 her parents n she even felt arjun’s comfortness unknowingly,…She s too ignorant wen it comes to arjun’s intimacy n his inner feelings 4 her as which Saral n nandhini identified sooner,…She never felt irritating by arjun’s touch but saral’s touch hurted her n irritated her the most,…

    Her life was hanged btw 2 loved ones,…one is SAM,her bestie n other is Arjun,whom she trusts,…Even wen her bestie humiliated her believing some craps,she never backout 4m saving her n she has no way 2 back out leading 2 marry arjun accidently,…She never thot of marrying him as she just wanna change him 2 a good person 4 her friend but irony s he bcame her’s instead of her bestie’s,…She does some stupid things 2 save her friend by putting her dignity & self respect in stake,…

    Gradually her feelings 4 arjun transformed 4m goodness in him to LOVE which she dinn realize by the fear of her status 2 be Mrs.Arjun mehra n courage to make her Bestie’s love as her’s,…She felt selfish 2 love Arjun n she never ever tried 2 understand arjun’s feelings 4 her as she herself bewildered by her grown up feelings 4 her husband after marriage,…She understands his every move n his every thots but she was poor in understanding his inklings 2wards her,…

    On trying 2 save her friend 4m a mystery man,she started feeling 4 him after understanding his child craving 4 love nature,…Hence she just set things right in his life by clearing all the air n left him after completing her 2 misions,…one being saving sam 4m revenge n other being saving arjun 4m avenge,…

    Her life is incomplete without arjun as he is the one who can bring her antics out of her innerself n protect her 4m her stupidity 2 save her friends by putting herself in danger,…he knew her every move like her as they both r synchronized couple,..He is the match stick 2 her candle n her light ll b lighten ly by him,….

    I wanna write more but stopping here n ill continue with Nesam sooner,… take care friends,…

    • Deepa on

      Renu missed u alot dr….am happy that u came back with beautiful explanation abt our chubby chasni…enjoyed alot dr…try to post it daily dr…..ur always rocking yaar….kepp rocking…..waiting for our nesam….love alot…a tight hug for u

  660. Deepa on

    Hey mandy am too happy tat i got many off u as my friend….love u all buddy….hope our relation continue

  661. Nisha on

    ?I feel like screaming ” hey u sp people cm nd c the fan following of our most dearest serial mmz ”
    I feel like taking the screenshot of our comments nd send it to sp….nd tl them tht if they continue with the same,the day s nt too far away when sp vanishes frm the trp chart itself(atleast nw they r in the second place)…
    @All …congrats on the 1000+ Comments on our favourite show
    Lots of luv mmz
    I may continue to go on with sp only if they cm up with mmz 2…. (as fr nw stopped watching sp frm 29th August 11:01pm

  662. Savera on

    Thena my dear hiiii
    wow yaar,every time I read n become speechless,what do I comment?
    awesome epi, it touched me …moved me. you made me emotinal.
    wish Manmarziyan starts once again , n YOU write the story with d creative writers team of Manmarziyan, I ll enjoy watching it.. inside deep I ll feel proud cause my friend Thena is writing it. Once again keep dreaming…. keep writing……n keep creating. bye bye DARLING.
    God bless you n ur creativity, i am blessed that I am connected to you people.

    • Thena on

      omg……great words sweety….am so touched buddy….

      luv u loads….tight hug deary…..

      keep gvng ur feedback savera dear

  663. renu on

    @riya,….Oh my deary,…u made me Head of the dept,….thank u 4 ur love deary,….m crazy on ur one liners may b ur explanation r ur poems dear,….

    n m ly the mad,..it suits well 4 me na,…….

    @thena,anu:i missed ur updates 4m 123 epi,….so sad,..n now m going 2 read it ,…n ill post my pov after completing it,…n i too wanna write the fill in the blanks of cvs ardhika honeymoon track b4 truth revealed 2 arjun,Next short leap of 15 days which includes ardhika separation,nesam marriage,next truth revealing radz sacrifice n all till love confession,…u started filling the blanks after love confession n anu started after 2 years leap,….but i doubt i can write,….as m a bad writer n now i ve time constraints as i can spend hardly minutes here in tb dear,….

    @mitty,kfar,mandy,dipika,deepa,natasha,n all my friends here( if i missed ur names it doesnt means i missed u all friends),….loved u all friends,…n missed u all here,…but ll try 2 b active here,…

  664. renu on

    hiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii friends

    Sorry 4 the late guys,…due 2 my studies,i cant comment here 4m yday,..kindly bear with me,….Further my data card also needs recharging,…now ly i came online n happy 2 see our comments crossed 1000,..yippie,……come on u all rocking guys,…

    2day i gonna say sth about our chasni n u all knew Radhika is my favorite character of mmz,…though i emphasize more about arjun,but i love radhika above all the characters in this show,…Cox i felt myself connected with radhika in so many situations in my real life,…tat’s the reason radhika’s character attracted me more than others,…k lemme review sth about our sweet Radhika mishra aka chasni,choti,panoti,raaste ka pattar,Mrs.Arjun mehra,…..

    RADHIKA

    A Girl of aspiration,altruism,naivety,…. Radz who will do anything for her loved ones i.e.,for her family & friends,…She will not back out of the things she engaged unless n untill she complete it fully despite the hurdles coming her way 2 stop her mission of achieving it,…She never cares about anything which affects her in personal when it comes 2 her family n friendship,….She is the proper definition of Being selfless 2 her beloved ones,…At the same time,she is too naive when compared 2 others,…She never see beyond the goodness in others which leds 2 her in trouble voluntarily at most,…

    She is fun loving person & will always try 2 clear the air in the ppl surrounding her by her antics n philosophy,…even sometimes end up by being hurt 2 bring light in other’s darkness by fading her light like candle,…She ll 4got the wounds given by her loved ones sooner as she ll ly b hurt by the fact that she was unable 2 save them 4m the destruction b4 her eyes,…Her definition of friendship itself differs 4m others as she ll b a protective shield to her friends rather than being a supporter 2 her friends in her life,….

    She identified her dreams ly when sam entered her life as a friend & her words gave a big strength 2 achieve her dreams of being a writter & also gave guts 2 live in it,..She dinn wanna marry some1 b4 living her dreams but at the same time she cant go against her parent’s wish 2 fulfill her wish,…That’s the reason she engaged 2 saral b4 landing up in mumbai,…Though radhika bcame friend of Sam n Neil,but it takes time 4 her 2 understand their craziness & she loved Sam n understood that sam’s past hurts her 2 move on in her life & radhika cleared all the mess in her life n succeeded in bringing back the light in sam’s life as her priority changes infront of sam,…

    She loves sam as her bestie n she never let any wounds 2 reach sam infront of her eyes,…this is the time Destiny makes Arjun to enter her life through the bridge SAM which connecting her 2 him,…Radz dinn ve any sort of feelings about arjun as she dinn like his rude jerk attitude but she tolerated his presence cox of the fact her bestie loves him,…But in her subconscious mind she found sth fishy about arjun within their few encounters,…She started digging his innerself 2 find his real face behind his facade 2 save her friend 4m being hurt again in her life,….

    By her unique quality n her spunky nature,she followed arjun despite his warnings,manhandlings,threatening,rude behavior,taunts,insulting,… 2 get answer 4 her doubts n tried 2 find his deep innerself which he hiding it 4 a longer time,…His proximity dinn affect her cox wen she concentrated in her mission, nothing ll distract her 4m her path,…

    She is too naive in understanding Arjun’s proximity at times as her womenliness inside her been awakened by arjun makes her perplexed n affected which she fails 2 understand,…She considered arjun’s inclination 2wards her as his goodness in him & at one stage of her life she started trusting arjun above all including her friends,..She never discussed anything about arjun with her friends b4 confronting him with some solid proof of her doubt on him,…

    She tolerated Saral’s misbehavior 4 her parents n she even felt arjun’s comfortness unknowingly,…She s too ignorant wen it comes to arjun’s intimacy n his inner feelings 4 her as which Saral n nandhini identified sooner,…She never felt irritating by arjun’s touch but saral’s touch hurted her n irritated her the most,…

    Her life was hanged btw 2 loved ones,…one is SAM,her bestie n other is Arjun,whom she trusts,…Even wen her bestie humiliated her believing some craps,she never backout 4m saving her n she has no way 2 back out leading 2 marry arjun accidently,…She never thot of marrying him as she just wanna change him 2 a good person 4 her friend but irony s he bcame her’s instead of her bestie’s,…She does some stupid things 2 save her friend by putting her dignity & self respect in stake,…

    Gradually her feelings 4 arjun transformed 4m goodness in him to LOVE which she dinn realize by the fear of her status 2 be Mrs.Arjun mehra n courage to make her Bestie’s love as her’s,…She felt selfish 2 love Arjun n she never ever tried 2 understand arjun’s feelings 4 her as she herself bewildered by her grown up feelings 4 her husband after marriage,…She understands his every move n his every thots but she was poor in understanding his inklings 2wards her,…

    On trying 2 save her friend 4m a mystery man,she started feeling 4 him after understanding his child craving 4 love nature,…Hence she just set things right in his life by clearing all the air n left him after completing her 2 misions,…one being saving sam 4m revenge n other being saving arjun 4m avenge,…

    Her life is incomplete without arjun as he is the one who can bring her antics out of her innerself n protect her 4m her stupidity 2 save her friends by putting herself in danger,…he knew her every move like her as they both r synchronized couple,..He is the match stick 2 her candle n her light ll b lighten ly by him,….

    I wanna write more but stopping here n ill continue with Nesam sooner,…

    • jayaru on

      woow,RENU ,you did a great job yaar,my favourite character also RADHIKA ,she is soooo funny and i love her character very much.i think our MONI is also a very loving girl in real life.keep it up my friend.

    • Thena on

      oh renu dear…..wat shall i say yaar…..

      amazing….amazing……amazing…..

      again i wish creators 2 c tis my dear….

      thank u soooooo much 4 reading my episodes…..pls leave ur suggestions,feedbacks,pov 4 tis friend….waitin here bud…

      n last…..i wonder who in tis world ll tell u tat u write bad…ufffffffff….just start writin ardhika’s honeymoon track,nesam mrg….al r waiting my dear friend….

  665. Savera on

    Hiiiiii Anaya,
    My budding writer of a very interesting story.
    HPDDKAB Epi 2 is nice, I liked it very much, yaar it made me laugh.
    the story is going amazing, dont ever think about stopping it , even in your wildest dream.
    Otherwise we ll b deprived of such a nice story. so continue it my dear with zeal n amaze us with your creativity. bye bye.

    • anaya on

      Thank you savera. I wanted to be sure I am not forcing you to read a Boeing story. The one who writes never knows if its working or not except from your assurance. Thank you

  666. Samiha on

    Ohhhhhhhh!
    Renu! Renu! Renu!
    Such a beauuuutiful POV on my chasni Miss. Radhika Mishra, sorry I mean Mrs. Radhika Mehra….. You took my breath. I was always a fan of yours and after reading this, my heart stopped… How do you do this girl??? Riya did right giving you the title of ‘Head of the Department’…
    I hope you have a promising career and make the best use of your writing talent. God bless….

  667. anu on

    The episode starts with Arjun&radhika in birdsong and waiting for sam&neil. They too reach birdsong but few minutes late. All the four goes to canteen to have breakfast. They discuss about the places they marked and back to arjun’s cabin. They finalize 3locations at last and sam&neil fight over it. Meanwhile birju brings coffee for them and smiles seeing them fighting. Arjun&radhika likes one place and sam likes other one and neil loves another one. AR hold their heads seeing NS fighting.

    Scene shifts to london, its morning Nandini wakes up and goes to the injured kid. She caresses him and sits thinking. FB shows arjun and nandini taking care of each other. Her eyes get wet due to the sorrow & pain as she was very far from their hearts. The boy gets up and sees nandini infront of him crying. He asks her y is she crying and wipes her tears. She answers u were too small and you had an injury, how wil you go to school now. The boy answers Thats not a problem, i know u’ll teach me and winks smiling. Nandini hugs him and she remembers arjun and cries missing him a lot. An elderly couple(not too old,age could be around 50yrs) calls nandini beti and they were shown from back.

    Ankush leaves to his college with frens and they attend a seminar. After the seminar all enjoy chating in the classroom along with other frens. Classes were dismissed for that day asking them to prepare for cultural activities for freshers party a few days later.

    Asusual neil compromises after fighting. Meanwhile, piyali comes to them and asks is evrythng ready for the shoot. They say yes and they all discuss. After finalising the location they all plan to leave tomorrow early morning. So they call up the direction team and asks them to meet in conference hall. They reach and a meeting goes on showing the pics of the location and arjun giving presentation. Later they were askd to start at early morning for shoot. All the four go to arjun’s cabin and they plan to go out for shopping in the evng. So they finished the work fast and the duo couples leave for shopping after having lunch.

    Nandini meets some donors for the education of children and they ask her to give quotation tomorrow. She says sure and fixes meeting at 10am.

    NS & AR at shopping mall roaming here and there and trying some dresses. Finally they complete shopping and plans to go to beach. @beach neil&arjun folds their pants up and all the four take a selfie with sunset behing them (just imagine how cute and romantic it was,,,,,,,,, ufffuuuuuu fell in love). Neil moves bit forward to get drenched in the water. He later pulls sam. They both enjoying playing and teasing eachother. AR were lost in their thoughts looking at eachother. Neil acts naughty and throws water on them. They comes to senses and both blushes. Neil pulls arjun, arjun holds radhika’s hand. AR both get drenched in the water.. they all leave for the home after much enjoyment.

    PRECAP : AR & SM gets ready & are about to leave in car. Nandini giving presentation……… ♥

    • Samiha on

      Hey Anu! Nice episode. I can easily visualize them getting ready as they attend patries a lot and getting ready always brings a new charm to us. Really nice stories, keep it up….

    • kfar on

      Hey cutting here to clear confusion..it’s two weeks after Viren”s story so…still Radhika staying the night at Arjun’s…

      Dat part about viren is another story…

  668. kfar on

    Heya its me again, with my story update, that was Viren’s story prologue, a brief view of part2 of this story. That will be interesting to read.

    Now, cut to two weeks after, where Radhika stayed back at Arjun’s mansion…following is the story…

    So, updating since where I left off…

    Sam here will be really very different from the character of her going crazy over Arjun. She obviously has her own story. Sorry, I couldn’t write about her more but that will be remidied soon, guys…

    So, I’m just shutting n updating since where I left off,

    Chapter-4 ( Together)

    The next day morning, the canteen, the whole thing was very awkward, more stress on the very. The few students who came in for breakfast, stopped dead on their way to the meal counter and walked to our table, to gawk at Arjun. Like she said, he rarely graced the premises of the college let alone enter into the canteen and sit casually slouchy in the chair next to hers.

    Thanfully, none of her friends were present. Neil and Arav were at another college as sports excutives from their University, as a team entry for interUni fest. She hadn’t Ruby nor Sam since their tiny weeny fight in the canteen

  669. Mandy on

    Hey thena n anu u guys I lovd it n anu urs is well descibed n thena urs is cool yaar I mean wat to say more asusual uguys r u kno it made 4 writin n all d ppl who writes in dis place is !!

    • Mandy on

      1 more thing I m sure from nny of u guys :=

      Renu anu farha natasha anaya thena ireena samiha dipika mitty savera nisha riya deepa n all dat ppl I dinn mntion ,,,som1 is gonna bcum a writer n hope so dat ny of u or all of u dat r interested in writin ur thoughts , ideas ,poetry, imagination n ur life time ,,,shud bcom a huge writer one day !!!!!

    • Samiha on

      You are right. Renu, Farha, Natasha, Anu, Thena, Anaya, Ireena, Dipika, Mitty, Savera, Riya, Deepa are really good with their skills. They are just roughly practising here and their skills are enhancing. You are also very good @Mandy (which you can’t object). Hope this site remains forever and I get to keep contact with such great writers (to be established writers). God bless…

    • kfar on

      Thanks Mand and Samiha dearies u are the best 😀

      Mandy u are my first ever friend who cmmented on my story dear it means a lot 😀

      Samiha- im really happy we discuss my story and the confusion in it darling makes me feelgood.

      N i wil post Drawn Together in one part and pot a linkhere…i just need go write it more clear and thorough 😀

  671. Samiha on

    Of course it’s okay yaar, in fact, it’s like a must. Your story needs to be filmed, I think. Awesome… Youth and Frienship – just like DYM… Love it a lot dear, waiting for the next epi…

  672. kfar on

    Radhika worried about Sam. Her thoughts strayed when she looked ar Arjun. He was very sweet when they got up. He waited near her house.Thank god, it was locked and nobody was there. She had a set of keys, Radhika had sent a message to them saying that she was staying back at Ruby’s for zero hour studies. It was a great save.
    So, he waited in the hall for her to change and also announced that they were going to have breafast in the Uni canteen. Radhika protested quite heavily but it wasn’t heeded.

    His persuasive version was..

    “The French toast, maple syrup waffles and coffee served in the canteen were the most delicious and you’ll never find such good food anywhere around of even the best restaurants across the town. Not even in my hotels.”

    Well, according to him not her.

    Radhija never had breakfast in the canteen. Why would she ever go anywhere when Ruby’s grandpa cook them up scrumptious meals in the morning. Well, she couldn’t get that now, could she.

    She agreed there were a burst of fireworks in her mouth when he pushed his fork on her lips, spreading the maple syrup all over with a wink. His mischievious smile promised of things he had in mind. She could practically feel the wheels turning in his mind about the use of syrup somewhere else. She warned him with het eyes to shut up with his telecommunicating thoughts he was shooting her way by the glide of his lazy gaze over her body. She shook her head and more of the waffles and vanilla ice cream he generously dolloped on her plate. She was so not going to have lunch after this. She moaned in reluctant pleasure as she opened her eyes and looked at his ‘see I told you so grin’ he often was using around her.

    Radhika then heard an incredibly loud scream from across the hall of the canteen. Her eyes widened in horror and she let out some choice blase expletives she had ever gathered up in her whole under her breath.

    The shock on Arjun’s face was very humorous to see and she could have laughed if not for the situation.

    “Oh, my god! I knew. I knew. I knew, this was going to happen.” Sam screamed loudly.

    Radhika glanced at Sam, she was wearing as usual, white tank top with a purple shirt teamed on it, a blue faded short jean skirt matched with pink sports shoes and socks. A fastrack college hanging on her right arm. Her black silky hair was pulled in a pony with the funk on her forehead. She had on a silly grin attached to her lips.

    Arjun pushed his plate away and wiped his mouth with the table cloth. He straightened up on the chair as he turned his head towards where Sam stood, across to the table where they sat.

  673. Savera on

    Hiiii Anu ,
    good epi, I like the good Nandani here. may b she has changed after deserted by Arjun.
    enjoying their friendship n fun together , you r writing really well,.
    I think story is going to b more n more interesting. thanks for the entertainment, which u r giving to us. This time also ur writing impressed me,
    so waiting for the next epi dear. bye bye

  674. Samiha on

    Okay Farha, nice but confusing.
    So you are continuing—
    (i) Radhika’s sleep-over at Arjun’s.
    (ii) The ‘Jasmine’ part was 2 weeks before the sleep-over.
    (iii) The ‘Arjun in the canteen’ 2 weeks after the sleep-over.(this one)
    (iv) The movie night was 2 days after the sleep-over.
    (v) There is a different story drawn together too…

    I am not trying to disturb you but am I right above?? If not then correct me.

    One confusion about the (iii) no: What weeny fight between Sam and Ruby???

    Hope you reply soon…….

    • kfar on

      Haha dat is spelerror it was teeny tiny fight yaa hhahah how mistakes can really be funny Samiha

      alright just got up and i need to get moving just don’t have time to read all the comments…wil come in later…tilll den all lovelies A Veryyyy good morning..

      Thena and Anu wonderfullllllllll doing good.

      Renu as usual fabulous thoughtss 😀

    • kfar on

      Hey two weeks later to Viren’s story yaar dat is still radhika’s night out at Arjun’s i forgot to mention dat….dat part about viren is totally unrelated to our story…just a gave a glimpse of how viren’s storey will be.

      Two days later is the move night and wat happened in these two days between ardhika is wat i just updated

      N Ruby being hurt to Radhika’s snap at her for giving help teeny means small.

      Sam being hury becoz Arav made her write his gf’s assignment..if u read again u’ll understand dearry

      I hope ur confusion is clearedddd deafy

    • Deepa on

      Kfar….continue ur both stories….loved both t stories of urs yaar…..its very romantic…..keep going buddy

    • Thena on

      hey samiha…u r such a sweetheart….same doubt 2 me yaar…got cleared nw…

      thank u sooooo much dear

  675. kfar on

    Arjun looked back at her and raised his left eyebrow in question. She just shrugged and smiled wide. He didn’t return the smile but instead frowned like he knew something not so pleasant was coming his way.

    Five minutes later. They all sat in uncomfortable silence. Sam was staring at Arjun, wide eyed. Her eyes like blue gimlets. She still had on that silly grin.

    Arjun looked back at her, like she was an alien descend from planet Mars.
    He cleared his throat and took hold of the water bottle.
    Sam glanced at her and gave her a look which said ‘you sly witch’.

    My god, she is going to blurt something worse. She was literally bouncing in the chair with utmosg excitement. Radhik moved her head side to side vigorously at her in negative gesture. Sam ignored her.

    “So, did you two make out hot and wild? Did you lose your damn naviety, finally? She asked eagerly.

    Radhika beat her palm oved her forehead and groaned in humiliation.

    Arjun coughed up the water the water that he just took as a long gulp from the bottle.
    He coughed hard. Radhika instantly rubbed his back.

    “Sorry, went into the wrong pipe.” He croaked.

    Sam nodded her head and smiled widely again like a starstruck fan.
    Students were gathering around. She felt like she needed to run from all this. Arjun’s popularity was no less than a movie star in the campus.

    “So, did you do it.” Sam asked again, wasn’t she ever persistant.

    “Sam, stop it now.” Radhika said in a forbidding tone.

    Her eyes got more rounder.

    “Oh, my god, you so did it.” She said slyly again.

    Arjun laughed a little bit low in his throat and Sam stopped smiling and looked at him in frozen wonder. She stared at him. Gawking.

    “Everyone is absolutely right. You are way beyond hot and s*xy, you’re smouldering. Rads, you lucky b*t*h.” She said disbelievingly.

    Ugh! Sam, why did you say that? His already swollen ego is going to float like a happy balloon in the air.

    Arjun seemed impressed by her crazy talk. He looked sideways abd grinned at Radhika magnanimously.

    Like she was really to sit with him.

    “Shut up.” She said flatly and rolled her eyes at them both.

    “Ignore her, she can be an old madam sometimes.” Sam switched parties gleefully.

    blo*dy traitor.

    “Oh, trust me, I know how you feel, and is she always like this or is it just natural, her beautiful attitude?” He asked her sarcastically.

    “Oh, yes, she is born with it, poor her, always so uptight.” Sam sighed.

    Radhika’s mouth hung open, did she just call her uptight?

    With that awefully funny comment, Arjun burst out laughing.

    Enough is enough.

    She stood up and threw the paper napkin down on the table.
    “Well, you two enjoy each other’s company, I’m out of here.”

    When she turned around Arjun caught her hand.

    “Come on, babe, it’s just a joke. You need to laugh a bit and lighten up.” He said a little softly, looking deep into her eyes.

    “I will lighten up only when I’m not the butt of your haha hilarious jokes.” She hissed, looking down at him.

    He didn’t respond to that but just stared at her.

    “Sit.” He ordered.

    “I’m not a dog.” She narrowed her eyes.

    “Sit, please.” He said softly again, and tilted his head to the side and half smiled.

    Radhika glanced at Sam.

    “Oh, my god, you both are hot.” She mouthed the words silently and fanned herself woth her left hand.

    Radhika looked back at Arjun and returned his smile with her own one.

    He didn’t let go of her hand when she sat down, instead he folded his fingers with hers. His humour instantly clicked with Sam’s. He was not condescending, rude or obnoxious, in fact, he smiled and laughed with genuine ease. He was wearing a light purple colured sweater over a white shirt with beige trousers, his tradmark wear, the Tommy Hilfiger watch admired his wrist of his right hand. Her left hand and his right one were joined together on his thigh under the table.

    It felt romantic and intimate. Her heaet fluttered under her chest. Looking at him, she felt herself connect to him. Mind, body and soul with this closeness. This was the third time she was feeling this, but how can it be possible they just met.How can she fall for him this fast.

    Her mind vibrated out, I ‘m in love with you, Arjun. His fingers tightened on hers at the same time. He glanced at her eyes for a brief second. His lips lifted uo in the corners slightest bit, in an unseeing smile and the brown in his eyes glimmered dark, like he just heard what she said in her mind, then he went back all normal into an animated conversation with Sam. Radhika gulped hard and at stared front.

    What just happened?

    Did she just blurt out? Did he hear it…….

    ********

    A brEAK i need..

    Hw is it guys?!?

    Will update soon: D

  676. Savera on

    Hiiiii Renu,
    Amazing Explanation dear, I m really unable to understand that how can you say, that you r a bad writer.YOU R MIND BLOWING … So never say it again. While reading everything was moving crystal clear in front of my sight. I wished to read more n more but it finished. your writing is like magic……n I dont wann come from this.you really deserve the HOD position which riya has given to you.

  677. Savera on

    Hey Mandy,
    hiiiiii my friend,
    Thank you soooooooooooo much for your good wishes.
    I used to write poems, n after connecting to you ppl I hv started writing story also.
    May God bless you With true love n happiness.

  678. Riya on

    Friends what is friendship & love
    Which one is important for us
    Let’s have a look
    Friendship is one of the greatest gifts ever bestowed upon mankind. While making friends may be easy, finding true and loyal friends who provide a lasting and fulfilling friendship is a much greater challenge.
    FRIENDSHIP
    F:
    “F” is for forgiveness. I believe that when you are truly friends with someone, you are free to make the occasional mistake. With mistakes, there is sometimes anger, sadness, hurt and, hopefully, discussion. After the discussion, if the friendship is true, there should be Forgiveness.
    R:
    “R” is for respect. Friends are really important to me! They Love you for you are, they trust you with their deepest secrets . Everyone needs somebody to respect and trust.
    I:
    “I” is for inspiration. My friends always inspire me to do more and to try hard. I hope I do the same for them.
    E:
    “E” is for encouragement. My friends always encourage me to be a better person. They also encourage me to keep spreading Love and Gratitude! There is a beautiful quote that fully explains this point. This quote says: ”Keep your face to the sunshine and you can never see the shadow.” – Helen Keller
    N:
    “N” is for nice. Your friends will treat you with kindness. There is no need for excessive drama or for being mean. Friends should treat each other nicely.
    D:
    “D” is for Doesn’t give up on me (my friends). When I have a problem or a challenge to take, they are always by my side.They will never give up on me an vice versa.
    S:
    “S” is for support. For me, this word is one of the keys of any friendship. It has happened to me a lot of times this year, that I needed the support of my friends and they were there for me… Sending me beautiful messages, phone calls, etc.
    H:
    “H” is for happiness. Happiness is a great gift, and it comes from within. Pursuit of happiness through friends is the loftiest thought of being spiritual, as friendship is immeasurable. And most of all, our pursuit of happiness through friends encompass continuing pleasure and peace of mind.
    I:
    “I” is for ingredient. Friends are one of the most important ingredients in this recipe of life.
    P:
    “P” is for platonic Love. Platonic Love is very much a part of any close friendship. But such a Love does not always stay platonic. Sometimes it turns into passionate Love. Crossing that line, between friendship and Love, can be both beautiful and extremely difficult.
    LOVE………………
    We tend to think that the meaning of love is to love one person. But truly, what is the meaning of love? The beautiful thing about love is that we don’t have to limit our loving to just our romantic partner or our family. We can love everyone we encounter. When we are present, we have nothing to fear, so we don’t have to create any boundaries about who can receive our love. When we are with anyone without judging them in any way, we feel love for them. It doesn’t matter if this person is our spouse or our waiter in a restaurant.

    # which one is important ?
    Ans-Both are important
    Ex-Tamil movie “Ariya”
    Also a sweet example Manmarziyan.

    Pyaar ka dard hai mitha mitha pyara pyara
    But friendship ka dard hai yaadgaar…..

  679. Savera on

    Hiiiiii Riya
    many many thanks for the …AMAZING TALENT….. title which u give it to me
    really dont know how to express my feeling.
    but surely dear U inspired me compose more n more.

    zindagi mei sada muskuraate raho
    faasle kum karo dil milaate raho

    ashk anmol hai
    kho na dena kahin
    iski her boond hai
    motiyon se hasin

    isko her ankh se tum churaate raho
    zinagi mei sada muskuraate raho

  680. Aru on

    Superb!!! U guys are all rocking,mind blowing….i was not hear for a vry long tym nd aftr d show ended,i thought no one ll b hear…but u r all continuing the story interestingly with ur amazing skills…i cant name them as i’m nt a frequent visitor….but as i scroll down i got to read number f beautiful reviews and stories….mind blowing…..keep it up guys

  681. Savera on

    hey Kfar
    Hiiiiii my novelist
    thank god you r back. i was missing you n ur story update.
    Now pls b here always coz so many of ur friends always wait for ur story.
    now coming to story …. it is rocking…as always.
    give me d good news regarding d publishing of ur Book, soon.

  682. mitty on

    Wat an imaginary skills yaar. …A big salute to all the writers in this forum. ..love u all. …plz continue. …

  683. Savera on

    Hiiii Samiha,
    how r u my friend?
    I m really really obliged, as you considered me in the list of skilled Mannmarziyan friends,
    I m really fortunate that u all r my friend, n for this credit goes our favourite serial Manmarziyan. MMZ is a strong thread, n we all r the pearls of this magnificent garland.
    So the priceless pearl(SAMIHA) always be here to enhance d beauty of MMZ garland.
    Very soon I ll post my next composition.
    bye bye dear.

    • Samiha on

      Oh Savera, Thank You. You have a way with words, just wonderful… I am happy to know that your story writing skills are also enhancing alongside poem writing. Hope to see your stories, dear. And you are right, the Manmarziyan thread brought us all together and it can’t be torn. I got to come in contact with such great talents through this site, hope it always remains. Thanks…

  684. raashi on

    Ohh….God we r past 1000 comments!! I seem to have missed quite a lot of action out here! Good Morning guys:) How’s everyone doing??

    I was stuck up with my studies n my net’s behaving crappy too:( Today I’ll try following up all d developments which I’ve missed of d amazing stories dat I’ve been reading..

  685. dipika on

    @Renu happie to c u back on tu….missed u so mch….
    n wht an vivid explation written by u on our chassni nw. Mrs Arjun Mehra…
    superb,mindblowing,amazing ….n u r verry goood writtter yaarrr having amzing skilll of bringing positivity in ech character… pls u too write the story on 2 yr gap of ardhika’ s life…
    @Samiha,mitty,anaya,Deepa u guys r rocking yarrr…Thanks for being such a wonderful friends..
    @Riya here is the spl Thanks to you for amaIng defination of FRIENDSHIP dear…
    @Anu superb epi…love the beach scene… visualize it…..n looks like Nandini di on the path if goodness…
    Happy Janmashtami to alll…
    May Balgopal brings mote n more happiness to our life n blessed my budding novelist n writers here…
    Thank you god for bringing me here n givibg me such wonderful Friends….

  686. dipika on

    @Natasha,Ireena,Mandy,Ira,Savera,Kfar sorry cant mention in earlier post…U guys r the amzing n talented ppl…ech n evry evry pov by u guys brings smile on face….
    @ kfar ur story is amazing dear thanks for giving such nice story to us…
    Love u all Barbies of tellyupadates….

  687. kfar on

    Thena- i realllllllly like the epi and nesam together 😀 hugs tight for missing me i missed u tooooooooooo 😀

    Anu- yaaar u write very good 😀

    Renu- no words just outstanding:D

    • Thena on

      farha thank u sooooooooo much dear….

      oh s i thot kfar as boyyyieeeeee….hahaha

      nw am gonna read urs…..m sure no need 2 say its awesum aftr readin…..cos anyhw am gng 2 njoy it buddy….

      keep rockin my dearrrrrryyyyyy…..

  689. Natasha on

    Guys i am busy today so cant update my story today. But tommorow i will surely update it. Tommorow i will write episode 3. And in that episode u will find a interesting incedent which will be funney as well as full of friendship.

  692. Riya on

    Friends one important think
    Thermodynamic=Manmarziyan
    How zeroth law of thermodynamic equal to Manmarziyan story…….

    Statement
    The zeroth law of thermodynamics states that if two thermodynamic systems are each in thermal equilibrium with a third, then they are in thermal equilibrium with each other.
    #########
    Manmarziyan
    Just assumed Arjun,Radhika,sam are 3
    thermodynamic systems.
    Arjun thermal equilibrium(love for revenge) with sam.
    Radhika also thermal equilibrium(love in heart) with sam
    Then Arjun & Radhika thermal equilibrium
    (love+ hate= create a passionate love) with
    Radhika.
    ……Ardhika……

  693. Samiha on

    @kfar: Thanks, Farha for clearing the confusions. And yes, of course I like ‘Drawn Together’. No. I actually love it. Hope you continue the stories simaltaneously and soon…

  694. Thena on

    Hi al my deariessss…………

    EPISODE 127:

    SCENE 1:

    ardhika’s posture ws selfsame….both were sleepin still…..nw thr ws a gradual movment in radz…1 by 1…hr fingers,toes,eyes….she opened hr eyes,hr glance fell on evry nook & corner of the room, bewildered hr luks……she felt a mild warmth on hr stomach….it ws arjun’s arm wrappin around hr waist as he attached it 2 hr 4 more than an hour…..she lifted hr head up a lil & arjun got awakened…..

    “Radhika……..”,he uttered huskily,hs hands held hr face…..

    she felt emotional seeing hm,tears rolled down unruly…..in no time,she huggd hm tight,hr fingers clenchd hs shirt & collar……..she ws weepin,weepin,weepin……he ws cluless,hugged hr back,hs r8 palm over hr head……hr weepin nw switched 2 sobbin…..hs shoulder ws drenched,hs shirt pasted 2 hs skin,al wet……he cudnt manage 2 c hr face as she ws nvr ready 2 leave hr clutch on hm…..

    “i lu…. lu….luv u arjun……”,she clenchd hs collar more tight nw…..she struggld 2 speak …the more she tried 2 utter,the more grown hr sobbin…..she ws weepin in hs arms as if a babe found its lost dad in the crowd….arjun clutched hr shoulders,nw succeeded in rippin hr apart…..he held hr face,hs fingers made dimples on hr cheeks…..he wiped hr tears,planted rapid kisses over & over on hr cheeks,4head,lips,eyes,chin……he nodded hr in nope,hs stare fell straight in2 hr eyes…..he gestured hr 2 smile & she smiled back…..he kissed hr 4head & gave hr a gentle hug………radz rested hr head on hs chest….

    SCENE 2:

    Dilip arrived 2 the hospital…..doctor informed mala & dilip tat dadaji ws 5n & can b taken home…..nesam came thr,assured tat they wud tak care of chasni & asked them 2 tak dadaji home……dilip thanked them,hs hands folded wid palms facin each othr & eyes filled wid gratitude…….neil hurriedly lowered hs hand & requested hm 2 nt consider them as outsiders…..

    Saral ws shown in a lonely house,hs face ws al plastered….he got a phone call,hs screen ws shown ‘NANDHINI CALLING………’…..the scene ws shown in mute…….he ws shoutin,hs hand waverin fast in air….

    SCENE 3:

    arjun came out & nesam wer waitin thr…….sam went in,radz ws leanin 2 the back,hr legs stretched straight…….sam smiled broadly at hr,tuk hr seat & kissed hr hands keepin 2gether…..radz sensed sumthin & askd sam if thr ws any problm……neil told arjun tat bs has got a new contract ‘GUESS seductive homme’ & partners had 2 attend the meeting…..radz smiled at sam,takin sam’s hands in hr’s & persuaded hr 2 go…..arjun askd neil tat hw cud he leave radhika wen she wsnt wel…..radz assured sam tat even she too ll cum wid them as she ws sound & safe….she ensured sam wid hr usual cute smile….

    END of epi 127….

    hi my dearies…..oh read evry 1 of ur cmmnt & felt emotional…….reallllllly touchin yaar……tight hug 2 u al……luv u loads……keep gvng ur feedbacks as always buddies….

    • Riya on

      Wow dr what a romantic ep…
      If all the fan writers of Manmarziyan
      want, then make a high level trp show…

    • Thena on

      Riya….so sweet of u yaar…..

      thank u soooo much 4 luvin tis epi dear….

      hope the beautiful designer ll luv my cumin episodes too….

    • happy on

      hi dear….nice…..i am my manmarziyan continuously by ur episode……thank u so much…..keep rocking……once again thanks…..

    • Samiha on

      Wow Thena, nice epi… What is that Saral and Nandini upto?? Maybe we should call them NaRal or SarDini…LOL…Hope they don’t create further problems between ArDhika…

    • Thena on

      oh samiha u r the best sweetheart…..

      i luv the names gvn by u yaar….naral suits more than sardhini cos sardhini sounds sumwat cute hahaha

      but negative roles r needed as much as positive roles na….

      tight hug…luv u loads

    • Deepa on

      Oh my dr thena….i hav no words to express my view dr…such an awesome epi……urrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrr always great yaar…… ardhika rocks tdy…..keep continuing dr…..love u loads

    • Thena on

      deepa….wat 2 say my friend….

      thank u sooooooooooooooooooo much 4 leavin ur feedback always….

      luv u loads buddy

    • lreena on

      Actually thena,I m leaving for my city tomorrow.after reaching there,I have something important to do.I have to complete them in almost a week.by that time,the page will be closed.so I m being compelled to say goodbye little earlier.

    • Savera on

      DEAR IREENA HIIIII
      Its really sad yaar, you r going…
      we ll miss you dear
      but I m happy that you were here
      .Shared our MMZ together
      b always happy ,everywhere
      to bless you, God is there
      So bye bye our dear

    • Deepa on

      Ohhh,,,,ireena,,,vll miss u alot dr….catch up in fb yaar…..v can continue our friendship there na

  696. Deepa on

    Wow riya…ur great yaar….keep it up dr…..ur lines make me relate to our show more and more and more crazier dr….hatss of to u ma

  697. Samiha on

    Great Bangladeshi novelist Humayun Ahmed said—

    “Prithibir sreshtho upohar hocche alo”

    ”THE WORLD’S GREATEST GIFT IS LIGHT”

    “Duniya ki sabse behtar toufa hai roshni”

    Radhika Mishra was this light, the greatest gift for Arjun Mehra. To shoo away the darkness and to spread the warmth of light, truth, trust and LOVE….. Miss our chasni….

  699. lreena on

    Hi,friends.now I m giving a small intro of myself as it’s my last day here.my real name is shreyan(there’s a reason for coming here with the name ireena)I m high school student on science background.I have been living in WB since almost a month.Tomorrow I have to start my journey of my home at Maryland.I used to watch manmarzian both online and tv.I have come here on summer vacation.with my staying here,I have been connected with u guys so much that u guys have become a part of my life.
    Plz come at evening(if u r free then).i m veryyy much eager to talk to u guys.bye till then.✋???

    • kfar on

      Oh my dear thats so emotional one im gonna cry dat ur going away 🙁

      n darling Ireena are you a boy? sory fr askin coz the name Shreyan is maybe a boy’s name?!?!? im sory if im mistaken

      and hey highschooler huh? dats nice coz u hv so much of beautiful things to do ib future and do heyjust as rads and us all do wat ur Marmanziyan…love lots 😀

    • Samiha on

      Oh, Ireena!! So sad you’re leaving us… You truly were a great friend… Sorry if I have hurt you with any of my comments and thank you for sharing your precious time with us. May God bless you and you live a happy life ahead……

  700. Mandy on

    Hey guys guess I m very late sorry wat to do !!!
    Happy Krishna Janmashtami guys !!!!

    Hey Farah ur amazing story n u r jus killin d day wid ur story !!!??

    Hey thena jus red ur choppy it was cool yaar but I so wish it was really a serial on sp !!!!????

    Hey Anu love u yaar its ❤️????

    Hey Samiha missed u yaar !!!??

    Hey renu ur really sweet n thoughtful yaar missed u !!!?????

    Hey Deepa how r u !!!!??

    Hey Ireena love ur povs ur !!??

    Hey how cud I 4get savera n Mitty missed u too guys !!!!???

    Riya ur jus a dreamer I mean d way u rite ur poems n meanings awwwwssssooommmmeee!!???

    Hey Anaya wr is ur story ???????

  702. kfar on

    im in bus being jostled around my mobile battery is going down…i can only come in the night..

    Thanks so much Annie, Deepa and Savera( Amazing poetry dear, dats a lyricist in the making)

    thanks Tanya 😀

    Mandy dear …hugs tight

    Thena yaar thnaxs so much for always readin my storyy 😀 n hey love ur epis and haha im not a boy though it fun u thought i was a boy

    raashi- Yaaaaaar kahan chalegaye the miss kiya tumko 😀

    Riya- always wrting amazing lines dead thanks yaaar

    Natasha- Heyyy update soon na..

    anaya and anu- You too pls update

    Mitty- heyyyyy i emailed sp yaaar thanx for providing the address 😀

    wrote sp a big long letter.

  703. kfar on

    Riya- i wrote dear it came as dead, it always comes deaf but its the first time..stupid typos so sorry dear

    • Samiha on

      Ha ha!! Dear becomes dead and deaf!! Next time it happens, you don’t even need to rectify it, we’ll understand…

  704. Natasha on

    Ireena as ur going i am feeling sad. Ur name is shreyan. So if i am not wrong then ur a boy. Sorry i have mistaken. Is this the reason that u hadnt give ur intro when i asked? By the way ireena is a beautiful name. Forgive me if i have ever hurt u. Bye and will miss u.

    • lreena on

      U never and ever hurt me dear.rather always touched me with ur comments.and ur story is really awesome??????????
      I will miss it very much.

  705. anu on

    hey ireena, feeling like loosing “I” from DOSTI..YAARIYAN..MANMARZIYAN…

    u cant go like this dear… come back soon atleast on fb.. we will be waiting for u there.. love u laods. miss u a lot. 🙁 🙁 🙁 …. a big hug.. wish u all the best in all your endeavours.. God bless u with strength and good health.. im almost crying, unable to bid bye to you dear… love u… fullfill your MANMARZIYAN in future.. 🙂 🙂

  706. raashi on

    @ Thena….thanks for missing me bud…means a lot!! N as for ur story….it was so emotional…..Radhika on d hospital bed….crying her heart out on Arjun’s shoulder…..n Arjun trying to comfort her….I could actually visualise it all…n it was making me cry too…den it reminded me of Radhika’s accident in d show n m missing my favourite show all d more now:( but I comfort myself thinking atleast u guys r there to keep Manmarziyan alive…..I also liked Nesam….n thankgod that dadaji is fine now…..n that cheapo Saral is back huh….he deserved another punch from Arjun……n Nandini di too….u know I had started liking Nandini di coz of Anu coz she turnrd her into such an angel in her story….seems lyk I’ll have to again go back to hating her while reading ur stories…..well m not complaining…..I loved hating her in d show as well! Would b waiting for ur next episode:)

    @ Farha…..I’ve always loved ur writings n these last few updates were no exceptions….I’m loving it….Loved d Sam- Arjun n Radhika bit in d cafe….n good to see Sam smiling n cracking jokes n pulling Radhika’s leg n blabbering just about nething….good to see this happy Sam…….much needed break for her from her Devdas mode……i was beginning to feel she’s living Neil’s character of d show…..one sided love wala…without d partner realising about it……..n we also have another character in d story Jasmine….hmm so her n Viren…ok… looking forward to ur next chapter!

    @ Anu…m loving ur story too….Nesam fighting over different shooting locations….how cute….n our compatible Ardhika settling on one location….sweet…u r even introducing Priya Mehra…that’s good yaar….n m loving ur sweet angelic Nandini di…..n I loved how u said d four tooj selfie with sunset as d background…cud visualise it in my mind but would love it even mire if cud aee such a pic for real:)

    @ Anaya…ur college wala story is so refreshing.. .loving d 3 MA….n d 3 SP….waiting for romance to brew…till den enjoying d yaariyan n d bg song…..good story….keep going!!

    @ Natasha….I believe I’ve missed some portion of ur story….that’s why its a bit confusing to me….lyk is Radhika seriously dead?? There’s actually so many comments out here…m having a hard time navigating through it all….but I’ll make sure I find d missing update…once I do that m sure ur story will b clear to me….but I must say I never imagined Ardhika with a medical backdrop until u put it out here…so I find it very intersting n I liked whatever I read till now!

    @ Riya…I loved how u defined Friendship n Love n how u said that we should follow our Manmarziyan..I also liked those touching short stories cum message post of urs…too good yaar!!

    @ Savera ur shayari is amazing:)

    @ Ireena…take care n have a safe journey!!

    M sorry if I’ve missed out neone….its just that I haven’t went through all d posts…there’s comments ka overload out here….I believe I need some time to check them all!

    • anu on

      Thanq so much raashi for liking the story… yeah i too wish to see the pic in real… have to photoshop/edit …. 😉 😉 😉 ….

    • kfar on

      thanksss so much raashi love ir comment and assesment big warm hug dearryyy 😀

      Savera- yes its in the progress yaar i opted for traditional publishing and itz gonna tKe time but hope for the best…thabks for asking 😀

      dipika- thanks yaar 😀

    • Thena on

      oh my dear raashi…..omg ….u made my day…

      tight hud 2 my dearyyyyy

      keep leavin ur feedback n i really njoy it….

      luv u loads…

  707. anu on

    ireena i am feeling like “I” is leaving from DOSTI..YAARIYAN..MANMARZIYAN.
    dont do this yaar… we will be missing u a lot… love u loads.. a big hug to u dear.. i am crying literally ans u r bidding bye to us.. but we will be waiting for u on fb dear.. so plzzz do come in future.. wish u all the best in all ur endeavours..God bless u with good strength and good health.. fulfill ur MANMARZIYAN in future…

    • lreena on

      I will miss u a lot,anu.I will check fb page to feel u dear(but not active there).wish u a very happy way in the long run of life.I wish I could contact u dear

  708. Aru on

    Thanks fr still remembering me anu…
    Uff,guys i’m reading all ur comments from mrng(with out switching on d tv..) but still could not complete….i read the stories posted here…each f them r heart touching…but i dint find my other friends,i mean i mean those who were commenting in initial days f d show along with me(to name a few pathanga,richa di,arjuni teldulkar…..)
    i am a die hard fan f this show who always beg my mom to watch this…..i strted posting comments herê in my vacation nd could nt continue wen d college started……i missed u guys soo much……i luv raashï nd renu ‘s reviews most..read farahs story,u r a vry gud writer buddy,,anu dym2 with ur narrating skill is heart touching……and urs thena ,119 or 120th episode made me vry emotional and i always wanted it(sam apologising radhu)
    just like ireena,i’m bidding bye to this site today…. But would lyk to b in touch iñ fb……luv u all

    • anu on

      thanq so much aru for liking our dym2.. stay connected on fb and wish u all the best in future.. love u.. miss u 🙁

    • raashi on

      Thank u so much for loving my review Aru….n u were missed out here….I still remember we used to comment together….missed u n welcome back!!

  709. Samiha on

    Hey Raashi, WELCOME BACK. You were gone for long, now we reached 1000 in comments. Hope to take it higher. Read all the stories. Everybody has become much active now. Missed you, glad you’re back…..

    • lreena on

      Hey,farha.I didn’t find u that page so came here.
      Good wishes for ur future dear.I hope ur story really reaches a destination.and be A SUCCESSFUL WRITER.miss u……????bye bye….

  712. raashi on

    @ Mandy…I’m fine dear…was just a touch busy….I missed u guys too…n Farha thank u so much for missing me…..@ Anu….yeah we have got d option of photoshop/edit but I wish yeh karne ki jagah we get MMZ 2 featuring this beautiful still:)

  713. dipika on

    Hey Ireena m really sad to hear tht u bidding final goodbye to us…..plz dear if possible thn stay connected…. n being highschool student nw u hav so much to explore in life… Wish u verrry happy n bright future ahead…. tight hug for u…will miss u….
    @ Thena soooooo much like the….visualize the evry bit of it….n felt m in that moment…n annoyed to seeing saral n nandu back…excited for nxt epi

    • Thena on

      hi deepika…..thank u soooo much yaar

      great words tat u can visualise it dear…..

      keep gvng ur feedbak buddy…

      luv u loads….

  714. Aru on

    Miss u too anu….all the bst to ur future as well and to all manmarziyan friends….
    I hd missed naming one more name Devga..where r u dea…no coments frm u for so loong tym???

  715. kfar on

    Samiha Mandy Raashi Dipika missed ur comments here friends it’s taking a lot of time to see and also… to upload commens but haha seems like we will soon cross 2000 too 😀

  716. zara on

    @kfar, interesting story dear l like jasmine character. keep going on. luv ardhika & nesam! !!
    ——————–
    @thena, love today’s episode … what a passionate hugging btwn ardhka. waiting for next. .
    ———————

    Anaya plzz post ” HPDDAB ” soon ….
    eagerly waiting for the next story..
    Plzzzz dear…

    Anu, wow yesterday’s story beach scene I like. nesam masti wonderful. waiting for nandani’s suspense . eagerly waiting for next. .
    hurry guys post your stories
    luv all comments 🙂 🙂

  717. lreena on

    Friends,what to say……a drop of tears is falling from my eyes.actually this page became a family for me.now i have to leave my family.
    A confusion has been arisen from my name.and so I didn’t mention my real name.Natasha,farha and all…..I m a girl,dear.Don’t know why my name is like that.but i really find it cooooool when someone thinks that I m a boy.??

  718. lreena on

    Though I didn’t want to mention name(I fear i will forget anyone),i want to remember us all with these name……..Natasha,renu,Mitty,Thena,samiha,anu,abi,anaya,Annie,riya,farha,Mandy,Ira afroz,raashi,happy,savera,deepa,dipika,Saji,aru,devga,nish,shub,ure,twinkle,jayaru,sonamohan,Sara,Tia,zara,tanya,sukriti,arjuni,aradhika,richa,pathanga……..(I just hope I didn’t miss anyone)……all of my new and older friends,u have given me a lot love.I don’t think that I will be able forget u guys.I m really really sorry if I really hurt u anytime,friends.u guys always made me happy with ur sweety comments.

  719. anaya on

    Episode 3:
    All the places and characters mentioned here are imaginary things. There is no resemblance to anything existing for real.
    The frame shows Vardamaan college entry board. Students of Physics batch have formed a cluster inside the class and a discussion is going on. One guy (Anank- Leader of Physics batch) :” Ok, so it’s all set. I will now get sanction for our trip from Vikrant (Principal) Sir to the Sayanora hills. Anank leaves class room. Now the frame shifts to Chemistry class. There apart from our 3 SP, all others are involved in discussions on their study tour. Rahul, the class representative, stood up and left for the Principal’s approval. In frame, both leaders have approached the Principal’s cabin. Anank:” Sir, we have planned a study tour to the Sayanora hills near Siliguri to explore the phenomenon behind the multi rainbow phenomenon taking place over there”.
    Rahul, the prefect of chemistry class stood still there for a few seconds before responding to the Principal questioning gesture. Rahul: “Sir, I am also here to represent our chemistry batch and we have planned a study tour to Siliguri in order to collect and study the igneous rocks present in its terrains”. Anank stood froze hearing this.
    Vikrant(Principal): “Ok. I see that both the batches have chose to go over study tour to the same place. And considering the number of students altogether, we will arrange for 2 bus and Anank, you have provided request for a 10 day tour, while Rahul, you have opted a 5 day tour. I will get you together, a 7 day trip. The bus will leave together and be back together. Is there anything else that need to be clarified?”
    Anank & Rahul together: “No Sir. Thank you.”
    They both leave. Once out of the class. Anank fully annoyed asked Rahul: “Is duniya me bus vohi ek jagah mili tumhe jane ko?”
    Rahul wryly : “ I was thinking the same.”
    Both left to their respective classes and announced the news.
    Some are happy. Some sad. There were mixed emotions everywhere.
    Precap: The buses are leaving for Siliguri. Sana, Panchi and Reeva run towards the bus, yelling “rukooooooo”

  720. anaya on

    Episode 3:
    All the places and characters mentioned here are imaginary things. There is no resemblance to anything existing for real.
    The frame shows Vardamaan college entry board. Students of Physics batch have formed a cluster inside the class and a discussion is going on. One guy (Anank- Leader of Physics batch) :” Ok, so it’s all set. I will now get sanction for our trip from Vikrant (Principal) Sir to the Sayanora hills. Anank leaves class room. Now the frame shifts to Chemistry class. There apart from our 3 SP, all others are involved in discussions on their study tour. Rahul, the class representative, stood up and left for the Principal’s approval. In frame, both leaders have approached the Principal’s cabin. Anank:” Sir, we have planned a study tour to the Sayanora hills near Siliguri to explore the phenomenon behind the multi rainbow phenomenon taking place over there”.
    Rahul, the prefect of chemistry class stood still there for a few seconds before responding to the Principal questioning gesture. Rahul: “Sir, I am also here to represent our chemistry batch and we have planned a study tour to Siliguri in order to collect and study the igneous rocks present in its terrains”. Anank stood froze hearing this.
    Vikrant(Principal): “Ok. I see that both the batches have chose to go over study tour to the same place. And considering the number of students altogether, we will arrange for 2 bus and Anank, you have provided request for a 10 day tour, while Rahul, you have opted a 5 day tour. I will get you together, a 7 day trip. The bus will leave together and be back together. Is there anything else that need to be clarified?”
    Anank & Rahul together: “No Sir. Thank you.”
    They both leave. Once out of the class. Anank fully annoyed asked Rahul: “Is duniya me bus vohi ek jagah mili tumhe jane ko?”
    Rahul wryly : “ I was thinking the same.”
    Both left to their respective classes and announced the news.
    Some are happy. Some sad. There were mixed emotions everywhere.
    Precap: Episode 3:
    All the places and characters mentioned here are imaginary things. There is no resemblance to anything existing for real.
    The frame shows Vardamaan college entry board. Students of Physics batch have formed a cluster inside the class and a discussion is going on. One guy (Anank- Leader of Physics batch) :” Ok, so it’s all set. I will now get sanction for our trip from Vikrant (Principal) Sir to the Sayanora hills. Anank leaves class room. Now the frame shifts to Chemistry class. There apart from our 3 SP, all others are involved in discussions on their study tour. Rahul, the class representative, stood up and left for the Principal’s approval. In frame, both leaders have approached the Principal’s cabin. Anank:” Sir, we have planned a study tour to the Sayanora hills near Siliguri to explore the phenomenon behind the multi rainbow phenomenon taking place over there”.
    Rahul, the prefect of chemistry class stood still there for a few seconds before responding to the Principal questioning gesture. Rahul: “Sir, I am also here to represent our chemistry batch and we have planned a study tour to Siliguri in order to collect and study the igneous rocks present in its terrains”. Anank stood froze hearing this.
    Vikrant(Principal): “Ok. I see that both the batches have chose to go over study tour to the same place. And considering the number of students altogether, we will arrange for 2 bus and Anank, you have provided request for a 10 day tour, while Rahul, you have opted a 5 day tour. I will get you together, a 7 day trip. The bus will leave together and be back together. Is there anything else that need to be clarified?”
    Anank & Rahul together: “No Sir. Thank you.”
    They both leave. Once out of the class. Anank fully annoyed asked Rahul: “Is duniya me bus vohi ek jagah mili tumhe jane ko?”
    Rahul wryly : “ I was thinking the same.”
    Both left to their respective classes and announced the news.
    Some are happy. Some sad. There were mixed emotions everywhere.
    Precap: The buses are leaving for Siliguri. Sana, Panchi and Reeva run towards the bus yelling “rukooooooo”

  721. Samiha on

    You are right, the take 15-20 mins in moderating. But if it’s big, they take an hour too… So annoying! And yeah, I too think we are gonna cross 2000 in a zippy… ’cause it only took 7 days to reach 1000. Another 7 days to go. Will miss you all trribly

  722. lreena on

    All of my writer friends-anu,Thena,farha,Natasha,anaya,Mandy…..u don’t even know how much I will miss u and ur story.really sorrowful.. ..??(sometimes I got jealous why I can’t write so well……Ha…ha..)
    My analyser friend renu,ur pov always touched me.Don’t know whether I will get such analysis ever or nt.?

    My artist friend riya,ur design is always heart touching.will feel it dear.. .?
    And my advanced friend Mitty,ur spoiler news always made me first.
    And I will check the fb regularly dears(but I don’t have any id),so keep me updated guys.

  724. Thena on

    EPISODE 128:

    SCENE 1:

    HOSPITAL:

    epi starts wid neil convincin arjun 2 leave 4 mumbai tellin tat he ll tak care of evrythin thr in hrisikesh…..arjun nodded in yep,hs face lukd impassive though….they went in & 2 their surprise radz ws sittin ready in bed…..she ws made wel ready by sam….she lukd fresh,elated,hr saree neatly draped & hr hair,ah! it ws a neatly combed coiffure……arjun ws dazed by radz & she threw hm an ‘am alr8’ smile just 2 convince hm 2 take hr 2 Mumbai wid hmself….Neil broke the silence sayin tat they had 2 leave as it ws time already & left out 2 finish the hospital formalities……..

    “Oh! yes yes….its time…..chalo chalo jaldi chalo”sam said followin neil 2 exit the room….

    radz still felt light headed & stood up wid a great deal of effort…..arjun ws al seein hr & she again threw hm the same smile 2 convince hm……Oh! she felt really dizzy & certainly needed a lil nap atleast, 2 retrieve hr strength….she ws unsteady & weak at the knees……..she hardly lifted up hr r8 leg & ws gonna miss hr balance…..arjun gave hs support 2 hr side b4 she fell……nw she managed 2 stand, clutchin hs shirt at hs elbow…..he askd hr 2 take complete rest as hs partnership wid bs wsnt more imp than hr……radz nw stood straight bt still wid hs support…..

    “am alr8….koi problem nahi….chalo arjun”,she said in a firm tone wid a smile of conformity……

    arjun’s left hand clutched hr wrist,hs r8 wrappin around hr waist at back & they made an exit….

    SCENE 2:

    Nandhini ws waitin somewhr alongside hr car…..she kept on lukin at hr watch often & gettin annoyed evrytim…..she uttered uffffffff in irritation……saral came thr & she started shoutin at hm 4 hs act on hospital…….he shouted back at hr sayin tat ws hs personal…..she gestured ‘talk 2 my hand’ wid eyes closed & face downward….in a sec he closed hs mouth & gulped hs throat…..she xtended money 2 hm & warned 2 nt stray 4m their plan…..she alerted hm 2 stay away 4m arjun …..she got in2 hr car & it moved off swiftly……saral luking at the money & smirked…..

    SCENE 3:

    Radhika’s house:

    Ardhika got aashirvaad 4m dadaji…..dadaji blessed them 2 giv hm junior choti soon….arjun threw an ardour luk at radz & she blushed…….they got blessings 4m dilip & mala…..mala xtended vermilion 2 arjun 2 apply it on choti’s maang…..he gave a respectful grin,tuk a pinch of sindoor & applied it on radz maang…..hs eyes lukin in2 hrs & hrs in2 hs……he admired hr,hs face lit up wid glee & she ws emotional….radz hugged dadaji,mala & dilip….tears rolled down & she bid goodbye…..

    Neil kept the suitcase on the car’s top….he tuk the driver seat,sam 2 hs adjacent…..ardhika tuk backseat…..radz rested hr head on arjun’s arm…..the car flew away 2 mumbai…..

    END of epi 128…….

    leave ur feedback buddies….just tell me if u lik my posts cos i don want 2 irk u wid my unwanted posts deariiiieeeeessss….feel free 2 say anythin buddies…..luv u loads….

  725. saji on

    Ireena…will miss u so mch…tkcr n god bless

    thena u make me addicted to ur story day by day…feel like cant live without ur lines…jst waitng for nxt episodes

    anu…great gng…u too make me happy with ur story…cos i miss mmz a lot…ur episodes mk me feel its not offair…hugs..

  727. dipika on

    No Thena hw could it feel irritating to us…all ardhika moment we njoy yarr…n abt the epi its a super duper n mindblowing… n like arjuns looks aftr hearing dadaji ashirwad abt lil choti…..wht is nandinis plan yaar..got tensed….bt like our Radhu’s smile….looking forward for nxt epi..

    @ kfar yup dear ther r prob in loading commnts nw n soon we will hit the 2000 commnts….
    @ Ireeena we too will miss u….Thanks for being wonderful friends dear

    • Thena on

      hey dipika……no words yaar….

      thank u 4 mentioni scenes dear….

      keep gvng ur feedback….means a lot dear…

      luv u loads…

  728. Shub on

    Farah – loved today’s story. Once again fluent writing. I like the line on ” got in to wrong tube” . that was very cheeky. , Keep going. Eagerly waiting for nxt epi. Hey drawn together is equally racy. Please update parallel if possible.

  729. renu on

    @theena: loved ur episodes,….arjun’s caring attitude 2 save radz but he ll not spare saral 4 doing such thing 2 his wife,….ly radz can ctrl arjun’s obsession n posessiveness over her,…n still he ll not allow neil 2 look after his wife,…he s like a child who wont give his toy 2 any1,…he s holding radz as she s his personal property,…& loved ur epi on the whole,….Next priya mehra entering their life,…seems quite interesting,…& wanna see more posessive arjun(renu’s wish dear),…..

    & thena thanx 4 ur encouraging words,…but i doubt i can write dear but m enjoying ur epi soooo much deary,…..

    • Thena on

      Oh renu…..wat shall i say dear…….omg u made my day……

      Thank u soooooooo soooooooo much dear….fr ur pov,suggestion deary……

      Oh even in tis small review u rocked…..amazing talent dear…….

      But y doubt yaar…..just write wen u find free time dearyyy……

  730. ishika on

    guys… evry1 u rock wid ur story’s n pov … kfar i’m a fan of ur story.. anu natasha thena ananya… u guys r really talented n tnx 4 keeping the show alive
    though i nvr used to cmmnt i daily used to visit this page to.ur cmmnts
    hey can ny1 plz tell me de song 4 whch ardhika n nesam danced on 26th epi.

  732. anu on

    Frens today im posting bit early…

    The episode starts with Nandini preparing quotation for education of children. She was called by elderly people, and she goes to them and talks to them addressing papaji and maa. Later She completes the quotation and goes to little boy, sees him sleeping and leaves to her room and sits thinking about her parents(as she addressed so).

    NS pampering their puppy apple. They make her sleep. NS come to their room and Neil says Sammy I love u and acts romantic.  Sammy hits his head with hers and says TIT FOR TAT for morning collision and winks. Both utter ouchhhh in pain and Sam says idiot. He says Ahh with ?, and with his smirky, face says good night and sleeps turning aside. Sam feels sorry for him and sleeps. AR have their blanket on and talks about their day@beach and lost in peeping in each others eyes. Radhika winks suddenly and arjun feels shy and blushes. They both hug each other and sleeps.

    Its morning, Sam gets up and messages Arjun without noticing of Neil. Arjun replies to her hiding from radhika. All the four get ready. Sam fills her bag with all the cosmetics and AR and Neil with some clothing. Neil was bit annoyed with sam. They start to leave along with direction team. They reach almost the location point and searches for the best visuality and usage of the product.

    London, nandini welcomes the sponsors and gives presentation and handsover the copy of quotation. They were impressed and they sign to sponsor for education of children.

    The ad shoot goes on at T_______R waterfalls (guess the name for now) and they wrap up after completion. Sam messages arjun and arjun hides it from radhika again. Direction team leaves first. AR & NS stay there for sometime and enjoys a calm and serene surrounding with a quiet lake and the only roaring sound fills the silence is from the waterfalls, beautiful nature, greenary all over, hills reaching the sky.. (Looks like a perfect romantic date).

    Arjun and Neil goes for swimming in the lake, watched by radz & Sam. Arjun asks radhu to come, but Neil being annoyed doesn’t call Sam. She jumps into the lake and acts like moving far from them. Neil notices this and swims towards her saying going beyond the mentioned line will be dangerous and pulls her back. They both have an eye lock and Sam says sorry and they both hug tightly in water.

    PRECAP : AR’s romance and car breaks down.

    NOTE : I’ll reveal the place, waterfalls name and location 2moro as it will make u visualize 2moro’s romantic episode. Till then guess it T_______R.. 😉 😛 … Stay tuned…

  733. Samiha on

    “SMILE DOESN’T ALWAYS INDICATE HAPPINESS, RATHER IT ALSO INDIATES HOW MUCH YOU CAN HIDE PAIN” – Novelist Humayun Ahmed.

    • renu on

      samiha,…oh my dear,…

      loved it yaar,…i even experienced it dear,…

      & thanx a lot 4 reading my comments n its really touched my heart,…friend,…

  734. Samiha on

    “EVERYONE WILL GIVE YOU PAIN. YOU JUST HAVE TO FIND SOMEONE WHOSE GIVEN PAIN IS TOLERABLE FOR YOU”-Humayun Ahmed.

  735. lreena on

    May……August.my journey with manmarzian.at first I didn’t get Hindi well.but with watching manmarzian I learned it .u guys also helped me.
    I want to thank amena wholeheartedly.u really provided awesome post everyday.salute to u.
    Thanks aaaaaa llllloooooootttttt dears for ur wishes.u guys take care and lead a happy,smooth and confident life.☺☺???

  736. raashi on

    @ Thena….wonderful epidode again….m liking d caring n loving Arjun…..awwww…hope Rads gets well soon….Neil n Sam are such good friends…..n Nandini’s reaction to Saral: talk to my hand…haha….in between MMZ I was forcefully reminded of Palak from Comedy Nights with Kapil!

    @ Anu….good that u updated earlier…m getting to read so many awesome updates before going off to sleep….but my brain’s so sluggish….I’m unable to guess nething about d Falls:-\ n what r Arjun n Sam planning? Well guess I just need to wait for d next update….btw its always Radhika who blushes….but now Arjun was shying away n blushing…..well that’s a first…good one!

  737. raashi on

    @ Thena forgot to mention- that bit where Dadaji blesses them to give Junior choti n then Arjun’s look n Radhika’s blush…..it was all too cute:)

  738. renu on

    @ telly bytes:

    Please dont close this site & please open a new Fan page 4 Manmarziyan like Desitvbox .com,….

    please please please,…i dont wanna miss all my friends here n i dinn ve fb too,…please TB,consider my request,…i hope atleast u ll hear my request unlike Starplus,….

    U can find such amazing comments 4m all my friends here,…Each comments is highly commendable n no words 2 describe every1’s talent here,…

    please consider my request,..please,…here v r not chitchatting ,…n our comments r related ly 2 mmz,….

    • raashi on

      I wish they would consider ur request…..would b so happy…….infact that’s a wish of all of us which u voiced out!! Thanks a lot for that!! Love MMZ:)

  739. Samiha on

    “One can easily be identified by his Laugh. Everybody cries in the same way, but everybody laughs in their own way”-Humayun Ahmed.

  740. renu on

    @all freinds,..:

    Thanx a lot friends 4 reading my comment n m impressed by all ur encouraging words n i dinn try 2 write sth like theena, anu,amaya,natasha,kfar,…. but i wanna fill the blanks which most of us felt rushed by cvs,…

    But still i cant write my filler episodes comments as i ve less time 2 roam here cox of my studies friends,….n if possible ill try 2 post my reviews about nesam 2day r 2morrow n ll continue reminiscing old ardhika memories,…

    So that u can connect with current epi by theena n anu n link with remembering wonderful old ardhika memories thru my comment at times,…

    LOve u all Friends,….I never think that i love all my friends here like my real life friends,…Thank u soooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo much 4 all ur love 4 ur RENU,….

    • lreena on

      Ha…ha…sorry for being senti…renu.Anyway,hope u to have a good way in future.bye bye.I hope to meet u in future and have ur high thoughtful words.miss u ……?

    • Samiha on

      Thanks Renu, you really are a good friend…..

      None of us know each other in real life, but here, a virtual frienship and love that has grown amongst us will evermore be fresh in my mind and heart. Will miss you all after the site closes.

    • kfar on

      Samiha i really like ur quotes, its really nice dat ur finding time to check and see fMous lines. Very cooool 😀

  741. kfar on

    So, here I’m with my update and all my lovelies here just open your hearts and blind the undermining people with your positive light and beauty of your soul…(alright itz me after listening to the song ‘Titanium’

    You shoot down, but I won’t fall…Im TITANIUM..

    So just shutting and updating n guys I don’t wanna confuse u with my stories but I hope you like em..

    Alright, Chicas…this is dedicated ya all

    Drawn Together

    Radhika’s nerves were frazzled, her hands sweated, her body becoming cold with worry, confusion and bewilderment. The reality of her situation was getting to her, just months ago she had been attending parties with her mother and now she was going to a high end business party with her husband. Well, a pretend one. She was going to mess this up. What if she trips over something? What if she blurts out something inapproriate?

    She was not an unmarried girl in society. She was a wife. Wife of a multimillionaire tycoon, the black hearted prince that everyone hated most. She was now Mrs. Arjun Mehra.

    The thought made her dizzy. She lifted up her phone to cancel the plan, that is telling him not to include her in the dinner party, but, Radhika stopped herself. The contract, her freedom. He was going to divorce her if she did not particpate in the farce of this marraige

  742. anu on

    last week this day our beloved show went off air,, I think no one remembered.. remembering all the last episodes scenes I made a story not to miss any lead character, keeping aside all the other characters. I didn’t add birdsong too as it was theirs from then… 😉 😛 …. that’s the reason I posted today’s episode so early..

    NS with apple,
    AR on bed,
    Nandini di (main character as the whole story revolved around her revenge)..

  744. kfar on

    (ireena dedicating this update to u dear hav an amazing life ahead :D)

    A deep inhaled breath pulled up and gathered frayed nerves. She straightened her spine and tilted her chin in determination.Gathering up the before bath lotions she got into the bathroom. She needed a serious bubble bath. She pulled the knob, the water start filling and Radhika poured lavander bits in it for soothing up her nerves. The smell instantly vapoured around from the hot steaming water.
    She closed her eyes and dropped into the bath.

    Half an hour later, Radhika felt like herself, she straightened her hair and finally slid into the gown. She saw herself in the looking glass, the image blinked back surprised at her. The girl in the mirror was gone and a woman came out looking a lot like her but potrayed a mystery of altogether an another person.

    For the first in the tensed evening, a smile graced her lips, her run away confidence came back tenfold, it also brought a little colour to her pale cheeks.

    The black gown hugged to her curves, almost a second skin. The soft shimmery material was beautiful, it leff her shoulders and arms bare, but she had black mesh wrap to over up before going out.

    Radhika slid into a pair of cinderalla shoes, good, it lifted up her from the ground a good three inches. Now, she will not be dwarfed by her husband. She felt like a princess. Well, a demure princess to a black hearted prince, her mind commented wryly. Hmm, but he was not a bad sort. He was just…her forehead crinkled for a word to describe a tug of rush she felt when she saw his half smile, her mind grabbed a word from the zoom of intense vocabulary that she already thought of from looking at him from top to bottom. Yes, Alluring, he did exclude the mystic dark allure from his strong built frame, it is that she felt or Radhika just described a vampire. Well, he very well looked like and behaved like though.

    Devilshly handsome, compelling piercing hazel eyes. What plays behind the gaze? What was behind the mask of iron?

    Enough said, Radhika did not want to stray anywhere near him, or else she was danger of losing sanity if she so ever got any closer.

    She sat on the chair opoosite to the dressing table. Make to her suited minimal, a blooming pink lipstick, mascara, liquid compact and she was done.

  745. anu on

    renu, samiha thanq so much for the comments.. love u loads.. big hug..

    mandy : few hrs to go… ill reveal the details soon.. love u.. big hug..

    kfar: as usual u r making addicted to ur story.. keep in touch buddy… bug hug…

    mitty: where r u?we r missing u.. come soon dear..

  746. reeda on

    I really don’t knw wat to say
    he cud I possibly love ppl I have Neva met so much
    I have been a silent reader all along but can no longer help myself from commentin @ thena…there s no diff btw u nd cvs, infact u r almost better….@kfar,renu,anu,ireena, sameeha,Natasha,happy….I love u all and reaaly wish to meet u… I come here to read ur comment everytym and its like cold water to my head when m sad….love u loads deaaries….

  747. kfar on

    Just as she was searching for some jewelery, the door creaked open and their stood her husband near the threshold, husband/ pretend one/her freedom holder/in short a stranger.

    She saw his image in the mirror, has he grown an inch taller since she last saw him or was he this tall always?

    Her serene heart started palpitating again, he was wearing a black Armani suit, he looked deadly handsome, well except the granite expression. His hair gleaming black was gelled up a little. He had a box in hand, Radhika frowned.

    With deep sense of discomfort she got and turned around slowly.

    He wasn’t at the door but strolled himself inside and he stood now right in front of her.

    Radhika glanced at his eyes, his gaze arrested her in a lock of freeze, his eyes now warm brew, slid first at her hair, then down slowly, leisurely, to her forehead, eyes, it stayed a second there and Radhika’s breath held up, then it slid down to her nose, lips, cheeks, chin and all over her face, then down her body..

    His stare arrested on her bare shoulders, it made Radhika extremely uncomfortable, then his gaze slid down slowly to her toes. His eyes, sharp came back to hers. She tensed up yet again.

    Was he planning to give her a heart attack? if so, he was so close to succeeding.

    He then broke the intensely disturbing stare.

    “Turn around.” He said, his voice deep and burring, which made her jump a little.

    His voice flat and must say drawly and bored.

    Was this guy any interested in going to the party, Radhika had hoped to socialize with friends and family, as a said duty of newlyweds, but to her dissapointment and also relief is that..the man was as isolated and marooned as if a shipwrecked/not found/missing person/ in short, he was a complete recluse.

    “Turn around, Radhika.” He said again, this time a tad annoyed, his face still a hard granite.

    Why should she turn around? She wanted to ask, it was at the tip of her tongue, but she swallowed the words and did as she was asked for no as ordered to.

    She turned around, he a good four inch taller than her, he looked ibto her eyes in the mirror.

    He moved closer, his body warmth hit her back, still looking into her eyes, he opened the box and took out a beautiful looking ruby beaded necklace attached to a platinum clasp.

    Radhika gasped looking at the rubies, it was so beautiful the necklace, it blinded her eyes with its brightness. With mesmerised eyes she saw him open the clasp. He slid it around her neck, the cool heavy perch of it made her shiver. His warm fingers touched her skin while he clasped it. His touch heated her skin and blood. His fingers slid along the necklace creating a heating pattern at the back of her neck. His eyes turned a shade darker, his forefinger slid down slowly on her back, Radhika shivered feeling it, his finger travelled down her spine, but stopped midway. He buttoned the zip of her back, frimly zipping up her gown, her cheeks heated, her eyes stayed locked to his warm honeyed gaze.

    “Put on the earrings.”” He whispered into her ear, his breath fell on her neck and bare shoulder………

    ****

    A break I need girlies 😀

    Till den, dedicatin dis song to u all…David guette…’Titanium’

    You shoot me down, but I won’t fall…..I’m TITANIUM..

    • Thena on

      oh farha am freezed….

      wat a description my dear…..

      u stopped my breath buddy….keep rockin deary

    • Shub on

      Farha your writing has captivated me. I am falling in love with the story. Ur writing is too good. You will go places girl. I wish you a great future. Loved the lines especially his eye movement.. Very eager for the next episode.

    • kfar on

      Shub thanks so much friend:D
      it made my day reading ur comment I hv been tryin since morning to come here but got stuck since i was out all day 😀

      hahah hope i could go place and means ur falling in love wit my story 😀

    • kfar on

      missed a few words haha means a lot that ur falling in love wit my story n sigh, wish i cud go places,. its u all who comment so nicely on my story:D

  748. kfar on

    So, bear with me here here updating the other story…wat can I say I’m an owl. And i forgot I dedicate the song to Rads too, she and ever persistent nature to do, the song reminded me how she tried hard to stay strong even when people were shooting down her will…come whatever may she is TITANIUM..

    Chapter -4(Together)

    Did she just that out?Did he hear it? Oh my god. She looked back at him again. No, he didn’t. If he did, he will be running far far away from her. Real far away. Stupid fool! You almost did confess. She shouted in her mind. Somebody just shoot her now. She looked around. Crap, she did almost made a fool of herself in the middle of the crowded canteen. Oh, god, she was going to be sick.

    She pulled at her hand, but Arjun wouldn’t let go. She tried again and again.

    “What? What’s wrong?” He gave her his full attention after several pulls.

    God, what does he eat? He had so much strenght even though he was lean.

    Sam frowned.

    “Yeah, Rads, what’s wrong? You look pale.” She asked concerned.

    “Nothing is wrong.” She flustered up and fake laughed.

    They both gave her an eyebrow raise enquiry at the same time.

    what? She shook her head. It looks like they were both long lost sister and brother, who just met, and Radhika became the third wheel here.

    “I..I just need to use the washroom.” She explained, and slid a lock of hair behind the ear, it was irritating how fell over her eyes constantly.

    She avoided Arjun’s stare which was burning holes on the left side of her head.

    “Ohkay.” Sam nodded her head slowlyike she really was trying to understand her.

    She pushed back the chair and got up with heavy heart and mind full of propelling thoughts. She turned to leave the table but a tug at her hand held her still.

    “Arjun, my hand.” She said in a low tone, looking down at their joined fingers.

    His hand was large, glorious and manly and hers was puny, pale and totally unsuitable to be held with his.

    “You going to look at me?” His tone sounded intently curious.

    Oh, no, she was not looking at him.

    “Arjun, please, I need to go.” She said and pulled at her hand again.

    He got up too and drew closer to her.

    “Hey, look at me.” His voice a soft whisper of caress in her skin.

    She finally looked up at his eyes giving up.

    “What’s wrong?” He asked putting his hand on her cheek.

    “I..I just want…” She tried to form words.

  749. kfar on

    “Oh, my god, Ari, what the hell are doing with the stalker?” She heard Saina’s cold voice float through from behind Arjun.

    Radhika looked over his shoulder.

    Saina stood there with one slender hand over her hips, quite clear in an anger stance. The other arm held a shimmery blue designer bag. She had on a red sleevless long length figure hiugging dress. Her long shoulder length hair fell over in a smooth silky mess. She pushed aside the hair over her back.

    Great. Radhika was going to throw up. For real.

    She lookedback at Arjun. His eyes were closed. Like he was praying for something…..

    Radhika’s eyes slid to Saina’s.

    Hello, Ms. Model..who are you calling stalker? and Ari? really?

    ********

  750. dipika on

    hiiiiiii
    verrry good morning to alll chassanis here

    @Thena love u too dear…
    @renu its ok dear ur pov on old memories all do the work of icing on cake…n waiting for ur next pov…..
    @ kfar ur story is mindblowing dear…keep going…

  753. Abbz on

    Thena ur epis r like amaziinnn !!!! Can imagine each n evry wrd u write …… feel like d serial is stillll goin on ….

  755. Samiha on

    “Women can love you with so much emotion, that the men can’t even understand that….” – Humayun Ahmed.

  756. Samiha on

    “We love life, not because we are used to living, but because we are used to loving…” – Friedrich Nietzsche.

    “Love is life. And if you miss love, you miss life….” – Leo Buscaglia.

    “Love isn’t something that you find, love is something that finds you….” – Loretta Young.

    • Natasha on

      Wow samiha u r writting so good words. I am so surprised that u write so good english inspite of being so much young. Because i dont think that i could write so good english when i was as old as u. God bless u.

  758. Geeth on

    Hi friends iam new here iam following thena’s, anu’s and others work u guys are great… Simply rocking guys =D> =D> and sply thena u r fabulous no words to appreciate ur work keep rocking =D> =D> =D> =D> =D>

  759. anu on

    Frens, a very good morning to all….

    i am here again to ask u to pressurize the SP & swastik productions as well..

    WE ARE HAVING MANY WRITERS HERE WITH IMAGINATIVE STORIES like theena, kfar, anaya, natasha, riya and many more(sry if i missed any 1).

    One more request from my side is “”PLEASE UPDATE YOUR STORIES ON OUR FB PAGE TOO, as it wil be a proof to show how much love we have for the MMZ and eagerness to watch season2″”. Many people have been seeing our posts there and are almost sharing the posts to differents grps and pages..

    For example : Yesterday i posted 1st episode of my imaginative story of dym2, we had much response.. that episode was nothing when compared with kfar’s story and thena’s abstract and renu’s thesis.. i hope you understand, if we cant pressurize them,then we cant get it back.. ITS OUR LAST CHANCE.. within days our posts can reach main heads of two SPs… so think about it once… we will be waiting for u there on fb page…

    http://www.facebook.com/DYMTELLYfriends.999

    mail them at
    [email protected]
    [email protected]

  760. Natasha on

    I am posting my story.

    Episode 3:

    The episode starts with shreya and tiya talking in the magazine office. Tiya says mam do u still remember that radhika? Shreya says yes. She says i also remember how we moved her from our way.(fb shows that shreya saying to tiya over telephone i think u know what u have to do. Tiya says yes mam. It shows that a girl whose face is similar to ananya comes on the top of a hil and asks tiya why u have called me here? Tiya says welcome radhika and todays ur last day of life. Tiya pushes radhika from the top of the hill. Tiya calls shreya and says ur work is done mam. Shreya says good job). Now at present shreya says radhika was profitable for me as model of my magazine but only because of her my daughter riya was not able to work as a model so i had to kill radhika. And now look riya is number one model.

    In radhikas house mala says to dilip do u remember how we got radhikas deadbody? Dilip says yes(fb shows that an inspector saying to mala to identify the deadbody.mala says how i can identify? Its face is fully destroyed. The inspector says we are confirmed that its radhikas body as all the birth marks are matching. Mala cries and dilip consoles her). Now at present dilip says i have to go to mumbai for some work. Will u accompany me? Mala says yes.

    Its night. In anus house her parents are talking sitting in the garden. Mohit says our life filled with colours when ananya came to our life. He says to madhvi do u remember that day? She says how can i forget that day? (fb shows that mohit and madhvi are going somewhere by car. When they were passing near a hill madhvi sees a girl lying on the road. She asks to stop the car. They go near the girl and anu is shown who look alike radhika.Madhvi and mohit takes her to the hospital. After regaining consiousness the doctor says that she has lost her memory. Madhvi takes mohit outside the cabin and says we have no child. We can take this girl to our home and adopt her. Mohit says but… Madhvi says no but pls. Mohit says okey.)

    Nikita is standing on the road. She says to herself what to do? She calls every internee and askes to meet her immediately in the hotel road. Everyone comes and asks niki what happened? Rahul says have u gone mad that u called us in so late night? Kirti says stop fighting and asks niki to tell what happend? Niki says do u remember that dr arjun told us to give him patients report? Neil says yes i remember but so what? Did u reported that dr arjun is a mental patient ? niki says stop joking. She says by mistake i gave him the love letter which was given to me by my ex bf. Sam says what? Neil now suppose ur job is gone. Anu says if dr arjun finds about the letter then he will kick u out of the hospital.Niki says i know we just met today for the first time but we are friends right? Sam yes and asks now what can we do for u? Niki says this is the patients report and i have a plan for which i need ur help. Niki asks will u all help me? She asks for promise and everyone gives her promise by giving hand.

    Precape: everyone is wearing monkey cap. Niki says guys we have to be very careful.

    • Samiha on

      @Natasha: Nice episode, but will you be able to complete the story in just 10 episodes?

      And I didn’t write those, those are some famous quotes. I just translated them….. And thanks for the compliment…..

  761. Natasha on

    Guys can u tell me the date when this page will be closed? I am writing my story without dragging as far as possible. Hope u r liking it.

    Dear telly updates.com pls dont close this site. Other serials at least run for 1year but mmz ended so soon. Pls dont close this site or open a fan page where we will be able to comment just like here.

  762. Natasha on

    @anu what to do? when i type the address of our facebook on google then its come but nothing is showed . But when i go to the fb from ur comment i can see everything. Pls give a solution to this problem because after closing this site i will not able to enter to our fb on basis of ur comments.

  763. Annie on

    @farah -I read ur story on kyy page please continue it here It was an interesting start by the way????????

    • kfar on

      Heyy thanks a lot bud dat u read the story and haha i tried der but dey kicked me out and yep I wil try yaar 😀

  764. Annie on

    Also Natasha theena anu anaya riya samiha u guys write so wellllll I don’t miss a bit of it.u guys have rocked it???????????

  766. Riya on

    M
    M
    Z
    I fell in love with my way’s stones, I have my heart to my problem.
    Aapne raste ki pathar ke sath pyaar hogey…….
    Most heart touching dialog of Arjun………..

  767. ishika on

    hey did any1 watch the grand wrapup of DYM .. it seems there was a grand party before they wrapped up the show

  768. anaya on

    Episode 4:
    The screen shows ‘tour begins today’
    Students are boarding the 2 buses. The bus is about to leave. Some students have not yet arrived. They waited for another 15 minutes. Then with permission from vikrant sir they left. As soon as the bus left from gate and was about to be out of sight, our 3 so came running. They yelled rokkooooooo… Driver didn’t seem to hear them. Neither did any of the students or teachers. The bus was out of sight. Sana : ” great! Now what? Let’s go back home”. Pancho : ” oh no. You know na.. My parents left for hometown as I was going for the study tour”
    Reeva : ha yaar. Also I had boasted so much about the sceneries we will get to see to my cousins. Now they will all bully me. No. I can’t go back”
    Sana: then what will we do now?
    Just then our 3 MA enter the college ground. Jagat : ” mene kaha tha na. Wo ankur or uske chamche kuch to karenge Hume na le Jane ko”.
    Parth:”chill mar yaar. Hum jayenge. Unke sath hi trip enjoy karenge”
    Ansh :” par kese? ”
    Parth jeep ki taraf dekhta he.
    Ansh:” no way…. Jeep me. Siliguri tk?”
    Parth: ” nahi yaar. Mene Anank ko phone kiya tha. Trip ki planning ke hisaab se aaj raat wo NH se 2 km door ke rajdhani hotel me stay karenge. Mene google map me details dhond lie he. We will catch them there. Ok?”
    All 3 joined there right hands together.
    They are about to start the jeep.
    Far away from them our 3 sp r standing.
    Panchi :” yaar. Dekho. lagta he wp bhi late ho bye”
    Sana :” oh. Wo log to time pe aa jaye to surprise hona chahye”
    Reeva :” ya right”
    Panchi :” chalo unse puchte he ki wo ab kya krne wale he”
    Sana ” rhne do yaar. Wo jo kare hame kya he”
    Panchi : tum nhi samajhogi yaar. Me ghr wapis nhi ja skti or Reeva bhi”
    Sana looks at Reeva. Reeva gestures with a nod.
    Sana sighs.ok
    They head towards the 3 MA.
    Panchi :” hai”
    Jagat : ” hey”
    Panchi :” tum log trip pe Jane ke liye aye the na?”
    Jagat : “ha. Par bus miss ho gyi”
    Panchi :” hm bhi late ho gaye. Ab kya karoge?”
    Jagat : hm log soch rhe the ki jeep me unhe follow krke raat tk catch up kr le.
    Panchi: oh .ok…..
    Jagat: haa
    Jagat looks at panchi n sees her fingers playing with her culry hair n was feeling reluctant though it felt she wanted to say smthng.
    Jagat: would u like to join us?
    Panchi’s eyes gleam. She looks over her shoulder to her friends. Reeva is happy. Sana just stood still.
    The scene focuses Sana & Parth remembering their lab encounter. Both looked annoyed at the sight of the other.
    Panchi : ” yes. Thank you”
    Ansh jumped with his right fist clutched saying “yes” as if he won a game. Everyone turned towards him with a ? on their face. Ansh ” sorry” and he looks with a cute smile on his face. Or uski ankhe sirf Reeva pe thi, jo blush kr rhi thi.
    Flash back:
    Reeva ovr her phone ” him shayd late ho jayenge. Panchi ab tk nhi ayi’
    Ansh :” oh.ok.”
    And after 10 minutes, he texts Jagat and Parth that his jeep is in workshop and will come within 15 minutes.
    The screen again shifts to the 3ma and 3sp planning to go together scene. Sana looks is disapproval towards Panchi. Panchi aawaz k bina Sana ko hoton se ‘please’ khti he. Sana surrenders to her plea. Ansh is on drivers seat. Sana,jagat, panchi n reeva peeche bethne jate he. Parth sits on the adjacent seat. Ansh :” Parth yaar, tujhe piche bethna acha lagta he na.” Parth looks with an ‘ achha bachuu. Larkiyo ko dekha to hm out’ look. Ansh smiles sheepishly.
    Parth gets down. Jagat says I also enjoy sitting at the back. Reeva or Sana if any of prefer to sit in the front seat……. Before Sana gets up, Reeva jumps out. I will sit. Reeva and Ansh on the front seat, Sana n Panchi on one side and Parth n Jagat on the other. Jeep starts. And on screen, it displays ‘ the journey begins…..’ BG music. Pause.
    Precap: jeep takes a sudden brake and Sana clutches Parth’s hand with eyes shut

    • Samiha on

      Hah, Nice episode. So you are fixing

      (Parth-Sana
      Jagat-Panchi
      Ansh-Reeva)

      hmm, seems interesting….

    • anaya on

      I am editing the Hindi convos to English. Hope it works fine.
      Jagat:” I told you,that ankur and his gang will do something so as to keep us from going over the trip.
      Parth:” chill yaar. We will go and enjoy the trip with them for sure.”
      Ansh: “but how?”
      Parth looks over towards the jeep.
      Ansh:” no way…..on jeep? Till siliguri?”
      Parth: no yr. I called anank. As per the planning they will stay overnight in rajdhani hotel 2 km away from NH. I have collected the details. We will catch up by then.

    • anaya on

      Panchi: look. It seems they also got late.
      Sana: we shud b surprised only if they r right on time.
      Reeva: ya right.
      Panchi : let’s go and ask them wat they r gonna do now
      Sana: let it be yaar. It doesn’t matter.
      Panchi: u won’t understand yaar. I can’t go back home. Nor can Reeva.

    • anaya on

      Panchi: u too came to go for the trip. Right?
      Jagat: ya. But we missed the bus.
      Panchi: we also got late. Wat r u gonna do now?
      Jagat: we were thinking to go chase them by tonight.

    • anaya on

      Ansh was looking at Reeva alone n she was blushing.
      Flash back:
      Reeva over her phone: we might be late. Panchi has not yet arrived.
      Ansh: oh.ok

    • anaya on

      Ansh: parth, you prefer to sit in back seat.right ?
      Parth gave a ‘ great. As soon as u saw girls, am out’ look.

    • anaya on

      I hope this is ok because I didn’t have my computer at hand today and couldn’t just copy and edit. Sorry aastha for any inconvenience.

  769. Savera on

    Hiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii All My Very Very Dear Friends

    Its really sad , some of our friends(IREENA , ARU) r leaving…..

    some ll leave in coming days
    nothing lasts for always

    so I m dedicating MY THIS POEM TO ALL OF US

    Once we were toooooooo close
    Our friendship was bud of rose
    Like the each n every petals of flower
    We were near to each other, not far

    With the running time, bud grew
    It was soft n sweet , in my view
    Bloomed… as a magnificent flower
    Which attracted all with its power

    It faced the burning sun of summer
    as well as, the chilly wind of winter
    But, how long ? it could tolerate
    It had to accept, its coming fate

    Magnificent flower, completed its time
    Our friendship ended its lovely rhyme
    Blowing wind separated the petals of flower
    Passing time took us away and very far

    ALL MY DEAR NOT FINISHED YET

    After few days, there, grew a weed
    Where, flower left its each n every seed
    Oh.. Lord…. It is the same old flower
    To attract all, again, with its magical power

    SO ALL OF YOU WHEREVER YOU GO, OUR FRIENDSHIP SEED(LOVE N MEMORIES) LL BE ALWAYS THERE IN YOUR HEART

  770. zara on

    hii friends,
    natasha, thena,kfar like your mnm episode guys! !!! fabulous imaginary scene would be created by you masterpiece peoples …

    @thena- hospital scene omg arjun’s teary eyes – its make me emotional then sindoor scene wow like it…continue it.!!

    @natasha- awesome story dear… madhavi and mohit nice people. they want to adopt memory lost victim … hate riya tiya. Now waiting for next episode . keep going on dear it is interesting! !!! 🙂

    @anu, rocking mnm episode wow nesam scene–romantically like it . for precap waterfalls scene I guessing one waterfalls name which is come in my mind Thalaiyar Waterfall don’t know it is ryt or wrong… Now waiting for ardhika’s moments !!!! eagerly waiting for next episode. 🙂

    @anaya- wow wow wow wow anaya I doesn’t have a word to express my feeling … omg 3 ma and 3 sp are together in one jeep omg… really its makes me very exciting vardhmaan college students going tour at hill for study purpose. precap is also fab..sana parth scene luv it …. can’t wait for next …tnx anaya for giving such a fantastic college youth story as I want
    🙂 🙂
    thnx u all guys for continuing marvelous story n our romantic mnm pair ardhika, nesam love you guys ” have a nyc day ” ♡♡♥

  771. Savera on

    A big hiiiii to all my MMZ friends,
    first of all very sorry to all of you , 4 bng so late to gv my comment.

    Oh THENA u rly took my heart dear,
    what a splendid epis(127 &128), finally Radhika said d 3 magical words 2 Arjun.
    My dear with which words, do I praise? luv u 4 dis dearie.
    Ur writing is like fresh, peaceful & soothing love music, which I m loving it like anything.
    Continue it my dear, in ur very own way.
    Ur this friend is always waiting 4 it.

  772. Savera on

    Hiii Anaya
    Ur epi(3&4) r nice, I think in d coming epi full masti n dhamaal ll b there.
    missing my excursion.. keep writing. I m rly rly enjoying it.
    waitng 4 d nxt epi.

  773. Savera on

    Hiii ANU

    VERY NICE , I liked it very much.

    they r Nandini parents or Arjun real parents? ,
    I think nw ll cum sm twist ..

  774. Savera on

    Hey Natasha
    i wz thinking d same dat Anu is Radhika.
    story sounds very interesting n emotional.
    I m liking it, good job Natasha
    So, what ll b d Title? hv u thought anythng…

  775. dipika on

    Savera wht a splendid poem dear!! tears r rolling dwn frm ma eyes…overwhelmed… really this the beautiful flower of friendship…..we r the petals of ths flower….didn’t wannna loose any petal…

  776. Savera on

    Hey Kfar my budding novelist
    first of all thanks 4 these nice words. it really means a lot to me.
    you r an amazing writer n Ur novel story is awesome.
    I m rly waiting 4 ur book.

    • kfar on

      Coming from the heart dear i love ur imagination and luv the lines alot might I add….n yeah me too hope ke chance miljaye n publish hojaye soon 😀

  777. anu on

    The episode starts with Neil and Sam having an eye lock and both hug tightly in water, but neil is still little bit annoyed. While our love buddies bit hesitant to get close in water, acts normal and enjoys swimming.. The duo couples after much enjoyment in water come out and walk for a while in the forest in opposite directions. Sam while walking in forest feels impossible to walk with high heels and hopping on one foot,she struggles to remove her high heel without tripping over. Neil finds sam not behind him & turns back & runs to her & offers his shoulder for support. Later he moves forward still being annoyed. Arjun and radhika find a small hut laid on wooden  pillars. They go inside but couldn’t find anyone there, as it looked as some tourists made it on their own.

    San follows neil and says thanks for the help idiot, but I would now like to get into your arms, forwarding her hands up to him and winks. He smiles and he wraps an arm around her back to lift her & he lifts and takes a breath while his face is buried in her hair. Sam wraps her hands around his neck and both have an eye lock. Its an awesome Eye lock which we have never seen it before(between them) having a meaning of apologies, care, love, affection and warmth.

    Radhika peeps out through the small vent while rubbing her hair with towel and listens to BIRDSONG ( song made by sounds of birds). But it was bit dominated by the roaring sound of waterfalls. Arjun can’t divert his eyes from her and moves forward to come close to her making a chuckle. A low chuckle behind her causes her heart to jump into her throat. She turns around to find out , it is none other than her love, Arjun. He holds her so tight that the water drops fall down from their wet clothes even after a long time since they came out of lake. Radhika feels uncomfortable as someone can see them and tries to get out of his arms. Arjun notices this and goes out angrily..

    Neil makes Sam sit on a knee wall, both hug each other and he kisses her on her forehead,followed by eyes, cheeks,nose.. When he was about to kiss her ears, she tickles. He smiles seeing her and hugs her followed by kissing on her neck. Arjun comes near the lake and calls out NS & radhika as they have to go back to their homes. All the duo couples were about to leave and joins at the place where they parked the car.

    PRECAP : SAM along with ARJUN goes missing from the place and neil & radhika were left alone..

    (THOSEGHAR WATERFALLS near THOSEGHAR VILLAGE in satara)

    • kfar on

      I like thewhole outdoorsy romance…keep going dear. Luv nesam and ardhika here they r so cooler in ur story 😀

    • Samiha on

      Ohhh! It’s real nice…. Hope Arjun’s annoyance goes away soon. Today you just showed(I mean wrote) only ’bout ArDhika and NeSam… Missed the office… Anyways, thanks for updating even on sunday(unlike SP).. Ha ha… Carry on…

  778. Samiha on

    “Perfectness is not attainable. But if we chase perfectness, we can reach exellence…” – Vince Lombardi.

    ”Nothing is impossible, the word itself says i’m possible!” – Audrey Hepburn.

  779. kfar on

    Thena Anu anaya Natash- Awesome guys i really loveeee reading ur epis hope one day urs will be selected as series on t…keep up the good workguys:D

    renu- i loveeeee ur reviews. Amaxing and outstanding no words 😀

    thanks a lot to Thena renu, raashi, Jayaru, Tanya, anu , Samiha, aastha, Mandy, ireena, ure, clara, riya, mitty happy, abi, ishika, and if im missing anyone do sorry yaar and thanks a lot dears for liking and encouraging my stories 😀

  780. Samiha on

    ”An unexamined life is not worth living…” – Socrates.

    ”Believe that life is worth living and your belief will create help the fact…” – William James.

    “Strive not to be of success, rather strive to be of value…” – Albert Einstein.

  781. kfar on

    @all- how was day guys? mine sucked big time and i think my cold got worse and also my mobile data is almost dead, dat means its taking forever to upload a page or site and soon der wil be no net. Hope u had a good day but not like mine 😀

    der, haha dats a sad talk, well missing Manmarziyan lotssssssssss

    @Anu- Hey I sent the emails with the given ids and thanks so much for da info and girl ur epis are awesome:D

    Will update my stories soon guys 😀

    • Samiha on

      Aww! Poor thing! Feeling sorry for you…:(…Try to update soon dear and hope for a better tomorrow…..

    • Savera on

      Hiii dear,
      pls get well soon. I m giving u home remady 4 ur cold.

      take 2 spoon of honey with half cup of warm water, just b4 going to bed.
      after taking it sleep is must. so tek rest n get well soon.
      To update d story. ha ha ha

    • Shub on

      Farah, drink lots of warm water through out the day. U will get will soon. Take care dear! .come back fast with your stories.

    • Thena on

      hey farha…feelin sad yaar….

      its ok…just cold…ll get cleared soon…..

      wish u 2 get well soon so tat v can njoy ur story….hahaha….

      God bless u deary….

  782. Mandy on

    Hey all sorry I dinn cmnt actually to say I cmntd but dis stipid thing got deleted so guys now …….

    Hey farha as usual ur a dhamaka love u !!!

    Hey anu ur epi is now having a new twist n turn love it !!!

    Hey savera ur too cool yaar I mean ur cmnts awsm !!!!!

    Hey anaya d story ws !!muuuuuuah !!

    Hey renu ur really an explosion u alwas cum with a new th love u also !!

    N now thena anaya ur s r suchly intrstin yaar !! Missed u

    hey

  783. kfar on

    @Samiha- hey i saw dat and read ur parents are doctors dats amazing and dear wat is ur calling? u want to become a doctor too?

  784. anu on

    The episode starts with Neil and Sam having an eye lock and both hug tightly in water, but neil is still little bit annoyed. While our love buddies bit hesitant to get close in water, acts normal and enjoys swimming.. The duo couples after much enjoyment in water come out and walk for a while in the forest in opposite directions. Sam while walking in forest feels impossible to walk with high heels and hopping on one foot,she struggles to remove her high heel without tripping over. Neil finds sam not behind him & turns back & runs to her & offers his shoulder for support. Later he moves forward still being annoyed. Arjun and radhika find a small hut laid on wooden pillars. They go inside but couldn’t find anyone there, as it looked as some tourists made it on their own.

    San follows neil and says thanks for the help idiot, but I would now like to get into your arms, forwarding her hands up to him and winks. He smiles and he wraps an arm around her back to lift her & he lifts and takes a breath while his face is buried in her hair. Sam wraps her hands around his neck and both have an eye lock. Its an awesome Eye lock which we have never seen it before(between them) having a meaning of apologies, care, love, affection and warmth.

    Radhika peeps out through the small vent while rubbing her hair with towel and listens to BIRDSONG ( song made by sounds of birds). But it was bit dominated by the roaring sound of waterfalls. Arjun can’t divert his eyes from her and moves forward to come close to her making a chuckle. A low chuckle behind her causes her heart to jump into her throat. She turns around to find out , it is none other than her love, Arjun. He holds her so tight that the water drops fall down from their wet clothes even after a long time since they came out of lake. Radhika feels uncomfortable as someone can see them and tries to get out of his arms. Arjun notices this and goes out angrily..

    Neil makes Sam sit on a knee wall, both hug each other and he kisses her on her forehead,followed by eyes, cheeks,nose.. When he was about to kiss her ears, she tickles. He smiles seeing her and hugs her followed by kissing on her neck. Arjun comes near the lake and calls out NS & radhika as they have to go back to their homes. All the duo couples were about to leave and joins at the place where they parked the car.

    PRECAP : SAM along with ARJUN goes missing from the place and neil & radhika were left alone..

    (THOSEGHAR WATERFALLS near THOSEGHAR VILLAGE in satara)…. <3 <3

  786. Riya on

    Love me thoda aur!
    Let me tell you tonight
    When the stars are shining bright
    Love me thoda aur!
    Just take my hand in your hand
    And then don’t you let it go
    Love me thoda aur!
    All I need is the time
    When I promise that you’ll be mine
    Love me thoda aur!
    With you by my side
    I know I’ll be fine

  787. Natasha on

    I am posting my story.

    EPISODE:4

    The episode starts with niki saying we have to replace the letter and have to keep this report. Neil says are u a fool? dont u know that we cant go to dr arjuns room without his permission? Niki says i know and thats why i have brought these. Niki gives to all monkey cap. Sam says are we thief that we will go wearing monkey cap? Rahul says we dont have any choice. Niki tells them the plan. Anu says what? I cant do this. Niki says pls anu help me. Anu says okay. All wear monkey cap. Niki says guys we have to be very careful. They all go to hospital. Before entering to hospital parth says look the watchman is here. If we go to hospital at this time he will suspect us. Kirti says what can we do then? Neil says i know what we have to do. This mans girlfriend lives nearby if we bribe her then our work will be done. Neil goes and comes with watchmans gf. He gives her a cup of tea and asks her to give it to the watchman. She gives it to watchman and he falls asleep. Neil says this man will now sleep for 2 days. Niki says great. They all enter to the hospital. Parth says hey dr gupta is today on night guard. Kirti says if he catches us then we all will lose our job. Rahul says i know a weak point of dr gupta. He always fear his wife. Rahul sends a sms to dr gupta as his wife. He writes” come to home right now. I have find out about ur affair. Dr gupta recieves the sms and says what? what is she saying? Dr gupta leaves the hospital. Niki says wow rahul. U made dr gupta very afraid. Neil says niki now go to the dr arjuns room . Niki goes to the room and replaces the papers. Kirti says do fast niki. Niki comes out of the room. Someone is coming towards them. Parth hits the man on his head with a stick from behind. They all run out from the hospital. They all laugh. Anu says mission successful.

    All are going to their home. Neil & sam are going together. Sam says i have found a new friendship after coming to swarage. Sam says i was shettered when yash bumped me. Now i again feeling happy. Neil says friendship is our world. We can get all happiness from friendship. Neil says u may also find ur love through this relation. I have found my love through this relation. He looks at sam and sam looks on. Samjhawan song plays………….

    Anu comes to home. She thinks what happened at her first day of hospital. She recalls dr arjun and his words. She smiles and says sir is strict but not bad and thats why he saved me today from falling down.

    Its morning. All internees are sleeping though its already 9:00am. Alarm rings and they all go to the hospital. Dr gupta calls them and says why r u late? dont u know the rules? Dr arjun says why r u all sleepy? did u go to complete any mission at night? They look at each other.

    Dr arjun calls dr anu at his cabin. He says u have to attend a operation with me. Anu becomes happy.

    Mala and dilip comes to mumbai. Mala says radhika always wanted to come to this city and work as a tpo model.

    PRECAP:Mala sees anu and calls her as radhika. Anu dont notice her and gets into the car.

  788. dipika on

    Khushboo si hai baatein hamari..
    DYM ki yaado se Judi ye Duniyadari…
    Ye Dosti bani rahe ye hai arziyaa…
    Salamat rahe Dosti…Yariya..Manmarjiyaan…

    This is smalll try for our Friendship my deariess
    pls tell me hw is it…..

    @ mandy i missed u too dear…whr were u?
    @ anu incredible episode…. liked Nesam romance today…. want more ardhika moment….
    @ kfar u missed my name…jus kidding dear…its ok…n waiting for ur story…
    @ renu whr r u dear…plz cum with u pov soon…

  789. Natasha on

    EPISODE:5

    The episode starts with arjun and anu going to the operation theater. They do a successful operation. The operation become suceessful because of anu. Arjun saysi want to give a tribute to u. Come to my cabin at lunch time and i will take u to a resturant. Anu happily says yes.

    Sam and neil are in child ward. Neil and sam argue about to prescribe medicine. Sam says what do u know about medicines? U r a illiterate doctor. Neil says and what about u? U r a fake doctor. U r not a doctor but a witch. Sam says angrily what? Am i a witch? Neil says yes. Sam fetches a teddy bear from a child patient and hits neil. Neil hits sam with a doll. Sam pretends as if she get injurded. Neil runs near her and asks is she all right. Sam laughs. The children also laugh.

    Its lunch time. Anu bumps with niki. Niki says where r u going ? Anu says to dr arjuns cabin . He will take me out for lunch. Niki says wow! He fell for u. Anu says no. He is giving me a treat as i have did a successful operation. Niki says congrates!

    Anu comes to dr arjuns cabin. Arjun says lets go. Anu gets into the car. Mala calls her as radhika. Anu dont notice her and goes. Mala says to dilip i have seen radhika. Dilip says u r dreaming about her as u love her a lot.

    Anu and arjun comes in a resturant. They order same food. They talk a lot about their life. After eating when anu stands up she slips and arjun hold her. They have a eyelock.
    They reaches to hospital. Arjun says now go for work. Anu says thanks for the dinner. Arjun smiles and goes . Anu smiles and thinks about arjun.

    All internees are in the looker room. They talks and laughes. They hear an announcement about go to the hall room. They comes to the hall and sees dr gupta, dr arjun and a lady. Dr gupta says this pretty lady is the head of administration of swarage and her name is dr jasmin maheswari. She greets everyone and says nice to meet u all. Dr gupta says she got award of best administrator doctor. So there will be party tonight at my house. All internees clap for dr jasmin. Dr jasmin says ur dress code is western.

    All internees talks about the party. Niki says i am confused about which dress to wear. Kirti says i will have to parlour as its first party of hospital. Neil says everyone go and finish ur work quickly then we have to do preparations for party. Anu says i will not attend. Sam says no anu. U have to come. Otherwise dr jasmin will mind. Rahul,parth and all supports sam.

    Its evening and anu is at home. She says to herself i will not able to wear western dress. Madhvi comes and gives her a very beautiful salwar. Anu becomes happy. Madhvi says ur dad brought it for u. Its very expensive and exclusive.

    Sam is trying all her dresses. Piyali (sams mother) comes and says wear this dress. She gives sam a black western dress. Sam says its beautiful. She huges her.

    PRECAP: All internees comes to dr guptas house.

  790. dipika on

    @Natasha thank you so much for apritiating my efforts…
    this epi is awsome one…spl anu n arjun eyelock sceen…

    @Savera thanks buddy its really great for me….love u….
    @mandy thank you dear for such great word….
    n feelin sad for battry n no network situation… may ths issues solve soon…n u can get back on tu….
    Love u All…

  791. kfar on

    Thank u so much guys for the concern Samiha, Thena, Savera, Shub..I did try the remidies, and had also put two extra spoons of honey as I like it so much n I drank lots of warm water…my throat is still sore but the nose block is gone..love loads guys..

    Dipika I never forget u dearyyyyy 😀

    Since I have been havin a downer day, I listened to Pink, she has such a beautiful voice.

    Dedicatin the song- Pretty pretty please, dont u ever ever feel that u r less than less than perfect….

    Drawn Together

    “Put on the earrings.” He whispered into her ear, his warm fell on her right shoulder, and neck.

    She saw in the mirror, he held his hand near her hand, the box open with small ruby earrings, they were more like tops.

    With held up breath, she removed the tops from the box, all the while aware of his burning gaze on her through the mirror.

    Thoughts creeped into her mind while put on the tops, he looked so uncaring and nonchalant and the jewellery was so thoughful to bring, did he even buy it himself? or did he order his secretary to pick something up for his wife.

    But, what could she expect from him, she is seeing him now after months. He never asked how she was doing? how her workshop was going or anything whereas she saw his whereabouts in the tabloids and magazines.

    Only a week ago he was in London for a business venture, a beautiful lady on his arm and in camparision, Radhika felt herself completely inadequate.

    All these thoughts made her to worry.

    “Where are your thoughts?” Came a brazen enquiry which made her to jump.

    He was standing too close to her back, his hands on her bare shoulders, he had took the wrap and was putting it around her.

    “I…I..” She started to explain, but she halted, when tilted his head to the side a little and slid curious gaze all over her face, his hands surrounded her body, Radhika felt hitch in her breath.

    “You’re like an open book, they’re going to eat you alive if you don’t wipe out that stricken look.” He said, a word of advice and a little admonishing in his tone.

    He slid his hand up on her shoulder and glided his fingers on the rubies, his forefinger stopped on the beating pulse on her neck, he rubbed a little, just a touch of whisper, but it raked hot shivers all over her skin.

    His other hand, held her right hand over the wrap, his fingers slid into hers, his front plastered with not an inch of gap.

    “Always look sharp, never show your weakness or they are going to fall on you like vultures. That’s what happens in business.” He adviced her more on the worldly living.

    Radhika’s twenty percent sane mind tried to grab his advice, but the other eighty percent of her not so sane mibd now was getting warmly aware of his delicate glid of touch over her pulse, aware of his heat at her back, aware of him all together.

    Then it was all gone as he moved away, and Radhika was left cold, bereft and all alone and disturbed her no end that she felt all this. She dismissed the intense though as they came in her mind.

    Look sharp, she declared his advice to her mind, she sqaured her shoulders and put on a brave face and turned around to face him.

    He was just an inch distance to her, he peered down at her, his assessing gaze running all over her features, then he concluded in a word whatever he saw there written on her face in a pleased tone.

    “Good.” He succinted and turned towards the door, and Radhika felt as if they were going to the border and fight for the country and get slaughtered in the process.

    God, he was a complete drill master and what was he talking about vultures? were the people that bad since where they are going? if so why can’t they just decide to not go altogether and go to a restaurant and have a quiet dinner, but sigh, they had to appear publicly sometime or the people going to think if something is fishy, this all hurried marraige betweem them had already raised quite an eyebrows.

    As she read in the morning paper after the night of their wedding, news like…

    “The Black Hearted Tycoon Prince Had Finally Got Himself Hitched.”

    “What’s the reason behind the hurried wedding.”

    “The Business Honcho is spotted with other women hanging on his arm every week…We Ask Where Is The Wife?!?”

    These all news made her feel disgusted. Why are the Papparazi so prying? Can’t they just take a hike, she thought, feeling like tearing of the news articles into pieces.

  793. Thena on

    Hi al dearieeeesssssss……….

    EPISODE 129:

    SCENE 1:

    title song bgm:

    The office ws shown busy…..tejj & zubin sittin in a cabin,wer preparin the agenda….manya & kritika stood 2gether discussin on the room’s decorations…..piyali ws shown supervisin,claryfyin staff doubts & givin suggestions 2 decorators on hangin wallpapers…..she got a call 4m sam,hr face lukd delighted while talkin & ended hr call wid a glee of contentment……

    She called all staff members,said tat nesam & ardhika wud b thr wid them 2morrow……every1 cheered up & ws sharin a smile wid 1 another……she applauded every1 on their work & wishd them gud luck 4 the nxt day’s meetin…..

    NIGHT: (nesam & ardhika reached mumbai):

    arjun unlocked the door & radz stood bhind hm…..the moonlight glimmered on the portico…..he opened the door & stretched hs hand 2 hrs lik a prince askin 4 a princess’s….she smiled & placed hr hand in hs……she tuk hr inside,both wer havin an exultant smile on their faces……arjun made hr lie on the bed & covered hr wid bedsheet….wen he ws about 2 leave,she called hm,hr upper frame wer lil upward wid a balance on hr elbows……..he uttered ssshhhhhhh,hs index finger on hr mouth…….raisin up hs eyebrows,he gave a sedate nod & went out…….she kept hr head on pillow,immersd in2 thots wid a beatific grin stickin 2 hr lips…..arjun came thr,hs r8 hand carryin a plate of bread slices & hs left,a glass of milk…..she ate all those slices as if she had been hungry since ages…..she drank the milk in a gulp leavin arjun 2 smile broadly…….he caressed over hr head & askd 2 tak rest sayin tat 2omorrow wud b a busy day in office…..he switched off the light & tuk hs place bside hr….he closed hs eyes & she ws all admirin hm……

    Sam lukd exhausted as hr energy ws out of the box……she threw hrself over bed ,hr face fell on roof & feet touchin the floor…..

    “neil….neeeeeiiiiiillllll…..idiiiiiiot”,she called while lyin in the same posture……

    she bellowed tat she ws terribly hungry,lifted hr head up,hr hands clutchin hr 4head…..hr eyes stood still seein neil cumin thr wid food plates….she got up enthusiastically & sat on the bed…..in a minute she put down the empty plate & burped…..neil didn take off hs eyes 4m hr al the while & she smiled at hm 4m ear 2 ear……

    SCENE 2:

    A house ws shown outside….it ws a bungalow wid large gates & wide entance…..the garden alongside the parkin lot ws creepin 2 the backyard…..

    A man ws gettin upstairs,hs hand ws shown havin a photograph….he knocked at the door of a room & went in……a lady ws shown hr back,leanin in a chair cross legged…..he gave hr the photo & made an exit….she tuk a luk at the photo & it ws of sam……

    “i ll soon c u samaira khanna”,she said tappin the photo…..

    SCENE 3:

    sunrays fell in ardhika’s room thru the open window……arjun’s head ws rested on pillow & radz’s ws on arjun’s chest……hs r8 arm ws under hr head & left wrappin around hr waist at back……radz woke up 2 c arjun sleepin…..she held hr heaad up,kissed hs chest & smiled…..

    “Oh!!!! cute baby is sleepin”,said radz pinchin hs nose……

    she stepped down the bed & made hr move fast seein the clock…….she got a caall,hr screen ws shown ‘PRIVATE NUMBER calling…….’ …….she attended the call wid a ? of ‘who it might b’ on hr face…….

    “hello Mrs.Arjun…..kaise mera bhai ‘Arjun Mehra’ hai?”,asked the other end…..

    “aapka bhai!!!!!!!!!!!…..nandhini…..?”,radz wondered….

    END of epi 129….feelin nt wel yaar …so slow updates…..keep ur feedback buddies….luv u loads

  794. Thena on

    yipppeeeeee….our mmz has got nw 6.3 out of 10 in IMDb……those who didn rate pls rate it wid 10 stars….it deserves 2 get more than 8 yaar…..

  795. kfar on

    Maybe that’s the reason he was taking her out, to put rumours to rest, if so then Radhika should bear up to an act of her life.

    “Are you going to come along any time soon or are you going to stand there like a statue for the rest of your life?” He enquired her annoyed, with an right eyebrow raise, standing near the door, like a tall, dark, avenging angel. A very irrirated dark angel.

    Alrighty, She hurriedly grabbed her silver clutch and moved along.

    Ten minutes later, in his black lambourghini, sitting beside to him in the luxurious interior of the car, Radhika felt herself go into an immense panic mode, it attacked her nerves into a furray of deep rooted tensed and anxious emotions.

    She can’t do this? She can’t a wife to this silent tycoon? He already made it clear aboutnot nice people accounters.

    Just then she felt a firm grasp on her nervous knee, she saw his hand hold on it. She didn’t realize she was doing it. It was a nervous habit, it a tell tale sign of how anxious she was.

    She glanced sideways at him. He was looking at her, his expression, my god, for the first time, his edgy sharp expression was changed into soft lines. His eyes were light. He slid his fingers on her cheek. It warmed her cool skin and also awashed her with safe and secure feeling.

    “Everything is going to be fine. I’m right here with you, yes?” He said slowly, soflty, giving her immense relief which made her expel out the tensed breath.

    She nodded her head looking deep into his eyes.

    There was a quirk to his lips, his eyes lightened more.

    “There’s the colour.” He murmured, rubbing her cheek a little with his forefinger and thumb.

    This made her blush several shades. His hand loosened it’s firm grip on her knee, just then the Limo jerked to a stop from it’s smooth glide.

    Oh, heavens, the panic returned again, when the door opened, and he got out of the car.

    Just as immediately there were blinding of several flash lights. She saw from wincing eyes that he streched his hand for her.

    Radhika expelled a deep breath and got out of the car by putting her quivering hand on his. She looked around and several photograph fluttered up to them. They were desperate to click them together.

    She felt a hand slid around her waist, pulling her to the side.

    Radhika glanced up at him, and was shocked to see him smile wide down at her, god in heaven, this was the first time she saw him smile and it more blinding than the camera flashes. His white even teeth gleamed but not his eyes, indicating her it was a farce and fallacy his public image, immediately her guard went up high but not towards the people around but towards him. He was becoming a danger to her, she need to protect herself from his caring fake behaviour.

    “Smile, darling, or the tabloids are going to think I beat you up behind the closed door. I don’t want another title as a ‘Wife beater’ in the headlines tomorrow, So act like you’re in love with me.” He whispered sweetly to her, his hands tightened on her waist, Radhika did not miss the warning in his tone, though he looked smiling happy.

    She immediately smiled up at him a watery one……

    **********

    So, DaTs IT…

    plsss do tell how it is till den..adios mi amigasss 😀

    • kfar on

      thanks Thena, Annie, Shub, tanya, deepa , mandy means a lot ur comments I gonna update soon i fell asleep writing half way haha

    • Shub on

      Farha, once again fluent writing. With every episode it is getting more interesting! Thanks for updating inspite of ur bad health! Get well soon!!

    • Thena on

      Farha amazing amazing…..just read it out yaar….

      n again a coincidence with our thoughts dear…..me too did mention the same car in my epi & color too the same……just thrilled….y in this world should I ve mentioned the same color….

    • kfar on

      Haha dats becoz we think so much alike 😀 n I liked ur next epi and Priya Mehra’s hair style very cool description:D
      pani is the bestttttttt 😀

  796. Riya on

    Jane kaun ho
    Par ho tum kayi
    Hain dill ko mere yaakeen
    Na hain Iptiida , Na hai Imteehan
    Hai Meri dastaan Tu Wahi
    Tera Sukuun , Ya Junoon tera
    Teri kushi ya tera gham
    Jo bhi Ziyaa who Jiyaa mene
    Jo bhi kiya tujhse Kiyaa
    Beinteehaan … !!!
    Man ko behlaye ..Behkaye
    Koi Khoyayish Khamkha
    Palkoon pee Aye sapno ki Barish Khamkha
    Abhi se Haal hai aisa Na jane Hoga kaisa
    Jo ye Ho gaya
    Beinteehaan !!!
    Unconditional love
    Zain & Aliya
    At first both are hate each other …….
    Marriage happen ………..
    Again both are hate each other… …
    They start help each other…..
    Both are depending each other….
    Start love…… ..
    Zaya…..

  797. kfar on

    quick question- what is ur comfort food guys? Mine is pani puriiiiiiii….Golgapppppa hahahahaha

    tell tell plsss????

    • Mandy on

      Hey farha yaar mine comfort food is pani puri / golgappa as well yaar wat to do I love da foods dat are fast wen I need watever it may b but my fav is pani puri !!!!!

    • Samiha on

      What a co-incidence! Even my comfort food is pani puri/golgappa. In bengali, it’s called ‘Fuchka’…

    • Thena on

      hey farha…i wonder who in tis world ll dislike pani puri….cos mine too is pani puriiiiii yaar……just luv it….

    • Natasha on

      My comfort food is pani puri and golgappa. We all like this food as it is very tasty and chatpata

  798. Savera on

    Oh Thena my dear ,,

    I missed U sooooooo much.

    were U not OK? wht hpnd 2 U?

    nice epi dear, U hv explained every thing with detail.

    I liked it veru much.

    Thanks dear , u liked my poem, it is for all of us.

    I was really waiting 4 U dear

  799. saji on

    Tk rest thena…

    ur s so interestng…n dnt worry abt typo errors…n thanx for d episode n entertaing us evn in dis conditn.

    luv u

  802. lrene on

    Hi friends
    l was always b silent reader
    2say about manmarziyan 4 me this much.’friendship is like a deep sea it doesn’t have any end’

  804. Samiha on

    What a co-incidence! Even my comfort food is pani puri/golgappa. In bengali, it’s called ‘Fuchka’…

    Oh, and your story was reallllllly good…. Arjun, you natkhat mystery!!!

    • Thena on

      hey samiha…thank u sooooo much yaar…

      oh u lik my mystery huh….am glad tat u mentioned it dr…..

      keep gvng ur feedback bud…

  805. Thena on

    @mandy,farha,jayaru,deepa,shub,savera,saji…….thank u al 4 ur lovely cmmnts dearies….really ncouragin & drives me a lot yaar……@shub hey keep guessing…@mandy hahaha tat ws hw the epi supposed 2 end budddy…..
    @farha,savera,saji…thank u sooooo much 4 ur concern buddies…..hey savera caught wid cold yaar….n my throat oh it sucks…….cant evn swallow……tried 2 update more epi 2day bt cudnt yaar……hi deepa epdi ma iruka…..y r u late 2day ma…..

    EPISODE 130:

    SCENE 1:

    Arjun came out of the bathroom,rubbing hs wet hair wid a towel…radz stood in front of the mirror dng hr hair….she had worn an usual attire,the white leggings plastered 2 hr legs & a red kurti on hr top…..hr gaze fell fixed sumwhr,the luks wer anomalous & hr hands kept combin though……sudden thr she felt arjun’s heat at hr back….he ws wrappin hs arms around hr waist,hs head on hr shoulder…..

    “good mornin my dear panauti’,he greeted lukin at hr in mirror….

    she smiled at the mirror & turned 2 hm…..nw hs hands were perched on hr shoulders & hr hands clutchd hs biceps…..she smiled partially wen he lukd at hr…….he askd hr if she ws alr8 lukin in2 hr eyes….she smiled & nodded in yep bt again hr gaze fell sumwhr….

    “radhika kya hua?…..tell me”,he enquired hr in a firm tone….

    she said nothin,hr eyes were avidoin contact wid hs……he held up hr chin,asked hr 2 luk in2 hs eyes & implored hr 2 speak out…..she hesitantly uttered nandhini bt b4 she cud complete hr’s,he interrupted & asked hr 2 nt take hr name in front of hm anymore…..he lukd upset,hs face filled wid the rays of emotional strain & in no time hs mood went off…..she held hs face,threw hm hr cutie smile & said tat she wud never ever utter tat name 2 hm…..he kissed hr 4head,hs xpressions wer impassive though…..he patted hr shoulder & left 4 changin over…..hr smile faded away once he left & she fell in2 thots, hr eyes kept movin side 2 side…..

    NaRal (nandhini & saral) stood waitin at the beach…..nandhini shouted at saral if he said the r8 time 2 hm(mentionin sum stranger)……saral told hr tat he had cum pointin hs hand 2 a man approachin them….the man greeted hr & asked 4 the photograph……nandhini gave hm sam’s photo & warned hm 2 xecute their plan soon if he wanted hs ful commission…..

    SCENE 2:

    BIRDSONG:

    the office ws the finest of its kind,shone wid a luk of top-class……staff members arrived thr in formals….manya had worn a white shirt & a black skirt xtended 2 hr knees top….piyali ws waitin 4 nesam & ardhika & kept on diallin…..just then nesam arrived thr…..sam wid hr usual style lukd astonishingly class…..she had worn a purple jacket clutched fit 2 hr top & a white mini skirt decorated hr down lik a barbie doll…….neil’s formal suit just embellished hs handsomeness……sam rushed 2 piyali,hugged hr & planted a kiss on hr cheek…..piyali embraced hr,askin the werabouts of ardhika….. sam assured hr tat they wud b soon thr….just then radz called sam & informed hr tat they wer stuck in traffic,wud reach thr ASAP…..

    Piyali stood at the entrance, holdin an orchid bouquet…..neil,sam & manya wer standin alongside hr,the other staff members wer bhind them…..a black Lamborghini screeched 2 stop at the entrance…..

    SCENE 3:

    The driver stepped out & darted 2 open the back door…..PRIYA MEHRA ws evry inch stylish & elegant wid a sturdy muscular physique…..a woman of suave & self possessed she ws….. hr attire ws a stylisly draped saree & hr hair ws of gorgeous squiggles coiffure…..piyali ushered hr in wid the bouquet,carryin a persistent grin al over……piyali introduced the partners sam & manya 2 priya….they shakened hands & nw she enqiured about the 3rd partner Arjun mehra…..just then ardhika reached thr……..she turned back & tuk a luk at them……she threw a luk of scrutiny on radz 4m top 2 bottom…….

    END of epi 130…….

    • Deepa on

      I went out of station yaar….so din read ur stories for tdays ma….missed alot dr…2dy my first duty aft reaching my home i read all of ur stories yaar….so only late command ma……enjoyed the episode very much…..keep rocking….love u buddy

    • Samiha on

      Niccccceeeeee……

      Thanks for mentioning NaRal (seems real villain type)… Ha ha….

      At last Priya Mehra. Now she would just start scrutinizing Radz, won’t she? And thanks for entering Manya, but what ’bout her crush for Neil??? Please clear that dear….

  807. anu on

    The episode starts with AR & NS about to leave and car doesn’t start. Neil asks what’s wrong with this, how can we go now and says I’ll check wait. Arjun let’s him to check but Neil denies to check saying we can’t do anything now. Arjun says he wil call piyali and wil tell about the situation, she will send car for us. All agree to arjun. Arjun goes to call and comes back saying it takes time, let’s roam here and there til car comes.

    They go for a long walk in the forest while talking, suddenly Neil and radhika notices Sam & arjun missing. Its almost late and they have to lit the light. Radhika&neil starts calling out arjun, sam and radhika starts crying. Neil consoles radhika and search there for a while, and says let’s go to car parking slot and nearby lake. They might have missed the route.

    Radhika, Neil searches at car parking but couldn’t find arjun&sam there. They start to go to lake banks to search there. On the way Neil sees arjun’s watch fallen on ground and gets worried, while radhika gets Sam’s bracelet. They run to the lake and gets shocked and surprised to see campfire and tents and a beautiful table arranged with two bottles of champagne and few glasses and some stuff to eat. Tears roll down from Neil’s eyes and radhika’s as well.

    Arjun and Sam sees them and comes out from hiding behind a tree. Both folding hands and standing with foot apart appear on the other side of the campfire. FB shows arjun removed the spark plug and fuel relay , so as to make car doent start.. Sam shouts I LOVE YOU NEIL, THIS IS FOR YOU. Neil gets spell bound and falls down on his knees having his eyes overloaded with tears of happiness and surprise. Sam rushes to him and hugs him crying. Radhika runs to arjun and scolds him for his disappearance for sometime. Arjun smiles and wipes her tears and asks howz the surprise. She turns to him and looks into his eyes.. Their eyes have spoken their DIL KI BAATEIN. Arjun hugs her and thanks her for being light to fill out his darkness..

    Nandini comes home and plays with him.nandini greets her parents and talks to them. She feeds the kid, makes him sleep and thinks of arjun.

  808. Samiha on

    Niccccceeeeee……

    Thanks for mentioning NaRal (seems real villain type)… Ha ha….

    At last Priya Mehra. Now she would just start scrutinizing Radz, won’t she? And thanks for entering Manya, but what ’bout her crush for Neil??? Please clear that dear….

  809. zara on

    hiii friends,
    wow thena good job.
    as always ardhika scene like more than other. 🙂 🙂 🙂 priya mehra’s entry seems interesting . now sarandini back their davilious character .
    waiting for next episode dear! !! keep going on… 🙂 miss u a lot ardhika nesam .
    anaya waiting for HPDDAK written epi.. . please post it soon dear
    I’m eagerly waiting … 🙂

    anu where r u dear ?? also waiting for your episode dear …. come back
    ……… good night

  810. Deepa on

    Anu

    i loved ardhika and nesam scene….and hope nandhini din spoil the life of another child…
    Wat a surprising epi….loved it dr….waiting for next epi

  812. kfar on

    Hey it’s me again with the update, So, I’m gonna continue with Drawn Together, the other story I’ll update it soon too…

    Everybody should hv a love story, me u all, everyone ah romance is dreamy but reality is worse…so im losing myself in the song ‘Love Story’ Taylor Swift…

    Romeo take me somewhere we can be alone….itz a love story baby just yesss…You were romeo throwing pebbles…

    Drawn Together

    Radhika smiled up at him, highly aware that many cameras were clicking more furiously now, she got a little dizzy with the impossibly long attention they were even though few more elite business heads had moved along the photographers way, the throng of the media were very much curious to know about their wedding, that is the thing she got the hunch about.

    Rapid beat of enquiries were thrown at them from random directions, Radhika didn’t know what to make of it.

    “Mrs.Mehra, how do you feel getting married to your father’s adversary?” One question, one raised voice almost made her trip over the expensive cinderella shoes, if not of her husband’s firm hold over her waist.

    What kind of question was that? it left her mind in a puzzled maze, a maze as twisted as their minds to twist her into a danger loop. She must tread the murky waters of this very carefully. If she would say something about her father, something else would be written in the papers.

    Seems like the question was also every other scribe’s curiosity, as there was an expectant and silent pause all around.

    She was about to say something really mild but her husband cut in with his own answer.

    “She would say, she is in love.” He said confidently, arrogantly, a little smugly, very cleverly pulling the crowd to him, affectively putting the enquiry to a cancel that they had not even an inch of incline of such a dismiss.

    Amazing, she breath out inwardly.

    The light answer travelled around the clicking people, raking laughs and amusement completely wearing off the tense atmosphere.

    Her husband, laughed a little, which vibrated into her body.

    “Mrs. Mehra, what do you have to say about that?” A question came out from somewhere around the middle.

    They would not leave her alone would they?

    Radhika squared her shoulders, tiltef her chin in determination, act up she told herself, as she moved closer to his body, she put her hand on his shoulder, drawing his confidence, she grinned up at him which in turn made him blink down at her, his smile froze, she then turned her head to the scribes.

    “My husband just said it all, what can I say more.” She replied, her voice full of affection, her smile still plastered, she felt a feverish rush, when she stressed ‘My husband’ more.

    The crowd gathered cheered and laughed and melted away a little, immediately then she felt his tightening of hand on her waist.

    “Good job, you are learning fast.” He whispered into her ear a littl huskily, Radhika blushed with the praise.

    He tilted her chin and she glanced up at him, his eyes a deep warm brew slid curious and amused over her face.

    “You are the first woman I ever accountered blushing this much.” He said, his voice a little in wonder.

    Radhika’s face went beetroot red at that and he laughed a little more. Radhika could see from the corner of her eye that they were gathering attention and she told herself it was all, his behaviour a big show for the world and she warned herself not to fall for such tricks…..

    ****

    I’m gonna take a break n wil soon start writing again…..

    • Mandy on

      Yaar yeh radhika ko tho pyaar hogaya iss arjun shayad bul gayi hai ki uske aur arjun ke bich ek deal hui thi poor radhika !! Chalo ab dek the hai age kya hota hai toh isi liye jaldi jaldi update karna bcos I teally cant wait !!!!

      Good Night !!☆★☆★☆

    • kfar on

      thank uuu Mandy lv ya aur haha patanahi kya hoga bcoz i write wit da flow no planning while i write 😀

      Samiha- it is da third time we are liking something same n ya pani puri is best guys i lv it 😀

  814. Natasha on

    EPISODE:6

    The episode starts with anu wears the salwar. Shes looking beautiful. Sam also wears the dress and looking good.

    The all internees meet outside dr guptas house. Kirti says to anu why u havent wear western dress? Anu says i know the dress code is western but i am not comfortable in western. Niki says do u always wear salwar? Anu nods yes. Sam says forget it. If one isnt comfortable in western then she shouldnt wear it. And just look at anu shes looking beautiful. Neil says if u r done with with ur girly gossip then shall we go? We are getting late. The internees enter into the house.

    Dr gupta greetes them and asks them to enjoy the party. Dr jasmin looks at anu and says didnt u know the dress code? Anu says i knew it but i never wear western dress . Jasmin says okay. Dont worry. U look good in salwar. By the way dress cant be the thing by with a person can be known. Jasmin says i have to attend my guests so enjoy the party.

    Dr jasmin announces to play the music and askes the internees to dance. She says shows a pot consisting of pieces of paper in which everyones name is written. She asks to pick up a paper to everyone. She says which name will be written in the paper u will pick will be ur dancepartner. At first dr gupta picks a paper and his dancepartner is dr jasmin. Anu picks up a paper fearly and dr arjun becomes her partner. She looks at arjun whos looking handsome. Anu smiles.

    Sam dances with neil wheres kirti dances with parth and niki dances with rahul. Neil says to sam we always dance together. why? Sam says because we are a team. Neil and sam laugh. Neil looks at sam and smiles.

    Arjun dances with anu. Arjun says why u always become different from others? Todays everyone is in western attire and u r in salwar. Anu says sir… Arjun says becoming different isnt bad. I also want to be always different.

    All internees are eating the dinner. Rahul says how boring this party is! lets play a game. Rahul goes and announces to play a game in which there will be two teams boys and girls. One team have to tell what other team’s member is trying to say. They have guess the films name.

    All divide into two groups. One team sits on oppsite side of other team.

    PRECAP: Arjun acting to say kaho na pyaar hai ( movie name). Anu quickly answers it. All looks on.

  815. kfar on

    (I had fallen asleep last night while writing, so I’m gonna write again as I have much time now)

    With his hand around her waist, they moved inside the venue, it was large hall, each aisle had a large glass cut chandelier, there were many other women and wives of other businessmen, but as they entered the hall, a complete silence fell in the lull and buzz that had been before, Radhika was suprised to see the utmost fascination and wonder it created, and now she knew it was the pull that was coming off from her husband’s presence, it was stirring and magnetic. Goosbumps rose on her skin knowing how much she was getting to know about him.
    The buzz started high again and many people moved towards them, greeting, smiling and fawning over almost eating out of their hands.

    Radhika felt flushed, it was getting to her head, the affection she garnering from all around as a newlywed and especiallt as the wife of a man who was thousand times more richer than her father. It was scintillating to the core.

    They moved around mingling and talking while her husband took two glasses of white wine from the serving trays, that’s then Radhika became nervous.

    “I don’t drink.” She whipered to him, he in turn looked back at her in surprise.

    His eyes stayed locked with hers.

    “Not even while you attended such parties with your father, no?” He enquired , his voice held a note of suspicion.

    Radhika shook her head as negative, he still looked at her giving a penetrating thoughtful nod.

    He glanced back at the waiter.

    “A glass of chilled orange juice for my wife.” He ordered and a turned to her once again, looking down and rubbing her arm a little, it seems like he wasn’t aware he was touching her constantly.

    “I have to see one of my partners there.” He indicated with his eyes, then he glanced down at and whispered. “You go mingle with the ladies, alright?” His hand still moving over her bare arm warmly and Radhika kept staring deeply into his soft brown eyes, the light back into them while he talked to her but when he looked around, his eyes were almost back, wiped out of any emotions and completely blank.

    Did he even realize he was switching on and off like that with her and others. It was like, he was drawing her into himself, he was not all aware that he had unknowningly lead her to an open window of his heart and mind. Did she manage a little to break the ice around his heart or was he an exceptional actor, just pretending to be acting nice with her? Who was he in reality? Was he this casual laid back guy joking around with the media or was he just acting up with the world around too? Manyany unanswered questions…

    “Hey, you okay?” He jerked her out of the mind vexing thoughts, his eyebrows were furrowed.

    Radhika shook her head.

    “Yeah..yeah I’m fine..I’ll go mingle.” She assured him and smiled.

    He didn’t look sure if he should believe, so he just nodded his head.

    “I’ll be back to you in no time, okay?” He whispered and rubbed her arms again.

    She smiled more freely now, putting all her thoughts to a stop.

    “Okay.” She mumbled, his eyes glided down at her lips and stayed there for a second, Radhika felt her heart rate spike up, his eyes after another second of stare at her lips came back to her, and her spiked up heart rate went into zooming fast beats, his eyes burning into hers with what she didn’t know but it melted over her skin like warm honey.

    He moved real closer, his forefinger slid the one strayed lock of hair out of her eyes, his head came down and his lips feathered a sweet warm kiss over her right eyebrow and real closer to her eye, Radhika closed her eyes taking it in, his closeness, his body heat, his inner warmness. People were wrong , he was not cold hearted as they assumed, he was just a closed shell.

    He moved away an inch and stared at her some more with his burning gaze, his lips thinned out, his eyes again speaking of things she didn’t understand, then he moved away from her altogether and walked off, and Radhika kept staring at the distance that was strenching between them…………

    *********

    • Shub on

      Farha loved the entire chapter and especially the last line “she stared at the distance that was stretching between them”the line spoke volumes. I am crazy about your story. Just can’t wait for the next update!!

    • Deepa on

      Hi kfar

      a tight hug for u dude…..keep continuing yaar…..i bcome madly addict to ur story yaar…its so romantic…..always rocks….

    • Mandy on

      Really yaar farha I really wish ki yeh sach mein yeh serial hota sp pe yaar THANK U farha yeh story toh waise hi hai jese mujhe pasand hai !!★★☆☆

  816. dipika on

    aaj ki sabhi epis n story mahol hai…”.Kya honga aage ” bas yahi man me aaraha hai….windblowning work by Thena,Anu n Kfar as always…@ renu whr r u buddy… missing u n ur pov badly

  818. Savera on

    Hiiiii my dear Thena & my dear Kfar,

    First tell me hw is ur cold ?
    rly U both guys r very dedicated, suffering from cold, even then U both updated ur story n epi.
    It rly touched me…..my dears.
    Thank you soooooooooooo muuuuuuch 4 doing it for all of us.

    MAY GOD BLESS YOU BOTH WITH GOOD HEALTH ALWAYS

    @ KFAR u rocked yaar … story is toooo mind blowing,
    I m waiting when d unemotional Arjun ll fell 4 Radhika. She hs stared feeling 4 Arjun.
    I think its going 2 b very intense romantic novel.

    @THENA…. like always U r just supeeeeerb darling.
    I just enjoyed each n every scene…
    NARAL cumback…. oh …sth dangerous …going 2 happen
    waiting 4 next epi..

  819. Natasha on

    EPISODE:7

    The episode starts with all playing the game. At first dr niki goes for. Niki acts and tries to say movie name pathshala. No one from other team cant guess it. Girls get a point. Neil comes from boys team. He acts to says movie name dill hai tumhara. Girls finds it difficult to guess. At last sam tells the name. Girls again gets a point. This time arjun comes and acts to say movie name kaho na pyar hai. Anu quickly answers it. All looks on. Anu says i feel it is right so i said. Girls wins the game. Boys says its cheating. Girls win as we have gave them easier ones. Girls says game is game. Accept that u lost the game. Girls and boys have an argument.

    After ending the party everyone starts for their home. Dr gupta reminds them about coming to office at morning.

    Mala and dilip are in hotel. Mala slips in the bathroom and gets injured. Dilip asks her to rest. Tommorow he will take her to the hospital.

    Its morning. Every internees are in looker room. They discuss about yesterdays party. Niki tells them about her family is forcing her to get married to a nri. Niki says i am not wishing to marry and thats why i have come to mumbai and join this hospital. Anu says dont worry. If u tell ur parents about ur unwilling to get marry then they will not force u. Sam supports anu. Sattu comes and tells anu that dr arjun is calling her. Kirti says oh! dr arjun is after our ananya. Anu says stop it.

    Anu goes to meet arjun. Arjun says i have to today attend a meeting in other hospital. A patient named mala will come there so pls attend her. Anu says okay. Arjun says will able to do that? Anu says of course sir. Arjun says thank u. U made my work easy.

    Anu is in her cabin. Sattu comes and says the patient has come. Shall i call her inside? Anu says yes. Mala and dilip comes. They get shocked seeing anu. Mala holds anu and says radhika dear where have u gone? We were searching u from a long time. Anu says sorry aunty but i am not radhika. Dilip says why r u lying dear? We throght u died. Anu says excuse me i am not ur radhika and i havent die ever. Mala says why u r not recognising us? i am ur mother and hes ur father. Anu says what rubbish u r talking? U r not my parents. My parents r someone else. Anu goes out angrily from the cabin and asks mala to get her treatment from other doctor of hospital. Mala cries. Dilip consoles her and says shes not our radhika. She just looks alike our daughter.

    Mala and dilip goes to dr samaira for treatment . Mala asks sam about anu. Sam says shes not radhika. Shes dr ananya sharma, daughter of mohit sharma and madhvi sharma whose are one of the richest person of this city. I know them. Mala and dilip goes.

    Anu comes to looker room and tells all about mala and dilip. Sam also tells them about her meeting with them. Neil says maybe they are not in sense. Parth says its obvious. Because their daughter is dead and now they find their daughter in every girl. Rahul says i think parth is right. Niki and kirti asks anu to calm down.

    Mala and dilip are talking outside the hospital. Dilip says to mala shes not our daughter. Even the other doctor said the same. Her parents are someone else. Mala says but i think shes radhika. Lets go to the girls house pls. Dilip says but… Mala says this girls family are famous in this city. Lets go there. At least after going there i will find setisfection. Dilip says as u wish.

    PRECAP: Mala and dilip comes to anus house. Madhvi says for whom r u searching for?

    • Savera on

      Natasha,
      story is becoming more n more interesting
      well done …n thanks 4 fast update
      taking story with good pace……..

  821. Samiha on

    @Natasha: Wow! So nice. Waiting for next epi….

    @kfar: Really felt good…. You said you have much time. Then please update fast, can’t wait…..
    And in the other story, you said Saina is Arjun’s GF, but wasn’t she Neil’s ex GF, who slapped him??

  822. Mandy on

    Hiiiiiii dipika , deepa saji anaya natasha anu shub renu thena Farha ……hw r u all ????

    Hey anu anaya renu wr r ur stories deariez !!!!!♥♥★☆♡

  830. Mandy on

    hey savera i m fine yaar waiting 4 ur new poem !!!!

    Deepa i m also fine yaar !!!!

    hey natasha ur bro !!! COOL hw old is he ???

    hey dipika i m very gud !!!!! I was watchin a movie WELCOME BACK !!!!

    hey Abbz i m fine !!!!
    THANX 4 reply guys !!!!

    hey thena n farha n anu n natasha i no u guys already updated ur story but pls update now guys plssss coz i m bord !!!!!

    • kfar on

      Im good ya Mandy and deepa and how was your day guys?welcome movie is very funny
      anaya- wer are u friendo?

      guys is the page really goin to be cut off on friday?
      waiting for ur poems yaar Savera n dipika haha im becoming demanding..

      anu- Heyyyy, wen u emailed sp and swastik productions did u get any reply?

      Mandy, Riya Samiha- Beintehaan was also my fav..and iss pyaar ko kya naam doon1 too, but dey aired real soon guys..

  831. kfar on

    Nice update Nats n Thena wer r u bud ? hope ur good…

    Savera Heyim alright just a little tired since all day long i was out n thanks for such nice compliments and I hope u stay blessed always. 😀

    Mandy- hahah thankuumuuuua for such a nice comment and yea im good, how ru?

    Shub- yaaaaar thanks:D a lot Im gonaa update soon Nd Deepa yaar hugs u too thanks u two place such nice comments 😀

    Dipika-and Savera- I lv ur poetry lots 😀

    Samiha- You are must say a very very sharp reader, hats off i mean i made a blunder der, I forget names usually so i forgoet about i kept same names but dey r difrent dat saina who slapped neil is not the same saina of arjun’s girlfrind…thanks a lot for the observation 😀

  833. kfar on

    Hv u guys all had dinner? aur Thena tumhe bi cold hai I too hv it yaa bcoz of the change in the weather..its always raining

  834. zara on

    ANAYA where r u dear ??? every thing is fine? ?? waiting for next episode of ” HPDDAB ” …. come on dear post it soon
    eagerly waiting.

  835. anu on

    @ kfar : yeah i got reply from sp but not from swastik productions..i felt like it is worst than sp.. not bothered about fans…

    @ mandy sorry for late. i came online just now..i’ll update soon buddy..

  837. dipika on

    @ kfar thanks for encouraging words it help me too think further….thank you sooooo much dear.i too sent mail to swastik productions bt they didn’t reply yet…
    @ mandy thats great.. how was the movie????
    @ thena hw r u dr???

    hey friends i want to share my happiness to u guys…
    I got my joining date today from PNB
    thats 5 oct at New Mumbai…..

    • kfar on

      Wooooooow! Congratulations 😀
      tight hug nd kaash ke maibhi tumhari tarahf talented hoti ke bank job lasakun, but great ya awesome news!!!

    • Savera on

      Hiiiiiiiii Deepika,
      congratulations…… my dear, A hug to you.

      MAY GOD BLESS U WID HAPPINESS N LOVE ALWAYS AROUND YOU

  838. anu on

    The episode starts with Neil hugging Sam and his eyes overloaded with tears. Neil shouts I love you Sammy and it echos. Arjun holds radhika laying his right hand on her shoulder and radhika holds arjun laying his left hand around his waist. Both the couples move forward to the table and celebrates their surprise filled with love, fun and joy. Neil happily takes the champagne bottle and shakes it to his heart’s content and uncorks it and launches the cork out into the sky as a fizzy spray of champagne (sparkling wine) follows. Neil asks when did u guys planned this? Arjun tells evrything while FB shows arjun&sam messaging &hiding evrythng from radhika&neil. The duo couples enjoy to the maximum as they all got their “”MANMARZIYAN””..

    Scene shifts to ankush in London and they practise dance for the event in their college and they all plan to leave out for restaurant. Nandini sits thinking about arjun’s hatred for her and cries saying I LOVE YOU ARJUN. The little boy notices this and gets up asking her not to cry as he is with her. He hugs and kisses her. The kid says I love u too.

    Again back to our lovely couples. Ufffuuuuu so much imagination. They finished dinner and are about to sleep in their tents.

    NS’s tent :
    Neils acts very romantic and SAM feels his eyes on her as she climbed off from the ground to bed and he focused on the low thump of the music(sound of waterfalls) playing somewhere in the distance making him feel more romantic and his excitement doubled..

    AR’s tent :
    The grass is cold and wet beneath their back watching up stars and mountains seemed to be wall to the sky. Both lost in their eyes and arjun turns towards her stretching his hand and bent at elbow to support his head and leans towards radhika. Her eyes followed the path of his arm and climbs his strong biceps and then to his chin. She closes her eyes with shy and blushes.

    Both the couples have lost deeply in their love. They lost track of exactly what time it is, but sure it’s so late into the night that it’s almost already getting dark blue out there, seeming to be the time just few hours left for sunrise.

    It’s sunrise, sun-rays touch them with very low light as the tent is refracting the beam. Neil feels dizzy & lazy to getup and says Can we be here for one more day. She replies “you want to swap days?” trying to blink her eyes into focus. She kisses his forehead and hugs him saying I love you to each other.

    Arjun gets up and he couldn’t find his blazer and searches for it. Ah- I – I am so sorry. He heard her say it, but he felt so shy to look into her eyes and acted being too busy in trying not to fall over to look at her. She handed his blazer and FB shows He covered her with his blazer as she shivered due to cold. He hugs her, radhika says I love you Arjun and that call made his day.

    Duo couples fresh up in the lake and they leave for their homes..

    NOTE : whole track of MNAMARZIYON PE AB HUM CHALE & KWAHISHEIN PE LIKHI play in background for the whole episode…
    ♥♥♥♥

    PRECAP : Nandini in hospital sees ankush there.

    • Mandy on

      Ooo la la very romantic but jus wished ki yeh such mein iss waqt sp pe ara hota I SO WISH YAAR !!★★☆IT’S FANTABULOUS SWEETHEART ★☆♥♥

    • deepa on

      Hi anu

      asusual u rocked buddy…loved t episode very muvh yaar……oh my god arjun was blushing…..its nice to see that…he s very cute….his expression are priceless…

      Loved ar and ns tent scene…..how romantic it was…especially loved bg song….both couples are rocking

      thanks anu for giving us tis wonderful episdoe….loved it alot buddy…..keep rocking always my dr…..love ulots

  840. Thena on

    EPISODE 131:

    SCENE 1:

    Priya mehra enquired piyali about the 3rd partner at the bit of ardhika reachin thr……she turned & tuk a luk at them both……then she had a scrutinizin luk on radz 4m top 2 bottom……radz ws clueless on hr stare over hr bt she needed no time 2 elucidate the air wen she glanced over the cardiff thr…..Oh! evry1 ws in formals & she ws the damn odd 1 thr……priya mehra approached radz & halted r8 straight 2 hr……hr height ws visibly inches taller than radz…..

    “u. r. Radhika .Arjun.Mehra…..right?”,priya askd radz as if a police inspector interrogtin the suspects…..

    radz replied in positive & left blank in the thot of hw cud she cum 2 know hr name….

    “its my policy 2 collect data 4m soup 2 nuts”,priya clarified radz mind in the midst of hr thots,an apple champange iphone bevelled btw hr fingers…..she warned hr 2 b cautious on dress code tellin tat she ll nt b spared nxt time…….standin thr,she addressed arjun as ‘Mr.Arjun mehra’ ,said tat partners wer 2 b more punctual 4 company’s growth….hr luks fell stern on arjun & he had no choice other than noddin in yep…….piyali circumvented priya 2 take a gander at the office just 2 clear up the mess thr……nesam,kritika,tejh,zubin & manya proceeded 2 comfort ardhika……b4 they cud reach them, radz went 4ward & hugged them tellin tat she missed hr besties so much…..she turned smilin at arjun, gestured hm 2 cum & soon the grim on arjun turned in2 a relieved grin…..he just cudnt resist hmself 4m admirin hs wife…..he joined the group hug bt hs gaze fell fixed on radz’s smile…….

    Manya ws waitin outside a room,hr thin lean shanks wer restless & kept on jigglin……she kept on peepin inside at times…….sudden thr she stood xcited as sam cumin out…….she confronted sam,kissed hr di & hugged hr tight……sam hugged hr back & said tat she ws missin ……..manya said sorry in the midst leavin sam 2 abandon the clutch…..sam bcame anomalous seein tears lined on manya’s kajal…….wen she beseeched 4 the reason manya said tat she had put hr(sam) favourite shoes, pointin 2 hr feet……sam nippin hr lower lip,pinched manya’s cheek & hugged hr……manya’s inner voice said,”m sorry samy”………..

    SCENE 2:

    Priya ws havin a tea in piyali’s room…….both wer sittin oppo & Piyali apprised priya tat a meeting had been summoned 4 the partners,hr lips carryin a mild grin……Priya opposed hr & asked 2 gather evry staff member 4 a meetin as they wer the underpin of any institution…..

    Priya,Piyali,ardhika,nesam,manya,tejh,zubin,kritika were sittin circular in a conference hall…..Priya instructed evry1 shud b punctual,neat,attentive & racy,hr legs sauntered 4m side 2 side al the while…….”GUESS seductive homme……..cum wid the innovative proposal”,said priya,hr palms pressin the flat polished glass table…….

    the gangster(man spoken 2 naral) made a call & informed tat he had emailed the photo……

    SCENE 3:

    ardhika got in2 the car,put their seat belt & made an exit…..arjun asked radz if she wsnt hurt on priya’s words,turnin hs head a lil…….

    “if fault wsnt mine i wud ve hurt”,she threw hr usual cute smile at hm……

    arjun felt emotional & at once felt proud……he perched hs left hand on hr lap,without digressin hs eyes 4m road….she held hs hand & placed a soft kiss,tears peeped out 4m hr eyes ……immediately then he parked the car aside,leaving radz wonderin……he didn utter anythin & rested hs head on hr lap,graspin hr thighs tight…..

    END of epi 131…….

    leave ur feedback buddies……luv u loads….

  841. Thena on

    EPISODE 132:

    scene 1:

    ardhika reached home late as it ws already 10……arjun opened the car door & lifted radz in hs arms……hr face shone faintly in the moonlight……he put hr down 2 open the door & went in…..radz heart stopped its beat wen he clutchd hr tight 4m bhind……he collected hr hair strands aside,kept hs chin on hr shoulder……warm blood rushed in2 hr body, hr nerves wer felt 4m end 2 end…..he slid hs chin 2 hr neck’s crook & rubbed hr cheek wid hs…..the cut stalks of hs beard tickled hr,hr fingers lost its grip & left the clutch on hr bag……she gathered al hr senses & turned 2 hm,stil she ws tightly clutched inside hm…..he leaned 2 hr,hs hot breath fell in2 hr ears…….hs lips wer so close 2 hrs, hr heart beat rumbled out of hr ears……

    “i….i…..i want 2 freshen up….”,whispered radz,hr lips touchin hs while uttering……

    he smiled & released hr 4m hs clutch on hr waist……she lukd perplexed, collected hr hair strands 2 the back of hr ear & made a sedate move 2 the washroom……arjun left the place smilin……

    Sam came out of the rest room wearin a short sleeveless gown,hr hair ws wet & water droplets wer clingin 2 its end……she perched hrself infront of the mirror & started combin…..neil stood tilted on the threshold,hs left hand in2 hs lower pocket,hs gaze fell fixed on sam…..

    “Oh! i don feel lik eatin apple nw…..”,sam said lukin in2 the mirror….

    neil straightened hs frame & moved in……he said tat he ws dyin 2 taste delicious orange,hs hands clasped hr shoulders,hs body had leaned 4ward wid a lil arc…..sam nodded fast in nope,the droplets scattered on hs face….he uttered “ouch”,pressin hs r8 eye…..he advanced 2 the bed, settled down & flattered hs fingers in a pretence of wincing……sam sprinted 2 clear hs eye,hr lips pressed hard hs eye wen he pulled hr grasping hr waist……she gave a punch at hs chest wen he smiled at hr…….nw he switched hs side,hs frame over sam’s…..she clutched hs soft banian,closed hr eyes wen he slid hs nose in2 hr ear…….hr toes wer jockeyin as if they were talkin gossips….

    SCENE 2:

    Priya Mehra ws leanin on a chair,hr eyes got arrested 2 sumwhr on the roof……a food plate ws kept in the table b4 hr ……thr ws a tear drop 2 the corner of hr eye…..

    FLASHBACK ws shown…….

    kiddy arjun lukd panic…….he had hugged the knelt down nandu,wrappin hs lean arms tight around hr neck…..

    “i don go wid hr…she isnt my sister….she isnt my sister…..ask hr 2 go nandu”,he cried on hr shoulder……

    nandu kept rubbin hs shoulder & threw a smirk at a girl stood b4 hr…..the girl left the place cryin……

    FLASHBACK ended…..

    priya ws shown lukin at a photograph…..zoomed in2 the photo,it ws of kiddy arjun kissin tat girl……

    SCENE 3:

    arjun came 2 hs room after freshening up & ws transfixed 2 see radz standin b4 the mirror…..she had worn a baby pink saree,neatly fleeted 2 hr shoulder……hr cuts wer wel seen & it ws xceedingly seductive……hr hair lukd more silky ended wid a wavy locks….a tiny stone shone on hr 4head…..

    thr wer sweat droplets appeared on hs 4head,hs body stiffened……He made a sedate move,gulpin hs throat…..radz smiled at watchin hm in the mirror…..

    END of epi 132…..

    keep gvng ur feedback buddies…luv u loads….

  842. Thena on

    hey hi al my dearies…….hw r u al yaar…..sorry 4 cumin late yaar….had a bad day….runnin nose,sneezing,throat sore….oops……but seeing the cmmnts of my buddies here really drives me…..blessed 2 have u people……u r the best buddies….

    @farha,savera,deepa,mandy,dipika…m nt wel yaar…bt ll get wel soon…..just lil down yaar….luv u loads….
    @samiha….u likd naral huh…..n ur suggestions r luvly dear…..
    @farha…heyaa s caught wid cold yaar…just torturin me while typin,,,hahaha…..n ur drawn together just drawing me to it….hahaha…amazin talent dear…i laughed out wen u applauded on my description buddy…..compared 2 u its nothin girlieee….
    abbzz,shub,geeth,tanya,jayau….hw ws ur day yaar….
    @renu wr r u my dear….leave ur wen u r free buddy….

    • kfar on

      Heyy get wel soon yeah me too had cold:( sMe like ur but its better my sore throat now gone but changed my voice.
      n love the episss 😀 hahaha feels good ur drawn to the story.

      Anu n dipika- I didn get’t Ny reply from both of them ya:(
      Anu- I liked so much the outdoor camping really cool environ 😀
      ur stories rocks all urs Thena, an anaya, Nats…
      Anaya- I love ir story n parth and sana n alllllllllllll great stories guys 😀

  845. deepa on

    Hi thena

    hru my dr…….

    A tight hug for u yaar…

    Both the episode are awesome….bt i liked 132 episode more than t previous…….

    No words to express my command to u my dr….ur always rocking dude…..love u lots….keep continuing…….and take care of ur health my dr….

  847. anu on

    The episode starts with Neil hugging Sam and his eyes overloaded with tears. Neil shouts I love you Sammy and it echos. Arjun holds radhika laying his right hand on her shoulder and radhika holds arjun laying his left hand around his waist. Both the couples move forward to the table and celebrates their surprise filled with love, fun and joy. Neil happily takes the champagne bottle and shakes it to his heart’s content and uncorks it and launches the cork out into the sky as a fizzy spray of champagne (sparkling wine) follows. Neil asks when did u guys planned this? Arjun tells evrything while FB shows arjun&sam messaging &hiding evrythng from radhika&neil. The duo couples enjoy to the maximum as they all got their “”MANMARZIYAN””..

    Scene shifts to ankush in London and they practise dance for the event in their college and they all plan to leave out for restaurant. Nandini sits thinking about arjun’s hatred for her and cries saying I LOVE YOU ARJUN. The little boy notices this and gets up asking her not to cry as he is with her. He hugs and kisses her. The kid says I love u too.

    Again back to our lovely couples. Ufffuuuuu so much imagination. They finished dinner and are about to sleep in their tents.

    NS’s tent :
    Neils acts very romantic and SAM feels his eyes on her as she climbed off from the ground to bed and he focused on the low thump of the music(sound of waterfalls) playing somewhere in the distance making him feel more romantic and his excitement doubled..

    AR’s tent :
    The grass is cold and wet beneath their back watching up stars and mountains seemed to be wall to the sky. Both lost in their eyes and arjun turns towards her stretching his hand and bent at elbow to support his head and leans towards radhika. Her eyes followed the path of his arm and climbs his strong biceps and then to his chin. She closes her eyes with shy and blushes.

    Both the couples have lost deeply in their love. They lost track of exactly what time it is, but sure it’s so late into the night that it’s almost already getting dark blue out there, seeming to be the time just few hours left for sunrise.

    It’s sunrise, sun-rays touch them with very low light as the tent is refracting the beam. Neil feels dizzy & lazy to getup and says Can we be here for one more day. She replies “you want to swap days?” trying to blink her eyes into focus. She kisses his forehead and hugs him saying I love you to each other.

    Arjun gets up and he couldn’t find his blazer and searches for it. Ah- I – I am so sorry. He heard her say it, but he felt so shy to look into her eyes and acted being too busy in trying not to fall over to look at her. She handed his blazer and FB shows He covered her with his blazer as she shivered due to cold. He hugs her, radhika says I love you Arjun and that call made his day.

    Duo couples fresh up in the lake and they leave for their homes..

    NOTE : whole track of MANMARZIYON PE AB HUM CHALE & KWAHISHEIN PE LIKHI songs play in the background throughout the whole episode..
    ♥♥♥♥♥

    PRECAP : Nandini in hospital sees ankush there.

  848. Thena on

    Hi Dearie’s I ve posted 131 & 132….got stuck in the previous page….just take a look yaar…..

    Keep ur feedback & suggestions as always buddies…..luv u loads

    • Savera on

      Oh Dear Dear Thena,
      U took my heart. wish….. I cud watch it on TV
      two epis together my dear….n that too when u r not well.
      get well soon dearie,

      I used to read it twice or thrice, I m loving it soooooooooo much

  852. anu on

    Mandy: thanq so much buddy.
    Kfar : thaq. My story is not much more than urs.
    Deepa: thanq so much for the comments.. feeling like i was roaming in air… heheheh 😛 😉
    Dipika : thanq so much for liking it…

    Mitty : we r missing u since days.. plzz come soon.. 🙁

  853. mitty on

    @anu as usual excellent nd mind blowing story. …great thought dear. …keep going. ……. amazing talent dear. … dat blazer part was really good. …eagerly waiting. ..

  854. anaya on

    Episode 5:
    The scene shows our 3ma & 3sp on the jeep. Ansh, jagat and parth are singing ‘o nadaan parinde ghr a jaa.’ They are moving fast & suddenly the frame shifts to Sana. She looks tensed. Suddenly a blurred flash back is shown.
    There everyone is laughing. Then a car with a group of people singing ‘haste haste kat jae raste’ and suddenly a truck comes from opposite direction & .
    The frame shifts to present. Here, a child crosses the road abruptly and with a sudden brake the jeep stops. At that time everyone is stunned and Sana grips Parth real hard with her nail digging into his right hand in panick. Parth was about to shout at Sana when he noticed that she was frightened like hell was in shock. And then, as if coming to her senses,she took her hand from Parth’s and said:” sorry. Sorry”.
    Parth :” u ok?”
    Sana:” ya. I am fine”
    Reeva or Panchi sb us break k shock me the.
    Reeva:” all okay?”
    Sana : ” ya all ok”
    Ansh starts jeep again & the trip continues. Parth wonders what was it that he just saw. He looked towards Sana. She was enjoying the scenery, at least it appeared so……He shook his head as if to remove all these things from his head and joined his friends again with ‘dil chahta he’. Sana was looking into infinity.pause.

  856. Savera on

    Hiiiiiii my all MANMARZIYAN friends,

    my new poem for all of you, I hope u ll like it

    There………. I was alone
    Being like a stone
    To tolerate everything
    And to say nothing

    Not once………., that time
    Every moment n every time
    I felt…… ………..your need
    To release my pain, indeed

    But you were not there……
    To give me love,care & share
    I could not say it to anyone
    And waited for someone

    ” No one came…………………
    The situation remained same”
    To my Heart I told………..
    “This is life” it told

    When I lost my all the faith
    “You” came, for me, as breath
    Told me, “I am always here”
    To take, all the pain, you bear

    As an ANGELyou came my dear
    To wipe softly, my all the tear &
    To give me your all love and care
    Now we both are ETERNAL to share

    Please give your feedback………. my all dear friends

    • Mandy on

      Savera dear dis poem is really touching yaar O GOD jis tarah tume lika yeh poem asa laga jese ek professional lik raha hai !!! Love u bud!!

      Bey nywas hw many days did take to rite dis poem yaar its actually my curiosity !! Plssssssss tell me dear !!

    • Savera on

      Mandy dear
      first 4 paragraph , in 3 hours, I wrote when my actual situation was like that…… few years back.
      But now I hv cum out of it n think everything should end with positivity.
      So next 2 paragraph I wrote yesterday within 1 hour.
      I m rly glad, it touched u. Thanks 4 this wonderful appreciation .
      With GOD’S grace you all are the behind force of this poem. Thanks buddy.

    • kfar on

      loveeeeee every word of how der was loneliness and da next instant da tears were wiped away..i feld ardhika here
      of how she wipes off the tears n how she promises eternal love to arjun wen his life turned bleak. Touched my heart, poetry always does 😀

    • Savera on

      Oh my dear Kfar,
      for this kind of appreciation…..I love you yaar
      ur each words matter a lot……. when a artist praises another… its amazing.

      THANK YOU MY BUDDING NOVELIST

    • Savera on

      Hey Natasha

      I posted my first poem on 29 Aug, it was also for all of us.
      For you my dear , I am posting it again. I hope you ll like……

      In my life , YOU are….
      like…..
      A GOD offered flower
      ………..which I respect
      …………..With my best
      I know………..
      Really know..

      I love you most………..&
      miss you at every coast
      Because, yet…..
      We are not together…
      I am here..you are there
      You know ……
      Really know…

      Say sun and moon…..
      We have GOD’S boon
      ……..To being together
      Always and forever…..
      We know……
      Really know..

      If anything else u want,then pls feel free to say.
      I ll definitely fulfil your expectation……

    • Savera on

      Shub hiiii

      thanks buddy for such a nice comment.
      you ppl are my inspiration……..
      it touched u…. means….my job is done.

  857. dipika on

    @ Thena 131 n 132 epis r jst piece of cake for me…wow hw beautifully u wrote it yarrr…jst astonished by ur imagination…” hate Priya Mehera for scolding radz bt fine till she behav like boss if she turn vamp for radhu then it will nt good for her….
    n thank you soooo muccccc for ur wishes dear….
    Get well soon dear..take proper care n medicine for cold…had u visited dr?
    @Deepa Thank you sooo mucccchhh dear for ur wishes…love u….
    @ kfar loved ur drown together.. m fell in love with it…
    @ savera epic poem dear…mindblowing…it touch my heart…keep going dear…

  858. Natasha on

    @ mandy u wanted to know about my bro’s age. His age is 12.

    @dipika congrates! May u acheive every success in ur professional life.

    @ thena,mandy,farah,anu,abbz,savera,samiha,deepa,anaya,mitty,riya and all how r u?

    @happy,raashi,abi,devga,mitty where r u guys? Missing u all so much. Come back pls.

  859. Natasha on

    Guys do u know sp has gone mad again? They are again airing off a youth show badtameez dil on 19 september. They will telecast ekta kapoors new show. That means sp will now telecast two tv show of ekta kapoor.

    • mitty on

      Yhea natasha ….sp is promoting extra marital affairs. … forget it stupid sp…….back to comments How u dear natasha? ???? Few more days left. …gonna miss u all dear. …

  860. Riya on

    ?????????????????????????????

    My dear TU friends
    Remember me and smile,for its batter to forget than to remember me and cry……..

    Good bye my dear friends…
    It’s my last comment…………
    A tearful good bye……….

    It’s late one
    Zindagi ke ye highway main kabhi kabhi
    sweet sweet accident how jata hai………
    Har kisiko hum yaad nahin rakha sekte hain, lakin usmein se kuchh ese hote hain
    hum usako chahakar vhi bhula nahin sakte.
    Wo hamare dilo dimag main set hojate hain.
    Just like our favorite serials & friends.
    Miss you Arjun,Radhika,sam,Nill & my all TU friends……..

  861. Shub on

    This page is going to close this week. Girls there are three options to continue this friendship group.
    1. Any has created a Facebook page. But those who don’t have a fb account can not read or comment or post. They can create a dummy account and only use it for that page incase one is concerned about privacy.

    2. We can continue this beautiful friendship journey in some other telly page. But the down side is we may be kicked out from there. Because other serial lovers may not be liking our friends stories.

    3. We can form a group in Google+. I don’t think there will be privacy issues.

    Option 3 looks more practical. But if all agree then we need to move really fast!!!

  862. dipika on

    @ Natasha thank you sooooo muccchhh dear ur warm wished.. means lot for me!!
    @ Riya hey dear y r u bidding gydbye too early still v hav few days dear…plz stay here…
    @shub i too thnk last one is bst option…
    plsss friends do sumthng to stay connected plzzzzz

  863. Reeda on

    Hey guys, hw u doin….@thena, anu, kfar savera renu Natasha anaya shub abbz deepa dipika nd my other sweethearts…. And riya where r u goin- why is dat ur last post- pls don’t go yaar….

    Why r u guys not pleading telly to leave this page. I don’t know what I would do if this page goes down. I cant even imagine not seein u guys.
    Pls lets protest usin d hashtag #TellyKeepDYMpage. Use it on all ur comments so they would see it…please please please please….. I don’t know what I would do without my virtual Manmarziyan deaeries nd writers…… Love u all

  866. deepa on

    Hello dudes,,,

    hw are u? and wat doing all my buddies…..misss u all

    thena and kfar………ru guys alright yaar…..hav u took medicine…..take care of ur health my drs….

    Oh my renu…..wru yaar….only some more days left yaar….am dying to read ur pov am missing alot buddy…..

    Natasha……wat u and ur brother doing yaar…..am eagerly waiting for ur story….update it na….

    Anaya…….wru mu dr…….continue your story yaaar…….am waiting

    mitty….wru….missing u

  867. sanju on

    @thena …… Awesome yaarrrrrrr thenna plz give 2episodes a day …. Can’t wait for a long time……

    @riya….. Sorry I was out of town…. U wrote a short story were u ask ur mom for serial and power cut……….. Then 8pm re telecast.. Ten wat happen………

    @anu … Plz number ur update dear I’m not able to find out….. As I was out of town…. Plz this my request…..

    u guys rock…… Love u yaarrrrr…… Just enjoying with ur stories

  869. Savera on

    My Manmarziyan Friends

    SAMIHA….RAASHI….AASTHA ….PARU …TANYA…SAJI….JAYARU….ANNIE…..DEVGA…….

    RENU(H O D)…… where are you ?????????

    please visit here n post your comment.

    I am missing you soooooooo muuuuuch.

    please cum my dearies

  870. saji on

    Oh my thena n anu…cud visualuse each n every moment…thank u so mch…eagerly waitng for upcoming episodes.

    hey natasha…i strtd lil late with ur story…nw i feel its really interestng..

    kfar d way you write s awesome yaar…kp gng

  872. kfar on

    Whoa! it’s cats and dogs here, so anyway I took a break and had slept all morning my cold went to head, leading to headache Oh so watver, it was hurting really..
    I visited in the morning da page i thought I cud update couldn’t so here Im to write again…

    Drawn Together

    Radhika stared at the distance stretching them and she shivered feeling a new cold spreading over her body, she moved gaze away from his disappearing back, it disturbed her and she didn’t know why.

    But, she wasn’t left with her thoughts longer, as a group of ladies of her age surronded her as mist, and she was surprised how she was enjoying herself, laughing, smiling and grinning, it was therepeutic, because hasn’t done that since long.

    Just as she threw her head and laughed a bellyclenching one, she failed to observe someone’s peering peircing gaze, when she wiped her tears and looked sideways and her body froze leaving all the breath and mirth out of her in just a second.

    The blood froze in her body, all the panic came back with full force. How in th god’s name was he here?

    The ladies moved away chatting and she couldn’t escape along with them because her feet were arrested jammed on the smooth floor.

    Her father, Raghav Mishra, The CEO and head of many marketing firms dealing with selling across the country was standing there, drinking gin and tonic, he was piercing her with his condescending gaze that Radhika was afraid of. He never encouraged her ever to be free in amusement, he didn’t laughing women and there she was behaving so undesciplined.

    He walked towards her, his age lines, glasses and grey hair looked very stern, and the grey suit he was wearing cut him out a very fierce businessman.

    “You seem to be very happy.” He said a little coldly.

    Radhika was seeing him after months, he had gone to Germany right after her marraige, for some marketing convention happening there.

    “Papa, I was just….” She started to explain but he cut her out, obviously he was here to wreck her nerves and confidence to shambles.

    He took a sip from his glass, his right hand in his pant pocket.

    “What is this I’m reading in the newspapers, dear daughter?” He smiled, his eyes though were super freezing cold.

    Radhika gulped hard, her face burned. Crap, he read the news about her marraige presumably on the rocks.

    “You must be very aware about it, dont you? remember I don’t want you coming home complaining, it doesn’t do well with my reputation…” He said, a clear warning and threat in his voice as he stopped mid sentence, his stance got stiff, as he looked over her shoulder.

    A second later she felt a familiar touch on her waist, and her husband stood beside, putting his body in between her father and her, he slid his hand around her waist and moved her away.

    Her father’s face got clearef of malice, and it replaced with warmth.

    “How are doing, Son. It’s been a while, isn’t it? ” He put out his hand as a greeting.

    Her husband looked across at her face and Radhika quickly rearranged her face and smiled at him, he in turn did not smile but offered her the glass of orange juice he had bought along for her.

    “Yes, it’s been a while.” He said mildly, completely uninterested, though he shook hands.

    Radhika’s hand wobbled over the glass and the juice spilled a little. Oh, crap.

    The admonishing was not late to come. Her father cliked his tongue in scolding.

    “Look, how clumsy she is. I’m sorry, Son that she is a complete embarrassment to you.” He said disappointed, his face contracted in irritation.

    Radhika’s face burned and her eyes filled with humliliated tears. Some of the juice drops fell on her husband’s sleeve, she hurriedly tried to clean it off with a paper napkin she had.

    But he caught her hand, and Radhika looked up at his face, and she saw that he was very angry. His lips were thinned out, his eyebrows defined sharp black. He was looking into her eyes with so much meaning, his hand tightened on hers, warm and firm.

    “Radhika, how can you so irresponsible…” Her father’s still more irritated superior voice jerked her up.

    But before she could say anything, her mouth shut up as she saw her husband stood more straighter, his eyes went from light swirling brown to dark midnight black, and turned around to face her father.

    “She is not just Radhika now, Mr. Mishra, She is Arjun Radhika Mehra, I hope from now on you address her with more civility and respect and maybe you won’t forget the name she has herself joined to or might say, I won’t be sorry if you lose your business in the market altogether.” He went on in a deep drawly voice, swirling his drink in the glass, glancing across at her father with a smile.

    The staight out threat was heavily palpable in the air and Radhika felt immensely dizzy because of it. Nobody, not one soul had the guts to talk to her father in such manner ever not even any businessman, he was known to be brutal of her husband here managed to silence her father in an angry pallor. She gulped hard looking across to him.

    His face was surprisingly impassive, but his flashef behind the glasses and his hand tightened on his drink, Radhika was afraid it would break the glass and hurt his hand.

    But he only smiled and Radhika felt her breath whoosh out. She felt a tug at her hand and later she was dragged away from there.

    He glanced down at her a moment later, His eyes now glimmered with utmost annoyance, he halted and took her hands in his, putting his body closer to her. His body hard on her soft one, his breath falling warm on her face. He tited her chin and slid his forefinger over her cheek, his left hand on the centre of her back.

    “This backbone of yours, you need to straighten it.” His fingers moved up her spine creating a cool fire and she shivered. His eyes snapped to her lips then to her eyes warmly. “You’re my wife now, no matter who is it who undermines you…..even if it’s your father, fireback with equal force, alright…..nobody humliates a Mehra.” He concluded, spanning her whole back with his hand, his other hand still on her cheek.

    Radhika felt her heart flutter.

    “So, am I a Mehra now?” She asked, a smile playing at her lips, her voice expectant.

    His eyes arrested in a surprised stare, his voice changed a little self observing.

    “Yes, you are.” He replied in a whisper, his voice a grasp of wonder, then it was all gone and he stepped back.

    and Radhika frowned at the change of emotion, he then took hold of her hand.

    “Let’s go, I’m hungry.” He mumbled…..

    *****

    At the dinner table, the dinning hall spread a large rectangular table, it extended to the full space, there were about sixty people having a go at the delicacies…and it was mostly sea food.

    Radhika looked down at her plate in distaste. It was boiled crab, and beside the plate was a small hammer to break the shell and to take out the meat was a fork. The silverware was gleaming, the plates so clean, the table cloth was pristine white, beside to her, Arjun was having an immense happy time with the crab, he was having a conversation with the man beside.

    Radhika hesitated but her hand on his knee, his head whipped around slowly, he looked down at her hand and she immediately removed it, he leaned towards her, his eyes straying to hers finally.

    “What’s wrong?” He asked huskily.

    She leaned too and looked into his furrowed brows.

    “I don’t like crab.” She whispered, his forehead cleared and his left eyebrow rose up in what seemed like amusement.

    “Oh..” He whispered and leaned back.

    “Call the waiter and change your plate with something else.” He explained, in a simple reply.

    Radhika stared at him, Um did he forget that this was not a restuarant and the main course was only crab.

    He seem to understant her plight.

    “I’m sure the cook will whip out something.” He said and looked all over at her in amused curiosity.

    But, Radhika wasn’t sure if she could do it confidently, changing plates and all. She never did it, her father was always leading.

    She glanced at her husband uncertainly.

    “Straighten your shoulders, don’t slouch.” He said, his voice clear with instruction.

    Her face burned but she did as she was told.

    “Right, look around eyes sharp and tilt your chin, yes, see the waiter is on his way here.” He instructed, his whisper on her bare shoulder made her tingle.

    She did as he said in quite confidence she got the hovering waiter’s attention. Wow, she thought.

    “Now, ” He turned her attention to his eyes. “Make your own way.” He whispered, half smiled and went back to his plate.

    The words though said lightly made a profound affect on her.

    Make her own way. Make her own way.Her mind repeated and leaned back with the force of the words.

    She doesn’t have to depend on him as a habbit, she wasn’t forced to depend on him as her father did. With her husband beside to her, she was free to do anything. For the first time in her life she expelled out a liberated breath. A blooming smile lit up her lips.

    She grinned up at the waiter who appeared beside to her, he seemed to blinded by the intensity of it. Her voice tooka happy note.

    “A greek salad, please, instead of the crab, I’m allergic to it.” She said smiling, the waiter blinked and nodded his head and turned to go but stopped him.

    “And hey a little extra of the warm mayo dressing over the salad, yes?” She concluded, feeling already hungry.

    The waiter gave her a ‘yes, mam’ nod and went away. She turned around glancing at her husband, he gave her n impressive small smile and went back to the conversation.

    Radhika blushed and she smiled inwardly, shaking her head.

    ****

    After a stomachful of dinner Radhika felt lethargic, after dessert the now wearing off party moved to another hall. There was slow music going on and a few couple were dancing in the centre of the hall.

    This is where when Radhika became a wallflower. She was good going unnoticed, happy to be not attracting the people around always.

    As she was lost thoughts in the corner, a hand slid on her neck, Radhika’s body went immediately high alert. It was not her husband’s touch. It creepy and slimy touch.

    “Hey, gorgeous, care to dance?” A voice, too drunk whispered in her ear, Radhika jerked back feeling disgusted….

  873. Annie on

    Hello Friend s …see I have checked another page of this site of serial bhabhiji ghar par hai of &tv in which no one has ever comment ed we can use that page what’s say ??????????In this way we will not disturb anyone ?????????

  874. Annie on

    Hello Friends …see I have checked another page of this site of serial bhabhiji ghar par hai of &tv in which no one has ever comment ed we can use that page what’s say ??????????In this way we will not disturb anyone ?????????

    Msg from Team: Unfortunately only that show can be discussed in comments over there.

  875. deepa on

    Oh my dr farha…..warm hug for u yaar……am very much drawned to ur story yaar……my day start with reading ur story…i bcome one of ur crazy fan buddy…..can u upload t story in fb yaar….

    Take care of ur health buddy…..consult doctor…tak medicine……tak rest buddy

    waiting for ur continuation…keep rocking buddy

  876. kfar on

    The man seemed to be in his late twenty, his breath stenched of alcohol. He was also wearing a suit, seems like a new entrprenuer.

    Radhika about to slap his leery face, when she felt a hand slid on her waist again. She was firmly moved to the side, affecting blocking her from the sleeze.

    “She is my wife, caring a dance with me.” He said possessively. “And you are? Well, nevermind.” His voice became low and dangerous. “There is the door, now, you f**ktard, turn around and run far away before I lose it.” His voice razer sharp and hard, his hand fisted, the drunk guy sort of his high as he glanced dow, he gulped hard, turned around and took to his heels.
    Radhika felt her husband back bunched up in strain, his fisted hand vibrated with voilence, as if still wanting to strangulate the running man’s neck, but he seemed have a finite control over his blackened anger.

    Radhika prayed to god that she would never on the receiving end of it ever of his anger. He turned around and his face shown a frustated expression, and she looked worried. He saw her then, his face changed drammatically into a grin.

    “I leave for a minute and you manage to find yourself in trouble always, huh.” He stated and shook his head.

    He then took her hand in his and drew her closer, he put his forehead on hers. Oh, he is acting strange, what got into him that made him grin.

    “Let’s dance.” He whispered and spun her around on the floor, Radhika moved in circles with the force of the spin, her jaw dropped open.

    The light went out and the music cut short. She peered in the dark from centre stage.

    A new music started and a round bright light came out from the ceiling and streamed on the floor.

    Her already dropped mouth hung wide open, in the centre of the light her husband stood. His back to her.

    A very familiar music started. A music from the famous movie Ashiqui, a remix of a song starring leadings actors in the pop song, that Radhika has recently saw on TV.

    First guitar strings played,then drumbeats and clicking sounds of forefinger and thumb.

    With rounded eyes she saw her husband lipsynch the song.

    His right hand finger clicking, his head turned to the side, his lips pelted out words.

    Har pal meryaan yadaan
    yadaan vich ae tun

    He turned around and moved to her, his eyes gleamed im mirth, he took her hand and spun her around in his arms.

    He then put her hand on his wild beating heart.

    Dil di gal mai dassa
    Te dassa fir kinnu

    His lips moved with the lyrics and so were his feet. His eyes locked in stare with hers. He moved her around, her back attached to his front. He moved her waist through the belt of the music.

    Har pal meriyaan yadaan
    yadaan vich kinnu

    His chin on her shoulders, he moved his front on her back and turned her around and pulled to his chest.

    Dil di gal mai dassa
    te dassa fir kinnu..

    Radhika’s face lit up with a smile.

    He then turned away from her. his fingers playing in between, pointing out at her.

    Teri meri, meri teri ik jind’di
    ik jind’di what to do

    He then cirlced her arm and bent her body down on his arm, smoothly removing her bun and letting herhair free and gliding on her shoudlers and lifted up cleanly.

    His lips moved over neck, ear and shoulders, warmly, his hands around her waist from behind her.

    Jhoomu main nachu mai
    gaaun ke likhun
    Tereliye mai kya karun

    His breath and lips over her skin rasied tingles and the song made her heady.

    He spun her around and smiled across at her warmly, it fluttered her heart more, his lips moved in sync with the song, he stared at her with such possessive streakness that made her jerk back..he walked to her very slowly, ina slow dance move.

    Dheere dheere se meri zindagi me

    • anaya on

      Hey farha….know 1 thing? I was planning to use this song as BG but sincerely u did real justice to it. I would never ever have……. Loved it. Absolutely amazing… U r a born writer. Keep writing. Never stop

    • kfar on

      Oh thats great we thought the same, it s awesome right the song I was hearing continually since days so I thought why not incoporate the song haha n omg , thank u so much for such a nice compliment bud coming from anothet writer means alot 😀

      thanks a lot tanya u always read my story n comment on it 😀

      @Shub- I don’t yaar we should just plead tellyupdate to not scrap off this page or go for option three, let see what happens

  877. kfar on

    Dheere Dheere se meri zindagi mein ana

    He moved closerto her

    Dheere dheerese dil ko churana…
    He put her hand again on his heart,

    His lips were mere inches away from hers, his eyes fiery honey, all the world vanished away from around them, just the music, guitar strings, drumbeats, finger clicks, the song crooning and his arms around her remained. His moving lips glided over her heated skin of her cheek and neck, their bodies moving in a slow dance.

    Tumse pyaar hume hai kitna jaane jaana
    tumse mil kar tumko hai batana

    They were embraced together and the song started fading away. His face was burrowed deep in a neck and his warmth was spreading into her from his strong built body. Radhika’s body was dragged up an inch completely plastered up in his arms, her hand around his toned waist and her head on his shoulders Radhika FINALLY FOUND HOME IN HIS arms…

    Her eyes closed with the fading of the song.

    tumse milkar tumko hai batana……….

    ************

    • Savera on

      Hey Kfar

      what do I say to you ….. you r amazing ….. simply marvellous

      just want to read more n more…… oops…it got finished..

      the way you express every emotion in words …gives the real feeling.

      I just flew with the story..

      how are you????? my dear…… ur cold????

      post next part soon coz I want to be drawn together with your writing.

    • kfar on

      Thank u soooo much yaar means alot coming from an outstanding poet n writer 😀

      yeah I hv headache since morning but I took crocin after eatin dinner hope it wil hv affect thanks for askin yaar 😀

    • Mandy on

      Farah I m a fan of ur story now ab toh mein tumati story ko kabhi nahi bulungi yaar its really ROMANTIC N A BIT HILARIOUS 4 ME !!! Love u bud !!

  879. deepa on

    Kfar…..

    Wat to say yaar……here my heart s beating faster after reading t story yaar….wat a romantic dinner date its very sizzling……continue next part soon dr……am eagerly waiting

    • kfar on

      Oh haha my heart was beatin too while i wrote it thanks dear means alot 😀

      Tanya- thanks yaar bud n continue writing its great 😀

  880. Tanya on

    After I Saw how fantabulously u all write even I got inspired and wrote but don’t should I share? First time, so there will be mistakes.You, all my friends plz advice should I post or not?

  881. anu on

    Here i go with the next update.. today its too early as i have to attend a function.

    Episode No : 10

    The episode starts with AR & NS reaching their homes. Ankush gets up and makes his frens to wake up and gets ready to go to college. Along with his frens he leaves to college. Nandini wakes up the kid and asks the maid to make him ready soon. Both nandini and little arjun(i gave a hint in yesterday, try to figure it out) go to hospital for checkup. Ankush with his frens go to same hospital for practical session. (Ankush studies medicine 2nd yr in the college, which has a hospital too). Nandini talks to doctor about little arjun and they take medicines and they were about to leave.

    Nandini’s wallet fells down and little arjun takes it and gives it to her. She turns suddenly and sees ankush bit far near next dept in the same block. She calls the driver to make little arjun sit in the car saying she will be back in few minutes. Nandini goes to ankush to speak.

    AR cleans their room, gets fresh up and they plan to go to Birdsong. NS gets relaxed in their room. Sam plays with the puppy apple and meanwhile arjun calls her & asks thems to reach BS asap to finish the project. Both the duo couples get ready and they leave to birdsong.

    Ankush notices her & wants to avoid her, but this time she succeeds. Nandini asks ankush about his sister Radhika & his jiju Arjun. He replies all are fine, as they dont have STONES ON THEIR PATH/WAY (raasthe mein pathar). She feels bad by the answer, but she again asks him are arjun&radhika together? He says i dont know your intention, but dont come in our lives again. He leaves saying We are truly happy and please excuse us.

    The little arjun heard evrythng.He sees nandini wiping her tears. Nandini turns and the little arjun escapes from her eyesight. Little arjun runs to the car,before nandini reaches there. He sits in the car thinking. Nandini comes and they to their home. Nandini makes him rest and asks him not be mischievious like before and pinches his nose. He too does the same and nandini hugs him.

    Precap : AR & NS @Birdsong. Piyali&samrat joins them.

    • Savera on

      Hey Anu,

      well written yaar…..what a talent you are

      I like ur story coz u r taking Nandini in a different way

      waiting for d next epi…….

  882. anaya on

    Episode 6:
    Ansh pulled up the jeep at a dhaba. All got down to have food. They were chit chatting and eating. All of a sudden , sana got up & said “I will just be back”. Others continued. After sometime, parth got up to wash his hands. While walking, he heard a giggle. He just peeped & saw that Sana was feeding roti to a puppy & was mumbling soothing sounds. The puppy was cooing & eating roti hurriedly from her hand. She was herself looking so cute & adorable that……..parth(was talking to himself)” wo wo wo boy….u need to have a grip on your mind”. He left from there with a smile on his face.
    To be continued…….

  883. anaya on

    Episode 6 continued..
    After some time everyone got on the jeep and continued their journey. The stereo was now playing ” Dil….dhadakne do……” And after about 5 hours of journey, they were stuck in a traffic jam. After waiting for around 15minutes, ansh asked a person standing nearby” bhaiyya ji. What happened?”
    The person:” a huge tree fell across the road and an oil tanker met with an accident. It will take 3 to 4 hours for the road to be clear again & could take longer since its getting dark”.
    Our 3sp &3ma:” oh go….d”
    After around 15 minutes
    Jagat:”hey guys.listen. its already getting dark. And the road is not clear too. For today, let’s just keep aside the chasing & rest in the nearby hotel and think ahead. What say?”
    After 2-3 minutes, all agree.
    To be continued……

  884. Tanya on

    Thanks Mandy.So I am uploading this story with my fav pair Arjun nd radhika.
    Chapter 1
    She woke up suddenly.She realised the reality.The warm sun rays made her comfortable.She looked around the house.it was her last day in that house but she was glad as it would mean to leave those abusive moments.Her landlord,a aunty,called her to remind her that today she had to leave the house,she told her she could move out of the house till evening.Radhika sarcasticly replied to herself after the call that how she could be so careless.She left everything for…but she stopped herself thinking further.
    Soon she felt hunger.She got up to make breakfast for herself.She went out of the room.She looked around,everything packed perfectly.She saw in the kitchen.only some food material left.she decided to make a warm,golden,delicious waffle and some warm tea.She quickly made a cup of tea and kept the batter in waffle pan.She thought to write something in the diary.She bought the diary from her purse.A girly pink diary with glitter on some spots.She had wrote all her moments in her dairy.She saw the diary had only had 2pgs left but she wanted to write her feelings endlessly.she bought a pink sticky note.she tried to write when suddenly that warm smell turned into a burning choking smell.Oh! She remembered her waffle.she quickly went into kitchen nd saw the brown,extra hot,totally terrible looking waffle.She threw the waffle into the bin and cleaned the vessel.Thankfully she had some good but less jam and some slices of bread left.She ate it and satisfied her hunger.she saw the time it was just 10.and her lease ends at 7.she looked into paper for some rental place when suddenly she saw the advertisement of Birdsong,inviting creative writers for recruitment.She now turned from gloom to joyful.She could work and forget those bad memories and find new opportunities for herself.She quickly got ready in her best formal dress and put a confident smile on her.She told to her reflection in mirror,”Get ready Radhika!you have a new future that too bright!You can do this and make yourself worthy and confident.i am coming Birdsong.”
    ———————————————————-
    So how was it till now? Plz help me to better myself and give your comments.Sorry if any mistakes. ?

  885. Mandy on

    Hey guys i was juz changing channels n i saw an old film of AHEM SHARMA dname of of d film is BLUE ORANGES yaar guys u won’t blive he was werin chashma n has a little mooch !!! I was so amused n shoked guys !! Wat is ur reaction guys after dis guys ????

    Pls send ur feedbacks !!!!

  886. Deepa on

    Anu..

    Asusual nice episode yaar…….enjoy t function well dr……waiting for tomorrow episode….gn ma

    anaya

    i love parth and sana pairing yaar….hope coming episode vll see some romance blossoming between them…….eagerly waiting for wat happens next…..u too try to post in fb yaar….

  887. anaya on

    Episode 6 continued
    They enter a hotel and Ansh enquires about rent and room availablity at the reception. Meanwhile others call their parents and tell that they are on the way to Siliguri( not revealing they r not on the bus arranged from college). The receptionist tells them that only 1 room is available. Panchi : ” what? No way..”
    Ansh:”shhhhh yaar”
    Panchi spells ‘no way’ silently.
    Jagat took her away & said ” yaar it’s not like we r staying alone. We all r a gang. What will we do otherwise. We can take rest, freshen up & leave. What else can we do now. Stay on jeep? U think that is a good idea. We wud b in middle of nowhere. We would be worried about your safety”. They have an eyelock at that point. Small breeze touches her hair. He looks with so much love & care that she feels her heart just stopped beating.
    Ansh:” hey guys. Are we gonna take the room or not?”
    The spell broke. Jagat ran fingers through his hair. Panchi blushed and nodded yes
    Sana :you people decide. I am okay with your decision. We all are together.
    Reeva: I am okay too
    Ansh made the payment and took the keys.
    Sana:” listen. We will pay off all the expenditures share once we are back. Is that okay for now?
    jagat :” we will discuss that later.for now just help with the keys. We have our hands full with luggage’s”
    Sana:” oh sorry. Sure.”
    Sana opens the door and all enter & our 3ma place all the luggage down.pause.
    Precap: they are playing truth or dare game.

  889. rajan on

    ANU . KFAR . ANANYA ,THENA etc and all those u write a heart touching stories… thanks .I always want to be in this page waiting for ur interesting stories to read.Compared to all the serials , anu,kfar,ananya.thena etc ,u peoples story line is best .i like to read it many times i could…..hope ill still get read more hearttouching stories…………………

  890. Thena on

    Hi dearies sorry 4 bein late….i tried my best…bt fell asleep yaar…still lil down bt hope 2 get wel soon….ur cmmnts r here 2 heal me girlies….

    EPISODE 133:

    SCENE 1:

    Havin freshened up,arjun came out rejuvenated & ws transfixed 2 c radz standin b4 the mirror…..she had draped a baby pink saree,hr cuts wer seen extremely seductive…… hs ws casuals,a banian on top fittin 2 hs biceps & a lower down…..he locked the door & radz smiled at mirror seein hm approachin hr……..hr smile faded away whence hs heat spread on hr back…….he sided hr hair strands & untied the knot on hr blouse……the feather touch of hs fingers titillated hr nerves & the adrenaline rush made hr exhilirated ……pressin hr bare waist,he kissed at the back of hr neck…..hs hot breath gusted out 2 fall on hr collar bone……..hr body temperature rose at an alarmin rate,hr heart ws poundin out of the chest………she closed hr eyes & hr fingers wer perched on hs…….wrappin hr waist firmly,he proceeded 2 hr neck’s crook……the warmth of hs lips aroused hr hormones & she found it hard 2 breath as if she ws a fish out of water in hs arms……he twirled hr in sudden & put hs firey gaze straight in2 hr hazel eyes……she blushed crimson,hr eyes turned dark & lips had bcome pale…..failin 2 hold hs intense luks,she plunged 2 the door…..

    hr chest heaving hard,toes wer clingin 2 one another & the pulse points kept explodin at evry nook & corner……hr heart beat rumbled out 2 hr skull wen arjun caught hr elbow…..a tug,she whirled 2 fall in hs arms…….carryin hr,he progressed 2 the bed,hr fingers clenchin hs neck open……

    kneeling down on bed, arjun cupped radz face,placed soft kisses on hr 4head,eyes,nose & sent hs gaze 2 hr lips……….he made a sedate move against the bed along wid radz & planted a soft kiss on hr lips…..unable 2 hold the proximity she bestirred herself 4m hs clutch……

    radz face turned scarlet,chest heavin terribly & cheeks transferred heat 2 some inches around……arjun clenched hr shoulder 4m behind…..immediately then she slid hr head in2 hs chest as if she ws gonna tear hs outfit…..s she ws….hs neck button ws thrown 2 the door’s corner…….he knelt down,tuk hr face out in a great deal of effort…….tis tme he went passionate,pushed hr hard 2 the bed,plantin an impulsive kiss on hr lips…..a THUG sound ws produced wen she hit the bed……hs body filled up every gap on hr body…..he left no space 4 air 2 pass in between them…..radz cudnt escape hs brutal clutch,hr fingers wer clenchin 2 hs silky hair as she finally gave hr up in the hormonal contest…..arjun stretched hs hand 2 switch off the light……

    (at last our ardhika consummated their marriage buddies)

    SCENE 2:

    A group of gangsters ws shown in a godown type room…..they wer playin cards & laughin at each other…..some were smokin & some wer sippin while playing…..another man came there & informed the crew tat the photo had been sent…..

    they wer seemed 2 b angst on hearin tis & abandoned their game in the midst…….they rushed 2 the system,checken in 2 the mail box & dowloaded a photo…..sam’s snap tugged out of the printer…..they tuk it out & cmmnted on hr features sayin tat she ws a delicious chick….

    Naral wer in a dark room,a spot beam fell over them….Nandhini tellin saral tat she ws restless 2 witness samrat’s happiness…..she told tat she did a big mistake on sparin sam as she had never loved arjun…..she bashed the table,gnashing hr teeth……

    SCENE 3:

    it ws morning…….arjun ws shirtless perched hs head on radz arm…….arjun’s front frame facin the bed,hs r8 arm wrappin around radz waist……radz woke up,hr eyes squinted 2 read time……she then found arjun on hr side & smiled reminiscin on their matin….she cautiously tuk away hs arm around hr waist & rested hs head on pillow……she ws curious 2 interpret sumthin glitterin on hs cheek….Oh! it ws hr stone bindi……she pressed hr left palm against bed & streched hr r8 2 tak it……she ws yanked hard by arjun 2 fall on bed…..

    He slid hs r8 arm around hr waist & pulled hr close 2 hm…..hs head ws perched on hs left palm,wid elbow point rested on bed…..she struggled 2 release herself but in vain…..he smiled,smiled,smiled & hs body quiverin on hr jigglin……sudden then he went still ,hs arm left its grip as she kissed hs lips,……she plunged up & winked at hm gng runnin 4m thr…..

    END of epi 133….

    leave ur sweet feedback buddies…..

  891. Thena on

    EPISODE 134:

    SCENE 1:

    The alarm bell rang straight in2 sam’s head…..

    “neil….neil wake up……neiiiillllll……”,squealed sam,hr arm sneaked out the blanket 2 pat beside hr….

    she thrust herself up agitated & shouted idiiiiiiot,hr eyes kept squintin at the door……then thr peered hr eyes 2 interpret the fig approachin hr……it ws neil bringing hr bed coffee,al smilin & winkin at hr…..she jumped down the bed,embraced hm tight & kissed r8 at hs heart……

    “I love u idiot…..my apple shud nvr leave hs orange alone”,she uttered babyishly on hs chest…..

    “hw cum tis idiot cud leave hs life sammmmmiiiiiiiieeeeeee…..?”, neil on sensing hr pertubation, pursed hs mouth in2 a childish pout……

    he cupped hr face,hs thumb wipin out the tinge of tear peepin out, kissed hr 4head & then possessed hr head 2 hs bosom….

    Arjun blinkin hs eyes, dispatched hs stare 2 the wall clock……Oh! it ws already 7 a.m…….he plunged out the bed,stretched hs arms wide & stifled a wide loud yawn……

    “Good mornin Mr.Arjun Mehra”,radz grabbed hs stretched arm & placed a cup of tea over hs arm…..

    “Oh! thank you Mrs.Arjun Mehra”,smiled arjun & sippin the cup 2 empty it in seconds….

    she shoved hm 2 the bathroom,pressin hr palms at hs back yellin tat they shud make in time unlike the previous day………..arjun mocked hr 2 make hm get ready ASAP…..she pushed hm inside putting hr ful brawn & immediately locked the door leavin hm 2 patter the door……

    “Sir its already time……dont waste ur time in playing wid the door”,shouted radz smilingly 2 the crook of the door…..

    SCENE 2:

    BIRDSONG:

    Priya Mehra sittin cross legged in a meetin hall……nesam,ardhika,Piyali & all staff members wer sittin in circular……a video ws shown on the projector screen….

    VIDEO:

    “DAY 1: a man is shown waitin sumwhr…..he smiles broadly seein a chick arrivin…..he is lukin annoyed at hs garment wen she crossed hm unnoticed….
    DAY 2:the same happens inspite of hs change in garment…..
    Days run swift 4m 3 to 30 down the screen…..
    DAY 30:he hurled everythin & wears the same garment tat he worn on 1st day & spritzs GUESS seductive homme on hs neck…..
    he nestles at the same location not noticin the chick.she is pulled 2 hm,biting hs neck wild’

    The VIDEO ended….

    Priya mehra lukin stern at radz,askin hr 2 cum up wid the catchy slogan just then…..arjun & nesam shocked….Piyali ws about 2 utter sumthin bt stooped priya’s gesture,still hr stare fell fixed on radz…..

    SCENE 3:

    Radhika wid hr positive grin cleared the atmosphere of apprehension thr……she stood up carryin a grin of confidence & proceeded near 2 the projector screen…..arjun ws restless,hs stare ws never off 4m radz…..piyali & sam were set off in trepidation…..neil’s eyes wer cool & hs composure ws wel witnessed by hs posture…..he ws just leanin casual 2 hs back unlike al others thr…..

    radz started 2 xplain on the ad:

    “here is a man tryin hs hard 2 guess hs crush’s taste on garments…..one day he gets fed up of guessing & just takin hs old garment ly 2 leave aftr sprayin guess seductive homme…..but 2 hs surprise she falls 4 hm…..so

    DON’T GUESS BUT DO GUESS”

    she ended hr speech wid hr slogan, still carryin the same grin…….

    END of epi 134……

    @farha…..heyaa wat is ur story yaar….omg…..tat dance sequence,i just visualised it……n arjun’s dialogue”carin 2 dance wid me”….Oh! u ve no clue hw much i laughed on it…..u r the best…lol
    @savera…my dear…u just made me cry…read ur poem many times….hair rising….awesome work buddy
    @dipika….m lil gud yaar….bt still runnin nose buddy….hope ll b cleared soon
    @sanju…heyya actu m already posti 2 epis evryday yaar….i really tried 2 post more bt slept due 2 my health….def i ll try my dear
    @jayaru…thank u yaar…m lil good now buddy…..
    @deepa…u r the best buddy…luv u loads….
    @natasha…hey m gud yaar…hw ws ur day….
    @mandy….hw ws ur day yaar…seems u wer free 2day..hahaha
    @raashi,samiha….wr r u buds
    @anu,anaya….ur stories r awesome….hey anu just likd tat blazer scene buddy….ananya urs is vry cool buddy..great works…
    @abbz…hey thank u 4 ur luvely cmmnts….glad tat u likd tat car scene cos me too felt it while writin buddy….
    @tanya…hey y such doubt yaar…just start & keep rockin buddy…..
    @reeda…hey me 2 feel the same…gonna miss u al soon….
    @saji…hey thank u buddy…lol
    @RENU….oh my dear…badly need ur suggestion & feedbak…hahaha….cum dear…..just lil time v hav buddy
    sorry if missed any1…didn mean 2 cos i read evry 1 of ur cmmnts dearies….

    so sweet of my dearies….do tel me hw much u likd this buddies…….

    GOOD NIGHT….have sweet ARDHIKA dreams….love u loads…..

    • kfar on

      awesome i loved it very much 😀 and haha thanks yaar for readin the story means a lot bud and hope u got better wit the cold mine went to my head and it is crippling my mind the ache well im babbling never mind, cooool wrting 😀

      rajan- thanks for appreciating our work.

      yaar renu raashi devga happy tia ure kahan ho sab, we have less time

      samiha are u well? sab theek?

      Heyyyy everyone Mandy n sab we soon gonna cross 2000——– THREE CHeeeeers

    • Thena on

      oh my dear farha……thank u sooooooo much yaar….

      again u caught wid cold huh…mine lil ok bt still my throat isnt clear….

      n ur story….wat a description on tat dance sequence!…..mind blowing….seems like u dance well girliiiiieeeee…………hmmmm…..

  892. deepa on

    Hi thena

    hru dr?……

    Coming back to episdoe……wat a hot and sizzling and passionate romance of our ardhika…..oh my god finally they consummated their marrage……

    loved nesam scene…..both episdoe are fantastic yaar…loved and enjoyed it my dr

    eagerly waiting for many episode yaar…..keep rocking buddy….tc…..
    Gn…….ma

  894. zara on

    @Anaya
    well done! !!!! superb dear
    I’m eagerly waiting for next episode. ..
    precap is always awesome, now 3sp n 3ma playing truth or dare game 😉 😉 ;-)…. amazing. .. keep going on 🙂

    @kfar
    hey farha as always ardhika rockss.. I enjoyed each and every moments as it come in your story. most like deehere dehere se … scene wow
    continue dear, thanks for gave such an amazing story on our Manmarziyan
    sooo once again thnx a lot. and I love your sher-o-shayari coz I’m also shayari baaz.

    @savera
    hii buddy your heart touching poem is fabulous! !

    and other peoples,
    actually today I’m quite busy according to my schedule therefore I didn’t read remaining epi, story . @thena , Natasha, anu, tanya, I post my feedbacks to your episode after reading.
    good night 🙂 Have a sweet dreams

    • kfar on

      Thanks a lot Zara for such nice compliment n yeah i lv da song n right away i thought of puttin it here hahaha aur yaar khub milke shaayaribazi karenge awesome. gdnite.

      Thena, anu, Nats, anaya, Tanya read al ur epis great going guys. gdnite yaar.

      Savera- I read ur another poem, ur simply makin mr ur fan…simple, clean and profound r da words. actually i had such poem in mind but urs is much better…

      @All,goodnite love u al guys 😀 zweetdreams, goodnite let not the bed bugs bite haha

  895. Samiha on

    Hiiiii guyss! My mom had taken away my phone so I couldn’t come all day…. Anyways,,,,,

    @Dipika: CONGRATULATIONS!!! Hope you succeed in your new career life…

    @kfar: Awesome. They really are being drawn together… And thanks for complimenting. And yeah, everybody wants me to follow my parent’s path and develope a medical career… Please continue your other story too. Have a nice day(or night)….

    @Natasha: Hey, where are you??? Why didn’t you update your story???

    @Thena: Wow!!! Liked your story very much. Tight hug!!!

    @Anu: Hi, your story is getting interesting day by day… Keep surprising us!

    @Mandy: Hi Mandy! What’s up???

    @Anaya: wow, I am also feeling like going to Siliguri! Ha ha… Your descriptions are superb…

    @Savera: Keep us updated with your stories and poems dear!

    @Tanya: hey, your story seems interesting! Keep updating…

    Okay guys, GOOD NIGHT! Loads of love……

  896. Samiha on

    @kfar: Are you awake Farha?? Anyways, can you give me the link where you posted ‘Drawn Together’???

    • kfar on

      I was asleep but coemts here are comin late..samiha hey i didn’t yet put it anywhere yarr but i’ll put in myeduniya soon once i know how to write in dat box haha

  897. renu on

    hiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii friends,…

    First of all,…i appologize 2 u all 4 not posting my pov yaar,…Actually i went 2 my home cox my mom called me suddenly as she wanna see me n so i cant post my comment yaar,… cox of poor internet connection at my home,…

    2day,i wanna share sth about NESAM

    (Note:I just understood deeper about SAM’s character portrayed in mmz after watching some old epi once again in my free time,..its not 2 hurt any1 intentionally,..Its purely my pov,..if u ve any objection,u may reply,…)

    1.SAMAIRA KHANNA,…

    A girl of bluffness,envisage,self-centered person,sometimes harebrained nature,…..She seems to be strong outside but she is emotionally weak n always needs some1 beside her as a supporting wall n She always thinks about her,herself n her life,…She loves her friends cox of their importance in her life at times,….She believes everyone easily even being a stranger n fall into their trap sooner,…She always reacts first b4 acts,…She even play pranks on innocent ppl just 2 prove her point,….Any1 can easily manipulate her n hurt her without facing such difficulties except her warriors Radhika & Neil,.. She cant withstand any failure in her life n she never ever tried 2 overcome the problems in her life,…she always used 2 b in the dark past which causes her pain n without some caretaker she never ever tried 2 do sth 2 come over it,…She even fails to understand her closed one’s feelings 4 her n poor in judging the persons in her life,…she always hurts her loved ones without knowing it n she even dinn think about them 4 a second,….

    Without Neil,her life wont b complete cox neil knew some of her flaws which i noted above n even being hurt by her many times,neil never left her alone wen she needed him,…She is lucky to have Friends like Neil & Radhika in her life,…which she never cared cox both love her in diff ways as Radhika always wants her 2 b happy n she saved her 4m huge heart break n being murdered by putting her life in danger as she wants 2 protect her always & Neil always there 2 console her n support her when she was hurt,…The biggest irony is till now she dinn understands radz love 4 her completely,….

    Arjun judged her character within few encounters n he manipulate her in the way he wants by his charm looks n sweaty double meaning dialogues which she needed 2 hear at times,…He even succeed in making her 2 see the world in the way he wants,…even after ardhika marriage,she believed arjun’s words cox she dont wanna burst the image she created 4 arjun in her mind,…She was attracted 2 arjun’s physical appearance n their intense scenes in the beginning says everything about it,…Her infatuation n her obsession 4 arjun makes her 2 live alone in her dreamy world which fails 2 connect her with the reality,…She always lost in her own imaginary world,..all she wants is 2 get what she wants in her life,..

    She have no guts 2 burst that bubble in which she was living 4 quite some time in her life as it gives her immense pleasure 2 rest in her bubble rather than facing the reality,…that’s y she slapped her best friend b4 all n she even doubted her n humiliated her publicly n hurting her badly with unpleasant words not at all matching her character,…She behaved like a creep cox of her fear in believing her friend’s truth,…

    & she even dinn care about Neil’s feeling 4 her as she again scared 2 see neil other than her best friend as she wears a friendship mask n she never wanna see him as her lover as it ll again burst her bubble,…So,she ignored Neil’s feeling 4 her as she cheating herself with her fake love n trusting her enemies by hurting her lovable friends,…She came out of her bubble ly after radz explanation of being fallen in true love that’s the turning point in her life,..then, she realized whom she loves n wat she doing,….

    I merely disappointed by the fact that sam dinn reciprocate her friendship to her 2 loved ones like them till the end,…but felt happy, at least she started 2 live in real,….

    2.NEIL MALHOTARA,…

    A man of Gem, jovial nature,….He always supports n consoles his friends when they needed,..His definition of friendship itself differs as he wanna be a supportive person 2 his friends in all walks of their life,…His ly happiness lies in his Best friend which he dinn realize till radz explained about his selfless friendship with sam after arjun’s entry in sam’s life,…He loved sam inspite of all her flaws n he is the ly one capable of putting some sense in2 sam’s brain wen she does sth idiotic,…

    He even noticed arjun’s hidden motives but failed 2 react cox his priority always lies in supporting n consoling sam,..That makes him 2 4get his world n he even started acting as a slave 2 bring happiness back 2 his ly angel SAM’s life by hurting his feelings 4ever,..He never expect anything in return 4m her,…He hide his feelings 4 her by losing his charm,his jovial nature n infact started being in devdass mode 4 a long time n he shed buckets of tears wenever seeing sam’s joy in being with arjun,…His each dialogues ve sensible meaning n if he was normal,he would never ever let sam 2 humiliate n slap radz b4 all,..He knew who is who n wat one can do n wat not,…& also wat one s upt2,…

    like sam,He also lives in sam’s world far apart 4m reality,…he never allow himself 2 come out of this bubble n hence he failed 2 protect his chasni being hurt in all this mess,…He came 2 reality ly after meeting Radz in arjun’s home after their marriage n Sam’s plan 2 take revenge on Radz by snatching arjun 4m radz,…He understood sam dinn love arjun n she s just taking revenge on her bestie as she cracked her bubble somewat,…

    He cheers her again by 4getting ardhika 4 a while but he felt hurt by seeing sam’s stupidity in hurting radz,..As he cant tolerate her stupidity as he came 2 reality now,..thus makes him 2 put some sense in2 sam’s brain n He even confessed her his decision of leaving birdsong just 2 wake her hidden love buried deep inside by her fake bubble,…He even decided 2 move on in his life as he understood this s the ly way 2 make sam come 2 her reality,…he understood her every move,..infact he saved his friend’s life by challenging sam 2 choose him r her avenge on radz,…He succeed in his plan too,..As his samainder singh chooses him as she loves her idiot nothing more than any 1 in this world,…He tried all his ways 2 bring sam 2 her right path n got succeeded in it by the final touch by his chasni,…

    These 2 buddies also has telepathy connection as both lived in their respective dream world apart 4m reality,…Thus both cant connect in real as they are mentally living in their bubble leaving their heart aside 2 scream 4 their love,…It takes more time 2 burst their bubble n reach the real world,…First Neil reached the reality followed by his Samendhar singh,…

    On overall,I love Ra- neil friendship bond too yaar,..it depicts the true friendship,…. Missed them badly,….& once again sorry friends 4 not being active here,..4give ur RENU,…Please,….2morrow ill start ardhika’s love journey,….Please bear with me dearies,…

    @tellyupdates:please dont shutdown this page,…consider the fan’s request yaar,..Dont b rude like Starplus,…

    As usual Sorry 4 many grammatical errors here n there,..hope u never mind,…

    • Thena on

      Oh renu….missed u so much yaar….
      n pls dear dont ask sry for mist….u dont know hw much u entertain us all …..

      Totally agreed yaar…..yeah Sammy a strong 1 outside but deep in emotional….. n Neil yeah he wudnt ve allowed Sam to slap radz if he WS in hs sense…..well said dear…..waiting for ur next deary…..

    • kfar on

      Amazing keen observsation on Sam, keep giving us ur point of view renu it wud help us in ubdrrstandin characters more 😀

      samiha- heyy I slept then my comment came in late dear

    • jayaru on

      hey RENU missed u soooooooooo much,i was shocked not to see any explanations of u.finally u came im soooooooooo happy.i really like NESAM COUPLE also.keep it my frend…………loads of love…………

    • deepa on

      Oh my dr renu……me too missd u alot dr…..sam s calling neil as idiot bt actually she s an idiot in not understanding abt her loved ones….

      Anyway renu i enjoyed ur pov abt our nesam……ur excellent yaar in analysing hook and corner of every scene…..and entertaining with us by ur fabulous pov…..ur always rocking……tight hug for u my dr…..eagerly waiting for ardhika love journey……and also give ur pov for thena and anus story yaar……love u buddy

    • Savera on

      Hiiiiiiiiiiii RENU

      HW R U DEAR ???? I MISSED YOU SOOOOO MUCH.

      YOUR POV IS AWESOME.. I FEEL THE SAME THING ABOUT SAM N NIEL

      WAITING FOR ARADHIKA LOVE JOURNEY……HOPE U LL POST IT SOON

  898. Thena on

    @Riya….wat happened yaar…y r u leavin…please stay until tis page is open dear……emotional am…

    @reeda….v ll keep askin tu page dear

    @rajan….thank u soooo much yaar

    @anu,mitty…….i got reply 4m star plus bt nt 4m swastik dearies……did u people get reply 4m swastik?….

    TELLY UPDATES pls consider our request…..dont close this page as we want to continue our discussions & to say not for chitchatting……please do consider our request & do us a favour…….

    • kfar on

      Hey thena I didn’t get Ny reply from both of them yaar n wat did u get reply from sp about mmz? I hear ke mmz2 is cmg but not wit da sMe cast..sm of my frnds wer talkin about it, I still am unsure if itz true?!?it might just be a rumour.

      mitty n anu- do u guys hv any idea about mmz2 cmng but not with da same cast?!?!?

  899. kfar on

    A try, a poem on the hot and dashing Arjun….;(

    Eyes so peircing,

    gaze lazy caressing,

    Walk a saunter,

    leaving talk n banter,

    smile a drop dead killer,

    swooning are girls in stiller,

    Oh, my,my ur swagger,

    just look back n we stagger…..

    Hahahaha, i dont knw why i wrote it, but just did..:D

  900. Thena on

    farha here is the reply 4m sp yaar

    “Thank you for writing to us.

    We are glad that you like our show Dosti Yaariyan Manmarzian on Star Plus. It is great to hear a word of encouragement from viewers like you; it drives us to deliver better. Also, we have made a note of your concern that you were unhappy with the ending of our show Dosti Yaariyan Manmarzian on Star Plus. Rest assured that we will share your feedback with the Programming team at Star Plus for their review.

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    n ur poem,woooooow wooooow….i really wish 4 aham sharma 2 c tis buddy…..

    @jayaru….hey thank u sooooo much 4 ur concern & keep gng ur feedback dear….luv u loads

    • Savera on

      Oh Thena Thena My dear Thena,

      Once again you made me speechless my dear……….. no words to praise you.

      Just one thing…. you always make my day … by writing such a fantastic epi.

      you n your writing is becoming an integral part of me…….

  901. saji on

    Hey thena..wat to say yaar…luv u alot for d episodes…d way u write s awesome dr…hugs…n im worried if dey close dis page hw will get ur further episodes dr…pls do something.

    hi renu…missed u so mch..n ur explanatns povs as usual mindblowng..original cvs of mmz will b happy to c dis..if dey come across ur pov..so connected.

    anu i think u will continue with ur story in dym telly fb page…pls continue yaar…

    i dnt want dis page to get closed…willmiss all my frnds…renu,,kfar,,,thena,,anu,,mitty,,mandy,,natasha,,raashi,,dipika,,savera,,jayaru,,,abbs,,tanya.,deepa n all others

  902. Natasha on

    EPISODE:8

    The episode starts with mala and dilip coming to anus house. Mala says to dilip mr sharma is very rich. Dilip says yes, their house is so luxerious. Madhvi comes and asks them whom r u searching for? Dilip says is mr and mrs sharma at home? Madhvi says ohit is not at home. I am mrs sharma. Tell me how can i help u? Mala says is dr ananya sharma ur daughter ? Madhvi says yes. Mala says is she ur biological daughter? actually today we saw her at hospital and got shocked seeing her as she looks alike our daughter radhika who died 5years ago. Madhvi says anu is my real daughter. I think u r searching ur daughter in every girl. I totally understand this as its really painful to lose ones child. But i am telling the truth anu is my daughter. Dilip says anus face is similar to radhika. Madhvi says it can be possible to have similar face as there are seven people looks alike in the world. Dilip says thank u mrs sharma. We got our satisfiction hearing ur words. Mala cries. Madhvi says pls seat. Let me arrange some refershment for u. Dilip says no , thanks. We have to go now. They goes. Madhvi says to herself are they anus real parents?

    Neil comes to sams cabin. Sam says what happend idiot? Neil says sammy can we go to dinner today? Sam says its difficult. I have to do a lots of work today. Sam says but i will try. Neil says thanks. I will wait for u.

    All r in canteen. Parth says to rahul dude can u do everything? Rahul says of course. Do u have any problem? Parth says but i dont think so. If u r really worthy of doing anything then prove it. Rahul says i will prove it. Kirti says what r u doing? Why r u behaving like fools? Rahul says no,kirti i will prove today that i can do anything. Parth says then take this paper plane and this fatty aunty is ur target. Rahul says but… Parth says dont make excuse. Just prove it. Rahul fearly flies the plane and it dumps with the aunty. The fatty aunty becomes angry and starts beating rahul. Rahul repeatedly says sorry but she doesnt stop beating and rahul runs away.
    All laughs.

    Dr arjun calls anu in his cabin. He says this hospital has been selected for free medical camp for street children. Anu says its really good sir. Arjun says and for this camp we have been selected as doctors. So be ready tommorow sharp at 9:00am. We have to go. Anu says yes sir.

    Anu comes to looker room and says guys tommorow i will have to attend a medical camp with dr arjun so may not meet u. Niki says oh with dr arjun! Anu says what nonsence! Kirti says dont tease her otherwise dr arjun will give us punishment. All laughs. Anu says tommorow i will be dr arjun for full day. She smiles.

    Mohit comes at home. Madhvi goes to him and says i have to talk with u. Mohit says yes madhvi tell me. Madhvi tells mohit about dilip and mala & what happened today. Mohit says that means anu is their child? Madhvi says yes. Mohit says why didnt u tell themthe truth? Madhvi says try to understand. If i had told them the truth then wouldnt they took anu from us? Mohit says but anu is their child. Madhvi says shes now our child. I cant live without her. I have became mother only because of her. We have fulfilled all her wishes. I will not let anybody to take my anu. Mohit says i dont think ur doing right. Madhvi says its for anus well. Anu can get everything if she stays with us.

    PRECAP: Neil and sam comes to a resturant for dinner. Neil holds her hand and says i want to say something to u.

  903. dipika on

    @ kfar how beautifully u describe aradhika date…like ech n evry moment from dinnner table to dance floor… sabse best use if dheere dheere song…its one of my fav nw days…fab dear…wish i would read more n more..read it twice…n how’s your cold? take medicine dear n get well soon.
    @ Thena what shud i say…no words for sizziling romance of radhika…beutifully description of aradhika’s 1st night…..loved all of it….keep going dear…
    @ renu missed u so mch…i thought too u left page bt happy to see u again…as usual incredible pov abt Sam n Neil…u jst explore all the parts of there character…loved it…waiting for next…
    @ Samiha @ Mandy Thanks buddies for ur warm wishesss….love u…
    @ Anu,mitty,riya,devga,natasha,deepa,savera n sorry if i miss any one…how u guys?? could connect yesterday coz family programmm…

  905. deepa on

    Hello natasha….

    Asusual interesting epi….enjoyed it buddy…..anu s falling in love with arjun and wen will arjun fall for her…..waiting for their romance….

    Loved parth rahul scene…its so funny yaar……continue next epi soon yaar….i think neil s going to propose sam…..

    Love u buddy

  906. anu on

    Thena : we didnt get any reply from swastik productions. swastik is too worst than star plus. i already posted SCREENSHOTS OF MY MAIL AND THEIR REPLY ON FB PAGE. if poss check.. i think they are giving the same reply to all.. fed up with their saying “WE WILL FORWARD THIS REQUEST TO PROGRAMMING TEAM etc”………

  907. deepa on

    Guys……am going to try in writing stories……it wll not b upto much expectation like kfar anu natasha amaya thena and renu…..bt anyway vll try my level best drs……keep feed back whether shall i continue t story or not frns….

    Waiting for ur feedbacks

  908. deepa on

    The story is based on college life…..

    Introductio of male lead…

    Male lead will b played by our dashing arjun mehra…..wo s rich and fun loving boy…..who used to flirt with girls….many girls in college hav crush on him…bt he is very adamant in getting wat he wants…..if he din like anyone,,,,he vll go to such an extent to make them bend before him…..in short arjun mehra will b the rockstar in clg,,,,,,no girls would resist him….whole colg girls have madly crush on him…

    Vll Give introduction of our charming heroine within sometime

    • anaya on

      hey deepa.. your character introduction itself is superb..
      I am confident that you are much more talented than what you credit yourself with…
      Eagerly waiting for your story….Please make it fast

  909. Tanya on

    Thanks to all for being so encouraging me.I had a doubt that after this pg close then where can I comment on your fantabulous story.

  910. dipika on

    @natsha m good dear..
    ur story is really intresting..feeling sad msla n dilip….n waiting for ardhika romance…
    @Deepa m good dear…yes for sure u try ur hand in writing dear…update soon with ur story…waiting..

  911. anaya on

    Episode 7
    All 6 of them settle down on the double bed and chairs.
    Each took shower one by one. Sana was very suspicious regarding any hidden cameras. She checked all the corners of bathroom & took bath almost in darkness. She took so long that Parth finally was about to knock when she opened the door.
    Parth was mesmerized by the wet hair , her damp face, droplets of water near her lips….. BG ‘ he kaash…..kaash u hota….. Hr shaam saath tu hotaa…guzhaara ho tere bin guzhara ,ab mushkil he lgta…..nazaara ho tera hi nazaara ab hr din ho lagta…..Hal-e-dil tujhko sunata.. Dil agar ye bol paataa….Sana :”sorry “.parth is back to his senses. “Its ok”
    Parth steps aside & goes inside as soon as Sana is out & closes the door.
    Parth is thinking- what’s happening. I don’t seem to have control over my mind around her. Whenever I get near her, all I want to do is get deep down those eyes into her soul as if its meant for my heart.
    To be continued

    • deepa on

      Anaya thank u somuch dr….vll try my level best yaar…..

      Enjoying ur story lot yaar….liked ansh and reeva,panchi and jagat.parth and sana sizzling chemistry yaar……waiting for next part dr…keep going yaar..love u buddy

  912. anaya on

    Jagat called & ordered food. They all are waiting for food. Everyone is chit chatting. Reeva is trying to go and get her phone from the table when she accidently trips and she was about to hit her head hard on ground when Ansh catches her and he was holding her by waist and she had her arms wrapped around his neck. She had her eyes shut hard in shock. Ansh just kept looking at her. Reeva opened her eyes and she saw the love & care in those eyes and the fear in those eyes with thought of losing her.she felt so secure in those arms. They just stood there ‘ surkh wala..soz wala…faiz wala love..hota hair jo love se zyada…were wala love..ishq wala love’
    Just them the door was knocked and Jagat went to open the door. Both Reeva & Ansh went back to their group, though they passed secret glances. All gathered to have food.They were having food and were also cracking jokes. Jagat was sitting near Panchi. After a while, he saw that Panchi had something on her lower lip. He told her that ” u have something here”. He placed his forefinger on her lower lip and rubbed off with so much delicacy that it stole her heart. Slow breeze made her hair flying over and they had an infinite eyelock. Just then, ansh’ mhm mhm…’ He cleared his throat bringing them to their present world and they knew that all had been watching them as they all broke into a laughter then. They too laughed. Panchi blushed . Her cheeks seemed to be about to ooze blood out.

  913. deepa on

    Here am going with mu stories guys…….

    EPISODE 1:

    THE episode starts with girl is shown praying in the temple……her hair s flying due to heavy wind……her eyes is shown…..her lips which is murmering prayers is shown…..she s wearing pink dress….she s praying sincerely….

    The next scene shifts to two ladies who are buying some stuff in the market and are busy talking about their daughters……one lady named latha tells that her daughter shwetha is suffering from stomach pain and always seen afraid since the day they told abt t forth coming higher studies result and latha asked to another lady that wat about her daughter,the another lady named seema(she s t mother of our heroine) tells that she went to temple early in the morning to trouble and disturb god with her tears…..

    Scene2:
    the scene shift to temple,where some girls are running in search of our heroine…..they see the girl praying and they rush to call her while running in hurry burry they collide with the priest wo s taking platefull of flowers…..the plate was thrown away….the girls call aloud Radhika radhika….she turn and t flowers were showered on her her face s shown……she s none other than our radhika…..radhika asked….. what happened? Yu girls are screaming?……

    The girls tell her about her result that she got 1st rank in t school…(radhika has wrote her 12 exam…she s praying for the good result)…radhika cant believe her eyes,,tears rolled down from her eyes….her friends wipe away her tears and tell….’u wll always cry for good things aswell as for bad things u idiot’and they happily share a group hug…..they are shown running towards their home….

    Scene3:
    radhika reached home,her mom is busy cooking…..she hugged her mom from behind and told tat she was t school topper….both mother and daughter share some emotional moments and her mom feed some sweets to her….radhika also feed some pieces of sweet to her mom….and finally they hug….suddenly there is knock on the door.radhika opened the door to see her best friend shwetha….radhika asked abt her result….shwetha told that she got nice marks and got centum in one subject…..both friends hug out of joy and they dance on the song….
    Episode ends

    Precap: entry of our hero arjun s shown in college

    guys give ur feedback,,,if u guys like my story ivll continue further….if not noo worries u can tell me….

  914. deepa on

    Hi anaya….

    Outstanding sizzling episode yaar…..i like t way parth was staring at sana…..i thought tat he s going to hug her bt anyway it happens in future episdoe…..

    Enjoyed it buddy…..post next part soon….waiting dr

    natasha and saveera thanks for ur encouragement yaar….love u buddies

  917. zara on

    hi friends,
    all the stories and episodes are awesome! !!!

    @thena- hii dear. finally I read your both mindblowing episode. .. wow I love ardhika romantic scene, passionate love 😉 🙂 ! !! eagerly waiting for next story. .. badly missing aradhika, nesam
    @anaya,
    hii dear . today’s episode was short but enjoyed parth sana scene very much 🙂
    next episode post it soon dear, eagerly waiting.

    @deepa,
    hiii, I read your story . arjun’s introduction is awesome. I like college life stories .keep going on dear waiting for heroin’s entry 🙂

    thnx all of you dear for entertaining us through you story !!!♡♡♥

  919. Tanya on

    Hi everyone I am back.
    Chp2 Entry to birdsong!
    She entered the office of Birdsong.How creative the office was,the interiors especially.she entered with a smile but was shocked to see all candidates in gleeful mode,when she asked one of the candidates,The candidate answered that all the candidates have been rejected only she is waiting for you,if u get select congrats,else come to join us in the mood.She heard her name to go nd give interview.Radhika entered the cabin confidently with a smile which had few hopes for herself after all she wanted a good future not experience that dark past.
    She saw the interviewer,it was the owner.She looked a tough woman.Radhika greeted her.She came straight to the point.She gave various situations and asked Radhika to give tag lines, to which radhika gave making the woman impressed.She congratulated her and introduced herself as Piyali Malhotra.Piyali called a clerk and asked him to bring the form.Piyali told her the salary nd the best part she could move into the house which was reserved for employees.But piyali told her that she will have to share it 3more members to which radhika agreed.She filled the form.She asked Piyali if she could move today.Piyali said that then it would mean Radhika had to clean the house as if she had waited for 2days,she could have get it cleaned but radhika said she would do.Piyali agreed and said by evening she would send other 3 person s with whom she is gonna share the house.
    Radhika went out to the rented home to pick her belongingsShe came to the address given by Piyali.She looked at the house,it looked big.Radhika thought she had taken her best decision.
    ————————————
    In next chp you will see the entry of Neil Sam and Arjun.they have different role than the mmz shown though there will be similarity.plz give comments how u felt

  921. deepa on

    EPISODE 2:

    The episode starts with alpha college in delhi…..some students are shown entering t college….watchmen stop them and ask them to wear id cards….they wear it and enter the college….they were shown wearing western and modern outfit…..some students are having chitchat at canteen…some in library….The college was so calm until the arrival of four guys….they are…neil,cabir,rocky and bubloo…
    Neil took the mike and ask all the students to gather in gallery within 10mins,,,,all students are walking slowly…seeing that neil shouted come on fast ur time starts now the people who enters t gallery first vll b given gift…..all rush to gallery pushing and pulling each other……however they entered gallery and nw they were fighting for chairs to sit…..they were chitchating as to y they called us tis much early….some of them begin to sleep…..suddenly the lights of gallery are switched….

    scene 2:
    there s silence maintained…those four guys arrive with the focus light on them….they play the music and they perform group dance…all the students clap for their performance….after dance,neil again took the mike and told that…listen guys there is very important news…..our college romio is going to return from america after sem vacation…he s going to come 2mrw…..before finishing his words…all the students started to jump and shout with joy…some fainted and fall down…they begin to sing and dance

    scene3:

    shifts to america,the guy is shown doing exercise in gym.he s streching his arm,his muscles are very strong and his sweat is flowing all over his hot body…he has tactoo on his arms,,,,his 6packs s shown….his hair s curly….his s*xy eyes are shown,,,,,and he has worn ring in one of his ear….he s still exercising heavily…suddenly he get the call,he attended it and said”yes i vll b meeting my angel soon”he cutted t call..he turns,,,his face is shown…..our arjun mehra

    episode ends

    precap:
    radhika get admission in alpha college.arjun is returning from america both of the faces are shown on split screens

  922. zara on

    hey deepa
    I enjoying your story, well n good entry of our radhu as like bharti nari 🙂 😉 . love it dear now waiting for next episode … lets see in wich way our ardhika meet 😉 it is excitable
    love you sooo much keep going on !!!

  924. Mandy on

    Hiiii guys seems like missed a lot yaar sorry I came late !!!

    Hey farha ur poem n story is really great yaar I mean yeh page jab close hojayega toh mein tumari story bohat miss karungi yaar !! Love uuuuuuuu !!

    Hey renu ur back jus read it yaar !! Missed u very much dear !!

    Hey anu ur really blessed yaar !! keep it up !!

    Hey samiha !! I m fine yaar !!wt abt u ??

    Hey deepa missed u yaar !!

    Hey anaya story seriously yaar thank god tumne yeh story start kardi ab tohu have to cntinu !! Pls cntinu !!

    Hey dipika hw r u yaar ??

    Hey natasha jus FAB yaar !! Pls cntinu !!

    Hey zara hw r u dear !!!

    Hey thena ur epis were toooo huggie yaar !!!

    Missed u guys a lot yaar cant tell !!

    Nywas update ur stories guys !!!

  925. Thena on

    @saji…hey thank u so much yaar….means a lot dear….gonna miss such wonderful friends here…..

    @savera….oh my dear….ur wors really drive me….just boost me up…thank u sooo much dear…

    @dipika…..hi dear….thank u soooo much 4 always cmmmntin & ncouragin me dear…..lol

    @deepa….oh my dear deepa….very good start….just go,go & go buddy…..

    @natasha….there is sumthin special in urs…u always pull me yaar….

    @anaya….cool story yaar…awesome work…keep it up dear….

    @tanya….hey nice gng…keep it up…

    @jayaru…hey buddy…thank u sooo much…..means a lot…

    @anu…hey dear thank u yaar…just fed up wid sp buddy….

    @farha,samiha,raashi,mandy,renu wr r u al?
    iwen tis page ll be closed exactly….can any1…oh m grievin….gonna miss u badly….
    @farha hey soon post sum link 4 ur story dear….its my request yaar….

  926. Thena on

    Hi al my dearies….m here as usual late….

    EPISODE 135:

    SCENE 1:

    Radz finished hr speech gvng a slogan “DON’T GUESS BUT DO GUESS”,carryin she, a persistent grin al over…..sudden then, the air filled wid blaster of claps……sam ws smiling broadly at piyali,hr body quivered on clappin……neil signaled thumbs up, starin proud at chasni & Arjun,ah! he fell emotional….. hs clap, a stealthily one & hs lips stickin 2gether conceited……

    “well, good one”,priya gestured radz 2 take seat……Arjun’s gaze sauntered wid radz & halted bside hm as she b seated thr….. priya mehra stood up erected 2 gather attention & started gvng hr speech…..radz ws flabbergasted as she felt the heat of arjun’s palm penetratin hr thigh……he didn’t digress hs head, listenin 2 priya’s discourse wen she glanced at hm…..wid a blushin smile,she concealed hs hand in2 hrs, hr gaze too restrictin 2 priya……the clock rounded,the faces thr holdin a grimmin lips as the quietude had been tearin by priya mehra’s clipped tones……

    “And Mrs.Radhika Mehra…..u.r.a.GENIUS”,priya concluded hr speech throwin a stern stare on radz……the air again filled wid applause,arjun’s fingers slid in2 hs wifey’s, clenchin tight in2 the gaps……

    “xcuse me sir….may I come in?”, radz lips stretched 4m ear 2 ear peepin in2 arjun’s cabin……..

    “yes, come in Radhika Mehra”,arjun’s sharp tone echoed on the room……

    Clenching hs fingers 2 the gaps,he swiveled in the chair……..hs wild stare fell fixed on hr getting in……”did I ask u 2 sit?”,the utterance gave hr a giggle wen she ws about 2 settle oppo…..he bantered hr if she 4got he ws hs boss…… “whoa….whoa Arjun….”
    ”am ur boss here…just keep quiet & obey my order….”,she ws cut in the midst by hm….. “now take ur seat”, hs bossy tone ws lil anomalous 2 hr…..”did I ask u 2 sit thr?”,hr legs wobbled on hs sudden firm tone wen again she ws 2 settle.….he, still in the same posture,ly a movement seen on lips, called hr near hm…….she tightened hr face 2 hr cheek bone angles turn in2 cutters…..”yes sir”,she, near hm, uttered as if she ws getting a command 4m colonel……”I asked u 2 take ur seat baby”,Arjun tugged hr 2 hs thighs…..hr back hit hard on hs chest,hr hair strands covered hs face…..she elbowed hm & wriggled btw hs arms bt he held hr firmly…….he pursed hs mouth & hot air ws blown bhind hr ear…….hr body lost its grip,eyes closed as hr head dropped back on hs chest…….he closed hs eyes,hs arms wer wrapped around hr neck & hs cheek, perched on hrs……

    Sam kept twirlin her head & slid hr hand in2 hr jean pocket 2 take out the beepin mobile…….’don’t search me baby….i’ll b soon thr’,the message read…..’hahaha….good joke idiot….y shud I luk 4 u?’,replied she…….she approached zubin & asked hm neil’s whereabouts….immediately then she turned back jumpin,hr hands coverin hr face as neil peeped out 4m zubin’s cabin…..she just rushed out 4m thr 2 bump hard on priya……

    SCENE 2:

    Nandhini called the gangster,asked hm if everythin ws gng well…..she warned hm 2 xecute the plan clean as no1 shud b strayed 2wards them…..hr tone ws wild,face ws as terrible as a witch……she ended the call,turned 2 c saral standin thr……”wat r u dng here?”,shouted she….”money”,he uttered wid a smirk,hs hands wer in2 hs pant pockets…….annoyed she ws,slid hr fingers in2 hr purse & xtended hm the money……

    It ws a lonely street,the trees wer blockin the moonlight 2 reach its ground…….a group of bulkies stood waitin under the tree……a man ws shown approachin them…….he hand over samy’s photo 2 them,ws shown instructin something serious,hs index finger kept movin to & fro…..

    SCENE 3:

    Sam sittin in bed kept callin neil’s number…..she ws restless,dispatched hr gaze 2 the clock….it ws 11.30…..panicked she ws,as neil went out sayin tat he wud soon b home…..hr heart skipped hr as the lights went down in sudden……..hr heart beat echoed 2 hr……she gulped hard as the room’s the door rumbled quivering…..she stepped out the bed,very sedate hr move 2 the door ws……

    no1 ws thr outside…..she threw hr gaze 2 r8 & left,hr body had a lil arc 4ward,……she went aside & called neil’s mobile again,nippin hr lower lip in perturbation…..sweat drops peeped out hr 4head….she got annoyed cudn’t reach hs numberAgain she threw hr gaze 2 r8 & left & went in……she screamed…..Oh! someone grasped hr shoulder as hr legs wer 2 cross the threshold…..hr mouth ws closed tight leavin hr 2 xpel out air in despair…..

    END of epi 135…..

    • Thena on

      oops many mistakes…actually sam rushed out followed by neil….hw cum she bump priya…oh my mind thinks 1 & fingers type 1….sorry buddies…4giv me….

    • deepa on

      Oh my dr thena….always loving ur episode yaar……am enjoying always….
      Ardhika romance s very awesome….loved conferrence room romance aswell as cabin romance….arjun look so hot and handsome wen hs withradhika….

      Loved alot buddy…eagerly waiting for next epi dr

    • Reeda on

      Thena Thena Thena…… Just when I think you could not suprise me more, u do just that…..love ur story….simply perfect….

    • Reeda on

      And who cares about mistake…..when Yu love sumtn, mistakes don’t count…. Pls post more than 3 stories today….

  927. dipika on

    @ deepa amazing story dear…u too hav good career in ths field….goood going…like the entry of ardhika…excited whn they meet…
    @ Mandy m fine dear..tum kaha gayab ho jaati ho dear…kidding..missing u….

    • Mandy on

      Hey wat to dipika yaar aaj mummy ka phone nahi chal raha isi liye mera phone lele thi hai aur ganton apne frends ke saath baat karthi hai yaar !! Its jus 15 m8ns ago I got d phone back n now I m back here !!!

    • deepa on

      Thank u soso much dipika….ur valuable commands are encouraging me more dr……they vll meet soon yaar…love u loads

  929. deepa on

    Guys am going with my episode:

    EPISODE3:

    The episode starts with radhika getting call from alpha college.After speaking,she goes and hug her mom and tells her,maa,i got admission in alpha college in delhi…..she kiss her mom and runs out to say the news to her friend…

    Its night,radhikas mom is so sad abt her daughter is going to go away from her…she s crying….radhika come and sees her mom crying…she sits besides her mom….and consoles her sayong “maa…dont worry….if u want to c me just give me a call.i vill be here in front of you….her mom says i cant stay without you radhika ur my world….radhika also began to cry….both mother and daughter share some sentimental scenes….atlast her maa s convinced…radhika bcomes happy and hugs her mom….

    Scene2:

    the scene shift to airport,arjun is shown coming in the car,he s wearing black shirt with 3 buttons open and blue jean his chest s clearly visible any girl wish to fell into his arm…..he s wearing cooling specs….he is seen getting down the car and walking in….some girl command abt arjun to another girl….arjun hears it,he start to approach towards the girl….girl bcome nervous seeing his gesture and start to leave bt our arjun caught hold of her hand removed his specs looked straight into girls eyes….and he holds her close to kiss her….the girl however escape and ranaway….he tells to himself tat y tis girls are always making command at others back….if v went straight to them they get afraid and ran away….oh my shit he look at tis watch and began to run to catch the flight…..arjun enters the flight, all the girls are eyeing him,he din bother about it,he went stright to his seat….he started to listen to music and he slept off…..

    Scene3:

    radhika get ready to leave for delhi….she hugs her mom and cry…she gets inside the car and waves goodbye to all cryingly….while she stravelling.she reminses the time spend with her mom and friends….
    Radhika reaches delhi otherside arjun also reaches delhi….radhikas car and arjuns car are stuck in traffic…their cars are parked next to eachother….they dont see the face….and t cars headed towards different paths….
    Episode ends.

    Precap:
    radhika fall into arjuns arm…first eyelock session

    • deepa on

      Thank u tanya…..for giving ur feedback……actually am jus trying yaar…..tis is my 1st time writing story….

      Keep giving ur feedback budiies…

      Next epi vll b updated soon yaar
      love u buddy

    • Mandy on

      Dis story is gonna be very romantic n funny yaar I mean its very different 4m oders !!
      Hey I hav a question dat radhika has only a mother no father or wat ???

      N plsssss rite more bcos only smtime is left !!!

    • deepa on

      Hi mandy….

      S yaar she dont hav father

      aft reaching college the story vll focus only on hurdles and love and romance between them yaar….

      No family s consdered

  930. deepa on

    Oh my dr thena….always loving ur episode yaar……am enjoying always….
    Ardhika romance s very awesome….loved conferrence room romance aswell as cabin romance….arjun look so hot and handsome wen hs withradhika….

    Loved alot buddy…eagerly waiting for next epi dr..
    Thena u also post ur stories in fb yaar

  931. Natasha on

    Tu told us that this age will be closed after 2 weeks of ending mmz. Guys tommorow will complete 2 week. And this page will be closed. So its time to say bye. But i am clueless about completing my story and i have no fb account. Give me a solution.

    Will miss u guys so much.

  932. deepa on

    Thank u tanya…..for giving ur feedback……actually am jus trying yaar…..tis is my 1st time writing story….

    Keep giving ur feedback budiies…

    Next epi vll b updated soon yaar
    love u buddy

  933. chahat on

    just imagine guys Dill Mill Gaye season 2. Dr arjun Dr radhika, Dr Neil, Dr .Sam and other interns I wish esa kuch ho

  934. Dil on

    Dear Thena; Anu and all the frnds of Dym telly updates.. I realy lov ur new stories and episodes of MMZ.. Those are fantastic..you guys r doing such grt job in Fb as well.. I too connected with u all in Fb.. Pls keep continuing posting yr stories in fb..as we need to continue aftr this page closed.. Also my special lov to Renu.. Yr comments.pov about Dym and abt our loving couples Ardhika. Nesam characters wonderful frnd.. Pls can any one post those in fb page as well. I may not commenting in this page all the time.. Bt im reading all of yr comments stories evry day.. I hv no words to express my gratitude fr u all guys.. Pls keep going.. Lov u all lov Dym; im awaiting fr Dym season 2 with u all guys..

  935. Riya on

    Arnav+khushi=Arshi
    Arnav (Barun Sobti) is a rich, arrogant business tycoon with no belief in love or God. His closest emotional bond is with his sister, Anjali (Daljeet Bhanot). Khushi (Sanaya Irani) is a simple and traditional girl from Lucknow deeply rooted in family values. She believes in the strength of love, relationships, and faith in God. After their first chance encounter, they immediately dislike each other. However, they keep meeting as Khushi starts to work in Arnav’s office and also meets his family. She is also asked by Anjali to teach Lavanya, Arnav’s girlfriend, about culture, relationships and religion in order to impress Arnav’s nani. Arnav and Khushi eventually fall in love and he breaks up with Lavanya.

    Shyam, Anjali’s husband and a lawyer by profession, who meets and falls in love with Khushi. Shyam pretends to be a loving husband and an honorable man but he secretly lusts for Khushi and remains with Anjali only for her wealth. He tricks Khushi and her family and gets engaged to her, which is broken by Khushi once she realises his true identity. Due to a misunderstanding, Arnav, prompted by Shyam, thinks Khushi loves Shyam and wants him to leave Anjali. To keep his now-pregnant sister happy, he marries Khushi thus thinking he is forcing her to separate from Shyam. He doesn’t reveal his true intentions to anyone and tells Khushi it is only a 6 month marriage. Due to the misunderstanding, Arnav treats Khushi unfairly at the start of their “marriage”. After a few months, Khushi and Arnav fall in love with each other again and after an argument, Arnav decides to go on a trip overseas but manages to get kidnapped. Khushi comes to his aid and they escape as well as profess their love for each other. Khushi and Arnav also remarry and Shyam’s true colours are revealed to the Raizada family, once Anjali suffers a miscarriage.

    Just when the marriage seems to be back to normal, Sheetal (Arnav’s friend) brings a son – Aarav, who is a carbon copy of Arnav. Khushi begins to suspect he might be Arnav’s son. Later it is revealed Sheetal was a gold digger who brought in Aarav and trained him to be like Arnav only to gain access to Arnav’s immense wealth, and that she had promised Aarav she’d lead him to his parents if he did so. Khushi and Arnav kick Sheetal out of their lives and legally adopt Aarav from his orphanage.

    Finally Khushi wins Mrs. India crown with Arnav by her side and they live a happy life together with their adopted son, Aarav and their family.

    • Riya on

      Kyun khwabon pe tere saaye hain
      phir kyun hain tanha mera
      kyun khamoshi hain zubaan meri
      ashqon se keh paun na
      kyun dard hain itnaaa
      tere yeh ishq mein
      rabba ve……..rabba ve

    • Mandy on

      Hey I also used to c ISS PYAAR KO KYA NAAM DOON it was such a hilarious serial yaar !! Thanx 4 remindin me d serial !! Love u dear !!

      Hey d song is also very cmndble !!

  936. anu on

    Episode No: 11

    The Episode starts with nandini and little arjun playing. She brings some snacks and juice for him. He says he is not hungry and she insists. He says okay i’ll have on one condition. She says okay done. The little arjun asks “with whom and about whom you are talking to some big boy in hospital”? Nandini asks him has he heard it. He replied yes in lower tone and askd her AM I NOT YOUR ARJUN, DO U HAVE ANOTHER ARJUN?” She was puzzled and amazed by the love for her in that little arjun. She cries and hugs him.

    NS & AR at birdsong. Piyali and samrat meets them. She asks them to finish the project asap. They discuss and works on it. Piyali & samrat leave from there. The duo couples work hard to complete, arjun&sam feels sleepy and yawns. Meanwhile radhika sneezes as she catches cold last night. Neil observes them and asks birju to bring coffee and starts playing his guitar. He sings and plays “Aankhon ke panno pe meine likha tha sau dhafa”. They all enjoy & all work again.

    Scene shifts to london again, Ankush sits thinking in dance rehearsal. He is bit upset but manages and comes out of it. Nandini says “U r my little arjun, and we have big arjun too”. He says okay, and asks will he come to meet us? She says okay too many questions today, enough for now, Go and play with dada and dadi patting his back. He leaves.

    AR & NS complete the work and waits for the dvd of ad’s video shoot. He gets a call from editing team and they say it takes 1hr more as we have technical problem. But sure we will give it to you in 1hr. He scolds them and finally says make it fast, and it should be on my table in 1hr. He ends the call. So they plan to go for dinner out. They leave.

    Nandini goes to her room and searches for office files and an album falls. She opens it and a new face was shown. She sits crying and after sometime gets up & goes to her parents. She sees them smiling and wipes her tears.

    AR & NS were back to birdsong and they wait for dvd. They all fell asleep waiting for it. Finally one of the editing team member comes & give the dvd. Its almost 1 am(mid night). They start to leave in a car.

    Nandini makes the kid sleep and she too goes to sleep. A car mets with accident, She feels restless..

    Precap: Nandini gets up with a phone call and sits crying.

  937. dipika on

    @ mandy oh aisa prob hai kya!! mere ghar pr b meri married sis mere phn pe cl krti hai to aisi situation hoti hai……
    @ deepa mindblowing story dear…epic 1…. excited for their eyelock session…
    @ Thena what dear tomorrow is the last day of ths page…omg…again another heart break cant bear…
    pl friends find some solution to stay connected….google+ or any thing…thena one suggestion frm that u can opn fake fb acc n join our page made by anu…wht say

  939. anaya on

    Sorry to be back again guys. Actually I want to provide as much story part as I can since I donno when the site will be inactive. Please bear with me.
    Episode 7 continued
    All finished their dinner and since nobody was in a mood to sleep, they planned to play a game. Some wanted to play antakshari, while some preferred dumb shards. Finally everyone agreed upon ‘truth or dare’ game. They took the coke bottle to spin here. The bottle first came to a halt facing Ansh.
    Parth:” Truth or dare?”
    Ansh: “Dare”
    Parth:”Great! Propose any of these 3 girls over here”
    Ansh: “ I can choose anybody right?”
    Parth:” Anyone”
    Ansh stood up and went towards Reeva & when Reeva was ready as if to hear his proposal, he went beyond her and knelt down before Panchi.
    Both Panchi & Jagat were shocked to see this. It was clearly visible that Jagat was clenching his jaw tightly. Reeva just sat like a statue.
    Ansh acted very dramatically and said:” Hey pretty lady love. I am like a frog waiting for rainwater. Please be the dessert of my food. Be my killer & sentence me to death”
    At that note, everyone laughed out loud. And a sigh of relief escaped from Reeva, which Ansh didn’t miss. He winced at her.
    Again the game began, and this time, the bottle stopped facing Panchi.
    Ansh: “Truth or dare?”
    Panchi: “Truth”
    Reeva:” Do you love somebody in this group?”
    Panchi froze. Oh no! I am trapped.
    Jagat was closely watching her and when Panchi looked into his eyes, she saw that he was waiting as if his world existed on this answer.
    Panchi :” Yes”
    She saw a look im Jagat’s eyes that was meant for her alone. She lowered her face stealing her eyes from him. She didn’t want to be too obvious…
    Reeva:” interesting. Who is the lucky guy?”
    Panchi: “ I answered the question. No further questions allowed”
    Ansh: “ Ok. Let’s proceed further. Again they spun the bottle and this time, Parth got the chance.
    Ansh: “Truth or Dare?”
    Parth: “Of course Dare”
    To be continued..

  941. deepa on

    Episode 4:

    The episode starts with radhika reaching hostel,there she meets her roommates tittu,misha,pia and charu who are also got admission in same college….they all get ready to go for college….

    The next scene shifts to arjun meeting his friends neil,cabir,rocky and bubaloo,..and they share group hug(they were all staying at arjuns farm house)they start to chitchat…..arjun noticed the time its almost 8″……he tells to neil that they have to get ready to go for college,neil….asked whats wrong with u dude? U have chanced alot after returning from america u have become good….arjun hit him with book and tells that oh…..my buddy,today freshers are coming to join our college…as seniors v have to welcome them na,so we must be punctual,u understand idiot……neil smiles and hug him….

    Scene2:
    all the five get ready and they reach college…..at the same our 5 girls also reach the college…..the girls in the college are mesmerised to see dashing arjun…..and arjun gives flyig kiss to all the girls….and they started to walk…arjun comes to a place where radhika and her friends are standing…arjun comes towards radhika…arjun s standing so close to radhika,her silky hair wipes his face,he get lost in her…tittu signals radhika to look at back,she turns and by arjuns closeness she jerk and fall into his arms..and he holds her tight in order to prevent her from falling….

    Scene3:

    arjun removes his specs and he get lost into her eyes….both of them forget abt their surroundings….and were lost in each others eyes….
    Atlast radhika come to senses and try to get released from his grip,,,but her chain got stuck into his chain,she is struggling hard to take it,,but arjun is busy admiring her with his s*xy eyes….atlasy she gotrelease of the chain and says”am really sorry”……and began to walk…arjun is fully mesmerised with her presence and he looks at her while she s walking….

    Episode ends….
    Precap:
    senior vs junior ragging…..arjun rags radhika…..and come closer to her…radhika becomes nervous….

  942. anu on

    2moro i’ll try to end the story guys. dont worry… if i cant i’ll just describe the theme… love u loads.

    • Daizy on

      Hey anu plz don’t end the story….your story is going very nice…u hav posted ur previous episodes on fb page so plz continue further with ur story there when this page closes…it feels like manmarziyan is still going on…

  943. Reeda on

    Heyya dearies….hw u doi….
    I wrote a poem for Telly team….feel free to laugh…its a bit amateurish.

    Dedicating Celine Dion’s lyrics Goodbye-
    “Goodbye s the saddest word I Eva heard
    -some day u say dat word nd I would cry” to Telly, Riya and everyone, no, to every-love instead…

    @Telly team
    Through thick and thin
    We stood by u
    Through bad network
    We never moved

    We love u
    For ur continued support
    We need ur help
    From heart breakin goodbyes

    U ve seen cour passion
    Our love, our hatred
    We seek ur help
    From painful goodbyes

    Ever grateful we shall be
    Our one request granted
    Please save our friendship
    Save our manmarziyan page…
    -how was it guys
    Telly please reply….

  948. Daizy on

    Hello everyone…all the fans of dym were disappointed when we heard that’s it’s going off air…dym wrapped up in 4 months which i think makes it the shortest running serial on sp.
    after dym closure all fans decided to stop watching sp and hence sp stated losing itz trp..

    now the same thing is going to repeat..the one only youth show on sp is badtameez dil which is going off air on september 28..itz going to wrap up only in 3 months..sp has gone mad..
    like dym fans of badtameez dil also decided to stop watching sp…

    now i think sp will even lose the 2nd position from trp chart…..n this shud happen with them…they took away my most favourite show Manmarziyan…..i m vry happy with sp degrading trp’s……

  949. Daizy on

    Hii everyone…….
    I m a silent reader of this page…but i regularly used to read all the comments and stories posted by all of you…

    @thena- ur story is just mind blowing…..everything which i wanted to see in manmarziyan i found it in ur story..ur just amazing..

    @anu – your story is becoming interesting day by day..plzz update further..waiting for ur episodes

    @renu-ur explanations are just fabulous……

    natasha,tanya,deepa,anaya,kfar u all are going great yaar…….

    I request to all of u dat if possible plzz update ur stories on the fb page made by anu…reading ur stories it seems dat manmarziyan still going on and i dinn want it to end…..

    @anu u had a very good job by creating a fb page so DYM fans can stay connected…

    all my telly frnzz plz stay connected on fb…….

    • anu on

      Thanq so much for commenting for us…. thanq for ur support & love. I’ll continue on fb . don’t worry guys..

  951. zara on

    @anaya, love your story
    now path got chance and he choose dare omg waiting for his daring act …plzz dear next episode post soon 🙂 😉

    @deepa, hii dear newly college entry of our couple was awesome! !! ardhika meeting too good. . eyelock scene also fabulous keep going on ..eagerly waiting for next epi… omg precap just rockss ♥♡♥

  952. deepa on

    Guys going with my story….

    Episode5;
    Episode starts with arjun staring at radhika,neil comes to him and ask wat he s doing here? Arjun replies nothing….dude! Comeon lets go…..radhika and her friends are walking in the stairs,they were discussing abt ragging.radhika doesnt seem to understand abt ragging ask her friends abt it…..tittu tells tha”ragging means senior students wll command junior students in performing some task we should obey and perform it,if not they vll force us to perform it”….it is done in many colleges radhika becomes tensed…
    Scene shifts to arjun and his friends are busy chtichatting in canteen.arjun is losed in the thoughts of radhika….neil asked arjun hey dude are you ok! U were seemed to b lost somewhere….arjun blushes and says leave that we hav one important work….lets go guys…..
    They come to the field and make annocement”all juniors are requested to come to field immediately….radhika become more tensed aft hearing annoncement she tells to tittu that she s not coming…tittu tells that if u din come they vll come to class and rag u…..radhika is tensed and they drag radhika along with them….

    Scene2
    All the juniors are present in the field…..arjun write the names of student in a bit of paper and put it in a bowl and he tells that whomsoever we call they should do wat v say…..his glance is fixed on radhika…neil took t chit and ask who s misha?…..misha comes forward….neil tells her to act like baby…misha asks what….me baby…..neil is like yes like baby u hav to act….misha also act like a baby,and all started to laugh…
    Next bubloo gets piya name and he give tiffinbox to her…he tells her to finish it within 5min bt piya finished it within 2min…bubloo gets nosecut…..

    Scene3
    Atlast our arjun and radhika…
    Arjun comes towards radhika,she become tensed and step backwards,he took step forward,and radhika is pinned to the tree…they were so close to eachother….arjun ask radhika to see into his eyes without blinking….radhika refuses and tries to go but arjun locks his arm around her and tells do…what i say? Radhika becomes upset and started to look into his eyes….they both were terribly lost into eachothers eye while others are busy watching them opening their mouth…..
    It starts to rain all of them run inside and now arjun and radhika are left alone…..arjun brings his lips closer to radhika,his lips almost touching hers….by fear she clutch to her dress tightly….arjun gets more closer and is abt to kiss her and radhika closed her eyes….suddenly arjun realised wat he s doing and backoff and he went….radhika slowly opened her eyes and she get into flashes of arjun
    episode ends
    precap:
    radhika comes to college in saree….arjun is mesmerised to see her beauty..

  955. Reeda on

    Guys pls wat z d name of d facebook page….

    Since today might b our last day, lets do something…..someone should guess where I a from…..I mean the country or continent…..

  957. abha on

    I think we shud continue @ nther tu page. Tis ll b gud fr those who dont hava fb account . Wat abt bhabhiji ghar pr h???

  958. Samiha on

    I will have 3 guesses….

    1. You are from Bangladesh…

    2. You are from somewhere of India…

    3. You are from Alaska…

    I am pretty sure none of them are right, but just fun guessing…. Ha ha…. Please reply even then……

  960. Natasha on

    EPISODE:9

    The episode starts with mohit saying to madhvi what if anu gets know about the truth? Madhvi says i will make sure that anu doesnot know about the truth.

    Neil calls sam in the evening asks is she ready? Sam says yes, sms me the address i will come myself.

    Anu is sitting alone in her bedroom. Madhvi comes. She notices anus attention is somewhere else. She asks anu what happened? Anu replies nothing. Madhvi says dont lie. Tell me the truth. It only happens when one is in love. Anu says what r u saying mom? There is nothing such ur thinking. Madhvi says really? Anu tells madhvi about arjun. She says so thats mean ur in love right? Anu says actually… Madhvi says i can understand everything and laughs. Anu tells madhvi about her meeting with dilip and mala. Madhvi says sometime this happens dont worry. Madhvi says to herself i have to do something. She tells anu to sleep.

    Sam comes to the resturant. She sees neil there. She says we came to this place after a long time. Neil smiles. He holds sams hand. He says i have tell u something. Sam says tell me. He says i love u. I wanted to tell u it since a long time but couldnt. Sam gts stunned. She says i have no space for love when samir dumped me. So i am sorry. Sam goes. Neil cries.

    Its morning. Everyone is in hospital. Sam sees neil and goes away. Neil becomes upset. Arjun calls anu. They goes for medical camp.

    PRECAP: Anu and arjun is inthe medical camp. Arjun gives treatment to a child. Anu smiles seeing him.

  961. deepa on

    Naaty….
    Asusual awesome episode yaar….felt like crying for neil…..loved mothers and daughters conversation……wat s madhvi upto……loved precap very much….love u buddy…keep continuing

  962. Riya on

    Tonight 8 pm plz come desitvbox Manmarziyan fanpage
    Manmarziyan fan meeting at night 8 pm
    Plz all are come……..

  964. dipika on

    Deepa yar wht to say abt todays epi…its jst great incredible dear…i jst dont hav words to express…loved it….r u on fb? thn plz join anus page n post ths story in it…m jst totally excited for nxt epi…plz post asap…

  965. deepa on

    The episode starts with b.e 1yr classroom,where radhika s sincerely listening to class and taking notes……tittu and misha feels sleepy…..pia s busy eating snacks…..charu s cracking jokes and making fun of piya…..
    There enters our arjun,,,,all girls started to eye him,,,,bt he din bother abt it,his eyes are busy searching for rads…..without taking his gaze from her he announced tat….guys ur second task is tat all ladies should come in sarees,,,wereas boys formals…..and girls should come and meet me first before attending class……u vll b given marks…..tats it….he started to walk towards door,and fixed his gaze on rads tis time radhika also looks at him….and suddenly turns…..arjun smiles seeing her and leaves the classroom…..teacher informs class s over go may go now……
    Next scene rads s sitting in canteen and thinking of arjun,,,,like whe he s always smiling at me……y he s coming close tome…….tittu buys some fresh juice and sees radhika lost somewhere….she comes to her and make her afraid….radhika came out of her trance and ask wat happened…..tittu says nothing happened to me…..something happened only to you…come its getting late v hav toreach ou hostel…..lets go

    scene2:
    Arjun comes to his home,,,,and goes to freshenup,he stands in the shower and thinks of his encounter with radhika,he ask to himself…..wt happened to him,y he s thinking abt tat girl somuch….y her presence s affecting him….infact there are many girls who i can make them run after me,but y am i running after tis girl…..he finish taking bath and wears his baniyan,,,,he sit on t couch and start to play games in his moby…..

    Its night,,,radhika s practicing to wear sarees…..tittu and misha ask her are u not coming to eat my dr?radhika tells am not feeling hungry,u go and get me parcel….
    Aft finishing their dinner they all chitchat and they practice to wear saree and they have fun….

    Scene3:
    In college,Arjun s talking with neil,,,,suddenly the chillwind blow into his face he turns and see radhika in saree…..he s mesmerised to see her beauty….radhika and her friends approach arjun…..radhika get slips and again fell into arjuns arms…..eyelock,,,he loose balance and they both end up falling down….they share first liplock with bg song “nafraton mein milli”

    episode ends
    precap:
    radhika slaps arjun…arjun holds her hand in anger,,,

  969. deepa on

    Episode7:
    Starts with ardhika lip lock scene….all are shocked to see such an hot liplock….radhika getsup and runs to washroom to clean her mouth,arjun s flattered by t kiss….he gets up and see all the people are staring at him,he says are u guys hav planned to stand here for fulldays…..if so i dont hav anyproblem,u can carryon with ur work,good bye all….arjun escape from there.but he caught redhanded by his friends….
    Neil ask….whats gng on men?
    I din see such a kiss scene in movie also,yuuupppp wat a kiss,wat a kiss….Tell me wats going on dude…….arjun just signals mothing,dude……its just accident.
    Neil says i dont think so its accidet its more than that….arjun shushes him and drags him to the class.

    Next scene all the students in class are busy staring at radhika,she feels uncomfortable,and goes outside….tittu comes and hugs her and ask….how did u feel when he kissed u? Radhika asked who?
    Tittu says our coll romio and handsome hero arjun..
    Radhika says”see tittu,tat is jus accident,i din feel anything…
    Tittu s like wat u din feel anything…u are wastr….if i were in ur place i would hav kissed him full day….
    Radhika tells her,ok….go n kiss him
    she also tells that am here to studt and not to flirt with anyone…she angrily goes to class….tittu shouts radhika wait,wait and run behind her…

    Scene2:
    Its break time,radhika is having coffee at canteen,some of the senior girls gossip abt arjun….our arjun vll not leave anygirl,,,until he get wat he want,,,any girl cann fall for him madly and go crazy….radhila hears that and think of the incident with arjun,she goes….

    Radhika is seen walking in the campus,arjun sees her and follow her,radhika sees him and began to walk faster….arjun ask her to wait bt radhika din stop,arjun holds her saree pallu and radhika stops walking.he pulls her pallu and radhika is drawn closer to him….

    Scene3:

    ardhika s shown closer,(arjun behind radhika)there body was touching without small gap…..radhika is breathing heavily,her breath and her flying siky hair make him to loose his control,he wraps his arm around her waist…..radhika heart start to beat faster…he bring his face close to her neck,he released her from his grip and she started to walk,arjun holds her hand and again draws her closer,this time his hands are on her bare stomach and he squeeses it….radhika loses her self control,took away his hands…she turns to him and give tight slap on his face…they both were looking into eachother with anger in their eyes…..radhika starts to go but arjun holds her hand and stop her

    episode ends

    precap
    arjun insults radhika(finaly their love hate relationship going to start)

  970. anaya on

    Episode 8
    The scene is still our truth or dare.
    Parth said he would do the dare.
    Ansh: “Here we go….. Look into the eyes of mmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm…..(ansh just looks around &) Sana (as he knew they were having some fight going on while in college) & make her close eyes”(Ansh thinking: i know it wont be an easy task since she wont lose that easily when the opponent is her rival and smiled sheepishly)
    Parth : “Ok” Sana is just annoyed at the fact that she would have to look into his face,but there was something different about the Parth she saw in college & the one now.”Whatever”
    They start looking into each others eyes. BG “Hal-e-dil tuzhko sunaataa….dil agar ye bol paataaa……..”
    The pupil of Parth’s eyes darken down with each passing minutes. Sana feels lil awkward as it felt like he was looking her soul. She was seeing too much of something that she craved for in his eyes. Something she had been searching for all her life. She felt it was a sense of love for her. She was just afraid to believe it. :”May be he is just trying to win this game. I will have to let it to , else I could lose my heart & be hurt with a wound that would be hard to heel”
    She just closes her eyes & Parth is still looking into her. All clap with the victory of Parth & then only Parth realises that he won the game. He just smiles. He wanted to know about her. He felt a sense of belonging when he was with her. He wanted to protect her from all the bad things she was facing……
    Now , its Sana’s turn.
    Ansh”Truth or dare”
    Sana: “Truth”
    Parth :” Whats your story?”
    Sana looks nervous. She looks towards Reeva and Panchi. They assure her to go ahead. She took a deep breath & then starts…”There is not much of a story…My life is quite boring. I am an orphan . I lost my parents when I was young in a car accident & I grew up in an orphanage till I got the scholarship to study here. And I do data entry jobs on Saturdays & Sundays to fulfill my livelihood now. That’s it”(Sana completed the whole story in a minute without any feeling).
    Everyone became silent. The silence was killing them all.
    Parth had a feeling that she had wiped out all the emotions while talking as if it was a story but it felt she was too much hurt inside that it was ripping her apart..
    Just then, to lighten the air, Jagat stood up & said: “1 minute. I want to dance. Music please”.
    Hearing dance, all cheared & music began… Dheere dheere se meri zindagi me aana…..dheere dheere se dil ko churana(new version). All started dancing. At first all were dancing together, then they started to become pairs & Parth & Reeva danced together, Ansh & Panchi, & Jagat & Sana. Then as the song played, they started switching pairs one by one. After a while, Ansh & Reeva were together, Jagat & Panchi made a pair and our Sana & Parth formed another pair.
    Sana was not comfortable. She tried to get away to next person, but when she looked, she saw that Ansh & Reeva were lost in themselves; & same was the case of Jagat & panchi. She had no choice left. She thought may be she should just stop dancing & just watch them all dance. She was leaving Parth, when Parth pulled her towards him with his left hand on her right hand that she went deep into his hands. He was looking again into her eyes. There was definitely a sense of possessiveness & love in his eyes. It took her breathe away. May be he is just being nice. But his eyes talked differently to hers. She just gave into the feelings for now. She couldn’t resist. He swung her around and then had her again in his embrace with his left had placed affectionately on her waist. ‘Dheere dheere se meri zindagi me aanaa……’
    She had her left hand placed n his shoulder while the right palm was spread over his heart. She could hear the faster heartbeat. He turned her so that his front was facing her back and the raised her arms up & cupped them within his. Then traced down her body curves with them…. She was melting in his arms & his hands were burning. Then he turned her around once again to watch those eyes & he saw that she too was letting down her guards. He cupped her face in his hands & placed an affectionate kiss on her forehead. She had her eyes closed Then he kissed her softly on both eyelashes. He kissed on her cheeks & he could see that those were red now. His lips curved smoothly thinking his effect on her. He then brought his lips close to her(almost brushing) and Sana opened her eyes & she suddenly hugged him with her neck beside his mouth. HIs soft breathe feel on her neck. She shivered as he kissed her on her neck groove inhaling her scent.
    Jagat was dancing with Panchi hand in hand & asked her; ” Whom do you love in this group?” Panchi said with a childish pout:” There is someone”
    Jagat huskily :” Tell me who is that lucky guy”
    Panchi: ” You think he is lucky”
    Jagat: “Very very lucky”
    Panchi blushes & rests her head on his chest still dancing.
    Jagat tightens his grip on her waist.
    Another corner, Ansh & Reeva are dancing.
    Reeva” You like Panchi too much, right? Go & dance with her na”
    Ansh”shhhhhhh(he kept his right hand forefinger on her lips). You know I don’t”
    Reeva: “I don’t know anything”
    Ansh cups her chin & brings her face up piercing his eyes into hers”Don’t you?”
    Reeva lowers her gaze & just keeps silent. Ansh too didn’t force. He had something in his mind.
    All were lost when the song stopped & they all dispersed with an odd smile on their faces. “Ok. let’s all get some sleep.”
    They placed the pillows in between & 3sp slept on one side of the pillow & 3 ma on the other side.
    To be continued…..

  972. dipika on

    ooooooooooo!!!!! wht an epi Deepa !! kissing n slapping!! haha….mahol…it gng fullon…wants continue to read it…mahool…muhhhhhh for u dear!!!
    @ kfar whr r u dear? missing ur story n u dear??
    @thena whr r u?? plzzz dear post ur epi…

  973. Clara on

    Hey guys!! Where are you all gonna post your stories after this site shuts??
    I am a great fan of everyone’s writings…
    @kfar @deepa @anu @anaya @thena @natasha
    Please continue to write somewhere even after this site shuts down!!

  974. Clara on

    I dared to try my hand at writing and composing…please do tell how it is guys..

    Kya kam is khubsurat chere ka,
    jo na ho muskan ispe.
    Kya kam in hatho ka,
    jo kar na sake madad kisiki.
    Kya kam in pairo ka,
    jo chal na sake sath apno ke gam me.
    Kya kam un vaado ka,
    jo nibhaa na sake ap unhe.
    Kya kam us khushi ka,
    jo mili ho kisi aur ki khusi chinkar.
    Kya kam us kagaz ka.
    jo kar dete h insan ko itna andha.
    Kya kam us rishte ka,
    jisme na ho vishwas ek dusre ka.

  975. zara on

    @anaya – what an episode dear, awesome . parth sana eyelock scene amazing dear. I had enjoyed all the scene of dare truth game. more like parth sana dance scene .
    keep going on dear … waiting for next episode. ♡♡♡

    @deepa- a huge salute to you dear ….
    omg arjun’s flirting, kissing accident, now slapping scene! !!! 😉 its make me more exciting plzzz next episode post soon …eagerly waiting 🙂

    @kfar wer r u dear ???? I’m waiting for your story

  976. deepa on

    Hi anaya….
    Awesome and sizzling episode yaar…..
    Loved parth and sana scene very much dr…..
    Waiting for next episode

  980. Thena on

    hi my dearieeessssss……am grieving yaar…..can’t even write many epis…….so cudn’t make it here since morning…….just nw written 1 epi n postin it here……bt y many wer absent 2day…..

    @FARHA……heyyyyyyyyy…..can u hear me…..just attached…..miss u a lot……come dear tis is the last day i think….pls cum…..hope u r fine….God bless u girl……

    @deepa…….tight hugggggiiiieeeeee my dear…….u r AMAZING sweety….just mind blowing…..luv u dear…..

    @savera….wr r u dear….just cum…bring any poem 2 ur thena dear….heal me wid ur words….

    @ANU…..oh dear wen u said sum1 2 create fb page,i didn consider it,really yaar….bt nw i feel grateful 2 u dear…..my 2 besties names r nithya & nw 3rd 1 dear……am gonna go create an fb account nw & ll soon join u guys thr…..tight hug my buddy…….

    @dipika….hey yaar as u said am gonna join u guys in fb dear….luv u loads…..

    @reeda…..hugs…luv u loads….actu my mood wsnt gud 2day 2 write many epis…..bt i assure u i ll soon join tu friends fb……btw wr r u 4m yaar….

    @sw@lak…..hey its difficult 2 read ur name yaar….hahaha….nyways…..luv u loads…..u made my day……

    @mandy….hw ws ur day buddy?

    @clara…..thank u dear….n ur poem,wel tried yaar….lekhin mujhe hindi patha nahi….hahaha…..just lil known…nt wel versed dear….so i can get more if write in eng dear….

    @anaya,nats…u guys r simply superb…just makin evry1’s day 2day…amazin dearies….

    @samiha,raashi.renu,farha,shub,jayaru,abbz,mitty evry1 just cum…..

    DEAR TELLY UPDATES,JUST CLEAR ME 1 THING…ARE YOU GONNA CLOSE THIS PAGE? IF SO,WHEN? PLEASE DO REPLY….

  981. Thena on

    EPISODE 136:

    SCENE 1:

    Sam’s mouth ws tightly closed,hr hands trying hard 2 escape the clutch…..thr ws rapid movement on hr widened eyes,chest heavin hard & hr xpanded nostrils xpellin out the air in despair……

    “cool baby…..m nt gonna kill u….just want 2 taste u”,warm breath blown on hr ear back……

    Sudden then hr eyes stood still,nostrils contracted,chest relaxed…..she scurried 2 turn & hugged hm tight….real tight as if she ws never ever gonna abandon any sooner…..hr hands wrappin around hs neck as if she ws 2 bend it until broken…..it ws neil actually,hs shoulder ws drenchin,drenchin,drenchin……hs r8 frame ws wet down 2 hs chest & makin its way 2 hs toned tummy…..neil felt very sorry then, tears rolled down hs eyes….he hugged back hr tight,kept rubbin hr back…..btw, he ws wiping out tears, runnin unruly 4m hs eyes as anyhw it kept wettin sam’s shoulder…..he seemed lik, just cudn’t bear sam’s pain……she ws shiverin,hr shanks trembled 2 vibrate on hs shanks…..hs hug went more tight…..

    “ok baby…am here,am here…its ur idiot….ur idiot is here baby….cool…cool…”,neil kept rubbin hr back…….

    She left hr clutch slowly, gvng hm space 2 hide hs tears……hr hair strands wer leisurely set free 4m the cut stalks of hs beard……turned red hr nose,it ws runnin badly……. she ws sniffin,downward, hr face,tryin hard 2 suck up hr nostrils……neil cupped hr face,wiping out the tears wid hs thumbs leavin hr 2 make faces….he lifted up the banian 4m hs waist part,hs left palm over hr head,blown out hr nostrils wid hs r8 fingers pinchin hard…..he planted rapid kisses al over hr face,then sent hs gaze in2 hr moist red runnin 1…..hr nostrils again set its point 2 xpand as if they wer gettin ready 2 xplode…..she just kept hittin hs chest xpeditiously….. he held up hr face,hs palms closing hr ears,pursed hs mouth in2 a babyish pout & kept hr in2 hs bosom so tight as hs chin ws pinned 2 hr head…….

    “idiot…..u almost killed me”,she patted hs cheek…..”k lets go its time”,she ws stopped by hs clutch on hr wrist…..he carried hr in hs arms b4 she cud turn…..he went upstairs,hr left fingers clenched in2 hs neck open, & r8 at back……

    Oh! was tat the same terrace which used 2 b until ydy?!?!?!……nope…..nw it ws so bright as if it ws a star hotel dinner arrangement…… shuttin hr eyes 4m bhind,he guided hr 2 the table arrangement……she ws settled in the chair,he glanced at hs watch raisin hs elbow bend……it ws 12 a.m…… hr mouth gone wide open as he unsealed hr eyes……two champanges,candles lit in circle,a large heartin chocolate cake, ‘happy birthday my juicy orange’,written in yellow streaks wer on the table front 2 hr……tears again filled hr eyes,grin 4m ear 2 ear,she darted up to cuddle hm…..

    NARAL met at a public restaurant…..annoyed hr luk ws on hm,warned hm 2 nt go inbtw ardhika anymore…..hr hands perched on the table,the 2 sittin oppo,hs posture ws lil cool leaning hs back 2 the chair…..tightenin hr face, she told hm 2 concentrate ly on their plan as Arjun wudnt spare hm if evn a thot of radz strike hs mind…..
    “please don’t mess up arjun’s life anymore”,said she in a clipped tone,hr eyes threw a firey stare on hm…..grabbin hr purse,she made an exit……

    SCENE 2:

    Blinkin hs eyes, Arjun slid hs hand 2 hs side in bed…..in sudden,the blinkin eyes stood still as radz wsnt thr…..it ws just 4’0 clock, shown the clock…..”RADHIKA”,hs sharp tone reached out the room…..hs mobile beeped….

    “gud mrg my dr SIRRRRR…..b thr in woodland’s restaurant by 8….”,the message read….

    “gud mrg my dr panauti…..s soon I ll b thr”,replied he smilingly…..

    NEIL ws awakened by a sudden vibration felt at hs thigh……they two stayed back in terrace the whole n8…..leanin 2 the wall back,hs legs wer erected bend by the bones btw thighs & shanks…..sam 2 hs side,hr posture as same as neil,still sleeping perchin hr head on hs shoulder…..neil squinted hs eyes 2 read hs mobile screen…..

    ’neil just do anything….i just want sam at woodland’s restaurant by 8’,read the message 4m chasni…..

    ‘Oh! surprise…? so sweet of u chasni….yeah sure she ll b thr at 8”,replied neil lukin cautiously at sam…

    SCENE 3:

    It ws 7 a.m.

    Radhika ws instructin sumthn serious 2 the hotel steward…..hr hands kept waving, xited hr face, she uttered everythin in a single breath……the steward just kept nodin in yep…..she gestured hm ssshhhh seein hr vibratin mobile….it ws neil called hr……

    “neil evrythi done….?”,hr eyes widened in question…

    “yeah no problem chasni…..i just drop hr r8 at 8….thr evrythin ready?”,neil 4m othr end…..

    “ah yes….here everythin perrrrfecccct neil….m just waitin 4 u”,she ended the call….

    NESAM arrived thr……neil asked sam 2 get in2 the restaurant,convincing hr, he wud cum back soon…….he then crossed the road 2 reach oppo & informed chasni about sam’s arrival…..

    Saral nestlin up against the wall 2 the shop aside,had a glance at sam inadvertently……he made a call immediately then….

    “she is here in woodland’s restaurant”,mumbled he on hs mobile,hs stare fell fixed on sam..…

    END of epi 136…..

  982. Thena on

    hey dearies,its my heart pourings…..just bear wid me buddies….hahaha….dont know y am senti….

    I STOOD ALONE…..
    TO STARE THE MOON…..

    I STOOD ALONE….
    TO STARE THE MOON……

    LONGING FOR LIGHT…..
    TO TOUCH THE WARM HEAT……

    SUDDEN THERE, THE SKY CHANGED…..
    WARM RAYS WERE SHOWERED……

    WISHED IT TO BE THE SAME EVER……
    PASSING CLOUDS SAID ME, “NEVER”……..

    PASSING CLOUDS SAID ME,”NEVER”….

    TORN THE AIR,MY SCREAM…..
    YEARN MY HEART, IT WAS A DREAM……..

    YEARN MY HEART, IT WAS A DREAM…..

  983. deepa on

    Mandy,zara.natasha.anaya.dipika.ure.reeda,clara,thena and many others sorry yaar cant remember many names….

    A tight hug for u buddies…..u all mean alot to me buddies….
    Thank u all for liking my stories yaar….keep giving feed back dudes….

    Love u lots

  984. deepa on

    Hi thena….
    Wat happened to u buddy…come on i give u thight hug my dr…..

    Loved epi very much yaar….loved nesam emotional romance yaar….loved our idiot very much….and birthday surprise….awesome epi dude…asusual u rocks always….

    Ur sweet lines made me to cry yaar….its really heart touching and supeeb my dr….

    Am feeling happy that u going to join fb yaar….tis deepa vll b always waiting for ur arrival yaar….love u buddy…..tc

  985. deepa on

    Episode8:

    starts with arjun holding radhikas hand tightly making one of her bangle to break….radhika ask him to leave her hand…atlast arjun leave her hand and says….”how dare are u to raise head on me? She replied…how dare u can come close to me?
    Arjun says shutup am ur senior give respect and talk….she says respect cant b taken by force,it should come from heart….their heated argument continue,due to loud noise all students gather around them.tittu asked radhika…wat happened? Radhika replies that arjun try to misbehave with her,so i gave him answer by my hand,all the junior students start to laugh at him….whereas neil ask how dare u can slap ur senior….say sorry to him…..radhika says no i cant and started to walk along with her friends….arjun looks angrily at her….his eyes are burning into red….neil tries to console him but in vain….

    Arjun is in college gym,,,getting out his anger on punching bag,he was shirtless,neil comes to him and calls out arjun…but arjun is busy punching recalling radhikas slap and her denial to say sorry…..neil stops the bag and tell”how long will u keep punching…arjun”
    arjun says” no girls,raised their hand on me till date…but today he got slapped by the junior student that too she s not off my status….

    Scene2

    neil says “leave it dude”…
    There are many girls who are waiting to propose him….leave that girl,
    arjun says “no neil….i can never forget her and her slap….i will teach her lesson and make her to bend ti me…he wears his shirt and tell…Wait radhika am coming for u… And gave one strong punch to his bag….

    Its ni8,radhika and her friends are disscussing abt the slap scene…

    Tittu says “u should have nt slapped him radhika
    radhika says “he vll do whatever he wants bt i should remain silent na…
    Tittu says “its not like that dr…they are richer than us they can do anything
    radhika says so what,he may b rich,,,but dont knw how to behave with girls
    tittu becomes tired and say no one cant compete u radhika in talking and she tickles her to calm her mind….radhika started to laugh…tittu says when ur laughing u looks beautiful….so keep laughing radhika….they smile and hug…
    Scene3

    its mrng,in college arjun and radhika are coming towards eachother in opposite directions….one guy come running and pushes radhika again she falls on arjun…anger eyelock between two….radhika get up and start to leave bt arjun whostles and gather all students and tells that tis girl come and fall on me wantedly,,,she s trying to trap me….what kind of girl is she….he started to insult her.

    Radhika has tears in her eyes, and tells that am not that type of girl

    arjun ask “then wt type of girl u are…come on tell me…..

    All the students start to gossip bad abt her….radhika gets hurt and runs from there….arjun smirks with his cute smile…..

    Precap

    arjun and radhika in locker room,,,,radhika get into argument with arjun…arjun out of anger,hold her neck and pins her to wall….

  986. anu on

    Sorry for late guys… Here is the update…

    Episode No : 12

    The episode starts with AR & NS going to their homes. Its morning arjun and radhika in cuddled position, both feels dizzy and suffers from cold. Calling bell rings and arjun getsup to open the door. There enters Mala & dadaji at Mumbai. Arjun bends down to take blessings & welcomes them and calls radhika. She still feels dizzy and comes out covering herself with half blanket and another half on the floor. 😛 . Radhika didn’t notice them and asks arjun who it is, y u r calling me? Arjun smiles with confusion and Mala gets shocked to see her like that at 9am.

    Dadaji smiles seeing at her innocent face and calls meri choti abhi bhi meri choti hai and winks 😉 . radhika then realises and takes blessings from dadaji & mala. Mala takes her inside and scolds her, radhika replies its too late @office and arjun’s surprise. Mala feels that they came at wrong time. Radhika understands it and says maa I know what u r thinking. We are very happy to have you & dadaji here. So stop thinking. Mala gets fresh and brings coffee for evry1. They all talk for sometime. Arjun gets ready and calls radhika. She comes and he holds her closer and asks her to get well soon & kisses on her forehead. He says miss you and leaves for BS alone.

    A car is met with an accident and nandini gets a phone call , she picks it up and gets shocked to hear the news. She feels restless having all this in her dream and gets up tensed and sweating. She drinks water and sits crying. She goes to her parents, sees them sleeping and she turns back but notices something fallen on floor and goes to pick it up. She picks it and comes to her room. She opens the diary sees the pic(which was shown yesterday) and name VIRAJ. FB shows Nandini calls the guy with name VIRAJ, and he turns back. He was a calm going, loved to keep everyone happy and valued relations. He was a doctor by profession. Nandini hugs that dairy and cries saying MISS YOU.

    PRECAP : AR invites NS and piyali& samrat for dinner at AR’s residence.

    • deepa on

      Hi anu

      todys episode s fabulous yaar….loved ardhika and mala,dadaji conversation…..its very funny yaar….laughed alot dr

      keep continuing buddy…love u lots

  988. dipika on

    Hi all Dearies!!!!!!

    Is it true that today is the last day of ths page?? If yes thn one more heartbreaking thing is happening….Plzzzzz tellyupdate.com dont close this page!!! plzzzz.

    @Renu if u read it thn for a tight hugg dear…u gave me view to see any thing positive in each n evry thing…ur povs r simply mindblowing n hearttouching….misss u n ur pov a lot dear!!!
    if possible thn cum on fb n join us!!
    @kfar u n ur story is awsome dear…missing ur story alreay…want to read more n more of it…Thank yoy for sharing such swt story!! plz come on fb n join us!!
    @Thena u feel the gap of our manmarziya by ur super duper hit episodes… really bcum fan of episss.happy to hear u r going to join fb dear..welcome on fb..i want to knw further story of ardhika!!!love u …muhhhhh!!
    @Anu a big thanks to u for making fb page….n ur episodes r so exciting n intresting dear…n happy tht i will read it on fb..
    @Deepa u r writting skill is so incridible dear m jst flew in ur story… r u going to share it on fb na??? plzz…love u dr
    @Mandy u r great friend dear…Thanjs for ur povs…love u..
    @Anaya ur story is very mch intresting…r u too cuning on fb na!!
    @savera@mitty@riya,@afroz@natasha@reeda n all if i miss any one plz m sorry…i m gonna miss u guys badly..u guys give beautiful memories…love all frm coreeee
    Miss U All!! have Happy n Bright future!! never say goodbye… say..
    Hum Hai Raahi Pyar k …Fir Milege Chalate Chalate…???

    • kfar on

      Heyyyy hum hai rahi pyaarke phir milenge chalte chalte…dost phir milenge apne raaste dilke raahon me ek din..ye pal phir ayenge ek nai kahani bankar.. phir milenge apne chalte chalte us ek nai kahanike mod par….Oh feeling so emotional dear

  989. Natasha on

    I dont think after my this comment we will be able to talk more because todays the 14th day after ending mmz and according to telly updates today is the last day of this site.

    Pls forgive me if i have ever hurt any of u.

    Happy,raashi,mitty,abi,devga,thena,ireena,jayaru,samiha,dipika,anu,renu,anaya,deepa and all i will miss u.

  990. kfar on

    Sooooooooo sorry guys for not being here buddies n my loveliesssss, oh dearies I missed u all very much, I wasn’t at home these two days, yesterday evng since I couldn’t get hold of my mobile charger, its been off and I felt so bad to come home since…..

    Is dis goin to be our last day? pls tellyupdates don’t fo this plsssssss don’t scrap the page….

    Feelin so emotional, gonaa cry 🙁

    I will miss all @thena, mandy, ireena,dipika, deepa, renu, anaya, anu, nats, mitty, ure. devga, abi, tia, clara, abbz, jayaru, Riya, happy, Zara, Sara, tanya, raashi, shub, yaaaaarr miss kisika naam toh maaf karna, I love u all will miss loads my lovies…..:(

    all ur stories, reviews, epis rocks guys n may all ur dreams come true…i want to stay connected wit u al, i wil be on fb, i wil n catch up guys…i just borrowed a mbl btry n chargin it…wat yaar 2 days itz been i didn’t cm feels saddd..

    Tight hug my dears!!!!

  991. kfar on

    @thena – hey i here my dear was stuck yaaaar, ut story rocks 😀

    Oh Savera yaar i missed ur name sorry buddy tight hug, i wil miss ur poems and all lovely comments 😀
    s
    dipika- Heyyyyy thanks so much dear for lovin the story n wil join u all on fb soon yaaaayy, Im good but just wasn’t home I was sooo stuck:(

  994. kfar on

    thena- dear ur epis very cooooooool, ur a slick writer 😀
    deepa very niceeeeeeee story awesome keep going 😀

    anaya- i loveddddddd sana and parth chem hot hot hot al characters awesomeeeeeeee

    anu- love ur story alwaysssss its da besttt

    tanya- u hv a very clean hand in writin i can see that in ur writing 😀

    nats: yaaaaaaar i love the idea of doctors coz in my family der are two doctors n i can see the characterization well 😀

    meri stories streching hai how can i complete now yaaarri can’t cut short them kyunki bland hojayega sab,,, wat to do friends?!?!?!

  996. Abbz on

    Am gonna miss each evry1 who has ever commented in dis page …… all d stories ….. feels like my mmz in endind all over again …. XOXO

  998. zara on

    hiii friends ….
    miss you all badly 🙁 🙁
    hey farha if you don’t mine so you can post your story on ” manmarziyan desitv box fan page” also other peoples joint too 🙂
    thanks to all for entertaining us through your manmarziyan story .
    good night and sweet dreams

  999. kfar on

    @all i wil do one thing two of my stories i wil post in myeduniya manmarziyan page…its still der we can post all our cmnts reviews stories everything der friends wat do u say? if and if only dis page goes off…

    just go on google search n type Manmarziyan myeduniya written update n da first site is da one

  1000. Natasha on

    Wishing for ur great future guys. Happy,mitty,raashi,abi,devga,sonamohan,kfar,anu,renu,samiha,dipika,thena,mandy,ireena,jayaru,savera,deepa,riya,zara,ure,tia,clara,sara,tanya,shub,abbz and all i will really miss u. Pls pray for me. Its feeling like the same as my last day of school. I dont know whether i have really become ur good friend but u all surely have become my good friends.

    A tight hug to u all. Will miss u. Stay blessed. And pray for me.

    Thank u all.

    • kfar on

      Hey tight hug dear, i too feel da same n wish u loads of luck Nats 😀

      paru deepa abbz i wud connect u al on fb n post stories friends n can i write now wil it not go away da page n al

      thena clara reeda very beatiful poems yaar 😀

      mandyyyyyyyy u asleeeeep? im waitin to see if da page is goin?

  1001. Mandy on

    Hey guys !!

    I will miss u farah.anu .renu.dipika.deepa.anaya.shub .mittythena.ireena.devga.abbz.clara.natasha .riya.abi.tia.jayaru.sara.zara.happy.ure.raashi.tanya.saji.n all buddies will really miss yaar dat I cant xpress n feeling to sing dis song yaar but cant so pls can any1 cmplte d song 4 me n evry1 !!!

    So d song is KAL HO NA HO …. pls cmplte !!!!!!!!

  1002. deepa on

    Hey guys….i feel like crying……really vll miss all of u buddies….i dont want to mention names…..every person in tis group….love u lot buddies…..i wish each and every one of u to have bright future……a tight hug for u guys….dont forget tis deepa;(;( buddies

    • kfar on

      deepa dont feel sad page did not cut off friend 🙂

      mandy sure yaaar i wil write it der n paru n ure clara gonna pst other story tmrw lv u al 😀

      Reeda- Hey ur right absolutely i think dey heard us 😀

  1003. Reeda on

    Its a new day already and the page has not been closed….do u tink they heard us…. Tu cant be so insensitive, can they….. Stop the Goodbyes please…. Its too sad….

  1004. kfar on

    Radhika felt like she was home in his warm and secure embrace but the lulling romantic fog and peace broke like a shattering of glass, whdn a loud cheer resonated the silent hall. Radhika jerked back and tried to move away but his hand tightened around her more and she couldn’t look up into his eyes for fear that she would break down completely.

    Now she knew, it was all a game, the dance, the smile, the song, it was all for a show, to let people know everything was fine between them. Of course, she signed up for this, but she didn’t sign up for him. His ever magnetic charisma to pull her into a loop of deceive. Never had she expected him to go for such lengths as to saving his public image.

    How can she be a fool to think he was for a minute not a ruthless manipulator. She gulped down the tears of humiliation and somhow found a will to smile across at all the people surronding them.

    His hand moved her face to his,

  1005. kfar on

    (As I don’t see the page is bot dead, I plan to continue my story)

    He was leaning, his face real close to hers, a furrow appeared between his brows. Radhika tried to rearrange her face but failed miserably in doing so. Her smile tremored and he looked down at her lips and then into her eyes.

    “Are you alright?” He asked, his voice a curious one, is face as aloof and a stone mask.

    If she was mistaken, he seemed worried by the look of a tender gleam in his eyes she was witnessing now, but otherwise his tight stern mouth he looked as cool as a cucumber.
    His hands again rubbed her shoulders, warming her cool body. He seemed to be unware of how it was affecting her with his touch, she needed an escape to pull herself together.

    His eyes stayed locked with hers and Radhika tired to decipher, if he was acting, playing some sort of game and what about his warning them not crossing paths? She wanted to know if he was still in the lock of deal they got into? Everything was so confusing with him, but finally she came to a conclusion. She needs to get close, to know who he was, to peel of the layers of recluse around his heart. She was his wise, legally and it’s time to see him as actully her husband.

    “I…I’m fine…just tired.” She hedged his concern and smiled a falsy one.

    His eyes snapped out the only emotion she could understand, now he looked a complete granite.

    Could he read her face and tone? She worried anew now.

    Just then a couple moved towards them and started congratulating smoothly seperating his penetrating warm stare away from hers……
    *****

  1006. kfar on

    In the limousine, they didn’t talk, well he didn’t utter a word and she didn’t dare to share her thoughts. He was a complete opposite to who he was in the party. She glanced sideways at him, he was sitting there lost in thought, his forefinger rubbing over his chin, he cut a clear image of a GQ business mag model.

    His hair a smooth midnight gleam, his face a shade darker, his arms and legs protrayed an agility, he seem to work hard on his body. No businessman can be this fit as him. Radhika was tired of all the anxiety she felt in the evening and the night was going to an epic memory of her life. The only night she felt beautiful. Her lips curved into a smile thinking about the dance, even if it was for a show, it was wonderful, her eyes became droopy and her head bent to the side as her vision became sleepy.

    A warm arm fell on her shoulder pulling her to a hard warmth. She cacooned her body to it and sighed heavily burrowing herself deeper….

    ****

    Yawn, I’m sleeeeeepy too now…

    • Clara on

      @kfar Loved it!! 🙂
      You describe each and every emotion in such a way that…am mesmerized…I can feel each scene happening before my eyes!!
      You really are an awesome writer.

  1008. dipika on

    @ kfar feeling like hugging u…awesome story dear…m jst flew in ur story….Thanks for the update dear missed u n ur story so much….
    n happppieeeee to knw ths page is still working….love u tellybytes.

  1009. Samiha on

    Hey guys, how are you all???
    @all story writers: Read all of your stories, all are just awesome…..
    @kfar: hey, I checked myedunia, but I only saw the prololouge… When will you fulfill it??? And the story was awesome…..

  1010. deepa on

    Oooops kfar,am addicted to ur story very much yaar….loved it and i vll keep loving it…..bravo…..ur a great novelist yaar……

    A tight hig for u buddy….keep continuing dr……love alots buddy

  1012. deepa on

    Episode9:

    starts with radhika crying and recalling her moms words,she wipes her tears and go in search of arjun.

    Arjun in locker room,thinking abt radhika and fumes recalling her slap,radhika comes to him,
    arjun ask what ru doing here?
    Radhika says am here to pay back for ur insult….
    Arjun smiles,oh…so u are going to compete with me
    radhika….u think i cant compete with u?
    She also says what rights u have to insult me in front of everyone,if ur senior means u think u can do whatever u wants…..,tell me?
    Arjun says “ya i have full right to do whatever i want,i dont care abt anyone
    radhika becomes furious and start to insult him,arjun fuming in anger,radhika starts to insult him more,,,arjun says stop it……
    Radhika says “if u have right to do whatever u want even me too have same right to do whatever i want.
    Arjun loses his control,holds her neck and pins her to wall,his face is very close to hers,she pushes him hard and starts to leave,giving him hard looks.

    Scene2

    Arjun rushes b4 her,close the door,and walk close to her,radhika backsup,and he again endup pinning her to wall,he gets very close to her,his nose is touching hers,radhika shivers by his proximity,arjun stares at her and says “see…radhika,i have the habit to make people bend to me if they disrespect me…i will make u to bend in front of me
    radhika says “vll see who will bend to whom”
    arjun says….”ru challenging me…..
    Radhika “yes of course”
    arjun,ohh……then lets wait and watch
    radhika “wait and watch,they share eyelock ant they shake hands….

    Scene3

    tittu and panchi are in class,tittu challenges panchi to act as their chemistry mam….panchi acts…they start to laugh….panchi forgets that she s in class and act more funny,tat time chemistry mam come and stand beside her,looking angrily
    tittu signals her to look behind…panchi gets shocked to see mam standing there with her big eyes staring at her….
    Panchi greets good morning mam
    teacher says out…..get out,panchi suddenly disappears and everyone start to laugh

    episode ends

    precap

    arjun choses radhika as his dance partner….radhika looks on

  1020. aastha on

    Hi friends!!!!!!!!!!!I I dnt usually cmmnt. I’m a silent reader f all ur comments.

    Deepa ur story is simple & beautiful??.I liked it very much.

    Anaya ,anu ur stories r also good??

    Kfar will u plz let us see arjun’s mind???? we only hear Radhika’s thoughts…….i jst wanna know his opinion abt hr…….

    Will u all complete ur storieshere ?????

  1022. deepa on

    Episode 10

    starts with radhika rushing to classroom,tittu ask where did u go?…teacher shouts and tells them to listen to class….class s going on…some annoucement is made regarding dance,those who are interested kindly come to audi at eve….

    Arjun,neil and cabir are in computer lab,they were tweeting without listening to class,teacher comes and scold them,and ask them to get out…arjun gets up,holds her hand and kiss it, “thank u mam for asking us to get out ur very sweet and hugs her….. Teacher gets dizzy and fell down,all students start to leave.

    During break time,radhika and tittu are discussing abt dance competition,misha also joins them,all the three decided to go for dance

    radhika ask tittu have u done ur record work….tittu says oh…oh…i forget dr.radhika start to scold her
    tittu says hmm….ur very talkative,dont knw who is coming too make ur mouth shut….radhika shushes her…

    Scene2

    its eve,all the students are waiting to give their performance,arjun is the judge….radhika comes there with titu to give her name,and is shocked to c arjun as judge…
    She gives her name.radhika s called first to perform. she goes to stage and dance.. all start to laugh and gossip abt her…she feels bad and looks at arjun….arjun give her smirk…..arjun shouts next…..all the students give their performance,radhika s shocked to see their dance.
    Arjun comes to stage and tells abt their respective partners…
    neil-misha,cabir-charu,rocky-tittu and last radhika will b paired with me…radhika looks on….

    Scene3

    all the students start to leave…radhika too start to leave,arjun stops her,and ask “do u knw y i chosen u as my partner”….radhika looks at him….he too looks at her and says “oh oh…. I cant answer nw,u will understand it by urself….
    She looks at him confused
    arjun holds her cheek and says wait and watch baby…..till then b cool and gives her flying kiss…he took hos bag…says bye…baby….
    And start to leave….radhika s shown thinking.

    Ends

    precap

    dance practice s on full swing….arjun tries to get closer to radhika….

    • richa on

      hello unknown is itt myy sweet nika plaa answer lol tc miss u a lot niku …. plss ans & tell r u ok ane lov ur comments….

  1026. Mandy on

    Hey farha ur story is really amazing yaar I mean u want to stay connected to u so pls post ur story on myeduniya !!

    Hey deepa ur tooo gud yaar I mean ur story is a hit !!

    Hey thanx guys 4 d fast update !! Love u buds !!!

  1028. Tanya on

    Chp3 The new real Dosti starts…
    Radhika was lost in thoughts when suddenly someone bumped to her.She fell down.She looked up.It was a girl who had pretty good fashion sense.She gave her an apologetic smile nd said sorry.she helped Radhika get up.She gave her purse which fell down.she asked Radhika if she knew the house number 303.Radhika said she is standing in front of that house.The girl checked it out.She looked Radhika nd asked so u r going to stay with us.She introduced herself as Sam.She was daughter of Piyali.She said that the even third person,Sam’s bestie,Neil has come.He comes there In a funny manner to which Radhika nd Sam laugh.Radhika says lets go!they enter the house.Oh how dirty it was.Sam made terrible expression nd exasperated.But Radhika started cleaning,Neil helped her.Sam too started after sometime.After cleaning they started to arrange.Sam was trying to hang a painting when the stool was unbalanced,Sam closed her eyes afraid she might hit the floor,but she fell into the arms of Neil,they had an eye lock.He smiled to her.Sam blushed.radhika looked at them and felt they were in love.She remembered her time,her sad past with Saral.A tear fell of her eyes.Sam saw her and Came and asked of her tears.Radhika replied that dust had entered.A call came to Sam of her father,he told that a party was held for them.They had to wear Indian theme.sam told them and frowned.Radhika asked her the reason,she asked her why was she angry?did she hate Indian wear?Sam replied she didn’t have know how to wear a saree,she wanted to wear as Neil had gifted her.radhika said she will help.Sam became happy and hugged her.the trio exchanged their nos.Sam told that they will dance in pair In pair.She told she will dance with Neil.sam told Radhika will dance with the fourth person who is going to directly come in party.Radhika got nervous because after her past with Saral she never danced with any man.
    —————-
    Precap: Radhika and the fourth person dance and Neil and Sam dance.
    plz do comment.

    • anu on

      hi mitty we r gud. hw r u buddy?? I think today the site will close, as it is the last day, 14th day from show’s closure. show closed on 29th, so count from 30th.. today is the last day here.. 1993 comments,,,,,ONLY 7COMMENTS LEFT FOR 2K.

      This shows our love for the show.. 🙂 🙂 <3 <3

      I wanna thank each and evry1 for bearing me and reading all my very long comments.. love u loads.. hope I'll stay connected. http://www.facebook.com/DYMTELLYfriends.999

    • Mandy on

      Hey mitty !! Hw r u yaar ??? I cant imagine like today is d last day of dis page !! Nywas I will miss u a lot yaar !!

      Hey mitty we r gonna rich 2000 cmnts yaar I m very happy 4 dat like 1st time 1 of d serial I lov is gonna rich 2000 cmnts !!! Love u bud !!!

  1033. anu on

    13.

    The episode starts with arjun reaching BS and NS joins them. They all give the final report of the ad to piyali and samrat. The brand’s manager checks it and praises them for their work and leaves.

    Piyali asks arjun about radhika. He replies she got cold and mummy ji & dadaji came. Piyali feels happy to hear it and she was so excited to meet them after a long time. Arjun invites them for dinner next day. Piyali says thanq and leaves. Arjun feels lonely in office. Neil teases him and sam joins them. Sam asks arjun to call radhika. He hesitates to call, but she insists.

    Nandini thinks about VIRAJ, FB shows viraj coming to the orphanage often to play with children and to meet Nandini. Little arjun comes to her and says dadaji is calling you nandhu. She goes with him. The old man asks him about the diary. She says it fell down, so i picked it and kept it safe. He asks her to bring it as it has their life in it. She consoles them and asks them to be happy and we accepted what had happened. He says i should tell you to be strong, but u r telling me. He wipes his tears and hugs nandini.

    Arjun calls radhika and talks to her. Sam takes the phone and tells Ur hubby is missing you so much here and u r enjoying at ur home. Radhika replies,no no not lile that, arjun only told to take rest and maa & dadaji came. So i-i , sam interrupts and neil takes the phone and asks oh my chasini, Arjun became devadas and teases both of them.

    Nandini goes to her room and cries seeing the diary and album. FB shows viraj coming to orphanage on his duty to check basic health conditions of the children. Its their first meeting and both introduces themselves. He calls her and asks her can i visit this orphanage whenever he wants. She tells him the timings and ends the call. Scene shifts to present and Little arjun comes to her & interrupts. He asks her to come and have lunch.

    Its evng,arjun wanna go early, and asks zubin&kritika for sam&neil. They say both left after lunch. Arjun calls sam and tells her that he is leaving early, she says fine and ends the call. Arjun comes home and was surprised to see sam&neil with radhika &dadaji.

    Ankush’s freshers party is on the next day, so they are too busy in rehearsals.

    PRECAP : Ankush’s fresher party and dinner at AR’s home.

  1036. jayaru on

    hey,i wiil also miss u guys,RENU,THENA,MITTY,HAPPY,MANDY,NATASHA,DEEPA,ANU,TANYA,FARHA,TANYA,RIYA,SWALAK,DIPIKA,ANAYA,ABBZ,CLARA,ZARA,SAMIHA,SAJI,SAVEERA and also silent readers,i hope we will meet sOme day guys………..wish u a very best 4 ur future guyz.these few months means a lot 4 me,i met some amazing guys thankz 2 our MANMARZIAN…U ALL DESREVE THE BEST HOPE SOME DAY I WILL MEET SOME AMAZING NOVELISTS……..GOOD LUCK GUYS.GOD BLESS U………….KEEP IT GUYS………..AGAIN I WILL MISSSSSSSSSS U A LOTTTTTTTTTTT.BYE,SEE YA……………..

  1037. Tanya on

    Chp 4 You ,Me and No one.
    Radhika dressed Sam in her saree.She looked beautiful in her pink georgette saree with pink embroidered.She looked perfect for party.Sam asked Radhika what is she wearing.Radhika showed her a dress but Sam told her to wear of her choice so she choose for her a orange saree with a black lacy blouse.the saree looked beautiful.Radhika wore the saree,she tied her hair into a bun.She looked gorgeous.Neil got ready in his Varun styled sherwani(remember Radha on the dance floor).he looked handsome.He complemented both the ladies.Radhika noticed Sam and Neil blushed looking at each other.Radhika smiled.They reached the party. everyone greeted them and congratulated.Soon they heard that the fourth person has come,Radhika decided to go somewhere away so that she does not have to dance with that person.But suddenly she saw that Sam And Neil have started their dance on “dheere dheere se” and dance passionately.Everyone clap.Soon it’s turn for Radhika and the fourth person.Radhika soon remembers she has to run when suddenly Sam sends Radhika to the stage,Radhika resists so Sam pushes her,she is going to fall but someone catches her and grabs her by waist.She looks at him,his dark eyes,his perfect toned yet muscular body,he was wearing a Siddharth Malhotra styled sherwani.Soon the music starts.They dance on Teri Meri Kahani hai barishon Ka pani,”they dance passionately.they soon come too close while dancing that there nose almost touched.Radhika could not understand why she was having comfort in his arms,why she wanted him to stay with her all the time while she does not even know him completely.At end of song everyone claps.Samrat introduces the young man as Arjun.while Radhika was going towards canteen as she wanted to drink water when suddenly there was water near that place.She was slipping when suddenly someone caught her.she had closed her eyes when she heard the man’s voice,”U still have that peculiar nose.”Radhika opened her eyes she saw Arjun.before she could say Arjun pointed at the bracelet that he had given to her when they were parting.radhika was overwhelmed.Arjun was a part of past but part of good past.She was so happy that she hugged him so tightly and suddenly kissing Arjun,shocking both arjun and Radhika herself.good was no one saw them.but Arjun too did the same thing,both blushing.
    —————-
    Precap:Radhika past is revealed.how Arjun Saral Radhika and her family are interconnected.
    Plz give comments.

  1038. deepa on

    Episode 11

    starts with arjun and his friends are at disquothe enjoying their ni8 with drinks…..arjun is pulled by neil to perform dance,arjun dances smokingly,aft dance,one of the girl goes to arjun and places a kiss on his cheeks…..arjun offers girl for a dance

    later neil comes to arjun and signals him to wipe his cheeks…
    Arjun asks what? Neil shows him the mirror…..arjun wipes the lipstick mark,and again they start to chitchat.

    In hostel,tittu teaches some steps to radhika,misha is busy in facial,pia always eating,charu teases piya saying,if u keep on eating like this,one day for sure ur stomach vll burst….pia get irked and throws book on charu….both start to fight….radhika and tittu laugh on their funny fighting.

    Scene2

    At clg audi,all r busy in dancing,arjun comes there and his eyes are searching for radhika…he sees her dancing with tittu and goes towards them and ask tittu who s ur partner? Tittu says rocky,arjun says he s waiting for u go n practice with him…tittu looks at radhika and goes,

    arjun ask radhika to come with him….radhika ask where?
    Arjun says to dance alone…babe
    radhika says v can practice hereitself na,y ve hav to go alone.

    Arjun cuts off her talk,holds her hand and take her to green room…he closes the door and plays music….he comes closer to her,radhika tries to go,bt he holds her hand and pulls her closer to him,he keep his hand on her waist and held her firmly….radhika feels uncomfortable….they slow dance.

    Scene3

    radhika feels uncomfortable and removes his hand frm her waist.and tries to go….arjun stops her and tell practice s not yet over…till it get over u cant go anywhere…babe,
    comeon….dance with me…he offers his hand. Radhika give her hand in his and they dance on romantic no “Tum hi ho”they share eyelock and arjun twirls radhika into his arm….he lift her up by hand,he backhugs her and brings his lips closer to her neck..as if to kiss her…radhika feels something

    ends

    precap

    radhika is lost in thoughts of arjun

  1039. Mandy on

    Guys dis is 4 all my telly Friends !!!

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    Par jise pyaar hi n milaa ho kisi ka wo badkismat bhi ktna gareeb hai

    Aur jise mil gaya ho tere jaisa yaar yaha wo shaks bhi mere jaisa hi khushnaseeb hai……… !!

    Guys congrats we riched 2000+ !!

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    Pls tell me how it is guys !!!!

  1040. seher on

    hey…all m a silent readr of ua cmnts….
    nd i m a big fan of kfa’s story…i ll b so desperate to read hr storyz…yaar jst lve ua storyz…

  1041. tasnim on

    ,Hai How r u ??@all guys am back.,ARE U GUYS FORGET ME…??? its evening n jst checking d page wow its aaamazzzing…U GUYS R THE TRUE FAN OF DYM N THATS WHY D CMNT CROSS 2000#.!!! :-)….@kfar: Cipku ,hw r u can u rmbr me u… jst strt writing stry u r d inpiration of all dear tnks 2 u frm evry 1 @MANDY:Mis u lil sis, hw r u ,@ANU:ur imagination jst owasme n unblfabl dear..keep it up @NATASA:Til ur age is a mistry bt ur stry cn’t dscribe it 1 words… @Deepika: wishing u a vry vry shining future n dear thats d girl power in bnk.. @SAMIHA:i am happy 2 see u lil sis ur vry attentive in ur reading n limitation of post here hope u wil do gööd dear… @RIYa:dear is pyr ko kya nan du it is my fav serial…. jst like it, n ur vry talented with ur poem jst killed it.,. @ZARA How r u dear…?@mitty , @abhi @Deepa @ireena (sry if i forgot any1ns name) @and all d new frnds welcome…u all guys r jst ROCKING N ROcKStar of d page…Hapy 2 see tat al d stry charctr named by ‘ardikha’ jst fabulous @Mis u a lot alll deariees… lots of luv jst keep roking n go d highest peak of coments…this is my longest cmnt ever…CNT CNTROL MY FELLING..;-);-)

  1042. seher on

    @renu- ua prvz r jst awsm
    @riya- ua pemz r really hrt touchn
    @thena- ua epz r mndblwng…i feel manmarziyaan z cntinung still
    @anu @deepa…ua storyz r also vry nce…jst lve evry1 in ths page

  1043. seher on

    @renu- ua porvz r jst awsm
    @riya- ua poemz r really hrt touchn
    @thena- ua epz r mndblwng…i feel manmarziyaan z cntinung still
    @anu @deepa…ua storyz r also vry nce…jst lve evry1 in ths page

  1045. ?strawberry? on

    I emailed tu and told them to plzzz let this page last for long ……they said that after 14 days every pg is deleted……today is the 14th day……from tmrw this pg would not be there????plzzzz update ur stories and then keep on writing them in Bhabi ji ghar par hain……there are no comments in that pg

  1046. kfar on

    So, Heyyy all lovelies I’m here with my update, gonna update kinda big, possibly…

    Love is fire, love ice, Love is everything….dedicatin the song ‘Don’t Fall Away’…its the song which comes at the end of the ‘I’m Number Four’ movie…

    Suggestion book- The one classic novel which changed my life is ‘Little Women’…I know many of u hv read the book but read again in this rainy weather…

    I should just shut up per say..

    Drawn Together

    Radhika was going in and out of sleep, she did though feel his arm around her, but now she couldn’t possibly move away. She felt secure and warm and he was the only source of her bed, pillow and covers right now.

    Moments later she heard a deep husky voice in the clouds of her sleep.

    “Hey, we are home.” It said, and she felt a pressure on her cheek.

    Oh, god, he wasn’t leaving her alone in her dreams too.

    But, a second later her eyes flew open and she stared at the most glittering brown eyes staring back at her in amusement, his arm was still around her almost plastering her to his chest.

    “We are home.” He whispered again, and Radhika scrambled out of his arms letting him to frown back at her.

    “Oh, I didn’t know when I fell asleep.” She explained, avoiding his gaze and looking anywhere but him.

    He gave an uncertain, preparing to ask something, but he nodded his head and got out of the car. Radhika followed cue, both of them walked in silence to the door, her feeling awkward and him being ever silent.

    So, this was it, now she would see him when? months later again? if this thing goes on the two year contract was going to end soon and for some reason Radhika did not at all feel good thinking about it.

    She climbed up the stairs and heard his door go in lock, she sighed heavily feeling winded, exhausted and tired altogether in one.

    She removed the ruby necklace from around her neck, she glided her gaze to her tresses and was surprised to see it down, in wild abandon. She remembered him removing the bun during the dance. The earring followed down on the table next.

    She tried to reach zipper of the dress but her hands shortened on her back. Frustration bubbled in her throat. The door clicked open just then.

    “You forgot your purse…”She heard his voice trail off mid sentence.

    Her heart stuttered mid beat, she heard footsteps getting closer and there he stood behind her. His eyes clashed with hers looking down all over at her.

    She immediately felt his heat hit at her back reminding of the same instant of the evening he first saw her in the dress. His eyes strayed to her back and Radhika felt the heaviness of his gaze all over raising goosebumps over her skin.

    His fingers removed her hands of the zipper, his touch cool on her heated skin. They fell to the sides her hands, his eyes came back to hers in the mirror, his face almost hidden in her hair over her shoulders. He towered her mostly all the time but he did lean into her all the time.

    His fingers rested there for a baited breath, then he removed the hook and her breathing constricted, he looked into her eyes, his breath falling on her shoulder, heavens he was affected too like her. She could feel him taking in a broken breath. The zipper down slow and smooth. He never looked down but stared right into her eyes.
    The moment seem to stretch and freeze in a lock down. The world again melted away from around like falling of white snow.

    His fingers trailed down too on her skin along with the zipper. Radhika closed her eyes unable look into his burning gaze anymore. She felt his lips on her neck burning trail on her skin.

    Just as it happened, it was gone altogether, she opened her eyes and saw the door closing with a click. Radhika came back from the high several beats later, she blinked and turned around to see he wasn’t there.

    She fell back on a chair her legs unable to contain standing.

    What just happened her mind vibrated a question.

    Why was he pulling back always? What’s going on in his mind? She hurriedly got up, trying to wear off the affect he had on her she took a long hot shower, that lead to her completing waking up from the lethargy. She got into her red pajama’s and top.

    Her fingers started to itch and she needed to do something about it.
    Radhika took out a canvas from her working bag, she slid down on the floor, she arranged the the canvas on the four footed wooden small holder.

    She took out few charcoal pieces and started shading the paper, her eyes formed an image printed in her brain. Within minutes, brows formed, eyes gleamed out, nose flared, mouth spread out a smile, hair blackened away and few more crucial and lower lip biting minutes later, the hard work and the blacknened fingers of hers took shape on the canvas. She stared and stared. Her breath caught and held looking at the potrait she drew with the charcoal.

    Heart beating faster, a smile stole at her lips and she leaned back on the bed. She drew her knees together and put her chin staring at him, and at his eyes, at his lips, at his face.

    It was him smiling, free of any frown, of any darkness, of any hesitation, free of any mask, free and happy. Would she be successful in bringing that out of him or will her time be up from here, from his life? The countless questions made her worry more but she put that away and burried deep in the closet of her mind.

    A breeze from the open window flew into the room, caressing her with its cool breath.

    ********

    Everything went back to the things before they were as since the night. Nothing changed. He went back to his usual recluse self coming home god knows when in the death of the night. She got up late and came into her workshop late. She once did indeed stay up late waiting for him downstairs, but the next morning she found herself in bed. He must have seen her on the couch, and must have put her in bed, that’s the only explanation she could think off.

    With heavy heart she got into het workshop, but stuttered to a stop when she saw a packet lay on the floor.

    She bent down and retrieved it from the floor. Tearing off the paper, she saw with surprise filling her eyes she removed the new stock of paints, brushes, canvases and whole new set of lovely water colour bottles. It was a half a year stock.

    She gasped out and searched for a tag who sent it. Her mouth hung open when saw the initials on the paper.

    ‘A.M’ written on the edge of it. and a sharp and short ‘For You’ was written with her husband’s intials.
    She pouted at the absence of any endearing words, like, ‘dear’ at the start and ‘Yours’ at the end with the beginning of his initials but sigh what more could she expect from him.

    The stock was more than a thoughtful gift for her. It was sweet and lovely surprise. She had not expected flowers but this, it was beyond surprising. How did he know she had gone out of stock? Oh, how thoughtful of him, she smiled.

    She needed to do something in return for him.

    Yes, cook dinner, she brightened up.

    ********

    On the way home in her excitement she picked up a month long of groceries, she knew Mrs. Martha, would have had the kitchen in order but Radhika was going to make dinner at any cost.

    She got home but was surprised to see the house in all darkness. Oh, damn, she forgot that the staff was at leave.

    With glee she twirled around and ran towards the kitchen.
    What should she make she thought and searched several cook books.

    What does he eat? what did he like? What should she make? Oh, heavens it was exhausting to think.

    Indian, Italian, Chinese, what? It left her head hot.

    But, she made a decision, Biryani, yes, she knew to make it best.

    She pulled her hair in a messy ponytail and went about cooking. It was already ten by the time she cut pieces of meat and veggies and all.

    In two hours of time she cooked up Biryani, fried rice, vegetable soup, chicken fry..everything that looked like family pack menu.

    Her face became oily, she felt sweaty and her hair greased with flour as she made flat breads. Her eyes rounded looking at the abundant food.

    She hurried upstairs, taking a shower which wore off the kitchen smell. She got down in her blue night dress, feeling refreshed.

    She waited at the dinning with a hot coffee mug in hand.

    The waiting lead to minutes. Minutes lead to another hour, it was 12 and there was still no sign of him. Another hour passed. She put her hand under her chin and waited pouting. Enough was enough, when was he getting home.

    Her eyes drooped almost when a sound at the door jerked her up. She hurriedly sat right and saw her husband’s figure walking towards the kitchen in a lazy prowl.

    He seem to not notice her presence when he walked towards the refrigerator.

    She got up from the chair, and moved forward but just then his back stiffened and he turned around towards her.

    He was wearing a grey suit and his face looked tired and his hair gleamed in every direction. His tie came out loose and he was looking at her sharply and he justly handsome.

    “What are doing here, awake this late?” He asked, mostly bit out.

    Radhika folded and unfolded her hands uncertainly.

    He looked at her up and down and removed his coat and put it on the back of the chair.He removed the wrist pins of his shirt.

    All these small movements were smooth and short.

    He took a cool water bottle from the fridge and took a long gulp.

    His adam’s apple moved with the effort of the pull and Radhika looked on mesmerised.

    She shook her head.

    “I..I was…I made dinner.” She said stuttering, her eyes again went back to his flexing arms under the white shirt.

    He moved towards her and sat down on the chair, he quizzed an eyebrow at her and she sat down on the chair opposite to him.

    “You made dinner?” He asked her in a drawly voice.

    She smiled wide at him, and his tired eyes blinked back at her. His gaze sharpened at her lips and snapped back to her eyes. His shoulders stiffened but he didn’t smile back. Radhika’s smile faltered and she gulped hard.

    His gaze slid down on the table, looking over at all the plates and cups.

    “Why did you make dinner? He asked her, his voice sharp as razor.

    Radhika winced and her cheeks heated up.

    “I…I..just.” She stammered.
    She made dinner because to thank for the gift. It was thoughtful and she wanted to do something for him, but he looked like he walked on a worst smelling restuarant.

    “I got the package…so I thought..” She tried again but he cut off rudely.

    “You got what package?” He snapped, his voice low and irritated, his face a smooth brutal angles.

    Radhika drew back several steps with that tone.

    “The paints, the canvases and the brushes.” She said in a small, feeling already humiliation creep into her body.

    “Oh, that, my secretary picked it up from somehere I guess.” He said nonchalantly.

    Her gut twisted, his secretary picked it up and he guessed?

    Oh why did it hurt so much. God, it hurg ten times worse.

    God, she was a fool to believe he would care? or anybody would care.
    He was looking at her now as if she was a pest he wanted to get rid off.

    “I had dinner already so…” He said breaking the silence, his eyes looked anywhere but her.

    “Right..” She scrambed up from the chair, her eyes filling up, she turned around to go.

    “I hope you remember this is a contract, Radhika, I don’t want this to repeat again. You won’t get more than what you signed up for or neither I.” His voice went on brutally.

    Radhika swallowed back a tremor.

    “Of course.” She flung back the words over her shoulder and walked away faster with tears streaming down her face.

    She cried sliently thinking why would he go for someone like her so plain. He would go out every week with much more beautiful women on his arm but he wouldn’t sit down at home to have dinner with her.
    She was an awkward hinderance in his life. A hinderance he would get rid of soon in twenty months.

    ***********

    Arjun body vibrated with voilence, his hand clenched on his thigh. He wanted to go and drag her down here. He wanted to rip her off the bed and get her down to his bed. He wanted to wipe out that stricken look he managed to marr her pearly skin with, when he said so brutally told her about his secretary picking up the gift.

    He did have dinner but it was hours ago, the aroma coming out from the dishes watered his mouth.

    He flipped the plated and picked a spoon to taste the rice. It was heaven. He closed his eyes and savoured the food. He three the spoon away, slid the sleeves of his shirt and gorged on the rice heartily.

    *****

    His mind reverted to the past while thinking..

    Five months back..

    He was a VIP guest at a party. It was gruelling one, he turned around a soft wooly body collided with his. His shirt inside his suit covered in a mushy wet punch.

    His eyes clashed with light brown widening one’s. The girl looked down.

    “Oh, my god. I’m so sorry I didn’t mean to…” She started to apologize profusely.

    But Arjun glared down at his shirt then at the girl. The girl took several steps back, spun around and ran away.

    Arjun stared at the running figure of the wide eyed, scared girl. The shimmery gold and pink disappeared in the crowd gathering around. He looked down at his suit. The cold punch absorbed into the white shirt dampening his skin in the sticky mess. Damn. It was an expensive Armani suit. The orange glob destroyed the delicate fabric. Extreme annoyance prickled his already blackened mood.

    He signaled with his eyes to Amal, his body guard, for change of clothes. The reliable man was already on the move talking over the blue tooth.

    He glanced around bored out of his mind already, but keeping up appearances to such events was very much important for the public image. The people around him moved out of his way. Scared rats. His adverseries were looking at him with a scowl from across the hall.

    He liked that they feared him. It fueled fire and zeal in to him to hold tighter the reins of control he had over them in market. He could pull any string of cord with his fingers and down fells their precious companies one by one without preamble. Almost every businessman here had a compulsary base with his companies and firms across the country, such that, their shares were stagnated out of reach and half of the money goes into his account. They could hate him as much as they like and also plaster his repute with countless demeaning titles, it doesn’t matter until the grabby filthy paws didn’t cross his path. He was ruthless and harsh when it came to business……

    ******

    alrighty…I’m takn a break I wil continue wit Arjun’s pov soon….I might have made spel erors n missed out words in a hurry…pls excuse it all n read….

    So How do u like it?!?! plsss telll

  1047. dipika on

    @ deepa wow yar..epi by epi ur writing is going on fabulous n interesting…. waiting for nxt!!
    @kfar awsome story dear pls ipdate soon i want to knw more n more
    @ mandy mahol poem dear…u too hav great talent!!
    @ tasnim thank sooooo much for ur encouraging n warm wishes!!
    how r u? whr were u?

    • kfar on

      Hey deary thanks so much yaaar for the support means alot dear 😀

      Thanks clara Mandyyyy love u all deepa anu tanya awesome epis..just read very cooool.

      Thenaaaaaaa wer r u?

      tasnim n seher heyyy i remember u of course thanks for praising me dear means alot n everyone here Hiiiiiiiii guys

  1048. tasnim on

    @Mandy..i am also fyn mandy by d grace of almighty…i mis u too dear…kya such may tum yad kya ya pher vul gaya bt i rmbr each evry 1 of u sis…

  1049. tasnim on

    hai@dipika fyn yar joining with al of u guys actualy i’ve preasure of stdy so cn’t come bt mis u guys a lot n check d page thats it…am vry happy that u guys rembr me…aur ek bat aapi(sis in bengali) humlok wel wisher nahi hogi to aur kn hoga…

  1052. kfar on

    Mandy hey we crossed 2000 woot wooot!!!!!! aur tumne bohot acha likha 😀

    Tasnim yaar long time se nahi dikhe
    hey Samiha yes yaar I did post a prologue but the box i cant seem understand it…der is no space giving for dialogues n paras its confusing n wen i see oder post dey are all writing nicely…can someone tell me how to give space in dat box of myeduniya?!?!

    Heyyyy mitty it did not go away yaar haha congrats..

    thena anu anaya nats,Clara, ure, Anni, shub, happy, abi, ireena, reeda, sab hiiiiiiiiiiiii all
    but @Strawberry- is it true today is da last day? wat is yaar???

    Thena Nats, Anaya kaha ho friendsssssd?!?!?

    Anu deepa Tanya awesomeeeeee episs yaar keep going

  1053. kfar on

    dipika- is it true again, tmrw the page gets deleted.

    Jayaru Abbz- hiiiii how are u all

    savera- heyyyyyyyyy kahanpeho wer r u? sab theek?

  1054. Clara on

    @kfar Amazing dear!!! Eagerly waiting for your next update. 🙂
    And please update further on the ‘Bhabhiji Ghar Par He’ site after this site closes..as it has no comments.

  1055. deepa on

    Epi 12
    starts with arjun lips s nearing radhikas neck….radhika closes her eyes….arjuns lips s touching her neck….arjun cant able to control his burning emotions….he turns radhika towards him….radhika still has her eyes closed….he cups her face and bring her lip close to his….suddenly there s knock on door….ajun and radhika looks ateachother shockingly…..arjun goes to open the door and its neil there….neil ask still ur practicing huh…dude?
    Arjun blushes and looks at radhika….

    Neil sees both of them staring at each other…and gives cunnin smile
    he says…. I came here at wrong time i think soo….

    Arjun understands wat neil upto and says its not like that v were practicing
    neil….oh….ic

    Arjun says to radhika todys practice s over….cme 2mrw,i vll b waiting for u….

    Radhika din utter a word and start to leave….neil smiles seeing radhika and start to tease arjun again and runs….arjun too runs behind him…..

    Scene2

    Radhika in classroom….thinking abt past scenes.her heart beats faster,reclling the scenes and she sweat more….her lips r shivering…

    Tittu comes and see,radhika lost somewhere…she calls her,,,bt she din respond,tittu somes and stand in front of her,radhika is fully lost with arjuns closeness

    tittu shakes up radhika just then radhika gasped frm her thoughts and ask…wen did u come?
    Tittu:am here shouting like anything for 10min,ur asking me wen i cme…hmmm
    radhika: oh….i din notice you
    tittu: hey…wt happened buddy…ru alright na?…did arjun say anything
    radhika…nothing leave me alone…
    Tittu watches radhika confused.

    Scene3

    its ni8,radhika din get sleep,she feels restless.oh….my god wt happened to me 2dy….y i seem to lost somewhere….y some kind of feeling cropping inside me,and she again starts to think arjun

    at the same time…arjun also thinks of radhika y i cant go away from tis girl….when she s with me,y i cant able to control my feelings,,,,

    both of them thinking abt eachother,without realising they are falling in love with each other crazily

    precap

    radhika tried to avoid arjun

  1057. Clara on

    Khwabo ke koi kinare nhi hote,
    Soch ke koi samandar nhi hote.
    Agar honsla ho kuch krne ka to..
    Andhi-tufan bhi hame jhukha nhi sakte..!!
    How’s it guys?? 🙂

  1058. Shub on

    Girls I created a Google plus community called ” telly friend of manmarzian” . you can all join and we can have a forum there. Login with your Google plus I’d.search for this community. Click join. Then you can update.

  1059. deepa on

    Thank u mandy,sheher clara.dipika,kfar,thena,tanya,abbs ure.unknown,swasan and many others for loving my stories buddies….a tight hug for u all for encouraging me to continue my stories yaar……love u alot buddies:*:*:*:*

  1061. tasnim on

    @kfar thanks api its a pleasure 4 me that u dn’t forget me.,.i mis u a lot…mis u a lot dear api….n u r truly ROCKING ROCKSTAR ….api…o api tumne tumhara real name abhi tak bataya nahi dis d 3rd time am asking u api…? N am do u like api(in bengali means sis people also cal apu.)..again rocking dear

  1062. tasnim on

    @kfar thanks api its a pleasure 4 me that u dn’t forget me.,.i mis u a lot…mis u a lot dear api….n u r truly ROCKING ROCKSTAR ….api…o api tumne tumhara real name abhi tak bataya nahi dis d 3rd time am asking u api…? N do u like api(in bengali means sis people also cal apu.)..again rocking dear

  1064. Thena on

    hi al my deariiiieeeessssssss……………didn get time 2 write epis 2day…..a big big sorry 1st…..maaf karna mujhe buddies………hav cum here 2 bid a gud farewel….A FINAL GOODBYE if tis page closes 2day…..wish it shudnt happen…..lets hope 4 the best girliiiieeeessssss…….but want 2 wish al my dearies a ‘very bright future ahead’………feelin emotional…..

    farha….hey m here dear…..sorry cudnt make here since mrg…..just read out ur story….am speechless….astonishin fluency…..sure u ve an xellent future….wish u gud luck….ll badly miss u dear…luv u loads…tight hug….

    deepa…u r my sweety….soooooo good ur stories are my dear…luv u loads…great imagination…ll miss u my dear….tight hug…

    strawberry…hey ii def try my dear….loads of luv 4 ur love dear…..

    hey buddies dipika,mandy,renu,anu(nithya),mitty,samiha,abi,happy,shub,jayaru,annie,aradhika.raashi,clara,abzz,savera,saji,sanju,anaya,anju,tanya,bushra,zara,natasha,nakshatra,ireena,Riya,dil,daisy,geeth,reeda,silent readers,evry 1(very sorrrryyyyy if i missed any of my deary….in God’s name didn mention 2….luv evry 1)…….luv u loads….wish u al gud luck….bid u a final good bye dearies….thaks 4 al ur support & luv……

    havn’t created an acc yet…bt soon ll & lukin 4ward 2 join u al guys if this page ends 2day….
    tat ws y the poem ysday….ws in dark aftr mmz…u came as light….bt again v r rippin apart…screamin am…wish it shud b a dream…..good bye dearies…got attached badly…..b happy evry1…always luv 4m me….tight hugs 2 u all…….BYE DEARIES….

  1065. dipika on

    @ kfar hey is true dr? omg!! nw wht will happn? plz mujhe puri story read krni hai…plz guys suggest sumthing…clara’s n shub’s suggest is too good.. wht say guys

  1066. zara on

    @deepa-amazing episodes dear. don’t have words to describe it… 🙂 🙂
    when I read your story feels like that I’m watching it on tv yaarrr 🙂 🙂
    keep going on dear waiting for next episode

  1067. Shub on

    Farha first things first. Where you going to update your stories after today? Do you write anywhere else? Please reply! I can’t miss your stories. I am dying to read them. For 3 days I am travelling. So data on and off… Didn’t realize today is last day!!

  1068. Thena on

    savera,sanju,anaya,saji,anju,tanya,bushra,zara,natasha,nakshatra,ireena,Riya,dil,daisy,geeth,reeda,silent readers,evry mmz fan………..oops names got deleted in previous post…..veryyyy sorrryyyyy….luv u loads….wish u al a bright future…thank u soooo much 4 such luv & support…..may God bless u all my dearies….

  1069. mitty on

    2000 crossed. ..We all r true fans of mmz. …All the imaginative writers u guys done an excellent job. ..keep going. … nd all my friends miss u guys. …wish u all good luck. …tight hugs to u all….luve u all friends. …feel lyk crying. …really donno Wat to write gonna miss u all badly nd terribly. …bye

  1071. tasnim on

    @thena api r u 4get me…mis u a lot dear n we all pray 4 u dear…may god bless u my dear api…u r xtremly vry nice… Pray 4 me…

  1073. Ireena on

    all my friends????I have become successful in completing my tusk in time.for talking to u guys for the last tme.though I said good bye to u,I can’t but coming here.I thought this page had closed yesterday,thank God,it didn’t.otherwise I won’t be able to meet u guys for the last time.
    AND I M BOWLED OVER WITH UR STORY FRIENDS….FARHA,NATASHA,ANU,DEEPA,THENA,ANAYA,TANYA…..(I HOPE I DIDNT MISS ANYONE,IF IT,PLZ FORGIVE ME)HATS OFF TO U ,MY WRITER FRIENDS……

  1075. Thena on

    natasha,nakshatra,ireena,Riya,dil,daisy,geeth,reeda,silent readers,evry mmz fan…..

    again these names got deleted…pls understand our emotion…its our bond…don del pls….

    @farha…its ur thena’s request….pls post ny link soon dear….hw can i cnnct wid u further…1 thing i ll b thr 2 buy ur novel at 1st dear….bt don change the name drawn together cos i don know ur name sweety…oh! feelin emotional…..means a lot tat u said me a slick writer….actu tat’s a word 4 u dear…

    my paasion is writin actu & u guys guided me really well….grateful 2 u all…know i ve 2 improve a lot bt u wer the guys 2 set me a platform 1st…..luv u looooooot deariiieeessss….

    again gud bye….wish tis shudnt b the last day buddies……

    wish u gud luck buddies…..biddin gudbye,urs thena…luv always deariiieesss….