Manmarziyan 2 states chap 26

Hiee all im Sv back here. Thank u all for the love u guys showered to me. Trust me this is the best birthday ever coz no one has ever gifted anything as a birthday gift apart from my family. Now im so happy to have a big family for me . Love u all for those lovely os wish i have my birthday daily coz those stories were awesome and u guys paring me with arjun gosh that would be a dream come true to be frank i love the character of arjun as tiger possessive about his radhika and when it comes harming her then he would turn a beast i love that one and a perfect one by my wifie , U guys know what i want to have that possessiveness which my wifie gave me in the form of rohan and then the way i wanted to get proposed arjun(sathya ) gave me as a as a halloween queen as that was my dream and then to taunt him was arjun rathore by my punch parvathi and then the way we should be friends by my ponney shree and then my twin’different plot of nail biting and my lil one(supriya’s) realistic os and brin di’s os of me making ardhika and nesam one gosh im over the moon and i have saved all those os in my mobile and reading it again and again as this is my precious gifts u gave and then my jaan and our harry potter love and my di’s cross roads and my aasthu giving my a dream to see them god im soo lucky to have u all and so as a birthday return gift this is for my family love u all.

Enjoy the ride….
Its been long time let us just have a look of the modern devadas saral (ok dont stare at me with those angry eyes, let him think sometime big coz at last he is going to be devadas only).
Chennai……

Saral ; ooh dear how to say that im in deep love with u ,
Tam – nee illama oru nimisham kuda ennala vazh mudiyadhu een purinjuka maatengara ??
Eng – i cannot live without u even a minute why cant u understand dear ??
Argh bow bow…. bow bw…….argh………… its teeth was in verge of biting his face.
Saral – tommy what even u are not accepting my proposal ??
Tam – andha aalu dhan enna pudikalanaru neeyavadhu purinjuko pls……….
Eng – that man is not understanding and u are not understanding me pls understand…….

Bow……
House owner lady – Tam – vandhutana dai unna indha pakkam vara kudadhunnu sonnenla ?? avarukita enatha sonniyo manushan veetlaye modangi kedakaru ippo enga veetu naayaum vidamatengara poriya illa naaya vittu kadika vidava ??
Eng – cameah ?? saaley i said not to come this side na ?? i donno what u said to my husband he is not even stepping out of his room and now u are talking with my dog are u going or i will ask my dog to attack u ….

Saral gulped and said ; tam – naayina bayandhuduvoma ?? ponga poonga naanum poren
Eng – dog means will i get scaredah ?? go inside madam i will go out…
Saral to the dog – tam – namba naalaiku continue pannalam ok bye baby
Eng – we will continue tomorrow ok bye baby….
And stepped out and said ; radhika i am practising all for u but i donno what are u doing ??
Mumbai…….
Neil and sam were practising so was ardhika. Arjun was seriously struggling as she was dancing like hell but he was dancing in robotic style. She was fed up but she wanted to win the dance as she was the dancing queen of her school. She wanted to win so badly. She made up a mind.

Radhika ; arjun pls dance properly.
Arjun ; its not coming for me pls leave me radhika.
Radhika ; arjun if we win the dance competition then i will give u one present.
Arjun (full exhausted) ; what is that may i know ??
Radhika ; well a romantic date with a perfect kiss.
Ting there was a sound and she turned and saw him. He was standing with full energy (like in some hot drinks ad after drinking those, the body will gain energy or to be frank popoye’s spinach or chota bheem’s ladoo)
Arjun ; will u kiss me if we win the dance competition ??

Radhika ; u heard me right ?? if i say that i mean it.
Arjun ; what about tha tha ??
Radhika ; patti will take care of him so come to practise. He nodded and started to practise now he was dancing like a super awesome guy who has inborn talent of dance.
Tha tha pov after knowing the deal between ardhika ; aahaaa in a smirk way and he flew away as his wife has asked him to come.
Radhika got a call and looked at arjun. Arjun was looking at her in a shock……. (bgm dan dan dan it is a shocking bgm think like a serious tone)Ardhika and Nesam rushed inside the hospital. They were on a race. Radhika and neil were in the front and samarj behind them. They were looking at their mobiles and finally all bumped inside the karthik’s room and radhika shouted yaa yaa i caught that in a exciting tone and sam who was angry picked up karthik and started to beat him black and blue as radhika got the pokemon but not sam.
Karthik ; have some pity on me sam im sick.
Sam ; why did u leave her win ??
Karthik (who was in the bed like a round earthworm) ; stop it sam its paining.
Sam ; and it is paining when i loose the game again she crashed my clan now it was pikachu how can i miss that. Neil was enjoying with radhika but arjun was making sam to calm down.

Jessie just entered and saw the chaos. She sat next to karthik and he shouted as she sat in his hand where he was injected the trips…she immediately stood and he was in fear crawled inside the bed.
Karthik ; pls leave me im scared of u guys……
Sam ; so jessie ur not gonna dance ??
Jessie looked at karthik he gulped and looked down. He held his hair and grinded the flour with his head and said ; this stupid has enjoyed in rain and now shivering in fever the best part was spoke like a super hero then fainted and fell down straight like that.

Karthik removed her hand from his head ; are u doing any head massage for me ?? jessie glared and said ; im leaving u coz i love u orelse i would just pounce on u and bite straight ur neck just like a big cats do. He ran and stood behind ardhika and said ; pls save me from that animal pls i want to live. Neil asked her to calm down and said ; we still have time jessie leave him for 2 days he will be fine. She nodded and they all left the hospital.

Program day.
Mosquito whose name was vibhav came with his 4 side kicks namely screw, spanner, cutting Blair and fitter (reason of the name nothing stricked my head other than these so only these) and of all vibhav is the head of the gang whose other name is tool box. So they are making themself ready to go to the mayura fest to ruin it and defame mumbai institute of technology but they never knew what is waiting for them.

Arjun wanted to surprise radhika so he decided to give a shock to her and so was radhika waiting to give him. Mosquitoe abd team started with a wireless to contact each other. Spanner has a habit of giving missed call which he used while he was speaking through wireless.
Vibhav ; argh this stupid is giving missed call even now and was busy to tune to spanner at that time screw jumped near vibhav and he in turn jumped over fitter.
Vibhav ; why did u shout u idiot ??
Screw ; sorry boss but i came to say that i have stopped neil from his performance…….
Vibhav ; how ??
Screw ; look here his shoes. Vibhav looked at the shoe and jumped from fitter and gave a tight slap.
Vibhav ; its my shoe u idiot.
Screw ; then that (pointing at vibhav’s shoes)

Fitter ; those are mine. They heard the announcement.
Ladies and gentle man let us take a moment to thank mumbai institute of technology so ladies and gentleman let us give a big round of applause to committee head of mit arjun. The claps were breaking the building and all the girls were eagerly waiting for hos single glance. All were expecting him to come in tux or t.shirt. All the lights were off. There was pin drop silence then tak……. (light on sound)….. all were looking at the stage. The sound of the foot step came but it was not one but 2. Slowly they were visible. It was arjun and neil but they were not either in tux or jean or in any other western oufits but arjun was in a typical tamil style veshti and shirt. His abs were so perfectly seen in that shirt and he was breathtaking. Neil came in a punjabi kurtha and bottom. Sam and radhika just entered the auditorium and found arneil on the stage. Radhika was in punjabi dress and sam was in typical saree. It was like mix of punjabi and tamil attife of them and Arjun was dashing in tamil attire and so was radhika in a punjabi outfit. Neil was just blinking at his beauty and so was sam looking at her handsome hulk. Tha tha came with patti.
Tha tha (to rasam) ; Way please hot couple coming through. Bith jerked and saw tha tha in tux and pattibin frock. Rasam’s jaw dropped. Patti pulled both the jaws by closing the mouth and said ; old is always gold babe. Both shook their head and came back to reality.

Sam ; is this ??
Radhika ; yes. They are doing too much yaa mudiyala (cant take it).
Sam ; let them enjoy now go and enjoy with my best friend. Radhika smiled.
Arjun came down and saw radhika. Sje was just blinking but she was into his spell.
Radhika ; tam – shirt nalla irukku…
Eng – shirt is nice.
Arjun – Tam – shirt illa kurtha.
Eng – Its not shirt but kurtha.
Radhika (closed her one eye and smiled and said) ; kurtha… .
Arjun ; tam – punjabi dress superah irukku.
Eng – Punjabi dress u look super. She blushed. Tha tha fainted as he for the first time seeing her blush.
First contest it was best voice.

Many sung the song. For few the claps were too damn high not because they are nice but to make them shut. Then vibhav came but all were silent and he started to sing the song. It was a perfect blend. Beautifully sung. Many were into his spell of voice. Arjun was not able to believe as his voice was like a radio which is not tuned properly. But how this ?? Arjun saw radhika who was busy staring something.
Arjun ; what are u seeing ??

Radhika ; look there and pointed and saw some one is standing behind the stage and operating something and radhika asked tha tha to look at them. Tha tha verified and said ; he is the one who is operating and vibhav is just giving lip moment.
Radhika ; tam – inga avavan enna nelamaila irukkan nai paatukku lip moment kudukudha ?? vada arjun paathurlam.

Eng – here all are in which condition ?? he is giving lip moment for the song dog come arjun lets do this. She pulled sam and both stood behind the stage. Sam whistled s*xily and he as if a dog looking at its food after days was staring at her. She waved her hand to come near her. He jumped and came and stood near her.
Sam ; close ur eyes honey wanna give u something and smiled so s*xily again. His eyes was having heart shape and he jumped and closed his eyes. Sam who was smiling took a big stick and hitted his head hard. He said ; that was powerful and smiled and fainted. Radhika went inside and turned the tempo t o 0.5(minimum speed) and the song was dragging and it was like a slow motion kung fu panda voice……

arneil and all are started to laugh and so was radhika, then she changed the tempo of the song to 2.0 (the maximum speed) and his mouth was going all speed and now all are rolling and laughing. He also gives a fake laugh and looks at spanner. Spanner goes to check what is that screw is upto when he went back tha tha came and scared him and that made spanner freeze and he was in a statue mode. Last one was arjun. He stepped up to the stage and took his guitar and sang radhika’s favorite song malare from premam malayalam one(its my fav song it is demanding my playlist from 2015 i wish u guys should hear to the malayalam premam malare and the only malayalam song and movie i know so hear it one time i guess u will all like that).
Arjun was singing in all love when he was singing , radhika was not able to hold anymore she ran and pulled him to a hug and slanted him over her hand and kissed him tight over his lips.

Tha tha ; Tam – enna da ivlo naal achey onnum nadalaiyennu nenachen nadandhuduchu nadathitanga

Eng – what yaar these many days over nothing happened i thought happened they made that happened.
Radhika saw him and said ; arjun i …………… he fainted.
Radhika ; tam – cha oru dhadava kuda i love u vey sollaliye evan ennadana posukku posukkunu mayangaran
Eng – cha not even single time i said i love u to him but he is all the time fainting.

The whole gallery applauded and radhika lifted him like a hero lifting the heroine (that was tha tha who was doing this his pov ; paa what is he eating sema weightu paaaa) and radhika was walking in a pride…….

Precap – Ardhika dance………. vibhav’s stomach goes for a toss after the food competition and those mosquitoes are being shooed by spraying hit………..

Thats it guys. Hope u all are enjoyed it and sorry for the delay. Hope u all enjoyed it and pls spare me for the typos. Love u all stay blessed and stay strong and dont forget to smile. Love u all,

38 comments

  1. Aasthu

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    Good mrng Shriiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! have a nyc day…………

    It was really funny……….is “malare ninne kanatirunnal” ur fav???????? It truly is a divine song……I’m a MALAYALI…but I’m fed up listening to it that I always change the song when I hear it in radio………………is that the only malayalam song ‘ve heard???????????? I nvr tot u wud listen to mal songs…………

    love u……….happy that u liked my gift 4 u……..TC………..muahhhhhhh……….

    • S.v

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      Hiee aasthu yup thats my fav song and the only movie I have ever watched in malyalam as u know that song was demanding and so was the movie and I know the other songs of that movie. Come on yaar any song which is nice I will hear it. Thank u so muh aasthu love u so much.

      • Aasthu

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        wow…..so that’s y the song has a spl place in ur heart….old malayalam songs are really a treat to our ears…..wanna try????? if so I’ll suggest sme………..so when’ll u update “Let mme live”?????????? I’m so demanding ri8??????? but wat to do………love u too……….did u watch irumukhan ??????????????

        love u too………………………….muaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaahhhhhhhhhhhhhhh……….

      • Aasthu

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        ok….I’ll suggest some………I’m not that aware of old songs….but I know some…..
        1) Mayilayi
        Mayilayi oooo mayilayi parannu vaa mazha villu tolkum enn azhake………..( Fly like a peacock and come to me dear, you who are even more beautiful than the rainbow)
        This is a very poor translation……I’m not good at it…… This is a good song……I love it very much……
        2) Alipazham perukan
        Alipazham perukan pilikoda nivarthi….poomkuruvi poovankuruvi ponn olanjali kuruviiiiiii eeeee vazhi vaa……………
        Plz don’t ask 4 translation…..I don’t know…..this is frm the 1st 3D malayalam movie “Hello my dear kuttichatan” …..
        3) S Janaki’s songs are real melody…..her voice is as sweet as a little child’s………
        4) There is this song from the movie “Ennu ninte Moideen” which was released this yr……..it is really nyc…….do listen to it…..
        “mokathe penne”…….

        I’ll ask my dad 4 mre and tell u later…………………do let me know if you listened and liked anyof the above………………

        love u…………..TC………………..

  2. Sammy

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    My cheeks are aching hubby ….from where did you get such awesome ideas ….now iam making a frowny face ..to lessen the ache …but still i am laughing again . And the ache is increasing …πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚damm hillarious hubby …love you so much and thanks for upadting it😍😍😍

    • S.v

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      Wifie thank u so much . That music part was done by me and my brother when we were playing some music we saw one option speed we did that and laughed like a maniac and wifie when is the last part yaar nail biting pls save ur hubby . Love u soo much muhhaa love u

  3. Sangee

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    S.v super epi that names …screw,cutting plair..hilarious…den radika is boost for arjun like bheems ladoo ha ha ha….. arjun fainting lol
    awesome epi…

  4. Jessie

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    Baby…. ore sirippu galattava iruku.. oh god.. !! Am laughing like a maniac.. saral oru naai te poi.. chi..!! Even dog hates him.. saral .. house owner kita propose pantana.. aiyo…rama…πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚
    Arjun’s Ting moment…lol…like popeye the sailor man..!!! Hot couple!!! πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚. Paati in frock!!! Vaibhav’s gaana mazhai .wah.. Arjun sings malare.. 😍😍😍😘😘😘😘 enaku ippo bp check panunga..lol.. Rads kissed.. Arjun passed off.. Ada kodumaiye!!!
    Thatha’s running commentary.. super… thambi Neilu.. neeyum potu thaku..!! Enaku out dragula shade kudutitiye.. bite in neck!! Ammadi..!! Naan Aval illai..πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚ my stomach hurts… Super one Sv.. I enjoyed a lot… will be waiting 4 nxt laughter ride.. TC n loads of love…

    • S.v

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      Bsby thank u so much . Unnoda commentennum galatavai padipadharkagai vandha enns nee ematha villi kalai baby kalai. He he he he. Summa oru effect kuduthen unakku coz nee ennoda baby. Bp unakku mattuma paakanum enakkum dhan paakanum ezhudhumbodhey mayangiten arjun stagela naama rendu perum keezha avan paata rasichu paakarom epdi irukkum ?? Ayyo mudiyala . Love u so much baby bear hugs and kisses. Muuhhhaaa.

    • Shree

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      Jess bp unnaku matuma? Ellarukum..

      Enna nee romba violent iruka πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚.. Karthik paavum ya.. odambu Sari illa.. apoyavudu utu vayi.. poor little guy

  5. Starz

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    Hi di…happy birthday day to you(belated)…may God bless you with happy and healthy life always…and may you succeed in ur lives Everytime….let you be the reason for others smile always and forever….let you have a beautiful life journey( don’t forget me between this journeyπŸ˜‰)…keep smiling…and write even more beautiful and funny stories for us…

    Actually I already wished you but in the comment section of someone’s story…but even though I am wishing you again….I am sorry that I couldn’t gift you with any story….was stressed up with school chores….
    Now about today’s post…loved it a lot.. Ardhika scenes is fantabulous…love you and take care…loving hug is all I can give you now…😍😍😍😘☺

    • S.v

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      Thank u soo soo much starz. I did nkt notice that sorry dear. No need anythng just ur love and ur wish that makes me strong dear. I will never forget u honey u r my cute one. Thank u so much my dear. Love u tons and dont stress up with the school look. Tha tha will help u lol love u so much. Muuhhhaaa. Bear hugs.

  6. Rossy

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    Superb twin…hilarious…oooh god what was that…m laughing laughing and rolling on…u r really too good at humour sense…plz try charmurti book dear…it was too hilarious also…omg…even my stomach ache,cheek ache, every ache started…screw and bheem ladoo…omg…mujhe roklo…me to pagal hogayi has has keπŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜†

    • S.v

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      Jho aapka aagya he he he sure will read that and music part was from my own self with my brother we did that ehen we were soo bored and that became our fav past time now. He he he love u so much. Let ur tummy ache more. Koi nahi rokengi u will go mad coz im ur twin will not leave u that easy. Love u soo much. Muuhhhaaa.

  7. Gauri

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    SV my stomach has gone for a toss….this was damn funny…Saral practicing infront of dof LOL….Vaibhav mosquito….super awesome…you have an amazing sense of comedy darling…keep it up…I am still laughing while typing this ….loved this and love you to moon and back πŸ™‚ stay blesseed

    • S.v

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      Didi thank u so much wanted to take my revenge on saral did that with this lol lot more to come didi u will see how how radhika and sam are gonna make them run with their tricks. Love u so much didi. Muuhhhaaa. Bear hugs and kisses.

  8. Vanshika

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    Hey s.v di you’re superb yaar even I’m laughing n tossing here n there y u never told me you ryt this I would have read b4.. My goodness you should get award dii…akka awesome love u lots..

    • S.v

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      i never knew u watched manmarziyan. Thats why did not say that dear and yes i write 4 ff and one already over and also i completed a ff in mahabharat too, thank u so much dear and love u tons love u

  9. Sweetie

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    Jaan,super and super..What was that!!OMG!! I’m laughing like hell here..Mosquito,screw,cutting plier,OMG OMG,from where do you get such awesome ideas..I was rofl when Arjun fainted..πŸ˜‚He always faints whenever she comes closer and this time kiss..OMG!Haha.. πŸ˜‰ Love you loads sweetheart and take care.. πŸ™‚

    • S.v

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      jaan thank u so much he he he those are normal using names of me when i get fed up with some one used here. Still she did not say i love u to him eek aur gazab kahani yaar lol love u so much

  10. Shree

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    Naan vandutene.. ting ting ta ding.. late entry ku manikavum.. 1000 times sorry..

    Oru nimisham…. Iru iru iru.. Ippo naan etanu daruva Idha pause.. play… stop… forward… reverse button potu oti oti padichen nu gnyabagame illiye… Uff uff ufff.. enna maa neenga ipdi pandreengle maa.. uufff

    Saral enna payitiyam aayitana? Dog ta poyi practice pannikitu… What the heck?! House owner uncle padingi poyi okandrukara?! Uncle pavaum…. andha allu kuda accept panala… Tommy too rejected… oru nimisham kuda irukamudiyadu… uff.. he’s like tenji pona tape recorder or gramophone… adhe palaya galatla matikitu… stuck ayi stuck aayi odikitu… Aunty terror… Lol… Naaya utu attack.. I think that would be great… Chaa aunty yen pannala? Naan ulundu ulundu sirichidupen.. naayi going bow bow.. way of expressing hatred… Hehehe… Ennadu? Naliku continue pandrada? Ivan enna elatiyum kola pakrana? Naaya utudu Saral… Adhu romba tangamanadu..

    Lol Arjun!! Aayafi he is no less.. dancing like Robot.. date and kiss nu sonone enna oru power.. like fire.. background la Popeye the sailor man.. toot toot.. illatna chota Bheem chota Bheem chota Bheem nu tune potrkalam.. semma effective aah irundurukum… Lol.. born to dance types.. uff Radhika.. lol Thatha.. as always.. Muaahh to him…

    Lol PokΓ©mon go… Hehehe.. Radhika won.. pavam Karthik.. sam Ida bomayi aayitan.. like a round earthworm.. lol.. Ada kashtame… Jessie enna ivalo terror ah iruka.. lol Jess kovam vanda utu velasiduva pola iruke..

    vibhav kosu with his 4 side dogs… lol.. screw, spanner, cutting blair and fitter… Enna oru Peru.. paratanum in mulaiya ponne.. wireless.. shoes.. Hehe.. arneil outfits.. uff.. oru varti kanavla paten.. ipo in update la padikirein.. idu nejatla nedaka kudada? Why God why? Yen inda kutty ponna (me) ivalo sodikireenga… Rasam outfits.. uff.. enna oru mix and match.. Thatha paati uff.. tux n frock.. the crazy couple is back to rock.. old is gold.. correct dhaan.. Hehe… Shirt illa kurta.. Premam scene.. etana daruva patalum bore eh adikadu.. Arjun compliment Radhika blush.. Thatha jaw drop.. lol..

    I understand.. kevalama paatu padra avanga irukanga.. kadla irukura javu kilinjikutu poyidum… Ada.. idha para.. Vaibhav patu paditana… Yen anda Java teacher madri ena avale padi shock adikala? Chaa.. anda aluku mayiku tangala.. inga Vera range la pogudu.. lol.. fine tune… semma pitch.. Radhika as always in detective mode.. operator ah kandupudichita.. Sam mandai le pota.. losu madri sirichikte mayakam potana? slow motion n fast motion… Semma ya.. Arjun sings malare… Ponne this song is on repeat mode on my phone.. I sleep listening to it and wake up listening to it.. nalla vela en OS la anda paata poten… Namba rendu Perum inda vishyatla nalla click ayitom.. Hehe

    Radhika kiss panita.. mayakam.. potan.. I doubt if he is man.. romba scene podrane.. ponne I think you need really need to feed your Arjun spinach.. konjam tembu varatum.. Radhika tookita.. Thatha paavum.. lol weight issues.. cool precap

    Semma di ponne.. as always.. vayiru valika valika sirichiktruken.. Appa vandu nee tirundave Mata nu oru look kudututu poyitaru.. ponnu psych ayita nu nenachi romba varutam padurarau pola iruku.. avaruku enna teriyum.. it’s your story that I’m psyched for.. Hehe.. totally loved it!!

    Adutada seekrama punch pannu.. waiting waiting waiting..

    Muuaaahh to you 😘😘.. love you 😍😘

    • S.v

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      aathadi naan enna panna inga oru mini update pannirukka nee i love u for that no words to say thanks to u sonnalum pathadu coz the way u show ur love to me…….. im seriously blessed to have u ….

      Konjam senti aagiducho paravalla needhaney he he he namma thelinjadhan prachana ipadi irundha no problem at all lol love u so much inga mattum ennavam appo appo oru mora appo appo oru thittu idhalam sadarnamappa………..he he he love u so much and thank u for the long comment dear.

  11. Aadia

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    Oh my dear sisssyy…I guess those birthday gifts boosted you so much that this part became a super duper hit..
    Aww my Saral baby..not even a dog wants him..don’t know why,but in this story I like that dumbo very much..and feeling pity for mosquitoes..thatha Patti:hot couple.lol.
    Finally Arjun got the kiss and he fainted??
    ..and the song Malare
    ..as aasthu said most of us fed up listening that at that time..and she suggested the song from ‘Moideen’.you must watch that film..its a true love story..will make you emotional..

    • S.v

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      ya yaa ya in my wifie (sammy’s) story he eloped me and went i was hell angry want to take my revenge did that here ha ha ha (villian laugh) u have soft corner for him oh my god why why this kolaveri ?? DOne moideen and yes malare is our fav coz that was the first ever malayalam song we heard and that was heart wrenching so thats the fav of many here still and will be always. Love u so much aadia love u

      • Aadia

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        Trust me sissy. ..this is the only story I like that Dumbo ..and what I like is his foolishness..πŸ˜‹πŸ˜‹actually we have to think from his perspective also naa..lol….and please pour a full tank water on that fainting hero’s face..wanna read next part soon..and connection from past and HAK..only if your fingers are okay….

      • S.v

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        connection from past started honey u will read it today for sure and ya hak its been a long time will update that tomo pakka love u

  12. Meen

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    it was hillarious sv……amazing….fantastic….fab…….super awesome……well u really r a star writer…….love ya

    • S.v

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      Thank u so much meen well are u in mission complete the story left out ?? U liked it im soo happy coz the gifts that i got as os made a boost in me to write this. Love u so much and waiting for ur update dear. Love u

  13. _Ritu

    |Registered Member

    Sv…it was hilarious as always.. πŸ™‚ πŸ™‚ u r jst amazing…I guess Everyone in ur house must me so well nd fit coz u give them best medicine by making Dem laugh so hard… πŸ™‚ and u also keeps us healthy… πŸ™‚ πŸ˜€ it was damn funny… πŸ™‚ πŸ˜‚ I wonder why don’t u try fir laughter shows…u will definitely win it dear.. πŸ™‚ πŸ˜€ love u loads πŸ™‚

    • S.v

      |Author

      u should see my mom she is my guru to pull my leg. I am just taking her glimse and she is god….. her leg pulling is a treat to watch but only others if that turns to me then im dead. Lol thank u so much ritu love u tons. Muhhhhaaaaaaaaa

  14. Roma

    Omg svvvv….wowwww awesome, marvellous, outstanding. ….hilaaaaaaarious episode. …this series always make me rolfing….my honeyyy you have divine talent to spell caste on us…my goodness. ..you’re amazingly awesoooooome my sweeeeeetheart. …keep it up honeyyy. Love you loads. muaaaaahhhhhh Bear hug β™‘β™‘β™‘β™‘β™‘β™‘β™‘β™‘β™‘β™‘β™‘β™‘β™‘β™‘

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