Manmarziyan 26th August 2015 Written Episode Update

Manmarziyan 26th August 2015 Written Episode, Written Update on

The Episode starts with Arjun and Radhika’s dance. Sam tells Neil that its her first dance with him always. She dances with Neil. Tumhe pyaar hai……………Neil asks Sam what is she doing with him. Sam says dance, this girl is not right for you. Neil says are you right for me. She says not at all, I don’t love you. He says no problem, why are you ruining my love life. She says I m your friend, I care for you, that’s it. He asks why is she jealous, I don’t love you, but I promise if you love me, I m ready to compromise, you have to accept it that you love me. She says no, I don’t love you, I just love Arjun. He says that’s why you left your true love for your friend. Nandini sees Arjun and Radhika dancing and gets irked.

She sees Sam with Neil, and leaves. Sam moves back. Neil

holds her and asks her to think, if she does not want to accept, then let me go, if you don’t want to walk ahead with me, then stop leaving me behind. He moves away and goes to Sharon. Sam sees Arjun and Radhika dancing. Radhika sees Sam and says Sir.. Arjun sees Sam and leaves Radhika. Radhika leaves from there. She goes to Nandini and stops her.

She thanks Nandini and says you proved Arjun is a very nice man, you lost and I won, you wanted to insult me, and Arjun made my respect his respect, now you can’t break our marriage. Nandini says you are so innocent, Arjun did just one good work so you feel he is a nice man, when will you understand, Arjun will do what I say. Radhika says no, if he was bad, you would have told him about killing Sam and he would be with you, you know the day he knows the truth, he will leave supporting you. Nandini says whatever I do, Arjun will not leave me, even I kill Sam, you could not understand our relation.

Radhika says fake relations are not understood, but broken, like yours and Samrat, and like yours and Arjun which I will break, I told you I won’t go anywhere, you will go away from our lives, very far from Arjun, Sam and her family. Nandini says you give good speech, why don’t you understand, you can’t win doing anything, as Arjun is under my favors, I told him what all sacrifices I made for him, you say he is a good man, how will he deny anyone’s favors, I m Lord for Arjun, he will do what I tell him, what do you think, I can kill Sam and not you, I can kill you and anyone who comes in my way, whether its Arjun, you can’t win over me, you can’t fail me, I will never lose.

Radhika says I don’t have to make you lose, you have failed yourself today and smiles. Nandini turns and sees Arjun. Arjun looks on shocked. Nandini gets tensed. Radhika recalls talking to Samrat. She asks him to keep a party for her and Arjun’s marriage celebrations and she will return all happiness to Sam. Nandini asks Arjun not to listen Radhika, she is lying. Arjun says you have told all the truth today and leaves. Radhika thinks now she can move off Sam and Arjun’s truth. Sam asks Neil not to marry Sharon as he does not love her. He says right, as if you about love well, why do you talk in between my love. She says you are my friend, stop it, don’t spoil our friendship.

He says maybe this is the problem, which is stopping you from seeing the truth. He leaves. Sam says stop this nonsense and sees Radhika there. She asks what do you want now. Radhika says nothing, I came to return something, Arjun… Sam asks was he yours that you returning. Radhika says I m breaking some limitations, you always had right on Arjun and will always be. Sam asks how did her heart change. Radhika says love has explained me everything and also the pain not to get love, I can’t see your pain, you love Arjun, its true right, to get smile seeing his face, and to get tears seeing his pain… and describes true love. She says you have full right to get your love, I will go very far from Arjun’s life tonight. She goes.

Arjun comes home and sees his and Nandini’s pics. He sits crying recalling Nandini’s words. Nandini comes to him and he asks her to be away. She asks him to listen to her. He says I have heard everything, not anything more now, I regarded you Lord. She says I just said that to make Radhika go away. Arjun says Radhika made me identify you, you held my hand and made me your brother when I had no one, I did not know I m just toy for you. She says you are my life, I love you a lot, you are my brother.

He says enough, if you really loved me and regarded me brother, then please go from here, old memories are enough for me, if you stay here, those memories will also be snatched from me, just go. She says she loves him the most and cries. He says enough, either you go or tell me to go. She apologizes to him. He asks her to get away from his life.

Nandini tells Radhika that you won by making Arjun away from me. Radhika says she will win when she unites Sam and Arjun. Nandini says you will lose that day.

Update Credit to: Amena


    • mitty

      Yeah truth revealed BT v r gonna miss our favourite show rite .. next week onwards m gonna miss u guys……abi devga Annie renu natasha happy nakshatra ireena irfoz sona arjuni u guys have always special place in my heart. …doesn’t mean dat I don’t care others…I do care nd gonna miss also BT these gurls are very special coz our friendship journey started along wid dosti yaariyan manmarzian… you all. ….Thank you guys for giving me the amazing 4 months. ….

      • Nakshatra

        Thank u so much mitty…I really like u and I’ll miss u..pls anyone create fb page so that we can be in contact with each other…what say guys?

  1. Dais

    O god radhu r u dumb arjun loves u and Sam loves Neil how can u unite them well m happy to see nandini’s condition good episode

  2. alley

    Wowwwwwwwwwww mind blowing epi yaar best epi of dmy but lil sad to see arjun crying yaar bechara!!!!! Now waiting for the confessions to happen…Radhika and Sam both lost their minds somewhere…can’t understand their partners love..guys 3 days more…..atleast nandini will be dng a good job while gng…..tellin radhu the truth I believe anyway gud epi…….

  3. kfar

    Can anyone tel me izz Radhika crazy? I didn’t watch da epi, but read it here. Did she really say dat? I mean come on, she said she will unite sam and arjun. Great, she is still unware dat he likes her. Amazing. Incredible. Outstanding. She likes him but is ready to sacrifs her love….dat means she wud try nw to propl hm towards her. Sad for Arjun dat he got know. Must hv bn broken heart knowng nandini’s motives. How was da dance can anyone tel?

    • mitty

      Kfar amazing episode but I couldn’t enjoy much. ..coz aft 3 days gonna miss this show nd miss u guys. …

  4. Ireena

    someone plzz tell me what to say ABT this mind and mouth has been closed.AND I M ON THE TOP OF THE SKY.DON’T KNOW ABT FUTURE

  5. Sara

    Wow!!!! Very nyc episode!!!! Just awesome!! Love ardhika a lot!! Radhika i m waiting fr ur turn to lose!! I hate sp frm core!! Very less days more!! I will miss everything….1 ardhika 2 nesam 3 raneil 4 rasam. 5 comments here!! I love all the comments here!! Renu u r just awesome!! I started thinking positively….waiting fr ur review!! I love kfar’s stories too….nd i will also miss mitty annie happy nd riya?

  6. Rads

    Seriously s radhika crazy?? Y d hell she wants to unite sam n Arjun….neither she can see arjun’s love fr her nor she s able to see neil’s love fr sam….both girls r so unaware f their respective love…..atlast truth s reveled… A big sigh!

  7. Nice episode waiting for tomorrow’s episode but feeling v sad just 3 days left dn no Dym . Hate u sp u proved it u r nt for new generation

  8. Annie

    Victory of good over evil!!

    Loved todays episode yaar!! What a masterplan radhika superb!! Atlast arjun came to know the true colors if that witch! Nandini s acting was superb.. she too nailed it…

    Coming to the party nesam convo and eyelick was sweet and cute! O god aur kitna push karna hoga us sam ko taki use malum pare ki wo nail se pyaar jarti hai.. arjun se nhi!! When will she leave chanting I love arjun??!! (What s fooloush question only 3 episode s r left :'( :'( )

    Ardhika dance was a passionate one!! That first move ! I loved it!! Their dance was not shown completely but jitna bhi dikhaya it was very good they were looking at each others eyes throughout their dance. this is what called LOVE!! They r madly in love with each other love them :*

    When rads was saying sam about love her eyes were teary!! It seemed tgat she is saying what she feels on the other hand sam was correlating rads words with her and neils relation.. hope sam understand this at earliest else rads will go away from MY arjuns lyf!!

    I did not like at all when arjun was crying. . But it was necessary.. in this case his acting could have been a bit bettr(my opinion)

    Anywayz waiting for tomorrow’s episode hope at the last moment again nandini become cupid for Ardhika and maje them confess their love for each other!!!

  9. wow wht a epi..
    Radhu my chashani what an excellent move dear….did a great job..oh feeling bad for arjun he gets shattered by nandini truth…..
    Dont worre dear our chashani spread sweetness ur life….
    aradhika dance was mindblowing…shws sizzling chemistry between them…miss mala,teji,samrat in epi…n yaar nandini ki sachai sab k samne ani chahiye thi….
    Neil ur great yarrr mking sam realize hr feeling… n u fool sam y r u keep running that love cassette…
    plz accept the truth….want a great ending plz cvs write grant unite of aradhika…

  10. Yayy!! Finally Nandini chapter ends…chalo atleast d cvs will completely focus on both d couples’ love realisation n acceptance track for d remaining episodes..remaining:-\:-\damn just 3 episodes left:'(:'(I hate this feeling….tchah star plus.

    Today’s episode was brilliant though…n d dance was too good…one thing I hated was Arjun crying…bechara..didn’t want to see him like that:(

  11. Annie

    Only 3 more episodes left and after tgat our manmarziyan will be finished!! Nooo…nooo….. I really cant accpt it!! I am feelin lyk crying!!! Will miss u all guys

  12. tasnim

    evry epi is going vry much xciting n that is pointing us 2 d end we jst cnt imgine we al wil deeply miss dym…….hope 4 d best

  13. Jyothsna manish jain

    Y is serial at its last point… Plz continue, wanna see more…. Good serial, my favourite detail yaar… Will miss u guys… Plz don’t go…

  14. Annie

    I wanted to see more ardhika romance in their dance.. but never mind!! Itna dikhaya utna hi kafi hai..

    Amena thank u for updating so fast.. how can u make it so fast??!!

  15. yes agreed yarr…y radhu is nt accepting her feelinh …hw she can tell sam abt leaving arjun fr hr as cooly…at that moment i cnt cntrol my anger…wanted to shout on her that cant u see arjuns love for her…plz renu explain yaar if u get any positivity frm radhu abt her feeling..

  16. happy

    i am feeling like crying while arjun crying……so good boy….i love him………

    first scene dance….wow….nice to see both pair….i expected full dance of ardhika….bt in between nesam talk…irritating that part….

    rad sees sam…she stopped….but arjun didnt leave her….wow….nice…then arjun…..feeling bad for him…..

    neil leave her…she even doesnt accept her love….what sam…..pls i want to see neil smilling face….

    nandhini face superrrrrrrrrrrrrrr…………………….really liked today……..

    rad and nandhini dialogue…..nice….bt when rad make that plan with samrat…..its nice….in party samrat missing…..

    while nandhini turning scene… heart beat raised in high level……….i am standing 5 steps away from tv….bt seeing arjun…i jumped…..nice….super……wow…..

    arjun and nandhini scene…..he is crying like 10 yrs old child….felt like crying….cant see him in that scene…..go to ur rad….dont waste ur time….

    rad going away from arjun….bt he cant leave her…..ur in love with him….pls understand…both girls r not accepting their love….wts this…..

    precap…..nandhini going scene i think…..pls make rad to understand…..

    afterall one question…..after dance scene arjun and sam come closer…..what happened between them…nxt scene arjun standing behind nandhini……

  17. janaki

    Wow wht a g8 episode they showed serial can get end in super way i love this serial comparing other serials of SP

  18. anu

    thanx ameena for the update..

    hi frens, i can truly say todays episode was rocking at some moments.. ardhu’s and sam-neil’s convo while dancing and radhu making nandini to speak out the truth..

    arjun-radhu : i cant describe you as your eyes, expressions, touch and dance has spoken a lot today.. peeping into eachothers eyes to see love.. ufffuuuuu….. when he raised you with his hand and rotated that eye lock has speaken out that HOW MUCH LOVE & PASSION YOU HAVE FOR EACHOTHER..

    sam-neil : the same old story.. sam but neil eyes covered with tears, swallowing his pain…. nooooo i cant take it anymore… 🙁 🙁 …. neil i know you are crying out inside your heart.. my heart too cried out seeing your eyes wet and your pain.. 🙁 🙁

    radhu- nandini : radhu you told about fake and true relations, felt like you are also not recognising whats true relation is.. fake relations will break.. but why you are accepting to leave arjun for sam?? is your love for arjun and his love for you is fake??
    i know its too hard to accept love for your arjun sir as you think he still loves sam… but be a support in his tough time,now he is going thru.. buddy you are deadly in love with arjun.. accept it soon… TILL THEN ENJOY THE COOL BREEZE OF ARJUN’S LOVE unknowingly..

    Mann..Marziyan… 🙂 🙂 🙂 …

  19. @ Farha…n yeah Radhika actually said dat..that she will return Arjun to Sam n den go away from their lives….m still wondering what’s wrong with this girl n don’t know what to call her- naive or stupid?:-\

  20. Ira afroz

    Oh my goodness….

    What a episode????So finally nandini got exposed.But seriously i m not feeling that kind of excitement.How can i excited???Manmerziayan just left 3 episode.Ufff……it’s such a torment.

    I don’t know why can i say GOOD BYE to Manmerziayan.

    So now……Radhika will reunite Sam and Arjun which is not happening.
    Eagerly waiting how Arjun stop Radhika and confess his love.
    Guys…..I just want to Heard Arjun’s name from Radhika.And About Sam and Neil , sam must confess.what i will that we couldn’t enjoy Sam and Neil Romantic moments.Seriously….
    I would love to see Neil’s Romantic avatar which also not happening.

    May be it’ll be a Happy Ending But For ME ***Manmerziayan***will be remain a Tragedy just becoz of it’s uncalled and incompleted End.

    Anyway……how r u guys????
    And Everybody……

    • mitty

      Not in a good mood yaar our show gonna end right ….oh my god gonna miss ya very badly. …..I mentioned ur name wrongly instead of afroz I wrote irfoz sorry it was a spelling mistake ok

  21. abi

    OMG…..i can’t believe that arjun know the truth……..

    party plan….shows that heroins are also inteligent….:P……..(bcoz…every time…..heroins r feeled by villains)……i expect more emotions 4m arjun…… usual sam irritates today also……..but i like her……

    Becoz of time only some incompletion…….but precap is really superb…….nandhu words to radhu s worthy……anyway i’m happy becoz atleast last 3 episodes for ardhika nd nesam….in that i want lots of luv for ardhika eachother…..

    But really i’m going to miss my fav show..nd my mmz frnds HAPPY,MITTY,DEVGA,ANNIE,NATASHA,NAKSHTRA,RENU,ANU,KFAR,IREENA,AFROZ ND ALL OF U GUYS,….its a frustrating one………..

  22. lreena

    I know guys, my opinion may nt match with u.But I wanted to happen just it.if rad would have said that she loves arjun,sam would react. Now sam herself will unite ardhika.But I must sayI NEVER WATCHED SUCH A PURE STORY OF FRIENDSHIPS EXCEPT MANMARZIAN

  23. Annie

    Guys radz still think that sam truely loves arjun and she is bcmg a barrier btwn dem.. remember what rads said to sam.. “when u love someone u can do anything fir them” in this casr rads live both sam snd arjun.. but she is unawate of the fact that arjun love her not sam.. so radz thought not to b a stone in arjun and sams path.. she will live her lyf with her love gor her arjun sir !!

  24. kfar

    @Ireena @Mandy @raashi @Annie @Riya….guys show gonna end soon. Can’t believe its over so soon 🙁

    Thanks for Amena and every comment got to know about da epi well even if i couldnt see it.

    @ireena i knew tel by wtchn shws n al and few of my friends knw da language in ap every1 knws it. Wer r u frm (if u dnt mind me askn)
    Gonna cmpt my stry only here 😀

    I hate it da shw is endn. Gld dat nandinis truth came out.

  25. happy

    bt feeling bad guys……after watching serial….my face filled with smile… today…there is no smile……serial ending….3 days only…….sp…..i kill u…..nw i am watching ly manmarziyan….i leaved all other serials….i cant face another heart break…..after 29…..i never watch any serial…..i miss u friends….

    dont want to comment again…..sry….bye……………………….dnt forget this happy…..

  26. Ira afroz

    Ha ha ha ha….same here.Annie.
    3 days kafi nahi yeh Ardhika moments ke liye….

    U know i m uploading Ardhika’s all moments and episode. I will watch those Thrilling and memorable moments after Ending Manmerziayan.

  27. abi



  28. Honana

    It’s my visualisation …
    So next scene…
    Rads tells Sam that Arjun is urs n Sam n Arjun will share each other that they don’t love eachother infact love their partners (rads n Neil) n leave to meet them

  29. kfar

    @raashi- i think she married arjun knowing dat he and his siter r togther n gonaa kill sam but then she gets knw it’s only nandini, arjun isnt even aware bout it n also she kinda thought he got feelngs for sam a little and sam is obviously her true love hehe so she got off nandini destryng her plan to make arjun destroy sam…so now remains sam love. Wat shuld she do? Make arjun fal inove wit sam.dats da motive of hr life coz she destroyed sam’s almost marraige. Now she feels guilty so cms friend duty first dan her love…sacrifc..only sam culd help here..

  30. lreena

    Guys, check the insta pic Monica sehgal above. I posted it there by mistake.
    @Farha,I m A NRI of present living at wb

  31. kfar

    Mitty : gonna mis u too. You hv given us good spoilers always. Miss happy too n Riya who always was to croon mmzyn songs.
    Sara- thanks ya means a lot. Wil ms u too.
    Anu-greatttttttt it:)

    • anu

      thanq kfar… but totally frustrated abt the ending… 🙁 🙁 .. donno what we all will do after 29th… 🙁 🙁

  32. Annie

    I have already started missing mmz from now!! So I hve started watchibg frm the 1st epi in hotstar!! Atleast here sp cant do anything!!
    Today I had off so I tuned in to svs and saw that onlyn channels r being launched where trp cmpition is much tuf!! Mmz had a good onlyn trp so why cnt sp telecast the show onlyn??!! Atleat there mmz will not have to tolerate the humiliation of low trp due to those crap nonsence illogical saas bahu serials!

  33. kfar

    @all Feeling the judai song from da mv badlapur…yep i goin dat drastic 🙁
    Dedicating da sng to all and specially 2 da show which made us cm together n inspired me 2 write a story here.

  34. Ireena

    we r leaving each other very soon.many of u guys made me happy by liking, replying my comments.perhaps I didn’t write anything but I felt It Really. I will remember u guys ever ?????

  35. chinna

    It was really an amazing episode…finally nandu truth came out…i really enjoyed the dance of two partners..radz was looking stunning in that black dress..and arjun was so handsome…

    Neil-sam.. Firstly a big round of applause for neil to make sam realize but asual sam proved herself as brainless..whenever sam says that ‘I don’t love u and love only arjun’..neil’s heart is made into thousands pieces and we can feel his pain in eyes…how i can explain neil..he is true of radhika and great lover of sam..his ubconditional love for sam so awesome..and he acts very became big fan of neil..

    Rad-sam:i liked the conv btw radz and sam…today i really feel love for arjun in radz eyes and pain of losing we know radz can do anythng for sam..our radz still thinks that sam loves arjun so she wanna scarifice her love frnd..we hardly get this type of frnds..hatsoff to radz..when radz was explaing abt true love..she was remembering all the moments with arjun.. And on tthe other sam was recalling her moments with neil..i hope will realize soon and make all other life easy…

    Eagerly waiting for the confession of their love both pairs… And the friendship btw radz and sam…some beautiful moments btw arjun and radz…i guess if radz call her arjun sir as arjun..that would be enough for arjun to make feel her love on him..

    Will miss u mmz

  36. anu

    sam comes running to meet radhu after the party while radhu starts to leave.. sam calls out radhika loudly, but couldnt meet up.. sam calls arjun to meet her, its important.. arjun doesnt want to go to meet her and searches for radhika..

    nandini di packs up her luggage and starts to leave taunting radhika. she sees radhu and says you won today by making my arjun away from me. radhu replies ill win when i unite sam&arjun. nandini di says that day is the day your loss, not win..

    radhu goes to her room to freshen up and searches for divorce papers.. but couldnt get them and sits thinking about nandini di’s words.. our gudiya is a detective na, she thinks y nandini di said that, whats going on?any new plan?

    meanwhile arjun knocks the door seeing her, she gets alert and asks him does he want anything? he didnt utter a word and sits up on bed inclined on his back..

    radhu sees his heart broken and asks arjun sir, sorry, mein eh sab jaan buchkar nahi kiya.. i am trying to introduce a new arjun inside you to you itself.. sorry, if i did wrong..

    its morning…
    arjun-radhu find them close to eachother on bed. they feel loved and dont wanna get away from eachother and turns to opposite sides.. radhu getsup and asks arjun to get ready as they have to go to temple.. arjun gets ready and they start to leave to temple..arjun remembers their journey to lonawala & with no bilief on god asked to save radhika when she met with an accident.. they step into the temple…..

    sam waits for arjun and arjun wont go to sam.. sam thinks he cheated me like this before and expresses her anger out.. she then sees a couple passing by and remembers her beautiful journey of finding love to kandalwala with neil..
    (they actually wanna go to lonawala for ad shoot location, then radhu informs them that arjun sir& the team are coming to lonawala, so nesam change the place… i think you guys remember)..

    sam remembers all the moments they spent there and the proppsal of neil and wants to confess her love to neil..

    uffuuuuu a new sam is found now.. lover doll…lot of imagination and thinking of beautiful colors to visualise all the above mentioned scenes… 😛 😉 😉 ♥♥♥♥ …..

    after the puja arjun and radhika starts to leave and there suddenly rain starts… so they stay in temple standing beside eachother and looking into their eyes.. arjun mind blinks of his old memories when he askd god to save radhu from death and then also it rained..

    he turns fully to her and holds her hand and takes kumkum and places on her fore head and says RADHIKA I LOVE YOU,PLEASE BE Mrs.ARJUN MEHRA FOR ALL THE YEARS TO COME.. radhu looks confused and finds his true love in his eyes and searches for her heart feelings.. she accepts his love…

    with happiness he streches his hand forward in the rain and welcome the shower of pitter patter rain drops and sprinkles few droplets on radhus face..

    recalling loss for nandu, and happiness for radhu,
    arjun moves forward to drench in rain to flow down his sad tears of loss and for happiness to come in his life..

    radhu calls him out as ARJUN, come under the shade.. he gets silent and stunned and mesmerized by the call and runs fast with passion to reach radhu to hear it again.. He asks her to call him ARJUN again.. she calls and he hugs her tightly and whispers I LOVE YOU RADHIKA in her ears…

    ♥♥♥ ….

    Mann…Marziyan ♥♥♥♥

      • renu

        anu,…nice prediction ,..loved it

        but i have 1 wish,…i wanna see arjun n dadaji encounter (atleast 4 1 scene),….

        i do predict some scenes about future epi,…but i swear 2 never predict anything cox i wanna enjoy the last 3 epi with full surprise 2 cherish its memories as its the last daily soap 4 me na,..

        i miss u yaar,….

      • anu

        me too wished that encounter in the last episode.. in previous updates i mentioned dadaji blesses the couples etc………….

        i’ll tell you y im interested in prediction because it has just 3days left.. dont wanna miss this show… this comments pages will be active for 14days after show completes.. atleast til that we can enjoy rather than thinking about the ending.. felt very disappointed with the sp’s deicison… 🙁 🙁

  37. arohi

    Radhika is expressing her point of view on true love, which she feels for arjun sir n Sam while hearing the description is thinking of Neil. Radhika thinks Sam loves arjun n arjun cud b in lv wit Sam by her effort n she can fulfil her dosti and at the same time live her life with her hrt filled with true lv 4 arjun sir who is far above her status n not b the barrier behenji. Nandini will b hopefully the one to tell her the true lv of aradhika

  38. arohi

    Arjun n Sam came close n rad left. But our arjun luks for radhika wen abt to dance or b close to Sam. He notice radhika is gone. Felt a heartbeat just skip. Went to look for her n heard the convo

  39. Hey all again I will really miss Farha, Anu , thena , Ireena , renu , Natasha,
    Nakshatra, Dipika , happy , Annie, Raashi , n all others I dinn mntion bcoz der r lot of ppl so cudn’t remember !! So remaining ly 3 more days to go I will really ????

  40. Priya

    Wow!! Todays episode was amazing.. Finally nandini’s true identity is revealed. I hope radhika and arjun again come back together and this show does not end. Manmarziyan is the most awesome show on television.. it should not end ?

  41. Anu I loved it yaar seriously maar daala apne cmnt se it was like mein puri story hi padlee ??

    Thanx 4 d great mesmerising writing of d story ???

    • renu

      me too miss u dear,….

      i dont wanna think about the ending as i always tries 2 think positive na,…but wat 2 do,..good things ll never last long n our manmarziyan s an example 2 this,…

  42. renu

    @kfar- i posted my reply comment 4 u but it dinn get posted,…n i never 4get u darling,..i wanna read ur story 4m starting continuously,…if possible post me the link where u posted it continuously,…i can find it easier 2 read after mmz end yaar,..i love reading stories,…after reading it even m ready 2 post my pov about ur story,…can u give me that chance dear,….

  43. renu

    hiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii friends,…

    @happy,mitty,mandy,ireena,thena,afroz,natasha,nakshatra,sanju,kfar,dipika,raashi,anu,annie, sara,aradhika,… n all my friends including silent readers,….thank u 4 reading my comments n m happy that i entertained u all a bit with my take on each episodes,…i gonna miss u all after sat,…but v ve 2 face the reality r8,…so,as my bestie always says 2 b strong 2 face any hurdles in my life,…cox m a sensitive girl,…n i remembered her words,…n now i made up my mind 4 final march yaar,…thanx 4 all ur love n support,….

    nemi,…just 3 days left n this story has huge potential 2 write n analyse in depth which i cant do 4 any other soap even u asked me 2 do so….earlier i watched jhansi ki rani but never write anything n i tried watching some soaps but it dinn impress me like mmz n i stopped watching it within few months but mmz makes me 2 write sth,…m feeling sorry 4 not taking ur suggestion but ill try 2 avoid some unnecessary things in my comment dear,…

  44. kfar

    @Heya all, it’s me again 🙂

    So, updating the story from where I left off. (Please read from previous epi’s comment section to know where I left off)

    Chapter-2 (Viren almost collides his car with Radhika’s body frozen shocked in the middle of the road)

    Radhika was sure now. Viren was certified bipolar.

    She still was muttering but that’s she got interrupted in her hurried walk.

    “Get in the car. I’ll take you home.” Viren’s firm voice made her to turn around surprised.

    “You’ll take me home?” She asked, raising an eyebrow in question, confused that she did not hear him properly.

    His poker face did not say anything instead his jaw grounded. Oh, right. He is going to drive like a maniac showing Radhika the gates of hell while driving. No. Never. He was not driving her and she was not sitting in that car with him.

    He gave her an irritated look and folded his hands.

    Oh, no. She would never get in the car with him.

    “’s fine. I’m good. I have good two feet and really it’s no…tt.” She started, but the word stuck on her tongue as a stutter, because right, he charged at her.

    He kept charging at her until he was just mere inches away.

    “Get in the car or else I’m gonna haul your ass in their myself.” He grounded out the words through clenched jaw.

    Ohkay. He really was on a period.

    Radhika shut her trap, meekly walked up to his car very reluctantly, slid into it, closed the door and strapped on the seat belt. All the while nine percent bewildered at his change of moods. One percent of her mind strongly suspicioned that he was indeed out of a mental institution. Just released from therapy.

    She saw that he got in the car, clutched the gear, moved the wheel and turned the car into thankfully and surprisingly a smooth drive.

    There was a very awkward silence in the closed space of the car, but it broke like thin ice shield when Viren’s deep sharp voice penetrated through in with his very strange statement.

    “You should cut down library work.” He stated but not asked.

    Radhika moved her surprised gaze at him. He was clutching on the wheel tight. He looked nonchalant and uncaring.

    “Ah..I can’t.” She replied short.

    Though she wondered at the try of small, she was surprised that he knew she worked late in the library and was it caring she heard in his voice. The small amount it, pleased her.

    The next words of his momentarily paralysed her mind and also her body.

    “Why don’t you take the money from them, my parents, for tuition fees.” He stated thoughtfully, softly.

    Radhika didn’t know how to answer to that one. How did he know she was struggling hard to pay for uni fee? How did he even know she refused the money offered to her by his parents?
    Frankly she was finding this all bizzare him talking about her personal life without him being mean, rude, sarcastic and hurtful. This side of him, the shockingly gentler version of his several shades was truly unhandable, if it’s a word to describe him, she thought it wouldn’t enough at all.

    So, Radhika reacted to the only way she reacts when talking to Viren. She became snappy.

    “Oh, I don’t know, because only days ago I was a charity case of the house, a useless piece of furniture, and now I’m suddenly a sad sympathetic figure , a sorry case that you found a tiny inch of heart in that iron cage, and you thought, why not give the poor girl some more charity, yeah?” She went on continually, with raised voice, with fast beat of heart, with heaving of chest, she let out the resentment she felt from all those painful years till now.

    She waited. Turned to the right in her seat with baited breath for him to explode in curses. She waited for him to blaze at her then throw her out in the cold all alone in the dark.

    Good, that way, she could feel Arjun following her from behind. That way she could see his hoodie covered face from the glass window of her room. That way she could feel, she had someone that cares about her. About her safety. Wrote a poem to her. To guide her out of darkness. That someone, would follow her in the dark to make her feel safe. Make her feel secure, like mom and dad did while they were alive…….

  45. kfar

    @renu-feels like im on top of the world that u like my story, honoured, humbled 😀 i lv ur reviews n comments verrrrrrry much.
    Greeeeat yaar ur making my day for sayin dat u’l review my story. Yes i already hv the parts wi me m in da procss of putting it somehwere.will surely yaaar u dont need my assent..i fell giddy thanks:)

    @ireena- dont feel words dat ur tellng me dat- my story on tv-feels great on the top of the world, i had cut short my story to talk to u n say thanks feels awesome 😀

  46. kfar

    (had typed out a huge part but it got deleted. It killed me dat it got deleted but anyway typin again)

    Radhika waited with baited breath for him explode. React. Say something to the angry words she blurted out. It was frankly a word vomit. When she gets made she gets it out in words. Rude words, but he remained silent. Dangerously silent.

    But then again, his already clenched jaw clenched some more. Yikes! His jaw and teeth would fall off altogether with all the grinding he was doing since.

    Radhika’s gaze then roved over his flexing hands. His hands tightened on the wheel. The nails whitened, making his fingers colourless of blood. She gulped hard, a lump was lodge itself in her throat which made the inhaled breath get stuck there. She had successfully managed to wake up a sleeping tiger with her frustated words.

    He did not turn to her but muttered low under his breath.

    “Shit, stubborn, aren’t you.” He mumbled.

    The powerless and strange words lead Radhika to visibly sag back in her seat relieved. The pent up breath whooshed out in relaxated exhalation.

    She got confirmed of this again. Radhika could not decipher anything about this guy. How he reacted to what. No, not an inch of idea. Nada. He was like a neat blackboard, no imprints of previous impression chalk to know what had been written before. Each time he surprised her with his nature. She did not know what to make of him.

    So, she reacted as the same way as before.

    “Oh, you haven’t seen how stubborn I can get, baby.” She taunted his sneer word of the morning to his face.

  47. kfar

    But Radhika did not in the craziest of her dreams made her listen to what happened next. Surprised and shocked but words did not come any closer to what she and her eyes encountered a second later.

    He did glance at her in a smooth glide of eyes at her but he went back to driving straight eyed again. She squinted to observe more clearly. His mouth turned into the corners a little.

    A second later and Radhika thought she imagined but she watched in slow motion. He threw his head back and laughed hard. Not a chuckle. Not a smooth sneer snort. Not a imagined one but a belly rumbling, mirthful, throw back laugh. A laugh which cleared the tensed up look over his hard face lines. The sharp angles smoothed into a boyish joy. The laughter lines around his eyes visible. His throat rumbled chuckles and Radhika’s heart pulled. When was the last time he laughed like this. With pure mirthful exaltation, with uncared and unrestricted bounds. What made him pull up a mask always?

    Radhika knew from short whispers of the many family functions she attended, Viren was never with his parents all his childhood until he was twelve. He had been with his uncle, then later he came back to his family. She didn’t know why he was with his uncle? How his parents could give him away like that? To a relative that too. But, whatever the circumstances, Viren was deeply affected. He had been. Or his attitude said, it was not an easy childhood.

    He was justfying his predicament through his meaness and resentment for leaving him like that. All alone. It scarred his entire teenage life and now she heard that he was going to leave the house and live separetly.

    She looked at his now calm face. Wondering about his disturbed past.

    His chuckles lightened and deep sense silence fell. It was not awkward now. Radhika too lost her parents and he lost his childhood. They connected somewhere. In pain and agony. They were like incomplete jigshaw puzzles. Alone in life. Alone in miseries.

    His now light pleasant voice broke into the fog of memories.

    “Got a humour in that pretty head, must say, it’s refreshing than the dumb look your face has usually.” He muttered wryly.

    With that comment, the smiled wiped out of lips and the sympathy she was feeling for the poor alone guy vapourized in thin air.

    She glared at his now turned face, turned around her head straight and muttered curses all the way of the cae ride.
    It made the devil chuckle more in amusement……..

  48. renu

    hiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii friends,……

    What 2 explain about 2day’s episode yaar,….such an emotional episode,….its a much needed episode 4 the last episode n i loved monica’s n nandhini’s expressions so much than ahem in 2day’s epi,…may b its a turning point episode 4 their finale,….thank u cvs 4 giving such an amazing serial 4 us n hate u star plus 4 ignoring every1’s voice 2 save this show,….

    I wanna discuss sth about SAM-RADHIKA 2day,….so,i just point out what i loved in male leads in 2day’s epi yaar,…loved neil 4 his continuous attempt 2 put some sense in sam’s brain,…n felt broken by sam’s attitude of ‘i love arjun’,…oh baby wen she ll get rid of this’i love arjun’ chant yaar,..m totally fed up with this dialogue like radz dialogue,..’who s nandhini di ‘ after lonovla track,…its k coming back 2 neil,….m really impressed wen u said atleast leave me 2 move on in my life stop chasing me,…nice neil,…but i honestly admit that i felt ur pain dear n shravan s the show stealer yaar,..he nailed it man,….i want sam 2 kneel b4 u n confess her love n also claim 4 ur 4giveness 4 her cold behavior neil,…

    Arjun,…sorry,…2day s the black day in ur life that u love 2 persons most in this world n both of them gonna leave u all alone,…even ur sister’s betrayal ll not affect u as much as ur wife’s separation yaar,…so try 2 act promptly as u knew ur wife’s stupidity at times,,confess ur love b4 all n mend the broken relationships of her family n friendship yaar 2 win back ur love tat’s the ly way 2 redeem urself n claim ur love without any rejection 4m her,….

    k friends,…now m coming 2 OUR GIRLS,….


    friends,…i felt SAM is totally confused about her feelings,….on 1 side arjun pinned her in wash room n confessed he loves her n not radhika n he s ready 2 divorce her 4 sam n radhika also confirms her that arjun dinn love her,….so,she thot that arjun dinn love radz,….n at the same time neil s continuously provoking her hidden feelings 4 him n she was never ready 2 accept herself that her friendship s fake n she loves her best friend as life partner,…which s a big thing 2 accept,…so,she tried 2 confirm that she loves arjun alone n not neil,….that makes her 2 chant her ‘i love arjun ly’ mantra,….but 2day radz explanation 4 true love ll definitely brought some diff in her as she felt guilty wen radz asked ‘u love arjun truly right’,..she never nod s 4 her qn,,,,
    She even started 2 figure out whom she really loves arjun r neil,….So,Radz words ll help her 2 see the world with her open eyes after a long time n rescue herself 4m the dream world which she lives in by cheating herself,….


    Friends,..i ve 2 talk more about radhika,..i already said i love this character more than all cox of her strange qualities,..

    1.She s ready 2 bring light in other’s life by destroying herself like a candle,….
    2.She ll never ready 2 leave a thing without completing it inspite of watever hurdle comes in her way 2 stop her mission in achieving her goal as it may be verbal abuse, physical manhandling, emotional blackmail r putting her self respect in disguise,…

    v cant find such selfless person rarely who never think about themselves 4 a minute,…that’s the reason she loved sam as a best friend who identifies her talent n indirectly encouraged her 2 live her dream,…if sam dinn come in her life,she ll b marrying some1 without living her dream atleast 4 a short period,….So,she felt sam as her priority n she knew sam s a short temper n her slap,her insults her repeated humiliation had least effect on her rather than her fear of losing her friendship,…

    She married Arjun,…who wanna destroy other’s life 4 his beloved ones,…He s exactly opposite 2 radz n tat’s y i said this couple as iconic epic couple seen so far,…k coming 2 radz,…Her marriage s just a SAVE SAM mission 4 her,..she married cox of sam n she never thot that she ll fall 4 arjun cox still he s Sam’s love b4 her eyes nothing else,..If nandhini dinn revealed her plan of killing sam,then radz ll never ve a thot of marrying arjun,…I already said that she s too young 2 experience wat love s as she herself replied arjun that she dunno what love is but she knew that every relationship starts with friendship,….(during bandage scene)

    She tries 2 bring goodness hidden in arjun as she find himself true b4 her n ve u think y she dinn try 2 change nandhini r saral instead of arjun cox she some how started feeling goodness in arjun after arjun wrapping duaptta around her 2 save her 4m creepy male eyes in kandala dress shop,his attempt 2 save her 4m accident,then his attempt 2 save her 4m unwanted marriage with saral n also the man who saved her dignity wen saral molested her,…

    She showed her cold behavior 2wards arjun after marriage as his goodness vanished 4m her eyes temporarily cox of sam’s love but she found within a day that arjun s not being at fault 4m his side n its all nandhini’s game,..where arjun s just a toy with her key,..& after noticing arjun’s true heart wen he saves mala,…she felt its needed 2 save arjun 4m his evil sister who manipulated him r8 4m his childhood n her priority changes as she almost 4got sam 4 some time,…she purely started feeling 4 him as she wants happiness in his life which he lost cox of his sis’s stupid revenge,..she tried 2 prove arjun wat’s the truth s not 4 sam but 4 her,….

    As i already discussed that arjun’s words in their SR that she s a behanji n not classy girl had a huge impact in her life now,…though arjun said those words just 2 assure her that he ll not force himself on her at any situation but radz believed his words as his opinion about her,..these words dinn affect her on their SR but it starts hitching her after her grown up feeling 2wards him,..that’s the reason she straightaway asked him about his opinion on her n his challenge 4 marriage consummation but arjun’s words r not satisfied though he said his real opinion about her this time, she felt that he said all those things just 2 reach sam,…she even noticed their closeness in office n neil too warned her the same in the morning,…

    But after their bed room scene,she realized she has some feelings 4 arjun,..,but after seeing the divorce paper n the way arjun continuously explained her 2 divorce him made her feel that she was rejected by him,…but at once wen he asked her 2 speak out other reason 4 not signing the divorce papers n he even ready 2 leave everything 4 her makes her scary,…that’s the reason she said,’i dinn ve such status r such courage 2 think so’,…i love this dialogue so much,….

    this 1 dialogue speaks a volume about her feelings 4 arjun n also she confessed her love indirectly,…i already discussed about this dialogue but 2day i understood wat it acctually means 4m radz pov,…She indirectly said 2 arjun that she never matches him with his status,his knowledge r his age(acc 2 story,sam s 23,radz s 21,arjun s 25,neil s 23 r 24),..she already hear middle class girl,behanji type, n many remarks about her,…so,she thot that sam s a perfect match 4 him in his life in all the ways be with his status r his knowledge r watever,….Acc 2 radz,he s a super hero n she s just a common girl living with dreams,…

    Further she actually scared of calling him as her own,…even in their intimacy,..arjun scared her a lot by posturing qns such as ‘sth happened,come near me’,…She thot that he ll get any girl wen he looks at them, her inferior thots scared her 2 express her feelings 4 him n tat’s y she said she dinn ve such courage,…friends, she never thot about sam but she thot about herself not worthy 4 arjun as a life partner 4 him,….

    Though she knew arjun dinn loves sam but she believed sam’s true love ll change arjun n she just wanna change arjun fully by revealing his sis’s real face n leave him,..that ly he wish her 2 do na,….she ll gain wat she wants her sam ll b safe marrying arjun n arjun ll lead a normal life with the classy girl like sam n his wish of leaving him completely by ending their fake marriage,…Here radz dinn knew anything about neil’s feelings,…

    During pen scene too,arjun talking about love letter n she meant divorce papers n arjun understood wat she meant,…tat depressed him with her rejection of his feelings n he got relieved wen she said she ll never sign inspite of his continuous rattling about leaving him completely which he never meant as she thots,…he just used it as reverse psychology 2 bide her with him…..,She knew this marriage ll not stand 4 a long with so much hatred 4 her 4m the persons who matters her the most,…its arjun’s mistake of never confessing anything except yday he said she s his wife n he never said he loves her n he just meant that her respect ll also affect his respect as she s his wife b4 this world according 2 her,…but arjun said those words 4m his heart with pure love which she again failed 2 understand,….she saw his care as his good person in him,…so,now she badly needs 2 reveal nandhini’s truth ly 2 arjun not b4 the world cox it ll affect his respect n his honor which she never wants 2 happen tat’s the reason she hides the truth b4 samrat n neil,…

    Arjun on the other hand loves her deeply but hides his feeling well b4 her,..he confused her by showing his mixed feeling as she thot those inklings as his goodness n sympathy over her,…He wants her badly cox he wants 2 lead a normal life without being longing 4 love entire life n seducing others without any emotions like bony r sam,….He wants platonic love,…but he tries 2 seduce radz just 2 get reciprocating feelings 4m her,…but radz thot arjun doing all this just 2 scare her n nothing else,….

    Now she completed her mission successfully that brought a big smile over her face after seeing arjun behind nandhini but in a glimpse of a second,…she felt bad 4 arjun,…so,she went 2 sam 2 assure her that she returning her husband 2 her n she should take care of him whom she loves most n 2day she learnt what love is n she wanna give what arjun wants acc 2 her as he constantly reminded her 2 leave him,,she decided 2 do that 4 his sake n her next attempt s 2 join his hands 2 sam just 2 bring a lovely life which he wants with a classy girl like sam acc 2 her n 2day she witnessed sam’s depressed face,..v knew she was depressed cox of neil with pagli…n arjun too left radz after seeing sam,…so,she felt that watever she thot s true n sam n arjun ly made 4 each other acc 2 her,…hence she left him n continued her mission just 2 leave arjun forever which they want whom she love the most in this world(arjun n sam),…

    2day she felt rejection n felt the pain of love being not reciprocated as she s still clueless wat arjun feels 4 her as arjun s clever in hiding his feelings b4 her n no need of accusing radz as the fault s at the persons whom she loves the most in her life now(arjun n sam),….Btw friends,…2day i felt that nandhini turned good at last cox of costume change n her dialogues as nandhini s the ly 1 who knew arjun’s feelings 4 radz,…if she revealed this 2 radz then she might reconsider her decision but i doubt she ll believe nandhini now,…

    Asusual dinn read wat i wrote,kindly bear with my mistakes any,…ve a nice day guys,….

  49. hi friends mandy .mitty ,renu,ireena,ira,kfar,arohi,riya,nakshtra,aradhika,anu n all who cmment here m going to miss u guys badly…this cmmntng n sharing view abt our mmz is became part of my day…cant live without it….
    jst 3 days left fr mmz m very sad..
    .my mom n sis r teasing me fr being sad for shw bt they wont understand my heart situation… feeling like part of my heart is gng away frm me….Watching mmz i wanna see more n more aradhika….Guys Thanks for being the part of life though its for short span n on virtual world… Gonna miss u guys…hope that we will meet again to share our views on another shw like mmz..

    • Ira afroz


      I also hope so we’ll meet again in future.But dear…..It’s bitter Truth there will be know Show As like Manmerziayan.U know It’s a amazing show with all brilliant Actors…..

  50. Natasha

    I read that this page willl be upudated till 2 weeks after ending mmz. So I think we can at least comment till that day? What’s ur opinion abt this?
    I am very happy that arjun came to know abt nandini’s true face.

    Again, I will really miss u.

  51. kfar

    Updating from where I left off, I’m sleepless, hungry, bleary eyed yet my finger don’t stop tyin. Wht is it about wrtin that makes me go crazy. Any way shutting up and updatin…So, here we go….

    Chapter- 2( Read the before story in dis page guys to get an idea)

    Radhika sat there fuming in distaste at his amused constant chuckles. Glad that her situation can be found spectacularly amusing for somebody.

    A minute late the came to a halt. The ride amazingly good and smooth. Radhika turned to thank him. She opened her mouth to say the words.

    “Get out.” Viren said harshly.

    Radhika closed her mouth flushing hot. Great, he was back to his angry self. She sat there still unable to move or speak.

    “Out of the car. Now.” His voice raised a pitch irritated high.

    Alright, alright, jeez, calm down angry daisy, she thought and hurried out of the car.

    She stood by the side, looking at the car, which zoomed fast on the road, raising a little dust in it’s wake. Radhika sighed at walked inside the house.

    She got in and looked around to see not a soul in the hallway. It was already 8PM, and she hungry as hell. Viren and Misha’s were still at work as usual, she didn’t know where Nisha was. Sighing more heavily than before, she walked up the stairs slowly.

    She missed walking with Arjun today. Looking at him follow through short peers would have made her day, but if not for Viren. She fumed, unlocked her door and threw her bag in the corner of the room.

    She moved around and opened the glass window, to look outside into the road. Nope. Not a soul. Perhaps, he saw her get in a car. It was strange having the silent prince of her fanstasy to stalk her through the darkness. He was as mesmering in reality than from in her dream.

    Radhika shook her head, removed free her hair from the tight held up ponytail over her head. Sliding her hands in the tresses, she groaned tiredly.

    Opening the cupboard, she got out a pair of blue denim short and a pink tank top. She got into the shower.

    Ah, the shower really drained all the tension accumulated in her body. The hot drizzle over her head calmed the senses and she felt incredibly sleepy.

    Radhika decided to take a nap, it would refresh her a little. So, she got into the warm covers and moaned in sweet relief, within minutes she out as aif dead battery. Falling in deep sleep………


    (Yawnnn, guys, I feel sleeeeeeeepy too hehehe)

    So, how did you find the story parts?!?

  52. Riya

    Radhika (Monica Sehgal) – Sam (Kashmira Irani) complete Arjun (Ahem Sharma) -Neil’s (Shravan Reddy) wish confessing their love to them in Manmarziyan

    Nandini plans get spoiled to break Arjun and Radhika’s marriage but she herself gets exposed to Arjun.

    Arjun throws Nandini out from his house.

    Radhika also decided to leave Arjun and unite Sam and Arjun as Sam loves Arjun.

    Radhika believes that Arjun will keep Sam happy now.

    On the other hand, Sam is upset knowing Neil is leaving Birdsong and then Radhika tells her about Neil loves Sam a lot but he never told her.

    Radhika makes Sam realizes her love for Neil

    Sam realizes Neil is really good for her and she stops Neil leaving Birdsong.

    Neil tells Sam that he will stop only after she accepts her love for him.

    Sam tells Neil that she always loved him but could not realizes her concern for him is actually her love.

    Sam finally says I Love You to Neil.

    Furthermore, Arjun is broken down to know that Radhika is leaving him and stops Radhika.

    Radhika is happy to see that Sam got her true life partner and she confesses her love to Arjun.

    Radhika tells Arjun that she loveshim while Arjun also exprsees his feelings for Rdhika.

    Lovely pair Nisam and Aradhika finally have union and make happy ending of Dostii Yaariyan Manmarziyan.

  53. kfar

    @Anu- good one yaar i loved it 🙂

    @Natasha- Oh dats great news. Wil mis u too.
    @Riya- dats great endin.

  54. abi

    hey guys………….

    i don’t know……why i m feeling like crying…….after all it s a serial only know….i really feel like dejected……why they end this show……

    always hearing…..khwahishon song……in repeat mode…….it s the most played song in my playlist……..i ll miss u my frnds….:-(((((((((((((((((((((((((((((((((((((((((((((((((((((((((((((((((((((((((((((((((((((((((((((((((((((((((((((((((((((((((((((((((((((((((((((((((((((((((((((

  55. Renu amazing describe radhu’ s state if mind…really ab tak u was thinking that radhu lost her mind so she cant see arjuns feeling…bt u made it crystal clr to me renu….Radz confussed hai arjun k feelings baare me…so arjun u hav to take part n confess ur feeling….

  56. Natasha

    Hot news! hot news! Hot news!
    Just saw a promo of mmz on tv. Star plus is going to arrage a hour special final episode 4 mmz on next sunday 30august 2015. This is according to singapore’s star plus and I don’t know wherther it will also telecast in other countries too.

  57. saji

    Anu,,,Renu…huge applause for d way u imagine…connect n convey things thru words….great talent…keep going…

  58. anu

    thanq so much dipika, riya, annie, abhi, me 🙂 , arohi, renu, mandy, kfar……

    sorry if i missed anyone.. miss you all frens…

  59. Hi all hws it goin ??
    Anu ur really awesome !!?

    Renu u were cool in dat cmnt like??

    Riya loved d what can I say ws??

    Hi Farha I m really like thinking dat 3 days to go ????

    N Farah n Anu Ela vunnaru ???

  60. Riya

    Khwaaishon Pe Likhi
    Dil Ki Yeh Arziyaan
    Kaisi Yeh Manmarziyan
    Daastaan Ek Nayi
    Khwaabon Pe Saji
    Bekaid Manmarziyaan


    Daastaan..Ek Nayi…………

    Nafraton Mein Mili
    Tu Muhje Iss Tarah
    Dil Yeh Sambhal Na Sakha
    Teri Baaton Mein Hai
    Ajab Sa Nasha
    Badli Yeh Manmarziyan

    Daastaan..Ek Nayi……..

  61. kfar


    Updating from where I had left off. Read if interested, if not even then read coz now ardhika chemistry going to be sizzling 🙂


    Chapter2 (Radhika had slept- read the upper part of this page)

    Radhika woke up with a jerk, she got up and blinked several. What made her surprised was the commotion going on downstairs. Loud shouts. She looked around and glanced at the bedside table watch. It was 10 PM, god, she had slept two hours.

    Her mind cleared of the foggy tiredness it had, she got off the covers and got out of the covers. Who was shouting as such. She put on a sweater coater, deep blue over the tank top. Radhika then walked down the stairs, feeling dread creep into her body.

    She froze mid step down the stairs, her heart grabbed a black grip.

    “Why the heck is she still staying at our house?” Misha shouted.

    She heard Misha’s mother hiss down her voice.

    “Misha, I need you to lower voice, I have just come from work and I don’t need your theatrics right now.”

    Radhika heard a restless to and fro walking. Was Misha drunk? Again?

    “Oh, you don’t have time? Why is it always like that, that you have time for that orphane b*t*h, but not have time for your own daughter.” She shouted again.

    The ugly words screamed by Misha went and hit straight at Radhika’s heart like a piercing arrow.
    Radhika’s heart bled, her hands clenched into fists, and her eyes watered.

    “Misha, tone down your voice and don’t talk in such way.” Her mother warned.

    “Why should I tone it down, I want her to listen how I hate her. How Viren hates and how we all hate her.” Misha’s voice held lots of poison and malice.

    “Is it true that you gave her the money when I your daughter wanted it so urgently?”

    “Misha…listen.” But the pacifying worsds were cut off.

    “We don’t where she is from? A gutter perhaps, and her parents, some kind of….” Misha went on ugly, but Radhika had enough.

    She ran walked down the stairs, uncaring if they saw her. Uncaring if they saw her hear everything. Every heart bleeding word.

    She didn’t care as she burst the doors open and ran out into the porch, outside into the open air in slippers, she ran hard the darkened lane. She ran with all her might all the way and well past the well lit house. Crossing an intersected road she ran into a new lane altogether. Her feet took her to a large open area. The central park. That was the only place she found peace. It was the only place she found solace.

    With heaving breaths and exertion she paced her run walking in a slow glide of steps, but that’s when she froze over the entrance of the park gates.

    A slow, sweet, gentle, soothing play of cords lead her inside. The music somewhat calmed her senses and gathered her scrambled brain. She followed the guitar string play.

    Deep inside she walked curious to know who was playing it, and that so heart feelingly.

    Near to the large old sycamore tree, under the shadow of it, turned to the white wooden bench, a figure huddled up.

    Radhika eyes forward and walked slowly towards the figure. It was a guy. He was playing guitar. All alone in the park.

    Her heart lurched forward, breath froze, emotions filled out, a deep sense of familiarity passed over her body when she recognised the back with the help of the various multicoloured small lamps attached to the tree branches.

    The black hoodied guy was still playing at the guitar, but Radhika stood good twenty distance from him.

    The playing of soothing music lulled her into a state peace.

    That”s when the guy seem to sense he wasn’t alone, as his back straightened erect and a minute later the music stopped and he removed the straps of the guitar from off of his shoulder through over his head.

    Radhika waited, the guy turned around, and there he stood his body now turned towards her fully. His eyes now focussed straight at Radhika. His brown gaze connected deep into her light brown eyes. He stood there as if he knew she was coming. Leaves rustled under their feet and when he removed his hoodie over off from his head, Radhika ran, she ran with eyes misting over in her eyes. She ran for him. To him. To feel him again.

    Arjun’s eyes seem to flare up as he braced for the hit. And Radhika hit hard to his body that he was pulled back a couple of steps but he managed well as his arms went around her and held her tight.

    That’s when Radhika lost it and she bawled her heart out over his chest. Clutching tight to feel his warmth to pass into her cold body. To feel his warmth spread into her heart and to feel it dissipate the years of sadness, immense hurt, bitter loneliness, and heart clear out of the poison and resent. She cried a healing one all the while he was whispering words of assurance and safety into her ears. His breath hot on her neck, heating her blood coursing into her veins as she became……..

    • Ireena

      today part was so good…will u complete ur story within 3days?nor will u continue till two weeks?anyway, I won’t be able come tonight.enjoy today’s epi.AND BYE TILL THEN ALL OF MY FRIENDS ??

  62. Sri

    I’m a tamilan.I regularly watch manmarzian.i love this a lot. I request the god not to end this yar.I like radhika so much.pls don’t stop this.

  63. saji

    Riya thanx for dat song…heart touching

    by d way any idea who sung dat sng daastan…superb song…

    frm nxt week jst hear dat song with mmz memories…so sad

  64. Ira afroz


    Breaking News…..Manmerziayan final episode is gonna telecast On SUNDAY 1 hour episode.

  65. I had written this essay n its been almost 5 hours n my comment is still not pasted…grrrr……seems like my stupid mobile played its magic again n d comment got deleted somehow:-(:-[ n m too exasperated to type d entire thing out again…I’ll save it for sometime later..

    Neways @ Anu that was too good….hope it happens in d show…would also like to see Dadaji, Teji, Kritika n Zubin.

    @ Farha the updates were really good…loved d car scene….n was really enjoying d Arjun-Radhika was emotional but then why did u stop at d wrong moment..plz complete it.

  66. kfar

    As she became aware his steady beating of heart. Her feet were an inch up fdim the ground as she holding onto his body tight.

    “Why is that you’re always crying bitterly whenever we meet, am I that frightening looking that you dissolve into tears each time.” He mumbled a teasing drawl into her hair.

    Radhika chuckled through the tears. She reluctantly moved an inch away, only just an inch she didn’t let go off his chest, but that’s when her gaze went down to his hard chest.

    Her eyes widened and she gasped, the hoodie zipper down and she saw a dark smudge over his waist. It was blood. That is why he groaned in pain when she propelled her body on his.

    “You’re injured.” She gasped.

    He didn’t reply but put his forefinger under her chin and lifted up her face to his. His piercing brown gaze slid all across her face then settling his soft gaze on her flowing one.

    His eyes seem to understand her sadness, he didn’t enquire anything.

    “it’s just blood.” He said her softly looking at her lips.

    She frowned.

    She touched the smudged and he flinched a little and she worried in anxiety.

    “It’s just not blood, it’s your blood.” She fussed over him.

    His pinched lips turned up into an alluring smile and Radhika was sure her heart skip a beat that. His tightened hands around her told her something. That is, his right on her body.

    He again didn’t reply, he tilted her sad eyes towards his again by lifting her chin with his forefinger. His eyes though said something, a pleased look came over them making his brown eyes swirl a deep brewing coffee hue.

    His breath was falling on her forehead and she was plastered into a locked embrace with his body.

    “Don’t want to go home?” He whispered enquired.

    A pained look came over her features which he seemed to read well.

    “Come.” He said, and entwined his long strong fingers within his, and he turned pulling her along.

    Radhika frowned.

    “Where?” She enquired bewildered.

    He smiled down at revealing the even white row of teeth and Radhika swore that her heart skipped several more beats.

    “My place.” He drawled s*xily, and startef dragging her towards his car.

    Radhika’s frown then turned into a bewildered enquiry.

    “But, your place is just a minutes away, why do we need….”

    Arjun’s smile then turned into a full blown grin which blew Radhika’s heart into a trolley of skip beat skip and beat continually.

    “Cute.” He mumbled sliding his finger over her heated cheek, which left a warm fiery path over her skin.

    She gave him a dumb look, then she understood. Oh, his place, as his own place, as in not his parents place. Of course, he was super duper rich.

    Radhika flushed hot and blushed a deep crimson which made him chuckle and tighten his arms around her more, then his smile vanished and turned a shade intense his eyes.

    “Come.” He whispered huskily, just a tiny inch from her lips, held her hand pushed away and turned around to lead her out of the park gate.

    Radhika hesitated, she was never aware of him much and it all was turning too fast and the untrusty gene in her hesitated more.

    “But…” She pulled at her entwined hand within his, but that’s when her world stopped, completely halted.

    He turned around slowly, hands entwined still and gave her a look so intense that the hairs on her body raised all over attacking her goosebumps.

    She took in the look, all breath expelled out.

    The look held such force, it was physical, it was chemical, it was organic, it was soul wrenching, soul connecting, it was blending his soul with hers with that look. Binding his core of heart onto hers. His eyes went far past her deepest darkest secrets. Connecting and mirroring her stricken image as clear crystal in his brown ones.

    And right then Radhika knew. She was falling hard, free falling in slow motion painfully, pleasingly, romantically, physically, mentally, chemically, organically, deeply, heart warmingly, soulfully, deeper harder in love with him.

    The force of that moment of realization shook her back a second later. Her heart, mind, body died and took a rebirth into a altogether a new person……..


    Oooooooh, took it’s tine to type 🙂

    My hands are literally shaking typin the scene and im not lying guys…

    How did u LIKE IT

    please commmment, I’m waiting plsssssssssssdsss:)

  67. kfar

    @anu @Mandy- nen bagunna but koncham sad n hey na story chadavandi yaar (beggin) ela undo chepara)heheh bgn again.

  68. Hey Farha I m sorry I m satin dos but I kinda lik d other multimillionaire Arjun story more dan dis story seriously satin dis story is also very good but is jus dat I got confused so dats y I ??? ???? Hey Farha I jus hope ur not hurt yaar !!! SORRY ??

    Hey yaar where r u from in AP ??

    Did u read d news dat DYM is also gonna cum on Sunday 1 hour special!!
    Lyk I m very very happy ! ??

    • lreena

      Thanks, dipika.u r New here but does extremely good things.but I don’t get the main news. Where’s it??

  69. kfar

    @Mandy- Hey it’s fine you liked both my stories right then fine coz the other is also mine 😀 I’m gonaa start dat real soon dont worry nt hurt at all 😀
    Yeah i heard it im so excited too!!!!!!!!

  70. Ira afroz

    i just can suggest u to visit a Facebook page where u got All Ardhika’s Moments to get download
    here it is…..

    Arjun & Radhika – Dosti yaariyan Manmerziayan
    There u just check their 2015 timeline top to bottom.

    Hopefully u got all video’s.And let me know later if u got it.okay…

  71. Ireena hey sorry yar i copied it right bt donno hw i missed the post…i will find it n post it again..sorry for inconvenience dear…
    Hey Ira thank u verrrrrry muchhhhh dear….so mch thank u dear js
    t got the page….happppyyyyyy nw….

  72. Ira afroz

    Okay…………Dipika.That’s Great.yaar
    Now upload ur all Ardhika’s Moments…..u can also download those video via ur cell phone and Enjoy Anyway time whenever u miss Manmerziayan.

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